[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Rozzy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Katon&Doton: Iwa-nenshou Tatsumaki | Fire&Earth Style: Cinder Tornado
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After a fire has been doused and cinders are remaining. The user builds up and channels his fire chakara into the cinders to increase the heat. If the user does not manipulate these burning cinders within 3 turns the cinders will cool, crumble and will not be able to use them. The cinders size vary from pebbles to rocks the size of a fist. Once the fire chakara increase the heat the user then stops channeling his fire chakara and uses his earth chakara manipulate the cinders movements as they are composed of earth, then preforms the Snake, Boar and Tiger hand-seals and forms a violently twister from hundreds of severely hot cinders directed towards the users target at great speeds. It reaches up to about 20 meters in height and has a diameter of 7'1/2 meters. The cinder tornado is very difficult to dodge due to the sheer size of it and its speed towards its target.
Note: Can only be used when a fire is put out by Fire Style: Douse
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Must have begun training in both elements and be up to A rank in at least one.
Note: Can only be taught by ShikamarUchiha10

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~ Declined, has to be at least S rank ~
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‡Bakuryou no Shinpan - Bō Staff of Judgement‡
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: (40 when ability is used)
Damage: N/A
Description: This staff is a long staff crafted by the elders of Iwagakure during the 2nd shinobi world war. The staff is 2 meters long. It has a small, metal cross blade at the end of it and it has a metal section stretching up 1 meter of the staff. It then continues with an extremely dense wood, infused with a special chakara that has made it unbreakable. The grip of the handle fits perfectly to the users palm and has a band which wraps around the users wrist so it will not fall off. The user can swipe this staff along the ground while infusing his doton chakara through it and and earth wall will rise where the user swiped the staff. The staff's blade must tear the ground so the wall will rise up from the ground. The wall is 5 meters in height and is very thick. The wall is able to stop A rank of any cannon elemental jutsu except lightning which it can stop B rank.
~Justu used by the staff counts towards the 3 moves.

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~ Declined, unlimited A rank walls ? No. ~

Katon&Doton: Iwa-nenshou Tatsumaki | Fire&Earth Style: Cinder Tornado
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 45
Damage: 85
Description: After a fire has been doused and cinders are remaining. The user builds up and channels his fire chakara into the cinders to increase the heat. If the user does not manipulate these burning cinders within 3 turns the cinders will cool, crumble and will not be able to use them. The cinders size vary from pebbles to rocks the size of a fist. Once the fire chakara increase the heat the user then stops channeling his fire chakara and uses his earth chakara manipulate the cinders movements as they are composed of earth, then preforms the Snake, Boar and Tiger hand-seals and forms a violently twister from hundreds of severely hot cinders directed towards the users target at great speeds. It reaches up to about 20 meters in height and has a diameter of 7'1/2 meters. The cinder tornado is very difficult to dodge due to the sheer size of it and its speed towards its target.
Note: Can only be used when a fire is put out by Fire Style: Douse
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle
Note: Must have begun training in both elements and be up to A rank in at least one.
Note: Can only be taught by ShikamarUchiha10

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~ Declined; fix chakra and damage points -.- ~

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‡Bakuryou no Shinpan - Bō Staff of Judgement‡
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: (40 when ability is used)
Damage: N/A
Description: This staff is a long staff crafted by the elders of Iwagakure during the 2nd shinobi world war. The staff is 2 meters long. It has a small, metal cross blade at the end of it and it has a metal section stretching up 1 meter of the staff. It then continues with an extremely dense wood, infused with a special chakara that has made it unbreakable. The grip of the handle fits perfectly to the users palm and has a band which wraps around the users wrist so it will not fall off. The user can swipe this staff along the ground while infusing his doton chakara through it and and earth wall will rise where the user swiped the staff. The staff's blade must tear the ground so the wall will rise up from the ground. The wall is 5 meters in height and is very thick. The wall is able to stop A rank of any cannon elemental jutsu except lightning which it can stop B rank.
~Justu used by the staff counts towards the 3 moves.
~The staffs ability can only be used 4 times.

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~ Declined; the wall can stop A-rank canon elemental jutsu ? So it cannot stop C-rank custom earth or water or fire or whatever ? O_O Or do you mean something else ? ~

 

[Hard]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Fūton: Okami Sono Sora) - Wind Release: Emperor Of The Skies
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-10 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Similar to Temari's "Wind Ryder Technique" the user will release his wind chakra outwards and manipulate the air currents beneath his war-fan, or any other fan big enough to be ridden on. He will then jump onto the war-fan as he rides it like a surfboard and is able to go airborne at fairly fast speeds like any traveling wind technique at its peak traveling speed. If the user wishes, he can utilize the war-fan while it is strapped to his back to initiate flight similar to how a kite is flown, however with the user attached to the bottom of it. The user can only glide/ride in a linear manner and not freely fly like regular flight techniques. The user can only change locations in mid flight once(ex. Gain height while going upwards during activation then choose the linear traveling path). After the liner path travel has completed the user will be suspended in mid-air for a total of two turns before the air currents are reduce back to normal, causing the user to start free-falling back down into the ground.

▵ Requires a fan/war-fan
▵ Can be used five times per battle
▵ Must be taught by Hard

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±± Declined ±± Suspended in mid air? Sorry, but its a bit too much for a B-rank wind technique.

I apologize for that. Removed everything about the offensive twist to it :\

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(Fūton: Okami Sono Sora) - Wind Release: Emperor Of The Skies
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: Similar to Temari's "Wind Ryder Technique" the user will release his wind chakra outwards and manipulate the air currents beneath his war-fan, or any other fan big enough to be ridden on. He will then jump onto the war-fan as he rides it like a surfboard and is able to go airborne at fairly fast speeds like any traveling wind technique at its peak traveling speed. If the user wishes, he can utilize the war-fan while it is strapped to his back to initiate flight similar to how a kite is flown, however with the user attached to the bottom of it. The user can only glide/ride in a linear manner and not freely fly like regular flight techniques. The user can only change locations in mid flight once(ex. Gain height while going upwards during activation then choose the linear traveling path). After the liner path travel has completed the user will be suspended in mid-air for a total of two turns before the air currents are reduce back to normal, causing the user to start free-falling back down into the ground.

▵ Requires a fan/war-fan
▵ Can be used four times per battle
▵ Must be taught by Hard

Increased its rank.

~ Declined;just cause I can...xd I mean, Scorps this is yours. ~

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±± Approved ±±

 

[XZA]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Raiton: Taibou Raiton no jutsu)- Greater lightning technique *
Type: Offense, Defence, Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user creates strong, medium-sized weopans, defences and bolts composed of lightning.

~ Declined; no resubmit ~

(Raiton: Seiteki Kumo *)- Lightning release: Static Cloud **
Type: Offense, Defence, Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user releases a burst of a large amount of static electricity from there feet. Then, the user constantly projects and emits*static electricity from their feet creating a blue aura that is the shape of a cloud. The burst sends the user in the air and the projected static keeps the user in the air and use it for transportation.*
Note: Last 5 techniques*

~ Declined; no resubmit ~

The Amp*
Type: Weopan
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A (+10 to lightning)
Description: *The amp is a gold, dual pronged baton that appears very similar to a cattle rod. It is able to extend and retract it whenever the user draws and seathes the Weopan respectively. The Amp is utilized mainly for melee and close quarter combat with any hostile he would encounter. Channeling lightning chakra into the weapon and the Amp is capable of unleashing a thousand volts into every strike made.The user is able to perform several acrobatic moves that enable him to take down human-sized hostiles with ease. Electricity runs in between the two prongs whenever it is swung. The user can *attach a rope of electrical energy at the hilt of the amp and use it to extend the range of the amp.*The tether has a long, limited range. If the amp is weilded by anyone other than 'Echo..' then it will send alot of bolts into whoever it touches, stunning them.*
Note: Can only be used by Echo

~ Declined; no Japanese name ~

 

[The_Empire]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Here is the previous/current weapon in the quote, I have and will dropping for the one below if it gets approved.

