[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Luiz]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Oumu no Jutsu: Seika no Torioumu) Parrot Arts: Psittaciformes' Chant

Rank: B-A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20-30
Damage Points: 40-60
Description: The Psittaciformes' Chant is a sound genjutsu where the parrot or a parrot art's user sings a succession of tone known as Shepard Tone. Shepard tone, named after Roger Shepard, is a sound consisting of a superposition of sine waves separated by octaves. When played with the base pitch of the tone moving upward or downward, it is referred to as the Shepard scale. This creates the auditory illusion of a tone that continually ascends or descends in pitch, yet which ultimately seems to get no higher or lower. The user will begin chanting in a seemingly eternal lowering tone, which will make the opponent's body and limbs feel heavier, stuck on the floor as if powerfully nailed to it. If the user is A rank or Jounin (or higher), he or she will be able to follow up with a second scale (making the technique A ranked), now going eternally high, which will then make the opponent feel as if his body and limbs are being pulled up. Which results in excruciating pain as the opponent feels his body being thorned up and ripped apart by the opposing forces.
*The Psittaciformes' Chant can be perfomed with or without handseals.*
*Without handseals, the genjutsu will take effect immediately, but the user won't be able to use any other jutsu as he or she chants*
*With 5 handseals, the genjutsu will take 2 seconds to begin, but afterwards the user is able to use any technique he or she wants, as long as it doesn't require the usage of the mouth (like spitting fire)*
*Does not affect the user, it's summoner or it's summons, nor it's allies*
*Can only be used twice, each lasting 3 turns max. Must have a 3 turn break between usages. Breaking the chant will break the genjutsu effective immediately*
~Leaving for Roku as it is more like Music Arts rather than Sound Release~


(Ninjutsu: Utsusemi no Sonata ) Ninja Arts: Cicada Sonata

Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu is an enhanced version of the Empty Cicada Shell Technique. This allows the user to disperse, multiply and amplify the sound produced by any being or object short-range from the user and spread those sounds all around the area, long range from the user. The user is required to preform 5 handseals, after which any sound the user wishes is spread out to the field. This can disperse and augment sound genjutsu, yet only those created with his own chakra and/or his summon's chakra. Apart from those, the user won't be able to defend other members unless they are connected with the user's and user's summon's chakra (directly by touch, or using a seal that releases chakra (if there is such a thing)).
*Can only be used 3 times per battle, lasts up to 2 turns*

~Pending~ I'm leaving those two for either Mugiwara or RokuNR.
~Declined~ You need sound release to do this jutsu

( Bushijutsu: Watarimono ) Samurai Arts: Wanderer

Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user charges chakra on his sword, and, with a whip like motion, will release a thin slice of chakra that will move flexible and chaotic towards it's target, differing from the normal crescent slice that goes straight forwards. Despite it's flexibility, it will move somewhat forward, even though it can curve and seemingly change directions, it will not be able to do a 360º turn.

~Declined~ First of all, restrictions? Secondly, the difference between your jutsu and the normal crescent shaped attack are almost nonexistent. Instead of being rigid it's flexible...ok and what does that change? You didn't elaborate on the only uniqueness of your technique. Also, how can it change direction? Can you control it. More details in the next submission.

Didn't noticed the change in rules. Disregard this technique if you check this post before November's 7th xd

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( Bushijutsu: Semishigure ) Samurai Arts: Buzzing Cricket

Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user charges chakra on the sword, making it vibrate. After the user grazes it on a second sword or piece of metal, it will release an wave all around the user, which will quickly dispel any sound based technique up to the rank of the technique. Iado users will be able to perfrom the technique at such speed that they will be able to emit the vibrations before they are actually affected by a sound technique, despite being after it reaches the user. Other users will need to have the sword and the second medium already unsheathed in order to achieve the same effects.
*Iado Masters will be able to dispel the technique it such ferocity that they will send the vibrations back to their user as a burst of sound, with half the damage, up to mid-range*

 

[Heavens Blade]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(yuri kyou koshou) lilly and pepper
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: after swiping blood on the summoning tattoo the user summons lily (girl) and pepper (boy) they are twin Leoliguar they are slightly larger then gamakichi in naruto they are great at climbing both can use wind jutsu up to A rank and they have a special ability that as long as one is in contact with the summoner the summoner can preform the handseals for either ones jutsu lilly and pepper can be summoned up to mid range from the summoner
-can only be summoned once per match
-they can stay on the field for up to four turns
-must have signed Leoliguar contract and have the tattoo
-this is the tattoo

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~Declined~ Check the bold part, I really don't understand what you meant.

(fuuton: fantomu ken) wind release: phantom blades
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user swings a fan and creates several shards of fuuton which are invisble at first and cant be seen until they get to mid range and they have time to fully form and gather more wind
-can only be used three times per match
-no wind for the next two turns
-can be done without fans requires three handseals and you blow the wind out your mouth
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist (though the fan wasn't used in the jutsu I had in mind, still the effect is the same).

(Kōton: Kōsame renda) steel release: steel shark barrage
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user does two handseals then places there hand on the ground and makes five sharks out of steel which travel underground two will come to distract the opponent while a third comes from under the opponent and drag them under the earth where the 5 sharks rip him apart same speed as water shark bomb
-this jutsu can only be used three time per match
-shark travels 2 times faster if steel field is in play
-can only be used by steel bios
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Declined~ How would steel sharks travel through ground? Granted it's in the Narutoverse, but let's keep it somewhat realistic.

(yuri kyou koshou) lilly and pepper
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: after swiping blood on the summoning tattoo the user summons lily (girl) and pepper (boy). they are twin Leoliguar they are slightly larger then gamakichi in naruto they are great at climbing abilities and they love to play pretend and mimic people. both can use wind jutsu up to A rank and they have the ability that as long as one of the leoliguars is in physicalcontact with the summoner the summoner can preform the handseals for any justu they preform.
-can only be summoned once per match
-they can stay on the field for up to four turns
-must have signed Leoliguar contract and have the tattoo
-this is the tattoo

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NOTE: hope you can understand it now all im trying to say is as long as im touching them i can preform there handseals since they cant do it themselves

~Approved~ Took out the part where you can summon them to mid-range.

(gilgabeast) gilgabeast
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: gilgabeast is gilgamesh's personal summoning the two of them grew up as brothers gilgamesh was there when gilgabeast was born and named him this there connection could explain why gilgabeast is able to use all steel jutsu up to A rank that the summoner knows gilgabeast can
-must have signed leoliguar contract
-stays out 4 turns for anyone other then gilgamesh
-can only be summoned by steel bios
-can only be summone once per match

~Declined~ I will not accept summons using special elements. Only the original 5.

(Kōton: Kōtacchi) steel release: steel touch
Rank: B
Type: Supplementry
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: /
Description: the user touches a object and places a layer of steel over it can be used to enhance doton jutsu can also be used to turn parts of the of the opponent into steel wich can weigh them down if you hit enough different parts you can completly turn them into steel
-can only be used by steel bios
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Declined~ OP. I don't mind you enhancing doton jutsu, but turning others to steel is a no-go. Make sure you mention that you can only increase the toughness of earth and earth CE (in other works it need to be solid for you to coat it with steel).

 

[Magic..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom weapon

(akuma ha-pu)Demon harp
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short/long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A(20+ to any genjutsu,that already has a damage point)
Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting chakra.its strings are four in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked. Each tone brands it's listeners with a particular type of illusion,Also the harp acts as a barrier against illusion attacks thrown at the weilder. Because of it's portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.
-Note: The user can't perform handseals whilst holding the harp.
-when in posession of the user,every genjutsu used by the user,gain's +20 damage points and the harp blocks illusiön based attacks,except advanced ones(forbidden or ms illusions) and also illusion shielding counts as one of 3 moves a turn and can only shield 3 times per match.


-Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.

(Removed the 4th string being special part)

~Declined~ Your restriction makes no sense whatsoever (+20 damage on genjutsus? Genjutsus don't do damage). Fix it and resubmit.



(genjutsu-omoi karada) - illusion technique- heavy body
Rank: S
Typeefence/Offense
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user does a unique set of handseals that leaves the foe under an illusion,making him think that his whole body has instantly grown so heavy,that he can't barely move a muscle but this is only temporarily.
-last's for one turn.
-once per battle.
-no S-rank and above genjutsu next turn.

~Declined~ When resubmitting jutsus, I need you to bold the added part or explain what you took away. Otherwise I won't check them.

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(akuma ha-pu)Demon harp
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short/long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting chakra.its strings are four in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked. Each tone brands it's listeners with a particular type of illusion,Also the harp acts as a barrier against illusion attacks thrown at the weilder. Because of it's portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.
-Note: The user can't perform handseals whilst holding the harp.
-when in posession of the user,the harp blocks illusiön based attacks,except advanced ones(forbidden or ms illusions) and also illusion shielding counts as one of 3 moves a turn and can only shield 3 times per match.


-Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.

Removed the increase in damage points,like you asked.


(genjutsu-omoi karada) - illusion technique- heavy body
Rank: S
Typeefence/Offense
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user does a unique set of handseals that leaves the foe under an illusion,making him think that his whole body has instantly grown so heavy,that he can't barely move a muscle but this is only temporarily.
-last's for a minute.
-once per battle.
-no S-rank and above genjutsu next turn.

