[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Yugure]

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(Fuuton: Eāfan'neru) Wind Release: Wind Funnel
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
After performing a single handseal, the user creates a small funnel of air, trough which items can be thrown, by a shadow clone or team mate, to increase their speed. Due to the pressure inside the funnel, small items such as kunai and shuriken can speed up to four times as fast as usual, making it difficult to dodge in short and mid range.
~Declined~ Restrictions?

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( Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Suzume-ō Jack) Summoning Jutsu: Sparrow King Jack
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
After the user bites his thumb and smears blood across his tattoo, he places his hands on the ground to summon Jack, the King of the Sparrows. Jack is giant sparrow, about 12 feet high, Jack is one of Aeolus faithful servants, the ruler of wind and while he is on the field, it costs his summoner only half of his chakra on Fuuton attacks.

Note:
-Stays in the battle for 4 turns
-Can be summoned once per battle
-Jack cannot be harmed by any Fuuton-Attacks below B-Rank
-Must have summoned Sparrow Contract
~Declined~ Half of your chakra for Fuuton Attacks? Yeah right.
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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sakkaku) Summoning Jutsu: Sakkaku
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description:
Sakakku can be summoned after the user bites his thumb and smears the blood across tattoo, after that he places the hand on his should to summon Sakakku. Sakkaku is a small bird, around 6,5 inch high and looks like a normal House Sparrow, only he is blind. His only ability is to recognise if his summoner is under a genjutsu and is able to release his summoner from the genjutsu by pecking his summoner in the shoulder, while releasing a small amount of chakra. One he has released his summoner from the Genjutsu, he will disappear.

Note:
-Can stay in battle for 4 turns, on the summoners shoulder
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Must have signed Sparrow Contract

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~Declined~ Unoriginal, and the chakra cost/rank is way off.

~Resubmitting~
(Fuuton: Eāfan'neru) Wind Release: Wind Funnel
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description:
After performing a single handseal, the user creates a small funnel of air, trough which items can be thrown, by a shadow clone or team mate, to increase their speed. Due to the pressure inside the funnel, small items such as kunai and shuriken can speed up to four times as fast as usual, making it difficult to dodge in short and mid range.

Note:
-Can be used twice per battle
-The user himself isn't able to throw kunai's and rocks in the funnel, he must be aided by a shadow clone or another shinobi.
~Declined~ Increasing the speed by four? No..

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( Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Suzume-ō Jack) Summoning Jutsu: Sparrow King Jack
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
After the user bites his thumb and smears blood across his tattoo, he places his hands on the ground to summon Jack, the King of the Sparrows. Jack is giant sparrow, about 12 feet high, Jack is one of Aeolus faithful servants, the ruler of wind and while he is on the field, it costs his summoner less chakra to preform Fuuton attacks, exactly one rank, so C-Rank attacks cost 20 chakra instead of 30, B-Rank cost 30 instead of 40 etcetera. Jack is also able to communicate with his summoner because their minds are linked with each other once Jack is summoned.

Note:
-Stays in the battle for 4 turns
-Can be summoned once per battle
-Jack cannot be harmed by any Fuuton-Attacks below B-Rank
-Must have summoned Sparrow Contract
~Declined~ What actually happens for the user to require less chakra for wind techniques? Saying that the summon simply lowers the chakra cost isn't going to cut it. Also its a summoning so it should only be summoned at short range distance.
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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sakkaku) Summoning Jutsu: Sakkaku
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
Sakakku can be summoned after the user bites his thumb and smears the blood across tattoo, after that he places the hand on his should to summon Sakakku. Sakkaku is a small bird, around 6,5 inch high and looks like a normal House Sparrow and sits on the summoners shoulder. When Sakakku is lets out his cry, every one in a radius of 20 meters will be trapped in a genjutsu, seeing 10 replica's of the summoner. The summoner will not be affected by the genjutsu due to his physical contact with Sakakku

Note:
-Can stay in battle for 4 turns
-Genjutsu lasts for 3 turns
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-If the summoner has no physical contact with Sakakku, then he will also be trapped in the genjutsu.
-Must have signed Sparrow Contract
~Declined~ Similar summons already exist

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[Kaziname]

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(Suiton: Mizu no Dekishi o Funshutsu) - Water Style: Gushing Water Drowning
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After forming one hand seal user of this jutsu sends water all around the enemy (from air and nearby water sources alike) up into his nose and mouth with objective to get water into enemy's lungs. Although the water can be expelled by coughing, this jutsu creates a window of time during which user can act accordingly to put down his enemy - for good or otherwise.

(Suiton: Uni) - Water Style: Sea Urchin
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Taking into consideration one of the biggest advantages of water element, it's malleability, user can add spikes (of his own design) to any jutsu he uses by adding another hand seal. That allows the user to make his defenses stronger, to surprise his enemy with offensive variations of usually purely supplementary jutsus and to utterly crush him by making an offensive jutsus even more offensive.

(Suiton: Shio Buringā) - Water Style: Tide Bringer
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: User can, by collecting vast amounts of water natured chakra, utilize a jutsu which has been known to bring sealords of old to their knees. Referred to as "Tide Bringer" among common folk (originally, quite unimaginatively, named "Tsunami Smash") this jutsu enables the user to change the tides of war single handedly. Through mastery of water element, user forms two tsunamis of unparalleled power on two different sides of his opponent and smashes him between them. If need be, user can bend and twist the water of tsunamis around him when endangered in order to avoid all harm. As a forbidden jutsu it takes quite a toll on user's body.
*Although it takes mastery of water element to perform it, this jutsu does not seem sated by that fact and drains a part of water from user's body therefore causing a slight shock to it thus leaving user unable to perform any water styled jutsu above A-rank for next two turns. Also, it leaves user's body in weakened state making him unable to perform taijutsu techniques above B rank for the rest of the fight.
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[Nagato..]