-Snake Tail (Hebi No O)
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Hebi No O(Short version:Hebi) was after Dei Dei made is stretchable scarf. He made this sword whip out of the same material just more stronger. Hebi is a 6-part segmented blade; each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with 2 pick-like protrusions on the front and back of each segment, with the ones on the front much longer than the ones at the back. The segments are connected by a stretchable thread that is a very strong material, making Hebi more useful as a whip than an actual sword, though it can serve as a regular sword just as easily, thanks to Dei Dei swordsmanship. Hebi's guard and handle remain the same as a normal katana. While Hebi can be stretched to incredible lengths in its whip form, Dei Dei has a limit of three consecutive attacks before having to bring the segments of Hebi back together for recovery -which makes him fairly vulnerable during this time interval. To make up for this, Dei Dei has to have a plan ahead of time. It is also wrapped in bandages when not in use and the bandages is attached on the hilt which acts on the user will.

-Mid range is the limit it can reach
-It can be used three times back to back when it is stretched out. After the third use it has to retract to recover for one turn.
-Only used by Dei Dei

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(This sword just acts the same as in Bleach but without it going to long range.)

Dropping this

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for the one above if it gets approved.

I took out the bold part the mod had bolded. It really didn't mean anything but oh well it is out now.

±± Approved ±± Yeah it did actually. It meant you could grow your sword segments almost without limit. lol

I am making this weapon again which was approved by Nexus and offically by Izuna Uchiha

Scarf Arm (Erimaki Ude)
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This weapon was made by Dei Dei. It took him over four years to develope. He was experimenting with different materials, after he had an experiment done on him by Nexus and Nero which allowed him to stretch his arms, legs and neck. He made this material that stretch just like rubber but isn`t rubber. He wasn`t proud with it so he did more experimenting and made a material that stretched, is thick which makes it a strong material and able to channel normal chakra through it so it can be manipulate it for various objectives. The objectives are, throwing weapons, wielding a katana, and punching an opponent. The material is shaped like a scarf with a hand on the end and is all black.
-Only used every other turn
-Stretches up to mid range

Took out the lift part that Nexus didn`t like.

~Approved~

Scarf Arm (Erimaki Ude)
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This weapon was made by Solf J. Kimblee. It took him over four years to develope. He was experimenting with different materials, after he had an experiment done on him by Nexus and Nero which allowed him to stretch his arms, legs and neck. He made this material that stretch just like rubber but isn`t rubber. He wasn`t proud with it so he did more experimenting and made a material that stretched, is thick which makes it a strong material and able to channel normal chakra through it so it can be manipulate it for various objectives. The objectives are, throwing weapons, wielding a katana, and punching an opponent. The material is shaped like a scarf with a hand on the end and is all black.
-Only used by Solf J. Kimblee
-Stretches up to mid range

Took the part about used every other turn and added only used my me, also changed name in description.

~ Declined; no link to quote provided ~

Lightning Release: Lightning Sphere Storm (Raiton: Kaminari-Kyu no Arashi)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user place their hands a few inches away from each other and generate lightning in between them creating a sphere of electricity in between the hands. The sphere is the size of a soccer ball. The sphere sends out lightning bolts around the user in an unpredictable manner making it hard to understand where the bolts will shoot out to strike. The user can remove their hands from around the sphere and the sphere disperses the lightning bolts are sent out everywhere around the user.
-Only used twice per battle
-No S rank during or after the turn this is used
-Only taught by Solf J. Kimblee
-Must wait one turn before using again
-The bolts are unpredictable when they are sent out the sphere and when the sphere disperses

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Added Japanese name and chaka and damage that I had forgot about on my last time posting this jutsu.

~ So...it could shock you ? ~

Lightning Release: Lightning Sphere Storm (Raiton: Kaminari-Kyu no Arashi)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user place their hands a few inches away from each other and generate lightning in between them creating a sphere of electricity in between the hands. The sphere is the size of a soccer ball. The sphere sends out lightning bolts around the user in an unpredictable manner making it hard to understand where the bolts will shoot out to strike. The user can remove their hands from around the sphere and the sphere disperses the lightning bolts are sent out everywhere around the user.
-Only used twice per battle
-No S rank during or after the turn this is used
-Only taught by Solf J. Kimblee
-Must wait one turn before using again
-The bolts are unpredictable when they are sent out the sphere and when the sphere disperses

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No the lightning wouldn't hit me because it would go around me the description says "everywhere around the user".

~ Declined; the phrase "everywhere around the user" does not exist in the correct context in the technique, as it implies that happens only after hands are removed ~

Summon Technique: Naga (Kuchiyose: Naga)
Type: Summoing
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user summons a gaint polar bear. The polar bear name is Naga. Naga is an unique bear of the whole Bear clan. He is a bear who acts like a dog. He sticks his tongue out like a dog panting. He likes licking the user face. Naga seems like he has no kind of ability until he is in a battle. His abilities are speed, reflex, tracking and taijutsu. Naga speed and relex is comparted to an Kage rank shinobi. Naga can use all of the user taijutsu he/she can use. Naga can use chakra but no elemental chakra. Naga tracking ability uses his nose to smell his target, tracking up to mid range really good but long range Naga can still smell the target but not really good. Naga is big enough to carry two grown adults on his back.
-He can only be summoned once per battle
-He stands on the field as long as the user or Naga likes as long as he isn't harmed(bleeding to bad or just got knocked out or is running out of chakra/stamina) and there isn't more then one summon on the field from the user.
-Signed the Bear contract

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±± Declined ±± Link to having signed the summoning contract?

Summon Technique: Naga (Kuchiyose: Naga)
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user summons a gaint polar bear. The polar bear name is Naga. Naga is an unique bear of the whole Bear clan. He is a bear who acts like a dog. He sticks his tongue out like a dog panting. He likes licking the user face. Naga seems like he has no kind of ability until he is in a battle. His abilities are speed, reflex, tracking and taijutsu. Naga speed and relex is comparted to an Kage rank shinobi. Naga can use all of the user taijutsu he/she can use. Naga can use chakra but no elemental chakra. Naga tracking ability uses his nose to smell his target, tracking up to mid range really good but long range Naga can still smell the target but not really good. Naga is big enough to carry two grown adults on his back.
-He can only be summoned once per battle
-He stands on the field as long as the user or Naga likes as long as he isn't harmed(bleeding to bad or just got knocked out or is running out of chakra/stamina) and there isn't more then one summon on the field from the user.
-Signed the Bear contract

~ Declined; I find it incredibly hard to believe a massive quadrupedal ursine can use any and all Taijutsu including things designed for lithe bipeds and/or the celestial gate techniques. ~

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[BusinessManTeno]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Hope this is better. :crazy:

(fukabun atomikku) Fiery Atomic
Rank:S
Range:Short
Type:Attack/Defense
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: This Sword is said to pass down from a family of Scorch users throughout the years. The blade is made from Black Metal, With Gold Lines down the middle of both sides.. It was said to be a forbidden black smith material back in the day. Nether the less. It could infuse The Scorch KG. Since the sword could hold the extreme heat of a SCORCH KG, they had to make a holster that could stand the extreme heat. The Holster is white with Silver lines down the middle. The holster can be equipped on the side of the person. This blade is special because of how it can be used. The User will draw his blade out Channeling his Chakra into the sword giving it the Scorch Ability. Once Drawn, the Sword Can emit scorch heat waves. The heat waves emit by the user simply Channeling his chakra into the blade (like said before). The user can only emit Scorch Chakra through the blade 5 times. .... The Scorch Heat wave can be used in a offensive way also. The user will swing his sword causing massive heat waves. The heat waves will form into scorch orbs . (Can form up to 4 Scorch orbs at a time)


