[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[-Kizaru-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Mongoose
Scroll Owner: -Kizaru-
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: None
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None

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~Approved~

(Raiton Hayai Handou)- Lighting Fast Kick
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User powers lighting chakra to there legs and feet. The user kicks the opponent or object once but at lighting fast speed. Since the kick is lighting fast its momentum powers up the kick to be a powerful fast kick.
Note: The user can't use any B-D lighting rank jutsus for one turn
Note: Can only be used by –Kizaru-

Declined. a similar technique exists

(Raiton Unsou)-
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Description: User puts there body's lighting chakra to there hands and shoots it like a beam, the beam bounces off objects or just goes straight to the opponent or object. When the lighting chakra reaches the opponent or object the user transport all the chakra in there body into the beam which makes them transport wherever the beam lands.
Note: Since this takes a lot of chakra concentration the range is short to medium.
Note: This is lighting speed but while user is concentrating there chakra just for a moment he is vulnerable, since he is using to hand to perform the jutsu.
Note: Can only be used by –Kizaru-

Declined. Please give the english name

 

[Luiz]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Oumou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Nico and Rafael) Parrot Summoning Jutsus: Nico and Rafael

Rank: C-B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user is able to summon either Nico or Rafael,the only two masters of the Samurai Arts among the Parrots of Altorio. Nico is an average sized parakeet with green feathers and white chest. He's relatively faster and more agile than his fellow master, and carries one samurai katana and bears a straw hat typical among samurais. Rafael is an Altorio average sized white cockatoo with a green mohawk (thus significantly larger than Nico), that wields 2 katanas and wears a typical samurai armor of brown color.
Both Nico and Rafael do not call themselves Samurai Masters, for they are the self proclaimed Karaoke masters. Though everyone in Altorio begs to differ, they just don't tell them in their faces.
*each can only be summoned once, after vanishing, they can't be summoned again. Summoning both will count as two jutsus*

( Oumou Jutsu: Tamago Matsuri ) Parrot Style: Egg Festival

Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This techniques stands as the parrots ability to lay eggs and let them hit their opponents, as as especial eggs that can either be extremely thick and heavy like dumbbells, explosive or plain normal. Depending on the size, chakra reservations and overall characteristics of the user, this technique can have lesser or greater damage. A Parrot summoner can create eggs on their hands and then throw them, as if they are projectiles. The smaller parrots will lay 5-10 eggs of about 5kg, or have the explosion abilities of a paper bomb. Normal parrots and human summoners have 3-6 eggs of about 15 kg or 5-7 paper bombs. The larger parrots (laying only 1) would follow the same line, the biggest eggs, from parrots about the size of Gamabunta would weight about two humans ( about 160 kg ) or explode with the equivalent power of Deidara's C3 bomb.

Both Declined. Please split the Parrot summons into two seperate summons and split the eggs into multiple techniques. The larger eggs (which have the power of the C3 bomb) should be an A-ranked technique due to thier power.

( Oumou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Nico) Parrot Summoning Jutsus: Nico

Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user is able to summon Nico, one of the only two masters of the Samurai Arts among the Parrots of Altorio. Nico is an average sized parakeet with green feathers and white chest. He's relatively faster and more agile than his fellow master, and carries one samurai katana and bears a straw hat typical among samurais.
Both Nico and Rafael do not call themselves Samurai Masters, for they are the self proclaimed Karaoke masters. Though everyone in Altorio begs to differ, they just don't tell them in their faces.
*each can only be summoned once, after vanishing, they can't be summoned again. Summoning both will count as two jutsus*

~Approved~ This is on the basis that they cannot use samurai techniques

( Oumou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Rafael) Parrot Summoning Jutsus: Rafael

Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user is able to summon Rafael, one of the only two masters of the Samurai Arts among the Parrots of Altorio. Rafael is an Altorio average sized white cockatoo with a green mohawk (thus significantly larger than Nico). He is relatively stronger than his fellow master and wields 2 katanas and wears a typical samurai armor of brown color.
Both Nico and Rafael do not call themselves Samurai Masters, for they are the self proclaimed Karaoke masters. Though everyone in Altorio begs to differ, they just don't tell them in their faces.
*each can only be summoned once, after vanishing, they can't be summoned again. Summoning both will count as two jutsus*

~Approved~ This is on the basis that they cannot use samurai techniques


( Oumou Jutsu: Tamago Matsuri I) Parrot Style: Egg Festival I

Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: This techniques stands as the parrots ability to lay normal eggs and let them hit their opponents. Depending on the size, chakra reservations and overall characteristics of the user, this technique can have lesser or greater damage. A Parrot summoner can create eggs on their hands and then throw them, as if they are projectiles. The smaller parrots will lay 10-15 smaller eggs, about the size of quail eggs. Normal parrots and human summoners have 5-8 eggs of chicken egg size. The larger parrots, laying up to 3 of the biggest eggs, from parrots about the size of Gamabunta, which would be about the size of a human.

If this still counts as the previous week, stop here xd
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If this is a new week, please continue :lili:


( Oumou Jutsu: Tamago Matsuri II) Parrot Style: Egg Festival II

Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This techniques stands as the parrots ability to lay especial eggs and let them hit their opponents, these especial eggs extremely thick and heavy like dumbbells. Depending on the size, chakra reservations and overall characteristics of the user, this technique can have lesser or greater damage. A Parrot summoner can create eggs on their hands and then throw them, as if they are projectiles. The smaller parrots will lay 7-10 eggs of about 5kg. Normal parrots and human summoners have 3-6 eggs of about 15 kg. The larger parrots, laying up to 2 of the biggest eggs, from parrots about the size of Gamabunta, would weight about about 300 kg .

( Oumou Jutsu: Tamago Matsuri III) Parrot Style: Egg Festival III

Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This techniques stands as the parrots ability to lay special eggs and let them hit their opponents, these special eggs have explosive upon contact or when the user decides to detonate them. Depending on the size, chakra reservations and overall characteristics of the user, this technique can have lesser or greater damage. A Parrot summoner can create eggs on their hands and then throw them, as if they are projectiles. The smaller parrots will lay 5-8 eggs whih have the explosion abilities of a paper bomb. Normal parrots and human summoners have 2-5 eggs of about 5-7 paper bombs power. The larger parrots (laying only 1) would follow the same line, the biggest eggs, from parrots about the size of Gamabunta would explode with the equivalent power of Deidara's C3 bomb (because of that, said parrots would need to spend an additional 10 chakra, making it an A rank technique)

All egg jutsu Declined. The different destructive propperties is what changes the rank. small size/power = small rank. you give reference to the size but not the destructive capabilities. If the damage doesnt change then why even mention the size?

