[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Nendo Tama)-Clay Bullets
Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The user Shoots small clay bullets.The bullets are set off by a handsign.
Note:this justu can be used to cover the enemy in explosive clay by shooting it at the opponent.
*this justu can only be used by Minato1*
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~Approved~

(Katon:Naraku)-Fire Style:Hell's Fire
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user Slams Two palms on the ground causes a shockwave of Flame that spreads across the ground all over the terrain.Engulfing almost everything in flames.If this just hits the opponent,It will cause severe burning slowly leading to death.
Note:This Move can only Be done once per battle.
Note:this move can only be block by space/time justu
note:this justu can't be put out by water beacuse its hell's fire its everlasting.
*this justu can only be used by Minato1*

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~Declined~
Oped and fire can be beaten by a strong enough water jutsu.
Make hell fire a custom element then we can talk.^^

(Doton: Doro Sawa)-Earth Style: Mud Valley
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description:User creates a valley of Mud.
Note: This justu can be made as a combo with Earth Style: Double Suicide Decapitation and Earth Style: Underground Fish Protection
*This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
*This justu can only be used once Per battle*
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~Approved~

(Raiton:Seishou Oonami)-Lightning Style:Energy Surge
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:User Sends a Surge of electric Currents Through the ground Shocking there opponent.This justu can also be used to break the earth around to user to escape a trap dealing with earth.
Note: This justu Doesn't need hand signs to be activated.
*This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
*This justu can only be used 3 times per battle*
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~Declined~
Exist already

(Fuuton:Shinshoku Jikoku)-Wind Style: Erosion Time
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:This Wind is So power full it can erode A Plateau.This justu is pefect to go against earth justu.
*This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
*This justu can only be used Twice Per battle*
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~Pending~
Give more detail how it can erode the plateau

(Fuuton:Shinshoku Jikoku)-Wind Style: Erosion Time
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:This justu is pefect to go against earth justu. the user sends a strong justu of wind that is strong enough to erode a plateau into dust.this justu can also be used to break down the defense of an earth user because they are most likely to have an earth defense to guard against their enemies attack.
*This justu can be only taught by Minato1*
*This justu can only be used Twice Per battle

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[Nero]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Mokuton: mokuzai seibutsu) Wood Style: Wood golems
Type: Supplimentary/Defense/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long (explosion- Short)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (+15 if explode)
Description: The user focuses the chakra then does hand signs to create wooden golems to come out of the ground or water(Wood is two elements Earth and Water) The golems follow every order that the user gives them they have legs, feet, arms, and hands that they can use to attack with.
Note:The golems turn back in to trees when this turn ends.
Can only be used 3 times per battle.

|Approved|
Limit to 2 golems per use. 3times per battle is fine.

(Doton: Doton wa-mu) Earth style: Earth worm
Type: Attack/Supplimentary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (+15 if user goes down with it)
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses his chakra to his foot then stomps his foot instantly creating a large worm under ground (while its under ground the user has a choice to go under ground with him if wanted) with a drill shaped head that can move underground and attack when the user commands it.
Notes:
This worm can only last 2 turns
This worm can only be used once per battle

|Approved|
But remove that instantly part

 

[RokuNR]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Updating a bit of my old customs O_O

Previous Version

Spoiler

(Kuchiyose: Joutei Shikon)- Summoning: Lord Fang
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons the Lord of the dogs on Mount Fang, Meiunha, a large dog slightly larger than Gamabunta, that can shoot spheres of wind at the opponent that do 15 damage (coming to a total of 75 damage if he uses them all five turns without fail). Meiunha can also attack normally, (bite, scratch) and fend off attacks for the user. Meiunha can sustain damage from 1 S-rank jutsu before he disperses. This summon lasts only 5 turns and can only be used once per battle.

(That "1 S-rank" got him killed everytime I summoned him >_>)

(Kuchiyose: Joutei Shikon)- Summoning: Lord Fang
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons the Lord of the dogs and wolves on Mount Fang, Meiunha, a large white wolf-dog slightly larger than Gamabunta, that can shoot spheres of wind at the opponent that do 15 damage (coming to a total of 75 damage if he uses them all five turns without fail). He is a master at Wind jutsu. Meiunha can also attack normally, (bite, scratch) and fend off attacks for the user. As a giant wolf, Meiunha is capable of sustaining fatal amounts of damage from several powerful (A-S-rank) jutsus before dispersing, and a great deal of trust is required for the user to even be able to summon him. This summon lasts only 5 turns and can only be used once per battle.
|Approved|
But make it 2 powerful S ranked jutsu or 3 powerful a ranked (several is too much)

Edit: Editted Description and added sustainability of damage

(Suiton: Ippai Bodi Mizu no Jutsu)- Water style: Full Body Water
Rank: A
type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (-3 each round active)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user uses their chakra to become water itself. The user is able to avoid physical attacks and shoot small to large-sized water projectiles (depending on their size). They are also able to absorb large amounts of water (half the size of Gamabunta) to merge with themselves when in water state.

