[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Akiza]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Tigrerra's combo-(Tigrerra konbo)
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: As Tigrerra gets angry, she jumps with incredible force and lands, and strikes the ground with her claws as she throws the enemy with a cut simultaneously. At that moment, she strikes with her other claw and catches the enemy with it as he nears being crushed above the ground. She then gets all of her legs up to make all the weight fall on that on leg that the enemy is under causing him to be crushed.

~ Needs restriction ~

The assistants’ assassination charge- (tetsudaite kison denka)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: When Tigrerra’s assistants come to believe that it’s time to end the battle, they all get out of there quickly and run at the enemy. With their speed it can’t be seen, except to Sharingan eyes, so they get to their positions with the same speed and then burst through the enemy with large amounts of chakra charged in each one of their big claws to cut the enemy to pieces if they sense any attack of the enemy near the user.

~ Needs restrictions ~

Dark cloaked white tigers - (kuro uea shiro)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: By doing this summoning, the user can summon up to 15 cloaked tigers wearing skull like masks who are silent even while moving at an incredible speed, for they are none other as Tigrerra's assassin squad, with their fantastic power and weird defensive armor that has horns everywhere even at their tails. For they are called "The demon tigers.”

~ Needs restrictions ~
White tiger fusion mode (shiro shinken modo)

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (- 20 for each turn)
Damage Points: 80 (+ 20 for any taijutsu)
Description: After summoning Tigrerra or a powerful white tiger such as Tigrerra, the user does handseals, and then slaps his two hands over her head making her soul merge with the user’s making the user’s body transform to a human-tiger shape which includes hand growth, claws, increased speed, keener eyesight (unlike Sharingan) that the user can use to see through mist and movements.
notes :
1- The fusion makes many damages to the user's body which makes it paralyzed after the fusion ends for one entire turn.
2- Lasts for 3 turns
3- Can be used only once per battle
4- After the fusion ends, the Tigrerra summon will vanish.

~ Declined, merging with summons is impossible ~

 

[Anbu578]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Raiton: den'atsu panchi ( Voltage puch )

Rank:A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid range
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 50
Description:The user uses their chakra to create a very strong electric current to their hand. Then with incredible power the user runs at their opponent to seriously injure the adversary

~ Declined, too similar to Chidori ~

 

[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Hakke: Haruka Nihyakugokyurosho) -Eight Trigrams: Distant Two Hundred-and Fifty Six Strikes
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses their chakra into the air. He then stands in the traditional Jyuuken posture before striking with his hands 256 times. The air near the opponent reacts to it and acts as an extension to the user's hands, striking the opponent. 128 of these strikes disable tenketsu; the other 128 use wind chakra to make small cuts on the opponent's face, neck and torso. This technique causes disabling of the chakra system as well as bleeding. This technique is fast enough to strike an opponent before they use any technique of a moderate-high speed to escape ; however usage of a very fast technique to escape is acceptable.
~ User can only use this technique once
~ No handseals the next turn
~ - 40 damage to user
~Declined~ OP add more restrictions and make it forbidden

lightning style: lightning death dome (raiton: denkou oujou enchou)
rank: forbidden
type: attack/defense
range: short-looooooooong
chakra: half the users chakra (from where it was at the beginning of the battle)
damage: death (if the user can evade 100 to the user)
description: the user will send a small bolt of lightning into the air just as it hits 50 meters high )it will burst out creating a dome down the middle of the dome comes a wall that separate the suer and his opponent the wall of the dome and the the wall are INDESTRUCTIBLE stopping the user and the opponent from escaping also underground the dome forms together stopping the opponent and the user from escaping that way at the top of the dome is a huge orb with 8 holes in it 4 on the user's side and 4 on the opponents side inside the orb is lightning building up ready to burst out this lightning can ONLY be destroyed if the opponent (or the user) send 4 A rank wind blasts and up inside the holes AT THE SAME TIME but not that the opponent sends in 2 and the user sends in 2 4 on the same side at the same time after 2 turns the lightning will be ready and it will shoot out of all 8 holes destroying everything in its way at this point it cant be blocked the entire dome will fill with lightning destroying everything inside it even the user
NOTE: once per battle
NOTE: nothing can destroy the walls of the dome or the wall in the middle they are indestructible
NOTE: after this the user will be nearly (or completely) out of chakra
NOTE: no ninjutsu can be used the next turn and no S ranks for the rest of the battle
NOTE: it takes 4 turns for the dome to form and while it is forming it is almost impossible to destroy
~Declined~ redo the description and resubmit it