Can Block Up to S Rank Water

Can not use Basic Ninjutsu Once the sword is even used ONCE

No Water jutsus Above B Rank While the Sword is Drawn

The Scorch Wave can travel up to Mid range

No Fire and Wind Jutsus Above A Rank While the sword is drawn

Using the Sword abilities counts as 1 of the user 3 turns

Can Only Be used by Teno

~Leaving for another mod~ I give up
~ You get free heatwaves and orbs so many times ? No. Also, what is "Basic Ninjutsu" ~

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(fukabun atomikku) Fiery Atomic
Rank:S
Range:Short
Type:Attack/Defense
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: This Sword is said to pass down from a family of Scorch users throughout the years. The blade is made from Black Metal, With Gold Lines down the middle of both sides.. It was said to be a forbidden black smith material back in the day. Nether the less. It could infuse The Scorch KG. Since the sword could hold the extreme heat of a SCORCH KG, they had to make a holster that could stand the extreme heat. The Holster is white with Silver lines down the middle. The holster can be equipped on the side of the person. This blade is special because of how it can be used. The User will draw his blade out Channeling his Chakra into the sword giving it the Scorch Ability. Once Drawn, the Sword Can emit scorch heat waves. The heat waves emit by the user simply Channeling his chakra into the blade (like said before). The user can only emit Scorch Chakra through the blade 3 times. .... The Scorch Heat wave can be used in a offensive way also. The user will swing his sword causing massive heat waves. The heat waves will form into scorch orbs . (Can form up to 4 Scorch orbs at a time)


Can Block Up to S Rank Water

Can Only Use elemental Ninjutsu Once the sword is drawn until it is put back into the holster.

Can Only Use 3 times

The Scorch Wave can travel up to Mid range

No Fire and Wind Jutsus Above A Rank While the sword is drawn

Using the Sword abilities counts as 1 of the user 3 turns

Can Only Be used by Teno


~ Declined; you confused me with the slashes becoming orbs which seems like unnecessary, but also you can "only use elemental ninjutsu" wow, that's such a strict restriction isn't it -.- ~
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(Katon:Taka panchi) Fire Style: Falcon Punch
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:. The User will Charge Fire chakra in their dominant hand . Once done the User will then form a falcon made of fire on their fist while punching the opponent. The Fire falcon is about the same size as the user. If the user punches land successfully the fire will engulf the opponent . Causing severe injury's .

Note:Can Use 3 turns
Note:Cant Use Fire Above A Rank Next turn
Note:Can only be taught my Teno

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~ Declined; no resubmit ~
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(Shakuton:Taiyou hateshinai) Scorch Style:Sun Of Everlasting
Rank:Forbidden
Type:Sup
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/a (40 to user)
Description: The User will first start off by doing a sequence of 4 handseals. Once done the user will exhale alot of hot air (heat waves) from their mouth, heading towards the opponent , Behind them.. These heatwaves are not harmful, and they are not visible to the naked eye. Once done, in a matter of seconds (About 3 seconds) the user will do the tiger handseal. With Great haste the Heatwaves form a Huge Scorch Sun. About the size of the earth mountain aandwhich (Just giving a rough outlook on how tall and wide it is) This Sun purpose is to not drain the water out of the opponent. But to Drain the Water Chakra out of the opponent . Causing the Opponent not to be able to use any Water Jutsu As long as it stays on the field. The Scorch Sun is beyond long range but still have a Major affect on the opponent. As the heatwaves will travel towards them attacking their water chakra system. Due to the large strain of jutsu this is. The user will suffer dizzyness for about 5seconds..

:Note:Can only use Once
:Note:The Scorch Sun Stays on the field for 4 turns unless destroyed
:Note:This jutsu takes up 2 slots due to the enormous amount of chakra it takes.
:Note:Will Be dizzy for about 5seconds. Making you see double
:Note:Cant Use Fire Or Wind Above A rank in the same turn or the next turn
:Note:Only Taught by Teno

~ Declined; do not resubmit ~

 

[Yūsuke1]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Fuuton : Chitedanmaku) - Wind Release : Thousand Hands Barrage
Rank : A
Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : 80
Description : The user concentrates wind chakra into either their left or right arm and then thrusts it forward and releases a large, condensed beam of wind towards any direction they like. Upon the wind beam reaching short-range, it explodes into a barrage of wind hands with detached arms. The hands race among themselves, pushing other hands behind them, making the illusionary sight that there are thousands of hands whereas in actual, there are only about twenty. The hands are as strong as hurricanes that can knock enemies down easily and thats basically what they do. They will continue to harass the enemy all over their body, not letting them the chance to get back on their feet until dealt with or released.

Note: Created by -Yusuke-
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: The hands can perform other tasks too if wanted
Note: Only lasts for three of the user's turn before dissipating

~ Declined, a hurricane is much stronger than that ~

(Fuuton : Chitedanmaku) - Wind Release : Thousand Hands Barrage
Rank : S
Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : 80
Description : The user concentrates wind chakra into either their left or right arm and then thrusts it forward and releases a large, condensed beam of wind towards any direction they like. Upon the wind beam reaching short-range, it explodes into a barrage of wind hands with detached arms. The hands race among themselves, pushing other hands behind them, making the illusionary sight that there are thousands of hands whereas in actual, there are only about twenty. The hands will rip through the target's skin and into their flesh, all around their body as though the hands were devouring the opponent's body.

Note: Created by -Yusuke-
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: The hands can perform other tasks too if wanted
Note: Only lasts for three of the user's turn before dissipating or countered
Note: No wind techniques higher than S-rank to be used the same turn

~ Declined; lasts for three turns ? Hell no. If you want this approved, it has to be a normal jutsu that is used, attacks and stops, and can be used only twice. ~

 

[Kato.]

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Current CW which I will be dropping if this new CW is approved



(Doki Issui Tentei) Wrath of the Sea God
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Close-Mid
Damage: 80
Chakra: 40
Description: Wrath of the Water God is a golden long trident, which is made from a mixture of chakra metals and is indestructible. The trident is 190 cm long and has spiralling patterns engraved into it. The trident is bound to the user and has the ability to summon water as the user swings the trident. The water that is summoned can be used in several forms, as a projectile, as a shield or as a way of boosting the strength of physical strikes with the trident. All of the summoned water is A rank and counts towards the users three jutsu limit per turn. If another person touches the trident whilst the user is wielding it they will receive burst of chakra through the art of their body they touched it with, numbing it and restricting its use. The trident can also sense water jutsu and thus when the user is wielding it the trident will notify the user when/where a water jutsu is coming.

-All the trident's abilities count towards the three jutsu limit, except sensing the water jutsu
-To use the ability to sense the water jutsu the user must be in contact with the trident
-The user cannot use S rank water while the trident is active (Being strapped on the users back does not count as active)
-Is someone other than the user touches the trident a burst of chakra will be sent through them, numbing the part of the body they touched (this doesn't go for striking with the trident)
-Can only be wielded by Kato Rokuemon

~ Declined, enough and more techniques that summon water ~

(Doki Issui Tentei) Wrath of the Sea God
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Close-Mid
Damage: 80
Chakra: 40
Description: Wrath of the Water God is a golden long trident, which is made from a mixture of chakra metals and is indestructible. The trident is 190 cm long and has spiralling patterns engraved into it. The trident is bound to the user and boosts the power of the users water jutsu by +5 it also has the ability to fire high velocity water as the user swings the trident. The water that is fired can be used in several forms, as a projectile, as a shield or as a way of boosting the strength of physical strikes with the trident. All of the summoned water is A rank and counts towards the users three jutsu limit per turn. If another person touches the trident whilst the user is wielding it they will receive burst of chakra through the art of their body they touched it with, numbing it and restricting its use. The trident can also sense water jutsu and thus when the user is wielding it the trident will notify the user when/where a water jutsu is coming.