Edit: Added more to the description and increased chakra

|Pending| Make it S rank and some limits.

 

[Decipher]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Raiton:seiteki hiru)-Lightning Style:Static Leech
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:long-short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The user sends two lines of lighting from his/her palms wich attaches to any part of the users body paralyzing them and draing all of their chakra until released or they have escaped.
Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
Note:Can only be cut by a infused chakra sword or a type of wind cutting jutsu.

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~Pending~
Remove the draining all of their chakra part, and resubmit.

(Doton:yochi kyouran) Earth Style:Earth Frenzy
Type:Attack/Defence
Rank:B
Range:long-short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:60
Description:The user does the needed hand seals and thrusts his/her palms on the floor adding his/her chakra to the earth being able to manipulate it.The Earth rises taking on a form of claws from the ground and is able to defend by covering the user or attack by grabbing the opponent and sufforcating or taking out a limb by limb.
Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
Note:lasts only 2 turns
Note can be brought down by a Rank B or higher lightning jutsu

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~Declined~
A similar jutsu already exist.

(Katon:nenshou nami) Fire Style:Burning Wave
Type:Attack
Rank:C
Range:long-short
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description:The user breathes in a bunch of air and while inside mixes it with their fire chakra exahaling a burning wave of fire that when in contact burns the skin.
Note:Ca only be taught/used by Sharingan09
Note:Burning Sensasion lasts for 2 turns
Note Can be removed by dipping into water or add water to the necessary part of the body were it was burned.

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~Pending~
Explain the wave bit, cause it sounds like Ash Accumulation jutsu

Raiton:seiteki hiru)-Lightning Style:Static Leech
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:long-short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The user sends two lines of lighting from his/her palms wich attaches to any part of the users body paralyzing them and until released or they have escaped.
Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
Note:Can only be cut by a infused chakra sword or a type of wind cutting jutsu.

|Approved|
(Katon:nenshou nami) Fire Style:Burning Wave
Type:Attack
Rank:C
Range:long-short
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description:The user breathes in a bunch of air and while inside mixes it with their fire chakra exahaling a heat wave much like when a nuclear bomb is explodes emits nuclear/heatwaves of fire that when in contact burns the skin.
Note:Ca only be taught/used by Sharingan09
Note:Burning Sensasion lasts for 2 turns
Note Can be removed by dipping into water or add water to the necessary part of the body were it was burned.

|Declined|
Nuclear Heatwaves? Sounds like a custom element to me

Doton:doro itsuryuu)Earth Style:Mud Spill
Type:Supplemantary
Rank:C
Range:long-short-long
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:30
Description:The user focuses Earth chakra in his/her mouth and emits a gewy like substance that can be spit in the user face to blind them.Can also be used on oneself to stick to walls or objects.
Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
Note can be romoved by a rank C or higher lightning move

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Fire Style:Cumbustion Pellets
Type:Attack
Rank:C
Range:long-short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:40
Description:The user shoots out fire pellets from the tips of their fingers.
Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09

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Earth Styleeath Coffin
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:70
Description:The user does the needed hand seals and thrusts his/her hands to the ground and a coffin appears underneath the opponent and rapidly shuts.The user will then manipulate the coffin to emit 5 sharp spears from inside and stab the opponent in the both thighs,chest,one hand,and the last one in the heart.
Note:Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
Note:Can be immediatly disspurssed by a full body chidori or any lightning because once it is broken from the inside it is useless.

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[Goro Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

People Listen Carefully.
In order to keep this thread as clean as possible keep your post(each week) in one thread and Keep Count of your own submission.

Only Five Post per week.

Yes this includes resubmission. Anything more than 5(per week) is declined.
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Thanks.

 

[Vergil..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Raiton:raikou tengai(lightning style:lighting dome)
Type:Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
description: user grabs is dual sword and stabs it in the ground and emitts lighting chakra throw it around a radius of 10.5 miles to trap the opponent inside a dome, the user can also pump more lighting chakra into the side of the dome to electricute the enemy inside paralizing him for one turn.

