[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Vasto Lordé]

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( Raiton: Iyā· Obu· za· doragon ) - Lightning Release: Year of the Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user first sends a surge of chakra through his body and up to his lungs, where he builds a sufficient amount of lightning chakra. The user then claps his hands and spits out the lightning chakra and simultaneously using shape manipulation to form it into a 8x8 meters Chinese dragon (with 2x2 meters, 8 Mustaches/nose-tendrils. 4 on each side) made of lightning. Once the dragon leaves the user's mouth and reaches Mid range, and as it's heading towards the target, it's 2x2 meters nose-tendrils which are made of lightning, spread out and if the target is mid Range they attack him from behind, and if the target is Long range, they attack him from his sides, while at the same time the original dragon still heading towards the target. The nose-tendril's lightning has the ability to numb the target, leaving him open for attacks during the same turn. The user, as long as his hands are clapped can control where the dragon goes to and use it to chase the opponent. Since this technique requires a whole lot of chakra and coming from the mouth, and is made of lightning chakra, the user's throat is left a bit numb, which won't allow him to use any technique that can only be made through the usage of the lungs and mouth for the next turn.

Note: Can only be used once.
Note: Can only use up to B rank lightning during the next turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Vasto Lordé
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-Declined- No projectile techniques of the basic 5 elemental natures will be approved anymore, everything has been attempted before, eagles, dragons, bulls, even rabbits, don't resubmit.

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

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Genjutsu: Futsukayoi Illusionary Arts: Hangover
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user does 3 handseals and casts a powerful and deadly illusion on the target. The target suddenly feels nauseas and they begin to throw up. Then the target starts having a bad headache, as if a pole is being lodged in to their brains. While this is happening,the user starts remembering the party he had last night, and starts regretting consuming so much alcohol. While in reality the target is just staring blankly in front of him...Could cause the target to regurgitate the days food.
-If the target does not have friends and is a social outcast of some sort, the target will remember walking in to a bar and getting drunk and speaking out their sorrows.
-If the target has friends, they would remember having a nice night out, and drinking too much and being carried home and puking a lot.
-If the target is under 18, they will remember sneaking out with and meeting with people to drink in an alley-way, and drinking too much and sleeping in the street.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Must wait 2 turns before 2nd usage
Note: Can only be taught by Cookie..
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-Declined- Don't resubmit, seriously =_=
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Genjutsu: Ari Oite Goshujin Sukin! Illusionary Arts: Ants in your skin!
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A simple genjutsu, activated with 5 handseals. When the target is struck with the illussion, it starts off basic, where the target simply scratches their arm...then a turn later, the itch worsens, and the target starts scratching feverontly. After another turn, the itchyness becomes out of control and the target needs to scratch all over their body. To make things worse, the genjutsu tricks and amplifies the "pleasure" sense, so that when the user scratches, they feel more pleasure than usual.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Must wait 2 turns before 2nd usage
Note: The genjutsu progresses to the next stage after one turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Cookie..
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-Declined- You can't predict how your opponent will react to your genjutsu, things like they will start to itch and all that, you can trap them provided that you give enough realism, like chains wrapping around them, but you can't say that they will do this and that.
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Genjutsu: Seishin'ijousha Ketsuretsu Illusionary Arts: Psychotic Breakdown
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: A very complex genjutsu with a series of effects on a single target. The user does all 12 hand-seals (Bird, Boar, Dog, Dragon, Ox, Tiger, Snake, Rat, Horse, Monkey, Hare, Ram) activating the genjutsu. Upon activation, the target will feel their limbic system spiral out of control, as they start to experience surges of hatred (Stage 1). If the genjutsu is not detected/dispersed in time, the target will start to hear voices and will start to hallucinate, seeing numbers and symbols around them (Stage 2). If the genjutsu is still not released, the target will collapse from the strain caused on the brain (Stage 3) (Similar to how Kakashi collapsed after Itachi's genjutsu)

Note: Even with a Genjutsu specialty of any kind, the user must still weave all 12 hand seals.
Note: The genjutsu progresses to the next stage after one turn.
Note: Can only be used once
Note: Can only be taught by Cookie..
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist, to add on that subject, Torturing type genjutsus will be heavily moderated, and 95% of them will be auto declined.

 

[Lucifer]

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⊰ Reiji Maigō ♆ Midnight Lost Child ⊱
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:

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is a very unique type of weapon, since it doen not have an actual appearance of a sword, the most common weapon or any kind of weapon in existence, due to its demonic features which makes this weapon look like black wings, thats what distinguishes Reiji Maigō from the already existing weapons and makes it special. This weapon was forged during the first shinobi world war, it was originally forged by an old priest named Ganryū who lived in an abandoned shrine. As the years passed and the five great villages came into existence, this weapon was finally discovered by a young man named Lucifer who found it in the previously abandoned shrine, quite close to Amegakure. After he found these strange black wings, he tried them on by attaching them to his shoulders and as to find out what they were capable of, thought it was in a quite bad shape. Because of that, Lucifer decided to reforge the metalic black wings by adding an unknown mineral to them, which he picked up during his travels through Iwagakure, thus after coating it with a double layer of a black looking material, it turned out to be indestructible as Lucifer himself couldn't put a scratch nor dent on them, thus its capable of blocking basic weapons such as Kunai, Shurikens and whatnot to protect its current master not to mention that it is also usable in melee combat, as a pair of extra hands. After some time passed Lucifer dicovered the true abilities of his wings, thought he couldn't use Reiji Maigō to fly. This weapon is always worn under a cloak by its users, due to its unusual appearance.
⊰ Abilities ⊱
Reiji Maigō's first ability revolves around, using both of the wings to shoot out dark colored feathers which have a black metalic appearance. These feathers are fired at the targets by simply waving it torwards them thus releasing 20 to 30 razor sharp feathers over a widespread area, which are quite fast, even comparable with some lightning technique's, the user is capable of guiding these feathers torwards multiple enemies, so they can strike their targets from different angles at once.
Reiji Maigō's second ability revolves around reflection, its capable of reflecting energy based elements, such as Fire/Wind/Lightning. Due to these elements having no solid form, thus it can be repelled by Reiji Maigō by simply sending it back from where it came from by using both wings as a shield to protect its user. Due to the high output of power used by both of the wings, the user can only use this ability only twice per battle, and it can only be used on S-Rank and below attacks.
Reiji Maigō's third and last ability revolves around its signature technique, which is a high blast of concentrated wind chakra it's capable of pushing an object or a person from short to long range in a matter of seconds, it is quite destructive in nature as it can be compared with Atsugai. It is performed by flapping both wings forwards thus creating a large build up of air around both wings. But the difference between these two techniques is that the user has full control over the wind blast not to mention that it is equivalent to an S-Ranked wind blast. The user is capable of using this technique twice per battle, due to the large amount of chakra it consumes.
⊰ Restrictions ⊱
Note: This weapon can only be wielded by Lucifer.
Note: The last two abilities can each be used only twice per battle.
Note: The user cannot use any wind technique the following turn, after using the third ability.
Note: The user can only use one of Reiji Maigō's abilities per turn, never more than one.
Note: All techniques performed using these wings, count torwards one of the users moves.


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±± Declined ±± A bit too much. I don't see how they can be used as hands. I you need to rank the feather ability. Wind is not energy based element and I would prefer if you restrict it to Fire and Lightning ones and the wind blast is too powerful in the minor details you add. "Pushing an object or person from short to long range in a matter of seconds" its too exploitable. Reword stuff like that or remove it.

Re-submitting: Explained of how they can be of use in melee combat, Ranked the feather's abilities, Removed the wind element thus it's retricted to Fire/Lightning, And also reworded the last ability, and reduced the power. Hopefully it's good to go now.

