(Mokuton: Mokusei no tsubasa ) - Wood release: Wooden wings Type: supplementary Rank: A Range: short Chakra: 30 (-10 every turn) Damage: N/A Description: The user caused wooden wings to emerge out of their back. The wings resemble Sasuke's wings in his Curse Mode lvl 2. It's the same size, same shape and emerges out of the same place. The user can fly with these wings, but they could also be used to protect the user from incoming attacks.
-Can only be taught by Khallil-
-Can only be used trice per battle.
-Can only be maintained for a maximum of 3 turns.
-This technique has a 1 turn cool down.
-Every turn this technique is maintained, the user loses 10 chakra points.
-No S rank wood, earth or water techniques can be used the same turn.
Declined Word for Word the same as another existing technique called, you guessed it, wood wings... DNR
(Raiton: Raitoningudoriru ) - Lightning release: Lightning drill Type: attack Rank: A Range: short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user puts his hand above his head, like he is about to duck into the water and then he jumps towards the enemy, with their head and fingertips facing the opponent. The user starts to drill and creating a lightning vortex around their body which is rotating along with the body. The lightning forms a sharp tip above the fingertips. The user drills with their body into the opponent, piercing them with the fingertips (lightning tip of the vortex) and dealing damage.
-Can only be taught by -Khallil-
-Can only be used once per battle.
-No A rank lightning (or higher) can be used the same turn.
-No S rank lightning (or higher) can be used the following turn. ___________
-Declined- Similar techniques exist.
(Fuuton: Asshuku sa reta kaze) - Wind release: Compressed wind Type: offensive Rank: A Range: short - long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description:The user puts his hand next together with small space between the hand palms. Then the user starts to release wind chakra out of their mouth between the hands, and they compresses all the wind chakra into a small ball of wind between the hand palms. The user can send the wind ball to anywhere up to long range. Then the user performs the Tiger Handseal and causes the wind ball to expand. The wind ball is able to expand up to any size varying between short and mid range. The wind ball destroys everything in it's path while expanding, and creating a "shinra tensei effect".
-Can only be taught by Khallil
-Can only be used twice per battle
-This technique has a 1 turn cool down.
-No A rank wind(or higher) can be used the same turn.
-No S rank wind (or higher) can be used the following turn. ___________
-Declined- It's a rip off of two cannon techniques, one you just mentioned "Shinra Tensei", and the Wind Ball Technique.
(Obama's Fingertips) - Obama's Yubisaki Rank: A Type: Weapon Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Range: Short-Mid Descrition: Obama's Fingertips is a unique pair of gloves with small tubes on the end of each finger. When the user channels chakra into the fingertips of the gloves, he is capable of firing a small sphere of wind chakra at the opponent, relative to the size of a skittle . The spheres can not be fired faster than one per half-second from each finger. The gloves do not interfere with handseals or any other techniques involving the hands. The gloves can only be used once per turn. __________
-Declined- Needs a bit more clarification and restriction to it's unique abilities.
Summoning Animal: Siberian Tigers ( Siberiarutora ) Scroll Owner: Redwood ( Myself as it's a new contract ) Other Users Who Have Signed Contract: None as of now Summoning Boss if Existing: Pending Below Other Summoning Animals Tied To Contract: None as of now Description and Background: Siberian Tigers are a sub-species [most-common species and posterchild of all tigers, the odd ones out being White Tigers (our rp variant owned by Akiza) which are an extremely rare variant of Bengal Tigers] of tigers native to the Land of Lightning and are particularly diverse in Turtle Island. Siberian Tigers are large creatures; weighing up to 250kg at the smallest size and when they are standing on two feet can reach heights of 3 meters. The tigers are primarily orange with black stripes that are accented by white fur. Although this odd assortment of colors might stand out to some, it provides the perfect camouflage to other. Tigers in general are capable of performing very basic attacks, such as biting or scratching with their huge claws and teeth. This species is also superb in the art of stealth, being natural hunters and all. Their paws allow them to move like a much smaller cat to only be complimented by their hulking bodies. Tigers are natural predators but have a rare relationship with certain shinobi, acting not as pets, but as companions in battle. Siberian Tigers are capable of communicating with humans like most other summons in the narutoverse.
*The summon contract owned by Akiza, White tigers, are an extremely rare variant of the Bengal Tiger, sub-species of Tiger. Siberian differ from Bengal in the size category, both physical size and Siberian having the largest living population, and how their bodies are adapted for the higher altitude. (Kumo.)
Declined DNR
Napoleon Rank: S Type: Summon Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Range: Short Descrition:Napoleon is the King of All The Tigers (aka boss). He stands at a hulking 15 feet tall when on his rear legs and weighs approximately 400kg. He does not appear to look like a typical Siberian Tiger but is instead all black with white accents. Napoleon is capable of taking little to no damage from C-rank and below techniques and is capable of performing A-rank and below water techniques with no handseals.
-Lasts for 5 Turns
*If this is too many turns for him to be on the field please feel free to reduce the number as you deem fitting, as I would rather just have the summon and not have to re-submit for another cycle. Same goes for too high of a rank pertaining to the water and feel free to remove the damage taken part if you deem fitting.
(Ranton: Buatsui Gufuu) - Storm Release: Colossal Typhoon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user utilizes their Ranton chakra to generate multiple black clouds imbued with their chakra (similar to Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave) around themselves, which quickly whirl around their body to give them the appearance of a tornado-like formation. As this happens, the user will also spin on the spot to further augment the speed and direction of the tornado's rotation. Due to the force of the tornado's rotation, any material covering the user's body will be quickly pushed away, freeing the user from their hold. Furthermore, as the raging black tornado spins, the streaks of blue electricity coursing through it will be emitted from the tornado as projectiles of Storm in every direction, making this technique exceedingly useful in countering techniques such as Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop, as the force generated by the tornado will repel the muddy downpour whilst the lightning produced by the technique will momentarily destroy it completely.
Note: Can only be used four times per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by -Danzo-
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Declined Why mid range and how will you be able to spin like that and still see, react, etc if you aren't a hyuuga?
(Ranton: Kagai Reiki) - Storm Release: Corrosive Aura
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will utilize their Ranton chakra to generate an aura of electrically infused black clouds from their body similar to the ones created in Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave, with the clouds being much darker in colour. The pitch black clouds appear to "leak" from certain areas on the user's body more than others, with their sleeves and feet producing the highest quantity of black clouds. Around the user's feet, the black clouds will form into a controllable layer similar to that of Gaara's floating sand, allowing the user to levitate and fly through the air. (not that high) The aura of dark black clouds will also create for a very sinister and truly foul atmosphere.
Note: Lasts for a maximum of three turns
Note: Can only be Taught by -Danzo-
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Declined Sand has "solidity" and thus why it can be used for that effect. A cloud does not. DNR.
(Ranton: Kuro Ikazuchi no Yoroi) - Storm Release: Black Thunder Armour Rank: A
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short Chakra cost: 30 (-10 chakra per turn)
Damage points: N/A (-30 damage if contact with the opponent is made)
Description: The user will release their ranton chakra throughout every chakra point in their bodies to manifest a whirling armour of electrically-infused black clouds similar to the ones produced in Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave. These black clouds will instantly assume the shape of the user's body, whilst not making direct contact with them, but instead constantly circulating their bodies in a spiral-like motion. The Ranton armour grants the user a certain level of tolerance to fire-based elements as well as Earth based-ones, as the the moist black clouds will douse the flames before they reach the user's body whilst the surging electricity will serve the purpose of shattering earthen constructs which make contact with the armour. Furthermore, due to the constantly surging stream of storm coursing through the black clouds, anyone unfortunate enough to come into contact with the user will undergo a severe shock, leaving them paralyzed for one whole turn (full body paralysis). However, aside from these normal benefits, the raging armour of black clouds and storm bolts provides an ability unparalleled by all other elemental armours. The force generated by the whirling black clouds means any gas-based elements targeting/residing in the area of the user will be blown away, causing them to be dispersed and pushed away from the user's position, making sure they don't happen to inhale them. Despite this resembling a property of Wind Release, the dispersion force is simply a product of the spiraling motion of the clouds and not the element itself. Not only that, but the inclusion of electricity in the black clouds also means that it will neutralize many gas-based elements entirely by de-ionising them e.g. Fluorine Release or Carbon Release. A powerful enough wind elemental technique can blow the clouds away to forcefully deactivate the user's armour.
Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by -Danzo- Note: Cannot use Wind Release whilst this technique is active
Note: Armour doesn't cover/obstruct the user's eyes or mouth.
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Declined Remove the gas part completely. The paralysis on touch part should be something like "causes slight numbness and temporary paralisys on touch" nothing more. And why wind? Why would the fact that you are focusing water and lightning chakras (storm element) prevent you from using wind? If it prevents you from using wind, shouldn't it prevent you from using earth and fire as well? Remove the references to the CEs. Last go then its DNR.
(Ranton: Kuro Ikazuchi no Yoroi) - Storm Release: Black Thunder Armour
Rank: A
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (-10 chakra per turn)
Damage points: N/A (-30 damage if contact with the opponent is made)
Description: The user will release their ranton chakra throughout every chakra point in their bodies to manifest a whirling armour of electrically-infused black clouds similar to the ones produced in Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave. These black clouds will instantly assume the shape of the user's body, whilst not making direct contact with them, but instead constantly circulating their bodies in a spiral-like motion. The Ranton armour grants the user a certain level of tolerance to fire-based elements as well as Earth based-ones, as the the moist black clouds will douse the flames before they reach the user's body whilst the surging electricity will serve the purpose of shattering earthen constructs which make contact with the armour. Furthermore, due to the constantly surging stream of storm coursing through the black clouds, anyone unfortunate enough to come into contact with the user will receive a slight shock resulting in slightly numbness and temporary paralysis (one turn). A powerful enough wind elemental technique can blow the clouds away to forcefully deactivate the user's armour. Whilst this elemental armour is active, the only elements the user is capable of using are: Storm, Water and Lightning.
Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by -Danzo-
Note: Armour doesn't cover/obstruct the user's eyes or mouth. __________
-Declined- I was going to approve it, but i saw some changes that you didn't bold, DNR.
(Ranton: Buatsui Gufuu) - Storm Release: Colossal Typhoon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user utilizes their Ranton chakra to generate multiple black clouds imbued with their chakra (similar to Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave) around themselves, which quickly whirl around their body to give them the appearance of a tornado-like formation. As this happens, the user will also spin on the spot to further augment the speed and direction of the tornado's rotation. Due to the force of the tornado's rotation, any material covering the user's body will be quickly pushed away, freeing the user from their hold. Furthermore, as the raging black tornado spins, the streaks of blue electricity coursing through it will be emitted from the tornado as projectiles of Storm in every direction (which reach up to Mid-Range), making this technique exceedingly useful in countering techniques such as Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop, as the force generated by the tornado will repel the muddy downpour whilst the lightning produced by the technique will momentarily destroy it completely. During this jutsu's duration, the user cannot see or react, leaving them vulnerable for its short duration.
Note: Can only be used four times per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by -Danzo- ___________
-Declined- DNR, for not bolding the changes you've made.
(Hanabi Taikai) Firework Festival
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Throw: Short-Long | Explosion: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: 10 each (x3)
Description: The user will throw three balls of rolled up explosive notes that are the size of regular marbles (exploding balls hereafter referred to as marbles), after infusing them with chakra; this chakra coats the marbles and allows them to be thrown a greater distance than the marbles would otherwise be capable of reaching, due to their extremely low mass and weight. Due to their small size, and the lack of a kunai to give away their position, these become a viable option in battle, as they are harder to see. Not only that, but each marble can be detonated individually at the user’s command, like regular exploding tags, allowing the marbles to be used for strategic purposes, due to their explosive radius. The damage is caused solely by the explosive tags; the chakra does not amplify the damage in anyway, and is simply used to throw them greater distances.
(Gurandofināre) Grand Finale
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long (Throw) | Short-Mid (Explosion)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Every great display of fireworks must come with a grand finale. The “ending sequence” to the show created by the “Fireworks Festival” technique. This orb of explosive notes is roughly the size of a baseball, compared to the marble-sized orbs of its parent technique. This technique functions in the same manner in that the chakra is not used to cause damage, but rather to allow the rather low-mass ball of paper to be thrown large distances; the damage comes about solely from the explosive yield of the paper bombs. Like a fire-works star, the color of the explosion can actually be controlled while making the orb, though this is purely aesthetic.
*Only useable three-times per battle, as the balls are pre-formed.
*Can be detonated by handseal, much like a normal explosive note. Otherwise, it functions like a grenade with a four second fuse. ________________
-Leaving for Scorps (Deoxys)-
Declined A few notes: If you throw this into mid-short range of you, you receive damage as you're essentially also inside the explosion area you define. So add a note explaining that. The size of this makes it somewhat not easy to carry on you. I mean, its 3 baseballs worth of explosive tags. How can you carry these? Doesn't make much sense so at least try to add a small explanation that, even if it counts for little, helps this make some sense. And finally, all the properties you explain in the original technique you must explain here even if you refer it as to being a bigger and stronger version of the original. You cannot expect all enemies will read your cj thread to try and find the original.
Doki Sono Kamigami: Prometheus' Inferuno| Wrath of the Gods: Prometheus' Inferno Type: Offensive Rank: S-Rank Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: A very complex technique of Doki Sono Kamigami, with this, the ninja uses their elemental prowess to add a stronger kick to the flavour. The user swings the blades up around the user, by swinging it behind them, when they reach the peak height, the user quickly coats the blades with Earth chakra by channeling their chakra through the chains and in to the blades. Then the user swiftly brings the blades down hard, and as the user swings it down on to their target, they add Fire chakra through the blade to give it an explosive impact. The earth chakra has two proposes: 1) To give the blades a stronger impact and damage and 2) Protect the blade from being damaged by the impact. The blade is protected by the explosion of chakra and the Earth chakra. This whole technique is one swift movement of the user swinging the blades with an explosive ending. The explosion is similar to a geyser of flames, which erupts from where the blades make contact with the ground.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Needs to be trained in Doki Sono Kamigami
Note: Bio must wield the blades
Note: A Samurai bio that uses this fighting style cannot use this technique
Declined Problem with this is that the description needs to be rewritten as its a bit confusing and you cannot channel two elemental chakras into the blades like that. The second chakra would cancel out the first one as you don't have Y/Y to enable such a feat.
Doki Sono Kamigami: Prometheus' Inferuno| Wrath of the Gods: Prometheus' Inferno Type: Offensive Rank: S-Rank Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: A very complex technique of Doki Sono Kamigami, with this, the ninja uses their elemental prowess to add a stronger kick to the flavour. The user swings the blades up around the user, by swinging it behind them, when they reach the peak height, the user quickly coats the blades with Fire chakra by channeling their chakra through the chains and in to the blades. Then the user swiftly brings the blades down hard, and as the user swings it down on to their target, they release the Fire chakra through the blade to give it an explosive impact. The Fire chakra has two proposes: 1) To give the blades a stronger impact and damage and 2) Protect the blade from being damaged by the impact. The blade is protected by the explosion of chakra. This whole technique is one swift movement of the user swinging the blades with an explosive ending. The explosion is similar to a geyser of flames, which erupts from where the blades make contact with the ground.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Needs to be trained in Doki Sono Kamigami
Note: Bio must wield the blades
Note: A Samurai bio that uses this fighting style cannot use this technique ________________
-Leaving for Scorps-
Approved
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(Reopon Gigei: Katateochi Raishuu | Leopon Arts: Partial Attack Type: Offensive/Defensive Rank: S-rank Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: The user channels their earth chakra through the ground in the desired area they want to effect. The user then claps their hands together and causes a part of the Leopon to rise out of the earth. The parts that can be created are the claws, tail, or jaws. The part created rises out in the blink of an eye and can be freely manipulated to do the user's bidding. Example being, the user can use the Claw to smack the target out of the way, or use the jaws to clamp a target. For every part created, the user spends a turn and uses 40 chakra while the part is still "alive". The created part can be made to be as tall as the Great Stone Golem and can be used to defend against incoming attack. Example, the user creates a tail in front of them to swipe away an incoming projectile.
Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle
Note: Must be a signer of the Leopon summoning
Note: Cannot summon a Leopon this turn or the next __________
-Declined- DNR, mainly because of the bolded.
(Kchuysei: Kin) - Summoning Technique: Kin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam his hands together for the summoning. This summon's Kin to the field. A Black snake with glowing red eyes. he has spikes throughout his back and head which he uses to attack his enemy with extreme power, smashing and piercing force (capable of overcoming even B-Rank defenses) He also has extremely sharp teeth that can shred flesh with ease. Kin is the same size of your average Kyodalja. (Giant Snake) Unlike most snakes, Kin spends most his time in water, being a master of water element Kin can use all water it's summoner knows. Kin is able to swim in water as fast as he can move on land (same speed as Manda) and can hold his breath for the duration of his summoning if needed. Kin can take one A-Rank attack and survive by shedding his skins afterwards, although this can only be done once through the use of the "Snake Body Shedding" technique. Like most Snakes, Kin is able to feel the vibrations through the ground to pinpoint and enemy, however he cannot use this method underwater. Note:
-Can only be Summoned once per Battle
-Summon last 5 turns
-Water counts as a Move
-Must sign Snake Contract
-Can only be taught by Serpent
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(Kchuysei: Akumu) - Summoning Technique: Nightmare
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam his hands together for the summoning. This summon's Nightmare to the field. A purple and tan snake with three teal eyes and a smaller snake head for a tail. Nightmare can use this tail to attack or bind an enemy. Nightmare is the same size of your average Kyodalja. (Giant Snake) Nightmare is able to is able to smash an opponent using its body with powerful force. (capable of overcoming even B-Rank defenses) and has the unique ability to pulsate colors from his third eye that can mesmerize an opponent looking into it making them unable to move. this however doesn't effect there ability to think or focus chakra but simply prevents prey from escaping dinner time with a mesmerizing fear. Nightmare can take one A-Rank attack and survive by shedding his skins afterwards, although this can only be done once through the use of the "Snake Body Shedding" technique. Like most Snakes, Nightmare is able to feel the vibrations through the ground to pinpoint and enemy Note:
-Can only be Summoned once per Battle
-Summon last 5 turns
-Mesmerization counts as a Move
-Must sign Snake Contract
-Can only be taught by Serpent
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(Kchuysei: Fukitsu) - Summoning Technique: Sinister
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam his hands together for the summoning. This summon's Sinister to the field. A green snake with golden wings. Sinister is able to fly at fast speeds (same speed as Nagato's bird summon) and is able to smash an opponent using its body with powerful force. (capable of overcoming even B-Rank defenses) Sinister is the same size of your average Kyodalja. (Giant Snake) and is a master of Wind Element, being able to use all wind jutsu the user knows. Sinister can take one A-Rank attack and survive by shedding his skins afterwards, although this can only be done once through the use of the "Snake Body Shedding" technique. Like most Snakes, Sinister is able to feel the vibrations through the ground to pinpoint an enemies location This method does not work if Sinister is in the air. Note:
-Can only be Summoned once per Battle
-Summon last 5 turns
-Wind counts as a Move
-Must sign Snake Contract
-Can only be taught by Serpent ___________
-All Declined- You must post either the bio that has snakes as a default, or a snake's training thread where you signed the contract.
(Fūinjutsu: Shikkoku Ya no Ryūseiza) – Sealing Technique: Jet Black Arrow of the Draco Constellation
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Through an infusion of chakra the user will mark a limb with an intricate Seal that remains visible regardless of its status. The seal functions as the focal point of the Black Arrow and only activates when two energy-based techniques of C-Rank and above collide and are about to cancel each other out. The techniques in question must contain a reasonable amount of energy. When the two techniques clash; thin and black arrows will protrude from the Seal and appear at the point of collision almost instantly. The arrows function as sponges, absorbing all remaining chakra with a foreign chakra signature and storing it in ‘glyphs’ that will appear on the user’s body, while storing all absorbed chakra with the user’s chakra signature in smaller sub-Seals that surround said glyphs. If the user is hit by an energy-based technique; the arrows have a secondary property in draining the technique of a part of its energy as it connects, resulting in a -20 damage reduction that can save the user's life in a critical situation. The Seal activates automatically and drains a small amount of chakra from the user to support its approach, but the same amount of chakra is given back when the arrows return to form glyphs and sub-Seals, since the Seal is a closed circuit. The ranks of the techniques absorbed decide how much chakra the Black Arrow can gather. C-Ranked techniques leave five points worth of chakra to be harvested, B-Ranked leave ten and so on.
-The Seal remains active until deactivated.
-The user only needs to spend thirty chakra points when creating the original Seal, not when it activates.
-The glyphs and sub-Seals are separate from the user’s chakra circulatory system.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin. ____________
-Declined- You need a trigger for the seal's second ability, it has to seal the technique before it connects with you, if it did connect then it will deliver damage and the seal can't do anything about it, and would be considered a medical related sealing technique which is only submitted by NB medics, and oh that's right..... you need usage restrictions.
(Fūinjutsu: Dai Tadashi-Sha Hinome) – Sealing Technique: Great Agamemnon’s Light of Day
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 60
Description: By unsealing stored chakra from the glyphs or sub-Seals of ‘Shikkoku Ya no Ryūseiza’ externally and internally respectively; this technique allows the user to either empower a physical attack with elementally natured chakra, or infuse elemental techniques with unfocused bursts of elementally natured chakra. By using this technique internally the user draws on chakra from the sub-Seals of the Black Arrow, filling an area of the body, or a weapon, with chakra of the sealed nature that strengthens a physical attack by granting it the traits and characteristics of said chakra. Similarly; by using the technique externally the user draws on chakra from the glyphs of the Black Arrow, allowing for the addition of a second, perhaps unknown element to the user’s technique.
-At least thirty points of chakra are needed to utilize this technique.
-Both the internal and external version can be used with mixtures of several different elemental natures.
-Both the sub-Seals and glyphs react when the user intends to use them, like Danzō’s ‘Tongue Twister Seal’ reacts to speech.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin. ___________
-Declined- The original sealing technique wasn't approved
Yes, I know I need to post the Seal every time it activates. Yes, I know every activation counts as a 'move'.
No, I haven't added any usage restrictions. The way these techniques function is a heck of a restriction in and by itself.
(Ninjutsu: Heya)Ninja Art: Room Type: Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40(-10 for each turn active) Damage: N/A Description: This is an advanced and complex Ninjutsu. The user will first start by gathering up a large amount of chakra and then releasing it outwards. The chakra will take the shape of a large room that surrounds am area around the user. The higher the user's rank, the further it can go. The room consists entirely of the user's chakra and is connected to them. The room gives the user four unique powers. The first power is detection. Due to the Room being a field of chakra that is connected to the user, the user is aware of the presence of anything with the Room, similar to barrier jutsu The second ability is control over every non-living entity within the Room. This gives the user the ability to levitate, move around or change the direction and orientation of objects. This grants the user a third power: Orientation Switching. This acts as somewhat akin to a higher level or substitution jutsu, where the user is able to switch the places of two or more objects. However, the user is only capable of switching, meaning he cannot simply teleport an object to any location within the Room. The user is capable of switching himself with an object at any given time, but is only capable of switching another human being once while the Room is active. Meaning, if the user switches Person A with Object A, he can no longer switch Person A with anything for the duration of the Room's activation. The activation of another Room resets this, and Person A can now be switched once more. The fourth power lies within the conjunction of bladed weapons. If the user swings his bladed weapon, as though performing a slice, the object he directing the slice at will be cut. However, this is only applicable to non-living entities. Once the object is cut, the user is capable of manipulating it as any other non-living object within the Room.