 

[House]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton:Isoide Wazuka Na) Lightning Release: Slight Surges
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user slams his hands onto the ground, sending slight lightning surges within the grounds, enabling him to sense of the whereabouts of his opponent.
Note:
-Hence this is a really slight lightning surge, it won't have any physical damage to anything it runs through.
-The user will be able to sense the opponent underground, and while he's on the ground.
-The user won't be able to sense the opponent while the opponent is 1.5 meters above ground.
-Hence this is a really slight stream, it takes not even a second to be able to sense the whole long range.
-Must have mastered Raiton, and be a Sannin or above, due to the chakra control.
-Can be only taught by Dr. House

~Declined: Explain in details why sending lightning into the earth would allow you to detect your opponent~


(Doton:Hyōmen no rokku) Earth Release: Surface Lock
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After a single handseal, the user will channel doton chakra into the ground, bringing the finest qualities up from the soil to the surface, creating a shield under the user, on the ground, which can cover short to mid-range under the user, protecting the user from any incoming ground attacks. The user can also break this slamp of earth in half, making it rise up to a vertical stance defending the user from any incoming attacks.
Notes:
-Can be only taught by Dr. House

~Declined: This just is acceptable and cool but work on the bold part. Also, where are the restrictions?~

(Kchuysei: Mrs. Afcanc) Summoning: Mrs. Afcanc
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Mrs. Beaver, has joined to the group of one of the oldest beavers out there. Mrs. Beaver meet his man along time ago when she was eating some wood, and then she saw this great man fighting with Mr. Bear, his long rival, she decided to join forces with Mr. Beaver, in order to beat the big bad Mr. Bear. Mrs. Beaver can cast both A-ranked water blasts up to 5 times, and S-ranked Fire blasts up to 3 times, as its capable of infusing its blasts with his owner's jutsu. Due to her shy personality, she's was living underground for her whole life, hiding from the surroundings, and she's very sneaky.
Notes:
-Due to her always digging and being familiar of being underground, she became an excellent digger, as she's capable to dig underground to long range, and able to match speeds with a human, maybe faster, via underground.
-She's able to dig out a huge space underground, having the surface collapse in. If long ranged, it takes 1 turn.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-Because of her rather wide/thick/flat tail, she can defend with his tail against any lightning and wind jutsu up to S-rank as in 1 times (-15 damage to the user), as in A-rank, 2 times (-10 damage).
-must have signed the beaver contract.
-must be taught by only Dr. House

~Declined: What the hell is up with that description O__O? Fix that and work on the abilities, there's too many of them~

(Kchuysei: Bībāpurinsu) Summoning: Beaver Prince
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The offspring of the two elders, the Beaver Prince. As the battle get's heavier and more furious, his attitude will turn more furious, rather evil, wanting to destroy everything. Hence for all his life, he played in a pond, and beaver dams, he became skilled with the water, on a really high levels. Because of his ill attitude, he will become extremelly unstable as psychologically, and able to push out, matching ranks of a forbidden in water blasts, while he's out for at least one turn, meaning he's able to do it, in the 2nd turn and for the rest of the battle. After he has released all his anger in that matching forbidden water blasts, he'll lose consciousness for 1 turn. The most time he stays on the battlefield, the more evil/crazier he get's meaning for the 1st turn, he'll be only able to perform A-ranked, he's able to perform water in the 2nd turn, matching a forbidden rank, but if he releases his anger (the forbidden water) in the 2nd turn, he needs to rest for 1 turn, but if he releases his anger, after the 2nd turn, he'll be able to perform A-ranked water or lower, in the next turns (meaning if he releases his "anger" in the 3rd turn, there is only 2 more times, he can perform A-ranked or lower ranked water.)
Note:
-Either of the Mr or Mrs. Afcanc can summon him also.
-Due to his condition, he can only stay on the battlefield as long as 5 turns.
-Due to his crazy appearance, the user takes -20 damage, when he's summoned.
-This beaver is big enough, that he can carry it's user, tho only when traveling in water.
-must have signed the beaver contract.
-must be taught by only Dr. House
-If there's water covering the whole field, or where is it covered with water, it's accessible to speeds that match the first gate.

~Declined: I will never allow a jutsu that makes a summon use Forbidden-rank technique~

(Kchuysei: Bībā ōjo) Summoning: Beaver Princess
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This little beaver is like her mother, all shy and cautious. This little beaver is able to smell onto long range, but if the field is wet, or covered in water, it's able to sense the whole field, due to her affinity to water. She's a really fast creature, due to her cautiousness, as able to match her speed to a human, maybe faster. Because of her affinity to water, she's able to cast S-ranked water blasts up to 3 times, and A-ranked water blasts, up to 5 times.
Notes:
-Stay on the field for 4 turns.
-Every jutsu this beavers uses counts as a move in the user's turn.
-Either of the Mr or Mrs. Afcanc can summon him also.
-This beaver is big enough, that he can carry it's user, tho only when traveling through water.
-must have signed the contract
-must be taught by Dr. House

~Approved: Took away the 1st Gate part and added two restrictions~

Resubmitting:
(Doton:Hyōmen no rokku) Earth Release: Surface Lock
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After a single handseal, the user will channel doton chakra into the ground, bringing the finest qualities up from the soil to the surface, creating a shield under the user, on the ground, which can cover short to mid-range under the user, protecting the user from any incoming ground attacks. The user can also break this slamp of earth in half, making it rise up to a vertical stance defending himself with the slamp of rock, the user is able to defend from any incoming attacks, where the slamp has been broken off..
Notes:
-Can be only taught by Dr. House
-Can be summoned twice
-only who mastered doton can use this.
-The user won't be able to go underground, hence it will be blocked.

(Kchuysei: Mrs. Afcanc) Summoning: Mrs. Afcanc
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Mrs. Beaver can cast both A-ranked water blasts up to 5 times, and S-ranked Fire blasts up to 3 times. She's able to go underground, via digging a rather large space under the opponent, making him fall in it.
Notes:
-She's able to dig out a huge space underground, having the surface collapse in. If long ranged, it takes 1 turn.
-Can only stay for 4 turns.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-must have signed the beaver contract.
-must be taught by only Dr. House

(Kchuysei: Bībā Kan) Summoning: Sense Beaver
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This little beaver can go underground, and sense everything what's happening on the surface, or underground and tell it's user of the opponents whereabouts.
Notes:
-Can only be summoned three times per battle
-Can stay for six turns
-scanning the area counts as a move, but scanning can be used during the six turns

(Suiton: Kontorōru o toru) - Water Release: Water Fist
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Descripton: A vortex of water shot out of the users fist water he/she punches.
Notes:
-Can only be taught by Doctor House and Gin-San

(Doton: Kaytio Burokku) - Earth Release: Devenge Block
Rank: A
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: The user will send his earth chakra in the ground from his feet, by doing so, he will cover anything within short range of himself. No earth attacks B-rank and below can be done within short range of the user (being the enemy or the user), because the chakra of the user will overpower lower ranks.
Notes:
-The enemy cannot use B-rank and below jutsus that are within short range of the user
-The user can use his own doton techniques as is his own chakra
-Can only be used two times per battle
maybe three
-not S-rank and above Earth techniques next turn
-Can only be taught by Doctor House and Gin-San

All Declined. Please read the rules regarding submissions. You may only submit 5 jutsu a week. So since you submitted 5 jutsu on the 27th of August you must now wait until the 3rd of September to re-submit. A declined jutsu still counts as a submission.

