[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Korra.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Ame Senpo: Shizen no Ame) - Rain Sage Arts: Nature's Rain
Type:Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-5 per turn)
Damage: 80
Description: The user will do the Ram sign and either channel their senchakra into an already existing rain source or use their chakra to make it start raining. The rain will be infused with natural chakra and the rain will span over to long range covering the entire terrain. The user has the rain hit their body and has their body absorbs the natural chakra. The user can use this to enter Sage Mode directly after 1 turn of getting hit by enough rain. If the user is already in Sage Mode when the use this jutsu they can use the rain to prolong Sage Mode. The prolonged Sage Mode will stay until the rain is either defeated or cancel by the user. When the rain stops so does the prolonged Sage Mode. Due to the senchakra powered clouds it would take a high level wind jutsu (S rank) to blow away the clouds away.
Note: Must know Sage Mode
Note: Usable 3 times a match
Note: Requires a 2 turn cool down between uses
Note: Must be taught by Korra.

✦ Approved ✦

(Pawāringu) Power Ring
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost N/A (40 for creating Tools/Weapons)
Damage Cost: N/A
Description: This Power Ring is worn by the user and glows different colors depending on the users emotion when activated. Green - Will, Indigo - Compassion, Red - Rage, Blue - Hope, Star Sapphire - Love, Yellow - Fear, Orange - Greed, while there is also two strong modes with Black - Death and White - Life. The user can switch between with each Corps/Emotion containing different abilities. To switch to a new emotion the ring deactivates and takes 1 turn completely to switch to a new emotion. Even though each emotion gives the user different abilities each emotion have some shared abilities.

Shared Abilities - By channeling their chakra into the ring, it glows the color it is on and can be used to create weapons like hammers, swords, kunai, and shields made up of pure chakra that stay connected to the ring by a chakra chain. Weapons created by the ring cause A rank damage. When creating a shield the shield can block up to B rank elemental jutsus (within reasonable size) and ninja tools. If the shield goes against an A rank jutsu, the shield will block it but be destroyed and will automatically loose to S rank jutsus. The ring can also release A rank blast that can stun opponents and have them stop moving for a turn. The ring can be programmed. It can be coded to the wearer so as to make them unusable if stolen. Commands can be stored in the ring to be executed at a later date, even if the bearer is not wearing the ring.

Green/Will – When the ring is set to Green Lantern mode they gain certain abilities and is powered by Willpower. By using the user's willpower and having the ring boosting it the user will be immune to B rank and below Gen and Mind Altering jutsu. At the cost of a jutsu per turn, the ring will raise the user's willpower to break out of Gen and other Mind altering jutsu of A rank and below.

Indigo/Compassion – Indigo is powered by Compassion. This emotion has a limited ability to to heal injuries from C rank jutsu and below. The healing is only to the extent of the small injuries and light injuries like surface wounds and slow bleeding. If the user knows Medical Ninjutsu, the ring can also use A rank and below Med Nin at half the cost of chakra.

Red/Rage – When set to Red Lantern Ring the ring is powered by Rage. Using their rage to empower them the user can create stronger constructs that are one rank high than all the other Emotions constructs (offensively and defensively).

Blue/Hope – When set to Blue Lantern the ring is powered by Hope. As fear is the belief of imminent demise, hope is the belief of imminent success. The ring can take the moisture in the air and for a medium water source throughout the entire field for the user to use for water jutsus.

Star Sapphire/Love – When set on Star Sapphire Lantern the ring is powered by Love. The user can use the ring to trap the opponent in a genjutsu (B rank gen, up to Mid Range) where the opponent sees a bright violet light shine from the ring than has them see an irresistible person of the opposite *** of them that they will immediately become attract to and not willingly to harm them keeping them paralyze in real life.

Yellow (Sinestro)/Fear - The Power Ring is unique in that its base of power is fear. The yellow mode can create holograms (like Haze Clone Technique) that are scary looking humanoid creatures that cause paralysis due to fear.. This would help distract the opponent and make him think that they are fighting against different people/beast and different KGs even though their attacks would be intangible.

Orange/Greed – When set to Orange Lantern the ring is powered by greed. The Orange rings have the unique ability to absorb the chakra from opponents or summons by creating a construct chain and has it wrap around them. Another ability is being capable of creating chakra avatar Orange Lanterns of the beings the user kills, literally stealing their identity postmortem. This avatar is avarice corrupted version of its former self, possessing no thought pattern besides the insatiable greed. In all other circumstances they act as individual but collective soldiers to the user, as they are an extension of his power. The avatars are able to use taijutsu and up to B rank ninjutsu. They can take up to B rank jutsus. They can also create powerful blasts of concussive force that knock out opponents.

Black/Death – When the ring is set to Black Lantern the ring is powered by Death and is one of the strongest mode. The Black Lantern rings are capable of scanning a being's current emotional state and where it falls onto the Emotional Spectrum. The user can create a chakra copy of the ring and latch it onto a corpse, and downloads all the memories of the corpse giving them information they might need. The user can also create chakra copies of the ring and have them attach to opponents. Once attach the user has the chakra copies slowly send pulses of electricity into the opponent constantly. After 1 turn the opponent will just feel a weird shock. After 2 turns the opponent will start feeling numb. After 3 turns the opponent will become paralysis and unable to move. After 4 turns the opponent will become unconscious and after 5 turns the shock becomes lethally enough to kill the opponent. (The Chakra rings can be destroyed with an A rank jutsu and up)

White/Life – When set to White Lantern the ring is powered by life and is the strongest mode. The user of a white ring can generate any color of the emotional spectrum and use the powers of each color (can only use 1 of the other corps abilities once a turn and cannot use two different corps/emotions abilities in the same turn). A white lantern can render him/her/itself invisible by willing themselves to bend light waves around his/her/its form. Upon their will, the white lantern can recreate a holographic environment based on data in its memory banks to trick the opponent into thinking they are in a different terrain.

Note: Have to be taught how to use the ring by Korra
Note: When creating weapons and shields it counts as a move.
Note: When using any Emotion/Corps ability it counts as a move.
Note: If the ring comes off the user it deactivates and the user must wait 3 turns so it can charge.
Note: The user has to state in the beginning of the battle which emotion they start off with. If they don’t they have to state later in the battle what emotion they want to use and then have to wait 1 turn for it change into the emotion.
Note: The user cannot start in White or Black Lantern mode. The user has to wait 4 turns in a battle before switching into White or Black Lantern. Once in White or Black Lantern Mode the user is stuck into that mode and cannot switch into any other Emotion/Corps for the rest of the fight.
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‡ Declined ‡ Sapphire, Blue and Yellow need to change. Genjutsu doesn't work like that (not everyone will have the same reaction, you can't compel emotions, et cetera). Same case with Yellow, not all opponents would be paralyzed into fear. The seeing emotions and downloading of memories for Black won't be allowed. Blue just infringes on Tobirama. You need to add a limit to how much each individual ability can be used. There's not enough of a drawback to using White. Specify Red is S-Rank and limit it slightly more than the others. Yeah, that should be it.

(Pawāringu) Power Ring
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost N/A (40 for creating Tools/Weapons)
Damage Cost: N/A
Description: This Power Ring is worn by the user and glows different colors depending on the users emotion when activated. Green - Will, Indigo - Compassion, Red - Rage, Blue - Hope, Star Sapphire - Love, Yellow - Fear, Orange - Greed, while there is also two strong modes with Black - Death and White - Life. The user can switch between with each Corps/Emotion containing different abilities. To switch to a new emotion the ring deactivates and takes 1 turn completely to switch to a new emotion. Even though each emotion gives the user different abilities each emotion have some shared abilities.

Shared Abilities - By channeling their chakra into the ring, it glows the color it is on and can be used to create weapons like hammers, swords, kunai, and shields made up of pure chakra that stay connected to the ring by a chakra chain. Weapons created by the ring cause A rank damage. When creating a shield the shield can block up to B rank elemental jutsus (within reasonable size) and ninja tools. If the shield goes against an A rank jutsu, the shield will block it but be destroyed and will automatically loose to S rank jutsus. The ring can also release A rank blast that can stun opponents and have them stop moving for a turn. The ring can be programmed. It can be coded to the wearer so as to make them unusable if stolen. Commands can be stored in the ring to be executed at a later date, even if the bearer is not wearing the ring.

Green/Will – When the ring is set to Green Lantern mode they gain certain abilities and is powered by Willpower. By using the user's willpower and having the ring boosting it the user will be immune to B rank and below Gen and Mind Altering jutsu. At the cost of a jutsu per turn, the ring will raise the user's willpower to break out of Gen and other Mind altering jutsu of A rank and below.

Indigo/Compassion – Indigo is powered by Compassion. This emotion has a limited ability to to heal injuries from C rank jutsu and below. The healing is only to the extent of the small injuries and light injuries like surface wounds and slow bleeding. If the user knows Medical Ninjutsu, the ring can also use A rank and below Med Nin at half the cost of chakra.

Red/Rage – When set to Red Lantern Ring the ring is powered by Rage. Using their rage to empower them the user can create stronger constructs that are one rank high than all the other Emotions constructs S rank (offensively and defensively).

Blue/Hope – When set to Blue Lantern the ring is powered by Hope. As fear is the belief of imminent demise, hope is the belief of imminent success. The ring stores and can release up to a medium source of water that spreads into mid range. Once used it takes the ring 4 turns to gather water from the moisture in the air to collect enough water.

Star Sapphire/Love – When set on Star Sapphire Lantern the ring is powered by Love. The user can use the ring to trap the opponent in a genjutsu (B rank gen, up to Mid Range) where the opponent sees a bright violet light shine from the ring than has them see an irresistible person of the opposite *** of them in front of them. The genjutsu person will grab them and kiss them and mimic the kiss of death to the opponent keeping them paralyze in real life.

Yellow (Sinestro)/Fear - The Power Ring is unique in that its base of power is fear. The yellow mode can create holograms (like Haze Clone Technique) that are scary looking humanoid creatures that cause paralysis due to the user's killing intent. This killing intent follows the effects of the canon Killing Intent technique and the user's own rank. This would help distract the opponent and make him think that they are fighting against different people/beast and different KGs even tho their attacks would be intangible.

Orange/Greed – When set to Orange Lantern the ring is powered by greed. The Orange rings have the unique ability to absorb the chakra from opponents or summons by creating a construct chain and has it wrap around them. Another ability is being capable of creating chakra avatar Orange Lanterns of the beings the user kills, literally stealing their identity postmortem. This avatar is avarice corrupted version of its former self, possessing no thought pattern besides the insatiable greed. In all other circumstances they act as individual but collective soldiers to the user, as they are an extension of his power. The avatars are able to use taijutsu and up to B rank ninjutsu. They can take up to B rank jutsus. They can also create powerful blasts of concussive force that knock out opponents.

Black/Death – When the ring is set to Black Lantern the ring is powered by Death and is one of the strongest mode. The user can also create chakra copies of the ring and have them attach to opponents. Once attach the user has the chakra copies slowly send pulses of electricity into the opponent constantly. After 1 turn the opponent will just feel a weird shock. After 2 turns the opponent will start feeling numb. After 3 turns the opponent will become paralysis and unable to move. After 4 turns the opponent will become unconscious and after 5 turns the shock becomes lethally enough to kill the opponent. (The Chakra rings can be destroyed with an A rank jutsu and up)

White/Life – When set to White Lantern the ring is powered by life and is the strongest mode. The user of a white ring can generate any color of the emotional spectrum and use the powers of each color (can only use 1 of the other corps abilities once a turn and cannot use two different corps/emotions abilities in the same turn and at max can only use each corp ability at most 3 times). A white lantern can render him/her/itself invisible by willing themselves to bend light waves around his/her/its form.

Note: Have to be taught how to use the ring by Korra
Note: When creating weapons and shields it counts as a move.
Note: When using any Emotion/Corps ability it counts as a move and at most can be used 5 times a match expect for Red which can only be used 4 times a match. The Shared Abilities do not have a limit usage.
Note: If the ring comes off the user it deactivates and the user must wait 3 turns so it can charge.
Note: The user has to state in the beginning of the battle which emotion they start off with. If they don’t they have to state later in the battle what emotion they want to use and then have to wait 1 turn for it change into the emotion.
Note: The user cannot start in White or Black Lantern mode. The user has to wait 4 turns in a battle before switching into White or Black Lantern. Once in White or Black Lantern Mode the user is stuck into that mode and cannot switch into any other Emotion/Corps for the rest of the fight.
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[Noni]

