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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Sorry if this is early or not since I do not know if it's 7 days from when I posted my last custom submissions or you can start submitting from sunday/monday since that is the starting of the new week.

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Shot
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The ninja will manipulate his or her wind chakra while in motion and then create a small guided path of wind allowing the ninja to gain added speed. The slip stream adds agility to the ninja allowing him or her to evade low rank attacks. Due to the nature of this jutsu the ninja can't use high lightning jutsu while using it. The speed increase of the ninja is now similar to the speed of the 3rd gate. Though it is fast the ninja can only sustain this slip stream for a period of time and is only available during movement.

Note: Only Musasibou can teach this move.
Note: Slip Stream lasts 3 turns.
Note: Can only be used twice a battle and must wait 1 turn after the duration.



~ Nice idea, but Declined ~

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: short to mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Ninja gathers earth chakra and slams his foot on the ground. 6 pillars of earth rise around the target and then begin to spin at a rapid rate. While this is happening the pillars will begin to crumble and get closer to the opponent slamming him with multiple medium sized boulders which ends with him being buried in rock.

Note: Only Musasibou can teach this move.
Note: Can only be used twice in battle and must be touching the ground.



~ Approved ~

Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 0
Description: The user gathers fire chakra and begins to exhale a bright flame that covers his body. Using a large amount of chakra control and mastery of fire the user equips flames to his body to protect himself from wind attacks. While controlling this fire the user is now more vulnerable to water attacks, but in return is protected against wind attacks. This armor also enhances fire style attacks by a small amount. After the armor is removed the users skin will be slightly burned and he will need to wait a while till he or she can equip it again.

Note: Only Musasibou can teach this move.
Note: Armor lasts for 4 turns and can only be used twice in battle.
Note: Must wait 2 turns to use this move again.
Note: User takes 10 more damage from all water jutsus.
Note: Fire jutsus get +10 damage.
Note: User takes 10 less damage from all wind jutsus.



~ Declined, similar jutsu exists ~

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Ninja uses water chakra to manipulate a large amount of water. The water then surrounds the ninja which will then collide at the target in the form of 3 streams. The 3 streams for focus on the targets largest body part applying extreme pressure that can break bones. A large water source is needed to cast this jutsu.

Note: Only Musasibou can teach this move.
Note: This move is only usable 3 times a battle and the user must have a water source.



~ Approved ~

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Using the jutsu (Katon: Goen Rasengan) - Fire Style: Flame Rasengan and applying mud from (Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Style: Mud Wall Jutsu the ninja will create a fire/earth combo attack that sends a fiery votex of molten earth at the target. This jutsu can be used as a defense against water/wind combos.

Note: Only Musasibou can teach this move.
Note: User must wait 1 turn to use this move again.



~ Declined ~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

As it is an A-rank move and it's nothing more than a powered-up punch, I see no reason to restric the amount of uses it can normally be used. However I restricted it that it can only be used twice as a combo per battle.

(Katon: Karyuu no Enchu) - Fire Style: Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow -

Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short (can medium/long in combination with another jutsu)
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses katon-based chakra into his elbow(s) and releases it in an instant like a booster jet from his elbow(s). As a result the speed and strength of the users punches are increased dramatically. The booster makes the punch so fast it’s nearly impossible to block/dodge it without having a special technique to do it(IG for example). The result of the speed is that internal damage the punch does is increased (as more speed means more power is released upon contact through the opponents body). The booster can be used for multiple strikes with both arms, though it’s mainly used as a one-hit attack.
This jutsu can also be used in combination with a katon-jutsu that is released from the users hand(s). As this jutsu’s doesn’t require any handseals(it just releases an amount of chakra), it can be used at the exact same time when performing the katon-jutsu, giving it a +20 damage boost (it still counts as one of the three jutsu’s).

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used in combination with a katon-jutsu released from the hands*
*Can only be used twice in a combo*

~ Approved ~

I increased the amount of damage it does to the user and added a restriction that the next two turns no fire jutsu's can be used.

(Katon: Karyuu no Guren Bakuenjin) - Fire style: Fire Dragon's Red Lotus Flame Exploding Blade -

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120
Description: The user collects a huge amount of katon-based chakra in his arms and releases it as a massive, large scale torrent of blade-shaped flames that strike the enemy in a spiral formation. Every time the enemy (or anything else for that matter) is hit with one of the blades it explodes with enormous force. As it are blades they make a slashing motion and blow up on contact, taking parts of the surface of the earth with it.
Because a large amount of blades is released, the entire battlefield is engolved in exploding flames and the make the battlefield full of large craters. It also evaporates watersources.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*-20 damage to the user due to it uses an enormous amount of fire chakra*
*The user can't use any fire juts's the next two turns*

~ Still slightly OPed, remove the entire battlefield part ~

I deleted the Sharingan-part and added a restriction of -10 damage to the user. Don't forget Ken Ki has to be activated to use it >.>

