[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Nadare]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kisame Customs:

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(Kuchiyose:Monsutasame) - Summoning: Monster Shark
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Description: The user uses Samehada to cut his palms with it's shreds.Then he throws the sword in the air, slams his hands together, and yiels Kuchiyose:Monsutasame.
A giant monster shark errupts from the water behind the user.The shark then moves in the water, and can be used, to errupt from the water, to attack in different ways(Causing errupting shockwave's, slaming on the enemy, etc.......).
*Note:Must have a water surrounding.*
*Note:Cutting of the hands doesn't do any damage to the user, since Kisame can heal himself.*
*Note:Can only be used by Kisame*

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kaito is making that jutsu offical

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(Samehada Bakuhatsu) - Shark Skin Explosion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Th user points Samehada in the air. The outer layer of shreds on the sword explodes, making the shreds fly in all dirrection, except toward the user.It makes huge damage all around.
*Note: Can only be used by Kisame.*
*Note: The layer of shreds appears back, since the sword heals it's self.*

~not possible~
its not shown in the anime/manga that samehada can do that

 

[Artimis]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon: X-Gloves
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user puts on Special Gloves Called X-Gloves, When the user infuses with fire chakra the gloves give the use the power to do more and stronger fire jutus .
*These gloves can only be used by Mato~kun*
*Gloves can be removed but must be done by another jutus*
*Any fire jutsu done with the gloves adds 10+ damage *
~Approved~
find a jap name


X Glover Levitation
Rank: B
Range: long
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description Once the user has equipped there self with the X Glover this jutus will give the user the ability to fly. This Justus work by making the flames for the gloves fire down warder towards the ground giving them the power to take flight. The back draw to this jutus is while the user is in the air he is unable to perform any jutsu that require handsigns because if the user would to try any he would fall because the gloves would not be pointing down anymore.
*These just can only be used by Mato~kun*
*This jutus cant be performed without the X Gloves
~decline~
make it an A rank and range to short. but will not make u fast as the 8 gates or any other speed increasing jutsus. find a jap name

X-Burner
Rank: S
Range: long
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80+10(with the gloves on)
Description: Once the user has equipped there self with the X Glover the user will be able to perform this attack called the X- Burner. This attack works like this the user turns sideways pointing his body towards his opponent first the user raises his hand fared away from the opponent and points it out wards once done he releases a soft flame this fire is not used to attack it is used to keep the user steady from being blow back by his other hand then the user raises his hand closes to the opponent and lets out super strong fire. This flame is strong enough to beat any jutus of lower rank the opponents jutus must at least be S-rank to match the power of the flame anything lower will be destroy and the attack will continue. The X-Burner maybe used in the air because the soft flame would keep him in place.
*This attack can be used three times in battle*
*only must have gloves on*
*Only Mato~kun can use*
~declined~
add some limits and restriction. find a jap name

X-Absorb
Rank: S
Range: long
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: Whatever the attack used power is plus +10
Description: Once the user has equipped there self with the X Glover the user will have the ability to absorb other fire attacks used against him. The jutus works like this the user points his hands outwards towards the fire attack coming at him he then makes a triangle shape with his hands giving him the power to Absorb any fire justu S-Rank and below after Absorb the fire attack he will send it back at the opponent.
*can only be used in battle twice*
*Only can be used on fire attacks*
*only Mato~kun can use*
~declined~
oped

 

[Lord of Kaos]

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Doton: Ro-ma Koroshiamu (Earth Style: Rome’s Coliseum)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes a large dome surrounding him and the opponent, creating a coliseum of sorts. The only way out of the dome is to use certain S-rank and above water jutsu (one’s that can pierce). The dome cancels out all light, leaving it completely dark inside it.
*the dome last for the whole battle until destroyed with S-rank water and higher*
*can only be used once*
-Declined-
Make it S-rank (wrong rank)...and not sure about the only weak to water thing. Shouldn't it be weak to lightning then?

