[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Bachiatari no Za-men : Nenshogurou Takai) Seeds of the Damned : Burning Black Death

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Any range
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Zetsu uses his unique abilities to make a group of vines burst out of the ground under the opponent and coil around them. However, the specialty of these vines is that the natural oil content of any plant is multiplied a hundredfold in them, making huge amounts of highly flammable oil rest inside them. The vines are also extremely weak and thin-skinned, and will burst into hot flames on contact with the slightest heat, even if there is strong sunlight. On the slightest touch, they will break spewing oil in their vicinity. Any fires caused by these are oil fires and cannot be put out by water.
~ Only Zetsu can use this jutsu
~ Can only be used twice per battle

-Declined: OP-


For the record, Nexus has allowed me to use poisons in my plant techniques.

( Bachiatari no Za-men: Ikusenbara no Sho-ru ) Seeds of the Damned : Shawl of a Thousand Thorns

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Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage: 20 if stabbed ; 20 per turn from poison
Zetsu focuses his chakra, and, without handseals, grows three inch long thorns all over his body. The thorns are all extremely sharp - and, are poisoned with a potent neurotoxin/hallucinogen that causes blurred vision and mirages as well as slowly paralysing the bloodstream. The thorns can also be shot out at will at high speeds, though they reach only up to three metres.
~ User takes 15 damage
~ Can only be used by Zetsu
~ Thorns can only be shot out twice per battle

- I am not allowing poison to an already deadly character who can manipulate the whole nature. -


The next one is basically nothing, I'm just changing the name of an already-approved custom, so it should be approved.

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(Vi-nasuwanahara Hijutsu Genjutsu : Ranbousosshaku) - Venus Flytrap Secret Illusion Technique : Violent Bite
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
An extremely complex jutsu, this technique casts a genjutsu that first makes the target think they are going to be eaten by a giant Venus Flytrap. Though this is sufficient to immobilise lower level targets, the real purpose of this technique is casting a genjutsu that plays with the target's mind by implanting a false memory of the target undergoing a violent attack by a man with split personalities in their childhood, and fools the brain into "remembering" this memory occur. This implants a deep phobia of people with split personalities into the target, making them freeze in place when they see a person with split personalities. The target, if they are a competent ninja, will release the first Venus Flytrap part of the Genjutsu, and will find that that is all ( an idea furthered by the technique's name of Violent Bite that the user will state ) and will not notice the more subtle part of this technique.
~ Can only be used once per battle
~ Lasts for 3 turns

TO

(Bachiatari no Za-men : Fukyuue) Seeds of the Damned : Eternal Hunger
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
An extremely complex jutsu, this technique casts a genjutsu that first makes the target think they are going to be eaten by a giant Venus Flytrap. Though this is sufficient to immobilise lower level targets, the real purpose of this technique is casting a genjutsu that plays with the target's mind by implanting a false memory of the target undergoing a violent attack by a man with split personalities in their childhood, and fools the brain into "remembering" this memory occur. This implants a deep phobia of people with split personalities into the target, making them freeze in place when they see a person with split personalities. The target, if they are a competent ninja, will release the first Venus Flytrap part of the Genjutsu, and will find that that is all ( an idea furthered by the technique's name of Eternal Hunger that the user will state ) and will not notice the more subtle part of this technique.
~ Can only be used once per battle
~ Lasts for 3 turns

-Approved again since it was approved before-


For the next one, I'm removing the restrictions on turns for the next one - for, let's face it, if something as devastating as the chakra armour the Raikage uses can be used for four turns - then this, an easily destroyed custom should not be restricted to two turns. [ Easily destroyed as in any B/A rank fire jutsu will slice through all this in one go ]The bold parts are the ones I've changed in the new one.
To compensate, I'm cutting the damage down from 80 to 20. I'm also changing the name.

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(Vi-nasuharawanpou: Toko no Vi-nasuharawana ) Venus Flytrap Arts: Bed of Venus Flytraps
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
The user, a member of Zetsu's clan, forces their unique clan chakra into the ground to make Venus Flytraps come out from the ground on the whole arena. These Venus Flytraps can bite the opponent and tear out parts of flesh. Also, while this jutsu is in effect, neither the user nor the opponent can use Earth Release (Doton) moves since the roots of the venus flytraps bind the soil tightly, preventing it from being manipulated.
Note: Can only be used by members of Zetsu's clan
Can only be used once per battle
Lasts only for two turns
User cannot use Earth Release moves either.

TO

(Bachiatari no Za-men: Ashigakyuu) Seeds of the Damned : Corrupt Spread
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 20
The user, a member of Zetsu's clan, forces their unique clan chakra into the ground to make Venus Flytraps come out from the ground on the whole arena. These Venus Flytraps can bite the opponent and tear out parts of flesh. Also, while this jutsu is in effect, neither the user nor the opponent can use Earth Release (Doton) moves since the roots of the venus flytraps bind the soil tightly, preventing it from being manipulated.
Note: Can only be used by members of Zetsu's clan
Can only be used once per battle
User cannot use Earth Release moves either.

-Approved-

For the next one, I have signed the wolf contract, and Roku has allowed me to make this summoning. Since Zetsu already has most of these abilities, it isn't too far-fetched.

