[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon/Raiton Kenjutsu: Saishuu Zenshin (Fire/Lightning Sword Art: Last Drive)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Desription: The user first charges fire chakra into thier weapon and then they release that chakra creating a wall of searing Fire scorches those close, then the user hacks away at a single target until ready to fire a beam of lightning that hits the target.
(No Fire/Lightning till 2 turns Afterwards)
(Usable 2 Times)

~ Approved ~

Raiton Kenjutsu: Ragunaroku (Lightning Sword Art: Ragnaroc)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 60
Damage: 120 (-30 to user as they will be caught in the blast slightly)
Description: The User kicks the opponent into the air and begins a Short Aerial Combo comprised of 6 Slashes., the last hitting sending the opponent to the ground. Then Using Lightning Chakra. They fire multiple bolts of lightning from their off-hand that explode on contact.
(No Lightning 2turns afterwards)
(Usable 2 times)

Kenjutsu: Kuraimu Penaruti (Sword Art: Crime and Punishment)
Rank:S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user takes there swords and using chakra causes it to hover around them (Such as Oro did) allowing it to attack on its own but have it close enough to still focus elemental chakra into it. After is has been charged the sword can release elemental attacks at the target.

Wind: Multiple wind blades hit the opponent
Earth: The sword implants itself into the ground causing the earth to cascade towards the target. Implaing them.
Fire: Multiple Fire blast are sent at the target
Lightning: Multiple lightning bolts are produced that zap surround the user from all angles and spread outwards.
Water: Torents of water are sent outwards hitting the target. carring them away on contact

(User loses the respective element next turn)
(Usable 2 times)

Raiton/Fuuton: Mabushii Unari (Lightning/Wind Release: Radiant Howl)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The User concentrates a large amount of wind and lightning Chakra in his mouth that when releases sends out massive shockwaves of lightning and wind that can destroy and push back whatever is in it path. The rippling wind and lightning creates a deafening howl that is able to drown out all sound and causes the user and opponent to be deaf for the turn afterwards.
(No Lightning/Wind Next Turn)
(Usable 2 times)

~ Other 3 Declined ~

 

[Azaghast]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Fuuton: Shodaime Hokage Senju Hashirama no Iji ) Wind Release : Memory of the First Hokage, Hashirama Senju
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 35
Damage: 70
Description: The user focuses their wind chakra, and a huge figure of the stoic Hashirama Senju will appear behind them, made out of wind. The figure then dissolves into a large number of wind blades that strike the ground, throwing up huge masses of earth and rocks at the opponent from all directions. The weight of these will crush the opponent under them.
*Only twice per battle

( Fuuton: Nidaime Hokage Senju Tobirama no Iji ) Wind Release : Memory of the Second Hokage, Tobirama Senju
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 35
Damage: 70
Description: The user focuses their wind chakra, and a huge figure of the playful Tobirama Senju will appear behind them, made out of wind. The figure then dissolves into a large amount of wind that strikes any water source in the area, throwing up huge waves at the opponent. This can alternately be used to focus any Rain in the arena into a wave at the opponent, or return a water jutsu headed at the user like a wave at the opponent [ the force of the wind blows the water back at the opponent ]
*Only twice per battle
~both Declined~ Please use the correct Chakra and Damage points and resubmit for further evaluation

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

first: wat so op in the first one..
sec: if i made the chains 4 will u accept it ?

ice style : all direction ice shuriken explosion ( hyouton : issai shuriken haretsu )

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Offense/Defense
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30 ( + 10 if it used as a wall or to imprison the enemy )
Damage Points: 60
Descriptions: as the user make the ice shurikens jutsu, the user make the shurikens explode with ice by expanding its size in the second it hits the enemy making the injuries expand with it, and can be used to make a wall of the ice shuriken jutsu that protect from moderate attacks, and can also be used to imprison the enemy inside the ice
- can only be used if ice shurikens was used
- can only be used twice per battle

~ Approved , I edited a bit ~

ice growth ( hyouton : hi houkou )

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense/sub
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions: by focusing your ice chakra through any ice within the range, te user will have the full control of making it grow to imprison the enemy or attack him or even protect of his attacks, and changing the ground's shape if the ice was over the ground, basically its the jutsu or making the ice grow in shapes.
- can only be used once
- -10 for each turn the user keeps the enemy imprisoned inside the ice
- can't last for more then three turns

~ Declined ~

and my last submit for this week T_T :

Summoning: White Tiger Ministers (Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora)

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is a summoning of the three huge white tigers that fight with the summoning boss, Tigrerra. Their size is the size of three normal white tigers, and they wear a defensive armor which is about as powerful as tiggera's. They also have great speed. They are faster than snakes and their claws and teeth are huge enough to cut through almost anything.
-Can be summoned with or without Tigrerra on the field.
-Can only be used twice per battle.