⊰ Reiji Maigō - Midnight Lost Child ⊱
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:

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is a very unique type of weapon, since it doen not have an actual appearance of a sword, the most common weapon or any kind of weapon in existence, due to its demonic features which makes this weapon look like black wings, thats what distinguishes Reiji Maigō from the already existing weapons and makes it special. This weapon was forged during the first shinobi world war, it was originally forged by an old priest named Ganryū who lived in an abandoned shrine. As the years passed and the five great villages came into existence, this weapon was finally discovered by a young man named Lucifer who found it in the previously abandoned shrine, quite close to Amegakure. After he found these strange black wings, he tried them on by attaching them to his shoulders and as to find out what they were capable of, thought it was in a quite bad shape. Because of that, Lucifer decided to reforge the metalic black wings by adding an unknown mineral to them, which he picked up during his travels through Iwagakure, thus after coating it with a double layer of a black looking material, it turned out to be indestructible as Lucifer himself couldn't put a scratch nor dent on them. Thus its capable of blocking basic weapons such as Kunai, Shurikens and whatnot to protect its current master. It can be used to assist the user in melee combat, due to the sharp metalic feathers thus it can be used as a pair of extra arms/weapons to assist the user, in a way to block physical attacks while also using it to harm the target using the sharp feathers as weapons, these wings are considered to be part of the users body. Later, Lucifer dicovered the true abilities of his wings, thought he couldn't use Reiji Maigō to fly. This weapon is always worn under a cloak by its users, due to its unusual appearance.
⊰ Abilities ⊱
Reiji Maigō's first ability revolves around, using both of the wings to shoot out dark colored feathers which have a black metalic appearance. These feathers are fired at the targets by simply waving it torwards them thus releasing 20 to 30 razor sharp feathers over a widespread area, which are quite fast, even comparable with some lightning technique's, the user is capable of guiding these feathers torwards multiple enemies, so they can strike their targets from different angles at once. This offensive ability of Reiji Maigo is considered to be at least A-Rank.
Reiji Maigō's second ability revolves around reflection, its capable of reflecting energy based elements, such as the Fire/Lightning elements. Due to these elements having no solid form, thus it can be repelled by Reiji Maigō by simply sending it back to where it came from by using both wings as a shield to protect the user. Due to the high output of power used by both of the wings, the user can only use this ability only twice per battle, and it can only be used on S-Rank and below attacks.
Reiji Maigō's third and last ability revolves around its signature technique, which is a high blast of concentrated wind chakra it's capable of blasting an object or a person from short to mid range, it is quite destructive in nature as it can be compared with Atsugai. It is performed by flapping both wings forwards thus creating a large build up of air around both wings. But the difference between these two techniques is that the user has full control over the wind blast not to mention that it is equivalent to an S-Ranked wind blast. The user is capable of using this technique twice per battle, due to the large amount of chakra it consumes.
⊰ Restrictions ⊱
Note: This weapon can only be wielded by Lucifer.
Note: The last two abilities can each be used only twice per battle.
Note: The user cannot use any wind technique the following turn, after using the third ability.
Note: The user can only use one of Reiji Maigō's abilities per turn, never more than one.
Note: All techniques performed using these wings, count torwards one of the users moves.

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 Declined  DNR. This is clearly not going anywhere.

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(Magen: Berūzebabu no Sesshoku) - Demonic Illusion: Beelzebub's Touch
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This genjutsu is quite unique, for it may be the most horrifying and traumatic Illusion ever experienced by its victims. The user will simply start off by performing 3 handseals (Hare → Monkey → Serpent) causing the victim to see and feel, as if something is tearing/ripping him/her apart from the inside. The victim will feel their insides being thorn apart over and over again, like there is actually something inside their stomach and chest area, which is trying to escape. And eventually the victim will see a chigantic bug crawling out of their stomach, while in the process eating its way out through the intestines, though after seeing the bug the victim will realize that all of his/her organs are missing, including the entirety of their lungs. While experiencing this genjutsu from the start, the victim will be paralyzed, due to the abnormal amount of pain caused during this illusion, which results into fainting. This happens within the next turn.

Note: This technique can only be taught by Ichigō.
Note: This technique can only be used twice per battle.
Note: The user cannot perform any type of Genjutsu for the following two turns.
Note: The user cannot perform any S-Rank or higher techniques the following turn.
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-Leaving both for Scorps-

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 Declined  This is very similar to an existing genjutsu where something crawls out of the users body tearing him apart in the process.

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(Raiton: Tensai no Jutsu) - Lightning Style: Heavenly Destruction Technique
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique permits to generate powerful arcs of lightning to be guided towards targets of the user's choice. The electrical bolts themselves can both electrocute and deliver potent gashes due to the concentration of chakra utilized. Since this technique relies primarily on the extremely intense energy for its effect, it has the potential to be applied in alternative manners, granting the practitioner a variety of freedom in its performance. Such examples include combining chakra flow with the technique in order to radiate an omnidirectional burst of destruction or to draw in natural electrical currents toward a desired target.

Note: This technique can only be taught by Ichigō.
Note: The user cannot perform any lightning techniques the following turn.
Note: The user cannot use any water techniques in the same turn as this jutsu.
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-Declined- Too generic, too broad, projectile based techniques of the basic five elemental natures are not going to be approved anymore.

 

[The Mockingjay]

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(Genjutsu: Sono Nijuushin Souron) Illusionary Arts: The Doppelganger Controversy.
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user catches the opponent in a genjutsu in which the opponent sees the user disappear in a cloud of smoke, when the smoke clears the user has been replaced by an exact copy of the opponent. The copy mirrors all the opponents movements with a slight delay as to appear like the user has transformed and is mimicking his movements in an attempt to confuse him, I.e. when opponent moves his left arm forwards the copy moves its right. Original runs left, copy runs right. The user however has not actually transformed and while the opponent runs around like a headless chicken the user can attack freely.
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

 

[Luther]

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Taijutsu sutairu: Koko no chōkoku:Taijutsu Style:Get Over Here.
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short_Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The user draws out an iron chain from his pocket and stretches it towards his opponent grabbing them by the neck restraining them from further movement. The user then swiftly draws the chain backwards with the opponent body tied around it and raises up his right elbow to deliver a blow to the opponent jaw dislocating it in the process.

Note:must be taught by thunderbolt to use
Note:can only be done twice a battle

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±± Declined ±± How is this an A-Rank taijutsu move? Taijutsu translates into Taijutsu? =_= for the love of...

Taijutsu sutairu: Koko no chōkoku Body Technique:Get Over Here.
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short_Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:The user draws out an iron chain from his pocket and stretches it towards his opponent grabbing them by the neck restraining them from further movement. The user then swiftly draws the chain backwards with the opponent body tied around it and raises up his right elbow to deliver a blow to the opponent jaw dislocating it in the process.

Note:must be taught by thunderbolt to use
Note:can only be done twice a battle
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-Declined- how would the opponent's movement be strained if the chain is only around their neck, won't they be able to move their legs and arms? what do you mean by the colored? how would that be possible if the chain is only around the opponent's neck?

I reduced the rank and edited the chakra cost and damage points.

Mokushiroku:Apocalypse
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description:Apocalypse is the name given to a sword which rumuor had it was forged by one of the sages son himself however that remains unclear and yet to be proven. The sword is 20 meters tall in height and was from titanium and lead and thus is indestructible. The sword though being powerful has its limits and cannot be infused with any elemental chakra. However it has two unique traits which sets it aside from other swords. The sword shares its own unique chakra signature from the user and can knock the user out a genjutsu he is casted upon by creating a chakra surge which he redirects towards the user body, however the genjutsu which can be broken is limited to [A Rank and below] The other ability of the swords is its ability to create minor shockwaves blast[B Rank] by the swinging of the sword in a to and Through movement which creates such effects.

Note:Can only be used /wielded by thunderbolt
Note:Last for only 4 turns
Note:Creation of shockwaves and genjutsu breaking Count as a Move.

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±± Declined ±± Follow correct template.

