[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[BusinessManTeno]

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(Fuuton-Suiton : bumon itsutsu) Wind/Water Style: Category Five
Rank:Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:90 (20 to user)
Description: This Jutsu can only be done on a Large Water Source. The user will do 5handseals. Once done the sky will become dark and become the area will become VERY windy. about 3 seconds later. A huge tornado will touchdown on the water source. The Tornado is Sharp enough to To cut through Boulders (Just to give a visual of how big, fast, and sharp the tornado is) Once it touch down on the water .. All the water will start to form around the tornado. Making the Tornado Coat In Water, Pretty much giving the water sharp wind properties .. The Tornado winds are 80MPH making it REAL REAL SHARP. Due to the tornado landing on water. It naturally becomes weaker. The user will do then tiger handseal, and channel more of their chakra into the tornado. Helping it from not weakening as it comes on land.. as The user Direct the Tornado towards the opponent. The Tornado travels about 50Mph. This jutsu is about the Same Size as Mountain Sandwhich. And As Thick as it.. The User Is also in Risk of getting Caught in flying objects that may be laying around. This Tornado is not Very windy. So the user and the opponent dont have to worry about getting blown away. Xd . Making It Similar in aspects of a Category Five Hurricane. Hence the name.

Due To Large Scale Of jutsu. This jutsu takes of 2 of the 3 jutsu slots

This jutsu uses up alot of Chakra. Causing the user to Exhaust himself Having him not able to stand that whole move

User Cant Use Wind Or Water Above B rank for the next 2 turns

Must form Over a Large Water Source

Can only be used Once

Only Taught By Teno

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~ Declined, OP ~

 

[Bloo]

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Summoning Animal :Kagu
Scroll Owner :-BlueDevil-
Other Users who have signed contract : None
Summoning Boss if existing :Wagi
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract :N/A
Description and Background:
The Kagu or Cagou (Rhynochetos jubatus) is a
crested, long-legged, and bluish-grey bird endemic to
the dense mountain forests of New Caledonia. It is
the only surviving member of the genus Rhynochetos
and the family Rhynochetidae, although a second
species has been described from the fossil record.
Measuring 55 cm (22 in) in length, it has pale grey
plumage and bright red legs. Its 'nasal corns' are a
unique feature not shared with any other bird. Almost
flightless, it a spends its time on or near the ground,
where it hunts its invertebrate prey, and builds a nest
of sticks on the forest floor. Both parents share
incubation of single egg , as well as rearing the chick.
It has proved vulnerable to introduced predators , and
is threatened with extinction.

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(Kaze Jin no ken)Sword of the wind djinn
Type:Weapon
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra:N/A
Damage:N/A(+10 to wind techs)
Description:
The sword was crafted by the wind djinn. It is infused with the power of wind. The sword is 1 and a half meters long. The blade is a light blue in color. The hilt is a straight bar with a light blue jem on each. The handle has finger grooves so it fits the hand better The user of this sword can channel there wind chakra into the sword. Then they release it from the tip of the sword in the form of a wind arrow that is equivalent to an A rank wind jutsu.
-Sword is useable by whoever I let use it
-Wind arrow usable 3 times a battle
-Must wait 1 turn before using again
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit

 

[Punk Hazard]

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Raiton: Hasami (Lightning Style: Scissors)
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel Raiton to their feet or fingertips. He will then wave his hands or kick towards the opponent, releasing the chakra in the form of a blade. The blade can travel very quickly and will leave deep gashes on impact with the opponent. While the technique is capable of slicing through rock and steel, it wont be fatal to the opponent unless it hits a vital spot.
~Can only be taught by Rikerslade.~
~Must know up to A rank Lightning.