~ The purple part is the OPed part ~

Summoning: White Tiger Ministers (Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora)

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is a summoning of the three huge white tigers that fight with the summoning boss, Tigrerra. Their size is the size of three normal white tigers, and they wear a defensive armor which is about as powerful as tiggera's. They also have great speed. They are faster than snakes and their claws and teeth are huge enough to cut through almost anything.
-Can be summoned with or without Tigrerra on the field.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
~Declined~ You didn't change anything

 

[Kiwii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Aburame Clan: Bugs of the Exotic Death
(Aburame Batsu: Ekizochikku Oujou no Konchuu)

Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: With a special tattoo on the user's body, he is able to bring forth one different specie of bugs. These ones are forced by chakra, and do not share a conection with the user. He is efficient enough to use an extraordinary big swarm, even when is not on the bug's own nature, but all the effects last only 3 turns. After those the insects are de-summoned back to the tattoo. The user acquires a nearly perfect immunity to the bugs under his control, and the most poisonous insects produce only a little itchy feeling, wich grows more in long term exposure. Insects with contact poison are kept above clothing and not directly on the skin, but can still travel across the skin during a battle, if the moment seems right. Every summon imeadiatly de-summons the previous Exotic Bug, and takes away one Elemental Chakra from the user. The summons last 3 turns. At the end of the turn the bugs are de-summoned. D rank element appears, then C in the next turn, then B, then A, then S, then Forbidden. The user can only summon 3 types of bugs per battle.
The bugs are killed on a ritual of summonization, where the user writes multiple tags and symbols around the floor and then preforms the handseals. The spirit of the bug is sealed and thus creates a forged contract with all the bugs of the same species. The more proficient the user is in chakra control, larger is the number of insects summoned. The Tattoo can only seal 9 animal species.


Goliath Birdeaters
[SIZE="-2"]Description: Birdeaters are the largest spiders in the world, their colours varies from dark to light brown. They have hairs all around their bodies and they're used to wet enviroments. These spiders make a hissing noise when disturbed. This noise is called stridulation and is produced when the spider rubs the bristles on its legs together. Birdeaters can defend themselves by biting or by kicking urticating hair towards their perceived assailant. These hairs can be severely irritating to the skin and lungs, and have been reported to feel like shards of fiberglass[/SIZE]

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Africanized Bees
[SIZE="-2"]Description: Africanized Bees are hybrid bees created to better endure tropical enviroments, but turned out to be more agressive then they should. One sting from an Africanized bee is no worse than a sting from the common honey bee. It hurts but is rarely fatal. Unfortunately the Africanized bees attack in swarms. Their victims may be stung thousands of times. That many stings can and does kill.[/SIZE]

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Black Widows
[SIZE="-2"]Description: The Black Widow is a medium sized spider with a body about a half-inch in length.The venom is considerably stronger than that of a rattlesnake. Fortunately the amount of venom injected is too small to kill most people.
The venom injected from the Black Widow Spider bite causes a considerable amount of pain. Muscles lock and they break out in cold sweat. Sometimes the symptoms include difficulty breathing. The symptoms can go on for days. Some victims never totally recover.[/SIZE]

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Death Stalkers
[SIZE="-2"]Description: These scorpions are straw yellow in color, and can grow 3.5 to 4.5 inches (9 to 11.5 cm) in length. Its very potent venom helps it compensate for its smaller size and narrow, weak pincers; this scorpion’s sting injects extremely toxic venom (a neurotoxin) that can cause extreme pain, fever, convulsions, paralysis, and often coma or death in humans (by heart or respiratory failure). [/SIZE]

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Japanase Giant Hornets
[SIZE="-2"]Description: These wasp body length is approximately 50 mm (2 in), and have a wingspan of about 76 mm. The sting of these wasps has flesh-melting properties, and an allergic human stung by the giant hornet may die from an allergic reaction to the venom, but the venom contains a neurotoxin called mandaratoxin which can be lethal even to people who are not allergic if the dose is sufficient.[/SIZE]

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Human Bot-fly/Mosquito
[SIZE="-2"]Description: The Human Bot Fly lays its eggs on a horsefly or a mosquito, something that will attempt to land on a human. This carrier finds a human and lands on him or her. The eggs rub off onto the human, whose body heat hatches the eggs. The larvae drop onto the skin and burrow right in. Where they live. Under your skin. Eating.
The larvaes have been seen devolping on multiple other places, such as the mouth and breathing pipes, or even inner organs, such as the lungs, and the brain.
These are the only kind that work together under the user's control. The Flies rarely leave the clothes, and that's why it's easy for him to control both species at the same time.[/SIZE]

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Puss Caterpillars
[SIZE="-2"]Description: The inch-long larva is generously coated in long, luxuriant hair-like setae, making it resemble a tiny Persian cat, the characteristic that presumably gave it the name "puss." The 'fur' of the larva contains venomous spines that cause extremely painful reactions in human skin upon contact. The reactions are sometimes localized to the affected area but are often very severe, radiating up a limb and causing burning, swelling, nausea, headache, abdominal distress, rashes, blisters, and sometimes chest pain, numbness, or difficulty breathing.[/SIZE]

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Green Darner Dragonflies
[SIZE="-2"]Description: The dragonfly, Anax junius, is commonly called the green darner, after its resemblance to a darning-needle. The Green Darner is one of the largest dragonflies extant: males grow to 76 millimetres (3.0 in) in length with up to an 80 millimetres (3.1 in) wingspan. These are the fastest insects in the world, capable of reaching speeds up to 23.7m/s. The dragonflyes can bite, but aren't poisonous.[/SIZE]

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This data is factual.

