[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Jokey]

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(Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: -
Damage: -
Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power by 10+ making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's, warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body and thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders he gains the ability to only sweep with his hands to perform wind technique's, Makarov already got the ability to use every wind technique with one single handseal, but this also gives him the opportunity to use wind techniques with only sweeping his hands like Gaara does with sand, only related to the part of when he sweeps his hands, when Makarov does so, he will be able to perform a wind technique with only sweeping with his hands. (other CJ'S will get submitted) Inspiration of his Village causes him to have an aura of wind flow around him giving him wind based attacks an additional 10+ damage however, the downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become two ranks weaker then the original.

Note: -10 chakra every turn
Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
Note: Only

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Note: 10+ On wind attacks or 10+ Damage on wind attacks
Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower two ranks then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become B-Rank)
Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he then won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points
Note: The bolded part means that when he sweeps his hands, he is able to perform a wind technique, which counts as a technique (ex; When he uses a S-Ranked Serial waves technique, he is able to sweep his hands back and forth, meaning that he will release the technique without making handseals, but this counts as 1 technique in a turn, meaning that he then only got two spots over for other technique's)

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~ You're repeating yourself over and over in the technique's description. Fix it. ~

Re-submitting the following;

(Fearī Teiru's Iyoku Ryoku) - Fairy tail's will of power
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: -
Damage: -
Description: Makarov wears a suit with Kanji symbols upon the goldish shoulders, When having the suit on, Makarov feels the energy of the Kanji symbols flow through him, and when this occurs his wind based techniques have an increase in power, making him even more deadly as a wind user, when he puts these on, he gains the the power to receive +10 damage points to wind based technique's. When having this suit on, Warmth and strength will then flow trough his whole body and thanks to the wind kanji's written on his shoulders he gains the ability to use wind technique's in a blink of an eye. Makarov already got the ability to use every wind technique with one single handseal, but this also gives him the opportunity to use wind techniques in a blink of an eye after putting the suit on, Inspiration of his Village sunagakure causes him to become stronger. The downside is when he wears this suit, every used Fire technique will become one ranks weaker then the original.

Note: -10 chakra every turn
Note: The bonus only applies to one attack per turn maximum
Note: Only

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Note: 10+ Damage On wind technique's
Note: When using a Fire technique, the rank will lower one rank then the orginal (ex; using S-Rank Fire will become A-Rank)
Note: After he turns off the suit (If it get's disconnected with his body) he won't be able to use wind and fire based technique's for the whole battle and loses -10 damage points

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Deleted and changed a couple of things, I hope it's better now.

~ In a blink of an eye ? No, just no ~

 

[Naruto Uzumaki Bijuu Sage]

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(Raiton:Howaito Raikiri)White Lightning Blade
Type:Weapon (sword)
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: N/A (10 when you send out a pulse in V1 / 20 per turn every turn in V2)
Damage: 40
Description: The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form

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, in this form the sword can send out pulses of raiton chakra in a desired direction,the raiton pulses can pierces solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body and sending it back into your sword letting you know something is there. You send out the pulses by swinging your sword in that direction and the pulses can only be sent out horizontally.These pulse can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything

when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form

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, in V2 form the blade gives a constant pulse of raiton charka this pulse can pierce solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This helps you see what you can’t see , like if your blinded you can use your sword to find your opponent. These pulse can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything


Note: In V1 every pulse counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn
Note: The pulses in V1 are 10 feet in width and 10 feet in height
Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade
Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele
Note: When in V2 the lightning blades constant pulse has a diameter of 20 feet (short/mid range) and a height of 20 feet
Note: The white lightning blade cannot send it’s pulses underground in any form
Note: When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state
Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.

-Declined-
If you send the pulses and they can pierce through objects, how do they come back to you with the info? Also on v2, you didn't mention if the pulses do damage or not. You only did that on v1. Add a limit on the amount of times v2 can be used

(Raiton:Howaito Raikiri)White Lightning Blade
Type:Weapon (sword)
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: N/A (10 when you send out a pulse in V1 / 20 per turn every turn in V2)
Damage: 40
Description: The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form

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, in this form the sword can send out pulses of raiton chakra in a desired direction,the raiton pulses can pierces solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body and sending it back into your sword letting you know something is there. You send out the pulses by swinging your sword in that direction and the pulses can only be sent out horizontally. the pulses that are sent out stay connected to the sword until another pulse is sent out or the jutsu is canceled, or if left on the field for more than two turns they disappear.(once the pulses are on the field the cannot change position the must stay in that direction until a new pulse is sent out, These pulses can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything

when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form

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, in V2 form the blade gives a constant pulse of raiton charka this pulse can pierce solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This helps you see what you can’t see, like if your blinded you can use your sword to find your opponent. This constant pulse of raiton chakra is full of waves that connect the 360 degree 20 foot diameter by 20 foot height pulse to the sword, so when a living creature is in side the area the user feels their electrical impulses in their body, thus giving the user an location of where the enemy is These pulse can go through solid objects without causing damage to anyone or anything


Note: In V1 every pulse counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn
Note: The pulses in V1 are 10 feet in width and 10 feet in height
Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade
Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele
Note: When in V2 the lightning blades constant pulse has a diameter of 20 feet (short/mid range) and a height of 20 feet
Note: The white lightning blade cannot send it’s pulses underground in any form
Note: When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state
Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.
Note:The white lightning blade is only usable 3 times in V2.

