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(Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user extends his shadow and then performs the Rat hand seal in order to divide his shadow. As the shadow splits, it goes right and left, moving towards the opponent in an arc. This way it forms a huge circle around the opponent, making him hard to focus on both and to choose which one to defend from. When either of the shadows reaches his shadow it makes him unable to move.
Note :
-Usable 3 times per battle
- Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
- Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
(Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
Damage points: 80
Description:This is the advanced version of the shadow impersonation and shadow sewing jutsu used by Shikaku Nara. The user gathers a massive amount of his shadow chakra in every part of his body, causing it to emanate a blurry dark shadow. Then he slams his hand onto the ground, causing tendrils of shadows to spout out from his body. He uses the shadows to form shape of a dark creature made of shadow with transparent shapehe (Shikaku) called it Shadow Dark Warrior. Its size is double of a human and it has shadow tendrils all around his body. He is able to extend the tendrils to long range, faster than usual and he can use them to stab the opponent while also binding him. The SDW can shape the tendrils into huge human fists in order to punch the opponent or slash him with his sharp nails, made of shadow. The SDW immune from any cannon shadow jutsu, meaning that any shadow jutsu won’t work to trap the user shadow while activating SDW . However, he is vulnerable to strong lightning and fire techniques with similar rank. The SDW forms in front of the user, while being attached to the user shadow.
Note:
- Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
- Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
- Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
- Can Only be use twice
- Last only 2 turns then auto vanished
- Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
- While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
- After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.
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(Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user extend his shadow and then performs the Rat hand seal in order to divide his shadow. As the shadow splits, it goes right and left, moving towards the opponent in an arc. This way it forms a huge circle around the opponent, making him hard to focus on both and to choose which one to defend from. When either of the shadows reaches his shadow it makes him unable to move.
Note :
-Usable 3 times per battle
- Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
- Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
X-Declined-X Why is it A rank?
(Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
Damage points: 80
Description:This is the advanced version of the shadow impersonation jutsu used by Shikaku Nara. The user gathers a massive amount of his shadow chakra in every part of his body, causing it to emanate a blurry dark shadow. Then he slams his hand onto the ground, causing tendrils of shadows to spout out from his body. He uses the shadows to form a monster called Shadow Dark Warrior. Its size is double of a human and it has shadow tendrils all around his body. He is able to extend the tendrils to long range, faster than usual and he can use them to stab the opponent while also binding him. The SDW can shape the tendrils into huge human fists in order to punch the opponent or slash him with his sharp nails, made of shadow. The SDW can block water, wind and earth up to S rank if he uses the tendrils to create a shadow shield, in front of him. However, he is vulnerable to strong lightning and fire techniques. The SDW forms in front of the user, while being attached to the users shadow.
Note:
- Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
- Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
- Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
- Can Only be use twice
- Last only 5 turns then auto vanished
- Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
- While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
- After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.
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X-Declined-X Its a Shadow. One, you're making it tangible be more reasonable of how you do it? I'll give it a go considering shadow tendrils are used to stab opponents. Two, its oped. Three, blocks matter based elements despite being a shadow. Four, Lasts too many turns.
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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Folklore ability is able to deflect any bright light which the opponent releases and causing the bright light to turn back blinded the opponents. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire .
Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara
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X-Declined-X Explain the colored segment. And pick either the elemental abilities or the tool.
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(Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user extends his shadow and then performs the Rat hand seal in order to divide his shadow. As the shadow splits, it goes right and left, moving towards the opponent in an arc. This way it forms a huge circle around the opponent, making him hard to focus on both and to choose which one to defend from. When either of the shadows reaches his shadow it makes him unable to move.
Note :
-Usable 3 times per battle
- Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
- Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
Note : Lowering the rank to become B-Rank and automatically edit the chakra cost also damage point
(Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
Damage points: 80
Description:This is the advanced version of the shadow impersonation and shadow sewing jutsu used by Shikaku Nara. The user gathers a massive amount of his shadow chakra in every part of his body, causing it to emanate a blurry dark shadow. Then he slams his hand onto the ground, causing tendrils of shadows to spout out from his body. He uses the shadows to form shape of a dark creature made of shadow with transparent shapehe (Shikaku) called it Shadow Dark Warrior. Its size is double of a human and it has shadow tendrils all around his body. He is able to extend the tendrils to long range, faster than usual and he can use them to stab the opponent while also binding him. The SDW can shape the tendrils into huge human fists in order to punch the opponent or slash him with his sharp nails, made of shadow. The SDW immune from any cannon shadow jutsu, meaning that any shadow jutsu won’t work to trap the user shadow while activating SDW . However, he is vulnerable to strong lightning and fire techniques with similar rank. The SDW forms in front of the user, while being attached to the user shadow.
Note:
- Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
- Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
- Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
- Can Only be use twice
- Last only 2 turns then auto vanished
- Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
- While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
- After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.
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Note : One, I change it to intangible shaped. two, reduce it’s ability, three, change the blocking ability with only immune with cannon shadow jutsu. Four, reduce it’s turn, from 5 to 2 turn.[/spoiler
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire . The 3 elders merge all of their unique chakra upon the mirror to create a suction hole in the center of the mirror to suck in the evil elder and trap his ability inside the mirror, so every ability which the evil wombat elder has, it will also be performed by the mirror which is able to absorb 3 elemental ninjutsu
Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara
Picture of Folklore, the legendary mirror
Note : I’ve added more explanation in the description which the mirror able to perform the unique ability of the evil Wombat Elder which is absorbing 3 elemental ninjutsu ( Wind, Fire and Water) by trapping the Evil Wombat Elder inside the mirror, it’ll be the same principle with the Manga when Minato Trap Kyubi inside Naruto. 2nd one, I’ve been erased the Tool abilities and choose the elemental ability only
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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire . The 3 elders merge all of their unique chakra upon the mirror to create a suction hole in the center of the mirror to suck in the evil elder and trap his ability inside the mirror, so every ability which the evil wombat elder has, it will also be performed by the mirror which is able to absorb 3 elemental ninjutsu
Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara
Picture of Folklore, the legendary mirror
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Note : I’ve added more explanation in the description which the mirror able to perform the unique ability of the evil Wombat Elder which is absorbing 3 elemental ninjutsu ( Wind, Fire and Water) by trapping the Evil Wombat Elder inside the mirror, it’ll be the same principle with the Manga when Minato Trap Kyubi inside Naruto. 2nd one, I’ve been erased the Tool abilities and choose the elemental ability only
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