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(Raiton: No Hosoku Olympus, Zeus Seishin)- Lightning Release: The Law of Olympus, Zeus's Spirit
Type: Supplementary/Offense/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 every turn active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Zeus, the order and all-father of the gods blessed Lancer with a token of his body due to Lancer's exceptional showing of Lightning, becoming arguably the greatest lightning user to bless the ninja world. A deity of greatness, this is considered one of the three gifts Lancer was bestowed upon by Zeus. The user will channel an abundance of chakra all over their body and strategically transform their exterior and internal being into the body of Zeus; specifically the user will suddenly appear to match the same physical characteristics of Zeus himself. Moreover, the composition of the users body will be lightning. Travel mechanisms allow the user to easily be able to phase in and out of material such as water and earth (things of that nature) without any time wasted, and at speeds fast enough to evade various jutsus. It can be comparable to that of Leech All Creation in its method of evasion, but the speed is far more quicker, to the point that when traveling through material the user looks like a "blur". To give a contextual basis on the speed, envision the speed of which Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar was able to cover the entirety of a battlefield, and depending on range of travel, can determine time spent. Defensively, various techniques that might attempt to clash with the users body, will look more or less like the water substitute technique but in a more "phasing" appearance. Also the material might be in danger of getting severely damaged or paralyzed. Also, due to the user being literally "composed" of a different body, most attacks that revolve around damage in the users brain or mental, will immediately lose effect, as in this state, the user will not be of tangible consciousness, rather, they will be in a passive state. In this state, the user will also be able to levitate and fly around the battlefield. Also, making true with lightning's immense speed, the user can move swift and in methods comparable to the speed of which Kakashi and Sasuke Double Lightning Quake, such as in unpredictable and zig-zag like manners, that become difficult to track, as well as easy to avoid basic moving projectiles and slow moving targets. In the lay of their wakes, trails of lights are left after every change of direction. When it comes to the supplementary usage of this legendary technique, it usually corresponds with how the user is able to perform lightning jutsus. As this body will have various electrical static wires erect in an amazingly fast and unpredictable manner that spans up to mid range. Alone, they provide no damage, rather an easy to use source and harness to perform lightning jutsus from. This might give the illusion that the user is performing lightning jutsus away from their body - thin air - but the reality is, they are simply being created from these interesting wires and is unrecognizable because of their speed. This will also give the illusion that the range of the jutsu might increase, as their starting point of creation is further out, but sadly, this is only they've been created further, their length and range remain the same in the composition context. One of the premier jutsu usage specific from this jutsu is performing what seems to be "lightning clones" that look like Zeus; in this context however, released at extremely fast speeds, almost like propellers, and in such a way they can intercept jutsus and attacks with ease and be used as a separate defense or offense, either to tank jutsus or attacks that the user is susceptible to, like wind jutsus, or EIG type users- even if it doesn't fully defend or tank the jutsu in question, it will momentarily halt said technique, allowing ample time for better evasion (A-Rank ability; can only be used three times). The second jutsu specific from the transformation is to allow the user to become "one" with other lightning jutsus, basically lightning jutsus either become controlled specific to the user, or the user becomes one with the lightning jutsus. Consider it similar to the Hozuki and their ability to morph in with water jutsus and control it specifically, this can be done with this concept. Allowing the user to morph into spears of lightning for example (A-Rank ability; can only be used thrice, last for as long as the jutsu allows). These jutsus may very well be used as an alternative, by themselves, without fully transforming, but would be susceptible to the overall usage. Lastly, there are obvious categorical usages that coincide with Zeus's myth, such as being able to punch and kick with electrical damage, and release projectiles in the form of an eagles and lions (his symbolic animals), and since this is a "superior" form of lightning, it can easily cut through any form of electricity, similar to Kakashi's Lightning cutter. This includes easily being able to pierce the opponent and slice them clean in half (A-Rank offensive damage, both concepts can only be used twice apiece).

Note: Can only be used by Noni
Note: Must specialize in Lightning
Note: Transformation can only be done twice
Note: Four turn cool down before re-use
Note: Lasts five turns
Note: Due to the electrical strain on the body, the user will have their speed halved, and taijutsu damaged halved
Note: After deactivation, no lightning for two turns
Note: After a second usage, no lightning for four turns

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‡ Declined ‡ This was a good read. The bolded is a definite no. Use another reference for the speed you travel at. The lightning clones bit clashes with a custom either Zaphkiel or Korra has (they passed it around so much I have no idea who actually got it approved). You'll need permission. The last sentences or so, clarify that it's the creation of animals that is A-Ranked and not your freeform strikes (or if it is, each strike that is A-Ranked in damage will count as a move). The parts in green are either exploitable and/or need to be better explained. I can understand not being affected by Genjutsu in such a state but I don't think this would extend to Keigoku. I'll have to re-read the Nekura clan submission to be sure. Also, can you still perform elements which aren't Lightning will in this state? That doesn't seem logical so add a note in your resubmission (if it's already there and I just missed it, my bad).

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" I do not personally see their similarities aside from being clones of different elements (which is canon). Though his move fast too, lightning is exceptionally faster, and his has more of an offensive repertoire base to it, while mine relies heavily on the defensive end, and the ability to simply allow lightning to cause the damage as its naturally meant. There is no explosion, or exceeded purpose. So I didn't feel or see the necessity of permission. If it was for Korra's Gambol Shroud, I got

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for that though.

(Raiton: No Hosoku Olympus, Zeus Seishin)- Lightning Release: The Law of Olympus, Zeus's Spirit
Type: Supplementary/Offense/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 every turn active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Zeus, the order and all-father of the gods blessed Lancer with a token of his body due to Lancer's exceptional showing of Lightning, becoming arguably the greatest lightning user to bless the ninja world. A deity of greatness, this is considered one of the three gifts Lancer was bestowed upon by Zeus. The user will channel an abundance of chakra all over their body and strategically transform their exterior and internal being into the body of Zeus; specifically the user will suddenly appear to match the same physical characteristics of Zeus himself. Moreover, the composition of the users body will be lightning. Travel mechanisms allow the user to easily be able to phase in and out of material such as water and earth (things of that nature) without any time wasted, and at speeds fast enough to evade various jutsus. It can be comparable to that of Leech All Creation in its method of evasion, but the speed is far more quicker, to the point that when traveling through material the user looks like a "blur". To give a contextual basis on the speed, it is essentially the speed of lightning within the "manga" context, that is, the user moves faster then any other of the basic elements (baring advance elements like sound), including the opponent (baring enhancements), and depending on range of travel, can determine time spent. Defensively, various techniques that might attempt to clash with the users body, will look more or less like the water substitute technique but in a more "phasing" appearance. Also the material might be in danger of getting severely damaged or paralyzed. Also, due to the user being literally "composed" of a different body, most attacks that revolve around damage in the users brain or mental, will immediately lose effect, as in this state, the user will not be of tangible consciousness, rather, they will be in a passive state. So anything that revolves around mental consciousness, mental/brain pain/manipulation through means of genjutsu, sound, or CC (Nekura for example) will be basically useless, as mentally speaking the user is not within the realms of these concepts, the user acts upon instinct of survival and death to the enemy. In this state, the user will also be able to levitate and fly around the battlefield. Also, making true with lightning's immense speed, the user can move swift and in methods comparable to the speed of which Kakashi and Sasuke Double Lightning Quake, such as in unpredictable and zig-zag like manners, that become difficult to track, as well as easy to avoid basic moving projectiles and slow moving targets. In the lay of their wakes, trails of lights are left after every change of direction. When it comes to the supplementary usage of this legendary technique, it usually corresponds with how the user is able to perform lightning jutsus. As this body will have various electrical static wires erect in an amazingly fast and unpredictable manner that spans up to mid range. Alone, they provide no damage, rather an easy to use source and harness to perform lightning jutsus from. This might give the illusion that the user is performing lightning jutsus away from their body - thin air - but the reality is, they are simply being created from these interesting wires and is unrecognizable and unpredictable because of their speed, thus the opponent with untrained eyes can not merely pick up where the creation of a lightning jutsu will occur (but for the sake of this jutsu, never within 5 meter radius of the opponent). This will also give the illusion that the range of the jutsu might increase, as their starting point of creation is further out, but sadly, this is only they've been created further, their length and range remain the same in the composition context. One of the premier jutsu usage specific from this jutsu is performing what seems to be "lightning clones" that look like Zeus; in this context however, released at extremely fast speeds, almost like propellers, and in such a way they can intercept jutsus and attacks with ease and be used as a separate defense or offense, either to tank jutsus or attacks that the user is susceptible to, like wind jutsus, or EIG type users- even if it doesn't fully defend or tank the jutsu in question, it will momentarily halt said technique, allowing ample time for better evasion (A-Rank ability; can only be used three times). The second jutsu specific from the transformation is to allow the user to become "one" with other lightning jutsus, basically lightning jutsus either become controlled specific to the user, or the user becomes one with the lightning jutsus. Consider it similar to the Hozuki and their ability to morph in with water jutsus and control it specifically, this can be done with this concept. Allowing the user to morph into spears of lightning for example (A-Rank ability; can only be used thrice, last for as long as the jutsu allows). These jutsus may very well be used by themselves as separate techniques, without fully transforming/performing the entire jutsu, but would be susceptible to the overall usage/limits within the jutsu description. Lastly, there are obvious categorical usages that coincide with Zeus's myth, such as being able to punch and kick with electrical damage, and release projectiles in the form of an eagles and lions (his symbolic animals), and since this is a "superior" form of lightning, it can easily cut through any form of electricity, similar to Kakashi's Lightning cutter. This includes easily being able to pierce the opponent and slice them clean in half (A-Rank offensive damage, both concepts can only be used twice apiece). The creation of animals that is A-Ranked and not the free-form strikes.

Note: Can only be used by Noni
Note: Must specialize in Lightning
Note: Transformation can only be done twice
Note: Four turn cool down before re-use
Note: Lasts five turns
Note: Due to the electrical strain on the body, the user will have their speed halved, and taijutsu damaged halved
Note: After deactivation, no lightning for two turns
Note: After a second usage, no lightning for four turns
Note: User can only use Lightning and KG/CE that revolve around lightning (storm, magnetism, etc) while this is active

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 Declined  Blue Rule.

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Kuchiyose: Appugurēdo (Summoning: The Upgrade)
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (+10 to Taijutsu)
Description: The user will simply perform a single hand seal, summoning an armour made completely of extremely sharp cardinal beaks over his body. The armour looks like a layered spiked suit and the beaks are of various shapes and sizes, interlocking throughout the suit so as to create the most efficient armour. The user is able to summon the beaks in any spot on his body he wishes. This could be just his right arm, both his arms, from his feet to his torso, or even having a full body suit. When an enemy makes contact with the beaks it will be as if he were stabbed with many sharp knives, the armour adds +10 to all Taijutsu the user uses. The beaks are naturally very strong and resilient, able to block damage from up to A-rank Taijutsu, A-rank Ninjutsu and B-Rank Elemental techniques. Since the armour is connected to the cardinals, should there be any Cardinal summon present on the field whilst the user has the armour on, the suit’s true power (The Upgrade) is activated and the suit adapts to the summoning Cardinal on the field.

• The Upgrade (Queen of Flames) - This upgrade is activated when Aphrodite is present on the field. The armour turns red and grants the user the ability to perform all Fire and Wind techniques B-rank and below with a single hand seal. The suit is able to withstand up to S-rank wind techniques, however it also obtains the elemental weaknesses of fire and wind and as such, it can only take two B-rank fire or water techniques before breaking.
Note: Can only use Fire and Wind elements while armour is active.
Note: Cannot use any B-rank and above fire and wind techniques for 2 turns after usage of this armour.
• The Upgrade (The Stormy Sea’s Princess) - This upgrade is activated when Keleano is present on the field. The armour turns blue and grants the user the ability to perform all Water and Lightning techniques B-rank and below with a single hand seal. The suit is able to withstand up to A-rank water and lightning techniques and S-rank Fire, however it also obtains the elemental weaknesses of water and lightning thus it is only able to take two B-rank earth or wind techniques before breaking.
Note: Can only use Water and Lightning while armour is active.
Note: Cannot use any B-rank and above water and lightning techniques for 2 turns after usage of this armour.

Note: Lasts 4 turns after which the beaks fall away.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle, but needs to cool down for 2 turns after the first time used and 4 turns after the second time used.
Note: The beaks that make up the suit are light so they do not remove from the user’s speed

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‡ Declined ‡ Interesting situation here. You gained ownership of a contract and probably learned that technique too but this jutsu still belongs to Broly. You can't update a technique approved to him since he still owns it, only he can teach it and only he can update it.

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Kuchiyose: Appugurēdo (Summoning: The Upgrade)
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (+10 to Taijutsu)
Description: The user will simply perform a single hand seal, summoning an armour made completely of extremely sharp cardinal beaks over his body. The armour looks like a layered spiked suit and the beaks are of various shapes and sizes, interlocking throughout the suit so as to create the most efficient armour. The user is able to summon the beaks in any spot on his body he wishes. This could be just his right arm, both his arms, from his feet to his torso, or even having a full body suit. When an enemy makes contact with the beaks it will be as if he were stabbed with many sharp knives, the armour adds +10 to all Taijutsu the user uses. The beaks are naturally very strong and resilient, able to block damage from up to A-rank Taijutsu, A-rank Ninjutsu and B-Rank Elemental techniques. Since the armour is connected to the cardinals, should there be any Cardinal summon present on the field whilst the user has the armour on, the suit’s true power (The Upgrade) is activated and the suit adapts to the summoning Cardinal on the field.

• The Upgrade (Queen of Flames) - This upgrade is activated when Aphrodite is present on the field. The armour turns red and grants the user the ability to perform all Fire and Wind techniques B-rank and below with a single hand seal. The suit is able to withstand up to S-rank wind techniques, however it also obtains the elemental weaknesses of fire and wind and as such, it can only take two B-rank fire or water techniques before breaking.
Note: Can only use Fire and Wind elements while armour is active.
Note: Cannot use any B-rank and above fire and wind techniques for 2 turns after usage of this armour.
• The Upgrade (The Stormy Sea’s Princess) - This upgrade is activated when Keleano is present on the field. The armour turns blue and grants the user the ability to perform all Water and Lightning techniques B-rank and below with a single hand seal. The suit is able to withstand up to A-rank water and lightning techniques and S-rank Fire, however it also obtains the elemental weaknesses of water and lightning thus it is only able to take two B-rank earth or wind techniques before breaking.
Note: Can only use Water and Lightning while armour is active.
Note: Cannot use any B-rank and above water and lightning techniques for 2 turns after usage of this armour.

Note: Lasts 4 turns after which the beaks fall away.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle, but needs to cool down for 2 turns after the first time used and 4 turns after the second time used.
Note: The beaks that make up the suit are light so they do not remove from the user’s speed

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Genjutsu:Joutai Dekimono - (Illusionary Arts: Condition Ulcer)
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:After performing a single handseal the user would cast a genjutsu upon his opponent that would cause the opponent to believe they have sores in the stomach lining and small intestine. The opponent does not notice anything for the first two turns and would just feel a light pain it the stomach area that goes away almost immediately(once for each turn), but upon the third turn the opponent would immediately experience a very intense non-stop burning sensation or pain in the area between his chest and belly button. The pain is so intense it would cause the opponent to fall to the ground writhing in pain, making it impossible to stand or move and as such unable to perform any handseals. The intense pain would cause also stress on the opponents mind and cause him to faint.
-Note: Can only be taught by El Alucard
-Note: Can only be used 3 times

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 Declined  Similar to existing Genjutsu. No long range Genjutsu. DNR.

