[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Seblax]

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Summoning Technique: Enchousura, The Dome - Kuchyose No Jutsu: Enchousura, Sono Tengai

Rank: S
Type: Deffensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a 4-meter-long-vulture with 6-Meter-long-wings. This creature is the Vulture-Shield of every Vulture summoner. Through her lifetime, she tried to master all sort of ninja methods; elements, ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu.. even kinjutsu, but all attempts failed. However, through all of the training she proceed through, her resistance to pain and muscle mass were impressively increased, so she decided to become the vulture-shield for others, a way she found herself useful for others and summoners when needed. She earned herself many titles; The dome, the iron boulder and the barrier, all of them were inspired by her specialty; taking hits and completely block the enemy's attacks. She corner the user with her body and armor as it knee inward at him, covering his body from the incoming attacks from most direction, hold against the pain then buff away when the attack is done. She is usually summoned behind the user at short range so that when it bend, she would still be able to see the enemy.
- Can only be summoned once per battle.
- Cannot summon other vultures for three turns.
- Can block up to S rank techniques.
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-Declined- So she can't do anything but shield from attacks? okay, i'll allow it if it only blocks 1 S-rank, or 2 A-ranks then poofs away and that's it.

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(Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Shipuu Bunshin) - Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Hurricane Clone

Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: -
Description: While using "Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater", the user will balance the hurricane below the board and direct it towards the enemy. They then send a series of strong wind gusts that are able to push back thrown weapons and is used to create dust from the contact with the ground. This dust will cover the opponents sight, whilst the user forms the shadow clone handseal, creating a single, identical clone that uses the Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater over a skater that is identical to the user's. The clone then proceeds to advance toward the enemy through the dust to attack him. Unless the opponent is a sensory ninja or a Doujutsu user, they will believe that the clone is the original that is attacking at close range. The clone can mainly use the hurricane skater martial art techniques, however, he could also jump off the skater and act as a regular shadow clone.
-This technique count as a shadow clone technique usage and is treated accordingly to the rules.
- Only one clone can be created through this technique.
- Can only be used three per battle.
- This technique can also be used to take the hit and block up to A rank techniques.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

X-Declined-X Defend against A rank techniques of What? It is basically Clone+Distraction+Defense , i wont disregard that. But its alright if you seek to save your moves and play strategically. Just dont go overboard, otherwise you'll be resubmiting it.

(Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Nibai Kire) - Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Double Chop

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Whilst using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater, the user will get as close to the enemy as possible before dashing from the board. The user first will infuse wind chakra into the edges of the board so that the sides and edges are sharper, by dashing from the board, the user causes it to start spinning with the hurricane underneath it, into a collision course with the opponent. After dashing, the user will simultaneously attack the enemy at the same time as the board, each targeting the enemy from a different side (Right/left or Front/behind), depending on the direction the user came from. The user will channel wind chakra through his straightened fist, making it as strong as a wind nature enhanced kunai only longer and chop the enemy from the opposing direction of the board. (Which will chop the enemy with its sides) The attacks from both sides will cut the enemy into pieces and then the hurricane will separate them from each other, which contains the board caused by Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater which was formed before hand.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

X-Declined-X So you chop the opponent, but wont the skateboard chop you too? ._. it is coming form the opposite direction, and with enough force.

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Summoning Technique: Enchousura, The Dome - Kuchyose No Jutsu: Enchousura, Sono Tengai

Rank: S
Type: Deffensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a 4-meter-long-vulture with 6-Meter-long-wings. This creature is the Vulture-Shield of every Vulture summoner. Through her lifetime, she tried to master all sort of ninja methods; elements, ninjutsu, genjutsu, taijutsu.. even kinjutsu, but all attempts failed. However, through all of the training she proceed through, her resistance to pain and muscle mass were impressively increased, so she decided to become the vulture-shield for others, a way she found herself useful for others and summoners when needed. She earned herself many titles; The dome, the iron boulder and the barrier, all of them were inspired by her specialty; taking hits and completely block the enemy's attacks. She corner the user with her body and armor as it knee inward at him, covering his body from the incoming attacks from most direction, hold against the pain then buff away when the attack is done. She is usually summoned behind the user at short range so that when it bend, she would still be able to see the enemy.
- Can only be summoned once per battle.
- Cannot summon other vultures for three turns.
- Can block up to a S rank technique or two A ranked techniques.

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(Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Shipuu Bunshin) - Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Hurricane Clone

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: -
Description: While using "Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater", the user will balance the hurricane below the board and direct it towards the enemy. They then send a series of strong wind gusts that are able to push back thrown weapons and is used to create dust from the contact with the ground. This dust will cover the opponents sight, whilst the user forms the shadow clone handseal, creating a single, identical clone that uses the Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater over a skater that is identical to the user's. The clone then proceeds to advance toward the enemy through the dust to attack him. Unless the opponent is a sensory ninja or a Doujutsu user, they will believe that the clone is the original that is attacking at close range. The clone can mainly use the hurricane skater martial art techniques, however, he could also jump off the skater and act as a regular shadow clone.
-This technique count as a shadow clone technique usage and is treated accordingly to the rules.
- Only one clone can be created through this technique.
- Can only be used thrice per battle.
- This technique cannot be used to defend the user.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

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(Shippuusuka Tatakai no Jutsu: Nibai Kire) - Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: Double Chop

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Whilst using Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater, the user will get as close to the enemy as possible before dashing from the board. The user first will infuse wind chakra into the edges of the board so that the sides and edges are sharper, by dashing from the board, the user causes it to start spinning with the hurricane underneath it, into a collision course with the opponent. After dashing, the user will simultaneously attack the enemy at the same time as the board, each targeting the enemy from a different side (Right/left or Front/behind) and angle, depending on the direction the user came from. The user will channel wind chakra through his straightened fist, making it as strong as a wind nature enhanced kunai only longer and chop the enemy from the opposing direction of the board. (Which will chop the enemy with its sides) The attacks from both sides will cut the enemy into pieces and then the hurricane will separate them from each other, which contains the board caused by Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater which was formed before hand.The angle the user and the skater target the enemy with differs so he will not be also attacked by his board or vise-versa
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Must have used Hurricane Skater Martial Arts: The Twister Skater before forming this technique.

X-Declined-X This still does not eliminates the possibility of getting hit.

