[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Nadare]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

here is the one i had to resubmit(it counts for the previous week, so i still have 5)

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(Futon:Kaze Se) - Wind Style: Wind Torrents
Type:Supplementary
Rank: B
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:35
Description:Suddenlly wind starts blowing softlly all around.A weak wind storm covers a whole area.It lowers the enemy visibilty. If the user moves quickly enough, to the enemy will seem like you are moving throught the air freely.
*Note:It can only be used once per battle, and it lasts 4 turns.*

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|Approved|

and here are the new ones:

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(Hyouton:Aisu Funjin) - Ice Style: Ice Dust
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage:10 (+30 if used with Fuuton:Kaze Se)
Description:User creates small pieces of ice, big like dust, from thin air.The area cools and the enemy is so easier to hit(he starts trembling a bit).IThe ice dust goes into the enemy polmons and he takes 10 damage from it.
If used with Kaze Se, the dust melts with the wind and it cuts severly the skin.the enemy starts bleeding.
*Note: Can only be used by Yugito Nadare bio's.*
*Note:Can only be used 4 times per battle.*
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|Declined|
Stick to the template, located on first page.

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(Hyouton:Un-da-hi-to) - Ice Style: Underheat
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description:the user underheats the surrounding to the point of freezing near livings.If the enemy stays still for more time(hiding), he freezes.The jutsu cancles out all fire jutsus up to B-Rank.the area can reach -60 Degrees Celsius.
*Note: Can only be used by Yugito Nadare bio's.*
*Note:Can only be used 1 times per battle.*
*Note:It does 20 damage to the user.*
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(Futon: Kaze Seppaku Hirate) - Wind Style: Wind Pressure Palm
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The user slowly puts his palm on the wanted object and then gathers all his wind chakra in his palm.He then releases it all at once and there is som much pressure mad under his palm that he a make a hole in almost everything.(earth, iron, stone.....)
Some things are exeptions(rubber, steel)
The user can so create a hole where to hide, or crush down a door, or wall.It can also be used on a human being.
*Note:Can only be used 3 times per battle.*
*Note:It does 5 damage to the user palm, each time used.*
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others will be added

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Chakra Release (Chakra houmen)
Rank; S
Type; Supplementary
Range; Self
Chakra Cost; 40
Damage; N/A
Description; The user releases packs of stored of chakra from his body that form a layer of chakra that increases all the users abilties to twice of his total stamina, it stops the rise of adrenaline lvl increasing courage and decreasing hesitation.
Note; The ability last for 3 turns it decreases the damage gained and increases damage dealt and con only be used once while in the battle.
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Increases all status for a short period of time.
|Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

Counter summoning (Tentou Kuchiose)
Rank; B
Type; Supplementary
Range; Entire Feild
Chakra cost; 25
Damage points; N/A
Description; Summoning and reverse summoning acts as a time/space ninjutsu transporting users from eithers blood ports to the opposite chakra ports. The jutsu switches the chakra ports thus stopping a summoning from taking place.
Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle.
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Blood Port1/Chakra Port1=Blood Port2/Chakra port2, sumoning or reverse sumoning causes either blood port to arrive at the opposite blood port, if used the same method while a sumoning replacing the chakra ports sumoning can be easily countered. I explained the method.
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Snake's mouth binding(Sunekuchi Shibari)
Rank; A
Type; Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range; Short-mid
Chakra cost; 30
Damage; -5 per turn
Description; Sunekuchi Shibari is a ninjutsu technique that turns the surrounding area into the easophagus of a seal marked kyodaija. The area turns into a soft malleable organ which releases a fog that seals away all chakra based attacks uptill B ranks. The jutsu can potentially end upon heavy impact.
Note; Must be able to summon snakes to use this jutsu.
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Made it uptill B rank, i'm now allowed to make A rank fuinjutsu
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Fire Style; Infernal prison (katon; inferunul keimusho)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Entire Ground in sight
Chakra;45
Damage; 85(10 to the users eyes)
Description; The user summons flame in a circular glyph under the opponents feet. The glyph moves with the users eyes, as long as the target is on the ground and in the users sights the attacks is really difficult to avoid, the flame comes from 4 corners of the glyph and covers till mid range of the air above the glyph. The flames are very voilent and harmful at contact.
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Lightning Style; Thunder Lance (Raiton; Rai-mori)
Rank S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-Long
Chakra; 45
Damage; 85(10 to the user himself)
Description; The user calls forth wide lightning in the form blades and structs the target. The lightning structs at a very fast speed and tilted angles from 60 degrees. 4 lightning blades struct the target but at different places the lightning never structs at the same place again. Each lightning struct is very powerful and forms a huge crater on the grounds where it hits.
Note; Must form clouds before usage.
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[-Ventus-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(katon:hakabakashii kasai butoukai)-Rapid fire balls
Rank:A
type:attack
range:short to long
Chakra Cost:30 Chakra
Damage Points:60
Description:User creates numerous rapid fireballs from the users palms and sends them flying on his opponent.Can cause the body of the opponent to be burned.
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|Declined|
Similar Jutsu already exist