(Shishi Sonson) - Lion's Song -

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user must have unleashed Ken Ki to use it. Placing a sheathed sword upright and listening to the "breath" of his opponent. The user then goes in a straight line to the opponent, using the speed from Ken Ki(=4 IG), making it look like he completely disappears and reappears behind the opponent. The attack rapidly unsheathes, attacks once, and sheaths the sword again when the user is past the opponent. The attack itself consists only from one straight slash that attacks the part between the shoulders and chest, slashing so deep it makes the arm that was hit disfunctional and making the opponent bleed to death. The technique is back-handed as opposed to from the waist with a standard grip on the sword. The slash is not completely full as the tip of the blade leaves the blade when the it slashes and then is put back into the scabbard.
Utilizing the speed of Ken Ki at it max and focusing it all in one slash it makes it nearly impossible to dodge block, unless the opponent itself has Ken Ki activated. Even then it’s almost it requirs skill.
It's strong enough to cut through steel.

*Can only be used when released Ken Ki*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
* -10 damage to the due to the enormous strain it puts on the body*
A gif of the attack:
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~ Restrict it to once per battle and add more side effects ~
(Katon: Karyuu no Guren Bakuenjin) - Fire style: Fire Dragon's Red Lotus Flame Exploding Blade -

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120
Description: The user collects a huge amount of katon-based chakra in his arms and releases it as a massive, large scale torrent of blade-shaped flames that strike the enemy in a spiral formation. Every time the enemy (or anything else for that matter) is hit with one of the blades it explodes with enormous force. As it are blades they make a slashing motion and blow up on contact, taking parts of the surface of the earth with it.
Because a large amount of blades is released, the part of the battlefield hit gets a number of large, smoldering craters. It also evaporates watersources.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*-20 damage to the user due to it uses an enormous amount of fire chakra*
*The user can't use any fire juts's the next two turns*

I will add restrictions to the other one another time ~_~ to lazy now

~ Approved, I added a bit ~
 

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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Editing Some Old Customs. The original version is outside of the spoiler, the edited one is below in the spoiler.

(Kuchyoise: Sanshouuo Shokka-) Summoning: Salamander Shocker
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will summon a salamander that stands on all fours and is about the shippuuden gamachu's size. The salamander has the ability to shoot a concentrated blast of lightning at the opponent and create lightning throughout it's whole body. The salamander also has the ability to split itself into hundreds of very diminutive salamanders and they are able to make lightning throughout their whole body and discharge it through the opponent. The lightning can only be dishcharged through the opponent if the salamanders have crawled onto him/her. The most dangerous part of this ability is that once one of the salamander's die the main salamander will get smaller and smaller until it completely dies (once all of them are destroyed).
Note: The Salamander is made a lot of electricity. The electricity cannot simply stay in the salamander or it would die from the overload so it discharges a small amount each turn. Therefore, after 8 turns the salamander will be dissmissed and the user must wait 3 turns before summmoning it again.
Only Usable by Riku..

(Kuchyoise: Hyokin) Summoning: Hyokin
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon a green gecko that goes by the name of Hyokin. Hyokin is approximately the size of Shippuden Gamachu. This gecko has the ability to shoot a concentrated blast of lightning from its mouth equal to an A rank or completely cover itself in lightning in a style similar to Chidori Nagashi, though a bit more concentrated, equal to B rank. The gecko, using its suction cup-like toes, can easily and quickly climb any surface, no matter how steep. The gecko is also able to split itself into about 20 small geckos, that can all still discharge electricity throughout their body. These geckos are able to use their suction-like toes to attach to the opponent, or anything else and discharge electricity.
Note: Hyokin is forced to discharge an amount of electric chakra per turn to avoid injuring himself with the lightning chakra. Therefore, after 6 turns, Hyokin will not have any lightning chakra left and will simply be a large gecko. He can be summonend again, but he will not be able to release lightning chakra for the remainder of the battle.

(Kuchyoise: Geri-n Iguana) Summoning Green Iguana
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon two green iguanas. The iguanas both have the ability to blend in with their environment allowing them to move completely unseen by the naked eye. They also have sharp claws to attack with. The iguanas are able, as a last resort, to use the dewlap under their neck to surround their head making a shield that can block nearly anything. Once this happens, the iguana that used it, if the rank is of their rank or higher, will dissappear due to their head still being exposed. If it is lower than their rank then the iguana will be badly injured.
Note: When one iguana is destroyed, the other one's power is cut in half.
Note: Must have signed a contract with the lizards.