Genjutsu sutairu: Enjin no shōgai: Genjutsu Style: All Engines Failed
Type:Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs the Tiger-Dog-Ox hand seals and casts a genjutsu upon the opponent manipulating the flow of chakra in their brain, and creating an illusion where the opponent sees himself on an airplane which engines has failed and is no longer functional and thus is plunging and accelerating to hit the ground at more than 700km/h ,which upon impact the plane along with the opponent would be crushed and would be burning due to explosion. Whereas in reality the opponent is unharmed and ready for battle.

Note: Can only be Taught by thunderbolt
Note: Can only be done once in a battle
Note: No Genjutsu Higher than A rank for the rest of the battle

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±± Declined ±± Follow correct template.

Mokushiroku:Apocalypse
Type:weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description:Apocalypse is the name given to a sword which rumor had it was forged by one of the sages son himself however that remains unclear and yet to be proven. The sword is 20 meters tall in height and was from titanium and lead and thus is indestructible. The sword though being powerful has its limits and cannot be infused with any elemental chakra. However it has two unique traits which sets it aside from other swords. The sword shares its own unique chakra signature from the user and can knock the user out a genjutsu he is casted upon by creating a chakra surge which he redirects towards the user body, however the genjutsu which can be broken is limited to [A Rank and below] The other ability of the swords is its ability to create minor shockwaves blast[B Rank] by the swinging of the sword in a to and Through movement which creates such effects.

Note:Can only be used /wielded by thunderbolt
Note:Last for only 4 turns
Note:Creation of shockwaves and genjutsu breaking Count as a Move.
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-Declined- No custom weapons that can get you out of genjutsu will be approved anymore.

Genjutsu sutairu: Enjin no shōgai: Genjutsu Style: All Engines Failed
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs the Tiger-Dog-Ox hand seals and casts a genjutsu upon the opponent manipulating the flow of chakra in their brain, and creating an illusion where the opponent sees himself on an airplane which engines has failed and is no longer functional and thus is plunging and accelerating to hit the ground at more than 700km/h ,which upon impact the plane along with the opponent would be crushed and would be burning due to explosion. Whereas in reality the opponent is unharmed and ready for battle.

Note: Can only be Taught by thunderbolt
Note: Can only be done once in a battle
Note: No Genjutsu Higher than A rank for the rest of the battle
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-Declined- Genjutsu is translated into Illusion Technique, nothing in Japanese called "Genjutsu Style" It's just genjutsu, also the opponent finds himself on an airplane? we say no technology and no to guns, and you say airplane, don't resubmit =_____=

 

[Frozenstein]

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(Genjutsu: Shinigami Kuchiyose) - Illusionary Arts: Death God Summoning
Type: Attack / Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a single hand seal and puts the opponent into a genjutsu what affects his vision and hearing. The target first sees a black, thick smoke appear somewhere around him, what looks like is used to conceal something. Then from this smoke, a black clothed man appears with great speed, who carries a big black scythe. Then this man swings his scythe and cuts the opponent into two. Due to the sudden shock of being cut, the opponent becomes paralised and will feel like someone who is about to die and looks through his own life. For the opponent, everything around him becomes slow and he sees and feels how his body is falling to the ground. However when hit the ground he doesn't "die", but lays there helplessly. Also the shock of being cut into two damages the opponent's mind, potentially slowing him down like other genjutsus. If used correctly, this technique can look like the user simply made a black smoke to help his partner deliver a lethal shot to the opponent.
- can only be used 3 times per battle
- paralisation lasts 2 turns
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

Man who appears looks like him:

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-Declined- Don't resubmit =|

 

[Illyasviel]

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(Genjutsu:Sorazorashii Metsuki)-Illusionary Arts:False Eyes
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C
Range:Mid
Chakra:15
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will cast an illusion on the opponent in which the target will see an exact copy of the users regular eyes 1mm in front of the users real eyes.If the user then activates his Sharingan the opponent will still see a normal pair of eyes on the opponent.Upon forming the false eyes the users eyes will flash blue for a moment in which the opponent can notice something is wrong.
~Can be used only twice.
~Lasts for four turns once activated.
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-Declined- And you want to do this because? ._. i don't get the purpose behind the technique honestly.

(Doton:Tsuchi Zassou)-Earth Release:Tumbleweed
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Mid-Long(never short)
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will send his chakra behind him and channel it into seven small rocks.The rocks will then start rolling forward,towards the user and whilst doing so the chakra inside them will be adding new layers of earth to them,creating large rock balls.By the time they arrive to the opponent the rock balls will have a 2.5 diameter.While the rocks are moving the user can barely control them,that is why he can't manipulate them fast enough to hit an opponent in short range without harming himself.If the user wishes to hit an opponent in mid in front of him,he will need to start rolling the rocks from long range behind him,while if he wants to hit an opponent in long range in front of him,he will heed to start moving the rocks from mid range behind him.If he starts moving the rocks from long range behind himself and the opponent manages to escape into long range in front of the user,the rocks will grow to massive for the chakra inside them to hold them together and will fall apart before getting to the opponent.
~Note:Can be used only twice per battle.
~Note:No above A rank techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No earth techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No above A rank earth techniques the next turn.
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-Declined- 2.5 diameter? what exactly? cm? meter? Kilometer? technique is weird honestly. how would earth chakra alone release layers of earth out of nowhere, earth chakra can't do that, earth techniques are mainly used in manipulating the ground, summoning structures, or releasing earth structures out of your body.

 

[ReXii]

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(Fuuinjutsu: Yang Fuu) - Sealing Technique : Yang Seal
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 per turn)
Damage Points: +10
Description: This is a unique seal created by a specialist in fuuinjutsu after witnessing the seal used by the fifth hokage Tsunade Senju, following this principle to store chakra, the creator of this technique sought to increase his own power in techniques rather then provide healing like Tsunade's.

-Note- Only usable once per battle.
-Note- Only sustainable for four turns maximum.
-Note- Upon deactivation the user is unable to peform any elemental ninjutsu for the following turn

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±± Declined ±± You don't have permission to submit S-Rank Fuuinjutsu

(Hiraishin: Gokan Sakusou) - Flying Thunder God: Five Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A technique unique to Minato Namikaze, by manipulating the jutsu shiki of the FTG he is capable of teleporting a smoke bomb containing a mist that spreads through the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it. This effect lasts for 2 turns.

-Note- Only usable four times per battle.
-Note- Must have fuuinjutsu at A rank.
-Note- Only usable by Minato Namikaze and taught by ReXii.

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±± Declined ±± Undefined. Description is too generic. Please develop.

(Hiraishin: Fūjin Heki) - Flying Thunder God: Floating Blades Wall
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A technique unique to Minato Namikaze, by manipulating the jutsu shiki of the FTG he is capable of teleporting two small scrolls these scrolls appear behind at the seals location, and are capable of releasing a barrage of random ninja tools including shuriken and kunai.

-Note- Only usable four times per battle.
-Note- Must have fuuinjutsu at A rank.
-Note- Only usable by Minato Namikaze and taught by ReXii.

I have permission from Xylon to make variations of his FTG explosion technique that involves sending exploding tags to a FTG seal, i have decided upon the theme of remaking canon techniques as FTG variants, as all my OC seem to be DNRed.


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±± Declined ±± Same as the other technique. Too generic. Btw, just to be clear...Blue Rule exists. I hope i don't have to remind you again.

(Fuuinjutsu: Yang Fuu) - Sealing Technique : Yang Seal
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 per turn)
Damage Points: +10
Description: This is a unique seal created by a specialist in fuuinjutsu after witnessing the seal used by the fifth hokage Tsunade Senju, following this principle to store chakra, the creator of this technique sought to increase his own power in techniques rather then provide healing like Tsunade's.

-Note- Only usable once per battle.
-Note- Only sustainable for four turns maximum.
-Note- Upon deactivation the user is unable to peform any elemental ninjutsu for the following turn
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-Declined- Can't approve something like this which empowers everything without a reason as to why the powering up is done, simply adding more chakra to your techniques from a seal wouldn't increase it's power, also be careful on your origins, because this is considered a rip off of Tsunade's seal that you mentioned, not the technique itself but the core principal.