~Can only be twice per battle and lasts four turns. Requires a cool-down of two turns before being used again due to the strain it puts on the user's stamina and chakra~
~Must have mastered Ninjutsu~
~S-rank are capable of creating a Room up to Short-range. Sannin are capable of making one up to mid-range. Sage are capable of making one up to Long-Range, but Long-Range Rooms require a three turn cool down rather than two.~
~Must be of at least S-class to learn~
~Can only be taught by Rikerslade~
~The user is only capable of switching himself with another object three times per activation.~
~The user cannot go above A-rank jutsu while the Room is active.
Note: The switching of objects and slicing of objects will require two other separate CJ that will be posted if this one is approved. Manipulating objects is part of the Room Ninjutsu and detection of everything within the room is passive. _____________
-Leaving for Scorps-
Declined >_> Unreasonable and this would require you more than simple ninjutsu. Its also very similar to some existing techniques. DNR
Yamanaka's Mind Reading Art - Warlord - Yamanaka Omoi Haidoku no Jutsu - Ekishu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30(-15 for usage per turn)
Damage points: -
Description: This technique was created by the Yamanaka eldest, its the essence that made the clan leaders unbeatable at times. This technique is derived jutsu of the Yamanaka Clan Telepathy technique, the user preform one hand seal and connect his mind with the enemy's but without allowing his thoughts to proceed to the enemy, allowing him to listen to the enemy's thoughts and know what's their strategy. This technique's user is able to react faster and know the whereabouts of his enemy. However, as great as this technique sound, it has the drawback of being only accessible -while its activated- when the user focus his mind into it, making the user unable to preform another technique while he's reading the enemy's mind.
-Remains active for three turns maximum and require three turns to be used again.
-User cannot use it more than twice per battle.
-Can only be used by custom Yamanaka clansman biography.
-Cannot use S rank or higher techniques while this technique is active.
Declined There is already a mind reading ability and its not ranged... DNR
Tamamayu no Jutsu: Panchi no Shihari- Art of the Jade Warp: Punch of the Thousand Needles
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: When Tamamayu wielder preform a punch or a similar motion with it, he lunches multiple piercing strings from his gauntlet in the punch's direction. If they targeted the enemy, the stings can cause minor damages to the enemy by screwing through their body and then sew together from the enemy's back making the user capable of dragging the enemy with his arm to then deliver a second punch if he wishes. This technique can be very effective with taijutsu and few ninjutsu techniques.
-Can only be preformed through Tamamayu.
Declined What is Tamamayu? Resubmit with link to this for reference...We aren't psychic you know?
Toad Summoning Jutsu: Gamastitch - Gama Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gamastitch
Type: Summoning(Offensive/Defense/Subblementery)
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: Gamastitch is a freaky looking blue toad who values the toad clan bond among one another. To summon Gamastitch, the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground, another object or direct his hand toward the ground to summon him while airborne. By that, the user summons Gamastitch, the Ohana toad. Gamastitch is as large as Fukasaku, he has no elemental affinity or taijutsu/kenjutsu knowledge. Gamastitch has different type of abilities that fits his body, he can preform the summoning technique to summon any of the toads the user can summon with its long nails, he usually cut a bit of his thump while preforming handseals. Gamastitch can also generate oil from his mouth like other toads using the Toad Oil Bullet Technique.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-Leaves the battlefield after five turns of his summoning.
-All of the techniques Gamastitch uses count as techniques used by the summoner.
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Hurricane Skater Martial Art: Whipping Tornado
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: While using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater Technique, the user will use chakra to stick his feet against the skating board and to then increase the length of the hurricane below it as he incline it to reach out to mid range of him swinging it from left to right or the opposite. This technique cracks off the surface of the ground drawing lines on its flattened texture with its strong gusts. If this technique encounter the enemy/enemies, it will draw them in, deliver sever cuts in their bodies and bang them against the floor with its forceful spins.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater Technique before hand. ___________
-Declined- Next time you need to quote the technique you used it for reference in your description "Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater Technique", as it's a part of the description.
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Tamamayu no Jutsu: Panchi no Shihari- Art of the Jade Warp: Punch of the Thousand Needles
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: When Tamamayu wielder preform a punch or a similar motion with it, he lunches multiple piercing strings from his gauntlet in the punch's direction. If they targeted the enemy, the stings can cause minor damages to the enemy by screwing through their body and then sew together from the enemy's back making the user capable of dragging the enemy with his arm to then deliver a second punch if he wishes. This technique can be very effective with taijutsu and few ninjutsu techniques.
-Can only be preformed through Tamamayu. __________
-Declined- This should be short ranged, and what ninjutsu techniques can this be effective with? o_o
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Toad Summoning Jutsu: Gamastitch - Gama Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gamastitch
Type: Summoning(Offensive/Defense/Subblementery)
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: Gamastitch is a freaky looking blue toad who values the toad clan bond among one another. To summon Gamastitch, the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground, another object or direct his hand toward the ground to summon him while airborne. By that, the user summons Gamastitch, the Ohana toad. Gamastitch is as large as Fukasaku, he has no elemental affinity or taijutsu/kenjutsu knowledge. Gamastitch has different type of abilities that fits his body, he can preform the summoning technique to summon any of the toads the user can summon with its long nails, he usually cut a bit of his thump while preforming handseals. Gamastitch can also generate oil from his mouth like other toads using the Toad Oil Bullet Technique.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-Leaves the battlefield after five turns of his summoning.
-All of the techniques Gamastitch uses count as techniques used by the summoner.
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-Declined- It's impossible for a toad to summon another toad, that's only a feat exclusive to their summoners, which hold a blood contract with them, that's how they are capable of summoning the toads, likewise the toads are capable of summoning the ones who hold a blood contract with them "contract signers", this is something that will never be approved or allowed.
Summoning Animal: Starfishes/Sea Stars Scroll Owner: Naizen Other Users who have signed contract: N/A Summoning Boss if existing: N/A Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
-Larvae
-Juvenile Stars
-Las Marianas Starfishes
Origin:
Starfishes originate from a secret coral reef called Las Marianas. It lies in the deepest part of the world's oceans; The Mariana Trench in the arc of the Mariana Islands.
General Description:
Starfish or sea stars are echinoderms belonging to the class Asteroidea. There are more than 1800 different species of sea star. Most sea stars are predators. Although starfish are invertebrates, they do have a kind of skeleton. The bodies of starfish are composed of calcium carbonate plates, known as 'ossicles'. These form the endoskeleton, which takes on a variety of forms such as spines and granules. Most starfish have five arms, called rays that come out from a center circle (disk). If a starfish has more than five rays, it will often have rays in multiples of five; there could be 10, 15, 20, or even 30 rays on one starfish. The aboral or upper surface may be smooth, granular or spiny, and is covered with overlapping plates.
Starfish have tube feet operated by a hydraulic system and a mouth at the centre of the oral or lower surface. Starfish, like many sea creatures, are able to regenerate (grow back) parts of their bodies. Starfish are better at regeneration than most other creatures. Not only can a new ray grow when a ray is cut/torn off, but if the affected ray has even a small piece of the central disk still attached, a whole new starfish can grow from the one ray.
Las Marianas Star Toxins: Starfishes contain a very toxic poison known as Saponins. When stung/bitten, the saponins is lost into the wound, thus the target are plagued by a sharp stinging pain, persistent bleeding due to the haemolytic effect of saponins, nausea, tissue swelling, numbness and paralysis. Large dose of saponins, are lethal to humans. Saponins occur throughout the life-cycle of the starfish. Thus there are saponins similar to those in the adult tissues in the larvae and juvenile stars.
Seastars may possess at least an eye on every one of their arms - so a 5-armed starfish has 5 eyes, a 40-armed starfish has 40 and so on.
Summon General Abilities:
Sea stars vary in sizes and shapes and thus by harnessing their chakra a ninja who has signed this contract will be able to summon starfishes as little as the tip of their finger to those large enough to go head-to-head with the giant frogs of Myobozukan.