Doton: Enkaku Domu(Earth Release: Isolated Earth Spear)
Rank: A
Type: Defense/Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This is a variation of the Earth Spear technique. Instead of turning his entire body into steel-like quality, the user will focus it to one point or area on his body. When applied to his fist or feet, the used can do tremendous damage,even more so than Earth Spear due to the steel-like quality being in one spot. When applied to the user's fingers, it can pierce the opponent's flesh and can even break bone.
~Can only be taught by Rikerslade.~
~Both Declined~ Do not Resubmit

Summoning Technique: Dendo The Porcupine
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will wipe blood on their Porcupine tattoo and after performing four seals, the user will slam their hand on the ground, summoning Dendo. Dendo is a large porcupine, just bigger than one of Pein's dogs. Dendo has a smug attitude, but gets all along well with other Porcupines and his Summoner. He has a scar running down his eye, which, according to him, is the result of his toughest battle. Like all porcupines, he has two weak spots, an area above his head and his underside, due to having no quills there. Dendo, like other porcupines, can fire off quills, which are strong enough to pierce through A-rank Earth and looks similar to Jiraiya's Needle Jizo. Dendo has an affinity to Earth style, being able to use any Earth style jutsu. He also has the ability to curl up into a ball and roll over targets. By putting the summoners and his allies on his underside, this can be used for transportation.

~Can only launch needles twice. After that, Dendo loses his quills for the remainder of the match.~

~Can only roll twice.~

~Can only remain on the field for 4 turns~

~Can all Earth techniques.~

~Can only be summoned by Rikerslade and -General Phaze-

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~ Japanese name ~

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Dendo , Yamārashi)Summoning Technique: Dendo The Porcupine
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will wipe blood on their Porcupine tattoo and after performing four seals, the user will slam their hand on the ground, summoning Dendo. Dendo is a large porcupine, just bigger than one of Pein's dogs. Dendo has a smug attitude, but gets all along well with other Porcupines and his Summoner. He has a scar running down his eye, which, according to him, is the result of his toughest battle. Like all porcupines, he has two weak spots, an area above his head and his underside, due to having no quills there. Dendo, like other porcupines, can fire off quills, which are strong enough to pierce through A-rank Earth and looks similar to Jiraiya's Needle Jizo. Dendo has an affinity to Earth style, being able to use any Earth style jutsu. He also has the ability to curl up into a ball and roll over targets. By putting the summoners and his allies on his underside, this can be used for transportation.

~Can only launch needles twice. After that, Dendo loses his quills for the remainder of the match.~

~Can only roll twice.~

~Can only remain on the field for 4 turns~

~Can all Earth techniques.~

~Can only be summoned by Rikerslade and -General Phaze-

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~Approved~

 

[Troyard]

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(Suiton: Mizu Assaku Katana) Water Release: Water Compression Blades
Type:Supplamentary
Rank: A - rank
Range: Mid- Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user performs the Rat,Boar,dragon and ram handseals and release several bullets (limit 8). After the bullets are release the user then claps their hands together while focusing their chakra turning the bullets into spiralling Disk like blades. These blades travel at the speed of common water projectile techniques and are very sharp . They can cut through C rank and lower Earth. The blades are so sharp that they are able to carve lines through the ground below.

-Can only be taught by light
-Needs Mastery Over Water
- Has to be S-class ninja or higher
-Can only be used 2 times
~Approved~ Edited the traveling speed.


(Katon: Meido zenshin) Fire Release: Hades drive
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank: S rank
Range: Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: For this technique the user focuses their katon chakra into both their arms and create two large streams of fire. The user then releases the fire chakra and it circles the opponent. One clockwise , one anti clockwise. The two streams of fire then shoots up into the air creating a Furnace of fire that traps the opponent in and burns them to death. Because of how fast it the flames are moving you can only escape from above or below.The user can choose if they want the flames to close in by performing the tiger handseal and by saying "Burn"
-Can only be used once
-Must master fire
-Must be sannin rank or higher
-Can only be tought by Light...

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~Declined~ Never describe the opponent dying in the description of your techniques.

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(Katon: Meido zenshin) Fire Release: Hades drive
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank: S rank
Range: Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: For this technique the user focuses their katon chakra into both their arms and create two large streams of fire. The user then releases the fire chakra and it circles the opponent. One clockwise , one anti clockwise. The two streams of fire then shoots up into the air creating a Furnace of fire. Because of how fast it the flames are moving you can only escape from above or below.The user can choose if they want the flames to close in by performing the tiger handseal and by saying "Burn"
-Can only be used once
-Must master fire
-Must be sannin rank or higher
-Can only be tought by Light...

I Edited the opponent dies in submission

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~Declined~ This kind of technique has been done before, and I don't see why it needed to be S-rank anyway.

