September Rap Battle- Bring it!!!

Best Rapper in this thread


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10023213

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Naruawesome you should go against elementalist since hes one of the people leading in the poll(and i already beat himxd)
 

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^ would just like to point out that i haven't battle any of the poll leaders, and i would be more than happy to hand any of you your own heads. seeing how ole scrafty can't seem to respond xd
 

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-__- SUPPRISE'D ihavent ben challenged i posted on pg 18.
 

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You gay pricks think you can rap all freely better not step 2 me thats a fact belive me this shit aint easy ya people better hear me.

Im the bullet in your gun and ima remain fighten till the war is won this shit is still a offical so gentlemen pull out your pistols.

I will lodge a bullet on the side of your brain knock you out unconscious so you wont feel pain you’ll be sitting there twitching feeling like a headless chicken the tasty shit ya eaten when its all ****ed up and bitten i’ll leave his body laying dead shitten
 

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shit man, u just said the wrong words
ya better swallow them now, cause i'm finna cut ya flow into thirds
i leave to get a haircut, and then the weak rise
people voting for me bro, totally not a surprise
but let me kill this battle, more than i already did
i'm breaking niggas backs, snapping 'em like twigs
the poll is up for 2 days, and i'm tied with elementalist and digits
are scare of me bro, rap back or get with it
Hahaha...
No actually, you sir have said the wrong words.
Right now, I'm so Fly, I don't think I'll ever die.
I'm the guy, that was shy, now I'm up there in the sky
You can STFU, and ask if I give a Fuuck
What you said earlier,
I really don't care, you can say whatever
My lyrics make you shiver,
The impact it delivers,
Quicker than a Bullet, harder than a Rock
It's like I took a Mallet, and smashed inside your Socks
The Pain you feel, that shiit never heals
This is real Mother Fuucker,
There's no shield Mother Fuucker
I don't gave 2 shiits if you made the thread
You'll crap 3 Bricks, and wish you were dead
By the time I'm done, you will be stunned...
Yeeah...
 

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Yeah, and isn't a bar 4 lines?

I believe 2 lines is a bar... Anyways in context of a beat a bar is a full measure of a beat.. soif ya rap falls in betwee.n a full measure its a bar

you must have a really abstract style that isn't so abc xd your flow probably just doesn't translate to text very well. that's kind of what i struggle with. not that my lines are long i just focus more on wordplay...

If you'd read my stuff it definitely is abstract cuz I don't stay with the same flow for the whole rap nor stay with the same rhyme pattern. And I play with words and syllables all the time but you want to stay consistent with ya flow and the syllables in a line ... You want to reread it and not trip over words and imagine a beat in the background.. LBeezy is superb at this n so is riker and ranificient oh and ldude and scion hentai... But ran n LBeezy switch up there flow which makes them top tier. My flow sometimes gets messed up...

I'm rambling but yea my main priority above all is to be unpredictable.. too many raps in this thread is the same cookie cutter shit.. like if I had took a shot to how many times I read "I fcked to girl" lol.. like cmon say I fcked to mom or aunt or sister .. I fcked to girl is old now!! So I try not to say the same thing twice and if I do I switch it up or I just do repeat words lol just because nobody else does.. sigh again I'm rambling
 

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Yea I know what u mean.. that's still 2 bars in a half.. look

1 line
2
3
4

5
6
7
8

9
10..

2 and half bars... Lol I think I will do 16 lines or 8 bars

Whoops actually that's 5 bars.. well depends how u look at it but that's too short for.me to get my points across in a rap..

i mean like this

i'm the coolest on the base, you guys can't compare
i'm rapping like its shit, ma truth handles your dare
u dare me to rap,, i dare u to beat me
cause i rap harder than any, even that u should see

thats 4 lines or 4 bars right, i don't know, i do mines like that. and then keep going until u reach 10
 
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Mad mike is taken? Rewind that line, ur brain is full of frustration. I take a 10 pack of beer and smash one bottle over ur head but now im just wastin.. So y not throw a freestyle at u cuz ur always debating. First u say madmike was alrdy stolen then u kick bak in ur roofless home sittin down preyin that the mike wont come bak with a dyke to steal
 

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I believe 2 lines is a bar... Anyways in context of a beat a bar is a full measure of a beat.. soif ya rap falls in betwee.n a full measure its a bar



If you'd read my stuff it definitely is abstract cuz I don't stay with the same flow for the whole rap nor stay with the same rhyme pattern. And I play with words and syllables all the time but you want to stay consistent with ya flow and the syllables in a line ... You want to reread it and not trip over words and imagine a beat in the background.. LBeezy is superb at this n so is riker and ranificient oh and ldude and scion hentai... But ran n LBeezy switch up there flow which makes them top tier. My flow sometimes gets messed up...

