[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Kagutsuchi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name:Genjutsu: Pee-O-No Jutsu
Requirement: Sharingan + Water Element
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra: 40 + 20 = 60
Damage: N/A
Description: User Puts his opponent in a genjutsu where the user thinks he is in toilet and peeing, to make it further convincing, user makes the environment cold using water element and makes the Air full of moisture. Water Dripping Sound is also produced to induce pee. This jutsu lasts few seconds and opponent Pees. Pee-ing is unavoidable and Makes the opponent Embarrassed. Genjutsu wears off as soon as Opponent has pee'd.

~Declined~ Any jutsu that make a farce out of the CJ thread will be declined. Please refrain from posting such technique in the future.

 

[Vroqrak]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Tsuki Manako) - Moon Eye

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Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage: 80 (-10 to user)
Description: The Moon-Eye is a spiritual and a mythical sword lost in the History and very special due to its unique ability.It has a layer of wind around it, when charged with chakra and can destroy trees by in a sword slash. The fuuton layer around the sword can create tornadoes and swipe out the opponents flying in the air without even requiring the sword to touch it. Since it conducts all elemental nature, when an opponents even attacks with fire nature to destroy the native wind, the sword takes the form of a fire sword.
Note: Can only create tornadoes twice
Summoning the sword counts as a move
Once summoned, the sword cannot be returned and does -10 to user per turn
Can only be used by pradattauchiha or those worthy enough

~Declined~ Swords shooting elemental blast (or tornadoes for that matters) are banned from this thread. Too many were made already. Also, destroying trees in a sword slash while not touching them falls in the category I've mentioned above.

(Mashin Tougyo) - Unholy control

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Type: Supplementary/Weapon
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Damage: N/A (-30 to user)
Description: Among the most unholy techniques, the Devil control or Unholy control was a result of the sealing of the most unholy people and techniques. The remains of the people/techniques resulted of gathering of strong yet dark chakra and started gathering force till it was deducted in the form of this mask. The mask can be wore by the user to increase the power of (+20)Ninjutsu and (+20)Taijutsu to the next level. Most A-Rank techs become S-Rank due to this mask. This mask acts much like a curse mark but causes greater damage and pain to user.(-30 from activation)
Note: ~Summoning the mask counts as a turn~
~The mask lasts for 5 turns~
~ After the mask is dissummoned, the user can peform only 2 moves per turn~
~Can only be wore by pradattauchiha~

~Declined do not resubmit~ 3 things. It was done before. Bleach techniques were submitted so many times I can't even remember them all. This technique is a variation of a curse mark and is hence forbidden (also the ability given are OP).

(Katon: Toko Itami)- Endless Pain
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus katon chakra in the hand and then turns them into ash while making physical contact with the opponent so that the ash sticks in certain part of the body that can be burned as per the user's wish. This technique is similar to Hidan's ritual but this technique is elemental and only causes burns
Note: ~Can be used twice~
~only used by pradattauchiha~

Feel Free To Edit

~Pending~ I really don't see how this technique is similar to Hidan's ritual, and in general, the description is sketchy. Re-submit with proper description (please don't come to my profile to clarify your technique, do so in your resubmission).

 

[Roger23]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton/Katon: makai nigiri)-Earth/Fire :Hells Grip
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Requirements: Must Know Earth and Fire A-ranks
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30 (+ 15 per turn active)
Damage Points:60 (+10 per turn)
Description:User performs 6 handseals and slams his hands on the ground. Chains made out of solid earth and blazing hot will wrap themselves around the oppoenents body. The chains will hold the enemy in place and since the chains are extremely hot. The chains will severly burn the opponent. The user must continue to send his chakra into the chains in order for it to continue to hold the oppoenent. The opponent will be in extreme pain.

~Note: can only be used once
~Note: Can only be taught by Roger23
~Note: The user most keep his hands in the ground for the chains to be active
~Note: Cant be used by clones

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~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

 

[Serpent]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kinjutsu Katon: Hinote Doki) Forbidden Fire Art: Infernal Wrath
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
Description: The user makes one hand seal holding it as he charges his Katon Chakra, A symbolic ring of flame will form around a mid range area with the user in the center. The user will then rise his hands in the air releasing the Chakra in an all out blaze. anyone within the ring will be burned as columns of Flame rise from underneath them. Because of the intense heat the user will be chard causing damage upon himself.
Notes:
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Must have Mastered Fire Element.
-No S-ranked or above Fire Next 2 turns.
-Must Charge for 10 seconds.
-User takes 30 damage.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

~Declined~ I'm ready to accept this one, even though a somewhat similar technique already exist, but you'll need to work the restrictions. -30 damages means nothing to me, and you should know that it doesn't affect you in a battle whatsoever. I want real physical damages from using this technique (unable to move, dizziness, burnt limb making them useless...etc).