( Kuchiyose: Kynareth Etai'gouken ) Summoning : Kynareth, Nature Guardian

Spoiler

Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 40 for Kynareth's claws or fangs, and jutsus used as per their details
The user summons Kynareth, a wolf from Mount Fang. Kynareth is about the size of three average humans and has green markings on his body and leaves growing out of his face. Like all the other wolves, Kynareth has extremely sharp claws and teeth. Kynareth's abilities focus around plants - he can use any plant based technique the user knows, or make plants grown suddenly to attack or bind the opponent. His aura is so pure that plants grow wherever he treads. Kynareth, when summoned, can either appear like a normal summoning, or come out of any plant in the arena. Due to his nature abilities, Kynareth will not let just anyone summon him, and will require the person to have signed the wolf contract and have abilities like Zetsu ( i.e. in touch with plants ) to summon him.
~ Can only be summoned once per battle
~ User cannot summon any other creatures, or use Wind Release above B rank whenever Kynareth is on the field.
~ User pays 25 chakra per turn for keeping Kynareth on the field.

-edit the pink part, also, no Mayfly for the same round-

( Kuchiyose: Kynareth Etai'gouken ) Summoning : Kynareth, Nature Guardian

Spoiler

Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 40 for Kynareth's claws or fangs, and jutsus used as per their details
The user summons Kynareth, a wolf from Mount Fang. Kynareth is about the size of three average humans and has green markings on his body and leaves growing out of his face. Like all the other wolves, Kynareth has extremely sharp claws and teeth. Kynareth's abilities focus around plants - he can use any plant based technique the user knows, or make plants grown suddenly to attack or bind the opponent. His aura is so pure that plants grow wherever he treads. Due to his nature abilities, Kynareth will not let just anyone summon him, and will require the person to have signed the wolf contract and have abilities like Zetsu ( i.e. in touch with plants ) to summon him.
~ Can only be summoned once per battle
~ User cannot summon any other creatures, or use Wind Release above B rank whenever Kynareth is on the field.
~ User pays 25 chakra per turn for keeping Kynareth on the field.
~ User cannot use Mayfly for the turn he is summoned

-Approved-


With respect to your "no poisons", poisons themselves are part and parcel of plants - nightshade, wolfsbane, strychnine in some plants, cyanide in apple pips etc.

So I think the poisons should be allowed for my plants ^^

( Bachiatari no Za-men: Ikusenbara no Sho-ru ) Seeds of the Damned : Shawl of a Thousand Thorns

Spoiler

Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage: 20 if stabbed ; 20 per turn from poison
Zetsu focuses his chakra, and, without handseals, grows three inch long thorns all over his body. The thorns are all extremely sharp - and, are poisoned with a potent neurotoxin/hallucinogen that causes blurred vision and mirages as well as slowly paralysing the bloodstream. The thorns can also be shot out at will at high speeds, though they reach only up to three metres.
~ User takes 15 damage
~ Can only be used by Zetsu
~ Thorns can only be shot out twice per battle

-You have the ability of appearing anywhere, eating people in an instance, have a berserk demon within you, you can suck and replenish chakra, and you have the spores. I do understand your point that some plants are poisonous, but you don't need poison in the Arena to become even more powerful. Also, Zetsu hasn't be shown so far to be using poison-

 

[Ragnaroc]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Towards showing respect to RP moderators' private time, asking questions like: "pls pls pls pls approve my bio" and "chheeeeeek my customssssss!!!!" x100, are prohibited effective immediately. Every question like this on Visitor Messages, Private Messages or posts will be considered spam, and will be treated as such by being totally ignored and deleted immediately, or if repeated by Warnings or Infractions.

Read it, understand it, do it because I will be enforcing it to the letter

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~ Thread Opened
Please note that any jutsu that is take from the official Naruto Manga/Anime will not be approved

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Dōjutsu: Fudo Nenshou Gekido) – Eye Technique: Fire Gods burning Rage

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
Description: The user will cast an illusion over the enemy trapping them in a realm where they see a torrent of red-hot flames burn and surround them and covering them in fire. The fire then feels like the victims souls is being punished by the fire god himself thus causing severe mental scaring and leaving the victims in a wrecked state with their body engulfed in sweat from the intensity of the illusion.
(The user receives –30 damage to themselves from the strain of using the technique and causes their eyes to bleed)

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be used with Mangekyo Sharingan or Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan


-Declined: OP and the whole soul thing better be removed completely-

(Dōjutsu: Fudo Nenshou Gekido) – Eye Technique: Fire Gods burning Rage

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
Description: The user will cast an illusion over the enemy trapping them in a realm where they see a torrent of red-hot flames burn and surround them and covering them in fire. The fire then burns the victim causing severe mental scaring and leaving the victims in a wrecked state with their body engulfed in sweat from the intensity of the illusion.
(The user receives –30 damage to themselves from the strain of using the technique and causes their eyes to bleed)

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be used with Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.
Note: Requires eye contact

~ Approved, I added a line to it to prevent any confusion in battles ~
( I removed the oped soulness and saying that the fire causes the mental damage)

(Dōjutsu: Shinkuu Sori) – Eye Technique: Vacuum Warp

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is and advanced Mangekyo Sharingan the user will manipulates space to create vacuum in which can be used to suck in an incoming attack from the enemy and transport it somewhere else on the battlefield. The user can also use the vacuum warp to teleport himself or the opponent anywhere on the battlefield.

Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Can only be used by Madara.

~ Declined, seriously OPed ~

(Doujutsu: NaiKajuu) – Eye Technique: Dead Weight

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This is an Advanced Mangekyo Sharingan technique where the user releases chakra into the opponents mind and then creating the illusion that that the enemy target is moving slowly. The user is actually manipulating their chakra in the enemy targets mind and affecting the flow of signals that are sent to make the muscles move.

Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Can only be used With Mangekyo Sharingan
Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama and Nero

~ How long do the effects last ? And only once per battle, make it S rank ~

(Raiton: Shingai Arashi) – Lightning Style: Terror Storm

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (- 30 damage to user)
Description: Quezacotl releases the lightning chakra that is emitted from his body which then causes large bolt blasts of lightning chakra to shoot down and surround the enemy target and then move towards the enemy target where they then join up and explode causing a large scale explosion leaving a large scale crater and destroying everything in its path.

Note: Can only be used once
Note: Causes – 30 damage to user from lightning charge of summon
Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama

~ Forbidden techniques require more side effects ~

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: (Katon :kasai uindo metsubou)-Fiery wind of destruction
Rank: S
Damage:80
Chakra Cost: 40
Range: Long
Type: Attack
Discription: In this attack Kakuzu separate his Fire elemental combines with his Wind elemental from his body so it is not him using the jutsu, to form an even more devastating attack. The two elementals will combine their bodies and each will emit their own jutsu blast from their mouth. The two attacks then combine in the air to form an even more powerful jutsu. Because the attack also includes Wind, a mere Water or earth attack will not be able to stop the whole blast.
*This can only be used by Kakuzu*
*This attack can be used two times in a battle*
*The turn after this is used the elements wind and fire can only use B-Rank jutsus*

~ Declined ~

P.S elemental means Hearts

(Satetsu Hanabi) - Iron Sand Fireworks
Rank: A
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: By sending his chakra trough the earth and by compressing the minerals, just like on Earth Style: Earth Mine, the user will make such force that will make the iron sand to explode. This happens because sand has user's wind chakra that after compressing the sand it will blow it up just like a bubble, the user will shape the wind on the sand and it will ''cut'' the sand that is so compressed that will explode, thanks to the wind in it, the explosion will be big
Note: After using it the user can't use S-rank Iron Sand jutsus in 2 turns.
Note: 3 times per battle

~ Explain it better please ~


(Jishaku Ninpou: Denjiki) - Magnetic Arts: Electromagnetism
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:The user will make a changing in a magnetic field and this will make electromagnetism, from there the user can control electric charges so hecan make Lightning jutsus from there. i.e. the user makes a electromagnetic field on a spot in a terrain, like over a river and then he can create lightning jutsus from there, shocking the river so if the opponent goes there, he will get shocked. For this jutsu to works the user must first create a magnetic field on the desired spot.
Note: Only useable in Sandaime Kazekage Bio

~ Declined, that isn't how electromagnetism is created ~

(Jishaku Ninpou: Koukateki) - Magnetic Arts: Effective
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Medium/All
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate all his magnetic chakra and release it all, this will make his magnetic jutsus stronger and capable of resisting at wind jutsus.
Note: Lasts 3 turns
Note: 1 per battle

~ How will releasing all your "magentic chakra" help ? From what I can see, it just gets you tired and suffer chakra loss ~

(Airon Ryuusei)- Iron Meteor
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses charka into the iron sand and compress it into 3 large sphere which are then shot up into the air and force back down with incredible speed which causes fiction for the alls to turn in to molten balls on iron which crash down on the opponent.

~ Declined, unrealistic ; unless you're going to space or sthg friction isn't enough to set iron on fire ~

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The below two need to be submitted only next week as you're above the 5 jutsus per week limit

(Atsui Satetsu Doragon) - Molten Iron Sand Dragon
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Charka Cost: 40 (+15 for each turn this is active)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focus fire chakra into the iron sand to make it heat up to its melting point, then forms the molten hot iron sand into a large dragon which can either be you to crash into the opponent or shoot molten iron senbons.
Note: after 3 turns the dragon hardens and turns back to sand, the user must pay 30 chakra to make the sand molten again

(Satetsu Shuriken) - Iron Sand Shuriken
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: A burst of 10 balls of iron sand balls flung at the opponent that cause blunt damage like breaking bones and if hit in the right area can cause organ damage.
Note: each ball is the size of a tennis ball

 

[Seblax]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

summoning white tigers ministers ( Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora )

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: this is a summoning of the three huge tigers that fight with the summoning boss " tiggara " they are huge enough to get any summoning together and wears an defensive armor especially wind that protect them from any attack and there speed is brilliant, they are faster then snakes and there claws and teeth is huge enough to cut throw almost everything

~ i know white tiger summoning
-Declined:edit the pink parts-

raiton : doragon-ken ) lightning style : dragon blade

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( - 15 for each turn its in use )
Damage Points: 80
Description: by charging the user's lightning chakra, he shall focus it in an blade like huge dragon shaped lightning from his hand " like an dragon chidori spear " but it can be moved like huge link to so that its flicks able if the user want to, and can make huge damages to the opponent , and perfect against others earth jutsus.

~ can only be user 3 times in a battle ..
~ cant stay more then two turns
~ - 10 for each time its in use for the user's health " because it injures his hand

-Declined:edit the pink parts-

( toko kusari ) endless chains

Rank: a
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30 ( -4 for each chain that has been released over each turn )
Damage Points: 60
Description: this is 7 chains that spins around the users arm with a kunai at it's end and its so long that can never been fully released , ans its controllable by the over user's chakra and its faster then any other attack of kunai or shuriken and can be powered with other elemental attacks , and can protect from others attack
- can be used 5 times each battle
- doesn't effect the user's speed

-Declined:no sealings-

~edited~

~ Resubmit them with the quoted post, don't quote them and edit. ~

 

[Axle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon: ( Sukai kujo) Sky Blasters

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Two blasters (guns) appear in the users hands, these guns can fire S-rank fire blasts at the users will, or the guns can be aimed toward the ground gaining the user the ability of flight
Note: Rules of Firing
(D-rank Fire blasts 6 second releases)
(C-rank Fire blasts 10 second releases)
(B-rank Fire blasts 16 second releases)
(A-rank Fire blasts 20 second releases)
(S-rank Fire blasts 30 second releases)
(Forbidden Fire blasts 1 minute releases)
Note: when blasters appear, they are the only weapon the user can use
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: only lasts 3 turns

