[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Akisha]

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Ice Release: Seven Slice Dance ( Hyōton : Nanarenbu)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After creating sharp blades made of ice on his arms, the user shots himself at the opponent at high speeds and rapidly slashes his enemy seven times.

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This is how it looks.

~Approved~

 

[Darijan]

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(Kuchiyose: Howaido Mantoru) ~ Summoning: White Cloak
Type: Offence/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: A
Damage: N/A
Description: The user does the preparations for the summoning jutsu and than he summons a small and young white lion from their valley. His name is Mantoru and he has a fire affinity so he can use B and below rank fire jutsus without handseals. He has also a special ability which allows him to transform into a cloak which the summoner can wear, the cloak protects the user from B-rank and below fire jutsus up to twice per battle, he can transform in that special form only once per battle.
Restrictions:
- Can be summoned twice per battle
- User cant use any S rank and higher jutsu in the turn in which he summoned mantoru
- Transforming into the cloak is counted as one of the 3 moves per turn

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~Declined~ You need to provide the link to your approved contract for me to accept your custom summons.

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(Kuchiyose: Howaido Mantoru) ~ Summoning: White Cloak
Type: Offence/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: A
Damage: N/A
Description: The user does the preparations for the summoning jutsu and than he summons a small and young white lion from their valley. His name is Mantoru and he has a fire affinity so he can use B and below rank fire jutsus without handseals. He has also a special ability which allows him to transform into a cloak which the summoner can wear, the cloak protects the user from B-rank and below fire jutsus up to twice per battle, he can transform in that special form only once per battle.
Restrictions:
- Can be summoned twice per battle
- User cant use any S rank and higher jutsu in the turn in which he summoned mantoru
- Transforming into the cloak is counted as one of the 3 moves per turn

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~Approved~


(Howaido Raion Kata: Genjutsu Coulrophobia)White Lion Arts: Genjutsu: Coulrophobia
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user, while already having a summoned white lion will make the lion show his claws to the opponent, that way he will make his opponent get Coulrophobia, the fear of claws, the opponent will be very shocked and paralized, he wont be able to think normally and he will see many claws appearing all around him.
Restrictions:
- Usable twice per battle
- Must have signed the White Lion contract
- Genjutsu lasts 2 turns
- User won't be able to use genjutsu or forbidden ranked jutsus in the next 2 turns

~Declined~ You need to specify how you cast the genjutsu on the opponent, simply showing them your summon's claws won't be enough. You can never tell how your opponent will react to a genjutsu, you can only describe what they will see and physically feel (if you make them believe they're being injured for example).

Summoning Animal:

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Scroll Owner: Darijan
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Unknown. (For Now)
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: nothing for now

~Declined~ Similar contract already exist.

 

[Lucifer]

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(Fūton: Tenkuu Sochi) - Wind Style: Air Step
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: All
Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 Chakra Every Turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user changes their weight by flooding their muscles with chakra and gathering their Wind Nature chakra for boost around their entire body to give the user a weightless effect focusing it the most at the feet to walk on thin air, tho it doesn't changes the users speed. The user seems to glide over the ground and air, stepping so lightly that there is no sound generated nor enough pressure to set off most traps or leave a trace of their movement. So due to the immens pressure pust on the legs with the wind chakra it grants the user to walk over thin air by, focusing your chakra into the feet this jutsu is similiar in a way to the basics of the ninja like walking on water infused with chakra into the feet. So the user is consantly focusing there chakra into both legs. This, jutsu can be used for a long period if the, user adds +5 chakra every turn to keep it active. This requires little chakra to maintain but prolonged use will begin to cause fatigue due to the strain put on both legs. When deployed masterfully air step can be used to push off of air with enough strength to launch themselves, into the air with full control tho not to evade attacks.

An example of Air Step when used:

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Note: Can only be used two, times per battle.
Note: The user must have, mastered wind and also specialize in it.
Note: The user cannot use any fire technique as long as this jutsu is active.
Note: Can only be taught by Strawberry.
Note: After this jutsu is deactivated the user seems to move slow motion (like matrix) for two turns.

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

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(Fūton/Katon: Kurenai Mari) – Wind/Fire Release: Crimson Ball~
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing the required hand seals Snake → Horse → Boar the user will, focus a large amount of katon chakra into both hands creating two small balls (the size of a smoke bomb) and then the user starts moving his/her hands at rapid speed spinning them all over and while doing that he user will start gathering fūton chakra around the ball covering it like a coat, making it slightly bigger then the rasengan. And after a few seconds the user will push them away at the opponent(s) while on their way the crimson balls will absorb more oxygen and eventually they'll merge with each other, making them just as big as a normal TBB but with an crimson color. As it reaches short range of the opponent, it will absorb the coated wind chakra and expand giving the user the chance to form the snake handseal doing that the ball will explode eating away all the oxygen in shot range severly burning the opponent(s) and also blowing every object back with the released explosion power.

Note: Can only be taught by Karyuu.
Note: The user must have mastered the required elements inorder to use this jutsu.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: The user can not perform any Wind or Fire techniques for at least two turns.
Note: This counts as two moves of the user due to having two elements combined.

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist, also I don't accept exploding spheres anymore unless there's a good reason for it. It was overdone.
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(Benhime: Kan Odori Kisaki) – The Red Queen Style: The First Dance of the Queen
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user grabs benihime by the hilt while the blade still remeans in the sheat doing so the user quick draws the blade extremely fast to strike, while it's still covered in magma making a horizontal slash movement at the opponent while moving her body in an cirkel pattern (Like those samurai shiz) releasing a cirkeling wave of black lava and fums at the opponent(s) but it's hard to predict from which direction it'll strike due to it moving at high speeds and cirkeling all around, when released the user will re-sheat benihime in a blink of amn eye.

Note: Can only be taught by Karyuu.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
Note: This jutsu can only be used by Benihime (The Red Queen).
Note: The user can't perform any lava/fire techniques the next turn.

Wepon: (Already Approved) (Benihime) - The Red Queen

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Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+5 for the kenjutsu boost.)
Damage Points: 80
Description: Benihime is a special blade forged in the Iwagakure village with sacred methods which allowed the blade to look black because they forged it out of many vulcano diamonds that is why it is black. The blade itself is indestructible, making it quite effective in blocking and deflecting incoming attacks from basic weapons. Anything above a B-Rank attacks would hit the sword out of the users hand but, it can't block it. If, benihime is unsheated it will cover itself with lava. This only works when the sword is in one of the users hands and they state that they are doing so. The user is able to focus their charka into the sword surrounding it with lava charka, though this lava turns to black due to the sword's effect. This black lava increases the damage of basic kenjutsu by +10 damage. This lasts for up to 5 turns and can be used once per battle.
The abilities of this sword are quite simple, The user can release a small Shockwave of magma (which is the highest form of lava and the hottest coated in fumes and, hot gasses) from the blade but doing so they will need to add +10 more chakra but this move can only be used 3 times per battle.
The wave it self is a S-Ranked jutsu, and it can be fired at Short to Long range.

.Note: The user must have mastered Fire/Earth/Lava inorder to use this wepon.
.Note: Only Karyuu can use this sword.
.Note: The user must be at Sage rank to use this sword.
.Note: This sword can only be used if your bio has the lava KG.
.Note: Can only be used once per battle.
.Note: Can only be used for 5 turns.