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

restricted it more,and decreased the elements it can be used on from 3 to 2 ^^

(Kyousei-Katana no Netsu Seijin ) Great Sword of the Temperature Sage
Rank: S
Type: weapon
Range:N/a
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: It is said this sword was once wielded by one of the family members of the Rokuddu Sage that possessed a ability to control temperature.Being constantly infused with that sages chakra,the sword actually inherited the ability.It is also said that the sword still has a small part of the Sages will left in it, so whenever someone who is not the weilder touches it, he get instantly ignited.The current and only weilder of this sword currently is Mugen who has the same ability as the Sage in the tales.(My CE)
The sword like previously said has a ability to manipulate temperature to a certain point.So once every 3 turns(meaning 2 full turns are a cool down),once, the user has the choice of almost instantly canceling any water or earth jutsu by infusing either cold or hot temperature into the jutsu itself.(this is done by slashing or stabbing) the jutsu.This can also be used on a regular sword of the opponent if it is close combat.
*The special ability costs 30 chakra
The sword looks like so

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~Declined: It's still OP. Check the bold part. And add restrictions at the end, not in the jutsu (just to make it clearer to your opponent)~

Added the restrictions on the end and changed the bolded part so it isnt oped.Sorry about that xd

(Kyousei-Katana no Netsu Seijin ) Great Sword of the Temperature Sage
Rank: S
Type: weapon
Range:N/a
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: It is said this sword was once wielded by one of the family members of the Rokuddu Sage that possessed a ability to control temperature.Being constantly infused with that sages chakra,the sword actually inherited the ability.It is also said that the sword still has a small part of the Sages will left in it, so whenever someone who is not the weilder touches it, he get instantly ignited.The current and only weilder of this sword currently is Mugen who has the same ability as the Sage in the tales.(My CE)
The sword like previously said has a ability to manipulate temperature to a certain point.The user has the choice of canceling any water or earth jutsu much faster than by doing a regular jutsu,it also gives a advantage that it looks like the user was hit by the jutsu. It works by infusing either cold or hot temperature into the jutsu itself.(this is done by slashing or stabbing) the jutsu.This can also be used on a regular sword of the opponent if it is close combat.
*The special ability costs 30 chakra
*The special ability can only be used once every 3 turns.Meaning you use it,than wait 2 full turns for it to cool down,than on the third you can use it again.
The sword looks like so

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Declined. Still too Over Powered. 30 chakra is equivelent to an A-ranked attack so this could not be used for all earth or water. Redo your restriction. make sure to note that canceling a jutsu with the sword will count as a move.

 

[Jinbei]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Jouterafōmingu ) ɸ Imperial Terraforming

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: All Ranges
Chakra cost: 50 to activate, +15 per turn to maintain.
Damage Points: N/A
Description : A very strong and advanced ninjutsu, this technique was developed by Jinbei Sarutobi throughout the years and it was this technique that made him famous in the ninja world.

The user simply infuses the ground with his chakra by releasing it through his feet, allowing the chakra to travel large distances ( up to long-range). Once he /she has done so, the user will form the serpent hand seal and the part of the terrain that was infused with the user’s chakra will be abruptly altered and transformed into any type of terrain the user wants it to transform into, granting the user moderated control over the terrain.

However, there’s a big flaw in the jutsu; he who performs it cannot, no matter the circumstances, use this technique for attacking purposes. ( I.e : The user can’t turn the ground beneath the opponent into spikes or into a fissure. However, the user can turn a forest into a lake for a water source).

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~ This technique lasts for the rest of the battle but due to the constant usage by the user to change the terrain, the user will be restricted to 1 forbidden jutsu every two turns. Furthermore, the user will have to select an element and won’t be able to use S-ranks of that element for the next turn.
~ The user will need to form the serpent hand seal every single time he/she wants the terrain to change. If the user fails to do so, the shift won’t happen.
~ The user may only change the terrain once per turn and every time he does, he loses an addition toll of 5 chakra points.
~ The user as well as the opponent can utilize anything that has appeared in the battlefield; If the user makes a mountain, the opponent can use it to his own advantage or as a ground source for his own purposes. This makes the technique a double-edged sword if used incorrectly.
~ The technique can only be activated once per battle and the user won’t be able to enter any states where he is required to exert his/her chakra.

Declined. Jutsu which change one form of an element into another element is not allowed.

 

[BluePhenix]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Meiun Hishou) – Earth Style: Doom Flight
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (Opponent may be knocked out)
Description: User stomps the ground and two S-rank pillars of earth immediately sprout from the ground and intertwine to bind the opponent, then separating from the ground to further launch towards the sky while forcibly carrying the opponent along with them. This move is so sudden that, by the time the opponent reacts to it, he is already launched in the air. And if he doesn’t escape the bind he is assured a freefall crash to the ground, where he will be knocked out.
Note: Can only be used/taught by BluePhenix.
Note: Cannot perform any other earth technique in the same turn that Doom Flight is used.

Declined. Different opponents have different reaction times which can be amplified by using certain techniques, so you cannot force a condition like that. Please re-phrase the bolded part in order to make a more generalized assesment of its speed.

Thanks for the feedback! I've amended the bolded part by using Mugi's speed chart as reference.

(Doton: Meiun Hishou) – Earth Style: Doom Flight
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (Opponent may be knocked out)
Description: User stomps the ground and two S-rank pillars of earth immediately sprout from the ground and intertwine to bind the opponent, then separating from the ground to further launch towards the sky while forcibly carrying the opponent along with them. This move's effectiveness will vary with the user, i.e. for opponents with reaction speed less than or equal to that of the user, this move is so sudden that, by the time they react to it, they will already be launched in the air. And if they don’t escape the bind they are assured a freefall crash to the ground, where they will be knocked out.
Note: This move can only be used/taught by BluePhenix.
Note: User cannot perform any other earth technique in the same turn that this move is used.

~Declined: It was clearly stated that the speed chart should only be used when debates arise in the RP section, it is not to be used as reference in customs~

 

[JojocIaw]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fukusuu Taka Dageki no Jutsu) - Multiple Falcon Strike Technique
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: User forces chakra flow to muscles and joints in the arm allowing user to perform several rapid strikes in quick succession.
Restrictions: Usable only with Kame Raikou Ken and once per battle.

~Accepted~

(Ikusen Hari) - Thousand Needles
Type: Attack
Rank: D
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: User molds his chakra in form of a thousand needles and hurls them at the desired target causing piercing damage.
Restrictions: Usable only once per battle.

~Declined: thousands of chakra needled and it's a D-rank jutsu? I doubt it~

(Suiton: Mizurappa Shippuu) - Water Release: Violent Water Wave Hurricane
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and is manipulated to form a small water hurricane that surrounds the user, washing away the enemy at close quarters. One can freely control the power of this technique with the amount chakra one releases.
Restrictions: Usable only once per battle.

~Declined: take away the bold part or elaborate on it~

(Kame Raikou Ken) -Turtle Lightning Sword
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Standard Kamegakure sword handed down to Chuunin. Sword is made from a special metal that can be infused through "chakra flow" with elemental chakra or Yin–Yang chakra to produce added effects. The hilt is made from a rare, strong turtoise shell.

*The special ability costs 20 chakra
*The special ability can only be used once per battle.

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~Declined: You didn't undergo Yin Yang training~

 

[-Yard-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon

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(Kchuysei: Sendo's houtei ) Sendo's Gift
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 on the first turn summoned if summoned.)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This sword is one of two swords and was named "seiryoku" Meaning "Might". The twin swords belonged to Lord Sendo and aided Lord Sendo through many battles in the great Condor war. Lord Sendo passed his swords down to the holder of the Condor contract to aid anyone who has signed the Condor contract in battle. This swords special ability is being able to literally cut any lightning jutsu. Any jutsu that is aimed at the user that is lightning base will be attracted to the sword making this sword exactly like a lightning rod. With every bit of lightning that this sword absorbs, it can be fired back at the opponent. This sword can also help on the user's own Raiton techniques by adding the lightning it absorbs into the jutsu that is performed. While sword fighting, the lightning that has been absorbed can also be easily channeled through the blade making cutting and piercing and also making the slashes lightning fast, very easily.


Notes:
* Doesn't need to be summoned if the sword is placed in the users bio.
* If summoned it must be summoned within the first 3 turns.
* Can only be summoned by those who have signed the condor contract
* If someone tries to wield the sword besides the summoner, they will be shocked with enough amps and current to kill.