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon: Hotarubi (Fire Release: Firefly fire)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage cost: 80
Description: The user will create a large amount of small fireballs that look like fireflies. These fireflies will surround the whole battlefield, when the user wishes he will make them all at once attack the opponent, and on contact they will explode, creating a massive explosion.

Note: Can only be used Twice Per battle.
Note: Cant use Fire Jutsu next turn.

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|Declined|
Similar Jutsu already exist.

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Za Ranpu Katana (The Light Blade)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: +10 each turn.
Damage points: 80 (+15 damage to all sword attacks)
Description: This blade is the only one of its kind in the world, wielded only by certain people, and can only be taught to those of great knowledge. The blade consists of a eye blinding light, the heat of the sword is immensely hot. When the sword is swung, it releases a heat wave of slicing fire.

Note: Only Archie can weild this blade.











Kenjutsu: Katanas Off Funkyuu (Sword Style: Blades of Confusion)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will gather a huge amount of chakra into their feet and legs, they will then charge at the opponent at such a high speed ( Even Doujutsu users have trouble following these movments) that the opponent won’t know what’s hit them, leaving them confused. While the user travels past them, then will slash them with their sword. But because of the extreme speed the opponent will think that they missed, only until a short time after will they realise that they were struck by the users sword.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: A katana is needed to perform this attack.
Note: Attack happens 1 turn after.

|Both Declined| You are over this week 5 post limit. Please Resubmit Next Week

 

[Zephon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Hyouton Butoukai ) Dance Of Ice
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage: 80
Description:The User cast vast amounts of concentrated ice chakra down their wrists the chakra then leaks from the users nails and upper hand creating an icy wrist brace,from the wrist brace and down to the nails sprouts 5 ( 50cm ) ice nails these are vastly versatile and can be flexed and bent but aren't easily broken the nails are very sharp able to cut through rock.
( Melt After 6 Turns Unless Terrian Is Cold )

|Approved|
Limit to use twice per battle and change to last three turns.(irregardless of terrain)

( Doton Toku ) - Shield Of The Earth
Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage: N/A
Description: The user smashes his left hand into the ground infront of himself leaving it there for a few minutes or so and then slowly lifts it up the ground then swamps up around the users forearm melding and moulding into a massive huge thick shield of mighty earth. The user can freely walk around with this earthen shield on his arm but unless the user has a full understanding on how to do jutsu's one handed then this jutsu might have a down effect also it is extremly heavy and will slow down your movement.
|Declined| remove that one handed part, and resubmit.

( Oni Rajikon 1 ) The Demon Of The First Plane
Rank: A
Type: Offence/Defense/Support
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage: N/A
Description: The users bind with hell takes hold and after the nessasary hand signs are completed the user opens a gate to the otherworld and makes a deal with the demon of the 1st plane. The demon is Tiamat ( most notably know to be the queen of dragons but i'll make her huminoid xD ) Wielding her battle armour and glaive she is fit for battle. Her cruel intentions and devious way of battling will make the enemy cower in fear.
|Pending| I'll need to speak with the others...

( Genjutsu: - Kouzetsu Jigoku ) Illusion Technique: Tongue Of The Devil
Rank: S
Type: Supplementry
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: 10 - Each turn within The Illusion
Description: The User First then covers their right eye with their hand then slowly slides down to reveal that their eye has become more demonic the eye then shudders and whoever is within this brief moment is sucked into a glimpse of hell ( Similar hell to Supernatural the TV Show ) the user is torn apart constantly in this illusion for aslong as they are still within the users view. In the real life the enemy is screaming in pain and is vurnable to free hits.
|Approved| But add that the opponent is still able to defend themselves.
Limit to twice per battle.