(Ken-Doujutsu: Abunai Kizu) Saber Eye Art: Critical Slash
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Using their Sharingan, the user will pinpoint the most critical attack point on the opponent slashing them with their blade which is charged with chakra, once the opponent is sliced the Chakra will be released acting as an "Intruder". This causes the opponents Chakra to concentrate on the point of attack, making it so the opponent is unable to gather enough chakra for powerful attacks of S-rank or higher.
Note:
-Requires an Uchiha bio with 3t Sharingan.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Last 2 turns.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

~Declined~ Your chakra isn't white blood cells , I see no reason why your opponent's chakra would be dragged toward the wound. Unless there's some form of fuinjutsu placed when you slash your opponent, this technique won't work.

(Kin-Kenjutsu: Klen Doki) Forbidden Saber Art: Slicing Wrath
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
Description: The user dashes at the opponent as he charges chakra into his blade. he will then unleash a fury of overwhelming strikes and slashes at the opponent that appear as a blur that only Doujutsu can track, dicing the opponent. Because of focused amount of chakra in the blade, this attack is able to cut through Steal and even the Bone of an Kaguya. however, because of the speed and strain on the user, he will be left feeling drained.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Must have Mastered Kenjutsu.
-No S-ranked or above Next turn.
-No Kenjutsu next 3 turns
-User takes 30 damage.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

~Declined~ Why is this even forbidden-rank? Also, I'll be leaving this technique to mugi once you resubmit, he's the Kaguya expert here

 

[Awesome Face]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Silver Dust History: History: is the name of the weapon created by sasori and used by the Fourth Kazekage. Due to the magnetic properties of silver, small particles of it could be manipulated in a similar manner to that of the sand utilized by Shukaku's jinchūriki, through the Kazekage's Magnet Release kekkei genkai. sasori created this technique after capturing and killing the third kazekage. though, he he tried mixing silver powder and sand together, but the outcome was not as expected. the sand was to heavy and could not be manipulated properly. he later saw the fourth kazekage manipulate gold dust, in smaller particles and copied this method. it was success and proven very useful and easier to manipulate. before his death, the fourth kazekage found a large quantity of silver dust in a village that was destroyed ( from sasori 100 puppet army). he used this


( jiton: daiyamondo suna kusari )- Silver Dust Chain
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: Daiyamondo Suna usari is the first technique created for silver dust. This technique molds the user's silver dust into chains which, after materializing, can be used to bind the target.


(Jiton: daiyamondo suna sotetsu) - Silver Dust Weapons
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The User will causes a small quantity of Silver Dust to erupt from beneath the surface, by placing both of his palms onto the ground directly in front of him which the user can manipulate to make weopans and katanas


(Jiton: daiyumondo suna sendon ) - Silver Dust Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: the user forms an arch with the Silver Dust above their heads, then fires off dozens of harden silver dust balls at the enemy, in order to gain speed, they rotate very fast.

~All Declined~ This is considered a CE. In fact, silver already exist as a CE.

 

[Ushiro]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Jūden no Dangan)- Sniper Art: Bullet Circuit
Type: Attack
Rank: A-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 with clones)
Damage: 60 (+20 with clones)
Description: Several arrows surging with lightning energy are shot from the user's bow at high speed to accurately strike multiple targets. They each follow their own designated path and are seen as bright streaks of light, making them very difficult for non-doujutsu users to trace. Metal wires may be attached to and made more durable by the arrows' lightning so they could paralyze targets ensnared by them. When performed in collaboration with shadow clones, many additional arrows can be shot for a stronger attack.
-Usable 3 times per battle
-No S-rank or higher lightning techniques next turn
-Must have a bow

~Declined~ They should be easy to track if they're bright, take out the part about Doujutsu users having it easy and hard for non-Doujutsus. How many arrows can you shoot with this technique. Be precise in your resubmission.

