[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Vex]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

~Resubmitting~

Summoning Boss Ace
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:Ace is a fire type warrior fossa. He is the boss of all Fossa, and he is about the size of an elephant . He can use S rank and below fire jutsu, but he can use S rank jutsu once per battle. Ace like all other fossa has very good night vision, and has a flame colored pelt which makes it hard to be stealthy in most enviorments. Ace also has claws, as sharp as a kunai which can be used to claw an opponent. Ace is very confident in his abilites, and loves to prove himself against stronger opponents. Unlike other Fossa, Ace cannot use wind jutsu

Strenths and Weaknesses​

• No wind jutsu the turn he is summoned
• Must have signed the fossa contract and have been taught to use.
• Summon lasts 4 turns
• Can only be summoned once per battle.
• Any move A rank or above Ace uses counts as a move I used as well.
• Can only be taught by PresidentBush
• His pelt is very tough, it takes a direct hit of A rank or above to disperse him
  [*]Ace can channel flame chakra into his teeth that can break through defences B rank and below.
  [*]Ace can fire a blast of A rank long range flames

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Calling Nimbus
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description: Long ago, a man named Gohan condensed all the water molecules from a cloud so that a person could sit on it. He then poured in so much of his chakra into the cloud that he died. He did this so that it could become his perfect weapon, sadly it failed. Nimbus is a yellow cloud which can be called when the user says "Hey Nimbus!". After the user says it, the yellow cloud flies to the user with great speed. The cloud can then be used for the user to fly, or to do battle. Nimbus can also release a cloud of gas, which causes the opponent to be caught in a A rank genjutsu. The genjutsu makes the user think that he is rapidly falling from the sky. The user is unaffected by the cloud, due to being on top of nimbus, while the cloud is below.

~Note~

Nimbus can only be called once per battle
+15 damage to all suiton attacks (with the exception of forbidden ranks)
User must be on top of Nimbus for him to use his Genjutsu Gas, or for the boost to suiton attacks to take effect.
Nimbus only lasts for 5 turns.
No one else can ride Nimbus except for PresidentBush
Genjutsu gas reaches up to mid range and can only be used once.

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Summoning Borsalino
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:Borsalino is a fossa about the size of TonTon. He is quite cheeky about his size, and hates being called short. Borsalino has extraordinary eyesight, he is able to see chakra itself being a sensory type animal. He is also able to use Earthstyle up to A rank having an Earth affinity. Borsalino due to his size disperses after any kind of weak attack (a punch, kick, kunai, etc). Borsalino will sit on the user's shoulders, and is able to weave handseals. Borsalino can use one S rank earth jutsu per battle.

Restrictions:

~Stays in battle for 4 turns~
~Disperses if he is hit with any kind of weak attack~
~Any jutsu used by him A rank or above counts as a move by me~
~Must have signed Fossa contract to use~
~Summoned only once per battle~

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Summoning Borsalino
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:Borsalino is a fossa about the size of TonTon. He is quite cheeky about his size, and hates being called short. He is also able to use Earthstyle up to A rank having an Earth affinity. Borsalino due to his size disperses after any kind of weak attack (a punch, kick, kunai, etc). Borsalino will sit on the user's shoulders, and is able to weave handseals. Borsalino can use one S rank earth jutsu per battle.

Restrictions:

~Stays in battle for 4 turns~
~Disperses if he is hit with any kind of weak attack~
~Any jutsu used by him A rank or above counts as a move by me~
~Must have signed Fossa contract to use~
~Summoned only once per battle~

X-Approved-X

Note: removed the part about him being a sensor type animal.

Summoning Boss Ace
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:Ace is a fire type warrior fossa. He is the boss of all Fossa, and he is about the size of an elephant . He can use S rank and below fire jutsu, but he can use S rank jutsu once per battle. Ace like all other fossa has very good night vision, and has a flame colored pelt which makes it hard to be stealthy in most enviorments. Ace also has claws, as sharp as a kunai which can be used to claw an opponent. Ace is very confident in his abilites, and loves to prove himself against stronger opponents. Unlike other Fossa, Ace cannot use wind jutsu

Strenths and Weaknesses


No wind jutsu the turn he is summoned
Must have signed the fossa contract and have been taught to use.
Summon lasts 4 turns
Can only be summoned once per battle.
Any move A rank or above Ace uses counts as a move I used as well.
Can only be taught by PresidentBush
His pelt is very tough, it takes a direct hit of A rank or above to disperse him
Ace can channel flame chakra into his teeth that can break through defences B rank and below.
Ace can fire a A rank long range blast of fire once per turn

Note: Removed formatting changes.

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Bow:Schneider
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:Schneider was forged long ago by an old weapon master named Gohan,it took him years to complete the bow but sadly when it was completed Gohan died.Schneider is a bow that can shoot pure chakra (D rank).This is almost never used though. It is a lightning style weapon, so it primarily shoots arrows made of the users raiton chakra solidified, but is able to shoot water, fire, and wind bullets (all C rank). The arrows are shot at twice the speed of a thrown kunai, and are quite powerful (A rank). The bow is unbreakable, and is able to deflect kunai,shuriken,etc. The user is only able to shoot four arrow per turn, and it takes about 4 seconds to reload after firing each arrow. The user is also able to decrease the power of the arrow(C rank), but make it light and faster (speed of a Kage ranked taijutsu master). When the arrows are shot, they don't make a sound but they are easy to spot. The bow itself is black as night, and is about 3 ft long. The bow is usually carried on someone's back.

Restrictions

-Can only be wielded by PresidentBush-
-Stays in battle for five turns-
-Cannot be summoned during battle only before or after-
-No earth arrows-

X-Declined-X I dont know, 4 elemental arrow shots of varying elements, you could make a combo of many different element in a single move. That itself is not a issue, but the fixed chakra cost of 40. Cant be approved unless you work to make it better in both description and abilities

 

[Yveltal]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Katon:Fenikkusu Gekido - Fire Releasehoenix Rage
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 or(+10)
Damage: 70
Description:The user gathers up fire chakra and then performs three hand seals. The user then forms flames around themselves and then fires the flames forward in the shape of a giant Phoenix which heavily burns the opponent on impact.
Notes:
-Can only be performed 3x
-Can only be used by Kage Phoenix
-Direction of the attack can be controlled but will cost 10 chakra points each time.