-All the trident's abilities count towards the three jutsu limit, except sensing the water jutsu
-To use the ability to sense the water jutsu the user must be in contact with the trident
-The user cannot use S rank water while the trident is active (Being strapped on the users back does not count as active)
-Is someone other than the user touches the trident a burst of chakra will be sent through them, numbing the part of the body they touched (this doesn't go for striking with the trident)
-Can only be wielded by Kato.

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Enough with the damage boosting and elemental shooting weapons.

(Suiton: Shiroppu Tama Kinko) Water Release: Syrup Sphere Imprisonment
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage: 60
Chakra: 30
Description: The user will form the Tiger handseal and create a thick layer of syrup above the opponent that quickly surrounds them, encasing them in a thick sticky sphere which restricts their movements completely

-Does not require a water source
-Can only be taught by Kato.

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Just because its syrup, doesn't mean its not similar to gushing water imprisonment, a cannon technique

(Suiton: ) Water Release: Bursting Water Stream
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Damage: N/A
Chakra: 15
Description: The user gathers water chakra at a certain point in their body and releases it as a stream of water which propels them in the required direction. The water can be released from any of the limbs or the mouth.

-Can only be taught by Kato.

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±± Declined ±± Similar technique exists

 

[Pervyy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

New cycle... yeyyyy


(Katon: Nori no Ho Doragon) Fire Release: Law of the Fire Dragon
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: All
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 100
Description: The user will bring their hands together focussing a mass of fire chakra between their hands compressing it all as much as they can increaing the heat. As they do a ball of fire will form between their hands as the chakra builds up to it's maximum, then the user will release compressed fire in an ourward blast all around to long range scorching the entire field leaving a huge crater hitting everything within a 50 meter diameter. This fire incinerates almost anything it comes into contract spreading outwards like a giant orb. If this jutsu is used within a mode that uses Natural energy, the jutsu will be infused with natural energy and will not be weak to water jutsu, but neutral.

Note: Use able once.
Note: Dude to the strain of the attack, the user can't use S rank or above attacks for 2 turns.
Note: Due to the strain from the use of this jutsu, the user can't use taijutsu for the next two turns from the strain on their body
Note: If used in a mode that requires Natural energy, it reduces the mode by two turns.

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing techniques.

(Suiton: Houkou no Mizu Doragon) - Water release: Roar of the Water Dragon
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user channels massive amounts of water chakra throughout the body entirely. Once this is done the user will bring the chakra up through the throat, and release an extremely powerful spirallying stream of water from their mouth. This stream expans outwards the further it travels like cone shape, and can have a diameter of up to 4 meters at long range. The water rotates at an extreme speed as it shoots forwards to increase the force of impact.

►Must be Kage Rank.
►Can only be used 2 times per battle.
►No A rank or above water techniques the following turn

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±± Declined ±± Similar to existing techniques.

(Suiton: kensei no doragon ) - Water Release: Power of the Dragon
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique is speciallised for those who have great control over their water chakra. This is usually used in close combat where the user will release their water chakra around a part of their body covering them in a 2 inch layer of water. This water is rotating around their body like a water rasengan wrapped around a limb. Due to it being the user's chakra and not that strong, it wont hurt the user, which can be quite painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is hit by this water created be the user, it will great a burst of rotating water on impact from the user, creating a forceful blast of rotating water forwards which can cause create a strong impact, almost like being punched by tsunade. The water release forwards only goes 3-4 feet, but it can soak an opponent.

Note: can stay active for 2 turns at a time
Note: Can't use lightning jutsu at the same time

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±± Declined ±± Collides with Fishman Karate

 

[Wakizashi]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(kuchiyose no jutsu: kyofu)-summoning jutsu: kyofu
Type: Summoning/Attack
Rank: S
Range:mid-long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:the user bites their thumb to draw blood weave the summoning jutsu hand signs and place their hands on the ground. When done a full grown Akamaru size toucan appears in a puff of smoke. This toucan has a blade located where his top beak should be, that is able to spin fast enough to when he sticks is beak to the ground he can easily dig into it, His wings big enough to cause great winds when they are flapped, and has razor sharp talon attachment to make them abnormally sharp. He is also able to use raiton to make his spinning blade beak and talons more penetrable when attacking.
-note: can only be summoned once
-note: summoning last three turns
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must sign toco toucan contract

~ Declined, highly doubt a Toucan only double the size of a human can cause "great winds" by flapping ~

( Kaminari no yobidashi)- lightning call
Type: supplementary
Rank:A
Range:n/a
Chakra:30
Damage:(+15 damage to standard attacks)
Description:kyofu makes the most unbearable croak that will send chakra out from his croak to the sky and cut off there sense of hearing. The chakra will cause clouds to form. once the clouds fully form to where thunder sounds and lightning passes thru the clouds kyofu will then fly to the sky and use his blade beak as a conductor and attract the lightning and mold it with his own chakra.
-note: can only be used twice
-note: one turn must be in between each use
-note: jutsu last one turns
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must signed the toco toucan contract

( Saigai no kaiten ha)-spinning blade of calamity
Type:attack
Rank:A
Range:mid-long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:kyofu begins raise his head to the sky as he opens his mouth, the top blade beak starts spinning. Once the blade spin at it’s highest velocity kyofu then slams it to the ground, drilling it with the blade beak. This in result creates a earthquake that causes the shattering ground underneath to smash the opponent. Combined with the lightning call jutsu makes the lightning on the beak run thru the ground and shock the opponent if he’s not already dead.
-note: can only be used twice
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: lightning call used by this summons will count as one move.
-note: must have signed the toco toucan contract.

~ Declined, get Kyofu approved first ~

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(kuchiyose no jutsu: kyofu)-summoning jutsu: kyofu
Type: Summoning/Attack
Rank: S
Range:mid-long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:the user bites their thumb to draw blood weave the summoning jutsu hand signs and place their hands on the ground. When done a full grown Akamaru size toucan appears in a puff of smoke. This toucan has a blade located where his top beak should be, that is able to spin fast enough to when he sticks is beak to the ground he can easily dig into it, normal sized wings, and has razor sharp talon attachment to make them abnormally sharp. He is also able to use raiton to make his spinning blade beak and talons more penetrable when attacking.
-note: can only be summoned once
-note: summoning last three turns
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must sign toco toucan contract

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±± Declined ±± Why is this mid-long range?

( Kaminari no yobidashi)- lightning call
Type: supplementary
Rank:A
Range:n/a
Chakra:30
Damage:(+15 damage to standard attacks)
Description:kyofu makes the most unbearable croak that will send chakra out from his croak to the sky and cut off there sense of hearing. The chakra will cause clouds to form. once the clouds fully form to where thunder sounds and lightning passes thru the clouds kyofu will then fly to the sky and use his blade beak as a conductor and attract the lightning and mold it with his own chakra.
-note: can only be used twice
-note: one turn must be in between each use
-note: jutsu last one turns
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: must signed the toco toucan contract

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±± Declined ±± The summon wasn't approved

( Saigai no kaiten ha)-spinning blade of calamity
Type:attack
Rank:A
Range:mid-long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:kyofu begins raise his head to the sky as he opens his mouth, the top blade beak starts spinning. Once the blade spin at it’s highest velocity kyofu then slams it to the ground, drilling it with the blade beak. This in result creates a earthquake that causes the shattering ground underneath to smash the opponent. Combined with the lightning call jutsu makes the lightning on the beak run thru the ground and shock the opponent if he’s not already dead.
-note: can only be used twice
-note: no other summons can be in play
-note: lightning call used by this summons will count as one move.
-note: must have signed the toco toucan contract.