 

[Gutsy]

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Sword of the Gathering Trees of the Forest (Tou Moyoushi Ueki Shinrin)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: This Legendary Katana is 140 centimeters long and the grip is 10 centimeters long itself, while the blade of the katana is 130 centimeters. The blade is made of a special metal from the land of iron, making it incredible durable and can resist incredible power. The handle is embedded in dark green silk and the name of the blade is inscribed into the blade itself in golden letters. Besides this, the blade itself has an incredible thin layer of Emerald surrounding it, giving it a special green color and making it almost indestructible, and when chakra is embedded into it, it gives the blade a faint green light coming from it. The blade is capable of controlling the wind surrounding the user and extends the blade by using the wind to create an "invisible" blade that is 20 centimeters long on the edge of the blade. Besides the blade being able to manipulate the wind surrounding the wielder, its true ability is to give the wielder perfect control over the weight of the sword, so when slashing at a person the wielder can make the sword lighter so it gains speed and in the last moment the wielder will be able to make it gain a massive amount of weight giving it massive momentum which will also make the sword powerful enough to cut through armor and break weapons in half.

Abilities:
- Indestructible
- Kenjutsu techniques can be used through this blade
Restrictions:
- All abilities of the sword counts towards the move count & does not require hand seals
- To wield the abilities of the sword, the wielder must have it in hand
- The sword can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya, if anyone else tries to do so, the sword will send a surge of chakra through the hands of the enemy and break all their bones in their arms

Dropping CW:

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(4th Post from above)
~Declined~ Similar Weapon Exists

 

[-Kenshin-]

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Chanpurū kendō: Bōshi heddokikku: Champloo Kendo- Spinning Head Kick

Type: Attack
Range: Short
Rank: B
Chakra Cost: 0
Damage Points: 40
Description:
The userr will get into a low stanceand put their hands on the ground as the place their hands on the ground the with set their head down and stick their legs out and spin on their head repeatly kicking their opponent

Restrictions

* can only be Tough by a Champloo Kendo Master
* can only be used 4 times a Battle
* Leave User open to attacks greatly
~Approved~ A fan of Samurai Champloo, are we?

 

[Daemon]

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(Boots of Hermes) Bu-tsu Hermes
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The boots stolen from the god Hermes, Messenger of Olympus. By putting these boots on, the users base speed comes to that equal of the speed of rock lee without weights. Once these boots are activated, they are active for the rest off the battle. When the boots are activated, they allow the user to run as fast as the speed stated above for 3 turns and have a 2 turn cool down period were the user will turn back into normal speed. After the cool down period is done, the speed of the user will pick back up again until the next cool down period.
(Can only be taught by Daemon)
~Declined~ Why don't you just add flight while you're at it? Seriously, though, do not resubmit.

 

[ReXii]

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(Hyouton: kensei no Kōri ryū) - Ice Release: Power of the Ice Dragon
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique is specialised for those who have great control over their ice release chakra along with fair practice in the arts of the dragon slayer. This is usually used in close combat where the user will release their ice chakra around a part of their body covering them in a pale freezing aura. Which can be quite painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is contacted by this icy aura created by the user, it will cause there body to be damaged by the Ice chakra Numbing them on impact, Slowing any further movement for two turns.
Note: can stay active for 2 turns at a time
Note: Can't use fire jutsu at the same time

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~ Approved ~

[Hyouton: Kōri ryū no Hōkō 氷龍の咆哮] Ice Style: Ice Dragon's Roar.
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user channels massive amounts of wind and water chakra throughout the air around them. Once this is done the user will bring the chakra up through the throat, and breathe in deeply before exhaling a gargantuan blast of ice and mist from there mouth barraging the opponent causing extreme damage from the frostbite and the blast has thousands of miniature ice crystals almost microscopic in size that penetrate the opponents skin without his knowledge, These crystals cause a continued feeling of numbness even if the opponent survives the initial blast causing them to be slowly numbed over the course of 5 turns, They get slower and slower until they eventually can barely move any longer and must get warm to recover.
►Must be Kage Rank.
►Can only be used Once per battle.
►No A rank or above ice techniques the following turn
►Doujutsu can see the microscopic crystals.