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Katon:Fenikkusu Hōyō - Fire Releasehoenix Embrace
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: S
Range:self
Chakra: 45
Damage: 30
Description: The user gathers up Katon chakra and performs the Tiger and Bird hand seal, the user is then engulfed in massive flames that form a huge Phoenix. The Phoenix then shields the user with its wings from on coming attacks.
Notes:
-Can absorb any fire ninjutsu for that one turn
-Can be used every three turns
-Only Kage Phoenix can use this technique
-Physical attacks will result in being burned
-User is unable to attack when technique is performed on that turn
-The user is inflicted 10 damage points from the intense heat

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Summoning Animal: Philippine Eagle
Scroll Owner: Kage Phoenix
Other Users who have signed contract: none
Summoning Boss if existing: none at the moment
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none at the moment
Description and Background:The Philippine eagle, a.k.a the "Monkey-eating Eagle", is said to be the largest extant of Eagles.They have brown and white-colored plumage, and a shaggy crest that resembles a lion's mane, and generally measures 86 to 102 cm.The Philippine Eagles have heavy legs that are yellow with large, powerful dark talons, and the prominent large, high-arched, deep beak is a bluish-gray. The eagles' eyes are blue-gray color.The Philippine eagles weighs about 6.5 kg., and have a wingspan of 2 meters. Their diet are mostly flying lemurs, some squirrels, snakes, civet cats, hornbills, and occasionally bats and monkeys. The Philippine eagle is known to live about 30 to 60 years. They also dwell in mountain forests or clearings of lowland forest.
Note:
-Permission from -Andy-

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Katon:Fenikkusu Gekido - Fire Releasehoenix Rage
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 or(+10)
Damage: 80
Description:The user gathers up fire chakra and then performs three hand seals. The user then forms flames around themselves and then fires the flames forward in the shape of a giant Phoenix which heavily burns the opponent on impact.
Notes:
-Can only be performed 3x
-Can only be used by Kage Phoenix
-Direction of the attack can be controlled but will cost 10 chakra points each time.



Katon:Fenikkusu Hōyō - Fire Releasehoenix Embrace
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: S
Range:self
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user gathers up Katon chakra and performs the Tiger and Bird hand seal, the user is then engulfed in massive flames that form a huge Phoenix. The Phoenix then shields the user with its wings from on coming attacks.
Notes:
-Can absorb any fire ninjutsu for that one turn
-Can be used every three turns
-Only Kage Phoenix can use this technique
-Physical contact will result in being damaged by the intense flames
-User is unable to attack when technique is performed on that turn
-The user is inflicted 10 damage points from the intense heat

X-Both Declined-X Im not feeling good, im actually a fan of pheonix xD brings out the moe in jean. But anyway, Similar to existing technique, get kagutsuchi's permission and we might approve it.

 

[Adachi]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Facepalm (Men-Hirate)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage: 10 (to self)
Description: "Dear Lord, I can't stand it anymore!" There are so many absurdities and absolutely preposterous happenings in the Ninja World every day and all the frustration and sighing must go somewhere. Thus, as a result, the user of this jutsu slaps his forehead with one hand (probably with dominant for more effect), resulting in something like a "wake-up" call. The quick, yet effective pain will allow much of the grievances to go away as blood would rush quickly to the affected area and the user would be forced to focus upon it, forgetting all of his worries for just a slight moment. Of course, this can happen in a fraction of a second, or a long facepalm can do as well. And on a more battle-related note, most fights cause much anxiety and stress because we often struggle for our lives on a daily basis, so this would help relieve such psychological impacts and clear the user's mind in combat in order to make improved rational decisions.

Yes, I also bang my head against my desk too. It is just as effective.

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On a side note, if you think I am trolling, I am definitely not. It seems that many of us have forgotten that we are humans, thus, we have active emotions.
Besides Genjutsu, where the main points of such an art is to very much inflict fear and stress onto their opponents, in terms of psychological warfare, other jutsus also do, sometimes on larger scales, sometimes on smaller scales.
What happens when a stone spike suddenly comes up from the start and you're "surprised" as a result? The heart pumps a rush of adrenaline, which by the way, scares the good crap out of anyone for a moment, and this triggers the run or fight scenario. In any case, your rational mind would be hindered for a moment.
How about the intensity of fire? I've been close to one myself, a huge flame that exploded from my neighboring house, and words can not describe the heat and death I felt in it, and the absolute fear that left my blood pressure soaring up, leaving me frozen in absolute shock.
Psychological effects in battles, no matter how hard they are to put in, are always going to be there and whether we want to deny it or not, inflicting pain because it is one of the strongest feelings our body can muster, can often times dull other emotions. Just think of the people who cut themselves, and I don't need to post a further scientific explanation.

Edit: :sy:

X-Approved-X Be creative with it

 

[WastedMonkey]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

1) Kanshō and Bakuya
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kanshō and Bakuya was forged using chakra making it harder and denser than normal swords. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. When the opponent tries to touch or wield the sword it will release red electrical current that will shock the opponent making them drop the sword. The main ability of the swords is their strong bond with each other, which not only allows them to attract each other, but it is also said they will return to their owner even if events cause them to be lost. If one is thrown while the other is held, the thrown sword will return to the wielder much like a boomerang.

Note: If not wielded in the beginning of the match the sword must be summoned by the user unless stated.
Note: Summoning the swords count as a jutsu.
Note: Cannot be used with any other Custom Weapon.
Note: Can only be wielded by WastedMonkey

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1) Kanshō and Bakuya
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kanshō and Bakuya was forged using chakra making it harder and denser than normal swords. When infused with chakra it will have a different appearance. When the opponent tries to touch or wield the sword it will release red electrical current that will shock the opponent making them drop the sword. The main ability of the swords is their strong bond with each other, which not only allows them to attract each other, but it is also said they will return to their owner even if events cause them to be lost. If one is thrown while the other is held, the thrown sword can be called back to the owner when wanted. The sword, when infused with chakra is also able to shoot out its sharp edges once every 3 turns.

Note: Swords must be weilded at the begining of the match.
Note: Sharp edges will return back to the sword 1 turn after they are shoot out.
Note: Cannot be used with any other Custom Weapon.
Note: Can only be wielded by WastedMonkey and those he allow

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X-Declined-X Well it lacks chakra cost where the description states an abilities that requires chakra. Its S rank, turn limit? Otherwise lower the rank to keep it at all times. Its probably better if you keep the original version

 

[-Logic-]

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I'm resubmitting these two Jutsu.

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Link of approval of the contract ^^

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(Horusu) Horus

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user with this technique proceeds to summons Horus; The boss of the Eagles. He is dark blue in colour and has thick blue feathers. He is roughly half the size of Gamabunta, and is said to be extremely wise. He is a powerful wielder of Lightning, feared by many. He can use Lightning techniques without the need of any handseals up to S rank, and is capable of firing a wide S Rank beam of Lightning twice per battle. However, in doing so it depletes his Chakra moderately, and one must wait at least two turns before firing this stream of Lightning again; After which, it cannot be fired anymore. Once per turn, Horus is able to fire 20 small A Rank Lightning infused feathers which are extremely sharp by simply flapping his wings.

Note: Only stays on the field for 4 turns.
Note: The A Rank Lightning Infused Feathers count as one of the three Jutsu per turn.
Note: The barrage of Lightning Infused Feathers is collectively an A Rank Jutsu; Rather than each individual Feather being A Rank.
Note: The S Rank beam of Lightning counts as one of the three Jutsu per turn.
Note: Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Bald Eagles contract.

