[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Robot Boy]

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(Raiton: Joushou tsuchi) - Lightning Release: Ascending Earth
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A stronger version of Lightning release: roaring earth. The user forms the ram handseal and concentrates their lightning chakra all throughout their body. Once the target is within close range, the user slams their hands on the ground, releasing a significant amount electricity along the ground and is shot upward below the targets feet in the form of a much larger vertical column of electricity. The lightning upon impact, lifts the target into the air before dropping them down.

Restriction:
-Physical contact with the ground must be made
-Can be used up to 3 times
-Can only be taught by fang
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-Approved- keep in mind that the technique doesn't cause paralysis, only numbing and physical damage.

Updating:

(Raiton: Joushou tsuchi) - Lightning Release: Ascending Earth
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: short-mid (if channeled into a weapon)
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A stronger version of Lightning release: roaring earth. The user forms the ram handseal and concentrates their lightning chakra all throughout their body. Once the target is within close range, the user slams one hand on the ground, releasing a significant amount electricity along the ground and is shot upward below the targets feet in the form of a much larger vertical column of electricity. The lightning upon impact, lifts the target into the air before dropping them down. If the user chooses, they can focus the technique into a weapon and throw them into the ground where the target is standing and release from there.

Restriction:
-Physical contact with the ground must be made
-The user cannot use both methods on the same turn
-Can be used up to 3 times
-Can only be taught by fang

Declined
Need a few clarifications. You can form this technique into a weapon..so like a Chidori Spear?Is it usable as a weapon as of itself? Also, by saying that when you throw it onto the ground, do you mean like targeting exactly where the target is standing? So, visually speaking, you throw this at the ground, it disappears into it to form a "pillar" of electricity, and then shoots the opponent into the air? What's the radius on it? I'm sure that your opponent wouldn't allow you to even hit anything near their feet.

 

[Aomine Daiki]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Bure-do no Arashikage The Arashikage Blade
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range: Short
Chakra:N/A
Damage:N/A
Description: A blade that was once used by the beloved Hard Master of the former "Arashikage clan". The blade had been locked away for years because the current Grand master saw that no human was worthy of wielding this blade. After defeating Storm Shadow, the Grand-master saw that Snake eyes possesed the skills and was worthy of this blade and so he gave it to him. The blade is made of the legendary black Arashikage steel with a simple wooden handle made from the great White Oak tree. right above the handle you can spot the legendary red marking of the former Arashikage clan.
Note: Since the blade is made of black Arashikage steel it is unbreakable and can even resist attacks from swords with an element mixed with them.
Note: Can only be wielded by Snake Eyes bio's.
Note: The blade has to be passed down bio to bio meaning two bio's can't have the blade at the same time.
Note: In order to completly master this blade Snake Eyes cut himself with it and the blade absorbed some of his blood. This process had linked Snake Eyes too the Blade giving him the power to teleport to the blade or to have the blade teleport to him anytime he wishes. This means that if Snake dropps the sword during a fight he can have it teleport back to his hands or teleport himself to the blade. This will count as one of the users moves.
note: the Blood linking process can only be taught by copy ninja hatake kakashi.

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☼ Declined ☼

You can submit another weapon with the same name/appearance, but with a completely different set of abilities as the ones on this are space/time, essentially being a rip of FTG

 

[Naruto.]

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(Raiton: Sankakki keimusho) - Lightning Release: Trianglular Prison
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user gathers a large amount of Lightning chakra and performs the Boar handseal. He then shapes the fingers of both his hands to form a triangle after which he channels lightning chakra into his hands and releases lightning from them, shape manipulating it into a triangle like structure made up of electricity. Once formed, the lightning triangle is released onto the opponent, surrounding him. While the prison is surrounding the opponent, the user has to maintain focus over his chakra to not let the lightning disappear. The lightning triangle is about 2 meters high and 3 meters wide. As the opponent is encased, he gets electrocuted by the lightning continuously, from all 3 sides. The electrocution lasts for 5 seconds, after which the user snaps his fingers to make the lightning prison disperse into thousand tiny sharp lightning spears, piercing the opponent and paralyzing him on almost every single point of his body.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per battle
- The user cannot use any S-Rank or above lightning jutsu in the next turn
- Can only be taught by Nāruto

☼ Approved ☼

Added a little to the notes, removed the two turns bit. You already said it lasts five seconds so no reason to say it lasts that long

 

[Katsumi Ren]

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(Ninpou: Nou Teki Kyou Nou Marou) Ninja Art: Know Your Enemy and Know Yourself
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: n/a
Chakra: 10+
Damage: n/a
Description: Through countless hours of training and meditation, you have become extremely aware of what your own chakra normally feels like, and exactly how that feel changes when you mold it for techniques. If you suspect that you are under a genjutsu, this technique allows you to quickly check if your chakra feels like it's flowing like it should based on your experience. If you can tell that something is off, you can then quickly stop the flow of your chakra and restart it thereby disrupting any genjutsu D rank or below. Though you may recognize genjutsu up to C rank, you will not be able to disrupt them. The technique costs 10 chakra to examine your chakra flow, and the full chakra cost of any genjutsu you decide to disrupt.

- Cannot be used to identify or free genjutsu in others
- Can only be used once per turn
- If disrupting multiple genjutsu, user must pay the full chakra cost of all genjutsu
- User cannot dispel higher level genjutsu without dispelling lower level genjutsu simultaneously

Can only be taught by Katsumi Ren

☼ Declined DNR ☼

A blend of chakra sensing and kai, both of which exist.

(Ninpou: Yatai Kochou) Ninja Art: Floating Butterfly
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: n/a
Chakra: 10 + 5 per turn
Damage: n/a
Description: This technique silences the sounds produced by the user's clothing and movements through the air, and suppresses negative emotions and killing intentions while active. The chakra is distributed efficiently through the user and their equipment and gives off no signature to chakra sensors, though it does not mask other sources of chakra including that of the user. It can be activated and deactivated instantly with no hand seals, though doing so repeatedly in a short period of time is very inefficient. The name 'Floating Butterfly' comes from the common use of this technique to drop straight down on an unsuspecting enemy and attack them without triggering a 'danger instinct' anymore than a passing butterfly would.

- an enemy will adjust to the technique when over exposed. Using Floating Butterfly for 3 out of 5 consecutive turns will cause the negative emotion and killing intent masking portion of the technique to fail for the rest of the fight. Sound's from body movement will still be hidden.

- Chunin are experienced enough to become immune after one turn. Jounin and above are completely immune.

Can only be taught by Katsumi Ren

☼ Declined DNR ☼

Similar to existing techniques.


(Ninpou: Meimu no Touhou ) Ninja Art: Illusion of Me
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: 1 meter
Chakra: 10 + 5 per turn
Damage: n/a
Description: A modification of the basic bunshin developed after many hours of training. The user creates a bunshin that stands inside the users own space, and can be instructed to mimic the actions of the user perfectly. This technique requires no handseals and aside from a small surge of chakra is not apparent to those without chakra sensory abilities or advanced doujutsu. The clone is not disrupted by the users presence or physical objects, but will be destroyed if it comes into contact with any another chakra source. While the clone follows the user's move in synchronization normally, it can be instructed to do something different in order to deceive the enemy, and in fact that is the purpose of the technique. The clone must be maintained via a steady flow of chakra to sustain itself but can be dispelled at any time without handseals.

-Clone must maintain contact with the user at all times or it will become a normal bunshin that can be disrupted by objects and the users body.

Can only be taught by Katsumi Ren

☼ Declined DNR ☼

Similar to existing techniques.

