[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Anbu578]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This is my first animal summoning
(Kuchiyose: risu musha) Summoning : squirrel warrior

Summoning Animal:Squirell warrior
Scroll Owner:Anbu578
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A


Name: (Kuchiyose: risu musha) Summoning : squirrel warrior
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: mid-long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Description:using the proper hand signs the user can summon from a special made scroll an Squrriel
Warrior.While summoned the Warrior is able to use advance taijutsu and some Ration.However though the Warrior is very slow and restricted to movement so he use his blade to manipulate his attacks

*Only Anbu578 is able to summon these*

-Both Approved-

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Pinball Target (pinbutoukai ta-getto)
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40 (-15 to user)
Description: The user opens the second gate and punches the enemy in the gut, causing them to double over and lean forward. He then knees them in the face and then kicks then in the face, lifting them high into the air and as their body goes upwards, the user tucks his body into a small ball and launches himself at the enemy. He hits the enemy and launches him backwards and then the user flies at the enemy again, hitting him once more.
*requirement: 2 gate open*

-Approved-

Raiton: Raigeki Kuresshendo (Lightning Style: Lightning Crescendo)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: mid-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user channels Lightning into his sword and swings it at the opponent and creates a large crescent shaped bolt of lightning from the sword. The crescent expands as it travels through the air from the atmospheric discharges found within the atmosphere. The crescent can slice through all Earth except Forbidden rank.

-Approved-

Summoning: Berbalangs
Type: Defense/Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user summons a berbalang, which is essentially a large humanoid-like gargoyle. It looks like a giant, moveable statue, standing at around the height of Gamabunta, and has no skin around it, just bones and black eyes. The user can use the bones of the Berbalang for Kaguya Jutsus and the berbalang can use all A-rank and higher bone jutsus and since it is a Kaguya summoning, it can regenerate any limb cut off once but not its head. As long as it is on the field, the user can only use bone jutsus involving it or the bones will fade away into dust. To summon it, the user must bite his thumb and form a small, brittle bone at the tip of finger that breaks when he slams his hand against something hard. Strong against Lightning, wind and water jutsus.

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Summoning: Daedalus
Type: Summoning
Rank: C
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user summons a berbalang, the size of a human man, by the name of Daedalus. Daedalus has two horns coming from his head, spiked arms and legs, and blue bones and winged bones from his back. Daedalus can use A-rank and higher Bone Jutsu and can use his wings to fly him and/or other people around with them. He can also use any A-rank and higher Lightning Jutsu.

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-Last 2 declined, please stick to the normal animal world-

 

[Kagutsuchi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Rasen Kaen Ryuu) – Fire Release: Spiralling Flame Dragon

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user inhales a large breathe before exhaling a flame of fire in the shape of a dragon that then spirals around creating a chamber in the middle that can incinerate the target.
Co-Creater: Kaito-sama

-Approved-

Name: Flaming Meteors
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Chakra: 120
Damage: 150
Range: All
Description: User starts to Concentrate chakra into the earth and raises Chunks of rocks ( 5 rocks to be exact ) into air and takes it into spaces and then manipulating earth chakra brings them down, while coming down due to friction they start to burn and form a Fire Ball of Rock and on impact with ground creates 10Metre Craters and are highly destructive.

Note:
1. Creates total of 5 Meteors
2. Takes whole 1 turn to complete
3. User cant use A rank higher earth jutsu’s for 2 whole turns
4. Releasing that much chakra casues Fatigue and -25 damage to user also
5. Co-creater kaito Sama

-Declined: Goro has this jutsu-


Name: Wind Map
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 65
Damage: N/A
Range: All
Description: User Releases Wind Chakra into his surrounding and connects himself with air, thus he can keep track of anyone , anything in that area, the range depends on the chakra pool of user and can 1km of range with sage rank. Invisible to Naked Eye but Chakra in surroundings can be seen by Doujutsu, else there is no way to find track of this jutsu.
Co-creater : Kaito –Sama

||Declined: No way||

Name: Water Current
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Chakra: 80 ( 40 water + 40 lighting )
Damage: 80
Range: Long
Description: Using a Water source user surges lighting chakra through it and makes a tidal wave , The waves slams the opponent from either Left or Right side not from Front or back, Wave is 20m high and 50m wide and can cover a large distance, as the water comes down it send lighting through anything even INTO ground and shocks the opponent or even summoning into pyralysis of 1 whole turn.
Co-creater: Kaito Sama

