[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

Sauron · Jun 16, 2011

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(Kessho tsubasa) Crystal wings
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Guren will focus her chakra creating wings of crystal on her back each one meter long. This gives guren the ability to fly with the wings.

(Kessho danmaku) Crystal Barrage
Rank: C
Type: attack
Range: Short - mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The use will focus their chakra into their hands at put their palm facing their target. Then the user will release their crystal chakra firing up to five crystal spikes from each hand at any target theye choose. These spikes fire at very high speeds and are very sharp.

(Kessho no jutsu) - Crystal style technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will use their crystal chakra to create small pillars of crystal, small tools, and small shields of crystal. Or even crystal weapons

(Kessho han'ei) - Crystal Reflection
Rank: C
Type: defence
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will perform one handseal creating a wall of crystal in front of them that reflects the light of it blinding the opponent for 5-10 seconds. The opponent wont have any idea what the user is doing until its too late.

-On hold. Resubmit when you reach Juunin rank-

Jokey · Jun 16, 2011

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(Suna Sensu | Suna Tsubasa) Sand Style | Sand Wing's

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 Per turn)
Damage: -
Description: Gaara focuses allot of Sand chakra trough his Sand Gourd and releases from the gourd allot of sand fused chakra, then as soon as the Sand get's out the gourd the sand then makes 2 Sand wing's, One on the left part of the back and the other on the Right part of the Back, these Wings give's Gaara the opportuinity to even fly into Long ranged air and can Carry 2 person's on each Sand wing.

-Resubmit when unbanned-

Drizzy · Jun 16, 2011

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-Declined. State how exactly you are doing this-

Faith · Jun 16, 2011

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(Kage Kakumei) - Shadow Revolution

Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will implants his shadow into a victim by doing a '' Rat '' hand seal and focusing chakra into his shadow and extended it toward his victim(like Shadow Imitation Technique). With the shadow it inside, the user is able to manipulate the shape of the victim's shadow. When the shadow's shape is changed, the victim's body will be changed too. The user is able to do this because of the general rule about shadows. It is common knowledge that a shadow will always comply with the body casting it. Because of that, the shadow and the body are always the same shape. By changing the shape of the body's shadow with this jutsu, the body is forced to match the shape of the shadow. In effect, it's the reverse of a shadow changing shape to match with the body casting it because it is the body that is now transforming to match the shape of the shadow it is casting and if the user force the shadow to take a kunai and stab himself it will inflict damage on the victims body but not on the user body . So it's basically the reverse of shadow puppetry

Must wait for 1 turn before using the jutsu again
Can be used only twice per battle
Can be only taught/used by T.O.P.

-Declined. Ridiculous.

(Burakku Bokkusu) - Black Box

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will turns his shadow,into several Brick Bats. He then have them to transform and completely encase an opponent in a black box made out of solidified shadows. With his opponent encased in the box, The user is capable of performing a '' Rat '' hand seal to cause the box to compress itself therefore crushing whoever is inside of the box however the user is also able detonate the box by performing two simple hand seal or simply trap his opponent in the box so that the opponent will die of suffocating due to lack of oxygen. This box form and move in a rapid speed.

Can be used only three time per battle
Can be only taught/used by T.O.P.

-Declined. Ridiculous.

(Sution : Kagerou) - Water Release : Dragonfly

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will focus and send an fixed amount of sution chakra into the air or sky then, the sution chakra will slowly form into a small size of an dragonfly which the user can freely control and order the dragonfly to attack his opponent, when the dragonfly strike onto the opponent or 5 feet close to the opponent, the dragonfly can then burst himself and turn into a water orb to trap the opponent which can also cause the opponent to drown in the water orb. If the user decided to create more dragon fly(maximum 4) he can wait for another turn to create another one though the first dragonfly must not be used.

Must wait 1 turn before the sution chakra turn into the dragonfly.
Can be used only three time per battle
Can be only taught/used by T.O.P.

-Declined. Ridiculous.

(Doton : Kangoku Kusari) - Earth Release : Prison Chain

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will focus and send certain amount of his doton chakra into the ground then he will swiftly perform two hand seal to cause the ground to burst out 4 prison chain that is made out of strong earth mineral from the ground, the chain will then lock the opponent both hand and leg therefore the opponent won't be able to perform any single hand seal or even move his hand or leg.

Can be used only twice per battle.
Can be only taught/used by T.O.P
It look something like this:

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-Declined. How exactly are you manipulating the minerals of the ground by releasing doton chakra?

Just in case my saber tooth contract got approve :

(Sa-buru-ha Gijutsu : Mikon-ha) - Saber Tooth Art : Wild Tooth

Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will clap his hand together to summon a average size of an Saber tooth which have brown fur all around his body, This saber tooth may look normal but what surprise people is his amazing speed and leg power since he have speed of an normal sannin ninja and having four strong leg like an horse. He can also charge chakra onto his legs to increase his speed or he can simply charge wind based chakra in his mouth and blast out a strong wind vortex to either hurt his target or simply use as an distraction or other mean use.

Capable of using fuuton up to A rank.(not including custom, only cannon)
Can be summoned only twice per battle
Can be only taught/used by T.O.P
Must sign/or have SaberTooth contract.

Iwabi · Jun 16, 2011

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(Futon: Gekido Suzamebachi Mure no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Raging Hornet Swarm Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will make two hand seals and then release from their hands a blast of wind energy that takes the form of a large swarm of hornets striking the target and imitating a angry swarm of hornets stinging their victim.

(Futon: Parasu Bekuta no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Pulse Vector Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user makes 3 hand seals and by focusing chakra in their mouth they will release it creating several medium rings of pressurized wind chakra that can strike the target sending them crashing into any near by objects or the ground.

(Zanshin) - God Slash
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra into their blade and block an incoming attack with their sword using the side face and counter by pushing them backwards opening up their guard and strikes them with a slash at the same time releasing the chakra in a crescent energy that carries the target away into some object like a tree or boulder following up with attacking with a kusarigama that slices across the targets chest.

