[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninpou: Rokugechi) - Ninja Art: Six Orders

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique was developed with the objective to manipulate the opponent. The user will write a small kanji of one of the 6 words on the air or on any solid surface and it will go towards the opponent. Once the chosen kanji is in contact with the opponent, it will take the respective effect on him. The disadvantage of this jutsu is that if the target goes further than medium range, the effect will wear off immediately.
縛る(bind). Binds the target in place keeping him from moving.
眠る(sleep). Puts the target asleep.
痛み(pain). Provokes extreme pain on the target. Even a trained ninja to resist torture won't be able to stand it and will fall on the ground, open for any attack.
盲(blindness). Affects the target's vision, making him go blind
虞(fear). The target will loose courage and will feel fear towards his opponent. Because of that he won't be able to defend himself properly and instead will run and scream in panic.
音(sound). Will either make the target go deaf or will make him hear voices which will disturb him, preventing him to focus on battle

*Kanjis can't move in water
*Usable three times per battle
*Each kanji can't be used more than once per battle and only lasts three turns
*Must have a turn of interval between usage

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Chika Bakuyaku Wana) - Underground Explosive Trap

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Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will infuse multiple explosive tags with his chakra and without the opponent see (unless he has byakugan), the tags will crow through the user's legs until they reach the ground. After that, the seals will insert themselves underground and will create an underground network of explosive tags. With a simple hand seal, the user can make all those tags to explode, creating a large explosion which will surprise the opponent.
Since the user cannot carry an indefinite supply of exploding tags, he can either do one explosion covering upto medium range from him or two explosions covering short range from him

~ Approved ~

 

[Eddy-kun..]

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(Hakke, Taishoku Shouheki) : Chakra Disrupting Barrier
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40 ( + 10 each turn the barrier is active)
Damage Points:
Description:A unique technique developed by Hyuuga Eddy and based upon the most basic of principles of Jyuuken which state that chakras cancel each other out, and expanding upon his Senjigusuri technique. Eddy will begin emitting a steady but subtle release of chakre from his entire body, saturating a relatively small area around him (up to mid range outward from his body) with it. This chakra, not enough to cancel out an opponent’s, is intended rather to interfere with and disrupt an opponent’s chakra as long as they spend within this small area. Activated jutsus such as for example, a cloak of lightning surrounding an opponent, will become disrupted and fall apart, opponent's chakra will seem to run amuck leaving them with difficulties in molding it, their bodies will begin reacting to their disrupted chakra flow causing them to feel a weakening, slowing and slight loss of balance, etc, nothing major, but enough to prove disadvantageous in close quarter and hand to hand combat. All an opponent has to do to free themselves from this effect is to step away from him and out of the affected zone, as long as they are not within it they will not be affected by it, this is very much intended for close range taijutsu combat. Unfortunately however, this Chakra is not visible to normal eyes, meaning a foe is unlikely to realize anything is happening until after they begin feeling the effects, and even then are unlikely to know what exactly is happening or where Eddy's chakra stops.
-Can only be used 1 times per battle.
- The "Chakra Disrupting Barrier" only last for 4 turns. ( + 10 each turn the barrier is active)
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

~ Approved ~

(Hyuuga Kaisoku Celerity): Hyuuga Chakra Control
Rank : S
Range : N/A
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage : ( Does 20 damage to user)
The user stimulates the production of certain chemicals in their body temporarily, increasing the speed of the chakra flow.Increasing there Chakra through the dilating of Tenketsus as well as controlling it’s flow and concentrating and focusing this Chakra boost into the user body, dramatically increasing the user levels of energy thus increasing there speeds to unnatural and inhuman levels. Obviously this kind of speed has many applications, from dodging with inhuman speeds, to attacking with strikes so fast they at best appear as little more than a blur that only allowing Sharingan users to react to it, to closing in on an opponent from a distance so as to enter striking range before they can react and retreat, the uses and advantages are innumerable. Finally not all benefits of this skill involve movement speed, another benefit this technique involves reflex and reaction speed instead. This technique is also used to enhance the efficiency of the user nervous system, speeding up his neural synapses, amplifying his already extraordinary reflexes dramatically, thus allowing the user to react near instantly. (The user Reaction speeds are on par with the Manga Raikage) However, this skill does have its drawbacks and limits as well.
-Can only be user twice per battle.
-Must wait one whole turn before using again.
- Cannot sustain this kind of speed for extended periods, only last for 3 turns.
-Overuse or exertion with this Jutsu can result in extreme physical fatigue and Muscle damage. ( Does 20 damage to user).
-During its duration, the user has two of their elements sealed off completely during it and the one turns following the end of this technique.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Think Rock Lee or Maito Gai when opening the gates). Minutes of intense and constant use will result in extreme Fatigue and cause Muscle and bone Damage requiring medical Attention.)

(In practical terms this jutsu can be considered to grant the same kind of speed boost and levels as the Raikage with his Lightning Armor. It terms of pros and cons it can be considered similar to opening the Gates (though obviously it grants no benefits to strength or endurance, or any other aspect for that matter, only speed) it has the same risks as opening the gates if over used to its maximum.)