(note:if used to attack it cost +10 chakra.)
(note: can only be used 3 times per battle.)
(note:must have lightning element.)
(note:can only be used by Vergil.. and Mugen Ryukio.)
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|Approved|
But limit the radius to 50m

Name:Ninpo:buraindo awai (Bliding light)
Type: Supplementary
Rank:B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: none
Description: this jutsu consists of using lightning chakra throw a metal object that he is using to blind the enemy momentarely.this light can be derected to only one side of the object.
(note:must have lightning to use)
(note: the object can be thrown)
(note: only blinds for 1 turn)
(note: can be used 3 times per battle)
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|Declined|
Jutsu already exist

Name:Fuuton: Kaiten(Wind Release: Rotation)
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu copies the hyuuga's kaiten(Rotation)using wind to replace the chakra control.By spinning and releasing wind chakra from his hands while moving them up and down the user is able to create a wind variation of the hyuuga's kaiten.
(note:must have wind to use)
(note:weak against fire)
(note: if used with water around it becomes resistent to lower level fire)
(note:can be used 6 times per battle)
(note: this can be shaped from a replica of kaiten to a simple hurrican)
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|Pending|

Name:Fujin sochi(Fujin step)
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range: All ranges
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points: (+ 10 to any taijutsu do to high speed)
Description: The user uses wind chakra on his feet to propell himself and get higher speed and jump higher at larger speed making him hard to see for normal eyes and byakugan users.
(note:this jutsu as effect for 3 turns )
(note:must have wind to use)
(note:can only be used 3 times)

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|Declined|

 

[Nero]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Oton: Oton tama) Sound style: Sound sphere
Type: Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (+5 if made disrupt)
Damage: 80 (5 each turn ears bleed)
Description: The user creates a sphere of unvisble and silent sound either by mouth or by palm and then sends it out towards the opponent if this jutsu is hit by a object it disrupts and sends out a ring towards every opponent except the user making the sound ring in their ears for over 3 turns if the opponent takes the hit this jutsu deals 80 plus five each turn the ears bleed.
Note: Can only be used once per battle

This is not a rasengan -_-
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|Declined|

(Oton: Oton anpurifaia) Sound Style: Sound amplifier
Type: Supplimentary/Attack/ Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: 0 (5 to the user when activated)
Description: The user unlockz a seal that amplifies sound giving him better hearing. This jutsu allows the user to hear things from any point on the terrian. This jutsu amplifies sound by 20 damage but also adds chakra on by 10. This jutsu makes the user unaffected to any jutsu dealing with any type of sound. Every turn this jutsu is active the user takes 5 damage. Any ringing that the opponent hears is added by 1 turn
Note: This jutsu only last for 3 turns
Can only be used once.
Only people who know sound the element and have been taught by nero can use this technique.

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|Declined|
Remove this,"This jutsu makes the user unaffected to any jutsu dealing with any type of sound." and "Any ringing that the opponent hears is added by 1 turn". Also make S rank. Resubmit next week.

 

[Kiba Inuzuka]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Futatsu Kashira Doragon Higyou) two head Dragon Strike
Rank:S
Type:Attack/Defense(can use both)
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: a 2 head dragons that can be controlled by the person who did it the dragons can shoot ice bullet and water from there mouth. they each have explosive tags throughout their bodies, which activate when the dragons are destroyed. This causes thier bodies to shatter and ice shards to be sent flying in all directions.

*can use x2 in mach
*this move can stay on the mach for 2 ture
*cant use back to back
*can be use by riku.. and kiba
*need to know water and ice
*when u use ice bullet or water bullet it count as a move
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~Pending~
Need to speak to the others about this.


(Aisu Waza) ice technique
Rank D
Type:Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range:Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description Creates small wall of ice,Small ice bolts,finger bullet that u can throw or block Shuriken,explosive kunai etc.
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~Approved~

(Tentei Gogyou Kiru)-God Water kill
Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:this use all Chakra
Damage Points:90 Damage
Description:The user Slams Two palms on the ground causes a shockwave of water that make all the water form ever where come to this one spot and make a big water ball that can kill in one touch
Note:This Move can only Be done once per battle.

