[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Black Butler]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hijutsu no Aburame: Gaijo no Zaigo) - Aburame Secret Technique: Removal of Sin
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (+10 if used on a friend)
Damage: N/A
Description On the users command or simply because the aburame's kikaichu are self active, the aburame bugs will, being connected to the users chakra flow, know when their hosts chakra flow is interrupted. They will simply proceed to suck any foreign chakra from the hosts body or from a friend's body (After having correctly figured their friend is in a Genjutsu) with extreme precision; (Ninpo: Mushi Genjutsu) - Ninja Art: Insect Illusion Technique is a technique that can be compared to this one in the sense of sucking chakra from a ninjas body. Having trained with Aburame bugs and several Aburame members, having sparred with Uchiha's, developed this concept in order to defend against their never-ending stock of Genjutsu. The Kikaichu, after having sucked the foreign chakra from the selected system, will proceed to unlatch from the target and die.
Note: Can't be used to suck an opponent's chakra at all
Note: The Kikaichu have been proven to be self reliable when protecting its host, so there's no need to command them to perform this action unless it's relieving their friend from a Genjutsu.
Note: Requires extreme control, therefore this technique can't be used with any other Aburame jutsu in the same turn.
Note: Must wait 2 turns in between uses
Note: Removes chakra up to S- Rank
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: must be stated in the special abilities of the user's biography.
Note: Can not be used offensively

Approved. Added a note that it must be stated in the biography as it is an 'automatic' counter. Note that this one will not work if you use a previous that in any way renders you unable to use S-rank. For example, if you have are unable to use S-rank in the next turn, you will not be able to use this as a defense, as your restricted your chakra flow due to the power of another custom.

(Aburame no Jitsu: Ubuge Shindou) - Aburame Secret Technique: Soft Impact
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description Aburame, not being well-versed in either Genjutsu or Taijutsu, sought of other ways in order to defend against something they weren't good at. Taijutsu is definitely not a field an Aburame would have practiced a lot, so they made up for the inability to defend with their bugs. If a user is unable to defend against an incoming physical contact from an opponent or object, their Kikaichu will act on their own accord and proceed to branch out in the incoming direction of attack and meet the attack head on. Using their ability to track and notice chakra, as well as swarm, the Kikaichu will intercept the blow or object by bending around the object while stringing themselves together with chakra to act as a kind of net. This net forcefully slows or completely blocks an incoming attack while greatly softening it, rendering it useless or slowed. If the attack is slowed, it will be enough so the user can maneuver out of the way of attack, moving to safety.
Note: If the user is unable to defend properly from an attack, the Kikaichu bugs will act on their own
Note: The bugs can defend from attacks that would be outside the users tractability, but will follow the S&W of Aburame jutsu
Note: The Kikaichu can't attack the opponent
Note: Can only be activated 3x per battle
Note: These bugs are not rapid to trace EIG or strong enough to counter EIG techniques.
Note: must be stated in the special abilities of the user's biography.

‡ Both Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.
approved. Added a small note in terms of EIG (which seemed normal anyways) and that it must be stated in your special abilities as again, it is automatic. Check previous jutsu regarding automatic techniques.

I have permission from Serpent to resubmit his Body of Storm Technique with added modifications(

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(Ranton: Shinjouran) Storm Release: Body of Storm

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (+10 Ranton | +5 Taijutsu)
Description: The user will push all of his Ranton based Chakra out of his body forming a bright aura around the user. This aura takes shape of Ancient Battle Armor that is semi-transparent. This drastically increases the users ability to use Storm Element, allowing the user to use stronger Storm based techniques then normal. Because of the Ranton Armor the user is able to achieve greater speed in similar fashion to "Raiton Armor", however this only allows the user to move at half speed compared to "Raiton Armor". Thanks to the speed gained by this technique, Taijutsu becomes more efficient. Not only allowing for faster delivery of Taijutsu, but an increase in strength as well. Ranton Armor seems like an excellent technique, but it has it's drawbacks. The amount of output needed for the Ranton makes it impassable for the user to use other element bases, the user can only use Ranton based Ninjutsu and Taijutsu during this mode. Upon deactivation of this mode the user will feel totally drain. As a side effect, the user will feel dizzy and move at half their normal speed because of the lack of chakra and the strain on the users body.
Notes:
-Last 5 turns.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Only Ranton and Taijutsu during this Mode.
-User moves at half speed for 2 turns after Jutsu.
-No S-ranks for two turns after this Jutsu.
-No Ranton Rest of Battle after this mode is deactivated.
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

And the modified version.

(Ranton: Shinjouran) Storm Release: Body of Storm
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage points: N/A (+20 Taijutsu) (+20 Ranton) (+10 To Lightning and Water)
Description: The user will focus his chakra deep within themselves forming it into Ranton before pushing it fourth from there body. This creates a semi-transparent chakra shroud that, with the use of advanced shape manipulation, forms into a full body armor of Ranton.This drastically increases the users ability to use Ranton, allowing the user to produce it's nature faster and without the need of hand seals. In similar fashion to "Raiton Armor", This technique increases the user speed drastically, however this only allows the user to move at half the speedincreased compared to "Raiton Armor". Thanks to the speed gained by this technique, Taijutsu becomes more efficient. Not only allowing for faster delivery of Taijutsu, but an increase in strength as well. The user will become immune to B-ranked Raiton and B-ranked Suiton or lower, while being completely unaffected by Ranton techniquesThis seems like an excellent technique, but it has it's drawbacks. The constant focus needed to maintain this technique drains at the users chakra supply while also preventing them from utilize elements outside of Suiton, Raiton and Ranton. Lastly, because of the vast amounts of chakra being withheld against their body the user will continue to take small amounts of electrical damage ultimately affecting there performance one the technique ends. This will cause the user to feel dizzy and drained. Causing their movements to become slower, equal to that of a ninja 2 ranks lower then themselves while not being able to use powerful techniques for a short time.
Notes:
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Cannot use Raiton or Suiton 2 turns after use.
-Cannot use Ranton for 3 turns after use.
-The user will feel drained for 2 turns after use.
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

‡ Declined ‡ You can't resubmit someone else's technique for them lol. As restricted as the storm armour is, I don't think you should attempt to update it. Such things are no longer approved and when you re-submit things they're liable to being revoked entirely.

 

[Mirai]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ittō-ryū: Shinkuu Hooku)One Sword Style: Vaccum Hawk
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:+10 Fire Techniques
Description: The user channels a strong, yet precise amount of wind chakra to their blade while gripping the handle and while still in the scabbard. This technique has two variants of usage. The first, the user will draw there sword and high speeds, but using shape manipulation and control, the user will stop drawing the blade when its ¾ out. This will create a linear burst of wind chakra to be launch in a path. This is sent behind of a fire technique, which could enhance the technique. This can also below back an enemy from the user one range away. The second application of this technique the user with is sword already drawn, will begin to sheathe it back into his scabard and then using his wind chakra, the user creates a liner vacuum path, and allows him to draw the target closer to him. This allows the user to bring enemies from mid-range into short range; roughly 6 meters from the user.

*Both applications can only be use once per battle*
*Can only be used/taught by Zekken*

✦ Declined, first part makes little sense; if the sword isn't fully unsheathed then how and why would a burst of chakra be released like you say? Furthermore, this not only resembles one of Cali's sword jutsu, but also other kenjutsu attacks I've seen that release blades of chakra when unsheathed. DNR ✦

(Ittō-ryū: Houou Tenshouku)One Sword Style : Razing Phoenix
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This is the first technique of the Sigmund Style used by the Seven Shinobi Guardians. The user will channel there fire chakra into their sheathed sword in a crouching position.The user then leaps into the air wreathed in flame, carrying any nearby enemies with them. While airbone the user then streaks toward the ground, again carrying the targets with him. A fonic glyph of flame appears underneath the user and he once again leaps into the air, this time surrounded by fiery energy in the shape of a phoenix, hitting the opponent repeatedly performing a 16 sword combo

*Can be used 3 times per battle*
*No Fire Techniques Above A- Rank Next Turn.*
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✦ Declined, illogical to put simple; you create a vacuum of fire around you that somehow carries enemies into the air with you? ✦

 

[Erzo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fūton/Katon: Aiorosu `Ikari ) - Wind/Fire Release: Aeolus' Wrath
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 per turn if maintained)
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user releases their Wind chakra from mouth or through hand movements (short ranged release when used in either of these forms), from the skies above, or send their chakra into the ground and cause it to emerge from the ground at a specific position. This releases what appears to be little light-green rain drops (ranging from 3-10 inches in size) which are extremely sharp and naturally fast due to the nature of Wind, and the way they are shaped, being extremely slimline. As these little rain-drops of Wind form, the user would add his Fire chakra into them, causing them to become extremely heated. Their colour would change into one extremely similar to the colour given off by '( Katon: Onidōrō ) - Fire Release: Demon Lantern', giving off a yellowish colour as the light-green and red from the Fire chakra mix together. Upon colliding with any other jutsu, regardless of whether it's Energy, or Matter based, the Rain drops would explode outward, releasing heated Wind which has blowing force with the addition of scalding effects. The jutsu is designed to always explode in the direction of the point of contact with the foreign chakra. Due to their size, each outburst of heated Wind would be quite small but since they always rain down/travel as a group of heated wind 'raindrops' the damage is done is nothing but. Moreover, the addition of Fire also allows the jutsu to travel towards bodies of heat which do not belong to the user, making this a double edged sword if used in a fight alongside allies.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Lasts four turns, or until deactivated/defended from. Usable three times per battle. After each usage the user must wait a turn before being able to use again.

