[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

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Nezumi: Rat Chakra
Rank: Forbidden
Chakra: 80
Damage: NA
Description: By meditating with th rats they can transfer chakra from their body to yours. Both the user and the rat must be meditating back to back and should remain still. This justsu does not last long, but while encompassed in the aura of the rat you achieve heightened sense of smell and hearing as well as a strength and power/speed boost equal to 2nd Gate. It does not last for long or give you much but it makes the rats better use collaboration jutsu with the user.

Note: Only usable 1 time a battle
Note: Only Rat summoners can use.
Note: After use you are slower, weaker, and all senses are extremely weakened.
Note: After Use you cannot use Forbidden ranked jutsu.
Note: Lasts 3 turns

~ Approved ~

Nezumi: rat fur
Rank: A
Chakra: 60
Damage: 60
Discription: By focusing chakra into the fur of a rat the rat can give its fur elemental advantages. Much like the rat blades it can be encased by the element of choice alot like lightning armor or water armor and that stone armor but not exactly the same the fur is incased with the element and can be used for anything the user see's fit it works best for moves like rat hole where you burry underground and attack the enemy from underneath.

Note: Only summon can use
Note: Only usable 2 tims a battle
Note: Must have contract with the rats

~ Declined ~

Nezumi: rat flesh spikes
Rank: B
Chakra: 50
Damage 50
Description: Rat spikes made of rat flesh attack the enemy. Off any rat or rat flesh you can see.

Note: Only works on rat flesh jutsu's or rats themselves
Note: Must have contract with the rats

~ Explain better ~

JNezumi: rat wave
Rank: A
Chakra: 50
Damage: NA
Discription: A huge wave of rats used to flood the field of rats and cover the enemy.

~ Explain effects ~
 
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Summoning: Elemental Spirits
Rank: S
Range: Shart-long-mid
Type: supplementry
Chakra Cost;40
Damage: N/a
Description: To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Then a elemental spirit of the user choise will appear. All the spirits are 10m long and can use their element up to A-rank. All of the spirits have differant personalaties: Fire spirit: Aggresive and mean, Water spirit: Calm and peacefull, Wind spirit: loyal and faitfull, Lightning spirit: Sneaky and tricky, Earth spirit: cunning and battle-loving. The elements are all trained in the ninja fighting art and all have very good marcial arts skills. Once per battle they can disperse into their element(wind spirit will turn diperse into air, water into water, earth into rubble, fire into fire and lightning into thunder). THey must stay dispersed(vanished) for 2 turns. Also the spirits fallow the same elemental weakness strenght cycle as the normal elements. Example: wind element is strong against lightning but weak against fire
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~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
 
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(Tsukene Oukoku)-Root Kingdom
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost:80
Damage: N/A
Description: The user puts in a large amount of chakra into your hands. Then the user of this jutsu slams his or hers hand on the ground. Then their chakra infuses with the roots in the ground. Now the user is able to control all the roots in the ground in a very wide range.The user then shoots roots out of the ground to make a long range dome over head. The user has control of every root under ground in a long range radius of 10,000 Meters.The user can bind the opponent in the roots but i won't cause any damage to them.
~ No root related jutsus can be done next turn
~ Only members of Zetsu's Clan Can use this jutsu
~ The user has to give of a steady flow of chakra to keep the jutsu active.

~ Hmm...Approved ~

(Tsukene Parusa)-Root Pulsar
Rank:S
Type: Supplentary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: the user again fouses a largge amount of chakra into their hand, the user them puts his or hers hand on the ground. Their Chakra surges through the ground. the user then can sense the move ments and where abouts of he opponent unless they are using a jutsu to conceal themselves.
~This Jutsu can only be used by people in Zetsu's Clan
~This Jutsu can only be performed if you have the Root Kingdom Jutsu Active.

~ Declined ~

(Tsukene Nenshou Kangoku)- Root Combustion Prison
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description:The User traps the opponent in a prison made of rootes and vines which have explosive tags in them. the user make a hand sign that causes the tags inside to explode and make the prison com-bust.
~Member's of Zestu's clan can only use this jutsu.