 

[Black Reaper]

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Rokku Wa-mu (Rock Worm)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:There are two ways in which this jutsu can be used. The first is that the user slams both hands into the ground and releases Earth chakra. From under the opponent a huge solid rock worm rises up swallows the opponent whole. The opponent is badly injured while inside the worms mouth because the worms inside are razor Sharpe. And the second is where the worms swallows the user whole and then travels deep down into the earth, avoiding attacks of any sort (The user can manipulate the worms inside so it doesn't harm the them).

- Three Times Per Battle

~ Declined ~

Tekidan (Grenade)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user picks up a chunk of earth and manipulates it into a circular shape (like a grenade). He then throws it at the opponent and makes the chunk of rock explode sending razor sharp Earth shrapnel in every direction.

~ Declined ~

Ofu Heikou (Off Balance)
Rank:C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short/Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:0
Description:The user simply stomps the ground releasing earth chakra, this then rises a small amount of earth under one of the opponents feet. This puts the opponent off balance stopping them from performing jutsu. It can also knock the opponent over if they are running when this jutsu is used.

~ Declined, similar techique exists ~

Old

Ration Katana (Lightning Blade)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (+60 lightning wave)
Description This sword posse’s very powerful lightning abilities. The sword itself can cut through hard materials but when channelled with lighting its cutting power increases to the max allowing it to release powerful slicing lightning waves.

Note: Anything that comes into contact with it will be shocked.

New

Ration Katana (Lightning Blade)
Rank:S
Type:Attack/Defence
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (+80 lightning wave)
Description This sword posse’s very powerful lightning abilities. The sword itself can cut through hard materials but when channelled with lighting its cutting power increases to the max allowing it to release powerful slicing lightning waves. While the user holds Ration Katana, he is able to deflect/absorb lightning abilities of the same rank and lower.

Note: Anything that comes into contact with it will be shocked.

~ Declined ~

Genkaku: (Illusion Technique: Illusion)
Typeefence/Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:0
Description:This genjutsu effects the opponents mind by making them think that there actually carrying on battling etc. But in reality there just standing still.
Note: Twice per battle.

~ Declined ~

 

[Seblax]

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|bukikuchyose: Van De Graff| Weapon Summon: Van De graff

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 100
Damage Points: 170
Description: The user do the rat, tiger, calf and snake handseals then slap his palm on the ground making the summoning seal appear on the ground that transport a huge amount of chakra and lightening chakra underground toward two locations summoning two huge van de graffs from the underground while generating a huge electrification thunder storm fields with the matirials around it, including everything by moving belt to accumulate very high electrostatics stable voltages on a hollow metal globe on the top of the stand that is rising up, each can be summoned anywhere within the range, as the rise up they send huge amount of electricity that changes the whole terrain and after secands of distraction the two van de graffs will make each other to be blowen away since they are both reducing the same kind of potentials and buffs out of the field.

can only be summoned once per battle.
the user could not use any other jutsu in the same turn
the user could not use any A rank or higher lightening jutsu in the next 3 turns
in the next two turns,the user can not use more then two jutsus.

|bukikuchyose: Antidou| Weapon Summon: Anti Trunks

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:The user release the seal on the scroll of doom with doing the dragon and tiger handseals then slap it, summoning a devloped sRAW anti tank gun that is used to take down light and heavy armors, it orginally be used by detecting the enemy on the screen and holding down the fire bottom so that even if the opponenet moves it will catch him, The developed part is that the user must charges his wind chakra into the ammo to make it get more powerful and faster, making it unblockable, when it hits it destroy whatever it hits and damages to all the short range objects.

~ the user can only summon this weapon once.
~ the weapon can only shot one shot per turn using this jutsu as a filler of one used jutsu, meaning if the user shots another shot this jutsu take place in his turn.
~ The user can only shot 2 shots per battle
~ The user can't use any wind jutsu in the turn this jutsu is used.
~owned by Theos.

~ Both Declined, do not resubmit. And in re the second one, one more idiotic funny submission like this and you're getting infracted ~

(Doton: rokkudoragon kujo) Earth Release: Rocks Dragons Destruction

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 60 (If the attraction happens then 80)
Damage Points: 120 (If The attraction happens then 150)
Description:The user makes the some handseals, then concentrate and charge a huge amount of chakra into the ground, as he do so he forces his chakra to gather into 3 spots that is anywhere in the range and make them clash out as rocks gathered in the shape of dragons that attacks the opponent and able to swallow him and fly in the air then clash down as the user likes, and when the attack end with focusing more chakra the user is able to make the rocks atract to each other smashing the enemy inside, those dragons are also useable to block water attacks and defending the user.

~can only be used once per battle
~ the user charged chakra inside the dragon makes the enemy unable to use Earth Style: Underground Projection Fish Technique to flee through it.
~ The user trbiute 20 more chakra if he continue it with the attraction.
~ the user can't use any earth jutsu for the next 3 turns
~ The user can't use but one other jutsu in the turn he uses this jutsu.