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[Reborn]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu Tensha Fuin ) Genjutsu Transcription Seal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: This is an advanced sealing jutsu that implants a delayed command for genjutsu activation on the user. The technique works by the user preconditioning a genjutsu technique and sealing the pre molded chakra within themselves. They will then tie that seal to a command which specifies the condition for releasing the genjutsu. Once the condition is met, involuntary of the user’s action, the genjutsu will be released. The biggest drawback for this is that the general requirements for genjutsu must still be met. For example, if the user does not know their opponent’s location, or are out of range to cast the specified genjutsu then the illusion cannot be cast. The seal will simply take the chakra away from the user in the event of a failure to cast. Also genjutsu that require conditions like; physical contact, continuous sound, or mediums that are not hand gestures or hand signs cannot be activated unless those mediums are also present in the command. If a user is unable to perform genjutsu because of a restriction from another technique when the command is sealed, the jutsu will not take effect until that restriction is no longer valid. As for the commands, the commands must adhere to the following restrictions:

The commands must be in response to actions taken by somebody other than the user. The user cannot simply generate a command that is activated by any means of their voluntary action. Commands must be specific and not ambiguous. Your opponent simply speaking to you, or using any technique against you, or them simply existing in your excellent presence isn’t enough of a condition to activate the genjutsu. Specific criteria such as using specific techniques or types of techniques, saying phrases, or committing otherwise detailed criteria would be acceptable. The conditions for any usage of this seal will be validated by the bio checker once the seal is placed on the bio.

Note: As the genjutsu technique is independent of the user’s will with this technique, the user can still perform a technique within the same time frame as they are not manipulating more than one technique.
Note: The seal must be plainly stated in the user’s bio with: What technique is being used and the conditions of activation. The user can have up to 3 genjutsu sealed on their bio.
Note: The rank, range, chakra cost, and damage of the seal is that of the genjutsu being sealed.
Note: Upon a specific technique being placed on a user’s bio with this technique, if there are any usage limitations on the technique, it is reduced by one. In other words, the technique can only be used the number of specified times, minus 1, of the user’s own volition. The activation of this seal will account for one of the usages of said technique.
Note: User must have completed genjutsu and fuinjutsu to learn this seal.

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 Declined  No rank, no range, no chakra cost... Nope. You can't also make a seal to substitute handseals, which is essentially what this is. A seal seals something. You cannot seal something that hasn't happened or doesn't exist. A Genjutsu only "exists" when casted and only inside the mind of the target so you cannot seal something that doesn't exist. A seal needs a medium, a seal, a key, a target... Your target here isn't a viable one and to seal a technique within your own body I feel you'd need medical fuuin mastery as thats one of the things it encompasses. I wouldn't also approve any kind of seal that would allow you to bypass the timeframe, specially when it comes to Genjutsu. The idea that you can seal any Genjutsu and up to 3 in your bio would make it also highly OP, even if only potencially. You could setup conditions to make perfect defenses or offensive combos that would otherwise be completely and utterly OHK. And all of this, passive, predetermined and without the need for any sort of real restriction. All and all, while it seems feasible at first, its not really possible nor, if possible, would be something approvable as it stands.

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[XZA]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Nise Bachi)- Illusion technique: False Gates
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Descriptions: An extremely useful and dangerous Genjutsu. After a string of eight handseals, the user is capable of inducing a Genjutsu. The target(s) will be placed an illusion where they will experience the user entering the Eight Inner Gates, his skin becoming a dark red and and the air become dense and heavy as their veins bulge across their body. Right after the transformation, the user will appear in front of the enemy cutting across the terrain at high speeds and leaving a massive 5 meter wide chasm in his wake and deliver a skyward directional punch in the stomach that launches the target into the air at high speeds, several dozen meters. In reality, nothing has happened and the enemy is left open for attack. This technique induces mental damage due to the body reacting to the punch despite it not happening. Due to chakra strain, the user is rendered unable to use Genjutsu for the next two turns and the user is only capable of using one other jutsu the same turn.


Declined - similar to existing jutsu.

 

[Vayne]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Removed the unwanted parts z.z

(Kage: Jama) Shadow Arts: Intrusion
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (20 per turn)
Damage: -
Description: After performing 5 hand seals the Nara would extend his shadow all around him, the shadow would begin to rise. It maximum length is 15 meters. Then, through shape manipulation, the shadow would take one of two forms.
Form 1: The shadow takes the form of an armored samurai. The samurai can transform his arms to shields and swords. The samurai has a max reach of mid range. The user can remain inside the samurai, he would only need to create a small opening where he wants to remain. To control the samurai the user has several options.
The first is to perform one hand seal and 'become' the samurai. The samurai would imitate the movements of the user.
The second is to control the movements of the samurai after performing one hand seal. This enables the user to move away from the samurai(max mid range otherwise 'connection' is lost) while the samurai deals with the targets(while under the user's control).
Form 2: The shadow would take the form of a 4 legged, two headed, and 2 tailed creature. The creature would be grotesque in appearance having spikes and scales located throughout its body. The creature would be controlled by the user, it can reach mid range from the user. The creature can release shadow spikes from its body, the spikes can reach mid range from the creature. The spikes carry A rank strength. The spikes can penetrate defenses based on their 'elemental' strengths and weaknesses.
In both forms the shadow has the strength of steel. Furthermore, a line of shadow always connects the user to the forms. If that line is countered the technique would end.The size of the forms can be increased/decreased with the maximum size being 15 meters. This allows for tactical attacks. Ex: Increasing the reach of the samurai from 3 meters to 6 meters in order to surprise opponents.
-The forms have a striking power of 80 DMG points.
-Shadow techniques can be performed through the forms.
-Last 2 turns.
-Usable twice with a 2 turn interval between uses.
-No nara techniques one turn after use.
-Whilst using the technique the user can only use nara clan related techniques, kenjutsu, taijutsu, and non chakra based techniques.
-An ally, in synchronisation with the user, can channel chakra through the forms, using them as a medium. This allows the forms to become deadlier. For example channeling wind chakra to surround the samurais sword to increase the damaging effects. Of course the techniques used must be logical. An ally cant go and create a fire armour around the samurai because it would weaken the shadow, or even destroy/disperse it completely. Reason and logic is a must.

Approve - nice xd

(Katon: Tesuro Teshita) - Fire Release: Tesla's Creations
Type: Attack/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15 (5 per turn)
Damage: 30
Description: A technique that creates numerous(up to 10) little solid flying orb like creatures(max size is 5 cm radius). These creatures are sentient and there offensive/defensive prowess are, as individual creatures, not impressive. However, there supplementary prowess is what sets them apart. Each Tesla, being composed of fire, produces light. The power of the light can be controlled by each Tesla, at will, ranging from the lowest visible to ultraviolet. The light can reach mid range distance from the Tesla. The light can be used tactically to, for example, suddenly blind an opponent for one turn by increasing the power of the light from low to high. This ability is only effective in terrains with low visibility/light and it is usable 4 times per battle. The ultraviolet light can, under the presence of glass(usually bulbs with openings carried by the user), be used to produce black light. Mostly for cosmetic reasons. If used to blind, it lasts for 1 turn.
-Usable 3 times per battle with a turn interval between use.
-Lasts for 2 turns.

Approved - made edits


(Kage No Kumo) - Shadow of the Clouds
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Expanding on how Storm Cloud Shell is used to allow the user to produce rain from their body. Kage No Kumo allows the user to build on that concept. It would allow the user, after 2 hand seals, to draw in rain clouds and place them on beings/objects. The rain clouds can act as full body shells or partial. The clouds would allow the creation of rain techniques from the body that they surround. The clouds would also serve as a protection from lightning and lightning based techniques, cutting a quarter of the damage the techniques provide. This technique can only be applied on objects, the user's allies, and summons on the field. It can not be directly applied to the opponent.
-Allows the usage of Rain/water techs up to A rank.
-Usable 3 times per battle.
-Lasts 2 turns.
-Rain and Water training must be complete.
-Turn interval between usage.

Declined - how can having cloud around you weaken lightning jutsu? xd

xD Was going off the canon version.
(Kage No Kumo) - Shadow of the Clouds
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Expanding on how Storm Cloud Shell is used to allow the user to produce rain from their body. Kage No Kumo allows the user to build on that concept. It would allow the user, after 2 hand seals, to draw in rain clouds and place them on beings/objects. The rain clouds can act as full body shells or partial. The clouds would allow the creation of rain techniques from and to the body that they surround. The clouds would also serve as a protection from fire/water and fire/water based techniques, defending the body that is surrounds based on elemental interactions. This technique can only be applied on objects, the user's allies, and summons on the field. It can not be directly applied to the opponent.
-Allows the usage of Rain/water techs up to A rank.
-Usable 3 times per battle.
-Lasts 2 turns.
-Rain and Water training must be complete.
-Turn interval between usage.

Approved - i like it
(Kage: Ikinobiru) - Shadow Arts: Survive
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: A simple technique that comes a long way. It enables the Nara to give a portion of his shadow tangible qualities. This allows the user to step on his shadow instead of the ground beneath him. This can be used to protect the user from stepping on/into enemy techniques. It lasts as long as the user wishes due to its basic application. Its as simple as walking on water.

Note: Lasts a max of 4 turns

Approved - added the note, so you have to re apply it Nice jutsu

(Kage: Ra No Hoho) Shadow Arts: Protection of the Ra)
Type: Offensive/Defensive/upplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A (60)
Description: One of the ultimate defense mechanisms developed by Vayne of the Nara. Based on the ability of the Nara to manipulate their shadow to become tangible and exhibit strong solid qualities this technique was born. The technique has two manners of usage. The first is erecting a defensive structure based on the users need. What sets the structure apart from any other defensive technique is how it interacts when damage is received. Instead of remaining solid and resistant to the oppressing technique the defensive structure would react in a unique way. It would become malleable, changing length and form while ability alpha will take effect. Ability alpha leads to the negation of all momentum of the opposing technique. This is achieved through absorbing the momentum of the technique and spreading it across the shadow then finally towards the ground, causing damage to the ground as a result. Depending on the strength of the technique it can cause damage from cracks to craters to the ground. This would stop the opposing technique from gaining any more distance, thus effectively protecting the user. The user can, 3X per battle and at a jurtsu cost, choose to redirect the momentum of the stopped technique to somewhere else other than the ground. The momentum would be directed through (a) shadow tentacle(s) towards the intended target. If multiple tentacles are used the power is spread amongst them. The intended target would be sent flying backwards while receiving damage equivalent to the stopped technique but with a -10 damage due to the fact that some of the momentum would be lost during the execution of the technique.(A punch that delivered 30 damage initially would deliver 20 damage when its returned). The malleable aspect of the defense, ability beta, comes into place in order to produce a counter in the same instance. This can be done 3X per battle(Doesnt cost a move if used in the initial turn of the technique, but still only usable 3X) The shadow would act as a launching device, sending the attack to where the user wishes. The attack would carry 60 DMG Points. However, the user can choose to combine the absorbed momentum with the counterattack. This would return the damage of the technique plus a 20 damage boost. Doing this would count towards the usage of both Beta and Alpha abilities of the technique. The use can choose to give their defensive structures, 3X per battle, spikes. These shadow spikes would destroy the opposing technique. They would carry A rank strength. This is ability gamma.

The second and alternative usage of this technique is to apply it to other shadow techniques. This would give that technique powerful defense. A second layer of shadow would appear on said technique. The technique this is applied to would get up to 45 defensive points added to it. When an opposing technique hits the augmented shadow it would count towards the 45 defensive points. Alternatively, momentum can be either sent towards the ground/target through a tentacle(s) delivering 3/4 of that damage, or it can be used to augment the shadow technique's own strength. The strength increase is only 1/2 of the stopped technique.(A tangible shadow punch that absorbed he momentum from a boulder for example would use the momentum to propel the shadow punch forward, increasing its damage as a result.) This can be only applied 3X per battle. It would last the same duration as the technique it is applied to. This requires the user to perform a hand seal. It would only become active when the shadow tech it is applied to gets hit. However, it would still cost 15 chakra points per turn.

The technique basicslly acts as a waterbed, distributing the damage but with a twist. The twist being that the damage would be 'presevered' then sent towards an outlet where it takes effect.
-Requires mastery of shadows.
-4 time per battle.

Pending - need to discuss with other mods

 

[Yuse]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Ninpo: (Chokkei no disento) — Ninja Art: Lineal Descent
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary, Offensive
Range: Short - long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A unique activation technique meant to benefit the user after failure. The user upon preforming a technique will preform an additional hand-seal imbuing it with additional chakra acting within the same time-frame as the original due to its effect only taking place in accordance with another technique. The excess chakra remaining dormant until destruction of the technique. When destroyed the special ability activates. The excess chakra is used to manipulate any existing remnants of the the technique destroyed. Manipulating the shape and controlling through the excess chakra dormant within. Left over water or broken sections of earth from a destroyed technique become weapons in the making. Such as having a puddle of water release a barrage of senbon towards the opponent, having a broken section of earth release spikes to impale the opponent. Allowing a large variety of use, as the technique use is only limited to the strategic thinking of the user. Logically the technique works best on liquids and solids, but is applicable to any technique leaving remnants which under certain situations can also include elements like fire, e.g things catching fire after the technique itself has been destroyed. While the technique's greatest strength is that of stealth, chakra sensors and doujutsu user are easily capable of noticing the dormant chakra with the remnants left on the field.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Can not be used on lightning
Note: No Basic Ninjutsu S-rank or above in the same turn.
Note: Has a 1 turn cool down between usages
Note: Can only be taught by Yusei

Declined - this is way too much for a single jutsu. Pretty much means any jutsu that is not completely destroyed is still a weapon and that is beyond OP.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Pervy.