~ Declined ~
 
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Summon: Granda, Three Headed Chimera (kuchiose: Granda kimera mihitsu)

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 45
Damage: 0
Description: After The user does some handseals, and with his blood in his palm he summons a huge Chimera with three-heads by slaming it over an object, Each head things for it self and they all read each others minds, The first head is a Calf and known with its wisdom, and second is jaguar's head and the Head in the middle which is considered the Leader is a Dark Dragonna, The beast's Nature element is Fire element, they are in the size of Gamabunta they have two huge wings that can make it fly very high in the sky and with great speed, there back legs are calf like which makes its jump in high speed and its front legs are jaguar like but more thicker but that doesn't slow it at all, In fact its as powerful ad the jaguar's, there skin is thick enough to be as powerful as an iron armor, and it also have a dragon's tail, fears draws into there enemy deeply when it craws.
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-15 chakra each turn its summoned
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can't stay on the field for more then 3 turns and
-This summon is owned by TCS.
-Must have signed the contract to be able to summon this


Summon: Slavron & Norvals, The Assassination Chimera (kuchiose: Slavron & Norvals kimera kison )

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 45
Damage: 0
Description: Lion-like-chimera with wings and they have a long snake tail and three heads, Its ride-able and its very fast there skin is as hard as an iron armor and they don't feel it, It usually hides its dragon and calf heads inside it to increase its speed, It has two powerful claws, Its considered an S rank not just for power but for its speed which can only be detected by special techniques such as Sharingan and dogs smell sense, and its able to use wind element and its in the size of three normal lions, and like all the chimeras there minds are connected.

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-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can stay for 5 turns only and it absorb 10 chakra points each turn
-This summon is owned by TCS

am dropping the white tiger summon

~ Umm...WTF, dude, you edited it AFTER I had said Declined. Don't you know you just have to resubmit it, and that you cannot edit after a mod already has ? O_O Sorry, but I'm banning you from this thread for a week -i.e. - until 8th June you cannot submit any customs. ~
Summon: Granda, Three Headed Chimera (kuchiose: Granda kimera mihitsu)

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 45
Damage: 0
Description: After The user does some handseals, and with his blood in his palm he summons a huge Chimera with three-heads by slamming it over an object, Each head things for it own and they all read each others minds, The first head is a Calf and known with its wisdom, and second is jaguar's head and the Head in the middle which is considered the Leader is a Dark Dragon, The beast's Nature element is Fire element, they are in the size of Gamabunta, they have two huge wings that can make it fly very high in the sky and with great speed, there back legs are calf like which makes its jump in high speed and its front legs are jaguar like but more thicker but that doesn't slow it at all, In fact its as powerful the jaguar's, there skin is thick enough to be as powerful as an iron armor, and it also have a dragon's tail, fears draws into there enemy deeply when it craws.

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-30 chakra each turn its summoned
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can't stay on the field for more then 3 turns
-This summon is owned by TCS.

Summon: Slavron The Assassination Chimera (kuchiose: Slavron kimera kison )

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 45
Damage: 0
Description:a Lion-like-chimera with wings he has a long snake tail and three heads, Its ride-able and its very fast there skin is as hard as an iron armor, It usually hides its dragon and calf heads inside it to increase its speed, It has two powerful claws, Its considered an S rank not just for power but for its speed which can only be detected by special techniques such as Sharingan, and its able to use wind element and its in the size of three normal lions, and like all the chimeras their minds are connected.

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-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can stay for 5 turns only and it absorb 20 chakra points each turn
-This summon is owned by TCS
-Can't stay for more then 3 turns
-must have signed the contract to be able to summon this

~ Both Declined. Chimeras ? Seriously ? No resubmit. ~

(kuchiose buki: Van de graff) Weapon Summon: Van de graff

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/offensive
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 100
Damage: 170
Description: The user do some handseals then slap his palm on the ground, then two huge vn de graffs appears from the underground while generating a huge electrifying thunder storm fields with the materials around it, including everything by moving belt to accumulate very high electrostatically stable voltages on a hollow metal globe on the top of the stand, each can be summoned anywhere within the range, and after seconds of distraction the two van de graffs will make each other to be blowen away since they are both reducing the same kind of potentials resulting destroying them.

can only be summoned once per battle.
the user could not use any other jutsu in the same turn
the user could not use any A rank or higher lightening jutsu in the next 3 turns
in the next two turns,the user can not use more then two jutsus.