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Yasaki No Magatami Nekkurasu - Eight Shaku Curved Jewel Necklace
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Eight Shaku Curved Jewel Necklace is a Necklace worn by Uchiha Itachi. It's rather small and is composed of three Sharingan like Jewels in design which are connected by a thin metal wire. It shares a unique relation to the wearer, similar to that of the Samehada; It's able to detect enemies and alert Itachi of their location. Because of this relation, it remains unaffected by anyone's Chakra that isn't Itachi's, and therefore it cannot be removed. Itachi was given this Necklace by his father who told him it that it had been passed down since the Rikudo Sennin's time. Itachi wore it; and never removed it since the day he acquired it. Itachi deduced that it was due to the special metal it was created from that allowed him to feel the presence of others. When Itachi needs to, he can remove the Necklace and wrap it around his fist, due to the Necklace's nature; it tightly coils around the first, and acts as something to be used to augment one's physical attacks, and can transform the part of the Necklace which makes contact with the enemy into many sharp spikes. A standard punch for example would have more power due to the Necklace being made out of metal, and weighing more; therefore being able to deal more damage due to it having more force behind it.

Note: Only people I allow can wear this.

X-User is Banned-X

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1.) Horusu - Horus

Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user with this technique proceeds to summons Horus; The boss of the Eagles. He is dark blue in colour and has thick blue feathers. He is roughly half the size of Gamabunta, and is said to be extremely wise. He is a powerful wielder of Lightning, feared by many. He can use Lightning techniques without the need of any handseals up to S rank, and is capable of firing a wide S Rank beam of Lightning twice per battle. However, in doing so it depletes his Chakra moderately, and one must wait at least two turns before firing this stream of Lightning again; After which, it cannot be fired anymore. Once per turn, Horus is able to fire 20 small A Rank Lightning infused feathers which are extremely sharp by simply flapping his wings.

Note: Only stays on the field for 4 turns.
Note: The A Rank Lightning Infused Feathers count as one of the three Jutsu per turn.
Note: The barrage of Lightning Infused Feathers is collectively an A Rank Jutsu; Rather than each individual Feather being A Rank.
Note: The S Rank beam of Lightning counts as one of the three Jutsu per turn.
Note: Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Bald Eagles contract.

X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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±± Declined ±± Why is this long range? And add a note that all of his techniques count as a move from your own count. And how wide is the beam? Range? feathers? Range? Because one thing is the range of his abilities another is the range of your summoning technique for him.

2.) Yasaki No Magatami Nekkurasu - Eight Shaku Curved Jewel Necklace
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Eight Shaku Curved Jewel Necklace is a Necklace worn by Uchiha Itachi. It's rather small and is composed of three Sharingan like Jewels in design which are connected by a thin metal wire. It shares a unique relation to the wearer, similar to that of the Samehada; It's able to detect enemies and alert Itachi of their location. Because of this relation, it remains unaffected by anyone's Chakra that isn't Itachi's, and therefore it cannot be removed. Itachi was given this Necklace by his father who told him it that it had been passed down since the Rikudo Sennin's time. Itachi wore it; and never removed it since the day he acquired it. Itachi deduced that it was due to the special metal it was created from that allowed him to feel the presence of others. When Itachi needs to, he can remove the Necklace and wrap it around his fist, due to the Necklace's nature; it tightly coils around the first, and acts as something to be used to augment one's physical attacks, and can transform the part of the Necklace which makes contact with the enemy into many sharp spikes. A standard punch for example would have more power due to the Necklace being made out of metal, and weighing more; therefore being able to deal more damage due to it having more force behind it.

Note: Only people I allow can wear this.

X-Declined-X

 

[Flash]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kage Matorikkusu) Shadow matrix
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A shadow technique invented by Flash07, where the user concentrates his shadow chakra to his shadow which gives it steel like strength. Then the user extends his shadows, (he can divide it into 3 in the start) where it digs through the earth and travels towards the opponent. The shadows travels 5 inches underground but it makes no noise or any disturbances so the opponent is unaware of it. When the shadow comes out of the other end, it divides into 5 spikes each and then jags the opponent and holds him in place.

Note: When underground, the shadows are unaffected by light.
Note: Can only be used by Naras.
Note: Can only be taught by Flash07.

X-Declined-X Then how would you make shadows underground if there is no light? O_O

(Kage Tori) Shadow Bird
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user jumps in the air and quickly manipulates his shadows to form a bird made of shadows under his legs. The bird can look like a falcon,an eagle or any other bird the user wishes. This bird can fly very fast (as fast as the fastest bird in the world) in the air, can do crazy stunts and the user does not have the fear of being knocked from the top of the bird as it is his own chakra. The user can also manipulate his chakra to create a larger bird which can carry 2 people. But this bird unlike the usual summons cannot perform any jutsus.
The bird can heal itself (re-generates) if hit by reasonable attacks.

Note: The user can manipulate the bird in mid air to make it larger or smaller.
Note: The bird can take one B-rank water/wind hit per turn before the user manipulates his chakra to make it good again.
Note: Can take hit from a few kunais as well (without flashbombs or explosive tags)
Note: Cannot perform any other jutsus while on the bird.
Note: Can only be used by Naras.
Note: Can only be taught by Flash07.

X-Declined-X "Shadow" get the rest

 

[Seblax]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Art of the Sword: Cutting Flames - Kenjutsu: KokuHisaki

Rank: S
Type: Deffensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: -
Description: When countering elemental shots. The user rapidly swings his blade in high accuracy and chakra running through it and his arm to increase its speed and strength, halving all of the shots send toward him no matter what they are shaped like or their size if possible, leaving enough space for his body to let the shots pass without causing him any harm.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-No kenjutsu techniques to be used next turn.
-Must have mastered kinjutsu to use this technique, for the user need the full knowledge of the sword's angle in use, speed and power.
-Cannot protect against lightning based techniques.


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Art of the Sword: Cutting Flames - Kenjutsu: KokuHisaki

Rank: S
Type: Deffensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: -
Description: When countering elemental shots. The user rapidly swings his blade in high accuracy and chakra running through it and his arm to increase its speed and strength, halving all of the shots send toward him no matter what they are shaped like or their size if possible, leaving enough space for his body to let the shots pass without causing him any harm.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-No kenjutsu techniques to be used next turn.
-Must have mastered kinjutsu to use this technique, for the user need the full knowledge of the sword's angle in use, speed and power.
-Cannot protect against lightning based techniques.

X-Declined-X Vague description, Elemental shots? O_O projectile type attacks you mean perhaps? and what do you do? cut throught them? And why is there a need for the user to master forbidden techniques?

Kuchyose No Jutsu: Trisura, Gogyou shikaku-Summoning Technique: Trisura, The Aqu-A-ssassin-
Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: -
Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a 4-meter-long-vulture with 5-Meter-long-wings. This creature is the protector of the borders of the Vulture empire has with the sea. It has two huge wings, a long tail, webbing between its large toes and the ability to hold its breathe for a very long time to help it swim and dive. Trisura could use up to A rank water element techniques of the techniques the user know. She is great at transporting and unlike many of the vultures she is friendly.

-Can only be summoned once.
-Can only use one A rank water jutsu every three turns.
-Can only remain on the battle field for 4 turns.

X-Declined-X No link to contract approval, i even tried looking at the previous submissions and approved contracts list. Before resubmitting it, update your contract.

Kuchyose No Jutsu: Trisura, Gogyou shikaku-Summoning Technique: Trisura, The Aqu-A-ssassin-
Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: -
Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a 4-meter-long-vulture with 5-Meter-long-wings. This creature is the protector of the borders of the Vulture empire has with the sea. It has two huge wings, a long tail, webbing between its large toes and the ability to hold its breathe for a very long time to help it swim and dive. Trisura could use up to A rank water element techniques of the techniques the user know. She is great at transporting and unlike many of the vultures she is friendly.