~ Declined, seriously, no guns in the Naruto RP -.- ~

(heishi mune houmen) - Dying Will Release

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user releases 90% of their remaining chakra into a force known as the user's "Dying Will", the user's 5 senses are pushed to the Max, also it greatly increases the users reaction time and their speed and strength are dramatically improved ten fold, but this jutsu takes alot of pressure on the user's body
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: only lasts 3 turns
Note: after using this jutsu is cancelled, the user can not use Chakra consuming jutsus

~ Declined, too similar to existing jutsu ~

 

[curse seal sasuke 2]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Omote Renge)front lotus
rank:forbidden
type:attack/Supplementary
range:short
chakara cost:50
damage points:n/a
description:The user launches the opponent into the air and then uses Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Now behind his opponent, the user restrains them and pildrives them into the ground headfirst. Because it uses one of the chakra gates, the user is left extremely fatigued
note:must know openning of the inner eight gates



(Kurohigi Kiki Nihatsu)Black Secret Technique Machine Two ShotBlack Secret Technique Machine Two Shot
rank:b
type:attack
range:short
chakara cost:20
damage points:40
description:After making a distraction, Kankuro maneuvers Kuroari behind the victim, which then opens up its chest and fires out chakra controlled strings that wrap around its intended target. It then winds these strings back in to trap the target in its chest. With the victim trapped, two scythe like blades appear and reap through one side of the puppet to the other, killing the victim inside
notenly kankuro or a custom character have been tought by kankrou are able to use this



~ Both declined , I just said not to submit manga jutsu ~

 

[Nadare]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Here are the one I resubmit:

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(Suiton: Dan'atsu Geyser) - Water Style: Pressure Geyser

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Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:80
Description: This is a fire+water combo. This jutsu requires a sword, and great water/fire and chakra control. The user must stab the sword in to the ground (it can be any material). Then he flows his water/fire chakra through it, into the ground. He causes a great volumn of hot water under pressure errupt from below the enemy. The enemy is blown in the air, he gets burned severely because the water is hot.
The user can be just leaning on the sword while he is channelling chakra into it, and it needs no seals.
This is based on real facts:

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*Note:Can only be used by Nadare.*
*Note: can only be used twice per battle.*
*Note:Based on real facts.*

~ Approved ~

Edited U_U

Here is the new one:

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(Silaat Taijutsu:Gishiki) - Silaat Taijutsu: Ceremonial

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Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user warms up himself before battle. He concentrates, and focuses his chakra. This jutsu is the result of countless years of training, in taijutsu. Only the most experienced, and strong fighters can produce this ceremonial. It's a sort of a dance, which is done before every battle. The user does several movements in a blink of an eye, which seem like a dance. Then the user bows, and claps his hands together, and yiels "Gishiki". Every master of the Silaat Style, is therefore very fast, and strong, which is only a result of hard training. The concentration also allows the user better chakra mold through the fight.
The Silaat style, is a fighting style, developed in Malaysia. The Malaysian fighters used this styles for centuries to defend their country. it's said to be the most lethal martial art in the world. The users are very proud, and dances, and proves of courage are their everyday. The current only master of Silaat is Nadare. A legend says, that the once the most experienced figher faught with a tiger barehanded, and won.

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*Note: Only Silaat fighters can use this*
*Note: Nadare, is the only current master of Silaat, and the only one able to teach it.*
*Note: This ceremonial, is used before every battle, and lasts the whole battle.*
*Note:It must be posted in the first move, and the enemy cannot disrupt the dance, or hurt the user in the meantime.*

~ If Nexus approved it, then Approved here too ~

Pattent Certificate for Silaat Taijutsu by Nexus & Rei​

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This jutsu is already approved by nexus & rei. All the silaat taijutsu's are previously approved/declined by nexus

 

[anbu kakashi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wind Release:Silent Wind (Fuuton: Kaze no Sairento)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user sends off a burst of wind that lashes out, removing all sound within the area. Making it impossible for either the user or the opponent to hear anything. This is normally used for silent assassination
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Last three times
Note: Can only be used by Anbu Kakashi and Itachi

-Declined: you can't wipe out the natural sounds with a wind jutsu-

Water Style: Lake of the Sky (Suiton: Mizuumi Zona Sukai)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using tremondous amount of chakra, the user creates water from thin air which hovers just above the user and forms so much that it covers a little less than half the entire battle field. The water does not dissipate for a certain of time, thus giving the user an advantage in water supply in which the user can use and manipulate due the water having the user's chakra in it.
Note: Can only be used by Anbu Kakashi and Crutch Kaguya
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Last three turns

||Declined||

Illusion Technique: Distorted Reality (Genjutsu: Ibitsu Riariti)

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user would cast an illusion immediately and unknowingly when the opponent have suffer any kind of pain, cut, wound etc. (it can be minor or life threatening). The illusion causes the opponent's pain, wound, cut etc. to becoming extremely painful and have the opponenet severly afraid of their wounds which causes them into a state of complete horror-struck

~Needs restrictions~

Wind Release:Furious Wind (Fuuton: Hageshii Kaze)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user sends off a burst of wind that lashes out which unleash a turbulent thunderous noise in the whole areana. Making it impossible for either the user or the opponent to hear anything.
Note: Last three times
Note: Can only be used by Anbu Kakashi and Itachi

~ Declined, unrealistic. Such a loud sound cannot be created by a fast burst of wind, else every wind technique in the jutsu list would do the same ~

