[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

Sin · Mar 4, 2010

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(Hyoton: Touketsu Taijutsu) Ice Release: Frozen Body Techniques
Rank: S
Type: Supplementery
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Flowing ice chakra through the User's body, they will take up a chilling effect, so when ever they touch something they instantly freeze it. The user will then be able to use taijutsu more effectively and in bounce with the ice release. This can make the user feel burned by fire if they keep reusing it as, every time they activate this again, they increase touketsu taijutsu power by +20.
-Lasts until end of battle
-Must know ice especially and from a sensei.
-Can't reactivate it more than 4 times.

~ Declined ~

Typhon · Mar 4, 2010

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Sacrifice said:
(Doton: Ageita) Trap Door
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user preforms a series of hand seals and creates up to 5 traps throughout the battlefield in locations of their choosing (within the said range). These traps do not have any distinctive features. When the opponent accidentally steps onto one of the trap locations the thin layer of earth on top crumbles revealing a 6 foot deep pit with earthen spikes at the bottom.
~The user must make clear the locations of the trap during their turn.
~The user can also fall into these traps.

(Doton: Doton Sentou) Earth Spire
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user forms a series of hand signs and then causes three columns of earth to shoot up from the ground around to the opponent. The three columns twist around the opponent as they grow out of the ground encasing the opponent in a spire of rock. The rock is close enough to the opponent that it completely restricts their movement, but does not crush them.

(Katon: Funka) Eruption
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user releases a large blast of fire that shoots out in a 360 degree ring around the user. The blast is strong enough to leave a crater under the user. The wave of fire moves extremely quick charring the earth it moves over. The wave itself is about 10 feet tall.
~Only usable twice per battle.
~No S-rank fire jutsu for the next turn.
~Does 10 damage to the user.

~ Restrict everything more please ~

(Doton: Ageita) Trap Door
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user preforms a series of hand seals and creates up to 5 traps throughout the battlefield in locations of their choosing (within the said range). These traps do not have any distinctive features. When the opponent accidentally steps onto one of the trap locations the thin layer of earth on top crumbles revealing a 6 foot deep pit with earthen spikes at the bottom.
~The user must make clear the locations of the trap during their turn.
~The user can also fall into these traps.
~Only usable once per match.

(Doton: Doton Sentou) Earth Spire
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user forms a series of hand signs and then causes three columns of earth to shoot up from the ground around to the opponent. The three columns twist around the opponent as they grow out of the ground encasing the opponent in a spire of rock. The rock is close enough to the opponent that it completely restricts their movement, but does not crush them.
~ Only usable twice per match.
~ No other earth jutsu allowed during the turn.

(Katon: Funka) Eruption
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user releases a large blast of fire that shoots out in a 360 degree ring around the user. The blast is strong enough to leave a crater under the user. The wave of fire moves extremely quick charring the earth it moves over. The wave itself is about 10 feet tall.
~ Only usable twice per battle.
~ No B-rank or higher fire jutsu for the next two turns.
~ Does 10 damage to the user.
~ This move ends the user's turn.

~ All Approved ~

(Amatsu-disukonekuto): Heavenly Disconnect
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 80 (-20 per turn while activated)
Damage: N/A
Description: This blade has a similar shape to a normal katana but has one distinct difference. The place where the blade would be is flat with no sharp edge. In the middle of this flat surface is a black strip of specialized metal. The user funnels their chakra through this specialized metal which manipulates the nature of the chakra. When the user cuts someone while the sword is activated no visible cut will appear on the opponent. Instead the chakra system in the area hit will be severed. This sword can also be used to cut through attacks of pure chakra. This doesn't mean it can cut through fire or lightning, but rather it can cut through something like a rasengan which manipulates non-elemental chakra.
~ This blade is weak against a normal weapon.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Alucard · Mar 4, 2010

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(Katon: Kaijin Kaibutsu) - Fire Release: Cinder Elemental

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using the ash on the burned ground, the user will make it raise with a form of a monster which then comes down on the opponent with enough force to crush his bones. With a single handseal, the user can make the ash to explode.
*Useable twice per battle
*Ash must be on the field