~ Declined, no Japanese characters ~

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[Hyouton: Kōri ryū Shimo Enjin 氷龍の煌炎] Ice Style: Ice Dragon's Ring Of Frost.
Rank: S
Type: Offense-Defense.
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (-10 damage to user)
Description: The user will channel massive amounts of Ice chakra throughout the arm's, the hand's will then gain a bluish tint around the skin. The user will then clap those hand's together which causes a snap freeze around his location encasing any living organism in a frost prison of very high durability immobolizing them for around 1-2 minutes before it begins to melt, The reason the ice melts is due to the incredible coldness of the chakra used to sustain it, Meaning the technique can only be self sufficient for that amount of time, But if the user makes contact with the ice prison he can create a link maintaining the prison for up to ten minutes.
►Can only be used once per battle.
►No A rank or above ice techniques the following turn
►This can encase the user also but they suffer no harm and can move freely.
►This technique can be dispersed at any time.

~ Declined, No Japanese characters ~

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Again making a custom version of pervy's techniques with his permission....again.
Feel free to edit anything to make it approvable.

 

[Pervyy]

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I've made the fire version of this jutsu, and have given rexii permission to make an ice variant as seen above. I'm making a lightning and wind version due loving fairy tail.



(Raiton: kensei no doragon ) - Lightning Release: Power of the Dragon
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique is specialised for those who have great control over their lightning chakra. This is usually used in close combat where the user will release their lightning chakra around a part of their body covering them in lightning. This is a non focussed charge like nagashi but only on parts of the body, not the entire body. Due to it being the users chakra and not that strong, it wont hurt the user, which can be quite painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is hit by this lightning created be the user, it will great a burst of lightning on impact from the user, creating some static bolts that shock and burn what hit his.

Note: can stay active for 2 turns at a time
Note: Can't use earth jutsu at the same time

~ Declined, too similar to existing techniques, no resubmit ~

(Fuuton: kensei no doragon ) - Wind Release: Power of the Dragon
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique is specialised for those who have great control over their wind chakra. This is usually used in close combat where the user will release their wind chakra around a part of their body covering them in wind. This wind is rotating around their body like a rasengan wrapped around a limb. Due to it being the users chakra and not that strong, it wont hurt the user, which can be quite painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is hit by this wind created be the user, it will great a burst of wind on impact from the user, creating seveal wind slashes forwards which can cause 2 inch cuts on an opponent.

Note: can stay active for 2 turns at a time
Note: Can't use fire jutsu at the same time

~ Approved ~

 

[Zenryoku]

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(Shōjunryū) - Ascending Dragon
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user channels chakra into their sword and then using the art of iaido to quickly unsheath their sword delivering a swing upwards towards the target and releasing the chakra in their sword and manipulating into a dragon that rises up into the air carrying the opponent with them by crunching down into their stomach causing severe damage.
Note: Can only be used three turns and must know Iaido

(Dokuga) - Venomous Fangs
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: By utilizing the reverse quick draw method the user will quickly draw two of their swords dealing a dual reversed gripped slash to the opponent that will either result in cutting them or breaking a guard. The user will then quickly point the two swords at the opponent right after the slash and stabbing them into their chest piercing them and retracting the swords flicking the blood off their edge and resheathing them.

(Shodō no Tetsugaku Kenjutsu) - Philosophy of Calligraphy and Swordsmanship
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn active)
Damage points: (+15 to Kenjutsu techniques)
Description: This technique encourperates the elements of swordsmenship and calligrapghy which go hand in hand. This is a form of training practiced by masters new and old to develop their essense of martial arts. The user by practicing strokes of calligraphy can enhance their swordsmanship in their power giving additional damage to their techniques, their speed in deliverance of the strokes is greatly enhanced by understanding wrist movement and the way the muscles work in their arm increasing their base speed by three times.
Note: The techniques duration lasts 5 turns and must wait two turns before activation.

 

[Smirk]

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Summoning Animal: Maggots
Scroll Owner: -Supreme-
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: The Hunger Queen
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A [None yet]

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±± Declined ±± You do know that maggots aren't the species right? they are a larva stage of the house fly...