This poison from sea stars may be injected into a target's body via their spines(extendable and retractable), tube feet, mouth or other weapons which will be included in the respective summoning jutsu. The toxin(saponins) produced in starfishes will be manipulated using chakra. Versitility of this toxin will be made manifest in subsequent submissions of techniques known as Star Arts.
Summoning:
The contract holder or signer of the starfish summoning contract is able to summon sea stars from Las Marianas. The summoner, using different amounts of chakra may summon starfishes of varying sizes, abilities and weapons. Larvae and Juveniles may be summoned if the summoner at their own will uses a minimized amount of chakra or if due to circumstances beyond their control the summoning is unsuccessful. Larvae and Juvenile Stars possess chakra and poisons(although in quantities smaller than a sea star) individually and may or may not utilize the Star arts.
Larvae takes 2 turns to develop into a species of starfish while Juvenile Stars take 1 turn. Sea stars require a water source to be successfully summoned, or may bring a water source with them when summoned. Since they originate from the deepest part of the oceans of the world [6,000 m (20,000 ft) below the surface], starfishes/sea stars, being very conversant with water are thus able to sense water passively.
~I would like to claim ownership of all species of starfish, the Asteroidea Class and the Asterozoa Subphylum at large.~
Summoning Animal: Starfishes/Sea Stars Scroll Owner: Naizen Other Users who have signed contract: N/A Summoning Boss if existing: N/A Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
-Larvae
-Juvenile Stars
-Las Marianas Starfishes
Starfishes originate from a secret coral reef called Las Marianas. It lies in the deepest part of the world's oceans; The Mariana Trench in the arc of the Mariana Islands.
Starfish or sea stars are echinoderms belonging to the class Asteroidea. There are more than 1800 different species of sea star. Most sea stars are predators. Although starfish are invertebrates, they do have a kind of skeleton. The bodies of starfish are composed of calcium carbonate plates, known as 'ossicles'. These form the endoskeleton, which takes on a variety of forms such as spines and granules. Most starfish have five arms, called rays that come out from a center circle (disk). If a starfish has more than five rays, it will often have rays in multiples of five; there could be 10, 15, 20, or even 30 rays on one starfish. The aboral or upper surface may be smooth, granular or spiny, and is covered with overlapping plates.
Starfish have tube feet operated by a hydraulic system and a mouth at the centre of the oral or lower surface. Starfish, like many sea creatures, are able to regenerate (grow back) parts of their bodies. Starfish are better at regeneration than most other creatures. Not only can a new ray grow when a ray is cut/torn off, but if the affected ray has even a small piece of the central disk still attached, a whole new starfish can grow from the one ray.
Las Marianas Star Toxins: Starfishes contain a very toxic poison known as Saponins. When stung/bitten, the saponins is lost into the wound, thus the target are plagued by a sharp stinging pain, persistent bleeding due to the haemolytic effect of saponins, nausea, tissue swelling, numbness and paralysis. Large dose of saponins, are lethal to humans. Saponins occur throughout the life-cycle of the starfish. Thus there are saponins similar to those in the adult tissues in the larvae and juvenile stars.
Seastars may possess at least an eye on every one of their arms - so a 5-armed starfish has 5 eyes, a 40-armed starfish has 40 and so on.
Sea stars vary in sizes and shapes and thus by harnessing their chakra a ninja who has signed this contract will be able to summon starfishes as little as the tip of their finger to those large enough to go head-to-head with the giant frogs of Myobozukan.
This poison from sea stars may be injected into a target's body via their spines(extendable and retractable), tube feet, mouth or other weapons which will be included in the respective summoning jutsu. The toxin(saponins) produced in starfishes will be manipulated using chakra. Versitility of this toxin will be made manifest in subsequent submissions of techniques known as Star Arts.
The contract holder or signer of the starfish summoning contract is able to summon sea stars from Las Marianas. The summoner, using different amounts of chakra may summon starfishes of varying sizes, abilities and weapons. Larvae and Juveniles may be summoned if the summoner at their own will uses a minimized amount of chakra or if due to circumstances beyond their control the summoning is unsuccessful. Larvae and Juvenile Stars possess chakra and poisons(although in quantities smaller than a sea star) individually and may or may not utilize the Star arts.
Larvae takes 2 turns to develop into a species of starfish while Juvenile Stars take 1 turn. Sea stars require a water source to be successfully summoned, or may bring a water source with them when summoned. Since they originate from the deepest part of the oceans of the world [6,000 m (20,000 ft) below the surface], starfishes/sea stars, being very conversant with water are thus able to sense water passively. ____________
-Leaving for Scorps-
~I would like to claim ownership of all species of starfish, the Asteroidea Class and the Asterozoa Subphylum at large.~
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Summoning Animal: Scroll Owner: Other Users who have signed contract: Summoning Boss if existing: Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Description and Background:
And is found in the first page of this thread. Also, other summoning animals tied to the contract isn't sub versions of the animal itself but specific summons you might summon which, since you haven't made any and the contract is still not approved, is to be left as N/A
Ameton/Genjutsu: Doragon no Rasuto | Rain/Illusionary Arts: Dragon's Lust
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 (stress on the target's mind)
Description: A rain based genjutsu cast by the user after stringing 2 handseals. In this illusion the rain falling on the target, the rainwater that has their clothes and body soaked and the rainwater around them turns into highly flammable oil similar to that of the (Suiton: Kokuun) - Water Style: Black Clouds technique. Simultaneously, they will see the user disappear from his previous position and reappear in mid air exhaling a large stream of flames that engulfs them, burning them alive.
#It must be raining in other to use this.
#Usable twice per battle
#Can only be taught by Naizen ___________
-Declined- I don't get it, will the rain itself in reality turn into flammable oil? or the one caught into the genjutsu experiences that the rain turns to a flammable oil? because if the rain itself turns into flammable oil then i won't ever approve this.
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Ameton/Genjutsu: Konagona ni Natta Kagami | Rain/Illusionary Arts: Shattered Mirror
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Whilst it is raining, the user casts an illusion on the target(s). This illusion dwells on the reflective property of rain which is amplified by the use of chakra. The user casts an illusion simultaneously with tossing a ninja tool (kunai, shuriken, etc) at the target. The limits of how that 1 tool is reflected all depends on the user's imagination. For example, after throwing a kunai, one, two, more or all raindrops falling on the target may become kunais, impaling him continuously as they fall; or the target may witness a shuriken from a different direction when it is thrown by the user; it is all limited to what and how the user thinks. But all the illusionary reflections must be based off of the single ninja tool used. That means the user cannot throw a kunai and reflect it as a shuriken, etc.
#Usable twice per battle
#Can only be taught by Naizen _____________
-Declined- similar techniques exist.
Genjutsu: Dementor's Seppun(Illusionary Arts: Dementor's Kiss) Type: Offensive Rank: A rank Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: After performing four hand seals, the user places the target in an illusion through sending his/her chakra to the targets brain. Inside the illusion the target would see a
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descend from the sky towards them. The target, upon the appearance of the being, would be paralyzed in their place due to the users chakra restricting them. As the being gets closer and closer to the target, (s)he would begin to feel colder and colder. As the being, named dementor, reaches the target it begins to 'suck' out the targets 'soul' through a 'kiss'(not necessarily a actual lip on lip kiss, it can be performed with the dementor's 'mouth' a few inches away.) The target would see a light blue line emerging from their mouth, said line would represent the 'soul'. As the 'soul' is being 'sucked', the target's deepest and most depressingly sad memories would 'pop' up in their mind, causing them extreme discomfort, furthermore the dementor would not only reveal the memories, it would also appear in them, making them much more worse than they already are, adding torture and anguish or whatever necessary and suitable to cause mental damage due to strain.
-Usable 3X per battle.
-Must have illusionary arts training completed.
-No illusionary arts above A rank can be used in the same and next turn. ____________
-Declined- I like it, but one thing is wrong with it, one isn't paralyzed simply because your chakra is restraining him, in the genjutsu his mind has to believe that he can't move, thus he has to experience something that makes him unable to move, like chains wrapping around him in the genjutsu and stuff like that.