(Katon: Onikasai) - Fire Release: Demon Fire

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user will send an enourmous fire chakra wave through the field while doing hand seals, then he claps his hands and two huge waves of fire appear at the right and at left of the opponent in a form of a demon's mouth with sharpen teeth.
*Once per battle

(Katon: Dagekinami Kasai) - Fire Release: Fire Shockwave

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather chakra on his palms and will push them forwards, then a shockwave is released from the user's palm which on contact with the opponent, turns into a big flame which engulfs him.
*Useable twice per battle

~ All Declined , OPed ~

Chago · Mar 4, 2010

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Chago's Sword (chago's Subeta)
Rank: S
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra cost: 40
Damage: none
Description

the Brotherhood) A sword of phenomenal power the steel around sword is actually chakra witch is caused when the user infuses it in to the sword this chakra then is concentrated from the handle then made in to a dense heavily concentrated figure that looks like a sword this chakra is able to cut through barrier techniques up to A-rank and one slash from this sword is lethal. The sword can also be used in elemental attack. For example the user will infuse katon chakra on to the sword to make it a flame sword.
(can only be used by chago)
(can only be used three times a battle.)
(have to wait at least 3 turns to re-use the sword.)

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Sword Arts: Instant Flash (Subeta Gigei: setsuna senkou)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 40
damage: 80
Description: The user pull out their sword and make a stance the feet will be closely together while the sword will be hold in on hand closely to the eye of the user and will be hold out by the user's right hand then the user will move in high speed at the opponents in attempt to finish them off in one blow by stabbing them in a vital spot.
(can only be taught by chago)
(can only be used twice a battle.)
(The technique is useless against the byakugan and 3 tamoe sharingan)

Sword Arts: Dance of Infinity (Subeta Gegei: dansu uf mugendai)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will infuse chakra to his/her sword then the user will make a stance with both feet wide apart and the sword hold out in the right hand behind the user as if the user is about to jump then the user will move in high speeds slashing the opponent all around a combo of 6 times.
(can only be taught by chago)
(this jutsu is beneficial with shadow clones.)
(can only be used 3 times in battle.)
(have to wait at least 2 turns in order to re-use this move.)

~ All Declined. ~

biojumaru · Mar 4, 2010

Custom Jutsu Submission summoning jutsu

kuchyose:koumori(bats)

Summoning Animal:bat
Scroll Owner: me biojumaru
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: koumoriji-sama
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:koumaru (low lvl )
koumtatsu(medium lvl that you ride it for flying and travelling purproses)

koumoriji can only be summon once per battle.

~ Read the rules please ~

Sinister · Mar 5, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Sinister said:
(Genjutsu:Kagami Gyakuten )- Illusion Technique: Mirror reversal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (Or the damage done by the opponents jutsu)
Description: Waiting for the opponent to attack or right before he attacks the user creates an full illusion of everything and everyone on the battle field, tricking the opponent to think that real time is still going on.the user creates an illusion of himself standing directly in front of the foe creating the "Mirror" effect. In the illusion the jutsu the opponent sent foward toward the mirror of the user seems as if its coming closer back to him to him, and eventually making contact with the opponent.

•Illusion cannot be dispersed with a small pain, takes a great deal of pain to escape
•Usable only twice per battle
•Usable By Sinister only

~ Remove the pain thing ~

(Genjutsu:Kagami Gyakuten )- Illusion Technique: Mirror reversal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (Or the damage done by the opponents jutsu)
Description: Waiting for the opponent to attack or right before he attacks the user creates an full illusion of everything and everyone on the battle field, tricking the opponent to think that real time is still going on.the user creates an illusion of himself standing directly in front of the foe creating the "Mirror" effect. In the illusion the jutsu the opponent sent foward toward the mirror of the user seems as if its coming closer back to him to him, and eventually making contact with the opponent.
•Usable By Sinister only
•Usable only twice per battle