(Kuchyoise: Kamereons) Summoning: Chameleons
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon two chameleons. These chameleons have the ability to freely make themselves completely invisible, hiding their chakra as well, with their great ability of camouflage. The chameleons have sharp claws that can be used for attacking purposes, and also hold the element of water, able to use certain water jutsu (jutsu that are blasts of water or can somehow be released from the mouth), however, when attacking, the chameleons are visible for a moment before attacking with their claws, and visible during the entire usage of a jutsu. The two chameleons also have one final ability, in order to protect the one who summoned them or the other lizard, the chameleon can enlarge the dewlap under his neck, making almost a shield around his face. However, when hit, the chameleon will then die (not like... for good lol) due to the exposure of its face and taking the hit directly. This can only block attacks of B rank and lower, but the chameleon dies from any attack when using this.

(Katon: Kasai Ken Dageki) Fire Style: Fire Blade Strike
Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage:40
Description:The user makes blades of fire to attack the opponent. The user can make the blades come from underground and attack or he/she can make them attack the opponent coming from the air. The user also has the choice of making 1 large fire sword attack the opponent or 6 smaller, almost dagger sized swords attack him/her.
Useable only by SharinganMaster

(Katon: Kasai Ken Dansu) Fire Style: Fire Blade Dance
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will create six blades that will encircle him. The blades will move around him in a smooth motion, almost seeming like a dance of the blades. The blades will prevent any incoming wind attacks up to S rank from hurting the user (only one blade will be destroyed when doing they protect the user), and can be sent out at free will. The blades are able to cut through the target, or practically meld with it (E.g. It flys towards a tree and instead of cutting through it, it spreads around the tree just before hitting), enflaming it. The blades will be sent out at the users command, but can also freely attack when the opponent is within fist/weapon range.
~All Approved~
 
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(Doton: Saigo Anko-Ru) Earth Release: Last Encore
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Four walls on each side of the opponent raise swiftly and collide into the foe in order to crush them and then following up with another four walls in a diamond shape slamming into the wreckage of the previous walls.

~ No restrictions ? O_O ~

(Katon/Fuuton: Kasai Kazaana )-Fire/Wind style: Fire Wind Tunnel
Rank: S
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Range: Short-Long
Description: The user focuses his chakra to create a tunnel of wind that will damage all that are hit by it or are within it. As the user does this he infuses fire chakra to create a tunnel of fire. This jutsu creates a tunnel of 5m wide and 3m high, and only goes one way. This direction is towards the user making the fire intense from the massive amount of wind being used.
Note: 4x per battle
Co-created by Musasibou

~ Declined ~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(suiton koko no jutsu)water style:ink rain
Rank:b
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: n/a
Description:the user make the sky rains ink
notes:you have to attack with a katon jutsu after this jutsu or this jutsu will have not any intrest

~ User banned from CJ thread for two weeks ; notice to all mods do not check any of his customs till 25 January and infract him if he submits any ; since he edited my ~Declined~ in his post to ~Approved~ ~
 
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(Genjutsu: Kage Mahi) Illusion Technique: Shadow Paralysis
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user quickly executes an eyesight illusion that although does not harm the reciever itself but the chakra control of the opponent and disrupts any distributed chakra from the hosts body i.e; shadow clone(s), causing the clone(s) to be restricted in an unconcsious and paralysed state.
? Only usable two times

~ Approved ~

(Suiton: Mizu Myaku) Water Release: Water Pulse

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+20 Continuous)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a triangular shape with his/her hands and blows small amounts of water to pulse through the triangle and from further on, the water extends into a large triangle of water and at a long-range, can even knock over a summoning such as 'Gamabunta'. This can be shot out successivly once the first pulse has been executed but at the cost of excessive chakra with each additional pulse.
~ Can only be used twice per battle

~ Approved, I added a bit ~

(Katon: Nagare no Okibi) Fire Release: Steam of Blazing Fire
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+15 Continuous)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user spews out a long and deadly stream of continuous fire from their mouth towards the opponent and can be manoeuvred in synchronization to the movement of the users head/mouth.

~ Declined, similar jutsu exists ~
 
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Eagle:Giant Fury-eagle giant furyType:Attack/Defense
Range:Long/Short
Rank:S
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description:an eagle that is the size of gamabunta that when he swings his wings its almost impossible for the opponent to hold is footing he is a master of wind techniques and can use any wind technique any wind element technique he uses comes out 1 rank higher then original C-B,B-A

*one of the most powerful summons in the eagle contract

earth style:Grand maze-地球のスタイル:グランド迷路
Type: Defence
Range:Long
Rank:S
Chakra:45
damage:90
Description:the user forces earth below them to level and create a huge maze that the user can hide,the walls of the maze run with the users chakra in them which enables the user to sense the opponent in the maze

*usable once
*user cannot use earth jutsus for the next 2 turns


Water style:Masters puppetry-水スタイル:マスターズ人形
Type:Attack
Range:Long/Short
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:A water jutsu that sends out hundreds of water based strings into the field that are very tiny that are invisible to the naked eye the opponent wont be able to use water based