Changed the range and reduced the genjutsu time limit.


(genjutsu-medusa miyaru) - illusion technique- medusa gaze
Rank: S
Typeefence/Offense
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This a unique secret illusion technique thats is useable by only a byakugan possessor,thus a hyuuga clan member.mostly because of chakra control as it requires the user to infuse his eye balls with chakra,causing it to glow pearl, whiter than that of a byakugan for a seconds.a glance at it by the foe would leave them in an illusion that makes them think their whole body has turned into stone thus temporarily immobilizing them.
-there must be a mutual eye contact to activate the illusion.
-last's for one turn.
-twice per battle.
-no S-rank and above genjutsu next turn.
-only useable by hyuuga clan members.


(suiton water style-water whale
Rank: forbbiden
Type:Offense
Range: long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:90(20 to user)
Description:This technique is a complicated move to pull off,since it requires a very large water-source to work.after the user must have done two handseals,with great concentration he/she manipulates and turns a large body of water-source such as river or lake into a giant whale that navigates towards the target with unimaginable speed whilst demolishing everything in its path.Still in motion,the whale is able to absorb some incoming water jutsu thus becoming more bigger and also able to shot off a medium size c-rank shark to do major damager to the target,before crashing into the target leaving no bone uncrushed.
-Once per battle.
-no S-rank and above next turn.
-absorbs 'one' C-rank and lower water jutsus.
-The user take 20 damage,due to stress.
-requires a standard water-source.


(Suiton-Mugen no mizu no yoroi)water style- infinite water armor
Rank: forbbiden
Type:defense
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A
Description: This technique enable the user to instantly gain an armor made of water,which shields the user from based fire attack.by channeling more water chakra into the armor constantly,the user is able to withstand instense heat or fire,even a lava bath as long as the armor is replenished every seconds.After usage the water washes off the user along with anything on the user's body.but Due to the constant pushing out of water chakra,the user internal organs are fairly damage and overusage of this technique totally destroys the user's organs.
-Twice per battle and lasts for 3 turns
-can only shield user from one fire attack and de-activate by itself.
-user is damaged by 10 every turn this is activate.
-The user becomes vulnerable to lightning techniques.
-no water jutsu next turn

~All Declined~ You're only allowed to submit 3 jutsus per weak, breaking this rule results in a 1 week ban from this thread (one full cycle). Your ban will be lifted on the 21 of November.

 

[WastedMonkey]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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[Izuna Uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Submissions starting on the 10/31/2011 ending on the 11/06/2011

 

[Toku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon- Kaen Fīda) Fire release- Flame Feeder
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user will perform the needed hand seals while focusing his fire chakra into a pre-existing fire increasing its power and size. The fire will expand to consume anything caught in its reach. This jutsu only works on fire created by B-rank jutsus and below.
*Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
*Note: Can only be used by Toku

~Declined~ The Pervy Sage has an almost identical technique.

(Raiton- Supākuringu Sōnzu) Lightning release- Sparkling Thorns
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user will perform the needed handseals while focusing his lightning chakra beneath the opponent and raise it out of the ground as growing thorns that shock the opponent. The lightning protrudes the earth and expands out reaching a distance of short range from where it is created.
*Note: No S-rank lightning next turn.
*Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
*Note: Can only be used by Toku.

~Approved~ Made it twice per match and up t mid-range.

(Doton- Kyūkyoku no Jūden) Earth release- Ultimate Charge
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short- Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: the user will raise a huge rhino’s head out of the ground made out of earth w/ its rock horn made of the densest minerals capable of protruding any earth defense made by an opponent.
*Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
*Note: Can only be used by Toku.

~Declined~ I don't really get how the Rhyno attacks your opponent. Can the head move around or is it created next to your opponent? Also, make it up to mid-range.

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

I've dropped the idea of Sheer Will for now. I will figure a way to get it approved. O^O

Resubmitting;

(Bishamon-Mura) - War-Lots of Grass
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage pints: 40
Description: The user will materlize a high amount of blades made out of visible chakra in the air, at the users desired location. These blades emit a distinctive and intimidating howling sound upon generation but despite the evident danger they possess from being suspended precariously around/above the intended victims, both of these qualities serve only to belie the technique's true nature. The attack's actual threat lies within its fragility, which results in the production of numerous razor-sharp shards that descend down at the target when disturbed by the foreign chakra(Opponent's), which would cause the swords to trigger and they will subsequently mincing the enemy to pieces. If one blade triggers, the rest triggers aswell.
~Can be use twice per battle.
~The Blades last aslong they haven't been destroyed.
~The blades would 'detonate' when foreign chakra goes through the air, past them, or jutsu being fired from target's location.

||Pending|| Not yet, Gobi. Please explain what you mean by "disturbed by the foreign chakra." How does one's chakra disturb the blades. Is it upon contact, movement, by being near the blades, ect.? You can PM the answer to me if you want.

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Changed the rank as Roku asked me to(We talked via PMs.).

(Bishamon-Mura) - War-Lots of Grass
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will materlize a high amount of blades made out of visible chakra in the air, at the users desired location. These blades emit a distinctive and intimidating howling sound upon generation but despite the evident danger they possess from being suspended precariously around/above the intended victims, both of these qualities serve only to belie the technique's true nature. The attack's actual threat lies within its fragility, which results in the production of numerous razor-sharp shards that descend down at the target when disturbed by the foreign chakra(Opponent's), which would cause the swords to trigger and they will subsequently mincing the enemy to pieces. If one blade triggers, the rest triggers aswell.
~Can be use twice per battle.
~The Blades last aslong they haven't been destroyed.
~The blades would 'detonate' when foreign chakra goes through the air, past them, or jutsu being fired from target's location.

~Approved~ Changed the Damage and Chakra Cost for you too >_>'

New;

(Fuuinjutsu: Fainda, Kanshu) - Sealing Technique: Finders, Keepers
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage cost: N/A
Description: Fainda, Kanshu is an advanced sealing technique, actually one of the most advanced ones, and devolpmented by Grimm & Gobi. Its an ability copying tech that involves sealing the ability and memory into a scroll; The sealing technique is dealt up in two parts and is both used with a certain scroll, the first part is called extraction and the second, implatation, it's actually more like a ritual.
Extraction; The first part of the sealing technique. The user will place the victim on the ground (alive and knocked out) and place a head set, similar to the ones used to communicate other shinobi long distance telepathically, on his head and the victim's. He will then wrap a scroll around the victims face whereafter he performs a long row of hand signs with the help of his partner. They will then slam their palms onto the ground causing a huge amounts of kanjis appear on the ground in a circle around the victims body. Once formed, the users forms a singel hand sign causing all the Kanjis to move into the scroll around the victims face. By doing so the scroll will now step in character and start to extract a certain memory. The head set will help the user gather the memory from the victims mind. It would not delete or make the victim forget this memory, the scroll would just copy it into the scroll.
Now to the second part of the sealing technique;
Implatation; This part is used in battle, unlike the other part which is used outside of battle. With the stored scroll the user will wrap the scroll around his arm and form a single hand sign. The Kanjis on the scroll will in an instant spread out across the users body whereafter it implodes into his forehead, leaving the kanji for sealing. Once done so the user have obtained the certain memory(s), for an example; How he did, how to do it, how he learned about it. Which will allow the person who uses implatation to do the same.
Deactivation; Whenever the user wants to deactivate the technique he forms another hand sign, causing the kanji for sealing in the forehead of the user, to explode out on the user's body again, spreading the seals across him whereafter back into the scroll. The scroll cannot be used the rest of the battle.
Restrictions;
~Extraction can only be used after the battle, and only one time on the same target(Unless if the current one gets destroyed.)
~Implatation can only be used once in battle, and transfers all memories in the scroll into the user's mind.
~The scroll can only stay activated up to six turns(That will mean 5 full turns.), if kept activated the user will gain a mental illness which will make him pass out after 2 full turns, and leaves the user unable to continue battling.
~One scroll can have up to 4 memories saved.
~If the scroll gets destroyed in fight he would have to fetch a whole new batch of memories.
Note;
~Only one scroll at play at a time, no exception. This means, if Ninja A and B, both posses the jutsu and Ninja A, seals three memories within the scroll, Ninja B can only seal one. If Ninja B gets the scroll destroyed both Ninja B and A need to fetch a new batch.

~Declined~ It was a nice read, and the best Inception adaptation so far (if it's not an adaptation it really resembles one lol). My only concern here is the application of this jutsu. Can you steal Customs with this technique? Come up with several examples in your re-submission and I'll come to a verdict.

(Doton: Chikyū Taitoku) - Earth Release: Earth Mastery
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damange points: 30(Though damage really depends on the usage of the jutsu.)
Description: By infusing any kind of earth in the field, with the users chakra he will change it's properties making it either 'liquid soft', rock hard or inbetween the two(normal earth.). This is probably one of the most basic earth techniques there is.

~Declined~ Both Goro Kaguya and BishamonSama have similar techniques.