Summoning Technique: The Hunger Queen
Rank: S
Range: All
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 60
Damage: N/A
Description: The Hunger Queen is about the size of Tsunade's giant Slug[Form 1]. The Hunger Queen[THQ] has the ability to disperse into millions of [pinky] finger sized maggots[Form 2], and feed on plants, crops, and living organisms while spreading a microbial infection known as Myiasis. While in Form 1 THQ is able to travel underground undetected, while carrying people in her mouth, due to her specialization in the Earth Element she remains unharmed against Earth based attacks.

Note: The Hunger Queen cannot actually perform any jutsu.
Note: THQ remains on the field for 5 turns.
Note: THQ is summoned when the user draws their own blood and performs seven handseals.
Note: THQ can only be summoned once per battle and the user cannot have other summons on the field at the same time as The Hunger Queen.
Note: THQ is summoned in form 1, then she's able to disperse herself into form 2
Note: In the Narutoverse the infection THQ spreads [only in Form 2] causes the opponents to become dizzy, disoriented, and slows down their motor functions. The User remains unaffected, due to THQ recognizing the users chakra.

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±± Declined ±±


(Doton: Sesshoku Galactus) Earth Release: Feeding Galactus
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The User makes five handseals, instantly causing an extremely large hole in the ground/earth, that can drain oceans of liquid, due to the hole running deep in the earth.

Note: Can be used twice per battle
Note: Taught by -Supreme-

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~ Declined, can drain oceans ? Excuse me while I laugh. ~

 

[Makoto Yuki]

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Summoning Animal: The Hare
Scroll Owner: Sammy Winchester
Other Users who have signed contract: none
Summoning Boss if existing: none
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none
Description and Background: Normally a shy animal, the European brown hare changes its behavior in spring, when hares can be seen in broad daylight chasing one another around meadows; this appears to be competition between males to attain dominance (and hence more access to breeding females). During this spring frenzy, hares can be seen "boxing"; one hare striking another with its paws (probably the origin of the term "mad as a March hare"). For a long time it had been thought that this was inter-male competition, but closer observation has revealed that it is usually a female hitting a male to prevent copulation.Hares have sensitive hearing that allow one to sense their opponent

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±± Declined ±± Rabbit contract exists.

 

[Gèckö]

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Summoning Animal: (giant)Hedgehogs
Scroll Owner: The 4th raikage
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Wally the Hedgehog
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Shadow the hedgehog, Sonic hedgehog
Description: A hedgehog is any of the spiny mammals of the subfamily Erinaceinae and the order Erinaceomorpha. There are seventeen species of hedgehog in five genera, found through parts of Europe, Asia, Africa and New Zealand (by introduction). There are no hedgehogs native to Australia, and no living species native to the Americas. Hedgehogs share distant ancestry with shrews (order Soricidae), with gymnures possibly being the intermediate link, and have changed little over the last 15 million years. Like many of the first mammals they have adapted to a nocturnal, insectivorous way of life. Hedgehogs' spiny protection resembles that of the unrelated rodent porcupines and monotreme echidnas.

Uses: the spikes on there backs can be used for defense purposes

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±± Declined ±± Contract exists

 

[Rokusho..]

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( Joukai no Kado ) - Heaven's Gate
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: N/A ( +20 to power up techniques )
Damage: N/A ( +15 to Taijutsu and Ninjutsu )
Description: This gloves were passed down from master to pupil for many generations , it's true origins are unknown . All that is known about it is that the gloves are fitted with a unique gem that intensifies the purity and density of chakra that is channeled into it , the chakra is then stored within the crystal and can be used to power up techniques which requires the use of hands . Another way of utilizing the chakra stored within the gem is to use it for propulsion by releasing a burst of the condensed chakra through the palm , allowing for extreme mobility and maneuverability .

- The gloves requires huge amounts of chakra which drains the user's stamina fairly quickly ( Only when the gem on it is put to use )
- Propulsion can only be used 5 times
- Can only be used by Rokusho..
~Declined~ The propulsion note is a bit vague. Elaborate on it, in which way you can maneuver, and how fast you can move. Also, decrease the number of times you can be propelled. 5 is too much. Lastly, how long do these gloves last?

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Tell me if there are any areas which can be editted to make it more approvable ^_^ .