*this is one hit k.o
*cant be block
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~Declined~
No one hit K.O.'s

Sution: Gekiha Teikiatsu (Water Style: Water Crushing Cyclone)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user inserts their hands into the water after performing the seals, and then they make water rise up, and make a cyclone horizontally go towards the opponent. Can only be used in a deep source of water. If this technique makes contact with the opponent, the force will be enough to drag them down, like an undertow.

Note: Must be used on a water source.
Note: Can only be used twice in a battle, must wait a turn before the next use.

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~Declined~
Similar Jutsu Exist

summoning(Futatsu Kashira Doragon Higyou) two head Dragon Strike
Rank:S
Type:Attack/Defense(can use both)
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: a 2 head dragon that can be controlled by the person who summoned the dragon can shoot ice bullet and water from their mouths.

*can be use by riku.. and kiba
*need to know water and ice
*when u use ice bullet or water bullet it count as a move
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|Approved|


(Tentei Gogyou Kiru)-God Water kill
Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:this use all Chakra
Damage Points:90 Damage
Description:The user Slams Two palms on the ground causes a shockwave of water that make all the water form ever where come to this one spot and make a big water ball that can kill in one touch
Note:This Move can only Be done once per battle.

*this move can be use when user is almost at death
*this move can be use by kiba
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[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Sekando: Gear Second
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage cost: 80 (varies on attacks)
Description: The user pumps his blood rapidly with his legs to kick start the process which in turn increases the speed of the users blood flow, thus providing more oxygen and nutrients to various parts of the body which makes the user faster and stronger. The user must concentrate to keep the blood flow steady allowing the blood to move at the increased speed without stressing any internal organs , if this doesn’t happen then there is risk that they may explode.

Note: User Cant enter Gear Second until 3 turns after.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Lasts 3 turns

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|Declined|Similar jutsu exist

Katon: Higan (Fire Release: Fire gun)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage cost: 60
Description: The user will turn the ends of his fingers into fire, allowing them to shoot fire bullets at the opponent, these fire bullets travel at an immense speed and do a considerable amount of damage.

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|Approved|
remove the immense speed part.

Katon: Enkai (Fire Release: Blaze Commandment)
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage cost: 80
Description: The user will first turn their hand into fire and then swirl it around themselves, this then creates a 360 flame around the user. The user will then turn the flame into a massive fire pillar that will rise up and protect the user from every angle, this jutsu is effective against taijutsu attacks. (This fire pillar is Incredibly powerful, and can stop most attacks.)

Note: Can only be used Twice per match.

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|Approved|

Katon: Shinka Shiranui (Fire Release: Holy Flame, Unknown Fire)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage cost: 80
Description: The user will create to large flames in each of their hands, he/she will then throw each flame at the opponent and turn them into fire lances, these are powerful enough to break through most defences, and can easily kill the opponent if they hit a vital spot.

Note: Can only be used 3 times per match.
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|Declined|
Remove the easily kill part

 

[Hazure]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

1. (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kisaki Neko Kuchiyose: Rinsei) Summoning Jutsu: Queen Cat Summon: Rinsei

Spoiler

Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (Depends on the jutsu she performs)
Description: Rinsei is the Queen of the Neko family (like Manda is the king of snakes). She is one of the most powerful of the Neko Family. Like the 3 tailed Demon she has 3 tails, this allows her to use her 3 Katanas. Her fur is soft like clouds and she has the Ying and Yang symbol printed on her forehead (the place where the summoner stands, if she allows it). She has the ability to manipulate all 5 elements to A-rank. Like all of the Neko family she is able to use a large amount of chakra, if needed. Her personality is that of a protective mother, if anything comes to hurt her young, or summoner, she will go all out against the person responsible. She is about 20 meters bigger than Gamabunta.
Jutsu she can use are (some cases she might need help from her summoner):
Katon ? Up to A-Rank
Suiton - Up to A-Rank
Fuuton - Up to A-Rank
Doton - Up to A-Rank
Raiton - Up to A-Rank
Rinsei is very touchy when it comes to a summoner, she will only let a summoner stand on her forehead when they have done something to prove themselves to her. In order for a summoner to attempt to stand on her forehead the summoner must undergo a variety of tasks, which vary depending on her mood. The only exception is Kusari Uchiha (Hazure), who holds the Contract of the Neko Family.
*Stays in battle for 5 turns.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Must have signed the Contract of the Cats (held by Hazure)

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~Declined~
Overpowered. 2 elements max.^^

1.
(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kisaki Kuchiyose: Rinsei) Summoning Jutsu: Queen Summon: Rinsei