(Hijutsu: Bakuhatsu Yūdoku Hachi no Jutsu) - Secret Technique: Exploding Poisonous Bee's Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points:
Description: The user creates a large swarm of poisonous bee's to converge on the enemy from all directions and then they will explode releasing a poisonous gas that then attacks the opponents nervous system causing them to feel extreme pain and imobilize the in a state of paralysis.
Note: Can only be used by members of the Kamizuru clan and are immune to their poison.

-Declined, do not resubmit-

(Doton: Iwa Suzumebachi Dorōn) - Earth Hornet Drones
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will make 2 hand seals and create 3 Hornets drones of earth that will then fly at the opponent and attack them. before impact the hornet drones then explode causing damage from debree and also releasing a sticky honey liquid to cover the target. The user can also add explosive tags to add more damage to the drones and they can also use them to fly on for transport.

-Fix the red parts. Remember, you are manipulating elements. You cant create new things just cause you feel like too -

Mockingbird · Jun 16, 2011

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Ruiz.. said:
(Fukasu-Fukasu Bodi) Smoke-Smoke Body
Type:Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:The user takes a pull of his cigarette, and then mixes the smoke with his chakra. His body then takes on all the characteristics of smoke, except for physical appearance, which stays the same. While in tis form, the user can choose to be intangible, and be impervious to all physical attacks, such as Taijutsu, and Kenjutsu, regaining anybody part, or healing any injury obtained while in this form (since the smoke would just go back and fill the space it was removed from during the hit). The user can also choose to be tangible, thickening the smoke until it is dense enough to land a physical blow on an opponent. (The idea for this jutsu comes from Smoker from One Piece)

~While in this form the user is only affected by Wind/Water/Lightning attacks. The user isn't affected by Fire/Earth based attacks.
~While in this form, the user can only use Fire/Earth techniques.
~This jutsu lasts for 3 turns once active
~Only usable 3 times per battle.
~Can only be taught by Ruiz..

NOTE
For these jutsu, im not sure if Kigiri is the only one who can use smoke jutsu. But i tried to make this different from his jutsu, by making it so that you manipulate the smoke from cigarettes that you've taken in by mixing it with your own chakra.

(Fukasu Karyo) Smoke Overdose
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user, after taking a pull from his/her cigarette, will then expel the smoke, mixing their chakra with the smoke, and blow it towards their opponent. Afterwards, they cover the smoke in a layer of regular chakra trapping the enemy in a dome of Tobbaco smoke, that cannot be broken by a jutsu of lower rank. (Because of the nature of narcotics, the longer the enemy is exposed to the smoke, they will become increasingly drowsy)

~Can only be taught by Ruiz..

(Katon: Hoka Bakuha) Fire Style:Fire Explosion
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user releases their fire chakra all at once all around themselves in a brief but powerful fire explosion, that hurts anyone near him/her.

~Can only be taught by Ruiz..

No one checked my submissions shown above.

These are a few more...

(Im not sure if the first one is classified as a Custom Weapon or not)

(Pawa Naru)-Power Ring(s)
Rank:S
Type:Attack/Defense/Supplementay
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A marvel of scientific ingenuity, the power ring was designed to be capable of absorbing, manipulating and releasing the wearers chakra. After much trial and error, the ring was finally successfully forged. By focusing chakra into the ring, the wearer is capable of manipulating his chakra into complicated shape and form to be used for Attack or Defense, forming it into a solid energy. The user is also capable of simply releasing the chakra in quick, powerful bursts of energy. A total of 10 Power Rings have been forged.
~Only Ruiz.. can distribute the rings to those he feels worthy.

-Declined. Irrelevant to Naruto's world-
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(Chakra Shokushus)-Chakra Tentacles xd
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After channeling chakra into his power ring, the user can release and manipulate their chakra to grab objects in the surrounding environment, and hurl them at the enemy. This jutsu can also be used, to grab and constrict the enemy.
~Can only be used 4 times.
~Must posses The Power Ring

-Declined. Irrelevant to Naruto's world-
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(Enaji Dangan)-Energy Shot
Rank: S
Type:Attack/Defense/Supplementay
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user focuses his chakra into his ring, and releases it into a single powerful energy blast. This jutsu works very fast.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle
~Must posses one of The Power Rings

-Declined. Irrelevant to Naruto's world-
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(Yamahodo Enaji Bakuhatsu)-Great Energy Eruption xd
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user channels their chakra into their ring, and from their ring into the ground, beneath the oppoenent. The oppoenent is then enveloped in a large eruption of energy coming from beneath them. (Works kind of like Exploding Flame Carter)
~Must posses one of the Power Rings
~Can only be used 3 times per battle

-Declined. Irrelevant to Naruto's world-
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(Enaji Heigai)-Energy Barrier
Rank:S
Type: Defense/Supplementay
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the power of their ring, the user coats them self in a thin layer of chakra, that acts as a powerful shield, keeping protecting the user from everything outside the thin barrier. This thin barrier can also act as a shield from breathing in poisonous gases, as well as allow the user to breathe under water (This jutsu can protect the user from outside forces, and allow them to breathe in certain environments, for limited amounts of time.)
~Can only be used 3 times
~Must posses one of The Power Rings

-Declined. Irrelevant to Naruto's world-
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Feel free to laugh at my rip offs from the Green Lantern xdxd

-I did check them -

Gobi Gobletsson · Jun 16, 2011

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(Katon: Naiteki kaji) - Fire Release: Inner fire
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage cost: 80
Description: The user cross his arms infront of his head, forming a 'X' a gathers huge amount of fire chakra within himself. He then as he have gathered the fire chakra which takes near to no time, swings his arms to each side releasing a huge burst of fire from all angles of his body, which results in a huge shockwave of fire which destroys everything in it's path.
~Useable twice per battle.