Yougan No Benihime:

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~Declined~ No elemental attacks being shot out of swords will be approved. Too many of those already.

 

[Yagura Yondaime]

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Weapon: Togatta ejji - Sharp Edge
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: 50
Description: This sword was used to fight off strong beast. but it was also used in countless shinobi wars and it was passed from one generation to other. it is approximately 24 inches or 60 centimeters, its named sharp edge because anything it touches it cuts through it. This sword has the ability to Burst out wind. the user must be training in wind in order to wield this sword. The user must put the chakra into this sword to release a tornado of wind, but if the user mastered the wind then this sword can absorb wind attacks.

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Minku no itachi ) - Summoning Technique: Minku the Mink
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 45
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on the back of his hand and slams his hands on the ground to call forth The Awesome Mink. Mink is a really giant mink which carry's a Giant katana which is same sized just same a mink. The katana he carry's cannot be picked or carried around by any other creature or human. He is special because outside his body is filled with little spikes which can damage if touched without caution. he can carry maximum 5 people on him on top of his head there are no spikes so people can get on him safely. he is really fat he is really thick so he can jump really high probably higher then a new york building >_<. From his birth he was always training to master the the earth element, he hasn't fully mastered it yet but he can easily use earth up to B-ranks. he is not really friendly to other except to his owner.

• Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
• Note: Minku can stay on the field for 3 turns per battle.
• Note: The user must have signed the Mink contract.
• Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the The contract.
• Note: The user must have mastered or have trained in C-ranks in earth

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Suiton: Wōtā Rokku (Water Lock)
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user manipulates the round and creates a large ball of water that can be used to attack and to trap his/her opponent. If Specialty Water,it can be reformed if broken.

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~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
Thank you.

 

[SHARINGAN_USER UCHIHA_ITACHI]

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(Sairento koku kaze)- Silent Cutting Wind
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description:The summoning GAVA flies in the sky and reaches above the target without making any noise then by moving wings,he shoots powerful wind blades toward the target right above on his head which is powerful enough to make curve-shaped scar on the ground.Target will be dead if get a direct hit.

(kyougeki chisoku)-Lasting Speed
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: By releasing chakra from its wings, summoning get extremely fast speed which is impossible for a human eye to detect [unless having Dojutsu] which also allow him to pass through several B rank attacks [ storms,fires etc].


(sui kansen)- Acidic Sweat
Rank: S
Type: Offinsive
Range: Long-Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage: 80
Description: In this jutsu, Gava add his chakra with a special fluid in his stomach which becomes a deadly acid and can melt even a solid rock, then split it from his mouth[beak wide open] targeting the enemy.

~All Declined~ Where are the restrictions?

 

[Mugiwara]

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(Honeton: Tenjoukai) - Bone Release: Celestial World
Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:100
Description: A jutsu developed by Kaguya D. Luffy, the Sage of the Diamond Bones. Luffy created this jutsu shortly after finishing his journey to become a Sage. It is now known as his ultimate jutsu. To use this jutsu, the user must prepare some things beforehand: Dance of the Young Ferns must have been used beforehand, and the Bone Flower must be used on himself to protect himself from this technique. Before using the Bone Flower, the user releases a large amount of chakra into the atmosphere, which he sends into the large bone spikes from the Dance of the Young Ferns technique. As it is sent into the bone spikes, the chakra compresses itself in each of the bone spike and the user quickly uses Bone Flower to protect himself and then uses this technique to detonate the bone spikes. All of the bone spikes shatter into a billion pieces flying at high speeds in all directions. The aftermath of this jutsu is nothing else than bone shards everywhere, and a lone bone flower in the middle of it all, the user cancels his Bone Flower technique after the "explosion" ends. This jutsu puts so much strain on the user that he is unable to use any aspect of his Kekkei Genkai for the rest of the battle, his bone density returns to the normal density of human bones, he can no longer manipulate his bones in any shape or form, which of course means that this technique cannot be used more than once per battle. The user also uses up a lot of chakra, meaning he cannot use any forbidden rank techniques for the rest of the battle and S rank for 1 turn, if the user has already used a forbidden rank technique during his battle, he will not be able to use this one(Cannot use any forbidden rank techniques before or after using this one). The user takes -15 damage from the strain and it can only be used by the Sage of the Diamond Bones.
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-Approved-

 

[TheGreyFox]

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Shadow chain jutsu(kage kusari jutsu)
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:60
Damage Points:N/A
Description the user takes all the shadows around and reaches it to the enemey and the shadows turn into chains that hold the enemey arms and leges kepeping the enemey still

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

Shadow claw jutsu(kage tsume jutsu)
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:60
Damage Points:N/A
Description the user pulls out a claw and using his or her shadow wraps around the claw and the user dashes twords the enemey and plunges the shadow into the enemey chest (note) the claw dosent tuch onley the shadow do

~Declined~ honestly, I don't get it. What did you do with the shadow? Did you extend it in the form of a claw or spikes? You need to re-do your description.

Shadow lance(kage mori jutsu)
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:60
Damage Points:65
Descriptionthe user uses his or her own shadow to make a lance and can used it to fight (note) this jutsu can be used until shadows are no more

~Declined~ Don't put the note in the description. Also, how would this lance react when you stop touching it directly?

 

[McKnockout]

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Submitting Custom Weapon:

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(Kinshou Getsuei) – Little Moon
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A (+10 to Tessenjutsu)
Description: The Kinshou Getsuei was crafted by McKnockout many years ago shortly after his return from the Land of Iron and creation of his own element, Platinum. Kinshou Getsuei is a large Japanese war fan or Tessen similar to one that Temari wields. However, unlike Temari’s fan, the Kinshou Getsuei is a Tessen made from hardened, light-weight Platinum which is highly infused with his chakra – so much so that it can only be wielded by him and starts to emit a bright, shining glow/light akin to that of the Moon. If any other person picks up the fan, they would not be able unfold the fan and as result, use any of its abilities. The Kinshou Getsuei is a folding fan with 10 ribs that are in fact blades of Platinum disguised to look like a normal, harmless fan. The fan itself is about 3/4 of McKnockout’s height and has countless engraved kanji inscriptions all over it. The fan itself, when collapsed, can also be used as a make shift sword and is able to deflect kunai and shuriken when opened and/or planted into the ground. This suggests that the fan is entirely made of Platinum rather than paper.

Like Temari’s fan, the wielder of Kinshou Getsuei is able to call down a variety of wind-related jutsus as well as some other unique abilities. These are:

• Indestructible (though it can't cut through anything)
• “Wind Release: Wind Spinning Blade Barrage Technique” gets 2 Ranks in strength when used.
• “Wind Release: Severe Hurricane Wall” gets 2 Ranks in strength when used.
• The engraved kanji inscriptions are in fact summoning seals and when chakra is channelled into them allows the user to summon various things.
• By channelling wind chakra into it, the user can dispel up to B-rank lightning jutsu by hitting into the jutsu or releasing an appropriate gust of wind (two times per battle). And an A-rank lightning jutsu using the same method (once per battle).