~ Bad description ~

Water style: Water Bottle Hands (Suiton: suibinkiba )

rank:S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user charges the battle of water that he has with a huge amount of his water chakra making expands in high speed of the battle in the shape of two hands on his left and right under his arms, those big hands can be used to attack he enemy and/or capture him or making an water barrier around the user and close range objects or in taijutsus, when this jutsu is in use the weight doesn't count over the user's weight meaning that it doesn't slow him.

~can only be used twice per turn.
~can stay for two turns only
~The user losses 20 chakra points for each turn they keep this jutsu on.
~owned by TCS.

~ A bottle of water ? O_O Expands into two giant hands ? No ~

Water bottle Hurrican wave (suiton: suibinnami)

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/offensive
Range: Short/Mid/long
Chakra: 45
Damage: 80 (+15 if a wind jutsu was used the same time)
Description: the user charges a big amount of water chakra into a water bottle making the water inside expands extremely fast and with concentrating his chakra, he makes it expand to cover a huge path in a water wave-like hurrican that eats up any fire it finds within its path, if it hits the opponent, it move him crazily and knock him unconscious.

~can only be used twice
~the user can't use any A rank or higher rank water jutsu this turn or the next one
~if it was followed with a wind jutsu which makes it expands and increase its fast then the damages will increase by 15 points.
~owned by TCS

~ Declined ~


~If you want to edit anything please do and please give reasons for declining any or even bold the parts that you dislike, this is just to help to know what should i do exactly no other.~
 
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(Katon:Tekken)-Fire release:Iron Fist
Type:Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will concentrated his fire chakra to engulfs his fist in flames to punch his opponent

(Katon:Yokugeki)-Fire release:Wing Attack
Type: Attack
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user jumps into the air, and the ignites two streams of fire from his hands, then swings the streams of flames at his opponent.

~ Both Declined. Unimaginative half-rips from existing techniques. I understand you like Natsu, but none of his techniques are unique enough to be made into a Naruto context. ~
 
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( Mei buki ) Dark Weapon

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Description: The user take out Dark Weapon and start putting wind on it the user that is using Dark Weapon doesn't need to do any seals to put wind on the katana just focus his wind chakra on it with will take less then a minute when the katana already has the wind
the user that is using Dark Weapon can put the opponent in danger because when the sword is activate with the wind chakra it gives the user that is using Dark Weapon speed and it could move almost like the 2nd Gate. The Dark Weapon has an special power that when the sword strikes the opponent is almost comparable to the 3rd gate because it gains speed for each strikes the user make.

Note - -Pain- is the only one that can use Dark Weapon
Note - When the sword is activate it can only last six turns
Note - No B Rank and above while Dark Weapon is in play

Dark Weapon looks like this:

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~ Declined. Do not resubmit ~
 
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Illusionary Technique: Chimera (Genjutsu: Kimera)
Rank:A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 60
Damage: 0
Description: The user will look onto the opponent's eyes, disrupting their chakra. The wave of disrupted chakra will then make the opponent see a representation of hs fear, incarnated in a chimera. The chimera can take up 3 A-rank hits 2 S-rank hits or 1 forbidden hits, the opponent must kill the chimera to destroy the illusion.
Notes: The fight occurs inside the opponent's head, therefore, the jutsus used to kill the chimera do not consume chakra but the jutsus usable per turn.
Notes:May only be done once per battle.
Notes: The chimera may defend itself by using either earth, winf or fire elements, but it'll consume the jutsus usable per turn of the user.
Notes: Automatically after usage the user may not use genjutsu for the next four turns and his turn ends.
Notes: self inflicted pain may not break the Illusion.

~ Declined. Similar technique exists ~
 
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Nezumi: rat flesh spikes
Rank: B
Chakra: 50
Damage 50
Description: Rat spikes made of rat flesh, attack the enemy. It can be used off any rat or rat flesh you can see. sort of like earth spikes but with rat flesh instead a basic attack made by the ancients to save their country. Spikes extend maximum one meter from source of flesh.