Genjutsu: Nazonazo (Illusionary Arts: Enigma) Type: Supplementary Rank: S Rank Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A(Or damage of the reversed technique if any) Description: A dormant illusion that is cast after the performance of five hand seals. The user's chakra would remain in the targets body until the opponent uses a illusionary technique, when that happen's the user's illusion 'begins'. The affected target would believe that the illusion that they have cast has backfired on them, and instead of happening to their opponent happened to them. The target would experience the effect of his own genjutsu. Of course the user is left to defend against the genjutsu cast on himself as well.
-Usable 2X, but never two usages on the same target when (s)he is under the effect of the genjutsu.
-Only B rank and below genjutsu for the same and next turn.
-The user can't cast another genjutsu at the opponent when enigma is in use.
-Doesn't work on ocular genjutsu.
-Only backfires A rank and below genjutsu techniques.
-Must have finished canon genjutsu training. ____________
-Declined- DNR, rip off from the Uchiha's Demonic Illusion: Heaven and Earth Change technique.
[Genjutsu : Shisha no Mokushiroku] - Illusionary Arts : Apocalypse of the dead Type: Offensive Rank: S-Rank Range: Short/Mid Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description: Performing a single handseal, the user initiates a slow yet powerful genjutsu on the opponent. While the battle scenario might look similar the opponent will see his leg being held or rather grappled by some object below that actually are men crawling and rising from the ground, cracking through the earth. The so made "men" increase in number, covering and grabbing the opponent until he is covered by them and held in a emotion of fear and panic. However from the first "zombie" that rises, the opponent will have his mind shifted from the user giving an advantage.
Note: Can only be used once.
Must have mastered genjutsu to use.
No genjutsu for next turn.
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-Declined- Not complex enough to be S-rank, this is a B-rank at most.
After forming the Rat → Dog → Snake handseals,the user points both his hands forward,forming his index and middle finger like a gun.He then channels Katon chakra into his fingers that are pointed forward.The user will then release bullets of Katon,that speed toward the opponent.While releasing the fire bullets,the user can change the trajectory of their body,to fire the bullets in a random manner,making it harder to dodge.As the bullets of Katon travel towards the user can also manipulate them to head upwards and come down upon the opponent.
Note:
-The user can only decide one of the two methods the technique can be executed,either towards the opponent or upwards
-Cannot use above A rank fire
technique the same and following turn
-Can only be taught by Detective L __________
-Declined- Similar techniques exist.
Katon: Uchigawa Inferuno | Fire Release: Inwards Inferno Type: Attack Rank: A Rank Range: Mid-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description:
After forming the Snake → Dog → Rat handseal,the user channels immense amounts of Katon chakra into both of their arms.The user will then leap forward and descend down,swinging their arms in a horizontal arc forward,releasing a huge amount of Fire towards the opponent.The fire travels like a column towards the opponent.On the left and right of the opponent.The user can then manipulate the column of fire to encircle the opponent,from both sides,trapping them in an inferno tornado.
Note
-Can only be used 2 times a battle
-Cannot use above A rank fire technique the same and following turn
-Can only be taught by Detective L ____________
-Declined- Needs a definite size to each column of fire.
Burakku Shinigami | The Black Reaper Type: Weapon Rank: S rank Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 40 (-5 for each turn active) Damage: N/A Description:
An ancient weapon,forged by master smiths.The Reaper,as it was known back in the day,was in the possession of a fearless shinobi who was known merely as "Black".He had gained this name as he was only seen as a black apparition and his weapon was like a Reaper,taking the lives of countless shinobi.This blade had seen many deaths,and it had an eerie aura about it,some say those who possess the Black Reaper,reach great heights in battle at the cost of their sanity.But this is merely a myth..or is it?The name of the blade then became The Black Reaper,dubbed after it's first master and the former name of the blade.It is said that the man passed on the weapon through generations of his family until it was stolen by a shinobi who had carried a grudge for centuries against Black and his weapon,for killing his ancestors,leaving his grandfather the last alive.Selling the Black Reaper to a Amegakurian shinobi,the man had now gotten rid of his vengeance and hatred.The Black Reaper easily found it's way to new owners as it hungered for battle and the blood of foes as it could not easily be destroyed as long as it had a wielder,knowing this,the blade was always in constant care of someone.The Black Reaper is blade attached to a chain.The blade's handle is 6 cm in length and is straight,it then portrudes into a octagonal shape,with an opening,an octagon,at the centre of this shape.The octagonal shape has four The handle is connected to one side of the octagonal shape,while two blades portrude from the other.This then leaves a space in between the two blades of approximately 2 cm.The blades extend to about 10 cm.The chain attached to the handle of this ancient weapon,is made of a highly conductive and high tensile strength wire.The wire can also be detached from the blade itself,and used seperately.The length of the wire at rest is merely a meter,when chakra is inserted into it,the wire can be extended to lengths of about 6m.
(see image to verify description,the shape is pretty complex)
Abilites:
-The Black Reaper can be used to channel various elemental chakra into it,giving off a different effect for each element.The user would have to specify which element is used in battle,and a turn is used to change it in battle.
-When Raiton chakra is channeled into the blade through the wire and it penetrates the opponent,it will numb him.When the wire is used alone,the user can wrap it around the opponent and channel the Raiton chakra into it,shocking the opponent.The Black Reaper only reacts to the users chakra,so an enemy can'tchannel their own Raiton chakra through the wire.
-When Fuuton chakra is channeled into the blade,it increases it's cutting ability,allowing it to easily slice through the skin of the opponent.The wires' cutting ability also increases,as well as it's speed that it travels towards the opponent.
-When Katon chakra is channeled into the blade,it heats up exponationally.The blade then hisses with heat,and releases a light steam.The blade then melts whatever comes into contact with it (within reason).Like swords,kunai etc.When the Katon chakra is channeled into the wire,it can burn the opponent on contact.
-The Black Reaper can also be used to grab an opponent with the wire and pull him toward you,if it's not attached to the blade.With the blade attached,without any chakra inserted,one could use it as a normal weapon and fight at close range with it. -If chakra is inserted into the wire,it extends from it's intial length of 1 meter,to about 6 meters.
Note:
-Changing the element channeled into the Black Reaper costs -40 chakra each time and also costs a move.
-The element channeled into the Black Reaper can be changed at every turn if need be,and the element can stay active for up to 3 turns with a -5 chakra penalty at each turn to keep it active.
-Can only be taught and wielded by Detective L
-The blade is highly durable and so is the wire,but it is not indestructible.If it has been destroyed,it can be reformed
by the users chakra after 3 turns. ____________
-Declined- Each ability needs a rank, and no to the bold, if you want those abilities, then you have to move it without chakra.
(Ninpou: Gādo) - Ninja Style: Patronus Type: Supplementary Rank: B-Rank Range: Long Chakra: 20 Damage: N/A Description: This relatively simple technique is invented to quickly send messages to other people. The user will gather his chakra and form into an animal made out of pure chakra, this animal hoewever will be different for each induvidual as they reflect the users induvidual personality. Once the animal is formed, it will be send off to the person the message's is meant for, and deliver it to them.
Note: Up to 3 animals can be formed at the same time ___________
-Declined- Similar to Astral Projection and Tyrants Calling techniques.
(Raiton: Hakkyou) - Lightning Release: Madness Type: Offensive Rank: Forbidden Range: Long Chakra: 50 Damage: 90 (-10 to the user if used properly, if not, the user shall die) Description:
The users of the jutsu shall perform the Snake → Ram → Rat → Dog → Tiger Hand-seals then they take their forefinger and start gathering an extremely large amount of their Lightning release chakra and focus it on top of the forefinger, as they focus the huge amount of lightning chakra a strong light appears and blocks everyone's field of vision (except long range targets). After gathering the chakra, without hesitating the user continues the operation by standing still and focusing the lightning chakra and using shape manipulation they focus the chakra inside an extremely small ball that can be seen as a small bright orb on top of the forefinger.