Restrictions:
Note: Must have mastered Wind element.
Note: Can only be wielded by McKnockout.
Note: All abilities count towards the user’s jutsu count.
Note: To use the fan’s abilities, the user must have it in his hands or strapped to his back.
Note: The user is more vulnerable to fire jutsu when he is holding the fan in his hands and receives +10 damage.

~Declined~ Very well made technique, the abilities are ok, my only problem is the restrictions. You have none O-o. While being a weapon, it still release S-rank jutsus, and hence need to be restricted.

(Kinshou Getsuei) – Little Moon
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A (+10 to Tessenjutsu)
Description: The Kinshou Getsuei was crafted by McKnockout many years ago shortly after his return from the Land of Iron and creation of his own element, Platinum. Kinshou Getsuei is a large Japanese war fan or Tessen similar to one that Temari wields. However, unlike Temari’s fan, the Kinshou Getsuei is a Tessen made from hardened, light-weight Platinum which is highly infused with his chakra – so much so that it can only be wielded by him and starts to emit a bright, shining glow/light akin to that of the Moon. If any other person picks up the fan, they would not be able unfold the fan and as result, use any of its abilities. The Kinshou Getsuei is a folding fan with 10 ribs that are in fact blades of Platinum disguised to look like a normal, harmless fan. The fan itself is about 3/4 of McKnockout’s height and has countless engraved kanji inscriptions all over it. The fan itself, when collapsed, can also be used as a make shift sword and is able to deflect kunai and shuriken when opened and/or planted into the ground. This suggests that the fan is entirely made of Platinum rather than paper.

Like Temari’s fan, the wielder of Kinshou Getsuei is able to call down a variety of wind-related jutsus as well as some other unique abilities. These are:

• Indestructible (though it can't cut through anything)
• “Wind Release: Wind Spinning Blade Barrage Technique” gets 1 Rank in strength when used.
• “Wind Release: Severe Hurricane Wall” gets 2 Ranks in strength when used.
• The engraved kanji inscriptions are in fact summoning seals and when chakra is channelled into them allows the user to summon various things.
• By channelling wind chakra into it, the user can dispel up to B-rank lightning jutsu by hitting into the jutsu or releasing an appropriate gust of wind (two times per battle). And an A-rank lightning jutsu using the same method (once per battle).

Restrictions:
Note: Must have mastered Wind element.
Note: Can only be wielded by McKnockout.
Note: All abilities count towards the user’s jutsu count.
Note: To use the fan’s abilities, the user must have it in his hands or strapped to his back.
Note: The user can not use an ability twice in the same turn.
Note: Due to the strain of handling such a big weapon, the user must have mastered taijutsu to use this weapon.
Note: The user is more vulnerable to fire jutsu when he is holding the fan in his hands and receives +10 damage.

I lowered one of the jutsus to just A-rank and added more restrictions.

~Pending~ Link me to "Severe Hurricane Wall" please. Do it though VM and I'll recheck this technique.

(Raiton: Hourou Hibana) - Lightning style: Wandering Spark
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 40 (+20 in conjunction with a Suiton jutsu)
Description: The user performs a single handseal and concentrates his Raiton chakra at a specific spot in front of him (usually a spot on his opponent) and creates an electric spark (an electrostatic discharge) at that spot, zapping the opponent. This small discharge of lightning numbs the affected area temporarily as it "lights up". However it does not have enough power/lethality to completely electrocute the opponent; it is used more as a method to distract and confuse the opponent. This technique can be used to stall the opponent e.g. zapping his hands while he is performing handseals to disrupt his jutsu. Or, it can be used to electrify metals or other materials that conduct electricity or to electrify a Suiton jutsu.
*Note: Can only be used 5 times per battle.
*Note: The target must be within the user's field of vision.
*Note: The spark disappears as soon as it discharges i.e. it doesn't continue to electrocute/zap the target.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout
Declined, the disrupting a opponents handseals would be against the timeframe

(Raiton: Hourou Hibana) - Lightning style: Wandering Spark
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 40 (+20 in conjunction with a Suiton jutsu)
Description: The user performs a single handseal and concentrates his Raiton chakra at a specific spot in front of him (usually a spot on his opponent) and creates an electric spark (an electrostatic discharge) at that spot, zapping the opponent. This small discharge of lightning numbs the affected area temporarily as it "lights up". However it does not have enough power/lethality to completely electrocute the opponent; it is used more as a method to distract and confuse the opponent. This technique can be used to electrify metals or other materials that conduct electricity or to electrify a Suiton jutsu.
*Note: Can only be used 5 times per battle.
*Note: The target must be within the user's field of vision.
*Note: The spark disappears as soon as it discharges i.e. it doesn't continue to electrocute/zap the target.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Removed the part about disrupting handseals. That can not be done.

~Declined~ I'm extremely tempted to put a DNR on this one. Never submit something that takes immediate effect on your opponent, how cheap is that? A similar technique would be Amaterasu and I'm almost positive you know how generally hated it is in our RP.

 

[Mattobi]

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(Suringu geijutsu: Dangan o kakudai) Sling Arts: Expanding Bullet
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user of the slingshot infuses the pellet he is about to shoot with earth chakra. Once the pellet is on its way towards its target, the user has to perform a one handed handseal and manipulating the chakra inside the pellet so that it grows bigger and a large ball of earth flies towards the opponent.

Note: Requires a slingshot
Note: Can be used three times per battle
Note: Can only be used with Mattobi's permission

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

(Suringu geijutsu: Kirameku dangan) Sling Arts: Sparkling Bullet
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user of the slingshot infuses the pellet he is about to shoot with lightning chakra. Once the pellet is infused and on its way, it gains a sharp point made of lightning chakra and is able to cut trough B-ranked earth jutsus and hit the opponent.

Note: Requires a slingshot
Note: Can only be used with Mattobi's permission

~Pending~ You can already infuse weapons with lightning chakra with cannon techniques or simply by saying it, so do you still wish for such a technique? VM me about it.

(Suringu geijutsu: Dangan o bakuhatsu) Sling Arts: Exploding Bullet
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user of the slingshot infuses the pellet with his fire chakra upto the point that the pellet is about to explode and burst into flames. The user will then shoot the pellet towards his target and the pellet will explode upon impact and set the victim on fire.

Note: Requires a slingshot
Note: Can be used three times per battle
Note: Can only be used with Mattobi's permission

~Approved~

 

[HakkeKoshu]

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Custom Weapon request:

Monado
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Rank:S
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:50 / From behind 80
Description:The Monado is a magical crimson-colored sword which envelops itself with the users chakra making it longer at will.