-Approved-

(Tekunobaiking) - Technoviking
Type: Supplymentary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Cost: 80
Description: The user takes a firm stance where he then points at the opponent with his right index-finger thus releasing an enourmous chakra throughout his body thus making a highly consedensed aura of chakra flow out of the users body.
This jutsu have several effects, on the user himself and one upon the enemy.

1. Using this jutsu, the user gains a six-pack, a manly beard, strenght on Tsunade's level and an aura. The aura is like a chakra cloak the jinchuurikis gains as they enter their incomplete form however this aura is invisible chakra and gives the user extra reach in Taijutsu. If the user doesn't connect his hits, the aura would blast the enemy away with a great force, alot like Frog Kata, just not as strong.

2. As the user points his index-finger at the opponent and gives him an intense look of pure killing intent the opponent goes in shock fearing for his life and is paralyzed and therefore unable to move. This is very similiar to the Killing intent jutsu.
~Can only be used once.

~The mode wears off after five turns.

-Declined, do not resubmit-

Yüme1 · Jun 16, 2011

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(Mayoko giri) - Side cut | X Slash.
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using the art of Mayoko giri, the will first take a quick step forward, once the user get's close enough to the target, he/she will slash with massive speed and power horizontaly twice at the target's torso, in an X formation.

-approved-

(Mugen-dai) - Infinate sword style, endless river of blood.
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will first channel a massive amount of chakra in their dominate arm, and hold their sword in the dominate hand, pointing the blade at the ground. Next he/she will point the sword's blade to face in the same direction as the user, and pull it back behind them. Then the user will rush toward the opponent and once the target is close enough the user will slash them upward diagonally. If the target is caught by the first slash, the user will begin to release their chakra from their dominate arm, and start slashing. The end result will be a total of 70 slashes, and depending on the target they will by this time be dead or in critical condition. If survived the target will bleed to death, hence the name river of blood.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*No chakra related techniques may be used in the next turn, including jutsu.

-approved-

Inch · Jun 16, 2011

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(Kage Sekai Supaiku)-Shadow World Spike
Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user forms three handseals and begins manipulating the shadows within a midrange of their location, (excluding the shadow of the target). The manipulated shadows turn into extremely shape shadow spikes. The shadow spikes then move across the ground and impale the target's shadow. When parts of the target's shadow are impaled by a spike, the respective body part is also impaled.
Note: This jutsu will fail if the only shadows around are that of the user and target.
Note: The size and reach of the spikes are both dependent on the size of the shadow used.
Note: The user must be a member of the Nara Clan.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by inchato:

-Oh hold. Explain this better. You are manipulating which shadows exactly? Also why do you need the spikes? Your shadow ability is enough-

Professor Sarutobi · Jun 16, 2011

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Custom Weapon for my Gin bio

God Spear (Shinsō)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 to extend the blade from short to mid or +20 to extend from short to long)
Damage Points: +10 for mid range attack, +20 for long range (due to the extra chakra flowing through the blade when extended)
Description: It looks like an ordinary wakizashi. The hilt is light-blue with a tsuba made of two slim swirls of metal looping around the blade to make an open oval, resembling an "S". It is normally in its wakizashi form when not used, or when a shorter blade is favorable to the user but can become the size of a katana at will and stay that length without an extra chakra drain.
Shinsō gained its name due to the special chakra metal it was forged with and (much like gaara's grourd sand) its passive ability to slowly absorb the users chakra while not in use to become naturally more resistent to breaking then normal swords at all times. When the user applys a larger amount of chakra then normal to the blade of Shinsō it can extend to great lengths, the blade's less famous feature to those who are unfamiler with it, is the great speed the blade extends and retracts, able to extend up to Mid range in about 1 second and return to original length in the same amount of time, able to extend to Long range in 3 seconds and return to original length within another 3.

-Can only extend up to long range once every 4 turns
-Can extend to Mid range once every 2 turns
-Extending and contracting the sword counts towards one of the 3 moves.
-Can only be used by Professor Sarutobi

-Declined. I cannot approve special types of chakra unless they are originating from a special or a custom approved clan-

(Hayaton: Hayaton Zama) Swift Release: Swift State
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every turn until canceled)
Damage points: +10 to all taijutsu
Description: A heightened state of constantly flowing swift release chakra to the body and mind, allowing the user to move and percive actions at superhuman speeds without hand seals, due to the constant use of elevated speed the users muscles are worn out after being the state if they maintained it for all 5 turns and the user experiences a more sluggish reaction time then normal.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
-Can only be used by a swift user bio.
-only useable once per battle, lasts 5 turns.
-movements only readable by 3 tomoe and above sharingans.

(Hayaton:Hayai Undoushinkei)Swift Release: Swift Reflexes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user releases a quick burst of swift release chakra to a single limb to heighten their reflexes substantially for a few seconds.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
-Can only be used by a swift user bio.

-On hold. Change the red part.-

(Hayaton:Shinsuu Kobushi Panchi) Swift Release: 10 Fist Punch
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user releases swift release chakra into their arms to increase the speed of their arms substantially for a few seconds, allowing them to throw 10 punches but in a burst of speed so that it appears to only look like one punch was thrown.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
-Can only be used by a swift user bio
-Only useable once per turn

-approved-

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Majikkjuutan) Summoning: Magic Carpet
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 for every turn after that or until canceled)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Summons Mr. Popo's "Magic Carpet" under the user's feet allowing flight through the use of the user's chakra being charged into it.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
-User can't have other summons on the field at the same time.
-Lasts as long as the user can pay the chakra price or until canceled.
-Can't be used againest Mr. Popo as the carpet above all else will listen to him over anyone else who has summoned it.

-Declined-

-Mugen- · Jun 16, 2011

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(Doton: kyojin tsuchi bunshin no jutsu) - Earth release: titan earth clone

Rank: S
Type: supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will channel earth chakra into the ground around him.After 6 handseals the users earth chakra will manipulate into a form of a clone.The clone then emerges from the ground ,however when the clone emerges the clone will not be a regular clone,but a giant replica of himself.The clone is about half the size of a boss summon.This technique is just a advanced version of earth clone technique.
*the clone deflects any B-rank techniques.Only A-rank lightning or S-rank elemental jutsus can stop him.(water does not stop this technique whatsoever)
*Can only be used once and no clones may be used for the rest of the battle.
*No earth transportation techniques can transport around the clone,due to a heavy amount of the users chakra being there.