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Yes, the real word is a b!tch. U_U

~ Declined for the same reason as the last time - i.e., only one type of ug allowed ~

Aburame Clan: Bugs of the Exotic Death
(Aburame Batsu: Ekizochikku Oujou no Konchuu)

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user transforms a bug's ability into a weapon. The user acquires a nearly perfect immunity to the bugs under his control, and the most poisonous insects produce only a little itchy feeling, wich grows more in long term exposure.[/font]


Goliath Birdeaters
[SIZE="-2"]Description:

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Birdeaters are the largest spiders in the world, their colours varies from dark to light brown. They have hairs all around their bodies and they're used to wet enviroments. These spiders make a hissing noise when disturbed. This noise is called stridulation and is produced when the spider rubs the bristles on its legs together. Birdeaters can defend themselves by biting or by kicking urticating hair towards their perceived assailant. These hairs can be severely irritating to the skin and lungs, and have been reported to feel like shards of fiberglass

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Weapon: The user seals the urticating hairs on a small bomb, like a smoke bomb. Upon impact, or a single handseal, a cloud of urticating air is released to the atmosphere. The cloud has half of the smoke cloud size.[/SIZE]


Africanized Bees
[SIZE="-2"]

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Description: Africanized Bees are hybrid bees created to better endure tropical enviroments, but turned out to be more agressive then they should. One sting from an Africanized bee is no worse than a sting from the common honey bee. It hurts but is rarely fatal. Unfortunately the Africanized bees attack in swarms. Their victims may be stung thousands of times. That many stings can and does kill.

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Weapon: The user can toss the poisoned infused stings and then fuse them with the wind to create a barrage of projectiles. Every bag has two thousand stings.[/SIZE]

Black Widows
[SIZE="-2"]Description:

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The Black Widow is a medium sized spider with a body about a half-inch in length.The venom is considerably stronger than that of a rattlesnake. Fortunately the amount of venom injected is too small to kill most people.
The venom injected from the Black Widow Spider bite causes a considerable amount of pain. Muscles lock and they break out in cold sweat. Sometimes the symptoms include difficulty breathing. The symptoms can go on for days. Some victims never totally recover.

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Weapon: The user infuses small needles with this poison, every needle as the same amount of poison that could be released from one spider.[/SIZE]

Death Stalkers
[SIZE="-2"]Description:

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These scorpions are straw yellow in color, and can grow 3.5 to 4.5 inches (9 to 11.5 cm) in length. Its very potent venom helps it compensate for its smaller size and narrow, weak pincers; this scorpion’s sting injects extremely toxic venom (a neurotoxin) that can cause extreme pain, fever, convulsions, paralysis, and often coma or death in humans (by heart or respiratory failure).

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Weapon: The stings of multiple scorpions are attached together and can create a string. The string can be used around the wrists or as a small whip 1 and half meters long.[/SIZE]

Japanase Giant Hornets
[SIZE="-2"]Description:

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These wasp body length is approximately 50 mm (2 in), and have a wingspan of about 76 mm. The sting of these wasps has flesh-melting properties, and an allergic human stung by the giant hornet may die from an allergic reaction to the venom, but the venom contains a neurotoxin called mandaratoxin which can be lethal even to people who are not allergic if the dose is sufficient.

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Weapon: The user can toss the poisoned infused stings and then fuse them with the wind to create a barrage of projectiles. Every bag has one thousand stings.[/SIZE]

Human Bot-fly
[SIZE="-2"]Description:

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The Human Bot Fly lays its eggs on a horsefly or a mosquito, something that will attempt to land on a human. This carrier finds a human and lands on him or her. The eggs rub off onto the human, whose body heat hatches the eggs. The larvae drop onto the skin and burrow right in. Where they live. Under your skin. Eating.
The larvaes have been seen devolping on multiple other places, such as the mouth and breathing pipes, or even inner organs, such as the lungs, and the brain.

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Weapon: The user incases the the eggs on small needles, wich upon contact drop the egg. Every needle can have 3 eggs. The eggs need warm to hatch, so they're kept relativly when they're not used, but immediatly hatch on the opponents skin.[/SIZE]

Puss Caterpillars
[SIZE="-2"]Description:

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The inch-long larva is generously coated in long, luxuriant hair-like setae, making it resemble a tiny Persian cat, the characteristic that presumably gave it the name "puss." The 'fur' of the larva contains venomous spines that cause extremely painful reactions in human skin upon contact. The reactions are sometimes localized to the affected area but are often very severe, radiating up a limb and causing burning, swelling, nausea, headache, abdominal distress, rashes, blisters, and sometimes chest pain, numbness, or difficulty breathing.

