Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
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(Karisuto no Mūnbureikā) - Kallisto's Moon Breaker
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short/Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Kallisto's Moon Breaker is a fine, shiny silver rapier that is extremely pointy, able to pierce through solid rock, given it is thin enough and the wielder has finished training in kenjutsu. This sword is very special as it has come down from generations upon generations from villagers of the Land of Sound. However, no one knows where it truly originates from, as it has landed into thieving hands and sold one hundred times over. It is rumored to have been forged by a Sage of the Land of Sound, using pieces of moon fragments and pure silver. Passed down from his family tree and eventually being misplaced into the wrong hands, it has lost its rightful owner many ages ago. However, the current wielder of this sword knows its potential and knows the sword is simply priceless and a gift from the Gods. The rapier is able to channel the user's chakra, making the chakra shoot like a bullet from the tip of the sword in exactly a straight line, in an unchangeable and linear path. This is where it gets its short to long range reach, although the rapier itself can only be used physically at short range. Once the chakra shoots from the tip of the rapier, the user has the option to keep it sharp and pointy on the end, giving it maximum piercing potential and range, or, the user can shoot the string of chakra out and mold it into a giant net made of chakra, able to capture very large targets or simply very small targets. However, if the user chooses to use the net, it can only go up to mid range. This net can be taken advantage of to where once the target is captured, it can squeeze shut extremely tight, leaving no room for any movement whatsoever, slicing and dicing its target to thin, tiny, brutalized yet neat pieces. For its last ability, the sword can utilize partial chakra from the "Straight Shot" technique and manifest it into a whip. This whip of chakra can go up to mid range and is entirely flexible. It can be infused with suiton chakra or wind chakra to make a water whip, or a wind whip. The sword's name was chosen after a legend came of it piercing the center of a star with such great force the results of which was splitting it in two. Thus the name Kallisto's Moon Breaker was born.
- Can use "straight shot" as many times as the user sees fit, but requires 30 chakra each time it is used. Can only use it once per turn and must wait one turn before using it again.
- To manifest a whip, it takes up 1 of the 3 technique slots in a turn but stays active until the user states otherwise.
- When used with water, it grows spikes of water and can be slung around to release these spikes from the whip. Each discharge of water spikes costs 10 chakra, each spike is C rank in power and it can release up to 10 spikes at a time. The water stays on the whip until the user states otherwise. And the spikes can be controlled by swinging the whip to guide them although at this point, it is streamed thus the user must focus on only this.
- When used with wind, the whip becomes deadly sharp with violent and obvious wind currents. At this point, the whip gains generous, powerful cutting powers. Much like the water counterpart, the whip can be swung to release blades of wind that cost 30 chakra and are B ranked. Up to 3 of these can be release at one time, but only 10 can be released in a battle. However, the wind stays on the whip regardless of how many blades of wind were used and until the user states otherwise.
- Can only use the net twice per battle and also costs 30 chakra
- Although the sword cannot be physically broken (with the exception of any type of raw chakra slicing into it), its powers can be disabled if touched by fire as an awful chemical reaction happens between the two (fire and "moon fragments").
- Can only be given to others by Moxxi
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☼ Declined ☼
For the whips in general give it a low rank (D or C) if you want it to stay active indefinitely, or give it a higher rank and a turn limit.
For the water whip spikes, just give it a rank and say it fires all the spikes at the same time and they reform after after a turn.
For the wind, make the chakra cost per blade 20 and make it 2 at a time. That way the strength can be easily calculated to A-rank if you use both.
Add a rank for the net and the bullet.
"as an awful chemical reaction happens between the two (fire and "moon fragments")." Meaning?
Lastly add the standard "all techniques count as a move" note.
(Karisuto no Mūnbureikā) - Kallisto's Moon Breaker
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short/Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Kallisto's Moon Breaker is a fine, shiny silver rapier that is extremely pointy, able to pierce through solid rock, given it is thin enough and the wielder has finished training in kenjutsu. This sword is very special as it has come down from generations upon generations from villagers of the Land of Sound. However, no one knows where it truly originates from, as it has landed into thieving hands and sold one hundred times over. It is rumored to have been forged by a Sage of the Land of Sound, using pieces of moon fragments and pure silver. Passed down from his family tree and eventually being misplaced into the wrong hands, it has lost its rightful owner many ages ago. However, the current wielder of this sword knows its potential and knows the sword is simply priceless and a gift from the Gods. The rapier is able to channel the user's chakra, making the chakra shoot like a bullet from the tip of the sword in exactly a straight line, in an unchangeable and linear path. This is where it gets its short to long range reach, although the rapier itself can only be used physically at short range. Once the chakra shoots from the tip of the rapier, the user has the option to keep it sharp and pointy on the end, giving it maximum piercing potential and range, or, the user can shoot the string of chakra out and mold it into a giant net made of chakra, able to capture very large targets or simply very small targets. However, if the user chooses to use the net, it can only go up to mid range. This net can be taken advantage of to where once the target is captured, it can squeeze shut extremely tight, leaving no room for any movement whatsoever, slicing and dicing its target to thin, tiny, brutalized yet neat pieces. For its last ability, the sword can utilize partial chakra from the "Straight Shot" technique and manifest it into a whip. This whip of chakra can go up to mid range and is entirely flexible. It can be infused with suiton chakra or wind chakra to make a water whip, or a wind whip. The sword's name was chosen after a legend came of it piercing the center of a star with such great force the results of which was splitting it in two. Thus the name Kallisto's Moon Breaker was born.
