[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

WastedMonkey · Sep 10, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

my last post was

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RESUBMIT

wastedmonkey said:
Konchū sutairu: Konchū burasuto) Insect Style: Insect Blast
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user instead of releasing his/her insects through pores, Shoots up to 3 meteor sized blasts of insects from his mouth. These blast travels at great speed causing damage on impact, the insects also sucks out the chakra of the hit opponent. The blast follow the opponent until destroyed.
- Can only use 3 times per battle
- No S-rank bug techniques while in effect
- Can only be taught by wastedmonkey and Black Uchiha

*Co-creator Black Uchiha

~Declined~

Insect Style: Insect Blast

Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user instead of releasing his/her insects through pores, Shoots up to 2 big ball of insects from his mouth. These blast travels at great speed causing damage on impact, the insects also sucks out the chakra of the hit opponent.
- Can only use 2 times per battle
- No S-rank bug techniques for the next round.
- Can only be taught by wastedmonkey and Black Uchiha

*Co-creator Black Uchiha

~Approved~

ABURAME TECHS

(Mushi Reikyū) - Insect Casket

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user sends a wave of bugs at the opponent, which then covers them completely from head to foot, immobilizing them completely.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
- Last one turn
- Can only be taught by WastedMonkey

　
(Mushi Haka) - Insect Grave

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user sends their bugs underground to create a hole inside the earth. Any pressure on the surface will collapse the ground trapping the opponent.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
　
- Can only be used twice per battle.
- Can only be taught by WastedMonkey

　
(Mushi Tate) - Insect Shield

Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates their bugs to from a shield on their arm. The shield can defend against B rank jutsu and below or a rank taijutsu.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
　
- Can only be used twice per battle.
- The user must be aware of the direction where the attack is coming from.
- Can only be taught by WastedMonkey

　

　
(Mushi Doku Ekiso) - Insect Poison Extraction Jutsu

Rank: B
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Range: Close
Description: The user uses its bugs to extract poison from their body.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan
　
- Can only be used twice per battle
- Can only be taught by WastedMonkey

~All Declined~

Howard · Sep 10, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Ninja Arts: Chakra Condor (Ninjutsu: Seishou hagetaka)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user charges a massive amount of his own chakra into his body and releases it out of his back. He pays a great amount of attention on shape manipulation forming the chakra into a Condor of chakra that swoops down slaming into the opponent with enough force to crush bones. It works much in the same way the Chakra Cannon jutsu works in that it is made of pure chakra. The Condor is roughly shaped and almost looks like just a mass of chakra that is released out of the user's back and formed into the silhouette of a bird. It puts strain on the user's body enough to restrict basic Ninjutsu for the next turn.
*Can't use Basic Ninjutsu for the next turn*
*Can't use any Basic Ninjutsu the same turn*
*Can only be used twice in a battle*
*Has to wait 4 turns before being used again*
*Cannot use any other S rank techs that turn*
*Can only be used by me and who I allow*

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~Approved~

House · Sep 10, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Dr. House said:
Resubmitting:
(Doton:Hyōmen no rokku) Earth Release: Surface Lock
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After a single handseal, the user will channel doton chakra into the ground, bringing the finest qualities up from the soil to the surface, creating a shield under the user, on the ground, which can cover short to mid-range under the user, protecting the user from any incoming ground attacks. The user can also break this slamp of earth in half, making it rise up to a vertical stance defending himself with the slamp of rock, the user is able to defend from any incoming attacks, where the slamp has been broken off..
Notes:
-Can be only taught by Dr. House
-Can be summoned twice
-only who mastered doton can use this.
-The user won't be able to go underground, hence it will be blocked.

(Kchuysei: Mrs. Afcanc) Summoning: Mrs. Afcanc
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Mrs. Beaver can cast both A-ranked water blasts up to 5 times, and S-ranked Fire blasts up to 3 times. She's able to go underground, via digging a rather large space under the opponent, making him fall in it.
Notes:
-She's able to dig out a huge space underground, having the surface collapse in. If long ranged, it takes 1 turn.
-Can only stay for 4 turns.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-must have signed the beaver contract.
-must be taught by only Dr. House

(Kchuysei: Bībā Kan) Summoning: Sense Beaver
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This little beaver can go underground, and sense everything what's happening on the surface, or underground and tell it's user of the opponents whereabouts.
Notes:
-Can only be summoned three times per battle
-Can stay for six turns
-scanning the area counts as a move, but scanning can be used during the six turns

(Suiton: Kontorōru o toru) - Water Release: W.O Punch
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Descripton: A vortex of water shot out of the users fist water he/she punches.
Notes:
-Can only be taught by Doctor House and Gin-San

(Doton: Kaytio Burokku) - Earth Release: Devenge Block
Rank: A
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: The user will send his earth chakra in the ground from his feet, by doing so, he will cover anything within short range of himself. No earth attacks B-rank and below can be done within short range of the user (being the enemy or the user), because the chakra of the user will overpower lower ranks.
Notes:
-The enemy cannot use B-rank and below jutsus that are within short range of the user
-The user can use his own doton techniques as is his own chakra
-Can only be used two times per battle
maybe three
-not S-rank and above Earth techniques next turn
-Can only be taught by Dr House and Gin-San

~All declined~ Scary Yamato was clear when he checked those; re-submit on the 3rd of September. Considering I warned everyone on my post (bottom of page 278), you're ban from the CJ thread for a week. If you have anything to say, please do so through VM.

Resubmitting:
(Doton:Hyōmen no rokku) Earth Release: Surface Lock
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After a single handseal, the user will channel doton chakra into the ground, bringing the finest qualities up from the soil to the surface, creating a shield under the user, on the ground, which can cover short to mid-range under the user, protecting the user from any incoming ground attacks. The user can also break this slamp of earth in half, making it rise up to a vertical stance defending himself with the slamp of rock, the user is able to defend from any incoming attacks, where the slamp has been broken off..
Notes:
-Can be only taught by Dr. House
-Can be summoned twice
-only who mastered doton can use this.
-The user won't be able to go underground, hence it will be blocked.
~Approved~

(Raiton: Surudoi ashi) Lightning Release: Sharp Both Foot
Type: Supplementary / Defense / Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user channels lightning chakra on his legs, enabling the user to cut through an obstance with a kick.
Notes:
-It can stay active for 5 turns

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~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists

(Kchuysei: Bībā Kan) Summoning: Sense Beaver
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This little beaver can go underground, and sense everything what's happening on the surface, or underground and tell it's user of the opponents whereabouts.
Notes:
-Can only be summoned three times per battle
-Can stay for six turns
-scanning the area counts as a move, but scanning can be used during the six turns
~Declined~ Explain how information is transmitted to you. And if it's through an empathetic link, restrict it more.