Spoiler

Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (Depends on the jutsu she performs)
Description: Rinsei is 1 of the Queens of the Neko family (like Manda is the king of snakes). She is one of the most powerful of the Neko Family. Like the 3 tailed Demon she has 3 tails, this allows her to use her 3 Katanas. Her fur is soft like clouds and she has the Ying and Yang symbol printed on her forehead (the place where the summoner stands, if she allows it). Like all of the Neko family she is able to use a large amount of chakra, if needed. Her personality is that of a protective mother, if anything comes to hurt her young, or summoner, she will go all out against the person responsible. She is about 20 meters bigger than Gamabunta.
Jutsu she can use are (some cases she might need help from her summoner):
Katon ? Up to A-Rank
Fuuton - Up to A-Rank
Rinsei is very touchy when it comes to a summoner, she will only let a summoner stand on her forehead when they have done something to prove themselves to her. In order for a summoner to attempt to stand on her forehead the summoner must undergo a variety of tasks, which vary depending on her mood. The only exception is Kusari Uchiha (Hazure), who holds the Contract of the Neko Family.
*Stays in battle for 5 turns.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Must have signed the Contract of the Cats (held by Hazure)

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|Approved|
remove that 20m bigger than gamabunta part though.

 

[Zaraki]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton Doragon Rasen) Water Dragon Spiral

Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user holds out their arm straight forward, then 2 water dragons spiral around the users arm (can use both arms with means a max of 4 dragons) , the user can then send the dragons toward the opponent. The user can also control the dragons with their chakra
Note: can only be taught by Zaraki
Note: 1 less dragon each time
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|Declined|

(Suiton Doragon bouei) Water Dragon Protection

Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user jumps in the air, water dragons sprout from the side of the users legs but they stay right there (2 on each leg) and block incoming attacks
Note: can only be taught by Zaraki
Note: can block 1 attack with each Dragon
Note: 1 less dragon each time
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|Declined|

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Here is one:

(Raiton:Ikazuchi Hibana Bakudan)-Lightning Style: Lightning Spark Bomb
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: Mid Range
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around him/her and then releases tiny sparks and after 2 turns, they are fully attached to the opponent and at anytime,The user can form tiger seal and make the sparks expload, the opponent would need to get out of range before this could happen or just use a jutsu that could burn away the sparks, if the opponent can't do that then the user could kill the opponent.
Note: The User Can Only Use This Jutsu Three Times A Battle
Note: Can only be used by SinRival or any people taught this jutsu by her.

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~Approved~

(Raiton:Sutatikku)-Lightning Style: Static Robots
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The User creates huge lightning robots that can shock anything it touches. They can be destroyed by getting hit by a s-rank wind attack, If they touch a living being, they will automatically paralyze or even kill if combined with another attack. After 5 turns they will turn back into sparks that can be used with other attacks.
Note: Can Only Be Used twice per battle
Note: Can only be used by SinRival and people taught by her
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~Declined~
Lightning Robots?O_O Re work the jutsu. And remove that kill part^^ Robot-o is the jap word.xd


No Japanese Word For Robots

(Taijutsu:Hakabakashii Sochi)-Taijutsu Style: Rapid Step
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: When then user activates byakugan and uses this jutsu, the user will recieve double the accuracy and speed and so the user then appears behind the opponent and do multipal hits, then suddenly dissapear and quickly appear at the side and do multipal hits, then keeps on going and when using other attacks they'll be harder to dodge and be in a same match up to sharingan.
Note: This lasts 2 turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Must Have Byakugan and be taught by SinRival

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~Declined~
Remove the sharingan part. Resubmit

The new one:

(Taijutsu:Hakabakashii Sochi)-Taijutsu Style: Rapid Step
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: When then user activates byakugan and uses this jutsu, the user will recieve double the accuracy and speed and so the user then appears behind the opponent and do multiple hits, then suddenly disappear and quickly appear at the side and do multiple hits, then keeps on going and when using other attacks they'll be harder to dodge.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Must Have Byakugan and be taught by SinRival
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|Approved|
But remove that last 2 turns part

(Suiton:Uzumaki Jiten)-Water Style: Whirlpool Rotation
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user uses the rotation on a bigger scale, on water, and when they start to spin for rotation, the water turns into a powerful and long whirlpool, if struck you'd be struck by a powerful force, and would very easily drown if you do not do anything.The user is required to know rotation for this to work.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Must Have Byakugan and be taught by SinRival
Note: Must Be on water source
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|Approved|
Add must be on a water source

Thats me iv submitted 5 customs

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Moonlight tempest(gekkou arashi)
Rank; A
Range; Short-Long
Type; Attack
Chakra Cost; 30
Damage; 60
Description; A sword art in which the user collects energy or transfers energy into the sword and slashes which gives an highly amplified swing that creates a shock wave which moves forward and cuts through anything in its way.
Note; The shock wave can cut anything in its way but moves straight forwards, which makes it difficult to hit the target, best used in short range.
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|Approved|
Remove that cuts through anything part, and add must be used with a sword.