~ Approved ~

darkecho47 · Mar 5, 2010

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ninja art: poison injection fist (ninja jutsu:doku funsha kobushi)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user hides a poison neddle in their sleeve and quickly slides it into their fist and punches the opponent injecting the enemy with poison

ninja art:carnivore assault (nija jutsu:niku kagai)
Rank: A
Type: supplamentary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points:
Description:the user realeases a burst of chakra to triple strength and speed for two turns
can only be used twice
takes two turns to be able to use again

~ Both Declined, do not resubmit ~

Deidara... · Mar 5, 2010

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yoton koudou (lava tunneler)
type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
description: hel begins releasing fire chakra from her entire body, the fire chakra manifests as a coat of lames. hel then begins burrowing towards her target. as she travels the fire on her coat super heats the ground behind and around her. causing a trail of lava to form and as she exits the lava bursts forward and envelops the target.

bouhatei kuchiyose: Heru (Mole summon: Hel)
Type: ALL
Rank: Forbidden
Range: n/a
Damage: n/a
Chakra: n/a
Description: Hel is a gaurdian mole. it is solely her responsibilty to make sure intruders don't make it to the homeland. Hel is a resilieant red color, her fur was stained from her signatrue technique. hel is only capable of using Katon release, she is known for tunneling underground with a coat of fire and unleashing a torrent of lava upon her target.
Note: Hel can only use Katon release.
Note: can only be summoned twice per battle.

Katon: tsuyatsuya reiki (fire release: cumpulsive aura)
type: ofensive/supplemenatry
rank: forbidden
range: short(aura)-mid(wyvern)
damage: 100
chakra: 50
Description: the user begins a chain of seals and an aura of pulsating fire begins to emit from the user. the user then stomps on the ground and a fire wyvern erupts from beneath the opponent. the aura remains after the attack. the auru makes the user completely immune to fuuton and all a-rank and lower water attacks become steam in close proximity.
(lasts 3 turns)
Note: no katon 7 turns afterward
Note: no suiton or fuuton for 2 turns afterward or during.
Note: can only be used once per battle.

~ All Declined ~

chanxyz · Mar 5, 2010

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chanxyz said:
1.Yari of Odin (Spear of Odin)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short to long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user focuses chakra in one hand and makes a spear using shape manipulation.This spear can be thrown or used as a weapon.If it is thrown,it explodes upon contact causing a blast of 3 yards' radius.
Created by Chan.Only Chan can teach this jutsu.

~ Declined ~

1.Odin Yari (Spear of Odin)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Mid to long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user focuses chakra in one hand and makes a spear using shape manipulation.This spear is then launched at the target.It explodes upon contact causing a blast of 2 yards' radius
Note:Can be used 3 times.Created by Chan.

I made changes to Range,removed the weapon part,Blast radius to 2 yards and added "Elemental description."If it is declined again,I demand no explanation and willing to accept it humbly and won't submit this again.Thank you.

~ Approved. I removed the elemental effects ~

Emperor · Mar 5, 2010

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~Declined~ seems more like a forbidden

~Declined~ Unsure about the part in blue

~Approved~

~Hasashi~ · Mar 5, 2010

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~Hasashi~ said:
weapon
trident of Poseidon (Poseidon's toraidento)
rank: FORBIDDEN
type: weapon
range: short (ability's are short long)
chakra: 50 to release the seal +10 for every turn used
description: the trident of Poseidon a weapon of mass destruction passed down through the ages. the trident is made of solid sapphire and is worn over the back. on the trident there are a bunch of seals the user will place the trident on the ground and make a few hand seals once done there will be a shining light and the trident will be released from its seal. once released the trident has a few distinctive abilities. the first and strongest is the ability to create water out of thin air (30 chakra to the user every time the ability is used) and the user can shape it any way he wants. the second is by stabbing the trident in to the ground the user can create huge earthquakes and if stabbed into a body of water huge tsunami's. another less distinctive ability is the trident becomes extremely sharp and dense it can pierce through anything and is virtually unbreakable while released.
~once per battle
~can be used as a normal weapon before and after released
~released for 4 turns
~no water for the rest of the battle
~no lightning or earth while the trident is released
~NOT ENTIRELY BASED ON GREEK MYTHOLOGY (though slightly Poseidon was said to have created the seas so i linked one of the abilities with that he was also said to be able to create huge earthquakes and tsunami's by stomping his foot)