 

[Illyasviel]

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(Doton:Tsuchi Zassou)-Earth Release:Tumbleweed
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Mid-Long(never short)
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will send his chakra behind him and channel it into seven small rocks.The rocks will then start rolling forward,towards the user and whilst doing so the chakra inside them will be adding new layers of earth to them,creating large rock balls.By the time they arrive to the opponent the rock balls will have a 2.5 diameter.While the rocks are moving the user can barely control them,that is why he can't manipulate them fast enough to hit an opponent in short range without harming himself.If the user wishes to hit an opponent in mid in front of him,he will need to start rolling the rocks from long range behind him,while if he wants to hit an opponent in long range in front of him,he will heed to start moving the rocks from mid range behind him.If he starts moving the rocks from long range behind himself and the opponent manages to escape into long range in front of the user,the rocks will grow to massive for the chakra inside them to hold them together and will fall apart before getting to the opponent.
~Note:Can be used only twice per battle.
~Note:No above A rank techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No earth techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No above A rank earth techniques the next turn.
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-Declined- 2.5 diameter? what exactly? cm? meter? Kilometer? technique is weird honestly. how would earth chakra alone release layers of earth out of nowhere, earth chakra can't do that, earth techniques are mainly used in manipulating the ground, summoning structures, or releasing earth structures out of your body.

(Doton:Tsuchi Zassou)-Earth Release:Tumbleweed
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Mid-Long(never short)
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will send his chakra behind him and channel it into seven small rocks.The rocks will then start rolling forward,towards the user and whilst doing so the chakra inside them will be sticking the top layer of the ground to the rock balls,leaving a trail behind and thus adding new layers of earth to them,creating large rock balls.By the time they arrive to the opponent the rock balls will have a 2.5meters in diameter.While the rocks are moving the user can barely control them,that is why he can't manipulate them fast enough to hit an opponent in short range without harming himself.If the user wishes to hit an opponent in mid in front of him,he will need to start rolling the rocks from long range behind him,while if he wants to hit an opponent in long range in front of him,he will heed to start moving the rocks from mid range behind him.If he starts moving the rocks from long range behind himself and the opponent manages to escape into long range in front of the user,the rocks will grow to massive for the chakra inside them to hold them together and will fall apart before getting to the opponent.
~Note:Can be used only twice per battle.
~Note:No above A rank techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No earth techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No above A rank earth techniques the next turn.
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~Declined~ still iffy about this, but one thing that i caught right now, if you are rolling the rocks from behind you, wouldn't they hit you when they grow in size? i think you should change it, making the rocks start rolling from in front of you, and edit the necessary changes accordingly in the description.

(Futon:Seppaku Hensen)-Wind Releaseressure Change
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:S
Range:Long
Chakra:40
Damage:Depends
Description:The user will perform four hand seals and channel his chakra into a small area he desires.Manipulating his chakra,he will make the atmospheric pressure in that area rise drasticly,creating powerful wind gusts that surge from the effected area all around the battlefield.These gusts have A rank wind strength.This technique can also be used to deflect an incoming wind technique,if it is created in front of it.This technique will send the opponents technique backwards in the same direction,giving it a +1 rank boost.
~Note:Can be used twice per battle.
~Note:Can deflect only A rank and bellow wind techniques.
~Note:No above B rank wind techniques for two turn.
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~Declined~ do not resubmit.

(Futon:Hensa Hei)-Wind Releaseeflection Wall
Type:Supplementary/Defense
Rank:C
Range:Mid
Chakra:15
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will channel his chakra into the desired are of a 1 meter diameter maximum.Using his chakra,he will make a small wind current in that area that constanly flows in a C like shape,from the bottom to the top and vice versa.As a projectile gets caught in the wind current it will be sent backwards in the direction the current is pointing at with a small speed boost like if it was infused with wind charka.For example if the opponent throws a shuriken at the user,and he creates this current in front of himself,the shuriken will be sent backwards at the opponent.
~Can be used three times per battle.
~Can create up to 3 currents at a time.
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~Declined~ the bold doesn't make sense.

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Subu no Jutsu: Subu Bakudan) - Sand Technique: Sand Bomb
Type: Attack
Rank: C Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user manipulates the sand underneath the opponent to form a orb of sand that surrounds them, in a upwards manner. Once the orb of sand traps the opponent, the user manipulates the walls of the sand to create several spikes of sand form from inside the orb, skewing the opponent in multiple places.

X-Approved-X

Subu no Jutsu: Subu Hou) - Sand Technique: Sand Gun
Type: Attack
Rank: C Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user manipulates the sand to form on each of their finger tips. The user uses shape manipulation to form the shape into small bullet like projectiles. The user covers the sand in a layer of chakra and flicks the sand of his fingers causing them to fly across the terrain, piercing the body of whoever it was aimed at. The user can place sand on each finger allowing them to shoot out eight bullets of sand in a turn.

X-Approved-X No mention of Speed, means they are easily trackable.

Subu no Jutsu: Supaida kara Sono Shindo) - Sand Technique: Spider from the depth
Type: Attack
Rank: C Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user manipulates the sand behind the opponent creating a large spider that is roughly twice the size of a average human. The spider has the same appearance of a real life spider including its chelicerae. The spider uses it's chelicerae to pierce the opponents body, and drag him back into the sand. The spider is manipulated by the user, making it hard to avoid the spider by running.

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General notice: Your techniques stand on the line between generic and original. It would help if you add more detail, they are fine though.

 

[Gèckö]

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(Fuuton: Aizou Gyoushuu)- Wind Style: Cherished Condensation
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs 2 hand seals, then he will release a thin gust of wind from his mouth. By performing another hand seal, the gust of wind will spread out evenly into a very thin and cold cloud. This cloud, when in contact with other gases, causes the gases to condense. Turning them into water. This jutsu can also be used by clapping the hands then performing the two hand seals.
Note: By gases I mean other win jutsus.)
Note: Cloud only lasts one turn
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Only condenses B rank wind jutsus and below
Note: The Condensed Air (Now water can be used as a water source now)
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

X-Declined-X Because obviously, it is not possible using wind release.

(Ninpou: Mitsudo Shifuto)- Ninja Arts: Density Shift
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S Rank
Range: Long Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar →Bird → Ram hand seals, then he touch the surface of water or earth. Causing the denser parts of that solid to shift upwards, switching places with the current surface. Changing the landscape, thus causing the Earth to react naturally. When dense earth for example the core switches with swamp of the under world, everyone would be able to move about freely. While under the surface, the swamp would still be there. For Earth's counter part water comes in contact with this jutsu, the temperature drops dramatically. Causing water to harden into ice, and for storm/hurricane clouds to form around the battle field.
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be used on Earth and Water substances
Note: When used on jutsus, it only works for A rank and below techniques
Note: This jutsu cause absolutely no damage to anyone.
Note: The user's hand specifically needs to be in contact with water or Earth for this to work
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

X-Approved-X Brilliant idea, could've written this in a better way though.