Notes for Checker - Bound Mist is a resubmisson originally posted By hells. I am resubmitting it as my own with his consent due to it being to similar to my own concepts to let him submit it for me. Also Lineal Descent was toned down in power to stop it from being Op

(Suiton: Arisutoteresu shōten) — Water Release: Aristotle's Ascension
Type: Supplementary, Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Somewhat derived from Cleopatra's Seductive Offspring, by primarily focusing on the merging and travelling aspect. The user will focus their chakra all throughout their body transforming it into pure mist. Which then merges with any preexisting mist on the field. By being merged with the entirety of the mist, the user is capable of respawning anywhere within it, through reforming his body in the desired location at a near instant speed. While merged with the mist, the user is incapable of being sensed or seen with doujutsu as their chakra is spread out entirely encompassing the mist. And logically unhindered by attacks due to the the intangible state the user has taken. The technique of course is purely defensive meant to simply evade techniques and respawn in a desired area for safety. However in the case that the mist is blown away while the user is still merged, he becomes separated from said mist with his body reforming back to normal. The technique is often seen as a mist oriented variant of the Hozuki's well known ability to merge with water sources with a few key differences being faster and relying more on stealth as opposed to being both versatile and offensive.

Note: Can be used three times
Note: No water techniques above srank fot the remainder of the turn or turn after
Note: Can only be taught by Yusei

(Suiton: Baundomisuto) — Water Release: Bound Mist
Type: Supplementary, Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20 (-10 ever turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: An activation technique created to cover an exploitable weakness of mist based techniques, namely their ability to be blown away. The user upon preforming a mist based technique will preform an additional hand-seal imbuing it with additional chakra acting within the same time-frame as the original due to its effect only taking place in accordance with another technique. Granting the mist the ability to take in moisture from its surrounding and itself in order to bind itself in place. The mist becomes incapable of be blown away due to the technique trying to pull its own moisture in place and that of the surroundings at the same time. Causing a stationary effect where the mist is bound to its location, and heavier then normal. Making it immune to the effects of being blown away regardless of the strength of the winds, as it will simply be pulled back into place. The latter allows mist techniques to remain on the field for their intended duration rather then being forced to end prematurely.

Note: Can be used three times
Note: No water techniques above srank in the same turn or turn after
Note: Can only be taught by Yusei

(Ninpo: Chokkei no disento) — Ninja Art: Lineal Descent
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Offensive
Range: Short - long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: A unique activation technique meant to benefit the user after failure. The user upon preforming a technique will preform an additional hand-seal imbuing it with additional chakra acting within the same time-frame as the original due to its effect only taking place in accordance with another technique. The excess chakra remaining dormant until destruction of the technique. When destroyed the special ability activates. The excess chakra is used to manipulate any existing remnants of the the technique destroyed. Manipulating the shape and controlling through the excess chakra dormant within. Left over water or broken sections of earth from a destroyed technique become weapons in the making. Such as having a puddle of water release a barrage of senbon towards the opponent, having a broken section of earth release spikes to impale the opponent. Allowing a large variety of use, as the technique use is only limited to the strategic thinking of the user. Logically the technique works best on liquids and solids, but is applicable to any technique leaving remnants which under certain situations can also include elements like fire, e.g things catching fire after the technique itself has been destroyed. While the technique's greatest strength is that of stealth, chakra sensors and doujutsu user are easily capable of noticing the dormant chakra with the remnants left on the field.

Note: Can only be used 4 times
Note: Can not be used on wind or lightning
Note: No Basic Ninjutsu above S-rank for the remainder of the turn
Note: Has a 1 turn cool down between usages
Note: Can only be taught by Yusei

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 All Declined  Blue Rule.

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[Ańbu Juniør]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kenjutsu: Ken Kōtei No Kankaku) Sword Art: Sense of the Sword Emperor
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Due to the extensive training the user undergoes in order to develope his swordsmanship, his muscles would have developed to the point where they can even react as a reflex and without interference of the brain. This reflex kicks in when the user is attacked from a blind spot, ambushed, or suddenly loses track of his opponent. When something/someone enters the reach of the user's sword, his arm(s) will automatically unsheathe the blade(s)(unless he is already is wielding one) and channel chakra into the the/it as he deflects or slashes at whatever it was that entered his reach. This is mainly used when projectiles or attacks are launched towards the user's blind spot, or when the opponent is too fast for the user to track and attacks him, in which case the reflexive slash can easily sever the opponent's limb(s). The effective range of this technique depends on the length of the user's sword, but if the length of the sword isn't mentioned, then the default range will be three meters around the user. By dislocating his shoulder and elbow joints he can block any attack that enters said range, regardless of which side an attack comes from. Naturally, this technique is ineffective against wide-spread elemental techniques, unless said techniques are based on projectiles. When used against techniques of that nature, Ken Kōtei No Kankaku is able to deflect/cut A-rank and below attacks that enter the field.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Requires a two turn interval between uses.
Note: Requires complete mastery of Kenjutsu to use.
Note: No S-ranked Kenjutsu techniques can be used in the same or following turn.

‡ Declined ‡ I just don't see this working.

 

['Kurapika]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Doton: Nyūsho) - Earth Release: Bondage
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate the ground to make chains of rock either softly emerge and wrap around an opponent's legs discretely or launch them at high speed and force to catch an already moving target.
These chains use the ground as a source of material, thus can be made at any size. For example, they can be made at such a size that can restrict the movement of a summon the size of the chief toad.

Note:
-The user must remain in contact with the ground as the chains emerge.
-Only useable 4 times per battle

Declined - Needs a size limit. I believe it should be multi rank, the bigger they are, higher the rank and more restrictions from the way you want to use it.

Made some changes following the checker's notes.
Also changed a restriction.

(Doton: Funjin bijon no jutsu) - Earth Release: Dust Vision Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user exhales air that naturally contains dust, then infuses the dust particles with his doton chakra. as he exhales the air, the dust carries a stream of his chakra allowing him to control more dust within range, and control the movement of the dust particles.
After the infused particles spread a stream of the user's chakra throughout the the area of reach, the user will gain the ability to identify his surrounding environment without the need for eyesight, this is done by causing the particles to move around while observing and noticing any objects that block the particles' movement path, which will allow the user to visualize the environment in which the particles are flouting in.It is also notable that the air entering the infused dust's reach will also be carrying dust, thus won't move the area of reach.Note:-The user cannot solidify doton while this jutsu is in affect, he can only use techniques that fragment rocks into dust/mud but not the other way around.-The user can't keep this technique active for more than five turns-This jutsu does not increase the amount of dust in the air, thus cannot affect visibility

X-Declined-X Is it a complete dust cloud or just minute amounts of dust within the air? If minute, perception wont be that great. If a cloud it will be visible to the opponent. Pick one.

(Doton: Funjin bijon no jutsu) - Earth Release: Dust Vision Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Through the exhalation of air containing chakra infused dust particles, which in turn transfer the chakra to particles already present in the air for faster spread, the user is able to observe the general movement of the ever floating invisible dust. As the dust floats _around_ objects, he can distinguish the general location and shape of objects that intersect the paths of the dust particles, including enemies.

Note:
-The user can't use doton techniques relying on the dust in the air while using this technique
-The user can't keep this technique active for more than five turns
-The user must reuse the technique in order to relocate the area affected by it


Declined - this pushes the boundaries of earth release to make. The word particals makes it seem microscopic, which i dont' like, and it seems like what cannon earth jutsu could do when you make a dust cloud with wind or earth.

 

[Pervyy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

‡ New Cycle ‡ ​

The new cycle starts on 18/06/2016 (at 10:00 GMT +1) and ends on 25/06/2016. The thread will be closed up to a week so we can check any remaining submissions and then it will be re-opened.

Rules of all upcoming cycles
1) Checking will happen throughout the week rather than at the end. Only make your submission when its complete as its liable to being checked there and then. No need to rush like crazy to submit your stuff since as you've seen, we check things in a random order.

2) To avoid clutter you're only allowed to make one post. This means if your post is checked and it only contains one technique, you cannot make another post to submit additional techniques. If you wish to submit the full three techniques, I suggest you post them all in one post when all of them are ready.

3) Of course this means resubmissions in the same cycle are no longer allowed.

4) You cannot edit your post if even one of your techniques has been checked by a moderator.

5) Techniques I deem too long for no reason will be declined automatically.

6) If you get a decline don't VM, PM or IM any mods about it. We've been pretty relaxed with the red rule but a lot of people have been taking advantage lately. ALso, the blue rule will be enforced from now on, no need to tell us what to check, we will read the cjs, bold the changes. Any bits telling us what you've changed ect will result in auto declines.

Any pending or remaining customs will be checked as soon as possible.

 

[Sinthorus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Koton: Metallicanna's kireme tentou ) Steal release: Metallicana's shattering heaven
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short -long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is a jutsu created by Gajeel to mimic the power of his dragon parent, the steel dragon Metallicanna when he stomps his foot. Gajeel will gather huge amount of steel chakra into one of his arms or leg and in a huge surge of chakra through his body will either stomp down or punch down to the ground. Due to the mass of chakra being released it will give of a green/blue light of chakra around Gajeel as he does it (cosmetic effect). The force of the strike will charka the earth below the use leaving a giant foot print in the shape of a dragons foot 1ft deep like his father had stopped there releasing the full force of this jutsu.

This steel chakra will surge through the ground and shoot up in a hurricane of steel blades, hundreds of thousands of them erupt from the desired location breaking the earth above as they blast up towards the heaven spinning with extreme force and sharpness to give it's name. The diameter of this can be up to mid range and if the user is caught within it he will suffer the same damage as everyone else if not defended.


Note: Useable twice per battle
Note: Only Fire, earth, steel elemental jutsu in this turn and the next

(Sunajutsu: Shikaku kireme tentou ) Sand release: Shikaku's shattering heaven
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short -long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This is a jutsu created by Gaara to mimic the power of the shikaku without his help. Gaara will gather huge amount of chakra into one of his arms or leg and in a huge surge of chakra through his body will either stomp down or punch down to the ground. Due to the mass of chakra being released it will give of a orange light of chakra around Gaara as he does it (cosmetic effect). The force of the strike will charka the earth below the use leaving a giant foot print in the shape of the shikaku's foot 1ft deep like the shikaku had stomped there releasing the full force of this jutsu.

This sand chakra will surge through the ground and shoot up in a hurricane of sand, hundreds of thousands of grains of sand moving at intense speeds, enough to cut flesh erupt from the desired location breaking up the earth above as the sand blasts up towards the heaven spinning with extreme force and sharpness to give it's name. The diameter of this can be up to mid range and if the user is caught within it he will suffer the same damage as everyone else if not defended.

Note: Useable twice
Note: Only wind, earth, sand elemental jutsu in this turn and the next

‡ Both Approved ‡ Lowered the rank and the restrictions.

(SunaJutsu: oshi dorai ) - Sand Release: Pressure drying
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This is a simple but effective jutsu created by Gaara after his humiliating defeat through his sand getting wet. It's based on his sand crushing but in a different method. Rather than crushing to a point in the sand, it crushes the sand to extremely compact it, squeezing the moisture out of it allowing him to once again to be able to control it again and retain his defense and offense through his sand gourd. If used on a source of the ground it would crush the sand in a layer similar to normal earth pushing the moisture down, much like how water sinks through sand on the beach, using gravity as the sands ally. This can be used in conjunction with another jutsu to harden it or on a wet source of sand so gaara can take control of it and it happens near instantly like Gaara's various crushing jutsu. The larger the mass of sand the longer it takes.

Note: Useable once every two turns.
Note: Only Sand, wind and earth in the same turn.

‡ Declined ‡ This essentially bypasses an element's weakness. I also don't see it as feasible.

 

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Name: (Chikyū/ kaze sutairu: Aiorosu no hijiri shikichi) Earth/Wind Style: Holy Grounds of Aeolus
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will first focus their earth chakra into one of their feet, and then proceed to stomp their foot on the ground. After the user has stomped their foot on the ground it will cause for cracks to be made in the ground up to mid range with the user at the epicenter of the jutsu, and the cracks spreading in all directions on the ground. The cracks in the ground are not a hindrance when walking, and are very small cracks at that. After the cracks have been spread throughout the area the user then does one hand seal, and begins generating their wind chakra into their hands. After the wind chakra has been gathered in the user’s hands they will then slam their hands on the ground, and force their wind chakra from underneath the ground, through the cracks on the land rising up into the air. Due to the user forcing their wind chakra through the ground, the cracks all throughout the area will begin to vibrate shortly before they eventually have slimmers of wind chakra erupting from them. Coming from all of the cracks are thin walls of wind chakra. The wind rises up rather suddenly, and if not avoided or defended against properly has the ability to cut off a person’s limbs. This technique will attack the enemy directly if they do not move out of range of the array of the wind walls causing for them to get brutally mutilated. There is also another side effect of this jutsu which is that it will greatly hinder the enemy’s movement due to the slimmers of wind everywhere restricting their ground movement. Each slimmer of wind rises about several feet into the air taller than the person themselves. Also, the slimmers of wind rise just inches around the user so that the user is not affected, but the space underneath the user is limited to just enough room for them to stand in so it also greatly hinders their movement.
Note: Can only be used Twice
Note: Can only be taught by Sasori
Note: No A-rank or higher Earth or Wind jutsu next turn.