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±± Declined ±± The summon wasn't approved

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon/Doton: Chikyū Basutā) - Fire Release/Earth Release: Earth Buster
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will within any range of this technique, materlize small sized highly compressed earth spheres, which are floating in the air, where created. These are barely visible, thus hard to notice at first. Nonetheless, once created the user releases fire chakra into them. A littlle spark appears from the spheres whereafter instantly erupting into an explosion, damaging everything within short-range of the explosion. Even though this sounds like a tiresome and long procces, it takes near to no time.
~Useable 4x

~ Declined, enlighten me on how earth randomly explodes like that ? ~

Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin: Kekkyojin no Don'yoku Hinan | Dance of the Bearded Sage: Lustful Escape of the Caveman
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Hair will erupt from anywhere, of the user's body, of their desire(However, already grown out hair, can be used for this as well). It will erupt rapidly and harden into that of steel quality and make it way through various objects creating a tunnel, whilst the user will be sucked into the tunnel and aided by the hair to travel through the tunnel at high speeds. The end of the tunnel is entirely up to what the user wants it, to be formed as, if it should be a pod wherefrom he emerges from, or just a hole where he will be shot out from. After usage or while performing the technique the user is capable of detatching the hair at anytime.
~Useable 3x per battle.
~S-ranked jutsus of this Fightning Style cannot be used the same or following turn.

~ Declined, umm...no. Just no. No resubmit. ~

The above jutsu is for my CFS;

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(Katon/Doton: Chiryuku Basutā) - Fire Release/Earth Release: Earth Buster
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will within any range of this technique, materlize small sized highly compressed earth spheres, which are floating in the air, where created. These are barely visible, thus hard to notice at first. Anyways, once created the user releases fire chakra into them, filling them up to the whim. Due the pressure from the fire that have built up over time, will cause the earth spheres to shatter and the highly compressed fire would erupt into an explosion, damaging everything short-range of the spheres. The only warning given is the little spark upon detonation, unless spotted of course. Even though this sounds like a tiresome and long procces, it actually takes near to no time.
~Useable 4x

Explained what you asked for. O_O

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±± Declined ±± Too small for the damage you describe. Anything short range from them, barely noticeable, can be done anywhere within short-long range and you can do as much as you want. Not only that but how come these can be materialized out of thin air? Earth techniques so far are done in 3 ways: Summoning portal (sticky drop, earthen lid), from your own body or by manipulating existing earth. Not from thin air.

 

[ZK]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Resubmitting. I removed all the creature parts and made the purpose clear:

(Amebuyou: Shin'youshuu) Rain Dancing: Collection of Mythology
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 per creation)
Damage points: 60
Description: The user smears blood over his hands and forms a single handseal. At the sign of the handseal, the user extends energy outwards and infuses all existing sources of rain with chakra. This technique does not affect an opponent’s technique. By using short and precise gestures to knead the chakra in the rain, this technique allows the user to slightly increase the size of the individual raindrops and make them light up because of the chakra inside them. As such, this technique sets up a frame that moves from raindrop to raindrop to create the illusion of movement. While this method is just as efficient as actually creating the creatures, it is infinitely many times simpler. As the frame nears its target, the chakra inside the raindrops turns unstable in nature, exploding violently and causing shockwaves of rain and chakra to hit the target and everything in its near vicinity.
- All shapes must be created at least five (5) meters away from the target.
-Can only be used trice (3) per battle.
-No S-ranked Rain techniques may be used during the following turn.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

~ Approved ~



Resubmitting. I haven't changed anything, as it was declined because I was in detention.

(Ichitenkai) One Point Release
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: A Taijutsu technique where the user opens the First Gate (Kaimon) for a single moment, harnessing all of its power into a single punch or kick. While destruction on a great scale is the trademark of the Eight Internal Gates, this technique requires a great deal of finesse and skill. By using the joints in the arm and by moving one’s body with incredible precision, the user transforms the single, destructive attack into a focused, whip-like strike. Instead of breaking many bones or crushing entire boulders, this technique allows the single attack to solely affect the point it hits, in return for completely destroying that single point.
-Can only be used twice (2) per battle.
-No S-ranked Taijutsu techniques can be used during the following turn.
-This does not count as an actual opening of the First Gate (Kaimon).
-The user must be able to open the Kaimon to use this technique.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

~ No, it has to count if you want it. ~

New submission:

(Tetsujō) Razor Wire
Rank: S
Type: Armor
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: Tetsujō is a sentient, tight-fitting bodysuit that encases the user’s upper body like a second layer of skin. Similar to Samehada in terms of function, Tetsujō shares a semi-symbiotic bond with its wielder, constantly absorbing his/her chakra, be it normal or abnormal, in order to remain sentient and functional. The main characteristic of Tetsujō is its ability to change the chakra signature of everything it absorbs. Through miniscule vibrations and fluctuations, the suit changes the signature of all the chakra it absorbs and injects it back into the user’s chakra pathway system in almost constant bursts. Normally, foreign chakra would disturb and disrupt the chakra pathways, but through the symbiotic bond the armor and wielder shares, Tetsujō is able to function as a purifier of sorts, guiding the user’s body through an almost instant process of adaption, though still altering its wilder's chakra flow. With its incredible ability to evolve, Tetsujō is also able to perform this process on unusual types of chakra. This constant process of change and evolution also serves to gradually, but continuously, change the user’s chakra signature on a fundamental level. Generally, Tetsujō will render illusionists unable to use dual-layered illusions on its wielder and make it all but impossible for Sensors to recognize its wilder’s chakra signature. Furthermore, Tetsujō makes the user’s constantly changing chakra impossible to mimic. Through its continuous changing of the user’s chakra signature, Tetsujō also decreases the rank of all Genjutsu Techniques cast on its wielder by one rank. Finally, Tetsujō is able to harshly constrict itself around its wilder’s body for a short amount of time.
If anyone but the wielder touches Tetsujō, the suit releases a harmful burst of chakra into the perpetrators chakra pathway system, ruining his/her balance and equilibrium for a short amount of time.
- Tetsujō cannot decrease the rank of a Mangekyō Sharingan Genjutsu.

~ Some restrictions ? ~

Yes, this'll replace my old Custom 'Weapon'.

Resubmitting:

(Tetsujō) Razor Wire
Rank: S
Type: Armor
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: Tetsujō is a sentient, tight-fitting bodysuit that encases the user’s upper body like a second layer of skin. Similar to Samehada in terms of function, Tetsujō shares a semi-symbiotic bond with its wielder, constantly absorbing his/her chakra, be it normal or abnormal, in order to remain sentient and functional. The main characteristic of Tetsujō is its ability to change the chakra signature of everything it absorbs. Through miniscule vibrations and fluctuations, the suit changes the signature of all the chakra it absorbs and injects it back into the user’s chakra pathway system in almost constant bursts. Normally, foreign chakra would disturb and disrupt the chakra pathways, but through the symbiotic bond the armor and wielder shares, Tetsujō is able to function as a purifier of sorts, guiding the user’s body through an almost instant process of adaption, though still altering its wielder's chakra flow. With its incredible ability to evolve, Tetsujō is also able to perform this process on unusual types of chakra. This constant process of change and evolution also serves to gradually, but continuously, change the user’s chakra signature on a fundamental level. Generally, Tetsujō will render illusionists unable to use dual-layered illusions on its wielder and make it all but impossible for Sensors to recognize its wilder’s chakra signature. Furthermore, Tetsujō makes the user’s constantly changing chakra impossible to mimic. Through its continuous changing of the user’s chakra signature, Tetsujō also decreases the rank of all Genjutsu Techniques cast on its wielder by one rank. Finally, Tetsujō is able to harshly constrict itself around its wilder’s body for a short amount of time.
If anyone but the wielder touches Tetsujō, the suit releases a harmful burst of chakra into the perpetrators chakra pathway system, ruining his/her balance and equilibrium for a short amount of time.
With the ability to absorb its wielder's chakra, Tetsujō is able to repair itself, making it very hard to remove from the user's body.
-Tetsujō cannot decrease the rank of a Mangekyō Sharingan Genjutsu.
-Because of the fluctuations Tetsujō constantly causes, all Genjutsu techniques used by the user loses one rank in terms of strength.
-Due to Tetsujō constantly changing the user's chakra signature, it is easy for a Shinobi with a sensory ability to distinguish between the user and clones of all kinds.