 

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Summoning Animal: Scorpions
Scroll Owner: -Blade-
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: Scorpions are predatory animals within the class Arachnida. They have eight legs and are easily recognized by the pair of grasping claws and the narrow, segmented tail, often carried in a characteristic forward curve over the back, ending with a venomous stinger. Scorpions range in size from 9 mm to the size of Gamabunta. All known scorpion species possess venom and use it primarily to kill or paralyze their prey so that it can be eaten. In general, it is fast-acting, allowing for effective prey capture. It is also used as a defense against predators.


Lightning Release: Lightning Racing HawkRaiton: Rai Zoku Taka
Type:Offence
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates a vast amount of lightning chakra into their palm and release a larger amount of lightning chakra causing it to form a sharp point resembling a birds beak. The lightning begins spreading around the user giving the perception that he has wings made of lightning(he doesnt) the user can run the technique into an enemy similar to Chidori or cause it to race towards the enemy and control the jutsu and have it chase after an enemy while controlling it via lightning chain that the user maintains on his hands.
-Only -Blade can teach
-Useable only 5x per battle
-If the lightning chain is broken the bird continues in the direction it is currently going

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X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else, prevent biased judgement here .__.

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~Declined~ for being banned, resubmit when the ban is lifted

 

[ZK]

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(Hebi Kuchiyose no Jutsu Tsukisoi) – Snake Summoning Technique Retinue
Type: Summoning
Rank: A-rank
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Differing from many a summoning, this technique allows the user to summon a host of snakes beneath his epidermis. The host, altogether known as ‘Retinue’, consists of microscopic, skeleton-less snakes with sensitive bellies and smooth, venomous scales. The snakes are constantly moving about under the user’s skin; making for a hideous sight as parts of the host occasionally breaks through the user’s skin. To avoid ‘leaks’ from becoming a problem however, the host uses nerve endings and muscle contractions to receive and send simple commands and signals. Specially bred; the host has no chakra circulatory system, relying on their heat-vision and advanced sense of smell to track enemies and their neurotoxic venom to incapacitate them. While the user is susceptible to the venom, every snake of the host has its belly pointing downwards against the user’s dermis and secretes its venom through its scales and, by extension, through the user’s skin. To avoid the venom remaining on the user’s skin; the host absorbs liquids through their bellies and expels it through their scales, allowing the user to perspire through the snakes and effectively ‘sweat’ the venom away. Naturally, the snakes’ scales reject liquids, thereby making the issue of the user’s skin reabsorbing some of the venom moot. As long as Retinue is summoned; the user will sweat almost four times as much as usual as a response to the sensation and to get the venom off the skin.
-The poison can effectively mix with the user’s sweat and cause tetany (incontrollable muscle contractions) that lasts for an entire turn almost immediately upon contact.
-Retinue can be summoned up to three (3) times, but it can only remain on the field for a maximum of five (5) turns.
-Should a part of the host somehow find itself with its scales against the user’s dermis, it will notice the difference in texture and disappear from the field without taking the rest of the host with it.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

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±± Declined ±± The idea is interesting and has a future but I need you to define what this host is. Is it another snake? And i can't have you being venomous to the touch just like that. The method seems a bit stretched and it somewhat collides with medical poison techniques.

(Hebi Kuchiyose no Jutsu Tsukisoi) – Snake Summoning Technique Retinue
Type: Summoning
Rank: S-Rank
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 per turn)
Damage points: 80 (in total)
Description: Differing from many a summoning, this technique allows the user to summon a nest of snakes beneath his epidermis. The nest, altogether known as ‘Retinue’, consists of microscopic, skeleton-less snakes with sensitive bellies and smooth scales with the Kanji for ‘violet’ (紫) cut into them. The snakes are constantly moving about under the user’s skin; making for a hideous sight as parts of the nest occasionally breaks through the user’s skin. To avoid unintentional ‘leaks’ from becoming a problem however, the nest uses nerve endings and muscle contractions to receive and send simple commands and signals. Specially bred; the nest has no chakra circulatory system, relying on their heat-vision and advanced sense of smell to track enemies and their summoner’s chakra to feed their only defense; the Kanji on their scales. The Kanji is a simplified version of the ‘(Shishienjin) - Four Violet Flames Battle Encampment’ that makes use of its violet flames. The modified barrier is a certain-death technique to be used by the individual snake of the nest in defense of the summoner. It activates when a part of the nest is ‘cut off’ from the summoner’s chakra and simply envelops the snake(s) in the signature purple flames of the Shishienjin. The flames are short-lived, but highly ‘contagious’ by way of physical contact. While the user is susceptible to the flames, every snake of the nest has its belly pointing downwards against the user’s dermis and is only considered ‘cut off’ when it is no longer so, as the snakes can only absorb chakra through their bellies.
-Retinue can be summoned up to three (3) times, but it can only remain on the field for a maximum of five (5) turns. If no more than sixty (60) of the allowed eighty (80) damage points worth of snakes has been expelled, the nest will be replenished when resummoned.
-The user can order any number of snakes to make their way through the epidermis with a single muscle contraction, but doing so counts as a move and inflicts great pain upon the summoner. The only exception is when a single snake is expelled with a small pulse of chakra as a makeshift, non-ranked ranged attack.
-Should a part of the nest somehow find itself with its scales against the user’s dermis, it will notice the difference in texture and disappear from the field without taking the rest of the nest with it.
-Requires extensive training in Fūinjutsu.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

(Sorry, I thought a 'host' was a group of snakes. Turns out that's a nest o_o I took out the poison and exchanged it for this. The intention is the same: a close-ranged weapon to support my Taijutsu)

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 Declined  I will need you to pm me and explain this because its hellishly confusing to me right now. It doesn't simply make sense. Sorry. Pm me with a further explanation so i can get a sense of what this is before i can direct you at how to better this.