-Declined: No restrictions for a jutsu like that?-

 

[Ragnaroc]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Thread will be reopened as soon as possible

 

[Rei]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Thread re-opened.
Count your jutsus please everyone

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementery/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A -Counts as 80 when used for attack, like crushing the inside with another attack counting just this damage-
Description: User will gather earth chakra around the opponent, then by focusing it in a spiral, User will make the earth spiral in and around the opponent making the opponent go a bit in the air, User can also use this to spiral all around the opponent leaving them in the inside, trapping them, this can also be used as a crash mat, to land safely, but used when cannot touch the normal earth. This can be used as defence, by spiraling around User and trapping them in a way but for defence, and User can just focus on earth to reveal again.
-Can only be used 5 times per battle
-User can make this turn back to earth when they want
-After usage 5 times, User cannot use s-rank earth for 3 turns

~Declined~ Your restrictions are not really restrictions. Change them

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

X- mo-do(X-Mode)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A(user 15 damage per turn this is active)
Description: This is one of the Strongest moves the X-Gloves can perform once fusion with the Mare Sky ring, the user will drain all the power from the X-Gloves this will cause the Gloves and the ring to become powerless and fall off, once the gloves fall off the user hands, the user eyes will turn red and his body will heat up in to a incredible rate causing steam to come from his nose every time he breaths while in this Mode the user speed will be enhanced speed and all fire jutsus performed will go up a rank and other fire jutsus used on the user will become useless
Note: While in this Mode can only use Fire Jutsus
Note: this Mode will burn the user inside per turn If the user stays in this mode longer then 3 turns his inside will be burned to the point where he will be unable to fight
Note: Gloves and ring are gone for the rest of the fight after the user comes out of this mode he will be unable to use any fire for the rest of the fight

-Declined: Like I said before, i approve only naruto-like jutsus-

(Fuuton: mimi juuten)-Wind Style: Ear Plugs
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulation wind in both of his hands once this is done he will cover his ears with the wind then the wind will continue to spin around his ears in a circling motions causing all sound to be blocked from his ears.
*Note: Can be used twice during battle
*Note: Last for 3 turns
*Note: Can be deactivate at anytime

-Declined: you can't control rotating wind, it will just make your ears explode-

Man what are you talking about I been making X-Moves for like two months now, now your going to start complaining about the jutsus

I am a woman, so watch your tongue.
Second, I said I personally don't approve and not that I disallow them.
I think that's all.

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Fuuton: Hashira yari ) - Wind release: Pillar spears
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: User will send some of his wind chakra into sky and form out clouds. After the user has formed out clouds multiple Spears of wind will rain down at the opponent. Skilled opponent can see through this jutsu with or without any dojutsu. The landed spears will stay sticking out from the ground so they can be picked up and thrown at the opponent.

-Make it S rank and usable only twice per battle-

( Suiton: Tai Masatsu ) - Water release: Anti friction
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: ( - 10 when activated )
Description: User will release water chakra all around his body and form out liquid armor that makes less friction when it touches solid materials. The liquid armor can be combined with small amount of lightning chakra making it shock a little users body when activated but also keeping him focused on the battle around him/her while letting him/her move at the speed of third gate.
Note:
- Costs 10 Chakra per turn
- Causes 10 Damage to be done when activated due the small shock that lightning chakra gives you.
- No more Forbidden ranked attacks on same battle
- Allows user to move with the speed of third gate
- No Water release allowed for two turns afterwards
- Lasts three turns
- Lightning attacks made by opponent hit + 10 more when used.
- Can only be used once

-I don't get how this armor will make you move faster and also we have many lighting armors already submitted-