(Suiton: Kontorōru o toru) - Water Release: W.O Punch
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Descripton: A vortex of water shot out of the users fist water he/she punches.
Notes:
-Can only be taught by Dr. House and Gin-San
~Declined~

(Doton: Kaytio Burokku) - Earth Release: Devenge Block
Rank: A
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: The user will send his earth chakra in the ground from his feet, by doing so, he will cover anything within short range of himself. No earth attacks B-rank and below can be done within short range of the user (being the enemy or the user), because the chakra of the user will overpower lower ranks.
Notes:
-The enemy cannot use B-rank and below jutsus that are within short range of the user
-The user can use his own doton techniques as is his own chakra
-Can only be used two times per battle
maybe three
-not S-rank and above Earth techniques next turn
-Can only be taught by Dr. House and Gin-San
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit, please.

Passion · Sep 10, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Black-Leg said:
( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ) ~ Black-Leg Taijutsu: Devil's Leg
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Mode
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 15 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: Black-Leg taijutsu master can activate a mode which will double their speed. The mode requires user to be at least Sannin rank and to be trained in other Black-Leg taijutsu techniques. To activate this technique an user below Kage rank must stop and spin while guiding chakra into their leg, granting temporary speed boost. User that has already reached Kage orf higher rank can activate this technique while battling without stopping moving. Once activated, the technique'll increase user leg's strength momenarily and Leg taijutsu damage done by user will be multipled with 1.5 with the leg this is activated on. Using this technique for longer duratons will cause stress fracturing which decreases user's speed by 25% of the original speed. This technique can be used on one leg and can be maintained for max four turns. User's leg looks as if it were on fire when this mode is activated and is covered in chakra.

Causes stress fracturing on one's legs

Can be activated twice per battle and the second usage will be extremely painful and second usage will last only two turns.

Costs 15 chakra per turn.

~Declined: If you have a fractured leg then it'd be close to impossible to walk, even less performing this jutsu again~

( Suterusu wōku ) ~ Stealth Walk
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: Stealth Walk is a technique which is used to jump higher in air and to move faster underwater. The technique consists two different variations that can both be used for quick escaping and to give user upper hand in fight. First variation, Blue Walk, can be used underwater by user focusing chakra into their feet as if they were walking on water's surface and this would also prevent them from sinking into water. Then, user can kick water to the direction he/she wants and repeat this four times. Second variation is called Sky walk and using it will give user chance of jumping five times mid air. Upon jumping, user concentrates Wind chakra to their feet and kicks it down in form of air, lifting user up.

Both of the technique's variations can be used once per battle.

Only five jumps can be made with this technique.

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Did as you said. Removed speed increase part and restricted uses of stealth walk.

~Declined: Over weekly limit~

THIS WEEK

Resubmittions:

1. ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Devil's Leg
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Mode
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 15 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: Black-Leg taijutsu master can activate a mode which will double their speed. The mode requires user to be at least Sannin rank and to be trained in other Black-Leg taijutsu techniques. To activate this technique an user below Kage rank must stop and spin while guiding fire chakra into their leg, granting temporary speed boost. User that has already reached Kage orf higher rank can activate this technique while battling without stopping moving. Once activated, the technique'll increase user leg's strength momenarily and Leg taijutsu damage done by user will be multipled with 1.5 with the leg this is activated on. Using this technique for longer duratons will cause stress fracturing which decreases user's speed by 25% of the original speed. This technique can be used on one leg and can be maintained for max four turns. User's leg looks as if it were on fire when this mode is activated and is covered in chakra. Getting hit by this causes also nerve damage to opponent, giving slight sensation of burning to the nevers and opponent once hit due fire chakra in leg.

Causes strain to user's muscles and leaves user limping if used for long durations.
Can be activated twice per battle and the second usage will be extremely painful and second usage will last only two turns.
Costs 15 chakra per turn.

~Declined~ Make it last 4 turns the first time while decreasing your speed by 25% after. Add restrictions for the second usage. Lastly, clarify "long duration" in your restriction; how long?

2. ( Suterusu wōku ) - Stealth Walk
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: Stealth Walk is a technique which is used to jump higher in air and to move faster underwater. The technique consists two different variations that can both be used for quick escaping and to give user upper hand in fight. First variation, Blue Walk, can be used underwater by user focusing chakra into their feet as if they were walking on water's surface and this would also prevent them from sinking into water. Then, user can kick water to the direction he/she wants and repeat this four times. Second variation is called Sky walk and using it will give user chance of jumping five times mid air. Upon jumping, user concentrates Wind chakra to their feet and kicks it down in form of air, lifting user up.

Both of the technique's variations can be used once per battle.
Only five jumps can be made with this technique.

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~Approved~

New technique:

3. ( Raiton: Tesura Raikō ) - Lightning release: Tesla Lightning
Rank: A/S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30/40
Damage points: 60/80 ( - 5/10 to user's nerves in their hand )
Description: Tesla Lightning is a lightning element based technique which unlike most Lightning release techniques, doesn't hold much brute force in it. To use Tesla Lightning user must focus chakra into their arm and gather a small ball at the center of their palm. Once the ball is created user can release it in form of a straight lightning bolt towards their target(s). This is where the Tesla Lightning differs from many other lightning techniques as the Tesla Lightning can fork and cover up a large area without being shot multiple times. The forking happens as user wishes it to happen and once it hits target, it will travel as an electrical current through their body and fork again into more bolts which then attack other enemies. Having a strong electrical current like that travel through body will create symptoms such as; heart beating problems, heart stopped at rare cases, neurotic damage/problems as well with damage to nerves. Even though the lightning can fork, the strength of it will decrease while travelling through a target's body. As said earlier, Tesla lightning won't have much destructive properties but can nullify the effects of earth techniques once it hits them. Tesla lightning can also be fired as a S - ranked technique which requires more chakra and causes - 10 damage to nerves in user's hand as regular one causes - 5 damage to user's hand.

Causes damage to user varying on the strength of the technique
No other lightning techniques can be used at the same turn by the user
Can be used only two times per battle. Once if S - class version is used

Feel free to add anything if you want to the technique above.

~Declined~ Work on the description, how far does it branch out? Take out the part about the possible symptom of getting hit by lightning. Getting hit by lightning in the Narutoverse isn't the same as in real life, especially when it's lightning created by a ninja. Make it S-rank or A-rank.