(Hebi Kuchiyose no Jutsu Ryūgūnotsukai) – Snake Summoning Technique Messengers of the Dragon Palace
Type: Summoning
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The Ryūgūnotsukai is a genetically modified sub-species of the snake. Having been created with the ascension-process described by Orochimaru and Kabuto Yakushi in mind; the group, commonly referred to as Naga, has evolved to become ‘dragons’ in their own right.
The Naga is a reptilian creature with 2-6 limbs and a humanoid torso merging into a serpent hind section. Myrmidons and Naginis, males and females respectively, are somewhat aquatic in nature, with a large set of lungs in what would be the equivalent of the human chest and a larger, secondary lung posterior to the intestines. The species also has two large hearts – the primary one in the chest and the secondary one posterior to the intestines – that keeps their blood oxygen-rich, allowing them to use their hind section to slither across land at high speed and maneuver perfectly in water. With their thick, smooth scales and large, partially-webbed hands to boot; the Naga are fast at land and even faster at sea.
The Ryūgūnotsukai are part humanoid and part serpent. Their physical appearance varies greatly from Naga to Naga and some have evolved bizarre mutations. The residual energies and chemicals of Orochimaru’s and Kabuto’s experiments are unpredictable and their mutative powers manifest in different ways. Many of these mutations are cosmetic in nature; soft spines running down their backs, or, unique to males; thick tendrils coming out of their chin in resemblance of facial hair. Some mutations, however, are more extensive and a number even appear suitable for combat. In this way; the sub-race has evolved an array of genetic variations and defenses.
Generally, Naga only marginally resemble the snakes they once were. Their reptilian features are warped and twisted. They are powerfully built and the heads of the Myrmidons are reminiscent of dragons. The sub-race averages in a height of 20 feet (6.1 meters), but a minority has shown the ability to reach heights of up to 40 feet (12.2 meters). Both males and females store very little fat in their bodies, having two stomachs and two livers and a very high rate of metabolism.
Due to only having existed in nature for some twenty years, Naga prefer to settle in environments where they can integrate into the food chain with little to no fuss. This means that humans are very unlikely to find the sub-species anywhere near their dwellings. Coupled with their aquatic nature, Naga habitats are usually found in humid, thickly jungled or forested areas with large bodies of water nearby.
Naga society is dominated by Naginis. Myrmidons – stronger (able to lift 3 times their body weight) and tougher than Naginis and capable to withstand a great deal of bodily injury – act as frontline soldiers and guards. They are strong melee combatants and willingly come to grips with the enemy. They are also seen as expendable compared to fertile females, whose standing in society correlates with how many eggs they lay. Female Naga are also physically unsuitable for hard labor, their bodies designed with flexibility and guile in mind instead of brute force. They are tall and slender, with fine scales covering their angular features.
Despite technically still being a part of the Snake Contract, the Ryūgūnotsukai share little kinship with Manda’s faction of reptiles. Their coming into existence through experimentation only fuels the Naga’s arrogance and has led them to become beasts of pride; they consider snakes and other reptiles inferior and often compare themselves to Dragons and Wyverns in terms of strength and power. Through the few years of human contact they’ve had with what would later become their summoners; the Naga have developed a sophisticated written and spoken language of their own, which they, in return for texts and lessons on human linguistics, teach humans they deem worthy.
In practical terms: a Ninja whom has signed the Snake Contract can, through many trials and hardships, establish a connection with the Naga Tribes. With such a bond, the Ninja can learn to summon a multitude of Naga to his aid. Myrmidons and Naginis of all sizes, with up to six arms and a multitude of mutations such as hardened carapaces, spined fists, tentacles, hair consisting of living snakes, razor fins and much more can all be called upon at a time of need. Due to their aquatic nature, Naga, as a variation of the ‘Food Cart Destroyer’ technique, can be summoned in large bodies of water.
Ryūgūnotsukai are fearsome fighters. Nagini use Fūinjutsu with much skill and Myrmidons – though they’re unable to use handseals unlike Nagini – use their own version of Xingyiquan to great ability, being able to receive (at the cost of their death) and deliver attacks of up to A-ranked strength and capable of shattering stone.
-Lasts for four (4) turns per summon.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

(Hear me out: Manda 2 had arms and aquatic snakes are quite common. I'm not looking to sneak abilities in through this 'technique', I'm looking to expand the Snake contract. Just consider: I could've explained a snake with arm-like appendages. The fact that I've called them Naga doesn't actually make them 'mythical'.)

X-Pending-X I will check this personally (Later)

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 Declined  Although its magnificently well written and described and I like the summons you describe, I cannot approve this. Approving this would enable a loophole into the 5 custom summons for cannon contracts limit and would allow a loophole into the no mythical animals thing. Its true that manda 2 is a proof that you should be able to do this, its a snake non the less, just genetically altered to be bigger, stronger and with limbs. But its a snake. You have here a completely different set of beings all together. Its a contract on itself, not a summoning animal technique. Unless the head of the RP goes for this, I can't approve it.

 

[Osiris.]

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Summoning Animal: Baboons
Scroll Owner: Abstract Mind
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: N/a
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/a
Description and Background:
Baboons are African and Arabian Old World primeapes belonging to the genus Papio, part of the subfamily Cercopithecinae. The five species are some of the largest nonhominoid members of the primate order; only the mandrill and the drill are larger. Previously, the closely related gelada (genus Theropithecus) and the two species (mandrill and drill) of genus Mandrillus were grouped in the same genus, and these Old World primeapes are still often referred to as baboons in everyday speech. They range in size and weight depending on species.All baboons have long, dog-like muzzles, heavy, powerful jaws with sharp canine teeth, close-set eyes, thick fur except on their muzzles, short tails, and rough spots on their protruding buttocks, called ischial callosities. These calluses are nerveless, hairless pads of skin that provide for the sitting comfort of the baboon.
All baboon species exhibit pronounced sexual dimorphism, usually in size, but also sometimes in colour or canine development. Males of the hamadryas baboon species also have large white manes.

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(Jinton:kihou) Magnetism Style: Gold Dust Hydro
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The 4th Kazekage Will manipulate the gold dust in the area, as he does so he will then slam both of his hands onto the ground. Upon doing that, moments later a huge burst of gold dust will erupt in a very violent manner from under their opponent. Causing Severe damage
-Note: Can Use 2 times
-Note: Cant Use it back to back (1 cool down period)

X-Declined-X How does the Gold dust appear below the opponent?

(yabureme sochi) Tears of a Son
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/a
Description: This Gourd is a very special guard. Only those who posses the magnetism KG Can withhold it. It contains large amounts of chakra in it to contain what it holds also containing an unlimited supply of Gold Dust similars to gaara. The Gourd is originally Gold but upon activating its different abilities it changes to 2 different colors. Shiny White, and Abyssal Black. Leaving the Guard with 3 abilities and must activate each with a handseal.