~ Approved ~
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(Ration: sono Howaito jajjimento)Lightning release:The white judgement
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid-Long
Chakra:20
Damage:40-20-10
Description:The user chanel their raiton charka into a sword, and then the user swings the sword sending out a powerful wave of white lightning blots at their opponent.The damage changes with the range ..In close range the wave of lightning bolts starts out as a single actuate powerful bolt of lightning capable of cutting Steele , then once the wave of lightning travels into mid range the single bolt starts to spread out into four bolts but the wave lowers in power, now only capable of cutting solid rock, when it travels into long range the wave of lighting splits again the time in half, now having eight bolts of lightning capable of only stunning a person(s), with no real harm only stunning them for 3 seconds

Note:When the wave of white lightning bolts are in close range it is 1 yard in width ( 3 feet ), when in mid range the wave of white lightning is 2 yards in width (6 feet), when the wave of white lightning is in long range the width is three yards ( 9 feet)

Note:Once every three times jutsu is used it cannot not be used again until four turns.(if you use this justu 3 times regardless of if it's in the same turn it cannot be used again untill the fourth turn after the last time used )

Note: This can only be used two times per battle(the most you can use this is 3 times in one turn and three four turns later.. so six or once every turn for three turns , and and then for turns later )

Note:Can only be used with white lightning blade V2
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(Raiton:chikai kaisen)Lightning release: Short circuit
Type: Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user closes their left eye and preforms the flowing hand seals Bird → Ox → Boar → Hare → Bird, as the user is doing the hand seals their gathering a massif amount of raiton chakra into their left eye. once the hand seals are complete the user opens his eye sending out a massif wave of chakra that's invisible to the naked eye flying towards their opponent, this causes a great amount of stress on the eye causes it to bleed and to go blind for 3 turns, the wave of chakra is 10 feet wide and 10 feet in height, and travels at a fast able to reach mid range in about 3 seconds. once the wave comes into contact with the opponent it stores tiny electrical bolts in their chakra net work that are dormant until the opponent try's to access their charka and when the opponent try's to access charka to use a jutsu or for some other reason the tiny bolts of stored lightning chakra release electricity throughout the opponents body causing their chakra network to become unstable for that turn resulting in the opponent not able to use any justu. the electricity also causes numbness in the opponents body.

Note: You can only use this jutsu two times per battle
Note: This can be the only jutsu you use on any any given turn, and if a jutsu was used before this you cannot use another one
Note: Using this justu will cause your left eye to go blind for three turns
Note: the charka wave can only be seen with a doujutsu that can see chakra or someone who has sensing.
Note the opponents body will go numb and unable to move it for 2 seconds <----Note to mod: (feel free to remove this one)
Note: if used three times your left eye will go blind forever.(just for that battle)

~ Both declined ~

 

[Mangomango]

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(Doton: Iwa Ningyō no sakusei) Earth Release: Rock Puppet Creation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the Ox then the Boar hand seals and places their hands on the ground, palms down. From in front of the user raises a group of rocks all in odd shapes. These rocks lay dormant on the ground until the user uses the (Kugutsu no Jutsu) Puppet Technique, when the Puppet Technique is used the Chakra channeled down the chakra strings and into the rocks make all the odd looking rocks fit together to form a humanoid shape (like a wooden artist mannequin). These humanoid shapes can be used like regular puppets.
Notes:
- Can be used as many times as the user wants but only one puppet is made per use of the Jutsu
-This Jutsu doesn't involve the control of the rock puppets and the Puppet Technique must be used to do anything with the puppets.
-The puppets don't have any hidden compartments or tricks and can only be used to perform free form Taijutsu.

~ Approved ~

 

[Rozzy]

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Enten Tonfa Heika - (Blazing Tonfa swords)
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (20 when heat is absorbed)
Damage: (+60 when struck with heated swords)
Description: Tonfa swords are extremely light and fast blades. The tonfa can be gripped by the short perpendicular handle or by the longer main shaft. In defense, if the handle is grasped then the shaft protects the forearm and hand while the knob protects the thumb. This gives the user greater use for the swords length while blocking but less when attacking. In offense, one can swing the shaft to strike the target. Large amounts of momentum can be imparted to the shaft by twirling the tonfa by the handle. This gives the user greater use for the swords length when attacking but less when defending. The tonfa can also be wielded in such a way as to use the knob as a striking implement, held either by the handle or by the shaft.
These swords have a unique ability which lets them engulf humidity and heat. The more heat and humidity they engulf the hotter the swords get giving them a glowing red-like colour due to the intense heat. Once the swords become heated up they cause great damage to anything the come into contact with.
~Can engulf up to B rank fire jutsus.
~Engulfing a fire jutsu counts as a move.
~Cannot hold them in defence position when heated due to the great heat of the blades rubbing off the users forearms.
~Can only be held by ShikamarUchiha10

~ Explain "engulf" humidity and heat ~

 

[Photon]