 

[Shinobi B]

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(Kenjutsu: Ken Suii) Sword Arts: Sword Transition
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Close
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description:This technique allows the user to end their Kenjutsu technique mid way, in order to quickly transition into a Kenjutsu maneuver of C rank. Focusing chakra into their waist, spine and attacking arm, The user will momentarily pause as his muscles begins to clench in said areas. The second it is felt, like an instinct, the user releases the placed chakra, allowing them to move freely without being forced by the bodies previous strike momentum. Giving them seconds to try and form an attack to combo the previous with. If done correctly, the target will notice the user do a fake out, crossover move or "juke" like movement before beginning his next attack.


Notes:
- Next jutsu must be a C rank Kenjutsu.
- Cannot alter or change users flight path.
- Can only be used 3 times per battle after every 10 user posts.
- Can only be taught by Shinobi B "Benn"

☼ Approved ☼



(Kenjutsu: Ken Rendan: Hisakata Jisou) Sword Arts: Sword Barrage: Lunar Phase
Type: Offense/Attack
Rank: C - A (Dependent on Kenjutsu users Shinobi & Kenjutsu rank)
Range: Close
Chakra: 15
Damage: [C-rank = 30][B rank = 45][A-rank = 60]
Description: The user draws their blade while in mid pursuit of the non running target. As they reach the opponent, the user quickly forces chakra into their dominant jumping foot, causing a greater force in the users leap. As the user leaps, they lean forward to begin a vicious tatsumaki like somersault toward the opponent while holding the dull side of the blade in alignment with their own skull. Thus causing the blade to rotate with the users somersault and slash the target as the user flips. The user then lands to the ground with a powerful final slash dealing liberal damage to their enemy. The maximum landed hits are 7 hits(60 DMG) and the minimum 4 hit(30 DMG). The users capabilities as a shinobi comes into play at this time and place, allowing them to land more slashes before landing..


Notes:
- Rank required for B rank/A rank damage
- Kenjutsu: Ken Suii can only be used during the B rank portion of the attack(5th/6th slash).
- Kenjutsu: Ken Suii locks damage at 40.
- Can be used 5 times per battle after every 5 user posts.
- Can miss if the target is running.
- Can only be taught by Shinobi B "Benn".

☼ Declined ☼

Not allowing multiple ranks based on what rank/training the user has.


(Kenjutsu: Ryuuki Taiyou) Sword Arts: Rising Sun
Type: Offense/Attack
Rank: C
Range: Close
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description:Holding their blades in an underhand grip. The user focuses chakra into their dominant foot. When needed, the user then stomps on the ground with said foot, expelling the chakra into it as he/she crouches. The user then rises into with greater force than that of an average leap, performing a 360 angled spin. With the users hands wielding blades the user rotates his body so that the blade drag upward against his/her foe for two slashes whilst they spin. Causing the opponent to rise into the air about 10 feet if not blocked properly. The user remains 5 feet off the ground as they descend into landing.

Notes:
- After the attack is over you have to descend to the ground. (-2 jutsus allowed next turn)
- Target is too high/far away to hit without landing and re jumping/ using a projectile (Ken Sui is ineffective)
- Can only be used 4 times per battle after every 7 user posts.
- Can only be taught by Shinboi B "Benn"

☼ Declined DNR ☼

 

[Bruce Banner]

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(Doton : Bosatsu no momote) – Earth Style : 100 hand of Bodhisattva
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After 5 years of training to develop his earth technique. With hard training, effort and praying every day for 5 years, the user did 1000 punches a day, and it took 18 hours to finish 1000 punches on his first day. After two years, when he completed the 1000 punches, the sun had not yet set. And after 5 years hard training, the user completed 1000 punches in less than one hour and more time to pray. Because of this hard training every days and takes 5 years to completed it, his punch become more solid and able to deliver punches with fast speed as the user normal speed, also able to shape manipulation by takes form of a gigantic statue of Guanyin, a Bodhisattva that is associated with compassion as Veneration by East Asia Buddhism, it emerge from behind, beneath the user’s ground. When activated, the user emits a gigantic multi-armed of Bodhisattva with reach heights of 10 meters and the multi armed able to reach up to mid range and this can be done by using his earth chakra continuously injected into the statue. In order to attack using the statue of Bodhisattva, the user must first prays by clasping his hands together in a fluid motion. After that, the arms on the Bodhisattva strike down upon their targets in conjunction with the user own hand motions.

Note:
- No S-Rank earth jutsu can be done when this jutsu activated with the exception of earth jutsu which associated with this jutsu.
- The hand of bodhisattva speed are the same as normal speed of the user.
- Drain -20 Chakra every turn
- Last for 4 turns and auto vanished.
- Can only be activated twice every battle and recharging for one turn each use
- After 2 times usage, the user can no longer use S-Rank Earth Jutsu and S-Rank Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle.

☼ Declined ☼

Give a specific number of arms in the description. Given the name I assume there are 100 arms, but it could also just be for naming purposes, so it needs to be clarified in the description. For the bolded, does that mean you can use the statue to attack without additional techniques? If so it needs to be described better. How many arms can be used at a time? What rank are these attacks? How many times can it be used? How often can it be used? Does it take up a slot in your turn (it should)? Etc.

(Bosatsu no momote : ichi no te) – 100 Hand of Bodhisattva: first hand
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By activating and using “100 hand of Bodhisattva” The user using his dominant hand to performs a chopping motion and the Bodhisattva mimics it, striking his opponent with a chop motion and crush the opponent body.

(Bosatsu no momote: ni no te) - 100 Hand of Bodhisattva: second hand
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By activating and using “100 hand of Bodhisattva” The user performs a clapping motion using his both hands and then the Bodhisattva copies it, attacking the opponent with a clap. Closing and smashing the opponent inside it’s palm.

☼ Declined ☼

Parent jutsu declined.

 

[Toshiro]

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(Suiton: Poseidon's Iyoku) - Water Style: Poseidon's Will
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40(-10 every turn)
Damage: 80
Description: Poseidon’s Will revolves mainly around the control of water through the usage of mere hand movements or subtle motions, or even the thought of the mind. However, it is merely limited to the manipulation of water, and not the creation of it. The initiation of Poseidon’s Will is simple; by solely molding Suiton chakra within the user's body, the user forces all chakra within his own body into water chakra, preventing the usage of other forms of elemental chakra. This makes it such that within the user's body, only Suiton chakra flows through it. The massive amount of Suiton chakra generated within the user's body allows the user to freely control water. The circulation of a singular chakra nature gives the user more clarity of thought, gaining much more control over Suiton chakra than he normally would, without the cluster of several elements. The user's sentient mind starts to link with his chakra. The Suiton chakra is imbued with an imprint of the user's own mind, and creates a sort of understanding between the user and the chakra. The user, through manipulating that chakra, can send it through physical bodies of water, infusing the chakra with the water body, and start to control it freely with the mere motion of the hand, or even the power of the mind, though the elaborateness of the gesticulation determines the size and power of the control over the water. There are a plethora of possibilities for the water, and pragmatic shapes of intricate designs to those of huge size can be created with the imagination of the user's mind.

- Due to the manifest of suiton chakra within the body, after the deactivation, no suiton for the following four turns
- Due to the complete circulation of suiton chakra within one's body, the user is unable to mold any other element during the duration
- The Rank | Damage | Chakra Cost for what is formed or manipulated, needs to be stated during the turn it's used in
- The technique last for five turns
- Can only be used once per battle
- Can only be taught by Toshiro

This is my first submission within a year of not role playing. So my bad if the restrictions aren't on par with the technique.
If you're wondering where I got the idea at, I got it from Percy Jackson's ability to manipulate water.
Updating this technique, which was approved

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☼ Declined DNR ☼

Restrictions are fine, but I'm not going to allow free manipulation of an element.