Resubmitting:

(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Jūden no Dangan)- Sniper Art: Bullet Circuit
Type: Attack
Rank: A-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 with clones)
Damage: 60 (+20 with clones)
Description: Six arrows surging with lightning energy are shot from the user's bow at high speed to accurately strike multiple targets. They each follow their own designated path and are seen as bright streaks of light. Metal wires may be attached to and made more durable by the arrows' lightning so they could paralyze targets ensnared by them. When performed in collaboration with a minimum of 2 shadow clones, an additional 6 arrows can be shot by each clone for a stronger attack.
-Usable 3 times per battle
-No S-rank or higher lightning techniques next turn
-Must have a bow

~Approved~

New:

(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Sonikku Dangan) Sniper Art: Sonic Bullet
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: An arrow infused with large amounts of wind chakra is shot from a bow at a target. The base of the arrow releases a pressurized stream of wind that propells it at incredible speeds. This, plus the wind chakra, allows it to pierce through nearly anything in its path with enough force to rip off limbs. By holding a handseal, the arrow's flight may be controlled by releasing additional streams from the sides of the arrow and manipulating the initial stream.
-Usable 3 times per battle
-No S-rank wind jutsu can be used this turn or the next

~Declined~ Why would such a basic technique be S-rank? No free manipulation of the arrow, this would make it too similar to an existing technique. The arrow can't possibly pierce something of greater density (diamond, re-enforced kaguya bones, martensitic steel alloy...etc).

(Sogeki no Geijutsu: Jūdan no Arashi) Sniper Art: Bullet Storm
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming 2 handseals the user creates 300 physical copies of a single flying arrow that all scatter in every direction with the same momentum as the original. The downside to this technique is if the user cannot find cover he may be struck by his own arrows.
-Usable 4 times per battle

~Declined~ You can't leave the success of a technique up to chance, otherwise it's too easy to say: No arrow hit me, how lucky was I . Specify the direction and lower the arrow count.

 

[Kerrah]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Aardvark
Scroll Owner: Dawan
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

~Approved~ A description would've been nice.

 

[Hellsbadass]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Petto elemento ryuujin)- Summoning: pet element dragon god
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage: N/A
Description: The user summons a baby elemental dragon. these dragon are baby dragons so they aren't able to use any jutsus other than for blowing fire and flying.
there are baby dragons for every element. They are just personal summons and they are not be used in battle.

this is just meant for the rp and not for battles

~Approved~ Nice to see you in this thread Papi

 

[shadow1darkrasengun]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

TSUBAKI(中務 椿, Nakatsukasa Tsubaki)
Type:weapon
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:
Tsubaki can only assit black star in battle as a weapon. She can not use jutsu or any attacks unless in weapon form. She has the ability to transform into 5 different types of weapons, 1. Shuriken 2.Chain scythe 3. Ninja sword 4.Smoke bomb 5.Uncanny sword CENTER]

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Chain scythe mode gives him the ability to attack from a distance. And multiple angles and postions

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Smoke bomb mode is a distraction to escape from sticky situations

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Shuriken mode is a long range weapon that can be thrown from a distance

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Ninja sword mode is a blade half the size of a regular a sword.

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Uncanny sword mode is a regular length of a sword but its infused with shadow chakra making its apperance black. This mode increases Black Stars ablitiy to manipulate shadows granting him 5 plus damage using a shadow tech but the sword can not manipulate shadows on its own it only grants the user the +5 damage while the mode is active. But this mode drains his chakra and thus can only be used for 5 turns if it is used all 5 turns he will only be able to use B rank jutsu and lower for the remainder of the battle.
CHANGING MODES COUNTS AS ONE MOVE
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~Declined~ Check the bold part. We discussed this via PM.

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Kumori shikaku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Cloudy vision Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: A mere and simply earth technique. The user will either stomp, punch the ground or either form a single hand sign. Doing so a slight amount of earth particles, which is invisible for the naked eye, arises from the ground and at flies directly into the target's eyes, obiviously blinding the target temporary.

~Pending~ I'll need to talk this one over with you on msn.
~Declined~ Similar technique exists.

 