~Declined: Read the bold part, they must go or be altered to something acceptable. Where are the restrictions on it's abilities?~

Custom Weapon

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(Kchuysei: Sendo's houtei ) Sendo's Gift
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 on the first turn summoned if summoned.)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This sword is one of two swords and was named "seiryoku" Meaning "Might". The twin swords belonged to Lord Sendo and aided Lord Sendo through many battles in the great Condor war. Lord Sendo passed his swords down to the holder of the Condor contract to aid anyone who has signed the Condor contract in battle. This sword is able to absorb lightning techniques. With every bit of lightning that this sword absorbs, it can be fired back at the opponent. This sword can also help on the user's own Raiton techniques by adding the lightning it absorbs into the jutsu that is performed. While sword fighting, the lightning that has been absorbed can also be easily channeled through the blade making cutting and piercin, very easily.


Notes:
* Doesn't need to be summoned if the sword is placed in the users bio.
* If summoned it must be summoned within the first 3 turns.
* Can only be summoned by those who have signed the condor contract
* If someone tries to wield the sword besides the summoner, they will be shocked with enough amps and current to make them drop it.
*Can only absorb 3 Raiton attacks.
*User still takes 10 damage upon the sword absorbing the attacks.


Added restrictions.

~Declined: I feel like you're just trying to pull a fast one on me here. What's the difference between "being able to literally cut any lightning jutsu" and "This sword is able to absorb lightning techniques"? You added no restrictions whatsoever concerning the rank of lightning it can absorb, which I was asking for. Also, do you really believe that adding 10 damage to yourself will change anything in my decision? If you wanted to add physical restrictions, add ones that really have an impact on your abilities to fight~

Updating my summoning boss and another condor and yes I hold the condor contract.

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The reason is that I just got the contract from a friend and also learned a few limitations on summonings and these were pretty under powered Compared to the limitations so I figured I'd adjust them while taking advantage of this contract and bring some life into it xd

So from this...

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(Kchuysei: Joutei Sendo) Summoning: Lord Sendo:
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 100 (20 per-turn when Fused)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user pulls out a small scroll places his hand on it. This summons Joutei Sendo the Lord of the Condors. Joutei Sendo has the unique ability to fuse on it's Summoners back, when fused it appears that the user has wings. This lets the user fly at fast speeds and make it easier to use Raiton Jutsu Joutei Sendo can also use B-rank Raiton Tech. that do not require hand seals.
Note:
-This Summoning can only be in play for 5-turns.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.
-When fused Raiton Jutsu only need one hand seal
-Can only be fused for 3 turns

To this...

(Kchuysei: Joutei Sendo) Summoning: Lord Sendo:
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 100 (20 per-turn when Fused)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user pulls out a small scroll places his hand on it. This summons Joutei Sendo the Lord of the Condors. Joutei Sendo has the unique ability to fuse on it's Summoners back, when fused it appears that the user has wings. This lets the user fly at fast speeds and make it easier to use Raiton Jutsu Joutei Sendo can also use up to S-rank Raiton techniques.
Note:
-This Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.
-The Summoning can only use a total of 4 Raiton techniques.
-When fused Raiton Jutsu need one less hand seal.
-Every jutsu used by the summon counts in the user's 3 jutsu per turn.
-Can only be fused for 3 turns

Bolded what I updated ^^

~Approved: Edited the bold part and made it so your summon can use up to S-rank raiton~

Boufuu Kyouzuu no Jutsu (Gale Surge)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: A defensive jutsu at best. The user distils the air around him or her with his or her chakra and at the exact moment of attack releases a large burst of air. The blast of wind goes out three feet and knocks a victim back at least five feet and can stop projectiles. It is a defensive move that is usually used when the user is caught off guard.
The wind can only be released in one direction however.
- Can only be taught by Zen and Yard.

~Declined: restrictions? It may only be B-rank, but we don't want this jutsu to be spammed in a fight considering it limits the taijutsu. Also, elaborate on the time it takes to perform this jutsu and the effect on the surrounding air (being compressed then released?)~

(Raiton: ranpu suicchi) Lightning release: Light Switch
Type: Supplement
Rank: B
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The user will form a two handseals and use their raiton chakra to adjust the brightness of Raiton based techs.
- This does not increase the power of raiton techs, only adjusts the brightness.

~Declined: Elaborate on the effect it'd have if you made your raiton jutsu really bright. It lacks descriptions on the effects and restrictions (for the same reasons mentioned in the jutsu above)~

If you think it should be limited then please put what you think the proper limit should be as another restriction.

 

[DopeyDwarf]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninpou: Bakuyaku Tama No Jutsu) - Ninja Arts: Explosive Projectile Technique

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user concentrates a mass of chakra into a metal weapon (any material that can be infused with chakra) which they will throw at the target. The user had applied a considerable amount of chakra pressure to the projectile and by performing a single handseal can cause the chakra built up within the projectile to explode. The resulting explosion is similar to a paper bomb.
Note: The user is also damage if caught in blast
Note: Can only use 3 times per battle.
Created by DopeyDwarf

(Ninpou: Tama Gakure No Jutsu) - Ninja Arts: Projectile Concealment Technique

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates a mass of chakra into a metal weapon (any material that can be infused with chakra) which they will throw at the target. By performing 2 quick handseals, the user can manipulate the chakra infused in the projectile to grant the projectile near invisibility to the naked eye. However, doujutsu can see through this technique.
Note: Can only use 3 times per battle.
Note: Doujutsu can still see the projectile.
Created by DopeyDwarf

~Both declined, do not resubmit~

(Mushi Kuuchuufuyou no jutsu) – Insect Levitation Technique

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A cloud of insects that can be used to levitate the user to protect him from harm or to give him an aerial advantage.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by DopeyDwarf

~Declined, do not resubmit~ similar technique exists

(Fuuton: Kaze Hensen) - Wind style: Winds of Change

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs a single handseal which creates a gust of wind which interacts with distant projectiles or small objects and allows the user to manipulate it in midair, changing its trajectory.
Note: Can only use 3 times per battle.
Created by DopeyDwarf

~Declined, do not resubmit~ similar technique exists.

(Suiton: Sekiyu Tekishutsu) – Water Style: Oil Extraction

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short–Mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40 (+15 to fire jutsus)
Description: The user creates a moderate amount of highly explosive and flammable oil to erupt from underground and shoot out at the desired location that is powerful enough to knock an opponent unconscious. By using a suitable fire jutsu, the user can create a strong oil/fire combination attack. This also acts as an oil source.
Note: Only the user can make use of the oil.
Note: Can only use 4 times per battle.
Note: Must wait at least 1 turn to be used again.
Created by DopeyDwarf

~Declined, do not resubmit~ you can't create oil

 

[Magic..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom weapon

(akuma ha-pu)Demon harp
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short/long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A(20+ gen)
Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting chakra.its strings are four in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked.Each tone brands it's listeners with a particular type of illusion,with the 4th string as an exception.Also the harp acts as a barrier against illusion attacks thrown at the weilder.
Because of its portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.

-Note: The user can't perform handseals whilst holding the harp.
-when in posession of the user,every genjutsu used by the user,gain's +20 damage points and the harp blocks illusiön based attacks,except advanced ones(ms illusions).
-illusion shielding counts as one of 3 moves a turn.
-Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.