Note: Requires HakkeKoshu's permission.
Declined, gain the appropriate rank

 

[Kaziname]

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(Fuer Grissa ost Drauka) – Bringer of Death
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description:

Rather remarkable and unique weapon created by chakra molders of the old. Said to originate from distant land in the north, where blacksmiths used chakra along with mastery of their talent to forge armor and weapons, this weapon comes in form of surprisingly normal looking, brown, leather bracer which covers entire forearm, its only exception being round, blue crystal embed into its center which shines upon every usage. In ancient texts, named as "One that is All" and "Form without Form", it brought many scholars and historians of the time into heated debate which was to conclude if weapon ever existed. After many years of arguments and counter-arguments, texts were labeled as nothing more than bedtime stories and as such soon fell into depths of oblivion. After hundreds of years, a man stumbled over a weapon while searching for gold in long-forgotten crypts of northern lords. After spending over twenty years on discovering and mastering abilities of the weapon he possessed, he systematically assassinated key people in the rule over northern districts while at the same time activating himself in the field of politics. Soon enough, he ensured himself and his bloodline a constant seat of power in rule over north. Weapon then passed from father to son and one of them was foolish enough to write down abilities on his deathbed because he didn't want his son to spend years on mastering abilities on his own. Not long after father's death, son was killed in his cradle and weapon was stolen where it's every traces is lost. Now, after all these centuries and decades, rumors has it that a lone ninja got his hands on it and secrets to its abilites...

User can, by using his chakra, create any weapon, shield or armor on any place on his body through use of special bracer. While they don't possess any special abilities they can be imbued with elemental chakra in order to increase their effectiveness. Although they can be thrown or shot, they will dissolve into thin air in a short time after hitting the target as they got too far from bracer. Whatever is created doesn't count as jutsu.

That would be it (sry for history) There are no restrictions as I don't think that weapons is too strong. It's merely taijutsu amplifier - you can make a shield to block the sword and then form it into knife in order to attack, but that is as far as it goes - no additional damage to anything, no less handseal thing, nothing. I may make jutsus for the weapon if it gets approved...

~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
Thank you.

Note: I don't want to be a douche, but I must apply the rules uniformly to all members in order to be unbiased. Of course I'll read your history since some members have a tendency to hide abilities in them.

 

[Mugen Ryukyu]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouton youshiki : Dansu sono hyouketsu waza) - Ice Style: Dance Of The Freezing Art

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/ Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra costs: 40
Damage costs: 80
Description: The user rushes the opponent while constantly flowing ice chakra out of their arms and legs. He then gages the opponent in taijutsu, With each connecting hit the user releases ice chakra wherever he hit. So with each successful hit on a certain area of the opponents body begins to freeze. If the user hits them in that same spot twice it would freeze over.
* Due to the constant flow of chakra to the users limbs, It can only lasts two turns.
* After effects wear off, the user cannot use Hyouton jutsu for the next two turns.
Note: If a certain part is hit only once, If the opponent doesn't do something about it the freezing will begin to spread and that area of the body will be frozen within a turn.
Note: Can also be used in conjunction with other taijutsu techniques.

~Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
Thank you.

|Torikkusuta| - Trickster
Rank:A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will take on a semi-crouching stance, balanced on the balls of the feet while leaning forward, and holding their sword elevated and at an angle so that the tip points towards the ground in front of them, with their non-dominant hand resting on the underside of the blade, underneath the cross-guard. The chakra from this stance helps augment the user's speed, allowing them to greatly increase their speed while moving, by about 33%, in addition to the user lowering their center of gravity. This stance revolves mostly around & emphasizes quick dodges and maneuvers.
*While in this stance, no other stances can be used.
*Can only be used once per battle.
* Only Kenjutsu & Taijutsu can be used in this stance.
* Only Keostu Eclipse and I can teach & use this jutsu

~Declined~ Check the bold part: your feet have balls ? Also, increasing your speed by 33% is a definite no. Even by 10% I wouldn't approve it simply because your speed is not absolute and hence this technique can be used while you're in some sort of mode that already boost your speed. Imagine stacking the 8 inner gates and this technique...

(Tei Akkei) - Air Trick
Type:Attack
Rank: A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Using the boost of speed from the trickster stance the user disappears in the blink of an eye and appears above the enemy's head in the sky confusing the enemy and leaving him open for an attack. Can also be used to dodge attacks.
* Can only be used twice per battle
*Must have activated the Trickster's stance before use of this jutsu.

~Declined~ Trickster stance wasn't approved.

 

[Yüme1]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

[ Hebunrī hebunrīsōdo no sutairu 風神 ] - Heavenly Sword Style Of The Seven Wind's.
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Heavenly Sword Style is a mixture between many from's and attack's. The holder can unleash a battering thunder of different strikes and defenses that are unmatched by other swordsmen. There are seven different sword styles in all. Each style is primarily different from the next, allowing the user switch form's in a split second, confusing most enemy's when it comes to tracking style. The seven style's are named after Seven wind god's, Fūjin, the Japanese wind god, Shu, Egyptian god of the wind and air, Tāwhirimātea, Māori god of weather, Enlil, the Mesopotamian/Sumerian god of air and wind, Anemoi, the Greek wind god, Vayu, the Hindu God of Wind, and Feng Bo, the Chinese wind god. These styles are devestating to tell the least, and very few, if any, have been able to stop this technique.
Style's:

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Fūjin: This technique mainly focuses on speed and accuracy. The speed gained by using the secret of this technique is devastating, and almost completely unavoidable. The user releases plenty set's of multiple quick strikes at one time, and never misses due to gained awareness and focus on the enemy.
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Shu: This specific are in specialization mainly focuses on defense alone. The user completely set's focus on any incoming attack, and counter's it completely using a blade alone. The strength barrier cannot be broken.
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Tāwhirimātea: The user specializes in hasty, fast movement's with the body. Allowing them to make their way out of a tight situation, or dodge an unblock-able technique quickly. This can also be used as a countering mechanism.
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Enlil: The tactical style. The user will use the help of the hands to counter. Once the target attack's with a physical based technique, the user will counter with the arm or hand in any specific way, (avoiding the damaging part of the blade or weapon) , opening up fatal attacks.
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Anemoi: This is a strength based technique. The user will use massive amount's of strength in each blow, knocking the other opponent of course, or out strengthening the opponent.
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Vayu: Allow's you to freely create form's in the air. Attacking is easier without a base to stand on in voided area's, giving you the upper hand in this type of situation.
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Feng Bo: This is a special technique. Which enables the user to easily, and quickly counter strike in incoming blade by dodging and slicing. Only a great samurai could avoid this technique.

Can only be used by a Samurai.
Sequence Must only be used once per-battle.
The techniques last as long as the user need's them to.

~All Declined~ You're only allowed to submit 3 jutsus per week, breaking this rule results in a 1 week ban from this thread (one full cycle). Your ban will be lifted on the 31 of January.

Note: I warned members many times about this, using one technique/weapon/summon to submit many more summons/jutsus/weapons is prohibited. Right now, with 1 technique you submitted 6 moves that could be individually considered jutsus.

 

[battleandthebad]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(fuuton: ketsunoana feisu kitai atakku) wind release: butt face gas attack
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: the user builds fuuton chakra in there stomache then lets out a fart using the fuuton chakra to increase the odor and guide the gas to the opponents nose
-can only be used when your butts facing your opponent
-super effective against those with hightened sence of smell
-can only be taught by battleandthebad

~Declined do not resubmit~ One more stupid technique like that and you're banned from this thread for 2 weeks.