~ Declined ~

( Gamakuchyose: Gamadora ) Toad Summoning: Gamadora

Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defense/supplimitry
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:the user mark the tatto on his hand with his other hand's blood then slap his tatto palm on the ground , and summons a huge toad that is pure black colored and has black eyes too that uses two fan as his weapon ad known as gamabunta's younger brother, he is a bit taller then gambunta and thiner he is able to make his mouth expand 5 times as it is to contain whatever the user needs, its hard to summon him by any toad summoner becuase he has a tattoo on his own that must be used summon him because he doesn't like to be used by othershis nature element is wind and he mastered it, his greatest power is his speed in moving, he is as fast as rock lee *without the gates* bacause of his light weight and big muscles.

~ Can only be summoned once
~ Can not stay for more then 4 turns because he hate to be used.
~ he absorb 10 chakra points for each turn he is on the field as a tax for summoning him.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

ice style: Forest of the Frozen screams ( Hyouton: mori touketsu himei

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 70 (+20 if there was no water over the ground)
Damage Points: 140
Descriptions:the user charges the water the he created before with his ice chakra through his water's chakra making it fill with the ice chakra, then makes the ground turn to ice that would stick the enemies legs to the ground, at that moment it rises randomly creating trees of ice from that slicing through the enemy’s body fast.

~This jutsus range depends on the range the water is covering *if water did cover the ground*
~The user can't use any other jutsu that turn
some trees grow underground making fleeing underground very hard.
~can only be used once per battle
~the user can't use ice jutsus for 3 turns
~can only be followed with ice expansion technique
~ all the Branches are are directed at the enemy

~ Okay, now I'm saying Do not resubmit ~

*For mods, this jutsu were submitted before but was considered oped without a sign of that i shouldn't resubmit it and i edited it*
Please edit any part that you want just to approve it, and please give reasons.

 

[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

kuchiose: polar bears (kyokusen kuma)
rank: A
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 30
damage: n/a
description: the user summons a polar bear. The bear can use all ice jutsu the user knows (i am making an ice bio soon), therefore he can also use all water and wind jutsu the user knows. The bear wears an armor that is harder than steel and lighter then a feather. Polar bears only require one hand sign for jutsu
~once per battle
~must have a contract with polar bears

~Declined~ Polar Bears are in possession by Goro

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Taijutsu: Yubi no eiga ) - Hand to hand combat: Finger flick

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Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A ( + 20 when hits )
Description: User puts his/her thumb over his/her middle finger. After that user concentrates mucles and aims for awhile user releases the thumb, releasing middle finger with massive strength, delivering a blow that's enough to make opponent bleed. Even though the bleed isn't anything near fatal the move can be combined with a item of somekind ( Rock or Coin .etc ) to create attack with the item that has incredible speed and is strong enough to make holes to wood and small rocks.
Note:
- Can be used four times per battle
- Can only be used once every two turns.

~ Declined ~

( Katon: Guǐhuǒ ) - Fire release: Will o' wisp

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Rank: D - C
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 10 - 15
Damage points: 20 - 30 ( the longer it's aimed the more chakra it costs and it hits less )
Description: User concentrates chakra into two of his/her fingers ( Middle and index finger ) for two seconds. Once that's done the user will snap his/her fingers inorder to create small fire that's size of fire from lighter but it burns at 450 degrees. The fire is almost harmless since it's hardly used on anything expect but detonation of bombs and lighting cigaretters when you don't have a lighter.
Note:
- Can be used twice per battle
- Can only be used once per every two turns

~ Umm...approved ? ~

( Doko no chikaku ni kuchiyose ) - Nowhere near summoning

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: User bites own thumb and repeats two first handseals of summoning jutsu while someone else is using summoning jutsu. Once that is done user will distrupt the flow of chakra from the summoner, causing the creature/weapon that opponent's about to summon to be summoned outside of the spot in different place. This jutsu can also be stored into scroll by having kanji written on it and once it's opened the user must stomp on the scroll or tap it with limb. This jutsu is mainly used to distrupt the appearing place of other's summoning(s) and relocate them. The width of the relocating is max 50 meters - 350 meters depending on size of the summoning ( like Gamabunta or Manda ) and user's rank.
Note:
- Can only be used twice
- Works max on one ninja at time
- Three turns interval between each usage
- User cannot have summon on field while using this jutsu.

~ Declined, nice idea but needs better explanation ~

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

kuchiose: polar bears (kyokusen kuma)
rank: A
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 30
damage: n/a
description: the user summons a polar bear. The bear can use all ice jutsu the user knows (i am making an ice bio soon), therefore he can also use all water and wind jutsu the user knows. The bear wears an armor that is harder than steel and lighter then a feather. Polar bears only require one hand sign for jutsu
~once per battle
~must have a contract with polar bears

Goro has the Bear contract, it includes Polar bears.

 

[BishamonSama]

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(Amenonuhoko)- Heveanly Jewelled Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 to summon, 10 to use special abilities
Damage: 80
Description: The Amenonuhoko is a large naginata (a Japanese spear) created by the primordial Shinto Gods. The Gods gave the naginata to Izanagi and Izanami to create the first land out of nothingness. The naginata itself has a long, razor-sharp blade that never dulls. Its shaft is made of unbreakable holy bamboo. Chakra of two types per battle can be channelled through the blade and shaft of the weapon, and the shaft can be extended and retracted at will in battle, much like the Third Hokage's Enma Staff.

Note: Can only be summoned once per battle
Note: User must maintain direct contact with the naginata at all times. If the naginata falls out of the user's possession, then the user will not be able to use its special abilities for the rest of the match.
Note: User cannot use water or wind jutsus above A-rank while holding the naginata.