(Raiton: Rikujōkōrō) - Lightning Style: Six-Staff Lightning Prison
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: n/a
Description: Six Staff Lightning Prison revolves mainly around the usage of subduing an enemy for a short period of time using the paralyzes properties of lightning. The initiation of Six Staff Lightning Prison is quite simple; the user will perform a sequence of two hand seals, while subsequently building up chakra within one of their index fingers. The build up of chakra should be relatively quick, seeing as how lightning is a fast element. The user will then begin to point their index finger towards its target(s). Around the time the index finger is pointed, a blinding light will begin to emit from it. The light is a mere distraction, causing blinks of temporary loss of sight. The user right after initially pointing their index finger, shoots off six triangular beams of condensed lightning towards its target(s). The beams of lightning travel at high speeds, which can be easily tracked, but quite hard to counter with techniques that require hand seals. The beams of lightning once reaching its target(s), will begin to surround them in a formation. A hexagonal formation if the target is merely one, and an equilateral triangle formation if the target is two. Soon after the formation occurs around the target(s), the beams of lightning will slam into the target(s) midsection, causing them relative pain from the slam, while holding them in place. Without a moments waste, right after slamming into the opponent’s body, the condensed lightning beams begin to release electricity into the opponent, paralyzing them much similar to Nagashi, hindering the target’s movements, and reducing their movement speed once the technique is complete.

- The paralyzes effects last for ten seconds
- The reduce movement speed last for another ten seconds once the technique is finished
- The beams of lightning automatically follow it's targets until destroyed
- No Lightning techniques for the following turn
- Can only be used twice per match
- Can only be taught by Toshiro

All I did for the update, was revamp the description to be more detailed and precise, increased the rank back to it's original, and gave it a little more effects. The ten seconds, as I didn't want to change that restriction, is merely a turn if you would like to call it.

☼ Declined ☼

When updating a technique you need to quote the approved one and then bold the changes made in the update.

 

[Never]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Futon : Wana jeido) - Wind Release : Ensnared Jade
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user will tag their opponent with Wind Chakra, the target shouldn't be able to notice it (unless they are a dojutsu user or have sensory capabilities) until the user makes the Rat hand seal when ever he wants to activate it and the wind chakra creates a gust around the target that will knock them about, taking them off guard. The user then makes another hand seal and the gust becomes tighter around the target and traps them between the ever flowing wind, which spins around their body, but does not damage except for keeping them still.

-Can only be used twice
-Lasts for 3 turns
-can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

☼ Declined ☼

What do you mean by tag their opponent? Does that require you to touch them? If so, this kind of seems like fuuinjutsu more than a wind release, even if wind is what's being used to bind them.


(Futon : Obude~yūtirirīfu) - Wind Release : Relieving of Duty
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The User focuses on a small portion of the air around their target, they focus their chakra within it and make it very sharp for a a second or two. This technique is used to distract the opponent usually, this can cut a part of their gear which would make the sheathe for their sword to fall on the ground along with the blade or even make their ninja pouch drop before they reach into it for a kunai or tool they need for an attack / technique of their own. The Sharp blade of wind can be heard, but it is hearD at the moment it cuts, making a kind of slicing sound for a second - it also appears to be a fast moving bit of air with a green aura around it 2x2 inches in size.

-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

☼ Declined ☼

This could be used to instantly and unavoidable cut someone's eye, so it needs some sort of restriction to prevent such usage.

Summoning Animal: Barnacle
Scroll Owner: LonelyAssassin
Other Users who have signed contract:
N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:
N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
N/A
Description and Background:
A barnacle is a type of arthropod belonging to infraclass Cirripedia in the subphylum Crustacea, and is hence related to crabs and lobsters. Barnacles are exclusively marine, and tend to live in shallow and tidal waters, typically in erosive settings. Barnacles are encrusters, attaching themselves permanently to a hard substrate until they have to leave the field. Barnacles usually have a natural affinity to water and earth, depending on which Barnacles are summoned they are able to attach to Earth or any kind of hard substance easily - they can even attach to the opponent. Barnacles can be summoned in with water, washing against the earth and attaching onto it - some will then use their own chakra to take over the Earth technique (within reason for example like a golem or dragon head) and can change the trajectory or attack so that they attack the opponent instead.

There are three types of Cirripedia, they are Acrothoracica, Rhizocephala and Thoracica :

• Thoracica
  These are the most Common types of Barnacles and there are two types of this class called the "Acorn Barnacles" (Sessilia) or the "Goose Barnacles", these Barnacles have six little limbs used for catching food and are usually found in large quantaties on hard substrate e.g. Rocks or Drift Wood. These Barnacles have a very hard calcite shells which are impermeable, and they possess two plates which they can slide across their aperture when not feeding. These plates also protect against predation - simple blades cannot break through the barnacle shells. Their feathery appendages beat rhythmically to draw plankton and detritus into the shell for consumption - this rhythmical beat will be used in more ways than one depending on the summon's ability. Barnacles are usually found within water and can be found very deep within it, though they are commonly found in the shallow areas. Barnacles are well adapted against water loss.
  
  The Thoracica Barnacles can manipulate their shells - this is a hard Calcite shell that is very hard and useful as it grants protection. Depending on which of these Barnacles that are summoned, only certain techniques can pierce through their shells. Usually it is lightning or Wind techniques that can break through, other elements will have a tough time overcoming the shell of the Barnacle.
  
  
• Acrothoracica
  These Barnacles 'bore' into materials like the ground like earth or wood, though they can bore into shells and sometimes other plants - this produces a slit-like hole in the surface. Acrothoracicans are typically smaller than other types of barnacle, being only a few millimetres in length. Being protected by the hard surfaces into which they have bored, they have no solid carapace of plates like other barnacles but have a soft, sac-like body fixed to the surface by a chitinous disc at the front of the head. They have from four to six pairs of feathery limbs, or "cirri", which they project out of their borings to catch drifting detritus for food.
  
  These Barnacles can be summoned in large quantities and create slits in the ground, they usually use their limbs to reach out of the holes slightly and use their chakra to generate an attack or some sort of supplementary use to the user - the Acrothoracicans also have other functions aswell. Because these Barnacles don't have the great protection of calcite shells, they can be killed much more easily than the Thoracica.
  
  
• Rhizocephala
  These are Parasitic Barnacle which usually could only take over other crustaceans, but these Rhizocephalan can use chakra and become more powerful and Parasitic to other creatures other than crustaceans, making them extremely Deadly. Their bauplan (body plan) is uniquely reduced in an extreme adaptation to their parasitic lifestyle, and makes their relationship to other barnacles unrecognizable in the adult form. As adults they lack appendages, segmentation, and all internal organs except gonads, a few muscles and the remains of the nervous system. The only distinguishable portion of a rhizocephalan body is the externa or reproductive portion of adult females. These are usually summoned by the user or when the summoned directly onto a target using the summoning technique.
  

Signers of this contract have a tattoo where they swipe blood on it to summon the different barnacles they are wanting to summon.

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(Futon : Wana jeido) - Wind Release : Ensnared Jade
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user will tag their opponent with Wind Chakra, the target shouldn't be able to notice it (unless they are a dojutsu user or have sensory capabilities) until the user makes the Rat hand seal when ever he wants to activate it and the wind chakra creates a gust around the target that will knock them about, taking them off guard. The user then makes another hand seal and the gust becomes tighter around the target and traps them between the ever flowing wind, which spins around their body, but does not damage except for keeping them still.

-Can only be used twice
-Lasts for 3 turns
-can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

☼ Declined ☼

What do you mean by tag their opponent? Does that require you to touch them? If so, this kind of seems like fuuinjutsu more than a wind release, even if wind is what's being used to bind them.


