Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
(Genjutsu: Shi u~inku) | Illusion Arts: The Death Wink
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Fighting an Uchiha was never easy. Not looking into the opponent’s eyes always proved to be a disadvantage. To counter this, certain members of the Senju clan came up with a counter technique – The Death Wink. With this technique handy, they could take on any Uchiha they wished. A simple and effective technique that this is, The Death Wink involves simply winking at the opponent to induce him in a genjutsu. This is specially effective when the user himself is under an illusion. Even when the user is paralyzed, he will always blink his eyes. After figuring out that he is in an illusion, the user will release chakra into the opponent’s brain and trigger it through his eye (blink) and put the opponent in an illusion. Note that this does not release the user from the illusion, but simply puts the opponent in an illusion as well, leaving the user more time to release himself from the illusion (using any viable means). The illusion caused by the wink has 2 effects, depending on what the user wants.
1. The moment the user winks, a huge blast of wind hits the opponent, head on and carries him and everything around him, 10 meters away. Since this is simply an illusion, the wind hits faster than the opponent can react. Also, the distance by which the opponent is blown etc, can all be manipulated.
2. The second effect causes the opponent to pertify on the spot. Again, this is unavoidable as it is simply an illusion. The opponent’s skin changes to stone, moss, wood or anything that the user wants. He will also be able to smell the scent of moss or sand or whatever his body would become, making it look all the more real.
Note:
Can only be used twice.
Cannot use any Genjutsu techniques above A rank in the same turn.
Can only be taught by Python
‡ Declined ‡ DNR.
(Genjutsu: Metarika) Illusion Arts: Metallica
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: At any point of time, when the opponent wields a weapon, or any object, the user will form the seal of confrontation to put him in an illusion. Suddenly the object in their hand (or whatever object the user wishes) will give a small beep and it will blow up. Should the opponent's attention be diverted to the object, he will see certain seals on the object before it blows up. The explosion will cause extreme damage (which in reality will cause mental damage), as his body gets blown up in bits and pieces. The fumes created by the smoke of explosion will make him go breathless due to lack of oxygen and presence of harmful gases. In reality, the opponent will fall down imitating his fall in the illusion. His confidence level will drop down while his speed, reflexes and reactions get reduced by a rank.
Note: The effects lasts for only 3 turns.
Note: No genjutsu above A-Rank in the same turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Python
‡ Declined ‡ This is slightly reminiscent of another technique but I'm willing to overlook that. You need to tone this way down. If this does mental damage (which it should), then this Genjutsu will break itself. Remove the fact that the effects last for three turns. For the most part illusions can't control your target's body, only involuntary and reflex actions. I won't allow this to make the opponent to fall down or fall unconscious. At best, he'll release his hold on the weapon. Any other effects will be superfluous since this Genjutsu will break itself as soon as its initiated.
(Doton: Kisei monsutā) | Earth Release: Parasitic Monster
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30-80
Description: This is the example of how even a small jutsu, if ignored, can become a huge threat to the opponent. The user begins by channeling his chakra into the earth, or into chunks of earth (or even kunai coated with earth chakra) and release it to the ground. The earth chakra contained in this piece of earth, acts like a parasite of sorts; in the sense that it eats away nearby earth materials and grow in size and power. Every turn, it expands (in size, power and rank) like a tumor and takes on the shape of a worm. The worm has the ability to swim through active earth jutsus of its same rank and can attack the target by opening its jaw and swallowing them. The interiors of its body being made of rocks and stones, will churn the opponent, should he be captured. Also, the A-Rank and S-Rank monsters are capable of releasing a large amount of debris from their mouth, before they attack. This is the reason, why it is necessary to destroy the parasite early on. An S-Rank parasite will have the size of Manda-II.
Note:
Every turn, the parasite's rank increases by 1.
Can only be used thrice.
Can only be taught by Python.
‡ Declined ‡ Your techniques are well-made but there are obvious issues with this one. An S-Rank with the chakra cost of a C-Rank that can be used a maximum of three times with no drawback to the user...iffy. The fact that the different ranked creatures have different abilities (look at the coloured). The scale is ridiculous (look at the bolded).