( Katon: Kuro kumo no hai ) - Fire release: Dark clouds of Ash
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( - 10 to user and opponent automatically )
Description: User makes Rat - Dragon - Sheep handseals and spits out fireball that's compressed with ash and fire. After the fireball has reached the sky the user will make it expand and explode leaving out black clouds that can be used with for Kirin if user defines so while small fireballs and ash that can be ignited rain down. The clouds can be canceled with S - Ranked wind attack or A - Ranked water attack.
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent automatically due the ash that damages lungs
- Lasts three turns
- No S - Ranked Fire for next two turns

-Pending: where do you find the ash? Seriously now, we have enough fireball jutsus. Make something new and completely unique-

( Katon: shinkō hai Doragon ) - Fire release: Rising Ash dragon
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 10 to user per turn )
Damage points: 80 ( - 10 to user + opponent automatically when used for clouds )
Description: User makes Rat - Sheep - Dragon handseals and spits/breaths out Pitch black ash dragon that's made from compressed with ash and fire. The Fire dragon can be controlled by user causing it to fly sky and explode causing multiple smaller fireballs and ash rain down for two turns ( Clouds can also be used for kirin if user defines so ) or it can be guided at opponent and it will explode after that. The Dragon is so firm that user can fly with it all around the field. The dragon is about Twenty meters long.
Note:
- This can be used once per battle
- It causes - 10 damage to user and opponent when used for clouds due the ash that's raining
- Dragon lasts three turns as Clouds last two turns
- No S - Ranked Fire for next two turns
- Dragon can breath out cloud of smoke that will blind the enemy unless He/She has dojutsu.
- Dragon can use C - Ranked Fire attacks
- Costs 10 chakra per turn
~Declined~ Make it forbidden and remove the part in blue. Only Thunderclouds work for Kirin
( Fuuton: Hashira yari ) - Wind release: Pillar spears
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 5 to user when he/she uses the spear as weapon )
Damage points: 80
Description: User will send some of his wind chakra into sky and form out clouds. After the user has formed out clouds multiple Spears of wind will rain down at the opponent. Skilled opponent can see through this jutsu with or without any dojutsu. The landed spears will stay sticking out from the ground so they can be picked up and thrown at the opponent.
Note:
- Can be used twice per battle
- Costs 5 chakra if spears are used as weapons
~Approved~

and don't say that you edited it for us, we know you did.

 

[Ben-sama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Sanzoku Buki : Risuto Kens) Bandit Weapon : Wrist-blades

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Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The User Wears Powerfull Unknown Mineral Gauntlets That Contain Two Blades Within Each Of Them, The Blades Can Be In Two States.
State One Is The Blade Being Drawn Back In By A Secret Mechanism Within The Gaunlet That Is Triggered By A Special Movement Of An Arm, In The First State The Gaunlet's Blades Are Slightly Lower Than The Knuckles, Meaning That The Blades Cannot Harm Anything.
In The Second State, Using The Same Mechanism The Blades Are Drawn Out About 40 Centimetres In Front Of The Knuckles And The Blades Are Battle - Ready. During The Blades Drawn Out The User Cannot Perform Any Handsigns, Because The Blades Will Get In The Way Of Performing Correct Handsigns. Both The Blades And The Gaunlets Are Made From And Unknown Mineral. The Mineral Is Extremely Light, Yet Powerfull, Making Each Attack Fast And Deadly. These Blades Can Be Combined With Sanzoku Taijutsu To Make Even More Deadlier Combinations.
- No Jutsus That Require Handsigns Can Be Performed When The Wrist Blades Are In The 2nd State.
- Only Sanzoku Taijutsu Users May Use These Gauntlets.
- Permission To Use Gauntlets Can Only Be Given By Benazz.
- No Doton Techniques That Require Hand Contact To The Earth Can Be Performed While Wearing These Gauntlets (Wrist Blades).