Water Style: Lake of the Sky (Suiton: Mizuumi Zona Sukai)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (-25 per turn due to tremendous chakra)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using tremendous amount of chakra, the user gathers water mostly from the moisture in the air and/or water particles from either the ground or plants which hovers just above the user and forms so much that it covers a little less than half the entire battle field. The water does not dissipate for a certain of time, thus giving the user an advantage in water supply in which the user can use and manipulate due the water having the user's chakra in it.
Note: Can only be used by Anbu Kakashi and Crutch Kaguya
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Last three turns

~ Declined, only Tobirama Senju can pull water from the air or plants ~

Illusion Technique: Distorted Reality (Genjutsu: Ibitsu Riariti)

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user would cast an illusion immediately and unknowingly when the opponent have suffer any kind of pain, cut, wound etc. (it can be minor or life threatening). The illusion causes the opponent's pain, wound, cut etc. to becoming extremely painful and have the opponent severely afraid of their wounds which causes them into a state of complete horror-struck
Note: Can only be used twice

~ Explain how it is cast - eye contact, sound, what ? ~

The bold in both jutsu have been added and/or modified to fit Naruto format

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon/Raiton Kenjutsu: Saishuu Zenshin (Fire/Lightning Sword Art: Last Drive)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Desription: The User raises a Weapon and a wall of searing Fire scorches those close, then the user hacks away at a single target until ready to fire a beam of lightning that annihilates anything in its path.
(No Fire/Lightning till 2 turns Afterwards)
(Usable 2 Times)

~Declined~ OP and bad description
Raiton Kenjutsu: Ragunaroku (Lightning Sword Art: Ragnaroc)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 60
Damage: 120 (-30 to user as they will be caught in the blast slightly)
Description: The User Begins with a Short Aerial Combo, that slashes away at the target hitting them to the ground. Then Using Lightning Chakra. They fire multiple bolts of lightning that explode on contact.
(No Lightning 2turns afterwards)
~Declined~ OP and needs better description and needs more restrictions
Kenjutsu: Kuraimu Penaruti (Sword Art: Crime and Punishment)
Rank:S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user takes there swords and using chakra causes it to hover around them allowing it to attack on its own and to still focus elemental chakra into it. After is has been charged the sword(s) release(s) elemental attacks at the target.

Wind: Multiple slashes hit the opponent
Earth: The sword implants itself into the ground causing the earth to cascade towards the target. Implaing them.
Fire: Multiple Fire blast are sent at the target
Lightning: Multiple lightning bolts are produced that zap surround the user from all angles and spread outwards.
Water: Torents of water are sent outwards hitting the target. carring them away on contact

(User loses the respective element(s) next turn)
~Declined~ OP and needs more restrictions
Kuchiyose: Nin-Inu Raikou, Entei, Suicune: ( Summoning- Ninja Dog Raikou, Entei, Suicune)
Rank: S
Type: Summon
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Three S-Class Ninja Dogs Raikou,Entei,Suicune are summoned giving the each with the ability to use Lightning, Fire, and Water Respectively. They also retain the ability to independently control these elements without using a jutsu.
(User loses control of these elements while they are summoned)
(Last 3 turns)
~Declined~ OP and not totally sure dogs can use elemental jutsu's, needs more restrictions and a better description
Raiton/Fuuton: Mabushii Unari (Lightning/Wind Release: Radiant Howl)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The User concentrates a large amount of wind and lightning Chakra in his mouth that when releases sends out massive shockwaves of lightning and wind that can obliterate whatever is in it path. The rippling wind and lightning creates a deafening howl that is able to drown out all sound and causes the and opponent to be deaf for the turn afterwards.
(No Lightning/Wind Next Turn)
(Usable 2 times)
~Declined~ OP

 

[ZetsuPOD]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu:Sowasowa Ayumikata)-Illusion: Nervous Move
Type: Supplementery
Rank: C
RangeShort-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will focus on the opponent, using chakra will make the opponent think the user is staring at them all the time from every direction and everywhere. This will stop the opponent from using there first moves. This jutsu is activated at the start of the match and so when the user has there proper turn they can only use two jutsus.
~Declined~ OP

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Te-no Hira no go jitsuryokus ) Palms of Five forces
Type: Attack / Supplementary
Rank: B/A/S
Range: Short - Long ( Depends on rank that's used )
Chakra Cost: 25/30/40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User focuses one of five basic element chakras on their hands. After it he claps his hands together creating sound wave that's going in every direction and is infused with elemental chakra. The wave that's launched can trigger various effects that are:
- Water causes small amount of water appear with wave
- Fire causes aura of warmth appear ( Melting ice attacks )
- Lightning causes paralyzing and Numbing appear to opponents body
- Wind causes Lightning attacks and tools repel
- Earth causes Avalanche ( Size depends on rank of the move )

-Declined: there is already a CE submitted for this ability-

( Suiton: Kugi No Ekitai ) Water release: Nails of Liquid
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User infuses Chakra on battle field and manipulates the water sources turning surface of them into needles that are able of piercing Hard objects. The size of Nail is up to user. Requires only water source no handseals.

-Declined: water piercing hard objects?-

( Genjutsu: Shitsunen no aoi Hinote ) Illusion technique: Blue flames of Oblivion
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User can trigger this genjutsu from every part in his body. As the genjutsu is cast on opponent the world will start to slow down and Opponent will be set a blaze with Blue flames of Oblivion.

-Declined: poor description and needs great genjutsu abilities to perform this one-

( Katon: Mokushi ) Fire release: Apocalypse
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: User releases Huge amount of chakra on skies and makes series of handseals. After it The sky turns into Red and it starts to Rain massive fireballs and Ash around the Battlefield. Can be used once in battle.