Note: Only works on rat flesh jutsu's or rats themselves
Note: Must have contract with the rats
Note: Must have one turn gap atleast between each use

~ Approved, I edited parts ~

Nezumi: rat wave
Rank: A
Chakra: 50
Damage: NA
Discription: A huge wave of rats used to flood the field of rats and cover the enemy. This helps detect where the enemy is incase of a blinding jutsu or anything that may hamper my vision.
Note: Can be used only twice per battle
Note: Each time used, rats stay on battlefield for two turns before they automatically disappear

~ Approved, I edited parts ~

I re-explained the 2 as u requested
 
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Lightning Release : Godly Fang over Fang (Raiton : Shinjinbukai Gatsuga)
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user channels his lightning chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lightning which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lightning after which the user rotates at a fast speed and as he rotates the lightning hound starts rotating too. An successful attack will leave the foe paralysed

(Can be thought only by Kakashi)
(Can be used twice per battle)
(The user is damaged therefor he needs to recover 2 rounds - Cant be used in the next 2 rounds)


I hardly think this justu will be approved but it worths trying

Katon : Entei (Fire Release : Flame Emperor)
Rank: A-S
Type:Offense
Range:Mid/Long
Chakra:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user gathers huge amount of fire chakra in his dominant hand and when he releases it the chakra forms a overwhelming-sized fire ball in his hand and fires it towards the enemy.

(Can be used once per battle)
(No fire justu can be used for the next round)

~ Both Declined, do not resubmit ~
 
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(Esukēpu no Kelen no Tanken) - Kelen's Dagger of Escape
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Chakra: 30 (per usage)
Damage: 60
Range: Short
Description: The fabled dagger used by Kelen, the fastest assassin ever to walk the world. Although most people thought that it allows teleportation to the user the truth was very far from that. There is special scroll inside the handle which activates once user imbues his chakra into it. Scroll allows the usage of (Shunshin no Jutsu) - Body Flicker Technique without any handseals.
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*note- if Body Flicker is used it is not counted as jutsu

(Katon: Mizu Jōhatsu) - Water Vaporization
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User gathers fire chakra into his hands and claps thus sending strong heat wave which is able to vaporize water. For example, it can be used to dry wet sand.
*note- cannot be used to weaken any water, rain or ice jutsu
*note- can be only taught by Kaziname

~ Both declined, do not resubmit ~
 
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[Frosmourn Gigei : Amatsu Torune-dos | Frostmourn Arts : Heavenly Tornadoes]
Rank : S
Type : Offensive/Deffensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
The user will infuse chakra into the Frostmourn and stab it into a water source, once done, multiple small tornadoes of water will rise up from the water source around the user and then will maintain the same position around him no matter where the user runs, as long as he stays in the water source, the tornadoes can be sent off in multiple ways. A direct hit from one of the small tornadoes can severely injure the person that was hit.
- 5 tornadoes form
- The tornadoes last 3 turns
- When the tornadoes are made, the user can use only 2 jutsu per battle.

[ Seisoken jaianto | Stratosphere Giant ]
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
" This technique put an end to evil's reign. With a foot. "
After performing a string of eight handseals, the user will release a wave of wind chakra. The air above the opponent, covering fifty feet around him, will suddenly compress downwards,crushing the opponent. It leaves a crater like a Giant's foot when the technique is done. It is large enough to crush summonings.
[ May be cast only once per battle ]
[ No Fuuton techniques for two turns after this jutsu is used, excluding the current turn ]
[ Co-created by Emperor ]
[ Before anyone else can be taught this technique, they must have the permission of both Benazz and Emperor ]
 
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(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Gorusu ) - Summoning jutsu -Gorusu

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Gorusu.Gorusu is King Gorukus younger brother.Gorusu has metal armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him.Gorusu has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.When gorusu was a child he always tryed to be better than his older brother.Since his chakra affinity is water he can use it up to S-rank.Gorusu is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.5 meters tall.

Note:Can use Water up to S rank
Note:Can only be summoned 1 time per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Raikan ) - Summoning jutsu - Raikan

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Raikan.Raikan has strong arms that can do siriose damage to poeple.But since he was a child he always was better in ninjutsu.That is why he can use lightning up to A-rank in such young years.Raikans chakra affinity is lightning.Raikan is a medium sized gorilla that is 2 meters tall.