[Inch]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouton: Reitō haiki-Mono no Dansu)-Ice Release: Dance of the Frozen Wastes
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-20 to user due to chakra loss)
Description: The user will make three hand seals, and upon completing them, they release a great surge of ice chakra from their body. As the chakra leaves their body, they shall manipulate it so that the chakra takes on the shape of thousands of razor sharp, but small shards of ice. The shards of ice will move a short distance away from the user and form a bubble around themselves. If the user desires, the bubble does not have to be a full 360 degrees around themselves, thus, should they be standing on the ground, they are able to just have the bubble seemingly be right on top of the ground, rather then have it pass through it. This bubble will be several inches thick, and the shards of ice will be constantly moving around the edge of the bubble, thus giving the bubble a swirling appearance. Any normal object or person that comes into contact with the bubble will be cut to such a thorough level that it will appear as if the bubble ground the object/limb into nothingness (unless the object/limb is of a high enough rank that it is able to overpower the bubble), although the ice turns red due to the blood. By slightly altering the movement of the ice shards, the user is able to create small openings to allow themselves to see outside the bubble, as it is normally impossible to do so, unless one should have a byakugan. While this bubble is active, the user will be unable to perform any other jutsu. By making a single hand seal, the user is able to manipulate all of the shards in the bubble to move at a target with a high rate of speed and accuracy. When the shards are sent forth, they will part around the users body, thus leaving the user unharmed, and continuing on at the target. Should the target be hit by the shards, just as earlier stated, they shall be seemingly cut on such a thorough level that they appear to be ground into nothingness, although the ice turns red due to the blood. After travelling a mid range, the ice shards simply fade away into nothingness.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: After this technique is used, the user will be unable to perform any ice jutsu for full two turns.
Note: After this technique is used, the user will be unable to perform S-Rank or above water or wind jutsu for the following turn.
Note: After this technique, the user will be exhausted and will have slower reflexes the turn after it is used.
Note: The bubble can be active for a maximum of two turns, including the one it was created. If it is still active at the end of the second turn, it will simply fade away.
Note: Can only be taught by Inch.

~Declined~ Two things I need you to clarify in your resubmission: can you control the shards when you direct them at your opponent or will they fly toward him in a straight, unalterable line? Secondly, how could the shards destroy any object (or even your opponent) if their density is higher than the ice? Ice couldn't possibly cut through diamond or steel. Oh wait, one last thing, why is it forbidden? I see you've added a lot of restrictions, but the description of the technique doesn't explain why it should be forbidden...it doesn't seem to be dangerous for the user to use.

(Hyouton: Yuki no Suishin Gijutsu)-Ice Release: Snow Propulsion Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will stream chakra through their feet and into the snow they are standing on. They will then use their chakra to manipulate the snow so that it suddenly moves and pushes the user into the air at a great raid of speed. The user is able to control at which angle they are propelled, though they do have to be propelled in the air. To use this technique, the user must have a reasonable amount of snow to be standing on. For example, if the snow the user was created by snow falling from the sky, the ground must be effectively covered in snow: a slight dusting obviously won't work.

~Declined~ A similar technique already exist but with another element.

(Hyoton: Reitō no Kami no Hari Chiryō)-Ice Release: Acupuncture of the Frozen Gods
Type: Offensive
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user touches his index finger to his thumb and focuses their ice chakra between them, and creates a needle made of ice. The user then focuses a great surge of ice chakra into the needle, and manipulates the shape of the needle to rapidly elongate in a straight direction at a high speed. The tip of the needle is razor sharp, and the ice it is made out of is dense. Because it is a needle and is very thin, if the needle were to be pointed at someone since it was created, they would have no way of knowing it was there, unless they had a doujutsu or some other chakra sensing ability. Although the needle would normally be very brittle due to it's thinness, however, by infusing their ice chakra in the needle, the user is able to reinforce the needle so that it is extremely hard for the duration of the turn it was created, however, it is extremely brittle on all turns after this, and can be broken by C-Rank and up taijutsu attacks.
Note: On the turn after this jutsu is used, the user is unable to perform S-Rank or higher Ice jutsu, due to the amount of ice chakra used to surge the needle forward.
Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Only usable by Inch.

~Declined~ I still think you haven't fixed the problem presented by last mod who checked your CJ. Adding chakra isn't always the solution, sometime we need a logic reasoning behind the technique.

Resubmitting:

(Hyoton: Reitō no Kami no Hari Chiryō)-Ice Release: Acupuncture of the Frozen Gods
Type: Offensive
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user touches his index finger to his thumb and focuses their ice chakra between them, and creates a needle made of ice. The user then focuses a great surge of ice chakra into the needle, and manipulates the shape of the needle to rapidly elongate in a straight direction at a high speed. The tip of the needle is extremely pointy and sharp, thus allowing it to pierce skin/objects quite easily. Because it is a needle and is very thin, if the needle were to be pointed at someone since it was created, they would have no way of knowing it was there, unless they had a doujutsu or some other chakra sensing ability. Because the needle is very thing and made out of ice, it is very brittle. As a result of this, it is weaker when attacked from the side, and thus, when an object of B-Rank or above that has shattering capabilities (IE taijutsu, earth jutsu, anything that can shatter ice, really) hits it from the side, although this does not hold true if the object hits the needle head on.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Inch

I removed the first restriction, as I feel like the bolded part at the bottom makes it far less powerful. Feel free to edit any numbers/specifications on this if you think they're off. :\

~Declined~ I have one last problem with this technique...it's basically a one hit K.O if you don't have a doujutsu. It's fast, impossible to see, and let's face it, it won't make a whole lot of sound. You need to either take away that part or alter it (very hard to see, impossible to see when slightly dark outside...etc).