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(Sanzoku Taijutsu : Rikkido Tsuppari) Bandit Taijutsu : Liquid Thrust

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Rank : A
Type : Offensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : The User Extends His Arm To The Opponent And Sends Water Chakra To The Tip Of His Entire Palm And Concentrates It To A Thin Layer Of Sticky Slime On The Palm, The The User Simply Touches The Slime - Covered Arm At The Opponent Making The Opponent's Clothing Stick To The User's Arm And The User Pulls His Arm Back Pulling The Opponent Towards The User And Once Pulled The User Quickly Fills His Free Arm With Chakra And Delivers A Powerfull And Fast Punch To The Opponent's Face Which If Directly Hit Would Send The Opponent Back A Few Good Metres, And Can Easily Break The Opponent's Nose. Just Before The Impact Of The Free Arm The User Releases The Water Chakra Within His Arm So Due To The Hit The User Wouldn't Fly Back Along With His Opponent Due To The Slime Holding The User's Arm And The Opponent's Body.
- Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu
- No Taijutsu During The Turn This Technique Is Used

(Genjutsu : Yabun Tenteis Seken) Illusion Technique : Night Lord's World

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Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : The User Shows His Night Lord's Judgement Blade To The Opponent And The Opponent Falls Under The User's Genjutsu Where The Time Of Day Turns Into A Dark Night Where The Opponent Almost Can't See Anything Except The Moon And A Few Contours Of His Surroundings. Once The User Moves From His Position Once The Opponent Fell Under His Genjutsu The Opponent Thinks That The User Dissapeared, Leaving The Opponent Merselesly Standing In His Position. Any Object That Makes Contact With The Opponent, The Opponent Will Be Able To See Clearly, Meaning That If The User Touches His Opponent He Will Be Revealed Once Again.

(Sanzoku Taijutsu : Hasu No Hagane) Bandit Taijutsu : Lotus Of Steel

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Rank : S
Type : Offensive
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : 80
Description : This Sanzoku Taijutsu Technique Is Used Only With Weapons From The Sanzoku Arsenal. There Are Two Versions Of This Taijutsu, One Specially Made For The Wrist Blades And One For Daggers And Other Sanzoku Weapons.
-Wrist Blade Version : The User Makes His Wrist Blades Into The 2nd State Where They Are Ready For Combat And Once The Opponent Is In Range The User Infuses Chakra Into His Legs And Makes A Low Jump For The Opponent With His Right Hand Out - Aimed For The Opponent's Shoulder, The User Lands Right Next To The Opponent And Pierces The Opponent's Shoulder With His Right Arm, Once The Hit Is Delivered, Using His Left Arm The User Slashes Through The Opponent's Stomach And Once Doing That, Draws His Right Arm's Wrist Blade Out Of The Opponent's Shoulder And Starts Spinning To His Right Side With His Both Arms Fully Extended, The Slashes Are Mostly Aimed For The Chest And Stomach Dealing Deadly Damage To The Opponent.
-Version Two Is Used For Daggers And Other Weapons. The User Infuses His Legs With Chakra And Makes A Low Jump For The Opponent And Quickly Slashes His Dagger Through Both Of The Opponent's Knees Making The Opponent To Fall On The User While The User Quickly Leans Back And Grabs The Opponent's Left Shoulder Stopping Him From Falling And With His Free Right Arm The User Starts Slashing Inwards And Outwards From Back To Front And So On.. The Slashes Are Aimed Either At The Chest Or Stomach
- Once Per Battle
- Only Benazz May Teach This Technique
- Must Be Given Access To The Sanzoku Arsenal
- No Taijutsu The Turn That This Technique Is Used

(Sanzoku Buki : Yabun Tenteis Jajjimento) Bandit Weapon : Night Lord's Judgement

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Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : This Is The Most Powerfull Weapon In The Entire Arsenal Of The Bandits. Only One Original Of This Blade Exists And Only The Leader Of Bandits Can Wield This Blade. It Is Made From A Black Mineral And The Handle Is Black Aswell, But Carved In Special Ornaments That Are Filled With Gold. The Blade Is Unbreakable. The Blade Has Got 3 Removable Daggers From Each Side Of The Handle That Are From The Same Mineral Aswell And Fly Faster Than Any Shuriken Or Kunai. The Sword Can Strenghten The User's Genjutsu Abilities And Can Strenghten The User's Abilities In Using Sanzoku Taijutsu. The Blade Can Increase The User's Reaction And Speed Of Thought Aswell.
- +20 Genjutsu Damage
- +20 Sanzoku Taijutsu Damage
- -10 Sanzoku Taijutsu Chakra Requirement
- Each Of These Abilites Can Be Used Twice Per Battle.
- Only Benazz Posseses This Blade