(Hiraishin: Gokan Sakusou) - Flying Thunder God: Five Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A technique unique to Minato Namikaze, by manipulating the jutsu shiki of the FTG he is capable of teleporting an explosive tag, the user disperses an odourless powder which when inhaled by their targets affects their five senses, slowing down their reaction times. This allows the users to freely dodge attacks while attacking their opponents, this effect lasts for two turns and the powder is a deep purple color.

-Note- Only usable four times per battle.
-Note- Must have fuuinjutsu at A rank.
-Note- Only usable by Minato Namikaze and taught by ReXii.
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-Declined- Too generic, like seriously mate, "freely dodge attacks while attacking their opponents" slowing down their reaction times? don't resubmit.

(Hiraishin: Fūjin Heki) - Flying Thunder God: Floating Blades Wall
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A technique unique to Minato Namikaze, by manipulating the jutsu shiki of the FTG he is capable of teleporting two scrolls under his opponent, that causes two thick metal chains to appear catching the opponents body preventing handseals, then from the seal up to 30 shuriken or kunai fire upwards attacking the trapped opponent.

-Note- Only usable four times per battle.
-Note- Must have fuuinjutsu at A rank.
-Note- Only usable by Minato Namikaze and taught by ReXii.
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-Declined- Again too generic, teleporting two scrolls under his opponent, what if the sealing formula wasn't under your opponent? and then you talk about catching the opponent preventing handseals, and you didn't even bother to describe how that's done, and that colored portion, it's obvious that you didn't spend any effort in creating the technique, and i'll tell you this, if you submit more FTG related techniques without an extensive explanation behind the idea, then the technique will be automatically declined without question, i simply won't accept a FTG variation without a detailed explanation.

 

[-Albel-]

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(Meiton: Infernal Sora Ame) Dark Release: Infernal Sky Rain
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After having used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy from the opponents jutsu. The user will then release up to 12 dark spheres that are purple color and are each the size of a kickball. The spheres are formed around the users body and with an upwards wave motion with either of his hand, will hurl them into the sky. From there they will rain down towards the target hitting them. A single dark sphere has enough power in it to break a bone.
Note: Can only be taught by Albel Nox.
Note: Must be a Dark user.
Note: Must use Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
Note: Once used the user must wait two turns before using again.

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-Declined- Where's the usage limit? putting ridiculous "restrictions" like "Must be a Dark user" doesn't fly with me, so strike that out.

(Meiton: Shingeki Kasseiken) - Dark Release: Advanced Revival Fist
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After having used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw to absorb the physical and spiritual energy from the opponents jutsu. The user will use a more advance version of Dark Release: Revival Fist. The user will channel the now converted charka he has jutsu absorbed and release it from his hands as a huge, powerful, and focused shock-wave that is similar to the original version of it, but much more stronger. Depending on what range the opponent is hit with this technique the damage will vary. If hit from long range the opponent will be knocked back with a loss of breath, if hit from mid range the opponent will be knocked back and suffer a broken bone or two, and if hit at close range the opponent will suffer from intense internal damage and be knocked down.
Note: Can only be taught by Albel Nox.
Note: Must be a Dark user.
Note: Must use Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
Note: The user must wait two turns before using again.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
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-Declined- Rip off from the cannon Revival Fist technique, you only tried to make it stronger.


(Meiton: Yoroi of Amatsu Mikaboshi) Dark Release: Armor Of Amatsu Mikaboshi
Type: Defensive, Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40(+5 per turn the armor is still active)
Damage: 80
Description: The user will begin releasing dark chakra from all the pores on his body that begin rising up and surrounding the user. The chakra itself when covering the user will look like black smog. As the chakra is being release the user will use shape manipulation to form the dark chakra into a sinister looking armor with wings that will latch itself onto the skin of the user. Dark chakra surrounds the user at all times, as long as the armor is attached to the user. It has been noted that the technique is very similar to Susanoo. The Dark armor itself acts like the jutsu Dark Release: Inhaling Maw but on a little bit of a larger scale and is able to protect the user by being able to absorb either two A-rank fire or wind jutsus or one S-rank fire or wind jutsu. When the armor has absorb the desired technique(s) it will begin to change colors from its normal black color to a light blue. The moment it does this it will unlatch itself from the users skin and charge towards the opponent that, if hit within close range it will cause tremendous internal damage along with broken bones.
Note: Can only be taught by Albel Nox.
Note: Must be a Dark user.
Note: Even though the armor itself has wings it cannot allow the user to fly.
Note: No Dark jutsus can be used in the same turn or while this jutsu is active.
Note: Can only be used once and stays active until it has absorbed the desired technique(s) and has launched itself at the target.
Note: Since the armor has the same ability to that of Dark Release: Inhaling Maw, it can only absorb an incoming tech when it is within short range of it.

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-Declined- I have declined the same technique before, submitting Susanoo like variations of elements is strictly forbidden, believe me i was going to ban you from submitting CJ for a month for this, but i let it slide so don't do it again.

 

[Yugure]

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(Hoippu Geijutsu: Mahi suimin) | Whip Arts: Numbing Sleep
Type: Attack/Supplemtary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user flicks his whip, the sound of it placing the opponent into a genjutsu. After hearing the sound for the first time, the opponent will be set into a genjutsu where he feel his limbs starting to burn slightly, as if they were over-worked, but nothing of actual concern. After hearing the sound for the second time the opponent will feel his limbs being heavy, painful to lift them. After the third time the sound is heard the opponent will become completely paralysed unable to move unless he somehow frees himself of the genjutsu.
Note: can affect multiple targets within range
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-

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(Hoippu Geijutsu: Indiana no Hanketsu ) | Whip Arts: Indiana's Judgement
Type: Attack/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique is the ultimate defence of a Whip Art Master. The user will spin his whip,while focusing chakra in it, rapidly around his body, creating an impenetrable dome around him. While moving creating the dome, the sound will trigger a genjutsu upon the opponent. The genjutsu itself if simple, instead of seeing the user moving around his whip constantly, the opponent will only see the whip being moved around once before the user seemed to rest the whip again by his side, while standing in the same position. In reality, the user will continue the move the whip around while moving forwards, and as the user comes within hitting distance from the opponent, he will flick the whip forwards and catch the opponent around the neck, effectively strangling or killing them, depending on the kind of whip the user carries.
Note:Can only be user twice per battle
Note: Can deflect any B-Rank or lower Elemental technique's, but the technique is broken
Note: Can deflect any A-Rank or lower Taijutsu and Kenjutsu technique's (except EIG technique's)
Note: The genjutsu breaks the moment the whip stops moving.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-

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(Hoippu Geijutsu: Mahi suimin) | Whip Arts: Numbing Sleep
Type: Attack/Supplemtary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user flicks his whip, the sound of it placing the opponent into a genjutsu. After hearing the sound for the first time, the opponent will be set into a genjutsu where he feel his limbs starting to burn slightly, as if they were over-worked, but nothing of actual concern. After hearing the sound for the second time the opponent will feel his limbs being heavy, painful to lift them. After the third time the sound is heard the opponent will become completely paralysed unable to move unless he somehow frees himself of the genjutsu.
Note: can affect multiple targets within range
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-

X-Declined-X I guess it is fair to say that a whip user would make use of sound. And sound by extension should be usable for illusions. Despite that, cracking your whip twice is too simple and impossible to perform in my dictionary. Perhaps continuesly cracking your whip and the effect takes form slowly, it will still be a versatile technique you'd be able to do easily in between your moves and undetected.