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[ゼットソード | Z sword]
Type: Weapon
Rank: S rank
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: N/A
Damage:N/A
Description: The Z sword is an ancient and extremely heavy sword. It was rumored to be made in the heart of a dying star by the gods. The Z sword is made almost completely or Osmium and silver which respectively are the most dense and most conductive metals. Because of the compound of these two metals it is extremely resistant to heat so it can nullify any c rank and below fire technique. because of the strains of silver running through the sword it is also extremely conductive this allows the user to channel his lightning chakra into the sword increasing the "sharpness" of the blade. Although because of the conductivity of the sword if a lightning technique hits the user without it being countered the ensuing damage is said to be amplified to one rank higher than what the technique is e.g. if a c rank lightning technique hits the user the damage caused will be B rank. Because of the density of the metals used in the forging of the weapon the Z sword is so heavy that it cannot be used for prolonged periods of time without fatigue / reduced stamina. Because of such after the weapon is wielded (in the hands of the user) the speed of the user is reduced by 10% and after 7 turns the player can only use 2 jutsu per turn for the remainder of the fight due too fatigue. Although because of this weight if anyone was hit with this sword as well as being cut their bones would be crushed and internal organs ruptured ( presuming that the sword hits them and they are not just slashed by a tip or an edge).
~Can channel lightning chakra to increase penetration
~ If hit with a lightning tech while wielding the Z sword the techniques power goes up one grade
~Can nullify any C rank and below fire technique
~Whilst being wielded it reduces the speed of the user by 10%
~ after 7 turns of wielding it the user is only allowed to use 2 jutsu for the rest of the fight.
~ Can only be wielded by Photon if anyone tries to pick it up except photon spikes explode from the hilt like samehada

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~ Declined, nothing unique about it ~

Summoning Animal: Giant Harrier
Scroll Owner: Photon
Other Users who have signed contract:
Summoning Boss if existing:
[Kuchiyose:kokuou kijuuki |Summoning: King Crane ]

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[kokuou kijuuki | King Crane ]
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Crane is the King of the harriers because of his large wing and legs (wing span of 20 meters and is 9 meters tall) he is well adapted to Wind and tai-jutsu because of this he has mastered both up to B rank. He is very fast and has great stamina both of these attributes are due to the size of his wings compared to the rest of his body. because of his stamina and wing span to body ration even with a summoner on his back he does not get tired which allows him to fight for longer periods of time without fatiguing compared to other birds
- Can only be summoned 2 times and lasts 5 turns
- Crane's jutsu count as one of the 3 per turn
- Elemental weakness to fire jutsu
-: Must sign the Giant harrier contract from Photon

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Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none so far.
Description and Background:
harriers are birds of prey, family Accipitridae, order Falconiformes. Harriers have long wings and legs, a small head with a short beak, an owl-like frill of thickset feathers around the face, and soft plumage. They eat frogs, birds, snakes, and small mammals, and are found mainly in marshy areas throughout the world. Because of their long wings and legs they are both gifted in wind jutsu and taijutsu being able to use both of these at B rank and below. although because of their thickset feathers they are very susceptible to Fire techniques due to both their elemental and natural weaknesses towards fire which is why they tend to stay in the air because fire techs tend to be short-mid range so they have learned to keep their distance.. Photon discovered these creatures when he was a nomad trekking across far distant lands. there he found the nests of the Harriers and formed an alliance with them meaning they sware no loyalty to any village just photon alone and who ever he hands the contract down too.

~ Scorps ~
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[sytren]

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*I wasn't sure where this should be posted since the custom weapons says put with custom jutsu submissions and that was closed...This is the first one i've made and give alot of thought to I'd like to keep it and just perhaps tweak it if possible. I used an actual sword too if that matters i can make one up. Thank you all for taking the time look this over any pointers are greatly appreciated. Also i never could find anywhere if jutsu ranks applied to weapons as well. If so when could i use this weapon?*

Juuchi Yosamu (10,000 Cold Nights)
Type: Weapon
Rank: D (explained in notes)
Range: Short
Defensive and Offensive
Chakra: (wasn't sure how much or when it would consume.)
Damage: (Stated in notes as it changes)

Description: The legendary sword Juuchi Yosamu made by the famous Muramasa. Basically this weapon is a defensive and offensive because it uses the sheath as well as the sword. I was thinking that the sheath if pointed towards a projectile jutsu (Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu) with the opening towards the fireball that it would basically suck it up. Then the user has to sheath the sword and then withdraw it out and the blade will then be infused with the chakra from the jutsu it sucked up.

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Note: Rank of the weapon depends on the jutsu it can suck up basically for example. I can only do it on D rank's right now til I get more training then will be up to C rank and then B rank and so on.

Note: Can only suck up B rank or lower jutsu's

Note: Strength of the chakra infused blade would be determined on the jutsu sucked up. Such as D rank +5, C rank +10, B rank +15.

Note: Can only have one jutsu sucked and infused at a time.

Note: The lower the rank the longer the blade stays infused. D rank - 4 turns, C rank - 3 turns, B rank - 2 turns.

Note: Chakra once infused into the blade can't be discharged at will must stay until runs out of turns.

Note: Sucking up a jutsu counts as 1 move

Note: Sheathing the blade and withdrawing it again in turn counts as a move. (Unless using that samurai technique that does the quick drawing thing)

*As I said i'll welcome any helpful thoughts and tips and sorry if this is the wrong place to post this thread. Thank you for reading.*

~ This is a good idea, certainly one of the more unique I have seen. However, two things. First, do not write it as "I think..." etc., state something confidently. Second, no colours or anything are allowed for fonts, so remove all that. Then resubmit, ~

 

[-Yard-]

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The quotes I mention are actual quotes from Bruce Lee, I think they hold a great place in this technique, as it reflects the mind that the user has and inspired this technique.