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Galick Gun | ギャリック砲, Gyarikku Hou
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (-20 To Self)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra throughout their body creating a surge and they lower their hands to either waist with the palms facing one another and they focus all that gathered energy into a compressed sphere that they forcibly shoot towards their target releasing a lightning beam thats light purple. Gathering ones energy at the start causes the surrounding earth to crumble, falling apart as its vibrating massively due to the lightning and energy that surrounds the user. This technique can take out large areas similar to Fire Release: Blaze Ball.

Note: Can only be used twice per match
Note: User must wait 3 turns before using again
Note: Holding the energy in place for an extra turn allows to gather more energy to reach Forbidden rank.
Note: No lightning the next turn
Note: This technique takes 25% of the users chakra supply.
Note: Can only Be taught By Ryoku
~Declined do not resubmit~ Similar techniques already exist, all you changed in the description was the color and included the surge to release yourself from genjtusu.
Gathering Energy

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Releasing The Beam

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[Ryūjin]

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(Sōdō) - Rebellion
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+ 30 for blocking each fire attack)
Damage: (20 base attack for normal use) (+15 damage to every fire based jutsu)
Description: the Rebellion sword is made out of a special metal that is able to use the user's fire chakra , it has a large white blade with a silver skull shaped handle ,it's worn on the user's back like Kakashi's sword when he was young , when the user channels his fire chakra into the blade, a fire Aura surrounds the white blade making the sword more lighter and enhancing the user with faster reactions and turning the blades color into bloody red, as long as the user is wielding the blade he can perform any fire technique with the use of only a single handseal, also by adding the +30 fire chakra of the user to the blade , the blade can block fire techniques up to A-rank negating the fire and absorbing it but still receives a certain amount of damage from the attack.
Note: Cannot be used without mastering the fire element.
Note: User takes -10 damage when absorbing a fire technique.
Note: Can only block fire techniques 3 times per battle.
Note: Can only be wielded by Dante..

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(Sōdō Geigei: Duraivo) - Rebellion Art: Drive
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is a Fire related technique used through the usage of Rebellion the great fire sword, similar to the slicing crimson wave technique but much more powerful, the user concentrates a large deal of fire chakra into Rebellion enveloping it in chakra as he charges more and more chakra in the blade while moving his blade to his back and maintaining a semi crouching position with the katana behind his back while the user holding his blade reverse grip stance, after the user is done charging the chakra into the blade he thrusts the blade forward dealing 3 diagonal slashes in front of him while the user is still holding the blade in the same way, releasing 3 condensed fire "shockwaves" towards the opponent's direction cutting through the ground as it reaches for his direction or released into the air, this can be used to attack multiple enemies at once or just a single opponent delivering a single fire shockwave with it's full power towards the opponent, the fire shockwaves can also be released into the air, basically whichever the user makes the slashes with Rebellion
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: No S-rank fire techniques the same or the next turn.

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~Declined~ CWs are only allowed to have one custom technique and that spot is taken by your "(Sōdō Geigei: Doki no Sōdō) - Rebellion Art: Rebellion Wrath" technique.

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(Neko Mōdo) | Cat Mode
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user takes on the characteristics of a cat. The user’s senses become 10X stronger. All taijutsu damage is increased by +20 and all ninjutsu damage is increased by +15. The user’s eyes become that of a cat and his speed becomes equivalent to double of Lee’s speed when lee took his weights off. The user’s nails grow longer. The user can move as they normally would or they can run on all fours.
*Only lasts for 4 turns
*Can only be used once per battle
*Can only be used/taught by Hazure
*Must have signed the Contract with the Cats (held by Hazure)
*After the mode has ended, the user cannot move for 1 turn

(Neko Mōdo Tsugi Ni) | Cat Mode Stage Two
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (-15 to the user for each turn it is in use)
Description: Like the original Neko Mo-Do the user takes on the characteristics of a cat. The user’s senses are the same strength except for their sight; the user’s sight becomes accustomed to speeds equal to the Neko Mo-Do’s speed. All taijutsu and ninjutsu damage are the same as ‘Stage 1’. The user’s eyes become that of a cat. The user’s nails grow longer. The user is able to sense chakra and his/her chakra is increased by half the original user's chakra, the user releases the chakra that forms a cloak around the user, the cloak looks like a regular cat. The user can use the chakra to lengthen the user’s range of taijutsu.
*Only lasts for 4 turns.
*Must have activated Neko Mo-Do
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Can only be used/taught by Hazure.
*The chakra can only block elemental jutsu up to C-rank.
*After the mode has ended, the user cannot move for 1 turn.
*Must have signed the Contract with the Cats (held by Hazure)
Note: The cloak is nothing like the Demon Cloaks the Jinchuuriki have; this cloak does not act on its own accord but on the thoughts of the user. The user must know where an attack is coming from for it to be able to defend him/her, they still take damage from the use of the chakra.

(Ninpō: Kyōhakuteki) | Ninja Art: Advanced Cat Senses
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a technique exclusive to Cats or to the signer of the Cat's contract when entering the "Neko Mōdo | Cat Mode" or "(Neko Mōdo Tsugi Ni) | Cat Mode Stage Two" by utilizing the Cat's naturally granted senses, The user of this technique utilizes his chakra to enhance the user's senses of hearing and sight, as the Cats have already very keen senses of hearing the faintest voices and hearing high pitched noises that normal humans cannot hear, like the faint noises the mice release which allows the cat to pinpoint it's exact location, and allows the user to see in near darkness state or in a Heavy mist surrounding like field thanks to the Cat eyes that he gains when he utilizes either of the Cat Modes, This technique also slightly increase the user's sense of smell due to the Cat's naturally high sense of smell that's above the human levels, however not to the level of the Inuzuka clan's sense of smell, the last advantage of this technique is that it increases the size of the user's claws, making them long, Sharp and retractable claws in his hands, and the Cat summons in all of their paws, As said before this technique is useable by any Cat summon or the user while he's under the influence of the "Neko Mōdo | Cat Mode" or "(Neko Mōdo Tsugi Ni) | Cat Mode Stage Two"
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: Lasts 4 turns.
Note: Must have opened the "Neko Mōdo | Cat Mode" or "(Neko Mōdo Tsugi Ni) | Cat Mode Stage Two" in order to be used by a ninja.
Note: Any Cat summons can use this technique.
Note: No S-rank and below non elemental ninjutsu for 2 turns after this technique ends.
~Declined do not resubmit~ You should know by now that there are already too many similar techniques that increase these senses.