(Hoippu Geijutsu: Indiana no Hanketsu ) | Whip Arts: Indiana's Judgement
Type: Attack/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique is the ultimate defence of a Whip Art Master. The user will spin his whip,while focusing chakra in it, rapidly around his body, creating an impenetrable dome around him. While moving creating the dome, the sound will trigger a genjutsu upon the opponent. The genjutsu itself if simple, instead of seeing the user moving around his whip constantly, the opponent will only see the whip being moved around once before the user seemed to rest the whip again by his side, while standing in the same position. In reality, the user will continue the move the whip around while moving forwards, and as the user comes within hitting distance from the opponent, he will flick the whip forwards and catch the opponent around the neck, effectively strangling or killing them, depending on the kind of whip the user carries.
Note: Can only be user twice per battle
Note: Can deflect any B-Rank or lower Elemental technique's, but the technique is broken
Note: Can deflect any A-Rank or lower Taijutsu and Kenjutsu technique's (except EIG technique's)
Note: The genjutsu breaks the moment the whip stops moving.
Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-

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(Ranton: Tōru no Ikari) | Storm Release: Thor's Rage
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Thor's Rage is one of the most powerful technique's know to the clan. The user will preform a sequence of 3 handseals while the eyes of the user will white, however their vision doesn't change. After preforming the third handseal, a beam of chakra will shoot up in the air, turning the clouds into massive black thunderclouds. Immediately after the formation of the clouds, three beams of lightning, controlled by the user, will bolt down upon the battle field.
Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
Note: Usable once per battle
Note: No Ranton technique's for the same and following turn
note: Each beam is equivalent to an A-Rank Storm technique.
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-Declined- 3 A-rank storm beams is more than an S-rank, S-rank is composed of two A-ranks mate, plus mention that the thunderclouds can't be used to generate the same conditions as Kirin.

 

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Genjutsu hensen gorannasai- Illusionary Arts Changing look
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:The user start’s by transmitting his chakra to his opponent’s brain by either weaving a single hand seal or staring directly into their eyes, this genjutsu effect’s the sense of vision of the opponent under this genjutsu the opponent is made to believe that a certain body has changed its appearance [living/non-living], while under this genjutsu the user can make the opponent believe that he has grown in size just like a member of akimichi clan or he has become timid [should be possible in terms of manga], he can also make him see a sharp pointed rock as a blunt one or can make his see a small rock as big as a boulder, the user can’t make him believe something which is completely impossible, like making small rock appear as big as a mountain.
- Can only be taught by Gitanshu
- No S rank or above genjutsu in the same turn it is used.
-Only usable 5x
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-Declined- Why exactly is this A-ranked? this should be B-ranked at most, A single handseal isn't sufficient for an A-rank, neither the technique is complex enough to be one, also the idea is too broad, limit it's usage to certain aspects.

Genjutsu nenshou emon- Illusionary Arts Burning Clothes
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60[mental damage]
Description: The user performs two hand seal while passing his chakra into his opponents brain, this chakra remains dormant until the opponent uses a high rank fire attack[B rank or above], which is expelled out from his mouth or originates from his body from one way or the other, once this is done the dormant chakra becomes active, and the opponent is casted in a illusion where a opponent believes that some part of opponent chakra is on fire and that fire has started to spread at great pace and with in a second or so his entire clothing is on fire, thus this makes the opponent believe that he is suffering from severe burns and thus the opponent suffers from a mental damage which in turn does make the opponent free from genjutsu, but leaves with him with bad reflexes ,reaction time and speed due to the mental damage these effect will stay in play for 3 turns.
-Usable 3 times.
-Can only be taught by Gitanshu
-No S rank genjutsu is same turn
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-Declined- No dormant genjutsus are going to be approved anymore.

Fuuton saitai marui -Wind Style Marry Go-round
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: A very simple yet effective technique, the user will simply perform a single hand seal while concentrating his chakra around his opponent and taking the charge of the wind which is around him, once done the nearby wind will start to rotate at great pace in anticlockwise/clockwise direction, the opponent is at the center of this rotating wind and starts to spin in the direction of the wind at great speed, the opponent roughly spins 10-12 times which makes him feel Dizzy, unbalanced and with a blurred vision and thus he is not able to fully concentrate on battle for the next 2 turns [because of the effect's].
-Can only be taught bu Gitanshu
-Can only be used 5 times.
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(Raiton: Dendou Tama Dageki) Lightning Release - Electric Ball Strike
Type: Attack
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
This Jutsu allows the person to compress their chakra and form it into a condensed ball of pure lightning. With this the user can throw it at the opponent to Mid-Range, causing the ball to stick to the opponent. While electrifying the opponent, the user must focus lightning chakra into their dominent leg and run to the Opponent. As the user closes in into the opponent, he/she will kick the opponent where the ball has stuck to the opponent. Doing this, the opponent will be thrown into the air while being severly damaged by the explosion of the lightning ball due to the kick.

-Can only be used 3 times
-Can only be taught by Fusion Reborn
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-Declined- No projectile techniques of the basic 5 elemental natures are going to be approved anymore, plus too many lightning techniques resemble this one.

(Fuuton: Kaze kassou fi-to)Wind Release - Wind Gliding Feet
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (+5 if the user keeps channeling chakra into their leg)
Damage: N/A
Description:
This Jutsu allows the user to glide over the ground by releasing air out of their feet. The user must form 2 handseals of their choosing and use chakra control to channel their chakra in both legs. Then he/she will release the chakra, causing the user to rise up about 12 inches. With this, The user can easily walk places to places like visiting another village. In this form, the user can only perform Wind Techniques up to their training on it.

-Can only be taught by Fusion Reborn
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

 

[Gutsy]

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Monosugoi Arashi | Earth Shattering Storm
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This mighty blade was forged by a small band of dwarves, long ago, in a land far away from the shinobi world. This legendary blade was first discovered by a single shinobi, Gutsy Jiraiya, during the 3rd Shinobi World War where he used it to the best of his abilities to take down his foes. The sword is 150 centimeters long, 20 centimeters in width, it is 3 centimeters thick and it weighs approximately 5 kilos. The hilt is made out of black leather from a bull, while the blade itself is forged with an incredible strong metal, Titanium, giving the blade strong resistance towards corrosion, due to the fact that Titanium is highly resistant to corrosion. There has been melted a very thin layer of silver on top of the blade, making the blade reflect some of the light from the sun, making it look very bright in clear sky. On the blunt sides of the blade you will find several hundreds of finger sized drills attached to the blade, which cover the entire blunt sides. The drills are 3 centimeters in diameter and 1.5 centimeters in height. These drills are made of titanium, which makes them very strong. These drills are capable of rotating violently when the user inserts his chakra into the blade, resulting in the sword being capable of when striking an opponent to tear skin and meat off their bones and grind their bones to mule. The user is capable of detaching the drills from the blade with his chakra, to shoot them towards the opponent with great speed and accuracy, while the drills will rotate in the air giving them stronger penetration abilities.

• Due to the blade having drills, it is capable of grinding and smashing through C-rank and below Earth Jutsu
• When using the blade to crush C-rank earth jutsus it counts towards the users move count
• When shooting the drills like projectiles, it is equivalent to that of a C-rank ninjutsu
• When shooting the drills towards the opponent, it counts towards the users move count
• Can only shoot drills from the blade twice per battle

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-Declined- I've said this like a million times, no chakra infusable swords are going to be approved anymore.

Ketsueki Gekido | Blood Rage
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will on the sight of blood or smelling the blood of another person, become increasingly furious and growing murderous intent in his face. If the user is in close range of the opponent, when this ability is activated, the murderous intent will temporarily paralyze the opponent (Paralyzing the opponent for a brief two seconds). He will become increasingly furious as his hair will grow partially longer while also growing longer and sharper nails on both hands and feet. His teeth will also become longer and sharper, more like the looks of a vampire. His reflexes and physical prowess will drastically increase due to the lust for blood and increasing smell. Due to the user having activated this ability and having increased reflexes, the user is capable of moving his arms and legs faster resulting in him being capable of performing hand seals faster (When the opponent makes one hand seal, the user has already made two).