The orb is a huge amount of lightning power focused in an extremely small size, so it's color turns from blue to black. The user mustn't move while gathering and forming the shape of the ball, if they were attacked wile gathering the chakra, nothing happens, but if they were attacked after gathering the whole amount of the required chakra the ball will explode and everything withing short range will be harmed, the user'll die because of the explosion and their chakra will reach zero, so even if they survived the explosion somehow, their chakra balance will be shocked and they'll lose every single point of chakra they have.
Forming the ball usually takes five minutes, but if the user successfully used it in five official battles, they'll gain the right experience to finish it in three minutes only.
After forming the ball successfully, in order to use it, the target must be long range from the user, the user shall aim and release, when released, the user's hand'll get shocked and they will lose some health points. The black ball travels fast towards the opponent, it's speed is quite impressive because the target won't have time to do handseals and counter, they might be able to counter it with a one hand-seal jutsu, or if they started their countering jutsu before getting attacked with the ball.
After reaching it's destination, the ball extends and destroys almost everything it impacts and causes a huge and massive explosion, and even going underground won't be useful.
Notes:
-Can only be used once in a battle, the user may use it twice but after releasing it, they'll die.
-Can't use any strong lightning techniques (B-Rank → F-Rank) fro the following three rounds.
-Takes 5 minutes for new users, 3 for experienced users.
-Can only be taught by megaamine.
-Using it on short or mid range targets fatal. ____________
-Declined- DNR, no matter how much you restrict an OP technique, it still stays as an OP technique.
(Meiton: Chikushou No Ude) - Dark Release: Beast's Arm Type: Offensive/Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description:
After absorbing the physical and spiritual energy of an opponent's jutsu through the use of Dark Release: Inhaling Maw, the user's Dark Release Diamonds marks start radiating and a purple aura surrounds them, then the user concentrates , uses shape manipulation to release the Dark chakra in the form of a huge arm that can reach to Long range. The arm is quite huge (= Normal Susanoo's hand, but the arm can be stretched) and the user can destroy huge rocks with it, grab his enemy's or crush them, he can also use it against huge summons.
- Can only be used three times.
- Can only be taught by megaamine. ____________
-Declined- DNR, Rip off of Susanoo.
(Suiton: Hekutsurogi) - Water Style: Piercing Rooms Type: Offensive/Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short - Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: A prompt technique in which the wielder will first wave two hand seals (snake > dragon) before materializing with water chakra, several baseball sized orbs of rain with thin rings surrounding each respectively. Being able to produce up to five at a given time, and a minimal of two. These are refered to as 'rooms' containing water chakra within them, compressed by the user himself. The rooms are made to hover/infront/sideways around the user, seemingly controlled by chakra and will alone. Each being able to hurl out of their center a beam-like sharp streaming body of water. Should three or more 'rooms' fire at the same target, vast amount of water would be generated from the clash, releasing waves of water outwards in the aftermath. Because extreme chakra control and source is required to maintain these rooms, the more there are, the weaker they become. Suggesting that five rooms at a given time, would mean each stream of water would equal to C ranked strength; followed by four, leading to B ranked strength, three equaling A ranked, and two giving them S ranked strenght. As mentioned formerly, the minimal amount of rooms able to be spawned are two. The rooms can be hovered up to 5 meters away from the user, however, exceeding such limit will cause them to simply falter and dissapate like regular water onto the ground. However, the streams can reach long distances. The user is free to stop the rooms from fuctioning, by waving 1 handseal.
- Only useable x3 per battle.
- Cannot use S ranked or higher water while in play.
- Rooms last up to 4 turns. __________
-Declined- Whether you compress water chakra or not into an orb, water doesn't generate water, your chakra does, so whether you use your water chakra to release the streams and not the water "rooms" they can't be made, using the rooms to release them would be meaningless.
(Magen: Kyōran Usagi) - Demonic Illusion: Raving Rabbits
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will send a chakra wave towards their opponent to trap them in this genjutsu, just like any regular genjutsu. As the opponent is trapped they will hear a weird growl-like scream sound which will instantly knock them out of their concentration. Upon being distracted for a second or two bound in confusion of what they just heard, the opponent will start to see white chubby rabbits that stand on two legs, some with blue and some with red eyes. Screaming as they go, they will start to run towards the opponent, and jump on them, creating a huge pile of fuzzy chubby white rabbits. The rabbits seem to keep appearing out of nowhere and jumping on the pile. As soon as the opponent will see the first rabbit, they will be paralysed in their confusion of both the visual and the noise which the rabbits make, whereas when the rabbits start jumping on them, they will start to get crushed under the weight of the chubby rabbits as well as going deaf from the screaming close to their ears. As this happens the opponent will fall to the ground in pain, grabbing their ears, believing to be crushed and deafened by the rabbits. What actually happens is immense stress on the opponent’s brain which forces them to believe they are actually in pain and became deaf, which will give the user the chance to attack freely.
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✘Note: If the opponent does not escape the genjutsu within one turn, they will believe they are completely crushed underneath the pile of rabbits which will cause them to faint. ✘Note: The genjutsu is only usable once per fight, as it is easily recognisable by the opponent once they have been trapped in it due to the unmistakable sound of the rabbits screaming. ✘Note: The genjutsu can only be used if taught by Leaf, and requires full genjutsu mastery.
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Declined Genjutsu doesn't happen because you send a wave of chakra to your opponent. that part needs rewording. This genjutsu needs to have handseals. I don't get why noise alone would distress a ninja and paralize him nor seeing the rabbits. I understand that a wave of rabbits doing all that is annoying but it doesn't hardly seem enough to paralyze a ninja or prevent him from moving neither in the illsuion neither in reality.
(Magen: Kyōran Usagi) - Demonic Illusion: Raving Rabbits
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user performs three handseals (dog, tiger, rabbit) and traps the opponent in the genjutsu. As the opponent is trapped they will hear a weird deafening growl-like scream sound which will make their ears peep and hurt, making concentration more difficult. Less than two seconds after what they just heard, the opponent will start to see white chubby rabbits that stand on two legs, some with blue and some with red eyes. As the opponent sees the first rabbit, their arms and legs will be grabbed by the rabbits, making them unable to move. Screaming as they go, they will start to run towards the opponent, and jump on them, creating a huge pile of fuzzy chubby white rabbits. The rabbits seem to keep appearing out of nowhere and jumping on the pile. When the rabbits start jumping on them, they will start to get crushed under the weight of the chubby rabbits as well as going completely deaf from the screaming close to their ears. As this happens the opponent will fall to the ground in pain, grabbing their ears, believing to be crushed and deafened by the rabbits. What actually happens is immense stress on the opponent’s brain which forces them to believe they are actually in pain and became deaf, which will give the user the chance to attack freely.
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✘Note: If the opponent does not escape the genjutsu within one turn, they will believe they are completely crushed underneath the pile of rabbits which will cause them to faint. ✘Note: The genjutsu is only usable once per fight, as it is easily recognisable by the opponent once they have been trapped in it due to the unmistakable sound of the rabbits screaming. ✘ Note: The deafening effect only lasts until the genjutsu is over. ✘Note: The genjutsu can only be used if taught by Mephistopheles, and requires full genjutsu mastery.
Approved Changed range. No long range Genjutsu. Also, try to bold the changes instead of coloring them. Its against the rules to use color, font or any other type of formatting besides the template and/or bolding changes made on resubmissions.
(Katon: Okunote: Saisei Kasai) - Fire Release: Last Resort: Regeneration Fire
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 50 (+ 20 for every additional clone)
Damage points: 90 (+40 for every additional clone)
Description: In dire situations there are not many options that do more good than bad, most of the time it is just choosing between the devil and the deep blue sea. Sometimes sacrifices must be made for the goal of exterminating one’s opponent. The user’s clone(s) perform one handseal and extend their arms out towards the opponent as they almost immediately start to burst out in flames. By sacrificing a clone, one is able to create an incredibly hot burst of flames which is aimed at the opponent, burning them severely. Due to the extreme heat of the fire itself, the opponent will burn their skin severely, slowing them down significantly and making it overall harder to move.