 

[-Broly-]

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(Omegaburasutā) Omega Blaster
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short- Mid (initial ball) Short-long (explosion)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user makes one handseal and gathers wind chakra into their hand in the form of an orb similar in size to narutos base rasengan except its clear due to it being wind this happens very quickly. Then the user throws the wind ball at the opponent and compresses the wind inside the ball creating a large tearing explosion that can blast the opponent to pieces or give severe cuts that make the opponent gash blood. The ball moves very fast due to the wind elements speed. And the explosion is very large stretching into midrange to the left and right
~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

(Chou Bakuhatsu Nami) Super Explosive Wave
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: A-S
Range: Short-Mid (A Rank) Short-Long (S Rank)
Chakra: 30-40
Damage: 60-80
Description: Similar to Chidori: Nagashi, The user quickly gathers and releases fire in an orb shape that goes in every direction outwards from the users body. This jutsu can also be controlled by making it a stream, controlling the size, and controlling the direction.

A Rank- This variation can only go up to mid range but can be used faster than the stronger version. In fact this variation can be used as fast as chidori nagashi.

S Rank: This variation can be used up to long range but requires 2-3 seconds two charge

Note: A rank version can be used 5 times per match
Note: S rank verion can only be used 3 times per match
Note: Can only been taught by goku2000
~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.
(Saiya Nin Puraido) Saiyan Pride
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user takes thinks about how strong they are and motivates themself by taking pride in their own abilities making them put a little extra into their attacks in order to win. They then release a cloak of chakra all over their body that goes away after a second and their will to win and pride gives allows them to react a bit faster and gives a boost of +5 to elemental techniques

Note: Effects last five turns then needs 3 turn cool down before being used again
Note: can only be taight by goku2000
~Declined do not resubmit~ Way too many similar techniques already exist.

NOTE: the "cloak of chakra" serves no purpose other than just to look cool and is nothing like the kyuubi cloak which is why i said it goes away after a second. Also if needed take out the react faster part

 

[Geezus]

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Raiton| Samehada no Mai| Raihara - (Lightning Release|Sharkskin Dance| Lightning Field)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (+10 for chakra draining)
Description: Kirabi places the tip of Samehada on the ground creating a small ring of lightning around himself and the opponent. This field stuns the opponent making them unable to move for a few moments and then extending Samehada it extends it's handle and slashes into the opponent draining them of chakra preventing the use of A-rank and above techniques for the opponent for the next two turns.
(Usable Twice)

Raiton| Sokushinseki - (Lightning Release| Acceleration Gate)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Sending out a wave of chakra in front of themselves the user uses chakra manipulation to speed up the nerve synapses in the user, giving them a temporary boost of speed doubling their current level for short distances. However if used against an opponent the chakra attacks the opponents nervous system slowing them down a great deal, leaving them wide open to attack. The same is true for Raiton jutsu as well by charging the ions the user increases or decreases the speed of incoming jutsu used from the caster and opponent respectively.
(Usable 2 times)

Raiton| Samehada no Mai| Hekirekiatemi -( Lightning Release| Sharkskin Dance| Thundering Blow)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Using immense strength the user slams Samehada on the ground with a dense layer of lightning chakra coating the sword. Upon hitting the ground the dense chakra gets released from the sword and anything within range gets thrown back while opponents get slowed down.
(Usable 3 times)
~All Declined~ You need to include more than usage restrictions.

 

[Littlefinger.]

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Fuuton: Boushi Kyuujou Kaze Bo-ru - Wind Release: Spinning Spherical Wind Ball
Type : Defensive/Supplementary
Rank : C
Range : Mid-Long
Chakra : 15(-5 if it lasts for more than one turn)
Damage : N/A
Description : After bringing one's palms together, the user releases wind chakra from all parts of his/her body and creates a spinning ball of wind around him/herself. This ball enables the user to ascend to about 12ft. in air. It is used to evade techniques that require contact with the ground to work successfully.
-It is able to repel C rank water&lightning techs and lower. Due to it's spinning effect, it can also slice C rank and lower earth techs shot at it.
-If a wind technique of a higher rank(B,A,S or F) is fired at it, it's rank increases by one rank, increasing its power to repel water, lightning&earth techs of it's new rank.
-It is however weak to fire techs of it's rank and those above it.
-It can only be used by Ace Uchiha and those he teaches it to.
~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.
It is like in this picture, excluding the fire and water.

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Doton: Jinsoku Tsuchi Hari Ryuuki no jutsu- Earth Release: Rapid Earth Needle Projection Technique
Type : Attack
Rank : B
Range : Short
Chakra : 20 points
Damage : 40 points
Description : After spreading chakra around the opponent from where he/she(the opponent) stands up to a 4-6 metre radius, the user prepares a rock needle trap that is triggered by pressure on the ground. The needles will fire from the ground rapidly, piercing the opponent in all parts of their body from all angles, inflicting more damage. When the opponent puts pressure on the ground by trying to run, jump, walk or use techniques that involve contact with the earth or that will disturb the earth, the needles will be triggered.
-Usable only 3 times.
-Techniques that disturb the Earth can be used by the opponent as far as they are not in the user's chakra radius.
-Can only be used by Ace Uchiha and those he teaches it to.
~Declined~ You do know that with the range this technique is at and the radius you gave it, it would also harm you? Lastly, 6 meters would be within the medium range mark so you need to fix the range issues.