‡ Declined ‡ Aside from being beyond weird, I have a few problems with this. I don't allow wind techniques to be created from the ground. How does this last four turns? Doesn't seem like that type of jutsu. This seems like a straightforward attack that you have no control over once aimed/released (the instant you move onto adding in your katon chakra, this jutsu is no longer in your control) unless you have Yin/Yang. Also, is there any way for the opponent to detect these?

Removed being able to use it from the ground and four turns thing.

(Fūton/Katon: Aiorosu `Ikari ) - Wind/Fire Release: Aeolus' Wrath
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user releases their Wind chakra from mouth or through hand movements (short ranged release when used in either of these forms), or from the skies above. This releases what appears to be little light-green rain drops (ranging from 3-10 inches in size) which are extremely sharp and naturally fast due to the nature of Wind, and the way they are shaped, being extremely slimline. After these little rain-drops of Wind form, the user would add his Fire chakra into them, causing them to become extremely heated. Their colour would change into one extremely similar to the colour given off by '( Katon: Onidōrō ) - Fire Release: Demon Lantern', giving off a yellowish colour as the light-green and red from the Fire chakra mix together. Upon colliding with any other jutsu, regardless of whether it's Energy, or Matter based, the Rain drops would explode outward, releasing heated Wind which has blowing force with the addition of scalding effects. The jutsu is designed to always explode in the direction of the point of contact with the foreign chakra. Due to their size, each outburst of heated Wind would be quite small but since they always rain down/travel as a group of heated wind 'raindrops' the damage is done is nothing but. Moreover, the addition of Fire also allows the jutsu to travel towards bodies of heat which do not belong to the user, making this a double edged sword if used in a fight alongside allies. Although not the most visible of jutsus, the combination of the Fire and Wind would still give off a yellow-ish glow and is clearly visible by the naked eye.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Usable three times per battle. After each usage the user must wait a turn before being able to use again.

‡ Declined ‡ The bit you added is a little more than cosmetic if these drops are created from the sky. The opponent needs to be able to detect these via means other than sight. I can remove the usage from the sky and approve this or you can find another way to make this detectable.

(Fūton: Saikuron no rengoku )- Wind Release: Purgatory of a Cyclone
Type: Attack/Defensive
Rank: S
Range:Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Having seen the creation of many tornado based Wind techniques which simply emerge from the sky, Roy decided to take the concept and further develop it further. With the release of his chakra into the area around him, the user of this jutsu would create a horizontal tornado which at short range would have a cone like shape, with the base being open and the area closest to him being the spike. Upon its creation, the jutsu would be sent flying forwards, allowing the natural speed of Wind to take it at great speeds despite its size. Although it is able to simply smash into the opponent and deal blunt damage. However, the main of this jutsu is to counter projectiles/other jutsus which aren't stream-based sent towards the user. Should a projectile/or a non-stream based jutsu of any kind be sent towards the user, with the use of this technique, the user is able use this technique and have the object/jutsu go into the tornado through the base, where its momentum is slowly slowed down as it travels further down into the tornado due the way the inside of the tornado is spiralling in a forward direction. Once it's close to reaching the end, the end of the tornado (end closest to the user) would burst forwards, taking with it whatever has been slowed down and forced to spiral in the direction of the tornado. Doing this will allow the user to defend against A-ranked Water/Earth/Wind (basically anything matter based which isn't strong against Wind] jutsus whilst adding +15 damage to this jutsu as it increases the concussive force/create a cutting effect upon striking the opponent. However, this jutsu can also be used to simply counter other jutsus of equal rank, according to the strengths and weaknesses of Wind.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Usable three times per battle, with a two turn wait after each usage. No other Wind jutsu above S-ranked can be used within the same turn as this.

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‡ Declined ‡ Coloured bit makes no sense. Ok no, this is simply unreasonable. +15 damage to anything that's sent back at the opponent? Is your technique weakened in the slightest in such "clashes"? Or does your attack become an S-Rank Wind + an attack up to A-Rank boosted by 15 damage? I don't see myself personally approving this.

Removed a word from the bit you coloured.

(Fūton: Saikuron no rengoku )- Wind Release: Purgatory of a Cyclone
Type: Attack/Defensive
Rank: S
Range:Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Having seen the creation of many tornado based Wind techniques which simply emerge from the sky, Roy decided to take the concept and develop it further. With the release of his chakra into the area around him, the user of this jutsu would create a horizontal tornado which at short range would have a cone like shape, with the base being open and the area closest to him being the spike. Upon its creation, the jutsu would be sent flying forwards, allowing the natural speed of Wind to take it at great speeds despite its size. Although it is able to simply smash into the opponent and deal blunt damage. However, the main of this jutsu is to counter projectiles/other jutsus which aren't stream-based sent towards the user. Should a projectile/or a non-stream based jutsu of any kind be sent towards the user, with the use of this technique, the user is able use this technique and have the object/jutsu go into the tornado through the base, where its momentum is slowly slowed down as it travels further down into the tornado due the way the inside of the tornado is spiralling in a forward direction. Once it's close to reaching the end, the end of the tornado (end closest to the user) would burst forwards, taking with it whatever has been slowed down and forced to spiral in the direction of the tornado. Doing this will allow the user to defend against A-ranked Water/Earth/Wind (basically anything matter based which isn't strong against Wind) jutsus whilst adding +15 damage to this jutsu as it increases the concussive force/create a cutting effect upon striking the opponent. When used in this particular way, due to being neutral to mentioned elements, the +15 damage is added on to the weakened version of this jutsu, which when used against neutral elements would be A-ranked. However, this jutsu can also be used to simply counter other jutsus of equal rank, according to the strengths and weaknesses of Wind.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo. Usable three times per battle, with a two turn wait after each usage. No other Wind jutsu above S-ranked can be used within the same turn as this.

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‡ Declined ‡ DNR.

(Ototon: Jentoruekō) - Sound Release: Gentle Echo
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: A sound jutsu versed in it's defensive abilities, Gentle Echo allows the user protection from specific techniques. The user must first focus on the vibrational frequency of the opposing jutsu, having done that then releases Sound either through a clap, or via the mouth, creating a sound of equal frequency, mimicking the incoming form(s) of energy/chakra. By altering it's vibrational frequency and mimicking that of the opponents jutsu, the sound is able to displace the incoming form of energy, allowing the two to clash and nullify each other, leaving nothing behind but dispersed energy. This jutsu is able to defend against Wind/Fire/Lightning, and other elements of that nature, and anything which is Energy-based, as long as it is created using chakra (so can't use this against SM) of equal rank. But it would not be able to handle the physical attributes that come with Water/Earth based techniques.
~ Can only be taught by Erzo and is usable three times per battle, with a turn between each usage. Within the same turn, the user is not able to use other Sound techniques of S-rank and higher. It can only nullify up to A-rank wind due to the elemental disadvantage.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for Wesobi.
Approved. Added a small note at the end.

 

[Robot Boy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Anda-Guraundo Misairu ) - Underground Missile
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After performing two hand-seals (dog -> snake), the user slams his hand on the ground and spawn three moles underneath the targets feet in which they coat their heads in earth chakra and rotate upward from the ground, and crash into the target, launching the target into the air from the blunt force. After they attack, the moles will burrow underground, ready to launch another attack. Alternatively, the user can perform this by himself but, he has to be underground before-hand through the Hiding-like a mole technique.

Notes:
-Can only be used by the moles and those who have signed the contract.
-When the head is coated, it forms a helmet that resembles Excadrill’s jagged helmet.
-Can be used up to four times.

✦ Approved ✦

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(Anda-guraundo Shougeki Misairu) – Underground Ballistic Missile
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: Is a technique derived from the underground missile technique. The user slams his hands on the ground in the same way how the multiple mud wall technique is performed, and spawns eight moles around themselves from below, to either intercept multiple attacking enemies in close quarters or take aerial based opponents by surprise, by coating their heads in earth chakra and rotating upwards from the ground.
-Can be used up to twice times
-After using, the user must wait 2 turns before reuse.
-Must have signed the mole contract

✦ Approved, added one restriction ✦

(Gouzen Nokogiri Shikon) – Roaring Saw Fang
Type:offensive/supplementary
Rank:S
Range:short-mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user and his ninken will focus lightning chakra throughout their body while rolling furiously having them ‘drop’ a total of eight small lightning orbs(about the size of a Handball) as they pass the target(s). The saw attack is merely a feint for the actual attack. The orbs are then discharged, each forming a pillar of lightning energy that is shot from underneath and violently shocking the target (s). When performing it in of the wolf transformations, the user will launch a single large ‘handball’ at the target while rolling. The ball will explode with whatever it comes into contact with.
-Can be used twice per battle
-No S-rank or above Inuzuka or lightning techniques next turn
-The user must wait a turn before using it again

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( Shikkyaku Rensei) – Falling Drill
Type:Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user and his ninken will jump into the air while building up massive amounts of water chakra and then spin furiously. They then release and combine that chakra, and shape it into a massive drill-like vortex of water with two additional drills facing in opposite directions, as well as smaller ones on the sides. The drills’ tips take on the form of the sharp protrusion on Excadrill’s head except it is extended (3 meters long). They will then dive downward or launch forward, depending on where the target(s) is and crash into them. The drills are strong enough to tear through a large summoning’s tail without losing its momentum.