(Jeet Kune Do: Enta-Sono Doragon) Jeet Kune Do: Enter The Dragon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: +10 To Taijutsu
Description: "As long as I can remember I feel I have had this great creative and spiritual force within me that is greater than faith, greater than ambition, greater than confidence, greater than determination, greater than vision. It is all these combined. My brain becomes magnetized with this dominating force which I hold in my hand. You have to keep your reflexes so that when you want it, it’s there. When you want to move you are moving. And when you move, you are determined to move! Not accepting even one inch less than 100 percent of your honest feelings. Not anything less than that. So that is the type of thing you have to train yourself into. To become one with your feelings so that, when you think it is My friend, drop all your preconceived and fixed ideas and be neutral. Do you know why this cup is useful? Because it is empty. In Jeet Kune Do, it’s not how much you have learned, but how much you have absorbed from what you have learned. It is not how much fixed knowledge you can accumulate, but what you can apply livingly that counts. ‘Being’ is more valued than "doing". The worst opponent you can come across is one whose aim has become an obsession. For instance, if a man has decided that he is going to bite off your nose no matter what happens to him in the process, the chances are he will succeed in doing it. He may be severely beaten up, too, but that will not stop him from carrying out his objective. That is the real fighter." This is not a technique of Determination, nor is it a technique of Will Power, it is a mind set that anyone through the efforts of Jeet Kune do can obtain, it is through Determination and will that this state of mind can be reached, and once it has, the warrior can take damage and move through it, as if they don't feel it. They will gain a greater force behind their attacks (Double the force and double the speed), a force of which easily shows they are giving it their all. This technique is to be the strongest and most respectful to the arts of Jeet Kune Do, for it is the warriors mind they gain through their efforts of the training in Jeet Kune Do. This technique is the strongest of Jeet Kune Do, because it represents the true emotion of the style. Because the style actually teaches to move through any obstical, overcome anything just like water flowing through a river, it's not just through fighting that this is taught, but through overall battle as well. It's a mind set that is achieved through Jeet Kune Do."

Notes:
- Lasts until the user dies.
- Can only be used once.
- Must be a Master of Jeet Kune Do.
- Must be of Sannin Rank.
- This is taught Automatically through the training of Jeet Kune Do.
- The user can take damage until he is fatally wounded or has lost too much blood.


±± Declined ±± Your job is to submit a technique, not a book. Reduce this to a readable description please

 

[~Anubis~]

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Summoning Animal:

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Scroll Owner: Anubis
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: None
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet


(Kuchiyose:Himaraya karanijikiji ) Summoning:The Himalayan Monal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:the user bites his thumb then smears the blood on his palm after doing so he performs needed hand seals and summons a Himalayan monal. He has a long crest that is metallic green color and fairly large about as big as deidera's clay owl.He's large enough to carry one person on his back while flying.he as affinity with Wind release and can use wind release up to the rank of the contract holder.The Himalayan monal is a very proud bird so sometimes he won't listen to the summoner and does as he wants and speaks English foully But he becomes serious while battling with opponents .he has ability to fly at a great speed making an opponent difficult to target him.
Note:
-Can speak foul English-
--Can only be in play for 5-turns.-
-Can only be Summoned by someone who has signed or owns the Monal contract -
-Can only be Summoned once per battle.-
-Each Jutsu counts as a move toward the three jutsu of the summoner-
-There are varieties of Monal so this contract is for all the species and no one can claim for the species that are related with monal-
~Declined~ Restrictions? Up to Forbidden Rank Wind Jutsu, High Speed Flight, and 5 turns?

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Scroll Owner: Anubis
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: None
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet

±± Approved ±±


(Kuchiyose:Himaraya karanijikiji ) Summoning:The Himalayan Monal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:the user bites his thumb then smears the blood on his palm after doing so he performs needed hand seals and summons a Himalayan monal. He has a long crest that is metallic green color and fairly large about as big as deidera's clay owl.He's large enough to carry one person on his back while flying. He as affinity with Wind release and can use wind release up to S-Rank without handseals.The Himalayan monal is a very proud bird so sometimes he won't listen to the summoner and does as he wants and speaks English foully But he becomes serious while battling with opponents .
Note:
-Can speak foul English-
--Can only be in play for 4 turns.-
-Can only be Summoned by someone who has signed or owns the Monal contract -
-Can only be Summoned once per battle.-
-Each Jutsu counts as a move toward the three jutsu of the summoner-

±± Approved ±±

 

[Gitanshu]

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Raiton boruto - Lightning Release Bolts
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release a dozen of bolts of lightning towards his opponent which causes numbing effect as well as damage to the opponent the but they are unique in the way how they approach the opponent , they approach him in arc like shape and completely engulf him as the approach him from all the different angles mainly from a 360 degree arc.
Note : Can only be used three times per battle
Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
Note : Must need mastery over Lightning element
Note : Can not use any S rank or higher Lightning base jutsu in the same turn
Note : Eight bolts are released towards the opponent
Note : They travel at the same speed of (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness mainly at a speed that any normal lightning attack does
Note: A little bigger (1.75 times) in width then that of (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Note: It requires three hand seals to be performed

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Katon netto- Fire Release Fire Net
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release fire from his handand send that fire toward's the opponent and also insert's some extra chakra into it and whent he fire is going to reach the opponent the user quickly transform it into a net made up of fire of diameter of approximately 5m and use it to trap the opponent with in it and due to it being made up of fire it causes deep burn to the opponent and can even be used to trap multiple opponents at the same time
Note : Can only be used three times per battle
Note : Can only be used or taught by Gitanshu/Alucard.
Note : Must need mastery over Fire element
Note : Can not use any S rank or higher fire base jutsu in the same turn
Note: It requires three hand seals to be performed

~ CAN BE USED OR TAUGHT ONLY BY Gitanshu/Alucard is a CONTRADICTION ! If it is only used by you, it cannot be taught, If it is taught by you, it cannot be only used by you. I would have thought this is simple logic. ~