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists; mine O_O-

( Raiton: Kobushi no Zetsumetsu ) Lightning release: Fist of Extinction
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( + 10 to user )
Description: User focuses huge amount of lightning chakra on his fist making it Glow. After it user can hit it to earth or opponent that's nearby. If the opponent takes direct hit of this move the match will be over. If user misses opponent and the fist will hit something else it will release aura of lightning chakra that paralyzes anything it hits for one turn. Can be used once in battle.

-Declined: OP and doesn't make sense, paralyzing aura?-

( Suiton: Kugi No Ekitai ) Water release: Nails of Liquid
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User infuses Chakra on battle field and manipulates the water sources turning surface of them into needles that are able of pierce skin, Feet ( Not bones ) and Soft clay/soil. The size of Nail is up to user. Requires only water source no handseals.

I added the information on what it can pierce.
~Approved~

( Raiton: Kobushi no Zetsumetsu ) Lightning release: Fist of Extinction
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( + 10 to user )
Description: User focuses huge amount of lightning chakra on his fist making it Glow. After it user can hit it to earth or opponent. When the punch hits the user will release all the lightning chakra in form of lightning shock wave that deals damage to everyone in the range of it ( Dealing 10 damage to user since he/she takes part of the shock ) * Can be used once in battle plus no lightning in two turns *.

Added the shocking part and restricted it more
~Declined~ Still OP, give a range of distance for damage to occur

( Genjutsu: Shitsunen no aoi Hinote ) Illusion technique: Blue flames of Oblivion
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User can trigger this genjutsu from every part in his body. As the genjutsu is cast on opponent the world will start to slow down and Opponent will be set a blaze with Blue flames of Oblivion that cause the opponents nervous system believe that he/she's taking serious damage ( And make him/her also feel it ) from blue flame and make the opponent panic. * This is advanced sharingan genjutsu that can be only taught by Myartisablast *

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The jutsu where itachi points with finger and causes opponent to start burning.
~Declined~ If its part of a Naruto game, then its part of the Narutoverse and thus can not be a custom jutsu
New ones:

( Kuchiyose: Kougake no Armstrong ) Summoning technique: Gauntlets of Armstrong
Type: Summoning / Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( + 5 to taijutsu and + 10 to lightning )
Description: User summons the gauntlets of legendary alchemist Alex Louis Armstrong ( AKA Strong arm alchemist ) of the Armstrong family. The gauntlets have Spikes on place of knuckles and Alchemical notes carved on the top to boost the Lightning attacks. When the gauntlets have activated they boost Taijutsu attacks + 5 and Lightning + 10. * Can be only used twice per battle and they last for five turns. Only myartisablast is able of teaching this summon and teach how to use these gauntlets. *
Picture:

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~Will discuss with Rei~

( Doton: Shioki sotte Kouka ) Earth release: Punishment by Hardening
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A ( + 10 to Taijutsu and + 5 to doton. Lightning Attacks done to user will cause + 10 damage and Taijutsu attacks will do - 5 less)
Description: User hardens body into steelish quality unlike regular hardening mode that gathers stone in form of protective armour. User's body will stay in same shape only expection is that user's Skin tone will change to darker. The mode lasts three turns and adds + 10 to damage done by taijutsu and + 5 to doton. User can also take more damage taijutsu attacks. * Can only be taught by myartisablast. It lasts only three turns and can be used once per battle. *

~will discuss with Rei, but too similar to the original hardening jutsu~

 

[Ben-sama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu : Sacchi Funkyuu) Genjutsu : Sense Disorder

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Rank : B
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short-Long
Chakra : 25
Damage : N/A
Description : By Using His/Her Chakra, The User Confuses His Opponent By Making Him Think That He Doesn't Feel Anything That He Touches, This Jutsu Affects The Sense Of Touching.

~Declined~ there is already a jutsu that does this
(Kuchyose : Katana No Sumiyaka) Summoning Jutsu : Blade Of Speed

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Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra : 30
Damage : 60
Description : The Blade Itself Has Chakra Within It, Which Once In Touch With It's Owner Starts Sending The Chakra Throughout The User's Muscles Giving Them Greater Speed
Effect : The User's Speed When Using This Blade Is Doubled
Note : Only Benazz Posesses This Blade

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~Declined~ Add restrictions
(Kuchyose : Katana No Sutamina) Summoning Jutsu : Blade Of Stamina

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Rank : B
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra : 25
Damage : 50
Description : The Blade Itself Has Chakra Within It, Once In Touch With Its Owner It Begins Sending It's Chakra Into The Lungs Of The User And Then Makes Them Works At The Same Rate, And Expands Them, Therefore With Expanded Lungs The User Can Hold His Breath Longer And The Due To The Same Lung Rate The User Can Keep Up His Running Speed At All Time

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~Declined~ Add Restrictions
(Suiton : Sandangamae Mizu Doragon) Water Release : Triple Water Dragon

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Rank : A
Type : Attack
Range : Short-Mid
Chakra : 30
Damage : 60
Description : This Jutsu Is Basically The Same Water Dragon Techinque, Only That When The Dragon Is Halfway Of Its Target, It Splits Into Three Parts That Can Attack Multiple Targets At Once

~Declined~ Not allowed to modify jutsu's from the NarutoVerse

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Dōjutsu: Fudo Nenshou Gekido) ? Eye Technique: Fire Gods burning Rage

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
Description: The user will cast an illusion over the enemy trapping them in a realm where they see a torrent of red-hot flames burn and surround them and covering them in fire. The fire then burns the victim causing severe mental scaring and leaving the victims in a wrecked state with their body engulfed in sweat from the intensity of the illusion.
(The user receives ?30 damage to themselves from the strain of using the technique and causes their eyes to bleed)

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be used with Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.
Note: Requires eye contact

~ Approved, I added a line to it to prevent any confusion in battles ~
( I removed the oped soulness and saying that the fire causes the mental damage)

(Dōjutsu: Shinkuu Sori) ? Eye Technique: Vacuum Warp

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is and advanced Mangekyo Sharingan the user will manipulates space to create vacuum in which can be used to suck in an incoming attack from the enemy and transport it somewhere else on the battlefield. The user can also use the vacuum warp to teleport himself or the opponent anywhere on the battlefield.

Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Can only be used by Madara.

~ Declined, seriously OPed ~

(Doujutsu: NaiKajuu) ? Eye Technique: Dead Weight

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This is an Advanced Mangekyo Sharingan technique where the user releases chakra into the opponents mind and then creating the illusion that that the enemy target is moving slowly. The user is actually manipulating their chakra in the enemy targets mind and affecting the flow of signals that are sent to make the muscles move.

Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Can only be used With Mangekyo Sharingan
Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama and Nero

~ How long do the effects last ? And only once per battle, make it S rank ~

(Raiton: Shingai Arashi) ? Lightning Style: Terror Storm

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (- 30 damage to user)
Description: Quezacotl releases the lightning chakra that is emitted from his body which then causes large bolt blasts of lightning chakra to shoot down and surround the enemy target and then move towards the enemy target where they then join up and explode causing a large scale explosion leaving a large scale crater and destroying everything in its path.

Note: Can only be used once
Note: Causes ? 30 damage to user from lightning charge of summon
Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama

~ Forbidden techniques require more side effects ~

My final submittion for the week ^^

(Raiton: Shingai Arashi) ? Lightning Style: Terror Storm

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (- 30 damage to user)
Description: Quezacotl releases the lightning chakra that is emitted from his body which then causes large bolt blasts of lightning chakra to shoot down and surround the enemy target spaced 2 meters away from the opponent in every direction and then move towards the enemy target where they then join up and explode causing a large scale explosion leaving a large scale crater and destroying everything in its path.

Note: Can only be used once
Note: Causes ? 30 damage to user from lightning charge of summon
Note: User cannot perform lightning element the following turn
Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama
~Approved~

 

[NEMEXIS]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon:nenshou enro dzuki makai) Fire Style:Burning Road To Hell
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:B
Range:Short-Medium
Chakara Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description:To use this technique, the user must be proficient in using the Katon element. He or she will concentrate a clump of chakra into either the palm of their hand or into the tip of their foot. It also doesn't require any handseals. Next you either slam your palm to the ground or stamp your foot and release the chakra, on the way out it is neccesary to mix a large amount of Katon chakra into it. The ground in front of the user will erupt into flames that stretches about ten yards and is about two times as wide as the user's body.
*Note: Can Only Be Used 3 Times Per Battle*
*Note: Only Nemexis May Teach*
~Approved~ I changed it to a B rank technique.
(Hasu doragon hoi-ru) Lotus Dragon Wheel
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:To use this technique, the user must be proficient in using the Katon element. Before executing the jutsu, the user must perform the following handseals: Boar, Dragon, Serpant, Monkey. The user will concentrate katon chakra around their arms. They will then stick them out the way one would do if he was pretending to be an airplane. Two Lotus dragons, described above, will begin circling each arm. When the user shoots his arms forward the dragons are released and cause a large explosion of flames.
*Can Only Be Performed Twice*
*Only Nemexis Can Teach*
~Declined~ explain how the dragons attack the user in better detail
(heki tekidan)Burst Grenade
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:B
Range:Short-Medium
Chakara Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description:To use this technique, the user must be proficient in using the Fuuton element. Before executing the jutsu, no hand seals are needed to be performed. The user will cause a large ball of wind energy in his or her hand. The core of which is a ball of unstable chakra. When the ball is thrown, it causes the wind and chakra to explode and let out a forceful burst of wind. The gale is strong enough to snap trees and toss a person around like a rag doll.
*Note Can Only Be Used Twice*
*Note Only Nemexis Can Teach*
~Declined~ Too similar to existing techniques
(Genjutsu:Mira-Hei)Mirror Wall
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:25
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Once The Target Looks At The User The Target will be Locked In A Genjutsu That Will Change Everything Around Him Look Backwards, so If He Is Looking Forward It Shows What Is Going On Backwards Instead Of whats Forward Making The Target Confused.
*Note Can Only Be Used Twice*
*Only Last 1 Turn*
~Declined~ elaborate the description more

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu:Yon-Saido Fuu Shiyou)-Illusion Technique: Four Sided Sealing Method
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user creates 3 shadow clones. Each of the stands as of they were in a perfect square meaning they stand at three corners of the square and the user stands and the last corner. The Opponent is trapped inside of the square.the user and the clones send out a steady flow of chakra through the ground towards the opponent. Once the users chakra makes contact with the opponent, he/she is trapped in a very high level genjutsu.The user and the clones have to stay in a sqaure formation for the it to work properly.The opponent is trapped under a genjutsu that makes the user believe that he or she is severely getting sliced by a sword. Though the physical damage doesn't happen the opponent feels the pain causing torture.
Restrictions:
-Can only Be used once per battle
-May only be used by ~Minato~
-This jutsu lasts 1 turn
~Approved~

 

[Adachi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wood Style: Wood Tendrils (Mokuton: Wood Shokushu)
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user uses this technique to make several thick tendrils of wood surround him like an active shield. This can be used to defend against closed-range attacks or to strike an opponent if they get near. The wood is made of Lignum Vitae (a hardwood know as the tree of life) and is extremely durable.
Note: This jutsu is a real jutsu of Hashirama's

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*For wood users only.*
~Declined~ You can't make custom jutsu's out of jutsu's that appear in Naruto
Wood Style: Tiny Seeds (Mokuton: Chippoke Za-men)
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates several tiny chakra seeds the size of a grain of rice. They then send these seeds towards his/her opponents. If a seed touches the skin of the opponent, they immediately respond to their chakra, sticking to the victim's skin and sprouting into a poisonous flower. This slowly numbs and kills the victim with spreading it's poisonous chakra their bloodstream. It also slows down his attacks.