I'm rambling but yea my main priority above all is to be unpredictable.. too many raps in this thread is the same cookie cutter shit.. like if I had took a shot to how many times I read "I fcked to girl" lol.. like cmon say I fcked to mom or aunt or sister .. I fcked to girl is old now!! So I try not to say the same thing twice and if I do I switch it up or I just do repeat words lol just because nobody else does.. sigh again I'm rambling

i feel you. i try and stay with the same rhyme pattern so it's easier to follow. i try and model myself off of southern rappers that's based more on cadence and flow as apposed to the bigger words....
 

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My name is Rico Cross check me out I'm pretty good:

 

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Hahaha...
No actually, you sir have said the wrong words.
Right now, I'm so Fly, I don't think I'll ever die.
I'm the guy, that was shy, now I'm up there in the sky
You can STFU, and ask if I give a Fuuck
What you said earlier,
I really don't care, you can say whatever
My lyrics make you shiver,
The impact it delivers,
Quicker than a Bullet, harder than a Rock
It's like I took a Mallet, and smashed inside your Socks
The Pain you feel, that shiit never heals
This is real Mother Fuucker,
There's no shield Mother Fuucker
I don't gave 2 shiits if you made the thread
You'll crap 3 Bricks, and wish you were dead
By the time I'm done, you will be stunned...
Yeeah...

bout time u respond, i had to vm u
bro u suck, get that as a tattoo
u say i'll be stunned, to what, your lyrics
my rhymes are cold, even the newbies fear it
yeah thats u, u can't raps like i can
take it back to ancient egypt, wave me with a fan
u wanna be what u can't, u wanna fit in to the crowd
well the crowd follows me, and you're still not allowed
not allowed to walk with us, my people, my rules
no one needs u, not worthy to be a tool
 

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^ would just like to point out that i haven't battle any of the poll leaders, and i would be more than happy to hand any of you your own heads. seeing how ole scrafty can't seem to respond xd

so you wanna take my head, thats if you can touch me
don't cry for a battle bro, cause ya flow is rustie
i would go all out, but i gotta save ma breath
call up a footlocker worker, to win i don't need a ref
 

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introduction failed! you're still impaled!
grab your blanky baby cuz them rhymes r tired as hell
come at you?! my spiritual preassure could reach you from here!
you take losses as easy as you take in the rear!
open an ear and listen up chump
i'll leave swollen and sic like a case of the mumps
i shrug of hoes and lames a like
you sittin here trying to bench press a meteor-ite.
my lines are heavy and my too hot to the touch
i'm reggie miller in the fourth i'm too damn clutch!
pass the fork to stick in you son..
i've spoke my peace and you're be-yond done
Tf? MY Introduction failed? What about yours?
I could make a better Rap infront of my Whores
I'm a Mean Green, big Fighting Machine
Tear you up, take a cup of my Sweet Green Tea
Mad because you get nothing but Dirty Draws?
I'd play you in Super Smash Brawl, and never Fall
Your lines aren't shiit, wait, yeah they are
Compared to the verses of "Scrafty, the Star"
 

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Go hard my raps tough
Why yo headlind so rough
Niggas back of the back
i be going front trackity track
U niggas are some haters
Cause i stack this paper
Yall be in my swamp like an alligator
U niggas wanna hate
Niggas wanna hate
Why i rap so hard nigga its a trait
Bout to get my chopper
Like the world ending
Knock the ball out the court
Call it goaltending
So selct me in the poll
Cause man i pack a toll nigga
 
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NaruAwesome

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lol bro just because of that I wanna go. You wanna start?

i was told i should go agaisnt u , so here i am
we're tied right now, lets get this battle on film
looks like google, got u far in this battle
u follow me like a snake, a baby after a rattle
i'm finna battle 3 people, finna win all 3
i know i'm good, just write an autobiography of me
 
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