Note: Raikan can use lightning jutsus up to A-rank
Note: Can only be summuned twice per battle
Note:Cant be summuned on the next 2 turns
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11


(Kuchiyose no jutsu-buke no Shamash ) - Summoning jutsu - Shamash the samurai

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Shamash.Shamash is a samurai that has special metal armour around his body and non chakra type attacks and all types of projectiles wont affect him.Shamash has big,long and strong arms that he uses to make strong slashes with his big katana sword.When Shamash was a child he always wanted to be a samurai,maybe this is because once when ninjas attacked there holy jungle on top of a mountain,a Gorilla swordsman saved him from a ninja that was aiming to kill him.Since his chakra affinity is earth he can use it up to S-rank.Shamash is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.7 meters tall.
*Can only be used 1 time per battle.
*Can use earth up to S-rank
*Can use sword techniqs
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

Okey Emp,I talked to nero and he said these are fine

~ It has come to my notice that a gorilla summoning contract exists already. So this is now declined ~
excuse me.First I wait 2.5 weeks for the contract to get appoved.Than I waited a month for my summones to get approved.And after all this time you now say I cant.Fine I will change it

Summoning Animal: Silver Gorillas
Scroll Owner: I am
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Goro
(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Goro ) - Summoning jutsu -Goro

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon one of the silver gorillas taijutsu specialists Goro.Goro has metal armour around his body and non chakra projectailes attack wont affect him.Goro has big,long and strong arms that can break a human in half.Goro cant use ninjutsu but can use strong taijutsu.Goro is 2.2 meters tall

*can use taijutsu moves up to A-rank
*Can only be used for 6 turns
*can be sommuned 2 times per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Gorusu ) - Summoning jutsu -Gorusu

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Gorusu.Gorusu is King Gorukus younger brother.Gorusu has metal armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him.Gorusu has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.When gorusu was a child he always tryed to be better than his older brother.Since his chakra affinity is water he can use it up to S-rank.Gorusu is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.5 meters tall.

Note:Can use Water up to S rank
Note:Can only be summoned 1 time per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Raikan ) - Summoning jutsu - Raikan

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Raikan.Raikan has strong arms that can do siriose damage to poeple.But since he was a child he always was better in ninjutsu.That is why he can use lightning up to A-rank in such young years.Raikans chakra affinity is lightning.Raikan is a medium sized gorilla that is 2 meters tall.

Note: Raikan can use lightning jutsus up to A-rank
Note: Can only be summuned twice per battle
Note:Cant be summuned on the next 2 turns
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11


(Kuchiyose no jutsu-buke no Shamash ) - Summoning jutsu - Shamash the samurai

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Shamash.Shamash is a samurai that has special metal armour around his body and non chakra type attacks and all types of projectiles wont affect him.Shamash has big,long and strong arms that he uses to make strong slashes with his big katana sword.When Shamash was a child he always wanted to be a samurai,maybe this is because once when ninjas attacked there holy jungle on top of a mountain,a Gorilla swordsman saved him from a ninja that was aiming to kill him.Since his chakra affinity is earth he can use it up to S-rank.Shamash is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.7 meters tall.
*Can only be used 1 time per battle.
*Can use earth up to S-rank
*Can use sword techniqs
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

~ SILVER Gorillas are not considered a separate contract. Make them chimpanzees or baboons or rhesus monkeys or sthg ~
 
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(X- kaunta )-X-Counter
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: As the opponent uses a fire jutsus on the use While the user has his X-Gloves on, he will hold both hands out forming a diamond shape with both his hands, Once the fire makes contact with the gloves the user will absorb the whole fire attack once absorb the next time the user uses a fire attack that fire will have its normal damage plus the damage of the opponent?s attack.
Note: This can be used twice in a battle.
Note: Only work on S rank fire and down.
Note:Once used the user must wait 3 turns before using again and it will only take half the damage the second time.
Note: Must have gloves on

(X- bakufuu )-X-Blast
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage:40
Description: The user will fire off two blast of fire from each of his hands while the X-Gloves are on.
Note: Can be used 4 times in battle.
Note: Must have X-gloves on.