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✘Note: The closer the opponent stands from the clones that use Okunote: Saisei Kasai, the more severe the burns on their skin are, as well as the amount of skin burned, which may cause trouble for the opponent later on, but can have some serious effects during the fight as well. As only so much of the skin can get burned before one would die, the opponent should at least be at midrange to avoid the possibility of being burned to death. ✘Note: The technique can be used by all the clones of the user that are able to use the jutsu. If one clone uses the technique, it would cost them 50 CP. If two clones use the jutsu, their total used CPs would be 50+20=70 CP, which would by divided over the two clones 70/2=35CP per clone, etcetera. Same goes for damage points, but they are all directed at the opponent(s). Once there are more opponents who are targeted by the technique the damage points get divided. ✘Note: The technique can be directed at two opponents per clone. The clone will aim his arms towards both of the opponents. The damage points will be divided in two for two opponents, dealing them both equal damage. 90/2=45 DP. ✘Note: Obviously the clones that use this technique will be sacrificed and cannot be used anymore. ✘Note: The technique is only usable if taught by Leaf, thereby it requires full mastery of fire and ninjutsu.
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Declined Ok, your clone explodes in a fiery mayhem of chakra...ok...so why is this long range? The +40 and the +20 per clone has to go. This can only be used once per battle, by one clone. No more. Also, if this doesn't cause damage to the user it cannot be called a forbidden rank. Forbidden ranks are forbidden because they cause damage to the user in exchange for this absolute power.
(Katon: Okunote: Azuraeru no saisei kasai) - Fire Release: Last Resort: Azrael’s Regeneration Fire
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short (Fiery explosion reaches Mid Range all around the clone)
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-20 to the user)
Description: In dire situations there are not many options that do more good than bad, most of the time it is just choosing between the devil and the deep blue sea. Sometimes sacrifices must be made for the goal of exterminating one’s opponent. The user’s clone performs one handseal and extends his arms out towards the opponent as they almost immediately start to burst out in flames. By sacrificing a clone, one is able to create an incredibly hot burst of flames which is aimed at the opponent, burning them severely. Due to the extreme heat of the fire itself, the opponent will burn their skin severely, slowing them down significantly and making it overall harder to move. A direct hit will result in too many heavy burns for the human body to take and will result in incredible damage Due to the intense heat the user will take damage as well in the form of first degree burns on their skin (area depending on where the heat hits them) to second degree if the user is in short range from the clone.
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✘Note: The closer the opponent stands from the clones that use Azrael’s Regeneration Fire, the more severe the burns on their skin are, as well as the amount of skin burned, which may cause trouble for the opponent later on, but can have some serious effects during the fight as well. As only so much of the skin can get burned before one would die, the opponent should at least be at midrange to avoid the possibility of being burned to death. ✘Note: The technique can be used for one clone, one time per battle. ✘Note: The technique can be directed at two opponents at once. The clone will aim his arms towards both of the opponents. The damage points will be divided in two for two opponents, dealing them both equal damage. 90/2=45 DP. ✘Note: Obviously the clones that use this technique will be sacrificed and cannot be used anymore. ✘Note: The technique is only usable if taught by Mephistopheles, thereby it requires full mastery of fire and ninjutsu.
Approved Remember that the clone simply ignites in flame, burning everything around him up to mid range.
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(Heruhaundo no Jaaku Rirīsu) – Wicked Release of the Hellhounds
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: In mythologies around the world hellish supernatural dogs occur. Mostly black, with glowing eyes and a ghostly of phantom-like appearance. They are often assigned to guard the entrances to the world of the dead, such as graveyards and burial grounds, or undertake other duties related to the afterlife or the supernatural, such as hunting lost souls. In most legends, seeing a hellhound or hearing it howl may be an omen or even a cause of death. In the Inuzuka clan there appear to be hounds with hellish appearances as well and owners of such dogs have been handing this technique down from generation to generation with such dogs. The dog, or dogs are start spinning at a very high speed towards the opponent, but after a metre or two they will instead of towards the opponent, aim at the ground. Drilling through the ground, they will resume their previous direction, towards the opponent. When they smell they reached the opponent they will emerge from the ground, still in high speed, delivering many powerful hellish beast-like attacks on contact with the opponent. Due to the force of the emergence from the ground, rubble and dust and/or sand will fly around, making it harder to see for the opponent what is going on and by what they are attacked. Due to this fact, survivors of the attack have reported the hounds that attacked them being hellish with glowing eyes and ghost-like appearance. ✘Note: Because the ninken need to drill themselves through the ground, this technique can only be performed two times per battle and only once every 2 turns. ✘Note: The technique can be performed with up to three ninken at once, though it doesn't change the damage of the technique or the technique itself; its just that the 3 ninken do it together with the damage divided between them. ✘Note: The technique can only be performed when the ground is made of earth or earth-like substances, but not for example on rock or brick. ✘Note: Can only be used by members of the Inuzuka Clan. ✘Note: Can only be taught by Mephistopheles.
(Kōton: Suchīrushīrudo) - Steel Release: Steel Shield Type:Defensive/Supplementary Rank:C-Rank Range:Short range Chakra:15 Chakra Damage:N/A Description: after performing the Bird → Horse handseals the user will make his/her Kōton chakra form a shield made of a black steel that sticks to the user's forearm (either left or right forearm depends on the user). the shield is tall enough to hide from the user's eyes to his/her hip and it is hard enough to block all non chakra-infused ninja tools. the shield has the ability to block all regular swords but it can't break them. The is also strong enough to block all C-Ranked and weaker normal taijutsu techniques
note: the shield remains on field till it is destroyed or the user cancels the jutsu
note: can be used 4 times per battle and requires 1 turn cool down between each usage time
note: only Pain... can teach this jutsu
(Kōton: Suchīrushīrudo-banme no bājon) - Steel Release: Steel Shield V2 Type: Defensive/Supplementary Rank: A-Rank Range: Short range Chakra: 30 Chakra (+5 for any steel release jutsu used via it) Damage: (+5 for any other steel release jutsu used via it) Description: advanced form of the (Kōton: Suchīrushīrudo) - Steel Release: Steel Shield. after performing the Bird → Horse handseals the user will make his/her Kōton chakra form a shield made of a black steel that sticks to the user's forearm (either left or right forearm depends on the user). the shield is tall enough to hide from the user's eyes to his/her hip and it is hard enough to block all non chakra-infused ninja tools. the shield has the ability to block all regular swords but it can't break them. The is also strong enough to block all C-Ranked and weaker normal taijutsu techniques. This advanced form of the shield is able to conduct the users steel chakra and shot up to 12 bullets made of steel (Kōton: Tama Ishuu ) Steel Release: Bullet Swarm and shot a net made of black steel threads (Kōton: Toami ) Steel Release: Fish Net out of it without using handseals however it requires more chakra to perform those 2 jutsus
note: each time the user use any of the two jutsus it counts as one of the 3 jutsus allowed per turn
note: can't perform any jutsu that requires handseals with the shield in the battle field
note: the shield remains on field till it is destroyed or the user cancels the jutsu
note: can be used 4 times per battle and requires 1 turn cool down between each usage time
note: only Pain... can teach this jutsu __________
-Declined- If it's only an upgrade to the defensive power then i'm okay with it, not using techniques through it.
You know the drill. Its opened for a new cycle of 3 techniques per user for one week counting from today or until the new marker is posted. One Cycle = one Week but one Week is not immediately one Cycle. Read the markers to be sure you're not bypassing the rules. Remember that you can only post between markers.
Also, I must remind members to read the rules (check the first post of this thread), read the thread and get familiar with what is approvable and is not, etc. Tons of techniques still are submitted without abiding to the template for example and that is auto decline. And its ridiculous to have a submission declined because of incorrect chakra or damage info. Be smart and make sure your submission abides the templates.
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Aízen; Permanently; Offensive behavior
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