 

[Kaze..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon:Tsuin Doragon)-Fire Style:Twin Dragon Fire
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user forms a series of hand signs then releases fire from his/her mouth making a double headed twin dragon. This dragon attacks the opponent an if it coillide with other fire jutsu it asborbs the jutsu an grows stronger.
Note:Can only aborb S rank fire an down
Note:Can only be used 2 per battle
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|Approved|
Make so it can only absorb a rank fire and down

(Doton:Shishi Doton Hora)-Earth Style:Lion's Of The Earth Den
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user forms a series of hand signs then 3 Lion's form from the earth the lions have the ability to fuse with the earth an swim in the earth like a fish does in water. The Lion's also has the ability to fuse into one huge lion when the lions fuse they have to be fully destoryed or they can regenerate from the costing the user - 20 charka
Note:Can only be used 2 per battle
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|Approved|
Edit to say if the lions combined it can only be used once per battle.


(Fuuinjutsu: Kursai Olympia) - Sealing Technique: Chain's Of Olympia
Rank :S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The User performs a series of handsigns then 4 Golden spots appear in the ground then 4 chain's shoot out of the ground an wrap around both arms an legs then restrain the opponent for one turn.An Seals the opponents charka for one turn
Note:Only Last one turn
Note:can only be used 2 per battle
Note: The Chains are unbreakable
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|Declined|

(Katon:Kouen Harumagedon)-Fire Style:Flaming Armageddon
Type:Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:90
Description:First the user focus pure fire charka into his/her hands then the user hands catch fire then while the user hands are on fire he/she performs some hand sign then releases a huge blast of fire from both hands.
Note: Only usable once per battle
Note:both blastes dont have to to be released at the same time nor do they have to be released in the same direction
Note:This is a HUGE Release of fire both blasts are the size of the jutsu Kazuku used from his mask
Note:No Fire Jutsu for 3 turns after use

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|Declined|
make s rank and resubmit.

(Katon:Kouen Harumagedon)-Fire Style:Flaming Armageddon
Type:Attack
Rank: S Rank
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:First the user focus pure fire charka into his/her hands then the user hands catch fire then while the user hands are on fire he/she performs some hand sign then releases a huge blast of fire from both hands.
Note: Only usable once per battle
Note:both blastes dont have to to be released at the same time nor do they have to be released in the same direction
Note:This is a HUGE Release of fire both blasts are the size of the jutsu Kazuku used from his mask
Note:No Fire Jutsu for 3 turns after use

|Approved|

 

[volcomguts]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Chakra Tengai) - Chakra Dome

Rank: C
Range:N/A
Type: Defense
Range:Short
Chakra cost:25
Damage Points:N/A
Description: A more defensive version of the chakra shield. The user will make a whole dome of chakra rather than just a shield. this will in turn protect them all 360 degrees rather than just the front of them.
NOTE:Can only be used by puppet users.
NOTE:Can only be used three times per battle.

|Declined|
To similar to existing jutsu

(Sumi Youshiki: Genkaku Kabe) - Ink Style: Illusionary Wall

Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Type: Defense
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user will summon a wall of black and white ink from a scroll. The wall has a hypnotic design on it causing the opponent to be caught in a trance of illusions and disbelief. during the time of confusion the opponent is only allowed one jutsu of D-Rank per turn.
NOTE: This jutsu can only be used by Sai
NOTE: This jutsu only lasts three turns.
NOTE: This wall cannot defend against weapons or attacks, it only confuses the opponent.

|Approved|

(Fuuton: Hissori Shuriken) - Wind Style: Silent Shuriken

Rank: C
Range: Mid-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost:20
Damage:30
Description: The user will throw up to ten shuriken (five in each hand) exerting a mediocre amount of wind chakra into each before throwing them. while the shuriken are in mid-air the user will make one single hand sign allowing the shuriken to turn into wind particles(dust). the user can then manipulate the wind chakra in the particles to move them around anywhere they please and then will make another single hand sign allowing them to reform and continue to another target or the same one from a different direction. in turn this allows the user to manipulate the shuriken to a different location without the opponent's knowledge.
NOTE: Can only be used by volcomguts/those who request it from him.
NOTE: Can only be used twice per battle
NOTE: The user cannot use any wind jutsu up to C-Rank for two turns after performing this technique.

|Declined|

(Fuuton: Kitai Mekakushi) - Wind Style: Gas Mask

Rank: C
Range: N/A
Type: Defense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: In cases of a smoke bomb or poison mist of some sort the user will create a small filter over his/her mouth/nose using a small orb of gathered wind chakra plus oxygen. the orb will cover the users mouth and nose allowing any mist or smoke that comes in contact with the orb to be filtered before entering the users air stream.