Declined - similar to existing jutsu

Name: (Ninja ātsu/ chikyū no sutairu: Gaia no shinseina hashira) Ninja Arts/Earth Style: Gaia’s Sacred Pillars
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user starts off by pulling out six different paper bombs from their pouch. With the paper bombs now in hand they will then place them all in separate locations away from themselves, but the papers bombs are all surrounding the user. Each paper bombs must also be set short-range from the user or inches away from themselves. Let it also be noted that each paper bomb are spaced out from each other. Now with all of the paper bombs on the ground the user will then place their hands on the ground followed up by focusing their earth chakra in their hands. As their earth chakra is gathered in their hands the next step of the jutsu is to use shape manipulation on the surrounding ground. By using shape manipulation the user will then cause for the earth underneath each of the paper bombs to sink underground in a circular hole. Once each of the paper bombs have been submerged under ground the place where they were placed is now just an empty hole. Taking it a step further the user will then cause for one or all of the pillars to rise around the enemy. As the pillars emerge from the ground it rises several feet into the air much taller than the enemy. At the moment each pillar comes up the user then sets off the paper bombs located on the pillars causing for the enemy to get hit with the blunt force of the explosion, and soon afterwards will have to deal with the shrapnel created from the explosion which launches itself at the enemy in the direction of where the paper bomb exploded, and where the pillar rose from. The thing with this jutsu is that as soon as the pillars rise from the ground, the paper bombs go off moments later giving little time to escape. Also, the user is not just limited to summoning forth one pillar at a time, but can summon them each at the same time, and in any pattern they choose. It is possible for the user to summon all of the pillars to trap the enemy inside of column of pillars which simultaneously go off harming whatever is inside. Then there is the ability for the pillars to rise one after the other going off as they rise, and since the user can emerge the pillars whenever the user is free to rise a pillar seconds after the first one giving the enemy little time react to each incoming pillar. Each time the shrapnel erupt from the pillars it is simply a reaction to the explosions, but still has enough strength to pierce and slice through flesh, and a pillar cannot be raised directly underneath the enemy.
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Can only be taught by Sasori
Note: No A-rank or higher Earth or Ninjutsu next turn

Declined - this can be done with cannon jutsu. And 4 paper bombs isn't the power of an S rank.

Name: (Kaze chikyū sutairu: Araushio no genwaku no kaze) Wind/Earth Style: Arausio’s Deluding Winds
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (40)
Description: The user will begin by manipulating the wind around them, and start to sway their arms in a circular manner around themselves. As they keep on swaying their arms a large gust of wind begins to surround themselves, and dust particles begin to be picked up from the ground surrounding the user. The user will basically be covering themselves in a large gust of wind and dust particles which will resemble a tornado once they are done forming. Once they have entirely submerged themselves inside of the tornado anyone on the outside will be unable to see them anymore due to the opaque wind as well as the dirt particles gathered that block their view of the user. The formation of the tornado also happens pretty quickly. After the tornado has been quickly made the user will then take off inside of the tornado in a certain direction. While the tornado has taken off the user will unknowingly to the enemy submerge themselves underground by turning it into loose sand like material, as the tornado was moving. The tornado acts as cover and a distraction to fool the enemy into the believing the user is still inside. So now that the user is underground they will be capable of traveling underground in order to escape sight of the enemy or surprise attack them, and the user has the ability to emerge just about anywhere on the field. Even after the user is underground the tornado will continue in direction it was given giving the enemy the impression that the user is still inside of it. Though once the user has exited the tornado it is unable to change its direction, and will continue in the given direction. It is also possible for the tornado to hit objects head on after the user has exited dealing the damage of a B-rank wind jutsu.
Note: Can only be used five times.
Note: Can only be taught by Sasori.
Note: Requires a turn cool-down after each usage

Declined - similar to existing jutsu

 

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(Katon: Uchiha Gōkakyū no Kyojin) - Fire Release: Uchiha Great Fireball Giant
Rank: S-ranked
Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Defensive
Range: Short-Mid (Long range, if hot-ash ball launchings or sprinkle showering)
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 chakrato other Katon Jutsu, if user decides to utilize any other Katon-related jutsu through this jutsu)
Damage Points: 80 (-20 per opponent’s turn sequentially)
Description: While performing the jutsu, Great Fireball Technique as a stream, the ninja will perform extra necessary hand-seals Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, streaming more chakra output utilizing enormous amount of Katon chakra, which will enlarge the normal spewed fireball from their mouth released through a ring hole made by the thumb and index finger. The flame will present itself as stream of fire outwards sustained as a gigantic ball of flames spinning within as it’s spanning throughout the given vacancy of the user in both width and height of their range radiance. While the user streams the gigantic fireball, they’ll release solidified ash that will in-turn coat the fireball, forming into a monstrous gray-black texture mix (boss summoning size equal), with igniting gas imbued within the ash, its resulting reactionary effect will flare up. That will be a brilliant light blinding flash and/or intense heat without exploding, which will (once during same turn of its creation) allow lavation of its ash to be used launched flame throws or rather wave off its ash skins to burn afar distances as if shurikens thrown (B-rank equal). This layering of katon chakra means the flames dense enough to be solid that it can deal great physical damage, but with great control, (if user’s biography is a Uchiha) they’ll be able to utilize A-rank or below Katon-related jutsu through this jutsu (counts towards move slot), making this jutsu outstandingly powerful.
Notice: Must be used after, Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique in same turn. Thus the heat from this creature allows it to levitate over the ground, meaning its capable of flight.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns until its Damage is zero, no other S-rank or higher Katon jutsu in same turn, and while this jutsu is active.
Note: This jutsu can only be used once per battle.
Note: Katon Specialist only, the user will have to control the jutsu at all times.
Note: Non-doujutsu users will be sight blinded for 1 turn.
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Declined - Most of it is fine i think, but i just need you reword the description, some of it doesn't make sense. Just explain in clear points. So far i've got a fire beast with a layer of ash over it that lasts 4 turns. Are you trying to say that it can release heat waves or that it can shoot fire shuriken? If that's the case i just need it be clear please.

(Katon: Uchiha Gōkakyū no Kyojin) - Fire Release: Uchiha Great Fireball Giant
Rank: S-ranked
Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Defensive
Range: Short-Mid (Long range, if hot-ash shuriken launchings)
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 chakra to other Katon Jutsu, if user decides to utilize any other Katon-related jutsu through this jutsu)
Damage Points: 80 (-20 per opponent’s turn sequentially)
Description: While performing the jutsu, the Great Fireball Technique as a stream, the ninja will perform extra necessary hand-seals Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, allowing them to stream even more extra amount of Katon chakra into that jutsu, which will enlarge both the height and width of (as it develops outwards as a sustained gigantic ball of flames (takes a small timeframe), spanning throughout the given vacancy of the user in range radiance) the normal spewed fireball (at this stage of the gigantic fireball is equal to an A-rank Katon jutsu; Short-Mid range) from their mouth (released through a ring hole made by the thumb and index finger). While the user streams the gigantic fireball, they’ll release solidified ash that will in-turn coat the fireball, forming into a monstrous gray-black texture mix (boss summoning size equal), with igniting gas imbued within the ash, the reactionary effect will make it flare up. That process will make a brilliant blinding flash and intensive heat to be released without it exploding (Short-range heat-wave burn equal to B-rank), which will (once during same turn of its creation) allow lavation of its ash skin to be used launched as flamethrowers to burn afar distances like huge ash shurikens (B-rank equal). This layering of katon chakra means the flames are dense enough to be solid that it can deal great physical damage, but likewise with great control, (if user’s biography is a Uchiha) they’ll be able to utilize A-rank or below Katon-related jutsu through this jutsu (counts towards move slot), making this jutsu outstandingly powerful. After a while, the core of the jutsu cools returning the flame giant into hot ash as it crumbles to the ground.
Notice: Must be used after, Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique in same turn. Thus the heat from this creature allows it to levitate over the ground, meaning it’s capable of flight. This jutsu can be cancelled/countered, during stage of the gigantic fireball but, countered only if the opponent overwhelms the gigantic fireball in its devolving stage with an equal B-rank or greater Suiton Jutsu.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns until its Damage is zero, no other S-rank or higher Katon jutsu in same turn, and while this jutsu is active.
Note: This jutsu can only be used once every other 6 turns (also if it was countered).
Note: Katon Specialist only, the user will have to control the jutsu at all times. With an Uchiha user, they can sync the actions with their giant and cast an A-rank Genjutsu during the flash bang, which will paralyze their victims as they see a shadowy figure with the sharingan, before they’re placed into dreaming. Note, this will cost a move slot for the Genjutsu being casted, as a small timeframe, it’s secondly after the flash. Requires Sharingan 3tomoe & Sharingan Gen w/o either Genjutsu field completed.
Note: Non-doujutsu users will be sight blinded for 1 turn.
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Declined - it's just a bit too much for one jutsu:

1. Sustaining fireball
2. Covered in ash
3. Use flamible gass to make it bright
4. Ahs shurikens and more

Remove the gas that blinds as that doesn't even make sense especially with a coat of ash.

(Katon: Uchiha Gurēto-en kuraudo no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Uchiha Great Flame Cloud Technique
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Performing the Boar → Tiger hand-seals and the user inhales air while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth toward the sky. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time, in this instance the clouds within range. These massive streamed intense flames from the user have enormous range and can cover a huge area; forming a soggy-cloud like state of flames that cover the area skies. The main advantage of the technique is that it can inhibit or seal-off the skies as an escape route, for the above sky is sizzling hot. While also heated air directly above, will be creating a sharp shift in air density levels near the ground. As light passes between the different levels, it will bend, creating mirages.

Note: The heat wave lasts for three turns.
Note: No S-Rank or above Katon in the user's same or next turn.
Notice: While if the user is a Uchiha biography/ Katon Specialist, they can summon up the flames from below the area after hand-seals by clapping and placing their hands onto the earth; erupting from the surface (Mid-range) the flames will quickly race toward the skies with much more force starting with shaking of the ground, (which results in the opponent falling and if so, losing aim) not as like one who would've released the jutsu from their mouth. The aftermath of the release spot of the flames, leaves a lava pool. Doing so, they'll have spent a move slot.

Declined - how can you have soggy flames? xD Sealing of the sky is fine you can say it vapourises the moisture like steam. And give it a rank of which water it can work on.

(Katon: Uchiha Gurēto-en kuraudo no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Uchiha Great Flame Cloud Technique
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Performing the Boar → Tiger hand-seals and the user inhales air while molding a great amount of chakra into their lungs and expelling a large stream of flames from their mouth toward the sky. The flames are hot enough to quickly evaporate large quantities of water within a relatively short amount of time, in this instance the clouds within range. These massive streamed intense flames from the user have enormous range and can cover a huge area; forming a solidified form of clouds that cover the area skies. The main advantage of the technique is that it can inhibit or seal-off the skies as an escape route, for the above sky is sizzling hot it vaporizes the moisture like steam (A-rank or lower Suiton-based jutsu).

Note: The heat wave lasts for three turns.
Note: No S-Rank or above Katon in the user's same or next turn.
Notice: While if the user is a Uchiha biography/ Katon Specialist, they can summon up the flames from below the area after hand-seals by clapping and placing their hands onto the earth; erupting from the surface (Mid-range) the flames will quickly race toward the skies with much more force starting with shaking of the ground, (which results in the opponent falling and if so, losing aim) not as like one who would've released the jutsu from their mouth. The aftermath of the release spot of the flames, leaves a lava pool. Doing so, they'll have spent a move slot. Cannot be made under the opponent.

Declined

(Ration: Doragoni Chāpu, Sandādoragonbodi)- Lightning Style: Dragoning Chirp, Thunder Dragon Body
Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Defensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Mid (Long range, if launched as Dragons)
Chakra: 40 (+10 per turn to sustain)
Damage: 80 (+10 to Shuriken-related jutsu utilized with this jutsu)
Description: The user starts by molding their Raiton chakra in their whole body, surging it throughout outwards as claws. Using shape manipulation, they release the Raiton chakra in the form of a claws (standard form) that they can be manipulated to stretch out up short-range. This can be used offensively in other three ways but is mostly used defensively. The user having created condensed claws, each formed outward upon the user's body together in a fashion much like fan blades, allows for greater control which forms a semi-sphere around them and absorbs all physical attacks. When used defensive and offensively at the same time, they charge at their opponent with the spinning high-speeding blades around them, slashing into them leaving the remains of their victims into what finally becomes of them being a gas state. Claw Ring Release, another attack mode; this is when they decide to break the linking to spinning claws and release them at sudden, causing them to splash slash around (Doujutsu users can target and aim at sources). This move very deadly upon close range to the user as this move has a greater number of claws fragments(12 inches in length), making the attack harder to evade. Whenever the user releases the claws (either when launched or simply emerging form their body), it appears as crests cracking due to the vibration at a high frequency, creating a short loud strained-bird chirp sound. Going beyond the random launching of the claws, the user can release the claws into dragons up to 4 in total, the blue-lightning dragon creatures which then emanate at a different vibration then a regular Lightning jutsu. This different vibration of lightning chakra will have a spring coil likeness to it. These dragons are each 3 feet in length and 2 feet in diameter thickness (when 4 have been released, but as one, width & length x4). These dragons can chase up to 4 shinobi(s), as they'd split up the target(s) upon themselves. The spring like coil and hoping state of this lightning jutsu, gives the miniature-like dragons ability to outwit objects in the way as they head forward only. They behave much like pawns on a chess board, moving only forward and never backwards toward their enemy when released from the hands of the user. These Dragons once released, they will lock on and track the target, till they shock them, unless the target(s) manages to get passed them. With each dragon made reduces the power of the whole jutsu and ultimately ends it, 1 = S-rank, 3 = A-rank, 4 = B-rank, the user can also choose to release 1 = B-rank up to 4 in-total allowing them to sustain the jutsu, till the initial releases are equal to 4. Choosing to do so, they'll not be able to launch above B-rank types. Given that they don't kill on contact but, will rather shock the enemy also paralyze them. The user also can install the jutsu's launched dragons with kunai(s), shuriken(s) and similar weapon size-like entities launching them in unison.

Note: User can only sustain the jutsu, in the standard form for up to 2 turns.
Note: No other S-rank or higher Raiton jutsu in same turn, and while this jutsu is active.
Note: Can only be used Once per battle.
Note: Once shocked paralyzation lasts 1 turn if successful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty.Note: This jutsu will only avoid preexisting obstacles in the way as they move onward. The user can command or let the jutsu decide the course of path only before launching (mentally).
Note: User must be a Lightning Specialist to utilize this jutsu.