(X- supea)-X-Spear
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will focus Chakra in to the X-Gloves, then the user will smash both hands together then he will slowly open them while opening his hands there will be a small flame in between his hands as he spread his hands apart the flame will start to get bigger and longer once the flame is be enough it will have the shape of a spear then the user will grab the spear with one hand once done the user will be able to throw the spear once the spear has been thrown it will fly at very high speeds, then once the spear make contact with the target or anything it will cause it to explode causing a blast of 10 yards' radius leaving a small crater
Note: Can be used once in battle.
Note: If attack happens in short range the user will be caught in the blast too.
Note: user cannot perform Fire element next turn

Custom Weapon: (waga sukai ringu) Mare sky ring
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: N/A(Doubles gloves power)
Description: The Mare Sky ring is one of the six strongest rings in the world. After the user has equipped himself with the X-Glovers he can then active the Mare sky ring .When the user infuses the rings with chakra the ring will then fusion with the gloves doubling the gloves power. So now if the user was to do battle with a fire jutsu of the same rank the X-gloves would easily overpower the other jutsus. Water jutsus used against fire jutsus with the ring on will become least effected, meaning that if the user uses a fire jutsu a rank higher than a water jutsu the fire should still beat it but if they are the same rank they will both cancel out.
notes:
The rings can only stay fusion with the X-gloves for 3 turns
Only can be used with X-gloves
Once the three turns are up the X-gloves will be unable to use any fire jutsu for 1 turns
Can only be used Once fight
Only can but used by Mato~kun

~ Leaving for Roku or Rag ~

I submit these jutsus to weeks ago and they still havent been check just thought I would post a reminder
 

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excuse me.First I wait 2.5 weeks for the contract to get appoved.Than I waited a month for my summones to get approved.And after all this time you now say I cant.Fine I will change it

Summoning Animal: Silver Gorillas
Scroll Owner: I am
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the gorillas - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Goro
(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Goro ) - Summoning jutsu -Goro

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon one of the silver gorillas taijutsu specialists Goro.Goro has metal armour around his body and non chakra projectailes attack wont affect him.Goro has big,long and strong arms that can break a human in half.Goro cant use ninjutsu but can use strong taijutsu.Goro is 2.2 meters tall

*can use taijutsu moves up to A-rank
*Can only be used for 6 turns
*can be sommuned 2 times per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Gorusu ) - Summoning jutsu -Gorusu

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Gorusu.Gorusu is King Gorukus younger brother.Gorusu has metal armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him.Gorusu has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.When gorusu was a child he always tryed to be better than his older brother.Since his chakra affinity is water he can use it up to S-rank.Gorusu is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.5 meters tall.

Note:Can use Water up to S rank
Note:Can only be summoned 1 time per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Raikan ) - Summoning jutsu - Raikan

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Raikan.Raikan has strong arms that can do siriose damage to poeple.But since he was a child he always was better in ninjutsu.That is why he can use lightning up to A-rank in such young years.Raikans chakra affinity is lightning.Raikan is a medium sized gorilla that is 2 meters tall.

Note: Raikan can use lightning jutsus up to A-rank
Note: Can only be summuned twice per battle
Note:Cant be summuned on the next 2 turns
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11


(Kuchiyose no jutsu-buke no Shamash ) - Summoning jutsu - Shamash the samurai

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Shamash.Shamash is a samurai that has special metal armour around his body and non chakra type attacks and all types of projectiles wont affect him.Shamash has big,long and strong arms that he uses to make strong slashes with his big katana sword.When Shamash was a child he always wanted to be a samurai,maybe this is because once when ninjas attacked there holy jungle on top of a mountain,a Gorilla swordsman saved him from a ninja that was aiming to kill him.Since his chakra affinity is earth he can use it up to S-rank.Shamash is a almost a full grown gorilla that is 2.7 meters tall.
*Can only be used 1 time per battle.
*Can use earth up to S-rank
*Can use sword techniqs
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

~ SILVER Gorillas are not considered a separate contract. Make them chimpanzees or baboons or rhesus monkeys or sthg ~
Summoning Animal: Chimpanzees
Scroll Owner: I am
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: King of the chimpanzees - Goruku
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Goro
(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Goro ) - Summoning jutsu -Goro

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon one of the chimpanzee best taijutsu specialists Goro.Goro has metal armour around his body and non chakra projectailes attack wont affect him.Goro has big,long and strong arms that can break a human in half.Goro cant use ninjutsu but can use strong taijutsu.Goro is 2.2 meters tall

*can use taijutsu moves up to A-rank
*Can only be used for 6 turns
*can be sommuned 2 times per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Gorusu ) - Summoning jutsu -Gorusu

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Gorusu.Gorusu is King Gorukus younger brother.Gorusu has metal armour around his body and c rank attacks and below wont affect him.Gorusu has big,long and strong arms that can break a humans neck if the enemy takes a direct hit.When gorusu was a child he always tryed to be better than his older brother.Since his chakra affinity is water he can use it up to S-rank.Gorusu is a almost a full grown chimpanzee that is 2.5 meters tall.