|Approved|

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Chakra Release (Chakra houmen)
Rank; S
Type; Supplementary
Range; Self
Chakra Cost; 40
Damage; N/A
Description; The user releases packs of stored of chakra from his body that form a layer of chakra that increases all the users abilties to twice of his total stamina, it stops the rise of adrenaline lvl increasing courage and decreasing hesitation.
Note; The ability last for 3 turns it decreases the damage gained and increases damage dealt and con only be used once while in the battle.
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Increases all status for a short period of time.
|Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

Counter summoning (Tentou Kuchiose)
Rank; B
Type; Supplementary
Range; Entire Feild
Chakra cost; 25
Damage points; N/A
Description; Summoning and reverse summoning acts as a time/space ninjutsu transporting users from eithers blood ports to the opposite chakra ports. The jutsu switches the chakra ports thus stopping a summoning from taking place.
Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle.
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Blood Port1/Chakra Port1=Blood Port2/Chakra port2, sumoning or reverse sumoning causes either blood port to arrive at the opposite blood port, if used the same method while a sumoning replacing the chakra ports sumoning can be easily countered. I explained the method.
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Snake's mouth binding(Sunekuchi Shibari)
Rank; A
Type; Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range; Short-mid
Chakra cost; 30
Damage; -5 per turn
Description; Sunekuchi Shibari is a ninjutsu technique that turns the surrounding area into the easophagus of a seal marked kyodaija. The area turns into a soft malleable organ which releases a fog that seals away all chakra based attacks uptill B ranks. The jutsu can potentially end upon heavy impact.
Note; Must be able to summon snakes to use this jutsu.
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Made it uptill B rank, i'm now allowed to make A rank fuinjutsu
|Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|
Fire Style; Infernal prison (katon; inferunul keimusho)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Entire Ground in sight
Chakra;45
Damage; 85(10 to the users eyes)
Description; The user summons flame in a circular glyph under the opponents feet. The glyph moves with the users eyes, as long as the target is on the ground and in the users sights the attacks is really difficult to avoid, the flame comes from 4 corners of the glyph and covers till mid range of the air above the glyph. The flames are very voilent and harmful at contact.
|Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

Lightning Style; Thunder Lance (Raiton; Rai-mori)
Rank S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-Long
Chakra; 45
Damage; 85(10 to the user himself)
Description; The user calls forth wide lightning in the form blades and structs the target. The lightning structs at a very fast speed and tilted angles from 60 degrees. 4 lightning blades struct the target but at different places the lightning never structs at the same place again. Each lightning struct is very powerful and forms a huge crater on the grounds where it hits.
Note; Must form clouds before usage.
|Declined!You have gone over the weeks limit of 5 jutsu submissions. Please post again next week.|

wtf? i submitted my last at sunday so it was technically new week to me as next day is monday
Chakra Release (Chakra houmen)
Rank; S
Type; Supplementary
Range; Self
Chakra Cost; 40
Damage; N/A
Description; The user releases packs of stored of chakra from his body that form a layer of chakra that increases all the users abilties to twice of his total stamina, it stops the rise of adrenaline lvl increasing courage and decreasing hesitation.
Note; The ability last for 3 turns it decreases the damage gained and increases damage dealt and con only be used once while in the battle.
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|Declined|

Counter summoning (Tentou Kuchiose)
Rank; B
Type; Supplementary
Range; Entire Feild
Chakra cost; 25
Damage points; N/A
Description; Summoning and reverse summoning acts as a time/space ninjutsu transporting users from eithers blood ports to the opposite chakra ports. The jutsu switches the chakra ports thus stopping a summoning from taking place.
Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle.
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|Declined|
Explain how the chakra ports a switched. If no direct contact with the scroll or medium inwhich the summon is summoned is made.

Snake's mouth binding(Sunekuchi Shibari)
Rank; A
Type; Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Range; Short-mid
Chakra cost; 30
Damage; -5 per turn
Description; Sunekuchi Shibari is a ninjutsu technique that turns the surrounding area into the esophagus of a seal marked kyodaija. The area turns into a soft malleable organ which releases a fog that seals away all chakra based attacks up till B ranks. The jutsu can potentially end upon heavy impact.
Note; Must be able to summon snakes to use this jutsu.
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|Declined|
I told you i wont approve it if t can seal away all chakra based attacks. Pick one element.