Lightning claws can't block ALL attacks like that and how do claws make a semi sphere like that? declined.

(Ration: Doragoni Chāpu, Sandādoragonbodi)- Lightning Style: Dragoning Chirp, Thunder Dragon Body
Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Defensive
Rank: S-Forbbiden Rank (+1 rank to other A-rank or lower Raiton Jutsu, only during F-rank)
Range: Short-Mid (Long range, if launched as Dragons)
Chakra: 40-50 (+10 per turn to sustain)
Damage: 80-90 (+10 to Shuriken-related jutsu utilized with this jutsu) (+10 to Taijutsu only during F-rank)
Description: The user starts by molding their Raiton chakra in their whole body, surging it throughout outwards as claws. Using shape manipulation, they release the Raiton chakra in form of a solid claws (standard form) that they can be manipulated to stretch out up short-range. Notice, that the user can farther release into the Forbidden state, where’s that their raiton chakra will imbed itself within the users skeleton, releasing itself through that channel, as it rips outward from within their bones forming (limit: mini-sized) hair claws. This advanced state allows the user to have voltage movements as each movement releases an electric current around them. This can be used offensively in other three ways but is mostly used defensively. The user having created condensed claws, each formed outward upon the user's body together in a fashion much like fan blades, allows for greater control which forms a semi-sphere around them and absorbs all physical attacks. This happens much like a fan (the user being the stem), where the fan blades spin at around 1620 RPMs. With the omnidirectional control of releasing the blades from their body to spin, they’ve developed the second ultimate defensive and offense in the NW. When used defensive and offensively at the same time, they charge at their opponent with the high-spinning blades around them, slashing into them leaving the remains of their victims into what finally becomes of them being a gas state. Claw Ring Release, another attack mode; this is when they decide to break the linking to spinning claws and release them at sudden, causing them to splash slash around (Doujutsu users can target and aim at sources). This move is very deadly upon close range to the user as this move has a greater number of claws fragments (12 inches in length), making the attack near impossible to evade. Whenever the user releases the claws (either when launched or simply emerging form their body), it appears as crests cracking due to the vibration at a high frequency, creating a short loud strained-bird chirp sound. Going beyond the random launching of the claws, the user can release the claws into dragons up to 4 in total, the blue-lightning dragon creatures which then emanate at a different vibration then a regular Lightning jutsu. This different vibration of lightning chakra will have a spring coil likeness to it. These dragons are each 3 feet in length and 2 feet in diameter thickness (when 4 have been released, but as one, width & length x4). These dragons can chase up to 4 shinobi(s), as they'd split up the target(s) upon themselves. The spring like coil and hoping state of this lightning jutsu, gives the miniature-like dragons ability to outwit objects in the way as they head forward only. They behave much like pawns on a chess board, moving only forward and never backwards toward their enemy when released from the hands of the user. These Dragons once released, they will lock on and track the target, till they shock them, unless the target(s) manages to get passed them. With each dragon made reduces the power of the whole jutsu and ultimately ends it, 1 = S-rank, 3 = A-rank, 4 = B-rank, the user can also choose to release 1 = B-rank up to 4 in-total allowing them to sustain the jutsu, till the initial releases are equal to 4. Choosing to do so, they'll not be able to launch above B-rank types. Given that they don't kill on contact but, will rather shock the enemy also paralyze them. The user also can install the jutsu's launched dragons with kunai(s), shuriken(s) and similar weapon size-like entities launching them in unison.

Note: User can only sustain the jutsu, in the standard form for up to 2 turns.
Note: No other S-rank or higher Raiton jutsu in same turn, and while this jutsu is active.
Note: Can only be used once per battle. While if F-rank is being used, the user cannot use any other Elemental jutsu except Raiton based Jutsu only. The Forbidden state does not change the amount (increase or decrease) of power of the released dragons/launched fragments. After Forbidden state, the user’s body will be fragile and weakened, as also their chakra is over taxed (-10 to user’s health per each player’s turn, for 2 turns after use or otherwise put "-40" total).
Note: Once shocked paralyzation lasts 1 turn if successful but is ineffective against bios who have a Primary Lightning Specialty. Note: This jutsu will only avoid preexisting obstacles in the way as they move onward. The user can command or let the jutsu decide the course of path only before launching (mentally). Note: User must be a Lightning Specialist to utilize this jutsu.

Declined - OP and pick a single rank.

 

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(Raiton: Kuroi Kaminari Δ Ornias no Eikō) - Lightning Release: Black Lightning Δ Glory of Ornias
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40 (+10 to Lightning Techniques)
Damage: N/A (+1 Rank up to A-Rank & +10 S-Rank and above)
Description: Through the teachings of Sandaime Raikage, Darui was able to create a more powerful form of lightning, known as Black Lightning. By applying the same principle to one's normal lightning techniques, through concentration and many years of practice, Darui was able to increase the power of his lightning techniques (barring his Black Lightning techniques as those are already enhanced). He does this by increasing the lightning's vibrations to a higher and more focused degree, increasing it's overall power and chakra cost (+1 Rank up to A-Rank & +10 S-Rank and above; +10 to Lightning techniques), giving it a black & white gradient color. While a seemingly simple technique to use, overuse begins to have a gradual, negative effect on him resulting in him losing his ability to use higher ranked techniques pertaining to lightning release as well as his techniques related to Storm Release. There are several things of note such as this application does not apply to lightning techniques that already enhance like Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword, Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration, etc and also, become more vulnerable to wind techniques (1 rank higher up to A-Rank and +10 damage S-Rank and above) though this mainly pertains to the enemy's techniques and not one's own (the wind vulnerability).
Note: Can only be used by Darui bios
Note: Lasts for four turns while active
Note: Can only be used twice per battle/event
Note: If First Activation, unable to use Lightning & Storm Release techniques S-Rank and above after deactivation
Note: If Second Activation, unable to use Lightning & Storm Release techniques A-Rank and above after deactivation

‡ Declined ‡ Black lightning isn't any stronger than normal lightning so this technique wouldn't increase the strength of your normal lightning jutsu.

(Raiton: Kuroi Kaminari Δ Kain no Ikari) - Lightning Release: Black Lightning Δ Rage of Caim
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Channeling his Black Lightning through his sword, Darui strikes the enemy in a series of slashes with the final strike ending in an explosion of lightning. Compared to other lightning techniques which focus lightning to the blade and increase it's cutting power, this technique instead continually releases the lightning through the blade which could be compared to Chidori. While not focused, the striking power of Darui's blade along with the shocking potential of the lightning can numb the opponent. However, Lightning Specialists, who are adept at the user of lightning techniques, can resist the numbing effects of the lightning but must still deal with the blows from the sword. The user, through fueling more chakra, can extend the lightning from his sword to hit multiple opponents within short range of the attack however loses the ability to numb them.
Note: Can only be used by Darui bios
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Lightning Specialists are immune to the numbing effects

‡ Approved ‡

(Raiton: Kuroi Kaminari Δ Foruneusu no Yobigoe) - Lightning Release: Black Lightning Δ Call of Forneus
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing the Ram handseal, Darui will expel a small stream of Black Lightning from his mouth that will continue to grow both in width and height the farther it travels appearing much like a horn. As it travels, it breaks apart anything it comes in contact with especially when used against earth techniques but can only travel as far as mid-range of the user. By expending more chakra the user can elect to focus the lightning into one single beam which can reach up to long range. The way this works is by creating the horn first up to midrange then "gathering" the lightning together to form the beam.
Note: Can only be used by Darui bios
Note: Can only be used two times per battle/event
Note: Unable to use Lightning techniques above A-Rank for two turns


‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist. Only difference is this is black lightning.

Leaving for NK

 

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(Hidora Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Jupiter) – Hydra Summoning Technique: Jupiter
Rank: S
Type: Summon
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After drawing blood and forming the Bird, Hare, and Ram handseals, the user summons Jupiter, the King of Lightning Hydras and supreme leader of all Hydras. He is 100 meters tall in height, rivaling Gamabunta in size. His scales are of a dark purple hue and he naturally carries the most heads of the contract; 10 in all. Jupiter is harsh, stubborn, and quite egotistical for a leader, but is still a highly respected figure of authority among Hydras. Related by blood to the other Kings, he is the eldest brother and by far the most powerful of them all. He is affiliated with the element of Lightning Release, and is able to use it up to S-rank without the need of hand seals (claws and tail can substitute the use of hands for jutsu like Raikiri), and is immune to the element up to A-rank due to his sheer size. Whenever Jupiter is summoned he passively leaks ration chakra into the air which creates dark thunderclouds composed entirely of ration chakra that are solely for his use and are merely supplementary (can't be used for Kirin). He is able to use the lightning from these as a source of his lightning and be able to attack with any suitable lightning technique from it. By passively spending two of the user's 3 moves per turn, Jupiter can utilize his mastery of lightning jutsu to double the damage output of his next lightning jutsu. However, this can only be done once every other turn and twice per battle.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Lasts for four turns
-Lightning jutsu count as a move of the user
-Must have signed the Hydra contract to use

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Declined - double the damage of a lightning jutsu? I know some that do 120 damage so that means 240 damage from one lightning jutsu... really?

(Gakidō: Sentakukyūshū Shīru) – Preta Path: Selective Absorption Seal
Rank: S
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid (Long for single technique)
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Through use of the Preta Path the user will create a sealing barrier similar to the original Blocking Technique Absorption Seal. Instead of universally absorbing all chakra, this barrier absorbs chakra of a particular nature or form. (Goes by the categories of the jutsu list. Eg. Raiton, Mokuton, Normal Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, etc.) In exchange for this limitation, the user may expand the barrier’s range very fast and cover everything mid-range from the user as a large sphere also extending beneath the ground. Alternatively, the barrier may be expanded even further into long-range with the condition of targeting just one specific jutsu to be absorbed, as long as the user knows or has witnessed the jutsu before. This will also apply to related techniques. For example, choosing Rasengan will absorb Rasengan and all techniques requiring its use such as Fuuton: Rasenshuriken. However, this barrier cannot absorb jutsu with components from different categories (like Steel) without specifying that particular category or technique. Nor will the components be absorbed (Fire and Earth) if Steel is chosen. Techniques falling under multiple categories (eg. Water/Lightning Release) will only absorb one of them and leave the other unaeffected.
-Can only be used by Ushiro
-Requires Preta path to be active
-Counts as one of the uses of Blocking Technique Absorption Seal
-Choice can only be changed if this technique is used

Declined - to say one catergory is fine but in your own example you say rasengan and FRS which one group is ninjutsu and the other is fuuton. So by your own example you've chosen two groups which goes against the purpose of the the initial effect.

(Hidora Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Jupiter) – Hydra Summoning Technique: Jupiter
Rank: S
Type: Summon
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After drawing blood and forming the Bird, Hare, and Ram handseals, the user summons Jupiter, the King of Lightning Hydras and supreme leader of all Hydras. He is 100 meters tall in height, rivaling Gamabunta in size. His scales are of a dark purple hue and he naturally carries the most heads of the contract; 10 in all. Jupiter is harsh, stubborn, and quite egotistical for a leader, but is still a highly respected figure of authority among Hydras. Related by blood to the other Kings, he is the eldest brother and by far the most powerful of them all. He is affiliated with the element of Lightning Release, and is able to use it up to S-rank without the need of hand seals (claws and tail can substitute the use of hands for jutsu like Raikiri), and is immune to the element up to A-rank due to his sheer size. Whenever Jupiter is summoned he passively leaks ration chakra into the air which creates dark thunderclouds composed entirely of ration chakra that are solely for his use and are merely supplementary (can't be used for Kirin). He is able to use the lightning from these as a source of his lightning and be able to attack with any suitable lightning technique from it. By passively spending one of the user's 3 moves per turn, Jupiter can utilize his mastery of lightning jutsu to increase the rank of his next lightning jutsu by 1. S ranks will not go up in rank but gain +20 damage. However, this can only be done once every other turn and twice per battle.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Lasts for four turns
-Lightning jutsu count as a move of the user
-Must have signed the Hydra contract to use

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Approve - we got there in the end xd

(Gakidō: Sentakukyūshū Shīru) – Preta Path: Selective Absorption Seal
Rank: S
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid (Long for single technique)
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Through use of the Preta Path the user will create a sealing barrier similar to the original Blocking Technique Absorption Seal. Instead of universally absorbing all chakra, this barrier absorbs chakra of a particular nature or form. (Goes by the categories of the jutsu list. Eg. Raiton, Mokuton, Normal Ninjutsu, Fuuinjutsu, etc.) In exchange for this limitation, the user may expand the barrier’s range very fast and cover everything mid-range from the user as a large sphere also extending beneath the ground. Alternatively, the barrier may be expanded even further into long-range with the condition of targeting just one specific jutsu to be absorbed, as long as the user knows or has witnessed the jutsu before. However, this barrier cannot absorb jutsu with components from different categories (like Steel) without specifying that particular category or technique. Nor will the components be absorbed (Fire and Earth) if Steel is chosen. Techniques falling under multiple categories (eg. Water/Lightning Release) will only absorb one of them and leave the other unaffected.
-Can only be used by Ushiro
-Requires Preta path to be active
-Counts as one of the uses of Blocking Technique Absorption Seal
-Choice can only be changed if this technique is used

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[Erzo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fūton: Korosu Raibu ) — Wind Release: To Live
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: A jutsu taught and used by those proficient in the Wind element, To Live is a technique which is almost always used defensively, allowing the user to survive in situations which may have otherwise been fatal. It works by the user sending Wind chakra to all parts of his body, connecting the Wind to that of a recently used jutsu (or one that is being sustained). This results in the user's body being able to move and react to speeds equal to that of the jutsu used as a base for this one, and would last for as long as that jutsu lasts. This means it'd last a single turn if used on something such as Pressure Damage, allowing the user to travel around the battlefield at the same pace, whereas if used on S-ranked Air Current Wild Dance, it'd last 3 turns but would not do much to increase the user's speed. Upon use, the user's body is coated with a thin layer of chakra to allow less friction, but would not do much as an armour as the user can still be damage just as normal. ~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Usable five times per battle, however, once used the user must wait a turn regardless of whether it was deactivated through the users will, or through other means.