please add any restrictions you feel necessary
~Declined~ OP

trident of Poseidon (Poseidon's toraidento)
rank: FORBIDDEN
type: weapon
range: short (ability's are short long)
chakra: 50 to release the seal +10 for every turn used
description: the trident of Poseidon a weapon of mass destruction passed down through the ages. the trident is made of solid sapphire and is worn over the back. on the trident there are a bunch of seals the user will place the trident on the ground and make a few hand seals once done there will be a shining light and the trident will be released from its seal. once released the trident has a few distinctive abilities. the first and strongest is the ability to create water out of thin air (30 chakra to the user every time the ability is used) and the user can shape it any way he wants. the second is by stabbing the trident in to the ground the user can create huge earthquakes and if stabbed into a body of water huge tsunami's. another less distinctive ability is the trident becomes extremely sharp and dense it can pierce through anything and is virtually unbreakable while released.
~once per battle
~can be used as a normal weapon before and after released
~released for 4 turns
~no water for the rest of the battle
~no lightning fire or earth while the trident is released
~NOT ENTIRELY BASED ON GREEK MYTHOLOGY (though slightly Poseidon was said to have created the seas so i linked one of the abilities with that he was also said to be able to create huge earthquakes and tsunami's by stomping his foot)
~the trident gets very cold when released and does 30 damage to the users hands

whatever's in bold has been added hope thats enough ^^

~ Declined. Water from air is Tobirama Senju's specialty alone. ~

Nadare · Mar 5, 2010

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~ Declined, this is a canon jutsu O_O Ask Kaito to make it for you ~

~ Declined -_-" do not resubmit ~

Passion · Mar 5, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Teh-Tobz said:
Custom weapon: ( Sāberu no Darth Tobz ) - Saber of Darth Tobz

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 20 to user when activated )
Description: Anti admin saber is legendary sword that's forged by the NB's by elders from fallen meteor into sword that's blade part glows red. After being forged the NB's Noobs gathered to infuse their noobness power into the sword making it to absorb epicness of some admins and moderators. The real powers of meteor are still unknown but it can easily slice through normal iron and steel.
Known abilities:

Can cut through normal Iron and steel.

Saying word Activate will cause it to weaken possible admin/moderator

It cannot be or wielded by anyone else expect the owner.

The sword's indestructible ( That doesn't mean that It can destroy anything ).

Chakra can be guided into this sword making it have the affinities of that element.

Note:
- Causes - 15 damage to user when activated
- Costs - 10 chakra per every turn to user when activated
- User can't perform Genjutsu, Ninjutsu or Taijutsu for two turns after using this.
- Weakens only Nexus and Kaito making them unable to use dojutsu.

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~ Declined; Much as I would like to see Kaito and Nexus fail, I cannot approve this. DO NOT Resubmit, else infraction. -_-" ~

( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 to user per turn )
Damage points: 100 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for two turns or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for explosion at sky due the ash that's raining
- Dragon lasts three turns.
- No Forbidden - Ranked fire for next two turns.
- Costs 10 chakra per turn

~ Rain cannot occur for two turns, that is too much ~

( Genjutsu: Suishō senmei hibiki ) - Illusion technique: Crystal clear Echo

Rank: S
Type: Offensive - Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 40 ( - 10 to user )
Description: User will draw out two Kunais and infuse chakra into them making them to form Tuning fork. After it when the kunais are chakra infused the user will hit these kunais together emitting Crystal clear chakra infused sound wave at target(s). When the sound wave will reach target(s) it will cause their eardrums to shatter and confuse the balance organ making the target's world to start shake while target(s) is/are deaf as their brains register information about echoes that they hear.

Can be used only once.

User can't perform Genjutsu for two turns afterwards.

Confuse of balance organ lasts one turn as deafness lasts four turns.

Causes - 10 damage to user.