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±± Leaving for Emperor ±±
~ First you state that sensors cannot distinugish user's chakra signature, but second you state they can pick it out because it constantly changes ? Remove all references to sensory blocking and then its approvable. ~

New submission:

(Fūinjutsu: Inpu) Sealing Technique: Book of Seals
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A (+10 to Fūinjutsu)
Damage points: N/A
Description: With few exceptions, Fūinjutsu requires paper and ink in some form, which drastically reduces its capabilities in combat. Inpu describes the ability to create tags and sealing arrays out of pure chakra, completely removing the need for paper and ink. Though it requires extensive training in calligraphy and Fūinjutsu to use Inpu properly, a successful user will be able to create sealing tags and arrays out of chakra alone. These creations, however, do not surpass the abilities of their counterparts.
-As Inpu is a general skill, it can only be used if the user has included it in his/her biography.
-Inpu does not improve any Fūinjutsu Technique in any way, beyond allowing its user to create the seals, tags and arrays of chakra.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

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±± Declined ±± The thing is that seals require a medium to seal something into. That medium is generally the scrolls and the sealing formulas produced. You can't assume you can make all seals work without a medium and by writing in thin air when they were all designed to work like that. You can submit individual sealing techniques that can be made without the need for scrolls, tags, etc. but you can't, in any way make all of the existing fuuin become usable in this manner. Not only that, but adding +10 to fuuin is something i will never approve and this would also be a hidden ability, not a CJ on itself, thus it can't be submitted.

 

[Nagato..]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Doton: Jari doroppu | Earth release: Gravel Drop
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Descripton: This allows the user to summon a massive amount 5 millimeter sized earth gravel from the sky crashing it into the opponent. The gravel must be summoned at least 5 meters above the opponent to have any real effect as gravel is composed of many small but sharp rocks.

Can be used 4x per battle.
Can only be taught by Ryoku

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±± Declined ±± Summon from where? Restrictions? 5 meters?

Serpents Wrath | Hebi no Ikari
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique allows the use to manipulate their limbs of choosing to flex in various motions and have the elasticity as of a serpents body. This allows for constricting opponents movements at close range and provides surprising offensive counters for the user.

Can only be used 3x per battle
Must have signed the snake contract.
Can only be taught by Ryoku

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±± Declined ±± How can this work? There is already a canon technique to make your body more flexible you know?

 

[-Broly-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Ōkina ōdo: Great Aether
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user charges fire chakra into their sword and delivers a mighty uppercut into the opponent, knocking him into the air and giving searing cuts. Then the user jumps into the air with the opponent and delivers six more slashes before delivering a double handed downward slash sending the opponent back to the ground and releasing a 4 ft high and wide flame pillar from the ground into the opponent upon landing that burns the opponent further

-The user may only use this 3 times per battle
-Only teachable by goku2000

~Approved~

Ah! Furīza-sama!: Ah, Lord Frieza!
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage:80
Description: Similar to how a wood user can shrink a clone into a seed and re-expand him into normal size but on a greater scale. The user first creates either a seed in his hand and throws it either in the air or directly at the opponent and then makes a single handseal using his chakra and shape manipulation to expand the seed or seeds into a large, thick tree in an instant that crashes towards the opponent. The tree can be up to 15 ft long and 15 ft in diameter.

-Can only use three times per battle
-Only teachable by Goku2000

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit

Note I had trouble deciding on the rank. If this deserves to be S rank then please change it to that

Kyōdaina ōku no iki:The Mighty Oak's Breath
Type: Offensve, Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short (absorbtion) Short-Mid (release)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The is used by using a prior wood source be it trees summoned before or a newly summoned pillar in short range of the user. Utilizing a water technique used against him that is in short range of the wood or the water the user summons that is in short range of the wood by using the wood and his chakra, opens the pores of the wood making them absorb any water technique up to s rank into the trees which then at any time can be released back at the opponent. Due to the woods elemental advantage over water the wood can absorb any water up to 1 rank above the wood.

- Wood can absorb any water up to one rank above the wood
-The water retained can be released up to mid range
-The size of the water and damage of the water released is proportionate to the water absorbed
-Can only be used 3 times per battle
-Cannot use lightning techniques around the wood when water is absorbed or else they will break apart
-Can only hold one water technique at a time

Note I had trouble deciding on the rank. If this deserves to be A rank then please change it to that

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±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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fuuton: shippuu kei ( wind release: hurricane whip)
Type: supp/offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will begin to focus wind chakra into their legs and then unto the ground the user will then manipulate the wind chakra to begin to spin lifting him up off the ground and will knock the enemy back slightly from the force and then will continue to move forward ( you can move wit the hurricane but no faster then you can walk/run) the user will then jump down garbing onto the hurricane he has created and as he lands he will turn it around and throw it like a whip at the enemy knocking them to the side that they are hit.) injuring them slightly and cuasing bleeding on a small degree.
note: can only be used twice
note: no wind jutsu above a rank next turn

~ Declined, clear up the description ~
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hyouton: hyoukai koori ( ice release: melted ice)
Type: supp
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will make 5 hand seals and focus his wind and water chakra into any ice on the field, using his chakra he will mix it into the already existing ice making the ice infused with his own chakra then by making one final hand seal and releasing his chakra from the inside of the ice like he would any other jutsu he wants to release. by doing this he will release the chakra from the ice and without the chakra the ice will melt in seconds as it has been mixed with the users chakra, like the ice has now become his own jutsu. so now he can release it in the same fashion as any other ice jutsu.
note: works on all ice jutsus, and all ice of any shape or size
note: can only be used twice
note: no ice jutsu above A rank next turn

~ Declined, the explanation started off well, but it then confused me completely into the last few sentences ~

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fuuton: shippuu kei ( wind release: hurricane whip)
Type: supp/offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will begin to focus wind chakra into their legs and then unto the ground the user will then manipulate the wind chakra to begin to spin and lift him upwards, within seconds he will spinning on top of this tornado/hurricane the force of the wind is enough to knock a man to the ground. the user will then be able to move the tornado forward backwards side ways, and when he reach short range will jump off the tornado garbing onto it he will land and turn the tornado to the side of the enemy and throw it like a wipe at them, with enough force to break a few bones and cause bleeding but not enough to kill them.
note: can only be used twice
note: no wind jutsu above a rank next turn

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±± Declined ±± Description is still a mess. Can't be understood. Sorry but you need to work on it. Use shorter sentences.
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hyouton: hyoukai koori ( ice release: melted ice)
Type: supp
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will make 5 hand seals and focus his wind and water chakra into any ice on the field, using his chakra he will mix it into the already existing ice making the ice infused with his own chakra then by making one final hand seal and releasing his chakra from the inside of the ice like he would any other jutsu he wants to release. by doing this the ice will cancel out turning into a water source no matter what size or rank the ice is.
note: can only be used 3 times per fight.

what i chaned to the jutsu above was remove the last couple lines since it confused you so there isn't much to bold

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±± Declined ±± I can't let you insert your chakra into enemy techniques and simply dispel them like that. What you are saying is that you melt any ice in the field, be it yours or your enemies without any cost to yourself and just like that. Regardless of rank and size and etc. Like this, it can't be approved.
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hyouton: koori kussetsu ( ice release: ice bending)
Type: offensive,supp, defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will make 3 hand seals and focus his chakra into all already made ice sources, using the chakra in his arms to connect to the ice teh user will be able to control ice with the simple movements of his arms or even his fingers. however do to this the user must keep the connection and is unable to preform any other ninjutsu while this jutsu is active.
note: while active user will be able to bend any ice to his will however he wants, altough though the movements of his arms after awhile will become predicable.
note: lasts 3 turns
note: can only be used 3 times
note: no ninjutsu can be used while jutsu is active.
note: no ice jutsu above A rank the turn after jutsu wears off.
note: ice bended by user will have the power of A rank ice.
note: each time ice is bend counts as a jutsu.