Doton: Furo-tingu Kougen (Earth Style: Levitating Plateau)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates a large chunk of the earth beneath him to rise into the air quickly, letting him manipulate the control of the piece of earth, causing it to be able to avoid and dodge B-rank and below jutsu. The user applies chakra to his feet to stay on the earth upside-down and, if he chooses to do so, can jump off and cause the earth to float towards what he wants it too.
*only stays in effect for four turns at the most*
*usable only three times a battle*
-Declined- Limit it to once per battle

(Fuuton: Ouranos’s Kuracchi) Wind Style: Ouranos’s Clutch
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user channels the air found around the enemy’s neck and forces it inward by closing his fist, crushing the enemy’s neck.
-Declined- a bit OP for that rank O_O Work on the description more and add restrictions.

Doton: Korandamu Panteon no Kamigami (Earth Style: Corundum Pantheon of the Gods)
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user uses his Earth Chakra to extract Aluminum and create a dome around me as one of his clones uses his wind as the shield is forming to make Aluminum Oxide in a solid state known as Corundum. It is impenetrable except for A-Forbidden rank Lightning Jutsu's because of elemental combination.
Note: Can only be used 2 times in a battle
-Goro or Grimm please check this one

(Suiton: atomikku shin'en) Water Style: Atomic Abyss
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close –Mid (most effective up close)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user creates 5 quickly condensed orbs of water from a nearby source of water. The orbs then begin to quickly orbit the user like an atomic nucleus, carving the earth as it touches the ground. The water orbs are then shot at the enemy in rapid succession with speeds like bullets.
*entitled to any elemental variations of this jutsu*
-Approved- I guess...

 

[Shig]

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(Fūton: Fuzei Genshi Soujuu) - Wind Release: Air Atom Manipulation

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 Chakra per Turn active)
Damage Points: -
Description: By spreading his chakra among the air, the atoms and ions spread away from the user deactivating the electrical and magnetic field around him, disabling any Lightning Jutsus that can be performed onto him, and also deactivating any form of Lightning that is in Mid-Close range from the user for as long as he keeps the wind moving.
- After five turns this automatically wears off and all atoms and ions come back to normal.
- May be teached only by Shigure

-Declined- OP Side effects?


(Raiton: Aian Itten no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Ion Particle Armor

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defence
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 55 (+20 each turn active)
Damage Points: - (-40 to the user when armor is activated, -5 damage per turn, whilst active, +20 to all Lightning Jutsus, -10 from any Lightning Jutsu)
Description: The user gathers all positive electrically charged Ions in the nearby enviroment, creating an ultimate armor of Lightning that is capable of rejecting all positive and negative electrons that are coming in touch with them.The user's speed increases to Lee's 3rd Gate speed and his general competence in Lightning attacks increases.Each turn the armor is active, the ions zap the user's skin causing discomfort while he moves around.The first time the armor is activated, it slightly burns the surface of the skin.
- Once the armor is deactivated, it cannot be activated for the rest of the battle.
- May be teached only by Shigure.

-Approved-

 

[Toku]

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( Hakkeshou Junsei Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Palm Perfect Heavenly Spin/Rotation

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(if used to attack)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of all there tenketsu and spin creating a dome shield that can fend off S-rank attacks. If used to attack, you must be in close range, the user spins with such speed and force that it fling its opponent very far.
*Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*Note: can only be used while byakugan is activated.
*Note: can only be used by Toku.
~check the jutsu list. it might be there~


(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes of Air Palms

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: It is a more advance combined form of the air palm and 64 strikes, the user pushes chakra out of there palm 64 times that blows away the opponent .
*Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*Note: can only be used while byakugan is active.
*Note: can only be used by Toku.
~check the jutsu list~

Kuchiyose no jutsu: (Sono Kyousei Hebereke Tanuki)The Great Drunk Raccoon Dog

Rank: S-Rank
Type: Summoning
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: the user summons a great raccoon dog, Daisuke, the size of gamabunta. Daisuke can use high ranking earth and he carries a big gourd of sake on his back that can be used for drinking of course but also for making powerful fire jutsus. The jutsus attack go up by 20 when making a ninja/summon combo with Daisuke.
*Note: can only be used 1x per battle.
*Note: can only stay in battle for 5 turns.
*Note: can only be taught by Toku.
~declined~
u cannot have this summon. u must be a sabu bio

(Fuuton: Raikou kuchini doragon) Wind release: Lightning eating dragon

Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: the user summons a dragon made of wind that sucks up all the lightning in the area and strikes the opponent as a lightning and wind combo.
*Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*Note: can only be used by Toku.
~declined~
wind cannot suck lightning