After the kunais are transformed into tuning fork they're no longer use in battle

~ This sounds like Sound Element. Do you know it ? If not, Declined, and do not resubmit. If yes, Approved. ~

( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 to user per turn )
Damage points: 100 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for one whole turn or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for explosion at sky due the ash that's raining
- No Forbidden - Ranked fire for next two turns.

~ Approved, I edited a bit ~

Custom weapon: ( Na kumi no rōnin ) - Blade set of Ronin

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 5 per turn when chakra is infused to smaller blades )
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is the blade set of skilled ninja. It contains four different parts. The first part is giant sword that's similar to Zabuza's hidden swordmen of the mist sword. The sword is called Guillotine and it was forged inside of hidden mist's master smith's workshop from eighteen smaller steel swords while he was inspired by the design of Zabuza's sword and decided to make something that looks like it but these swords differ from each other by the fact that zabuza's sword is longer, has the holes in the blade and is heavier. This sword is mainly carried on back. The three other swords are smaller type katanas that were too forged on the same place. The Katanas are made from special metals that causes them to have the ability to absorb elemental affinities just by user focusing chakra into them.

[*] The Guillotine is carried on back of ninja
[*] Three smaller swords are carried on left hip
[*] Guillotine sword can be only swung by its master
[*] Three smaller swords contain the ability to absorb elemental affinities.
[*] Only skilled swordman can carry this set
[*] While wearing these user can't perform any taijutsu

Guillotine looks similar to this expect it doesn't have the holes or isn't that long:

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Three smaller blades:

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~ Explain the absorbing elemental affinities ~

Sin · Mar 5, 2010

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(Katon: Touketsu Taijutsu) Fire Release: Heated Pressure
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementery/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 60
Damage Points: 90
Description: First, User will focus fire chakra in the area, making it spread, and sparkle, so any jutsus that can be ignited that are in the area, will ignite within the heated pressure comes the attack. The pressure can be formed into a jet of pressure that can be used to directly attack the opponent, upon touching the opponent it will release the gathered pressure and make it either a small explotion that effects the opponent by unabling to use any attacks/ or just a huge burn or make a huge burst of fire turning the area where the opponent is standing into char, completely overheating the opponent's body, turning the opponent's insides into a chamber of fire.
-Can not use any fire attacks next 2 turns
-User takes -20 damage from the heat and chakra it takes to fill the pressure it takes
-User can only use one other jutsu in the same turn as this
-Can only be taught by Sin
-User will take -5 damage off of all other jutsus for the next 5 turns

~ Explain it better please ~

Geezus · Mar 5, 2010

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Kirabi said:
Custom Weapon: Bullet Blade (Soudu Dan)
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: (+20 per Blade Extension)
Damage: 30 from each hit.
Description: A sword with four extensions; it has the appearance to look like Hidan's Scythe. These extensions are attached to chains within the inner mechanisms of the sword making the user able to fire off these extentions to accomplish a variety of effects such as grappling objects to pull the user towards it, attacking the opponent or even binding the opponent.
(Can also use Sword-Gun Jutsu)

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~ Fire off: Explain. ~

Custom Weapon: Bullet Blade (Dan Ken)
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: (+20 per Blade Extension)
Damage: 30 from each hit.
Description: A sword with four extensions; it has the appearance to look like Hidan's Scythe. These extensions are attached to chains within the inner mechanisms of the sword making the user able to fire off by infusing chakra into the sword and sending it into the blades the user then pulls a trigger causing the blades to extend out towards a target to accomplish a variety of effects such as grappling objects to pull the user towards it, attacking the opponent or even binding the opponent.
(Can also use Sword-Gun Jutsu)

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~ Approved ~

Deidara... · Mar 5, 2010

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yoton koudou (lava tunneler)
type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
description: hel begins releasing fire chakra from her entire body, the fire chakra manifests as a coat of lames. hel then begins burrowing towards her target. as she travels the fire on her coat super heats the ground behind and around her. causing a trail of lava to form and as she exits the lava bursts forward and envelops the target.
Note: can only be used twice.

bouhatei kuchiyose: Heru (Mole summon: Hel)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-class
Range: all
Damage: n/a
Chakra: 40
Description: Hel is a gaurdian mole. it is solely her responsibilty to make sure intruders don't make it to the homeland. Hel is a resilieant red color, her fur was stained from her signatrue technique. hel is only capable of using Katon release, she is known for tunneling underground with a coat of fire and unleashing a torrent of lava upon her target.
Note: Hel can only use Katon release.
Note: can only be summoned twice per battle.