 

[Icemyster]

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(Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range:All
Chakra:50
Damage:90
Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast.
*Lasts three turns
*while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
*the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
*can only be used once
*can only be used by Ice users

Removed the lowering of fire and lightning jutsu.

(Fuuton: shindou) Wind Release: Vibration
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
The user, releases a rapid succession of wind chakra into the wind around him. The wind then is rapidly manipulated around the user, creating intense vibrations that distort the way sound is perceived by the opponent, causing imbalance, impairing the ability of the opponent to coordinate taijutsu and make hand seals. (this justu works by affecting the labyrinth of the ear, which is a series of fluid filled channels that send signals of balance to the brain, by vibrating the fluid in them, it disorients a person's sense of balance, causing coordination issues with opponents)
*jutsu's effects last two turns
*only usable once per battle


52 bachi-roppou(52 Pick-up)
Rank-S
Type-Weapon
Range-Short/Long
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Description-
The weapon 52 pick up, is a set of 52 thinly pounded, sharp rectangular iron cards.
The user carries them in a small pouch that allows easy access to them.
These cards are used by means of normal throwing (like a kunai) or chakra manipulation of either wind, or magnetism chakra. Using wind chakra, the cards gain cutting strength and speed, while when used with magnetism they may be freely manipulated in mid
Feel free to make edits as you see fit ^_^

±± All Declined ±± Posted outside the weekly markers. I do hope you know how to read. Its essential in a Forum RPG like this. If you do know how to read, i assume you also know how to scroll slightly up. As you do it, you'll see a post from me. Had you taken the effort to read it, you wouldn't post techniques after it.

(Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range:All
Chakra:50
Damage:90
Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast.
*Lasts three turns
*while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
*the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
*can only be used once
*can only be used by Ice users
~Declined~ Where is the physical damage to the user? It is a forbbiden rank after all.
~ Also, it's too much of an infringement on Sound. IMO its a DNR. ~
Removed the lowering of fire and lightning jutsu.

(Fuuton: shindou) Wind Release: Vibration
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
The user, releases a rapid succession of wind chakra into the wind around him. The wind then is rapidly manipulated around the user, creating intense vibrations that distort the way sound is perceived by the opponent, causing imbalance, impairing the ability of the opponent to coordinate taijutsu and make hand seals. (this justu works by affecting the labyrinth of the ear, which is a series of fluid filled channels that send signals of balance to the brain, by vibrating the fluid in them, it disorients a person's sense of balance, causing coordination issues with opponents)
*jutsu's effects last two turns
*only usable once per battle
~Declined~ This is nowhere near an S rank.

52 bachi-roppou(52 Pick-up)
Rank-S
Type-Weapon
Range-Short/Long
Chakra-40
Damage-80
Description-
The weapon 52 pick up, is a set of 52 thinly pounded, sharp rectangular iron cards.
The user carries them in a small pouch that allows easy access to them.
These cards are used by means of normal throwing (like a kunai) or chakra manipulation of either wind, or magnetism chakra. Using wind chakra, the cards gain cutting strength and speed, while when used with magnetism they may be freely manipulated in mid air
~Declined~ Remove the damage, its a weapon not a technique. Also Expand the description in terms of actual power rank wise for the wind and magnetism chakra.

 

[Selendrile]

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(Bakuton: Sūpā Nendo Kakudai)- Explosion Release: Super Clay Expansion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: After kneading clay, the user will then release the figurine into the air. Normally, the user simply expands the figure to a predetermined size after release. By applying this technique, the user is capable of increasing the target figure's size up to double of the normal size. This is done by simply channeling more chakra into the object, increasing the size. Like normal expansion of figures, this technique requires no hand seals, only chakra manipulation. Due to this, it takes no more time than normal expansion.
Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
Note: Usable twice per battle; Lasts four turns
~Declined~ Why does this technique last four turns? It should only be one expansion per usage. Also, would this double the damage of the clay? It is after all, being doubled in size. Also keep in mind that I will not allow you to double in size a C4 clay figurine.
(Genjutsu: Hari o Tōsu)- Illusionary Art: Threading the Needle
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will begin by performing the hand seals, Monkey → Boar, and then thrust their chakra into the opponent's brain. Upon completion, the opponent will see a clone of the user burst from the ground in front, behind, and to both sides of them. Each clone is carrying a needle-like sword, that has a long piece of wire attached to clone's belt. The clone's will thrust their sword through the opponent, and the clone on the opposite side will grab the protruding weapon, and begin to thread the wire back and forth throughout the opponent's body. Eventually, the opponent's arms will be sewed to their sides, and their legs will be sewn completely together. In reality, the opponent is standing paralyzed due to the action of having their body parts sewn together.
Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: No genjutsu to be used on the same, and next turn
~Pending~ Leaving for Scorps.
±± Declined ±± Incorrect chakra info. Not only that but the part i bolded i won't allow. Also, this is not in any way an S-Rank genjutsu. Its more like a B-Rank tops. Many genjutsu with stronger illusions and effects exist throughout the base that are A-Rank, not to speak of the S-Rank ones.

(Raiton: Buzoku no San no Keimusho)- Lightning Release: Tribal Sun Prison
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will perform three hand seals, and then raise ten, flat rectangular pieces of stone from the ground in a circle formation bordering short range around the opponent. The rectangular stones protrude no higher than the ground, being compared to something like a concrete sidewalk. After they rise to the ground, the user will create large tornadoes of lightning on top of each stone rectangle that shoot up seven feet into the air. As they appear, they begin to rapidly spin around the inside of the circle, converging on the opponent. Once successfully converged around the opponent, the tornadoes combine into one massive fifteen foot tornado, creating a deadly electrical explosion.
Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
Note: No S-rank lightning on the same or next turn
Note: Usable twice per battle
~Declined~ The lightning is magically materializing around the opponent? Its not wind nor water release.