- Can use "straight shot" as many times as the user sees fit, but requires 30 chakra each time it is used. Can only use it once per turn and must wait one turn before using it again.
This technique is A rank in power.
- To manifest a whip of chakra, it takes up 1 of the 3 technique slots in a turn.
This whip is B rank in power and stays active for 4 turns.
- When the whip is used with water, it grows spikes of water and can be slung around to release these spikes from the whip. Each discharge of water spikes costs 10 chakra,
each spike released is B rank in power. The spikes reform after a turn. The water stays on the whip until the user states otherwise. And the spikes can be controlled by swinging the whip to guide them although at this point, it is streamed thus the user must focus on only this.
- When used with wind, the whip becomes deadly sharp with violent and obvious wind currents. At this point, the whip gains generous, powerful cutting powers. Much like the water counterpart, the whip can be swung to
release two blades of wind that cost 20 chakra and are B ranked. However, the wind stays on the whip regardless of how many blades of wind were used and until the user states otherwise.
- Can only use the net twice per battle and also costs 30 chakra.
This net is C rank in power.
- Although the sword cannot be physically broken (with the exception of any type of raw chakra slicing into it),
its powers can be disabled if touched by fire as an awful chemical reaction happens between materials inside the sword and the fire when the fire heats the materials, causing it to become faulty.
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All techniques count as a move
- Can only be given to others by Moxxi
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✦ Approved ✦
New Submissions:
(Ameton: Suparuta no Shotto) - Rain Release: Shot of the Spartan
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will manifest a bow made of their rain chakra which they will then manifest an arrow of their rain chakra and shoot it into the sky. This arrow travels just high enough to reach frozen temperatures and take on a frozen form and then turns into mostly ice, but not all of it. The user will guide this hardened arrow back down to where their opponent is and the arrow will come down at a devastating speed, aiming to pierce the opponent. Once the arrow makes contact with a solid surface or a surface solid enough to break it, it will shatter, each piece releasing the little water it had left stored in it into little spiked bullets of rain which will bounce every which way, depending on the trajectory of the broken ice pieces, aiming to pierce whatever is in their way, much like shrapnel.
The user can keep the bow active for 10 chakra a turn and freely shoot D ranked arrows of hardened rain, as long as they have the bow activated and a rain source is available.
- Can be used three times per battle
- Having the bow activated does not interfere with handseals
- Must have activated or have access to a rain source
- Can only be taught by Moxxi
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✦ Declined, uhh, how does this not interfere with handseals if you have to hold the bow to use it? ✦
(Suiton: Acionna no Gifuto) - Water Release: Acionna's Gift
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After weaving a devastating 15 handseals, the user will gather chakra throughout their entire body and through shape manipulation, emit a thick and also hardened mist around them up to mid range. The little bubbles of mist are so thick, if you were to smack them, they would hurt your hand as if you just smacked solid pebbles. During this phase of the technique, the user can do multiple things. For one, the user can gather this hardened mist around them and make a shield to protect them, whether from one angle or from multiple angles. Next, the individual hardened bubbles can be used to freeform a shape to attack the opponent. Ex: A hardened tiger claw or a hardened spear. Because of the amount of hardened mist on the field, these techniques are quite massive in size, the claw being comparable to the body of an elephant. Because of the destructive power of this technique, it is easy for the user to hurt themselves in the process of using it. Third, the mist can be attracted to the user's arm(s) or leg(s), or even on their summon to create a weapon(s) such as claws, drills, swords, etc.
- Only two offensive techniques can be used during a battle
- Can shield yourself three times per battle with this technique
- Supplementary and weaponized components of the technique stay active indefinitely
- Can only freeform weaponized attacks five times per battle
- Must deactivate before the use of handseals if using weaponized technique
- Can freeform offensive techniques with the mist even with weapons active
- The user can choose to "release" this technique at any time and the hardened mist will fall like rain, impairing the opponent's vision and hurting the opponent and the user but not fatally.
- All variations are S rank in power
- Can only be taught by Moxxi
~Leaving for Another~
✦ Declined, just no lol. ✦