 

[~The Norwegian~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Summoning Animal: Rhino
Scroll Owner: ~The Norwegian~
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King Rhino
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Not at the time

~Approved~

Summons for the Rhino summon:

(Rhino's Kuchiyose no Jutsu: King Rhino)- Rhino's Summoning Technique: King Rhino
Type: Summoning
Range: Short-Long
Rank: S
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
King Rhino is the king of the Rhinos. He's the largest of all the Rhinos that excists, he is just as large as Gamabunta, and no other Rhino can compare him in hight. King Rhino have as all the other Rhinos two long horns at the en of his head, but since King Rhino is so large his horns are also much larger. King Rhino is very fast, even if he's so large, but due to his size it's hard for him to controll his movements, and since he's so heavy he can't jump. King Rhino has as all Rhinos very thick scin, almost like metal plates, and due to the scin, King Rhino is able to withstand attacks that are weaker than S-Rank. King Rhino has the ability to fire a and A-ranked beam of lightning out of his horn, and this lightning reach up to long-range.
~Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
~Note 2: Stays on the field for 4 turns, but can be sendt back if hit by a S-Rank jutsu.
~Note 3: His lightning beam attack counts as one of the three jutsus per round.
~Note 4: Must have signed the Rhino contract and be tought by ~The Norwegian~.

~Approved~ Made it 4 turns.

(Rhino's Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ryhorn)-Rhino's summoning technique: Ryhorn
Type: Summoning
Range: Short-Long
Rank: S
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Ryhorn is the son of King Rhino. Unlike his father he's not that big, and his size is just two times as much as a normal human. Since Ryhorn is not that big, he can run much faster and he has great controll of his movements. Since Rhyhorn is not that big, he can jump into the air. Ryhorn has the same thick scin like his father, but he can only withstand attacks that are weaker than A-rank. Ryhorn has the ability to blast an A-Ranked fire out of his horn, and the fire reach up to long range.
~Note: Can only be summoned once per battle and last for 5 turns.
~Note 2: Stays on the field untill it's destroyed, and can be destroyed by attacks that are stronger than B-Rank.
~Note 3: Ryhorns fire counts as one of the three move per turn and his attack can only be used 3 times per match.
~Note 4: Must have signed the Rhino contract and be learned by ~The Norwegian~

~Approved~ Check the bold part.
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I have signed the Buzzard contract, and I'm adding this to the contract:

(Buzzard´s Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Buzzard: Skarmory)- Buzzard´s Summoning Technique: Skarmory
Type: Summoning
Range: Short-Long
Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: Depends on Jutsu
Skarmory's feathers are all made of a strong metal that can withstand attacks that are lower than B-Rank, but her weakness is Lightning so she can withstand attacks of Lightning Jutsus of C-Rank and below. And she can fire these feathers at the opponent like Iron Needles. Due to the Iron Feathers Skarmory is not that fast in the air, but she is famously known for her dangerous "Needle Mist" which is considered as 1/3 jutsus as well. The Needle Mist is done by Skarmory releasing her feathers at the opponent, only that the feathers are so small that they can only be seen by Dojutsu users. One of the needles won't do much damage, but when the opponent is trapped inside the mist they will be heavily slashed. The needles are released by Skarmory from her wings, and therefore she's open for attacks. Skarmory can use Wind up to A-Rank.

*Note: All of Scarmory's attacks counts as 1/3 per round.
*Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
*Note: Stays on the field untill she's killed.
*Note: Must be tought by ~The Norwegian~ and have signed the Buzzard contract.

~Declined~ Normally, I never defines what can kill a summon, since many techniques have many different usages. A C-rank spike could kill a summon. Because your Rhinos are natural tanks, I made an exception, however I won't do it for every summon. Take out everything related to what your summon can withstand before dispersing and re-submit.

 

[Igneel]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Sution:nurunuru bunpi|Water Release:Slimy Bunpitsu|
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description:The user secretes a slimy fluid from his body by using his suiton chakra which coats the user thickly not covering the users nose ,mouth and eyes.The advantages of this slimy stuff is that the user cannot be harmed by taijutsu as the slimy substance will absorb all taijutsu blows of A-rank and below and some would slip though the users skin due to the slime and also earth.The user cannot be harmed by ordinary kunai's or shurikensThe user is free to do other jutsu's while covered in this slime.While in this form the users speed is reduced by 1lvl.

Note:

• Can only be used 2 times per battle
• Lasts for 1 turn after activating the slimy substance
• Cannot use any suiton jutsu's of S-rank for the next 2 turns
• Can only be taught by igneel

Declined. Didnt Izuna tell you to take out the part about now being harmed by blades? like he said, just because you are slippery doesnt mean you cant be cut. I get what you are going for here but its not all there. I can assure you if I gave you a roundhouse kick to the side, being slippery wont matter. you need to add description about twisting the body so blows slide past the user. Theres more but you need but I'm not going to alter it completely ebcause its not my CJ :/

Fuuton:Sandoicchi|Wind Style:Sandwich|[/B]
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Range:Short-long
Type:Attack
Description:The user channels fuuton chakra into the air and does 3 handseals and as he does the first handseal, wind walls of dimensions 25m X 25m start to from on the the front and rear side of the target and when he does the second seal the wind wall finishes forming(the wind wall is not visible to naked eye,only doujutsu users can see it) and when he does the 3rd seal the walls move towards the target at high speed and the two wall will collide in 2 seconds,trapping the target in middle restraining his movements and also the target will have multiple fractures.Although the wind walls are invisible to naked eye,if the opponent is facing the user he will be able to sense the strong wind which goes to from the wall behind his back,but can only feel the strong the wind and nothing else and will be unaware of the wall infront of him

Note:

• Can only be used 2 times per battle
• Must have mastery over wind
• cannot use any wind jutsu in the next turn
• can only be taught by igneel

If both walls are the same why would only one have a gust comming from it?

Katon: Doargon Nagareboshi|Fire Release: Draco Meteor|
Rank:S
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user focuses his katon chakra into his mouth and then spews out a huge fire ball into the sky right above him at great speed and then just as it reaches a great height(5 m above) it splits into multiple fragments of fire and shoots out in all direction resembling a shower of meteor,none of fire fragments comes at the user who is standing right below.Upon contact with the anything(even ground) the fragments explode creating even more damage

-can only be used 3 times per battle
-must have mastery over fire
-must be atleast sannin rank to use this jutsu
-cannot use an fire jutsu of S-rank in the next turn

i'll submit my new sword next week and change its abilities completely

Declined. I feel like something like this needs handseals to make and a handseal to split into multiple peices.

Sution:nurunuru bunpi|Water Release:Slimy Bunpitsu|
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description:The user secretes a slimy fluid from his body by using his suiton chakra which coats the user thickly not covering the users nose ,mouth and eyes.The advantages of this slimy stuff is that the user cannot be harmed by taijutsu as the slimy substance will absorb all taijutsu blows of A-rank and below and some jutsu's would slip though the users skin due to the slime while other taijutsu(A-rank and below) effects will be absorbed by the slime,making him completely harmless to taijutsu of A-rank and belowThe user is free to do other jutsu's while covered in this slime.While in this form the users speed is reduced by 1lvl.

Note:

• Can only be used 2 times per battle
• Lasts for 1 turn after activating the slimy substance
• Cannot use any suiton jutsu's of S-rank for the next 2 turns
• Can only be taught by igneel

~Declined~ First you're ignoring what I said when Yamato checked your submission and now you're ignoring what he said. COVERING YOURSELF IN SLIME DOESN'T MAKE YOU INVINCIBLE TO TAIJUTSU. I hope I made myself clear. It all depends on the blow your opponent will be giving you. Like Yamato said, a sideway kick would certainly affect you.

Fuuton:Sandoicchi|Wind Style:Sandwich|[/B]
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Range:Short-long
Type:Attack
Description:The user channels fuuton chakra into the air and does 3 handseals and as he does the first handseal, wind walls of dimensions 15m X 10m start to from on the the front and rear side of the target and when he does the second seal the wind wall finishes forming(the wind wall is not visible to naked eye,only doujutsu users can see it) and when he does the 3rd seal the walls move towards the target at high speed and the two wall will collide, trapping the target in middle restraining his movements and also the target will have multiple fractures.And as long as the user maintains the third handseal intact the wall will be present

Note:

• Can only be used 2 times per battle
• Must have mastery over wind
• cannot use any wind jutsu in the next turn
• can only be taught by igneel

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

Katon: Doargon Nagareboshi|Fire Release: Draco Meteor|
Rank:S
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user focuses his katon chakra into his mouth and then spews out a huge red ball purely made of katon chakra into the sky right above him at great speed and then just as it reaches a great height(5 m above)the user does the ram bird handseal and the red ball splits into multiple fragments of fire and shoots out in all direction resembling a shower of meteor,none of these fire fragments comes at the user who is standing right below.Upon contact with the anything(even ground) the fragments explode creating even more damage.