(Futon : Obude~yūtirirīfu) - Wind Release : Relieving of Duty
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The User focuses on a small portion of the air around their target, they focus their chakra within it and make it very sharp for a a second or two. This technique is used to distract the opponent usually, this can cut a part of their gear which would make the sheathe for their sword to fall on the ground along with the blade or even make their ninja pouch drop before they reach into it for a kunai or tool they need for an attack / technique of their own. The Sharp blade of wind can be heard, but it is hearD at the moment it cuts, making a kind of slicing sound for a second - it also appears to be a fast moving bit of air with a green aura around it 2x2 inches in size.

-Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

☼ Declined ☼

This could be used to instantly and unavoidable cut someone's eye, so it needs some sort of restriction to prevent such usage.



Summoning Animal: Barnacle
Scroll Owner: LonelyAssassin
Other Users who have signed contract:
N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:
N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
N/A
Description and Background:
A barnacle is a type of arthropod belonging to infraclass Cirripedia in the subphylum Crustacea, and is hence related to crabs and lobsters. Barnacles are exclusively marine, and tend to live in shallow and tidal waters, typically in erosive settings. Barnacles are encrusters, attaching themselves permanently to a hard substrate until they have to leave the field. Barnacles usually have a natural affinity to water and earth, depending on which Barnacles are summoned they are able to attach to Earth or any kind of hard substance easily - they can even attach to the opponent. Barnacles can be summoned in with water, washing against the earth and attaching onto it - some will then use their own chakra to take over the Earth technique (within reason for example like a golem or dragon head) and can change the trajectory or attack so that they attack the opponent instead.

There are three types of Cirripedia, they are Acrothoracica, Rhizocephala and Thoracica :

• Thoracica
  These are the most Common types of Barnacles and there are two types of this class called the "Acorn Barnacles" (Sessilia) or the "Goose Barnacles", these Barnacles have six little limbs used for catching food and are usually found in large quantaties on hard substrate e.g. Rocks or Drift Wood. These Barnacles have a very hard calcite shells which are impermeable, and they possess two plates which they can slide across their aperture when not feeding. These plates also protect against predation - simple blades cannot break through the barnacle shells. Their feathery appendages beat rhythmically to draw plankton and detritus into the shell for consumption - this rhythmical beat will be used in more ways than one depending on the summon's ability. Barnacles are usually found within water and can be found very deep within it, though they are commonly found in the shallow areas. Barnacles are well adapted against water loss.
  
  The Thoracica Barnacles can manipulate their shells - this is a hard Calcite shell that is very hard and useful as it grants protection. Depending on which of these Barnacles that are summoned, only certain techniques can pierce through their shells. Usually it is lightning or Wind techniques that can break through, other elements will have a tough time overcoming the shell of the Barnacle.
  
  
• Acrothoracica
  These Barnacles 'bore' into materials like the ground like earth or wood, though they can bore into shells and sometimes other plants - this produces a slit-like hole in the surface. Acrothoracicans are typically smaller than other types of barnacle, being only a few millimetres in length. Being protected by the hard surfaces into which they have bored, they have no solid carapace of plates like other barnacles but have a soft, sac-like body fixed to the surface by a chitinous disc at the front of the head. They have from four to six pairs of feathery limbs, or "cirri", which they project out of their borings to catch drifting detritus for food.
  
  These Barnacles can be summoned in large quantities and create slits in the ground, they usually use their limbs to reach out of the holes slightly and use their chakra to generate an attack or some sort of supplementary use to the user - the Acrothoracicans also have other functions aswell. Because these Barnacles don't have the great protection of calcite shells, they can be killed much more easily than the Thoracica.
  
  
• Rhizocephala
  These are Parasitic Barnacle which usually could only take over other crustaceans, but these Rhizocephalan can use chakra and become more powerful and Parasitic to other creatures other than crustaceans, making them extremely Deadly. Their bauplan (body plan) is uniquely reduced in an extreme adaptation to their parasitic lifestyle, and makes their relationship to other barnacles unrecognizable in the adult form. As adults they lack appendages, segmentation, and all internal organs except gonads, a few muscles and the remains of the nervous system. The only distinguishable portion of a rhizocephalan body is the externa or reproductive portion of adult females. These are usually summoned by the user or when the summoned directly onto a target using the summoning technique.
  

Signers of this contract have a tattoo where they swipe blood on it to summon the different barnacles they are wanting to summon.

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☼ Declined ☼

The colored sections are too much for general abilities, that stuff would need to be in the description of the summon.

 

[Ndlovu]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninjutsu - Senpuku Chakra no Jutsu) – Ninja Art - Hiding in Chakra Technique
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 5 (-5 chakra per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will focus their chakra into the air within their immediate vicinity (up to long-range around themselves) to flood it with chakra. To correctly understand what this technique does, imagine an invisible version of Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique. This is done so to create a "scrambler" like effect to doijutsu users, as when they attempt to see the user's chakra system or locate their exact position, the blanket of chakra will prevent them from doing so. This technique itself doesn't cloak the user's presence or blind Doijutsu users, however it acts as a useful supplement to other stealth techniques. As a result, it becomes near-impossible to see through transformation techniques (only through the use of most Doijutsu) whilst this is active. It can't fool the Byakugan but due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan users will see the air coloured and made "opaque" by their opponent's chakra. This technique will also distort the use of ordinary chakra sensing, Rain Tiger at will and other methods of sensing since the user's chakra will span such a large area that it will become impossible to discern/pinpoint their exact location through the use of such measures alone. The user will continually exude this veil of chakra until this technique has been cancelled. Instead of a veil which spans out up to long-range in every direction, the user can decrease the size of the blanket to a chassis-like coating which solely envelops the user's body.

Note: Can only be Taught by Ndlovu

☼ Declined ☼

This isn't an E-rank technique. It needs a turn limit and usage limit as well.

(Doton: Bourei no Tsuchi) – Earth Release: Tyranny of Terra
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 chakra per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will perform a single handseal and slam their hands onto the ground before causing a wide portal to open up above the battlefield (Similar to Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop). From the portal, a heavy downpour of adhesive rain will be let forth with the exception that the droplets are composed entirely of sticky mud rather than water. Once the droplets of mud make contact with anything, the mud will swiftly harden into sturdy, solid rock. However, since the droplets of mud are made from the user's chakra, they will be unaffected by its stickiness and droplets which come into contact with them will not harden into rock. As a result, this technique can be used to encase the opponent in a makeshift prison of rock or even to convert the surface of nearby water sources and swamps into earth, restricting their usage. Since the downpour spans over the course of two turns, conventional methods of offsetting the technique are negated (e.g. Chidori Nagashi) as at best they'll have a momentary effect. To effectively counter this technique, the opponent can use a continuous lightning-based technique (e.g. the Raikage's Armour) or acquire a suitable shelter/defense to seek cover under.

Note: Lasts two turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Cool down of two turns in between usages
Note: Can only be Taught by Ndlovu

☼ Declined ☼

I like it, but it needs to be destroyable. If someone were to attack the portal with a strong enough technique, it would be disrupted and disperse or be destroyed.

(Ninjutsu - Senpuku Chakra no Jutsu) – Ninja Art - Hiding in Chakra Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15 (-5 chakra per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will focus their chakra into the air within their immediate vicinity (up to long-range around themselves) to flood it with chakra. To correctly understand what this technique does, imagine an invisible version of Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique. This is done so to create a "scrambler" like effect to doijutsu users, as when they attempt to see the user's chakra system or locate their exact position, the blanket of chakra will prevent them from doing so. This technique itself doesn't cloak the user's presence or blind Doijutsu users, however it acts as a useful supplement to other stealth techniques. As a result, it becomes near-impossible to see through transformation techniques (only through the use of most Doijutsu) whilst this is active. It can't fool the Byakugan but due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan users will see the air coloured and made "opaque" by their opponent's chakra. This technique will also distort the use of ordinary chakra sensing, Rain Tiger at will and other methods of sensing since the user's chakra will span such a large area that it will become impossible to discern/pinpoint their exact location through the use of such measures alone. The user will continually exude this veil of chakra until this technique has been cancelled. Instead of a veil which spans out up to long-range in every direction, the user can decrease the size of the blanket to a chassis-like coating which solely envelops the user's body.