-Can only be summoned once.
-Can only use one A rank water jutsu every three turns.
-Can only remain on the battle field for 4 turns.
-Vulture must wait a turn in order to fly again after it, comes out of water.
X-Approved-X However i added a restriction, you could have made it more reasonable. Make something up about unique feather attack would easily dry up idk its all your imagination

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Genjutsu: Zetsubou - Art of Illusion: Hopelessness
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage:
Description: By having strings at close range of the enemy. Either by sending ninja weapons that are tagged with strings or in another method. Strings will act as a medium to the user's chakra sent form his hand to the enemy close to that location just as he form the rat and tiger handsigns. After that, the user will use the chakra to manipulate the enemy's mind to become unable to feel Balanced. No matter what she/he do, their bodies become unable to move nor to stand until this genjutsu casts off. This illusion can be formed at close range of the enemy without the usage of strings.
-Can be stopped by the usage of the genjutsu release technique.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-The user cannot use another genjutsu in the same turn nor the next turn.

X-Declined-X Vague again, and nothing you cant already do with existing genjutsu

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

1. Sealing Technique: Hermes' Reply| Fuuinjutsu: Hermes' Touben
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short (When seal is applied on the object)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user applies a sealing formula to a case of sorts (the 'case' doesn't necessarily have to be a case. It can be a letter, door, scroll, jar, box, suitcase, etc. Anything that can be opened can have the seal applied to it. After applying the seal, it seems to disappear on the object but is still there, just no longer visible. Seemingly doing nothing, the seal allows the user to know if the object has been opened. Once the object is opened, the seal is broken and the user is mentally alerted.
*Can only be used 3 times a battle*

X-Approved-X

2. Kuchiyose: Theseus| Summoning: Theseus
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: N/A
Description: The user wipes his hands over his summoning tattoo, or makes several handseals and summons, Theseus. Theseus, when on all fours, is roughly the size of Gamabunta, and his height is double that when he stands bipedally. Dressed in traditional Ancient Greek armor with the skull of the slew Minotaur from his deadly show-down on his skull as a type of helmet, he wields an unbreakable gold katana that shrinks to the size of a normal katana (blade length 30inches). A trait characteristic of ligers, Theseus can contact the summoner via telekinetic communication as well as verbally. Theseus, having Wind Affinity, can use up to A-rank wind jutsus that the user knows by means of channeling his chakra into the helmet and releasing it from his mouth (certain wind jutsus obviously will not be able to performed from his mouth) and is also capable of releasing a S-rank unidirectional blast via the horns of the helmet. The S-rank blast will have half of it's power come from each side of the horns, with a blast coming from each side that meet in front of Theseus and mix, creating the S-rank blast.
*Wind blast and/or useage of wind jutsus by Theseus counts as jutsu per turn*
*Minotaur skull around his head somewhat limits his vision and makes it difficult to turn his head more than 90 degrees.*
*Can only be summoned once a battle.*
*Last three turns.*

X-Declined-X Limit the abilities, there are too many: its the size of bunta (yes well it is an ability considering the number of techniques you could evade and/or are ineffective) telekinetic communication, sword weilding (im guessing kenjutsu will be available to him), elemental affinity and blasts.

Submitting three new Satsui no Hado CFS jutsus. Custom Fighting Style approved here:

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3. Shin Gou Hadou|True Great Surge
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will gather a large amount of Satsui no Hado chakra, then perform a single hand seal and release all of the chakra at once, just like performing Nagashi. The Satsui no Hado chakra will be released in a 360 degree around the user, which would place the opponent under Satsui no Hado genjutsu if caught in the circle. The murderous and dark intent of the chakra will be embedded into the opponent through their skin and disrupt their own chakra paths within their brain; They will see the user and feel inside of them a rage so deep that it consumes their person and will rage within themselves, disrupting their ability to mold chakra effectively. Due to this, any technique released by the enemy will be consequently weaker due to not being able to channel the proper amounts of chakra into them due to rage. Any rank of jutsu will be down graded to one rank, in essence. Any S rank will become A rank, A rank will become B rank and so on and so forth. This jutsu can also be used without handseals but the user must lower himself into the horse stance and charge chakra for a few moments before releasing it at once (takes around 4-5 seconds to charge if done this way)
*Lasts 3 turns
*Can only be used 2
*Requires break period in between of at least 3 turns
*Can only be used by users of the Satsui no Hado

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±± Declined ±± Sorry but so many variations of this exist that its bound to collide with any 360º burst technique. And the effects are a bit too much and unreasonable. Why don't you make this more directional and less opped? Perhaps some sort of taijutsu move that would unleash this chakra up to Mid-range? thus affecting the enemy?

Changing the above submitted custom completely into a new attack with the same name.

3. Shin Gou Hadou|True Great Surge
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will stand in the horse stance with his right hand drawn in, focusing large amounts of Satsui no Hado chakra throughout the arm. The user will then strike forward with that arm, hitting the target in the solar plexus, halting all forward movement by the foe from the blow as the Satsui no Hado chakra latches onto them, causing them to gain properties of the the CFS, increasing their strength and speed, now moving at speeds of Lee without his weights and slightly stronger than the average Strong Fist user. As the chakra attaches to the enemy, it causes them to become greatly enraged in a rage that clouds their mind, letting their anger take over due to inexperience with controlling the fighting style. This rage prevents them from using elemental jutsus of A-rank and higher for three turns due to the Satsui no Hado chakra's influence causing great anger that causes them to want to literally beat the user to death. As the turns go by, the anger starts to subside and the enemy is able to see and think more clearer and as such, they regain access to higher ranking elemental jutsus. The first turn this is active, they cannot use A-ranks and higher. The second turn, no S-ranks and higher and the third and final turn the enemy cannot use any Forbidden ranked jutsu of elemental natures. The speed/strength boosts last the entire duration of three turns.
*Last 3 turns*
*Only useable 3 times*
*Speed and Strength boosts are an approved part of the CFS*
*Can also be used on an ally*

X-Approved-X Changed the range, why was it mid anyway?xD

 

[BlacKing]

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Osoroshii Kishu Tatsumaki Kaden Supin (Dreaded Horseman Bullet Charge Spin)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user surges their body with chakra and performs a short, quick backwards dodge gliding across the ground. The user then begins a rapid 360 degree spin with chakra surrounding their body in the direction of the target. As the user travels towards the target, the chakra surrounding the user gives off the impression of the user being encased in a chakra bullet as it rages towards the target like a protective layer around their entire body. This spin only lasts for a short period of time, enough to go from one range to another. The short quick backwards dodge is not enough to send the user into a different range, and ranges between 1-3 meters backwards. When going backwards from the speed at which it occurs, it leaves a chakra impression of the user's body, however it does not harm the opponent in anyway. This technique can be performed extremely quickly. The user's body is covered with a chakra coat with a diameter of 2 feet. If the user is in the air, this can be performed without the backwards dash. This technique is capable of plowing through a large summon.
Note: Can only be used once per turn.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
Note: User must wait one turn before using this technique again.