~All Declined~ All OP

 

[Alucard]

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(Honeton: Kirefunjin no Mai) - Bone Release: Dance of the Slicing Dust

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will break bones which are already out of his body, like a bone spike on his leg for example or he can break bones already on the field by sending chakra waves through the air, turning instantaneously into dust. Then he will make the dust to spin around the opponent like a tornado with great speed and will slice him from every direction. The dust is very thin and small so it can barely be seen by naked eye.
*Useable twice per battle.

(Honeton: Hone Teikuyo) - Bone Release: Bone Take Over

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will touch the opponent and send some of his bone chakra through the opponent's organism, until it reaches his bones. Once done, the user will be able to manipulate the opponent's bones for one turn.
*Useable only once per battle.

~Both Declined~ OP

 

[Geezus]

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(Doton: Resshin)- Earth Style: Earthquake.

Rank:S
Type: Offensive-Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 35(above) 80(below Ground)
Desription:The user simply makes a single hand sign,and then stomps onto the ground, When the user does, a great earthquake will commence, shaking the very earth. The earth will twist and turn, causing multiple cracks, and pillars will come out of the earth. This, in all, will cause mass destruction, the only way to survive, is to be airborne. This protects the user 360 degrees and doesnt effect a area of 2m around the user.
(Usable 3 Times)
(No Earth next Turn)
~Declined~ OP
Name: Mukoton: Kurotenshuki (Wood Release: Black God Tree)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: +40 to Mokuton if used to attack.
Description: Kurohime's only original Mukoton Technique. She infuses the wood with her chakra turning it into a Blackened state that sprouts small flower petals on it. that can defend against attacks(3 A-Rank or Below Non-Combination Jutsu) or even, attack the opponent. With This jutsu she can also produce a sword that when she attacks with it can branch out and attack if blocked.
(Usable Twice)
(Last 3 Turns)
(No more Mokuton 2 turns after use)
~Declined~ OP
Why are you making Mokuton jutsu's when you don't have a Mokuton bio?

 

[Deidara...]

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gunk shot
type: Offensive
rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Damage: 80
Chakra: 40
Description: the user has their summon Build up acid in the base of their throat. the user then combines an elementally recomposed chakra with the shot so that its more deadly than normal.if the acid hits the target it begins to corrode their skin/armor/etc. immediately,
and can be combined with katon, raiton, and fuuton.
Note: combined with katon induces burns
Note: combined with raiton induces numbing and makes the melting process painless, and difficult to respond to
Note: combined with fuuton cuses the acid to take a sharper form and cut into the flesh of the target
allowing the acids to penetrate further into the body, at a faster rate.
Note: Must know a summoning that can use acid
Note: can only be used twice per battle.
~Pending~ Do you have the acid CE? answer in a vm
draconis jet flame
Type: Offensive
rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Damage: 100
Chakra: 50
Description: the user performs a string of seals, and then breaths out a jet flame from their mouth. the flames then take the form of several wyverns (max=6) each wyvern can be controlled individually. when they travel near the ground the area beneath them becomes lava. if they seperate they encircle the target and smash into the ground cuasing an uprising of lava and then they reemrge from beneath the opponent. causing a lava torrent to explode form beneath them.
Note: can only be used once due to the strain put on the users body.
Note: no katon for 5 turins afterward
Note: can only be taught by Iseris...
Note: the users mobility is greatly impaired for the next turn.
~Declined~ OP

 

[Nero]

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Kirabi, Kurohime is dead dude!!! Plus if ur not Shodaime or Tenzo then you cant use wood this rule was made by all the mods when making a wood bio was cool back then.