-Declined. I do not approve altering of cannon clones-

(Fuuinjutsu: Tenketsu seppaku) Sealing technique: chakra pore pressure

Rank: forbidden
Type: supplementary
Range: short-long.
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (death is successfully activated)
Description: This is more like a desperate last attempt to kill the opponent.The user will focus chakra into his fist,than in touching distance from the opponent he will punch the opponent with his fist in the stomach,then by sending the chakra from his fist to the opponents body he will block off all the chakra streams in the stomach.Thus all the streams in the stomach will be pressured by the rest of the streams around them,causing the opponent to explode.(the user may also use this on himself as a suicide.Which will explode killing anyone within a 1 kilometer radius)
* Can only be used once per battle and the explosion starts the next turn after it has been successfully done.
* Can not use any sealing techniques for the rest of that battle.
* Causes a explosion that is as big as 1 kilometer in radius.
* causes 50 damage to the opponents dominant arm due to strain.(kills user if used as a suicide technique)
* Can only be taught by mugen

-On Hold. Get Nexus to check this. -
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-Declined- lmao

(Kuchiyose: Takamura) � Summoning: Takamura

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Takamura is a medium sized hawk compared to the giant hawks having a wingspan of 3 meters. He is also a very young hawk and hasn�t reached his full size that are like his older brethren counter parts. He is big enough that the user may ride the hawk. Takamura has red and brown markings with feathers protruding from his head. He is capable of moving at fast speeds due to his smaller size and is able to attack the opponents with medium sized fireballs, which are equivalent to B rank. It can also attack using its features such as the wings, beaks and talons.
Note: Must know Hawk summoning contract wielded by Kaito-sama
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

-Approved-

(Kuchiyose: Raikan) � Summoning: Raikan

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Raikan is a medium sized hawk with a wingspan of 3 meters. He is also a very young hawk and hasn�t reached his full size that are like his older brethren counter parts. He has a black body with yellow stripes running down the side of his body from his eyes to the tips of his feathers which some say are the exact representation of his elemental affinity. He is capable of flying at very fast speeds Raikan is capable of flapping his wings and creating lightning blasts equivalent of a B rank level attack. And he also has the ability to use his beak, wings and talons as extra means of attacking opponents.
Note: Must know Hawk Summoning contract wielded by Kaito-sama
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

-Approved-

Phobos · Jun 16, 2011

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(Doton: Haima-to) - Earth style: Homeland

Type: Defense/supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
User inserts his chakra into ground in 4m radius around him hardening it and making it unable to be used by enemy earth jutsu (can't even emerge from ground there) also canceling any earth jutsu in progress by enemy (if enemy jutsu is bigger than Homelands radius then rest of it still happens.
Secondary it can be used to boost power of existing earth jutsu by one rank by touching it and improving its structure (earth wall and so on)
-no handseals required, only contact

-Declined. Makes no sense. Why would your earth chakra cancel other peoples' earth techniques? -

(Fuuton: Fukashi) - Wind style: Invisibility

Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: N/A
User insert chakra into air around him changing its density in such way that it bends light (coming from front or rear) around him thus making him completely invisible (also no shadow) from front or back, however because of this user also cannot see what's in front of him (or behind).
This also boosts any fire jutsu cast at user by one rank. Can be still seen with dojutsu as this bend only light and not chakra flow. Lasts one turn.

-Declined. Makes no sense. -

(Fuuton: Unido Tate) Wind style: Wind Shield

Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Forms a shield of rapidly spinning wind around users whole body that protects user from enemy attacks (up to A rank and S rank raiton) also blowing away small objests as kunais.
However if active and hit by fire jutsu it acts as a combination of A rank wind with a relevant fire jutsu, also user can't use fire jutsus as he would set himself ablaze.
-Lasts one turn if other than fuuton elemental ninjutsu is used, else 3turns.
-After first turn its released immediately after using non fuuton elemental ninjutsu.
-Can be released anytime.

-Declined. Similar jutsu already exists-

(Raiton: Denkai) Lightning style: Electric Field

Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
User throws 3-6 lightning infused kunais and then when he wishes (can be activated even before kunais land) activates the jutsu with one handseal to create lightning field between those kunais. If thrown on ground also affects targets in underound.
-Minimum of 3 kunais must remain for jutsu to work.

-Declined. Similar jutsu already exists-

(Fuuton: Twister) Wind style: Twister

Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
This jutsu lasts 2 turns, when used it forms a tornado around enemy which is 15m tall and 10m wide, doing no harm to the enemy so far but if fire jutsu is used the tornado gets ignited and burns whoever is inside or in close range, if somebody get recklessly caught in the tornado he/she will be unable to act for two turns until the jutsu ends. In second turn the tornado narrow itself enough to catch it's victim (if he/she remains inside) and make him/her unable to act for one turn until the jutsu ends.

-On hold. How exactly are you forming a tornado and control it considering your low rank? Also, if someone gets caught in a tornado they won't just become 'unable to act'. -

..no Jap for twister..

ZK · Jun 16, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Doton: San-kai hashira kaden | Earth Release: Three Pillar Household
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: By performing a single handseal, the user makes three great plateaus of earth and stone rise up through the ground wherever he wishes. The plateaus rise through the ground very quickly and without warning, and they cause small tremors around them as they rise. The user is able to slightly manipulate the shape and form of the plateaus, before they rise through the ground, to suit his needs. By forming a single handseal, the user is able to emit spikes from the plateaus. This technique is an advanced version of the Earth Style: Earth Flow Rampart.
Notes:
• Can only be used 4 times per battle.
• Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero

-Approved-

Ninja Arts: Telekinesis = Ninpou: terekineshisu
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Middle/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user by using the art of the Telekinesis can move objects with his mind. The user only needs to concentrate chakra into the desired object and by doing the connection with his brain he can send it wherever he wants. This technique is so strong that the user can ever use it to move trees and use them as defense or offense.
Note: Last for 4 turns
Note: No genjutsu while using this technique.
Note: No Forbidden ranked techniques after this jutsu is over.
Note: Can only be taught by Akisha and Leeroy G. Zero
Note: Twice per battle.