~Do not edit a post after a mod has edited it. this is my last warning~

 

[RokuNR]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ongakupou: Hekate Tsu Irori)- Music Arts: Hekate Steals Hearth
Type: Genjutsu/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (50 in Apollo's World of Grief)
Damage: 85 (-10 to user) (90 in Apollo's World of Grief but -30 to user)
Description: This jutsu can only be activated by playing on the lyre. Once the user strums the strings of the lyre constantly for 1 turn, trapping the opponent in a genjutsu (which they will not be aware of until the things begin to happen), the sky darkens slightly and then turns blood red. From the sky, tiny spheres of magical light begin to gently and slowly float to the ground, where they glow once they touch the ground. Once the last of them fall, the ground begins to crack around the entire field with lava spewing out of it. Vast amounts of the earth fractures and displaces rocks in an armageddon-style finale for the genjutsu, all leading up to the point where the ground completely shatters under the opponent and they are devoured by a gigantic orange flame which, once is finishes burning, ends the genjutsu and leaves only a feather from what was the changed illusionic surroundings. If used in Apollo's World of Grief, this jutsu can be used without playing the lyre and gains 5+ increase in damage but also a 10+ increase in chakra cost followed by a -30 damage to the user. (the World of Grief itself is dreamworldish surrounding, and this technique is much easier to use in a place where altering the surroundings is child's play).
~Can only be used once per battle.

Fixed...O_O
~approved~

 

[-Naruto Uzumaki-]

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Sage Art: Nature's Defense (Senpo: Kidate Difensu)
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short (Mid if used for offensive purposes)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (60 if used for offensive purposes)
Description: The user releases a fair amount of natural energy from their body, manipulating it to surround them in the form of a spiraling sphere. The powerful rotating sphere is capable of protecting the user from very powerful elemental ninjutsus. By performing a certain hand seal, the user can make the sphere expand outward in all directions in order to collide into and damage anyone or anything in range. The user can execute jutsus while within the protection of the sphere.
~Can only be used twice per battle
~Lasts one full turn unless the user makes the sphere expand
~User must be in Sage Mode
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~Declined~
Specify which powerful elemental ninjutsus it can block. Make it S-rank

Sage Art: Nature's Defense (Senpo: Kidate Difensu)
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defense
Range: Short (Mid if used for offensive purposes)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (80 if used for offensive purposes)
Description: The user releases a fair amount of natural energy from their body, manipulating it to surround them in the form of a spiraling sphere. The powerful rotating sphere is capable of protecting the user from very powerful elemental ninjutsus (such as S-rank, and of any element). By performing a certain hand seal, the user can make the sphere expand outward in all directions in order to collide into and damage anyone or anything in range. The user can execute jutsus while within the protection of the sphere.
~Can only be used twice per battle
~Lasts one full turn unless the user makes the sphere expand
~User must be in Sage Mode

Edited. O_O
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Approved

 

[Adachi]

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Hokage Shiki Jijun Jutsu: Bijuu Tanshinfunin Chakra (Hokage Style 60 years Retirement: Demon Chakra Transfer)
Rank: Forbidden
Chakra: 40
Damage: Ranges
Decription: After using 'Hokage Style 60 Years Retirement Technique: Sanctuary Enlightenment Enclosing Palm' to control a bijuu, the user is able to draw upon the chakra of the bijuu and use a minimal of it to boost their power. Also damages the jinchuuriki at the same time.
*can only be taught by TenzoX*
*Shodiame/Yamato users: kekkei genkai*
*only be used once in battle*
~declined~
oped

Wind Style: Element Tornado (Fuuton: Soshi Gufuu)
Rank: S-Rank
Range: All
Chakra cost:40
Damage: 80
Description: User creates a spinning tornado and adds their own element in it, making a combination of wind/X element. It spins at fast speed and destroys everything in its path...hard to block unless you use right combination...
Elements Compatible: Everything except lightning and earth
*can only be taught by TenzoX*

~declined~
there is already a tornado jutsu

Wind Style: Wind Rod (Fuuton: Kaze Roddo)
Rank: S-Rank
Chakra Cost: 40
Range: Long
Description: User creates an ultra fast spinning tornado in the air. The tornado sucks in all electrons of the lightning element, destroying it. Protection against all lightning jutsus that gets near the sky.
*can only be taught by TenzoX*
*lasts for eight turns*
~declined~
i am not sure. wind jutsu cannot suck lightning jutsu. show this jutsu to roku and goro