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±± Declined ±± Much better. Has a problem though: while the technique is perfectly fine and ready to be approved, technically, only a Hyuuga could possibly use this. The spinning alone would make it so that without a dojuutsu and more specifically a Byakugan, you would become hazed, dizzy, etc right after the technique and during it you wouldn't be able to even notice an attack. This said, as its raw chakra, you'd be easily killed by any enemy.

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Jiton Fuuinjutsu: Midas no Dōzō (Magnetism Release: Gold Dust Statue of Midas)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 0
Description: After having successfully magnetized their opponent with Magnetic Ninja Art: Electric Phantasms, the user performs Tiger>Ram>Horse handseals and magnifies the magnetic pull on their opponent in such a way that all the Gold Dust within range of the opponent will be drawn towards their opponent an a rush and try to stick to them until the opponent seems to be standing like a statue, unable to move while immersed in Gold Dust. The Kanji for the word "Seal" then appears on the user's hands, and upon touching any body part of the opponent, successfully seals the opponent in the statue.
Note: The speed of this technique depends on the amount of Gold Dust in the area of the opponent. The more Gold Dust in the area, the quicker and harder it is to avoid this technique.
Note: This can be done to multiple opponents as long as they are within short range of each other.
Note: Can only be performed 3x per battle.
Note: Can only be used by The Yondaime Kazekage bio

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±± Declined ±± Very OPed. Specially the " After having successfully magnetized their opponent with Magnetic Ninja Art: Electric Phantasms," with all that it implies.

Fuuton: Osoroshii Kishu Tatsumaki Kaden Supin (Wind Release: Dreaded Horseman Bullet Charge Spin)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user surges their body with wind chakra and performs a short, quick backwards dodge gliding across the ground. The user then begins a rapid 360 degree spin with wind chakra surrounding their body in the direction of the target. As the user travels towards the target, the wind chakra surrounding the user gives off the impression of the user being encased in a wind bullet as it rages towards the target like a protective layer around their entire body. This spin only lasts for a short period of time, enough to go from one range to another. The short quick backwards dodge is not enough to send the user into a different range, and ranges between 1-3 meters backwards. When going backwards from the speed at which it occurs, it leaves a chakra impression of the user's body, however it does not harm the opponent in anyway. This technique can be performed extremely quickly. The user's body is covered with a wind chakra coat with a diameter of 2 feet. If the user is in the air, this can be performed without the backwards dash. This technique is capable of plowing through a large summon.
Note: Can only be used once per turn.
Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
Note: User must wait one turn before using this technique again.
Note: User (unless they are a Hyuga Member) will experience dizziness as a result of this technique that lasts for 2 turns.
Note: This technique can only be performed by member who possess a Doujutsu or other types of Sensory abilities in any form to maintain visibility.

X-Approved-X

Jiton Fuuinjutsu: Midas no Dōzō (Magnetism Release: Gold Dust Statue of Midas)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 0
Description: The user performs Tiger > Ram > Horse handseals and manipulates all the Gold Dust within range of the opponent in such a way that it will stick to the opponent and cause them to be paralyzed if the gold dust successfully makes contact with the opponent's body. The opponent is encased in condensed Gold dust where they will stand like a statue of gold. The Kanji for the word "Seal" then appears on the user's hands, and upon touching any body part of the opponent, successfully seals the opponent in the statue.
Note: Can only be performed 3x per battle.
Note: Can only be used by The Yondaime Kazekage bio

X-Declined-X Paralyze on contact? its minute gold dust. Ofcourse contact would be made easily, but disregarding that how can gold dust of such little size cause paralysis?

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Jiton: Tosu no Jiki (Magnetism Release: Magnetic Toss)
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels their magnetic chakra into their hands and then force it outwards to surround an object(s), giving them a magnetic field that the user can manipulate. Magnetizing multiple small objects, medium or large sized objects, the user can then deflect and or send the object at an opponent uses one of their hands as a medium to control the object. This can also be used to bring an object towards the user.
Note: Cannot be used on Summons or people as they would be too hard to maintain complete immobility.
Note: Cannot be used on an opponent's CW or weapon such as the Seven Swordsman Swords
Note: User cannot manipulate more than one medium or large sized object at a time with one hand.
Note: Can only be used 5x per battle.

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X-Declined-X Existing technique, you might want to ask zenryoku to add this if it isn't already there:

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[Daemon]

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(Ura Youshi) – Back to the Fundamentals
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 45
Damage points: N/A
Description: This jutsu was once referred to as the God Creator rendering all things useless against whoever used this technique. The person sits down folding their legs over each other and claps their hands together and holds it there. This requires complete stillness much like Hermit Mode. While the user is still the user’s chakra is converting every one of his sources of elemental chakra into basic or regular chakra used for everyday ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu. After transformation of chakra is done, the user then forces chakra into each and every one of their chakra points causing the user to exert more force during taijtusu attacks. While in this state, the user gains +5 to taijutsu, +10 to Ninjutsu, and +5 to genjutsu. However this does come with some drawbacks, while in this state the user is not allowed to use elemental ninjutsu of any sort. While converting the chakra the user has to stay this leaves the user vulnerable to attack. Also while in this state the user can only make 2 clone at a time rather than the normal 4 clones. While standing still and converting chakra the user is vulnerable for 10 seconds.
Restrictions:
-The important restrictions are in the jutsu itself
-Lasts 5 turns
-After the state is deactivated, it takes about 4 turns for the user’s chakra to return to normal so after 4 turns the user will be able to use elemental jutsu up to A-rank.
-Can only be taught by Daemon

X-Declined-X Wrong chakra cost. Youre activating more then one chakra nature at the same time within your body, and pushing chakra through all of your tenketsu is well... somewhat jyuuken

 

[-Naruto-]

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(Doton: Maddokingu no tobira) Earth Release: Doors of the Mad King
Type: Offensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will inject their chakra into the ground and then create 4 large doors of earth that surround their opponent. The doors can range from 10 to 15 feet tall and 5 to 15 feet wide, trapping the opponent in a box. Once created, the user can then form the snake handseal, causing all 4 doors to swing inwards towards the opponent, each door smashing into each other in the middle.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by -Naruto-

X-Approved-X

 

[-Yard-]

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(Genjutsu: Ato Kiseki Pasu) Genjutsu: A stray path
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: After making the Horse and Tiger handseals the user places the opponent under genjutsu. In this genjutsu, the user takes a few steps then disappears, reappearing in a different line of movement facing a different way continuing his steps, then disappears to re-appear a different distance away, this continues until there are a large number of illusionary clones walking distances before disappearing and reappearing in another area, clones that phase in and out of visibility moving all around the victim that disappear when attacked. The user can either be hidden among these clones or hiding via camouflage in the area the clones move, this is used to make a get away as well as creating a window for surprise attacks.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Cannot be layered with other genjutsu.
Note: No genjutsu in same turn
Note: No genjutsu above A rank next turn.

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing genjutsu.

(Hebi Kawa) Snake Skin
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (+20 For the defensive ability)
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a Ninjutsu technique in which the user will make two handseals and will begin to mold a one inch layer of white snake skin over their body, which forms in 2.5 seconds. This is a highly flexible snake skin style armor made purely of the users chakra. It can instantly turn hard as steel with one handseal making a nice defense. It can defend against 1 S rank jutsu as long as they are holding the seal. Without the seal, It can only defend against Taijutsu and projectiles. However, for certain situations the user can manipulate small (fist size) areas of the skin, pushing the skin scales close together making the area of the skin hard as steel, thus making for increased protection. To do this for the entire layer of the skin will require a handseal for chakra control.