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( Joukai no Kado ) - Heaven's Gate
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: N/A ( +20 to power up techniques )
Damage: N/A ( +15 to Taijutsu and Ninjutsu )
Description: This gloves were passed down from master to pupil for many generations , it's true origins are unknown . All that is known about it is that the gloves are fitted with a unique gem that intensifies the purity and density of chakra that is channeled into it , the chakra is then stored within the crystal and can be used to power up techniques which requires the use of hands . Another way of utilizing the chakra stored within the gem is to use it for propulsion by releasing a burst of the condensed chakra through the palm which blasts the user in the opposite direction of whichever direction he aimed the blast in , allowing for extreme mobility and maneuverability .

- The gloves requires huge amounts of chakra which drains the user's stamina fairly quickly only when the gem on it is put to use ( Lasts for 5 turns before the user would be too drained to do anything )
- Propulsion ability can only be used 3 times
- Can only be used by Rokusho..

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~ Declined, +15 to Tai and Nin ? No, no, no. One more chance to make this approvable or it is a DNR ~

 

[Alternative]

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(Kugutsu Baindingu no Jutsu) - Puppet Binding Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: -
Description:
• The user controlling a puppet will charge towards the target. When they are close, the user will wrap the puppet around the target's arms and legs, while segregating it's parts so that it has a much easier time doing so. This technique wraps the chakra strings around the target, while using the puppet as a medium to strengthen the hold.
Notes:
• Can only be used three times a match.
• Can only be in control of no more than two puppets to use.

~Approved~ I made it close range only, so you and your puppet need to really be next to your opponent for this to work out.

(This is merely an attachment to the above jutsu)

(Kugutsu: Essensu ketsugō) - Puppetry Technique: Essence Binding
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description:
• After successfully using the Puppet Binding Technique, the user can focus a single elemental chakra to act as an essence around the puppet to affect the target in a specific way. Using wind chakra would cause the target to take in cuts around his body, fire chakra would cause the body to burn, and so on. The chakra uses the threads as a guide to make it's way to the puppet, and only causes small wounds to the entire body.
Notes:
• Can only be used three times a match.
• Can only be used with the basic five elements.
• User must be trained in said element up to B-Rank in order to use it.

~ Declined, explain what each element does ~

(Bodipiasu) - Body Piercing
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description:
• Using Black Ant, the user will open up it's stomach cage, revealing hidden blades and thrust them into the target, piercing their body.
Notes:
• Can only be used with a Black Ant puppet.

~ Declined, doesn't need to be a jutsu ~

 

[~Yubel~]

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Faia Raida no Jutsu - Fire Rider Jutsu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user ignites his feet with a very large flame to increase his speed by using the strong ensuing flames to jet-propel him in any direction he wishes. The increase in speed is that opponents without taijutsu mastery or 3t sharingan can´t follow the movements and react in time.
- Changing direction count as a move
- Taijutsu involving kicks get an extra 10 damage
- Can only be used twice
- Last for 3 turns

Shindou Bakuha - Shock Blast
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user coats his body with pulsing chakra that when attacked directly will explode on the opponent to damage him greatly.
- Can only be used once

Kurohitsugi - Black Coffin
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Envelops the target with a powerful torrent of barrier that takes the form of a box of black energy, covered in several spear-like protrusions. The spears then pierce the box, lacerating the one inside from head to toe.
- Can only be used once

~ All Declined, do not resubmit any. ~

 

[Dprian]

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Card Barrage (Karuto renda)
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will take out a Chakra card and add a small amount of there Chakra to it. They will then throw it and perform the Sheep and seal and the will multiply to up to 6 cards.