Wood Style: Chakra Tree Body Revival (Mokuton: Chakra Ki Karada Ribabaru)
Rank: Forbidden
Chakra Cost: 80
Description: The user begins to cycle thier chakra through their circulatory system like water being cycled through the roots of a tree. the chakra speedily moves throughout the body replenishing the muscles giving drastically increased strength and speed. This gives comparable strength to the gates but instead of expelling the chakra in massive amounts, its continually circulates chakra so minimal chakra is lost.
The user must have the inherant abilities of the senju and be a master of mokuton to use. This lasts for 5 turns. Allows user to utilize specialized techniques that can only be performed while the user is under the effect of the jutsu.
*can only be taught by Scary Yamato and TenzoX*
*lasts for five turns*
Mah - credits go to SY, I did none of this...
(If this is approved, then I might create some wood jutsus that apply to this)
~declined~
no makin jutsus similar to the 8 gates

Summoning Animal: Spine-tailed swift, also known as the White-throated Needletail (scientific name: Hirundapus caudacutus)
Contract (Scroll Owner): TenzoX
Summoning Boss: Jinsoku
Other animals tied to summoning contract: Taisuku

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hayai Jinsoku)-Summoning: Swift Boss - Jinsoku

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User summons Jinsoku, the fastest bird in the world. (Go check online if you don't believe me...) He can travel at speeds around 107 MPH and can use all wind jutsu. Jinsoku is about twice the size of a average human.

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Taisaku)-Summoning: Swift Taisuku

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User summons Taisuku. He is about average human size and can carry the summoner efficiently through the air. Taisuku is extremely quick and has high agility; able to see most jutsus before it actually hits with his fast bird eyes. Taisuku can use up to A-rank wind.

Does the summoning contract count as two jutsus? ~_~

~declined~
i think some1 made a bird summon

 

[Alucard]

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(Yōton: Yougan Kusari) –Lava Release: Lava Tendrils

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes multiple tendrils of lava to come out of the ground. If the user makes them to come out from a lava source, they can chase the opponent for one entire turn, as long as the lava source doesn’t disappear. The user can make innumerous tendrils if they come from a lava source. Twice per battle

DeclinedOped

(Yōton: Yougan Kusari) –Lava Release: Lava Tendrils

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•Rank: S
•Type: Attack
•Range: Short-Long
•Chakra Cost: 40
•Damage Points: 80
•Description: The user makes multiple tendrils of lava to come out of the ground to cut and bind the opponent. This tendrils can even cut through flesh and bones. Twice per battle

~Approved~

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Fuzen Yonbi no Saru) – Bijuu Style: Partial Four-Tailed Monkey Transformation

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•Type: Supplementary
•Rank: S
•Range: N/A
•Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn to mantain the control over the bijuu)
•Damage Points: (+20 to Bijuu Style, Lava Release and Taijutsu)
•Description: As seen with Naruto and Killer Bee, the hosts of the Bijuus can make a demon chakra cloak around them. Like Killer Bee, Roshi has perfect control over his Bijuu so that he can borrow his bijuu some chakra and transform himself into the Four-Tailed Monkey in a human shape tough he still has control over his body. With the cloak around him, Roshi drastically increases his speed and strength, as much as Killer Bee or Naruto when they partially transformed into their Bijuu.
•While in this mode the user can only use Bijuu Style and Lava Release Jutsus.
•Can only be used once per battle and lasts 5 turns
• The user cannot perform any summonings for the same and the following 2 rounds.
•Causes 5 damage to user per turn

Looks like Kirabi on his mode, last chapter:

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I think this kinda looks like Kinjutsu since the user transforms himself and suffers damage, but since i have the bijuu, this shouldnt be considered as Kinjutsu (in my opinion).
~declined~
no bijju cloak. roshi does not have full control of his bijju

(Bijuu Fuukaku: Yonbi Saru Imari) – Bijuu Style: Four-Tailed Monkey Menacing Ball