-Declined. I do not approve anything supernatural which is incompatible with the Naruto world. -

Fuuinjutsu: Shinkei to Kin'niku no Saisei | Sealing Technique: Rebirth of the Nerves and Muscles
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will reveal a part of his body where the Kanji for Muscle is applied. The kanji will immediately begin to glow, and send small currents of chakra and electricity through the user’s body. These currents will cause any harmful spasms and restrictions on the user’s muscles and nerves, to be sealed away. The user will feel a huge relief after the seal has been activated. By directing the chakra currents, the user can control exactly which muscles and nerves in his body will be checked, and for what.
Notes:
• Can only be used 3 times per battle.
• Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero

-Get Nexus to check this-
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-Declined- you can't seal away such stuff, and for future reference I don't usually even bother to read stuff in spoilers so refrain from using them in official submission threads

Ninpou: Dake Saikyō Remasu Seizon | Ninja Art: Only the Strongest Will Survive
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 100 (50 every turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique can only be activated if the user is under the effects of: Haruku henkan (The Hulk Transformation) Or: Ninpou: Kyojin no Jutsu (Ninja Art: Juggernaught Technique) This technique allows the user to exceed the human boundaries on physical strength for a short amount of time. The user pushes a larger amount of physical energy into his chakra as he molds it, this will give the user’s chakra a more physical consistency, and it will therefore actually be able to hit and hurt people in its pure form. As the user molds this chakra, he simply releases huge amounts of uncontrolled chakra, which will form a chakra cloak around the user because of the huge amounts released. The wild chakra coursing through the user’s system will cause the user’s brain to release great amounts of adrenaline and glucose, which will increase the speed of the user’s blood flow. All these substances in the user’s system will cause the user’s physical strength and durability to continuously grow over time. The user’s hair will turn yellow, and his eyes will turn blue, this happens because of the massive amounts of performance enhancing substances coursing through the user’s body. The chaka cloak around the user will behave like a wild fire, it will not protect the user from anything but the most basic ninja weapons, but it will give the user a larger reach in his Taijutsu, and it gives chakra burns similar to the ones Naruto gets after his 4th tailed Kyuubi transformation, to anything it touches. The user will become extremely durable when under the effect of this technique; every part of his body will become double as durable, every turn this technique is active, the user will also become extremely resistant to extreme temperatures. This technique gives the user incredible strength, it will give him an increase in strength, similar to two times Tsunades strength, and every turn this technique is active, the user’s physical strength will double. The chakra cloak around the user will give the user a boost of speed big enough to cancel the slowing effect of: Haruku henkan (The Hulk Transformation) Or: Ninpou: Kyojin no Jutsu (Ninja Art: Juggernaught Technique) The user will create small craters where he walks, and the energy release from this technique alone, is enough to send shockwaves around the user.
Notes:
• The user cannot use any Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Clones and Summonings, while this technique is active.
• Lasts for 5 turns.
• Can only be used once per battle.
• The user’s heart explodes when this technique ends, because of the gigantic pressure it puts on his body.
• This can be activated simultaneously with: Haruku henkan (The Hulk Transformation) Or: Ninpou: Kyojin no Jutsu (Ninja Art: Juggernaught Technique)
• Can only be taught by Leeroy G. Zero

This is the technique.

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-Declined. I have not even read the rest of the jutsu; the red part is so wrong that renders what follows completely irrational-

Geezus · Jun 16, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kuchiyose|Yuusou Inu - (Summoning|Majestic Dog)
Type:Summon
Rank:S
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Yuusou Inu, or Majestic is a very loyal and majestic Dog. She is very nice, always obedient, and is very powerful. She is a man's best friend. She stands over 6 feet, with white, glossy fur. She is very lanky and fast. Yuusou is Cerberus' first lady of Mount Fang. She has been treated like a queen for her entire life, but she fights like a warrior goddess. Her fur is very clean, glossy, and white. She has shapes of flowing wind all around her fur, giving the resemblance of a majestic, yet swift one. Because of this she is natural at wind based techniques allowing her to use up to S-Rank Wind Techniques. 3 times a summon, she can roar releasing a wind technique equal to an A-Rank wind.

Kuchiyose|Nemui Inu - (Summoning|Sleepy Dog)
Type:Summon
Rank:A
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Nemui Inu, or Sleepy is a very lazy and sleepy dog. He is always sleeping and eating, but is very smart. He is the laziest of all ninja dogs. He stands about 5 feet tall weighing about 215 pound, because of his overactive eating, and no working out. Nemui is Warui's best friend, even though Warui doesn't show it. Nemui was a very pampered puppy, getting everything he wanted, but mostly food. His fur is Dark brown, coated with orange stripes, like a tiger. He loves the earth and all of her food, so he is a natural at earth based techniques, allowing him to use up to A-Rank Earth Techniques. 3 times a summon, he can stomp on the ground, causing earth spikes to erupt under the opponent, these spikes are equal to B-Rank Earth.

Kuchiyose|Haipa Inu - (Summoning|Hyper Dog)
Type:Summon
Rank:A
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Haipa Inu, or Hyper is a very playful and energetic dog. He is always playing and is very fast, faster than all the other ninja dogs. He is about 5 feet tall, weighing 160 pounds, because he is skinny and very fast. He loves to play and make friends. Haipa's best friend is Ikasu, the Cool dog. Haipa was abandoned when he was small, because his family wasn't rich and had no money. He was found by Ikasu, lying on the side of the road, dying. He had been struck by lightning, leaving zig-zags along his entire body, that are black. He has dark yellow fur, with multiple zig-zags. Because of this Haipa is a natural at lightning based techniques, allowing him to use up to A-Rank Lightning Techniques. 3 times a summon, he can raise his paw up, releasing a lightning bolt from the skies. The lightning bolt is equal to a B-Rank Lightning Technique.