lightning style: devils mask (raiton: mashin fukumen)
rank: forbidden
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 50
damage: n/a (50 to the user)
description: the user will put his hand over his head and focus his chakra and bring the lightning particles around the air into one forming a mask which the user then pulls over his head (causes a lot of damage to the users face) once the mask is on the user gains an insane amount of speed equivalent to the 6th gate and all the users lightning jutsu +40 furthermore the user gains the ability to create lightning out of nothing but takes 10+ damage each time he does this
NOTES
once per battle
lasts for 4 turns after that each time the user keeps it on it is +25 damage per turn maximum of 6 turns
wind jutsu go down in power -20 and it takes more chakra
lightning jutsu take less chakra
the user cant use lightning and wind for the rest of the battle
no S rank next turn
~Declined~ OP and too similar to the Raikage's Lightning Armor

 

[Kaze..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Hyuuga Taijutsu:Yofun Kaze Rinten) -Hyuuga Fighting Style: Raging Wind's Rotation
Rank: S
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The User releases wind charka from his body then rotations, when the user rotates it creates a violent hurricane like barrier around the user that has the power to cut the opponent into pieces it also has the power to block lower ranking ( up to C rank ) fire jutsu.

Only Can be used twice per battle

~ Approved, I added a bit to it ~

 

[Decipher]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton) Lightning Style: Electric Conductor
Rank: A
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 70
Description: The user focuses there Lightning chakra into ther palms/body and can conduct lightning from the opponents Lightning jutsu's and use it against them.
*User must use a Lightning jutsu in order to conduct the opponents.
*Jutsu must be of equal or higher rank.
*Can only be taught/used by Sharingan09

~ Declined, unrealistic ~

 

[Raiden Ichiro]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Weapon: Claws Of Raiden
Type-Attack
Rank-N/A
Range- Close-Mid Range
Chakra cost- N/A or 30(if they channel lightning style chakra into the gloves)
Damage- 25 if hit normally /50 powered with chakra
Description- A pair of mysterious black gloves. Fingernails made of a mysterious metal and are as sharp as any katana. The user can channel only Lightning style chakra into the gloves and upon doing so the metal finger nails shoot out, being connected to the glove with "wires" of lightning style chakra, thus extending its overall reach from close to mid-range. Although not powerful enough to cut through blades [like lightning blade] (yet) it will shock the enemy and deal quite a bit of damage.

*Can only be use by Raiden Ichiro
*Chunin:Limited to 1 use of the gloves per battle (this includes using them in combination with any kind of jutsu)
*S-Jounin Rank -Jounin : Limited to 3 uses of the gloves per battle (this includes using them in combination with any kind of jutsu)
*S-Class-Sannin: Limited to 4 uses of the gloves per battle (this includes using them in combination with any kind of jutsu)
*Kage-Sage: Limited to 5 uses of the gloves per battle (this includes using them in combination with any kind of jutsu)

~ Approved ~

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

summoning white tigers ministers ( Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora )

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: this is a summoning of the three huge tigers that fight with the summoning boss " tiggara " they are huge enough to get any summoning together and wears an defensive armor especially wind that protect them from any attack and there speed is brilliant, they are faster then snakes and there claws and teeth is huge enough to cut throw almost everything

~ i know white tiger summoning

~ Declined, too OPed ~

raiton : doragon-ken ) lightning style : dragon blade

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( - 15 for each turn its in use )
Damage Points: 80
Description: by charging the user's lightning chakra, he shall focus it in an blade like huge dragon shaped lightning from his hand " like an dragon chidori spear " but it can be moved like huge link to so that its flicks able if the user want to, and can make huge damages to the opponent , and perfect against others earth jutsus.