Notes:
-Can only be used twice with a two turn break in between usages.
-Requires at least two ninken to use this
-Must use the four-legged technique beforehand
-Can’t use Inuzuka and Water techniques for two turns

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✦ Both Declined, as far as I'm aware, Inuzuka dogs can't use elemental affinities. If this is different, show me proof and I'll recheck these but I'm almost 100% sure they cannot ✦

 

[Kai NB]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Moukinrui no Kuchiyose: Namazu) – Raptor Summoning: Namazu
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Namazu is an average sized raptor, smaller than most and too small for the user to stand upon but he is no less than any other raptor as Namazu possesses a unique affinity towards the earth element, capable of hardening his wings or beak to a great extent similair to that of the Hardening Technique in order to strike his target with a strength equal to that of an A-Ranked earth technique literally cladding said parts with a layer of solid rock. Namazu also possesses the ability to literally dive into solid earth, merging with it much like the Hiding in Rock technique, leaving the earth undisturbed whilst 'flying' throughout it at the same speed he flies through the air whilst being aware of whatever is happening on the surface of the earth, preying upon his target and he can fly through earth techniques of B-Rank and below by merging with them as he does so and thus this diving ability counts as an A-Ranked earth technique. Namazu is able to execute his hardening ability whilst merged with the earth allowing him to strike his target as he emerges from the ground.

Note: Utilizing Namazu's hardening technique counts to one of the summoner's three moves per turn and is an A-Ranked earth technique.
Note: Utilizing Namazu's merging ability counts towards one of the summoner's three moves per turn and is an A-Ranked earth technique.
Note: Must have signed the raptor contract to summon Namazu.
Note: Namazu may only be summoned once per battle and remains on the field for a maximum of three turns.
Note: Namazu only finds those who possess mastery over the earth element worthy of summoning him and does not respond to the call of those who have yet to achieve it.

‡ Declined ‡ The hardening technique, despite it's name, doesn't harden anything. It just coats the user in a layef or rock so remove any reverences to the wings becoming harder. The weight of the rocky material surrounding the bird would obviously take a toll on it so you need to account for that in your description. The merging ability would work on any earth that's devoid of chakra as well as well, so you might want to add that (as it is this can only merge through techniques like the canon Hiding in Rock technique).

(Moukinrui no Kuchiyose: Mōkinshizen) Raptor Summoning: Mōkinshizen
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the summoning technique, the user summons Mōkinshizen: The Elemental Streak. Mōkinshizen (Nature Raptor), like the rest of the Raptors, is a large Raptor that is roughly the size of of his user, which makes him too small to allow users to fly on him. He has a regular Raptor appearance along with a unique streak that identifies himself, in this case a streak that may be 1 of 5 colors (Red - Green - Yellow - Brown - Blue) at a time that appears running down his back and when Mōkinshizen flies, he leaves a shining streak of light along his flight path, in this case whatever color streak is currently on him. Mōkinshizen has a unique ability to create certain geographical and weather effects depending on the power he activates. The power correlates to the current color streak along his back. Also, Mōkinshizen seems to take on a different personality with each power he activates.

(Aka no Shima) The Red Streak
Mōkinshizen will create heatwaves from his flight path. Doing so, all Wind Release techniques within the heatwave lose power by one rank and all Fire Release techniques within the heatwave gain power by one rank. When this ability is activated, the Summoning Tattoo on the user's chest gains a red streak right down the middle of it. In this form, Mōkinshizen can only use Fire Techniques up to and including A-Rank.

(Midori no Shima) The Green Streak
Mōkinshizen will create hurricanes from his flight path. Doing so, all Lightning Release techniques within the hurricanes lose power by one rank and all Wind Release techniques within the hurricanes gain power by one rank. When this ability is activated, the Summoning Tattoo on the user's chest gains a green streak right down the middle of it. In this form, Mōkinshizen can only use Wind Techniques up to and including A-Rank.

(Keikoku no Shima) The Yellow Streak
Mōkinshizen will create lightning storms from his flight path. Doing so, all Earth Release techniques within the lightning storms lose power by one rank and all Lightning Release techniques within the lightning storms gain power by one rank. When this ability is activated, the Summoning Tattoo on the user's chest gains a yellow streak right down the middle of it. In this form, Mōkinshizen can only use Lightning Techniques up to and including A-Rank.

(Chairo no Shima) The Brown Streak
Mōkinshizen will create earth tremors from his flight path. Doing so, all Water Release techniques within the earth tremors lose power by one rank and all Earth Release techniques within the earth tremors gain power by one rank. When this ability is activated, the Summoning Tattoo on the user's chest gains a brown streak right down the middle of it. In this form, Mōkinshizen can only use Earth Techniques up to and including A-Rank.

(Aoiro no Shima) The Blue Streak
Mōkinshizen will create rain storms from his flight path. Doing so, all Fire Release techniques within the rain storms lose power by one rank and all Water Release techniques within the rain storms gain power by one rank. When this ability is activated, the Summoning Tattoo on the user's chest gains a blue streak right down the middle of it. In this form, Mōkinshizen can only use Water Techniques up to and including A-Rank.​

Note: This Summoning may only be summoned by those with the Raptor Contract
Note: This Summoning may only be summoned summoned once
Note: This Summoning may only switch to one type of weather effect per turn
Note: Once an elemental effect is used, it can't be used another time again
Note: All elemental jutsus are are affected by this weather pattern effect, including the user's, teammates, and opponent's jutsus

‡ Declined ‡ I liked the whole elemental streak thing but a summon can only have one affinity and the effects of the produced streams are overpowered and illogical. Also, why would a flight path produce tremors on the ground?

 

[Avonomemi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Hottokēki) Illusion Technique: Hot Cake
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Focusing on the opponent sense of touch, After making a few sequence hand seals (tiger-> boar-> snake) whilst binding his target in an illusion that affects their sense of feeling thus they're are unable to feel which isn't their own body, slight vibrations, sharp objects cuts and stabs until the dispersion of the illusion(in the sense that the target wont feel a sword driven through them until the pain from the piercing disperses the illusion). When the jutsu is active the targets seems to feel normal and unaware.
Restriction:
- Usable thrice per battle.

‡ Declined ‡ This seems reasonable but it isn't. DNR.

(Ranton: Subete No Shiro Subete) Storm Release: All White Everything
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: the user release their storm chakra into the ground then cause several pillars made of pure electrical energy to erupt from the ground at desired location, then by performing a single hand seal, the user change their dress attire to all white then using the electrical energy light emission to camouflage his presence, this illusion trick is mainly focus on sight and sound. The technique ensure no shadow can or is formed while producing an electric buzzing sound.
Note: the energy pillar don't cause any damage to the target's eyes but disturb their hearing due to the cracking sound it produce.

Restriction:
- the technique last for three turns
- usable three times per battle.
- Require two turn cool down.

‡ Declined ‡ This goes beyond the normal applications of Storm Release.

(Daichi Meidō: Heui Buresshā) Great Tremor: Heavy Pressure
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: N/A ( -10 per use)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Heavy Pressure is a microphone-type weapon that amplifies the user's voice into deadly sound waves. It was once owned by a sound ninja until his death, the weapon works when the user speak into the balled shaped end while channeling chakra into the weapon, as the user speak the weapon can amplify the user's voice and turn it into ultrasonic sound waves capable of pulverizing the enemy by shattering their bones or placing them in an induced sleep illusion.
It seemed to have different output levels; with full power output presumably being its strongest the sound it produce can shatter a A-rank defense, at low power output presumably its weakest state it can induce the target into a A-rank illusion and at mid power output can exhibit both action at the same time but at C-rank effect.
An added feature is given to the Heavy Pressure to make up for the nature of the weapon being poor at close range, though this latest edition was made by a kumo ninja after the previous owner had died. At the base of the weapon (the cylindrical bottom) the user will materialize an element of their choosing to form an elongated blade just about the same length of a regular katana (1.8meters in length).
Note: The ultrasonic sound waves can travel up to long range in the absence of a barrier.
Restriction:
- The three ability of the weapon count as a move and each can only be used four times per battle.
- The weapon require a one turn cool down before used again.
- The weapon when combined with an element to form its blade does not take the form of the element.
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‡ Declined ‡ Just a way of getting psuedo-Sound.

 

[Goddess]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Daichi) - Earth Release: Terra Firma
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (80)
Descripton: After performing a series of 4 handeals ( Snake -> Boar -> Snake -> Monkey), the user focuses their chakra into an earthen structure whether it be found in nature or infused with chakra. Making its foundation from Stone Lodging Destruction, the user focuses their chakra into the structure and using that chakra to near instantly find its weak point or structural weaknesses. The chakra works at eating away at the weaknesses causing the earthen structure to crumble instantly. The points of the structure are constantly battered with chakra until they give in. Using this jutsu on naturally occurring earthen structures is relatively easy. Since there is no opposing chakra within the structure the effects of the jutsu would take hold faster. In fact, it is twice as fast if there is no chakra present. In regard to the chakra infused structures, the jutsu can only be used on jutsu that are equal in rank to it or below. When performed on non infused structures, the rocks and debris are capable of raining down on the opponent inflicting damage equivalent to an S rank jutsu. However, this spells a problem for the user also. The main focus at that point would not to be hit with the crumbling rocks because he/she can also be affected by the damage. But also, the debris is not chakra enhanced and can easily be defended against by any rank earth techniques if applicable. Due to the advanced nature of the jutsu, it can only be performed by those who have earth as their primary specialty.
Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle
Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Goddess

‡ Declined ‡ Similar to existing techniques.