Kuchiyoso|Ikasu Inu - (Summoning|Cool Dog)
Type:Summon
Rank:A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Ikasu Inu, or Cool is a very laid back and cool looking dog. He doesn't show much emotion, and is always calm. He is the smartest and oldest of all the ninja dogs. He is about 5 feet tall, weighing around 170 pounds. Ikasu likes to thing of himself as a loner dog, even though his best friend is Haipa. He left his family a long time ago, to pursue his dream of becoming a ninja dog. On his way, he a found a pup on the side of a road dying, Haipa. He loved water and enjoyed his free time overseeing the ocean. He has Dark Blue fur, with black spots all over him. He has a very shaggy face, which gives him the cool look. Because of this Ikasu is a natural at water based techniques, allowing him to use up to A-rank Water Techniques. 3 times a summon, he can roar, releasing a torrent of water for his mouth. This Torrent is equal to a B-Rank Water Technique

-Declined. So, through your summonings, you get affinities of all elements simultaneously. Not to mention your tailed beast form. No way-

Bhil · Jun 17, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Shōnetsu Jigoku) Fire Release: Blazing Hell
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:S
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user molds a small amount of chakra in their hands and then flicks it into a small ball of fire towards the enemy. The purpose of the technique is not to strike an enemy, but to make sure it reaches near the area they are currently on. Once the small ball of fire comes into contact with the ground, it’ll immediately grown and surround the target in a complete circle. There is a small five second delay before the flames begins to ignite and erupt into a huge column of fire, reaching up to twenty feet high. The heat generated from the flames is so hot that anything coming into contact with the column will be burned instantly, with the high temperature of the flames the ground heats up,slowly turning into lava. This technique is mostly used to trap an opponent inside a blazing fire like prison and it is large enough to encompass one or two people. Suffocation is possible and likely should they not be able to escape, as the flames will quickly devour all available oxygen.
*Note*:Can be used TWICE a battle
*Note*: Lasts for three turns.

-On hold. Well, since you are throwing a small ball of fire, how does it expand and erupt? By itself? Fix your description-

Youshun (鷹隼, Hawk and Falcon)
Rank: S
Type:Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: Similar to the Chidori and as such appears to be quite similar in nature. Like Chidori, Youshun is a concentrated strike of lightning delivered at melee range. Unlike Chidori, which is used as an assasination techinque and strikes a single point with an lightning enhanced jab, Youshun rather shreds material it comes in contact with making it more suited towards damaging the target critically regardless of where the technique strikes. Youshun appears as a surging concentration of lightning in the user's hand rather than around it with Chidori and is used to rip through a target.The concentration of chakra is greater in this technique and that it would theoretically be able to cut through Chidori. It would seem that this technique requires a significant amount of chakra, but a specific limit has never been specifically announced. Due to amount and concentration of chakra being employed in this technique the users risk damaging themselves if they aren't in perfect control of the technique. This damage can range anywhere between burns from the lightning to the shredding effect this technique.

Reason for creation: Chidori insufficient and that a thousand birds still flee from a hawks and falcons.

*Note*: Can be only used twice a battle.
*Note*:Can be only used by ~Sanji~

-Declined. Your reason for creation doesn't persuade me. I am sure you can be more creative than this-

(Raiton: Raikouatsu) Lightning release: Thunder Volt
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu gathers enormous amounts lightning in the hands and when released it is the form of several bolts that will snake their way to the target as long as chakra is continuously used. Once hit the target will receive a very nasty shock. The ninja can continue to poor more chakra into the jutsu and also lift their target into the air and be open for another attack. This jutsu can be used with one hand or two. If two hands are used the effects are doubled not halved.
*Note*: Can be only taught by ~Sanji~
*Note*: No Lighting jutsu the turn after.

-Declined. Makes no sense. How can you poor more chakra into lighting bolts that you don't touch? Also, lighting is not glue-

(Kyousei Tsuchi Doragon) Great Earthen Dragon
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing the required handseals a large 20 foot long dragon erupts from the ground around the user. The dragon is made from compressed earth and rock which gives it a greater strength than steel, it is usually used to bite the opponent as its teeth are incredibly strong and sharp and could easily pierce straight through a ninja. The user fully controls the dragon in every way, unfortunately this means that the concentration that one needs to control the dragon requires the user to not move from their current position, which could potentially leave them open to attacks from an opponent.
*Note*: Can by only taught by ~Sanji~
*Note*: The dragon can only remain on the battlefield for 3 turns and can only be created twice per battle.

-Declined. Similar jutsu exist and they got approved because they didn't have the red part you posted. -

Black Butler · Jun 17, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ranton Bunshin)- Storm Clone

Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:35
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The creates a clone of himself, that is made of Water and Lightning nature. The clone can do everything the user can, including all ninjutsu(elemental and regular), Genjutsu, and Taijutsu. When destroyed the clone reverts back into Water and Lightning, shocking who ever is near.

-Declined for obvious reasons-

(Ranton: Ittou "of Poseidon")- Storm Release: Sword of Poseidon

Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will do 3 handseals, while gathering their Ranton chakra into their hand. Then the user will create a giant sword on their hand, made out of water and lightning. The user can swing this very easy. On contact, the sword will electrocute the opponent to near death.
Note: Usable 2x a battle
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy, must know Storm Release

-Declined for obvious reasons-

(Ranton: "Poseidon's" Doki)- Storm Release: Poseidon's Wrath

Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points:100
Description: The user will do do a set of handseals, while near a water source. The user will then summon a giant creature, by the name of Poseidon, made of water, the user will then add lightning nature to this giant. Poseidon comes complete with his Storm shield, which can block up to 1 S-Rank Technique, before dispersing. He also comes complete with his Storm sword, which when hit with, causes S-Rank damage. He can also shoot a storm vortex from his mouth, which is equal to A-Rank.
Note: Usable 1 time a match
Note: Water Source required
Note: No Storm Techniques for the next 3 turns
Note: Can't use up to A-Rank Water or Lightning for the next turn.
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy, must have Storm Release

-Declined for obvious reasons-

(Raiton: Kuroi Chidori)- Lightning Release: Black One Thousand Birds

Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: This technique is just chidori, but enhanced by black lightning.