 

[This is my username]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton:Mizu Neko)-Water Release: Water Cat
Type:Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: User creates a cat from water. The cat will start meowing, annoying the opponent and also distracting him from the fight.
Note: Can be used only by This is my Username
Note: Can be used only 3 times in a battle.

~Approved~

 

[The Doctor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuton: Hito-gui jinshu) Wind release: Cannibalization
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing 12 handseals, the user manipulates a large area of wind from around the field into a large ball. He compresses the ball into a microscopic level, opens his mouth wide, bites down, and releases it, causing a massive explosion of wind to ensue, and leave a large crater in the ground in the area hit. Anything within short range of the explosion seems to have been "eaten" by the user.
Note: Can only be used by a master of wind
Note: IF the user is short range of the explosion, than he can harm himself as well.
Note: Can only be used by Doctor Kaguya

Note to the mods: What I mean by "eating" should look something like this:

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~Declined~ I can't approve that O__O, it's a mix between existing technique, it's OP (since there's basically no way of avoiding it unless you know what the technique does) and there's basically no restrictions.

 

[Gitanshu]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(chakra tsume) - chakra claw
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description- The user will quickly focus his chakra in his hand and will create claws in each of his hand this claw are very sharp and powerful and can pierce through anything thus granting him many power and thus grant the user to cut through B rank techniques the technique will still continue to move but by getting split by the claw and thus saving the user

~can only be used by Wolverine bio~
~can only be used by gitanshu and whom he allow ~
~no S rank techs till they are in play ~

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~Declined~ Cutting through anything? Cutting through B-ranks any times you want? With no restrictions on the time or usages? No.

(Raiton- maru) lightning sphere
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description- The user will quickly focus on his lightning chakra and quickly release it in front of him and quickly create a circle out of it in front of him which will be able to block earth base attack up to A rank because of elemental advantage and many spear like structure can emerge from it for attacking purpose which can reach upto mid range .
~can only be used by gitanshu and whom he allow ~
~no S rank techs in the same turn it is used and as well as no lightning base technique in the same turn~
~Must have mastered lightning~
~Can only be used 3 times~

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~Declined~ Similar techniques already exists.

(Katon- maru) Fire sphere
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description- The user will quickly focus on his fire chakra and quickly release it in front of him and quickly create a circle out of it in front of him which will be able to block Wind base attack up to A rank because of elemental advantage and many spear like structure can emerge from it for attacking purpose which can reach upto mid range .
~Can only be used 3 times~
~can only be used by gitanshu and whom he allow ~
~no S rank techs in the same turn it is used and as well as no fire base technique in the same turn~

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Please add any restriction if needed

~Declined~ Same as above.

 

[Alternative]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Yoshimitsu
Rank: A
Type: Puppet
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: - (30 to summon)
Damage Points: -
Description:
→ Yoshimitsu is a puppet created long ago by Alternative which has had many tweaks to it to make it a viable puppet. He takes on the form of a Samurai, though can't use Samurai techniques. It is primarily made of a sturdy wood, with pieces of refined metal across it's face, ribs and legs to imitate a skeletal look. It is slightly taller than the average human, standing tall at approx. 2m and seems to have an athletic build. It's left wrist is mechanical, being able to twirl it around in haste. In it's left hand it wields a katana which is his primary weapon used for attacking. The user is able to use Kenjutsu techniques through the puppet, so long as the user has gone through the required training for it. The katana is also said to be cursed. Yoshimitsu's sword isn't seeped in poison, because it's based on a samurai from ancient folklore, which doesn't believe in using such toxins in such a way. Yoshimitsu is also able to use all basic puppet techniques, including Senbon Rain from it's right hand (fingertips), creating a Chakra shield using it's right arm, and able to emit either poison smoke or poison capsules which emit gas on hitting the floor through a compartment in it's mouth.
Notes:
→ Yoshimitsu cannot be summoned into battle without proper Fuuinjutsu training
→ While wielding the katana, the puppet cannot use any standard puppet jutsu
→ Kenjutsu moves used through the puppet count as a move
→ Can only use Kenjutsu techniques up to A-Rank
→ Can only be used by those allowed by Alternative