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Weapon: The user seals the hairs on a small bomb, like a smoke bomb. Upon impact, or a single handseal, a cloud of urticating air is released to the atmosphere. The cloud has the size of the smoke cloud.[/SIZE]

This data is factual.

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Yes, the real word is a b!tch. U_U

~Declined~ Over submission limit

No it isn't. This is my second submission this week. I have more 3 to go. I don't know how you count this.

 

[Laharl]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

katon/doton : fashin tsuiraku kyohaku )- fire\earth style : falling stars

co-owner: ~TCS~
Rank: S
Type: Attack/defence ( can do both )
Range: Short-long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Desription: by charging earth and fire chakra into the chest, the user can spit up to 5 boulder covered with great flames toward the enemy,this is the perfect against water/wind moves and ca defeat it easily so it can protect the user fom them.
- - 10 for the user caused by breathe proplems
- can't use any other attack that need to be spited in this turn and the next one .
- can be tought by TCS

( fuuton: hae jinketsu )- fling super hero

co-owner: ~TCS~
Rank: S
Type: sub/defense ( can do both )
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 ( + 10 for each turn its in use )
Damage: 80
Desription: the user free his wind chakra to cover his body, then release it to make the user with the ability fly in the air " not that high ", and it can be used as an covered shield of wind against lightening.
- can be used twice per battle
- can be in use for 3 turns only
- weak against fire attacks and strong against lightening
- the user can't use another wind jutsu in the turn it was preformed " just the turn it is preformed the other turns isn't included
~Both Declined~ Needs better description

 

[Ben-sama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchyose : Katana No Sumiyaka) Summoning Jutsu : Blade Of Speed

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Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra : 30
Damage : 60
Description : The Blade Itself Has Chakra Within It, Which Once In Touch With It's Owner Starts Sending The Chakra Throughout The User's Muscles Giving Them Greater Speed
Effect : The User's Speed When Using This Blade Is Doubled
Note : Only Benazz Posesses This Blade
Note : This Blade's Effect Lasts For 3 Turns
Note : This Blade Can Be Summoned Once Per Battle

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(Kuchyose : Katana No Sutamina) Summoning Jutsu : Blade Of Stamina

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Rank : B
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra : 25
Damage : 50
Description : The Blade Itself Has Chakra Within It, Once In Touch With Its Owner It Begins Sending It's Chakra Into The Lungs Of The User And Then Makes Them Works At The Same Rate, And Expands Them, Therefore With Expanded Lungs The User Can Hold His Breath Longer And The Due To The Same Lung Rate The User Can Keep Up His Running Speed At All Time
Note : Only Benazz Posseses This Blade
Note : This Blade's Effect Lasts For 3 Turns
Note : This Blade Can Be Summoned Once Per Battle

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~ Both declined; unrealistic ~

(Surudoi Shokubutsu No Jutsu) Sharp Plant Technique

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Rank : A
Type : Offensive/Defensive
Chakra : 30
Damange : 60
Rang: Short
Description : By Using Chakra Within It And Extending It Outside The Body, Zetsu Can Form Long And Sharp Spikes To Come Out Anywhere Out Of His Body, The Spikes Can Easily Penetrate Bones And Other Hard Materials, The Spikes Sprout Really Fast.
Note : Must Be A Zetsu Clan Member Or Zetsu To Use
Note : Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu
Note : This Jutsu Can Be Used 3 Times Per Battle

~ Approved ~

 

[Smoker]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kage itsutsu Kunai Torappu) - Shadow five Kunai Trap

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Charka Cost:30
Damage Points:60 if making explode.45 if using kunais.
Description: User focuses their Chakra and make the shadow come under the user and make poses.Then user takes kunais from pocket to hand and throw's them to opponent making dodge and jumping to air or letting the kunais hit.To explosive tag's and making shadow to take them to explode and staying long way away from the it.
*NOTE:Usable for nara clan members only*
*NOTE:Can be used 2 times per battle*
*NOTE:Only suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach This jutsu*

(Kage Kikyuu Torappu ) - Shadow Balloon Trap

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/medium
Charka Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:User puts a balloon that holds kunais in it and moving it by its Shadow jutsu and moving it to high air.After pointing the kunais to opponent user crushes the balloon and the kunais fly to the opponent hurting him seriously.
*NOTE:Only suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach This jutsu*

~Declined~ Nara's dont need techniques to do that, they just need ninja tools to be able to create the shadows then they can control them
(Kage Gouben Torappu ) - Shadow Pool Trap