~ Approved ~


This Amenonuhoko halberd will have no relation at all to any "Amenonuhoko Mode" jutsu. I have no plans to submit such a jutsu. This halberd is simply a custom weapon. Also, the mythology behind it is all true.

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[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Goro has the Bear contract, it includes Polar bears.

unless he stated that it involved all bears i don't see why that is fair

akiza has a white tiger contract does that mean it includes all tigers? kaito has a hawk contract does that mean it includes all birds?

 

[Daemon]

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(Genjutsu:Gyousei Keiyou Kansei Shouka)Illusion Technique:Venus Fly Trap Digestion

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Rank:Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range:Short/Mid/Long
Chakra cost:50
Damage points:90
Description: A Large Venus Fly trap swallows the opponent whole. The venus Fly trap Excretes an acid that digests the opponent like a fly.Since this is a genjutsu this isn't really happening but the opponent feels real pain as they are getting digested. After the opponent is fully digested, he or she is spitted out and re-eaten again.
Note:Only Zetsu and characters from Zetsu?s clan can use this.
Note:This jutsu lasts one turn
Note:no genjutsu for the nest 2 turns

~ Declined, similar technique exists ~

 

[Alucard]

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(Ninpou: Rokugechi) - Ninja Art: Six Orders

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique was developed with the objective to manipulate the opponent. The user will write a small kanji of one of the 6 words on the air or on any solid surface and it will go towards the opponent. Once the chosen kanji is in contact with the opponent, it will take the respective effect on him. The disadvantage of this jutsu is that if the target goes further than medium range, the effect will wear off immediately.
縛る(bind). Binds the target in place keeping him from moving.
眠る(sleep). Puts the target asleep.
痛み(pain). Provokes extreme pain on the target. Even a trained ninja to resist torture won't be able to stand it and will fall on the ground, open for any attack.
盲(blindness). Affects the target's vision, making him go blind
虞(fear). The target will loose courage and will feel fear towards his opponent. Because of that he won't be able to defend himself properly and instead will run and scream in panic.
音(sound). Will either make the target go deaf or will make him hear voices which will disturb him, preventing him to focus on battle

*Kanjis can't move in water
*Usable three times per battle
*Each kanji can't be used more than once per battle and only lasts three turns
*Must have a turn of interval between usage

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Chika Bakuyaku Wana) - Underground Explosive Trap

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Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will infuse multiple explosive tags with his chakra and without the opponent see (unless he has byakugan), the tags will crow through the user's legs until they reach the ground. After that, the seals will insert themselves underground and will create an underground network of explosive tags. With a simple hand seal, the user can make all those tags to explode, creating a large explosion which will surprise the opponent.
Since the user cannot carry an indefinite supply of exploding tags, he can either do one explosion covering upto medium range from him or two explosions covering short range from him

~ Approved ~

(Ninpou: Tara no Purotekutofuu) - Ninja Art: Protecting Seals of Tara

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will do the hand seals and from his body, purple glowing seals will start to glow. After that they will expand through the ground and cover a medium range area around the user. These seals can then be manipulated as ropes at distance to either attack the enemy or defend the user.
*Usable only twice per battle and lasts up to three turns
*User can leave the area with the seals, otherwise the jutsu will deactivate.

~ Nice idea, but make it using something else, maybe an element or pure chakra if you want ~

 

[-Mugen-]

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(Hyuuga fuukaku: youso hira) - Hyuuga style:elemental palm

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Because the Hyuuga clan has great chakra control, they can fuse there elemental chakra with there palms and combine it with the juukan style attack.Each element has its own affect.If the element is lightning it will stun the opponents organs and he will stop breathing.If its fire it will burn through a few milimiters and burn everything it touches.If its wind,the users palm will cut through the opponents body.If its earth it will break the opponents bones and if its water it will make the opponent dizzy.
*Can only be used twice
*The use recieves 20 damage and cant use juuken the same move this was moved.
*Can only be taught by Mugen sama

~ Declined, do not resubmit. Customs involving elemental variations of the Hyuuga Style will not be approved ~

 

[Nadare]

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(Katon: Hinote) - Fire Style: Ignite -

Rank:S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This justu is used to ignite wind techniques. The jutsu heats the wind projectile more than normal fire.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
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(Fuuton:Kyanonbo-ru) - Wind Style: Cannon Ball -

Rank:Forbbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user makes several handseals, and gathers a massive amount of chakra, creating a huge ball of wind in a already pre-made tube. Another handseal is made, and the ball is shot out with enourmous force. The power is so great that the tube is crushed after the ball is shot. Also, as the ball is shot, the runs on the tube are activated, adding more chakra to the ball.
*Note: Can only be used once.*

~ Declined ~
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(Doton:Tsuchi Kuda) - Earth Style: Earth Tube -

Rank:S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes several handseals, and a massive tube of earth appears in front of him. It looks like a gun tube, and it's directed towards the enemy. It's about 50x50 m large. Also, the inside walls of the tube are covered with ash. This is a mineral convertion from earth. Also, the outside of the walls is covered in signs, simbols and ancient runs.
*Note: Can only be used once, and only lasts for one shot, as so much power is released.*