 

[Zenryoku]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon : Kaen enban)- Fire style: Flame Disk

Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Desription: the user creates a spinning flame disk where they hold their hands appart and breath fire chakra inbetween and mold the chakra into a spinning disk.

*Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
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~Approved~

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(Doujutsu: boushi kokudo) - Eye Technique: spinning realm

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Boushi kokudo is and advanced sharingun technique in which the user creates the illusion of the enemy spinning around and then prevents them from molding chakra and unable to create a move.

*Note: the enemy cant create the maximum amount of moves in a turn
*Note: lasts 1 turn

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~Declined~
How does spinning around prevent the opponent from molding chakra?

(Ninpo: Shinku Kiji Ryuu)- Ninja art: Scarlet cloth dragon

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damaga cost: N/A (+10 for explosive tags)
Description: the user opens a scroll and performs the following seals: tiger dog horse. mutliple cloths with spiked tastles on the ends traps the enermy by wrapping round the legs shoulders and arms and then ankers itself to the ground using the spiked tastles.

Note: This jutsu can be used in conjunction with explosive tags to cause damage.
Note: can only be taught by uchiha Kaito

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~Declined~
Explain this a bit more.

(Ninpo: Shinku Kiji Ryuu)- Ninja art: Scarlet cloth dragon

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damaga cost: N/A (+10 for explosive tags)
Description: the user opens a scroll and performs the following seals: tiger dog horse. this then releases mutliple cloths with spiked tastles on the ends that is infused with chakra and allowing the user to control its path of direction. The scarlet cloth dragons are then able to trap the enermy by wrapping round the legs shoulders and arms and restrains their movements. the spiked tastles are then thrust into the ground to act as ankers to hold the enemy down. This can also be used by applying explosive tags to the cloth to use as extra damage after holding the enemy still.

Note: This jutsu can be used in conjunction with explosive tags to cause damage.
Note: can only be taught by uchiha Kaito

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|Approved|

 

[Riku..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Calm down Ali lol.

(Hyouten: Hando of Jakki Shimo) Ice Style: Hand of Jack Frost
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage:90
Description:The user will place their hand on any object on the battle field and a blue, frozen hand of ice will appear anywhere throughout that object (Example: If the user places their hand on a tree then they can make the hand appear anywhere throughout the tree, on a branch, the top of the tree, anywhere). The hand has three, unique abilities. It can grab the opponent and make spikes all over its hand stabbing the opponent. It can also morph into either a giant ice sword to stab the opponent. And finally it can shoot an extremely cold blast from its hand freezing the opponent or the ground under and around the opponent. The user can also run their chakra through the something, and make it continue running to somewhere else. (Example: The user runs their chakra through the ground, and then runs it into a tree which is attached to the ground.) If a hand is destroyed, it shatters, leaving the enemy to deal with ice senbon that rain down upon them if they are within short-range.
Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
Note: Once this jutsu is used the user must wait 2 more turns to use it again.
Note: If this is used more than once then it takes up 5 more chakra than the last time.
Only useable by Riku..
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~Approved~
But make it 3 times per battle.

(Hyouten: Kyojin of Sono Tougen) Ice Style: Giants of the Tundra
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long (depends on the attack that they're using)
Type:Supplementary
Chakra:40 (drains 5 more chakra per turn, per giant)
Damage:80
Description:The user creates massive giant(s) made of ice. The giants basically are humongous, crystalized creatures that have some human features, such as hands and feet, but the features of their face are more gruesome than a normal humans. The giant is about as big as a two trees stacked atop each other. The user can make up to two giants. The giants are able to do simple attacks of course, swinging arms, kicking, etc. A hit by any of the ice giants’ attacks freezes the opponent as well as touching the giant (this doesn’t apply to the user). The giants are also able to make giant spears/javelins to throw at the enemy. An attack would be mid-range while a throw would be long range. When a giant is destroyed, he freezes a short range area around him.
Note: The giants get slightly smaller after each turn and after 6 turns they melt into ice due to the user supporting two things at once.
Note: If two giants are made then this time limit is cut in half and they melt in 3 turns due to the user needing to support 3 things at once: themselves, and the two giants.
Note: Only useable 3 times in battle.
Useable only by Riku..