• Taijutsu techniques are increased by 10 + damage
• Can be activated twice per battle
• The mode lasts for 4 turns
• The mode can first be activated a second time after 4 turns after the first activation is over
• The user can enter this mode immediately on the sight/smell of blood at his own will
• The user is unable to use A-rank or above taijutsu techniques for the two following turns after the mode is exhausted
• Due to the enhanced reflexes, the user is capable of performing hand seals faster (The user makes two hand seals as the opponent makes one - meaning twice as fast)
• This is a passive ability, meaning no move cost will be used and this has to be mentioned in the bio

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-Declined- Apart from this technique having absolutely no solid grounds at all, it isn't possible in our RP because we don't have vampires, nor would looking at blood at any point will make you have a murderous intent, not to mention there's a CFS of Lord Of Kaos that covers murderous intent.

 

[Daemon]

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(Amatsu Toride) Heavenly Fortress
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A (+20 to kenjutsu)
Description: *The ultimate defense and offense for a Saumrai. A Saumrai through years of experience has developed almost of things including their skills. But most of all their pride and courage is developed instantaneously. A Samurai's pride and courage are their most important thing. Without ones pride and courage, they become an empty shell of themselves. For Samurai chakra is directly connected to their sense of pride. As their pride grows, their chakra goes along with it.(The Pride is obtained obviously through victorious battles and training so when I say that chakra is directly connected to pride, I mean that increased chakra is because of learning and training.) After meditating for large periods of time, it frees up the mind and stresses on ones body. This allows advanced chakra control. After years of mastering this form of meditation the user can clear their mind in a matter of seconds yet it requires no movement. The Samurai forces a large amount of chakra out of his body into the air around him that is visible to the human eye. The chakra is compressed into a denser form and molded. The Samurai shapes this dense chaka into an aura around him shaped like a person. This figure has long flowing hair and stands tall above the user about 10 feet tall. This figure is made out of pure chakra and is see through but is not defined to the point where you can see its face. Arms are formed around the samurai in like a coddling position where 1 arm is protecting the user. The second arms holds a katana that is held at the side of figure. This condensed form of chakra around the user doesn't slow them down anymore nor does it speed them up. In combat, the figure does the fighting for the user, the only role the samurai has is motion. All techniques that are used by the figure are amplified giving Kenjutsu techniques a 20+ damage stat bonus. Being the ultimate defense for Samurai's, the figure can defend the user from S-rank or below physical techniques for elemental techniques only A-rank and below can be effectively defended against. However every hit the user takes full on force from an elemental attack reduces the turns this figure can stay up because even more a master Samurai it is difficult for them to continue to supplying chakra to it. This factor doesn't apply to physical attacks because they are hardly grand scale with the exception of EIG attacks. Due to it only being able to handle S-rank physical attack this means that it can handle up to 80 damage but anything higher the user takes the difference. For example, if the samurai is hit with a forbidden rank technique which has 100 damage and the figure can only take up to 80 damage, the user takes 20 damage(100-80=20). Once every 2 turns, the figure can stab his sword into the ground sending out a wave of chakra that carries B-rank damage. However, in the same turn, the user cannot use any techniques that are higher than B-rank. The wave of chakra can cause a person to fly backward and cause damage or defend against B-rank energy based elemental techniques(Lightning, Fire and Wind. Has no effect on water or earth.) After deactivation, the Samurai is exhausted and all the things that were cleared from his/her come rushing back putting stress back on them. For this, they are weakened for period of time. (This technique is based off the Uchiha's Susano'o.)
-Can only be taught by Daemon.
-Can only be used once per battle
- Must be a samurai to wield this.
- Only lasts 5 turns. Can be shorted by a turn numerous times.(explained in jutsu itself)
-After deactivating, no S-rank or higher techniques for the next 2 turns.*

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(Iaido: Bachi) Art of Quick Draw and re-sheathing the sword: Punishment
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user grabs on to the hilt of the sword. Suddenly the sword is re-sheathed and unsheathed about 10 times in the span of about 3 seconds. With each unsheathing, The sword fully comes out and slashes the opponent. This makes 10 quick and light lacerations on the opponents body. Though light in power, these slashes still cause a great deal of pain. If used correctly, these 10 slashes if hit in the same area cut after cut, with create a slash deep enough to completely cut through the pectoral muscle exposing the rip cage. This technique can also be used to deflect projectiles such as Kunai or Shuriken. Due to the speed of this technique, it can only be tracked easily by taijutsu masters. With the rank of the user of this technique the speed increases. For example. If a jounin were using the technique, The sheathing and unsheathing of the sword will take about 7 seconds, S-Class- 6, Sannin- 5 , Kage - 4, Sage(official and unofficial) -3.
-Can only be taught by Daemon.

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(Revenge) Kyuushuu
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kyuushuu is a folding blade with intricate mechanisms. By squeezing the hilt of the blade, a large stainless steel blade forms and protrudes from it. The blade is thin and light making it easy to carry. The dimensions of the sword is about 55 cm long or 1.80 feet. This would classify it in the realm of the length of a normal Katana. Even tough the blade itself is thin, It is extremely durable and nearly indestructible. Located in the hilt of the sword is a mechanism that holds iron wire. The wire that is in the hilt is refined, thin and sharpened allowing the wire to be able to severe the flesh of enemies. The Wire is released when a button is pressed on the bottom of the hilt. A compartment opens causing the wire to shoot out from the hilt and wrap its self around the desired target set by the user. If the hilt of the sword is held incorrectly by the opponent, the wire will eject from the hilt and wrap itself around the enemies arm. Small gears in the Hilt start to turn constricting the wires more until they slice the opponent arm off into a dozen pieces. After this takes place, the wire then retract into the hilt of the blade and the compartment closes. The sword being able to fold in on its self into hilt eliminates the need for a sheathe and allows it to be stored easily or concealing in small places. Once per turn, chakra can be channeled through the wires to increased their destructive power. The chakra can coat the wires so that it can dull down their cutting power but increase its strength so that I can be able to form traps and even support a full grown man to save him from a free fall. The user may also choose to add enough chakra so that is can restrict a small summon like Gamaken. The Wires from the sword can only reach to short range (5m or 16 feet). While restricting summons or using it to attack the user,It counts as one move towards the 3 move limit. For the actual use of the blade, when used to cut the opponent is leaves light yet deep cuts that aren't visible to the naked eye. This is used for the illusion of silent and unseen assassinations and murder. Even though the cuts are light, It still has the cutting power of slicing through the body with great ease.
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-Can only be used by Daemon

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(Amatsu Toride) Heavenly Fortress
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu) (+10 to taijutsu)
Description: *The ultimate defense and offense for a Saumrai. A Saumrai through years of experience has developed almost of things including their skills. But most of all their pride and courage is developed instantaneously. A Samurai's pride and courage are their most important thing. Without ones pride and courage, they become an empty shell of themselves. For Samurai chakra is directly connected to their sense of pride. As their pride grows, their chakra goes along with it.(The Pride is obtained obviously through victorious battles and training so when I say that chakra is directly connected to pride, I mean that increased chakra is because of learning and training.) After meditating for large periods of time, it frees up the mind and stresses on ones body. This allows advanced chakra control. After years of mastering this form of meditation the user can clear their mind in a matter of seconds yet it requires no movement. The Samurai forces a large amount of chakra out of his body into the air around him that is visible to the human eye. The chakra is compressed into a denser form and molded. The Samurai shapes this dense chaka into an aura around him shaped like a person. This figure has long flowing hair and stands tall above the user about 10 feet tall. This figure is made out of pure chakra and is see through but is not defined to the point where you can see its face. Arms are formed around the samurai in like a coddling position where 1 arm is protecting the user. The second arms holds a katana that is held at the side of figure(figure can be made without the katana). Even though this technique was created by Samurai it can easily be learned and used by a Shinobi also since that said Shinobi 9 times out of 10 has higher chakra manipulation abilities than a normal Samurai. This condensed form of chakra around the user doesn't slow them down anymore nor does it speed them up. In combat, the figure does the fighting for the user, the only role the samurai has is motion. All techniques that are used by the figure are amplified giving Kenjutsu techniques a 10+ damage stat bonus along with a +10 taijutsu. Being the ultimate defense for Samurai's, the figure can defend the user from S-rank or below physical techniques for elemental techniques only A-rank and below can be effectively defended against. However every hit the user takes full on force from an elemental attack reduces the turns this figure can stay up by 1 because even more a master Samurai it is difficult for them to continue to supplying chakra to it. Due to it only being able to handle S-rank physical attack this means that it can handle up to 80 damage. If the damage exceeds 80 damage the attack will pierce through the figure and hit the user. After deactivation, the Samurai is exhausted and all the things that were cleared from his/her come rushing back putting stress back on them. For this, they are weakened for period of time. (This technique is based off the Uchiha's Susano'o.)
-Can only be taught by Daemon.
-Can only be used once per battle
- Only lasts 4 turns. Can be shorted by a turn numerous times.(explained in jutsu itself)
-After deactivating, no S-rank or higher techniques for the next 2 turns.*