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(fan doki) fan wrath
Type: Mode
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A [+10 to wind techs]
Description: fan wrath is a fighting style which uses as the name suggest a fan it combines the fan as a weapon and as a catalyst for fuuton jutsu while in this mode you can only use fuuton jutsu and fan doki jutsu [which will be fan related moves and fuuton] the upside to this is most fuuton atacks will no long require handseals and you gain a ten point boost to wind techs fan wrath is primarly mid range fighting style that generally has the user useing the fan as a blunt weapon to push the opponent into mid range if they are short so they can deal devestating fuuton jutsu this fighting style requires the user to adept in weapon use as well as fuuton jutsu
-can only be traind be battleandthebad and heavens blade
-last 4 turns
-can be entered once in a match
-can be left at any time
-cant use fuuton jutsu the next turn after you leave this mode and on the second turn after deactivation futon jutsu do 10 less damage
-cant use any other elements besides fuuton while in this mode

Approved


(Kuchiyose: kumo) summoning: clouds
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user summons clouds from the leoliguar home village these clouds change the environment allowing the leoliguar summons to use a special techneque that normally they can only use in there village each tech is different depending on the personallity of the leoliguar
-clouds stay on the field until destroyed
-can only be used once per match
-must have signed leoliguar contract

[before you decline this jutsu please keep this in mind when naruto went to the toads village he asked why he couldnt just keep some of the oil on him so he could go into SM anytime and grampa toad said that outside there environment it would evaporate so the basis of my jutsu is solid in my opion also when i say enviroment i dont mean the field will change more like a the air will change slightly not enough for people to notice except maybe the inuzuka clan cause they have super smell]

Declined, do not resubmit
NOTE: I was given permission to resubmit these on battleandthebads behalf

(predator mo-do) predator mode
Type: Mode
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: this mode can only be entered while (Kuchiyose: kumo) summoning: clouds is in play the user absorbs the atomshere from the leoliguars home and enters this mode this atlers the users the senses giving them hightened vision, smell, hearing, and a speed boost this also allows the user to use all leoliguar kata moves
-last 4 turns
-can only be entered once
-must have signed leoliguar contract and been given permission by heavens blade
-once you leave this mode you are exhausted and can only use 2 jutsu per turn for the next two turns

Declined, do not resubmit

(fan doki: biggu yurasu) fan wrath: big swing
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: user builds fuuton chakra into there closed fan then hits his opponent with the fan as your fan comes in contact with your opponent you release the wind chakra causing a gust of wind which blows them back to mid range even if the attack is blocked/dodged the gust of wind will still knock them into mid range
-only does damage if opponent is hit by the fan
-can only be while in fan doki mode
-can only be taught by battleandthebad

~Approved~

(fan doki: jougo) fan wrath: funnel
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
chakra: 20
Damage: -
Description: by swinging your fan you create a funnel of wind underneath your opponent lifting them up into the air which knocks them off ballance
-only lifts them a couple of feet of the ground
-must be in fan doki mode
-can only be taught by battleandthebad

~Declined~ Does the wind take place directly under the opponent, or is it the wind that was pushed by the fan that made it's way to you opponent and lifted him up?

(fan doki: jougo) fan wrath: funnel
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
chakra: 20
Damage: -
Description: by swinging your fan you create a funnel of wind underneath your opponent lifting them up into the air which knocks them off ballance the funnel is created from the wind pushed toward your opponent from the fan but the funnel isnt formed until the wind has surrounded your opponent
-only lifts them a couple of feet of the ground
-must be in fan doki mode
-can only be taught by battleandthebad

~Approved~

(janku yoroi) junk armor
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Range: Self
chakra: 30 [summoning cost]
Damage: [+5 tai, +10 fuuton, +10 doton]
Description: the reason this is called junk armor is because its ability to protect its wearer is pathetic it can protect them from normal kunai or shuriken [not if its been enhanced with chakra] this armor is made of two special metals which have a releation to fuuton and donton chakra the metals that where used where suppose to make it light as air and harder then any rock however there was a mistake and the armor while being very light the defence is pathetic infact if your hit with any element other then those to the armor increases the damage taken however the was found to increase the wearers offencive powers in the two elements and in tai [punching someone witha a metal glove is still going to hurt more then a bare fist]
-if hit by suiton, raiton, or katon attack the rank of the attack you are hit by is increased by one
-user summons the armor by placing ther hand on the tattoo
-can only be used by battleandthebad and the those with his permission

~Declined~ I read the bold part 3 times before giving up. Re-word the description and re-submit.

 

[AntiHero]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Oonami Konami)- Water Style: Big Wave, small wave
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates two layers of water charka, one dense layer in their mouth, and regular layer in their throat. Once released, the first wave crashes into an opponent causing internal damage upon impact, the user rides or hides in the second wave but this cannot be seen as the first wave blocks the opponent’s view. Allowing the user to remain hidden and follow up with an attack or jutsu.
Note: Can only use C-rank and below water jutsu as follow up attack.
Note: Can only be used/taught by AntiHero.

(Suiton: Kyuutai Tsunami)- Water Style: Orb of Tsunami
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing seven hands, the user concentrates their chakra on the moisture around them creating a large orb of water above their head. The orb can then be used as a water source for jutsu or be used to absorb an opponent’s water jutsu.
Note Can only be taught by AntiHero.
Note: Can only use water jutsu as long as this jutsu is active.

Summoning Jutsu: Carbuncle Tribe (Kuchiyose no Jutsu : Carbuncle Zoku )
Scroll Owner: AntiHero
-Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
-Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
-Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Persian, Liepard, Luxray
• Persian, Battle Cat

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Type: Summoning
Rank: C
Range: short/long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 30
Description: Persian appearance is arguably more similar to Siamese cat than its namesake. She is as big as a Puma. The gem on its head makes it resemble a Carbuncle, a Latin-American mythological beast which had a jewel on its forehead. Her tail has a distinctive whorl at the end. Her fur is pale tan with the exception of black-rimmed ears. Perhaps her most distinctive feature is the red jewel in the center of her forehead. Many of the members of the Cat’s Ear Tribe with elemental abilities have similar jewels; Persian, however, does not demonstrate any affinities to a particular element, so this connection seems to be purely coincidental. Like 'real-life' cats, Persian is capable of retracting its claws and bringing them out again when needed, she is also very swift and can track peoples scent. Its thick whiskers are very sensitive to changes in air movements, enabling it to detect its prey by movement alone. Persian's lithe muscles also enable it to walk without making a sound.
Note: Persian cannot use elemental jutsu.
Note: Each jutsu Persian uses counts towards the users 3 jutsu per turn count.
Note: Can only be summon by AntiHero and others who have signed the Carbuncle contract.
Note: Can only be in play for 3-turns.

• Liepard, Cruel Prankster

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Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: short/long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: Depends on the jutsu it uses.
Description: Liepard appears to be a leopard cat, a species of wildcat that appear to have traits of both housecats and leopards. It slightly resembles a black panther, because the spots on the panther's coat can be seen if examined closely. Liepard is a slender, primarily purple-colored feline, similar to a large house cat. It has a pink "mask" patterning over its eyes, a pink nose, and small yellow "eyebrows". It has two pairs of long yellow whiskers, with the tufted underside of its body and the tips of its legs also yellow. Its body is speckled with yellow rosettes, and it has a curling tail that looks somewhat like a sickle. Liepard move silently and elegantly, preferring to take down their opponents by stealth. They sneak up behind their victims, and attack before they have a chance to react.
Note: Liepard can turn itself into mist, having an affinity for water.
Note: Can only use C-rank and below water jutsu.
Note: Each jutsu Liepard uses counts towards the users 3 jutsu per turn count.
Note: Can only be summon by AntiHero and others who have signed the Carbuncle contract.
Note: Can only be in play for 3-turns.