(Raiton: Akuma Kase) – Lightning Release: Demonic Shackles

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user takes out a scroll and makes two hand seals (tiger – Horse) and then concentrates their lightning chakra to create shackles of lightning shoot out the scroll and bind themselves round the target shocking them into numbness and holding them in place.
Note: Effects of Numbing Last 1 turn.
Note: Binding lasts for 2 turns
~Approved~ Added binding restriction
(Doton: Tsuchi Guuzou no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Earth Statue technique

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing a couple of hand seals the user will spew a mud like substance from their mouth like a water hose covering the opponent’s body and causing the substance to harden making the appearance of the opponent turning into a statue and restricted their movement for a short period of time.
Note: movement restriction lasts 1 turn.
~Approved~
(Doton: Yuueki Tsuchi no Jutsu) Earth Release: Concrete Earth technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user manipulates their earth chakra to create the earth below the opponent turn into cement like state where the body weight causes the target to sink and then the earth hardens binding the opponent into place.
~Declined~ Add to the description
(Fuuton: Kyuushuu Suidou) – Wind Release: Suction tunnel

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a suction tunnel that surrounds a fire elemental attack and can suck out the air that feeds the flames thus making the fire burn out and stop, completely nullifying the technique.
Note: Can only be used on Fire element up to A rank
Note: Can only be used 3 times.

~Declined~ how would it be limited to just the fire?
(Katon: Hotaru no Mai) – Fire Release: Dance of the Fire Flies

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user shoots from their mouth multiple fireballs of intense heat shoot out like a storm of fire flies and converge on a large area and leave the surrounding area scorched from the intensity of the flames.
~Declined~ Restrictions?

 

[Seblax]

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(Ninpo: Kiji Tenma no Jutsu) Ninja Art: Cloth Demon Technique

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 40
Description: the user takes out a scroll making a few hand seals to release a piece of the cloth attached at both ends demon windmill shuriken. The user will focus their chakra into the cloth and manipulate the cloth by performing a sort of dance where the cloth is shot at the opponent using the demon windmill shuriken and dealing heavy damage.
~Declined~ How can you control the cloth without any chakra strings?
(Heikou Ryou no Jutsu) – Balancing skill Technique

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra into their ears to help correct their balance when it is disrupted from a technique or disturbance of their balance.
~Pending~ Ask Rei if this is possible since she's the medical expert

 

[Mugiwara]

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(Eremento Ya)- Elemental Arrow

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After creating a bow using:Tessenka no Mai Senshu, the user will infuse an element of choice into the bone he will use as an arrow. The elemental arrow has power equal to S rank attack of that element. Arrow has the same elemental weakness as the element infused to it. The bone arrow becomes the element that the user chooses, fire arrow becomes like a fireball and so on. The arrow flies at really high speed, and has the power to penetrate high density targets.
Terra Arrow: Earth element infused arrow. Aqua Arrow: Water element infused arrow. Fire Arrow: Fire element infused arrow. Wind arrow: wind element infused arrow.
Note: Can create one arrow each round.
Note: Can only shoot 1 type of element once, thus the jutsu can only be used 5 times a battle.

-Approved-
(Taiko no Touken)- Body of Swords

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will use Shikotsumyaku to make bones come out of his legs, shoulders and elbows, in a way which will no restrict the users movement at all. The bones that stick out can be easily pulled out and used as swords in combat. These bones are especially strong compared to other bones in the Kaguyas body. The bones which are taken out of the body, will be regenerated, so that new bones stick out at the same spot where the old ones were. The user can furthermore use the bones that are sticking out to attack the opponent without having to pull it out completely.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Once activated, the technique lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Cannot use Shikotsumyaku for one round after the jutsu is deactivated.

-Approved-

(Iba Shintai)- Uncontrolled Body

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (3 to the user)
Description: The user activates this technique, forcing bones to come out, but at the same time, suppressing them with chakra, so they remain in. When the users chakra gets disrupted, (by a genjutsu, or something similiar), or when the user can not control his chakra perfectly for some reason, the bones with stick out uncontrollably around out of the user, and from the ground, defending the user against incoming projectiles, as well as giving the user superficial cuts.
The Bones burst out at really high speed right after the users chakra is disrupted, or when he loses control over it.
Note: Once activated, this lasts until the end of the battle, or until it is used up.
Note: Can only be activated twice per battle, and it has to be reactivated once the user loses control of his body.