(Doton: Burakkukyanbasu) - Fire Release: Black Canvas
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short Mid range reach
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A (40)
Descripton: Black Canvas is a defensive fire jutsu that forms around the users' body. Performing 2 handseals ( Tiger -> Dragon), the user concentrates fire chakra within their body and release seven basketball sized fire balls that orbit their body. Unlike most fire techniques, the fire is almost solid in form as the chakra in them is compact and more dense than the run of the mill fire technique. The basketball sized fireballs take the form of wisps, energy based creatures shaped like small humanoids. These wisps orbit around his/her body entirely leaving trails of orange light behind them as they fly. These near solid constructions of fire are capable of defending the user from an opponent's jutsu of the same rank(following elemental weaknesses and strengths of course). On a more offensive note, the seven wisps can be commanded to attack the opponent through mental command. On contact with an obstacle, the wisps will deliver blunt force impact and explodes on contact. The explosions resemble an explosive tag with each fireball. Because they are solid they can be deflected as projectiles. This force allows them to break down defenses easily. The flight path of their attacks are completely dependent on the user's wishes. However, once they are sent to do the users' bidding it releases them of their defensive properties and disperses them once they are used. When attacking, the wisps do combined damage equivalent The initial creation of the wisps are incredibly fast, forming immediately after the hand seals for the technique are complete.
Note: Lasts 3 turns if not sent to attack; sending the wisps to attack count as a move.
Note: Can only be taught by Goddess

‡ Declined ‡ A well-worded version of existing techniques.

 

[Priest]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Toe Smash - To Sumash
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: An unothodox Taijutsu where the user channels chakra through their foot and stomps the toes of the target burying only the toes in the ground while shattering the metatarsus.


Fuzen no Henge - Partial Tranformation
Type: Sup
Rank: E
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage: 0
Description: As the name implies, the user is able to transform part of his body instead of his whole body. He could transform just his head to looks like another's. He could transform his hand to become that of a dog's, etc.


Genjutsu: Iwa Kotai - Illusionary Art: Rock Solid
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 0
Description: A simple genjutsu. Whenever, the target punches or kicks towards the user, he is put in a genjutsu where he thinks as he punched/kicked the user, he just punched/kicked a rock solid entity thus his hand/leg is completely broken. In real life, the user has already evaded through a flip or a roll by a distance of 5m.
The victims arm/leg remain broken until he breaks out of the illusion. In real life, the victim would not be able to use the affected arm or leg.

‡ All Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

 

[Nathan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kenjutsu: Kyōjin) - Sword Arts: Assassin's Dagger
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short - Mid (when thrown)
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique is an alternative performance of the Shadow Clone Technique in which the user channels the chakra necessary for the aforementioned clone into a one of their bladed weapons before the blade pasts their target. When the blade is just behind the victim the user will trigger the creation of a shadow clone at the location of the thrown blade. Upon forming the clone, the clone will grasp the projectile blade and stab the opponent in the back, effectively finalizing the assassination. The speed at which the user performs this technique has given the illusion that the user is using Space–Time Ninjutsu on more than one occasion. Additionally, by manipulating the position of the blade via wire strings he can more easily position his blade behind an opponent.
Notes:
- Only usable four times per-match.
- Bladed weapon can range from anything from a kunai to a longsword, tanto, etc...
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

‡ Approved ‡ On the condition you teach me

‡ Declined ‡ Ok, this is a cool technique. Pseudo-FTG for us people who can't teleport. Materializing clones outside of short-range is possible but not like this. You would need some sort of medium. Water, earth or something to form the clone form. Either you can do that or wait until you have Fuuinjutsu to seal a clone inside of your kunai and release it with a single handseal or something.

(Doton: Niidoru Inai Numa) - Earth Release: The Needle Within The Swamp
Type: Offensive
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15 (-5 for each turn active)
Damage: 30
Description: By either using (Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld or (Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River first. The user manipulates the mud beneath their opponent, shaping it into needles that shoot the enemy from various angles. The length, size, number and density of the needles are as desired by the user. The user may kill them by piercing various vital points or crippling them by aiming the legs which the mud is beneath, the latter being incredibly hard to evade through normal means. Furthermore, since the enemy lost balance due to the previous technique, switching is not possible and they are left at the user's mercy. The technique is apparently difficult as it requires the user to shape chakra from a distance and turn mud to solid needles within a very short time frame.
Notes:
- Stays active for three turns, or unless the swamp, or earth flow river is active.
- Must use either one of the required techniques to use this technique.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

‡ Declined ‡ Similar techniques exist.

(Ototon: Damu Hooru) - Sound Release: Dumb Hole
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short (Short - Long for offensive application)
Chakra: 40 (-20 per each turn the Dumb Hole's supplementary application is active)
Damage: 80
Description: This Sound technique was developed by a specialist task force from Otogakure, whose missions almost always required their presence to be unnoticed until after they were done. They developed this technique so they could carry out their missions without fear of attracting attention, while not requiring them to maintain a high level of care or concern for their actions, as this Jutsu prevented them from revealing their presence through sounds they made. One man, known as "The Mime" or "Corazon" was able to use this technique so effectively that he was once able to infiltrate an enemy stronghold, kill the majority of the guards and escape without his presence ever being discovered or detected until he was already long gone. This technique is based off a interesting concept known as the

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. The user starts by gathering Sound Release Chakra either in a specific part of their body, or throughout their entire body. The user then releases this Chakra in the form of a "bubble" around themselves which can be as large or as small as they wish, but it's size is restricted to Short Range of themselves. The bubble consist of high frequency, low energy sound waves, which vibrate at an extremely high frequency, so any noise that the barrier makes is above regular hearing, but this also creates an interesting effect. As the sound waves are vibrating at a higher frequency than most other sounds, especially those that are not created as a result of Sound Release, they act like a barrier for all but the most powerful Sound Waves, making it impossible for sounds from outside the bubble to be perceived inside the bubble. This applies in reverse too, making sounds from inside the bubble impermeable from the outside.

In addition to acting like "soundproofing", Dumb Hole has another application, which is far more violent and destructive than it's more supplementary application. By compressing the same high frequency, low energy Sound Release Chakra in their hand, the user is able to create a much more violent, but controllable Dumb Hole, which visually resembles a Rasengan, that acts like a Black Hole for Sound Waves, drawing in any Sound from the immediate vicinity and trapping it inside the Dumb Hole. Once inside, the user is able to use their own Chakra to amplify and change the Sound trapped within the Dumb Hole, changing it into a sound wave that has low frequency and high energy, or in other words, destructive qualities. Once the user has changed the sound so that is able to act like a destructive Sound Jutsu, they point the Dumb Hole at their designated target and weaken it's surface, causing the sound waves trapped within to violently burst out in the direction of the designated target, releasing them in the form of a destructive wave of Sound.​

Note: This technique's offensive application can only be used three (3) times per battle.
Note: If the offensive application is used, the user must wait two (2) turns before they can use this technique again.
Note: The supplementary application can only be used three (3) times per-match.
Note: The supplementary application stays active for three (3) turns, unless countered, or manually halted by the user. The user can also only use sound techniques below A-rank while this supplementary application is active.
Note: Can only be taught by Nathan.

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving for another mod.
✦ Declined, for one remove the underlined part or condense. It doesn't really have a purpose in the submission and I get that you want to explain some background info but its just making it look bulky for no reason. You talk about the offensive version being controllable and in their hand but later talk about the being "inside" it, making me think you're talking about the full body version being offensive. I'm not really sure about how I feel about the Rasengan-like one; I think Nagato.. has one like that or Oraan, but I'd have to check later. Overlooking that, cap the max range of this to mid range. In addition to this, you have an S rank that can be used 6 times overall. I get it's 3 and 3 but 6 overall is too high for an S rank imo. Make it a cap of 4 or 5 times (depending on how you edit it) in all, including any mix of usages that equals the number. This is like a more powerful Whispers of the Canine canon tech that somehow has more offensive properties lol nice tho. ✦

 

[Glad Of War]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Jigoku sukaru) - Fire Release: Hell Skull

Rank: S-rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After several battles, Hidan great love for Fire made him devised a technique aimed to finish his opponents. After performing the Tiger hand seal, the user will mold a large portion of their Fire chakra and then channel some of this fire chakra at base of their feet whilst condensing it. By releasing it against the ground below, the user would create a upthrust force, that would enable them to be able to propel themselves upwards in a height 7 meters. At that moment in the air, the user would then channel all their dormant fire chakra into their mouth whilst using shape manipulation simultaneously, and transforms it into a condense fire Skull. When this is done, the user would then expel out the condense fire Skull aimed at the opposing target. Just as the Fire skull gets about 1 meters towards the target, The user will manipulate it in such a way the skull would open its mouth, and swallow the target whole. Thus burning them into ashes. Furthermore, since the Fire Skull is coming downwards, it speed would be greatly enhance due to gravity.

Note:
• Can only be done twice per battles.
• The fire skull is quite huge having a height of 4 meters and a diamter of 3 meters.
• Can only be taught by Savage.

‡ Declined ‡ Wrong template. Type before Rank. Put the 2nd note in the description itself. Remove any references to speed or gravity.

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Re-submitting, Remove both references concerning speed and gravity.

(Katon: Jigoku sukaru) - Fire Release: Hell Skull
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After several battles, Hidan great love for Fire made him devised a technique aimed to finish his opponents. After performing the Tiger hand seal, the user will mold a large portion of their Fire chakra and then channel some of this fire chakra at base of their feet whilst condensing it. By releasing it against the ground below, the user would create a upthrust force, that would enable them to be able to propel themselves upwards in a height 7 meters. At that moment in the air, the user would then channel all their fire chakra into their lungs whilst using shape manipulation simultaneously and transforms it into a condense fire Skull. When this is done, the user would then expel out the condense fire Skull aimed at the opposing target. Just as the Fire skull gets about 1 meters towards the target, The user will manipulate it in such a way the skull would open its mouth, and swallow the target whole thus burning them into ashes. The fire skull is quite huge having a height of 4 meters and a diameter of 3 meters.

Note:
• Can only be done twice per battles.
• No S-Rank or above Fire in the user's next turn
• Can only be taught by Savage.