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Medium
Charka Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:User Focuses his/her chakra to palms and makes shadow pool under the enemy.Enemy drops to the pool and the pool disappears and appears to high sky and drops the enemy down.
*NOTE:Only suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach This jutsu*
*NOTE:Usable only 3 times per battle*
*NOTE:Only Nara clan member can use this jutsu*

~Declined~ Same as above and OP

 

[-Ventus-]

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(hyouton:hi kouu)Ice release:Ice Rain
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:after performing handseal,the user will make the sky ,rain of ice needles that is directed at anywhere under the user's will.the needles will stay for 2 turns
-only shinn a use this or teach the jutsu-
-3x per battle-
~Declined~ Needs better description
(hyouton:hi supea)Ice release:Ice spear
Type:Attack
Rank:s
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:after performing handseal,the user will make tice spera that are totall of 4 floating around the user then at his command the ice spears will then be directed to the opponent.
-only shinn a use this or teach the jutsu-
-3x per battle-
~Declined~ Add more restrictions and a better description

(hyouton:hi supea)Ice release:Ice spear
Type:Attack
Rank:s
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: as the user make hand seals, he transform his ice chakra to ice spears that are totall of 4 floating around the user then at his command the ice spears will then be directed and can be controlled to the opponent.
-only shinn teach the jutsu-
-3x per battle-
-the user can't use any other ice release in the same turn-
-the user shall lose -15 chakra if he made 5 spears-
~Declined~ give some sort of description of the damage done to the opponent. If you are already at five, I won't count it against you if you resubmit
how is that ?

ok lets see : (hyouton:hi kouu)Ice release:Ice Rain
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:after performing hand seal,the user sends his ice chakra to the sky , making it fuse with the clouds above then the user fully control the cloud with his ice chakra,so then the user can make the cloud rain with ice needles anywhere he/she wants for the next two turns.
~ can be used 2 times per battle
~ shinn is the only one how can teach this~
~Declined~ already existing

 

[curse seal sasuke 2]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(kagutsu creeto)puppet create
type:Supplementary
rank:a
chakara cost:30
damage points:n/a
Description:the user puts an puppet parts then fuceses some chakara and imagine the puppet shape then focus some chakara and make the parts stuck with each other by chakara then the puppet will be created
notes:-this jutsu can be learned by curse seal sasuke 2 or yagura or riku
-this jutsu can be used if youre old puppets are smashed
-this jutsu can be used while training

~ declined ~

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(hyouton:hi supea)Ice release:Ice spear
Type:Attack
Rank:s
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: as the user make hand seals, he transform his ice chakra to ice spears that are totall of 4 floating around the user then at his command the ice spears will then be directed and can be controlled to the opponent.
-only shinn teach the jutsu-
-3x per battle-
-the user can't use any other ice release in the same turn-
-the user shall lose -15 chakra if he made 5 spears-

how is that ?

ok lets see : (hyouton:hi kouu)Ice release:Ice Rain
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:after performing hand seal,the user sends his ice chakra to the sky , making it fuse with the clouds above then the user fully control the cloud with his ice chakra,so then the user can make the cloud rain with ice needles anywhere he/she wants for the next two turns.
~ can be used 2 times per battle
~ shinn is the only one how can teach this~

sorry but how can you create ice rain under ice element when ice rain is already appart of rain element and it also requires 2 turns to form ice rain =/

 

[Akiza]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Dark cloaked white tigers - (kuro uea shiro)
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User summons up to 5 cloaked tigers wearing skull like masks who are silent even while moving at incredible speeds, for they are none other as Tigrerra's elite assassin squad, “The Demon Tigers.” They have great offensive power and an onyx defensive armor that has horns everywhere even on their tails.
Can only be used once per battle.
~Declined~ What type of offensive and Defensive powers? Needs better description
Devil White Tiger Trosaduk Summoning
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (-20 to user per turn he is on the field.)
Damage Points: 100
Description: A summoning of a huge shining snow-white tiger that is the size of Tigrerra who was sealed for an eternity in a cave for his demonic abilities. He is about as powerful as Tigrerra herself because of his massively huge claws and great speed. He wears a platinum armor that doesn’t slow him at all that is comparable to Tigrerra’s battle armor. Due to the user breaking the seal that holds him in the cave, he slowly drains the user’s chakra for every turn he is summoned.
And now for the long explanation of his demonic abilities…During the early years of Tigrerra’s reign, there was one white tiger who believed Tigrerra was incapable of handling the kingdom. That tiger was Trosaduk. Trosaduk defied Tigrerra, continuously stating that he should lead whereas Tigrerra should not. Tigrerra and Trosaduk brawled afterwards, and Trosaduk lost the fierce brawl. Trosaduk left Tigrerra’s kingdom, and learned of a witch doctor who could give anyone their deepest desires. Trosaduk went to visit the witch doctor, and explained his greatest desire to him. The witch doctor gave Trosaduk what he wanted, demonic abilities he could use against Tigrerra and bring her reign to an early end. These demonic abilities included the ability to make shadow copies of himself, brainwash weaker beings to his command, and his platinum armor, which does not slow him down even at top speed. Trosaduk raised an army to bring Tigrerra’s reign to a close, and then struck. It was a fierce war, with many casualties on both sides. It came down to the rematch of Tigrerra and Trosaduk atop a mountain. This time the match didn’t end as quickly as the last time. They brawled for weeks on end, until Trosaduk fell to his feet, and Tigrerra’s ministers sealed him into a cave for an eternity, never to be seen again, until someone broke the seal and summoned him into the battlefield. Hope that was enough of an explanation for ya, Emp.
-Can only be used once per battle
-He can only stay on the field for a maximum of 5 turns.
~Declined~ Good story but little to no description about abilities