~ can only be user 1 times in a battle ..
~ cant stay more then two turns
~ - 10 for each time its in use for the user's health " because it injures his hand

~ Approved, but I changed it to only once per battle ~

( toko kusari ) endless chains

Rank: a
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30 ( -4 for each chain that has been released over each turn )
Damage Points: 60
Description: this is 7 chains that spins around the users arm with a kunai at it's end and its so long that can never been fully released , ans its controllable by the over user's chakra and its faster then any other attack of kunai or shuriken and can be powered with other elemental attacks , and can protect from others attack
- can be used 5 times each battle
- doesn't effect the user's speed

~ Explain it better please ~

summoning white tigers ministers ( Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora )

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: this is a summoning of the three huge tigers that fight with the summoning boss " tiggara " there size each is three white tigers together and wears an defensive armor especially from wind and protect them from almost any attack and there speed is brilliant, they are faster then snakes and there claws and teeth is huge enough to cut throw almost everything

edited~

( toko kusari ) endless chains

Rank: a
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30 ( -4 for each chain that has been released over each turn )
Damage Points: 60
Description: this is 7 chains that is weared around the users arm with a kunai at it's end and its so long that can never be fully released from the arm , and its controllable by user's chakra strings, and its faster then any other throw-able attack like kunai or shuriken and can be powered with other elemental attacks , and can protect from others attack by circling around the user .
- can be used 5 times each battle
- doesn't effect the user's speed

~ Both declined, OPed ~

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Houkei Keisei Disuta-bu Chakra Shiyou) - Square Formation of Disruption Chakra Method

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: At least four ninjas (including summons and clones) are needed to do this technique. They will surround the enemy forming a square, then they will do the handseals and chakra lines will appear, connecting the 4 people. All of them will then send their chakra through the ground and air to inside the square and they will make their chakra to mix with the opponent's chakra flow, but isntead of disturbing the opponent mind like in a gengutsu, they will disturb the opponent's chakra system and can even make them unable to move. To this jutsu to be successfuly used, none of the users can be interromped, otherwise the jutsu will faill. The drawback of this jutsu is that the users's need to be still and can't move while they do this so they can focus their chakra on the opponent and because of that, the users can be an easy target for an opponent. Can only be used once per battle, lasts 2 turns.

~ Declined. Extremely unrealistic. All you are doing is focusing your chakra into the air and ground, How will this affect the opponent's chakra flow ? How can you force your chakra into the opponent's system ? Even a Hyuuga can only do so on contact. Furthermore, is your chakra some sort of special power that seals off other's chakras ? Do you have some sort of chakra that works like a Hyuuga's Jyuuken ? Even the demonic chakra of the Kyuubi no Kitsune cannot seal off other's chakra flows. If you are allowed to use Fuuinjutsu, then submit this as a Fuuin, when it might be approved ~

Like in a gengutsu, you mix your chakra with teh opponent's chakra flow and you make them see what you want (illusions), but here, instead of affecting the mind of the opponent, it affects his whole chakra system.

~ Then this will only be an illusion, and not have an actual effect. Submit it as a Genjutsu if you want ~

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Like in a gengutsu, you mix your chakra with teh opponent's chakra flow and you make them see what you want (illusions), but here, instead of affecting the mind of the opponent, it affects his whole chakra system.

~ Then this will only be an illusion, and not have an actual effect. Submit it as a Genjutsu if you want ~

Meh, the fact that i mix my chakra with the opponent's chakra flow doesnt mean it has to be a gengutsu --' This has nothing to do with a gengutsu, i was just saying thats how i disrupt the opponent's chakra (by mixing my chakra with his).

And i cannot submit is has Fuuinjutsu because it would need to be at least S-rank and there is that stupid rule which doesnt make sense and says only medninjas can make fuuinjutsu customs over A-rank.