Migualon J.J. · Sep 10, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ingram Mo-Do) Ingram Mode

Type:Mode
Rank: S
Range:All
Chakra:50 (-15 each turn its maintained)
Damage Points:N/A (+15 to ninjutsu and +10 to tai.) (-25 after deactivation)
Description: Shinobi who have signed the buzzard contract and are capable of summoning Storm Skyress get a special seal on their right shoulder. When this seal is released, a special armor is summoned onto the user. Its called "The Ingram Armor" and it was forged in the buzzard realm with a very special alloy that is capable of channeling and absorbing a special form of chakra only found in the Buzzard realm (Similar to nature chakra but its not found in the normal world). The armor is a bit different as it is more of an exo-skeleton, partially fusing with the users own body. The armor regulates the body causing chakra to channel more fluently aswell as muscles to work to their full capacity and at the same time pumping that special chakra to fuse with the user's own. This causes the user's ninjutsu to be enhanced in power and also causes him/her to become faster and stronger. The user moves so fast that things around him becomes slightly blurred when moving at full speed and he/she gets the strength to crush boulders if using full stregth and stop large objects in their tracks. The armor also gives the user a good defense. He/she can take the full force of blunt attacks, swords, etc unless given special properties. The user can withstand the power of C-rank attacks and below due to the armor and special chakra to reinforce it. After using the armour, the user will be worn out and take damage from muscle exhaustion.
Notes:
-Can only last 3 turns at the most
-After deactivation, the user can only use B-rank ninjutsu for 2 turns
-Can withstand C rank attacks besides Lightning and fire. (D-rank for that)
-Can be activated twice but it must be sent back to buzzard realm and take 5 turns to absorb the special chakra.
-Can't use genjutsu in this armour
-The user takes 25 damage from muscle exhaustion after useage and needs two turns to recuporate.(The person loses strength and speed on a large scale. Couldn't even beat up a todler xd)
-No taijustu after deactivation until done recuporating

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~Declined~ You need to quote the first submission when re-submitting jutsus and but the added part in bold.

I don't know if this is your alternate account but that jutsu was already submitted:
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~The Norwegian~ · Sep 10, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~The Norwegian~ said:
Herumusupuritta: Helm Splitter
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Mid-range for the fissure and short for the shield.
Chakra Cost: N/A (40 for the special abilities)
Damage Points: 80
Description: A hammer made of steel wich is reinforced witch Doton chakra, making the steel extremely hard and more heavy. Thanks to the Doton chakra in it, the user can slamm this weapon on the ground and create a fissure in the earth towards the opponent. The wielder can also slamm the weapon on
the ground and tear the earth up to create a defensive shield of earth.
Note: Can only be used with the permission of ~The Norwegian~
Note: The two abilities take 40 chakra.

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(Doton: Chikyū Bōru) Earth Style: Earth Ball
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers his Doton chakra in the ground before him and performs the 3 required handseals. Then he uses the gathered chakra to make the earth rise and take the form of a large, spiked ball of earth. It can be used to block incoming attacks or to roll over the
opponent.

Note: Can only be used with the permission of ~The Norwegian~
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: Requires 3 handseals.

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(Fuuton: Burēdoharikēn / ブレードハリケーン) - Wind Style: Bladed Hurricane
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Defensive
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Point: 50
Description: The user will take his sword and infuse it with Fuuton chakra. The user will then spin his sword around with a chain attached at the end of the hilt and release the Fuuton chakra infused, releasing a wind current that takes the form of a hurricane that is on its side. It can blow back C-Rank attacks but collides with B-Rank jutsu and cancels them both out, fire jutsu of B-Rank or higher will cancel this out easily.
Note: Can only be used with ~The Norweigan~'s permission.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

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Gawa no hadan no tatsumaki: Side Breaking Tornado
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user sweeps his hammer to the right, but instead of moving it back to hit the opponent he keeps sweeping the hammer. Due to the weight of the hammer, the user keeps spinning and goes faster and faster. Thus, the user becomes like a little tornado wich can deal
smashes with the hammer on the left side of the opponent.

Note: Can onle be used with the permission of ~The Norwegian~
Note: One must wield a hammer.
Note: Can only be used two times per batle.
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(Suiton: Kyodaina mizunote) Water Style: Giand Water Hand
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user gathers his chakra into a water source nearby while performing the 2 required handseals. Afterwards, he uses his chakra to form a large hand out of water wich can grab or smash the opponent.

Note: Can only be used with the permission of ~The Norwegian~
Note: Requires 2 handseals.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
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~All Declined~

Gone a week, now resubmitting. Last submitt was 3.September. This weeks submitting starts 10. Septemer.

Herumusupuritta: Helm Splitter
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short to Mid
Chakra Cost: N/A (40 for the special abilities)
Damage Points: 80
Description:
A giant Hammer made of a special metal that has the ability to conduct earth chakra. The hammer itself is almost indesctrutable and is a formidable weapon. When the user channels either his earth chakra or his normal chakra, he gains acess to some unique abilities:
Abilities:
-Channeling normal chakra through it and slamming it into the ground creates an A-Rank chakra shockwave up to mid range.
-Slamming the ground with the hammer infused with doton chakra creates an A-Rank wave of earth capable of overturning the landscape up to mid range
-User can channel doton chakra into the hammer and swirl it into a circular pattern in front of him to defend against up to 1 S-Rank technique (follows elemental table)

Note: Each ability can only be used twice, and the user can only use up to 3 abilities per battle
Note2: User can't use lightning while using the hammers abilities
Note3: When used to defend, user can't use earth in the same turn
Note4: can only be wielded by The Norwegian

~Declined~ OP
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(Doton: Chikyū Bōru) Earth Style: Earth Ball
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: User does 3 handseals and kicks the ground, making a spiked ball of rock pop up in front of him (about 3 meters wide). User can then channel doton chakra into a fist or feet and punch/kick the ball towards the opponent. The ball quickly rages towards the opponent (ball moves only a fraction slower than a normal full running speed of a ninja), gaining size as it gathers rubble from the ground.

Note: Can only be used 4 times
Note2: Can only be used on earth/rock ground
Note3: Ball is created within short range of the user
Note4: can only be taught by the norwegian.
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~Approved~

I edited those two, the bold parts are what I've changed.

Mods can edit if they want too.

Coyote · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

*Last weeks submissions started on September 2nd*

Earth

~Both Declined~ Such jutsu already exist (or very similar while not being "Roman legionnaire")

Water

~Approved~ Change the word "internal" for "several" in your description.

~Approved~ Took out one of your restrictions and added one.

Nara's Shadows

~Declined~ Work on the restriction, I didn't get the point of your jutsu. Make it clearer.

Edit:

I've posted several times about this:

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You posted 2 customs on the 5th, meaning it counted toward the week starting on the 9/4/2011 and ending on the 9/10/2011 (hence you can post your next batch on the 11th. Plus I clearly stated that I'd post to delimit every week). This post is therefore in addition to those 5 others.

You are hereby banned from the CJ thread for the coming week (the next batch of submissions). The ban will be lift on the 25th of September (Since I check all your submissions anyway, it's like you're banned from your next possible submission).

If you have questions ask through VMs.