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

lol about akiza's submit
u should go and make a fan fic

ok : Summoning: White Tiger Ministers (Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora)

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This is a summoning of the three huge white tigers that fight with the summoning boss, Tigrerra. Their size is the size of three normal white tigers, and they wear a defensive armor to symbolize their rank as ministers. (The armor has no special properties whatsoever.) They also have great speed. They are faster than snakes and their claws and teeth are huge enough to cut through almost anything.
-Can be summoned with or without Tigrerra on the field.
-Can only be used twice per battle

this is the last edit hope its wat was needed U_U
~Declined~ Over the weekly limit

 

[Kiwii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Aburame Clan: Bugs of the Exotic Death
(Aburame Batsu: Ekizochikku Oujou no Konchuu)

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user transforms a bug's ability into a weapon. The user acquires a nearly perfect immunity to the bugs under his control, and the most poisonous insects produce only a little itchy feeling, wich grows more in long term exposure.[/font]


Goliath Birdeaters
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Birdeaters are the largest spiders in the world, their colours varies from dark to light brown. They have hairs all around their bodies and they're used to wet enviroments. These spiders make a hissing noise when disturbed. This noise is called stridulation and is produced when the spider rubs the bristles on its legs together. Birdeaters can defend themselves by biting or by kicking urticating hair towards their perceived assailant. These hairs can be severely irritating to the skin and lungs, and have been reported to feel like shards of fiberglass

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Weapon: The user seals the urticating hairs on a small bomb, like a smoke bomb. Upon impact, or a single handseal, a cloud of urticating air is released to the atmosphere. The cloud has half of the smoke cloud size.[/SIZE]


Africanized Bees
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Description: Africanized Bees are hybrid bees created to better endure tropical enviroments, but turned out to be more agressive then they should. One sting from an Africanized bee is no worse than a sting from the common honey bee. It hurts but is rarely fatal. Unfortunately the Africanized bees attack in swarms. Their victims may be stung thousands of times. That many stings can and does kill.

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Weapon: The user can toss the poisoned infused stings and then fuse them with the wind to create a barrage of projectiles. Every bag has two thousand stings.[/SIZE]

Black Widows
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The Black Widow is a medium sized spider with a body about a half-inch in length.The venom is considerably stronger than that of a rattlesnake. Fortunately the amount of venom injected is too small to kill most people.
The venom injected from the Black Widow Spider bite causes a considerable amount of pain. Muscles lock and they break out in cold sweat. Sometimes the symptoms include difficulty breathing. The symptoms can go on for days. Some victims never totally recover.

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Weapon: The user infuses small needles with this poison, every needle as the same amount of poison that could be released from one spider.[/SIZE]

Death Stalkers
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These scorpions are straw yellow in color, and can grow 3.5 to 4.5 inches (9 to 11.5 cm) in length. Its very potent venom helps it compensate for its smaller size and narrow, weak pincers; this scorpion?s sting injects extremely toxic venom (a neurotoxin) that can cause extreme pain, fever, convulsions, paralysis, and often coma or death in humans (by heart or respiratory failure).

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Weapon: The stings of multiple scorpions are attached together and can create a string. The string can be used around the wrists or as a small whip 1 and half meters long.[/SIZE]

Japanase Giant Hornets
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These wasp body length is approximately 50 mm (2 in), and have a wingspan of about 76 mm. The sting of these wasps has flesh-melting properties, and an allergic human stung by the giant hornet may die from an allergic reaction to the venom, but the venom contains a neurotoxin called mandaratoxin which can be lethal even to people who are not allergic if the dose is sufficient.

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Weapon: The user can toss the poisoned infused stings and then fuse them with the wind to create a barrage of projectiles. Every bag has one thousand stings.[/SIZE]

Human Bot-fly
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The Human Bot Fly lays its eggs on a horsefly or a mosquito, something that will attempt to land on a human. This carrier finds a human and lands on him or her. The eggs rub off onto the human, whose body heat hatches the eggs. The larvae drop onto the skin and burrow right in. Where they live. Under your skin. Eating.
The larvaes have been seen devolping on multiple other places, such as the mouth and breathing pipes, or even inner organs, such as the lungs, and the brain.