 

[Troyard]

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(Suiton: Mizu Assaku Katana) Water Release: Water Compression Blades
Type:Supplamentary
Rank: A - rank
Range: Mid- Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user performs the Rat,Boar,dragon and ram handseals and release several bullets (limit 8). After the bullets are release the user then claps their hands together while focusing their chakra turning the bullets into spiralling Disk like blades. These blades travel at great speeds and are very sharp . They can cut through B rank and lower Earth. The blades are so sharp that they are able to carve lines through the ground below.

-Can only be taught by light
-Needs Mastery Over Water
- Has to be S-class ninja or higher


±± Declined ±± A-Rank water would be cancelled by B-Rank earth...it wouldn't overcome it. Also, A-Ranks require usage limitation

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(Suiton: Mizu Assaku Katana) Water Release: Water Compression Blades
Type:Supplamentary
Rank: A - rank
Range: Mid- Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user performs the Rat,Boar,dragon and ram handseals and release several bullets (limit 8). After the bullets are release the user then claps their hands together while focusing their chakra turning the bullets into spiralling Disk like blades. These blades travel at the speed of common water projectile techniques and are very sharp . They can cut through C rank and lower Earth. The blades are so sharp that they are able to carve lines through the ground below.

-Can only be taught by light
-Needs Mastery Over Water
- Has to be S-class ninja or higher
-Can only be used 2 times
~Approved~ Edited the traveling speed.


(Katon: Meido zenshin) Fire Release: Hades drive
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank: S rank
Range: Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: For this technique the user focuses their katon chakra into both their arms and create two large streams of fire. The user then releases the fire chakra and it circles the opponent. One clockwise , one anti clockwise. The two streams of fire then shoots up into the air creating a Furnace of fire that traps the opponent in and burns them to death. Because of how fast it the flames are moving you can only escape from above or below.The user can choose if they want the flames to close in by performing the tiger handseal and by saying "Burn"
-Can only be used once
-Must master fire
-Must be sannin rank or higher
-Can only be tought by Light...

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~Declined~ Never describe the opponent dying in the description of your techniques.

 

[Serpent]

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(Raiton: Ridairekuto) Lightning Release: Redirection
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack | Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The user will flex there middle and index fingers out while focusing their chakra to a point, this will allow the user to channel an opponent's Raiton attack (up to S rank) into their body. There, the user will harness the Raiton and add more chakra into it allowing them to releases the attack back at the opponent as a concentrated blast of lightning. This Jutsu is considered extremely dangerous as it causes minor electrical shock to its user making them move slower then normal and causes there chakra levels to deplete.
Note:
-Causes 20 damage to user
-User moves at half speed for the next 2 turns
-No B-Ranked or Higher Raiton next turn
-Can only be used once per battle
-Can only be taught by Serpent

±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Tried many times before and there is actually a technique that accomplishes the same in a very similar manner.

(Fuuton/Katon: Kagutsuchi Bure-Do) Fire/Wind Art: Blades of Kagutsuchi
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The user will focus a large amount of Chakra in their gut making the fallowing handseals (Tiger-Ram-Monkey-Dragon) and then shoot several blades of wind that can't be seen due to the winds intangibility. In flight the user will make one more handseal (Tiger) causing the Katon chakra inside these blades to ignite and burst out in Blazing flames. Upon impact with there target these blades will burst out into several blazing tornadoes completely touching the surrounding area up to Mid Range. This Jutsu is extremely dangerous to the user as it causes major harm to it's users chakra levels making it so they can't use powerful Jutsu's for a short period of time as well can causing them to feel pain in there gut making them less efficient during battle. If the user is caught in the attack, They will suffer the same damage as an opponent.
Note:
-Causes 20 damage to user.
-No A-Ranked or Higher Fuuton next turn.
-No A-Ranked or Higher Katon next turn.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Can only be taught by Serpent

~ First, causes 20 damage to the user is a meaningless restriction, and both of us know it. Second, I'm worried the tornadoes might be too OP. ~

(Doton: Nami Inmetsu) Earth Release: Waves of Destruction
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user will make the fallowing hand seals (Monkey-Serpent-Ram) while focusing their chakra into the ground. The user will then punch the ground with extreme speed and force causing the ground to turn as massive waves in a ripple effect manner. These waves reach Mid-Range in heights and depth’s and only takes seconds to stretch out to Long Range. Because of the large amount of punching force needed to complete this Jutsu, the user’s hand will break, preventing them from using hand seals or fighting with that hand. On top of that the user will strain their chakra making it so they can’t use powerful techniques for a while because of that, this jutsu is considered to be a double edged sword. If an opponent is under ground, they will take extra damage.
Note:
-Can only be used once per battle.
-No A-Ranked or above Doton next turn.
-Can only be taught by Serpent.

~ Again, all Forbidden techniques require self-harm. Second, it reaches mid-range in height and depth ? What ? ~

 

[Kwalker394]

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Katon: Nenshou Kimochi(Fire Style: Burning Sensation)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description:
The user channels and molds his Raiton and Katon chakra at the same time to his hands. The user then sends both chakra to the out side of his hand forming a thin layer around his palm consisting of Raiton and Katon chakra. Once this is done if the user touches the enemy the touched area is then burned and shocked. The burned and shocked area isnt life threatening but the sensation still is felt enough to distract the opponent. The Katon chakra is for burns and discomfort, and the Raiton is also for discomfort but also the stinging sensation and slight shock to the 1st layer of nerves of the area touched. If the area is not cooled down quick enough it will lead to 1st degree burns of that area. If the user grabs on to the enemy and the enemy dosnt get away quick enough it can cause 2nd-3rd degree burns.