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• Type: Attack
• Rank: Forbidden
• Range: N/A
• Chakra cost: 50
• Damage Points: 90 (+20 because of Bijuu chakra); (30 damage to user)
• Description: When Roshi transforms in the Four-Tailed Monkey, he concentrates the demon chakra of his bijuu and a lot of lava in a big and compresses ball, in front of his mouth, then he will shoot it at the opponent. The user can make this ball to divide, transforming it into thousands of mini demon-lava balls. Any of the balls, the small or the big one, explode when the user wants to. If the big ball explodes, his strength is enough to blow up one entire village and turn it into a magma field, if someone touches the magma, even with the tip of his fingers, the demon chakra within it will burn the opponent’s arm. Same thing happens with the smaller balls, except the explosion each one does is smaller, but if they explode all at the same time, they do the same damages as the big one does. The user can freely control the smaller balls, but the big one can only be shoot forwards in a straight line.
•Can only be used once and must be in Bijuu or Partial Bijuu Mode (the one above)
•After used only Bijuu Style and Lava Release jutsus can be done
•Shortens user’s lifespan

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~approved~
remove the partial bijju mode

(Yōton: Yonhei Assai Yougan) –Lava Release: 4 Walls of Crushing Lava

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•Rank: A
•Type: Attack
•Range: Short-Long
•Chakra Cost: 30
•Damage Points: 60
•Description: The user makes 4 walls of lava to rise from the ground, around the target. They smash the opponent and then crush him under pressure. Usable 3 times per battle.

~approved~

(Yōton: Kyojin Yougan-Nami) –Lava Release: Giant Lava Wave

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will do the handseals and will make a huge wave of lava to rise, that comes down crashing on the opponent. The user can ride the wave by infusing his feet with Lava chakra so he won't get burned, needs a great Lava source to use this jutsu and can only be used twice.

If you think the riding wave part shouldn't be there, tell me, but approve it if the rest is alright, i'll take that off.
~approved~
remove the riding wave part

 

[Sora.]

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Doton:gesuidou (earth style: drain)
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost:60
Damage Points:N/A
Description: By slamming their hand to the earth all sources of water will be drained away from the battlefield, (this includes mud) and any water left over from a jutsu, only water jutsu that require no source can be used This jutsu is very simple but can be very effective.

*Lasts 5 turns
*only taught by Sora
*Only water jutsu that require no source may be used for 5 turns during the activation of this jutsu
*useable twice per battle

Declined Change the amount of turns it last.

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Doton:gesuidou (earth style: drain)
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost:60
Damage Points:N/A
Description: By slamming their hand to the earth all sources of water will be drained away from the battlefield, (this includes mud) and any water left over from a jutsu, only water jutsu that require no source can be used This jutsu is very simple but can be very effective.

*Lasts 3 turns
*only taught by Sora
*Only water jutsu that require no source may be used for 3 turns during the activation of this jutsu
*useable twice per battle

~aproved~

 

[aTastyCookie]

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(Raiton: Kaminari Shibari)-Lightning Release: Thunder Binding
Rank:A
Typeefensive/Supplementary
Range:Short-range
chakara cost:30
Damage Points:20 (then 5 every turn)
Description:This technique lets the user create a three-sided wall of electricity to bind their opponent. The user must have three conductors(Made out of wood or earth or tree branches) to stick in the ground to create the points. Furthermore, once the enemy is inside, if they come into contact with the wall they will be electrocuted. The only way the jutsu can be broken is if an outside party were to strike one of the wall with a strong enough attack, which will then deactivate the other walls.
-Declined- OP

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Futon: Kaze Dageki) Wind Blow
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will focus His/Her wind chakra in his abdomen then once its burst the user will release it at once releasing a strong gust that can push the oponent to a 15m far.

P.S. it can also blow the user out of the earth if the user is stucked since it does not the user/enemy

*Only Shinn/Amaya can use this jutsu*

Declined There are basic wind jutsu that do such.

really? ----> too bad.

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(Oton: ketatamashii houkou) Piercing Howl
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a high pitch sound or howl which surrounds the enemy piercing their ears, making them vulnerable for until the echoes of it remains. the user then attacks by charging and kicking the enemy's stomach with his/her knee while hitting the head with his/her elbow, thus making it a lot more painful.