~Declined~ there are a few things not right. First and for all how the hell can it do +20 damage if a genjutsu by default doesn't do any damage at all. Your harp is not going to change that as then it's not genjutsu anymore. And can agree on being immune to genjutsu, however not against forbidden and not infinitely or without a single drawback

I would make the tones as seperate jutsus,if approved^^

Custom weapon

(akuma ha-pu)Demon harp
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short/long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A(20+ to any genjutsu,that already has a damage point)
Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting
chakra.its strings are four in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked.Each tone
brands it's listeners with a particular
type of illusion,with the 4th string as
an exception.Also the harp acts as a
barrier against illusion attacks thrown
at the weilder.
Because of it's portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.
-Note: The user can't perform
handseals whilst holding the harp.
-when in posession of the user,every genjutsu used by the user,gain's +20
damage points and the harp blocks
illusiön based attacks,except advanced ones(forbidden or ms illusions).
-illusion shielding counts as one of 3 moves a turn and can only shield 5 times per match.
-Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.

I would make the tones as seperate jutsus,if approved^^

~Declined: All the music arts are the property of our fellow moderator; RokuNR. Ask him if you can make similar jutsu to his before submitting it again~


Updating this..

(Suiton: poseidon's hei,kabe ) - Water Style: poseidon's wall
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wide Range,10 ft wall of water horizontally in front of the user out from the ground,by slamming his/her two hands on the ground. This wall of water is especially effective at stopping fire and lightining techniques.
Note-
-Does not require water source
-Can only 3 times a battle
-can only stop A rank fire and B lightining jutsu.

To this
(Suiton: poseidon's hei,kabe ) - Water Style: poseidon's wall
Rank: S
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wide Range,10 ft wall of water horizontally in front of the user from the ground,the seconds he/she slams his/her two hands on the ground. This wall of water is exceptionally good,for stoping fire based attacks and can further, be used as a water source
Note-
-Does not require water source
-Can only 2 times a battle

~Approved~

Updating this

(Tako Taishita modo)-Octupuse mode
Rank: S
Type: Offense/defense
Range: n/a
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: n/a
Description: This jutsu allows the user to take features of an octopus in other words be like an octopus except they gain just more four hands making it six hands in total.In this mode the user is able to stretch some parts of their body up to 10 ft, these includes their tongue,neck,arms and legs,they can also detarch and regrow non vital parts of their body like the legs,hands,tongue and their body are covered with pores which helps them stick to anything their body comes incontact with And also grants the user flexibility,great speed(underwater) and ability to survive underwater.

-Must be able to summon uctopus
-Must be used only once per battle
-The user cannot use Taijutsu in this mode and Taijutsu (B rank) is useless against the user
-Only last for 5 turns
-Must be immobilized/stand still for 1 turn to activate this mode.

Approved

To This
(Tako Taishita modo)-Octupuse mode
Rank: S
Type: Offense/defense
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80(20+ to every water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to take features of an octopus in other words be like an octopus except they gain just more four hands making it six hands in total.In this mode the user is able to stretch some parts of their body up to 10 ft, these includes their tongue,neck,arms and legs,they can also detarch and regrow non vital parts of their body like the legs,hands,tongue and their body are covered with pores which helps them stick to anything their body comes incontact with And also grants the user flexibility,ability to squezze through tight openings ,speed only trackable by a 3 tomoe sharingan(on top and underwater) and ability to survive underwater.Lastly four giant size detachable octopus hands erupts from the users back ,which can be used to pound the target to death,as they are able to demolish any wall.

-Must be able to summon uctopus
-Must be used only once per battle
-The user cannot use Taijutsu in this mode,except jyuuken and Taijutsu (B rank) is useless against the user
-Only last for 5 turns
-Must be immobilized/stand still for 1 turn to activate this mode.

~Declined: I wouldn't have approved the original version so I won't approve a powerup of it~

I have tauburn's permission to update this

(Myou Yakke)- Chakra Coat

Spoiler

Rank:A
Type: Defence
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user molds up huge amount of chakra within their body then channels it out through all 361 chakra points to form a blunt coat of chakra covering their whole body.This chakra coat enables the user to walk on sticky materials, spikes and also a good defense against chakra base attacks(A ranks).
-can only be used by a hyuuga clan member
- only twice per battle
- the coat last for 3 turns.

~Approved~

To this
(Myou Yakke)- Chakra Coat
Rank:S
Type: Defence
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user molds up huge amount of chakra within their body then channels it out through all 361 chakra points to form a blunt coat of chakra covering their whole body.This chakra coat enables the user to walk on sticky materials,swamps, spikes and also a good defense against chakra base attacks(S ranks).
-can only be used by a hyuuga clan member
- only once per battle
- the coat last for 4 turns.

~Declined: I wouldn't have approved the original version so I won't approve a powerup of it~

New submission.
(Doton-Sokonashi no Kussaku) : Earth style-bottomless excarvation
Rank:S
Type: Defense/Offense
Range: long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:This technique requires The user to first perform some handseals, then he or she forcefully seperates his/her hands whilst manipulating and horizontally excarvating/demacating the earth between them and the target.this jutsu can be used to drain out water jutsu,watery/muddy terrain because of the mass capacity of this technique.
-Twice per battle.

~Approved~

 

[Darijan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmit:

Fire Dragon's Sword Horn (Karyū no Kenkaku)
Rank:S
Type:Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:100(20 to the user due to the heat and the fire around him)
Description: The user ignites his whole body in fire, and he runs at the opponent at hige speed raming into the opponent and dealing huge damage to the target, after the user rams into the target he can also use his leg or arm to shoot the opponent upwards.(When the user is running towards the opponent he gains +2 levels on the speed)
Notes:
Usable once per battle
No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
no forbiden ranked jutsus for the rest of the battle

~Declined: Respect the template for forbidden techniques and add some real restrictions with regard to it being a forbidden technique. Causing you to suffer 20 point of damage won't affect you in any way in this battle. There need to be physical damage that will actually have an impact on your aptitudes to fight. That is the definition of a forbidden jutsu~

Resubmiting:

Fire Dragon's Sword Horn (Karyū no Kenkaku)
Rank: Forbiden
Type:Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:90(30 to the user due to the heat and the fire around him)
Description: The user ignites his whole body in fire, and he runs at the opponent at hige speed raming into the opponent and dealing huge damage to the target, after the user rams into the target he can also use his leg or arm to shoot the opponent upwards.(When the user is running towards the opponent he gains +2 levels on the speed)
Notes:
Usable once per battle
-No fire jutsus for this and the next turn
-No forbiden ranked jutsus for the rest of the battle
-In the same and in the next move this jutsu was used the user wont be able -to use 3 jutsu per turn, instead of that he will only be able to use 2 jutsus per turn
-The user also gets 5 damage for the next 3 turns cause of the little burns which will appear on the skin.

New one(its a fightning style):
(no japanese name found, probably because regulus actually is a name of a star)
Regulus:
Regulus is a type of mostly short-ranged attacks. It was created in a long time ago by te first white lions from Šiškovci. Its a fightning style which you can only use by signing the white lion contract. Another of the things you have to do to learn Regulus is to get the Howaido Raion Ring which is made of Stones from Šiškovci, some stones in Šiškovci have the similar effect as the oil from Mount Myōboku. The stones from Šiškovci allow the user to use Regulus, cause for it the user needs a strong link with Šiškovci and the lions. Regulus is a ninja art where the user uses his chakra to boost his attacks by pressing the chakra from the ring in any part of the users body.

Restrictions for using Regulus:
-Must have signed the white lion contract
-Must have a Howaido Raion Ring
-Must have a quite good chakra control
-Must be Kage rank
-Must have mastered Fire
-Must have mastered Taijutsu and Ninjutsu

And this is how Regulus looks like when its used

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~All Declined: Over weekly limit~

 

[black uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Mushi Kuuchuufuyou no jutsu) – Insect Levitation Technique

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A cloud of insects that can be used to levitate the user to protect him from harm or to give him an aerial advantage.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by DopeyDwarf

This is a ripoff of my insect cloud as I told you before

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please delete it.