~ Declined, no ash. Ash is NOT a mineral conversion from earth. And no symbols and runes and stuff. ~
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(Senjutsu:Seishitsu Karyou) - Sage Technique: Natural Chakra Overdose -

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is a highly advanced Senjutsu. It requires some time for the user to gather Natural chakra around him. The effect works exactly the opposite of other Senjutsu. Instead of gathering chakra inside, the user concentrates, and gathers natural chakra around him, and then after a series of handseals releases it through the area in high amounts. Everyone within Mid Range will be petrified. The petrification lasts only for one turn though, as the natural chakra they absorbed is not massive enough to turn them into stone statues completely.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle*

~ Declined ~
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(Gendo Gigai:Osoi Gen'an) - Illusionist Arts: Slow Motion Corruption -

Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Once the user has come to short range with the opponent, he makes one handseal, and releases chakra from his mouth, which flows through the nose and ears of the opponent, directly in his brains. Unlike other Illusions, which work with glares, etc, this works with a direct transfer of chakra in the opponents brains.
This chakra then enters the opponents mind & reflex cells, and corrupts their DNK. The effect of this Illusion Art, is that the opponent brains transfer data to the body slower, or at least this is what the opponent thinks. As every part of the body depends on the brains, this jutsu puts the opponent in slow motion. This way, even when entering the EIG, the opponent can move at maximum speed of an S-Class ninja.
Although, the chakra transfered is very dense, and leaves the user inable to use any other genjutsu or non-elemental ninjutsu.
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~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

And I request that the Sage Mode Jutsu, shown in the manga untill now, are created, and added to the jutsu list.

You don't need to "request", it's already been under construction for a month or so. Furthermore, if you want anything take it up with Kaito and stop posting it oon this thread like some sort of a prophet crying that the world will end

 

[Kaziname]

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(Suiton: Suitenhōfutsu)-Water Style: Liquid Memory
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short to Mid range
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu enables the user to control water and moisture much like Gaara controls his sand. It can be used to block most incoming attacks, bind or drown opponents, and shape the water into various attacks, allowing the user in conjunction with the Summoning Technique to allow water-based summonings to fight in areas that it normally need water to move around by either trapping the target in the same water or maneuvering the water to allow the summing to chase the target. It is able to extract and utilize groundwater, and as is very effective most areas, but useless in rocky areas.

Jutsu already exists in

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~ I said some time ago, and repeatedly before that, that canon jutsus should not be submitted here, and will not be tolerated. You are hereby banned from submitting customs into this thread for a week, i.e. until 28th June. Also I am infracting you ~

(Suiton: Aianmeiden)-Water Style: Iron Maiden
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User causes nearby water around the opponent/s to transform into spikes and stab him/them. Spikes are very sharp and cannot be stopped by any kind of armor but they are only as long as kunais so this jutsu is only usable if opponent/s is inside or standing on water.
*Note- can be only taught by Kaziname
*Note- Short range is considered as range between water and opponent, not as range between user and opponent

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

(Suiton:Mizu Sheru)-Water Style: Water Shell
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 5
Description: Water that covers and encases the enemy in from head to toe. If rain is falling and opponent is standing on/near water he is encased in instant.
*note- can be only thaught by Kaziname

~ Approved ~

Here is already approved version:

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(Suiton:Mizu Sheru)-Water Style: Water Shell
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 5
Description: Water that covers and encases the enemy in from head to toe.
*note- can be only thaught by Kaziname

The reason I added "If rain is falling and opponent is standing on/near water he is encased in instant." part is because some guys don't realize that, if rain is falling and if they are covered by water and are standing on it, jutsu encases them in instant.

 

[Konoha's Yellow Flash]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( kage nijuushin): shadow doppelganger
Rank: S
Type: supplementary
Range short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: none
Description: The user will enforce chakra into his shadow and make it split from him. In doing so, he applies shape manipulation to create a shadow made duplicate. Being made of shadows, the duplicate can’t be harmed in usual ways, only fire elemental ninjutsu attacks may affect him, other will go just through it. Once defeated, it’ll melt and return to the user.
Notes: the clones may only use shadow jutsus, ninjutsu and taijutsu.
Notes: only 3 clones may be created per battle.
Notes: May endure up to 2 A-rank fire attacks without going back to the user.
Notes: The user, as not having shadow, will not be able to use any shadow jutsus while the clone is active.




( kage nijuushin kawamiri)-Doppleganger replacement
Rank: B
Type: supplementary
Range: short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: none
Description: Ths user will change places, at the best kawamiri way, with his shadow dopplenganger.
Notes: May only be done once per battle.

(Kage haji ):Shadow grabbing
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 0
Description: The user will concentrate shadow chakra into one of his hands that, when in contact with a shadow, will make it tangible and then he’ll begin to move it making the origin of that shadow move the same way that the shadow.
Notes: The user can’t use any shadow jutsus while using this.
Notes: May only be used twice per battle.
Notes: user may not use shadow jutsus for the same and following 2 turns.