-can only be used 3 times per battle
-must have mastery over fire
-must be atleast sannin rank to use this jutsu
-cannot use an fire jutsu of S-rank in the next turn

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

 

[Ryūjin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Arumiton: Arumi Modo) - Aluminum Release: Aluminum Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A [+15 to Aluminum techniques, +10 to Fire and Earth techniques]
Description: The user gathers a huge amount of chakra into the center of his body and flowing his aluminum chakra into every cell of his body to activate this technique upon releasing all of his aluminum chakra at once, for this technique a set of changes into the users body occures, the user's skin turns into aluminum metal of dull gray color allowing the user to gain extra damage while using the aluminum techniques or elemental techniques that create the aluminum i.e. Earth and Fire elements, but unlike the iron skin technique the user isn't immune to attacks as it's sacrificed for faster usage of aluminum techniques as well as fire and earth elements, the user continuously releases his aluminum chakra through his body to maintain his form at hand, but at the same time the user has an advantage of being immune to genjutsu techniques techniques that of B-rank and lower due to the continous release of the aluminum chakra through his whole body and allows the user to know whenever he's under a genjutsu as if the user is attacked with a genjutsu the aluminum skin-like quality that the user gains with the usage of this technique slowly deteriorates with due to the suppression of the opponent's chakra into the user's body thus slowly stopping the continuous chakra flow that's used to maintain this technique, but the continuous release of the aluminum chakra has a major disadvantage that is the user can only use aluminum techniques because if the user changes his aluminum affinity he loses the control over this technique, as well as earth and fire techniques that are used to form the aluminum metal.
~Can only be used once per battle.
~This mode lasts for 4 turns.
~Only Aluminum, Earth and Fire elements are to be used within this form however this doesn't include non elemental ninjutsu and taijutsu.
~No genjutsu can be utilized while in this form.
~No Aluminum techniques at all for 3 turns after this mode is deactivated.

~Declined~ Restrictions are a bit off. When leaving a mode, you're supposed to feel the drawback from it's usage. Also, why wouldn't you be able to use Aluminum for 3 turns but still be able to use fire and earth? Make it +5 and +5 or +10 for aluminum and +0 for the others.

[Katon: Kaen Karasu] - Fire Release: The Blazing Crow
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100 [-40 to the user]
Description: This is an advanced fire technique that's taught to the user by Blaze the legendary crow of fire and the most experienced crow in the fire release, this technique is given to the user after proving skilled enough in the arts of fire release and showing a sufficient amount of respect towards the crows, After the user forms a set of handseals (Ram ? Monkey ? Horse ? Bird ? Tiger) The user gathers a large amount of fire chakra into his lungs as well as inhale a large amount of air and mixes both air and fire chakra to create fire which is shot out of his mouth in the shape of a huge fire stream the same size as the "oil flame bullet technique", immediately the user using his shape manipulation to turn turn the fire stream as it's shot out of his mouth into the shape of a soaring crow of fire that's the same size as Gamabunta scorching the ground as it heads for the target and making a noise equivalent to 100 crows screaming as it's heading for the opponent, this technique becomes exceptionally powerful if used after a wind technique that's possible to merge with this technique making it a fire/wind combination, the crow of flames absorb the power of the wind as fuel and becomes larger than it already is, but after this technique is used the user's body becomes extremely exhausted due to chakra overuse.
~Can only be used once per battle.
~The user is unable to use fire techniques at all for the next 2 turns.
~This technique counts as 2 moves of the 3 moves allowed per turn.
~This technique puts a huge strain on the user's body in the following turns due to the chakra overuse the simplest movements puts a huge strain on the user's body and the speed of the user drastically decreases for the next 3 turns.
~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

~Declined~ As big as Gama? Now that's OP.

(Arumiton: Arumi Modo) - Aluminum Release: Aluminum Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 50 [-20 per turn to maintain active]
Damage Points: N/A [+10 to Aluminum techniques]
Description: The user gathers a huge amount of chakra into the center of his body and flowing his aluminum chakra into every cell of his body to activate this technique upon releasing all of his aluminum chakra at once, for this technique a set of changes into the users body occures, the user's skin turns into aluminum metal of dull gray color allowing the user to gain extra damage while using the aluminum techniques or elemental techniques that create the aluminum i.e. Earth and Fire elements, but unlike the iron skin technique the user isn't immune to attacks as it's sacrificed for faster usage of aluminum techniques as well as fire and earth elements, the user continuously releases his aluminum chakra through his body to maintain his form at hand, but at the same time the user has an advantage of being immune to genjutsu techniques techniques that of B-rank and lower due to the continous release of the aluminum chakra through his whole body and allows the user to know whenever he's under a genjutsu as if the user is attacked with a genjutsu the aluminum skin-like quality that the user gains with the usage of this technique slowly deteriorates with due to the suppression of the opponent's chakra into the user's body thus slowly stopping the continuous chakra flow that's used to maintain this technique however it's not enough to completely break this technique, but the continuous release of the aluminum chakra has a major disadvantage that is the user can only use aluminum techniques because if the user changes his aluminum affinity he loses the control over this technique, as well as earth and fire techniques that are used to form the aluminum metal.
~Can only be used once per battle.
~This mode lasts for 4 turns.
~After this technique deactivates the simplest movements puts a huge strain on the user's body for 3 turns however he's able to perform handseals just as normal.
~After the mode is deactivated the user becomes extremely exhausted and his speed decreases drastically after the technique deactivates and his body becomes much weaker due to the enormous chakra drain. (If the user is a Sage after the deactivation he has the speed of a sannin)
~The user can't perform more than 2 techniques per turn, for two turns after this mode deactivates due to the enormous chakra drain.
~Only Aluminum release is to be used within this form however this doesn't include non elemental ninjutsu and taijutsu.
~No genjutsu can be utilized while in this form.
~No Aluminum techniques at all for 3 turns and no S-rank or above Earth/Fire techniques for 3 turns after this mode is deactivated.

★ Increased the rank and the physical drawbacks for it as well as restrictions to be approvable for such a boost. ★

~Approved~ Made is so you can only use Aluminum and I took out the part making a reference to the speed chart. Let's get this straight, even I don't have a mode that boost 3 elements at once, it's too OP. This is as much as you'll get so if you don't like it, VM me and I'll re-decline it.

[Katon: Kaen Karasu] - Fire Release: The Blazing Crow
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100 [-40 to the user]
Description: This is an advanced fire technique that's taught to the user by Blaze the legendary crow of fire and the most experienced crow in the fire release, this technique is given to the user after proving skilled enough in the arts of fire release and showing a sufficient amount of respect towards the crows, After the user forms a set of handseals (Ram ? Monkey ? Horse ? Bird ? Tiger) The user gathers a large amount of fire chakra into his lungs as well as inhale a large amount of air and mixes both air and fire chakra to create fire which is shot out of his mouth in the shape of a huge fire stream the same size as the "Oil flame bullet technique", immediately the user using his shape manipulation to turn turn the fire stream as it's shot out of his mouth into the shape of a soaring crow of fire the same size of the fire stream that was shot by the user scorching the ground as it heads for the target and making a noise equivalent to 100 crows screaming as it's heading for the opponent, this technique becomes exceptionally powerful if used after a wind technique that's possible to merge with this technique making it a fire/wind combination, the crow of flames absorb the power of the wind as fuel and becomes larger than it already is, but after this technique is used the user's body becomes extremely exhausted due to chakra overuse.
~Can only be used once per battle.
~The user is unable to use fire techniques at all for the next 2 turns.
~This technique counts as 2 moves of the 3 moves allowed per turn.
~This technique puts a huge strain on the user's body in the following turns due to the chakra overuse the simplest movements puts a huge strain on the user's body and the speed of the user drastically decreases for the next 3 turns.
~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

~Declined~ @Your change: this couldn't get more vague lol. Give a fix size that's reasonable.

[Katon: Kaon Sacchi] - Fire Release: Heat Sensing
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15 [+20 per turn to maintain Active]
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a variant of the chakra sensing technique but with the usage of Fire chakra instead of normal chakra, the user gatheres fire chakra in the center of his body and releases it constantly around the whole battlefield infusing the air particles with the fire chakra released by the user, and with the usage of the "Tiger" Handseal, the user causes the air to be slightly heated triggering heat waves around the battlefield, when coming in contact with the body of anything that has a heat signature, the user is able to sense his position at all times no matter if he was on the ground, in the air or underground.
~Can only be taught by ~Crow~

~Declined~ Kagutsuchi as a very similar ability.

 

[Mathias]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Sogeki Geijutsu: Kouseitan'i Ojigi-Shukun) - Sniper Arts: Elemental Bowmaster
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 40
Description: Through the art of Kyūjutsu, the user will concentrate his chakra into a specific elemental type. Using shape manipulation, the user will form an arrow completely made up of the selected element. Once the arrow is shot, the user can choose to split the arrow into three smaller versions to pierce multiple areas of the selected target. With the use of a single hand seal, the user can turn the arrow into a small blast to defend against certain techniques depending on their size. (Ex. Small/Medium sized fireballs, water shots, mud shots, wind blades etc.)

Wind - If the extra hand seal is used, the wind arrow will turn into a small gust of wind.

Lighting - If the extra hand seal is used, the lighting arrow will turn into a small crescent shaped blade that can cut through solid rock.

Water - If the extra hand seal is used, the water arrow will turn into a small slash of water big enough to evaporate small/fire balls/blasts.

Fire - If the extra hand seal is used, the fire arrow will turn into a small sized blast of fire hot enough to evaporate small scaled water techniques.

Earth - If the extra hand seal is used, the earth arrow will turn into a small rounded shield that can be used to block certain techniques.

Note: Requires the use of a Bow.
Note: Can be used three times
Note: If the user chooses to multiply the arrows he can not perform the hand seal to convert them into their other forms and vice versa.
Note: Must be taught by Mathias

~Approved~ I'm starting to anticipate your submissions, very well done once again.