Serpent · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Serpent said:
(Kchuysei: Sune-ku Kutsurogi) Summoning: Snake Room:
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user slams their hands together and a room warps around the battlefield. this room is an unique chakra barrier that appears to have solid walls, the walls move with the opponent keeping them in the center of the room. The room is filled with thousands of snakes, these snakes can be bent to the user's will to attack the enemy.
Note:
-No S-Rank next turn
-Must be able to summon snakes
-Can only be used once per battle
-Only last for 3 turns
-Can only be taught by Serpent

Declined. Make it stationary. Is it just 4 walls or does it have a roof?

(Sune-ku Ishiki) Snake Senses :
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his chakra to enter a state of a Snake. their senses change drastically. there pupils become slanted like that of a snake. this doesn't have any effect on the eye site. Their skin also becomes more scaly and sensitive allowing them to feel any vibrations on or in the ground. and tongue become's forked and makes them able to taste an opponents whereabouts in the air.
Note:
-Must be able to summon snakes.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only last for 3 turns.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

Declined. Tone down the ability some. You may be able to "smell" the scent in the air, but it depends on the wind direction. it the wind is moving away from you, my scent will never reach you.

Serpent said:
(Kchuysei: Sune-ku Kutsurogi) Summoning: Snake Room:
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user slams their hands together and a room warps around the battlefield. this room is an unique chakra barrier that appears to have solid walls with 8 sides in the shape of a octagon and a dome cling, the walls appear with the opponent in the center of the room. The room is filled with thousands of snakes, these snakes can be bent to the user's will to attack the enemy.
Note:
-No S-Rank next turn
-Must be able to summon snakes
-Can only be used once per battle
-Only last for 3 turns
-Can only be taught by Serpent

(Sune-ku Ishiki) Snake Senses :
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his chakra to enter a state of a Snake. their senses change drastically. there pupils become slanted like that of a snake. this doesn't have any effect on the eye site. Their skin also becomes more scaly and sensitive allowing them to feel any vibrations on or in the ground. the tongue become's forked and makes them able to taste an opponents whereabouts in the air up to Mid range.
Note:
-Must be able to summon snakes.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only last for 3 turns.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

I'm not sure how to indicate wind detection in a battle so to avoid arguments in battles to who is up or down wind I made it up to Mid range if that's okay with you..

~All Declined: over weekly submissions~

(Kchuysei: Sune-ku Kutsurogi) Summoning: Snake Room:
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user slams their hands together and a room warps around the battlefield. this room is an unique chakra barrier that appears to have solid walls with 8 sides in the shape of a octagon and a dome cling, the walls appear with the opponent in the center of the room. The room is filled with thousands of snakes, these snakes can be bent to the user's will to attack the enemy.
Note:
-No S-Rank next turn
-Must be able to summon snakes
-Can only be used once per battle
-Only last for 3 turns
-Can only be taught by Serpent

(Sune-ku Ishiki) Snake Senses :
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user focuses his chakra to enter a state of a Snake. their senses change drastically. there pupils become slanted like that of a snake. this doesn't have any effect on the eye site. Their skin also becomes more scaly and sensitive allowing them to feel any vibrations on or in the ground. the tongue become's forked and makes them able to taste an opponents whereabouts in the air up to Mid range.
Note:
-Must be able to summon snakes.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only last for 3 turns.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

I'm not sure how to indicate wind detection in a battle so to avoid arguments in battles to who is up or down wind I made it up to Mid range if that's okay with you..

~Both declined do not resubmit~ The first one is not acceptable in term of jutsu and the second one something that is now banned; animal transformation/mode.

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New Submission

(Sune-ku Bomu) Snake Bomb:
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses his Chakra into a Snake(s) he is then able to detonate the Snake(s). the size of the explosion depends on the size of the Snake and how many snakes are detonated.
Note:
-Must be able to summon Snakes.
-Can only be used 3 time's per battle.
-Must wait 2 turns before using again.
-Can only Be taught by Serpent.

~Declined do not resubmit~ No more explosion of elements (or summoning in this case), there's already enough of those.

Demosthenes · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hakke Shinkuu Yari) Eight Trigrams Empty Spear
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using the Empty Palm technique as a basis, the user will thrust their palm forward, releasing a chakra blast/void pocket. However, rather than making the blast hit the enemy as a blunt attack, the user will apply shape manipulation, forming the brunt of the blast into a very sharp point and condensing the rest of the blast into a thin, cylindrical rod-esque shape which, upon hitting the opponent, can impale and fly out of the other side of the body before dispersing.
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.

~Declined~ The fact that you're trying to add shape manipulation to this jutsu means you haven't fully understood how it work. You can't shape something if your primary goal is to compress it to it's maximum level (other then shaping it into a sphere).

(Hakke Shinkuu Ashinami) Eight Trigrams Empty Step
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will stomp one of their feet on the ground, releasing an outward wave of chakra throughout the ground as they do so. Should this chakra hit the opponent, it will move up the enemy's legs with the force of an Empty Palm, temporarily stunning them, though not reaching their organs, meaning that this technique is not lethal.
Note: Can be used thrice per battle.

~Approved~

(Suiton: Kiri Assaku Gokusha) Water Style: Mist Compression Prison
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long (Enemy must be in mist.)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user performs three handseals as he begins to manipulate a very large amount of pre-existing mist. When the enemy is within this mist, the user will manipulate it to quickly converge on the opponent, condensing and forming a Water Prison that is somewhat larger than a normal one, retaining its ability to immobilize the opponent.
Note: This technique does not create mist. The mist for this technique must already be present before this technique's use.
Note: If the enemy is not within the mist/Is not within short-range of the mist, the technique can not be used on them.
Note: Can be used twice per battle.

~Declined~ This is a combination of many existing technique (customs jutsu in fact).

(Suiton: Mei Megurushi) Water Style: The Dark Mark
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will raise one hand to the sky, pointing two fingers towards it. Using the Hidden Mist Jutsu as a basis, he will form a large amount of mist in the sky, at the cloud level which he will manipulate and condense into the shape of a large ghastly skull. The skull will emit a condensed mist-serpent from its mouth that will quickly travel and extend towards the opponent. Upon reaching the opponent it will bite down on them, causing a bit of crushing damage before quickly withdrawing back into the mouth of the skull, which is filled with very thick mist and is devoid of breathable air. As the opponent enters the skull's mouth, it quickly closes, trapping the opponent inside. Should the serpent be destroyed, the skull will fall the ground like a comet with enough force to crush whatever it lands on. After hitting the ground, the skull will lose its compressed form, releasing a large amount of mist over the field.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Takes two of the three moves per turn.
Note: This technique uses the basis of techniques that involve solid-esque objects being created out of mist, meaning that both the skull and the serpent are compressed enough to be physically touched. Similar to solid Fuuton objects.

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~Declined~ I like that one, really, but you need to work on the bold part as they are unrealistic (even you try to compress the mist to much it'll become water, and when it gets destroyed, it should lose it's compactness since it's not under your control anymore). Also, what happens when you're trapped and in the skull?