(Kage yajuu):Shadow beast
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 0
Description: The user will concentrate his chakra into all sourrounding shadows and make them collide and then, by applying shape manipulation, he’ll turn this great deal of shadows into a beast which is the size of a large summon like gamabunta.
Notes: The beast may not be hit by conventional means, only katon-nature jutsus may affect it.
Notes: The beast will endure up to 4 A-rank attacks before disappearing, meaning each attack will modify It in size, from large to big to medium to small to nothingness.
Notes: each stage will make the some shadows return, when it is defeated all shadows shall be returned.
Notes: The user may not use the shadows of people for it
Notes: No shadow jutsus for the same and next 4 turns.
Notes: The beast itself may last up to 3 turns in which it becomes progressively weaker.


~ All Declined, do not resubmit any ~

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fluid Fist Style
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 45
Damage: N/A (+10 to taijutsu and suiton, -20 to katon)
Description: The user relaxes both their body and mind by circulating suiton chakra throughout their body making their movements extremely fluid. By keeping their body loose and their mind calm they are able to increase their reaction speed against incoming attacks to the level of a 3-tomoe sharingan user. This doesn't mean that the user can predict movements, or see things in slow motion, but once they see what is happening they can react extremely fast. While using this style the user focuses on using the opponent's momentum against them to turn their attacks into their own downfall. It involves mostly counters and throws that keep the opponent off balance and is very effective against aggressive opponents. Due to the added suiton chakra throughout their body they gain a boost in power to their water attacks, but lose a significant portion of the power for their fire attacks. They also become more vulnerable to fire attacks.
~User gains +10 damage to taijutsu and water techniques.
~User loses -10 damage to fire techniques while the opponent gains a boost of +10.
~Lasts for 5 turns once activated.
~Must be taught by Bahamut.
(If you've seen Spike fight in Cowboy Bebop this would be similar to his style. Here:

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Water Style: Leviathan of the Depths
(Suiton: Leviathan Umi no Fukami)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60 (-30 if kept for a second turn)
Damage: 120 (-20 to the user, -20 more if kept a second turn)
Decription: The user preforms a series of hand signs and then focuses a massive amount of chakra into a large source of water and create a huge sixty foot long serpent of water. The leviathan can be controlled at will by the user and as long as it is in contact with a water source it can be regenerated. This creature can leave the water source but cannot regenerate if it does. The user can use this beast to defend against incoming attacks, devour the opponent, or do both at the same time. While the leviathan is being controlled the user cannot use any other jutsu and it will last a maximum of two turns. Because of the amount of chakra needed the user will lose an extra 30 chakra if the leviathan is kept for an extra turn. The use of such massive amounts of chakra also damages the user.
~Can only be used once per battle.
~No water techniques can be used for the next two turns.
~Does -20 damage to the user, -40 if kept out for an extra turn.
~Costs an extra 30 chakra to be kept out an extra turn.
~Can regenerate if in contact with a large water source.

~ Both Declined ~

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Spoiler

(Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: (-30 to user per turn no matter which choice) (See spoilers below for damage effects for each choice)
Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. The user is able to choose and gain a trait from one of three different snakes.

Spoiler

First, the user's muscles become able to move with the striking speed of a Death Adder which happens in 1/4 of a second. This allows the user to move with speed equivalent to the 4th gate. However, once the effects of this jutsu wear off, the users speed will decrease for 2 turns by 2 ranks below what they are now (To S-class rank speed for Kage, etc) due to exhaustion.

Spoiler

Second, the user gains the ability to inject the venom of a Belcher's Sea Snake into their opponent through either their teeth, or their finger nails.(target takes -20 per turn if injected with venom and the venom lasts 5 turns)

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Or third, the user gains the strength of an Anaconda, which can constrict with a total strength of 4000kg.(user gets +40 to taijutsu) Once the effects of this jutsu wear off the users taijutsu be decreased by 20 because of exhaustion for 2 turns.

*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
*The user can only choose 1 trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
*After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
*The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns

(Okay, I added restrictions for the first and third ones (in the spoilers). The second, I don't think is that OP so I left it as it was. If you think there needs to be any more restrictions just let me know, or you can add them in if you want. And this is mainly to try and combat all those Raikage bios lately. Which the armor gives +60 to taijutsu, +40 to lightning, 4th gate speed, and lasts 4 turns...so if this is declined for being OP...than the armor needs to be seriously resubmitted and less powerful lol xd.)
~Declined~ I see no problem with this, except for the choosing armor abilities. why not instead of having the armor have three different abilities, why don't you create three different armors with the different abilities since that would be more in tune with what we would see in naruto

Resubmitting using Rag's suggestion of making them 3 sperate jutsu.