• Luxray, Intimidating Eyes

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Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: Depends on the jutsu it uses.
Description: Luxray has a spiky black mane that covers its head down to its legs. Its back legs are black and blue and it has a black tail with a star-like shape on the tip. It has three rings on the backs of its legs and has red eyes. Luxray have extraordinary eyesight. It is so powerful that they can see through most objects, like x-ray vision. Luxray is extremely vicious, although very loyal to AntiHero. He can administer extreme amounts of power through electricity. Because of his flawless x-ray like vision, practically nothing can go unseen by its eyes.
Note: Can only use Lighting jutsu C-rank and below.
Note: Can not be harmed by lighting jutsu C-rank or below.
Note: Each jutsu Luxray uses counts towards the users 3 jutsu per turn count.
Note: Can only be summon by AntiHero and others who have signed the Carbuncle contract.
Note: Can only be in play for 3-turns.

(Mods please tell me what I have to do to get these approved if they don't)

~All Declined~ You're only allowed to submit 3 jutsus per week, breaking this rule results in a 1 week ban from this thread (one full cycle). Your ban will be lifted on the 30th of January.

 

[Howard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Chisou Taishite Prometheus) Feast of Prometheus
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user releases Raiton chakra much like in 16 Pillar bind but instead of forming multiple pillars he forms just one behind the opponent. From this pillar sprouts out chains made of the same material as the pillar itself they wrap around the opponent's arms, legs, waist, and neck holding him firmly in place. Once bound to the pillar/stake he is violently shocked for about 15 seconds with a current of electricity. The shock is enough to stun the opponent and paralyze parts of his body but not enough to kill him. The chains also restrict the persons movement making it so he can't place his hands together to form hand seals. Once he is firmly bound in place and the current has subsided a bird summon will swoop in and begin to dig into the persons belly he is aiming to eat the person's liver in the most gruesome of ways while the opponent is forced to watch. The bird continues the process starting with the liver once finished he moves on to the stomach then the lungs and finally the heart if the opponent hasn't made an escape yet the bird moves it's way up to his head and begins to peck at his eyes going for the brain the summon will then begin to devour the brain little by little.
Note:
-Once the electric current Subsides the user's part in the jutsu is finished and he is able to attack further.
-Can only be used once per battle
-Must have a bird summon on the field at the time of the jutsu, Jutsu does not summon the bird for you.
-Must be the only Raiton jutsu used this turn by the user of the jutsu
-Must know 16 Pillar Bind and have mastered Raiton Release to use

~Declined~ We never accept techniques that graphically elaborates how they kill their opponents. In fact, if your description explicitly states that it kills the opponent you're sure it'll be declined. Re-word the description.

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(Kchuysei: Tako Artemis) Summoning: Artemis
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb drawing blood he then opens his hands wide and summons Artemis. she is the younger sister of Apollo. She is very mature and understanding toward all things both battle ready and non battle ready. She has on both Talons a sharp metal cleat type apparatus which can be used to do a considerable amount of damage she can channel her Katon nature into them giving them a massive cutting ability and burning. She is to small to carry anyone on her back but she makes up for her inability by being a keen fighter. She can use any katon jutsu up to A rank that the user knows as they have trained together for a long time working together on timing and jutsu. Together Apollo and Artemis make one of the best Kite summoning combos Apollo able to use Wind that powers up his sisters fire making for devastating combo attacks. She has a sharp sense of both sound and sight but has the ability to tune out unnecessary noise. She can easily spot an opponent from a range away. Around one of her Talons she has a band that has the Heno Heno Moheji as a way to show that she is a favorite summon of my Kakashi bio.
-Can speak English
-Can only be in play for 5-turns.
-Can only be Summoned by someone with the Kite Contract.
-Any Jutsu used counts to the three jutsu
-Channeling of Katon nature counts as a jutsu
-Can only be Summoned once per battle.

~Approved~
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(Kchuysei: Tako Aporo) Summoning: Apollo
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb drawing blood he then claps his hands and summons Apollo. Apollo is a White-tailed Kite he is large enough to carry one person on his back and can fly at fast speeds with a rider. He is the only brother of another Kite named Artemis he and his sister Artemis were born from the same mother the same day and are twins. Apollo is a few minutes older than Artemis but it doesn't show much he has a immature personality in stark contrast to his sister who has a mature personality understanding of nature as well as her brother's lack of maturity. Apollo has trained with the summoner and has learned all he can in his affinity for Fuuton he can use any Fuuton jutsu the user knows up to S rank. His beak and talons are razor sharp and can clutch onto prey. His Talons are large enough to hold a human and strong enough to break bones like twigs. He can screech at an incredibly high pitch by using his Fuuton chakra to aid in the screech. It is enough to deafen the opponent 1 turn and leave his ears ringing the next turn. Anyone on the field is effected even the summoner if he doesn't prepare by covering his ears. Around one of his Talons he has a band that has the Heno Heno Moheji as a way to show that he is a favorite summon of my Kakashi bio.
Note:
-Can speak English
-Can only be in play for 5-turns.
-Can only be Summoned by someone with the Kite Contract.
-Any Jutsu used counts to the three jutsu
-Can only be Summoned once per battle.
-Screech counts as a jutsu, deafening lasts 1 turn, ear ringing last the following turn. User is sensitive to this to unless he blocks his ears in some way.

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~Declined~ Unless you were trained in Sound release, your summon will never be allowed to use sound techniques.

Resubmits

(Raiton: Chisou Taishite Prometheus) Feast of Prometheus
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user releases Raiton chakra much like in 16 Pillar bind but instead of forming multiple pillars he forms just one behind the opponent. From this pillar sprouts out chains made of the same material as the pillar itself they wrap around the opponent's arms, legs, waist, and neck holding him firmly in place. Once bound to the pillar/stake he is violently shocked for about 15 seconds with a current of electricity. The shock is enough to stun the opponent and paralyze parts of his body but not enough to kill him. The chains also restrict the persons movement making it so he can't place his hands together to form hand seals. Once he is firmly bound in place and the current has subsided a bird summon will swoop in and begin to tear into the person's gut eating his internal organs unless stopped.
Note:
-Once the electric current Subsides the user's part in the jutsu is finished and he is able to attack further.
-Can only be used once per battle
-Must have a bird summon on the field at the time of the jutsu, Jutsu does not summon the bird for you.
-Must be the only Raiton jutsu used this turn by the user of the jutsu
-Must know 16 Pillar Bind and have mastered Raiton Release to use

-Declined. Op and way too many abilities and chakra manipulations/elemental uses in one jutsu only-

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(Kchuysei: Tako Aporo) Summoning: Apollo
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb drawing blood he then claps his hands and summons Apollo. Apollo is a White-tailed Kite he is large enough to carry one person on his back and can fly at fast speeds with a rider. He is the only brother of another Kite named Artemis he and his sister Artemis were born from the same mother the same day and are twins. Apollo is a few minutes older than Artemis but it doesn't show much he has a immature personality in stark contrast to his sister who has a mature understanding of nature as well as her brother's lack of maturity. Apollo has trained with the summoner and has learned all he can in his affinity for Fuuton he can use any Fuuton jutsu the user knows up to S rank. His beak and talons are razor sharp and can clutch onto prey. His Talons are large enough to hold a human and strong enough to break bones like twigs. Apollo's wing span is enough to form a gust of wind comparable to an A rank wind jutsu. It looks alot like Wind Release: Pressure Damage but is only aimed forward toward the opponent instead of exploding outward in all directions. Around one of his Talons he has a band that has the Heno Heno Moheji as a way to show that he is a favorite summon of my Kakashi bio.
Note:
-Can speak English
-Can only be in play for 5-turns.
-Can only be Summoned by someone with the Kite Contract.
-Any Jutsu used counts to the three jutsu
-Wind gust counts as a jutsu and can only be used 3 times in battle
-Can only be Summoned once per battle.