‡ Approved ‡

(Raiton: Sabēji shi) Lightning Release: Savage Death.
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The achieve this technique, the user will execute a series of hand seals precisely Ox → Rabbit → Dog and mold quite a large amount of their raiton chakra. Then they would slam both hands simultaneously into the earth crust below, releasing condense lightning chakra directly under their opposing target. A twin set of lightning chakra shaped in ropes will sprout out from the earth beneath the opponent, binding and electrocuting them. Thus voiding any further movement. When this is done, the user will continue and manipulates his lightning chakra, causing a cuboid made of sharp lightning lasers sprouting from the earth again at a radius of 360 degrees, that would completely encase the opponent. This cuboid would start getting smaller at a fast pace, and multilate the opponent into numerous pieces once upon contact.

Note:
• Can be use twice per battles.
• Can only be taught by Savage.

(Futon: Jaianto barikēdo) Wind Release: Giant Wind barricade
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Quite a simple technique, the user would perform a ram hand seal, and mold his chakra whilst using Nature transformation, turning it into Futon chakra. By thrusting forth both hands towards the opponent, the user will form two giant barricade of wind at the height of 10 meters intertwine together. In consonance, the user will drop both hands at the same time, Thus releasing the barricade of wind that falls and compress the opposing target with bone crushing force.

Note:
• Can be use three times per battle.
• Alternatively, the user can lace the barricade of wind laced with sharp petals that cause further deadly injuries.
• Can only be taught by Savage.
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‡ Both Declined ‡ Similar to existing techniques.

 

[Beifong]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Koton: Tokui no Tristan) – Steel Release: Triumph of Tristan
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (60 damage if used to attack the opponent)
Description: This technique essentially allows anything that's inanimate and solid in composition touched by the user to be converted into black steel. As a result the user can make use of anything he classifies as a weapon, from sticks to the weapons of others (excluding Custom Weapons). If used on multiple tools/objects collectively they all amount to the power of an A-Rank.

Note: Lasts three turns and cannot be used on objects larger than the user or with a heavier mass.
Note: Can only be used four times per battle

(Kōton: Mukankaku no Yoroi) - Steel Release: Impervious Armour
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This Technique allows the user to turn part their body into black steel, making that part of their body invulnerable to most weapons and taijutsu attacks. But due to its metal properties it leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.
Note: Can only render Taijutsu Techniques A rank and below useless.

Both based on the above jutsu.

(Koton: Kyouyuu no Gawain) – Steel Release: Gallantry of Gawain
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is often seen as a close counterpart to Steel Release: Impervious Armour. The user will use their koton chakra to turn part(s) of their body into black steel, making those part of their body invulnerable to most weapons and taijutsu attacks. He will then shape those parts of his body in a variety of basic bladed-weapons in order to give this technique its offensive edge. This technique can do something as simple as make the edge of the user's arms and/or legs into swords (look at image for a visual reference) or it can even reshape whole limbs into any sort of bladed weapon e.g. swords, spears, lances, tridents, etc. Due to it's metal properties it leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

Note: Lasts three turns
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Can only render non-elemental Taijutsu Techniques S rank and below useless.

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✦ Both Approved, made a few edits ✦

(Koton: Hakari no Doragon) – Steel Release: Scales of the Dragon
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+30 chakra to earth-based techniques)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will activate an ability which allows them to infuse Koton chakra into the ground in order to augment their own Earth Release techniques for the following four turns. Whenever the user utilizes a technique which is created/emerges from the ground a coating of black steel scales will envelop it as it rises, the result being the fully surfaced technique being completely clad in a chassis of glossy metal. It could be said that the technique is "wearing an armour" as the glossy coating boosts the defensive abilities of the technique considerably. The armour of scales "worn" by the technique is the equivalent of an A-Ranked Steel technique and is purely defensive in usage (meaning it will not boost the damage techniques can inflict). Affected techniques do not become dual-elemental, simply layered. For example, using this on a B-Rank Earth technique will make it so the exterior is an A-Rank Steel technique and the interior is a B-Rank Earth technique. Destroying the exterior of metallic scales will expose the underlying rock and this will leave a B-Rank Earth technique. While seemingly powerful, an S-Rank Lightning technique would destroy a S-Rank Earth technique coated with this A-Rank Steel armour and still continue onwards. The main purpose of this technique is to make the user's own earth techniques superior to that of the opponent's. It is still vulnerable to Lightning. Formation of this metallic armour is passive and does not result in the premature termination of earth techniques which require maintenance such as the Earth Dragons and the Stone Golems. Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this technique's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only initiated when the user utilizes another earth-based jutsu. This technique's effects do not have to be applied to every earth-based jutsu used from the ground while this ability is active. Only the initial activation of this technique counts towards the user's jutsu per turn limit.

Note: Lasts four turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Does not work with KG/CE variants
Note: Cannot be used on Forbidden Rank Techniques
Note: Cannot be used with mud or sand-based techniques

‡ Pending ‡ Leaving all for Madara

✦ Declined, I said a few cycles ago I wasn't approving anymore of these instant activation techs, getting tired of seeing that concept used/abused in customs ✦

 

[Summer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kessho: Doragon Tsume) - Crystal: Dragon Talons
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user begins by forming a single handsign and changes her finger nails into crystal talons which extend up to 1" past finger length. These talons can extend at fast speeds leaving very small room for error when evading freeform slashing and can retract back to normal just as fast. The user also has the ability to at will shoot the nails like senbon from there hands to mid range, By doing this the fingers will revert back to normal and not be crystal anymore.

Restrictions
: the user can use this ability 3 times in battle
: the user cannot extend and retract more than twice for each way in the same turn.
: can maintain talons for two turns
Note:Can only be used by guren.

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‡ Update Approved ‡



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(Shoton: Doragon Hakari) - Crystal: Dragon Scales
Type: Supplementary/offensive
Rank: S rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40(15 to maintain)
Damage Points: 80 (+10 taijutsu)
Description:
This jutsu requires three handsigns and then the user's crystal chakra will crystallize the water in the air surrounding the user's body. The user can control which portions of the body they would like scales to be on as well instead of full body. The scales are not very thick but are very dense Crystal, and dark pink colored in nature. These scales are in no way turning her body into Crystal but are making a layer of scales over her skin, which can move like dragon scales would thus giving considerable movements. The scales can be used to block taijutsu up to B rank and blunt force ninjutsu up to C rank. The scales can be shattered by Guren if they become a hindrance to her during combat.
As a full on release Guren can form one more single handsign and fully release the scales shooting them from her body in every direction within short range.


Restrictions
: can only be used twice per battle

: lasts for three turns

: two turn cool down required once the Jutsu ends

:cannot use other ninjutsu while this is active.

Note:Can only be used by guren.

☼ Declined ☼

Not sure why this is S-ranked, the defensive abilities make this pretty much B-rank, and I don't see these scales causing S-rank damage. I think bringing it down to A-rank would be fine.

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(Shoton: Doragon Hakari) - Crystal: Dragon Scales
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 to maintain)
Damage Points: 60(+10 taijutsu)
Description:
This jutsu requires two handsigns and then the user grows Crystal like scales out of all there sweat pores on there body. The user can control which portions of the body they would like scales to be on as well instead of full body. The scales are not very thick but are very dense Crystal, and dark pink colored in nature. These scales are in no way turning her body into Crystal but are making a layer of scales over her skin, which can move like dragon scales would thus giving considerable movements. The scales can be used to block taijutsu up to B rank and blunt force ninjutsu up to C rank. The scales can be shattered by Guren if they become a hindrance to her during combat. They will also slow your movements down by -1 of your current speed but it will give you a +10 damage when used with taijutsu.
As a full on release Guren can form one more single handsign sharpening all the scales to sword like points, point straight off the users body and fully release the scales shooting them from her body in every direction within short range.


Restrictions
: can only be used twice per battle

:cannot use elements other than Crystal while this is active.

Note:Can only be used by guren.

‡ Approved ‡


(Shoton Senki)Crystal Annihilate
Type:attack
Rank:S rank
Range:short-long
Chakra:40(30 per turn active)
Damage:/ (swords A rank 60)
Description:
This jutsu requires 6 handsigns and then a great amount of chakra to build and maintain this jutsu. This jutsu is one of Guren's last ditch attempts at truly killing and vowing to put someone In there grave. She forms the handsigns and releases an incredible amount of chakra creating a giant dome of dark Crystal inside the dome is 1000 circling swords make of pink Crystal which hover inside the dome. The swords cannot be sent at the enemy in no way but the user can hold out an open hand and willfully manipulate the swords into her hands so effortlessly. Guren can only have up to two swords being used at one time, and while the swords are A rank in strength they do A rank damage as well. The swords will glow with Crystal chakra and also light up the dome with light from the glowing swords. The dome itself can be shattered but the enemy would have to take into effect that the swords are hovering around the perimeter of the dome and would take some of the damage as well.
If a sword is shattered while being used the user will simply open their empty hand and manipulate a sword into it from the perimeter of the dome.

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Restrictions:

+ cannot use any other ninjutsu while this is active.

+ cannot use Crystal jutsu's for three turns after this jutsu dispels.

+Stays active for three turns.

+can only be used by Guren.

☼ Declined ☼

The concept is okay, but having an unlimited number of A-rank swords is a bit much, even if they can't do much.



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(kuchiyose Sennin Entou ) Summoning Jutsu Sages of Cylinders Jose/Quervo
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S rank
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
These two meerkats that once summoned to the field are both 6 feet tall and have an athletic build Jose and Quervo both males. Neither of them carries any weapons but they have the ability to transform into two special cylindrical canister's which are both open on the top, and 10 feet in diamter and also length. Once per turn these two meerkats once transformed can recieve any elemental chakra blast and suck it into one cylindrical canister and then fire it out from the other canister. These two meerkats can only transport elemental chakra between themselves, meaning no weapons can pass through one canister and out of the other. They can be aimed in any direction even back at the enemy sending elemental attacks back to them once per turn. After the attack has been sent away the meerkats change back to there regular forms. These two meerkats are able to use a elemental transportation jutsu because they have a mental link between the two of them which enables the transfer between summons. One could say they were the two most famous pets of the legendary sage who use this ability to transport booze to his mansion.