Looks like this:

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~Approved~

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(Manji tonbo) - Manji Dragonfly
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
→ The user controls Yoshimitsu to holding it's sword so that the hilt is on a 90 degree angle with it's arm. By holding the sword up, the user makes Yoshimitsu jump into the air and spin it's sword using it's mechanical wrist, causing it to hover with ease for approx. 3 seconds. From there, the user controls Yoshimitsu to performing a downward slash onto the opponent, causing a major vertical severing.
Notes:
→ Must know Puppet Jutsu
→ Can only be used with a Yoshimitsu puppet
→ Because of chakra strain, this can only be used thrice in battle
→ Can only be used once every two turns
→ Can only be used by those Alternative allows

~Approved~
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(Harakiri) - Disembowelment
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
→ Once Yoshimitsu draws close to the opponent, with great speed, it turns backwards and stabs the opponent through itself. Through stabbing itself in this way, Yoshimitsu hits a poison gland built into the puppet, intoxicating the opponent upon puncturing them.
Notes:
→ Must know Puppet Jutsu
→ Can only be used by a Yoshimitsu puppet
→ Because of the effect, this can only be used once a battle
→ After usage, poison cannot be used throughout it's weapons for the remainder of the match
→ The puppet is left extremely weakened after this, only to be allowed to use B-Rank and lower puppet jutsu
→ Can only be used by those Alternative allows



Feel free to edit however you wish. ^^

~Approved~ I can't remember the last time I approved 3 out of 3 submissions. Congrats ^^

:izuna:

 

[La Espada]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kusabana Touken)-Flower swords
Rank: B
Range: Short
Type: Attack/Defence
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
The two flower swords are two special swords who are made to the great warrior "Rose Blade" shanks. When Shanks died the swords where passed on to his son, "Rose Blade" Vista. The two swords may look normal, but they are all other then that. The Rose swords are made in that way that when elemental chakra has been channeled trough it doesn't just react as normal swords, instead it produces flowers. The strength and type of flowers depends on what type of chakra gets channeled trough it. Three different elements can be channeled trough the swords, and that's Fire, Lightning and Water.

-When water is channeled trough the swords, they will create large flowers that can be used to guard against incoming kunais or taijutsu attacks. The large flowers are dripping wet due to the water so they are able to guard against C-Ranked fire attacks.
-When lightning is channeled trough the swords, they will create sharp and fast rose leafs that can be sent piercing against an opponent.
-When fire is channeled trough the sword, they will create burning leaves that can be sent against an opponent. The leafs will burn away after one round, but if they hit they leave great damage.

~Note: Must have a Vista bio
~Note 2: To use the special abilities Vista must use jutsus that counts as 1/3 moves pr. Turn (read jutsu under this one to understan better)

~Declined~ This is no different than any other elemental blast shot out of a sword, you simply shaped it as flowers. There's only the water one who could be accepted, but you'd need to elaborate on the defense in general, I'm not sure I understand where the flower appears and how it defends you.

(Ro-zo Tatsumaki)-Rose Tornado
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Type: Attack
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Vista will channel lightning chakra into his two flower swords and as he slash against an opponent with them he releases the chakra along with 100 small rose leafs. The leafs are small but very sharp due to the ligthning, and they move in a big and round tornado. The tornado is made in that way that it's powers are weakened as it reaches longer distant, so when it reaches long-range they do almost no damage to the opponent on impact. They are therefore strongest at short-range. The rose blades will also paralyze everyone that gets hit by them.
~Note: Must have a Vista bio

(Giganto Kusabana)-Giant flowers
Rank: B
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
While holding the flower swords, Vista will channel lots of water chakra into them. When the swords are filled with chakra, Vista performs a slash with the swords, and creates giant flowers that's soaked in water. The flowers can't move nor be used as an attack against the opponent, all they can do is guard against incoming attacks. The flowers can guard against fire attacks due to all the water, and they can guard against bombs and kunais. The flowers will not dissapear from the field unless they are destroyed. This flower reacts to water that way that it absorbs water that's from B-Rank and below, and it uses that water to grow. If the water is stronger the flowers will die due too to much water at one time.
~Must have a Vista bio
~Can only be used 3 times each battle

~Both Declined~ The swords weren't approved.