Katon: tsuyatsuya reiki (fire release: cumpulsive aura)
type: supplemenatry
rank: forbidden
range: short
damage: 100
chakra: 50
Description: the user begins a chain of seals and an aura of pulsating fire begins to emit from the user.the auru makes the user completely immune to fuuton and all a-rank and lower water attacks become steam in close proximity.
(lasts 3 turns)
Note: no katon 7 turns afterward
Note: no suiton or fuuton for 2 turns afterward or during.
Note: can only be used once per battle.

~ All Declined, do not resubmit ~

Alucard · Mar 5, 2010

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Alucard said:
(Katon: Kaijin Kaibutsu) - Fire Release: Cinder Elemental

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using the ash on the burned ground, the user will make it raise with a form of a monster which then comes down on the opponent with enough force to crush his bones. With a single handseal, the user can make the ash to explode.
*Useable twice per battle
*Ash must be on the field

(Katon: Onikasai) - Fire Release: Demon Fire

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user will send an enourmous fire chakra wave through the field while doing hand seals, then he claps his hands and two huge waves of fire appear at the right and at left of the opponent in a form of a demon's mouth with sharpen teeth.
*Once per battle

(Katon: Dagekinami Kasai) - Fire Release: Fire Shockwave

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather chakra on his palms and will push them forwards, then a shockwave is released from the user's palm which on contact with the opponent, turns into a big flame which engulfs him.
*Useable twice per battle

~ All Declined , OPed ~

-.- how oped

(Katon: Kaijin Kaibutsu) - Fire Release: Cinder Elemental

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using the ash on the burned ground, the user will make it raise with a form of a monster which then comes down on the opponent with enough force to crush his bones. With a single handseal, the user can make the ash to explode.
*Useable twice per battle
*Ash must be on the field

On this one, i just use the ash which is on the ground. It's kinda like asuma's jutsu but i can use the ash on the ground and dont need to use it, it's just like i'm re-utilizing a fire jutsu. Asuma's jutsu also makes the ash to explode, here the difference is that i can make it do that with a handseal.

(Katon: Onikasai) - Fire Release: Demon Fire

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user will send an enourmous fire chakra wave through the field while doing hand seals, then he claps his hands and two huge waves of fire appear from medium range at the right and at left of the opponent in a form of a demon's mouth with sharpen teeth.
*Once per battle

Now you can clearly see they dont appear that close to the opponent so he has time to defend.

(Katon: Dagekinami Kasai) - Fire Release: Fire Shockwave

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather chakra on his palms and will push them forwards, then a shockwave is released from the user's palm with the form of a ring of fire which on contact with the opponent, turns into a big flame which engulfs him.
*Useable twice per battle

Now you can see the shockwaves due to the fire ring thing.

~ Approved, but make all of them S rank ~

The_Empire · Mar 5, 2010

Re: ? Custom Jutsu Submission ?

(Kage Kata:Kage Rakka Jutsu)Shadow Style:Shadow Drop Jutsu
Rank:S Rank
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Range:Short - Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The Nara clan member exstends their shadow like the shadow possesstion jutsu but instead of the jutsu just connecting with the enemy. The shadow connects and the enemy drops in the shadow and telports to an unknown place and a couple seconds later the enemy comes up from the shadow is confused and then just faints from fatigue because where the enemy went the place sucks almost all their chakra out.

-Can only be used by Deidara Nara and Konoha?s Yellow Flash.
-Can only be taught by Deidara Nara or Konoha?s Yellow Flash if u ask me can he teach it to u.