(Sogeki Geijutsu: Mohaya yu-bekarazu touhou, Mohaya yu-bekarazu!) - Sniper Arts: Now you see me, now you don't!
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 40
Description: Very much like kakashi when charging at his opponent when using raikiri, the user will start channeling great amounts of chakra into his feet for a 1.2x boost in speed, followed by charging forward at great speeds in a zig-zag manner. The user will make a full "Z", zig-zag side stepping left/right/left. From the boost in speed caused by the chakra in the users feet, the sheer pressure and force of Z-side stepping, will leave a small creator in the ground where the foot once was. Each Z-step travels the distance of 5 yards. So the user will go 5 yards forward/towards the left, 5 forward/towards the right, and so on. The user will be shooting a wind infused & explosively tagged arrow at great speeds in each side step he performs (so three) causing the arrows to reach the target from different angles 5 yards apart. Speed wise, the arrows are 1.5x faster than throwing a regular kunai, so it will reach the target within 1-2 seconds (short-mid) or 3-4 (short-long). The opponent will still be able to see the users but will get a tad bit confused from the zig-zaging. This whole process is performed in a fast and swift motion.

Note: Requires the use of a Bow.
Note: Can be used three times per battle.
Note: The speed boost only lasts the turn that it is used.
Note: Must be taught by Mathias.

~Declined~ I like the jutsu in itself, but I can't allow a technique that will multiply your speed by a factor of 1.2. If you already have speed enhancing techniques activated it would become plain OP. Fix it any way you want but keep it a fixed boost, independent of your speed (and be sure not to use the speed chart as a reference, it's against the rules).

(Sogeki Geijutsu: Kakutou Ya Dagekinami) - Sniper Arts: Grappling Arrow Shockwave
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 40
Description: While airborne, the user will shoot an arrow at great speeds towards the ground. The arrow is attached to a very strong chakra string. The string is attached to the bow's grip so that once the arrow makes contact with the ground, it can reel in the user to avoid aerial techniques or simply to get back into the ground faster. As the user is coming down with great force, he charges earth chakra into his feet. Once his feet make contact with the ground, a 360 degree wave of earth (B-Ranked) will be made and spread out in the form of a shockwave. This is due to the intensive landing and earth chakra concentration when stomping/landing on the ground. The user will receive no harm to his feet when landing at such speed, the reason being because while landing, the user softened the earth while stomping the ground and creating the shockwave, and thus landing on a pillow of earth as the shockwave forms. This technique does not necessarily have to be used while being airborne, the user can choose to be reel'd into other objects or even gain height by hooking onto flying objects.(Not kunais or anything of that sort. More like stabbing through a summoning, or maybe even a flying piece of earth etc..)

Note: Requires the use of a Bow.
Note: Can be used three times per battle.
Note: When used to gain height, the shockwave will not form unless the user stomps/lands onto the ground.
Note: Must be taught by Mathias.

~Approved~

 

[Selendrile]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Fumetsu no Kage)- Immortal Shadow
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Immortal shadow is a 3 foot long, one handed kanabo-type weapon. It has a wood base, which is then wrapped securely in an indestructible, chakra reinforced, iron casing. Along the length of the club, are deadly iron studs. The user at any time can slam the club onto the ground in any direction around them. This will force up vertical slabs of hardened A-rank earth, which can be used for defensive purposes. Each strike on the ground can raise a maximum of three slabs. This will only work up to short range. Then, using the iron studs along the length of the weapon, the user can launch thin beams of B-rank lightning chakra. This functions similar to Storm Release: Laser Circus, but the lightning emanates from each of the iron studs. The user is able to fire a max of 10 beams of lightning chakra at one time. These are best used at med/long range, and can be sent in different direction on release. However, once the direction is decided, it cannot be changed.
*Note: Can only be wielded by HereticPassage
*Note: The earth and lightning techniques may be used twice each, and count as a move of the user
*Note: Defensive slabs last until they are completely destroyed, or deconstructed by the user

~Declined~ Either keep the lightning or the earth jutsus but not both. If you keep the earth, restrict the usage on the technique.

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Looks like this, but made of wind chakra, and vertical

(Futon: Kūki-kan o Tsutsumu Bodi)- Body Encasing Air Pipe
Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When standing on a body of water, the user will perform three handseals, and then create a vertical tube of air, which extends from their feet, to the bottom of the body of water. The tube has a “lid” on it, which enables the user to stand on it. If the user is attacked, they perform one handseal, and the lid drops away and enables the user to fall to safety to the bottom of the pipe.
*Note: Can only be used/taught by HereticPassage
*Note: User must be standing on a large body of water.
*Note: Usable once per battle
*Note: Opponent cannot see the tube, as it is concealed by the water

~Declined~ The very principle of wind technique is to make your chakra as sharp as possible while keeping it in movement. Standing on the lid of wind would basically tear you to shred, not to mention the typhoon you'd be creating around you from the wind rotating to keep the water outside the underwater part of your pipe.

(Katon: Setchaku-Zai Kasai)- Adhesive Fire
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Med/Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: 50
Description: The user performs three handseals, and then blows super heated fire out of their mouth. It takes a sphere shape, and has a diameter of 10ft. After this sphere touches the ground, or collides with a jutsu, it takes a liquid-like fire form, and splashes forward like a wave. The fire is very sticky, and will cling to any object it touches, burning away until there is nothing left.
*Note: can only be used/taught by HereticPassage
*Note: If the fire gets on the user, it will burn him as well
*Note: Usable twice per battle

Feel free to edit anything.

~Declined do not resubmit~ If you need any explanation, read the part where you said the fire was like a fluid sticking to the opponent.

 

[-Kenshin-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Submitting My Very Own Custom Taijutsu/Kenjutsu Style

(Champuru/champloo Kendo)

Description: Highly unorthodox swordplay and a fighting style based on breakdancing the Style also take Movements from almost every kind of Marital Arts the Style allows the Users movements to be unpredictable and very deadly. The user can use this to even defend himself in very small and tight area's. Most movements of this style of Taijutsu and Kenjutsu are done with Flips and by the using their feet and is done low to the ground. Even thoe most movments are unpredictable the Style has it weakness due to the fact that it involes flips and is done close to the ground the user unless properly is left open in the middle of dodging a Attack. Some of the Style can also be mistaken with Rock Lee's Drunken Fist and with some of the Movements seen by Sasuke while fighting Naruto on the roof before Sasuke left the village. This style allows very few Chances to use any Chakra Infused Attacks because while using the style the user is in consent movement either attacking or defending againist his opponent.This style does not have to be done with a sword but works best with one

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Requirements to use Champloo Kendo:

• Must be Atleast Sannin Rank
• Must Have Atleast Started Basic Kenjutsu
• Must Have Mastered Basic Taijutsu
• Must Have My permission and Proof of beginning Kenjutsu and Mastery of Taijutsu
• Can Only Be Taught By Me (-Itachi-) Unless I sate otherwise

~Approved~

As we talked about earlier. make sure none of the techniques match kaito tai. there is a technique in there that involves cartwheeles and such to dodge incomming attacks


(Chanpurū kendō: Bōshi heddokikku) Champloo Kendo: Spinning Head Kick

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 80
Description: The User will drop down to the Ground and start to spin on their head while spinning on their head the user will spread their legs out kicking their opponent Constantly Until the user Stops Spinning

Restrictions-

• Must Have Been Trained in Champloo Kendo Up to this Jutsu
• Can only Be Tought by -Itachi-

~Approved~

(Chanpurū kendō: Furippingu ken suraisu) Champloo Kendo

Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will Flip into the air and first land a strong kick almost like landing on their opponents head and then flip upwards and pull out their sword and deliver a dead slice to their opponents HeadRestrictions-

• Must Have Been Trained up to this Jutsu in Champloo Kend
• Can Only Be Taught By -Itachi-
• Depending on how used the user can also injure themselves by using this

Declined. describe the green part better so the user can visualize the move. right now I cant picture how I land a kick on the opponent head and then flip upward and slice thier head. is it flip, kick, land, flip again slice downward into the top of the head?

Resubmitting

(Chanpurū kendō: Furippingu ken suraisu) Champloo Kendo: Saigo no shunkan

Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will First Jump into the air and land a strong Kick on their opponents head. Using the force and the angle of the kick they landed on their opponents head the user will almost immediately flip backwards landing on the ground the user will then pull out their sword and slash thier opponents throat

Restrictions-

• Must Have Been Trained up to this Jutsu in Champloo Kend
• Can Only Be Taught By -Itachi- or by masters of Champloo who have permission to Teach it
• Depending on how used the user can also injure themselves by using this

~Approved~ Added 40 in the damage section and 20 in the chakra section.

About this one it the only technique that got Declined so i resubmitted it and almost changed everything about it so that it would make since... Please Edit to make it able to be approved

New Submission's:

(Chanpurū kendō: Pāfekutokonbo) Champloo Kendo: The Perfect Combo

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Charka Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The User will First Drop to the ground and Spin on their head repeatedly Kickly their opponent up to 10 times. Then while still in Front of their opponent The User stand still on their head and perform a strong upwards kick to their opponents chin.. As the opponent Stombles Backwards The User will flip back onto their feet and lift up one foot and stomp on the opponents Knee Cap and slam their other Knee into their Opponents Chin Knocking them out

Restrictions:

• Must Be Trained Up To This Technique to Use It
• Must Be Taught By -Itachi- Or a Champloo Master with -Itachi-'s Permission to teach it
  [*]This Techniques count as The Users Three Moves for the Turn
  

~Approved~ Fixed the chakra/damages, also look at the bold part. Taijutsu moves always count in the user's 3 moves per turn when you need to post a "jutsu" to use it. You can always use taijutsu by simply describing what you do, but taijutsu moves like this one always count.

