Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
(Gokōjin) - Halo Blade
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is a dual-sword battō-jutsu technique. During execution, both swords are drawn at an incredible speed, unleashing a strike with enough power to burst an adversary to shreds.
-Iaido
-May only be used twice per battle.
-May not be used twice in a row.
Declined: too vague (don't use terms like incredible speed. This is too subjective). Enough power to burst an adversary? what if he uses enhancements? what if he is from the Kaguya Clan? If this is a custom weapon (which it appears to be), how can you only use it twice per battle? Maybe i'm missing something but this is too vague. Also, your first note is Iaido? What?
(Suiton: Aimai na mizu sutoraiku) - Water Release: Water Strike Evasion
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user's body quickly sinks down into a normal puddle of water and then quickly emerges quietly from another puddle of water from behind the opponent. The user suddenly lunges forward at the opponent while forming a violent drill vortex of water around their arm which they stab forward into the opponent's body.
-Usable thrice per battle.
Declined: so the puddle of water behind the user conveniently happens to be there? State that you create the pool there.
(Kinto'un) - Flying Nimbus
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Flying Nimbus is a small cluster of clouds which has the ability to carry people and the ability to fly of course. It is just big enough to carry one or two people around at high speeds. It always remains up in the sky above the user until its use is required, at which point the cloud will swoop down for the user to hop on. The user cammands it through a mental link and Flying Nimbus grants the user flight without having to spend any chakra.
-The flying nimbus may carry up to two people at once for an unlimited amount of time.
-May be used to dodge up to A-rank ninjutsu through high speed maneuvering twice per battle.
Declined, DNR. Has been attempted and made a lot of times before already.
(Gokōjin) - Halo Blade
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is a dual-sword battō-jutsu technique. During execution, both swords are drawn at an incredible speed, unleashing a strike with enough power to burst an adversary to shreds.
-Iaido
-May only be used twice per battle.
-May not be used twice in a row.
Declined: too vague (don't use terms like incredible speed. This is too subjective). Enough power to burst an adversary? what if he uses enhancements? what if he is from the Kaguya Clan? If this is a custom weapon (which it appears to be), how can you only use it twice per battle? Maybe i'm missing something but this is too vague. Also, your first note is Iaido? What?
(Suiton: Aimai na mizu sutoraiku) - Water Release: Water Strike Evasion
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user's body quickly sinks down into a normal puddle of water and then quickly emerges quietly from another puddle of water from behind the opponent. The user suddenly lunges forward at the opponent while forming a violent drill vortex of water around their arm which they stab forward into the opponent's body.
-Usable thrice per battle.
Declined: so the puddle of water behind the user conveniently happens to be there? State that you create the pool there.
(Kinto'un) - Flying Nimbus
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Flying Nimbus is a small cluster of clouds which has the ability to carry people and the ability to fly of course. It is just big enough to carry one or two people around at high speeds. It always remains up in the sky above the user until its use is required, at which point the cloud will swoop down for the user to hop on. The user cammands it through a mental link and Flying Nimbus grants the user flight without having to spend any chakra.
-The flying nimbus may carry up to two people at once for an unlimited amount of time.
-May be used to dodge up to A-rank ninjutsu through high speed maneuvering twice per battle.
Declined, DNR. Has been attempted and made a lot of times before already.
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