Yūsuke1 · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

-Yusuke- said:
(Ninpou : Nibankikai) - Ninja Art : Second Chance
Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 35
Damage points : N/A
Description : The user performs a row of 4 handseals, ending with a final clap and takes in a deep breathe, as though as pulling something back. With this technique, the user is able to recover a shot projectile or technique and then launch it again. The user also does not need to perform any of the requirements needed for the previously used technique such as handseals, opening the mouth, be on the ground for an earth technique.

Note : Usable only three times per battle
Note : Can't be used for forbidden rank techniques
Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Cannot be used for kekkei genkai and genjutsu techniques
Note : Still works for hidden ninjutsu such as Nara, Inuzuka, Aburame
Note : Cannot be used for a technique that has already hit a target
Note : User needs to keep the 'clap' together as long as the technique is active

~Declined~ I'm not quite sure where you're going with this. Is this your projectile, or you opponent's? Are you re-directing it? Please make it much more clearer when re-submitting.

Resubmitting :

(Ninpou : Nibankikai) - Ninja Art : Second Chance
Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 35
Damage points : N/A
Description : The user performs a row of 4 handseals, ending with a final clap and takes in a deep breathe, as though as pulling something back. With this technique, the user is able to recover the user's very own shot projectile or technique and then launch it again. The projectile or technique will appear right in front of the user and be shot again at the enemy as though it hasn't even been shot yet. The user also does not need to perform any of the requirements needed for the previously used technique such as handseals, opening the mouth, be on the ground for an earth technique.

Note : Usable only three times per battle
Note : Can't be used for forbidden rank techniques
Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Cannot be used for kekkei genkai and genjutsu techniques
Note : Still works for hidden ninjutsu such as Nara, Inuzuka, Aburame
Note : Cannot be used for a technique that has already hit a target
Note : Not usable to recover an opponent's projectile due to it being filled with the opponent's chakra
Note : User needs to keep the 'clap' together as long as the technique is active

~Declined~ Please precise whether or not re-shooting the technique counts as a move and precise that re-shooting it makes it lose 25% of it's original strength.

New submission(s) :

(Suna : Mugenkouu) - Sand style : Infinite Rain
Rank : S
Type : Offensive
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 40 (+5 for an additional range radius)
Damage points : 80
Description : After performing the three handseals, 'Boar, Ram and then Tiger', the user is able to mold a few thousand raindrop-sized needles in the sky above the desired location. The more chakra the user injects into this technique, the larger the radius of the attack. This sand needles will rain upon the enemy like bullets being shot. The less scattered these needles are from each other, they are more compact and would compile together as they rain, making them more deadly and powerful. Despite its size, it still has the ability to pierce though one's flesh with its sharpness and its falling momentum.

Note : Last a couple of seconds
Note : Usable only three times per battle
Note : Can only be used by a sand user
Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Will injure the own user if used around his own area too (20 damage)
Note : No S-rank and above sand techniques for the next two turns
Note : Takes a turn to prepare, although its not visible to the naked eye as its preparing
Note : The technique is fully visible to the naked eye when it starts raining on the enemy

~Approved~ Check the bold part.

(Suna : Mikkusu) - Sand Style : Imbue
Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : N/A
Description : With this technique, the user is able to implement sand into the user's wind technique hence enhancing its potential such as wind's weakness towards fire. This will allow the wind technique to overpower a fire technique, one rank above it since sand is strong against fire shown when Gaara blocked Amaterasu with sand and it neither broke nor melted. When against other techniques, theres barely any difference except for the fact that the wind technique is now stronger thanks to the additional destructive power when mixed with the sharpness of sand when spun extremely fast just like a Typhoon.

Note : Usable only five times per battle
Note : Can only be used by a sand user
Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
Note : The user's wind technique now does not have the elemental advantage over lightning hence being on equal level if both techniques are of same rank
Note : The concept behind why the wind technique is stronger now is just the same as how when water is combined with wind to increase the water's destructive power, only now, the sand is extremely sharp

~Declined~ That jutsu doesn't make sense as you only look at it linearly. Yes sand is strong to fire, but that doesn't change the fact that when your wind clash with a fire jutsu, the wind will strengthen the fire. Your sand will just fall to the ground afterward. Why sand was strong against Amaterasu and fire in general is because it was tight enough to keep air from feeding the fire. For it to work it'd have to be all sand, so this jutsu will most likely never work on regular wind techniques.

(Genjutsu : Koukinko) - Illusion Technique : Box Imprisonment
Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : N/A
Description : The user will take a good look at the target's skull mainly at its centre and then forcefully sends and injects the user's chakra into his or her mind. The user will close his eyes momentarily from feeling a pain in his head due to the strong chakra injection in his head. Right after opening it, the target will notice an earthen wall not only in front of him but on all sides including the top and bottom. With this, the enemy's line of sight is blocked, along with smell and hearing due to the target's mind thinking the target is in an illusionary earthen prison.

Note : No illusion techniques for two turns
Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Requires contact with the user's skull
Note : Can only be used twice per battle
Note : User cannot take his eyes off the target as long as this technique is active

~Declined~ You don't have a Doujutsu and yet you cast a genjutsu on someone by simply looking at them? And up to long range at that?

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Heavens Blade · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Heavens Blade said:
(Kōton: rippoutai) steel release: cube
Rank: A
Type: Supplementry
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: /
Description: the user tosses a large steel cube over there opponent then you can use a four pillar or sixteen pillar to turn the cube into a large oven
-can only be used by a steel bio
- can only be taught by heavens blade

Declined. Give a better description of how the cube is formed and how large it is.

(Kōton: metaru sadou) steel release: metal movement
Rank: A
Type: Supplementry
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: /
Description: the user is able to move through metal object at very high speeds can be used to dodge attacks of gain tactical advantage over opponent
-can only be used by steel bio
-can only travel through steel that is connected
-can only be taught by heavens blade

Declined. Needs usage restrictions

(Kōton: Kōsame) steel release: steel shark
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user does three handseals then places there hand on the ground and makes a shark out of steel which travels under ground will then comes out of he ground and devours the opponent the shark moves at the same speed as water shark bomb
-shark travels 2 times faster if steel field is in play
-can only be used by steel bios
-can only be taught by heavens blade

~Appoved~

(doton: shiroari) earth release: termites
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user makes 5 handseals then makes a dozen termites made of earth the termites are larger then normal (the termites are the size of deidara clay spiders) the termites can eat through anything of a lower density
-can only be used twice
-can only be taught by heavens blade

Declined. Do not resubmit

(suiton: hitoshirenu heki) water release: useen tears
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: the user gathers suiton chakra into there hand making water droplets on there fingertips then flicks his/her wrist flinging the droplets at his/her opponent just before the water leaves his/her hand s/he condenses the droplets till there hard enough to pierce the skin (when the water leaves the finger tips it takes the shape of a tear drop)
-can only be taught by heavens blade