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±± Declined ±±

Defense Card (Benso Karuto)
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will levitate any number of Chakra cards in from of them and add chakra to them forming a wall to block an attack(s)

Note: Can only Block up to B rank Jutsu
Note: Can only block up to 2 Attacks at a time
Note: Must wait 3 Turns before you can use it again

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±± Declined ±±

 

[zenkutsu]

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Summoning Animal: Whales
Scroll Owner: Zenkutsu
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background:
Whales are Aquatic mamals (air breathing, live birth giving creatures that live in the water). Whales take many shapes and sizes, but generally are very massive but docile creatures. They are the largest mamals on Earth and spend their entire lives in the water. Do to their size and weight if a whale is brought up on dry land, it can be crushed by it's own weight. Their massive fins are perfect for unleashing devastating water attacks on oponents (which makes them good choices for those lacking water release). Their sheer bulk allows them to outpower most oponents, but naturally they do not seek to fight. Young whales are often the size of cars while adults can reach 100 ft in leangth for some species and way several tons. Because they are mammals and have lounges, they must surface for air occasionally. They normally are only summoned to vast aquatic environments, but can be summoned onto dry land for a short time to be dropped on opponents, or be used as shields. The summoner can hide inside of the whale's body (if large enough of a whale) and hide underwater while depending on the oxygen in the whale. Most whales have a natural affinity to water and some can generate water which allows them to travel on land for short ammounts of time.

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±± Declined ±± Killer Whale/Orca contract already exists. I can't approve such a broad contract.
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HanmaTenshu: Titan Mase (Litterally God Hammer)
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra: Dependant on distance (see description)
Damage: N/A
Description:
The Titan Mase is a weapon based on a meteor hammer (Ball and chain), with the main alteration that it possesses no chain. The structure of the weapon is a 40 lb solid Iron sphere with two hilts (one connected through magnetism and the other seperate). The Hilts are actually powerful magnets that can have their polarity altered by altering the grip or position of the hilts. One hilt (held in the user's non-dominent hand) controls distance. The base position of the sphere is connected to the hilt. Depending on how how much chakra is put into the hilt (through grip) the distance between the user and the ball varies (up to a radius of 60 ft). The other hilt determines the direction the ball travels. The ball will always go wherever the hilt points and will follow it in real time. The speed and distance the hilt travels determines the speed and distance the ball moves (I.E. faster hand motions in a larger arc makes for a more devestating blow)

~~Notes
-If either hilt is dropped, the ball returns to the rest position on the distance hilt.
-When the ball is attached to the distance hilt, it is not effected by the directional hilt.
-Distance is proportional to chakra where 1 point of chakra= 1 foot up to a maximum of 60 points for 60 ft
-Only Bio's that were born and are loyal to Amegakure can use
-Can only be used for 5 turns

~ Declined, powerful magnets ? Do you know Magnetism Release, or else this is unapprovable ~

 

[Rasnall]

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Using this approved CJ methods of bending light. (Explanation of CJ method added to the help explain, link below.) Ask me (or maybe Izuna sensei if he is not to busy as he approved the original CJ) if any points need explaining. Open to any changes and comments.

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Third submission this cycle.
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(Fuwafuwa Mira Rei) Light Reflection Ghost
Type: Supplementry
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will raise a mist from a water source sharpening the water droplets while forming it into an dense copy of the user (maximum of 2). This copy is controlled by the user and can not perform anyjutsu's as it has no physical state. Upon contact with an opponent or object the copy will disperce but still retain its shapened water droplet structure while also still being able to be controlled by the user to surround an opponent or object.
Notes:
~ The copy can make no form of damage to an oppoent when they come into contact.
~ The copy can not perform any jutsu's.
~ Must have learnt "Light Reflection Mist" to use this.

~ Declined, making clones with mist is an existing technique. ~

(Im adding this little note in case you think i'm just making a useless CJ, but it is actually a very useful CJ for me.)
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[Frozenstein]

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(Fuuton: Kaosu Kaze Tora) – Wind Style: Chaotic Wind Tiger
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (+10 if absorbed other elements)
Description: After a short sequence of 2 hand seals the user creates vacuum somewhere around him and collects wind from the environment with it. Then using this wind, he creates a giant tiger-like beast, which is as tall as a human and about 2 times longer and can travel up to long range. The body of the beast is made up from different spinning winds. They are differing in speed, size and direction. The beast can attack in 2 different manners. It can disperse his body and strike the target with a strong blast of wind capable of blowing away the opponent. In this wind the beast recollects his body and using it’s claws makes deep cuts too. When the beast attacks in it’s full form, instead of simply cutting, it shreads the target. The beast can absorb earth, water or fire, if it is collected from the environment or other lower ranked jutsus.
- can only be used 3 times per battle
- can only last for 3 turns
- using attacks in both forms counts as 1 of the 3 moves
- absorbing elements/jutsus doesn’t count toward the 3 moves
- if the beast absorbs other elements, it lasts 1 turn less
- can only be taught by Frozenstein

~ Declined, no collecting and adding on things, just gives you a dual elemental boost ~

I hope it's better now.