*Gold*: When The Gourd is Gold it is said to infuse the gold dust with huge amounts of magnetism inside the Gold Dust. Giving the dust a more sparkle type color. This allows the Gold Dust to attract Metal, steel, Or anything that can be originally magnetized. Coming in contact with this sand also magnetizes the opponent/user until the Gold Activation Wears Off. This activation is done by doing the Ram Handseal

*Shiny White*: When the gourd is Shiny White, It is said to be able to take over regular sand by infusing just 1 gold sand particle inside of the regular sand. spreading all of the gold dust, leaving the regular sand turnt into Shiny White Sand. This Gives the User Free Manipulation Over Regular Sand once a Shiny White Dust Particles enters any type of regular sand. This Color is achieved by doing the Dragon Handseal

*Abyssal Black* When the gourd is Abyssal Black, It is said to control the weight of the sand. The Color of the Gold Dust is Now Black and Can Be used in a very unique manner. The user can manipulate the weight of the Black Dust thus increasing the Power of the Gold Dust Technique By +15, Though it becomes real slow, and leaves a lag of 5seconds due to the huge increase in weight. Or the user can make the Sand Lighter. Giving it massive speed, Barley Visible to the Naked Eye, but the power of the jutsu is cut down by half and Regular Sand Is now able to pierce through it.

-Cant activate them all at once
-Cant have more then one active
-Can only use the abilities of each Gourd Color 3 times. With a Cool down period of 2 times for each ability
-Activating a Guard Counts as one turn along with the abilities.

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[Serpent]

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(Kchuysei: Watatsumi) - Summoning: Ancient Deepsea King
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (80 w/ Katon)
Description: This Colossal Summon Watatsumi, also known as "Sumi" was once the summon of the Elder Brother. After destroying countless seaports and devastating all types of life along the Ninja Worlds coastline, the Elder Brother took it upon himself to face this monster. Gifted with the Rinnegan Eyes he took control over this creature by infusing black chakra rods into the beast. Sumi has arm like growths with claws, although no other case of Eels have such growths, it is suspected that like most other Rinnegan Summons, the beast had somehow been modified from it's original state into a type of Kymara. Sumi is one of the largest Eels rivaling the size of the Eels summoning boss. Sumi has a number of body piercings, linking its chakra with the user and as such manifests the Rinnegan in his eyes. His large and thick skin allows Sumi to rub off and not be effected by Ninjutsu up to B-ranked and Taijutsu up to A-rank. Sumi has the unique ability to manifest large amounts of S-ranked fire from it's mouth, Sumi is able to use this fire for different forms or attack such as Fireball's, Jet Streams, and flamethrowers. and different forms of defense such as Walls or Domes. The user is able to summon a large water source suitable for the summon to swim in this however will cause extra strain on the user's chakra supply. (cannot perform standard fire techniques)
Summon Notes:
-Using Fire Release Ability counts as a Move.
-This Summon last 4 turns
Notes:
-Can only be Summoned by an Nagato Uzumaki bio with the Animal Path activated.
-Can only be Summoned by someone that has Signed the Eel Contract.
-Because of the Strain of this summon, The user cannot have any other summon on the field at the same time.
-Because of the Strain of this summon, The user is unable to use the Animal Path for two turns after summon
-Summoning Water counts as it's own move and causes the user to be unable to use water Technique next turn.
-This Summon requires a water source.

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(Unagi Sendoku-Fuu) Eel Dodging Method
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will replace themselves with Eels as an small Eel is released from there sleeve with grate speed to a desired location. The Eel will then release the user out if it's mouth as the other Eels acting as the user distracts the opponent. This method is similar to the way Jiraiya travels in small toads. Doujutsu and Sensory abilities can see through this method.
Note:
-Can only be use twice per battle
-Must sign Eel contract
-Can only br taught by Serpent

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(Fuuinjutsu: Shoukyaku) - Sealing Technique: Incinerating Flash Barrier
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user, and three shadow clones, that must have already been created, will surround the opponent in a square formation. They will then create a cubical barrier trapping the opponent within the barrier. The barrier will then flash brightly incinerating the opponents chakra supply. This will seal the opponents chakra making them unable to use Technique A-rank and above until the sealing method fades.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Requires a 4 turn cool down
-Sealing Method lasts 2 turns
-Can also be used by 4 Shadow Clones
-Can only be taught by Serpent

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[Wakizashi]

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memory cloth cloak
Type: weapon
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: 40
Damage: n/a
Description: This cloak is made of a special cloth called "memory cloth." When a surge of lightning is ran thru the cloth, it hardens, making it tough enough to render B-rank Taijutsu and Kenjutsu techniques useless. Also, while hardened, with a powerful C-rank wind under the cloak the user can levitate up to mid range from the ground and move at regular running speed only short range at a time for a full turn.
-must wait one turn before levitating again.

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(Genjutsu: Medo~ūsa)-Art of Illusion: Medusa
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user does two handseals making the enemy fall into the illusion that the user continue with a few other handseals then stomps the ground with his palm summoning a Medusa. Everything after the first two handseals are an illusion including the summoning itself which is on one mission of following the enemy until he sees her face which cause major damages to his/her nerve system and stun them. As long as the enemy doesn't see her face, this technique doesn't damage the enemy.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-The user can no longer use Genjutsu for three turns after the activation of this technique.
-Lasts for two turns.

X-Declined-X Cant allow such a simple technique to be S rank. It also has damage stated...

 

[BlacKing]

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Fuuinjutsu: Miwaku Sākuru Meiro Rūru | Sealing Arts: Spellbinding Circle Labryinth Rules
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs two handseals and slams their hands together, causing a circular fuuin seal to form at the ground of both the user and his opponent(s). The rule within the fuuin seals maintain that the person within it must keep at least one foot on the ground at all times or else the seal will seize the leg of the person who breakes the rule and cause extreme pain to them, preventing them from being able to stand on their own.
Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
Note: Can only be used on up to 3 opponents
Note: The seal moves with the person.
Note: User must be on the ground when performing this technique.
Note: Lasts for 3 turns.

X-Declined-X Answer, what, when, where, why & "how". It explained what the seal does, but how does it work? Just because the seal says so ?

 

[Shirou Emiya]

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Summoning Animal: black harrier
Scroll Owner: bobisacoolguy
Other Users who have signed contract: vexen.
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: When perched, this bird appears all black. However, in flight a white rump and flight feathers become visible. It feeds mostly on small rodents and birds and will occasionally take reptiles, catching them while flying low over its hunting grounds. black harriers come in many different sizes ranging from the smallest at about a meter tall and the biggest as big as a small house with a wingspan of approximately 34 feet. these birds originate from the woods around the land of fire. these birds are very territorial and don't tolerate trespassers. it is said that in order to befriend the animal a young shinobi had to stand on the back of the biggest harrier for 5 days straight. after completing the the deal the shinobi and the bird signed a contract so that if in need they would aid each other.

X-Declined-X Variation of Falcon and Hawk summon. Too many summons of that family exists already.