~Approved~

link to my finished steel training

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(Kōton: Kōsame renda) steel release: steel shark barrage
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user does six handseals then places there hand on the ground and makes five sharks out of steel which travel underground two will come to distract the opponent while a third comes from under the opponent and drag them under the earth where the 5 sharks rip him apart same speed as water shark bomb
-this jutsu can only be used three time per match
-shark travels 2 times faster if steel field is in play
-can only be used by steel bios
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

this is just a more powerful version of my steel shark jutsu

(Hyouton: hitoshirenu heki) ice release: useen tears
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: the user gathers suiton chakra into there hand making water droplets on there fingertips then flicks his/her wrist flinging the droplets at his/her opponent just before the water leaves his/her hand s/he turns the watere into ice that is strong enough to pierce skin(when the water leaves the finger tips it takes the shape of a tear drop)
-can only be used by ice bios
-can only be taught by heavens blade

i want to turn this jutsu into a ice jutsu please

(Hyouton: yobigoe)ice release: hail
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: the user turns the rain into ice making it hail doing damage to everyone and everything on the field (including yourself if you dont denfend against it)
-must be raining
-can only be used by ice bio
-can only be taught be Heavens Blade

(fuuton: hornets) wind release: hornets
Type: Offence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30 (+10 for each extra one max 4)
Damage Points: 60 (+5 fpr each extra one)
Description:after prefoming 5 handseals the user will spit out 4 hornets that are made completly out of fuuton chakra due to there wings they are able to turn and follow a enemy if they try to dodge them
-can only be taught by heavens blade

i couldnt find the japanese word of hornets

(Kuchiyose koori) summoning koori
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: koori is a relitivly small humming bird barely big enough for one person to ride on he has a very cold attitude and doesnt get along with very many people which is why it is very wierd that he is usually by the side of fai koori has the ability to use all ice techneques that his summoner knows he can also use all suiton jutsu that his summoner knows up to A rank
-koori is fai personal summon
-must be ice bio to summon him
-any jutsu used by koori counts as one of your jutsu
-can be out for 4 turns for all who summon him except fay
-must have signed humming bird contract
-can be summoned once per match

~All declined~ I will not check re-submissions unless you put the added part in bold.

Frozenstein · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Ocelot
Scroll Owner: Frozenstein
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

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~Approved~

Enzup · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fell free to edit..

(Doton: Deddo supaiku) - Earth Style : Deadly Spikes
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The earth user perform hand signs and then put his hands on earth, so that numerous big conical shape spikes of almost 1 m in height comes out from earth instantly from anywhere the user wants. The spikes will continue to come out non-stop till the user's hands are on earth..
Note: This jutsu can only be used 3 times a battle..

~Declined~ Already exist but in a less OP form.

(Doton: Kyojin engai) - Earth Style : Giant Dome
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The earth user perform hand signs and make a dome around the opponent or user of radius up to 25m and thickness 1m, either to trap the opponent in dome or for defensive purpose..
Note: This jutsu can only be used 3 times a battle..

~Declined~ Already exist.

(Doton: koudo hibi) - Earth Style : Earth Crack
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The earth user hardens his hand and then punches the ground, the earth start shaking, creating an earth quake and unbalancing the opponent and simultaneously creating a huge crack of width 10m in the direction in which the user has hit the punch..
Note: This jutsu can only be used 3 times a battle..

~Approved~

(Doton: biggu tou) - Earth Style : Big Tower
Rank: B
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The earth user perform hand signs and pull out a cylindrical tower of earth from beneath the legs of user of radius 5m and height 10m.
Note: This jutsu can only be used 4 times a battle.

~Approved~

(Raiton: Denkou shishi) - Lightning Style : Lightning Lion
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user generate lightning in his hands and then creates two lions of it from both hands which are connected to hands by lightning chakra and user can control the lions to attack the target..
Note: This jutsu can only be used 3 times a battle..

~Declined~ This is too similar to Kakashi's lightning hound jutsu.

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Venus · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Amatsukami hirameku) Lightning release: Heavenly Gods Flash

Rank: S
Type:Offence
Range:short/long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points:80
Description:
The user gathers raiton chakra in their palms, performs a few seals and then slams their hands to the ground. Lightning, tears up from the ground infront of the user and burts towards the opponent. When the lightning is close to the opponent, another bolt of lightning, surges down from the sky in an instant and collides into the bolt on the ground, creating a giant electrical explosion that could easily get an opponent at close range.

Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
Note: Can not use raiton jutsu for 1 turn.
Note: Can only use up to B rank raiton jutsu for 2 turns.
Note: Can only be used if there are thunder clouds on the field.
Note: Can only be used and taught by ~Sage~.

~Approved~ Added a note in bold.

(Raiton: Gokumon) Lightning Release: Prison Gate

Rank:A to S (If adding more chakra to make stronger)
Type:Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost:35(A rank) 45(S rank)
Damage Points:N/A
Description:
The user gathers chakra in to their strongest foot, does some hand signs and then stomps on the ground. Lightning style prison bars, shoot up from the ground, around the user and entrap them in a lightning styled cube.

Note:Can only use 2 times per battle.
Note:Can only use raiton justu for 2 turns.
Note:It only stays active for 2 turns after performed
Note:Can only be used and taught by ~Sage~.

~Approved~ Don't really see the point in trapping yourself for two turns though...

(Animal summoning) Thylacine

Summoning Animal: Thylacine
Scroll Owner:~Sage~
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

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Feel free to edit for approval.

~Declined do not resubmit~ Extinct animal will all be declined.

Mockingbird · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Jacob Moore said:
(Raiton:Hitomure Karasu)-Lightning Release:Flocking Crows
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user surrounds himself with a flock of Crows made of his/her Lightning chakra. These Crows can be used to deliver powerful piercing damage to an enemy on contact, as well as induce paralysis. It can also be used for diversionary tactics.
~Usable 3 times per battle
~No S Rank lightning next turn

(Fukasu Ryuudan)-Smoke Dragon
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user performs three handseals to imbue any existing smoke with chakra, right before manipulating it in the form of a large Dragon. The user can manipulate the thickness of the smoke so that it can physically touch or grab someone. It can also be used a a diversionary tactic, where as the user can hide several Explosive Tags in the Dragon (Since it can become solid enough to touch)
~Usable 3 times
~No A Rank or above Fire techniques next turn.
~Can only be taught by Ruiz..
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(Fuuinjutsu: Inception)-Sealing Technique:Inception
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: This jutsu requires the user to place a seal on the enemy through physical contact, to be effective. Once the seal has been placed on the enemy, at any time, the user can put the enemy under a trans causing them to fall asleep where they stand. While asleep the enemy will be trapped in their own subconscious, where they will be dreaming. The dream is so realistic that to the enemy, nothing will appear wrong at all and everything will continue as it was previously happening before the activation of the jutsu, except now things will be going accordingly with what the enemy's subconscious makes up (Like an actual dream). Because this isn't a Genjutsu, it can't be escaped the same way a regular Genjutsu would be broken. The only way for the enemy to escape this dream, is if they were killed in their subconscious. The dream will then be ended, and they will return to reality.
~Can only be used twice per battle
~While under the jutsu, the enemy may be affected by the outside environment (i.e if it started to rain in reality, it would suddenly start pouring rain in the dream out of nowhere. If they're body was moved in any kind of way, they would be thrown around randomly in their dream, alerting them that something is wrong)
~The only way to end the jutsu, is if the user releases it, or if the enemy dies while in their dream (Causing no physical harm to the affected person)