Note: *Kills opponent in three turns if they do not get rid of it*
~Declined~ Add restrictions

 

[Axle]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(di Squalo dageki) The Shark Blow

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Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates chakra into their blade, and when it comes in contact with another object, the chakra flows out of the sword like a current, and goes into the opponent thus stunning the opponent for 1 turn
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~Approved~
(Shigure Souen Ryu)

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Rank: B
Type: supplementary
Range: short
Chakra: none
Damage: N/A
Description: an ancient Japenese sword style in which some say is the most unbeatable style in the world the user picks up thier sword and holds it close to their eyes with one hand as this technique the user needs to be able to use only 1 hand to control the swords movements, the users feet are spread shoulder length apart, this sword style has 7 totally different forms
Note: while in this form the user can use no Gen or Ninjutsu unless used before the technique
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: only lasts 3 turns

~Approved~
(Shajiku no Ame) - Axle of Rain

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Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: the user focuses their chakra in their feet and pushes off, holding the blade with 2 hands in a thrusting motion
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~Declined~ Needs better description
(Saka ma ku ame) - Rolling Rain

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Rank: B
Type: supplementary
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Description:The user puts the tip of their sword in the water focusing their chakra into the tip, the user then lifts up the blade swiftly, causing a 2 giant water typhoons to form, this water typhoon can only defend the user, the reflection of the water off the user can cause illusions for the opponent and giving the user time to escape if necessary and hide the user's whereabouts giving them the advantage to counter attack
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: Water source needed

~Declined~ OP for a B rank
(ya ra zy no ame) - Last Minute Rain

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Rank: A
Type : Offense
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user drops their sword with the blade facing toward the enemy, then the user focuses their chakra in their foot, and kicks the sword with incredible power in speed, and as soon as the sword hits the mark, the user is there holding the sword again (the sword causes a distraction giving the user time to rush in toward the opponent)
Note: the user can only use this technique while in Shigure Souen Ryu
Note: can only be taught by Axle

~Declined~ Add restrictions

 

[Adachi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wood Style: Wood Tendrils (Mokuton: Wood Shokushu)
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user uses this technique to make several thick tendrils of wood surround him like an active shield. This can be used to defend against closed-range attacks or to strike an opponent if they get near. The wood is made of Lignum Vitae (a hardwood know as the tree of life) and is extremely durable. It also travels with user wherever they go on the ground. If you jump into the air, it can extend to high heights to reach the user. This wood is controllable by the user by thought alone.

*For wood users only. *
Changed the idea of it. It is actually vastly different than the one from the game.)
~Will discuss with other Mod~
Wood Style: Tiny Seeds (Mokuton: Chippoke Za-men)
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates several tiny chakra seeds the size of a grain of rice. They then send these seeds towards his/her opponents. If a seed touches the skin of the opponent, they immediately respond to their chakra, sticking to the victim's skin and sprouting into a poisonous flower. This slowly numbs and kills the victim with spreading it's poisonous chakra their bloodstream. It also slows down his attacks.

Note: *Kills opponent in three turns if they do not get rid of it*
*can only be used three times a battle*

(The mods usually add restrictions. >_>)
~Declined~ Add restrictions....i'm not doing your work for you, thats not my job!
Lightning Style: Lightning Counter (Raiton: Raiton Kaunta)
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user sends out a vast amount of raiton chakra into the air before him. If his/her opponent uses a water move, the user can manipulate his raiton chakra to attract the water particles (since electricity is naturally attracted to water) by spreading it over the attack. He can then reflect the move back at the opponent by pumping more raiton chakra into the mix and sending the water in the form of a jet.
*can only reflect water moves that don't involve vast amounts of water (like lake creating water)
*can defend all A-Rank water*
*usable only three times a battle*
~Declined~ Lightning doesn't attract water and its attracted to water, Water is just highly conductive with electricity.
Lightning Style: Body Shock (Raiton: Karada Dageki)
Rank: A-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: None
Description: The user sends raiton chakra quickly throughout his body and the air around him to get rid of any foreign materials that may be in and around him. These includes things on the microsopic level, minor poisoning, and viruses.
~Declined~ Add usage restrictions

Wind Style: Bursting Blades (Fuuton: Heki Ken)
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra:40
Damage: 80 (if it hits the opponent after driving through their jutsu)
Description: The user releases fast and dense amounts of wind chakra in the shape of a blade. (Like Ichigo's Getsuga Tenshou). These fast wind blades travel at an extremely fast speed (good for countering) and can cut cleanly through certain elements. For water moves, it can spread it to and fro and for earth moves, it can cut through it.
*can protect up to A-Rank earth and water moves* (not all. Only the more physical ones. Like direct water moves; high amounts of water cannot be cut)
*up to three blades can be shot per move*
*usable five times per battle only*
~Declined~ too similar to already existing jutsu which can do all the same things this can be done