 

[Houdinii]

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Sono Teroshi-rudo Kougake|The Aegis Gauntlets
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description:
The Aegis Gauntlets are a twin pair of armor pieces, one for each hand that were bestowed to a single individual for his courage and prowess. The gauntlets are unique in both their construction and abilities, they cover the entirety of the users hands and the forearms til just before the elbows. These great weapons are made from neither metal nor mineral but are yet so far indestructible, featuring razor sharp spikes that protrude an inch from the knuckles. The gauntlets abilities are even greater, with the user finding that their Futon techniques and Suiton techniques being empowered while wearing the gauntlets.

Abilities:
~The gauntlets are unbreakable.
~Due to the spikes on the knuckles and the extremely hard nature of the gauntlets, the user gets +10 to taijutsu using the hands.
~Twice per battle the user can increase the rank of a Futon or Suiton technique by 1.

Resctrictions:
~The user can only increase the rank of a Futon or Suiton jutsu twice per battle(e.g Futon x2 or Suiton x2 or Futon & Sution) and doing so counts to the users moves that turn. To empower the technique the user needs only to raise their hand, either the right or left for Suiton and Futon respectively.
~Whenever the ability of the gauntlets is used the gauntlets get covered in swirling patterns that glow a bright gold.
~Can only be used by xHoudinii unless given permission. If one tries to do so without permission the gauntlets will shrink and crush their hands and forearms, making them unusable.

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[Frozenstein]

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(Fuuton: Joumae Seki Reikon Setsudanki) - Wind Release: Locked Gate Soul Cutter
Type: Attack, Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid (The effect range of this technique is 5m)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User crosses his arms or get a similar position and gather wind in the targeted area. Then by swinging his arms he makes the wind spiraling inward with great speed and force. The wind makes deep cuts in the opponent and makes him twist in the direction the wind moves. However the main purpose of this tech is that it can „grab” the opponent or it’s body parts like arm, leg, head and twist it with great force, breaking/dislocating it and rendering it useless. The tech can only be used on body parts that are „pointing” toward him, like when the opponent is punching or kicking or just pointing at the user. Otherwise it would only make the cuts. Same goes for the head too. The maximum size of the tech is 3 meters in diameter, but can freely change it while it's smaller that that.
- can only be used 4 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

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(Doton: Jun Tsuchi Wa) - Earth Release: Whirling Earth Rings
Type: Defense, Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs a single hand seal and make the ground twist in a clockwise direction with great speed with a certain place in it’s center. The earth can vary in size as well as can be a single roundish earth core or earth rings. If the core is used under the opponent, it can turn him into another direction, making him launch his techs in that direction. If the rings are used, they can move the user around the techs center. The depth of the tech is only 2 meters and can only be used in mid range. Advantage of the tech is like the moving earth core, it doesn’t matter how heavy or how big the target is while it is still inside the area of effect. Also similarly to the Moving Earth Core, it doesn't change the environment other than making it spin.
- can only be used 3 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

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(Raiton: Jinsoku Suraido) - Lightning Release: Swift Slide
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user quickly gathers and divide lightning chakra in his body equally and then turn into a single wave of lightning. This lightning wave is 1,5 times faster than average lightning techniques and serves the purpose to move in short range and avoid attacks with great speed. The user can move in every direction he pleases, but once he started to move, he can't change direction unless he cancels the tech and use it again. While in lightning form, the user can't see or hear anything, but can sense chakra up to mid range. When using this technique the user can pass through incoming attacks like a sword swing, stone spikes, etc. If an A-rank earth tech is used against the user, the technique gets destroyed, but the user returns into his original form. If the opponent gets in direct contract with the technique, he gets shocked and slows down with half of his speed.
- due to the lesser amount of lightning chakra needed, the tech can be activated really fast
- can only be used 5 times per battle
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

X-Declined-X Similar to Arrow Step.

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

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(Fuuinjutsu: Tedzumari) - Sealing Technique: Stalemate
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-ranked
Range: Short(Applying the tag)
Chakra: 30 (Unless pre-prepared)
Damage: N/A
Description: Tedzumari is a special made tag which can either be prepared in battle-sitaution by charging the tag with chakra, or have been pre-prepared before battle. The tag is used to be applied ontop of another Fuin/Juinjutsu. Having placed the tag onto a sealing technique, which does not have to be done physically by the user himself, it can be transfered via a medium, such as being attatched to a kunai. It will upon the seal that Tedzumari was applied to automatically activate as the sealing tries to, and forcefully create a barrier around it, creating sort of a capsule which will contain the energy, expelled from the seal, and disallowing anything from entering the seal as wel - Despite its nature. This could be used for disabling other sealing techniques such as the Five elemental sealing method. More tags can however be placed onto the same seal, and will work in conjuction to supress the power of said seal. If pre-prepared the user is not restricted from using the technique, despite being unable to use A-ranked techniques.
~ If the tags are used in conjuction they only count as one move, however seperated they each take up a move.
~ The user must post if pre-prepared in the start of the battle, unless it's stated in his biography
~ Max three usages per battle. User can carry a maximum of 3 tags.
~ Each Addition tag allows the user to seal a technique of a higher rank. I.e. 1 tag can seal an A rank technique, 2 could seal an S rank.
~ Cannot seal forbidden rank fuinjutsu.

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X-Declined-X Bolded part is vague. And i understand there is a limit to the abilities of the barrier, that is why you would use multiple tags to strengthen it. So what is that limit and by how much can additional tags improve the durability of the capsule(s)?
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Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin: Atarashī kanten Tanzō | Dance of the Bearded Sage: Forging a new Light
Type: Defensive/Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is primarily a defensive technique where the user will engulf himself in hair, however not disabling him of his mobility or vision. By sending chakra into the hair, the user will make it a functional lighting rod - capable of absorbing and transmitting lightning throughout the hair covering the users body. Upon in contact with a lightning technique, the users chakra in his hair will guide the lightning sending it through a path of his hair and then releasing a weakened version of the opponents technique in the desired direction in the form his wishes, it could be a lightning bolt, or a current of electricity travelling through the ground, or a 360 degree shockwave.
~ Can guide up to and S-rank included
~ It will be weakened by one rank
~ Can be used twice

X-Declined-X The technique is short ranged, how far can the currents travel? In which shape or form? At short range it appears to only be capable of releasing the bolts in the form unfocused electricity like nagashi does.

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Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin: Kotējigāden | Dance of the Bearded Sage: Cottage Garden
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will unleash an heavy amount of hair from desired part of his body, and into the ground, having it spread throughout the entire terrain, manifesting itself within the ground. Small patches of hair throughout the terrain can be spotted, emitted from the ground, going in an arc and back into the ground. The hair is closely linked to the user's senses, thus allowing him to detect any movement underground and above(Obviously, aslong as it touches the hair.). The heavy amount of hair can however also be used as a source for future Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin techniques, keeping the traits of Cottage Garden.