 

[Taka]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Gensō bārendōmu no Jutsu) Illusionary Barren Dome Technique:

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Mid-Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user generates his/her Doton chakra to their palms, then slams them to the earthen surface below, forcing their ordinary chakra to rise up in the shape of a dome, not visible to the opponent. Once a segment of the chakra dome is touched or attacked, the segment exposed to damage will solidify into rough stone, unable to penetrated unless the flow of chakra is cut off.
Note: Requires the users palms to be constantly touching the ground as so to constantly flow chakra. If that flow is broken for even a split second, the solidified stone will thus begin to crumble.

~Declined: Do not resubmit~

 

[Izuna Uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

When re-submitting customs, put the part you're altering or adding in BOLD. It makes our job easier when checking them.

Thank you all~

 

[Sheldon Cooper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Scroll Owner:Yellow Flash Of the Leaf
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:Lind-Sama
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Daiken,Kasen


(Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin:fukurou:Lind-sama) ( Summoning Technique:Giant Owl:Lord Lind)
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 (depends on the jutsu)

Description: Lind is the king of all owls and he is the most proudest and most strongest owl out of them all,He wont obey anyone Other than his summoner.He is the Size of gamabunta and has the the power to fly at extreme speeds and has full control of the sky.Lind can use Wind jutsus up till S-rank and If the summoner has been trained in Fire he/she can combine the jutsu to make a Fire/Wind technique.The summoner can put chakra into lind's wings to make his wings more powerful (Strength or Speed).He has huge wings and an aerodynamic tail, and he has White feathers.He attacks with his sharp talons or wind enhanced wings if he must resort to physical attacks.Lind is very picky on the summoner and if the summoner is new he/she must prove himself to lind before he/she can summon him or even stand on his back (although Yellow Flash of the Leaf is an exception, as I hold the contract).

*Note*
-Stays in battle for 4 turns.
-Can fly for all 4 turns
-Can only be used once per battle.
-User rides on Lind's back
-Can use wind up to S-rank and count as one of the users 3 moves and also fire combination allowed.
-Must have signed the Contract of the owls (held by Yellow Flash of the Leaf)

OTHER SUMMONING ANIMALS TRIED TO CONTACT:Daiken & Kasen

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin fukurou: Daiken) Summoning Technique:Giant Owl: Daiken
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: short - long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 depends on the jutsu
Description: Daiken is the personal Owl summon of Yellow Flash of the Leaf. He is very calm, friendly, and is extremely loyal to Yellow Flash of the Leaf. He is twice the size of Gamatatsu, and has the ability to fly at high speeds and he also has a wide array of aerial maneuvers. The Jutsus he can use are Fire up to A Rank. When using fire, he can channel fire chakra throughout his body, and even to the tips of his wings and tail, making them glow with fire. He has large wings and a small tail, and he has Gold, red feathers.He attacks with his sharp Beak if he must resort to physical attacks.Daiken can only be summoned by Yellow Flash of the Leaf, and they are good Friends Thanks to it.

*Note*
*Stays in battle for 3 turns.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Can use fire up to A-rank and count as one of the users 3 moves
*Can only be summoned by Yellow Flash Of the Leaf and anyone who he specifically teaches
*Daiken's size twice that of Gamatatsu

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin fukurou:Kasen) Summoning technique:Giant Owl:Kasen
Type:Summoning
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (depends on jutsu)
Description: Isuma is a large owl and half the size of Gamabunta.Kasen is the Owl Madam of the sea, and can use suiton up to S-rank. Since she is a Owl, Isamu can fly extremly fast and has complete control and a vast array of aerial movements. A user of the contract gains control over the Owl, and can fly on Isamu’s back. Isamu is a very Smart,obedient Owl that cares for those who summon her. She tries her hardest in battle, and will do whatever is asked of her. She has white and blue feathers that cover her body and huge wings, as well as sharp beak and Talons for combat.

*Note*
*This Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns
*Can fly for every turn
*This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Owl Contract.
*This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle
*Summoner rides on Kasen's back
*Can use water justu up to S-rank and count as one the users three moves if she uses water technique.

PS: Please feel free to edit it if there are any problems.
~Declined~

==========================================================
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:Lind-Sama
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Daiken,Kasen


(Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin:fukurou:Lind-sama) ( Summoning Technique:Giant Owl:Lord Lind)
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 (depends on the jutsu)

Description: Lind is the king of all owls and he is the most proudest and most strongest owl out of them all,He wont obey anyone Other than his summoner.He is the Size of gamakichi and has the the power to fly at extreme speeds and has full control of the sky.Lind can use Wind jutsus up till S-rank and If the summoner has been trained in Fire he/she can combine the jutsu to make a Fire/Wind technique.He has huge wings and an aerodynamic tail, and he has White feathers.He attacks with his sharp talons or wind enhanced wings if he must resort to physical attacks.Lind is very picky on the summoner and if the summoner is new he/she must prove himself to lind before he/she can summon him or even stand on his back (although Yellow Flash of the Leaf is an exception, as I hold the contract).

*Note*
-Stays in battle for 5 turns.
-Can fly for all 5 turns
-Can only be used once per battle.
-User rides on Lind's back
-Can use wind up to S-rank and count as one of the users 3 moves and also fire combination up till B-rank allowed.
-Must have signed the Contract of the owls (held by Yellow Flash of the Leaf)

OTHER SUMMONING ANIMALS TRIED TO CONTACT:Daiken & Kasen

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin fukurou: Daiken) Summoning Technique:Giant Owl: Daiken
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: short - long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 depends on the jutsu
Description: Daiken is the personal Owl summon of Yellow Flash of the Leaf. He is very calm, friendly, and is extremely loyal to Yellow Flash of the Leaf. He is two inches bigger than Gamatatsu, and has the ability to fly at high speeds and he also has a wide array of aerial maneuvers. The Jutsus he can use are Fire up to A Rank. When using fire, he can channel fire chakra throughout his body, and even to the tips of his wings and tail, making them glow with fire. He has large wings and a small tail, and he has Gold, red feathers.He attacks with his sharp Beak if he must resort to physical attacks.Daiken can only be summoned by Yellow Flash of the Leaf, and they are good Friends Thanks to it.

*Note*
*Stays in battle for 3 turns.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Can use fire up to A-rank and count as one of the users 3 moves
*Can only be summoned by Yellow Flash Of the Leaf and anyone who he specifically teaches

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kyojin fukurou:Kasen) Summoning technique:Giant Owl:Kasen
Type:Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (depends on jutsu)
Description: Isuma is a large owl and is the size of Gamatatsu.Kasen is the Owl of the sea, and can use suiton up to A-rank. Since she is a Owl, Isamu can fly extremly fast and has complete control and a vast array of aerial movements. A user of the contract gains control over the Owl, and can fly on Isamu’s back. Isamu is a very Smart,obedient Owl that cares for those who summon her. She tries her hardest in battle, and will do whatever is asked of her. She has white and blue feathers that cover her body and huge wings, as well as sharp beak and Talons for combat.

*Note*
*This Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns
*Can fly for every turn
*This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Owl Contract.
*This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle
*Summoner rides on Kasen's back
*Can use water justu up to A-rank and count as one the users three moves if she uses water technique.

PLEASE BOLD THE PARTS I MUST CHANGE IF YOU ARE GOING TO DECLINE.