*note this is not actual puppetry



Wind Style:Imperial Gust-風のスタイル:インペリアル突風
Type:Attack
Range:Short/Long
Rank:Forbidden
Chakra:50
Damage:100
Description:the user makes the hand signs and creates a huge ball of wind that is full of gushing wind and cutting wind waves of pure wind chakra that makes it extra dangerous the shape of this jutsu is like a giant ball of bright light that the user holds with his both hands into the air and attacks the enemy

*after using it the user cannot use wind techniques for 4 turns the reason is the user uses all of his wind reserves for this jutsu and it takes 4 turns to recover
*usable once per battle
*it has the power to level an island


Earth Style:Solid-地球のスタイル:固体
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:the user catches the enemy by his feet or arms and uses this jutsu the opponent will run his earth chakra throw his arm to disbalance the molecule structure of the body part he is holding thus turning the part into stone so the enemy cannot move if his leg is turned to stone and etc.

*lasts 2 turns
*usable 2 times per battle

~ What happened to the Japanese names ? ~
 
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(Buki: Doragon Buin) Weapon: Dragon Staff
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The Dragon Staff is weapon used by Kaze that he keeps sealed in his right hand that is marked by a Dragon Symbol. The Staff also have the capabilities of interconnecting and making a nun-chunk weapon,the user can also infuse charka elements or just pure charka into the staff

~ Approved ~

(Doragon Buin No Jutsu: Raikou Inferuno)- Dragon Staff Style: Lightning Inferno
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user infuses Lightning charka into the staff then hits the opponent with it causing a massive explosion of Lightning

Can only be used 2 per battle

~ Approved ~
 
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( Azumi no Isora ) - Ancestor of the Azumi
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
This technique requires two people to perform. The first person spits out water which reforms into a number of wide, thin discs. The second person uses their wind chakra to coat the edge of the discs making them extremely sharp. The first person then sends the discs forward in a wide arc, covering a large area. The discs rotate as they travel, making them even sharper and able to cut through nearly anything. The discs travel in such a wide and tall arc that they cannot be avoided by moving to the sides or upwards.
• Can only be used twice per battle
~Declined~ Add more restrictions

( Ajisukitakahikone ) - Screaming Mountain-Creator
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
The user of this technique focuses their earth chakra into the ground, making a large hollow mountain rise up from the earth. The user, as the mountain is rising up, fills the hollow with wind chakra. If the mountain is ruptured, or if the user wishes, the wind chakra will explode forwards, blowing huge pieces of rock shrapnel propelled by fierce winds [ which themselves cause damage ] forwards or to whichever side the opponent is. The shrapnel are so large they can even damage summonings.
• Can only be used twice per battle

~Declined~ only one restriction?
( Daikokuten ) - Majestic Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
The user of this technique focuses fire chakra in their hands and shoots two spiralling walls of flame forward. Some distance from the user, the two flames collide, and since they are rotating in the opposite direction, fight with each other for dominance. The user takes a breath and shoots off a small burst of wind which pierces the boundary between the two flames, letting them merge, and then the wind, carrying some fire with it continues forward as a fire/wind bullet. The user then takes another deep breath and releases a huge blast of wind shaped like a full dragon [ head, wings, body, tail ] which combines with the fire that merged with each other and then goes off into the sky. Once in the sky, it comes streaking down at extremely high speeds as a fire/wind dragon straight at the opponent. If this technique meets a water/wind technique, it will be dispelled but will create a localised field hot enough to melt flesh for ten seconds.
• Can only be used once per battle
• User takes 25 damage
~Declined~ OP

( Fuujin za Raijin ) - Thunderstorm Encampment
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
The user creates three man-sized spheres of lightning. The user then makes a tornado of wind surrounding these spheres, which carries them within itself and then heads up and then comes crashing down upon the opponent. Once the tornado connects with the opponent or the area near the opponent, the spheres of lightning split up into a multitude of smaller spheres which, propelled by the fierce winds of the tornado, quickly descend on the opponent and electrocute them. The massive discharge of electricity quickly causes the tornado to collapse inwards, smashing the opponent with devastating force. If the tornado is attacked on the way to the opponent, it frees the lightning from it and sends it shooting forward at the opponent at high speeds, propelled by wind while the tornado collapses.
• Can only be used once per battle
• User takes 25 damage from using this technique
~Declined~ Change the rank and add another restriction

( Futsunurushi ) - General of the Sun
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
The user spits water and makes several swords of water around them.These swords have extremely sharp edges. The user then charges the swords with electricity [ water is a great conductor of electricity ] and sends them flying at the opponent. The downside of this technique is that the user has to maintain the ram seal with their hands till the technique hits the opponent. Should they remove the ram seal at some point, then the lightning chakra will overload, decomposing the water into hydrogen and oxygen, which will then explode with great intensity due to the heat of the lightning, and hence not be able to travel forwards anymore. If the user has a second person with them, then they can change the direction of the swords flight by making appropriate hand seals, but the user alone cannot.
• Can only be used twice per battle
~Declined~ OP and needs another restriction
 