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[Vayne]

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Illusionary arts/ Water Release: Death by Electrocution - Genjutsu/Suiton:*Kanden ni yotte shi*
Type: Offensive/ Supplementary
Rank: B rank
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After performing two hand seals, the user would either expel water from his mouth or take control of existing water source, and would send a wave of water towards the opponent(s). The waves maximum size is 10X10 meters, any value less can be made. Now when the opponent is hit by the wave they will be washed away while in the water, in the genjutsu(which takes place as soon as the water comes into contact with the opponent) the opponent would see that after getting hit with the water the user of the technique would send a lightning bolt towards him, the lightning bolt either sent from the user or from the sky.
-Usable 3X
-Must have training in Water & Genjutsu at least up to B rank.
-One turn interval between uses.

X-Declined-X The technique is physicall impossible

Earth release: Broad Kick - Doton: Hiroi Kikku*
Type: Offensive*
Rank: B Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: *Broad Kick originally started off a simple taijutsu attack; the user would dash towards the opponent, jump and deliver a kick to the opponents chest/face thus sending them backwards. Now in the improved version the user would channel earth chakra into their kicking foot, and upon the contact with the opponent the user will cause the a pillar of earth to 'shoot' from his foot, the pillar would send the opponent flying into mid range. Then user can even choose to add some basic shape manipulation to the pillar.
-Usbale 4 X
-The earth would be connected to the users foot, but through a simple chakra burst the user can seperate his foot from the earth.
-Compeltion of Earth & Taijutsu training are required.

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[Reaper]

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Summoning Animal: Ant
Scroll Owner: -Reaper-
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: None
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None
Description and Background: Ants are social insects of the family Formicidae and, along with the related wasps and bees, belong to the order Hymenoptera. Ants evolved from wasp-like ancestors in the mid-Cretaceous period between 110 and 130 million years ago and diversified after the rise of flowering plants. More than 12,500 out of an estimated total of 22,000 species have been classified.They are easily identified by their elbowed antennae and a distinctive node-like structure that forms a slender waist.
Ants form colonies that range in size from a few dozen predatory individuals living in small natural cavities to highly organised colonies that may occupy large territories and consist of millions of individuals. Larger colonies consist mostly of sterile wingless females forming castes of "workers", "soldiers", or other specialised groups. Nearly all ant colonies also have some fertile males called "drones" and one or more fertile females called "queens". The colonies sometimes are described as superorganisms because the ants appear to operate as a unified entity, collectively working together to support the colony.
Ants have colonised almost every landmass on Earth. The only places lacking indigenous ants are Antarctica and a few remote or inhospitable islands. Ants thrive in most ecosystems and may form 15–25% of the terrestrial animal biomass. Their success in so many environments has been attributed to their social organisation and their ability to modify habitats, tap resources, and defend themselves. Their long co-evolution with other species has led to mimetic, commensal, parasitic, and mutualistic relationships

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X-Declined-X Existing Contract, velvet ants.

 

[Enzup]

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Gecko) - Summoning Technique: Gecko
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons a 5cm tall Terrapin named Gecko. He can communicate with user using telepathy.

Note: -Can only be summoned once per battle but lasts as long as user wants.
-Must've signed Terrapin contract.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

X-Declined-X Summoning technique itself is a C rank skill
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(Kame Ninjutsu: Ro-ra- Tonsou) - Terrapin Arts: Roller Escape
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: One of the techniques of Terrapin Arts, in which a terrapin pulls his limbs along with his head inside his shell (which is a unique trait of any turtle specie). And from the 5 holes where the limbs and head were pulled, raw chakra is forced out strongly like a geyser. At the same moment the terrapin rolls to either of his side, which allows him to cover short distances quickly even in air because of chakra geyser which acts like rocket propulsion. This technique is mosty used to dodge incoming attack within reason or to hoodwink the enemy. While travelling the distances, the terrapin cannot use any technique because of his limbs and head which are aleady inside his shell.

Note: -Can only be used by but all Terrapins or any other specie of it.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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(Kame Ninjutsu: Peace) - Terrapin Arts: Peace
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique is usable by small sized Terrapins. This technique is mostly used to protect themself from harm. When the terrapin see an incoming attack like fire stream etc heading towards him, he pulls his limbs and head inwards and faces his backshell towards the attack in order to save himself, as shells are usually strongest part of a terrapin's body which might protect him from the attack (depending on terrapin shell's strength). And in order to protect himself from falling on ground (as no balance would be there b'coz legs are also pulled inwards) he releases very small packets of chakra from every spore of his body, which helps him to levitate at his own place. He can however move in air but with extremely slow speed and not beyond short range.

Note: -This technique, like excretion of chakra, does not provide any additional strength to the shell. For example, if a terrapin's shell is immune to D-rank attacks then using this technique the terrapin can block upto D-rank attacks with perfect orientation.
-Can only be used by but all Terrapins or any other specie of it, who have small size.
-Can only be used twice per battle by every terrapin.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.


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X-Declined-X In reality, the technique is nothing more then levitation

 

[Yashiro]

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(Raiton: Tsuin dendou tengai) - Lightning Release: Twin electrical domes

Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user holds out both hands and focuses lightning chakra in them, he then shapes the gathered chakra into domes with round tops and flat bottoms, the user then swings his hands and arms across each other and releases the domes in a way that they fly towards the opponent, As they reach the opponent the user manipulates the domes to explode into small bolts of lightning, able to shock and numb multiple parts of the targets body.

- Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
- Can only be used twice per battle

X-Declined-X You focus your chakra around you? Shouldn't that mean you form the domes around yourself? And when you move them how will you remain unaffected to your own lightning technique?
EDITS: What do you mean fly? Domes Flying?

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(Raiton: Tsuin dendou tengai) - Lightning Release: Twin electrical domes

Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user holds out both hands and focuses lightning chakra in them, he then shapes the gathered chakra into domes with round tops and flat bottoms, The user then compressors the lightning chakra within the domes to make it seem more solid, the user then swings his hands and arms across each other and releases the domes in a way that they fly towards the opponent, As the domes are released the user releases a burst of chakra from beneath the domes, so that the domes could be sent drifting into the air for a short while, As they then reach the opponent the user manipulates the domes to explode into small bolts of lightning, able to shock and numb multiple parts of the targets body.

- Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
- Can only be used twice per battle
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~Declined~ when you send the domes at your opponent and they are around you, surely you will get pushed towards your opponent along with the dome, specially when it has a solid structure, this needs a lot of rewording.