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Ndlovu

☼ Declined ☼

Three times at four turns a pop ain't exactly much of a restriction.

(Doton: Bourei no Tsuchi) – Earth Release: Tyranny of Terra
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 chakra per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will perform a single handseal and slam their hands onto the ground before causing a wide portal to open up above the battlefield (Similar to Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop). From the portal, a heavy downpour of adhesive rain will be let forth with the exception that the droplets are composed entirely of sticky mud rather than water. Once the droplets of mud make contact with anything, the mud will swiftly harden into sturdy, solid rock. However, since the droplets of mud are made from the user's chakra, they will be unaffected by its stickiness and droplets which come into contact with them will not harden into rock. As a result, this technique can be used to encase the opponent in a makeshift prison of rock or even to convert the surface of nearby water sources and swamps into earth, restricting their usage. Since the downpour spans over the course of two turns, conventional methods of offsetting the technique are negated (e.g. Chidori Nagashi) as at best they'll have a momentary effect. To effectively counter this technique, the opponent can use a continuous lightning-based technique (e.g. the Raikage's Armour) or acquire a suitable shelter/defense to seek cover under. Another way of countering this technique is the destruction of the portal itself with a strong enough technique (following Earth's elemental strengths and weaknesses).

Note: Lasts two turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Cool down of two turns in between usages
Note: Can only be Taught by Ndlovu

☼ Approved ☼

 

[Naruto.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Atama No Nai Kishu ) - Illusionary Arts: The Headless Horseman
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will perform the Dragon handseal and make contact with the opponent with his hand, injecting his chakra into the opponent's chakra system, disrupting the flow of chakra in his brain and placing the target under an illusion. The illusion will make the opponent see a headless horseman with a sword on a horse approaching him. Looking at the headless guy will paralyze him in fear, and as the guy approaches the opponent, he will pierce him with his sword on the opponent's abdomen, while still on his horse, as this causes severe paralyzation to his body. The illusion lasts for about 2 turns.
Notes:
- The paralyzing effect lasts for two turns.
- Can only be used three times per battle
- It requires the user to make contact with the opponent.
- Can be only taught by Nāruto.

☼ Declined DNR ☼

 

[Isa Claire]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Oncilla
Scroll Owner: Skyhascheese
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A Yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background:
The oncilla resembles the margay and the ocelot. But it is smaller, with a slender build and narrower muzzle. It grows to 38 to 59 centimetres (15 to 23 in) long, plus a 20 to 42 centimetres (7.9 to 16.5 in) tail. While this is somewhat longer than the average domestic cat, Leopardus tigrinus is generally lighter, weighing 1.5 to 3 kilograms (3.3 to 6.6 lb).

The fur is thick and soft, ranging from light brown to dark ochre, with numerous dark rosettes across the back and flanks. The underside is pale with dark spots and the tail is ringed. The backs of the ears are black with bold ocelli. The rosettes are black or brown, open in the center, and irregularly shaped. The legs have medium-sized spots tapering to smaller spots near the paws. This coloration helps the oncilla blend in with the mottled sunlight of the tropical forest understory. The oncilla's jaw is shortened, with fewer teeth, but with well-developed carnassials and canines.

The Oncilla Lives in the Jungles of tsuki(Luck).
An area with a large amount of rivers.
The oncilla Usually are Born With earth release or Water release.
Altough Fire release Occurs Sometimes,But it is Very Rare.


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Again, I'm not accepting descriptions of summons that are flat out copy-paste from Wiki or the whatnot. Add a bit more on its abilities when summoned, its main attributes, the sizes it could be summoned up to and how it plays a role in the Ninja World when it is summoned.

hyoushoku ittou {glacial scouring Sword}
Type: Weapon
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short Range
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 20
Description:
The glacial scouring Sword is an ancient Sword.
Found in the land of Snow,In an ancient Temple of The Sage of the six paths
It has an great sharpness.
And Does not Bold as fast as a normal sword Does.
It is capable of Cutting a 10cmX10cm Stone Piece in one slash if enough power is put into it.

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Okay, so...give me more detail on what it does. "Great sharpness?" This is not worthy of being a custom. You give no description to it, it's poorly worded, and formatted.


-Can Only used by Silly Kira 2

Kenjutsu : toradoshi |-|Sword Arts : Year of the Tiger
Type:Offensive
Rank:S-rank
Range:Short range
Chakra:40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user goes on his Knees and Legs.
Taking the pose of a Tiger.
The user Holds his sword in his dominant hand.
The user then Molds chakra into his sword.
Causing it to Glow yellow,With Black Dots.
The user then Dashes towards his target,Doing a Horizontal and A Verticle Cut.
Afterwards he jumps over the target,And Does a Slash from the targets Right Shoulder to his left Lower torso
-Note: Required mastery Over Kenjutsu
-Note: Can only be used Twice
-Note: Can only be teached by Isaac Clarke

Summoning Animal: Oncilla
Scroll Owner: Isaac Clarke
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A Yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background:

The oncilla resembles the margay and the ocelot.Due to it being Crossbread of the two.
The Oncilla Mostly Comes in the sizes of a Normal Cat,But with more slender Shoulders.
They also tend to be very Light.
But some oncilla have also Become the length of a Full Grown Horse.
Those tend to be strong and have more muscles.

The Oncilla a Unknown Trough the Ninja world.
And Nobody has ever had a contract with them.
The creatures are from ancient Times.
Living in peace.
Using their Length and Speed to their advantage.
They are able to run from shadow to shadow,Barely Noticable.
Using their Sneaking skills,They make excellent Spies.
Some Oncilla have been known to Grow as the size of a Horse.
Still keeping its speed,it Loses his Sneaking skills but Gains a Higher amount of Strength.
if needed,A large Oncilla can be used to Ride in a horse Fashion.
The oncilla has a natural hatred towards all Kirigakure Ninjas.
And Acts Friendly towards Sunagakure Ninjas.

The Oncilla Lives in the Jungles of tsuki(Luck).
An area with a large amount of rivers.
The Oncilla have a Natural Skill of using Ninja tools.
being Excellent in Kunai fighting and Shurikenjutsu.
Most of the Oncilla are born with Earth release or Water release.
And a Small amount of oncilla are Skilled Using Fire release.


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☼ Declined ☼

Resubmit when not banned.

 

[Migualon J.J.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuinjutsu: Magarime Ni Sumāfu Jutsu) - Sealing Arts: Turn Into Smurf Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage: N/A
Description: The user puts seal on someone or himself and if the person that has this seal on him does something bad or wrong (for example lie or thinks something evil), he turns into person with blue skin color which happens because the seal makes body have bad oxygen delivery. The effects are temporary if said person does the opposite of what made his skin turn into blue. (For example if I lied and my skin turned into blue, than if I tell a truth, my skin turns normal again). Even tho, if person does something bad again, their skin will turn blue yet again.

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*Can only be taught by Migualon J.J.
*Can only be removed by the creator of this technique or those who learned it.
*Stays on the person till he dies or till he gets it removed by the creator or those who learned it from him.

X-Declined-X But i lol'd

(Genjutsu: Za Kakudai Suru Karada) - Illusionary Arts: The Expanding Body
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user first makes 4 hand seals and than makes his opponent believe that his (opponent's) body or parts of his body start expending into gigantic sizes. For example one could make his opponent believe that his (opponent's) whole left half of the body grows into size of pyramids, while the rest of the body stays the same.