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(Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike (Version 1-Venomous)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: (-30 to user per turn)
Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. Using this jutsu, the user is able to gain a trait from a specific snake. In this version, the user gains the ability to inject the venom of a Belcher's Sea Snake into their opponent through either their teeth, or their finger nails.(target takes -20 per turn if injected with venom and the venom lasts 5 turns)
*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
*The user can only use 1 Snake Strike trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
*After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
*The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns

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(Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike (Version 2-Strength)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: (-30 to user per turn)
Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. Using this jutsu, the user is able to gain a trait from a specific snake. In this version,the user gains the strength of an Anaconda, which can constrict with a total strength of 4000kg.(user gets +40 to taijutsu) Once the effects of this jutsu wear off the users taijutsu be decreased by 20 because of exhaustion for 2 turns.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
*The user can only use 1 Snake Strike trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
*After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
*The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns

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(Heibi Dageki) Snake Strike (Version 3-Speed)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: (-30 to user per turn)
Description: This jutsu can only be done by those who have signed the contract with snakes. Using this jutsu, the user is able to gain a trait from a specific snake. In this version,the user's muscles become able to move with the striking speed of a Death Adder which happens in 1/4 of a second. This allows the user to move with speed equivalent to the 4th gate. However, once the effects of this jutsu wear off, the users speed will decrease for 2 turns by 2 ranks below what they are now (To S-class rank speed for Kage, etc) due to exhaustion.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have signed the contract with snakes to use this jutsu
*The user can only use 1 Snake Strike trait per battle and this jutsu can only be used once per battle
*After this jutsu is done the user cannot use any jutsu involving snakes for the rest of the battle, including summonings.
*The user can only maintain this state for 3 turns

~Approved~

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hakke Ryu Ha):[Pure Chakra Energy Blast]

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Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:50
Damage Point:90 (-10 to user)
Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra beams, and putting to the user understanding in the control and focus of chakra. A powerful and destructive technique, the user will focus an amount of chakra into one of the user palms (or two if the user needs more power). Finally, aimed towards the user target, this chakra will be released right towards them. The Chakra fires out like a powerful energy blast, taking the appearance of a 6 inch wide bright bluish white beam of light, almost laser like. This blast is very powerful, it could blast through solid rock creating a hole 1 foot wide in the blink of an eye. However the rays are visible to everyone. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt Chakra.
-Can only be used 1 times per battle.
-Harms the user solar plexus, thus the additional damage. -10 to user
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

"The speed of the attack is tremendous, allowing only Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it." [I took that out making it avoidable to those without Sharingan]

Spoiler

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40 (+ 5 for each needles)
Damage Point:80
Description:A Jyuuken technique requiring relatively strong Chakra Control. The user raises concentrates and created lager needle like Chakra projectiles from any tenketsu in their Body. These Chakra needles are sharp and pierce into flesh and bone. When hitting a target these needled disrupt the targets chakra flow in the area where they hits. These needles are very long and hair thin, but contain enough concentrated chakra to be slightly visible to the normal eye as a thin shining sliver but speed of the attack is tremendous, allowing only Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it. The user has to physically throw the chakra senbon.
-Only 2 can be made at a time.
-Can only be used 2 times per battle.
-Must wait one whole turn before using again.
-Harms the user thus causing damage -10 to user
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

~ De-power both ~

Only For Emp To Check ^^ Also add anything you think is needed to make it approve >.> really want these custom ^^

(Hakke Ryu Ha):[Pure Chakra Energy Blast]
]Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:50
Damage Point:90 (-10 to user)
Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra beams, and putting to the user understanding in the control and focus of chakra. A powerful and destructive technique, the user will focus an amount of chakra into one of the palms. Finally, aimed towards the user target, this chakra will be released right towards them. The Chakra fires out like a powerful energy blast, taking the appearance of a 6 inch wide bright bluish white beam of light, almost laser like. However the rays are visible to everyone. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt Chakra should it strike the opponent at a tenketsu.
-Can only be used 1 times per battle.
-Harms the user solar plexus, thus the additional damage. -10 to user
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

~ Approved ~

"The speed of the attack is tremendous, allowing only Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it." [I took that out making it avoidable to those without Sharingan]

(or two if the user needs more power).I took that out and added the user can only created one now!

Also on the jutsu below I remove slightly visible making it visible also I remove Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it. And just made it Sharingan users been able to.

(Taibu Sekishokyuu Streaking Ryu Ha) Chakra Needles|Chakra Senbons
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40 (+ 5 for each needles)
Damage Point:80
Description:A Jyuuken technique requiring relatively strong Chakra Control. The user raises concentrates and created lager needle like Chakra projectiles from any tenketsu in their Body. These Chakra needles are sharp and pierce into flesh and bone. When hitting a target these needled disrupt the targets chakra flow in the area where they hits. These needles are very long and hair thin, but contain enough concentrated chakra to be visible to the normal eye as a shining sliver but speed of the attack is tremendous, allowing only Sharingan of 3 tomoes users to see through it. The user has to physically throw the chakra senbon.
-Only 2 can be made at a time.
-Can only be used 2 times per battle.
-Must wait one whole turn before using again.
-Harms the user thus causing damage -10 to user
-The user will feel exhausted when ending the jutsu and will only be able to use 2 jutsu that turn.