-Approved-

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(Raiton: Mahi Taihou Panchi) Stun Gun Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user closes his fingers making a fist and charges Raiton chakra into the palm of his hand. He gathers a decent amount but keeps his fist clenched only releasing a little of the Raiton out of the top of his hand making static bolts appear from his knuckles. The stored electricity can be released when the user puches the opponent sending him back as well as paralyzing the corresponding part of the body. This jutsu can be aimed at the core muscles to make movement near imposible for 1 turn if standing the opponent is knocked to the ground from the force unless properly countered
Notes
-Can only be used twice and not in the same move
-No S rank lightning the same turn due to the focus needed
-Paralasis lasts one turn(The current turn) unless defended against
-This Jutsu doesn't kill

-Declined. Similar jutsus already exist-

 

[-Cobalt-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Gull Gen'ei Shishou)Summoning Technique:Gull Illusion Master
Rank:S
Type:Offense/Defense
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:After preforming the summoning ritual the user summons Ayumu the Gull Genjutsu master.He is a highly skilled and intelligent summoning and over the years spent in the Gull Citadels he has gained to ability to use Genjutsu (basic genjutsu only).He has mastered the illusionary arts and is able to preform them without any hand seals.He is somewhat grumpy but will always help the user in need.He is one of the Three Great Brothers,and of the three he is the oldest.They were called the Three Great Brothers since they had proven themselves worthy in the "Great Flame Wars" in which the Gulls fought the Crows.Since he has great knowledge over Genjutsu he has designed a genjutsu which is almost unbreakable.Once per battle,Ayumu can put the opponent into a genjutsu where the opponent is injected images of the "Great Flame Wars" which cause him to become paralyzed and feel immense pain.The genjutsu can only be broken by inflicting a large amount of pain to oneself (cutting off the palm of a hand,stabbing oneself in the gut,biting off the tounge completely and similar).He is big enough to carry 2 persons on his back but he lacks speed due to his age.He is also immune to C-rank and below genjutsu
Note:Once summoned,Ayumu stays on the field 3 turns and can only be summoned once per battle.
Note:His ability can only be used once per battle.The opponent stays paralyzed for one turn and eye contact has to be made with Ayumu in order for the genjutsu to work.
Note:No genjutsu above S rank can be used by the user while Ayumu is on the field.
Note:Every move he uses counts as a move of the user.
Note:Can only be used by Cobalt and whom he allows.
Note:The user cannot use S-rank and above techniques for the following turn after Ayumu is summoned.
Note:Must have signed the Gull contract.

-Declined. I am not comfortable with a bird casting genjutsu and you aren't even saying how he's doing that exactly-.

Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Gull Ninjutsu Shishou)SummoningTechnique:Gull Ninja Arts Master
Rank:S
Type:Offense/Defense
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals the user summons Takumi,the Ninjutsu master from the Gull Citadel.Just like Ayumu he has spent many years in the Citadel learning the art of Ninjutsu thus he became highly skilled at it.He master all Ninjutsu techniques (basic ninjutsu) and is able to preform the techniques without hand seals.He is the middle brother from the Great Three Brothers.Even though he isn't intelligent as Ayumu or strong as Katashi,he has shown great skill in Ninjutsu.He can carry 2 persons on his back and has average flight speed.Once per battle,Takumi can use a special Ninjutsu which allows him to help his summoner(s) by increasing the speed and efficiency of the summoners ninjutsu techniques (no elemental techniques).He preforms this by sending his great chakra reserves into the user.Once he sends these chakra reserves into the user he will disappear from the field due to exhaustion.He is younger than Ayumu and less grumpier than him but he dislikes slackers and lazy summoners.
Note:Can only be used and taught by -Cobalt-.
Note:Must have signed the Gull contract.
Note:Once summoned,Takumi stays on the field 3 turns and can only be summoned once.
Note:His ability can only be used once per battle.Once it is activated the ability lasts 3 turns,and after that the user is unable to use A rank and above Ninjutsu for the following 3 turns.
Note:While Takumi is on the field the user is unable to preform A rank and above Ninjutsu.
Note:Every move he preforms counts as a move of the user.
Note:The user cannot use S-rank and above techniques for the following turn after Takumi is summoned.

-Declined. Makes no sense. Have the bird use some techniques instead of increasing the speed of the summoner-

Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Gull Taijutsu Shishou)Summoning Technique:Gull Hand To Hand Combat Master
Rank:S
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals the user summons Katashi,the youngest of the Great Three Brothers.It was his actions that brought the victory to the Gulls in the "Great Flame Wars" between them and the Crows.Unlike his older brothers,Katashi isn't the smartest Gull,he relies on his physical strength which allowed him to become a master at Taijutsu (basic taijutsu only).Due to his physical capabilities he is able to preform even the hardest of Taijutsu techniques with great ease.He is the friendliest of the three brothers,and unlike the other two he is very lazy and easy minded.He is big enough to carry 2 persons on his back and due to his small size he can fly at above average speeds.
Note:Can only be used an taught by -Cobalt-.
Note:Must have signed the Gull contract.
Note:Can only be summoned once per battle,and once summoned he stays on the field for 3 turns.
Note:Every move he uses counts as a move of the user.
Note:No taijutsu techniques above A rank can be preformed while he is on the field.
Note:The user cannot use S-rank and above techniques for the following turn,after Katashi is summoned.