~ HOW do you mix chakra with the opponent ? You cannot just force your chakra into the opponent's body ~

 

[Kiwii]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Aburame Clan: Bugs of the Exotic Death
(Aburame Batsu: Ekizochikku Oujou no Konchuu)

Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: With a special tattoo on the user's body, he is able to bring forth one different specie of bugs. These ones are forced by chakra, and do not share a conection with the user. He is efficient enough to use an extraordinary big swarm, even when is not on the bug's own nature, but all the effects last only 3 turns. After those the insects are de-summoned back to the tattoo. The user acquires a nearly perfect immunity to the bugs under his control, and the most poisonous insects produce only a little itchy feeling, wich grows more in long term exposure. Insects with contact poison are kept above clothing and not directly on the skin, but can still travel across the skin during a battle, if the moment seems right. Every summon imeadiatly de-summons the previous Exotic Bug, and takes away one Elemental Chakra from the user. The summons last 3 turns. At the end of the turn the bugs are de-summoned. D rank element appears, then C in the next turn, then B, then A, then S, then Forbidden. The user can only summon 3 types of bugs per battle.
The bugs are killed on a ritual of summonization, where the user writes multiple tags and symbols around the floor and then preforms the handseals. The spirit of the bug is sealed and thus creates a forged contract with all the bugs of the same species. The more proficient the user is in chakra control, larger is the number of insects summoned. The Tattoo can only seal 9 animal species.


Goliath Birdeaters
[SIZE="-2"]Description: Birdeaters are the largest spiders in the world, their colours varies from dark to light brown. They have hairs all around their bodies and they're used to wet enviroments. These spiders make a hissing noise when disturbed. This noise is called stridulation and is produced when the spider rubs the bristles on its legs together. Birdeaters can defend themselves by biting or by kicking urticating hair towards their perceived assailant. These hairs can be severely irritating to the skin and lungs, and have been reported to feel like shards of fiberglass[/SIZE]

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Africanized Bees
[SIZE="-2"]Description: Africanized Bees are hybrid bees created to better endure tropical enviroments, but turned out to be more agressive then they should. One sting from an Africanized bee is no worse than a sting from the common honey bee. It hurts but is rarely fatal. Unfortunately the Africanized bees attack in swarms. Their victims may be stung thousands of times. That many stings can and does kill.[/SIZE]

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Black Widows
[SIZE="-2"]Description: The Black Widow is a medium sized spider with a body about a half-inch in length.The venom is considerably stronger than that of a rattlesnake. Fortunately the amount of venom injected is too small to kill most people.
The venom injected from the Black Widow Spider bite causes a considerable amount of pain. Muscles lock and they break out in cold sweat. Sometimes the symptoms include difficulty breathing. The symptoms can go on for days. Some victims never totally recover.[/SIZE]

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Death Stalkers
[SIZE="-2"]Description: These scorpions are straw yellow in color, and can grow 3.5 to 4.5 inches (9 to 11.5 cm) in length. Its very potent venom helps it compensate for its smaller size and narrow, weak pincers; this scorpion?s sting injects extremely toxic venom (a neurotoxin) that can cause extreme pain, fever, convulsions, paralysis, and often coma or death in humans (by heart or respiratory failure). [/SIZE]

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Japanase Giant Hornets
[SIZE="-2"]Description: These wasp body length is approximately 50 mm (2 in), and have a wingspan of about 76 mm. The sting of these wasps has flesh-melting properties, and an allergic human stung by the giant hornet may die from an allergic reaction to the venom, but the venom contains a neurotoxin called mandaratoxin which can be lethal even to people who are not allergic if the dose is sufficient.[/SIZE]

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Human Bot-fly/Mosquito
[SIZE="-2"]Description: The Human Bot Fly lays its eggs on a horsefly or a mosquito, something that will attempt to land on a human. This carrier finds a human and lands on him or her. The eggs rub off onto the human, whose body heat hatches the eggs. The larvae drop onto the skin and burrow right in. Where they live. Under your skin. Eating.
The larvaes have been seen devolping on multiple other places, such as the mouth and breathing pipes, or even inner organs, such as the lungs, and the brain.
These are the only kind that work together under the user's control. The Flies rarely leave the clothes, and that's why it's easy for him to control both species at the same time.[/SIZE]