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Weapon: The user incases the the eggs on small needles, wich upon contact drop the egg. Every needle can have 3 eggs. The eggs need warm to hatch, so they're kept relativly when they're not used, but immediatly hatch on the opponents skin.[/SIZE]

Puss Caterpillars
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The inch-long larva is generously coated in long, luxuriant hair-like setae, making it resemble a tiny Persian cat, the characteristic that presumably gave it the name "puss." The 'fur' of the larva contains venomous spines that cause extremely painful reactions in human skin upon contact. The reactions are sometimes localized to the affected area but are often very severe, radiating up a limb and causing burning, swelling, nausea, headache, abdominal distress, rashes, blisters, and sometimes chest pain, numbness, or difficulty breathing.

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Weapon: The user seals the hairs on a small bomb, like a smoke bomb. Upon impact, or a single handseal, a cloud of urticating air is released to the atmosphere. The cloud has the size of the smoke cloud.[/SIZE]

This data is factual.

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Yes, the real word is a b!tch. U_U

~Declined~ Can only have one bug summon

Read again. I don't control any bug, or summon any bug. These are simply weapons. They aren't alive

 

[Ragnaroc]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Your still over the submission total for the week, so I'll edit my reasoning

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Atsui Satetsu Doragon) - Molten Iron Sand Dragon
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Charka Cost: 40 (+15 for each turn this is active)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focus fire chakra into the iron sand to make it heat up to its melting point, then forms the molten hot iron sand into a large dragon which can either be you to crash into the opponent or shoot molten iron senbons.
Note: after 3 turns the dragon hardens and turns back to sand, the user must pay 30 chakra to make the sand molten again

(Satetsu Shuriken) - Iron Sand Shuriken
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: A burst of 10 balls of iron sand balls flung at the opponent that cause blunt damage like breaking bones and if hit in the right area can cause organ damage.
Note: each ball is the size of a tennis ball

~ Both declined, existing jutsu are there ~

I was given permission by Wrath to resubmit these custom

~ Then you should have said that O_O
Both needs restricting ~

 

[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Hakke: Haruka Nihyakugokyurosho) -Eight Trigrams: Distant Two Hundred-and Fifty Six Strikes
Rank: FORBIDDEN
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses their chakra into the air. He then stands in the traditional Jyuuken posture before striking with his hands 256 times. The air near the opponent reacts to it and acts as an extension to the user's hands, striking the opponent. 128 of these strikes disable tenketsu; the other 128 use wind chakra to make small cuts on the opponent's face, neck and torso. This technique causes disabling of the chakra system as well as bleeding. This technique is fast enough to strike an opponent before they use any technique of a moderate-high speed to escape ; however usage of a very fast technique to escape is acceptable.
~ User can only use this technique once
~ No ninjutsu/taijutsu that require physicle contact for 4 turns
~ No handseals the next turn
~ - 40 damage to user
~Declined~ If its long range how do you come in contact with them? and if its long range, how would you be able to hit them so fast that they would be unable to counter?
lightning style: lightning death dome (raiton: denkou oujou enchou)
rank: forbidden
type: attack/defense
range: short-looooooooong
chakra: half the users chakra (from where it was at the beginning of the battle)
damage: death (if the user can evade 100 to the user)
description: the user will send a small bolt of lightning into the air just as it hits 50 meters high it will burst out creating a dome down the middle of the dome comes a wall that separate the user and his opponent the wall of the dome and the the wall are INDESTRUCTIBLE stopping the user and the opponent from escaping also underground the dome forms together stopping the opponent and the user from escaping that way at the top of the dome is a huge orb with 8 holes in it 4 on the user's side and 4 on the opponents side inside the orb is lightning building up ready to burst out this lightning can ONLY be destroyed if the opponent (or the user) send 4 A rank wind blasts and up inside the holes AT THE SAME TIME but not that the opponent sends in 2 and the user sends in 2 it wont work only 4 on the same side at the same time after 2 turns the lightning will be ready and it will shoot out of all 8 holes destroying everything in its way at this point it cant be blocked the entire dome will fill with lightning destroying everything inside it even the user
NOTE: once per battle
NOTE: nothing can destroy the walls of the dome or the wall in the middle they are indestructible
NOTE: after this the user will be nearly (or completely) out of chakra
NOTE: no ninjutsu can be used the next turn and no S ranks for the rest of the battle
NOTE: it takes 4 turns for the dome to form and while it is forming it is almost impossible to destroy
NOTE: the user cant use lightning or wind for the rest of the battle
~Declined~ Description is still confusing