-Declined: you cant be harming yourself like that and you can't pre-know when projectiles will be thrown at you. It might easily go the other way around, so its a no go-

(Kire Kouyou no Mai)- Dance of the Slicing Elements

Spoiler

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will make bones stick out of his body, as he starts spinning, the bones become longer and longer(3 meter max). When he starts spinning, he charges Lightning chakra into the bones, paralyzing the opponent at contact, he then continues spinning, changing the elements ever 3 seconds, charging lightning, fire, earth, water and lastly wind. Once the dance has started, it cannot be stopped. While the user is spinning, the bones will block any incoming projectiles.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: After spinning at really high speed, this technique will leave the user very dizzy and unbalanced.

-Pending: Get rid of the red part-

(Kire Kouyou no Mai)- Dance of the Slicing Elements

Spoiler

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will make bones stick out of his body, as he starts spinning, the bones become longer and longer(3 meter max). He starts spinning, starting off with charging lightning element, changing the elements ever 3 seconds, changing from lightning to fire, then to earth and then to water and lastly wind. Once the dance has started, it cannot be stopped. While the user is spinning, the bones will block any incoming projectiles.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: After spinning at really high speed, this technique will leave the user very dizzy and unbalanced.

~Declined~ I don't believe its possible to change elements that quickly, modify or remove the part in blue
(Iba Shintai)- Uncontrolled Body

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (3 to the user)
Description: The user activates this technique, forcing bones to come out, but at the same time, suppressing them with chakra, so they remain in. When the users chakra flow gets disrupted, (by a genjutsu, or something similiar), or when the user is paralyzed and cannot control his chakra perfectly, the bones with burst out uncontrollably around out of the user, and from the ground, defending the user against incoming projectiles, as well as giving the user superficial cuts, breaking him loose from genjutsu or paralyzation.
The Bones burst out at really high speed right after the users chakra flow is disrupted, or when he cannot control it perfectly.
Note: Once activated, this lasts until the end of the battle, or until it is used up.
Note: Can only be activated twice per battle, and it has to be reactivated once the users chakra flow gets disrupted or when he cannot control chakra.

^ The bones doesn't pop out when projectiles are thrown at me, but when my chakra flow is disrupted. And I'm not hurting myself very much, its almost the same as getting a clone to throw a shuriken, cutting my ear to break me out of a genjutsu.
~Declined~ Too OP

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Su-Pa-Noba)- Supernova
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates a large quantity of fire chakra throught their body and begins to glow. They then release the chakra all at the same time in every direction causing a ball of fire to expand in every direction. The blast is strong enough to leave a crater in the ground underneath the user and incinerate their foe.
- Can only be used twice per match.
- Fire Jutsu cannot be used during the next turn.
~Declined~ Wouldn't that kill you?
(Katon: Honoo-hitonomi) Flame-eater
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Medium
Damage: N/A
Chakra Cost: 60
Description: The user preforms a series of hand signs and then begins to inhale. The inhalation pulls in any A rank or below katon based chakra/jutsu within medium range. After swallowing the fire the user can use that chakra to fuel their next katon jutsu. It cannot be released on its own, such as in the form of a fireball, so it must be used as another jutsu, taking up another move.
~Declined~ You think eating a fire attack is a good idea?
(Doton: Ishi kanadzuchi danmaku) Stone Hammer Barrage
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 40
Description: The user preforms a series of hand signs and stomps on the ground. Four large stone hammers shoot up from the earth. One behind the target, one in front, one to the left and one to the right. The mallets simultaneously slam down on the enemy, crushing them.
~Declined~ I believe there are already jutsu's that exist that do the exact same thing
(Doton: Deidowaku Supaiku Wana) Mudslide Spike Trap
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: 40
Description: The user forms a series of hand seals and slams his foot on the ground. A path of earth in front of the user slants downwards as the surface turns into mud. At the end of the path where the earth didn't sink down spikes shoot out of the wall. The opponent gets carried down the path by the mud until they are slammed against the wall and impaled by the spikes.
~Declined~ This is more of a combo then a jutsu