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±± Declined ±± Copy of Fishman Karate: Water Bending but for Ice...

 

[Icemyster]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range:All
Chakra:50
Damage:90
Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast. The hand used by the user to perform this jutsu gets frozen, literally turning into ice. When the jutsu is over, the hand melts.
*Lasts three turns
*while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
*the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
*can only be used once

~ Declined, unclear. The hand melts as in the hand melts clean off, or is this essentially meaningless ( the ice melts ) and so I'm going to ask you to come up with another ? ~

(Hyouton:kenjitsu kitei) Ice Release: Solid Ground
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary/Defensive
Range:Short/Long
Chakra:30
Damage:0 (+15 to ground based ice/earth jutsu used by user)
Description:
The user channels his ice chakra into the ground, freezing the moisture in the ground. (If in an arid area like a desert, a water jutsu must be used first). Once the moisture is frozen, the ice that is holding the earth together makes it harder for the opponent to use earth based jutsu, or jutsu that require channeling different chakra natures aside from Ice jutsu, severely slowing the jutsu speed of such jutsu. The user's own earth and ice jutsu are empowered by the mixing of the elements, however the user is restricted by the same means, causing the user's own Fire, Lightning, Water, and Wind jutsu have problems traveling through the ground.
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Jutsu lasts three turns before the ice in the ground melts back to it's original form of normal moisture.

~ Declined, if you're in an area like a desert, unless you can pull off torrential rain for hours straight or a massive tsunami, you cannot have sufficient moisture in it to do anything ~

(Hyouton:Toride Yuukyou) Ice Release: Fortress of Solitude
Rank:S
Range:Short/Long
Type:Offensive/Supplementary
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
The user channels a large amount of Ice chakra into his hands and feet, uses the Bird Seal, releasing the chakra into four corners around the user and opponent, causing massive pillars of ice to form a fortress around the user and opponent, creating a makeshift arena around the user and opponent. The top of the fortress is like a tent, meeting at the center above the user (shaped like a pyramid.) The Air in the fortress causes pain to anyone not used to cold air, causing fire and wind jutsu that are used to hurt whomever attempts such jutsu. The ice used in this jutsu cannot be used to make any jutsu, without causing the entire structure to fall on top of everyone within the fortress. Ice jutsu used inside the arena are colder than usual, causing numbness to limbs that are hit with Ice Jutsu. After four turns, the jutsu falls apart, causing massive chunks of ice to fall on the user and opponent.
-Can only be used once Per battle
-The user cannot leave the fortress unless the jutsu is broken.
-The user is limited to water, Ice, and wind jutsu while the fortress is up, along with ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu, until three turns after the technique is over.

~ Declined, I like the idea and I think it will be a very useful jutsu to you. Now regarding the cold air, I can see if you say that using wind jutsu against someone unused to the cold is a +5 damage due to temperature or something, but not what you've put up. Fix it. ~

(Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range:All
Chakra:50
Damage:90
Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast. The hand used by the user to perform this jutsu gets frozen, literally killing the muscle tissue in the hand, and the hand becomes extremely frostbitten, rendering the muscles in the hand useless and immobile.
*Lasts three turns
*while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
*the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
*can only be used once

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±± Declined ±± Range is not "all", were is the damage to yourself? Tweak those formatting issues up. Rest seems ok.

(Hyouton:kenjitsu kitei) Ice Release: Solid Ground
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary/Defensive
Range:Short/Long
Chakra:30
Damage:0 (+15 to ground based ice/earth jutsu used by user)
Description:
The user channels his ice chakra into the ground, freezing the moisture in the ground. (If in an arid area like a desert, this jutsu will not work). Once the moisture is frozen, the ice that is holding the earth together makes it harder for the opponent to use earth based jutsu, or jutsu that require channeling different chakra natures aside from Ice jutsu, severely slowing the jutsu speed of such jutsu. The user's own earth and ice jutsu are empowered by the mixing of the elements, however the user is restricted by the same means, causing the user's own Fire, Lightning, Water, and Wind jutsu have problems traveling through the ground.
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Jutsu lasts three turns before the ice in the ground melts back to it's original form of normal moisture.

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±± Declined ±± +15? Not for 2 elements at once.

(Hyouton:Toride Yuukyou) Ice Release: Fortress of Solitude
Rank:S
Range:Short/Long
Type:Offensive/Supplementary
Chakra:40
Damage:80(+5 to wind jutsu used by the user)
Description:
The user channels a large amount of Ice chakra into his hands and feet, uses the Bird Seal, releasing the chakra into four corners around the user and opponent, causing massive pillars of ice to form a fortress around the user and opponent, creating a makeshift arena around the user and opponent. The top of the fortress is like a tent, meeting at the center above the user (shaped like a pyramid.) The Air in the fortress causes pain to anyone not used to cold air, causing wind jutsu used by the user against a non ice user +5 damage due to the chilling effect. The ice used in this jutsu cannot be used to make any jutsu, without causing the entire structure to fall on top of everyone within the fortress. Ice jutsu used inside the arena are colder than usual, causing numbness to limbs that are hit with Ice Jutsu. After four turns, the jutsu falls apart, causing massive chunks of ice to fall on the user and opponent.
-Can only be used once Per battle
-The user cannot leave the fortress unless the jutsu is broken.
-The user is limited to water, Ice, and wind jutsu while the fortress is up, along with ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu, until three turns after the technique is over.

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±± Declined ±± Make this Forbidden rank because of the huge amount of chakra needed and the scale of it and add some damage to yourself and this is good to go

 

[black uchiha]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Konchū shinkei kuranpu) Insect Nerve Clamp
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The insect that are inside the user’s body are immune to genjutsu. And when they sense the user is under a genjustu, bugs clamp a nerve inside the user’s body. This clamping sends enough pain to break the genjutsu without permanently injuring the user, once out of the genjutsu the bugs release the nerve.
- Can only be used 4 times per battle
- Must be a bug user
– Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

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±± Declined ±± Soooo, why is this long range and why is it S-Rank and why does it do full damage to you?besides, if a nerve is clamped from inside your body it has great consequences in terms of mobility and sensitivity of the area that nerve pertains to.