~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
~Can only be used once during battle
~Counts as 2 moves
~The burning sensation last for 3 turns (if not treated sooner)
~Medical care can treat the wounded area also Water jutsus (D rank or higher or any source of water) can also treat it to cool down the area
~If the user's hand is forced back at him with the jutsu still active it can harm the user the same way as the enemy

±± Declined ±± You can't mold two elemental chakras at the same time unless you have yin/yang mastery


Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hogosha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Hogosha)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 10 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Hogosha. The Guardian of the contract. Hogosha is half that of a human. He has a red-black face, throat and upper breast with a red crown and nape, and a white diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark blue. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
Hogosha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

Ability's:
~Can speak
~Capable of using Fuuton
~Carries the Black-throated Robin Contract in a scroll on his back

Restrictions:
~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
~Can only be used by the current contract owner of the Black-throated Robin Summon
~Can only be summoned 3 times during battle
~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
~Fuuton attacks count towards the summoners 3 move limit

±± Declined ±± This is not a D-rank summon and he can use fuuton up to what rank?


Kuro Nodo Komadori Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Musha (Black-throated Robin Summoning Technique: Musha)
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and slam their hand on the ground thus summoning Musha. The Robin Warrior. Musha is 10 meters tall. He has a grey-black face, throat and upper breast with a black crown and nape, and a red diagonal mark on the neck. The upperparts are blue-grey, and the underparts black to white over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark brown. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the white neck marking is diagnostic.
Musha is a P. albonotata Species in the Genus Poecilodryas.

Ability's:
~Can speak
~Carries a large sword with him at all times and is very skilled at it
~Can use Fuuton

Restrictions:
~Must have signed the Black-throated Robin contract
~Can only be summoned 2 times during battle
~Can only stay in battle for 3 turns
~Sword and Fuuton attacks as well as flying count towards the summoners 3 move limit

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Katon: Nenshou Kimochi(Fire Style: Burning Sensation)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description:
The user channels and molds his Katon chakra at the to his hands. The user then sends his Katon chakra to the out side of his hand forming a thin layer around his palm consisting of Katon chakra. Once this is done if the user touches the enemy the touched area is then burned. The burned area isnt life threatening but the sensation still is felt enough to distract the opponent. The Katon chakra burns and discomfort, but also the stinging sensation to the 1st layer of nerves of the area that is touched. If the area is not cooled down quick enough it will lead to 1st degree burns of that area. If the user grabs on to the enemy and the enemy dosnt get away quick enough it can cause 2nd-3rd degree burns.

~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
~Can only be used twice during battle
~The burning sensation last for 3 turns (if not treated sooner)
~Medical care can treat the wounded area also Water jutsus (D rank or higher or any source of water) can also treat it to cool down the area
~If the user's hand is forced back at him with the jutsu still active it can harm the user the same way as the enemy

Note: Took out the part where it involves channeling two chakras and also the part where it mentions Raiton chakra.

Katon: Kasai Chacha(Fire Style: Fire Disruption)
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user channels and molds his Katon charka to his mouth while preforming the Tiger~Snake~Boar~Dragon handseals. He then exhales the Katon chakra while molding it into a stream of fire. The stream of fire will then go straight down the middle of the the opponent's jutsu and the user will then control his fire stream to widen and expand the fire stream in multiple areas inside the opponent jutsu. This will cause the opponent's jutsu to lose strength, stability, and will collapse on itself from the inside making the jutsu fail and disperse.

~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
~Can only be used three times during battle
~Can only be taught to those who have great control of their chakra
~Can not disperse Futon or Suiton attakcs on high level but can disperse them if the level is low enough

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Raiton/Katon/Suiton/Futon/Doton: Soshi Toku (Lighting/Fire/Water/Wind/Earth Style: Element Shield)
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user channels his chakra into the ground below him. Once his chakra is below him he can then control and shoot the chakra up through the ground in a chain length net type wall to protect him from any weapon and taijutsu attacks and also some jutsu's (This is where

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applies) When the chakra is up above the ground the user then changes the chakra nature to fit to deflect the enemy's attack. Example: If the enemy fires a fire ball at the user he can change the chakra nature to Suiton to deflect the attack and the same for any other nature.

~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
~Can only be used Twice in battle
~The chakra stays in the ground for 2 turns until used.
~Cant use any jutsu A rank or higher after use until next turn.

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~All Declined~ Do not Resubmit the first and last ones. Also, for the second one, you cannot disrupt any fire technique by just adding fire. Plus, your description doesn't match the video since the latter uses water and air to accomplish the goal of the technique.

 

[Rozzy]

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Lightning Style: Heat-Seeking White Chirp | Raiton: Kaon-Samoshii Shiro Saezuru
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user concentrates his lightning chakara to both his hands and releases it, while extending his arms outwards. He then manipulates the lightning chakara as it is been released to take the form of 3 lightning birds that traveling directly at their opponent. The birds are about the same size as an avarage crow. The birds will continue to follow the opponent unless he counters them. The birds also leave off chirping noise like sasukes chidori.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: If used the user cannot use the next turn
Note: No other lightning jutsus during the same turn
Note: Can only be taught be ShikamarUchiha10

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Summoning jutsu: Monk
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra: 40 (+10 each turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Monk is the largest of the puffins. He is about the same size as Deidara's clay dragon. He has a multicolored metal beak and has a black body with a white stomach. He has metal claws equipped to his talons to make them sharper for extra damage. He has many scars that reside down the left side of his face from battles.

Abilities
-Due to his metal beak, lightning attacks up to A aimed for me automatically travel towards his beak and he absorbs them. Same goes for my lightning jutsus to my opponent
-If struck by his metal talons it causes 40 damage
-Is able to use lightning jutsus up to A rank.
-Isnt effected by any D rank attacks or shuriken
-Monk must take 100 damage to die

Restrictions
~Can only be summoned once per battle
~Stays on the field for 4 turns unless he is killed
~He is a very angry, defiant summoning so one must stay on his back to control him.
~Must have signed the puffin summoning contract
~Monk drains the users chakara so each turn he is out, the rank of the users jutsus decrease by 1 every turn.
~Both Approved~

 

[Elmage G Ace]

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(katon: kibaku kaen butoukai) fire release: exploding flame ball
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels his/her fire chakra through
their entire body then perform the hand seals
Ram>>Monkey>>Tiger then clap hands together releasing fire from
his/her body which explodes a ball of fire around them.
- can only be used twice per battle
- user cannot use fire jutsus for the next turn
- can only be taught by elmage
- user must have fire as specialty
~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists

(katon: re-za dangan)fire release: laser bullets
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: short/mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels their chakra to the tip
of his/her four fingers, and after performing the Tiger seal,
release laser-like fire from his/her fingers give it a higher penetrating power.
the fire can pass through certain obstacles e.g A-Rank, C-Rank water wind, to hit the target/opponent.
Note: This jutsu causes a very small explosion on impact, but that has little effect. The real damage is the penetrating power of the jutsu, making it capable of burning straight through obstacles
- can only be used once per battle
- the user cannot use fire jutsus for two turns
- the user cannot use jutsus with more than one hand seal for one turn
- can only be taught by elmage
~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists. Restrictions are too heavy for a jutsu of this level anyway.