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Puss Caterpillars
[SIZE="-2"]Description: The inch-long larva is generously coated in long, luxuriant hair-like setae, making it resemble a tiny Persian cat, the characteristic that presumably gave it the name "puss." The 'fur' of the larva contains venomous spines that cause extremely painful reactions in human skin upon contact. The reactions are sometimes localized to the affected area but are often very severe, radiating up a limb and causing burning, swelling, nausea, headache, abdominal distress, rashes, blisters, and sometimes chest pain, numbness, or difficulty breathing.[/SIZE]

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Green Darner Dragonflies
[SIZE="-2"]Description: The dragonfly, Anax junius, is commonly called the green darner, after its resemblance to a darning-needle. The Green Darner is one of the largest dragonflies extant: males grow to 76 millimetres (3.0 in) in length with up to an 80 millimetres (3.1 in) wingspan. These are the fastest insects in the world, capable of reaching speeds up to 23.7m/s. The dragonflyes can bite, but aren't poisonous.[/SIZE]

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This data is factual.

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Yes, the real word is a b!tch. U_U

~ Declined for the same reason as the last time - i.e., only one type of ug allowed ~

 

[Axle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Saka ma ku ame) - Rolling Rain

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Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:The user puts the tip of their sword in the water focusing their chakra into the tip, the user then lifts up the blade swiftly, causing a 2 giant water typhoons to form, this water typhoon can only defend the user, the reflection of the water off the user can cause illusions for the opponent and giving the user time to escape if necessary and hide the user's whereabouts giving them the advantage to counter attack
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: Water source needed

~ Declined ~

(Shajiku no Ame) - Axle of Rain

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Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: the user focuses their chakra in their feet,then releases in an instant causing the user to charge towards the opponent like the user was shot out of a cannon,and while charging the user is holding the blade with 2 hands in a thrusting motion, this attacks power is equivalent to one of Tsunade's punches.
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~ Needs restrictions ~

(same do re) - Early Summer Rain

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Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user rushes in toward the opponent holding the blade with one hand, in the middle a sideways swipe towards the opponents face, the user drops the blade with excellent timing, causing the blade to fall in the user's other hand, for a clean sweep at the opponents mid-section
Note: can only be used while in Shigure Sousen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~ Approved ~

(shi bu ki ame) - Spraying Rain

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Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user puts all their chakra in their sword, then strikes the water, causing a giant water splash, this splash causes the opponent not to see the user
Note: can only be used while in Shigure Sousen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: Needs a Water source

~ Approved ~

(Shino tsu ku ame) - Pelting Rain

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Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user rushes in as if to clash with the opponent, bu almost instantly slides down as if playing baseball, and slices the opponents, and leaving the opponent vulnerable to another attack
Note: can only be used while in Shigure Sousen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~ Approved ~

 

[Akiza]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Tigrerra's combo-(Tigrerra konbo)
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: As Tigrerra gets angry, she jumps with incredible force and lands, and strikes the ground with her claws as she throws the enemy with a cut simultaneously. At that moment, she strikes with her other claw and catches the enemy with it as he nears being crushed above the ground. She then gets all of her legs up to make all the weight fall on that on leg that the enemy is under causing him to be crushed.

~ Needs restriction ~

The assistants’ assassination charge- (tetsudaite kison denka)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: When Tigrerra’s assistants come to believe that it’s time to end the battle, they all get out of there quickly and run at the enemy. With their speed it can’t be seen, except to Sharingan eyes, so they get to their positions with the same speed and then burst through the enemy with large amounts of chakra charged in each one of their big claws to cut the enemy to pieces if they sense any attack of the enemy near the user.

~ Needs restrictions ~

Dark cloaked white tigers - (kuro uea shiro)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: By doing this summoning, the user can summon up to 15 cloaked tigers wearing skull like masks who are silent even while moving at an incredible speed, for they are none other as Tigrerra's assassin squad, with their fantastic power and weird defensive armor that has horns everywhere even at their tails. For they are called "The demon tigers.”