( Hakke: Haruka Nihyakugokyurosho) -Eight Trigrams: Distant Two Hundred-and Fifty Six Strikes
Rank: FORBIDDEN
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses their chakra into the air. He then stands in the traditional Jyuuken posture before striking with his hands 256 times. The air near the opponent reacts to it and acts as an extension to the user's hands, striking the opponent. 128 of these strikes disable tenketsu; the other 128 use wind chakra to make small cuts on the opponent's face, neck and torso. This technique causes disabling of the chakra system as well as bleeding. This technique is fast enough to strike an opponent before they use any technique of a moderate-high speed to escape ; however usage of a very fast technique to escape is acceptable.
~ User can only use this technique once
~ No hyuuga style taijutsu for 4 turns
~ No handseals the next turn
~ - 40 damage to user

it would be hard to block b/c it comes from the air near the opponent

i will do the other one later =/

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuton: Kaze o Yofun) Wind: Winds of Rage
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will cause the wind around the opponent to spiral creating a tornado with the opponent in the middle, the wind is clear and is able to be seen thru, but has increadible pressure and will rip anything that comes in contact with it, user will then cause it to shrink and crush the opponent in the middle.
~Can only be used 2 times per battle.

~ Approved, but I changed it to twice per battle ~

(Fuuton: Nijuu Te o Moui) Wind: Double Hands of Fury
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user collects wind chakra in the air to make two walls of cutting intense wind on both sides of the opponent, then the user will clap and both wind walls will come crashing into the opponent from both sides crushing them in the middle, the wind walls are invisible unless the opponent has a eye technique.
~Can only be used 2 times per battle.

~ Approved, but I changed it to twice per battle ~

 

[Icemyster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(hi misuto doragon) Light Mist Dragon
Rank-A
Type-Offense/Defense
Chakra-30
Damage-60
Description-
The user exhales a ware mist(like water bullet) that produces three mist dragons, able to defend against fire attacks by condensing and creating water walls. (Defends against a rank and below fire attacks). When created they can be controlled by the user.
*Can Only be taught by Icemyster*

(akumu keimusho ikazuchi baito) Nightmare Prison Thunder Bite
Rank-S
Type-Offense
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Descritption-
the user builds up raiton in their mouth, Then opens His mouth in a biting motion, causing the raiton to jump outshaped like teeth and close down on the opponent, causing paralysis.
*Can only be used twice.*

(yochi haru) Earth Spring
Rank-A
Range-Short
Type-Defensive
Cost-30
Damage-N/A
Description-
The user manipulates the earth with chakra beneath him or his opponent by stomping, causing who ever the justu is used on to be flung rapidly through the air in the direction of the users choice.

(konchuu shura kamae) Insect Fighting Style
Rank-S
Type-Offensive/Defense/Supplementary
Range-Short
Cost-40
Damage-N/A
Description-
Through years of training with the aburame beetles in taijutsu, the user commands full attention from his bugs, and also directs full attention to them. By doing this the user gains instant communication with his beetles, giving him the ability to sense chakra build-ups within the opponent(the bugs alert him), and respond accordingly, alomst as if he can read movements. In the same way, the bugs also corespond with the users movements, creating small swarms with each of the users limbs, pushing and pulling with his movements, causing the user to move faster.

*Lasts Four turns*
*Can only be used By Bug Users*
*Can only be used twice*

~ All Declined ~

 

[-Ventus-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(hyouton:hi supea)Ice release:Ice spear
Type:Attack
Rank:s
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: as the user make hand seals, he transform his ice chakra to ice spears that are totall of 4 floating around the user then at his command the ice spears will then be directed and can be controlled to the opponent.This ice are so strong it can pierce into a doton b-rank jutsu's and can pierce the opponent in the chest or can freeze a body part of the opponent that the spear touches becouse of its extreme coldness.
-only shinn teach the jutsu-
-3x per battle-
-the user can't use any other ice release in the same turn-
-the user shall lose -15 chakra if he made 5 spears-
~Approved~

 

[Obito]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

氷のように:細胞傷害性
(kori:saiboo shoogai sei)
(Ice style: Cytotoxcitity)
Rank: A
Range:Short
Cost/Damage: 30/60
Decription:a close combat jutsu, the opponent needs to be touched by at least a finger for this to work.the user must be vigilant not to touch him/herself with the hand executing the attack otherwise they will also fall victim to the jutstu.
Chakra is expelled explosively from the hand and attacks the body's cells by means of an open wound, travelling through the blood it freezes water into tiny shards of ice crystals within each of the body's cells,in turn busts the cells causing critical internal bleeding and a slow, painful death.
This justsu can be combined with fire style*, which in turn gives a different affect, something like a thousand white hot needles ripping through the body causing critical internal bleeding and up to 3 degree burns from the inside out.For example the phoenix flower jutsu used in conjunction the the cytotoxicity technique will achieve this, other fire styles may be used but their affect as of yet is unknown.
(1) the tiger hand sign used in conjunction with this creates a seal so the user cannot fall victim to justsu if ignorant, however it will limit the effect of the ice/fire combination.
*The firestyle hand signs must be done immediately after the cytotoxicity justsu or 5 seconds after to give affect, if not, both justsu's hand signs will need to be repeated.
N.B: dangerous jutsu not recommended to use more than twice in battle.
(Can only be taught be Obito )