Raiton boruto - Lightning Release Bolts
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release a dozen of bolts of lightning towards his opponent which causes numbing effect as well as damage to the opponent the but they are unique in the way how they approach the opponent , they approach him in arc like shape and completely engulf him as the approach him from all the different angles mainly from a 360 degree arc.
Note : Can only be used three times per battle
Note :Can only be taught by Gitanshu
Note : Must need mastery over Lightning element
Note : Can not use any S rank or higher Lightning base jutsu in the same turn
Note : Eight bolts are released towards the opponent
Note : They travel at the same speed of (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness mainly at a speed that any normal lightning attack does
Note: A little bigger (1.75 times) in width then that of (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Note: It requires three hand seals to be performed

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~ If an arc is 360 degree, it's called a circle O_O ~

Katon netto- Fire Release Fire Net
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user quickly starts to gather his chakra in his palm and quickly start to quickly release fire from his handand send that fire toward's the opponent and also insert's some extra chakra into it and whent he fire is going to reach the opponent the user quickly transform it into a net made up of fire of diameter of approximately 5m and use it to trap the opponent with in it and due to it being made up of fire it causes deep burn to the opponent and can even be used to trap multiple opponents at the same time
Note : Can only be used three times per battle
Note : Can only be taught by Gitanshu
Note : Must need mastery over Fire element
Note : Can not use any S rank or higher fire base jutsu in the same turn
Note: It requires three hand seals to be performed

~ Too many "quickly"s, make your description clear and understandable ~

CUSTOM FOR MY CW

(tsuwamono-shi-rudo) Warriors shield
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description- The user quickly channels one of his basic five elemental chakra into his sword and mix it with the special defensive power of the shield and thus create a wall of 10*10 meter in front of him which is equal to S rank defensive barricade.
Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Must posses mastery over the element which is being used
Note: Can not use the element which has been used to create the defensive wall in the same turn
Note: Can only be used with the help of Warrior Shield

~ The CJ has the same name as your weapon ? ~

Already Approved CW

(tsuwamono-shi-rudo) Warriors shield
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description- It is a shield of warrior and was wielded by a true shinobi and it's defense was said to be unbreakable it was found by gitanshu after many hard work and it was taken by him in his possesion this shield is capable enough of blocking all elemental jutsu up to B rank and is a mark of a true warrior,but it can only block small projectiles only like small wind bullets.
~need not be summoned if placed in a bio~
~can only be taught by gitanshu~
~can only block up to B rank~
~can only block up to 4 attacks per match~

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[Mangomango]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Doton: Chikyū Shinbu no Torenchi) Earth Release: Deep Earth Trench
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs the Snake hand seal and then places their palms on to the ground in front of them. After this is done the user channels their Chakra down into the earth and out towards the enemy. The user lowers the earth underground creating an underground chasm 2 meters in front of the enemy. When the enemy moves over the Chasm the small crust that hides the Chasm from the surface breaks due to the weight and the person who walked over would falls in. The Chasm is 3 meters wide both ways and 7 meters deep. The user can also recover the Chasm after the enemy has fallen in if they wished to.

Notes:
- Have to leave one turn between usages.
- The user doesn't know the Chasm is there, no physical signs will indicate its presence either. (Unless they have a technique stating otherwise - Chakra sensing/Byakugan)
~Declined~ Good, but what does the bolded mean?

 

[Pervyy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

I figured i'd try and make a variation of this jutsu:

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(Sennin Fuuin: Ero Toki) - Sage Sealing art: Pervy time
Rank: S
Type: Seal breaking
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 20 (to break the seal)
Damage Points: 100
Description: Before the battle, the user will have placed a special seal on their body while in sage mode. As they did, the would have have sealed 100 chakra points worth of natural energy into this seal placed on their body (like how jiraiya sealed the black flames into the scroll). The user will then perform one quick handseal thrusting their hands outwards releasing the seal. Upon doing so, they will release the large blast of natural energy outwards in all directions from their body. This is purely for damage, the user can't use this natural energy for sage mode. (see video below)

Note: Useable once
Note: Must be placed on bio or stated at the begining of the battle.
Note: No fuuin jutsu for 2 turns
Note: Can only be used by those able to control natural energy.
Note: This takes up two of the users 3 jutsu for the turn.
Note: The natural energy acts purely as a blast of energy with no added characteristics.
Note: Can't use while in Sage Mode (or similar).

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(Fuuin: Ero Gekido) - Sealing art: Pervy Rage
Rank: S
Type: Seal breaking
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 20 (to break the seal)
Damage Points: 100
Description: Before the battle, the user will have placed a special seal on their body. As they did, the would have have sealed 100 chakra points worth of each of the basic 5 elements into this seal placed on their body (like how jiraiya sealed the black flames into the scroll). The user will then perform one quick handseal thrusting their hands outwards releasing the seal. Upon doing so, they will release the large blast of the chosen element outwards in all directions from their body. If the earth seal is released, mud will errupt from the users body. The element released wont hurt the user


Note: Useable three times
Note: Must be placed on bio or stated at the begining of the battle.
Note: No fuuin jutsu for 2 turns.
Note: This takes up two of the users 3 jutsu for the turn.
Note: Only 1 element can be released at a time
Note: See video below, but instead of a pure blast of chakra it will be a chosen element

~Declined~ Umm, no. Do not think of resubmitting it as it stands.