~ Needs restrictions ~
White tiger fusion mode (shiro shinken modo)

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (- 20 for each turn)
Damage Points: 80 (+ 20 for any taijutsu)
Description: After summoning Tigrerra or a powerful white tiger such as Tigrerra, the user does handseals, and then slaps his two hands over her head making her soul merge with the user’s making the user’s body transform to a human-tiger shape which includes hand growth, claws, increased speed, keener eyesight (unlike Sharingan) that the user can use to see through mist and movements.
notes :
1- The fusion makes many damages to the user's body which makes it paralyzed after the fusion ends for one entire turn.
2- Lasts for 3 turns
3- Can be used only once per battle
4- After the fusion ends, the Tigrerra summon will vanish.

~ Declined, merging with summons is impossible ~

Restrictions added:

Devil White Tiger Trosaduk Summoning

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 50 (-20 to user per turn he is on the field.)
Damage Points: 100
Description: A summoning of a huge shining snow-white tiger that is the size of Tigrerra who was sealed for 40 years in a cave for his demonic abilities. He is about as powerful as Tigrerra herself because of his massively huge claws and great speed. He wears a platinum armor that doesn’t slow him at all that is comparable to Tigrerra’s battle armor. Due to the user breaking the seal that holds him in the cave, he slowly drains the user’s chakra for every turn he is summoned.
-Can only be used once per battle
-He can only stay on the field for a maximum of 5 turns.

~ Explain the "demonic abilities" ~

Tigrerra's combo-(Tigrerra konbo)
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: As Tigrerra gets angry, she jumps with incredible force and lands, and strikes the ground with her claws as she throws the enemy with a cut simultaneously. At that moment, she strikes with her other claw and catches the enemy with it as he nears being crushed above the ground. She then gets all of her legs up to make all the weight fall on that on leg that the enemy is under causing him to be crushed.
Can only be used whenever Tigrerra is on the field, and can only be used once per battle.

~ Approved ~

The assistants’ assassination charge- (tetsudaite kison denka)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: When Tigrerra’s assistants come to believe that it’s time to end the battle, they all get out of there quickly and run at the enemy. With their speed it can’t be seen, except to Sharingan eyes, so they get to their positions with the same speed and then burst through the enemy with large amounts of chakra charged in each one of their big claws to cut the enemy to pieces if they sense any attack of the enemy near the user.
Can only be used whenever Tigrerra’s white tigers are on the field, and can only be used once per battle.

~ Approved but I changed it to once ~

Dark cloaked white tigers - (kuro uea shiro)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: By doing this summoning, the user can summon up to 15 cloaked tigers wearing skull like masks who are silent even while moving at an incredible speed, for they are none other as Tigrerra's assassin squad, with their fantastic power and weird defensive armor that has horns everywhere even at their tails. For they are called "The demon tigers.”
Can only be used once per battle.

~ Declined ~

 

[Chago]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Falling Dragon Barrage)shikkyaku doragon danmaku
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description:The user jumps in mid-air then makes four clones then the clones all charge at the opponent and kick him up to mid-air as well directly below the user then the clones quickly appear in mid-air where the opponent is and each on grabs the opponent's legs and arms then the user dives down and does a barrage of kicks and punches to the opponent till the user slams him to the ground creating a mid-size crater.

(Lighting release: Electric Sword Charge) Raiton: erekutorikku subeta denka
Type:supplementary
Rank:B
Range:short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points:N/A
Description: the user is able to infuse lighting chakra in to his sword making a rotating aura of electricity that may zap and paralyze and opponent when the aura comes in contact with the opponent.
(Note: can only be used by chago)
(Note: each turns the user loses 5 chakra points)

(Sword Arts: Blade Illusion Mirror) subeta gigei: ken irixyu-jon mira-
Type:defense
Rank:B
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points:N/A
Description: the user concentrates chakra on to his blade so he can expel and reflect genjutsus up to B Rank against the opponent.
(note: can only be used twice in battle)

~ All Declined ~

 

[Kaze..]