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( Fuuton: Shodaime Hokage Senju Hashirama no Iji ) Wind Release : Memory of the First Hokage, Hashirama Senju
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses their wind chakra, and a huge figure of the stoic Hashirama Senju will appear behind them, made out of wind. The figure then dissolves into a large number of wind blades that strike the ground, throwing up huge masses of earth and rocks at the opponent from all directions. The weight of these will crush the opponent under them.
*Only twice per battle

( Fuuton: Nidaime Hokage Senju Tobirama no Iji ) Wind Release : Memory of the Second Hokage, Tobirama Senju
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses their wind chakra, and a huge figure of the playful Tobirama Senju will appear behind them, made out of wind. The figure then dissolves into a large amount of wind that strikes any water source in the area, throwing up huge waves at the opponent. This can alternately be used to focus any Rain in the arena into a wave at the opponent, or return a water jutsu headed at the user like a wave at the opponent [ the force of the wind blows the water back at the opponent ]
*Only twice per battle

~ Both Approved ~
 
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( Fuuton: Rasenken ) Wind release: Spiraling blade
Type: Attack
Range: Short - mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User creates set of handseals and focuse spiraling wind on their hand. After it they release it in form of Multiple spinning blades that can create serious damage if they hit. This jutsu can reach up to fifteen meters causing blades cut their target in that range.

~ Declined ~
 
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Puppet Technique: Great Lion (Kairai Jutsu: Kyousei Raion)
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defense/supplumentary
Range: Mid Range
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 20
Description: A wooden puppet of a lion. About the size of a human being. It has a mane of poision needles which allows the user to control and shoot them at the opponent. The lion can be moved around very fast, with the help of the user. The lion can also attack by biting and by also shooting various projectiles from its mouth. The mouth of the lion is infused with poison, allowing it to temporarily injure the opponent.

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(Inuzuka: Doku Bakudan)Inuzuka: Poison Bomb
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short -Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A ninken of inuzuka, will release chakra into their mouth, then by mixing there chakra with acids that are hidden inside the dog. They will create poison that can be shaped into bombs of poison. The dog will release the bombs by chewing the poison and barking, the poison bombs can burn the skin if the opponent is not careful.
- This can only be used 3 times each battle unless stated otherwise or given permission to use it more
- Must be part of inuzuka clan and given permission to use by ZetsuPOD

~ No poisons unless you're a puppet user or a med student or have been given special permission by Rei ~
 
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Chago's jutsus:

-Sword Techniques-

Kaze houmen: Kaze touza zoukyou (Wind Release: Wind Current increase)
Rank-A
Type- Supplementary/defense
Range- Short
Chakra- 30
Damage- None
Description- The user concentrates more chakra on the rotating wind aura around the sword to make it rotate faster witch makes the wind more deadlier and the rotating aura is able to block kunais and shuriken coming at them as well as weak C-D rank Lighting jutsus
(note can only be use by Chago)


kaze Houmen: Kaze touza enchou (Wind Release: Wind current Extension)

Rank-A
Type:Attack/defense
Range- Long
Chakra-30
Damage-60
Description:The user concentrates chakra on to the rotating wind of Chakra around the sword witch is able to make the rotating wind around the sword extend about 10 feet from the user
(note:can only be used by Chago)

subeta gigei: sobou kiwa hagane (Sword Arts: Hard Edge Steel)

Rank- A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage- 60
Description: The user concentrates chakra on to their sword making the steel of the sword hard witch in result is able to cut mid size rocks and armor jutsus up to B rank.

-Wind jutsus-

Kaze Houmen: howaido ookami denka (Wind Release: White Wolf Charge)

Rank- A
Type:Attack
Range:Short/Long
Chakra:30
Damage- 60
Description: The user concentrates wind chakra and creates a Mid-size orb witch is then made into a wolf like pattern with the wind is in a white color and then its able to be directed at the opponent at any direction.
(note: can only be use by Chago)

kaze houmen: howaido hirate shindou (Wind Release: White Palm Impact)

Rank-A
Type:Attack
Range- Short
Chakra- 30
Damage- 60
Description-The user concentrates a great amount of wind chakra on to the palm making the palm look a whitish color and it is capable of cutting large objects in half.