Note: Took out the sword stab in the ground and the samurai only restriction.
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[Abon]

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(Raiton: Seiteki Tama)Lightning Style: Static Sphere
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Short
Chakra:30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and begins to concentrate his Raiton chakra into his dominant hand and forms a ball of electricity that gives off a semi bright glow and that is big as the user’s palm. This ball of his electricity is highly concentrated, and with the use of static electricity the user can stick the ball to the opponent or objects. The user can throw the sphere or physically stick it to the opponent himself and detonate it at will. With the sphere sticks to the opponent, he will feel a tingling/vibration from the electricity before detonation that is powerful enough to slightly paralyze the area where it is stuck to. And when detonated the ball releases a powerful burning blast with the potential to blow off an opponent’s limb and the impact to make the opponent stagger. If the opponent tries to remove the sphere with their bare hands the sphere will explode by itself.
-Can only be used 4 times.
- After the 4th use, the user’s hand will go numb for a turn due to the vibrations of the sphere.
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

(Ragnorok)Ragnorok
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40 (-15 per sword reform)
Damage:80
Description: This sword is made a strong steel like crystal found deep within the ground in an unknown area a sword thicker than most average sized sword, and is made of a unique black crystal. The weapon itself is indestructible and if picked up by another user crystals will erupt and impale the opponent unless the owner says otherwise. The sword has the innate ability to respond the user’s chakra for it to be controlled. The sword has the ability to shoot barrages of extremely fast and small crystal that explode violently when given the command from their chakra, they are faster than kunai can be thrown with more force and can be fired with great accuracy. When used in close combat, when the user manages to wound the opponent, the sword leaves a significant amount crystals deeply embedded in the wound. These crystals can be ripped out, but are small and hard to notice but can still be seen with the naked eye, and cause pain the opponent due to they’re now being attached to the opponent flesh. On command the user can explode and causing further damage, although with having to be in a certain range for them to detonate. Two slashes in the same area of the body (on the same arm/leg etc.) , with now a increased amount of crystals, will then react to each other and can be detonated for an even greater explosion capable of blowing off an opponent’s limb. The crystals leaving the sword do not reform only on its own and takes the users chakra to reform to its former shape.
-Can only be wielded by The Jinchuurki Uchiha.
-Embedded Crystals can easily be seen my Doujutsu users.
-Must be in Mid Range of the opponent and make the one handed hand seal to detonate crystals.
-When shooting crystals as projectiles the user can is limited to 15 per turn

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-Declined- Chakra infusable swords are not going to be approved anymore, if i had a nickle everytime i said this i would've been a millionaire by now >_>

(Fuuton: Kassei-ka Breath)Wind Style: Invigorating Breath
Type: Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description: The user focus his wind chakra throughout his lungs and body, increasing his intake of oxygen and therefore increasing the amount of oxygen in blood flow through the body. The user can control his heart rate, preventing stress and is able to think clearly and react to situation clearly and swiftly, feeling refreshed. Moreover, relaxing the user’s muscles making them feel light as a feather for quicker and swifter movement and moderately increasing running speed.
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Can be used twice
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

 

[Venom]

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(Genjutsu: Heki Kukyou)-Illusionary Arts: False Predicament
Type: Offensive
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user first cast a genjutsu on the enemy. When the genjutsu is successfully used, the enemy will see the user simply standing there looking at him with a normal and emotionless look on his face(or what ever the mood is at the moment for the user, will be reflected on to him), then he will lift his left hand and point towards the enemy, then the enemy will see the user running at him in a zig zag manner to him. In reality, the victim of the genjutsu is completely immobilize from the moment the user raises his arm. Unable to move his body in reality, but in the illusion he can clearly move, and can act normally. By the time the user of the genjutsu is seen reaching close to the enemy in the illusion, its because the user has already earn enough seconds to to reach short range of the immobilize enemy

Notes:
-May Only be taught by -Venom-
-No A rank or above Genjutsu the next turn

(Genjutsu: Doukeyakusha's Koui )-Illusionn Arts Clown's Act
Type: Offensive
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Long Range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This genjutsu can only be used at a specific time during a battle. Once an opponent(s) has release a jutsu (the jutsu must be a type of jutsu that is release from the user, such as "Lightning Style: False Darkness", which the user can clearly see if it reaches the victim or not). The user will perform a single hand seal, when the enemy has been cast in the genjutsu, his chakara flow will momentarily stop, and chakara he used for whatever jutsu will stop/cancel out also, but in the illusion, he will see his jutsu hit the intended target, and whatever motive he may have for the jutsu to do, he will see it come through. In reality, the user of the genjutsu is perfectly harmless, standing ready to retreat or head in for the victim of the genjutsu, who is standing there, partially paralyze, only able to move his body for a short period of time.

Notes:
-No Other Genjutsu For 4 turns
-No S Rank Ninjutsu next turn
-Can Only be taught by Venom
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-Both Declined- No long range genjutsus period, i won't check them until you fix that in your resubmission.

 

[Never]

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(イライザ Iraiza)- Eliza
Rank : A
Type : Weapon
Range : Short-Long
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description :
Faust carries the remains of his dead wife around under his big coat, he never wished to be parted from his dear wife even after her murder and tried everything to bring her back. It is believed that part of her soul but not all still lingers within the remains, Faust uses his chakra to store into the remains so that the soul can feed off it and take on a stronger form, the skeleton of Eliza moves like a normal human, the aura of the chakra used makes an outline of what eliza looked like. Normally Faust gives Eliza his normal weapons, like kunai, swords or any other ordinary weapon he has (usually his axe). Eliza cannot be destroyed, the limbs of the skeleton may be parted at joints but they cannot be destroyed. So this means it can be immobilized and torn apart to render it useless. The only way it can reform again is if Faust puts them together.
Eliza can go to any distance away from Faust and Faust knows exactly where she is, the only problem is that she cannot send any information she has gathered back to Faust from the long distance. she can also travel through the earth; creating tunnels or to strike an opponent off guard.

-Only Used by LonelyAssassin's Faust VIII bio

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(Fūton : Riborubā) - Wind Release : Revolver
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 each turn tech is active)
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user quickly forms in their hand some wind that they manipulate to form into the shape of a revolver, this revolver sweeps up rocks from the ground near it or any that may be given to it by the user. The user then aims the revolver at shoots up to six rock bullets in rapid succession at their opponent. Since the user uses rocks as their attack but the wind to propel the rocks at tremendous speed, it is counted as Earth that the opponent will be defending against.

-The shooting of the bullets do not count as the tech, only the forming of it.
-Does not defend Area of Effect attacks as it only shoots small super fast rocks.
-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

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±± Declined ±± Similar to a Doton technique submitted long ago. DNR.

(Fūton : Tokage no sanpu) - Wind Release: Lizard Scatter
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user focuses Futon Type chakra to their sword and swing it back behind their head whilst the wind spins around the blade, they then slash downward whilst releasing the wind into multiple lizard heads that are connected to the sword, they can be scattered around to intercept multiple targets. The Lizard heads can also stay in short range still connected to the sword and attack later from it.