*can be used once per battle*
*this can be used both by Amaya and Hinaru*
*Hinaru is co-creator of this jutsu*
P.S *for Hinaru, it is S Rank: 40 Chakra / 80 Damage* --HA!

Approved Ps for hinaru its still B rank does the same 20/40 damage.

ehe xd u really nailed it with a --HA!

wel... ok, here's the new ones

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(Oton: Sairensa) Silencer
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short [should be heard by the enemy]
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A [+10 if Futon jutsu is used afterwards]
Description: The user creates music that echoes surrounding the enemy and slowly silencing everything around him, giving off that eerie silence and making his hearing somewhat DEAF... also if an ambush attack of futon is used on him, it will surely hit [that is, if he didn't see the attack being made]

*Last for two turns before hearing of the enemy returns to normal*
*Can be used twice per battle*
*Can only be used by Amaya*

-Approved-

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(Futon: Kaze Kireme) Wind Cut
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 [+15 to user if not used properly]
Description: A special combo with Silencer; [can be used even if silencer is not used] the user jumps 10ft above and creates wind tendrils surrounding oneself, these tendrils must be then manipulated with either of the 5 different patterns [or else the user can be hit and damaged] after the pattern the tendrils are then sent to the enemy with great force and speed, each attack differ with the use of dan'atsu.

*Can be used 3 times per battle*
*Can only be used by Amaya*

P.S. How it is used should be explained by the user.

~Approved~

a follow-up on wind cut,
if so, that it is needed to be futher known
i'll submit them next week when i can

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The 5 different patterns called dan'atsu:

these are patterns used for the wind tendrils,
each pattern result to different effect,
such effect are named accordingly...

1. kanetsu [heat] - fire
2. eiri [sharpness] - wind
3. shinkan [silence] - sound
4. namida [tear] - water
5. kushin [pain] - lightning

Reason why this should be used:

to make sure the wind tendrils doesnt hit the user itself
and to give them special effects before hitting the enemy;
effects differ with each use of pattern
all in all there are 5 patterns that can be used
and each had different effect to the wind tendrils

is this a jutsu O_O pm the details

aw... i remember dark water from wind cut
(T^T too bad i couldnt pass it off as custom jutsu...
it was declared as custom element... anyways
I hope wind cut can be approved of.

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(Taijutsu: Taihou Shotto Sentou) Gun Shot Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user confuses the enemy by moving around him with great speed and suddenly showing up, punching him once then confusing him again and punching again like gun-shots that can't be easily stop.

*Continues with 10 multiple hits*
*Can be used Twice per battle*
*Can only be used by Amaya*

~approved~

 

[+Kariru+]

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(Oton:Kashou no Zetsubou)Sound: Song of Despair
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short (enemy should hear the song)
Chakra Cost: 25 Chakra
Damage Points: 40 Damage
Description: A song from which began when Takara was imprisoned. In her history, her parents placed a seal in her throat. It is a seal that is only activated if she began a musical activity with her voice. When this is done, this musical notes transforms into chakra that transmit through the ears of the opponent, which injures his/her mind, if this is heard. It can shock the mind of the enemy and temporarily paralyzes him/her from moving towards the user as long as the song was heard. Can only be used 3 times per battle.
*Can only be used by Takara
-Declined- Similar jutsus already exist (Music Arts)

 

[anbu kakashi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon: Katon Arashi (Fire Style: Fire Storm)

Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user would gather enormous fire chakra within them and release it all out with tremendous force. The user would release a large pool of fire in which quickly and rapidly spreads out becoming longer and wider. The fire would spread and travel along the ground burning all in its path and is usually 100 meters wide at max and stretches as far as the user exhales.
Note: Can only be used three times
-Approved-

Katon: Orokashii Houka (Fire Style: Will-O-The-Wisp)

Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a small ball of extremely compact flame upon each of his fingers. With this, the user has two options; 1. The user can strike the opponent burning through him/her, 2. The user can shoot the five flame at the opponent which moves at a very slow pace but with homing abilities. The movements of the fire is erratic causing the flames to get the opponent at different areas of the body and with the extreme condensation of the fire, the flame can't just be shot or spray away from water jutsu but rather it must be completely conceal in a body of water.
Note: The ball of flames last for two turns or until washed away
Note: Can only be used twice
-Need Goro's and Grimm's opinions on this one-
~declined~
oped