None of the above were checked yet >_>
(Removed Law of the Twin Fish)
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Custom Summoning
Summoning animal: Tasmanian Devil
Scroll Owner: Jacob Moore
Others who have signed this contract: N/A
Summoning Boss: (Will make one if approved)

~Approved~

(Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Akira)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Akira
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Akira is the first born son of Taz, the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's as well as Jacob's personal summon. Unlike most of his kind, he is extremely relaxed, never over-reacting, and always analyzing his each situation presented to him. Akira has black fur, as well as a stripe of white fur across his chest. In his human form he carries his blade "Debiru Ketsurui" in a black and white sheath (A regular Longsword, capable of conducting chakra to increase lethality). In his human form, Akira has shaggy Black hair, and noticeably enlarged canine teeth. He wears a black kimono, with a white sash around his waist. Akira's size dwarf's that of trees, and some buildings, he is also capable of changing the size of his body, so that his size doesn't become a nuisance in certain situations (Like Gamatatsu). In his shrunken state, he stands at around 1 foot tall, and can stand on the user's shoulder. Unlike other members of his species Being the first born son of Taz, Akira is one of the most powerful of his species. He specializes in Earth Style Ninjutsu, as well as Kenjutsu.

~Stays on the field for 5 turns.
~Akira can only use up to C Rank Earth jutsu.
~Akira's transformations count as the use a jutsu
~In his regular form, he cannot use Kenjutsu (Being that his species don't have aposable thumbs)

~Declined~ No human form, you're summoning an animal, not a hybrid. Re-work the description.

Typhon · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Iado: Ikazuchi Senkou) - Quick Draw Technique | Thunder Flash
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80 (-10 to user)
Description: The user stands with one hand on the middle of their sheath and the other on the grip of their sword. They channel a large amount of chakra through their sword into their sheath building up a large amount of chakra. While they do this they control the chakra with the hand that's placed on the sheath keeping it tightly packed within the sheath and building up the pressure. A moment before the technique is released a faint glow can be seen on the sheath. From there the user quickly unsheathes their sword in a slashing motion releasing the built up chakra from their sheath in a blast that extends up to mid range. The release of pressure from the sheath also works to push the katana out making the actual slash of the technique faster than standard iado, though the slash is confined to short range. The momentary speed the arm gains puts strain on it, causing ten damage to the user.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only be used by samurai.

(Bushido: Abatā) - Way of the Samurai | Avatar
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40 (-15 per turn)
Damage: +15 to Kenjutsu
Description: This technique is an advanced form of the samurai saber technique in which rather than coating the blade with chakra, the samurai instead concentrates chakra within the blade. By doing this the sword begins to shine brightly taking on a bright white color while maintaining its original form, representing the soul of the Samurai within the blade. By concentrating the chakra into the blade rather than around it, it becomes more focused and powerful allowing normal slashes to cut through metallic weapons such as kunai or other swords in the same was as a chidori current. Also due to the shine of the blade it becomes difficult for the opponent to follow its movements as it becomes harder to pinpoint where the actual blade is within the light. The light isn't enough to blind the enemy, but if there were to look directly at the blade they would have to squint. The technique is not without drawbacks. It must be used with their dominant arm and since the user must keep the chakra under better control it puts more strain on their body, especially the arm holding the sword. As a result once the technique wears off they lose use of that arm for two turns afterwards. It also makes the sword used become very brittle to the point that if it were to clash with another sword it would be easily broken (regardless of any custom weapon that says its indestructible). The technique can be activated and deactivated multiple times per battle, but the number of turns the technique can be active in total is not to exceed four. Every time it is activated it must be counted as one of the three moves that turn.
-Can only be used by Samurai.
-Can only be used for a total of four turns per battle.
-User loses use of their dominant arm after the fourth turn for two turns.

(Genjutsu: Chikin-icchi) - Demonic Illusion | Chicken Pox
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 20
Description: The user will either scratch their arm or neck causing the target to fall under an illusion. In the illusion the opponent's skin will become irresistibly itchy causing them to claw at their own body. They begin to scratch so hard that they actually cause themselves to bleed in several places. The pain caused by the scratching is enough to break them free of the genjutsu, making it very brief, but leaving them with numerous minor cuts on their body.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-The motion of the user scratching themselves must be seen.
~All Declined~ Do not resubmit the thunder flash jutsu, it already exists

Tvqxeqlapcfr · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~Kira~ said:
Roshida Mode (Roshida Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 3o Per Turn of Use
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites their thumbs, and marks their eyelids in blood. During the users next turn, the blood drips from their eyes to their
jaw line, and the user begins to grow colored feathers, as well as feathers of a different color around their neck. The color of these feathers vary from person to person. Their eyes become small and black, similar to that of a hummingbird.
~Cannot be used unless:

The user has not used any summons during this battle.

The user has signed the hummingbird contract.

The user has used no jutsu during the turn of use.

The user has not used taijutsu before or after use. The use of taijutsu forces the user to exit Rashido Mode, and renders them unable to enter it again during the same battle.

~The user can exit Rashido mode at any time.
~Rashido mode can only be entered twice per battle.
~Roshida mode can only be used for a total of ten turns per battle during both uses, and counts as a jutsu each turn of use. Can only be used for up to five turns per usage. Upon exit, the user cannot attempt activation again for three of the user's turns.
~The user's speed is increased during usage (x1.5 on the Speed Chart) as well as their ability to see certain speeds (x1.5 on the Speed Sight chart). The users speed is less than normal for three turns after exit. (x 0.5 on Speed Chart. Does not apply to sight).
~The user's summons for the hummingbird contract can be done without hand seals during usage of Rashido mode. The user's summons all disipate upon exit of Rashido mode. These summons cannot be called upon for three turns after exit of Roshida mode.
~During Roshida mode, Kekkei and Special Abilities are forbidden, and cannot be used between the two usages. They can, however, be used before the first usage and three turns after each usage, with the exception of if the user wishes to use it a second time.