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[Ryūjin]

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(Doton/Sekiyuton: Sekiyu Numa) - Earth/Oil Release: Oil Lake
Type: Supplementary , Offense
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user using his Earth chakra manipulation causes the ground underneath the opponent to descend with a large circular radius that's big enough to trap a Large summoning creature, and a height of 10 meters causing the opponent's balance to be disrupted, afterwards by forming 3 quick handseals of Ram → Monkey → Boar the user causes Oil to seep from the ground underneath and around the opponent "the walls of the circular area which descended" filling the area with Oil making it hard for the opponent to move through the Oil, this technique can be used for other Oil techniques.
Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Must have signed the Toads contract.
~Leaving for Mathias~
~Declined~ Having signed the Toad contract does not give you the ability to create oil related techniques from the ground. The oil is produced by the toads themselves which are usually used in fire combinations. Putting that aside, the fact remains that this would collide with the oil Release CE that has been already approved by another member.

(Ninpō: Akuma Hōka) - Ninja Art: Demonic Fire
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a basic ninjutsu technique used by Ryūzetsu, to give her fire techniques a more "unique" shape than the other users of fire techniques, similar to the shape of the "Fire Release: Demon Lanturn" technique, Ryūzetsu's fire techniques have somewhat of a transparent effect to it, allowing Ryūzetsu and others to see through the fire technique but a more of a distorted vision of what's behind the fire, and whenever she's using a fire technique that consists of small fireballs like for example the "Fire Release: Phoenix Fire Technique" all of the small fireballs attain a demonic head-shaped fireball, this technique doesn't increase or decrease the strength of any fire techniques whatsoever.
Note: Will remain continuously activated once used.
Note: Can only be used by Ryūzetsu.

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~Approved~ Pretty well done.

 

[Vroqrak]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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Raiton: Getsuga Tenshō (Lightning: Moon Fang Heaven-Piercer)
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Attack / Defence
Range: Short / Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: At the instant of the slash, the user absorbs the lightning energy and channels it to his balde and releases highly condensed lightning energy at the tip of the blade, magnifying the slash attack and then flies forward. This slash takes the form of a crescent moon or in the shape of a wave. Getsuga Tenshō is a powerful technique with great force, capable of causing large-scale damage and destruction. It can be used in several different manners, such as striking the ground to create an omnidirectional blast to knock away incoming attacks or slashing at the ground to upturn it and crush everything in its path.

Note: Can only be used 3 times.
~Declined~ Do Not Resubmit

 

[House]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

re-submit

(Hakke Kakureta sainō) 8 Trigrams Hidden Talents
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the abilities where a hyuuga member is able to emit a sharp chakra line through his palms, he'll be able to access one's chakra system. As this sharp chakra line had impaled one's body, the user will be able to access the enemies' chakra system as the chakra from the chakra line has infected the system, by sending chakra/going through the paths of his chakra system. As the chakra spread through the chakra system, it will completely stun his body/disturbing chakra flow for a turn, or ti'll the user is connected to the opponent.
Note:
~It won't hurt the opponent, only paralyze him for a turn or ti'll the user is connected to the opponent.
~The chakra line is just as fast as hinata shown using it to create a barrier.
~Can be used 2x in a battle.
~Dr. House may teach it.
~No S-rank or higher elemental chakra for the following turn

±± Declined ±± OP


(Hakke Shatā tamashī) 8 Trigrams Soul Shatter
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Himself
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 in each turn)
Damage Points: N/A (+10 Ninjutsu / +10 Taijutsu)
Description: The hyuuga member will focus his chakra throughout his body, thus using his excellent chakra control over his body, convert his whole body into raw chakra. In this state, he is able to be one with his jutsus and is able to take any physical damage. While active, the appearance of the user's chakra system can be seen and the shroud of chakra which makes up the body. The user may use his elemental chakra affinity while this is active. The elemental chakra affinity can only be used in the way of shaping the raw chakra which makes up the user's body. To go into more deeper, the user won't be able to make any techniques which is only the affinity the user has, but only to use it as a shape manipulator of the raw chakra.
Note:
~Can only use his elemental affinity and no other elemental techniques.
~Two jutsus in every turn while this is active
~Only kages or higher
~Can be taught by Dr. House
~Useable once per battle
~Lasts 4 turns
~When this ends, user may only use elemental chakra up to A-rank for the next 3 turns.


±± Declined ±± OP and the description has serious flaws.

(Hakke Shatā tamashī) 8 Trigrams Soul Shatter
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Himself
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 in each turn)
Damage Points: N/A (+10 Gentle Fist / +10 Taijutsu)
Description: The hyuuga member will focus his chakra throughout his body, thus using his excellent chakra control over his body, convert his whole body into raw chakra. In this state, he is able to be one with Gentle Fist techniques like the Twin Lion Fist and is able to take any physical damage. While active, the user's appearance looks dark blue raw chakra which suppose to make up the user's body. While this mode is active, the user is vulnerable to lighting. If the opponent touches the user, it will burn him.
Note:
~The user won't be able to mold any of the 5 elements while this is active
~While this is active, it counts as one of the 3 jutsus per turn
~Only kages or higher
~Can be taught by Dr. House
~Useable once per battle
~Lasts 5 turns
~User won't be able to use tai or gentle fist for two turns after the jutsu has de-activated.
~When this ends, user may only use elemental chakra up to A-rank for the next 3 turns.

Changes I've made
~took out the whole elemental affinity thing
~cleared it up more
~Made it so only gentle fist can be used
~Made it last 5 turn
~Declined~ Overpowered still. I like the idea though.