Declined - the purple makes this way too OP, stuf like wind blade moves so fast that i just can't allow this. Plus i'm not sure even how this works, do you just gain the speed of a wind jutus? If that's correct it's not possible in this way.

(Fūton: Korosu Raibu ) — Wind Release: To Live
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: A jutsu taught and used by those proficient in the Wind element, To Live is a technique which is almost always used defensively, allowing the user to survive in situations which may have otherwise been fatal. It works by the user sending Wind chakra to all parts of his body, connecting the Wind to that of a recently used jutsu (or one that is being sustained). This results in the user's other Wind jutsus being able to move and react to speeds equal to that of the jutsu used as a base for this one. In order to be able to use this, the use must first have used a jutsu whcih speeds he wants to replicate either in the same, or previous turns. Upon doing that, he can then post this jutsu passively, in order to activate the ability, and follow up with a Wind jutsu of his choice which will now move at a fastened pace, allowing him to attack and defend more effectively. This jutsu remains activated, allowing the jutsus used by the user to have the same speed (one used originally as a base). If the user wants to change the jutsu used as a base however, it will come at the cost of a turn. ~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Usable four times per battle, however, once used the user must wait a turn regardless of whether it was deactivated through the users will, or through other means.

Declined - I just don't get why a wind jutsu you used 2-3 turns ago would make other wind jutsu any faster? If you changed this to say you use the pinciple of "insert cannon jutsu that is fast" applying wind manipulation in a different jutsu to make it the same speed. That's fine. So really using shape manipulation of wind to increase the speed the same as a cannon technique, but just saying you used an old jutsu and this next one gets fast wouldn't work. If you want more explaining or an example you can PM me about this one jutsu.

 

[Klad]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Meiton: Chijō burēka - Dark Release: Terrestrial Breaker
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: C - S Rank
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra: 15 (40)
Damage: 30 (80)
Description: Terrestrial Breaker is a prime example of how a simple Dark technique can become lethal. The user slams either palm on the ground and sends Dark chakra underground. Via using shape manipulation, he will manifest said chakra in the form of a basketball sized orb which will lie inches underneath the ground's surface. The lethality of this technique depends on how long the orb will stay active. Each turn, this orb will absorb the target's chakra and any absorbable technique they use (only underground related techniques). The longer this orb stays active, the more it will absorb and this will result in a more powerful release. Once this orb absorbs chakra it will turn into light blue color. The surface of the earth will start to glow a faint blue color hue as soon as the orb reaches B rank in strength. With a single hand seal by the user, he'll trigger the orb and make it explode in an extensive amount of blue flames which will cause internal and external burns to anything caught in it. The orb lasts for 4 turns.

The explosion also leaves a crater behind. The mechanism of this technique goes like this:

Turn 1 - C rank release strength (5-meter diameter crater)
Turn 2 - B rank release strength (7-meter diameter crater)
Turn 3 - A rank release strength (9-meter diameter crater) (2nd degree burn)
Turn 4 - S rank release strength (11-meter diameter crater) (3rd degree burn)

Restrictions
-User can't use Dark techniques while the orb is active
-The orb lasts for four turns
-It has two turns cooldown before used again and can only reach the maximum of S rank only twice.
-Can only be taught by Klad

‡ Declined ‡ Good technique but this needs to be counterable in some way. You form this orb without handseals, that's fine. As is the absorption of chakra/techniques to grow in size but there needs to be some kind of tell. Using this and triggering an explosion one, two or three turns later without your opponent ever knowing about it is kind of OP. Also, remove the list/rank thing. Just say this increases in rank every turn and it's diameter increases by 2 or 3 meters every time it increases in rank.

Resubmitting.

Meiton: Chijō burēka - Dark Release: Terrestrial Breaker
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: C - S Rank
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra: 15 (40)
Damage: 30 (80)
Description: Terrestrial Breaker is a prime example of how a simple Dark technique can become lethal. The user slams either palm on the ground and sends Dark chakra underground. Via using shape manipulation, he will manifest said chakra in the form of a basketball sized purple dark orb which will lie inches underneath the ground's surface. The lethality of this technique depends on how long the orb will stay active. Each turn, this orb will absorb the target's chakra and any absorbable technique they use (only underground related techniques; following Dark's elemental S/W). The longer this orb stays active, the more it will absorb and this will result in a more powerful release. Once this orb absorbs chakra it will turn into light blue color, associated with flames. The diameter of the orb increases by 2 meters every time it increases in rank, as the main point of it is to absorb chakra in order to make itself stronger and bigger. The surface of the earth will start to gain a light blue glow, once this orb absorbs chakra. The blue shade is faint at first, but it becomes vivid once the rank of the orb increases. At will, with a single hand seal by the user, he'll trigger the orb and make it explode in an extensive amount of blue flames which will cause internal and external burns to anything caught in it. The explosion leaves a crater behind, its size depending on how strong the release was. This orb increases by one rank every turn (it's C-Rank on the first turn, B-Rank on the next) up to a maximum of S-Rank and it can only be detonated once it's at least B-Rank in power.

Restrictions
-User can't use Dark techniques while the orb is active
-The orb lasts for four turns
-It has two turns cooldown before used again and can only be used twice per battle
-Can only be taught by Klad

‡ Approved ‡

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Meiton: Koritsu shita kōu - Dark Release: Isolated Rainfall
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Isolated Rain is only accessible when the user has absorbed a technique first, and has used a technique which makes it rain. Performing a set of two handseals, the user will manipulate his dark chakra in a way that it is sent up and stored in the already formed clouds. The clouds will darken and from them, rain infused with dark chakra will start to fall. Since the raindrops are now associated with the dark release characteristics, they have access to absorbing chakra of anything they touch. Upon absorption, the chakra doesn't go back to the user, but instead will disperse into an unfocused harmless explosion once it hits matter. The main effect of this technique is, because the rain makes physical contact with the target, they will have a difficult time using techniques of elements that are weak to Dark Release. This would mean that the target will have to spend extended chakra reserves when performing a technqiue, specifically +10 chakra points. The target's techniques will also suffer -5 damage points. The rain has double effect on raw chakra based technqiues, forcing the target to use +20 chakra points to be able to perform them, and the techniques also suffer from -10 damage points decrease. This technique doesn't affect the user as it's their own chakra but will will affect their allies (excluding clones).

Restrictions
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Lasts four turns
-Can only be taught by Klad

‡ Approved ‡ Edited.

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Ajisashi Kuchiyose: Shiro Tenshi - Tern Summoning Technique: White Angel
Type: Summon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Originating from the sea, White Angel is one of the boss summonings for terns. He's an adult, large and white bird and has been the first tern to ever utilize chakra. Because of that, he is considered to be the father of terns. White Angel stands 5m high and his span of wings extends to 11 meters, and is capable of carrying 3 people on his body. He has a very long and strong bill which can resist most physical damage and also tear through B rank barriers or techniques of any element. White Angel has a streamlined body which allows him to perform fast and quick dive actions in the water in fast speeds, even though the frame is huge. Just like the majority of terns, White Angel has sharp claws which deal B-rank physical damage, and can be used in conjutction with Taijutsu techniques. Obviously, this summon is capable of flight by making use of its wings, and he is also capbale of speech. He doesn't talk much and only when necessary. Going by its personality characteristics, White Angel is a pretty strict individual, contrary to his name. He is prideful and doesn't allow himself to be degraded by others. He has been one of the first terns to teach others how to utilize their chakra. Due to all these, Feitan had had trouble to link a contract with its kind. Even though White Angel was skeptical at first, he decided to trust Feitan and swore on his honor that he will be the first and last human he ever believes. White Angel's affinity consists of water release. He has been very skilled at it since when he was young, as he has mostly grown around the sea areas. Because of this, he can use up to S-rank water techniques, and when there is a water source present, he can make generic B rank water waves to shoot at the target.

-Can be summoned only once and lasts 4 turns
-All the moves listed above take up a move slot every turn.

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[The_Empire]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuinjutsu: Museigen no Buredo) Sealing Technique: Unlimited Blades
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user either places seals on 20 objects they would like to have under their control which is placed passively or they have objects already with these seals. This must be stated in their first post of the battle. The seals are connected to the user via a seal that is on the user's left shoulder. The user with this seal allows the user to control each seal that's on their objects and move them around for whatever purpose they see fit. This whole jutsu was created so when the user loses their weapon they can still control it and attack an opponent that isn't looking or drop their guard. The user can control up to five objects at a certain time. The objects can only be inanimate. The seal on the user's shoulder glows whenever this technique is in use but isn't bright enough to go through none see through clothing.

Declined � 20 is too much

(Fuuinjutsu: Museigen no Buredo) Sealing Technique: Unlimited Blades
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user either places seals on 4objects they would like to have under their control which is placed passively or they have objects already with these seals. This must be stated in their first post of the battle. The seals are connected to the user via a seal that is on the user's left shoulder. The user with this seal allows the user to control each seal that's on their objects and move them around for whatever purpose they see fit. This whole jutsu was created so when the user loses their weapon they can still control it and attack an opponent that isn't looking or drop their guard. The user can control up to 2 objects at a certain time (one per arm). The objects can only be inanimate. The seal on the user's shoulder glows whenever this technique is in use but isn't bright enough to go through none see through clothing. The speed of the objects at what they move is the same as if the user had it in their own hands.

Note: Each movement through this counts as a move per turn.

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(Ninjutsu: Shigoto no Ha) Ninja Art: Blades of Work
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short(where the portals and weapons form)-Long(length the weapons can travel)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user opens up either one to ten portals(similar to the one large one for Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop but smaller ones) that give off a golden glow when they are formed. The portals are four feet in all directions. The user can only create these portals around theirselves up to 3 meters from their selves. Each portal has one weapon to them. The portals when commanded release the weapon out at a certain target(the gif and video(0:50) below gives the justice of how they are formed and release). Once the weapon is released the portal closes right then.
-Can only use this every other turn
-Can't use any other jutsu that requires portals in the same turn
-Can used this five times per battle

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Declined - i'm almost certain this exists as a jutsu already.

 

[Alyx]

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(Tsumibukai Genjutsu: Burakku Bokkusu)Sinful Illusionary Arts: The Black Box
Type:Supplementary | Offensive
Rank: C-S
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra: 15-40
Damage: N/A
Description: The illustrious and legendary Genjutsu of the Royal Sinners, The Black Box. This is a powerful Genjutsu, acting like a Kai and can also be used as an attack. The kai version is activated when the user is sent into a Genjutsu to which is identified through the means of sensory , dojutsu and or other means. Lacking one of these, the user would need to self evaluate situation, allowing them to identify they are in a genjutsu . The user will channel his chakra into his own brain, placing chakra into the five senses. The senses that were not targeted by the targets Genjutsu will be layered with chakra at the minimum. The others that was targeted however, the chakra will overlay the targets chakra and actually flush the chakra out of the system of the brain, in the Genjutsu itself dark figures with red and yellow and dark devil eyes will come from the ground and begin to drag the target into the ground. After which the user will find himself in a dark room known as the “Black Box” which is actually the dark subconscious of the mind created by the illusion. In the room, there exists a red demon wearing a tuxedo and playing a piano and smiling to the user saying “You owe me one...boy” to which he starts laughing and the illusion ends when the chakra leaving the brain. When used as an attack, the user will use a set of 6 seal and channel his chakra into the brain of the user taking control of the five senses. The user will slam his hands on the ground, making it seem as if he used an earth technique. The earth rises around the target and places them in a new dimension known as the “Black Box”. In the new room the target will find themselves strapped to a black chair and piano music playing. The same red demon will be playing the piano and tells the target “Read for the symphony?” and laughs dark and loud as a dark figure with a shinigami mask on comes towards the target. In reality at this moment the target is unable to move. The masked man the places his hand by the heart of the target and proceeds to rip out the soul of the user , removing the mask and eating the soul, The masked man the laughs and begins eating other parts of the target till there is no more. During this time the target is immobilized in reality.

*Can be used 4 times to release from C rank, 2 for B rank and once for A-rank.
*When used on a target it is B-Ranked in strength and can be used only twice*

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(Genjutsu: Miraa Imeeji) Illusionary Arts: Mirror Image
Type: Denfensive
Rank: B -Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
A simple yet effective technique. Mostly used as an counter / defensive, the user when in close range of the target will release from there body a small omnidirectional burst of chakra after making 3 handseals , effecting everyone near them. They are placed under a genjutsu where nothing seems to happen upon activation but when the target tries to make physical contact or a close range assault (eg with a weapon) he user will create an illusionary doppelganger that runs from behind of the user and disappearing instantly . The original then takes the intended hit, having their body disappear with a cover up(smoke, petals etc). This creates a short second of distraction, to which the target feels a tight tugging on their arms, finding the doppelganger had chained both the targets arm with long golden chains, now using there “chakra” to keep them from moving. The creation of the doppelganger can be made prior to the originals disappearance. The technique also adds realism to the illusion, giving the doppelganger shadows, the effects of chains rattling and so forth. The user can also change their disappearance, using things like light or smoke instead as well. They can have the doppelganger move the chains and pull them causing emulated pain as the chains are embed into the skin of the target. In reality when the chains are connected the target is immobilized. Once the target is chained, the technique remains active for one turn, making them vulnerable in reality.
*Can be used 3 times per battle*
*Lasts one turn*

Example of how the doppelganger is made , separating like in video below @ 00:53-00:58

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Declined. While I like League related jutsus, the first part seems incredibly weird to let yourself get hit by a sword (for example) only to reproduce the mirror image. You wouldn't be able to do a whole lot with a sword stabbing you in the chest. Work that part out a little better. Also: of all the highlight, you take Siv HD? Really? >_______>

(Kitsune Ogi Genjutsu: Itazura) Fox Secret Illusion Arts: Prankster
Type: Offensive | Defensive
Rank: A -Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will form 3 handseals, causing a genjutsu to occur. While the target holds a weapon or instrument(anything you can hold), the user is able to use this genjutsu to make it appear as if the held object turns into a fox. The illusionary fox then attacks the target, grabbing there limbs and preventing them from moving. This can also work on elemental techniques usede by the enemy, having the technqiue appeared to have changed into a fox as well. This adds some uniqueness as the user can make the fox appear as if it was created from the element its self, meaning creating a fire fox if used on a fire technique etc. The technique lasts for 3 turns to which the user can transform as much objects as they want within this interval. The user can also add extra effects like smoke , heat(for fire) and so forth as well to add more realism.