-Declined, do not resubmit. Chidori is fine as it is-

(Raiton: Kurio Janguru)- Lightning Release: Black Jungle

Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:All
Damage Points:100
Description:The user will gather black lightning into their hand. They will then compress it, molding it into a ball. The user will then let the ball rise up above the battle field. Then the user will make the tiger handseal, causing the ball to explode, raining several different jungle animals, made of pure black lightning, down upon the battlefield. These animals are giant and seemingly unavoidable. These animals aren't made to move, but to crush and electrocute multiple targets over a large scale. After completed, the user will faint and no longer be able to continue, unless treated.
Note: Usable 1 time a battle
Note: User can't continue after use.
Note: Must know black lightning, must be taught by McAfeezy

-Approved. I am surprised.-

If there is corrections that need to be made, please make them.

Ushiro · Jun 17, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Dangan o Hikisaku)- Sniper Art: Tearing Bullet

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user shoots an arrow from his bow infused with a large amount of chakra at a target that augments its speed and generates a rapidly spinning vortex of chakra resembling a giant drill that can be guided and will tear through a target and any obstacles in its way. The vortex protects the arrow and allows the arrow to continue after it has hit a jutsu of the same rank. It can also be positioned to surround the user for defensive purposes.

-On hold. This should be of S rank. It's a smart idea but just 'chakra' is not enough-

(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Yōkai Shotto)- Sniper Art: Specter Shot

Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user channels chakra into arrows that bends the light around them to make them nearly invisible to the naked eye. Doujutsu users can easily see through the technique.
-Lasts for 2 turns

-Declined. Makes no sense. -

(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Fukusū no Namida no Dangan)- Sniper Art: Multiple Tearing Bullets

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user shoots numerous arrows from his bow infused with a large amount of chakra at a target that augments their speed and generates rapidly spinning vortexes of chakra resembling drills that can be guided and will tear through a target and any obstacles in their way. The chakra protects the arrows and allows the arrows to continue after they have hit a jutsu of the same rank.

-On hold. Just fix the description and I will approve. It's a smart idea but just 'chakra' is not enough-

(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Shotto Shiage)- Sniper Art: Finishing Shot

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user imbues his bow and arrow with chakra to strengthen them and augment the arrow's piercing ability so the arrow can be shot at high speeds only tracable by a 2 tomoe sharingan or a very skilled ninja. If the arrow encounters an opponent's jutsu of the same rank it will travel through it unless it is a wind jutsu.
-Usable 3 times per battle

-Oh hold. Ibid. Just fix the description and the 'chakra' part. Personally, I'd go for wind for this one.-

(Kage Hōrudo)- Shadow Hold

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user binds a visible opponent(s) to any object they cast a shadow over and are in contact with using their own shadows. Once the technique starts the user doesn't need to be able to see the target.
-Lasts up to 2 turns
-Can only be used by a member of the Nara clan

-Declined. OP -

Drizzy · Jun 17, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

if declined, please tell me what's wrong so i can fix it...

-approved-

Tvqxeqlapcfr · Jun 17, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kurimuzon Hakira said:
Only Summonings this week. No resubmission (even if I am upset that they were declined. , I guess it will have to wait until next week.)

Hummingbird Summons:

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Ho-Oh, The Fire Bird (Ho-Oh, Hi no Tori)

Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Ho-Oh, the Fire Bird. Ho-Oh is a large humming bird. She is of the ruby-throated variety, and is known for a large scorch mark on her right eye. She can understand and speak the summoner's language. She can use B-Rank Fire Jutsu that do not require hand seals. When he flaps his wings, he creates a torrent of A-Ranked Flames.
~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
~The Fire Torrent counts toward the turn count.
~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

Striker, The Lightning Bird (Sutoraikā, Raitoningubādo)

Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Striker, the Lightning Bird. He is a hummingbird of the blue-throated variety, distinguished by a scar on his right claw. He is able to use up to B-Ranked Lightning Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. His twin brother is Shaker, the Earth Bird. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of Lightning by flapping his wings.
~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
~The Lightning Torrent counts toward the turn count.
~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

Shaker, the Earth Bird (Shēkā, Chikyū no Tori)

Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Shaker, the Earth Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Beryline variety, distinguished by a scar on his left claw. He is able to use up to B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. Striker, the Lightning Bird is his twin brother. He can create an A-Ranked Earth Torrent by flapping his wings.
~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
~The Earth Torrent counts toward the turn count.
~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

Gust, the Wind Bird (Gasuto, uindobādo)

Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Gust, the Wind Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Black-chinned variety, distinguished by a scar on his left eye. He is able to use up to B-Rank Wind Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of wind by flapping his wings.
~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
~The Wind Torrent counts toward the turn count.
~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

Weapon Summoning:

Pinned (Kotei sa Reta)

Rank: A
Range: Short- to Mid-Range
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user throws a previously marked in blood scroll into the air. Five large poles connected by chains fall from the sky on top of the opponent. (depicted below) The opponent is pinned to the ground.
~The user must be hit by an A-Rank+ Jutsu first.

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Are these gonna be checked? Sorry if this has been answered, just curious.

Nara's Shadows: Mocking Bird (Nara no Kage: Mokkinbādo)

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short to Long Ranged
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user manipulated their shadow so that it approaches the opponent, and then creates multiple hummingbird-shaped shadows that come off the ground and lunge at the opponent. The shadow birds then stab the target, keeping them in place, as well as wrap around the target. The target can be pulled to the ground if needed.