(Katon: kyo aoi karasu)fire release: Large blue crow
Type: Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: short/mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs the seals Ram>>Boar>>Tiger and then shoots a giant blue flame towards
his opponent, which turns into a crow that explodes on impact.
The crow can be manipulated by the user's chakra.
- can only be used once per battle
- The user cannot use fire for three turns
- can only be used by uchiha itachi
-can only be taught by elmage
~Declined~ I'm pretty sure you can't make Blue Fire. Also very generic

 

[Luiz]

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( Oumu no Jutsu: Shorei ) Parrot Style: Message

Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Similar to a summoning technique, this allows the user to summon and vanish a feather from any parrot in Altorio. The feather will be attached to it's owner by chakra, allowing the user to charge chakra through the feather that will be felt by the owner, and the other way around as long as the feather is in the user's possession. Through a common understanding, the different intensities of the chakra information or frequency of information allows messages to be sent through any distance.
*With this I claim rights to the idea behind this technique, reserving to myself the permission for other Bird Summoning Contracts to create their version of Message. Rights for hair (Mammal Contracts) and Scales (Reptile and Piscis Contracts). If other users find a different part to use, I claim no rights as I can't think of them by myself*

Similar to: (Oumu no Jutsu: Hane Shuriken) Parrot Style: Throwing Feathers (

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~Pending~ I'm not sure what the goal of this technique is? If you're transferring chakra, how much can you transfer at a time (and that would hardly be a D-rank submission)

 

[Tsukune]

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Suiton Kasumi Iki: Water style mist breath
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40(+5 per turn its activated)
Damage:N/A(80 if breathed in by an enemy)
Description: By rapidly drawing water into their lungs the user will break it up at the same pace and breath out mist that is controlled by them. When inhaled by an opponent and the mist particles are absorbed into the bloodstream the user can reform it into water and expand blood volume, popping various blood vessels.
Restriction(s):
Usable twice per battle
Lasts 3 turns

Suiton Kasumi Yuketsu: Water style mist transfusion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage:N/A
Description: Using chakra one will compress mist particles down small enough that they can enter through a humans pore ducts.
Restriction(s):
Usable twice per battle
effects last two turns per use
~Both Declined~ Do NOT Resubmit

 

[Vroqrak]

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[ Doton | Tenrai Souken ] Earth Style | Divine Creation
Type: Attack | Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short | Long
Chakra: 60
Damage: 100
Description: Focusing massive amount of chakra on the hands and the upper body of the user, the user slams his hands down on the ground, and then causes a 15 foot irregular thick pillar of earth to emerge and surround the user. The thick pillar goes 25 feet in the air, and then instantly breaks down from the top into smaller "tendrils" of earth that slam down around the area and crush anything that is touched by it. Almost 20 tendrils surround the area, and each is made up of user's chakra so that the user can sense anything that touches the earth arms. The user can also emerge out of the arms and attack.

Note:
Can only be used once.
The user cannot perform any other jutsu's of S-Rank of every element for the entire battle.
The user loses 30 of his health after this
The user cannot perform A-Rank earth jutsu's for the following 3 turns.

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~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists

 

[Coyote]

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Coyote Gigei: Hei Waruirando | Coyote Arts: Wall of the Badlands
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short - Mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will preform one handseal and slam their foot on the ground at the same time to summon around the target (360) a arena type structure that's open at the top. The wall is completely made of Iron and will have hundreds of coyote heads craved into the walls with their jaws open. All the heads face straight while along the top edge they face at a upward angle by 45degrees. Once summoned some of the heads will begin to emit either thousands of senbons and the other heads will emit a stream of fire. Both includes the heads facing upwards so it forms a type of inescapable cover so if they jump out they will still get head while trying to escape.

Restrictions:
Only usable once per battle
Only usable by Coyote Contract signer
~Declined~ Inescapable? I can't allow that, especially along with the fact that this jutsu produces a metal structure.

Coyote Gigei: Hei Waruirando | Coyote Arts: Wall of the Badlands
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short - Mid Range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will preform one handseal and slam their foot on the ground at the same time to summon around the target (360) a arena type structure that's open at the top. The wall is completely made of Iron and will have hundreds of coyote heads craved into the walls with their jaws open. All the heads face straight while along the top edge they face at a upward angle by 45degrees. Once summoned some of the heads will begin to emit either thousands of senbons and the other heads will emit a stream of fire. Both includes the heads facing upwards so it forms a hail of senbons as well to block the opening.

Restrictions:
Only usable once per battle
Only usable by Coyote Contract signer

~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~

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Oshie sono Gekiryuu Yajuu: Shuukyoku | Teachings of the Raging Beast: Finale
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description:
Known as the strongest technique in the teachings, this move is forbidden for use. While the user is in "Four Legged Technique" he will unleash 90% of his chakra into the already existing coat of chakra into the users muscles, skin, nails, hair, basically all over the body (same concept as the 4legged) The user will gain speeds that are unimaginable to any other Inuzuka, the strength, the reflex, the flexibility is pushed to the utmost limits while entering this final Hail Mary. When the user enters this sudden burst of power, their whole body changes even beyond the point of being in the most advanced form of "Four Legged Technique" The users will take on the closest form to a wolf without actually turning into one. Chakra coats them looking like a wolf while their hair is extremely beast-like as well as their teeth form almost into a full wolves jaw, the same goes for the joints and skin. This highly advanced technique does come with extreme repercussions, while in this mode the user cannot use any form of ninjutsu or genjutsu. Once out of this mode the user will be exhausted to the closest point of defeat. However with that great power comes of it, ability to cover ground that the normal eye cannot track.