(Raiton: Dendou Kousen) - Lightning Release: Electrical Beam

Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (-10 to the user)
Description: The user focuses lightning chakra throughout his entire body and then channels it within his arms, The user then holds his hands straight outwards ao his sides and brings them around in circular anti-clockwise formation, as the user brings his arms around in a 90 degree angle, he drops his right hand down and lifts his left hand up, he then slams his wrists together while holding his hands open so that his palms face the target, as his wrists connect, the user releases his gathered lightning chakra all at once, and creates a bright beam of piercing lightning, this beam of lightning shall destroy anything within its path.

Note - Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
- No lightning can be used for the next 2 turns
- No techniques requiring hand seals can be used in the following turn as the users hands will still be in shock from the wrist slamming
- Can only be used once per battle
- The beam cannot be controlled, once it is released it only goes straight in the direction it was released in
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~Declined~ similar techniques exist.

(Bakuyaku Mo-do) - Explosive Mode

Rank: S
Range: N/A
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user takes out a two handfuls of clay from his clay pouches and then consumes both the balls of clay with his palm mouths, by doing this the user has his palm mouths chew onto the clay and swallow it, while holding the clay on standby and fully charged with blast release chakra, the user can then automatically release figures of clay for a set amount of rounds without having to consume clay all the time.

Note - Only usable by Deidara
- Explosive mode lasts for 5 turns in succession
- When the user activates explosive mode, he can only mold blast clay figures up to C3 level
- No clay techniques can be used for 3 turns after Explosive mode
- The user has to state his preperations for explosive mode in the turn before entering
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~Declined~ How would you do that? you can't passively produce clay by consuming it, because it has nothing to do with Blast chakra, it's simply infused within them, allowing it to be used as a medium for explosions to occur through.

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[Flash]

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(Genjutsu: Ferōshippu no dentō-tekina kōru) | Illusionary Technique :Traditional song of the Fellowship
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid (from the snakes)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The jutsu starts with the user releasing 12 rattle snakes from his body towards the opponent. These snakes all surround the opponent in a mid range (or lower) distance from all sides. Then, the snakes start their rattling- hissing and buzzing- made by the rattles at the tip of their tail which releases a strange sound vibration. The opponent(s) trapped in between the snakes suffer the maximum damage. The effects of this genjutsu take over 3 turns. This genjutsu inducing sound vibrations cause the opponent(s) to slow down considerably as he feels extreme sweating and in next turn, freeze in place as he starts hallucinating mildly. His vision will start to blur. He will feel uneasy as his heartbeat will increase. He'd find it difficult to move his muscle. His involuntary movements will stop.
In the third turn, all his 5 senses will fool him, making him see, hear, smell, feel and taste things which are not present.
- Can only be used once in a battle/thrice in a war.
- The user is immune to the genjutsu as he will be used to the rattling.
- Can only be taught by Flash07.

X-Declined-X Make this a summoning technique. Remove damage and show a link that proves you possess snakes.




(Ninjutsu: Hozen no āto) | Ninja Arts: Art of Conservation.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short (self)
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a technique by which the user maintains the energy/chakra that leaks out of his body, into his system and then utilises it for the different purposes. Basically when we are in motion, we give out a lot of heat energy from our skin to maintain the body temperature. Here, the user will form a single handseal and close all the pores of the skin on his body which will increase his body temperature and keep it warm. This will decrease the loss of energy that leaks out and the user can use the same energy to boost up his other techniques.
Note: All the techniques get a boost of +5 damage
Note: If hit by fire technique, the user will suffer +10 damage.
Note: Can only be used once per battle/thrice per war.
Note: Lasts for only 6 turns.
Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

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Summoning Animal:Camel
Scroll Owner:Kisamerox9
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing:None
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:None
Description and Background:A camel is an even-toed ungulate within the genus Camelus, bearing distinctive fatty deposits known as "humps" on its back. The two surviving species of camel are the dromedary, or one-humped camel, which is native to the Middle East and the Horn of Africa; and the Bactrian, or two-humped camel, which inhabits Central Asia. Both species have been domesticated; they provide milk, meat, hair for textiles or goods such as felted pouches, and are working animals. "Camel" is also used more broadly to describe any of the six camel-like mammals in the family Camelidae: the two true camels, and the four South American camelids: the llama and alpaca are called "New World camels", while the guanaco and vicuña are called "South American camels". A full-grown adult camel stands 1.85 m (6 ft 1 in) at the shoulder and 2.15 m (7 ft 1 in) at the hump. Camels can run at up to 65 km/h (40 mph) in short bursts and sustain speeds of up to 40 km/h (25 mph). The humps are actually reservoirs of fatty tissue: concentrating body fat in their humps minimizes the insulating effect fat would have if distributed over the rest of their bodies, helping camels survive in hot climates. When this tissue is metabolized, it yields more than one gram of water for every gram of fat processed. This fat metabolization, while releasing energy, causes water to evaporate from the lungs during respiration (as oxygen is required for the metabolic process): overall, there is a net decrease in water. Camels have a series of physiological adaptations that allow them to withstand long periods of time without any external source of water. Unlike other mammals, their red blood cells are oval rather than circular in shape. This facilitates the flow of red blood cells during dehydration and makes them better at withstanding high osmotic variation without rupturing when drinking large amounts of water: a 600 kg (1,300 lb) camel can drink 200 L (53 US gal) of water in three minutes. When the camel exhales, water vapor becomes trapped in their nostrils and is reabsorbed into the body as a means to conserve water. Camels eating green herbage can ingest sufficient moisture in milder conditions to maintain their bodies' hydrated state without the need for drinking. Camel urine comes out as a thick syrup, and camel feces are so dry, the Bedouins use it to fuel fires

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 Pending  It hasn't been done before but when we say background we mean pertaining to Narutoverse. Its where you explain the context of your contract's animals in narutoverse.

Summoning Animal:Camel
Scroll Owner:Kisamerox9
Other Users who have signed contract:None
Summoning Boss if existing:None
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:None
Description and Background:This animals are found in Sunagakure, and Iwagakure. The generic camel being found in Sunagakure and the Llama and the Alpaca being found in Iwagakure. These animals stand at about 6 ft 1 in at the shoulder and 7 ft 1 in at the hump. Within the hump there is a large amount of water that can be kept for long periods of time, this is also because of the Camel's abnormal red blood cells, which are oval rather then circular. This is beneficial to Camels in the desert of Sunagakure and the mountains of Iwagakure. Using the water in their hump, they can use large scale water jutsu. Although the Camels are very large, they can run at a speed of 40 mph in short bursts and sustain speeds of up to 25 mph for longer periods. With the fat in the humps of the Camel, they can survive in warmer climates.

X-Approved-X I checked, its fine if the speed is slightly greater then what they can achieve in real life. Never knew camels could run xD