*Can only be taught by Migualon J.J.
*Can only be used twice per battle
*Can be used second time after 2 turns pass after the first use
*After the second use, the user cannot use any Genjutsu for 3 turns

X-Declined-X On a different note: "than makes his opponent believe that his (opponent's) body or parts of his body start expending into gigantic sizes" o.0 Seriously? and the hell is wrong with your signature!

Resubmitting with no change because I do not know what to change on it.


(Fuuinjutsu: Magarime Ni Sumāfu Jutsu) - Sealing Arts: Turn Into Smurf Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage: N/A
Description: The user puts seal on someone or himself and if the person that has this seal on him does something bad or wrong (for example lie or thinks something evil), he turns into person with blue skin color which happens because the seal makes body have bad oxygen delivery. The effects are temporary if said person does the opposite of what made his skin turn into blue. (For example if I lied and my skin turned into blue, than if I tell a truth, my skin turns normal again). Even tho, if person does something bad again, their skin will turn blue yet again.

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*Can only be taught by Migualon J.J.
*Can only be removed by the creator of this technique or those who learned it.
*Stays on the person till he dies or till he gets it removed by the creator or those who learned it from him.


☼ Declined ☼

The whole lying or evil bit could be subjective, which would make it hard to use in a battle. Seems like you plan on using this on yourself, just use henge if you want blue skin. >.<

 

[Toku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose no jutsu- Gozu Hokkyokuguma) Summoning- Gōzu the Polar Bear
Type: Attack/Defend
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: the user will summon Gōzu, cousin of Odin, by performing the necessary hand seals and smearing his blood on his palm and clapping his hands together. Gōzu has an elemental affinity of water and wields a large sword(w/ no special abilities). He is a master of hiding in mist jutsu/silent killing technique combo. He is half the size of Gamabunta and stands on his hind legs like his cousin Tyr-kun. He is a powerful swordsman and a skillfull kenjutsu user. He is also able to use C-rank water jutsus and gives them (+10 damage points) when performing a user/summon combo.
*Note: can only be used once per battle.
*Note: can only stay in play for a total of 4 turns.

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☼ Approved ☼

 

[Excālibur1]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fuuton: Eiei Kyuu | Wind Release: Pulling Sphere
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user first gathers wind chakra in either of his hand and throws it either in a forward or diagonal direction in form a sphere which would be the size of a person's head. With the sphere in position, it starts pulling things towards itself with immense force. With the nearby small objects within the sphere, due to the sheer pressure in the core, it suddenly explodes sending out the objects and particles in all directions except for the side of the user who would remain protected. The other variation of this technique is the user can divide the one big sphere into smaller ones and place them according in their positions utilizing chakra.

Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Needs two turns cool down between each use
Note: The user must be mid-range away from the technique to avoid getting throwed away
Note: Can create upto 10 smaller spheres
Note: The sphere can suck in small weapons and particles but not big objects like summons or human beings.
Note: Can make a human go off balance if the sphere is near him/her
Note: Can only be taught by Excālibur

☼ Approved ☼

(Kōkan suru Memori Jutsu) - Replacing of Memory Technique
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A technique that is used upon the user or another in order to add new memories, any sort of memories can be added as long as ample opportunity is upon the user. Such as the objectives or some certain memory. The user must press his palm against the opponents head while inserting his chakra onto his brain, forcefully altering his memories by adding a new one to a given set of memories or memory.

Note: This justu can only be used twice per battle.The user must say what memories will be replaced(only one category).
Note: The actual memory (before using this technique) would be lost after being replaced with a new one
Note: Can only be taught by Excālibur

☼ Declined DNR ☼

 

[Omega]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Misutishizumu Ori) – Lightning Style|Mystic Cage
Rank: S
Type: Supplemental/Attack
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:N/A (80 if the user attacks)
Description: The user will send their chakra towards the opponent to create electrical chains about one meter away from the opponent that are to circle the enemy to create a spherical image around the target large enough to trap about one individual inside. Once the chains are fully formed, they will then wrap themselves around the enemy's body within the sphere so that he is unable to escape. The user of this jutsu can perform the ram handseal to proceed to shock the enemy that has become trapped inside if he so chooses to so.

Can only be used twice
Can only be taught by Omega
Cannot be used in consecutive turns
No S rank Raition during or after the turn this is used.

Approved
Alright. I have an idea of what you're going for with this jutsu, so I'm going to reword it better.

(Katon: Fenikkusu Ki) – Fire Style|Phoenix Tree
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Performing the Tiger, Horse, and Rat handseals the user will concentrate a massive amount of fire chakra deep into the ground below the enemy. Like an eruption the fire will burst through the ground and take the form of a rapidly growing tree that expands upwards (up to 15 meters) ripping and scorching through the earth and burning everything near it. After the technique is over, it leaves the area a barren scorched land.

Can only be used once per battle
Must be taught by Omega
No S rank fire next two turns.

Approved

Summoning Animal: Earth Worms
Scroll Owner: -Omegā-
Other Users who have signed contract: N/a
Summoning Boss if existing: N/a
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/a
Description and Background: An earthworm is a tube-shaped, segmented animal commonly found living in earth, that feeds on live and dead organic matter. Its digestive system runs through the length of its body. It conducts respiration through its skin. They have sensory cells allowing them to function in their surroundings. All earthworms have the ability to sense everything above ground while they are below ground. They reside beneath Mt. Gaia where they train to become stronger. They usually have Earth affinities, few have had water affinities, and they have been rarely noted to have lightning affinites.

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Like I said above, I'm not accepting descriptions of summons that are flat out copy-paste from Wiki or the whatnot. Add a bit more on its abilities when summoned, its main attributes, the sizes it could be summoned up to and how it plays a role in the Ninja World when it is summoned.

(Katon:Seikitai Atsusa) – Fire Style: Astral Heat
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:100 (-40 to the user)
Description: The user will gather large amounts of Katon chakra and in a short powerful burst form four gigantic wings of Katon spanning about 10 meters each , generating so much heat around the user that coming near him would easily evaporate water and burn individuals severely due to the amount of Katon beng used. The ground beneath the user will begin combusting(Scorching) and any liquids can be seen evaporating causing a steam to also be seen around the user. He will then use his large wings to zoom through the battlefield toward his opponent scorching everything along the way until he crashes through the target incinerating it. After the technique has ended the user will suffer some minor burns of his own and feel somewhat drained from the massive amount of chakra required for the technique.


Can only be used once
Can only be taught by Omega
No Forbidden rank techs during or After the turn this was used
No Katon After the turn this is used.

☼ Declined ☼

Wrong Chakra/Damage info.


(Shiga-ya) – Cigar Arrow
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user smoking on a cigar will channel his chakra into to smoke and cigar and manipulate the smoke within his mouth. When the enemy is in range the user will shoot out four thin senbon like shapes of smoke at the enemies’ eyes causing them to go temporarily blind as the smoke will cause some minor burning, irritation, as will anything entering one’s eyes will. The senbons being shot at a short distance and coupled with their extremely light weight causing them to travel at great speeds makes it difficult for normal ninjas to see an attack like this coming. The smoke is also very thin and white (as most cigar smoke is) which causes this technique to almost be somewhat transparent/camflouged with the contrasting background. This process can be done fairly quickly and be used in a pinch.

Can only be taught by Omega
Only usable by Smoke Users
Must have Cigar/Pipe in bio
Can only be tracked by doujutsu (including 1 tomoe Sharingan)

☼ Declined ☼

You're making this sound way harder to see than it should be. At short range it would still be tough to react to, but it shouldn't be hard to see. Smoke isn't wind.