Note: No other ninjutsu besides elemental ninjutsu can be used in the same turn as the defensive ability/armor creation, and only up to A rank.
Note: The defensive ability counts as one of the users 3 jutsu per turn.
Note: Can only defend against one jutsu up to S rank.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns. Then it will shed from their body.
Note: Must have signed the snake contract.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.

X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. This is nothing but a mimic of cannon techniques.

 

[Shinta]

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(Kawasemi Kuchiyose: Augustine Shōnetsu no tori) Kingfisher Summoning: Augustine the Fiery Bird
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After making a blood sacrifice and performing a sequence of five hand seals, the user will place the hand on the ground or facing the ground below them and release there chalra to create the summoning seal. This will summon Augustine the largest of the Kingfishers and he can be considered as the boss of all the other Kingfishers. Augustine has a large crest and finely spotted white on black upper-parts with a chestnut breast band and otherwise white underparts with dark flank barring. He is large enough to carry four people on his back being about two times larger than Sasuke's Hawk summon and has a the ability to speak with his summoner. Augustine has the ability to perform all Fire jutsu without hand seals by releasing them from his mouth or using his wings where the jutsu may state using an arm swing (all within reason as its clear that he will not be able to use ALL fire techniques). Twice per battle Augustine can coat his beak with fire chakra and dive at a target inflicting them with damage equivalent to that of an S-rank fire jutsu.
Notes:
- Must have signed the Kingfisher Contract,
- His Flame Diving attack can only be used twice per battle with three turns in between each use and S-ranked,
- Can be summoned once per battle
- Remains on the field for up to four turns per summon,
- The only exceptions to the fire jutsus usable by Augustine are the Flame Rasengan and ones that require ninja tools or scrolls to perform.

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±± Approved ±±

Updating this as I found a few things that need editing >_>

(Kawasemi Kuchiyose: Augustine Shōnetsu no tori) Kingfisher Summoning: Augustine the Fiery Bird
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After making a blood sacrifice and performing a sequence of five hand seals, the user will place the hand on the ground or facing the ground below them and release there chakra to create the summoning seal. This will summon Augustine the largest of the Kingfishers and he can be considered as the boss of all the other Kingfishers. Augustine has a large crest and finely spotted white on black upper-parts with a chestnut breast band and otherwise white underparts with dark flank barring. He is large enough to carry four people on his back being about two times larger than Sasuke's Hawk summon and has a the ability to speak with his summoner. Augustine has the ability to perform all Fire jutsu without hand seals by releasing them from his mouth or using his wings where the jutsu may state using an arm swing (all within reason as its clear that he will not be able to use ALL fire techniques). Twice per battle Augustine can coat his beak with fire chakra and dive at a target inflicting them with damage equivalent to that of an S-rank fire jutsu.
Notes:
- Must have signed the Kingfisher Contract,
- His Flame Diving attack can only be used twice per battle with three turns in between each use and S-ranked,
- Can be summoned once per battle
- Remains on the field for up to four turns per summon,
- The only exceptions to the fire jutsus usable by Augustine are the Flame Rasengan and ones that require ninja tools or scrolls to perform.

X-Approved-X Spell checks are ok but it cant stay in the feild for more than 4 turns being an S rank.
Changed the time on the field from four turns to five turns, also fixed some spelling


(Katon: Faiāshīrudosufia) Fire Release: Fire Shield Sphere
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: A defensive jutsu in which the user amplifies their body heat and projects it through their chakra in every direction around them. The result is a dome of flame about 15 centimetres thick in every direction from the user, resembling a slower sort of explosion that continues expanding until it reaches the outskirts of short range. This will remain up for a few seconds and can nullify most physical and jutsu based attacks, this can also be used to attack in every direction while protecting oneself. The heat inside the sphere takes a toll on the user preventing them from casting other jutsu or moving around to much while inside it.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Can not be used successively,
- Can be used five time per battle.

X-Declined-X Similar to existing technique


(Ninpou: Mizu Kokyū Jutsu) Ninja Arts: Water Breathing Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15 (+5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Using precise chakra control, the user establishes a layer of chakra along the walls of their wind pipe. This chakra liner filters out the oxygen from the water before it reaches the lungs, enabling them to literally breath water in as though they were a fish. This eliminates the need to surface from the water for air, and also allows the user to remain submerged for extended periods.
Notes:
- Can only be taught by Shinta,
- Can be used for five turns successively, after which a two turn cool down must be observed,
- Can be used four times per battle,
- Must have started training in suiton.

X-Declined-X I liked the idea, but how you do is a bit, well its actually way off. Come to me, ill try and help ya

 

[The Mockingjay]

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(Suiton: Karui Shussui) Water Style: Minor Flood
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user creates a thin layer of water which coats the battleground floor. Then, by channeling his/her chakra into this water the user is able to detect slight ripples and movement inside the water.
-The thin nature of this water layer means that it is unable to assist in the use of lightning style techniques.
-Must be taught by 'The Girl on Fire'

X-Declined-X Its C rank O_O

(Doton: Kakou Spile) Earth Style: Downward Spile
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: By channeling their chakra down into the ground in numerous small streams the user creates multiple chute-like openings in the ground around themselves. Each chute reaches ten feet down into the ground and is slightly smaller than a five pence piece.
-Must be taught by 'The Girl on Fire'

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(Suiton: Kaisaku) Water Style: Excavation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: After using (Doton: Kakou Spile) Earth Style: Downward Spile the user gathers water chakra inside their body and begins to use it as a sort of water magnet. This in turn draws water from deep below the ground, this water builds up in the previously created chutes of earth and remains hidden inside the chutes as a secret water source.
-Must be taught by 'The Girl on Fire'

X-Approved-X Wasnt really a need to submit, first would work just as great

 

[Vision]

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Genjutsu: Shita no Kata o Mitsumeru | Illusionary Arts: Stare Down
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A momentary genjutsu where the user would place a genjutsu on the opponent by saying the words “look and eyes” within a sentence or a phrase. The chakra that is placed within the opponent will regulate the flow of the opponents chakra within their brain to break their concentration. Thus leaving them open to looking into the eyes of the user as they hear those words.

Note: The opponent has to be looking at a body part of the user other than the eyes.
Note: A momentary genjutsu, the opponent will only look into the users eyes briefly before being able to turn away to look somewhere else.
Note: Only Vision is able to use this technique.
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Genjutsu: Sōzōshī Chinmoku | Illusionary Arts: Loud Silence
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will charge their chakra into both of their hands and then slap it quickly. The opponent soon as he hears the slapping sound of both hands but the chakra is released through the hands as the user is clapping but not traveling through the sound that makes when clapping, the opponent will be placed under a genjutsu where the users chakra is in the opponents brain disrupting the flow of the opponents brain. The illusion will set it by the disruption of chakra flow within the brain so that the there is no blood running through the ear drums of both ears. The opponent under the genjutsu will immediatly hear a static ringing noise which is high pitched, casuing a headache to be felt. However, because it effects the ear drums or the illusion of effecting the ear drums, the opponent will appear to be bleeding from the ear, followed by loss of balance as they stand or walk, being distorted around his surroundings as well as dizziness settling in. By the third turn of this technique the opponent would have to kneel down as the sense are being amplified as time goes on. Constant dizziness and everything spinning will cause the body to feel like if it is having motion sickness which could or may result in puking. Eventually the headache intensifies as well breaking all concentration of the opponent and rendering them useless.