Note:Can use Water up to S rank
Note:Can only be summoned 1 time per battle
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11

(Kuchiyose no jutsu-Raikan ) - Summoning jutsu - Raikan

Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description: After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Raikan.Raikan has strong arms that can do siriose damage to poeple.But since he was a child he always was better in ninjutsu.That is why he can use lightning up to A-rank in such young years.Raikans chakra affinity is lightning.Raikan is a medium sized chimpanzee that is 2 meters tall.

Note: Raikan can use lightning jutsus up to A-rank
Note: Can only be summuned twice per battle
Note:Cant be summuned on the next 2 turns
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11


(Kuchiyose no jutsu-buke no Shamash ) - Summoning jutsu - Shamash the samurai

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After biting there thumb and wiping it on a tatoo on there arm, the user will summon Shamash.Shamash is a samurai that has special metal armour around his body and non chakra type attacks and all types of projectiles wont affect him.Shamash has big,long and strong arms that he uses to make strong slashes with his big katana sword.When Shamash was a child he always wanted to be a samurai,maybe this is because once when ninjas attacked there holy jungle on top of a mountain,a chimpanzee swordsman saved him from a ninja that was aiming to kill him.Since his chakra affinity is earth he can use it up to S-rank.Shamash is a almost a full grown chimpanzee that is 2.7 meters tall.
*Can only be used 1 time per battle.
*Can use earth up to S-rank
*Can use sword techniqs
Note:can only be taught by yashurik11
~Pending~ Need to see if there is already a chimp contract, plus remove the silver part. If you want them to be silver, state it in the summons description
 
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Lightning: Aqua boost (raiton: suiton 高める)
Rank: S
Type: supplementry
Range:short
Chakra cost:40
Damage:0(+100 to the water jutsu it effects)
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra in his right hand and touches any water jutsu with hiss right hand. The water jutsu that the user has touched becomes electrofied and deals a lot more damage also it stuns the opponant for 1 turn.
*cant use any lightning jutsu the same turn
*can only be used to power up other water jutsu and has no effect on its own
*can only be used 2 times per battle
*the water jutsu that this attack powers up loseses its weakness to earth because the lightning in the water can beat earth jutsus

~Declined~ 100 damage to the water jutsu? I don't think so
Water-Wind Whirlpool(suiton-fuuton uzumaki)
Rank: S
Type: supplementry
Range: short and mid range of the opponant so long range if the user doesnt wanna be effected
Chakra cost:40
Damage: 80
Description: The user spew a strong wind tornado from his mouth on to any water surface. Then a whirlpool forms on the water then the user uses his water chakra to harden the water in the whirlpool so thee water rips who ever is in the whirlpool into shreds.
*must be on a large water source(lake, river ect.)
*can only be used once
*the user cant use any water or wind jutsu fallowing 2 turns
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

edited the other 2 made them smaller and weaker also added restrictions.

Summoning Elephants:Shamus (kuchiose zou: Shamus)
RAnk: S-rank
RAnge:short-long
Type: supplementry
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:0
Description: Shamus is the leader and king of all elephants. He is 10m long and weighs 7 tons. He carry a blade that is made out of elephant tusks. hee has 4 tusks instead of 4 and he can walk on 2 feet. He is calm and inteligent. HE has stuby feet and can only run at 5km/h. He can use water jutsu up to and icluding A-rank. Also like all normal elephants he has a very thick skin and can withstand most weak bullets.
*can only be summoned once per battle
* if another elephant is summoned he can not be summoned
*can only stay 5 rounds
*Cannot be summoned on a desert
*No other elephant can be summoned as long as he is summoned