[On a side note, this has been changed drastically, and must be checked again completely.]
~Declined On a side note bold the edits otherwise it will not be checked consider this a warning as it has been stated multiple times to bold any edits made~

Roshida Cloud (Roshida Kumo)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user uses their feathers to create a cloud-like buildup of densely packed feathers beneath their feet that can be used as a stepping stone. Once used, the feathers are pushed in the other direct, propelling the user.
~Up to three clouds can be created per use.
~Only usable by hummingbird summons or a human in Roshida mode.
~Delined, how can feathers be used to propell a person :S ~

Roshida Sword (Roshida Ken)
Type: Attac
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra : 6o
Description: The user creates a sword-like beak similar to the beak created by Hachidori Hands. It is a javelin-shaped spear, and can be aimed and thrown at the target. As soon as it lands/hits, it disipates in a cloud of feathers.
~Can only be used by a hummingbird summon or a human in Rashido mode.
~Declined, explain how you exacty create this sword~

Roshida Drill (Roshida Doriru)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user creates to large beaks similarly to how beaks are created through Hachidori Hands. The beaks rotate, acting like spinning drills. The user goes underground and tunnels underneath the target, and comes up from underneath them with the beak.
~Can only be used by a hummingbird summon or a human in Rashido mode.
~Declined, same as above~

Rashido Whip (Rashido Muchi)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user creates a whip of tightly woven feathers in the form of a long whip, which can be used to stile the opponent.
~Declined, this isnt A rank level ~

Roshida Mode (Roshida Mode)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 3o Per Turn of Use
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites their thumbs, and marks their eyelids in blood. During the users next turn, the blood drips from their eyes to their
jaw line, and the user begins to grow colored feathers, as well as feathers of a different color around their neck. The color of these feathers vary from person to person. Their eyes become small and black, similar to that of a hummingbird.
~Cannot be used unless:

The user has not used any summons during this battle.
The user has signed the hummingbird contract.
The user has used no jutsu during the turn of use.
The user has not used taijutsu before or after use. The use of taijutsu forces the user to exit Rashido Mode, and renders them unable to enter it again during the same battle.

~The user can exit Rashido mode at any time.
~Rashido mode can only be entered twice per battle.
~Roshida mode can only be used for a total of ten turns per battle during both uses, and counts as a jutsu each turn of use. Can only be used for up to five turns per usage. Upon exit, the user cannot attempt activation again for three of the user's turns.
~The user's speed is increased during usage (x1.5 on the Speed Chart) as well as their ability to see certain speeds (x1.5 on the Speed Sight chart). The users speed is less than normal for three turns after exit. (x 0.5 on Speed Chart. Does not apply to sight except where applicable).
~The user's summons for the hummingbird contract can be done without hand seals during usage of Rashido mode. The user's summons all disipate upon exit of Rashido mode. These summons cannot be called upon for three turns after exit of Roshida mode.
~During Roshida mode, Kekkei Genkai and Special Abilities are forbidden, and cannot be used between the two usages. They can, however, be used before the first usage and three turns after each usage, with the exception of if the user wishes to use it a second time.

[Changes Bolded, as asked by Zen.]

Magnet Release: Pull (Jiton: Puru)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points:
Description: The user magnetized a large metal weapon and throws it away from themselves. Any smaller metal weapons are drawn to the sword unless they themselves are magnetized, rendering them useless.

Magnet Release: Metal Rain (Jiton: Kinzoku no Ame)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user throws a large bag filled with small magnetized metal weapons into the air above the opponent. The user forces the magnetized weapons to rain down on everything within short range of the opponent.

Lightning Release: Metal Coat (Raiton: Kinzoku Koto)
Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description: The user lines a metal object in a coat of lightning, not only making it stronger, but also giving it numbing capabilities.

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Type: Supplementary\Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 3o
Damage Points: 6o
Description:
~All Declined~ OP and unrealistic.

Izuna Uchiha · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Submissions starting on the 9/11/2011 ending on the 9/17/2011

Phobos · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouton: Touketsu Senshu)- Ice Release: Frozen Bow
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: A
Tange: short-long
Chakra: 30 (+5 per turn)
Damage: 60 (this is for defensive purposes only, not for shooting normal arrows)
Description: The user makes one handseal and creates a bow made of ice with chakra string able to shoot ice arrows at high speed (must create arrows with another technique). Normal ice is solid and does not bend, thoug, this one is flexible but needs small amout of chakra every turn to maintain it's flexibility and function. The bow can be also used to block certain techniques that it is able to withstand, like sword slashes etc.

~Declined~ How long does it last? Is it only physical attacks it can block? Need to define these things

(It is really not much different from normal bow but I wanted to make it into ice to fit with bio and also a requirement to use other ice techniques that require bow like the next one I submit)

(Hyouton: Aisu Ya)- Ice Release: Ice Arrow
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: B
Tange: short-long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user pulls string of his Frozen Bow and as they do so, arrow made of ice will materialize and is then shot at very high speeds (small part of charka is infused into the bow to increase the speed of the arrow). Due to it's speed, it is close to invisible to ordinary eyes.

~Declined~ Adjust highlighted areas. Either remove completely or have different speed levels for different chakra costs

(Hyouton: Aisu Kousei)- Ice Release: Ice Regeneration
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Tange: short-long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: With single hand seal the user send's his chakra into previously created ice technique and regenerate it. For instance, if enemy hit users ice technique with lower rank technique, this will be able to repair the damage done and restore its previous strenght.
Additionaly this can be used to prevent destruction of ones ice jutsu if it is struck by enemys technique of same power , though it needs to be done in the same moment the two techniques are colliding and can only be used twice this way.

-Preventing destruction can only be used twice
~Declined~ Usage restrictions for healing?
(I just realized it is kind of similiar to expansion jutsus, though it is not increasing damage of anything. If you think it is too similiar and shouldn't be approved because of this, coul you just delete the part from "Additionaly..." please? *hopes it doesn't happen* xd)

(Kekkai: Chacha)- Barrier Method: Disruption
Type: Supplementary/defense
Rank: S
Tange: short-mid
Chakra: 40 (+10 per turn)
Damage: -
Description: The user will make three handseals and raise and expand an invisible (to ordinary eyes) spherical barrier around themselves, they can either keep it small or expand it up to mid range. The barrier reacts to any chakra amd disrupts it by mixing its own chakra with it. This prevents any jutsus that are made by releasing chakra to certain location and take effect after that, such as erth spikes, swamp of the underword... if the jutsu is formed before reaching the edge of the barrier or inside of it, it will not be affected in any way. The downside is that it stops all such techniques including those made by the user.

-three times per battle
~Declined~

Captain Shodai · Sep 11, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Doton: Doro Henkan no Jutsu; Earth Style: Mud Conversion Jutsu
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: -
Description: The user of the technique slams both palms on the ground. As the palms hit the ground, the earth under the opponent turns into a pool of mud a few feet deep, causing the opponent to instantly sink to his/her thighs. The user then makes the snake hand seal, converting the mud back into earth, locking the opponent in place.
~Declined~

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