Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±
⊰ [Fūton: Shatta-Kaze] - Wind Release: Shattering Gravity ⊱
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses his wind chakra into two points,one on his opponent's right direction (5 meters away from him) and one on the opponent's left direction also 5 meters away from him,creating two openings inside the sky within these spots,these openings are so small that ain't able to be noticed by the naked eye however it has a great force,these openings starts to suck the air from it is side,meaning the right side opening will suck the air from it's side pulling the opponent's right direction towards it and the left side opening will suck the air from it's side pulling the opponent's left direction towards it,causing the opponent to shutter into two halves because of the pressure that will happen to his body because of the two openings.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Can not use any wind technique at the same time
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±± Declined ±± This would pertain to Vacuum Release not wind. Don't resubmit.
⊰ [Genjutsu/Doton: Gyutto Rikiddo] - Illusion Technique/Earth Release: Hard Liquid ⊱
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal while channeling his own chakra to the opponent's mind casting a genjutsu on the user causing him to see the user creating needles of earth that is summoned around his upper body in the air,which all attacks you at the same time stabbing you very badly,however that needles aren't made of earth they are made of water but the genjutsu trikes the opponent causing him to see the water needles,needles made of earth.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Zanshin
Note: Must have a mastery over Illusion Techniques alongest with Earth Release
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±± Declined ±± *If the needles are Water, why is this labeled as an earth release? Also, this can't be higher than B-Rank. Won't approve any long range genjutsu. This is essentially 2 techniques so it needs to count as such. And remove useless restrictions such as the one i colored.
⊰ [Fūton: Seppaku Tsukenes] - Wind Release: Atmospheric Roots ⊱
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user gathers a good amount of his wind chakra,once the user earns the right amount he focuses that chakra inside the air around 360 degree around the opponent,creating huge roots that is made of wind,which wrap around him with a great force while also binding him inside his place,inflicting a great damage to the opponent's body due to the pressure of the wrap.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Zanshin
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±± Declined ±± Makes no sense.
⊰ [Fūton: Shatta-Kaze] - Wind Release: Shattering Gravity ⊱
Type: Supplementary - Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses his wind chakra into two points,one on his opponent's right direction (5 meters away from him) and one on the opponent's left direction also 5 meters away from him,creating two openings inside the sky within these spots,these openings are so small that ain't able to be noticed by the naked eye however it has a great force,these openings starts to suck the air from it is side,meaning the right side opening will suck the air from it's side pulling the opponent's right direction towards it and the left side opening will suck the air from it's side pulling the opponent's left direction towards it,causing the opponent to shutter into two halves because of the pressure that will happen to his body because of the two openings.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Can not use any wind technique at the same time
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±± Declined ±± This would pertain to Vacuum Release not wind. Don't resubmit.
⊰ [Genjutsu/Doton: Gyutto Rikiddo] - Illusion Technique/Earth Release: Hard Liquid ⊱
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal while channeling his own chakra to the opponent's mind casting a genjutsu on the user causing him to see the user creating needles of earth that is summoned around his upper body in the air,which all attacks you at the same time stabbing you very badly,however that needles aren't made of earth they are made of water but the genjutsu trikes the opponent causing him to see the water needles,needles made of earth.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Zanshin
Note: Must have a mastery over Illusion Techniques alongest with Earth Release
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±± Declined ±± *If the needles are Water, why is this labeled as an earth release? Also, this can't be higher than B-Rank. Won't approve any long range genjutsu. This is essentially 2 techniques so it needs to count as such. And remove useless restrictions such as the one i colored.
⊰ [Fūton: Seppaku Tsukenes] - Wind Release: Atmospheric Roots ⊱
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user gathers a good amount of his wind chakra,once the user earns the right amount he focuses that chakra inside the air around 360 degree around the opponent,creating huge roots that is made of wind,which wrap around him with a great force while also binding him inside his place,inflicting a great damage to the opponent's body due to the pressure of the wrap.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Zanshin
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±± Declined ±± Makes no sense.
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