Fire Style; Infernal prison (katon; inferunul keimusho)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Entire Ground in sight
Chakra;45
Damage; 85(10 to the users eyes)
Description; The user summons flame in a circular glyph under the opponents feet. The glyph moves with the users eyes, as long as the target is on the ground and in the users sights the attacks is really difficult to avoid, the flame comes from 4 corners of the glyph and covers till mid range of the air above the glyph. The flames are very voilent and harmful at contact.
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|Declined|
Kind of Oped. Stick to the template and take out that eye bit. Resubmit.

Lightning Style; Thunder Lance (Raiton; Rai-mori)
Rank S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-Long
Chakra; 45
Damage; 85(10 to the user himself)
Description; The user calls forth wide lightning in the form blades and structs the target. The lightning structs at a very fast speed and tilted angles from 60 degrees. 4 lightning blades struct the target but at different places the lightning never structs at the same place again. Each lightning struct is very powerful and forms a huge crater on the grounds where it hits.
Note; Must form clouds before usage.
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|Approved|
Stick to the template! Change to 40/80 damage

 

[Hazure]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

2. (Doujutsu: Genjutsu: Hari Oshi) Eye Technique: Illusion Technique: Needle Pressure

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user looks at the target with his/her activated Sharingan, and claps his/her hands together to create a fluctuating sound vibration that travels into the inner ear, causing the opponent to be ensnared by this Genjutsu. The Sharingan’s tomoe spin to activate the Genjutsu. The target is invisibly constrained in mid air, surrounded by needles that, 1 by 1, insert themselves slowly into each of the pressure points of the target. This paralyzes them for 2 turns.
*Only the Uchiha Clan can perform this technique and can only be used by Hazure
*Must have the Sharingan activated
*Can only be used once per battle

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|Approved|

3. (Doujutsu: Genjutsu: Akumu) Eye Technique: Illusion Technique: Nightmare

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the Sharingan, the user looks into his/her target’s eyes and mutters a single word, Nightmare, which echoes throughout the battle field to activate the Genjutsu. The targets worst nightmare develops around the target and they are left stunned for one turn.
*Must have the Sharingan
*Only the Uchiha Clan can perform this technique and can only be used by Hazure
* Can only be used twice per battle

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|Declined|
Existing Jutsu

4. (Neko Mo-do) Cat Mode

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user takes on the characteristics of a cat. The user’s senses become 10X stronger. All taijutsu damage is increased by +20 and all ninjutsu damage is increased by +15. The user’s eyes become that of a cat and he is able to run as fast as Lee (when the 2nd gate was opened). The user’s nails grow longer and the user is able to telepathically talk with Cats.
*Only lasts for 5 turns
*Can only be used once per battle
*Can only be used by Hazure
*Must have signed the Contract with the Cats (held by Hazure)
*After the mode has ended, the user becomes vulnerable to attack

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|Declined|
No mimicing the 8 gates. And remove that telepathic part. Resubmit.

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doujutsu: Ippai Shinjou Marionetto) - Eye Technique: full body marionette

Rank:S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (+10 if use of weapon on enemies self)
Description: This is an advanced sharingan in which the user has to simply point all fingers at the enemy and them to have directly looked at the fingers. This then puts the enemy in a genjutsu where the user takes control of the enemies body and can control them to either attack another opponent or make them draw a kunai and stab themselves. however the enemy still has full control of their eyes and is able to watch their body move without their control.

Note: this jutsu can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
Note: this jutsu can only be used twice per battle
Note: lasts for 1 turn
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|Declined|
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(Katana jutsu: Shinkirou dageki) - Sword art - mirage strike

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user uses the light reflected off the blade and molds it with chakra sent into the blade. this then intensifies the light reflected towards the enemy and then gives the illusion of multiple blades in which the enemy sees multiple blades coming towards them and find it hard to predict the actual blade.

Note: this jutsu must be performed with a drawn sword
Note: this jutsu can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
Note: this jutsu can only be performed 3 times

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|Approved|

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Boushi no Mai) - Dance of the Eyes
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate his chakra on any part of his body and an eye will appear (3 max). Then, everything the eye sees, the user can control it. Each eye can only control one object, cannot control elements. This jutsu can only be used twice per battle
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|Declined| Too bleachy, not enough for naruto context

 

[Riku..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

There was no word for Imbue nor Imbuement in Japanese, so I'll change the name if needed, but for now I'll leave it as is.