Summoning Animal: Earth Worms
Scroll Owner: -Omegā-
Other Users who have signed contract: N/a
Summoning Boss if existing: N/a
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/a
Description and Background: An earthworm is a tube-shaped, segmented animal commonly found living in earth, that feeds on live and dead organic matter. Its digestive system runs through the length of its body. It conducts respiration through its skin. They have sensory cells allowing them to function in their surroundings. All earthworms have the ability to sense everything above ground while they are below ground. Earthworms also have regeneration abilities when segmented/cut meaning they can regenerate the missing parts of their bodies if the injury is not bad enough. ]They reside beneath Mt. Gaia known as the underground mountain where they train to become stronger. They usually have Earth affinities, few have had water affinities, and they have been rarely noted to have lightning affinities. All jutsus used by Earthworms are of course those done without handseals. The earthworms summoning size might vary from normal sized worms being a few inches, to worms as large as Manda. It is not uncommon for the worms to have some kind of plated armor around their bodies when summoned, also when summoned they can of course borrow underground and use various jutsus while underground without worrying about the ground collapsing on them for they can dig without aid of chakra. While underground they have more acute senses in that environment than humans so they can easily sense through vibrations and chakra everything above ground. If they are cut or divided in parts thay have the ability to regenerate damaged parts of their body if they are not totally destroyed. They can all speak (some smarter than others) and love to make dirt related catchphrases. Nearly all of them are wisecracking senile individuals who even make cracks at those who summon them but are really helpful when needed be it a battle or more domestic things. In the Narutoworld these creatures are useful for decomposition and improving soil fertility which aids in plant growth

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☼ Declined ☼

Sensing the vibrations through the ground is fine, full on chakra sensing is not. You can have a summon with that ability, but its too much for a general ability. What do you mean by totally destroyed? Are we talking Cell, only needs one cell to regenerate? I hope not. And lets say one gets cut in half, do two reform? Or does the bottom half die while the top half regenerates a new bottom half?

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 PS  You cannot drop a contract; you can only pass a contract to one of its signers. Contracts are not dropped, they are passed forwards to someone else.

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[-Albel-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton: Sen Sekai Oma-San | Water Style: Weight of a Thousand Worlds
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique is a technique that can be utilized from any water source within mid-range of the user. The user will channel suiton chakra into that source and create from it a a small globule of water, extremely small and barely noticeable. Once it is created, it is sent on an opponent and once it touches them, rapidly expands into a large and dense orb of water. It's expansion is enough that it can cover an entire limb and because of how dense and heavy the water is, it is like a weight. It will bring that limb to the ground under its weight. If this water globule was formed on someones head, it would also suffocate them. It is great to be used to limit an opponents movement. The user can form up to 3 small globules of water at once.
~No water at all for the turn after this is used
~Can only be used 3 times
~Can only be taught by Albel

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(Futon: Vengeant Kiba) Wind Release: Vengeant Fangs
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After channeling a large amount of futon chakra into the air around his target or targets if they are within short range of one another, the user will make three quick hand-seals which causes the futon chakra in the air to take the form of a large mouth that goes up to seven meters long and three meters wide coated with several sharp jagged fangs that can easily slice through meat and bone. The moment the mouth and fangs form, it will then bite down sending those deadly fangs into the user's target/s, slicing through them like a hot knife cutting through butter, leaving whatever part of the body bitten by the mouth sliced cleanly off the body.
~ Can only be taught by Albel
~ Must have a one turn wait before using again
~ Can only be used four times

Watch 2:08-2:11 to see it.


Approved

(Raiton/Futon: Rasen Ascension) Lightning/Wind Release: Spiral Ascension
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will begin by channeling a large amount of lightning chakra into his sword and then begin to slash at his opponent. First he will make a downwards vertical slash that is followed up by a left to right horizontal slash, then right to left horizontal slash, then finally followed up by a powerful forwards thrust while releasing some of the built up lightning from in the sword into the target. After being hit by the lightning induced thrust, the user will then spin with great speed with the blade of his sword pointed outwards at his opponent while releasing the last bit of lightning that is in the blade. The spinning of the user and the blade causes the lightning to come out in the form of a small vortex made of lightning and wind, that lifts the target up, spinning him around while also shocking him. After the vortex dies off and leaving the victim in the air and about to fall back down towards the ground, the user will make his final move by jumping up above his target and then come flying down with a powerful drop kick, kicking the opponent in the stomach which sends him crashing into the ground.
~ Can only be taught by Albel
~ Can only be used once
~ No lightning or wind jutsus S-rank and above can be used for the next two turns

Watch 3:12-3:20 to see it.


Declined, do not resubmit
Eh, just too much freeform and I highly doubt anyone would let you execute anything past for the first strike with today's RP. Don't get me wrong, I think the Tales series are amazing (ordered Tales of Heart R for the Vita already).

 

[Littlefinger.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Bōfūu no Bakuhatsu | Rainstorm Explosion
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Upon discovering his affinity for the intriguing rain element, Littlefinger. began seeking ways to perfect his usage of it. He began studying the intricacies of it, learning what is and what isn't, what ought to be and what oughtn't to be. During his recent course of study he accidentally created a special rain technique which would aid him in battle. He realized that by forming the Horse ~ Dog handseals and concentrating large amounts of chakra in raindrops just as they are being condensed in the clouds, he could build up pressure in their individual cohesive bonds thus causing them to vibrate forcefully. Therefore, on coming in contact with any object, the raindrops explode violently, dealing severe damage.
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#Lasts 2 turns upon activation.
#Usable 3 times per battle.
#Teachable by Littlefinger.

Declined
Too OP right now. Take off the activation rate, give me a bit more of an idea on how the explosions work - about how large or small? Also, if you were standing in this rain, wouldn't it affec you as well?

 

[neilson]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton: Bakuhatsu Mizu Toppu | Water Release: Exploding Water Top
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-20 to the user)
Description: The user will perform a set of five handseals: Bird - Snake - Ox - Tiger - Rat, and proceed to gather an extremely large amount of water chakra from their dominant palm. Extending their palm outwards, the user will release this chakra in one motion, performing nature transformation as it is released to transform the chakra into actual water. It would be released in extremely large quantities, and with the use of shape manipulation, the user will shape it as a "top (the toy)", with the pointy end faced towards the users palm. He/she will manipulate this amount of water to spin drastically, and use shape manipulation even further to shape the water into spikey and compressed whips outwards, making the contact with a target much more fatal. It extends outwards and grows in size as it travels longer. It spins like a top, so the blunt force it creates upon impact will be extremely powerful. Because it grows in size as it travels further, if it is used against a target that is short-range from the user, it will only count as an S-rank jutsu. Furthermore, the user will take damage on their hands, from the extreme pressure on it as the large quantities are released, therefore, he/she will be unable to perform handseal jutsus for the next turn.

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Notes&Restrictions:
- Can only be used Once
- Teacheable by neilson only
- The user will take 20 damage on their hands, and will be disabled from performing handseals for the next turn.

(Raiton: Shīrudodōmu) | Lightning Release: Dome Shield
Type: Defensive | Supplementary | Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (+60 if the target makes contact with the shield)
Description: The user will clap their hands together, as if they were praying, and gather a large amount of lightning chakra in their body. Immediately after, he/she will release this chakra from all their chakra points to the outside, while performing nature transformation to change the nature of their chakra into the properties of lightning. With further shape manipulation, the user will be able to shape the lightning and control it, creating a dome around them that is about 10 meters tall and has a 10 meter radius. This shield would be able to disintegrate any S-rank and lower earth technique that makes contact with the shield. This lightning as it expands outwards from the body is very dangerous, and if the target is within range as it is expanding outwards to create the shield itself, he/she will be harmed and paralyzed for a turn.
Notes&Restrictions:
- Can only be used three times
- Only teacheable by neilson
- Two turn cooldown before using again

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Both declined, do not resubmit
Too similar to existing concepts. Nothing unique enough about them at all.