Note: Able to use three times per battle.
Note: Last 4 turns unless broken.
Note: Can not use or layer another genjutsu while the opponent is under this genjutsu.
Note: Can only be taught by Vision
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-Declined- The point of a genjutsu is to create an illusion, not to cause physical damage. Making the brain think that it can't hear and therefore making your oponent deaf would work, but stopping the bloodflow to the eardrumms is a simple no.

 

[Vasto Lordé]

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(Tensa Zangetsu) - Heaven Chain Slaying Moon
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Tensa Zangetsu (天鎖斬月, Heaven Chain Slaying Moon) is considered to be a daitō (Japanese long sword) with a black blade. The crossguard has four prongs bent out to form the shape of the manji (which is the kanji for "ban," meaning "full", as in "full release"), a short length of chain with a broken link at the end dangles from the base of the hilt. Tensa Zangetsu was forged long ago by a black smith from Konoha with special metals that allowed the sword to gather energy and allowed the user to transfer his chakra into the sword. When the user channels his chakra into the sword the chakra changes its color into a black with a red outline. Main ability of this sword is that it allows the user to use his pure chakra for attacks instead of elemental chakra.

- Sowrd's Techniques | Attacks are to be submitted.
- Can only be used by -Vasto Lorde-

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(Tensa Zangetsu: Getsuga Tenshō) - Heaven Chain Slaying Moon: Moon Fang Heaven-Piercer
Type: Offense
Rank: S-Rank
Range: short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: While wielding Tensa Zangetsu, the user utilizing their chakra focuses a large amount of chakra into the sword's blade. The user then swings the sword, releasing a large moon-crescent shape wave of chakra. The cutting power of the wave is strong enough to cut through dozens of trees at once, and is capable of destroying large sized boulders.

- Can only be used three times per battle.
- Can only be used once in a turn
- Can only be used | taught by -Vasto Lorde-


( Tensa Zangetsu: Getsuga Bakufū ) - Heaven Chain Slaying Moon: Moon Blast
Type: Defense | Offense
Rank: A-Rank
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The technique revolves around the user, utiziling their chakra and inserting it into the sword's blade. Once done the user, pierces the sword into a solid substance such as the ground. The moment the user pierces the sword into the solid substance, a large blast of condensed chakra is released in the shape of half a dome which spreads outwards up to short-range fro the user. The blast is capable of protecting the user from incoming attacks, and is capable of pushing others nearby with such a great amount of force.

- Can only be used three times per battle
- Can only be taught by -Vasto Lorde-

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X-Declined-X Well you could say, bleach is against policy

 

[Gitanshu]

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kangen:kiyasume kangen | Music Art: Soothing Music
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: short-long
Chakra: 30[+5 each turn to keep it active]
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique basically resolves around the base that when someone hear's a specific type of music he is no longer able to concentrate on other type of sound's or noise basically because he is not able to forget that melody, In this technique the user uses his chakra to enhance any melody or already produced sound with these property and once the opponent hear's that music he is completely mesmerized by it and looses his ability to concentrate on other types of sound and to certain extent on the battle itself and while this technique is active the opponent can no longer hear any other sound except the specific sound which is now charged with users chakra and this all happens because the soothing effect which is caused by that sound.
-Can only be used 3 times a battle
-Can affect multiple enemy's at the same time but max 5
-The opponent reflexes start to weaken when he is exposed to this sound as it kills his will to fight and it's effect become more and more stronger as time passes and if he is continuously exposed to this sound for 5 turns or move he completely looses his will to fight and gives up the fight
-While this is in play the opponent can longer hear any other type of sound
-It's effect is in play as long as the sound is created continuously but if the sound projection is obliterated for more then 3-4 second the opponent will snap out of it's effect
-No melody arts in same and next turn.

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Fuuton sakujou - Wind Release rope
Type:Supplementary
Rank:C
Range:short-mid
Chakra:15
Damage:N/A
Description: A very simple technique which requires the use of a single handseal and then the user starts to manipulate the air which is little above the ground and use it to create a wind rope which is tied too two poles made up of wind as well the rope is roughly 10cm above the ground [30-40 cm for big summons] and the length may very from 1m-3m, This rope structure is created right in front of the opponent when he is running or charging towards a specific point and due to the rope his legs get stuck in it and he falls on face side on the ground and due to wind property of the rope and poles the entire structure is invisible to naked eyes.
-Can only be taught by -Gitanshu-

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[Zatanna]

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Genjutsu: Hyakka Ryouran | Illusionary Arts: Samurai Girls
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user creates a Snake then Tiger handseal and releases genjutsu at the opponent. Then the opponent sees Three Samurai women clad in armour come riding at them on horses, from all sides. The first captures the opponent with a whip, immobilizing their arms. The second rides past stabbing them in the back bringing the opponent to their knees. The last dismounts and walks over to the opponent and draws a sword and slashes the opponents throat.

X-Declined-X Dafuq? xD Reduce rank, fix the chakra cost and remove damage points

Suiton: Hyakka Ryouran no Toritsuke rareta | Water Style: Mounted Samurai Girls
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user sends their chakra into a water source or can use a previous water source, to form 3 figures from the water. These three mounted samurai rise and attack the opponent. One has a whip, which can wrap around the opponent and immobilize them, the second has a long lance and the last has a bow to launch water arrow projectiles. The first samurai uses their whip to immobilize the opponent, the second, fires an arrow at the back of their leg to bring them to their knees and the last uses the lance to piece through the opponents chest.
-lasts for 2 turns
-Can only be used twice
-No water for same turn

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[Blizzàrd1]

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[Genjutsu: Iiya Kataki] Illusionary Arts: Forbidden Rivals
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User casts a very strong genjutsu on the opponent, the genjutsu initializes by first turning the sky blood red, changing the entire surroundings into a deadly battle ground just because of the sensation of red sky. It then revives an illusion of opponent's worse enemy, or one of the enemy of the user. The illusionary enemy is able to use all the jutsus that he/she had in his/her lifetime, which are also illusions. The jutsus are controlled by the user, and do not physically harm the body of the opponent. Instead, it causes pain to the brain, the wounds are not real, but the pain is strong enough to effect the opponent's mind. Opponent though can freely move, and dodge or counter the jutsus using his/her own. If he she does not defend from the incoming attacks of the illusionary enemy, he will suffer pain according to damage caused by illusionary attacks. It may lead to death due to brain hemorrhage because of the stress caused by pain on the brain of the opponent.
Note: Illusionary Jutsu count as one of the three jutsu in the move.
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
Note: Must wait two turns to use this genjutsu again.
Note: Can only be taught by Blizzard.