 

[Yagura]

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(Satetsu Kaihō) - Iron Sand: Needle Sphere
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This jutsu uses Iron Sand to create a gigantic sphere of branching spikes. The user creates two masses of Iron Sand with opposite polarities and then merges them together. This causes the magnetic forces to instantly increase and the repellent force created by the two opposing magnetic fields scatters the Iron Sand across a vast area. The Iron Sand spreads in spikes that branch off irregularly, making it almost impossible to get a clear overview of what is happening. This also makes evading the spikes nearly impossible. Even if the opponent has managed to evade getting hit, the Iron Sand spikes will have filled the entire surroundings, cutting off any escape routes. With the opponent trapped, the user is free to attack in person.

Declineda bit Oped

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(Satetsu Shigure) - Iron Sand: Scattered Showers
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Like the Sand Drizzle, this technique hardens the Iron Sand into countless small grains or a few elongated needles. These projectiles can then be used to attack simultaneously across a wide range. The magnetic repellent forces will speed them up in an instant, making them so fast they can barely be seen. The range and speed of this attack make it almost impossible to defend against.


DeclinedSounds impossible to me..
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(Sennō Sōsa no Jutsu ) - Brainwashing Investigation Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Sasori used this technique to block memories of himself in the minds of his spies so they wouldn't raise suspicions. Sasori can deactivate the jutsu from any location, thus restoring their memory and making the spy loyal to Sasori again.

Declined But how is it applied to the person?

(Satetsu Kaihō) - Iron Sand: Needle Sphere
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This jutsu uses Iron Sand to create a gigantic sphere of branching spikes. The user creates two masses of Iron Sand with opposite polarities and then merges them together. This causes the magnetic forces to instantly increase and the repellent force created by the two opposing magnetic fields scatters the Iron Sand across a vast area. The Iron Sand spreads in spikes that branch off irregularly, making it almost impossible to get a clear overview of what is happening. This also makes evading the spikes nearly impossible. Even if the opponent has managed to evade getting hit, the Iron Sand spikes will have filled the entire surroundings, cutting off any escape routes. With the opponent trapped, the user is free to attack in person.

(changed it to mid range)

(Satetsu Shigure) - Iron Sand: Scattered Showers
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Like the Sand Drizzle, this technique hardens the Iron Sand into countless small grains or a few elongated needles. These projectiles can then be used to attack simultaneously across a wide range. The magnetic repellent forces will speed them up in an instant, making them so fast they can barely be seen.

(Sennō Sōsa no Jutsu ) - Brainwashing Investigation Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Sasori used this technique to block memories of himself in the minds of his spies so they wouldn't raise suspicions. Sasori can deactivate the jutsu from any location, thus restoring their memory and making the spy loyal to Sasori again. The user must point his fist to the opponent to make the jutsu active.

|| Declined ||

 

[Yagura]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Fainaru Bentsu) - Thunder Emperor Arts: Final Vent
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: n/a (+10 to Thunder Emperor Arts damage)
Description: The user's sword is charged with Raiton chakra and the sword changes it's shape. The sword's shape is changed from a wakizashi to odachi and can add more damage if the user uses Thunder Emperor Arts.
~declined~
limits, side effects and restriction

(Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Tsuchi Bure-ka) - Thunder Emperor Arts: Earth Breaker
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user after uses the final vent, uses his sword to slice the ground and the ground leaks up to mid range. The opponent can be sliced if his is in the mid range.
~declined~
limits, side effects and restrictions

 

[Kagutsuchi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: Fuuinjutsu : Seal Of Awareness
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a seal containing different types of chakra so they can continuosuly be disturbed ( due to their difference in properties ). Thus when palced on sum1 it disturbs the chakra flow thus disabling him / her to use Genjutsu or To be captured in any kind of genjutsu, it almost works as if a Tailed beast is inside the One who has seal palced and preventing him to fall under any Genjutsu, Including Music arts , Excluding MS tech’s.
~declined~

 