Blade of Resentment, Archenemy
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+10 if the sword needs recharge)
Damage: 80 (+10 with lightning or wind chakra)
Description: Archenemy created long ago possibly by the one who made the legendary Seven Swordsmen of the Mist’s swords. Archenemy is as long as the longest katanas and as light as a short sword. It has the ability to store the user’s water chakra for a long time and allow him to use it later. This chakra is extremely compressed and the maximum amount is enough to create a bigger lake. Because of this anyone who wants to hold Archenemy feels like he have to hold a lake in his hands, making it impossible to use the sword. Archenemy also has the ability to create A-ranked water waves and release A-ranked water needles, if the user swings it in an arc. It is also releases a small amount of water if the opponent blocks or hits the sword. Making the enemies clothes wet makes them more vulnerable to lightning based attacks. Archenemy can hold other chakra natures too, but for only 1 attack. The special attacks can be used in conjunction with lightning and wind chakras, making them even stronger. A charged Archenemy can be used as a base of a water jutsu, allowing the user to use water jutsus without a water source.
- 3 B-ranked water jutsu use up most of the sword’s water source
- 2 A-ranked water jutsu use up most of the sword’s water source
- 1 S-ranked water jutsu use up most of the sword’s water source
- using the A-ranked attacks counts as 1 of the 3 moves
- using lightning or wind chakras with these attacks adds +10 to their damage
- creating a lake counts as 1 of the 3 moves and uses up most of the swords water source
- each time Archenemy uses up it’s water source, it needs 1 turn to recharge the water
- when recharging the user can’t use water jutsus without water source and also can’t use the sword’s A-ranked jutsus
- can only be wielded by Frozenstein

~ Declined, enough and more techniques that create water sources ~

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Changed the type, name and the pic, the rest is the same.

I don't see why I can't collect things. This is a wind jutsu and every wind jutsu is capable of doing that. If I create a tornado on a lake, that will collect water, if I blow out a blast of wind in a desert, that will collect sand, if I spew a little fire ball into a wind vortex that turns it into fire... it is the same. if a wind tech gets enough from these elements, these will give the jutsu that boost...

also there are already jutsus that clearly states they are collecting stuffs. ->

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(Fūton: Fūsajin no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Dust Wind Technique
Type: Defence
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a gust of wind that layers an area in loose sand and dust. Doing so also acts as a sandblaster on the surrounding area. This layer of sand that accumulates on the trees during this technique makes it difficult for others to get a good footing. The initial gust can also temporarily blind opponents by lodging sand in their eyes

(Fūton: Kaze Iwa Rendan) - Wind Release: Wind Rock Barrage
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user creates a huge stream of wind that carries rocks that lifts the opponent into the air where the rocks hit them.

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

(Fūton: Kamikaze) - Wind Release: Divine Wind
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+10 if used with a fire type)
Description: The user releases a gust of wind that forms several small tornadoes. Combined with Fire Release: Running Fire that forms a circle on ground level, this creates a massive flaming hurricane.

(Fūton: Mugen Sajin Daitoppa) - Wind Style: Infinte Sand Great Break Through
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: Originally Gaara's technique, for other characters the user will have to gather the dust or sand of the environment around him and then combine it with his elemental wind affinity. A large wind gust with dust or sand will get created capable to push away the opponent or medium sized objects.

(Fūton: Fūsui Ranha no Jutsu) -Wind Release: Wind Water Wild Wave Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will first release a wave of water at the opponent, and then the user will enhance the wave's destructive capacity with wind.

(Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.

(Fūton: Fūjin no Jutsu) - Wind Release Dust Cloud Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the Bird hand seal the user creates a stream of high velocity wind combined with scouring dust. The completed technique is directed through overlapping hands.

and if I'm already complaining, my Ocelot contact is not in the official list, so I'd be grateful if a mod could put it in.

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