 

[Ragnaroc]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

I'm resubmitting to update the description

Fuuton: Taishita Kaze Shuriken (Great Wind Shuriken)
Rank: S
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: (Based off of Rasenshuriken)Performed the same as taishita kaze douran, except small wind blades are focused into the spinning wind. These wind blades cut on the microscopic level and can cause severe damage to anybody caught in the funnel

• The Blades last one round.
• Can only be used twice per fight
• (Must know Great Wind Upheaval and be taught by Ragnaroc)

~Approved~

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Su-Pa-Noba)- Supernova
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates a large quantity of fire chakra throught their body and begins to glow. They then release the chakra all at the same time in every direction causing a ball of fire to expand in every direction. The blast is strong enough to leave a crater in the ground underneath the user and incinerate their foe.
- Can only be used twice per match.
- Fire Jutsu cannot be used during the next turn.
~Declined~ Wouldn't that kill you?

(Katon: Su-Pa-Noba)- Supernova
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates a large quantity of fire chakra around their body and begins to glow. They then release the chakra all at the same time in every direction causing a ball of fire to expand in every direction. The blast is strong enough to leave a crater in the ground underneath the user and incinerate their foe.
- Can only be used twice per match.
- Fire Jutsu cannot be used during the next turn.

~ Firstly, the heat would probably still burn you, secondly there is a jutsu like this already. Declined. ~

I highlighted the changed part, so instead of the chakra being gathered inside the body, it is gathered around the body.

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

]X- mo-do(X-Mode)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A(user 15 damage per turn this is active)
Description: This is one of the Strongest moves the X-Gloves can perform once fusion with the Mare Sky ring, the user will drain all the power from the X-Gloves this will cause the Gloves and the ring to become powerless and fall off, once the gloves fall off the user hands, the user eyes will turn red and his body will heat up in to a incredible rate causing steam to come from his nose every time he breaths while in this Mode the user speed will be enhanced speed and all fire jutsus performed will go up a rank and other fire jutsus used on the user will become useless
Note: While in this Mode can only use Fire Jutsus
Note: this Mode will burn the user inside per turn If the user stays in this mode longer then 3 turns his inside will be burned to the point where he will be unable to fight
Note: Gloves and ring are gone for the rest of the fight after the user comes out of this mode he will be unable to use any fire for two turns.

~ Declined ~

 

[Icemyster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: ga fugenfugo) Moth Of Silence
Type-Summoning
Rank-S
Range-All
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
One on the Moth elders, The moth of silence is about the same size as a pigeon. This Moth has the ability to transfer his chakra to the user, allowing the user to use moth techniques for three extra turns. His wings also have an image of predatorial eyes(as seen in both butterflies and moths in nature) giving him the ability to cast Genjutsu(S rankand below) upon the opponent by spreading his wings.
*Can only be Used By Icemyster*
*Can only be summoned by those with the Mark of the Monarch(moth contract)*

~ Needs restrictions ~

( Icemyster's giragira) Icemyster's Glare
Type-Attack
Rank-S
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user glares at the opponent, trapping them in this genjutsu(eye contact must be made,), once trapped the opponent begins to believe that their hands and feet have been frozen solid, and they are being encased in ice. Due to the genjutsu the opponent cannot make hand seals or run. Also, due to the strain on the user, he cannot perform any genjutsu for three turns.
*Can only Be used by Icemyster*
*Can only Be used once per Battle*

~ Explain in detail the time period for this effect to occur ~

( kazangan hane ) lava plume
Type-Attack
Range-Mid/long
Rank-S
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Description-
The User stomps on the ground, causing the earth in front of him to rise into the air, while gathering fire chakra in his lungs, then he expels the chakra in the form of a giant and intense fireball, that drags the earth along with it towards the opponent, turning into lava in the process. Due to the intensity the user cannot use any fire techniques for the next three turns without causing major damage to themselves.
*Can only be taught be icemyster*
*Can only be used three times per battle*
*Cannot be used the turn after used*

~ Declined, do not resubmit this ~