(Mizu rirīsu: U~ōtāmōdo) Water Release: Water Mode
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short- Long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:100 [-10 Every turn this jutsu is in effect]
Description: This is a very advanced Water technique which the user Gathers up a very large amount of Suiton Chakra and does one Handseal. After doing the Handseal the user will release the Suiton Chakra and have it surround their body. The Suiton Chakra can be used as Extendable Arms simlar to the Tailed Beast Chakra Arms. except the arms can only grow an extra arm of that comes out to the right and can only grow one extra arm out of each arm which unlike the Chakra Arm the Tailed beast users who can grow an extendable at as many times as they want. The user can only grow two extra arms. But the User is left wide open to Doton Attacks. This Advanced Jutsu can be used at any moment even after the use of a different type of eleental armor . But is very weakened when used which another Elemental Armor.

Requirements

*Note: This Jutsu can only Be used Once a Battle
*Note: This Jutsu leaves the Opponent Weak for Three Turns after this Jutsu wears off
*Note: This Jutsu Stays in effect for 4 Turns
*Note: After using this jutsu the user can not use any S ranked or aboved Jutsu for three turns
*Note: Can only be used by -itachi- Unless Tought
*Note: Must Have Started Training in Water and Have Good Chakra Control

~Declined~ This jutsu as been done countless times, so: similar techniques already exists.

 

[Gin-San]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Kea Seijins: Meros and Sarah) Summoning: Kea Sages: Meros and Sarah
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: After extracting some blood and making the necessary handseals, the user can summon the Kea Sages. Both have been trained specifically in their element on affinity almost their entire lives, and have mastered even the most destructive jutsus. Sarah is able to use S-rank and below Wind jutsus, proving her vast knowledge in water jutsu. Meros is able to use S-rank and below Fire jutsus. Their wings are designed in such way, that they are able to make handseals (their wings have 5 feathers, this 5 feathers are used like fingers to make handseals). Even though they are masters in their own field, they are old, so their capacity to fly at high speeds have decade, and they are only able to fly in a slow-mid paced speed. The keas can be summoned in the user's shoulders. If the Keas are summoned in the user's shoulders, they will strongly close their claws in the user's skin, sticking them in place (by doing so, the user loses -5 of health, but does not affect his perfomance). The Keas are unable to fusion to the user, has they aren't able to combine genetically.
-Can only be used once per battle
-Can only stay in the battlefield for 4 turns
-Summoning them counts as two of the three moves in the turn they are summon.
-Each of their moves count as a move
-The user is unable to summon other Keas while they are still in the field, the user is unable to summon any Kea for two turns after they leave the battlefield.
-The user is unable to use higher than A-ranks for one turn after they leave the battlefield.
-Can only be summoned by those who hold the Kea contract
-Can only be taught by Gin-San

Declined. just add one more note saying that they cant fly while making handseals since they use thier feathers as fingers.

(Fuuton: Kaze Bakuyaku Reiki) Wind Release: Wind Explosive Aura
[Type: Defensive/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will stand in position in an aggressive posture then release a massive amount of wind chakra. The user will surround himself in a giant cocoon of wind that keeps flowing upward. The user can look at the opponent without a problem, but the opponent can only see the user as a voracious humanoid creature (though the shape of the person is not altered, and does not affect the opponent at all). The user will receive -10 of damage from the burst of air do the chakra strain. This defense can defend against Forbidden and below Lightning (except Kirin, unless the user activates the cocoon before the preparations for Kirin are finished, such as the final handseals for Chidori),S-rank Wind Jutsus and A-rank and below Water jutsus (the blast will direct the water upward). If the opponent is caught within the area of the cocoon, he will be blasted back and cut moderately. This cocoon is highly flammable, being able to be caught in fire with B-rank Fire jutsus and above.
-Can only be used twice
-Can only be used once every 3 turns
-The user is not able to use above A-rank wind and lightning in the next turn
-No other wind jutsus in the same turn do chakra restrain
-Can only be taught by Gin-San

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~Approved~

Inchato gave me permission to alter Frigid Wind


(Fuuton: Gokkan No Kaze)-Wind Release: Frigid Wind
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user makes two hand seals and manipulates the air above an opponent to move down upon them at a high speed. As the air moves down, several small, thin blades of razor sharp wind currents are created, which will cut into the opponent as the wind hits them, slicing into their body and causing external and internal damage.
- This does not necessarily have to be created over an opponent's head.
- Can only be used thrice per battle.
- Can only be taught by Gin-San

Decined. Many similar techniques exist... I know from personal experience being on the receiving end of them

(Kuchiyose: Kea Seijins: Meros and Sarah) Summoning: Kea Sages: Meros and Sarah
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: After extracting some blood and making the necessary handseals, the user can summon the Kea Sages. Both have been trained specifically in their element on affinity almost their entire lives, and have mastered even the most destructive jutsus. Sarah is able to use S-rank and below Wind jutsus, proving her vast knowledge in water jutsu. Meros is able to use S-rank and below Fire jutsus. Their wings are designed in such way, that they are able to make handseals (their wings have 5 feathers, this 5 feathers are used like fingers to make handseals). Even though they are masters in their own field, they are old, so their capacity to fly at high speeds have decade, and they are only able to fly in a slow-mid paced speed. The keas can be summoned in the user's shoulders. If the Keas are summoned in the user's shoulders, they will strongly close their claws in the user's skin, sticking them in place (by doing so, the user loses -5 of health, but does not affect his perfomance). The Keas are unable to fusion to the user, has they aren't able to combine genetically.
-Can only be used once per battle
-Can only stay in the battlefield for 4 turns
-Summoning them counts as two of the three moves in the turn they are summon.
-Each of their moves count as a move
-The user is unable to summon other Keas while they are still in the field, the user is unable to summon any Kea for two turns after they leave the battlefield.
-The user is unable to use higher than A-ranks for one turn after they leave the battlefield.
-The keas are unable to fly while doing handseals, or do handseals while flying
-Can only be summoned by those who hold the Kea contract
-Can only be taught by Gin-San

~Approved~

(Genjutsu: Kanchi): Illusion Technique: Perception
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This genjutsu is able to slow down the perception of an enemy. By making a quick succession of four handseals, pointing at the general direction of the enemy and shouting aloud "Your reality depends in your perception" the user will cast a genjutsu in the enemy. The genjutsu consists of slowing down the perception of the enemy, making him think objects are moving at the same pace, but in reality they are moving faster. The trick in the genjutsu is that objects maintain their original initial speed and acceleration (including the user), but the enemy will think they are going at the speed he is seen them. To make it simple, the enemy as the observer will find himself looking at objects moving at the same speed as before, not changing any of his reaction. The user as the observer will see the opponent reacting slower to objects moving, reducing considerably the reaction speed of the opponent. This genjutsu will reduce the reaction speed and movement by half (as the opponent thinks he is moving at his same speed, because his senses make him believe he is).
-Can only be used twice per battle
-The effect only lasts for 3 turns
-The user is unable to use higher than S-rank in the same turn.
-This jutsu counts as two of the three available moves in a turn.
-The user is unable to use genjutsu techniques for 3 turns after the effect has been worn out (this means I need to wait 3 turns after the effect is done to use another genjutsu).
-Can only be taught by Gin-San.

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. A CE was even created with this principle (time dilation).

 

[Shade Dracova]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting:

Summoning Technique: Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Kaminari-on The Lightning Sound will appear. Kaminari-on meaning Lightning Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a red bill, black face and red body like most male Cardinals. She can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Kaminari can use A rank lightning technique that dosent require any handseals due to the fact that while he was a mere baby bird in Aries he was struck by lightning giving extra powerful lightning affinity.
*Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
*Can only be summoned twice*
*When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
*Summoning her counts as a move also*
*The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed* *
*This is another version of the previously approved Naki Tori in my quotes*

Summoning Technique: Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound will appear. Sukaisaundo meaning Sky Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a white bill, black face and red body unlike most Cardinals. He can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Sukaisaundo can use any Wind technique's up to A rank that dont require any handseals..
*Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
*Can only be summoned twice*
*When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
*The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
*Summoning her counts as a move also*
*The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*
*This is another version of my previously approved Naki Tori summoning*

(I took out the part about the sound wave and S rank lightning and btw there is no japanese word for summoning)

~Both Declined~ "Summoning" is one of the most used word in Narutoverse, the fact you're saying the word doesn't exist is aberrant and proves that you didn't spent one once of effort to even look for it.

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See how easy it was?

Resubmit those two with Japanese names.


New:

(Wasureta shinigami)-The Forgotten Reaper
Rank:S
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40(20+ with additional techniques in use)
Description: Thousands of years ago a scythe was forged by a great warrior who had the ability to wrench the souls of others from there body. The great warrior made this in hopes that some young warrior would be able to carry on his legacy. While this was being built the warrior literally put small traces of his soul into the weapon making it even more powerful. this procedure ended in him dying but as a result the sword gained special abilities to the point where everyone wanted to get there hands on it. Though the warrior knew that it could wreak havoc if it had fallen into the hands of a villainous being so he used his soul energy to engrave a security system so only those with a good heart can wield it.