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~Declined~
Make forbidden, and limit to once per battle. Resubmit.

Ok, edited.

(Hyouten: Kyojin of Sono Tougen) Ice Style: Giants of the Tundra
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Long (depends on the attack that they're using)
Type:Supplementary
Chakra:40 (drains 5 more chakra per turn, per giant)
Damage:80
Description:The user creates massive giant(s) made of ice. The giants basically are humongous, crystalized creatures that have some human features, such as hands and feet, but the features of their face are more gruesome than a normal humans. The giant is about as big as a two trees stacked atop each other. The user can make up to two giants. The giants are able to do simple attacks of course, swinging arms, kicking, etc. A hit by any of the ice giants’ attacks freezes the opponent as well as touching the giant (this doesn’t apply to the user). The giants are also able to make giant spears/javelins to throw at the enemy. An attack would be mid-range while a throw would be long range. When a giant is destroyed, he freezes a short range area around him.
Note: The giants get slightly smaller after each turn and after 6 turns they melt into ice due to the user supporting two things at once.
Note: If two giants are made then this time limit is cut in half and they melt in 3 turns due to the user needing to support 3 things at once: themselves, and the two giants.
Note: Only useable 1 time in battle.
Useable only by Riku..
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|Approved|
Add minus 10 damage to use per turn.

 

[-Ventus-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(katon:hakabakashii kasai butoukai)-Rapid fire balls
Rank:A
type:attack
range:short to long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:700
Description:User creates numerous rapid fireballs from the users palms and sends them flying on his opponent.Can cause the body of the opponent to be burned.
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|Declined|
Overpowered. I suggest you review the template.

(doton:daichi yure jutsu)-Ground Vibration Jutsu
Type:Supplement
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:n/a
Description:The user puts chakra in his/her feet making him/her able to sense the vibration in the ground when closing his/her eyes.And he/she can also sense the opponents movement even the slightest movement made by his/her opponent.
*can only be use by hinaru*
*can only be taught by hinaru*
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|Declined|
Jutsu already exist

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu:kokuou ookami summon:LOKI)king wolf summon:LOKI
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: short - long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 depends on the jutsu
Description: Loki is the king of all the wolve's and the strongest in the ookami family
He is very hard headed and won't obey others but his summoner.he has 4 tails and each resemble the 4 basic elements earth water fire and wind.When he changes mood he also changes color (literally).He's personality is a spoiled bossy king and has 4 sons Freyja,Asgard,mead,Balto.Loki has a diamond crest on his forhead on which the user stands.
Jutsu he can use are (some cases he might need help from her summoner):
Katon – Up to A-Rank
Raiton - Up to A-Rank
Loki is very picky on the summoner and if the summoner is new he/she must prove himself to Loki before he/she can summon him or even stand on his forehead(exception on hinaru the holder of the ookami family contract)
*Stays in battle for 5 turns.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Must have signed the Contract of the wolve's (held by Hinaru)
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|Pending|
Wolf contract exist. Speak to RokuNR

(doton:koudo glove) Earth gloves
Type:supplement
Rank:B
Rangen/a
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:n/a
Description:userslams his hand in the ground and creates a glove out of ground covering his whole hands and gives the user +20 on taijutsu attack and +10 when guarding with his/her hands
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|Approved|

 

[Kaze..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon:Tsuin Doragon)-Fire Style:Twin Dragon Fire
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user forms a series of hand signs then releases fire from his/her mouth making a double headed twin dragon. This dragon attacks the opponent an if it coillide with other fire jutsu it asborbs the jutsu an grows stronger.
Note:Can only aborb S rank fire an down
Note:Can only be used 2 per battle
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|Approved|
Make so it can only absorb a rank fire and down

(Doton:Shishi Doton Hora)-Earth Style:Lion's Of The Earth Den
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user forms a series of hand signs then 3 Lion's form from the earth the lions have the ability to fuse with the earth an swim in the earth like a fish does in water. The Lion's also has the ability to fuse into one huge lion when the lions fuse they have to be fully destoryed or they can regenerate from the costing the user - 20 charka
Note:Can only be used 2 per battle
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|Approved|
Edit to say if the lions combined it can only be used once per battle.