Restrictions:

+ once per turn absorb and regurgitate attack.

+ can only be used against A rank and below attacks.

+ remain on the field for two turns

+Must be contract signer to summon

‡ Both Pending ‡ Leaving for Typhon.

☼ Declined DNR ☼

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton/Same Ninjutsu: Eidothea's Hoyo) – Water Release/Shark Ninjutsu: Eidothea's Embrace
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30(-100 per usage)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing 3 handseals, the user focuses chakra into his shark tattoo and extend his arm forward. A gushing stream of water appears out of his arm. This wave of water is extremely sticky by nature and adheres to any surface. This water stream contains many tiny sharks that travel with sticky water. This sticky water has two uses one that is used on jutsu and one that is used on the opponent. When used on the opponent, the sticky water latches on to their body or any part of the body that it intercepts. At this point, the miniature sharks(thousands of them all about the size of a pebble) swarm on to the opponent latch on to him. They do this by digging their teeth into his/her skin. The sharks begin to take chakra from the opponent and siphon it through the sticky water connected to the users' arm. At this point, the user would be absorbing the chakra directly from the opponent at a distance, using the same Tiny sharks to transmit the chakra into his own system. Due to this being a streaming water jutsu, it lasts as long as the user can sustain the technique and as a result has to cancel it if he wishes to use another jutsu that requires chakra. Interaction with a jutsu is a tad different. The user will begin the same process but use the sharks to drain chakra from the jutsu itself, namely other water jutsu of the same rank, fire techniques and wind techniques. As the jutsu collides with the sticky water, it begins to lose the chakra that was placed in it making it all together weaker and weaker until it is snuffed out. Unlike when it was being used against a human, the chakra from the jutsu does not fuel the users' own chakra.
Note: This jutsu can be used 3 times per battle; must have a 3 turn waiting limit between usages
Note: No Water/Shark jutsu S rank or above in the next turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Daemon; must have signed the shark contract

‡ Declined ‡ Too similar to the Chakra Absorption technique.

 

[Vegeta]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton/Fuuton - Hādo haisen) - Lighting/Wind Style - Hard wiring
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S-Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40/50
Damage Points: 80/90 (-20 to user if Forbidden)
Description: As seen with Swift release, lighting and wind can indeed be combined with precise chakra control. This jutsu acts upon that notion but in a different form. The user begins by molding Raiton chakra through their body releasing it outwards unfocused. The user then quickly makes one seal and molds their fuuton chakra through out their body as well, releasing and manipulating it to closely surround the lightning chakra, like the rubber insulation around electrical wiring. Once achieved, the wind will act to shape the lightning into any form the user desires, as the lightning will be trapped inside the wind chakra unable to penetrate thru it's natural insulation (Could be in a spherical shape, or like a whip, or could surround the users body like Lighting armor). The user can extend it outwards in an attack up to mid range, the wind chakra carrying slicing properties like a sword however, once the attack strikes anything, the wind chakra, while cutting, will split an opening, like a break in an electrical wire, allowing the lightning chakra to escape the break and shock anything it touches (comes out as an unfocused blast, and the user can will the wind chakra to split on it's own without contacting anything). Another usage would be surrounding oneself in the lightning/wind chakra as protection, however doing so slices up the user as the wind chakra surrounding the lightning is dangerously close to them making this usage Forbidden.
~Notes~
- Must be taught by -Vegeta
- Usable 3x per battle at S rank
- Usable 1x per battle at Forbidden rank
- Uses 2 moves, meaning only one other jutsu may be used the same turn
- No other lighting or wind the turn this is used, and none above A rank the next turn
- Must have Lighting/Wind/Ninjutsu completed to use as precise chakra control is needed
- If Forbidden Ranked in strength, the user takes slicing damage to the body and will not be able to use wind/lightning elements for 2 turns after

‡ Declined ‡ You need Yin/Yang to control two natures at once.

(Doton - Taigāpitto) - Earth Style - Tiger pit
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user molds and manipulates their Doton chakra thru their legs to the ground, streaming it to a 5x5x5 meter squared radius a 1/2 meter below the ground directly in front of them, changing the earth into a fine course material almost like sand. After creation, the material is just strong enough to support the solid ground directly above it. Any additional weight that touches the ground will cause it to collapse downwards upon itself, whatever was on top becomes trapped in the rubble/deep sand like earth.

~Notes~
- Usable 1x per battle
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

‡ Declined ‡ Similar to Jiraiya's Hidden Earth Trap

(Doton - Riborubingutānsutairu) - Earth Style - Revolving Turnstile
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user sends a pulse of doton chakra into the ground which pools under the opponent until the user either stomps his foot or taps his foot lightly against the ground. When the user stomps or taps his foot against the ground a circular piece of ground with a one to five meter diameter spins below the opponent in either a clockwise or counter-clockwise motion at a rapid pace. If timed perfectly this can leave the opponent wide open to be attacked from the front because as the ground turns the opponent is forced to turn with it if his feet are placed upon the ground. This jutsu works a lot like (Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core but instead of moving the ground up or down it rotates it along with everything on the rotated piece of ground.
~Notes~
- Can be used 3x per battle
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

‡ Declined ‡ Similar to Selendrile's Rotator Plate

 

[21 Savage]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Inuzuka Clan Techniques.
( Kaiten suru Surasshu) – Whirling Slash
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: After performing the four legged technique and once the target is within range, the user will leap into the air and slash in all directions. The technique is best suited against aerial based opponents.
- Can only be used by members of the Inuzuka clan.

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(Ōkami Pisuton) – Wolf Piston
Type: Defensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: A technique used by Ninken where they will first jump into the air while focusing their chakra into and around their tails to form the ‘base’ and ‘nose’ of a hammer with a piston on the back. Upon impact with the ground, they will trigger the tail-like piston, and create small fissures that appear in the form of a white beam of energy that travel along the ground, and converge toward and under the target. This technique is used to interrupt an opponent’s jutsu that requires them to stand still while gathering chakra. This can be done alone but, will count as a D-rank.
- Can be used up to four times and by a maximum of 3 dogs.

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(Supin Kōgeki) – Spin Attack
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: After using the four legged technique, the user will focus more into his claws before spinning forward and hitting multiple targets with his nails by controlling the path of his chakra infused slashes, hitting the enemies positioned on the user’s sides as well as the ones in front.
- Can only be used by members of the Inuzuka clan.

 

[Klad]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fuuton/Suiton: Mawari - Wind/Water Release: Rotation
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: To start off, the user will perform three handseals and start gathering great amounts of air around a specified point in the battlefield. In order to do no harm to the user himself, these air currents will need to be formed mid range from the user. When the user has made sure he fills this requiriment, contninously he will apply more chakra to the winds and give it a shape of a gigantic drill which spirals in a right side manner. Due to wind’s natural properties, it will gather around dust, debris and little rocks, which will raise up some obstacles between both sides. After finishing this process, the user will proceed by kneading his water chakra and also repeat the same process they did with the wind. Leaving up a gap of few centimeters between the primary wind/dusty layer, the user will perform another two swift handseals and concentrate his water chakra and engulf the wind drill with a thick, fluid water layer which will spiral in the opposite side of the wind, which is left. Maintaining this position, the user directs the combined elements towards his target, and upon impact the combination will burst upon them. Due to having spiraled on different manners, the disrupted wind and water flow would crash onto the target in a rampaging fashion, which would send off the caught target all around where the technique covers, simultaneously massively harming them due to the force of the impact and the elements respective properties.

Notes:

-Can only be used twice with a three turns cooldown
-Applying the combinations restrictions, you use two moves with this.
-Only teachable by Klad

‡ Declined ‡ DNR.

 

[ZandaT]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuinjutsu/Doton: Chikyū Ningyo no Ishi Suisō)- Sealing/Earth Release: The Earth Mermaid's Stone Aquarium
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user first will perform the required hand seals, Dragon → Boar. They then will direct their chakra into the ground, in the necessary location. The user will mold the appropriate creature, and cause it to "leap" out from the ground, where the creature opens its mouth and swallows the opponent's technique up to S-rank. This is done through several seals located inside the creature’s mouth which initially seal the chakra. By having multiple tags spaced along the circumference of the mouth, it reduces the concentrated force of the absorbed technique at a single point. Once swallowed, secondary seals located throughout the inside of the creature labeled with the kanji for, “Secrete” are activated. Depending on the element absorbed (cannot swallow lightning-based attacks), these seals release the chakra onto the creature’s exterior, covering it in an armor of the absorbed element. After the creature enters the ground once its first leap is finished, it performs another leap at the opponent, covered in the armor. (Ex: The creature absorbs an A-rank fire attack; the fire is secreted through its skin to cover it in an armor of A-rank fire + A-rank earth) This technique works best on techniques that have a mostly defined shape, and not on huge scale attacks like Wind Release: Pressure Damage.
Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
Note: Usable twice per battle; Counts as two moves of the user
Note: No S-rank or higher earth on the same turn; No sealing above B-rank next turn

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 Declined  Then I think you have your own answer... Resubmit if you ever become able to submit S-Rank Fuuin but still its too much overall.

