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I totally need an icon for my elements @_@

Awesome biography, Caliburn. The history was epic and had a realistic feel to it. You did well to incorporate each of your experiences and interactions with people very personal and meaningful. And also, awesome format (very vivid and lively yet historical and relic) Absolutely stunning.
Well yeah I've been checking bio's for months now. So I took all the aspects I liked and used them into my bio. Considering I just didn't want a long bio, like my previous update, but also a bio that people would enjoy to read, the bio must look like it's easy to read. For that you need to use some optical tricks like making the bio overall pleasing to the eye and drawing the people's attention by posting pictures on good places. I made it so that the pictures in the history have a pattern. This way I also didn't need to post anymore pictures elsewhere.

Most of the time people post pictures in countless spoilers, but that ruins it. I noticed that in my previous update.

Overall I see it as a zipper. I competely merged the OP world and the Naruto world together without having them contradict each other.

May i ask who was that one person you faced?
That was a long long time ago in Goro's EIG tournament xd all my other battles were never finished :p

Hmm, the pictures you have of your swords could use some work. They don't flow well together.
Overall, this is a great bio, the green flows surprisingly well with the blue. The three songs in quick succession could be presented better, maybe some spoiler-tags? Depends on how you want it, naturally.
There is nothing wrong with those pictures, they are the best pictures in existence of Zoro's swords. In fact several of them are from the same maker. And multiple weapons rarely flow together.
And the songs are perfect. I refuse to use there spoilers. If you use to many spoilers, you ruin the bio. I've seen people posting humongous titles for Ninjutsu, Genjutsu etc. and then just say mastered in a spoiler tag. As a result their entire bio is full of tags. Such bio's are just ugly.

Also the color of the vids go perfectly with the rest of the bio and the white background. In a spoiler tag the background has another color. You said my swords didn't had flow. Well it would be the same if I would place those vids in a spoiler tag. It would ruin it. Now it looks like a screen build right into my bio.

Though that's my opinion, however Rei, who was the proof reader, said she liked it too.

Lmao. This made me laugh ._.

And I'm not sure if the word excellent begins to describe this bio.
When you said that your update would shake the foundations, I had no idea..... *Gets mind f**ked and dies*
You have no idea what kinda stuff I pulled off xd

Abyss got approved :T_T:

:crazy:
Yezzzzzzzz, though on the condition that Gobi and I can't take students :rolleyes:
 

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That was a long long time ago in Goro's EIG tournament xd all my other battles were never finished :p

Yezzzzzzzz, though on the condition that Gobi and I can't take students :rolleyes:
I remember I won that tournament xd

Nooooooooooooooooooo... I wanted to be a part of that CE :( I asked as soon as it was submitted... darn it..
 

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who's bio is more epic, yours or Mugi's O_O....I wonder
Well I find mine better, but that's just my own very subjective personal opinion xd

I remember I won that tournament xd

Nooooooooooooooooooo... I wanted to be a part of that CE :( I asked as soon as it was submitted... darn it..
Em that tournament never finished. Goro went inactive before the final fights. There were still 3 people left and he already decided that you would be one of the two persons who would get 8IG considering you had done the most fights.

As I recall don't you already have 4 CE?
 

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Well I find mine better, but that's just my own very subjective personal opinion xd



Em that tournament never finished. Goro went inactive before the final fights. There were still 3 people left and he already decided that you would be one of the two persons who would get 8IG considering you had done the most fights.

As I recall don't you already have 4 CE?
I found out that I was put as Co-creator on Temperature long after it was approved. o_o I didn't even know there was a temperature, so yeah :p I'd be willing to get rid of that one for Abyss >_>..
 

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Go ahead, I don't mind. Contrary to popular believe I don't have much suck ups...though the people who I banned or the people I gave a wallie as a present often flame me for some reason :rolleyes:
Well in that case, very nice bio. :) I love those CE icons. Too bad Abyss isn't available to teach. =/
 

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Looks is done, the only thing left is personality and the History, It's epic, and awesome. Loved the part 'As a result Zoro keeps that eye most of the time closed, even though the eye is still there in its socket,....
just because it's über badass'
. U_U

This biography makes me re-watch OP all over again :T_T:

Overall, 'Epicness' is an suitable name for this biography.
 

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This is the work of a god.

How long did it take?
Well I started working on it on the 17th of August. It has been ready for over a month now, thouh I posted it just now as my Abyss Release got approved yesterday.

So you could say I worked on it really for a month, however you need to know I just did that in pieces. For instance the first day I decided how the title and the banner should look like. Another day I added the vids I wanted etc.

I just worked on it when I had some free time, most people make their bio in one go.
 
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