(Bītorumōdo) Beetle Mode
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (to the user upon deactivation)
Description: Beetle Mode(BM) is achieved by the balanced combination of a ninja's chakra with the spiritual energy. The user, unlike most modes, doesn’t have to stand still in a motionless state and gathers up chakra. The user will draw in the chakra and mix them both. This takes time to achieve (1 turn). When the user has achieved BM, the user’s skin becomes dark and harden throughout his body like an exoskeleton of a beetle, capable of blocking normal weapons and withstanding C-rank and below attacks (Earth, water, and wind only). His eyes become jet black compound eyes (like that of beetles), as such the user is granted the ability to track fast movements (not as well as the Sharingan; 2 tome at best (compound eye link ). The user’s nails will turn black and sharp and his hair will grow into a harden horn on the user’s head. BM gives the user boosted strength to lift several times his own body weight (like the rhinoceros beetles), his speed will be lowered slightly due to the dense skin that dons him but he will be able to react much quicker than a normal ninja due to the compound eye. This mode gives the user a +10 boost to Ninjutsu. After deactivation the user will become motionless and restrained for 1 turn (the backlash of not having to be motionless to achieve BM) and have to shed his now brittle skin in the next turn (counting as a move). The user will also be drained of chakra and can only use C-rank and below jutsu for a short time (3 turns).
- Can only use once per battle
- Only last 4 turns
- Takes 1 turn to achieve BM
- Can only withstand 2 C-rank attacks
- Withstood attacks can only be earth, water, and wind
- The user can’t move for 1 turn after the BM deactivation
- The user takes 80 damage upon deactivation
- The shedding of the skin counts as one of the user’s 3 moves
- Can only use C-rank and below jutsu for 3 turns after the shedding (due to chakra loss)
- Can’t use Fire techniques while in BM
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract for 2 months

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±± Declined ±± Ok... First things first. Chakra, as you should know, is the passive, every occurring combination of 2 energies: spiritual and physical. Saying that you mix your chakra with the spiritual energy doesn't make sense. Also, only modes that enable you to use natural energy require you to be still. You get these compound eyes but how? You failed to explain. Just because you have a beetle contract doesn't mean you can transform your eyes into a makeshift dojuutsu.

(Konchū sutairu: Tekitai-teki baishū) Insect Style: Hostile Takeover
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: All
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (50 to user)
Description: The user releases a pheromone of his own inside and around his body to excite the insects to go into an near uncontrollable state. Once in this state the insects forsake their chakra only diet, and devour any solid mass (earth/metal/ice...etc) in seconds. The insects suck up 60% of the users chakra before they burst from within the user and gourd in all directions, injuring the user badly and only leaving him with seventeen insect within to replenish their numbers. The insects release the absorbed chakra to protect them from attacks S-rank and below of any nature.
- Can only be used once per battle
- Works on all bugs under the users control
- Can't use insect jutsu until Insect Cocoon is used twice
- Lasts for 1 turn then the bugs die off
- Can only withstand 2 S-rank attacks
- Only B-rank and below techs for 2 turns, due to fatigue.


Note: The fact that Shino's bugs ate thru 4-5 metal ships in seconds, in the 2nd shippuden movie Bonds is what makes it plausible.

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±± Declined ±± Take the "can only withstand 2 S-Rank attacks" and this technique can be overcome by the normal weaknesses of bug techniques. It just happens to be Forbidden ranked.

 

[Jokey]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Meiton Houmen: Furai Sono Kuragari) - Dark Release: Fly Into The Darkness
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30 [-10 per turn]
Damage Points: -
Description: The user when releasing a large amount of Dark chakra will shape the Dark chakra into Wings made out of Dark release which will cause the user able to fly into the air. These wings are two meters width and one meter long however, when these wings will get in contact with water or earth than they will vanish instantly. While having these wings activated, the user won't be able to use any elemental technique except Dark technique's and Taijutsu.
Note: The user will lose -10 chakra every turn being activated
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: This technique will last for four turns
Note: Must have both Fire and Lightning mastered

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±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit

 

[Shady Doctor]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

( Tengoku no masuku)
Rank: S-rank
Type: Weapon
Range: short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
Tengoku no masuku is an all black mask that Hikari Hyuga stumbled upon near the village of Amegakure. While patrolling the area with his byakugan he noticed an object in the distance that had massive amounts of chakra seeping off of it. He went ahead to see what it was and when he came closer noticed it was a simple mask with no holes to see out of. When he picked it up he instantly felt that the mask had suddenly began taking small amounts of chakra out of him, but curiosity got the best of him and he put the mask on anyway.
A few weeks later he had been on a mission with the mask on to conceal his identity and to conceal the fact he had a byakugan. During this said mission Hikari was trapped in a genjutsu but instantly after being trapped he felt a great amount of chakra being pushed into him from the mask that easily broke the genjutsu. From that day on Hikari continued to wear Tengoku no Masuku in case he runs into genjutsu specialist.
Masks abilities:
- It constantly takes small amounts of chakra from me over time and then stores it. Once I've fallen victim to a genjutsu the mask acts upon it's own will and pushes the stored chakra back into me to disrupt my chakra and break the genjutsu.
- Is made of an unknown metal substance that is slightly stronger then steel and can tank up to A-rank techniques without breaking or cracking in the slightest way. Also stops people from looking in my eyes since the mask has no eye holes to see out of.

Note:
• Can only break up to 3 genjutsu maximum (1 S-rank )
• Process of breaking genjutsu doesn't need to be activated since the mask does it on its own will.
• Mask can only be broken by S-rank and above techniques
• Byakugan or sensing ability is needed since the mask has no wholes to see out of.

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( Looks exactly like this^^^, except has no eyes)

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±± Pending ±± You do know that Byakugan users can easily detect and release from Genjutsu passively without the need for techniques or external help, right? Because this mask is pretty much useless in a Hyuuga.
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(Genjutsu: Shūen o tōkō suru) Illusion art: Post demise
Rank: B-rank
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: short/mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
Using the Snake hand sign the user sends his chakra to the opponent where it will then stay temporarily dormant. The genjutsu's affect will start once the opponent uses a B-rank or higher jutsu which then activates the dormant chakra. Once the illusion starts the opponent sees the illusion that the user has been killed/severely injured by the previous attack. The users actual body will be completely invisible to the sight of the opponent thus giving him a chance to sneak attack him after he has put his guard down thinking he made the kill.

- can only be taught by William24
- ONLY affects the opponents sense of SIGHT, no other senses are affected.
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Genjutsu lasts 2 turns

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±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. This technique was made already

 

[ninjastormgenaration33]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon:Taka Panchi)Fire Style:Falcon Punch
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:The user uses his/her Fire Chakra and infuse it with either their left or right arm.After the chakra is infused with the users arm,they then run towards the user at high speeds and punches them.Once hit,the opponent goes flying back with great impact.
~Can be countered by a A or higher ranked water style technique
~Only Douglas Uchiha can use these technique(Unless I give permission)
~If infused with Wind Chakra,the speed of the technique can be increased

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±± Declined ±±

 

[ninjastormgenaration33]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Animal: Blue Eyes White Dragon
Scroll Owner: Douglas Uchiha (me)
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:Me(If approved)

Description:The Blue Eyes White Dragon is a powerful beast that existed long ago in ancient times.It was said that only the Uchiha can summon this beast.It has immensely power strength,it can fly up to 200 mph,and it can shoot large lightning balls from it's mouth.It is unknown of the beasts were abouts

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±± Declined ±± No mythical Creatures

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Metsuki Doragon)Summoning:Blue Eyes White Dragon

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Rank:S
Range:Close-Long
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:The user wipes their blood on their hands and performs the Tiger,Ram,and Dragon hand seals,the user then places their on the ground and summon the Blue Eyes White Dragon.Once summoned,the user can get on top of the dragon or control it.The Dragon has razor sharp teeth and claws,flys at super high speeds,and it can shoot gaint lightning balls out of it's mouth at the opponent.
~Only Douglas Uchiha can summon this
~Must have mastered lightning to summon it
~Lasts 3 turns
~Can be summoned once per battle

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±± Declined ±±

(Raiton:Kyo Tama)Lighting Style:Shining Ball

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Type:Attack/Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra:N/A
Damage:N/A
Description:Once Blue Eyes White Dragon is summoned,the user can have Blue Eyes shoot a Gaint Lightning Ball out of his mouth at the opponent.Once hit,the user can possible die from the electric force.
~Only Douglas Uchiha can summon this
~Must have mastered lightning
~Can only be used twice a match

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±± Declined ±± you are hereby banned from this thread for 2 cycles of submissions for submitting 4 techniques in one cycle.