(Genjutsu: Shi u~inku) | Illusion Arts: The Death Wink
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Fighting an Uchiha was never easy. Not looking into the opponent’s eyes always proved to be a disadvantage. To counter this, certain members of the Senju clan came up with a counter technique – The Death Wink. With this technique handy, they could take on any Uchiha they wished. A simple and effective technique that this is, The Death Wink involves simply winking at the opponent to induce him in a genjutsu. This is specially effective when the user himself is under an illusion. Even when the user is paralyzed, he will always blink his eyes. After figuring out that he is in an illusion, the user will release chakra into the opponent’s brain and trigger it through his eye (blink) and put the opponent in an illusion. Note that this does not release the user from the illusion, but simply puts the opponent in an illusion as well, leaving the user more time to release himself from the illusion (using any viable means). The illusion caused by the wink has 2 effects, depending on what the user wants.
1. The moment the user winks, a huge blast of wind hits the opponent, head on and carries him and everything around him, 10 meters away. Since this is simply an illusion, the wind hits faster than the opponent can react. Also, the distance by which the opponent is blown etc, can all be manipulated.
2. The second effect causes the opponent to pertify on the spot. Again, this is unavoidable as it is simply an illusion. The opponent’s skin changes to stone, moss, wood or anything that the user wants. He will also be able to smell the scent of moss or sand or whatever his body would become, making it look all the more real.
Note:
Can only be used twice.
Cannot use any Genjutsu techniques above A rank in the same turn.
Can only be taught by Python
‡ Declined ‡ DNR.
(Genjutsu: Metarika) Illusion Arts: Metallica
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: At any point of time, when the opponent wields a weapon, or any object, the user will form the seal of confrontation to put him in an illusion. Suddenly the object in their hand (or whatever object the user wishes) will give a small beep and it will blow up. Should the opponent's attention be diverted to the object, he will see certain seals on the object before it blows up. The explosion will cause extreme damage (which in reality will cause mental damage), as his body gets blown up in bits and pieces. The fumes created by the smoke of explosion will make him go breathless due to lack of oxygen and presence of harmful gases. In reality, the opponent will fall down imitating his fall in the illusion. His confidence level will drop down while his speed, reflexes and reactions get reduced by a rank.
Note: The effects lasts for only 3 turns.
Note: No genjutsu above A-Rank in the same turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Python
‡ Declined ‡ This is slightly reminiscent of another technique but I'm willing to overlook that. You need to tone this way down. If this does mental damage (which it should), then this Genjutsu will break itself. Remove the fact that the effects last for three turns. For the most part illusions can't control your target's body, only involuntary and reflex actions. I won't allow this to make the opponent to fall down or fall unconscious. At best, he'll release his hold on the weapon. Any other effects will be superfluous since this Genjutsu will break itself as soon as its initiated.
(Doton: Kisei monsutā) | Earth Release: Parasitic Monster
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30-80
Description: This is the example of how even a small jutsu, if ignored, can become a huge threat to the opponent. The user begins by channeling his chakra into the earth, or into chunks of earth (or even kunai coated with earth chakra) and release it to the ground. The earth chakra contained in this piece of earth, acts like a parasite of sorts; in the sense that it eats away nearby earth materials and grow in size and power. Every turn, it expands (in size, power and rank) like a tumor and takes on the shape of a worm. The worm has the ability to swim through active earth jutsus of its same rank and can attack the target by opening its jaw and swallowing them. The interiors of its body being made of rocks and stones, will churn the opponent, should he be captured. Also, the A-Rank and S-Rank monsters are capable of releasing a large amount of debris from their mouth, before they attack. This is the reason, why it is necessary to destroy the parasite early on. An S-Rank parasite will have the size of Manda-II.
Note:
Every turn, the parasite's rank increases by 1.
Can only be used thrice.
Can only be taught by Python.
‡ Declined ‡ Your techniques are well-made but there are obvious issues with this one. An S-Rank with the chakra cost of a C-Rank that can be used a maximum of three times with no drawback to the user...iffy. The fact that the different ranked creatures have different abilities (look at the coloured). The scale is ridiculous (look at the bolded).
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