Abilities

- The Forgotten Reaper is nearly indestuctible(only jutsu or weapons of forbidden rank cant break it).

- Due to the warriors specialty being Katon and Fuuton, the user gets +5 damage points on all Katon and Fuuton. The user can also perform each of those elements with 1 less handseal.

-The Forgotten Reaper can slice through all B rank techniques.

- Due to the warriors soul living inside The Forgotten Reaper, the scythe will inform you as soon as you are cast under a genjutsu. How you deal with it is on the wielder.

- The Forgotten Reaper slightly increases the reflexes of the wielder due to the warriors soul being able to tell what is going on somewhat. Though it isn't Byakugan and cant protect your blind spots.

Restrictions

-Can only be used by Shade Dracova or anyone given permission to use by Shade Dracova

- The Forgotten Reaper weighs over 100 pounds so the user must have somewhat training in taijutsu to prove his muscle strength.

-While wielding The Forgotten Reaper you cant use S rank jutsu for any of the Basic 5 elements except for Katon and Fuuton while the scythe is in the wielders hands.

- Due to the heavyness of the scythe, you -1 speed level when holding it.

It should look something like this:

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~Declined~ Anything related to soul, dead, resurrection...etc will be automatically declined. No cutting through techniques, it's already been done so you're ripping it off. Make it so the +5 boost affects only one element. Fix the thing with genjutsu, no soul in the sword anyway. Lastly, you can't make any reference to the speed chart so alter your last restriction.

(Majo shinigami)-Gemini Reaper
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Points: 40
Damage Points: 80(if it hits)
Description: The user will release a massive amount of chakra into"The Forgotten Reaper", combine it with the soul warriors soul within it. The outcome is a major power up. The scythe will grow a upside down "L" chakra aura around the blade. When in this form "The Forgotten Reaper"s soul is linked with the wielders giving the weapon and wielder perfect sync causing the wielder to make no mistakes whatsoever when he performs this attack. The user will jump or dash at his opponent and slice them perfectly inhalf. This jutsu can also be used to slice through any S rank jutsu.
Must posses "The Forgotten Reaper" and have permission to use this from Shade Dracova.
- Once this is done "The Forgotten Reaper" will lose all of it's abilities and restriction making it a plain scythe as the soul energy has to recharge. The scythe will gain its abilities and restrictions back in the 2nd turn
- Can only be used once

~Declined~ Sword was declined.

(Kasai rirīsu: Jigoku rokettsu)Fire Release:Hell Rockets
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: All
Chakra Points: 30
Description: The user will firmly plant his feet and fist towards the ground. He/She then will release massive amounts of katon chakra out there legs and fist which would result in flames pushing out. This jutsu can propel the in any direction. This jutsu is continuous so you can fly around in the air.
- Can only be used/taught by Shade Dracova
- No Katon the next turn.
-Can only be used three times per battle

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

Resubmitting:


(Sukaisaundo o Sukaisaundo: Tekunikku o shōkan)Summoning Technique: Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Sukaisaundo The Sky Sound will appear. Sukaisaundo meaning Sky Sound is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a white bill, black face and red body unlike most Cardinals. He can fly at speeds up to 47mph. She is ruffly the size or a normal hummer automobile. Sukaisaundo can use any Wind technique's up to A rank that dont require any handseals..
*Must have signed Cardinal Contract*
*Can only be summoned twice*
*When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
*The sound wave technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
*Summoning her counts as a move also*
*The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*
*This is another version of my previously approved Naki Tori summoning*

~Declined~ Look at the bold part; what sound wave?

(Wasureta shinigami)-The Forgotten Reaper
Rank:S
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40(20+ with additional techniques in use)
Description: Thousands of years ago a scythe was forged by a great warrior Shiro Kazuma. Kazuma was known as the most powerful warrior alived and was praised to by many. Kazuma never could have enough power so he put all of his energy into making the ultimate weapon in hopes he could rule the world. Kazuma forged the metal from meteorite. Kazuma put all his blood and sweat into this scythe but his project came to a fatal end when he died of a heart attack and the scythe was never finished
Abilities

- The Forgotten Reaper is indestuctible

- Due to the warriors specialty being Katon and Fuuton, the user gets +5 damage points on all Katon. The user can also perform Fuuton with 1 less handseal.

-The scythe is constantly sending out chakra sonar waves into the ground and the air around so you can sense where you opponents chakra is but not what type it is. The chakra waves reach short range.
Restrictions

-Can only be used by Shade Dracova or anyone given permission to use by Shade Dracova

-The scythe will become 500 pounds if it is wileded by anyone but the owner or anyone given permission to hold by the wielder

- The Forgotten Reaper weighs over 100 pounds so the user must have somewhat training in taijutsu to prove his muscle strength.

-While wielding The Forgotten Reaper you cant use S rank jutsu for any of the Basic 5 elements except for Katon and Fuuton while the scythe is in the wielders hands.



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~Declined~ Take out the part about it sending out sonar waves, that's a rip off of a sound jutsu, 2 of the 7SM swords, and an ability of my clan. Make it 50 pound, 100 pound is ridiculous.

(Majo shinigami)-Gemini Reaper
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Points: 40
Damage Points: 80(if it hits)
Description: The user will release a massive amount of chakra into"The Forgotten Reaper", combine it with the soul warriors soul within it. The outcome is a major power up. The scythe will grow a upside down "L" chakra aura around the blade. When in this form "The Forgotten Reaper"s soul is linked with the wielders giving the weapon and wielder perfect sync causing the wielder to make no mistakes whatsoever when he performs this attack. The user will jump or dash at his opponent and slice them perfectly inhalf. This jutsu can also be used to slice through any S rank jutsu.
Must posses "The Forgotten Reaper" and have permission to use this from Shade Dracova.
- Once this is done "The Forgotten Reaper" will lose all of it's abilities and restriction making it a plain scythe as the soul energy has to recharge. The scythe will gain its abilities and restrictions back in the 2nd turn
- Can only be used once

(I added the Japanese name for my summon)

~Declined~ Forgotten Reaper wasn't approved.

 

[Drizzy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Doton/Katon: Za Fuubi Inpakuto za Hebun's Nagareboshi|Earth/Fire Release: The Overwhelming Impact of the Heaven's Meteor
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs three handseals, he then releases his chakra. The user summons A Giant Meteor above mid and long range, while the user is in short. The meteor isn't engulfed in flames, it is in a black, solid rock state with small streams of fire racing throughout it. As soon as the meteor is summoned, countless large compressed segments of the meteor will collapse in the shape of spikes. The spikes are released rapidly until the entire meteor is finished which would take a generous time span time of 20 seconds.
Meteor is similar to:

~Declined do not resubmit~ You are currently banned from this thread.

 

[battleandthebad]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Cockatoo
Scroll Owner: battleandthebad
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

~Pending~ I'd need you to check with the current owner of the Parrot contract if he's ok with your summon. I know they aren't exactly the same, but they pretty much fall under the same category of summon.

(suiton: uma hitonami) water release: horse stampede
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: after doing four handseals the user creates large horses out of water which then rush toward the opponent the horses will first run over the opponent causing blunt damage to them then they will be trapped in the water drowning them the horses are about five feet tall
-requires a water source
-can only be taught by battleandthebad
-can only be used three times

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

looks something like this

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(fan doki) fan wrath
Type: Mode
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A [+10 to wind techs]
Description: fan wrath is a fighting style which uses as the name suggest a fan it combines the fan as a weapon and as a catalyst for fuuton jutsu while in this mode you can only use fuuton jutsu and fan doki jutsu [which will be fan related moves and fuuton] the upside to this is most fuuton atacks will no long require handseals and you gain a ten point boost to wind techs
-can only be traind be battleandthebad
-last 5 turns
-can be entered twice in a match
-can be left at any time

~Declined~ OP. The rank for such a technique should be S-rank in the very least. Also, I would need you to elaborate a lot more on this "fan" style. Restrictions are way off too, make it last 4 turns and 1 per match. Add some drawbacks.

 

[Swizzik]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Kaijin Doragon)-Fire style: Ash Dragon
Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The user spews a stream of chakra infused gun-powder from their mouth in the shape of a dragon that the user can direct. Once the user directs the jutsu to its target he then ignites the gun-powder causing a massive explosion.This jutsu can also be used to mask the users presence by using the ash as a means of cover.

- Can only be used by Swizzik and hawaiianmike.
- No Katon the next turn.
-Can only be used three times per battle
-Can be dispersed by wind if it isn't ignited on time

~Declined~ And where did you get the gun powder? If it's a new release (CE) this isn't the right place to submit it.