 

[Bad Luck Brian]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Cassowary
Scroll Owner: Kyuubisan
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: JinsoAkuma (Will add if approved)
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: I will add them if approved
Description:
Those who sign this contract must get this tattoo on their upper right bicep:

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~Approved~

(Suiton:Mizu no hakai) - Water Style: Water Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers their Suiton chakra and forms countless numbers of small water pellets in a disconnected 6 foot wall in front of them. They then release them at their opponent, like the water bullet technique, only many more water bullets.
-Must be a Hozuki member to use this
~can only be taught by Kyuubisan
~can only be used 2 per battle

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

(Jigoku no ringu)- Ring of Hell
Type: Weapon
Rank: A-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40-50
Damage:
Description: The user will wear a ring on his or her right hand. The ring is locked with a tremendous amount of chakra that only certain users may be capable of harnessing. The chakra is a different color then the normal blue it is a metallic color looking almost silvery. It is a black color though it is made from tungsten one of the strongest metals around.
-A ranked
Chakra cost: (40)
Range: Depends on the weapon used
(Short term) Weapon creation
The user may manipulate the chakra to make it into almost any weapon ie. Sword, flail, bullet (not gun just the bullet), and any other imaginable (that is allowed by NB’s rules)
Short term Restrictions
~When in use (Weapons actually being used) other jutsus can not be used
-S ranked
(Semi-long term) Chakra infusion (After use the user loses 20 health and 20 chakra plus an additional 50)
The ring is said to be made from the pits of hell and when worn by the user it was made for (Kyuubisan) and when worn long enough the chakra of the user and the rings chakra will combine making the user capable of using one super charged attack before the user reverts back to a weakened state of their original state. (Attack doubles in strength and size using 20 of the users main chakra and depleting the rings chakra)
Semi-long term restrictions
~Once the user reverts back to a weakened state it takes 3 turns for the users ring to come back to full strength
~The user may only use Semi-long term form once
~It takes 2 turns for the ring to go from short term to long term

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(May only be used by Kyuubisan)

~Declined~ I didn't even read it. If you submit techniques that can be used on different rank, they count as two different technique and I want them submitted individually. Let this be your warning, next time you do this you'll be banned from this thread if you exceed your 3 CJ submission a week.

 

[aradmehr]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuton: Tatsumaki)-Wind release: Tornado shield(No Japanese name for shield)
Type: Defensive but can damage the opponent if He/She gets caught in it
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60(If the opponent gets caught in it)
Description: The user performs two handseals and wind starts to spin around the opponent at a very fast speed like a not moving tornado however this protects the user from above as well due to the very fast speed of the wind and can even protect the user from a small to medium explosion.
~This jutsu can only protect the user against weapons,taijutsu and up to D rank jutsus and not any other jutsus.
~The user cannot perform another wind style jutsu for two turns.
~Can only be used by the people aradmehr allows to use.
~Can also defend against jutsus that throw things like sand needles,sand shuriken,wind demon wind shuriken etc. that are from D-rank to A-rank.

~Declined~ This technique doesn't make any sense. You create the wind around your opponent, yet you're protected from above? Re-read yourself, the description is a mess.

(Kibaku kage bunshin no jutsu)Exploding shadow clone jutsu.
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: (When it explodes it will cause 40 damage to the person that is caught in it)
Description: The user creates a shadow clone and it can do anything a shadow clone can do and when hit will poof away however these clones have a self destruction ability that when they self destruct they will explode,causing a small to medium explosion(Depends on the number of clones made)And will cause damage to anyone that is caught in it.But the self destruct ability is only activated when the user performs one handseal and activates the self destruct ability.
~Can only be used thrice per battle.
~If the user has performed 3 bunshin or kage bunshin jutsus already he/she may not use this jutsu until the end of the battle.
~Each time the user performs this jutsu,he/she can make from 1 to 3 at a time.
~When self destruct ability is activated the clone will explode if hit.
~Must have the permission of aradmehr to be used.

~Declined~ This is an already existing cannon. If you knew that and still did this similar a technique I could ban you from this thread for a week. Let this be a warning, never re-submit already existing cannon techniques.

(Raiton: Denkou Henkai no jutsu)Lighting release: Lightning transformation jutsu
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Description: This jutsu allows the user to transform into lightning and avoid 1 or 2 enemy attacks(Only if the attacks were at the same time this jutsu can avoid both)And this jutsu is activated by performing one handseal and allows the user to transform into lightning for 10 seconds maximum.
~This jutsu can only be done twice per battle.
~If the user has already performed the substitusion jutsu this jutsu can only be used once until the end of the battle.
~Must have permission from aradmehr to be used.
~After transforming into lightning,the user can move at the maximum of 8 meters to a side(if He/she wants to).
~This jutsu cannot harm the opponent if reaches him/her.