*Each usage lasts 3 turns*
*Can be used twice per battle*
*Can only be used by Fox Signers*

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(Tsumibukai Genjutsu: Burakku Bokkusu)Sinful Illusionary Arts: The Black Box
Type:Supplementary | Offensive
Rank: C-S
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra: 15-40
Damage: N/A
Description: The illustrious and legendary Genjutsu of the Royal Sinners, The Black Box. This is a powerful Genjutsu, acting like a Kai and can also be used as an attack. The kai version is activated when the user is sent into a Genjutsu to which is identified through the means of sensory , dojutsu and or other means. Lacking one of these, the user would need to self evaluate situation, allowing them to identify they are in a genjutsu. The user will channel his chakra into his own brain, placing chakra into the five senses. The senses that were not targeted by the targets Genjutsu will be layered with chakra at the minimum. The others that was targeted however, the chakra will overlay the targets chakra and actually flush the chakra out of the system of the brain, in the Genjutsu itself dark figures with red and yellow and dark devil eyes will come from the ground and begin to drag the target into the ground. After which the user will find himself in a dark room known as the “Black Box” which is actually the dark subconscious of the mind created by the illusion. In the room, there exists a red demon wearing a tuxedo and playing a piano and smiling to the user saying “You owe me one...boy” to which he starts laughing and the illusion ends when the chakra leaving the brain. When used as an attack, the user will use a set of 6 seal and channel his chakra into the brain of the user taking control of the five senses. The user will slam his hands on the ground, making it seem as if he used an earth technique. The earth rises around the target and places them in a new dimension known as the “Black Box”. In the new room the target will find themselves strapped to a black chair and piano music playing. The same red demon will be playing the piano and tells the target “Read for the symphony?” and laughs dark and loud as a dark figure with a shinigami mask on comes towards the target. In reality at this moment the target is unable to move. The masked man the places his hand by the heart of the target and proceeds to rip out the soul of the user , removing the mask and eating the soul, The masked man the laughs and begins eating other parts of the target till there is no more. During this time the target is immobilized in reality.

*Can be used for a total of three times for B-A Ranked, twice for S-ranked while unlimited for C ranked and below. A genjutsu specialist is capable of releasing one rank higher then they normally would base on the Kai Restrictions (i.e A Sannin can only release up to A-ranked with Kai but being a Genjutsu specialist will allow them to do so up to S-ranked)*
*When used on a target it is B-Ranked in strength and can be used only twice*


Declined - keep the orginal

(Genjutsu Ogi: Itazura) Secret Illusion Arts: Prankster
Type: Offensive | Defensive
Rank: A -Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will form 3 handseals, causing a genjutsu to occur. While the target holds a weapon or instrument(anything you can hold), the user is able to use this genjutsu to make it appear as if the held object turns into an animal(based on the user's contact). The illusionary animal then attacks the target, grabbing there limbs and preventing them from moving. This can also work on elemental techniques used by the enemy, having the technique appeared to have changed into a animal as well. This adds some uniqueness as the user can make the animal appear as if it was created from the element its self, meaning creating a fire fox if used on a fire technique etc as an example. The technique lasts for 3 turns to which the user can transform as much objects as they want within this interval. The user can also add extra effects like smoke , heat(for fire) and so forth as well to add more realism.

*Each usage lasts 3 turns*
*Can be used twice per battle*
*Can only be used by signers of an animal contract*

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[House]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Hakke Shatā tamashī) 10 Quadgrams - The Sage of all Generation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Himself
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 in each turn)
Damage Points: N/A (+20 Gentle Fist / +10 Taijutsu) (-10 damage to user)
Description: The Sage of Gentle Fist had traveled through many mountains and sections where he looked for ways to uncover more secrets about what chakra points really are, their limits and if they are expendable. Expendable in a way to push them beyond any shinobis' imagination. When a chakra point is being closed by hitting tenketsu points, it'll shut off a targets chakra pathway. When a chakra point is opened forcefully, the targets jutsus would naturally fail. Dante with his vast knowledge and beyond capability of Gentle Fist and precise chakra control to open his own chakra points to the point of letting his chakra pathway system surround him and conjure with his own flesh. While the user still somewhat remains his own physical form, the raw chakra fused with his body allows him to not only speed up his execution of Gentle Fist but a unique feature of executing his Gentle Fist techniques in a more advanced shape manipulated and concentrated manner. This unique feature that the state provides enables the user to use Gentle Fist on par with more advanced techniques like elemental techniques. In this state, he is able to be one with Gentle Fist techniques like the Twin Lion Fist or any rotations and is able to resists physical damage up to a certain degree. While his opening of chakra points and letting his raw chakra fuse with his own flesh offers him a degree of defense from B-rank and below techniques, he's limited to only techniques that doesn't require handseals. While active, the user's appearance expands significantly and looks dark blue raw chakra which suppose to make up the user's body. Any contact will cause burning sensation hence the degree and quality of chakra.
Note:
~The user won't be able to mold any of the 5 elements while this is active
~The user won't be able to do jutsus that require handseals till this active.
~While this is active, it counts as one of the 3 jutsus per turn
~Can be taught by Dr. House
~Useable twice per battle
~Lasts 2 turns
~User won't be able to use taijutsu or gentle fist above b-rank for two turns if the mode has lasted for 2 full turns.
~When this ends, user may only use elemental chakra up to A-rank for the next turn.
~The jutsu puts so much strain to the users body, it'll put -10 damage per turn to the user.

Approved

Note for the checker: I removed the draining and boosting and put a more concentrated chakra which will ultimately achieve the same effect I wanted.

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(Jūho : Akusei Pāmutoraiaru) Gentle Step: Malignant Palm Trial
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A - Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Based on the principle of closing and opening chakra points, the user starts letting out raw chakra from all of his points around himself having an invisible cloud of raw chakra within mid range of him. The raw chakra that's been released constantly by the user being manipulated to have attributes of shutting down or opening chakra points of whatever is within their space. Soon as their target enters within short range, the target will feel massive pressure being placed on their chakra points, having great difficulty to channel their chakra due to the massive effect of the raw chakra cloud they're in on short range. The nature of the chakra will either close or open their chakra points forcefully, leaving their target with the feeling of weakness and having an abnormal control over their chakra due to having an immense pressure on their chakra points. For example, if they try to perform a simple chidori it will disipate in a burst of light or if they try to create an armor it'l just fall apart due to the inability over chakra control. Once the target manages to get away from the user's range, it'll take a turn to return to their full chakra control.
Note:
-Only affects A-ranked and above.
-Can only be used 2x
-Last for 2 turns and must wait two turns to use again
-No s-ranked or higher Gentle Fist after this technique deactivated.
-Taught by House
-Has to be Kage or higher to use this due to the expertise needed

Approved - made edits

(Jūho : Shinpan no Tsūka) 8 Trigrams: Passage of Judgement
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Himself
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Hyuugas are well known for their instant release of raw chakra. Though activating this state, if the user wishes, the user manipulates his raw chakra for the intended Gentle Fist technique which enables his techniques to pass through mere solid objects. Hyuugas are excellent at chakra control and hence they're able to perfectly release the right amount and density of chakra. Just like how any raw chakra release will pass through a human body, the user will thin his chakra enough to pass through objects that are only liquid and solid in form. Just like how Neji was able to push his Mountain Crusher through his own self image and through the ground to kill all the White Zetsus underground. However, the drawback of this technique is that hence their raw chakra will be thinned out, it'll lose a rank in power for whichever technique the user thinned out.
Note:
-Lasts 3 turns
-Can be activated 2x
-Taught by House

Declined – make it a bit clearer of how it works, give an example, like if you use this on A rank earth golem.

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(Hakke Shatā tamashī) 10 Quadgrams - The Sage of all Generation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Himself
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 in each turn)
Damage Points: N/A (+20 Gentle Fist / +10 Taijutsu) (-10 damage to user)
Description: The Sage of Gentle Fist had traveled through many mountains and sections where he looked for ways to uncover more secrets about what chakra points really are, their limits and if they are expendable. Expendable in a way to push them beyond any shinobis' imagination. When a chakra point is being closed by hitting tenketsu points, it'll shut off a targets chakra pathway. When a chakra point is opened forcefully, the targets jutsus would naturally fail. Dante with his vast knowledge and beyond capability of Gentle Fist and precise chakra control to open his own chakra points to the point of letting his chakra pathway system surround him and conjure with his own flesh. While the user still somewhat remains his own physical form, the raw chakra fused with his body allows him to not only speed up his execution of Gentle Fist, increase his speed up to twice, but a unique feature of executing his Gentle Fist techniques in a more advanced shape manipulated and concentrated manner. This unique feature that the state provides enables the user to use Gentle Fist on par with more advanced techniques like elemental techniques. In this state, he is able to be one with Gentle Fist techniques like the Twin Lion Fist or any rotations and is able to resists physical damage up to a certain degree. His opening of chakra points and letting his raw chakra fuse with his own flesh offers a very concentrated shroud of chakra protecting him from techniques S-ranked and below. While active, the user's appearance expands significantly along with their jutsus and looks dark blue raw chakra which suppose to make up the user's body. Any contact will cause burning sensation hence the degree and quality of chakra.
Note:
~The user won't be able to mold any of the 5 elements above B-ranked while this is active
~The user won't be able to do jutsus above B-ranked that require handseals while this active.
~While this is active, it counts as one of the 3 jutsus per turn
~Can be taught by Dr. House
~Useable once per battle
~Lasts 4 turns
~User won't be able to use taijutsu or gentle fist above b-rank for two turns if the mode has lasted for 4 full turns.
~When this ends, user may only use elemental chakra up to A-rank for the next turn.
~The jutsu puts so much strain to the users body, it'll put -10 damage per turn to the user.

Declined - almost there. Hyuuga jutsu don't cause burning in that way.

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(Jūho : Shinpan no Tsūka) 8 Trigrams: Passage of Judgement
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Himself
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Hyuugas are well known for their instant release of raw chakra. Though activating this state, if the user wishes, the user manipulates his raw chakra for the intended Gentle Fist technique which enables his techniques to pass through mere solid objects. Hyuugas are excellent at chakra control and hence they're able to perfectly release the right amount and density of chakra. Just like how any raw chakra release will pass through a human body, the user will thin his chakra enough to pass through objects that are only liquid and solid in form. Just like how Neji was able to push his Mountain Crusher through his own self image and through the ground to kill all the White Zetsus underground. However, the drawback of this technique is that hence their raw chakra will be thinned out, it'll lose a rank in power for whichever technique the user thinned out. For example, if an A-ranked ranked air palm meets with an A-ranked earth golem, it'll paralyze its chakra pathway (hence that's what it's really attacking and doesn't attack him physically) disturbing the chakra flow within him and continue while losing a rank in power, becoming an B-ranked.
Note:
-Lasts 3 turns
-Can be activated 2x
-Must wait a two turn cooldown before use
-Taught by House

Declined - say it can't be used on S ranks and above otherwise all amors will be rendered useless against you. And it's negative effect is rendered useless with the jutsu below.

(Jūho : Vu Ankisshutoraiaru) 8 Trigrams: Heavens Dance of Hazy Sage
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Himself
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A [+20 to Gentle Fist]
Description: Similar to Heavens Dance of Hazy White cannon Gentle Fist, where this technique gives the user's chakra qualities of having explosive properties. Hyuugas are so impressively masters of chakra control that they're able to either manipulate their chakra into figures or release a simple raw chakra blast. The user, similarly in the Dance of Hazy White, passively manipulates their chakra so impressively condense and high in density, into having explosive properties while releasing their intended technique. The techniques under this passive manipulation are different in size with looking more compact and from the increased density, giving it a blinding white light effect. For example, the user uses the Twin Lion Fists, and once it makes contact with the intended target, the quality of the chakra enables the user to create a large forward explosion upon contact. This can be applied to any Projectile/Air Palm and rotation based jutsus.
Note:
-Lasts 3 turns
-Can be activated 2x
-Must wait a two turn cooldown before use
-Taught by House

Declined - DNR

(Jūho : Doragon no Tamashii) Gentle Step: Soul of the Dragon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A (+10 to Techniques while active)
Damage: N/A
Description: One of the few techniques that was created by the most exemplar members of the Hyuga Clan through years of practice with chakra control and the ability to naturally release chakra from all 361 chakra points. This technique although it serves no purpose on its own as a stand alone technique, it actually is passively activated and instant. The user will naturally burst out more chakra from the tenketsus in the body(depending on the location of which the chakra is being release from) in which when the Hyuga uses a technique, they are able to use the extra chakra and infuse it with the chakra being concentrated to create jutsu in order to increase the range of the techniques used by them. The burst chakra acts as a catalyst in order to fuel more chakra into the technique and using their mastery of chakra control, they are able to execute this technique. These techniques range for example if only reaching short range like the S-ranked Crumbling Mountain Crusher, is now able to reach mid ranged etc, thus allowing them to hit enemies from further distances. This however can become taxing over time and thus a Hyuga can only keep it activate for a set amount of time.
Notes:
-Can be used twice per battle, lasting four turns each or when deactivated. The user needs to wait one turn after deactivation in order to utilize again. This can be activated at the start of battle if needed
-Can be taught by House

Declined - wont be approving any jutsu that extend the rage of CQC jutsu like this.