Kaze houmen: yuuen Kaze zama houmen (Wind Release: Grand wind state release)

Rank- S
Type-supplementary/Defense
Range-Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description- The user goes under a wind state release witch the wind covers around the users body in a high speed rotation witch may cause blurriness to the human eye the byakuyan eye could see throught it and only a 3 tomoe sharingan can also see through it as well as MS sharingan and EMS sharingan. The users also is protected by the wind and is able to move in extremely high speeds and their strength greatly increases one punch could make a hole in a large size rock. The use while in this state also is able to block lighting jutsu up to A rank. The mode can only be used for three turns and the user also is unable to move for one turn do to exhaustion.
(Lighting Release: Flash of Blindness) Raiton: senkou
Rank: A
Type:Defence
Range: long
Chakra:30
Damage:none
Description: The user concentrates Lighting chakra around him then he/she make a yellow orb appear above him/her that flashes and blinds the enemy temporarely.
(Note: the blindness last 2 turns)
(note: if the user doesn't close his/her eyes they are blinded as well)

~ Declined, similar jutsu exists ~
 
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Eagle:Giant Fury-eagle giant furyType:Attack/Defense
Range:Long/Short
Rank:S
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description:an eagle that is the size of gamabunta that when he swings his wings its almost impossible for the opponent to hold is footing he is a master of wind techniques and can use any wind technique any wind element technique he uses comes out 1 rank higher then original C-B,B-A

*one of the most powerful summons in the eagle contract

earth style:Grand maze-地球のスタイル:グランド迷路
Type: Defence
Range:Long
Rank:S
Chakra:45
damage:90
Description:the user forces earth below them to level and create a huge maze that the user can hide,the walls of the maze run with the users chakra in them which enables the user to sense the opponent in the maze

*usable once
*user cannot use earth jutsus for the next 2 turns


Water style:Masters puppetry-水スタイル:マスターズ人形
Type:Attack
Range:Long/Short
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:A water jutsu that sends out hundreds of water based strings into the field that are very tiny that are invisible to the naked eye the opponent wont be able to use water based


*note this is not actual puppetry



Wind Style:Imperial Gust-風のスタイル:インペリアル突風
Type:Attack
Range:Short/Long
Rank:Forbidden
Chakra:50
Damage:100
Description:the user makes the hand signs and creates a huge ball of wind that is full of gushing wind and cutting wind waves of pure wind chakra that makes it extra dangerous the shape of this jutsu is like a giant ball of bright light that the user holds with his both hands into the air and attacks the enemy

*after using it the user cannot use wind techniques for 4 turns the reason is the user uses all of his wind reserves for this jutsu and it takes 4 turns to recover
*usable once per battle
*it has the power to level an island


Earth Style:Solid-地球のスタイル:固体
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:the user catches the enemy by his feet or arms and uses this jutsu the opponent will run his earth chakra throw his arm to disbalance the molecule structure of the body part he is holding thus turning the part into stone so the enemy cannot move if his leg is turned to stone and etc.

*lasts 2 turns
*usable 2 times per battle

~ What happened to the Japanese names ? ~
japanese names added =)
 

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Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A broad and strong sword made out entirely of Black Stone and beautifully decorated with gold. Though it's looks like a heavy sword, it's as light as a feather. As a result its speed is immense and can easily counter incoming attacks.
It has a number of effects:
  • Gives +20 damage to each wind jutsu of the user
  • The opponents wind jutsu's loose -10 damage
  • The sword can be infused with wind-chakra. As a result it becomes sharper, but it can also increase the length of the sword, but not by alot, making its reach greater.
  • By swinging the sword the user can send multiple shuriken at the opponent made out of slicing winds. These shuriken can easily be stopped by jutsu's, however they are alot faster then normal shurikens, and are able to slice through normal ones and still continue.
  • The sword can also release wind currents that rapidly circle around the blade. These currents are strong enough to slice swords.These currents increase the damage done by any taijutsu or sword techniques by creating wind currents around the sword, which increase the size of the wound.
    *Can only be wielded by Ingwer Hatake*
    *The sword is indestructible, though this doesn't mean it can destroy everything*
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~ Declined ~

(Doton: Saigo Anko-Ru) Earth Release: Last Encore
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Four walls on each side of the opponent raise swiftly and collide into the foe in order to crush them and then following up with another four walls in a diamond shape slamming into the wreckage of the previous walls.
Note: usable two times per battle

~ Approved, I edited it to twice ~
 
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(Lighting Release: Flash of Blindness) Raiton: senkou
Rank: A
Type:Defence
Range: long
Chakra:30
Damage:none
Description: The user concentrates Lighting chakra around him then he/she make a yellow orb appear above him/her that flashes and blinds the enemy temporarely.
(Note: the blindness last 2 turns)
(note: if the user doesn't close his/her eyes they are blinded as well)
copy of the offical jutsu approved by nexus
 

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(Buki : Ikazuchi Doragon Katana) Weapon : Thunder Dragon Blade
Type : Supplementary
Rank : A
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : 60
Description : This Blade Was In Possesion Of The Founder Of The Cloud Village - The First Raikage, He Made This Blade For His Own Self, Though After His Death - Grave Robbers Stole The Blade And So Began The Blade's Journey. The Blade Has A Gold Handle, And On The Beggining Of The Steel - A Dragon's Head That Has It's Mouth Open, And From It's Mouth, The Steel Part Of The Blade Appears Once Added Lightning Release Chakra Into It. Added Lightning Chakra To The Inside Of The Dragon's Mouth, The Chakra Shall Call Out The Hidden Steel Part Of The Blade And It Will Draw Out From The Dragon's Mouth
Note : Only Benazz Posseses This Jutsu
Note : Once Damage That Would Normally Destroy A Regular Blade Is Dealt To The Thunder Dragon Blade - The Blade Will Just Return To The Dragon's Mouth
Note : The Steel Part Of The Blade Can Only Be Called Out Once Per Battle, That Means If It Has Sheathed Itself In Due To Damage - That Means It Will Be Dorment No Matter How Much Chakra Will Be Added In It Till The Next Battle