~ Declined ~

 

[Jet]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kage Shuuren (Shadow Drills)

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: With the Ram sign held up, the user can extend their shadow outward into multiple linings (five at the max) in which can emerge from the ground and constantly spiraling. Each spiraling shadow can easily penetrate anything or technique of A rank and lower, meanwhile if all shadow drills merge together into one large drill then it can penetrate any defense of S rank. Shadow drills can easily merge or separate at the shadow's will.
- 3 usage per battle

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Kigi Kage (Sciophobia)

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: Sciophobia means the fear of shadow. The user would extend his shadow outward but unlike other Shadow techniques, this one requires a set of handseals to activate. This shadow is enhanced with chakra (the same in which Genjutsu are activated) that upon looking at the shadow will trigger the opponent to fall into a illusion that may seem too real to not believe. Once in the illusion, the opponent will begin hallucinating of shadow that forms into their worst fear or nightmares. The best way to avoid falling into the illusion is to obviously not look into the user's shadow or if the user's in front view, it's suggested to look slightly upward just above the user's head. Even the slightest glance of the shadow of this technique can trigger the illusion, so it's best to look away from the ground as much as possible.
- 1 usage per battle

~ Approved ~

Jinteki Kage Mane (Personal Shadow Imitation)

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Like the Shadow Imitation technique but much more simplier, the user would simply enhance a certain part of their body (feet, hands, etc.) in which all he does then is touch the opponent's shadow with that Shadow chakra enhanced body part.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Kage Dansu (Shadow Dance)

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Ulitizing the Shadow Sewing Technique with the option to use the Shadow Imitation, the user would immediately send out multiple shadow lining, somwhere between 10-15, which emerges from the ground and attack the opponent in a frenzy manner. These shadows are not control by the user as the user just simply let the shadows out in attempt to distract or if lucky enough actually pierce the opponent. While dealing with multiple shadow linings, the user will sneak a shadow towards the opponent in attempt to trap and get a hold of the opponent to finish him/her off. This one shadow isn't like the other shadows because it cannot emerge from the ground and can only travel along the ground which can be undetected by the opponent. This technique is also very useful to defend against any taijutsu from any angle as Shadow linings emerge from all direction from the user's shadow. Even though the user cannot see behind him, it is pretty much guarantee that the shadow will aid the user from his blind spot as multiple shadows are swinging in a wildly way while the user's main focus is on the one shadow that is used to trap the opponent. Though ultilizing both of the clan's main technique, the user must of course hold up the Rat sign and cannot move.
- 2 usage per battle
- Due to a massive strain on the user for using two of the clan's technique at once, the user is restrained from using Shadow technique the next turn

~ Shouldn't be a jutsu, can be replicated by using two techniques ~

 

[Fomo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Chidori Oonami ) – Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Purge
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses on the destructive power of the Chidori in their hand into the form of a static releaser or thruster. It has more specialized power than the normal Chidori and can cause damage to strenghten surfaces such as S rank causing severe damage on the body. With the static element one may produce lightning to propel one from one spot to another allowing the user to move within mid-air. It will appear as the lightning is flickering on and off when the user is actually producing the necessary lightning to stay a float. This jutsu is based on kakashi's ultimate jutsu in Naruto: Ultimate Ninja Storm and Infamous' Cole and his moved called static thrusters. Stating one could be striked with this jutsu.
Note: As long as you use this jutsu it takes up a jutsu slot
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Note: One would still maintain the speed granted by chidori or lightning blade
Note: One could use one arm but the speed would slow down by half

~ Canon jutsus should NOT be submitted here. I know you only just came back, so this one time is excusable, but no techniques based off canon jutsus will be approved, and the next time you will get the same punishment as the others which is an infraction and a ban from this thread for a week ~

(Katon: Mera-Mera Hiken) Fire Style - Flame-Flame Fire Fist
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user turns his/her fist into flames and gathers energy looking as though he is about to throw a punch, when he/she finishes he/she launches a mighty column of fire shooting out of his/her fist forming a nearly 30 ft wide column and blasts raging at his target. This attack is so incredibly powerful that it is able to plow through several buildings without losing any speed with a single shot.

~ Declined ~

(Suiton: Eki-Eki Arashi Semeku) Water release- Liquid-Liquid Storm Torture
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Suddenly water begins to swirl up from the ground around the opponent, giving them little chance to escape. If trapped inside, they experience dozens upon dozens of needles that shred the skin and puncture the muscles underneath or it can drag the user within the water trapping them and giving them no chance of fresh air. This jutsu takes effect substantially faster when performed on a target standing on a body of any type of water and is consequently much, much harder to avoid. The vortex can be created while on land through the water in the ground/soil/ water possessive like areas. The vortex having only a five-foot circumference.
Note: use 1 times per battle

~ Approved ~

(Katon: Mera-Mera Hibashira) Fire Style - Flame-Flame Fire Pillar
Rank: B
Type: supplementary/defense/Attack
Range: short (long going upwards)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user stomps on the ground. All within that stomp they had send and stored fire nature chakra from under him which than shoot straight upward in a column formation not enveloping the user, destroying a target above him and blowing flames around him preventing anyone from touching him momentarily. These flames are increasingly hot as they came from underground thus really becoming lava. The wideness of this jutsu is about short-mid range and can be controlled.

~ Declined ~

(Raiton: Goro-Goro Hekireki Tataku ) – Lightning Release: Rumble-Rumble Thunder Clap
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: the user heats the air around him(not directly around him but more like in the air of the battlefield) with their lightning nature chakra until it explodes in a thunder clap. This is used to avoid and neutralize non-material attacks and a sudden surpise attack on the opponent. This jutsu isn't visible to the normal eye. Problem is it takes a two jutsus worth of time to perform leaving the user only to use this with a planned strategy and hence only one other jutsu can be used that turn
~ Use 2 times per battle, requires at least one turn gap between each use

~ Approved ~