 

[Coyote]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sakurifaisu Kuchiyose - Vlad) : Summoning: Sacrificial Summon - Vlad
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
This is a secret Gull summoning only known to Sacrifice after he stumbled upon the Gull's secret temple lost ages ago during the "Great Flame Wars" between the Gulls and the Crows. As he entered the temple, he found an ancient codex written by a Gull, he found this surprising because this codex was small and most Gulls were much larger. As he read the codex, he found an old key. He searched the temple for days until he found a key slot in which he placed the key in and suddenly he was teleported to an island, On this island a statue of stone stood. The statue somewhat resembled a Gull but was smaller and was able to stand upright...he read the name on the codex "Vlad" the statue started to lose it's rock texture and Vlad appears. Vlad is about the size of Gamakichi so the user is able to ride on him, only one person though, he's very fast and quite strong. Vlad has a complete mastery over Fire, he can use them without handseals and have its power increased which makes him great for combination attacks with the user. Vlad has a secret technique which allows him completely cover him in fire and release a "S Rank" explosive fire orb directly at the target causing everything in that area up mid to long range to be under a sea of fire, in turn destroying everything in the area.

Notes:
- Summon lasts 4 turns
- Vlads Fire Techniques are increased by +5 (not the users though)
- Fire Techniques count as a move
- Must have signed the Gull contract
- Only usable by Coyote & those he allows.

~Declined~ Restrict the usage on that special ability, and like I said, summons can only use S-rank max, so do change the bold part please.

New Contract:
Summoning Animal: Coyote
Scroll Owner: Coyote
Other Users who have signed contract: Zancrow
Summoning Boss if existing: Upon Approval
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Upon Approval

~Approved~

Re-Submission
This should be good too go I hope added the exception which i assume you wanted due to your comment Izuna.

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sakurifaisu Kuchiyose - Vlad) : Summoning: Sacrificial Summon - Vlad
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
This is a secret Gull summoning only known to Sacrifice after he stumbled upon the Gull's secret temple lost ages ago during the "Great Flame Wars" between the Gulls and the Crows. As he entered the temple, he found an ancient codex written by a Gull, he found this surprising because this codex was small and most Gulls were much larger. As he read the codex, he found an old key. He searched the temple for days until he found a key slot in which he placed the key in and suddenly he was teleported to an island, On this island a statue of stone stood. The statue somewhat resembled a Gull but was smaller and was able to stand upright...he read the name on the codex "Vlad" the statue started to lose it's rock texture and Vlad appears. Vlad is about the size of Gamakichi so the user is able to ride on him, only one person though, he's very fast and quite strong. Vlad has a complete mastery over Fire (except Forbidden Ranks), he can use them without handseals and have its power increased which makes him great for combination attacks with the user. Vlad has a secret technique which allows him completely cover him in fire and release a "S Rank" explosive fire orb directly at the target causing everything in that area up short to mid-range to be under a sea of fire, in turn destroying everything in the area.

Notes:
- Summon lasts 4 turns
- Vlads special technique is only usable once per battle
- Vlads Fire Techniques are increased by +5 (not the users though)
- Fire Techniques count as a move
- While Vlad is on the field, the user can't use S-rank and higher fire techniques.
- If the user is within range of the attack, he will suffer the same amount of damage as his opponent.
- Must have signed the Gull contract
- Only usable by Coyote & those he allows.

~Approved~ Changed the rank of the explosion to short-mid and made the range of the attack Long. If you shoot it while you're any close then long-range you'll get hit by your own technique. Check the bold parts I added.

Summon for new Coyote contract, quoted above

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Quixote ) Summoning: Quixote of the Mirage
Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Quixote is the Boss of "The Ingenious Gentleman" a rogue group of Coyote's from the deep barrens in the Land of Wind. This group of Coyote are known as bandits and have cells in various parts of the world and can be called by a select few of shinobi. Quixote is the head of this organization and he runs his clan with extreme caution. Quixote is whole-hearten to few and black-hearten to many, though he has this personality Quixote has close ties to his summoners. Due to his statute, he is known as one of the most powerful Coyote's in "The Ingenious Gentleman". Quixote has complete mastery of the water element and can use without hand seals (except Forbidden) due to him massive amount of water chakra he is able to preform water techniques that requires a water source without any water being nearby just by using the chakra he already has massed. One of Quixote most noted abilities to create a massive "Tidal Wave", this wave is bigger than Kisame's massive waves, the Tidal Wave destroys all in it's path and is capable of not holding back but sweeping away a tailed beast. Quixote isn't a large Boss, only big enough to carry 2 users but keeps his rule to his strength and unmatchable speed.

Notes:
- Summons last 4 turns
- Quixote's water techniques count as a move
- Tidal Wave only usable once, this techniques however requires a water source
- Only usable by signers of the "Coyote" contract
- Only trainable by Coyote

~Declined~ OP. In the Narutoverse, this summon would basically be the strongest water user EVER.

New Submission:

(Meiton: Sono Joushou ) : Dark Release: The Rising
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user will slam his hands on the ground with destructive force, as the hands get slammed on the ground the user release a massive amount of Dark chakra into the ground very quickly. The chakra is spread from where the user slams his hands all the way up to Long Range making it death zone almost inescapable. Suddenly on the battlefield, the ground cracks and from the cracks a black aura comes from it. Then the ground begins to shake and the darkness erupts from the field pushing up large rocks and pieces of earth up to the sky looking as if the earth was lifted towards to sky. Under the earth that has lifted the Dark chakra is radiating the powerful darkness, destroying all that get's caught in the eerie aura. If the target is on the ground, the earth rises up all around the battlefield, keeping the air a zone of destruction of flying earth chunks all over the place, the target will fall or be caught in the aura, annihilating them form the Darkness. The technique is able to knock anything out of the sky and fall into the aura. The ground becomes so unstable that balance is thrown off. Due to the intensity and speed and mass of the chakra produced at such speed it exhausts the user immensely.

Notes:
- Only usable by a Dark Release user
- Only usable once
- Able to knock anything out the sky and cause it to fall into the Dark Aura.
- The air on the battlefield has so much debris of huge rocks that it makes the air a danger zone
- All under the battlefield the Dark Aura lingers like a sea under the earth
- Unable to use Dark Techniques for 3 turns
- Unable to Fire Techniques for 2 turns
- Only can use 2 Techniques for 2 turns due to exhaustion
- Only usable/trainable by Coyote

~Declined do not resubmit~ I don't think I need to go into much detail here; OP. No amount of restriction will get this one approved.

 

[-Tauburn-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Sorry i meant to edit these with restrictions.

(Raiton: Raitoninguhōn)- Lightning: Lightning Horns
Type: Deff
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid (from weapon used with)
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The user will focus lightning chakra into a weapon, then throw the weapon towards the opponent(s), once the weapon lands the lightning springs out from the weapon with a burst like shape in every direction, begining thin and razor sharp, stabbing through the opponent with easy.
- Usable 4 times per battle.
- The weapon used from has to be a bladed weapon. (kunai, sword, shuriken, etc..)
- Must be taught by -Tauburn-

~Declined~ How would your weapon know it's close to the opponent ~__~? Use hand seals.

(Raiton: Raitoninguhōn)- Lightning: Lightning Horns
Type: Deff
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid (from weapon used with)
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will focus lightning chakra into a weapon, then throw the weapon towards the opponent(s), The user makes a single handseal and the lightning springs out from the weapon with a burst like shape in every direction, begining thin and razor sharp.
- Usable 4 times per battle.
- The weapon used from has to be a bladed weapon. (kunai, sword, shuriken, etc..)
- Must be taught by -Tauburn-.

~Approved~ Took out the part about it easily stabbing through your opponent. Also, I made it 40 damage.

Wow im getting bad about remembering my restrictions lol.

(Meiton: Sekkikyokuryuu)- Dark Release: Black Devil Sword
Type: Supp
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The user releases a burst off dark chakra from their lower daimond, while making a handseal with the user right hand. Releaseing the chakra summons the Black Devils Sword, from the users left hand. The sword its self will disappear if the user release their hold on the sword.
- Must have Dark Release to summon it.
- Can be summoned 4 time per battle.
- Will stay in battle for 2 turns, then must be released.

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Declined. since you have a restriction that it disappears when released front he left hand, make a note saying that the sword will be released in order to make handseals

(Meiton: Ikkitousen)- Dark Release: First Demonic Blade Blow
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: when the user has the Black Devil Sword already out and in their hand, the user will release dark chakra onto the sword, from their lower daimond, as the user starts to release dark chakra to the sword the user will hold the Black Devil Sword above their head then swing downward releaseing all of the dark chakra as a blast from the sword.
- Must have the Black Devil Sword summoned.
- Usable 4 times per battle.
- Never twice in a row.

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(Meiton: Sekkikyokuryuu)- Dark Release: Black Devil Sword
Type: Supp
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The user releases a burst off dark chakra from their lower daimond, while making a handseal with the user right hand. Releaseing the chakra summons the Black Devils Sword, from the users left hand. The sword its self will disappear if the user release their hold on the sword.
- Will be released to make handseals.
- Must have Dark Release to summon it.
- Can be summoned 4 time per battle.
- Will stay in battle for 2 turns, then must be released.

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~Approved~

(Meiton: Ikkitousen)- Dark Release: First Demonic Blade Blow
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: when the user has the Black Devil Sword already out and in their hand, the user will release dark chakra onto the sword, from their lower daimond, as the user starts to release dark chakra to the sword the user will hold the Black Devil Sword above their head then swing downward releaseing all of the dark chakra as a blast from the sword.
- Must have the Black Devil Sword summoned.
- Usable 4 times per battle.
- Never twice in a row.

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~Declined~ No more sword shooting elemental blast will be approved.