~All Approved: edited the first summon so it stays on the field for 4 turns~

 

[Konoha's Yellow Flash]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuinjutsu: Inpakuto Daiaru) - Sealing Technique: Impact Dial

Spoiler

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A
Description: Dials are strange, mysterious devices made from the remains of Shellfish, which have the ability to store energy and matter. Dials can be used for several purposes, making them a very useful tool in one’s arsenal.

Impact Dial

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The Impact Dial may be hit by anything blunt, and will absorb the kinetic energy. Once the apex of the Dial is pressed, the stored energy is released, usually causing internal injuries to a living body, while not leaving any visible external damage. This blunt force is even enough to severely wound large enemies. The Impact Dial can also absorb the impact of large explosions. The Impact Dial, while not actually dangerous for the user, can still hurt the user through a backlash when a large amount of energy is released.
The Impact Dial is capable of absorbing up to S rank attacks or explosions, the power of the attack released will be of the same power although the form of the attack will change, usually being in the form of a massive impact.
Every time the dial absorbs an attack, it will count as a jutsu. If the attack is absorbed and released in the same turn however, it will still count as one jutsu.
The dials are kept on a bag the user carries around; taking them out doesn’t count as a jutsu, only the absorption or release of an attack.
If the dial has absorbed an attack, it cannot absorb another one until it has released the attack in it.
The impact dial cannot absorb an elemental attack but it can absorb the explosion an elemental attack may produce.

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(Fuuinjutsu: Raiton Daiaru) - Sealing Technique: Thunder Dial

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A
Description: Dials are strange, mysterious devices made from the remains of Shellfish, which have the ability to store energy and matter. Dials can be used for several purposes, making them a very useful tool in one’s arsenal.


Thunder Dial

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The Thunder dial is capable of absorbing and releasing electricity. If used in conjunction with a throwing object, it will electrify the object which may harm or paralyze the opponent if contact is made
The Thunder Dial is capable of absorbing up to S rank attacks, the power of the attack will be of the same power although the shape of the attack will change, not having being the same than the one of the absorbed attack.The attack released will be similar to a thunderbolt, its power will be determined by the attack absorbed.
Every time the dial absorbs an attack, it will count as a jutsu. If the attack is absorbed and released in the same turn however, it will still count as one jutsu.
The dials are kept on a bag the user carries around; taking them out doesn’t count as a jutsu, only the absorption or release of an attack.
If the dial has absorbed an attack, it cannot absorb another one until it has released the attack in it.

(Fuuinjutsu: Ranpu Daiaru) - Sealing Technique: Lamp Dial

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A
Description: Dials are strange, mysterious devices made from the remains of Shellfish, which have the ability to store energy and matter. Dials can be used for several purposes, making them a very useful tool in one’s arsenal.


Lamp Dial

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The Lamp Dial is capable of storing and releasing light; they are most-commonly used for domestic purposes and not for battle.
The lamp dial may absorb some light from the sun and from anything that emits light, like a flashbomb. Once it has absorbed this light, the user can press the apex and the dial will start glowing.

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Global restrictions for Dials:

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*If the dial is attached to an object to give this object elemental property, it will not count as a jutsu.
*If the dial receives an attack while having absorbed one previously, the dial won’t be able to absorb it and it might break; this will depend on the attack launched at the dial and its power.(A weak water attack might not break the dial while a lightning one would)
*There are more than one dial of each kind.
*The user can use an attack on several dials to charge them himself.If more than one dial of the same kind is charged at the same time by the same attack, it will count as two jutsus ( the attack performed and the absorption of the dials).

Made the dials separate jutsus as I was told. And made restrictions for the two Kabuto attacks below.

~Declined do not resubmit~ Those are grossly OP and unrestricted. Some things can be mixed between different manga, but certainly not the dials.

(Hi no Tori Boshi/Faiyā Bādo Sutā) – Fire Bird Star
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:Usopp fires a small pellet containing flammable material that will explode in mid air and transform into a massive phoenix, once this phoenix makes contact with the opponent, a large ring of fire will be created in the area where the contact was made. If for some reason the pellet explodes before it’s supposed to (because of an enemy attack or the user’s) the attack will continue with the phoenix continuing towards the target aimed.
*Can only be perfomed with Kabuto(Weapon)
*Because of the size of the pellet, they can be blown away with a strong gust.
*This attack may be with another Kabuto related technique.(Counting as two jutsus)
*Can only be done 3 times per battle.

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~Declined: Similar jutsu already exist~

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(Atlas Suisei) – Atlas Comet
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points:60
Description:The user shoots four high speed pellets with gunpowder inside them with smoke tails which converge together and hit a target creating a large explotion. The arcs the four shots make resemble the horns of an Atlas Beetle.

*Can only be perfomed with Kabuto(Weapon)
*Because of the size of the pellets, they can be blown away with a strong gust.
*If another object is used for this technique, the objects will still converge together but if they dont have gunpowder within them they wont explode.
*This attack may be with another Kabuto related technique.(Counting as two jutsus)
*Can only be used 3 times per match

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~Approved~

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Updating old custom:



( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ) ~ Black-Leg Taijutsu: Devil's Leg
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Mode
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 15 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: Black-Leg taijutsu master can activate a mode which will double their speed. The mode requires user to be at least Sannin rank and to be trained in other Black-Leg taijutsu techniques. To activate this technique an user below Kage rank must stop and spin while guiding chakra into their leg, granting temporary speed boost. User that has already reached Kage orf higher rank can activate this technique while battling without stopping moving. Once activated, the technique'll multiple user's speed with 2.0X and Leg taijutsu damage done by user will be multipled with 1.5. Using this technique for longer duratons will cause stress fracturing which decreases user's speed by 25% of the original speed. This technique can be used on one leg and can be maintained for max four turns. User's leg looks as if it were on fire when this mode is activated and is covered in chakra.

• Causes stress fracturing on one's legs
• Can be activated twice per battle and the second usage will be extremely painful and second usage will last only two turns.
• Costs 15 chakra per turn.

Declined. If used in one leg, then one leg wouldnt be able to keep up with the other
New one:

( Suterusu wōku ) ~ Stealth Walk
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: Stealth Walk is a technique which is used to jump higher in air and to move faster underwater. The technique consists two different variations that can both be used for quick escaping and to give user upper hand in fight. First variation, Blue Walk, can be used underwater by user focusing chakra into their feet as if they were walking on water's surface and this would also prevent them from sinking into water. Then, user can kick water to the direction he/she wants and repeat this four times. Second variation is called Sky walk and using it will give user chance of jumping five times mid air. Upon jumping, user concentrates Wind chakra to their feet and kicks it down in form of air, lifting user up.

• Technique can be used three times per battle
• Only five jumps can be made with this technique.

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Declined. Since this can be used to dodge arial and underwater jutsu it's number of uses needs to be restricted.

( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ) ~ Black-Leg Taijutsu: Devil's Leg
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Mode
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 15 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: Black-Leg taijutsu master can activate a mode which will double their speed. The mode requires user to be at least Sannin rank and to be trained in other Black-Leg taijutsu techniques. To activate this technique an user below Kage rank must stop and spin while guiding chakra into their leg, granting temporary speed boost. User that has already reached Kage orf higher rank can activate this technique while battling without stopping moving. Once activated, the technique'll increase user leg's strength momenarily and Leg taijutsu damage done by user will be multipled with 1.5 with the leg this is activated on. Using this technique for longer duratons will cause stress fracturing which decreases user's speed by 25% of the original speed. This technique can be used on one leg and can be maintained for max four turns. User's leg looks as if it were on fire when this mode is activated and is covered in chakra.