~ Jutsu template incomplete ~
 
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Ant Bomb Technique ( Ami Bakudan no Jutsu )

Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A variation of (Hachi Bakudan No Jutsu) - Bee Bomb Technique, where the user detonates ants upon contact. The ants release a squeeze of poison instead of wax, which can have devastating effects on mouth, nose, eyes or open wounds, but don't really do anything on the user skin.
~ Approved ~
I'd also like to update:

As a winner of the Hunt, I was given the opportunity to submit 2 costums, no matter my rank

2nd Jutsu:
(Reza-Shirakasu) Razor Scatter

Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: This technique requires a chakra conductive material (For example: Chakra Blade) and a very accurate user. After infusing both 50 chakra aswell as 15 health points into the blade, the weapon(s) will collapse and desintegrate into tons of invisible razor blades (due to it's size) that will travel at very high speeds. The user will manipulate the mist with his chakra, and can fuse them as he wishes, to create barriers or weapons from the razors. This mist can change it's density, but not it's mass, so it will be confined to the original weapon's mass.
This blades can be sensed by chakra sensing users/jutsus but can only be seen by doujutsu users (For example: Sharingan). After 3 turns, the blades will regroup on the handle(s) of the original weapon(s) and take an extra 10 health points to the user.
*Can only be used by Needle Users or Archers*
*Requires a Chakra Conductive Material*
*Can only be used once per battle per battle*
*Can only desintegrate 2 weapons max*

Infused with water has no special effect.

I'd like to add:

Water: Upon contact, the shards release micro jets of water that infuse more water on the blood, making the opponent bleed more and faster.

~ Declined ~
 
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Just to let u guys know I have a Neji bio ;) Also to let u know we all seen Neji having the power blast chakra from his body..

(Hakke, Taishoku Shouheki): [Eight Divination Signs Fading Barrier]

Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short
Chakra:50-(+5 for each turn it's active)
Damage Point:
Description:A unique technique developed by the Hyuuga clan.The user will begin emitting a steady but subtle release of chakre from his/her entire body, saturating a relatively short range around his/her body. This chakra, not enough to cancel out an opponent?s, is intended rather to interfere with and disrupt an opponent?s chakra as long as they are within the area. Activated jutsus such as for example,"Lightning Strike Armour" to surrounding them, will become disrupted and fall apart, opponent's chakra will seem to run amuck leaving them with difficulties in molding it, their bodies will begin reacting to their disrupted chakra flow causing them to feel a weakening, slowing and slight loss of balance, etc, nothing major, but enough to prove disadvantageous in close quarter and hand to hand combat. All an opponent has to do to free themselves from this effect is to step away from her "Mid Range" and out of the affected zone, as long as they are not within it they will not be affected by it, this is very much intended for close range taijutsu combat. Unfortunately however, this Chakra is not visible to normal eyes, meaning a foe is unlikely to realize anything is happening until after they begin feeling the effects, and even then are unlikely to know what exactly is happening or where the user's chakra stops.
Note: The Barrier can only be active one turn per battle


-Declined: OP-

(Hakke Ryu Ha):[Pure Chakra Energy Blast]

Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage Point:80
Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra beams, and putting to use her/his understanding in the control and focus of chakra. A powerful and destructive technique, the user will focus an amount of chakra into one of her/his palms (or two if she/he needs more power). Finally, aimed towards her target, this chakra will be released right towards them. The Chakra fires out like a powerful energy blast, taking the appearance of a 6 inch wide bright bluish white beam of light, almost laser like. This blast is very powerful, it could blast through solid rock creating a hole 1 foot wide in the blink of an eye. It can cut through steel just as easily, Being a blast of Pure concentrated chakra it can also cut through chakra with ease. Whatever it hit gets blasted right through, as if vaporized. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt Chakra.
[ ]---this is how it would look



-Declined:You need to know Yin & Yang to achieve this-


(Sutori-Kingu):[ Streaking Chakra needles/Chakra Senbons ]

Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage Point:60
Description:A Jyuuken technique requiring relatively strong Chakra Control. The ninja Raises concentrates and fires off small needle like Chakra projectiles from any tenketsu in their Body. These Chakra needles are sharp and pierce into flesh and bone. When hitting a target these needled disrupt the targets chakra flow in the area where they hits. These needles are usually 3 inches long and hair thin, but contain enough concentrated chakra to be slightly visible to the normal eye as a thin shining sliver. This technique can be used to fire multiple needles at a time in rapid fire succession, increasing the total damage done, this can result in complete overwhelming of an opponents chakra system, or it can take them down on the pain alone or can simply be used to disable them long enough to close in and finish them off. or the Hyuuga user can fire a burst of needles from each of her/his Tenketsus simultaneously in all direction from he/herself, this being effective mostly in close range, or they can be fired individually, one at a time.