[anbu kakashi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kuchiyose: Saru Musha-Daiki (Summoning: Monkey Warrior-Daiku)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User summons Daiku the monkey warrior from a small scroll. Daiku's size is about half the user and carries almost or if not all of the necessary tools/weapons a ninja carries (scrolls, kunias, shurikens etc.). Daiku has a great knowledge in battling which enables him to attack, defend or conceal himself like a ninja. With great knowledge in battling, Daiku lacks the ability to mold chakra which also cripples him of using elemental attacks. Although he has no elemental affinity, he carries elemental scrolls which can shoot out blasts of the five main element (lightning, water, fire, wind, and earth) at B rank level. To make up for lack usage of an elemental attack, Daiku dedicates most of his time in hand to hand combat which makes him an excellent taijutsu user allowing him to use up to A rank taijutsu.
Note: Can only be summoned twice

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u need to learn monkey from a member wit a 3rd hokage bio

 

[~hinata~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Getsuei Megami Suki Tategoto) – Moon Goddess Lunar Harp

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: the user after performing a couple of hand seals summons the Moon Goddess Lunar Harp. This weapon has a bladed side to allow the user to defend them selves in close range combat and also allows the user to perform special melody’s which can then cast Genjutsu and even make water sources retract like the lunar cycle.

Note: The special abilities only last 4 turns
Note: Can only be used or taught by ~Hinata~

(Getsuei Senshu) – Moon Bow

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user carry’s this bow around on their back. The user will shoot arrows specially charged with lightning chakra to create numbing on contact and can prevent the enemy from forming hand seals if shot in the arms and prevent properly charging their chakra when shot in the stomach.

Note: Lightning charge lasts 4 turns
Note: Can only be taught or used by ~Hinata~

(Genjutsu: Keisei Suki Eika) – Illusion Technique: Siren’s Love Song

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will sing a melody that will then cast an illusion over the enemy target and then cause them to enter a trance state where they follow the song and leading them into close range where the user can then strike them if he/she chooses. (effects of Genjutsu last a single turn)

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Can only be taught or used by ~Hinata~

this needs fixing i know
thanks sir
Grimm, check these...kind of vague, I think.
~all approved~

 

[-Ventus-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wind and Fire release:Blazing rasenshuriken!
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60-80
Description:When doing the rasenshuriken the user will then put his fire chakra in combination w/ the rasenshuriken.Making it not only pinch the cells but also burning them microscopically.This jutsu will result in the immediet death of the enemy and also will put the user's arm in critical state because the damage he will also recieve.This jutsu is far more power full than fire rasengan combined w/ rasenshuriken because it cannot be block by S-class water jutsu or water combination because it will only evaporate the water because of extreme heat.
*only be used once*
*The user will be weakened after this*
*only Shinn can do this jutsu*
*-30 on the user*
*cannot do any S-ranks katon for 2 turns*
*Cannot do any S-Ranks Fuuton for 2 turns*

Declined Kinjutsu

Weapon Summoning:Yamenage
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Description:the user summons a sword that can combine wind and fire techs and releases.the sword can use wind and fire techs
*Only shinn can use this jutsu*
*Can be summoned once per battle*

Declined How can the sword use jutsu?

Weapon Summoning:Yamenage
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Description:the user summons a sword that surpasses human size(Sephiroths sword)that one slash of it if added with wind chakra can slice a building because of the sharpness of the wind.This sword can only maximize the sthrenght of wind chakra and no other U_U
*Only shinn can use this jutsu*
*Can be summoned once per battle*

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~declined~
add restrictions to how many times u can use the wind slicing blasts

Summoninginosaur:Chomp
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Description:Chomp is a large trinosaurus dinosaur at the siza of gamabunta and chomp specialize on the element Raiton/Lightning
*Only shinn has the contract*
*Can be summoned once per battle*

Petit Size

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Summoninginosaur:Ace
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Description:Ace is a large size dinosaur at the size of gamabunta and ace specialize on the element Fuuton/Wind
*Only shinn has the contract*
*Can be summoned once per battle*
Petit Size

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Summoninginosaur:Terry
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Description:Terry is a large size T-Rex dinosaur at the size of gamabunta and Terry specialize on the element Katon/Fire
*Only shinn has the contract*
*Can be summoned once per battle*
Petit Size

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~declined on all dino summon~

Fire Style:Fire Wolves
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Damage:60
Chakra Cost:30
Description:The user will breath out fire that will turn shape into wolves,the wolves can then defend or chase the target.The wolves explode when they are near or close to the target
~approved~