-Declined. Wrong chakra info.-

Nara's Shadows: Copy Cat Clone (Nara no Kage: Mohō Kurōn)

Rank: A
Type:Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user manipulates their shadow to take the form of their self in a dark form (still in the form of a shadow). The clone can then attack the opponents. (Attacks are worth applicable damage). The shadow can be destroyed by either being separated from the user or an intense light source.
~The shadow is solid, and can use weapons and Nara's Shadows jutsu. It is not effected by weapons, as it is only a shadow and nothing more.

-On hold. You really want this? It's not good for you, considering that your 'true' self will be unable to move, yet fully visible to the opponents. Anyway, if you still want this you have to state exactly what I told you-

Hummingbird Hands (Hachidori no Te)

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user unleashes the beak of a hummingbird (that is very sharp) from their sleeve. The beak can open to grab the target.
~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

-Declined: Wrong chakra info-

Hummingbird Hands: One Thousand Beaks (Hachidori no Te: Ichi Sen Bādopanikku)

Rank: A
Type:Offensive
Range: Short to Mid-Ranged
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user begins by using Hummingbird Hands. Instead of being released from the sleeve, it is released from the mouth. The user then upens the beak, releasing two more. The next one does the same, etc. The target now is being swarmed with "one thousand beaks".

-On hold, until you get the jutsu above approved-

Demonic Illusion: Torture Chamber (Genjutsu: Gōmon Heya)

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short to Long Ranged
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The User throws a smoke bomb, starting the illusion. when the smoke clears, the opponent finds themselves strapped to a table in an extensive torture chamber. the opponent is put through multiple kinds of torture worse than your wildest imagination, and then released from the jutsu. This can be used for interrogational purposes as well.

-Declined. An illusion does not start by a smoke bomb. State exactly how you are making the illusion happen-

If it is an accident that this is open, the above will be submitted at another time. Please check the quoted first.

Shade Dracova · Jun 17, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Giant Peregrine Falcon
Scroll Owner: Rinnegan On The Moon
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Flare

Summoning Technique: Flare The Falcon King
(Couldnt find Japanese name)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Flare is the Almighty King of Arus. He watches over all the other falcons of Arus. He specializes in Katon in which he studied for 123 years. Flare is about the size of a coach bus and can hold 2 people on his back. Flare has 2 abilities he calls The 2 Arts Of True Power. The 1st ability is that Flare can merge his rib cage with the users Spinal cord. His talons dig into the user back and his head dissapears inside the users body giving the user temporary angel wings. The second was flame rain. Flare can spread his wings and release an A rank fire storm from them raining on everything he fly's over but he can only use it one time and if the user gets caught in it the user receives damage also. He can also fly at top speed and twice that when merged.
* The times he can be summoned is based on your rank 1 time= Jounin and S class, Sannin and Kage= 2 times, Sage= 3 times*
* Only stays for 4 turns*
* Each time he uses a special it takes away one turn he can be out*
* If he gets hit by a B rank or above attack he dissapears*
* You must sign the contract with Rinnegan On The Moon*
* Cant be hurt by wind techs*
* His abilities count as a move*

-On hold. Fix the red part. A falcon cannot create a fire-rain. Stick to the use of up to A rank katon jutsus-

Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

Ocean The Flying Stream
(No Japanese Name)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Ocean is a falcon also. Ocean is known as the savior for creating a ocean of water when Arus had a drought and they were dying. Like the rest of the falcons Ocean can fly at top speeds. Ocean also has abilities. He can take the moisture in the air and multiply it creating oceans and other bodies of water. He can also change his spit into water and spit a C rank water blast at the opponent.

-Declined. -

Weapon: Moon The Sword And Shield Of All Element
(Buki: Subete no eremento no tsuki no ken to tate)
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Moon is a combination of a sword and shield that a shinobi can use in battle. There are 2 scrolls used with this weapon a summoning scroll and a power scroll. The summoning scroll is used to summon both weapons because they wouldnt naturally be carried with them due to their power. The power scroll is the scroll you use to enhance the sword and shield. You can concentrate elemental chakra into this scroll to enhance the shield and sword based on the rank of the elemental release.
Example: If someone sumons it and they have learned Doton jutsu up to c rank they can transfer some of their chakra into the power scroll to give the shield and sword the power and rank of the element you use. You can know block B and lower rank Water attacks with that shield and the sword is as powerful as a c rank do attack.
* The weapons can only be summoned once per battle*
* It can be broken in the right situation( any question ask Rinnegan On The Moon*
* You cant concentrate S rank elemental chakra if it is done the shield and sword will break*
* The user must place the weapons on the summoning scroll to reverse summon them back to their armory etc*
* If it is broken the creator(ROTM) can construct another one if he wishes.
* The weapon can be stolen and in that case(ROTM) dosent have to make you a new one*
* if one is broken the other dissapears*
*Must request the creator(ROTM) to build one for you*
* You can only enhance the power scroll three times*
* When you enhance the power scroll it lasts for two turns* * It counts as a move to summon and enhance scroll*
(Sorry for so many restrictions)

-Declined. How exactly did you get those scrolls and why is it possible for you to summon weapons? Your biography states so?-

Genjutsu-Never Ending Pit Of Death(No japanese found)
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The user cast a genjutsu on the opponent to make it seem as if a huge hole formed under him and he is falling to his death. While the opponent is in the midst of the jutsu, the user may finish him quickly or slowly torture him until he dies.
Tip: It is best used when your opponent is making handseals
* Can only be used once a match*

-Approved-

Water Release-Octopus Tendrils(Mizu rirīsu - tako no shokushu)
Type

efensive/Offensive
Rank:A
RangeShort
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The user will create a orb of water around the to protect themselves.The can split the dome into many tendrils that can whip, slash and pierce nearby enemies.
* While inside the dome you are very open to b rank raiton techs*

-Approved-

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