(Hakke Kakureta sainō) 8 Trigrams Hidden Talents
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using the abilities where a hyuuga member is able to emit a sharp chakra line through his palms, he'll be able to access one's chakra system. As this sharp thick chakra line had impaled one's body, the user will be able to access the enemies' chakra system as the chakra from the chakra line has infected the system, by sending chakra/going through the paths of his chakra system. As the chakra spread through the chakra system, it will completely stun his body/disturbing chakra flow for a turn.It takes 3 seconds ti'll the opponent completely becomes stunned (meaning his whole body) if the opponent is hit anywhere else then his chakra core.
Note:
~It won't hurt the opponent, only paralyze him for a turn or ti'll the user is connected to the opponent.
~The chakra line is just as fast as hinata shown using it to create a barrier.
~Can be used 2x in a battle.
~Dr. House may teach it.
~No elemental chakra is allowed to be used by the user in the same turn. CW is an exception where the user can only channel raw chakra into his CW to activate any affinity the CW has.

Changes I've made:
~Put more restriction
~Made it a-ranked
~cleared it up more
~Declined~ Incorrect chakra cost. Plus, how is it mid-range?

(Katon: Geretsuna Harikēn) Fire release: Vile Hurricane
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will channel his fire chakra to the opponent and when the katon chakra has reached the opponent, massive flames will appear around the opponent, engulfing him in massive flames, burning him alive.
Note:
~Can be used 3x
~No other Katon technique in the same turn,
~No S-ranked katon or higher in the next turn.
~Dr. House may teach it.
~Must master fire
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit.

 

[Lucifer]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Doton: Rōzugāden) - Earth Release: Rose Garden
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-30 to the user)
Description: The user makes a quick sequence of three handseals, Hare → Tiger → Snake, and focuses a large mass of doton chakra throughout the whole battlefield. As the user forms the last handseal being the snake handseal he slams both of his hands on the ground thus releasing the concentrated doton chakra in a burst, the enemies can literally see the shockwave of the doton chakra through the ground spreading into every direction. By doing this the user will create giant roses and spike branches made from silicate minerals found in the earth crust, being one of the basic earth crust elements, the gigantic roses and spike branges are made out of rare minerals only found in the earth crust thus gaining a redish-greenish, making them look like actual roses thought they are just earth minerals given actual form by chakra. These gigantic roses are sharper than blades and much denser having dozens gigantic spikes stiking out of the core not the mention the green colored branches. These gigantic roses reach out up to 30-40 meters in the air, in a mayhem of branches and leaves each capable of piercing through metal, creating a forest of deadly roses which can penetrate the targets literally from all direction, the garden reaches out to all directions, being highly infused with the users Doton chakra, granting the user the ability to use earth techniques from the garden with increased speed and reduced difficulty, from the large amount of silicate minerals.

Note: This technique can only be used/taught by Lucifer.
Note: The user can only use this technique once per battle.
Note: The users speed decreases by three ranks, following the speed chart.
Note: The user can't use earth techniques for two turns after this jutsu is used.
Note: The user will take enormous damage due to the large mass of chakra used to perform this jutsu. (-30)
Note: The user cannot participate in close combat due to the severe damage taken by this jutsu. (doing so will result in killing the user.)

~ First, the part I bolded is a contradiction. Second, the technique needs to be depowered. ~

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(Fūton: Amatsukaze) – Wind Release: Heavenly Wind
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user touches his left hand with the other hand, releasing a great deal of wind chakra into the air arround the targets causing a

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walls wind from the right and left side to side of the targets, while the wind wall on right side bends and rotates inwards the left wind wall rotates outwards with many wind blades hidden inside the wind gust. This prompts a powerful storm to strike the area around the user, lifting targets and objects with great force and sending them flying in a circular motion into the skies, whil skreding tehem to pieces while inside the twister. This jutsu is also capable of lifting even a summoning animal such as gamaken into the air. It can also be combined with a fire jutsu to form a fire/wind twister, causing twice as much damage.

Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
Note: The user cannot use any wind techniques the following turn.

~ Rephrase the description, it's confusing ~
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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Supitto Faia) - Summoning Technique: Spitfire
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes blood over a tattoo placed on a body part and slams his hands on the ground to call forth the legendary and most powerful out of the elemental griffins; Spitfire, the fire emperor,

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is a fairly large gryphon and is able to carry a total of four people on his back, he is the exact same size as pain's giant bird, but the thing that makes Spitfire really special is his appearance, his fur is completely orange-yellow, with the tip of her feathers colored light red and his both wings and all four legs are on fire this won't do any harm to the gryphon's because they are impervious to fire, Spitefire's eyes are the color of hell one might say completly red with yellow splits resembeling his power, superiority over other of his kind and his elemental affinity, Spitfire has a very interesting bone strucutre which is solid yet hollow from the inside and very thin but hard as stones, thus it makes him much faster and much more powerful than other gryphons of the round he is also very muscular, a normal ninja could easly loose track of him in the skies or on the ground. Spitfire has the manipulation of the wind affinity, from his birth he trained to master the fire element and thus he became more accustomed to it, therefore he can use the fire element upto S-Rank (counting towards the users moves of course), without the use of any handseals. Spifire is often refered to as the fire monster, or simply Spitfire.

Note: Spitfire can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Spitfire can stay on the field for 5 turns per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by the holder of the gryphon contract.