(Suji Imbuement) String Imbuement
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Instead of shooting normal jutsu through puppet strings, the user will imbue elemental chakra through a chakra string. The user can imbue any elemental chakra that they have in the string. Whatever element they put in the string, the puppet that the string is controlling can use it. Example: If you were to run fire chakra through a string, that puppet can now use fire jutsu up to whatever rank the user knows.
Note: The user can use this as many times as they want throughout battle but only once per turn and can only use at as long as they have enough strings to use.
Note: If this is used along with "(Kugutsu No Jutsu) - Puppetry Technique" it can count as one move. Because of the fact that it would be exactly like extending a chakra string out, just adding elemental chakra into it instead of normal chakra. Despite this, the jutsu can be used at any time, but it will only count as one jutsu when used with the said technique.
Note: If the user comes with a puppet, they can have it already activated, but only one puppet as said with the first restriction.
Note: Must be a puppet user.
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|Declined|
Remove that can use any jutsu up to whatever the user knows.
Make it so that the puppet can release said element.
Also make S rank and three times per battle.

Or

Make a custom puppet that can use elemental attacks. Resubmit.

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This Thread Will be closed until Monday!

Apparently you guys can't count 7 days from your last post.

 

[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Thread is now Open.

You can only post 5 jutsu during a seven day period, and yes resubmits count.

This is your first warning, go over and begin to spam, i'll infract.

Have fun submitting jutsu.^^

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Emono O-ba) - Game Over
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: All
Damage Points: N/A (will make the heart of the user stop)
Description: The user will concentrate all of his chakra in its heart and will release it all at once. This will make the user to have huge speed and strength and will make him able to use very strong jutsus which will drain all of the user’s chakra. Thanks to the enormous amount of chakra released the user can control his element at will with no need of hand signs and some jutsus that require a huge mass of chakra can be used. Lasts 4 turns, after this, the user’s heart will stop and he will die.
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(Raiton: Bakuyaku Onidenkou Nami) - Lightning Release: Explosive Demon Lightning Wave
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 100
Damage Points: 150
Description: One of the 3 jutsus that cause inimaginable damage but carries the fate of the user's death. The user will concentrate all of his lightning chakra and suddently will release it, making an huge explosion around him. This explosion is said to be even bigger than Deidara's self destruction jutsu. This jutsu totally obliterates the field but the user will die using it because of its immense power. Last resort jutsu.
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(Katon: Bakuyaku Oninami) - Fire Release: Explosive Demon Wave
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 100
Damage Points: 150
Description: One of the 3 jutsus that cause inimaginable damage but carries the fate of the user's death. The user will concentrate all of his fire chakra and suddently will release it, making an huge explosion around him. This explosion is said to be even bigger than Deidara's self destruction jutsu. This jutsu totally obliterates the field but the user will end by losing control of the jutsu, which will burn him to death. Last resort jutsu.
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|Declined|

(Fuuton: Suraisu Oninami) - Slicing Demon Wave
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 100
Damage Points: 150
Description: One of the 3 jutsus that cause inimaginable damage but carries the fate of the user's death. The user will concentrate all of his wind chakra and suddently will release it, in form of huge and strong slicing winds. This jutsu totally obliterates the field but the user will end totally mutilated since he cant control the power of this jutsu. Last resort jutsu.
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|Declined|


Can't have you dying on me
Sacrifice ftw!!

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Next one in my series of sword jutsu !!!

Kenjutsu no Kaito : Pegasus ( Sword Style of the Emperor : Pegasus )
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: To perform this technique, the user points their sword at the opponent. Almost immediately, the user dashes forward in a straight line at high speed ( much as if the user is on a conveyor belt, but faster - there is no movement of legs , only body as a whole ). The user is surrounded by wind travelling at high speeds to a distance of about two metres, in much the same shape as a comet ( with the user in the head of the comet shaped wind ) which slices any physical objects that touch it. Due to the wind travelling at high speeds, just beneath the wind is a layer of vacuum, though this has no offensive application whatsoever. Because of the wind surrounding the user, the impact of this technique does not leave a stab wound, but rather blows a large chunk of the object away, as if hit by a large beam of energy. The user, after the point of impact, continues on for another five or six metres before stopping due to the high speeds. Once the user stops, the wind dissipates into weak blades that spread out 360 degrees.
This move does 15 damage to the user whether successful or not due to the strain caused on the user's body.
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|Declined|
Clarify the bolded text? Just slice right
Remove the wind blades