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Hyuuga Taijutsu:Sa-Ti-Roku Kujo Hirate) -Hyuuga Fighting Style: 36 Destructive Palm
Rank: S
Type:Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The User strike's the opponent 36 times with his open palm then sending a shockwave of charka through the opponents each time he strikes the shockwaves his the power to damage organ's and brake bones

Can only be used twice per battle

~ Declined ~


Hyuuga Hijutsu: Seikuken) -Hyuuga Secret Arts:Seikuken
Rank: S
Typeefense
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:When the user actives this move he/she are able to read the opponents charka flow and can predict taijutsu moves and can block or counter attack faster then usual.

Lasts 3 turns
can only be used 1 per battle
Byakugan Must be Activated

~ Declined ; how ? O_O ~

 

[Artimis]

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(Atsui Satetsu Doragon) - Molten Iron Sand Dragon
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Charka Cost: 40 (+15 for each turn this is active)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focus fire chakra into the iron sand to make it heat up to its melting point, then forms the molten hot iron sand into a large dragon which can either be you to crash into the opponent or shoot molten iron senbons.
Note: after 3 turns the dragon hardens and turns back to sand, the user must pay 30 chakra to make the sand molten again

(Satetsu Shuriken) - Iron Sand Shuriken
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: A burst of 10 balls of iron sand balls flung at the opponent that cause blunt damage like breaking bones and if hit in the right area can cause organ damage.
Note: each ball is the size of a tennis ball

~ Both declined, existing jutsu are there ~

 

[Anbu578]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Raiton: den'atsu katana ( Voltage blade )

Rank:A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid range
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 50
Description:The user uses their chakra to create a very strong electric current to their Double-wielded blade. Then with incredible power the user runs at their opponent to slice and seriously injure the adversary.

Note* Anbu578 can only train this

* Double-wielded blade is needed

~ Declined ~

 

[~Hasashi~]

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( Hakke: Haruka Nihyakugokyurosho) -Eight Trigrams: Distant Two Hundred-and Fifty Six Strikes
Rank: FORBIDDEN
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses their chakra into the air. He then stands in the traditional Jyuuken posture before striking with his hands 256 times. The air near the opponent reacts to it and acts as an extension to the user's hands, striking the opponent. 128 of these strikes disable tenketsu; the other 128 use wind chakra to make small cuts on the opponent's face, neck and torso. This technique causes disabling of the chakra system as well as bleeding. This technique is fast enough to strike an opponent before they use any technique of a moderate-high speed to escape ; however usage of a very fast technique to escape is acceptable.
~ User can only use this technique once
~ No ninjutsu/taijutsu that require physicle contact for 4 turns
~ No handseals the next turn
~ - 40 damage to user
~Declined~ If its long range how do you come in contact with them? and if its long range, how would you be able to hit them so fast that they would be unable to counter?
lightning style: lightning death dome (raiton: denkou oujou enchou)
rank: forbidden
type: attack/defense
range: short-looooooooong
chakra: half the users chakra (from where it was at the beginning of the battle)
damage: death (if the user can evade 100 to the user)
description: the user will send a small bolt of lightning into the air just as it hits 50 meters high it will burst out creating a dome down the middle of the dome comes a wall that separate the user and his opponent the wall of the dome and the the wall are INDESTRUCTIBLE stopping the user and the opponent from escaping also underground the dome forms together stopping the opponent and the user from escaping that way at the top of the dome is a huge orb with 8 holes in it 4 on the user's side and 4 on the opponents side inside the orb is lightning building up ready to burst out this lightning can ONLY be destroyed if the opponent (or the user) send 4 A rank wind blasts and up inside the holes AT THE SAME TIME but not that the opponent sends in 2 and the user sends in 2 it wont work only 4 on the same side at the same time after 2 turns the lightning will be ready and it will shoot out of all 8 holes destroying everything in its way at this point it cant be blocked the entire dome will fill with lightning destroying everything inside it even the user
NOTE: once per battle
NOTE: nothing can destroy the walls of the dome or the wall in the middle they are indestructible
NOTE: after this the user will be nearly (or completely) out of chakra
NOTE: no ninjutsu can be used the next turn and no S ranks for the rest of the battle
NOTE: it takes 4 turns for the dome to form and while it is forming it is almost impossible to destroy
NOTE: the user cant use lightning or wind for the rest of the battle
~Declined~ Description is still confusing