~Declined do not resubmit~ Elemental transformations are banned from this thread.

 

[Icemyster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Moth Of Salvation(ga-gedatsu)
Rank-S
Type-Weapon/Summon
Range-Short/Mid
Chakra-40(-5 per turn)
Damage-80
Description-
The user applies a small amount of chakra to his/her Mark of the Monarch tattoo (owned by anyone who has signed the Moth summoning contract) and the user summons the Moth of Salvation, a four foot long moth, that can freely transform into a large four foot long trident. While summoned the Moth can pinpoint the opponent and type of chakra being used. If the User's Chakra flow is altered, the moth can inject small amounts of chakra into the user.
-Can only use abilities 5 times per battle.
-Must be taught by Icemyster

~Declined~ No sensory abilities/summons are allowed anymore. Check Zen's last post here.

 

[House]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

it's been a week.

(Juho Tsuin Raino no Ashi) Gentle Step Twin Rhino Feet
Rank: S
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Similar to (Jūho Sōshiken) – Gentle Step Twin Lion Fists, the user forms two large rhino head-shaped shrouds of chakra around their leg, enabling the user to kick through even against Doton techniques.
Note:
~Can be used 4x
~Must be taught by Dr. House
~Must master and have a great control over Jyuuken
~Only may sannin use this.

~Declined~ "through even against Doton techniques", to what extent can this be applied? Can you break through S-rank Doton? I'd like to remember you (and anyone reading this), that raw chakra is weaker than elemental chakra. If you'd like some clarification on that, come to my profile.

(Doton/Suiton:Hebi no hōkō) Earth and Water Release: Roar of a Lion
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: As the user forms 2 hand seals and slams his hand on the ground, a giant 8 by 10 meter wide lion head will erupt from the ground under the enemy. As the lion has erupted from the ground as its beginning to close its giant mouth on the enemy, water will erupt from the lion's mouth in order to entrap the enemy in water, then the lion will entrap the opponent in its mouth. As the enemy got entrapped within its mouth, the lion will smash itself into the ground, destroying itself and anything trapped within it. The water will entrap the enemy, and right after that, the lion will close its mouth. Despite the size of the lion, the lion will be able to reach into the skies, and the user may only use it within Mid-Long range.
Notes:
~Can be used twice
~Can be taught by Dr. House
~higher then S-ranked earth can't be done in the same/next turn.
~Must master Earth
~Doujutsu may see it

~Declined~ Okay, two things: reaching into the skies? How far are you referring to? Then, you can't use two elements in one move unless you've undergone Yin Yang training. Did you?

(Hakke Chakurasutorīmu Gijutsu ) 8 Trigrams Chakra Stream Techniques
Rank: S
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 See Notes)
Damage Points: 80 (-10 to user)
Description: This jutsu is basically the same concept as "Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms" as it is made up of the same ability, but it for example could take shape of a Lion, or even a wall made of constant excertion of chakra stream. From years of training, the user had came to master the flexibility of the arms and as the user is emiting a constant stream of chakra from his palm, as because of the hyuuga's hand movement is extremely fast (his movements becomes a blur), with extreme precise, the user will be able to create a figure like lion, or even a simple wall.
Note:
~Can be used 3x
~This is an extremely difficult technique, and only sannin, and master of Jyuuken may perform this, who had their bio for over 3 months as of the mastery of Gentle fist with it.
~ The +5 is because of the extreme/precise chakra maneuvering.
~ No Gentle fist may be performed for the same and next turn.
~ The user takes -10 Health because of the extreme shaping of figures.

Note for checker: Basically the texture of the jutsu will look like this. As you see a barrier here, imagine this barrier to be shaped of a wall or a head of a lion, made of that texture.

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Note to checker: I was thinking to made this a style of gentle fist, and then branch off different techniques out of it, like a dome or a wall. What do you think?

~Pending~ I like the general concept, though I wouldn't extend it to a taijutsu style. First of all, why does this technique do 80 damages? It's originally meant to be a defensive technique and can push back an enemy when he hit it directly, but it shouldn't be considered as strong as an offensive jutsu. I'm ready to accept the 80 damage if you explain why in the resubmission.