And then

Kinjutsu : Haikkekaku Fuuin ( Forbidden Technique : Consumption Seal )
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: On Self
Chakra: 50
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses all their life essence into one spot on their body, creating a seal there, which looks like three snakes in a circle with a six pronged star in the middle. This means that if the user is hit in any other place of their body, their body will regenerate its wounds and the user will not die. However, if the opponent so much as touchesthe seal, the user will die - even from a D ranked jutsu or a simple punch hitting the seal. Even if the user attempts to hide this seal by an armour, the seal will shine through the armor, and touching the armour at that point will kill the user. However, if suppose the seal is on the user's arm and the user cuts off their arm so that the seal is split in two, the user will not be vulnerable to the effects of the seal, but will lose their arm. Unfortunately, to prevent a person from being practically immortal by forming it on the arm and cutting their arm off, the seal always forms on the middle of the torso, because there is almost no way for the user to cut their torso into half without dying.This jutsu takes 25 chakra per turn, and the user loses 15 health per turn.

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|Declined|

Excuse me, but these jutsu in the quoted message havent even been CHECKED since 24. 08..... They don't count as my submissions for this week....

Raiton : Dendou Munashii ( Lightning Release: Electric Void )
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user shoots a bolt of lightning at any water technique or water source. This bolt causes the water to become elctrolysed, splitting into its constituent parts, Hydrogen and Oxygen. The heat of the lightning bolt causes the Hydrogen to explode, also combusting the Oxygen, enveloping the enemmy ( if they are near the water ) in a wave of fire and explosions.
-Can only be used thrice per battle-
-Does 10 damage to the user-
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Similar to pure water...

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Raiton : Enkohi ( Lightning Release: Arc Blaze )
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user shoots a bolt of lightning, ionising any air near the opponent, causing a phenomenon similar to a lightning arc to occur. This heats the surrounding area to roughly 10,000 K, incinerating the opponent.
-Can only be used twice per battle-
-Does 20 damage to the user-

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|Declined|
Overpowered.

Your Excused!

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Jishaku Ninpou: Denjiki) - Magnetic Ninja Art: Electromagnetism

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user carefully controls their chakra and creates a pulse of chakra shooting out of their hand. this pulse creates a electromagnetic field and attracts protons and neutrons in lightning based attacks and draws them into the centre of the electromagnetic field and discharges the collected energy into the ground. ( takes a toll on the user so they cant use magnetic ninja art the following turn)

Note: can only be used by 3rd Kazekage bio or sasori bio
Note: can only be used 3 times
Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
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(Jishaku Ninpou: Kouin anime) - Magnetic Ninja Art: time animation

Rank S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user emits magnetic pulses which can disrupt the electromative impulses that the brain sends throughout the body to communicate with the limbs and holds the enemy in a state of suspended animation for short period of time making their reaction to attacks a last minute option.

Note: can only be used by 3rd Kazekage bio or sasori bio
Note: can only be used twice
Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
Note: enemy can only use two jutsu in the turn instead of 3
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|Declined|
EMP's (Electric Magnetic Pulse) cannot (to my knowledge) stop the electrical impulses sent though our brain nuerons that connect throughout your bodies. It's why humans were safe from the robots in the matrix, xd.

(Jishaku Ninpou: Jiki Kanchiki) - Magnetic ninja art: magnetism sensor

Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a magnetic field which expands over a 10 meter radius and covers underground by 5 meters. This magnetic field can pick up the slightest magnetic charges coming from any enemy that happens to be within the magnetic field and relays the postion to the user.

Note: can only be used by 3rd Kazekage bio or sasori bio
Note: can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
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|Approved|

(Tsuin Tenma Sai) - twin demon sai

Rank A
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: the Twin demon sai's are a pair of handheld weapons made from infused chakra metals. They are commonly used by the uchiha clan for their unique offensive fightning style capabilities. they have the ability to absorb the users chakra and coat the blades in three different elements of either fire , lightning or wind. when the pair of blades are run along each other ( by the middle spike) they release a energy blast of raw chakra and can be infused with the elemental chakra that they absorb. these raw chakra blasts create different affects. lightning will numb area of contact, fire will induce 3rd degree burns and wind will simply shred the outer skin layers. These twin demon sai's are carried in the sleeves of the users top and can be wielded as blunt objects to increase damage from punching the enemy.

Note: Can only be used by an uchiha Bio
Note: Can only be taught by uchiha Kaito
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|Declined|
Make them S rank and limit their uses.

(Han Sochi jutsu)- Half Step technique

Rank: S
Type: offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a style of chinese martial arts where the user uses precise chakra control to move half a step out of the way when being attacked at close range. The user is then facing the side of the enemy.This advanced technique can be followed up with an attack and the opponent cant react because the user is in too close proximity and allowing the user to directly cause damage quickly to the enemy.

Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
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|Declined|
I understand what your saying, but i don't understand how this can't be blocked. Some fighters are great a proximity fighting.

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

When will the group be opened again?

Counter summoning (Tentou Kuchiose)
Rank; B
Type; Supplementary
Range; Entire Feild
Chakra cost; 25
Damage points; N/A
Description; Summoning and reverse summoning acts as a time/space ninjutsu transporting users from eithers blood ports to the opposite chakra ports. The jutsu switches the chakra ports thus stopping a summoning from taking place.
Note; Can only be used 3 times in a battle.
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using time/space, reverse summoning and summoning, summons humans or monster summonings using time/space, u use time/space and replace the chakra ports
like what minato did to develop flying thunder god, instead of getting something to the target it gets the target somewhere. (Summoning-Flying thunder god relationship) replacing the ports,
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You still haven't explain how you can replace the ports with out direct contact.
Do not resubmit.

Fire Style; Infernal prison (katon; inferunul keimusho)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Range; Short-mid(on the ground where the glyph was formed)
Chakra;40
Damage; 80(10 to the user)
Description; The user summons flame in a circular glyph under the opponents feet. As long as the target is on the ground the attack is really difficult to avoid, The glyph can be moved and the flame comes from 4 corners of the glyph and covers till mid range of the air above the glyph. The flames are very voilent and harmful at contact.
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|Approved|
On the condition that the mid range in the air part is removed.

Water Style; Blessed Drop (Suiton; keitaku tekika)
Rank; S
Type; Attack/Defense (can be both at the same time)
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user collects moisture from the air into an orb shape, the user keeps on collecting water and condenses it into the orb, the friction upon condensing produces electricity, thus an orb of condensed electrified cold water, upon impact the orb releases large ammount of water capable enough of blocking the highest level wind fire combo's and strong lightning techniques.
Note; No water source needed to perform this technique, though a water source can increase the speed of forming the orb.

At the blocking part i said blocking not overpowering, don't misunderstand that part.
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|Declined| Remove the highlighted area. resubmit.

Earth Style; Ground Dasher (Doton; Daichiyakushin)
Rank; S
Type; Attack
Chakra cost; 40
Damage points; 80
Description; The user stomps on the ground that first makes a tomb of earth binding the opponent tight, then the user stomps again the brings rock out of the ground that goes rushing towards the opponent. The opponent gets crushed if he is underground due to flipping of the earth and stomping.
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|Declined|

 

[Nero]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Oton: Oton tama) Sound style: Sound sphere
Type: Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (+5 if made disrupt)
Damage: 80 (5 each turn ears bleed)
Description: The user creates a sphere of unvisble and silent sound either by mouth or by palm and then sends it out towards the opponent if this jutsu is hit by a object it disrupts and sends out a ring towards every opponent except the user making the sound ring in their ears for over 3 turns if the opponent takes the hit this jutsu deals 80 plus five each turn the ears bleed.
Note: Can only be used once per battle

This is not a rasengan -_-
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|Declined|

(Oton: Oton anpurifaia) Sound Style: Sound amplifier
Type: Supplimentary/Attack/ Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: 0 (5 to the user when activated)
Description: The user unlockz a seal that amplifies sound giving him better hearing. This jutsu allows the user to hear things from any point on the terrian. This jutsu amplifies sound by 20 damage but also adds chakra on by 10. This jutsu makes the user unaffected to any jutsu dealing with any type of sound. Every turn this jutsu is active the user takes 5 damage. Any ringing that the opponent hears is added by 1 turn
Note: This jutsu only last for 3 turns
Can only be used once.
Only people who know sound the element and have been taught by nero can use this technique.

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|Declined|
Remove this,"This jutsu makes the user unaffected to any jutsu dealing with any type of sound." and "Any ringing that the opponent hears is added by 1 turn". Also make S rank. Resubmit next week.

(Oton: Oton anpurifaia) Sound Style: Sound amplifier
Type: Supplimentary/Attack/ Defense
Rank: Srank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 0 (5 to the user when activated)
Description: The user unlockz a seal that amplifies sound giving him better hearing. This jutsu allows the user to hear things from any point on the terrian. This jutsu amplifies sound by 20 damage but also adds chakra on by 10. Every turn this jutsu is active the user takes 5 damage.
Note: This jutsu only last for 3 turns
Can only be used Twice.
Only people who know sound the element and have been taught by nero can use this technique.
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|Approved|