-Only taught by LonelyAssassin

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±± Declined ±± Restrictions?

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(Iraiza)- Eliza
Rank : A
Type : Weapon
Range : Short-Long
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description :
Faust carries the remains of his dead wife around under his big coat, he never wished to be parted from his dear wife even after her murder and tried everything to bring her back. It is believed that part of her soul but not all still lingers within the remains, Faust uses his chakra to store into the remains so that the soul can feed off it and take on a stronger form, the skeleton of Eliza moves like a normal human, the aura of the chakra used makes an outline of what eliza looked like. Normally Faust gives Eliza his normal weapons, like kunai, swords or any other ordinary weapon he has (usually his axe). Eliza cannot be destroyed, the limbs of the skeleton may be parted at joints but they cannot be destroyed. So this means it can be immobilized and torn apart to render it useless. The only way it can reform again is if Faust puts them together.
Eliza can go to any distance away from Faust and Faust knows exactly where she is, the only problem is that she cannot send any information she has gathered back to Faust from the long distance. she can also travel through the earth; creating tunnels or to strike an opponent off guard.

-Only Used by LonelyAssassin's Faust VIII bio

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-Declined- Nice idea for a custom weapon, but idk what do you want from it, it's like a puppet that can shoot ninja weapons on it's own, apart from that whole soul remains thing which is a bit ridiculous, but i could let it slide.

(Fūton : Tokage no sanpu) - Wind Release: Lizard Scatter
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user focuses Futon Type chakra to their sword and swing it back behind their head whilst the wind spins around the blade, they then slash downward whilst releasing the wind into multiple lizard heads that are connected to the sword, they can be scattered around to intercept multiple targets. The Lizard heads can also stay in short range still connected to the sword and attack later from it.

-Only taught by LonelyAssassin
-The lizards stay active for 3 turns.
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-Declined- Technique is fine on it's own, apart from that whole connecting to the blade thing.

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(Raiton : Denryū yusō) - Lightning Release : Current Transport
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user turns his body into lightning, travelling through a technique that is a Lightning Release technique that connects itself to the user. The User travels through the connection and out of the other end of the technique; for example if the user uses Chidori sharp spear they would turn to lightning and travel through the extended spear, and then the user would form on the other end of the spear with the chidori and the end of the chidori sharp spear would be where the user previously was.
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-Declined- Yeah not going to be allowed, and when submitting an A-ranked technique it's mandatory that it has proper restrictions, or it will be declined on the spot.

 

[Stick]

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(Katon:Sunappu Kobushi ) - Fire Release: Snapping Fists
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user begins by channeling his fire chakra into his thumb and index finger. The user snaps his fingers releasing the chakra, creating a fireball that shoots out from his thumb and index finger. The user uses his shape manipulation to transform the fireball into large fists, that punch the opponent and explodes upon impact. The user has the ability to create several fireballs by simply snapping his fingers resulting in a fury of fireballs. Each snap of their fingers creates one fireball. The fireballs are roughly as big as average fists put together.

Note

Can only be used three times per battle
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.



(Katon: Sono Hei Kara Makai ) - Fire Release: The wall from hell
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user begins by channeling his fire chakra into his swords blade. Once stored the user release this fire chakra while spinning in a circle creating a large wall of fire that is formed by manipulation. The fire is release from the swords blade. The wave travels towards the opponent, burning everything in its path. The wall of fire is ten meters tall and wide, and travels at a fast pace.

Note

Can only be used three times per battle

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-Declined- Similar techniques exist, and that whole omni-directional blasts are not approved anymore.

 

[Yonkou Pandaman]

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Houzuki Clone Technique (Houzuki Bunshin no Jutsu)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is an advanced form of Kage Bunshin, it was developed by the Second Mizukage for when he is injured, he can merge with the clone via Hydrification Technique if he is ever injured. It can also use everything the user can, plus. The clone can use Hydrification technique (Oil Variation) the same way the Mizukage does. If the Mizukage or any other Houzuki is injured, this technique can be used as a last-resort technique to get body parts back. But it causes severe strain on the mind as the user is merging with a clone of himself.
~Restrictions:
~Can only be used Twice per battle, if used the second time, the effects will double as there are two clones' minds~
~Oil Hydrification Clone can only be used by a 1 Month Old Houzuki bio, or the Mizukage~
~If used, it can heal a missing body part before it disperses, which is after Six Turns~
~The strain put on the users mind will last for a single turn, and will disallow Genjutsu use for that turn~
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-Declined- The idea is simply not possible, your clone isn't real, it has a physical representation of your own body but it's temporary and it's not permanent, plus what you are trying to do is bordering Medjutsu.

 

[-Cerberus-]

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Raiton - Kozumikku Haro | Lightning Release – Cosmic Halo
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user begins by performing the handseals, Tiger-Dragon-Ox. Once performed the user channels a large amount of their lighting chakra to both their hands. The users hands begins to glow due to the large amount of chakra based in the hands of the user. By manipulating the chakra the user creates a large circle of electricity that floats above the user. The circle has a diameter of three meters, making it big enough to encircle a average sized human. The user waves his hand towards the opponent causing the circle of electricity to fly across towards the opponent. As the circle is traveling towards the opponent, the user causes the the circle to rise up above the user. Once above the user, the circle of electricity lowers and becomes smaller in size trapping and electrocuting the opponent.

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Note:
- Can only be used twice per battle
- Can only be taught by -Cerberus-


Declined
Need to clear a few things here. Approximately how fast does it travel, and how long does it paralyze for?

Resubmitting

Raiton - Kozumikku Haro | Lightning Release – Cosmic Halo
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user begins by performing the handseals, Tiger-Dragon-Ox. Once performed the user channels a large amount of their lighting chakra to both their hands. The users hands begins to glow due to the large amount of chakra based in the hands of the user. By manipulating the chakra the user creates a large circle of electricity that floats above the user. The circle has a diameter of three meters, making it big enough to encircle a average sized human. The user waves his hand towards the opponent causing the circle of electricity to fly across towards the opponent. As the circle is traveling towards the opponent, the user causes the the circle to rise up above the user. Once above the user, the circle of electricity lowers and becomes smaller in size trapping and electrocuting the opponent. The ring travels as fast as a average ninja running at full speed. Once the opponent is caught in the ring, they become paralyzed for ten seconds.

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Note:
- Can only be used twice per battle
- Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
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-Declined- Fix the colored =_= and mention the radius of the circle


Neptune's Trident
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Neptune's Trident is a long gold trident that has three large tines with the middle being bigger than the other two. The main ability of this weapon is to change the ground their standing on, to turn into a large 'ocean' by surprise. This is done by the user constantly channeling their water chakra into the trident at all times. Once enough water chakra has been channeled into the trident, the user stabs the tines of the trident into the ground, releasing the stored water chakra into the ground by chakra manipulation. Once in the ground, the user manipulates the water chakra creating a large 'ocean' to form underneath the fighters. For the user to channel the recommended water chakra into the trident, they must only use one water jutsu each turn. This is done to build up enough water chakra into the trident for it to be used. For every turn the user channels his water chakra into the trident, the bigger the ocean will form. If someone other than Cerberus attempts to pick up the trident, it will explode releasing the stored water chakra in the trident, blasting their body, resulting in major damage. It then reforms. The trident can only be destroyed by F rank jutsu's.

One turn = 50 meter's deep and wide.
Two turns = 100 meters deep and wide
Three turns = 150 meters deep and wide.

Note:

Each time the user channels his water chakra into the trident, the user can only use one water jutsu each turn.
Only wield-able by -Cerberus-

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-Declined- 150 meters deep ocean? simply ridiculous, and how exactly are you turning the ground into a large ocean "by surprise"? two things can happen, either you turn your water chakra into water which i'm not going to allow, or that you summon the water from the ground causing it to rise up which will be very noticeable by the opponent.