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(Fuinjutsu/Doton: Chikyū Ningyo no Ishi Suisō)- Sealing/Earth Release: The Earth Mermaid's Stone Aquarium
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user first will perform the required hand seals, Dragon → Boar. They then will direct their chakra into the ground, in the necessary location. The user will mold the appropriate creature, and cause it to "leap" out from the ground, where the creature opens its mouth and swallows the opponent's technique up to S-rank. The aspect of how and where it leaps from the earth is up to the user who can freely adjust the creature to the jutsu being targeted, the creature swallowing from behind, underneath, head on, from the sides, or even above, landing unscathed. Its ability to absorb techniques is done through several seals located inside and along the creature’s mouth which initially seals the chakra away without the target technique actually coming in contact with the creature protecting it from harm as it performs its duties. Once swallowed, secondary seals located throughout the inside of the creature labeled with the kanji for, “Secrete” are activated. Depending on the element absorbed (cannot swallow lightning-based attacks), these seals release the chakra onto the creature’s exterior, covering it in an armor of the absorbed element. After the creature enters the ground once its first leap is finished, it performs another leap at the opponent, covered in the armor. (Ex: The creature absorbs an A-rank fire attack; the fire is secreted through its skin to cover it in an armor of A-rank fire + A-rank earth) This technique works best on techniques that have a mostly defined shape, and not on huge scale attacks like Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave.
NOTES
►Jutsu lasts for two turns, or until it is destroyed
►Usable twice per battle
►Counts as two moves of the user
►No S-rank or higher earth on the same turn
►No sealing above B-rank next turn
►Can only be taught by ZandaT

‡ Declined ‡ You can't resubmit techniques made by other people.

(Fuuinjutsu: Baria-hō) Sealing Arts: Barrier Law
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: Barrier Law is a unique fuuinjutsu technique that is similar to the Dead Demon Consuming Seal due to the technique's involvement of a spiritual being named Pànduàn, meaning judgment, which is a tall spirit with a green hue as well as pure black eyes that matches the long black robe it wears that drags along the floor. Made by an Uzumaki clan member before their village's destruction, the jutsu was based off of a game used to train aspiring Uzumaki shinobi as they tested their limits in battle while obeying a set of rules depending on the circumstances called. The game had three different ways to play, each field holding their own set of rules, and those field's became the three different laws of Baria-hō. The Law of Energy, Body, and Mind. This jutsu serves as a pact between Pànduàn, his summoner, and those within the technique's range, a pact to follow the rules established upon summoning Pànduàn who acts as a non biased referee between opposing sides using its powers to set the field as well as enforce the rules of the game. This jutsu can be activated by performing the first 4 core hand signs followed by the last which changes based on the game chosen to play, and with the waving of the fifth hand sign the user will summon Pànduàn within short range above their location. Upon being summoned Pànduàn rises at swift speeds towards long range as it erects an A ranked barrier over the battlefield with special chakra suppression and visual blocking properties that allows the summoner and their opponent to remain hidden from outside disturbances as they battle under the conditions of the game. Advance chakra sensors and dojutsu users would be able to see/sense the barrier at most, but its content within will remain hidden as the game commences, and users with normal sensory would see nothing but the terrain as if the battling shinobi were not there but the barrier can still be touched if stumbled upon seemingly acting like an invisible construct to them. This is Pànduàn's domain, and within it he monitors the game as it commences using his powers to bestow punishment on those who break the rules, rules established in the mind of both players upon the barrier's formation. The spiritual being has an A ranked durability allowing it to only be killed by an equal power that matches its intangible energy based body composition, but each unsuccessful attempt results in the loss of 25 chakra points. The law of Baria-hō established must be followed or else punishment will be bestowed, and the jutsu lasts for 4 turns upon activation.
Law of Body | Dog
While the Law of Body is in play the players are only allowed to use non chakra based techniques on the battlefield for the duration of this jutsu. Basic hand to hand combat, techniques utilizing weapons and basic skill, etc. are primarily used while active, as long as it doesn't require the user to mold or release chakra in any form. This field in Baria-hō is primarily used to show a shinobi's resolve and raw talents as they battle without chakra, yet using chakra isn't taken away from the players, but in doing so they will receive punishment. While this game is in play the punishment for using chakra related techniques is a 50% increase on chakra consumption which can be detrimental to any shinobi in the long run.
Law of Mind | Snake
The Law of Mind is quite special due to the fact that when it is activated it strips both players of any active or passive sensing they may have as the game promotes the usage of the basic 5 senses in battle. One must be true to themselves, opponent, and their surroundings while this game is in play making illusionary/sensing skills tabooed while active. While the Law of Mind is in play the players should battle straight up, with a clear perception, with no tricks or schemes whatsoever. Un top of sensing being jammed while active, players who use illusionary techniques will have their own illusion rebounded upon them the moment it would have taken effect within their opponent. This is the punishment of breaking the Law of Mind.
Law of Energy | Ram
Similar to the Law of Mind in terms of jamming a certain skill while in play, while this game is active the players will have the choice of using only two elements on top of their other basic skills while in battle. Law of Mind primarily focuses on elemental expertise as it limits the players from using all five of the basic five or any other element while in battle. Once activated both players will mentally choose their two elements of choice, Pànduàn knowing all thoughts while in his domain, before partaking in battle with their opponent. The elements that can be chosen are not subjected to the basic five alone, but if an elemental KG is chosen for example that does not mean that the player can use the two elements it is composed of separately. When trying to use an element not chosen the user will still expend chakra points, the jutsu even starting to form on the battlefield, before it gives out before even reaching half of its potential making it a waste of time and energy.
NOTES
► Can only be used 1x per battle
►No other fuuinjutsu can be used while active
►No jutsu can be used above S rank for two turns after activating this jutsu
►No jutsu can be used above A rank one turn after this jutsu has ran its course
►Can only be taught by Zanda

‡ Both Pending ‡ Thank God I don't have to check these.
Declined. Really neat jutsu, but it needs some guiding imo. First, put a maximum amount of turns because having this up forever could sway too much in your favor.

Second: Law of Mind: Snake should be different. If a KG is chosen, the user should automatically take up those two natures or else he wouldn't be able to use that KG in the first place. Not only that, but I would just restrict KGs in general and just let them choose two. Also: who goes first? I assume you do as it's your technique, so the opponent could just choose accordingly. Can you still use customs techniques? What about space time techniques? You would not be able to forbid these from using them to get out of this domain would be in essence the perfect way to use it and you can not so easily bend space-time as to say an A-rank being would be able to stop it.

Third: what happens if they attack the Pànduàn? Sure, you can say it's not possible, but lets be honest it might as well just be "friendly fire".

I like the core concept a lot but it really needs some tinkering to get the loopholes out.

Also: please use some spacing. It's quite difficult to read big blocks of text this way.

(Fuuinjutsu: Baria-hō) Sealing Arts: Barrier Law
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: Barrier Law is a unique fuuinjutsu technique that is similar to the Dead Demon Consuming Seal due to the technique's involvement of a spiritual being named Pànduàn, meaning judgment, which is a tall spirit with a green hue as well as pure black eyes that matches the long black robe it wears that drags along the floor. Made by an Uzumaki clan member before their village's destruction, the jutsu was based off of a game used to train aspiring Uzumaki shinobi as they tested their limits in battle while obeying a set of rules depending on the circumstances called. The game had three different ways to play, each field holding their own set of rules, and those field's became the three different laws of Baria-hō. The Law of Energy, Body, and Mind. This jutsu serves as a pact between Pànduàn, his summoner, and those within the technique's range, a pact to follow the rules established upon summoning Pànduàn who acts as a non biased referee between opposing sides using its powers to set the field as well as enforce the rules of the game. This jutsu can be activated by performing the first 4 core hand signs followed by the last which changes based on the game chosen to play, and with the waving of the fifth hand sign the user will summon Pànduàn within short range above their location. Upon being summoned Pànduàn rises at swift speeds towards long range as it erects an A ranked barrier over the battlefield with special chakra suppression and visual blocking properties that allows the summoner and their opponent to remain hidden from outside disturbances as they battle under the conditions of the game. Advance chakra sensors and dojutsu users would be able to see/sense the barrier at most, but its content within will remain hidden as the game commences, and users with normal sensory would see nothing but the terrain as if the battling shinobi were not there but the barrier can still be touched if stumbled upon seemingly acting like an invisible construct to them. This is Pànduàn's domain, and within it he monitors the game as it commences using his powers to bestow punishment on those who break the rules, rules established in the mind of both players upon the barrier's formation. The spiritual being has an A ranked durability allowing it to only be killed by an equal power that matches its intangible energy based body composition, but each unsuccessful attempt, or accidental strike, results in the loss of 25 chakra points, and do to the spiritual beings powers it is quite difficult. Being a neutral factor in the game all of Pànduàn's abilities are defensive and only able to protect him alone. Pànduàn is able to create and sustain an A ranked barrier around himself when threatened, fueled by concentrated chakra that can block jutsu of the same rank, but he is left vulnerable afterwards as he has to wait a turn in order to use it again. The law of Baria-hō established must be followed or else punishment will be bestowed.

Law of Body | Dog
While the Law of Body is in play the players are only allowed to use non chakra based techniques on the battlefield for the duration of this jutsu. Basic hand to hand combat, techniques utilizing weapons and basic skill, etc. are primarily used while active, as long as it doesn't require the user to mold or release chakra in any form. This field in Baria-hō is primarily used to show a shinobi's resolve and raw talents as they battle without chakra, yet using chakra isn't taken away from the players, but in doing so they will receive punishment. While this game is in play the punishment for using chakra related techniques is a 50% increase on chakra consumption which can be detrimental to any shinobi in the long run.

