I totally need an icon for my elements @_@
Awesome biography, Caliburn. The history was epic and had a realistic feel to it. You did well to incorporate each of your experiences and interactions with people very personal and meaningful. And also, awesome format (very vivid and lively yet historical and relic) Absolutely stunning.
Well yeah I've been checking bio's for months now. So I took all the aspects I liked and used them into my bio. Considering I just didn't want a long bio, like my previous update, but also a bio that people would enjoy to read, the bio must look like it's easy to read. For that you need to use some optical tricks like making the bio overall pleasing to the eye and drawing the people's attention by posting pictures on good places. I made it so that the pictures in the history have a pattern. This way I also didn't need to post anymore pictures elsewhere.
Most of the time people post pictures in countless spoilers, but that ruins it. I noticed that in my previous update.
Overall I see it as a zipper. I competely merged the OP world and the Naruto world together without having them contradict each other.
May i ask who was that one person you faced?
That was a long long time ago in Goro's EIG tournament xd all my other battles were never finished
Hmm, the pictures you have of your swords could use some work. They don't flow well together.
Overall, this is a great bio, the green flows surprisingly well with the blue. The three songs in quick succession could be presented better, maybe some spoiler-tags? Depends on how you want it, naturally.
There is nothing wrong with those pictures, they are the best pictures in existence of Zoro's swords. In fact several of them are from the same maker. And multiple weapons rarely flow together.
And the songs are perfect. I refuse to use there spoilers. If you use to many spoilers, you ruin the bio. I've seen people posting humongous titles for Ninjutsu, Genjutsu etc. and then just say mastered in a spoiler tag. As a result their entire bio is full of tags. Such bio's are just ugly.
Also the color of the vids go perfectly with the rest of the bio and the white background. In a spoiler tag the background has another color. You said my swords didn't had flow. Well it would be the same if I would place those vids in a spoiler tag. It would ruin it. Now it looks like a screen build right into my bio.
Though that's my opinion, however Rei, who was the proof reader, said she liked it too.
Lmao. This made me laugh ._.
And I'm not sure if the word excellent begins to describe this bio.
When you said that your update would shake the foundations, I had no idea..... *Gets mind f**ked and dies*
You have no idea what kinda stuff I pulled off xd
Abyss got approved :T_T:
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Yezzzzzzzz, though on the condition that Gobi and I can't take students