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Yuukokuryuu
(Custom Weapon: Valor of the Black Dragon)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: N/A (-10 per turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The time and place of this blades creation have been lost to the winds of time. Its maker is said to have slain the black dragon Kokuryuu himself and then used its scales to create a powerful weapon. He removed the scales of the dragon and then molded them together into a large broadsword. He removed the eye of the dragon and placed it into the hilt of the weapon. The scales of the black dragon are extremely light weight yet durable to the point that the sword is indestructible. The true power of the sword lies in the eye's ability to draw in and amplify large quantities of the wielder's chakra which is then used to attack the opponent. The act of the eye consuming the chakra isn't visible to the opponent but the eye will begin to slowly open in relation to its chakra levels. Every turn the sword is being wielded it leeches 10 chakra from the user. This chakra is then used to create devastating attacks unique to the sword. When using abilities through the sword the user can use only the chakra that is stored in the eye. The sword can hold a maximum of 100 chakra at any one time and when it reaches these levels the eye glows a bright orange.
  • Can only draw in the user's chakra.
  • Can only be wielded by one person at a time, until that person is killed the sword cannot be wielded by anyone else.
  • Techniques created using its ability must be submitted as separate abilities.
  • The sword is indestructible.
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~Declined~ Do no resubmit
 
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[Kuuhaku] ♦ Vacuum ♦
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra Cost: 75
Damage Points: N/A [Death, if not out of it after two turns.]
Description: One of the most difficult Wind jutsu's to use, its difficulty of usage is matched only by the difficulty it takes to learn it. To use this jutsu, one must accept that elemental nature does not necessary mean what most think it does, and that form, function and purpose are completely different to one and another. Channeling chraka through the air itself, one must learn how to shape the very currents, and understand the symbolic nature of their element, as well as its physical parts.

Once the chraka is focused into the area you wish to affect, it must all be 'pulled', in a special matter, that literally grabs all the air in that area, leaving only a void. Since there isn't any air or similar things inside the void, anyone inside it can't breathe and are slowed down a bit, giving them a short while to leave the affected area before falling unconscious. They have two turns after that for their body to be removed, before they die. In addition to this, no jutsu or ability based off lightning can be used within the Vacuum, as there is simply no Ions to be worked with, nor can this jutsu be absorbed in any way shape or form, due to the nature of it. However, due to the control needed to prevent air from rushing back in, the user can't use any other jutsu while this is active. Also Due to the nature of this jutsu, nothing stops them from simply walking through the 'vacuums edge' and breathing again, but they are slowed and it would be hard to do so, so a jutsu would be needed to escape somehow. The radius of this jutsu can be manipulated by focusing more.
~Wind element has to be fully mastered.
~No wind element the next turn, after using this.
~The victim can't breath and is slowed down, meaning it's hard to escape.
~Declined~ OP OP OP
 
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• Mei buki • Dark Weapon •

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Description: The user take out Dark Weapon and will start putting chakra on the sword witch will take less then a minute and it doesn't need any seals for that your focus your chakra on it when the katana have the chakra already it will make the user that is using Dark Weapon it will make the user twice faster then it's normal speed. When the katana strikes the opponent it have a special abilities that each strike that the user that the user hit the opponent it's an about of speed of the 1st gate only for the strikes. The hilt of the sword is where all the power comes.

Dark Weapon looks like this:

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Note: The katana can last 12 rounds
Note: Only -Pain- is the only one to use the katana

-Emperor is the only one that may check this-
-Emperor please if theres any mistake fix it. Thank you-

~Declined~ OP, BTW you can't reserve a CJ for a particular mod to check. It doesn't work like that.
 
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((Rai/Fu/Ka/Sui/Do)ton: Pa-ji)-(Water/Wind/Fire/Earth/Lightning) style: Purge
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Rank:E-S(varies depending on the effect you want)
Range: Short(oneself)
Chakra Cost: Varies from rank (5-40)
Damage Points:0(0 if used e-rank, -5 to -20 ranks D-S respectively)
Description: The user will channelize as varying amount of elemental chakra in his chakra network. In a single blow, he/She'll release it creating a cloak of the respective element that will dispers from the body the seconds it done. Mainly used defensively
Notes: May only be done twice per battle per element.
Notes: The use of this jutsu injures the user with varying damage.
Notes: When used you spend a lot fo the chosen element chakra, limiting you moves in the following way:
-If used E-ranked version: No effect.
-If used D-ranked version: No S-rank or higher next turn.
-If used C-ranked version: No A-rank or higher next turn.
-If used B-ranked version: No B-rank or higher next turn.
-If used A-ranked version: No C-rank or higher next turn.
-If used S-ranked version: No D-rank or higher next turn.
~Declined~ Just no
 
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