-Declined: Tenketsu are nodes from which chakra can be released, but these chakra needles would cut your body also and destroy your tenketsus.-

(Hakkesho kiritateru ): [Crescent Blade]

Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage Point:60
Description:This is a simple Jutsu developed by a Hyuuga. Focusing chakra into her/his hand the user will then swing it in an arcing motion emitting sending chakra as she does so in the form of a 16 inch wide paper thin crescent shaped form of shining blue translucent energy. Easily seen by normal eyes this Crescent blade travels very quickly and cuts as deep as a Kunai or Shuriken. Able to cut through flesh but not bone, none the less it can prove dangerous depending on where it hits the opponents chakra system. With a total range of 30 feet, this attack will cross its entire range within a second before dissipate into nothingness

-Approved-

(Bakurikimaha)-Shockwave

Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage Point:80
Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan. That once ones use to decimates an entire city. This technique is performed by raising two fingers and controlling it?s chakra flow and concentrating and focusing there Chakra into both ends of there fingers.Causing an shockwave of expolsion from the top of the ground up which covers a wide area.
Note: Can only be use 3 times in battle

-Declined: just because you focus chakra into both ends of your fingers you will cause a shockwave explosion of pure energy? are you radioactive or sth?-
(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Eye Technique: Blast From Heaven

Type:Supplementary/Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:-Short-Mid
Chakra:50
Damage Point:90(-20 to the user)
Description:This Technique is an advanced Chakra control technique developed by The Hyuuga Clan ability to emit Chakra Blast from there eyes. The user would close there "eye" or "eyes" and force there chakra into the middle of the eye creating a small point and release a huge amout of chakre from that point in the eye. The Chakra is not visible to normal eyes, meaning a foe is unlikely to realize the blast until contact of the blast. Being Pure Chakra and of an Hyuuga it can even be used to disrupt the Chakra system.
  • Note: Can only be use 1 times in battle
  • Note:"Byakugan" most be activated

~ Declined, just no ~

(Hakke, Taishoku Shouheki): [Eight Divination Signs Fading Barrier]

Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short
Chakra:50-(+5 for each turn it's active)
Damage Point:
Description:A unique technique developed by the Hyuuga clan.The user will begin emitting a steady but subtle release of chakre from his/her entire body, saturating a relatively short range around his/her body. This chakra, not enough to cancel out an opponent?s, is intended rather to interfere with and disrupt an opponent?s chakra as long as they are within the area. Activated jutsus such as for example,"Lightning Strike Armour" to surrounding them, will become disrupted and fall apart, opponent's chakra will seem to run amuck leaving them with difficulties in molding it, their bodies will begin reacting to their disrupted chakra flow causing them to feel a weakening, slowing and slight loss of balance, etc, nothing major, but enough to prove disadvantageous in close quarter and hand to hand combat. All an opponent has to do to free themselves from this effect is to step away from her "Mid Range" and out of the affected zone, as long as they are not within it they will not be affected by it, this is very much intended for close range taijutsu combat. Unfortunately however, this Chakra is not visible to normal eyes, meaning a foe is unlikely to realize anything is happening until after they begin feeling the effects, and even then are unlikely to know what exactly is happening or where the user's chakra stops.
  • Note: The Barrier can only be use once in battle
  • Note: Only 2 move can be done when active the Barrier
  • Note: No Ninjutsu can be done after the Barrier active that turn

~ How many turns does the barrier last ? ~

(Buben Jouzai) :[Soldier Pill]

Type:Supplementary
Rank:-
Range:None
Chakra Cost:None
Damage Points:+5 to the user
Description:When the chakra pill is swallowed, it allows the user to fight for several days without rest. The pill is full of proteins and a special stimulant that momentarily increases the ninja's chakra within the chakra network.
  • Note: Can only use one per battle

~ Declined ~

Kaisoku (Celerity): [Chakra Control]
Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range:-
Chakra:50
Damage Point:-+30 to evey justu and +10 to every Hyuuga clan jutus (+5 to the user)
Description: Basically what this skill involves is increasing her/his Chakra through there chakra system as well as controlling it?s flow and concentrating and focusing this Chakra boost into her/his body, dramatically increasing her/his levels of energy thus increasing her/his speeds, power etc (Think Rock Lee or Maito Gai when opening the gates).
  • Note: Can only be used 2 times in a battle
    Note: Must wait one whole turn before using it again
    Note: Only can be active once taking "Soldier Pill"

~ Declined, unrealistic ~
 
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