(Fuuinjutsu: Kursai Olympia) - Sealing Technique: Chain's Of Olympia
Rank :S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The User performs a series of handsigns then 4 Golden spots appear in the ground then 4 chain's shoot out of the ground an wrap around both arms an legs then restrain the opponent for one turn.An Seals the opponents charka for one turn
Note:Only Last one turn
Note:can only be used 2 per battle
Note: The Chains are unbreakable
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|Declined|

(Katon:Kouen Harumagedon)-Fire Style:Flaming Armageddon
Type:Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:90
Description:First the user focus pure fire charka into his/her hands then the user hands catch fire then while the user hands are on fire he/she performs some hand sign then releases a huge blast of fire from both hands.
Note: Only usable once per battle
Note:both blastes dont have to to be released at the same time nor do they have to be released in the same direction
Note:This is a HUGE Release of fire both blasts are the size of the jutsu Kazuku used from his mask
Note:No Fire Jutsu for 3 turns after use

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|Declined|
make s rank and resubmit.

 

[volcomguts]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This Is My Resubmit With Corrections

(Sumi Youshiki: Chuusen Bakuyaku)- Ink Style: Drawing Explosive
Type:Attack
Rank:C
Range: Short-Long Range
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:30
Description: The user can draw either small animals such as beatles or giant animals such as lions to match the explosive powers. these images must be drawn on some sort of canvas whether it be a scroll or a tag or even a fan. after giving the appropriate hand signs the animal will be summoned and at that point the user must perform one last handsign to make the animal explode. the user may control where the animal goes but depending on the size of the image he must put more chakra.
NOTE: Can only be used by Ink Users.
NOTE: Can only be used by Sai.
NOTE: Must be drawn with chakra infused ink such as the kind that Sai uses.

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|Approved|

 

[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Next one in my series of sword jutsu !!!

Kenjutsu no Kaito : Pegasus ( Sword Style of the Emperor : Pegasus )
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: To perform this technique, the user points their sword at the opponent. Almost immediately, the user dashes forward in a straight line at high speed ( much as if the user is on a conveyor belt, but faster - there is no movement of legs , only body as a whole ). The user is surrounded by wind travelling at high speeds to a distance of about two metres, in much the same shape as a comet ( with the user in the head of the comet shaped wind ) which slices any physical objects that touch it. Due to the wind travelling at high speeds, just beneath the wind is a layer of vacuum, though this has no offensive application whatsoever. Because of the wind surrounding the user, the impact of this technique does not leave a stab wound, but rather blows a large chunk of the object away, as if hit by a large beam of energy. The user, after the point of impact, continues on for another five or six metres before stopping due to the high speeds. Once the user stops, the wind dissipates into weak blades that spread out 360 degrees.
This move does 15 damage to the user whether successful or not due to the strain caused on the user's body.

And then

Kinjutsu : Haikkekaku Fuuin ( Forbidden Technique : Consumption Seal )
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: On Self
Chakra: 50
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses all their life essence into one spot on their body, creating a seal there, which looks like three snakes in a circle with a six pronged star in the middle. This means that if the user is hit in any other place of their body, their body will regenerate its wounds and the user will not die. However, if the opponent so much as touchesthe seal, the user will die - even from a D ranked jutsu or a simple punch hitting the seal. Even if the user attempts to hide this seal by an armour, the seal will shine through the armor, and touching the armour at that point will kill the user. However, if suppose the seal is on the user's arm and the user cuts off their arm so that the seal is split in two, the user will not be vulnerable to the effects of the seal, but will lose their arm. Unfortunately, to prevent a person from being practically immortal by forming it on the arm and cutting their arm off, the seal always forms on the middle of the torso, because there is almost no way for the user to cut their torso into half without dying.This jutsu takes 25 chakra per turn, and the user loses 15 health per turn.

 

[Azaghast]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

My version of swordfighting

Kenjutsu no Ryoku : Akasou ( Sword Style of Power : Red Monk )
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user points at the opponent's body with a sword. Then, a huge figure of a monk made out of fire is visible behind the enemy. As this figure forms, a huge blast of hot chakra blows the opponent to the monk figure, who grabs the opponent between two burning hands, before collapsing in a huge wave of flame on the opponent. As the opponent is burning in the wave of fire, the user moves there at high speed and slashes the opponent repeatedly.
-Does 20 damage to user
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Can be used by Azaghast
Co-creator: Emperor