Law of Mind | Snake
The Law of Mind is quite special due to the fact that when it is activated it strips both players of any active or passive sensing they may have as the game promotes the usage of the basic 5 senses in battle. One must be true to themselves, opponent, and their surroundings while this game is in play making illusionary/sensing skills tabooed while active. While the Law of Mind is in play the players should battle straight up, with a clear perception, with no tricks or schemes whatsoever. Un top of sensing being jammed while active, players who use illusionary techniques will have their own illusion rebounded upon them the moment it would have taken effect within their opponent. This is the punishment of breaking the Law of Mind.

Law of Energy | Ram
Similar to the Law of Mind in terms of jamming a certain skill while in play, while this game is active the players will have the choice of using only two elements on top of their other basic skills while in battle. Law of Mind primarily focuses on elemental expertise as it limits the players from using all five of the basic five or any other special/KG element while in battle. Once activated both players will mentally choose their two elements of choice, mentally due to Pànduàn knowing all thoughts while in his domain, before partaking in battle with their opponent. The elements that can be chosen are subjected to the basic five alone, and while this law is active no other element other than the two chosen can be used. The punishment for trying to use an element not chosen results in the user still expending chakra points, the jutsu even starting to form on the battlefield, before it gives out without even reaching a third of its potential making it a waste of time and chakra.

NOTES
► Can only be used 1x per battle
►Jutsu lasts for 4 turns upon activation
►Custom jutsu are subjected to the rules of the Barrier Law technique
►The opponent goes first in all games since according to the rules they would have to react to this technique being used
►Techniques, like S/T jutsu and similar transportational jutsu, can be used to leave Pànduàn's domain ultimately ending the technique since it is a 2 man game
►No further fuuinjutsu can be used while active
►No jutsu can be used above S rank for two turns after activating this jutsu
►No Fuuinjutsu can be used above A rank one turn after this jutsu has ran its course
►Both the opponent and the user itself are subject to the rules of the game.
►Can only be taught by ZandaT

Approved. Gj. Added a little rules saying you are both subject to the rules of the game as I might have overlooked a sneaky edit in which you might have stated otherwise. U_U precaution.


(Genjutsu: Ekitai no shintō) Illusionary Arts: Liquid Penetration
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: (80 mental stress)
Description: Liquid Penetration is a high skilled illusion that can only be triggered once the opponent is submerged in a liquid preferably, but not limited to, water. Triggered by waving 4 hand seals as the opponent is moving within the water, they will notice their own movements becoming increasingly laggish as the water pressure around them seemingly increases ultimately prohibiting their movement as well as making them surcumb to the sensation of an immensely growing pressure pressing against their body also holding them in place. The rising pressure can be compared to the feeling of being buried by numerous rocks that continually pile on the target, but in the genjutsu the growing pain will be felt nonstop on all sides of the body until it is replaced by a greater sensation of pain caused by the next step of the illusion. The surrounding liquid will then forcefully and swiftly penetrate every hole within the target's body ranging from pores, mouth, nose, etc., filling their inner body cavity with water damaging skin, muscles, and organs within the genjutsu, the target feeling every aspect of internal damage in detail as the illusion makes them simulate near death pain. As this happens the target's body responds to the penetration by swelling up as if they were an Akimichi clan member growing to a very large boulder like size as the illusion simultaneously takes the target's eyesight replacing it with a white realm in which their most cherishable past memories flashes before them, and before they know it they reach the apex of their body enlargement where they then seemingly explode. Their consciousness drifting into a vast nothingness lost for all eternity. In reality the target is unable to move while they are submerged in the water which can lead to expiration of oxygen and ultimately drowning as they fall victim to the illusion's effects, and since the level of the genjutsu is so high, even if a large amount of water enters their body they wouldn't feel the effects of drowning since their senses are currently severed from reality. If the genjutsu takes effect and the opponent didn't have an instant defense yet the opponent has still broken the illusion they would still be somewhat dazed and sluggish due to the mental stress that their mind has somewhat undergone.
NOTES
►Can be used 2x per battle
►User cannot use genjutsu within the same turn
►No genjutsu above A rank in the next turn
►This jutsu has a 3 turn cooldown afterwards
►Can only be taught by ZandaT


‡ Both Pending ‡ Leaving for Wesobi.
Declined. The last part is what makes it declinable. The level of genjutsu being so high that even suffocation won't end it? It doesn't work that way. The genjutsu is ok considering you already need the opponent to be under water, but it would just counter itself at some point. Remove that part and it's fine really.

 

[Wesobi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Ototon: Hi no owari | Sound Release: Fire's Destruction
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Using low frequency/tone sound waves, the user nullifies any incoming kind of fire, be it that they are infused with chakra not.
Note: Can only be used 4 times and can nullify up to S-rank fire techniques
Note: Can not use any other sound techniques during the same turn.
Note: due to the range of the soundwaves and the kind (low tones) it can only stop techniques that are in mid range or short range. Techniques that travel from long range can only be stopped once they are at mid-range of the user.

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[Houdinii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Seizon Honnou)-Earth Release: Survival Instinct
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
This is a jutsu that was made specifically for use upon allied summoning creatures. The user will perform one hand seal and focus their chakra into the summoned animal, by doing so they can create an earthen coating over part of the animal (arm, leg, tail etc). By doing so they can protect that limb from attack while also allowing the animal to use it to augment their physical attacks, giving it more utility or killing threat. The earth can take multiple forms, sticky mud that upon contact will cause the target to stick to the creatures limb, unable to move. This makes it much easier for the animal to bind or attack the target while they are stuck. The earth can also be formed into a dense coating that protects from attacks (following elemental adv/disadv) that can be shaped into any form the user wishes though it cannot be bigger than short range from the creature. This technique can only cover one limb or body part at a time

Note:
~The user must have contact with the creature to use this technique
~The earth coating lasts until destroyed or the animal is dispersed
~Can only use one form of the covering at a time and changing from one to the other requires another move
~Can only be used 3 times
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

‡ Declined ‡ You didn't specify how this earthen coating is formed. Is it formed from the user's body and spreads over the creature or does it form from the ground? I don't understand the sticky mud bit. I imagine this as a solid rock coating. Do you mean the rocky coating is covered in mud? If so, clarify that. However, using this mud will be problematic. It will bind to anything it touches, not just the opponent. So if this coating is formed over one's leg, walking becomes impossible and your summon is essentially pinned to the ground. Personally I'd just make this solid rock only, abandon the mud entirely.

I thought about it and agreed removed the sticky mud

(Doton: Seizon Honnou)-Earth Release: Survival Instinct
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
This is a jutsu that was made specifically for use upon allied summoning creatures. The user will perform one hand seal and focus their chakra into the summoned animal, by doing so they can create an earthen coating that seemingly grows from the animals skin over the part of the animal (arm, leg, tail etc). This protects that limb from attack while also allowing the animal to use it to augment their physical attacks, giving it more utility or killing threat. The earth is formed into a dense coating that protects from attacks (following elemental adv/disadv) that can be shaped into any form the user wishes though it cannot be bigger than short range from the creature. This technique can only cover one limb or body part at a time. The animal can also release the coating from itself simply by focusing its own chakra into the earth that is covering them, causing it to fall off quickly and harmlessly.

Note:
~The user must have contact with the creature to use this technique
~The earth coating lasts until destroyed, released or the animal is dispersed
~Can only be used 3 times
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

‡ Declined ‡ You can't use Earth like this. Earth can only be created from one's own body or the ground. The user can't grow this from their summon's body. If the summon has the earth affinity, they can perform this themselves but as it is, this won't work.

New Submission:

(Katon: Furea Betsuji)-Fire Release: Flare Mishap
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30 (+15 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description:
The user of this technique will focus their Katon chakra and active this technique, which stays active for a set amount of time. The techniques effects will activate whenever the user wishes, as he can also choose not to utilise it. So that after activating this technique, the user can direct the technique to target a pre-existing fire source or fire technique. By doing so this changes the nature of the fire so that it is now explosive, as seen in some other fire techniques. So that on impact or as it is released/burning, the technique will detonate into a concussive wave of flames outward from the techniques current position. If struck by this technique not only would the target be burned by the flames but also receive great blunt force damage from the force of the explosion. The explosion travels up to mid range from its origin and by utilising their chakra the user can angle the explosion to whatever direction needed so as to maximise or limit the area affected.

Note:
~Can only be used 3 times
~The technique lasts for 4 turns
~There can only be a maximum of 4 individual explosions
~Cannot use fire techniques above S rank in the same turn
~Cannot use an enemies technique as a source of fire unless it is no longer active(being manipulated or chakra present)
~The point from which the explosion orginates can be anywhere from Short to Long range, but the explosion itself only travels up to Mid range from its origin
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

‡ Declined ‡ Edward attempted this the previous cycle or the cycle before that.

 

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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kokoro no Anzen-sei)-Safety of Mind
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: 40, -10 per turn.
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will focus chakra within their own mind, creating a sort of mental shield that protects the user from attacks that damage or take control of the user's mind. This technique works by isolating the user's mind with chakra and rejecting foreign chakra that seeks to directly harm or control it. Should the user be hit by one of these attacks while the technique is active, the mental barrier will either be weakened if the attack is a lower rank, cancelled if the attack is of the same rank, or overpowered if the attack is of a higher rank. The mental barrier also serves to suppress the thoughts and intentions of the user, preventing even those with powerful abilities of precognition, observation and awareness from gleaning information from the mind of the user itself. This technique is however incapable of protecting the user's sense from being fooled or controlled, and thus does nothing to protect from genjutsu.

Note: Only usable twice per battle.
Note: Lasts a maximum of four turns.

‡ Declined ‡ I wanted to make something like this but you got here first z.z. This would work a lot better as a seal to be honest. Rather than activating this, it could come into effect whenever the opponent tries to use one of these mind-invasive techniques on you. You could expand a bit more on this concept. Also, the restrictions are lacking for an S-Rank.