~ Declined, do not resubmit. Yes, I know this is a game jutsu, but still do not resubmit it ~

Kedamono · Mar 6, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouton: Bunshin Bakuha)Ice Style:Clone Explosion
Rank:A Rank
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but can be detonated at any time to form a very large explosion and ice shards will be flowing from all angles.
*can Only be used By Kedamono*

(Hyouton: Katana)Ice Style:Ice Blade
Rank:A Rank
Type:Attack
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:It is formed strictly from ice. It is a blade that is indestructible towards any oncoming attacks, once used to attack the opponent and hits any solid substance it'll shatter and leave shards of ice behind.
*can only be used by kedamono*
*if not used before the third turn begins it'll be destroyed leaving shards behind, but cannot be used after one turn has passed*

(Katon: Katana)Fire Style:Fire blade
Rank:A Rank
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 (+5 every turn)
Description:the fire is encased in chakra making the flames not go wild, but instead constantly rotate at a higher temperature.( and it can be controlled so that the flames won't get hotter and hotter)
*can only be used by kedamono*
*if it is not used to attack it'll explode depending on how much power it has accumulated*

~ All Declined ~

Passion · Mar 6, 2010

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Teh-Tobz said:
( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 to user per turn )
Damage points: 100 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for one whole turn or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for explosion at sky due the ash that's raining
- No Forbidden - Ranked fire for next two turns.

~ Approved, I edited a bit ~

Custom weapon: ( Na kumi no rōnin ) - Blade set of Ronin

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 5 per turn when chakra is infused to smaller blades )
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is the blade set of skilled ninja. It contains four different parts. The first part is giant sword that's similar to Zabuza's hidden swordmen of the mist sword. The sword is called Guillotine and it was forged inside of hidden mist's master smith's workshop from eighteen smaller steel swords while he was inspired by the design of Zabuza's sword and decided to make something that looks like it but these swords differ from each other by the fact that zabuza's sword is longer, has the holes in the blade and is heavier. This sword is mainly carried on back. The three other swords are smaller type katanas that were too forged on the same place. The Katanas are made from special metals that causes them to have the ability to absorb elemental affinities just by user focusing chakra into them.

[*] The Guillotine is carried on back of ninja
[*] Three smaller swords are carried on left hip
[*] Guillotine sword can be only swung by its master
[*] Three smaller swords contain the ability to absorb elemental affinities.
[*] Only skilled swordman can carry this set
[*] While wearing these user can't perform any taijutsu

Guillotine looks similar to this expect it doesn't have the holes or isn't that long:

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Three smaller blades:

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~ Explain the absorbing elemental affinities ~

Custom weapon: ( Na kumi no rōnin ) - Blade set of Ronin

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 5 per turn when chakra is infused to smaller blades )
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is the blade set of skilled ninja. It contains four different parts. The first part is giant sword that's similar to Zabuza's hidden swordmen of the mist sword. The sword is called Guillotine and it was forged inside of hidden mist's master smith's workshop from eighteen smaller steel swords while he was inspired by the design of Zabuza's sword and decided to make something that looks like it but these swords differ from each other by the fact that zabuza's sword is longer, has the holes in the blade and is heavier. This sword is mainly carried on back. The three other swords are smaller type katanas that were too forged on the same place. The Katanas are made from special metals that causes them to have the ability to absorb elemental affinities just by user focusing different natured chakra into them meaning that one katana can contain one only one element that it can absorb. Shortest katana can only absorb wind element chakra causing it become sharper and the length of katana is increased by 4-6 inches. The middle sized katana can absorb only lightning nature chakra making it slightly numb place around the cut. The longest katana can only absorb water nature chakra making it cut faster in rain or underwater.

[*] The Guillotine is carried on back of ninja
[*] Three smaller swords are carried on left hip
[*] Guillotine sword can be only swung by its master
[*] Three smaller swords contain the ability to absorb elemental affinities.
[*] Only skilled swordman can carry this set
[*] While wearing these user can't perform any taijutsu
[*] Shortest Katana can only absorb wind element chakra
[*] Middle sized Katana can only absorb lightning element chakra
[*] Longest katana can only absorb water element chakra

Guillotine looks similar to this expect it doesn't have the holes or isn't that long:

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Three smaller blades:

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~ Approved ~

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