• Causes stress fracturing on one's legs
• Can be activated twice per battle and the second usage will be extremely painful and second usage will last only two turns.
• Costs 15 chakra per turn.

~Declined: If you have a fractured leg then it'd be close to impossible to walk, even less performing this jutsu again~

( Suterusu wōku ) ~ Stealth Walk
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: Stealth Walk is a technique which is used to jump higher in air and to move faster underwater. The technique consists two different variations that can both be used for quick escaping and to give user upper hand in fight. First variation, Blue Walk, can be used underwater by user focusing chakra into their feet as if they were walking on water's surface and this would also prevent them from sinking into water. Then, user can kick water to the direction he/she wants and repeat this four times. Second variation is called Sky walk and using it will give user chance of jumping five times mid air. Upon jumping, user concentrates Wind chakra to their feet and kicks it down in form of air, lifting user up.

• Both of the technique's variations can be used once per battle.
• Only five jumps can be made with this technique.

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Did as you said. Removed speed increase part and restricted uses of stealth walk.

~Declined: Over weekly limit~

 

[Lucifer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~Summoning~​

Summoning Animal: Dracula Bat (Kyuuketsuki koumori)
Scroll Owner: Ichigo..
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:

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(Kchuysei: Kyuuketsuki Koumori) Summoning: Giant Dracula/Devil Bats
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Akuma Batto is the King of The Dracula bats and Ancient ruler of old times. He has the power to element to his will making him able to use lightning element up to the users rank. He flies around with swift speeds and at high altitudes making him a hard target. He is capable of using his ears(they look like horns) and wings as weapons making him a deadly force.
Note: Can only be summoned once and lasts 4 turn.
Note: Must sign the Giant Dracula contract from Ichigo..
Note: The, User must be sannin or above. (lol ._.)

Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

~Declined: I believe Dei Dei is the current owner of that contract~

 

[Rokusho..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Chou Hakkeshou Kuuten) - Eight Trigrams Giant Heavenly Sky

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Rank: S
Type:Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:The user molds his chakra into razor sharp lines and releases it out of all their tenketsus and spins to form a razor sharp dome shield to attack and defend all in one move

-Usable only 3 times per battle
-Can only be used by Hyuuga clan members
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

~Declined~ Restrictions?

( Raiton: Soudai Oushou Rei ) - Lightning Release: Royal Hollow Flash

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses raiton chakra into one of his palms with the other hand clutching his arm , then he fires it from his palm as disk-shaped lightning which blinds the target for a brief moment and is also very sharp due to the high frequency vibrations which are a property of raiton chakra .

-No raiton jutsus the turn after this is used
-Can only be used 3 times
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

~Declined: similar jutsu already exist~

(Chou Hakkeshou Kuuten) - Eight Trigrams Giant Heavenly Sky

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Rank: S
Type:Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:The user compresses the chakra and releases it out of all their tenketsus after molding the compressed chakra into razor sharp lines and spins to form a razor sharp dome shield to attack and defend all in one move

-No S-rank Jyuuken following turn
-Usable only 3 times per battle
-Can only be used by Hyuuga clan members
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

~Declined: OP; elaborated what it can defend against~

 

[ZK]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Hakke Magenken: Tercera no Kata | Eight Trigrams Demonic Illusion Fist: Third Form
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user performs a simple hand gesture, which immediately places the target in a Genjutsu, where he will feel nothing but absolute terror, fear and dread. First, the target will see the users hand begin to glow ominously, after which, the users body will disappear into a complete darkness and only his two hands will remain visible. The users two hands will immediately seem to form a box with the thumb, index and middle finger of each hand and as soon as the box is complete a glowing red eye will appear in the middle of the box and quickly begin to multiply. The target will feel as if thousands of glowing red eyes are racing past him with high speed. The Genjutsu will manipulate the targets brain into ignoring any sense of survival-instinct, the only feelings the target will be able to feel is fear, paranoia, sadness and hopelessness. In reality, the user simply focuses chakra into his feet and earth chakra into his hands. The user will then disappears in a blur of speed; he quickly reappears behind the enemy and delivers a devastating dual palm thrust to his spine.
-The illusion is B-ranked.
-Can only be used 3 times per match.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

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2:21 – 2:34

~Declined: check the bold part. Also, work on the restrictions.~

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Hakke Magenken: Cuatro no Kata | Eight Trigrams Demonic Illusion Fist: Fourth Form
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses wind chakra into his hands or into a weapon, this will causes the wind chakra to extend itself from the chosen object and thereby increase its range. The extended wind chakra is invisible to the naked eye. As the user focuses wind chakra, he performs a simple gesture with his hand or holds eye contact with the target, either one of these will cause the opponent to be trapped in a Genjutsu. Inside the Genjutsu, the target will see the user disappear in a blur of speed and feel his presence behind him a moment later, the feeling of having the user behind him will be extremely realistic and include both the smell, the sense of danger, etc. The second the target becomes captured in the Genjutsu, the user will dash towards him with incredible speed and perform two incredibly fast slashes with his weapon or hands. The attack will happen so fast that the body will take a few seconds to register the fatal damage. This technique is based on Asuma Sarutobi’s Hien (Flying Swallow)
-The illusion is C-ranked.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin

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~Declined: You're overextending your abilities. You're not using anything to boost your speed or strength~

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Hakke Magenken: Tercera no Kata | Eight Trigrams Demonic Illusion Fist: Third Form
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user performs a simple hand gesture, which immediately places the target in a Genjutsu, where he will feel nothing but absolute terror, fear and dread. First, the target will see the users hand begin to glow ominously, after which, the users body will disappear into a complete darkness and only his two hands will remain visible. The users two hands will immediately seem to form a box with the thumb, index and middle finger of each hand and as soon as the box is complete a glowing red eye will appear in the middle of the box and quickly begin to multiply. The target will feel as if thousands of glowing red eyes are racing past him with high speed. The only feelings the target will be able to feel is fear, paranoia, sadness and hopelessness. In reality, the user simply focuses chakra into his feet and earth chakra into his hands. The user will then disappears in a blur of speed; he quickly reappears behind the enemy and delivers a devastating dual palm thrust to his spine.
-The illusion is B-ranked.
-Can only be used 3 times per match.
-No S-ranked or above illusionary techniques during the next turn.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

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2:21 – 2:34

~Approved: I've edited it and took away the part you've putted in bold~

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Hakke Magenken: Cuatro no Kata | Eight Trigrams Demonic Illusion Fist: Fourth Form
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses wind chakra into his hands or into a weapon, this will causes the wind chakra to extend itself from the chosen object and thereby increase its range. The extended wind chakra is invisible to the naked eye. As the user focuses wind chakra, he performs a simple gesture with his hand or holds eye contact with the target, either one of these will cause the opponent to be trapped in a Genjutsu. Inside the Genjutsu, the target will see the user disappear in a blur of speed and feel his presence behind him a moment later, the feeling of having the user behind him will be extremely realistic and include both the smell, the sense of danger, etc. The second the target becomes captured in the Genjutsu, the user will dash towards him with incredible speed and perform two incredibly fast slashes with his weapon or hands. The user will use his wind chakra to remove any wind resistance and to give himself a slight boost of speed in the form of wind in the back, during the duration of his dash. This technique is based on Asuma Sarutobi’s Hien (Flying Swallow)
-The illusion is C-ranked.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin

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5:40 – 5:47

~Declined: If you want to create a wind jutsu to boost your speed, fine, but don't turn this A-rank genjutsu into a way to merge jutsus and abilities~