X-Declined-X Basically the Genjutsu manifests itself according to the enemies worst nightmare? Its not exactly manipulation of your opponents when the genjutsu is able to do something that is out of the users own knowledge. How would you know what the opponent fears? If you dont so doesn't the genjutsu. Although it is possible you need a very strong background ability to support this. Like Yamanaka are able to read minds, it would be an appropiate genjutsu for them.

[Katon: Ira Kaen] Fire Release: Thorn Flames
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User chooses some weapon(s) and channels his fire chakra in them, it can be done through a distance, contact with the weapon is not required. After channeling the chakra, with just one Tiger hand-seal user makes the chakra burst into flames in a shape of thorn, which reaches out half-meter in a shape of spiked orb. User can simultaneously envelop maximum of 5 weapons with thorn flames.
Note: Must be taught by Blizzard.
-Usable 4 times per battle

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[Genjutsu: Youso Irege] Illusionary Arts: Elemental Switch
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: User casts a Genjutsu on the opponent, being very sophisticated illusionary jutsu it needs a good chakra usage, and amazing control. Once this illusion is casted, the user can make the opponent believe that the jutsu used by the user is of different element than in reality. So, if the user uses a water release jutsu, he or she can make the opponent believe that it is a fire release jutsu. The shape and style of the jutsu remains the same no matter what the user makes the opponent believe the element is. So, a water wave if switched to fire release, it will appear as a fire wave. The elements will switch according to the user's will.
Note: Elements can only be switched to the elements that the user knows.
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
Note: Must wait two turns to use this genjutsu again.
Note: Can only be taught by Blizzard.
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[Enzup]

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Creating a CJ for my above CW.

(Doton/Katon/Shinigami: Sasori) - Earth/Fire/Shinigami Style: Scorpion
Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (on physical contact)
Description: Taking advantage of combination of elements, and transformation ability of Shinigami Reaper, user passes his earth chakra into Shinigami and while it starts transforming into earth version, user passes his fire chakra combining the two natures and as a result the sword transforms into an Lava version of "Scorpion", which can now use Lava techniques upto A-rank without any handseals, in Lava (scorpion) form.
Note: -Technique lasts for 4 turns before turning Shinigami into his sword(normal) form.
-This technique counts as user's 2/3 moves.
-Any technique used by Shinigami counts towards user's 1/3 move.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Can only be used by Enzup.

Got the idea of making this CJ from a thread of Izuna, where he said that combining different element is possible, but that would count as 2/3 moves. And also its the ability of my CW to transform into the animal version of the Element's chakra passed into it. So I thought its possible.. ^^



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Shinigami Reaper
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu)
Description: The sword was made by ancient priests of hell and heaven at a sacred place by using hairs, bones, skin, blood and senses of a living shinigami himself which gave the sword life and transforming ability. The sword was named after the shinigami. And it is believed that the shinigami is living in the form of sword now.
The size of the sword is very big. The hilt itself is of 2m height, and the blade is of 3m height making a total length of 5m. It is a double-edged sword. And have a little curvature in the edge part and pointed on front. The sword is quite thick but the whole blade is covered with the hairs of shinigami which are very sharp, as a normal katana. The blade is bloody red in colour which is supposed to be the blood of millions of people killed by it and of shinigami himself. It also has 2 black strips originating from the rain guard to some extent on blade, and it was supposed to be the curse of people died from it.

Abilities:
-This sword is indestructible
-It has life of its own just like samehada and thus it can react on its own when required when its transformed into an animal.
-When Chakra is passed to the sword, the sword transforms into an elemental animal familiar that represents the element used |Fire- Phoenix|, |Water-Shark|, |Earth- Dragon|, |Lightning- Snakes|, |Wind- Porcupine|
-The sword only listens to Enzup.

Restrictions:
-Passing any chakra to the sword, counts as a move, which is equivalent to S-rank Offense/Defense/Supplementary.
-Transformation lasts for a maximum of 4 turns and can only be done twice
-If opponent's chakra neutralizes or overcomes the animal's chakra (when transformed), then the transformed animal will come to its normal form again. i.e. in sword form.
-The sword transforms into an elemental version of the animal and not an animal on itself.
-If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this sword, then he will receive an addition of +20 damage points.
-Sword cannot sense chakra.
-The size of the animal in which the sword transforms differs little to nothing from the normal size of the sword.

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Creating 2 CJs for my above CW.

(Shinigami/Doton/Katon: Sasori) - Shinigami/Earth/Fire Style: Scorpion
Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (on physical contact)
Description: Taking advantage of combination of elements, and transformation ability of Shinigami Reaper, user passes his earth chakra into Shinigami and while it starts transforming into earth version, user passes his fire chakra combining the two natures and as a result the sword transforms into a Lava version of "Scorpion". Since the sword can use techniques of the element in which it is transformed (like wind needles in porcupine form), so now it can use Lava techniques upto B-rank without any handseals.
Note: -Technique lasts for 4 turns before turning Shinigami into his sword(normal) form.
-This technique counts as user's 2/3 moves.
-Any technique used by Shinigami counts towards user's 1/3 move.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Can only be used by Enzup.

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Try once more to bypass the KG rules and you'll be banned from the customs bureau for the whole of 2013...not joking. You expect us to accept a weapon that would allow you to use a KG regardless of the bio you have for it? You could then make Earth+Water=Wood, Wind+Water=Ice and why not join 3 elements together and go for Dust Release? Don't try something like this again. Ever.
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(Shinigami: Mikanseino Hengen) - Shinigami Style: Incomplete Transformation
Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is used when user wants to wield Shinigami for kenjutsu attacks as well as use the transforming ability of the Shinigami Reaper. User passes his elemental chakra as usual but in limited amount this time, as a result the sword transforms in the animal, the element represent, but the hilt part remains as it is, which was supposed to be transformed into tail of that animal. The user can now wield the partially transformed sword for his kenjutsu purposes.
Note: -Transformation lasts for a maximum of 4 turns and can only be done twice per battle.
-Can only be used by Enzup.

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(Kame Ninjutsu: Za Orientaru Wana) - Turtle Arts: The Oriental Trap
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+10 per turn to everyone inside it)
Description: When opponent is within the mid-range of the user, user makes the "Ram" handseal and summons 2 big shells, kept one over other; closed, forming a sphere (somewhat), of radius 10m, around himself and the opponent; trapping both inside. The closed shell is imbued with special type of chakra of turtles which causes extreme gravity for anyone who is inside it. And anyone who has signed the turtle contract will get upper-hand because he will be a "little bit" resistance to that gravity, due to being "slightly" used to it after training with turtles in that shell. The effect of gravity is that great, that anyone standing will feel like, his internal organs are being pulled to his legs and further towards his feet. Though the effects are too great, but the gravity only applies on living beings, not things, objects or any techniques. The shells were of two almighty turtles, whose defense were considered to be the greatest, so for breaking the shells, one must need to use atleast an S-Rank attack or higher in order to break these shells and thus force a way out of it.

Note: -If not dealt within 4 turns, shinobis inside it will die, due to shifting of organs from upper body parts to downwards.
-Usable by Turtles themselves and by the ones who have signed the Turtle contract or any other specie of it.
-Usable once per battle, means, once summoned by anyone, another can't summon it again.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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