 

[Smoker]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Shishou Kage Subeta) - Stabbing Shadow Sword

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Charka Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: User puts Their palms together after taking the sword.Making shadow sword that stabs the opponent four times a row to where the user stabs with Hes/Her Palms.
*NOTE:Sword Is Needed for this jutsu*
*NOTE:Can be User By Nara Clan Members Only*

~Explain it better ~

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

summoning white tigers ministers ( Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora )

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: this is a summoning of the three huge tigers that fight with the summoning boss " tiggara " there size each is three white tigers together and wears an defensive armor especially from wind and protect them from almost any attack and there speed is brilliant, they are faster then snakes and there claws and teeth is huge enough to cut throw almost everything

edited~

( toko kusari ) endless chains

Rank: a
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30 ( -4 for each chain that has been released over each turn )
Damage Points: 60
Description: this is 7 chains that is weared around the users arm with a kunai at it's end and its so long that can never be fully released from the arm , and its controllable by user's chakra strings, and its faster then any other throw-able attack like kunai or shuriken and can be powered with other elemental attacks , and can protect from others attack by circling around the user .
- can be used 5 times each battle
- doesn't effect the user's speed

~ Both declined, OPed ~

first: wat so op in the first one..
sec: if i made the chains 4 will u accept it ?

ice style : all direction ice shuriken explosion ( hyouton : issai shuriken haretsu )

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Offense/Defense
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30 ( + 10 if it used as a wall or to imprison the enemy )
Damage Points: 60
Descriptions: as the user make the ice shurikens jutsu, the user make the shurikens explode with ice by expanding its size in the second it hits the enemy making the injuries expand with it, and can be used to make a wall of the ice shuriken jutsu that protect from moderate attacks, and can also be used to imprison the enemy inside the ice
- can only be used if ice shurikens was used
- can only be used twice per battle

~ Approved , I edited a bit ~

ice growth ( hyouton : hi houkou )

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense/sub
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions: by focusing your ice chakra through any ice within the range, te user will have the full control of making it grow to imprison the enemy or attack him or even protect of his attacks, and changing the ground's shape if the ice was over the ground, basically its the jutsu or making the ice grow in shapes.
- can only be used once
- -10 for each turn the user keeps the enemy imprisoned inside the ice
- can't last for more then three turns

~ Declined ~

and my last submit for this week T_T :

Summoning: White Tiger Ministers (Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora)

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is a summoning of the three huge white tigers that fight with the summoning boss, Tigrerra. Their size is the size of three normal white tigers, and they wear a defensive armor which protects them from almost any attack. They also have great speed. They are faster than snakes and their claws and teeth are huge enough to cut through almost anything.
-Can be summoned with or without Tigrerra on the field.
-Can only be used twice per battle.

~ The purple part is the OPed part ~

 

[Sinister]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Chidori Bakuha ) – One thousand birds Blast
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The User creates a very concentrated Chidori in his dominated hand. Since the chidori is concentrated Upon contact with the opponent the chidori will burst. Using chakra control the user directs into a front wards blast that engulfs the opponent in lightning. By squeezing the chidori to the point of explosion he can self activate the blast and forward it toward his opponent (from Mid range maximum).

~ No lightning next turn
~Can only be taught by Sinister

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(Chidori Kakuhan) – One thousand birds Whips

Rank: S
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs 2 chidori’s 1 for each hand. He then Manipulates The 2 chidori’s into long Whips of lightning. These whips serve many purposes. They can Attack the opponent(s) or they can Bind and shock the opponent.

~The user wields the whips for 3 turns
~Can only be taught by Sinister
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(Raiton: Kyanseru) – Lightning Style: Earth Cancel
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user Charges his hand full of lightning and slams the onto the ground releasing a mix of lightning and regular chakra. Since Lightning has dominance over earth the tech will caccel out the usage of earth jutsu and anything associated with it for 3 turns.

~Earth is canceled for 3 turns
~Can only be taught by Sinister

~ All Declined ~