-Declined. How can a bird use ALL Taijutsu? Limit and restrict to plausible techniques-

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Bijutsu| Chakra Oshi - [Tailed Beast Skill| Chakra Pressure]
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+20 to Tailed Beast techs)
Description: Using the bijuu's powerful chakra the jinchuuriki creates massive amounts of chakra pressure deflecting attacks away from them, pushing the opponent away or strengthening Tailed Beast Skills. Since the bijuu is made of mostly chakra, the techniques can happen from any point of the bijuu or Jinchuuriki. The technique even has the ability to uplift massive amounts of Earth or Water, giving the illusion of Elemental Based techniques but in actuallity is simply the manipulation of the powerful chakra to affect the terrain.
[Able to Repel Only One Technique up to A-rank per use]
[Usable 4 times]

-On hold. That's S rank-

Bijutsu| Bijuu Junsei Chakra Arashi - [Tailed Beast Skill| Tailed Beast Pure Chakra Storm]
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Based on the same principle as the Tailed Beast Ball, the Tailed Beasts, and, by extension their jinchūriki, can create a wide range of small blasts made of chakra. Created by utilizing only positive black chakra, the user can fire a veritable storm of chakra blasts nearly covering the arena. Taking advantage of the fact that Tailed Beasts are beings of pure chakra, the Tailed Beast Chakra Storm can be fired from practically any part of the body though the mouth and tails are the most commonly shown. The blasts can be fired individually or can be collected into one large blast and then fired - only to detonate in mid-air and become another storm of blasts. This works to keep enemies off guard by hiding the larger blast within smaller ones, only to dramatically increase the storm of chakra once it explodes.
[Usable 2 Times]
[Must be in Incomplete Form or Complete Form]

-Approved-

Bijutsu| Chakra Jaguchi - [Tailed Beast Skill| Chakra Tap]
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra: 30
Damage: (+15 to techniques, +5levels to speed)
Description: The user taps into their bijuu's chakra reserves and uses that chakra instead of their own. Since the bijuu's chakra is stronger then the Jinchuuriki's the user is granted a boost in speed, power and strength. This can be better visualized as the state Naruto went into when the Nine-Tails Chakra was first released in the fight with Haku.
[Usable Once]
[Last 3 Turns]

-On hold. Judging by Naruto this should be of Forbidden rank Make it at least a S rank and then mention the limits and the side effects it has-

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Anti Hyūga Technique
Type: Defense | Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:
Description: This technique was designed to counter act other uses of the Gentle Fist fighting style by removing their ability to inflict internal damage to one's vital organs and tenketsu. By using the Byakugan and own knowledge of the Gentle Fist the user analyzes his opponents angle of attack and can predict where his opponent is targeting on there own body. Once the user knows where the blow will land he will expels a stream of concentrated chakra directly into the path of the oncoming attack. The stream of chakra interferes and disrupts the chakra the opponent has built in their finger-tips. So once the two forces meet they cancel one another would, leaving only the physical attack which inflicts minimal damage.
- Usable 4 times

-Declined. Anti Hyuga technique for real? Do not resubmit under the same name and spirit; make your idea a general jutsu applicable to all battles-

 

[Migualon J.J.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Tekken No Boro) - Weapon Of Iron Fist

Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+20 to transform it)
Damage Points: 0
Describtion: This weapon was forged by Archangel Michael originally as staff for Migualon J.J. when he created and mastered Style Of Tekken so that he wouldn´t have to enter that state while being still able to use special Tekken techniques. But than Michael made a "mistake" when forging it and it became unstabble in it´s form. Michael and Migualon were making a lot of tests on it and than they noticed that it can change form into different weapons when infused with chakra. This weapon has 4 different forms, which are Staff (possible to use shape manipulation to make spike on 1 end of it), 2 Swords, Shield and Spear (as 1 form) and Hammer.


All 4 Forms:

Staff (just that staff xd)

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Two Swords

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Spear And Shield (shield can only protect from weapons)

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Hammer (just that hammer xd)

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Notes:

Can only be wielded by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ and those who mastered Style Of Tekken and obtained ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~´s permission

Transformation into different form counts as 1 of the 3 moves per turn

It cannot be broken [if in form of Spear And Shield, the shield breaks, than it goes into Staff form with spear (shield can be broken by any jutsu of C-rank and higher)]

The user is able to use Tekken techniques when wielding this weapon without activating Style Of Tekken

~Approved~

:izuna:

(Caliburn) - Caliburn

Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+20 to transform it)
Damage Points: 0
Describtion: This weapon was forged by Archangel Michael originally as Big Sword for Migualon J.J. when he created and mastered Style Of Tekken so that he wouldn´t have to enter that state while being still able to use special Tekken techniques. But than Michael made a "mistake" when forging it and it became unstabble in it´s form. Michael and Migualon were making a lot of tests on it and than they noticed that it can change form into different weapons when infused with chakra. This weapon has 4 different forms, which are Big Sword, Staff (possible to use shape manipulation to make spike on 1 end of it), 2 Swords, Shield and Spear (as 1 form).


All 3 Forms:

Sword [sword that Arthur Auguste Angel has (that blond guy)]

Staff (just that staff xd)

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Spear And Shield (shield can only protect from weapons)

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Notes:

Can only be wielded by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ and those who mastered Style Of Tekken and obtained ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~´s permission

Transformation into different form counts as 1 of the 3 moves per turn

It cannot be broken [if in form of Spear And Shield, the shield breaks, than it goes into Staff form with spear (shield can be broken by any jutsu of C-rank and higher)]

The user is able to use Tekken techniques when wielding this weapon without activating Style Of Tekken

It´s power can be increased with Normal, Wind and Lightning Chakra (just like Sasuke increases power of his katana)



(i bolded edited parts and i removed Hammer)

-Approved-


(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Buzzard's Bosu: Karura); Summoning Technique: Buzzard's Boss: Karura

Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: Depends on used jutsu
Describtion: She is sister of Storm Skyress, the queen of Buzzard's, so she is actually 2nd queen of Buzzards. Only the Masters Of Buzzard Summonings are able to summon Karura. Karura is little Buzzard, but she is incredibly powerful in just one element, but she is master of it, it is Wind and she is able to use all S-rank and below ones, she most of the time stays on summoner's head or shoulder. She herself has special wind technique which creates armor of wind around itself and the person she is touching (pic on the bottom). She can use Wind Jutsus that have hand seals if user makes them for her. She can speak English easily and she can actually talk by telepathy with the one who summoned her.


Karura

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Armor Of Wind

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Notes:

Can only be summoned by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~ or Taiketsu Yagami as they are the only Masters of Buzzard Summons

Only stays on field for 4 turns

Can only be summoned once per battle

All techniques she uses are considered as 1 of the 3 jutsus per turn

Armor Of Wind can be used only once per battle and stays formed for 1 turn only



Approved Buzzard Summoning Contract

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-Approved-



(Tekken: Kyūkyoku No Hō: Unmei No Ippō) - Iron Fist: Ultimate Technique: Hand Of Fate

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 60
Damage: 100
Description: The user while wielding Weapon Of Tekken/Caliburn or having activated Style Of Tekken can use this technique by focusing high amount of his chakra into one of his hands so that it starts shining with orange light. When he does so, he can than punch into an enemy and if he hits him in Close-Range than the user makes hole in opponent's body. This technique can be also used for Mid and Long Range and that is when user has chakra in his hand, he thrusts his hand forward and releases all chakra at once to hit his opponent with beam of pure chakra which can make hole in opponent's body.


Used for Mid or Long range (1:54 - 1:59)

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Notes:

Can only be used once per battle

Can only be used while using Style Of Tekken or while wielding Caliburn/Weapon Of Tekken

When the user uses this technique, he can't use hand with which he used it for 3 turns (meaning no hand seals for example) (this is because of that huge amount of chakra and muscles in the hand being exhausted)

This technique has no elemental advantage or disadvantage

Can only be taught by ~Mig J.J. Quiksilver~


Approved Style Of Tekken and even Weapon Of Tekken (if you decline Caliburn that is xd)

Style Of Tekken

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Weapon Of Tekken

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-Approved-