(Raiton: Hakai-tekina inazuma no ken) - Lightning Release: Destructive Lightning Fist
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will perform a set of three handseals, and releases lightning chakra to surround the target. It would be spaced about 5 meters away from the target, and with the lightning chakra, the user will materialize balls of lightning to appear around the opponent (about the size of the target, and is spherical). This would be about eight lightning balls spaced evenly around the target, 5 meters from, and 45 degrees between each sphere. With the use of shape manipulation, the user will shape the sphere of lightning into a fist with spikes from it immediately after it appears on the battlefield. By clapping their hands together, the user would be able to motion the lightning fist (about the size of the target, in height) to crash towards the target and electrocuting him/her, all at the same time while stabbing him/her with the spikes
Notes&Restrictions:
- Can only be used twice
- Can only be taught by neilson
- Cannot use any S-rank or above lightning techniques in the next turn

Declined
I'm having a hard time imagining this jutsu right now. I understand it all the way up to the part where the spheres are formed - and then it turns into a fist with spikes from it? Do the spikes grow after the final attack? And how large are they originally? Also, 45 degrees between each sphere? That makes no sense at all.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Hyouton: Regice (Ice style Regice)
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will make 2 hand seals (Bird and dog) and will begin focusing his water and wind chakra into any area within mid range. With his water chakra and shape manipulation he'll create a golem shaped figure still unseen. Then with his wind chakra he'll cool down the ice until it reaches ice age levels. Making it so cold that it will freeze every water source it touches. The golem will then take shape five meters in height and width. The ice golem is similar to a shadow clone in that it has it's own mind and moves according to how it see's fit,However the user still can manipulate the golems actions as it's still connected to his chakra. The golem will be able to merge in and out of any ice similar to Haku's ice mirror jutsu and leave at the same speeds aswell ( Counts as a B rank jutsu), can fire an A rank Ice beam made purely of ice chakra ( basically wind and water chakras) and it can explode Either on the users command or its own, this explosion is S ranked and can reach mid range from the spot from the spot it's in. This will leave a creator covered in frost afterwards.
Notes:
-Can only be used four times per battle
-Last's 4 turns
-When it explodes it can't be used again until the turn after said explosion.

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Dat Regice doe. LOL. Alright, I'm a bit confused about what you mean by cooling down the ice until it reaches ice age levels. Is this down to simply form the golem or does it affect that entire area as well? Also, explain more on its "moving in and out" ability along with the range and aspects of the "ice beam" ability.

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hyouton shimo hitonomi gekido ) Ice Release: Frost Bite Rage
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Self
Chakra Points:50(-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage Points:N/A (+20 damage points to Ice techs and +15 damage points to taijutsu +5 to water +5 to wind)
Description: The user will release a large amount of water and wind chakra around him gathering all the moisture in the air of a 10 meter radios and cover himself in it. This will look like the user skin tone is becoming lighter til it becomes pure Bluish-white, which in turn raises his/her defense due to be covered in ice(Basically able to block shurikens and kunais without special properties). In this form all Ice techs released from the user are 10 damage points stronger and when he touch something, it causes a minor case of frost bite, making taijutsu more effective. the user is also able to make ice jutsu with one hand seal.the user can not be harmed by fire of c rank or below as the ice around him would keep him cold and not inurjied.
Notes:
-Can only be used twice
-Last 3 turns
-No more ice Jutsus above A rank for 2 turns after jutsu ends
-can only use ice jutsu Water jutsu, wind jutsu and taijutsu while in this mode
-User will suffer a -10 to their health after the jutsu deactivates

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Hyouton jounin on rui (Ice style standing on thin ice)
Rank: C
Type: supplementary
Range: mid-long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points:
Description: The user will make five hand seals and place his hands on the ice below him. He will then focus his water and wind chakra into the ice and with his chakra he will make the ice as weak and brittle as possible making it easily broken. If either the user or the enemies step on the ice in front of the user it will shatter.
Note: only usable 4X per battle
Note: can be used to weaken other Ice jutsu B rank and below in this case the user does not need to make contact with the jutsu and will instead just transfer his chakra into the ice jutsu he wants to weaken. The ice jutsu will be weakened one rank.

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[Yasopp]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting

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(Sankyotenhoshi) - Three-Point Star
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+5 for every turn activated)
Damage: N/A
Description:
The Three-Point Star are simply three small spheric balls made out of a special metal that is light, yet durable and cannot be broken. Each of the balls have hundreds of pores to insert chakra into their hollow interior. By accumulating the chakra within these balls, the user will be able to fully control these balls, either for easy access or just to play with them when bored. By forming two hand seals, the balls form into an alignment, producing a golden equilateral triangular barrier. On each vertex of the triangle are the balls, projecting the triangle and keeping its form . The user can easily expand the triangle from larger attacks.
Notes
Defends from S-Rank attacks (cannot defend from non-solid attacks such as Genjutsu etc)
Activation of the barrier counts as a move
Barrier can only be used thrice per battle

☼ Declined ☼

Put it back to A >.>

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Miltonius) - Summoning Technique: Miltonius
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
Smearing blood onto the user's tattoo/scroll, the user must perform 3 hand seals before slamming his hand into the ground, summoning Miltonius. Miltonius is a huge snake and Reborn's personal summoning. Towering to the heights of 100-90 meters, Miltonius is a snake with willpower, able to withstand A-Rank jutsus. He is also very unique to other snakes. He wears a purple head piece on his head which resembles a dragon-like head. On his back is a large sheathed knife-like sword tied around his body. (Miltonius uses his very powerful tail to grasp the sword.) He is very proficient at swordsmanship, able to cut through A-Rank Jutsus. He is also widely known for his mastery over Doton Chakra, able to perform S-Rank Doton Jutsus without hand seals.
Notes:
Use of Sword can only be used thrice
Stays in the field for 4 turns
Able to endure A-Rank Jutsus
Can only be used once
Proof of Mastery over Snake

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☼ Declined ☼

He can take one A-rank technique, but he can't be immune to A-rank techniques. Remove that. Being able to cut through A-rank techniques needs to be removed as well.

(Sankyotenhoshi) - Three-Point Star
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+5 for every turn activated)
Damage: N/A
Description:
The Three-Point Star are simply three small spheric balls made out of a special metal that is light, yet durable and cannot be broken. Each of the balls have hundreds of pores to insert chakra into their hollow exterior. By accumulating the chakra within these balls, the user will be able to fully control these balls, either for easy access or just to play with them when bored. By forming two hand seals, the balls form into an alignment, producing a golden equilateral triangular barrier. On each vertex of the triangle are the balls, projecting the triangle and keeping its form . The user can easily expand the triangle from larger attacks.
Notes
Defends from A-Rank attacks (cannot defend from non-solid attacks such as Genjutsu etc)
Activation of the barrier counts as a move
Barrier can only be used thrice per battle

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Miltonius) - Summoning Technique: Miltonius
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
Smearing blood onto the user's tattoo/scroll, the user must perform 3 hand seals before slamming his hand into the ground, summoning Miltonius. Miltonius is a huge snake and Reborn's personal summoning. Towering to the heights of 100-90 meters, Miltonius is a snake with willpower, able to withstand ONE A-Rank jutsu. He is also very unique to other snakes. He wears a purple head piece on his head which resembles a dragon-like head. On his back is a large sheathed knife-like sword tied around his body. (Miltonius uses his very powerful tail to grasp the sword.) He is very proficient at swordsmanship, able to swing his sword with precise accuracy. He is also widely known for his mastery over Doton Chakra, able to perform S-Rank Doton Jutsus without hand seals.
Notes:
Use of Sword can only be used thrice
Stays in the field for 4 turns
Can only be summoned once
Proof of Mastery over Snake

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