[Predictions] 616 Prediction [Spoilers]

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Hinata and Naruto charge with a new made attack called "Naruto and Hinata's Kurama Rasengan" at the Juubi about to fire another sphere into the battlefield.They jump and direct the rasengan at the sphere which releases instantly.Suddenly everything lights up and everyone covers their eyes.Obito glares at the direction of the light with an angered face,while Madara looks at Obito with an emoitonless face.He thinks to himself "He is not giving up!".The light dissappears and reveals a hopeful image.The Juubi's arm-tails were cut-off because of the large impact between the sphere and the rasengan.A loud roar is heard from the Juubi as everyone yells in an excited mood.Hinata and Naruto land on the ground as Hinata smiles at Naruto and thinks back to the time she was pursuing him and now she finally reaches his hand and then squints her eyes as her smile grows longer.Naruto looks at her wondering what happened.She says it's nothing.Obito snaps from his thoughts and sees they're distracted.Naruto says "Okay,we don't have time to waste!I have a plan!".Hinata answers "What is it?".He thinks for a moment and says "We need to target Madara.Kakashi-sensei will take care of the other guy!".Hinata nods and replies "Right."They proceed on as Naruto makes two kage-bunshins-one to distract the Juubi and the other to help Kakashi out against Obito.Then they make another rasengan and jump to Madara.As he sees the upcoming enemy,he aims at them with his hand as a sign he will perform Shinra Tensei.They still proceed on,but to no avail.The force from the Shinra Tensei is far too strong and pushes them back.They crash to the ground and the rasengan explodes in their hands.Naruto and Hinata are separated.Obito says "We've got them separated.Now it's our chance!"Obito activates his MS as tough going to the other dimension and then performs a swirling fire technique pointing at Hinata.To be continued...
 
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you never learn to skip lines in first grade did you?
 

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Well take your time and read it.I put some effort you know.
 

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Hmm Kurama Rasengan..
 

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The Juubi's arm-tails were cut-off because of the large impact between the sphere and the rasengan.A loud roar is heard from the Juubi as everyone yells in an excited mood

Underestimate Juubi more please lol.

Anyway good try.
 

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Ok,what is with this "I read the first word and hated it!" Have some respect!I didn't make it for the Emmys here,I made it for plain entertainment,nothing more-nothing less.
 

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You guys read the first words/lines?

My eyes were already burning by a single glance at the wall of text

I'm amazed
 

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it was fun to read
sorry about all the other comments people put
i can't see how people can be rude to someone they don't even know
 

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your retarded
 

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That's what I'm talking about.I don't make it for the aplauds or for grammatical correction,I make it for entertainment (that means fun)
 

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The first line sounds like a name the wonder twins would use for a power.
 

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I admit.I admit.I don't handle criticism that well,but whatevs.I bet I can handle THIS.
 
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