Notes:
- Lasts 3 turns
- Speed is so immense that it's only trackable by high level doujutsu
- Only taijutsu and Inuzuka techniques are allowed in this form
- Once mode is complete 90% of the user chakra is relinquished
- Unable to use any elements, ninjutsu, or genjutsu
- Must be in 4legged tech
- Only usable by a master Inuzuka clan member
- Must have mastered "Lost Teachings of the Raging Beast"
- Has to be used within the first 5 turns of battle or unable to be used after that point
- Must be Kage ranked
- Only usable once per battle

~ Blah. For all the buildup, really a vanilla powerup. That said, specify speed clearly. ~

Oshie sono Gekiryuu Yajuu: Kito Hitonomi | Teachings of the Raging Beast: The Returning Slash
Type: Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 60
Description:
When the target tries to preform any kick, fist or weapon attack the user will increase the chakra sharpness in the users claws to block the kick, fist or weapon. If blocking a fist or kick the appendage will be grabbed and bound by the claws meaning the claws will puncture the arm, leg, etc. If blocking a sword then it can grab the sword on any part without harming the hand of the user due to the increased chakra barrier in the claws. Once the attack is blocked, with the other claw the user will straighten their hand out with the increased claw length with chakra and slam it into any part of the human body they wish. This is all done very quickly just like how a beast will attack it's prey. It's also done in near one motion, block - puncture.

Notes:
- Usable twice per battle
- Must be in 4legged tech
- Only usable by a master Inuzuka clan member
- Must have mastered "Lost Teachings of the Raging Beast"

~ Doesn't deserve to be an A-rank ~

 

[Nagato..]

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The above pics hows that it can be used to bolt into one direction, and then if the target is missed the user pauses for a second before he is able to turn directions

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The burst of energy numbs his opponent for a second,before he uses wind chakra to dash towards him and then use enhanced lightning afterwards.
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Kaio-ken 界王拳 | Fist of the World King
Rank: A-Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30-50
Damage: x5 (+7) x10 (+15) x20 (+20) & (-30) to self
Description: Kaioken is said to be a legendary technique invented by the brother of the Sage of Six Paths the man named Goku was said to be the only person ever able to successfully use it. It is a technique that multiplies the users bloodflow or heart beat, enabling them to inflict serious damage to opponents who are considerably stronger than them. Its somewhat like a boost of adrenaline. While in the state, the users chakra emanates form their body having the color of crimson red and their strength of taijutsu, wind and lightning natures are enhanced temporarily. Initially the activation of the technique is like an explosion and pulses out of the users body blowing back things obstructing ones limbs or weapons, its force numbs opponents for a secondif they are caught at short range. The user is granted the ability to use his wind chakra at the utmost potential allowing him to surround his body to burst into one direction to meet his target as well as move at high speeds that are in class with Might Gai. The technique has different levels of usage as well as severe drawbacks no matter what the level.

[A Ranked] Kaioken x5: The user yells out "Kaioken x5" and like each level chakra burst from his body giving him an accelerated heart rate and giving him a boost to taijutsu, wind and lightning techniques of (+7) and when its over the user is unable to perform taijutsu, wind or lightning of any sort for 2 turns.

Note: Lasts 4 turns

[S Ranked] Kaioken x10: The user yells out "Kaioken x10" and like each level chakra burst from his body giving him an accelerated heart rate and giving him a boost to taijutsu, wind and lightning techniques of (+15) and when its over the useris unable to perform any taijutsu and wind for 3 turn.

Note: Lasts 3 turns

[Forbidden] Kaioken x20: The user yells out "Kaioken x20" and like each level chakra burst from his body giving him an accelerated heart rate and giving him a boost to taijutsu, wind and lightning techniques of (+20) and when its over the users actions are delayed by 10 seconds due to being extremely exhausted and cant perform taijutsu, wind and lightning for 4 turns.

Note: Lasts 2 turns

Note: Can only be initialized once per battle.
Note: Levels can be used consecutively if needed but the amount of turns it lasts are cut by one turn, and the drawback of the level the user is advancing to are still in effect. (-10 to self if advancing up a level) Example: Going from Kaioken x5 to x10 or x20
Note: Can only be taught by Ryoku

To my checker, please edit any minor detail if its near approval. O_O And what I meant by the turn being cut by one is how I chained the turn duration of each level.

x5 = 4
x10 = 3
x20 = 2

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Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

"Life" and "Death" (Twin Chained Chakra Blades)
Type: Custom Weapon
Rank: D rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description:
Two chakra blades, each 12 inches long are held on the end of chakra chains and swung around the user in various circular patterns. The blades named "Life" and "Death" respectively, are made of heirloom chakra silver that has been reforged into a new weapon every generation, having almost endless battle experience.

The weapon allows the user to use the chained blades as normal chakra blades would be, however with the benefit of range. Enabling the user to distance himself while attacking, and use the chains as a way of entangling and trapping his foes. The chakra control of the user allows both the blades and the chains to be used as a cutting surface, while the chains enable the blades to be retracted towards to user after being thrown or swung. "Life" and "Death" act as a normal pair of chakra blads in respects to damage, but allows the user to utilize the chained blades as a medium for any weapon based justu that they are trained in. Adding the benefit of range to jutsu that would have otherwise been disadvantaged.

Note: Can only be used by

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~ Eh...Approved ~

(If there is any minor things you need to change in order for this to be approved, please do so, especially if you think it needs an effect other than as described. Thank you for your time)