~ I'm going to be a bit of an ass here, and say that I'm not checking it because you used extra font modifications ( colours ). Read the rules. ~

 

[Vayne]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Lightning Release: Lightning Limb (Raiton: eda)
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will send his lightning chakra through a puddle of water and as the lightning has almost reached the opponent the user will make his lightning chakra bounce and hit his opponent in the said body part leaving the opponent electrocuted.

-must have a stream of water to conduct electricity through.
-only usable three times per battle.
-can only be used by mangekyo byakugan and those thought by him.

±± Declined ±± Already exists


Lightning/Earth Release: Electro Limb Armor/attack(Raiton/Dotpn:eda bugu/batsu)
Type: Defense
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will uses his earth chakra to form an armor around a certain limb of his body then he will use his lightning chakra around the limb so that the lightning chakra travels on the covered limb the user then can hit his opponent with his limb causing the opponent to get electrified
-usable only twice per battle

±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit


Summoning Animal: Addax
Scroll Owner: mangekyo byakugan
Other Users who have signed contract: none
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and Background: The Addax is a rare antelope that inhabits the great mountains of mount addax they formed a contract with a shinobi of the name mangekyo byakugan allowing him to summon the addax kind to help him in battle.


±± Approved ±± Although i could have sworn i saw an antelope contract before. I can't find it though so your subspecies is approved.

 

[McRazor]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Hyouton: Mabayui bakari no rifurekushon | Ice Release: Blinding Reflection
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: While the field is on ice, user quickly channels chakra through his legs and sends it into the ground. While quickly spreading his chakra through the ground he calculates his opponents position and the position of the sun, which he then uses to manipulate the frozen ground in order create a small ice bump which deflects the sun into his opponents’ eyes. Due to the reflection being very strong and concentrated into one point, i.e. opponents’ eyes, he gets blinded enough for the user to move from long to mid or mid to short, and vice versa.
Note: Usable only two times per battle
Note: Only McRazor can use this

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to declined jutsu in previous CJ thread.

~ Approved ~

Hyouton: Kinkyū-ji no bāsuto | Ice Release: Emergency Burst
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: User does a single handseal and releases a strong unfocused burst of Hyouton chakra that even disturbs his own chakra flow. That burst is also capable of freezing and stopping an S-Rank Suiton or Fuuton jutsu that is directed towards the user. Because of the burst, user's skin turns blue-ish which raises his skin's resistance and makes him resistant to C-Rank taijutsu and normal or chakra enchanced ninja tools. While his skin is blue-ish he can't perform any Katon jutsus. The blue-ish state lasts two rounds, until his body temperature raises again.
Note: Usable only two times per battle
Note: Only McRazor can use this

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to declined jutsu in previous CJ thread.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Hyouton: Mizu no hentai | Ice Release: Water transformation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: +20 to Suiton jutsu
Description: After the user released a Suiton jutsu he immediately releases an extremely cold Hyouton chakra wave. The wave is very fast and it catches up with the previous Suiton jutsu before it hits the target. It carries very cold air which freezes any body of water on contact. The air wave is cold enough to freeze a meduim-big body of water. As the wave catches up, with the Suiton jutsu and freezes/powers it up, it disperses through the air, this way, not being nearly enough close to the opponent in order to harm him. The only effect the opponent can feel is a minor decrease in temperature due to the wave dispersing in all directions across the battlefield. Dispersion of the wave lasts about one turn until it totally disappears leaving the field a few degrees °C colder. This jutsu can't be used unless a Suiton jutsu is used previously. When the cold air wave freezes the water, its structure changes and forms into hexagonal prisms which make the attack solid. Due to the attack being solid it’s powered up for a whole rank. Note that an S-ranked Suiton jutsu doesn't become Forbidden but instead a very strong S-rank jutsu.
Note: Usable only after a Suiton jutsu is performed
Note. Usable only two times per battle
Note: Only McRazor can use this

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to declined jutsu in previous CJ thread.

~ Won't this stop the jutsu in its tracks ? ~

I'm very sorry that those above aren't quoted because the original CJ thread is locked. Thanks.

 

[Daemon]

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(Shakuton:Hihashira )- Scorch Release: Blazing Pillars
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: the user forms a dragon handseal then slams his or her hands on the ground in front of them. Instantly a whole line of geysers made of scorch release shoot up in the front of the user in a forwards direction.
(can only be used by daemon)

~ Restrictions ? Yes, Scorch has the potential to be extremely powerful, we need restrictions on it. ~

 

[Coyote]

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Suiton: Watatsumi Hanamoyou Joukuu | Water Release: Sea of the Floral Skies
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user will preform one handseal and release water chakra up to mid-range from the user. The chakra will take a thin layer of water on the ground. By using chakra manipulation the user is able to control viscosity of the water. When the target is on this thin layer, watery flowers appear around the target (360degrees) these flowers are manageable in terms of sending at the target thin slice layers of water and/or compressed water bullets. This attacks around large but very thin an very sharp to be able to cut like paper cuts. The water is like a layer of sticky syrup that even when disturbed it goes back to its original state on the ground. If the target runs on this layer, the flowers appear anywhere they go as long as they're on it. The main purpose of these water slices is to hit the targets hands to stop them from preforming handseals. Due to the reflective ability of the water when the target begins handseals the slices are triggered to hit the hands and stop them from preforming the move.

Restrictions:
- Only usable twice per battle
- Lasts on field for 2 turns
- Cannot be redone again until 1 turn has passed
- Only usable by Coyote

~ Description is unclear, the line I bolded particularly so. ~

Suiton: Konpaku Sono Watatsumi | Water Style: Ghosts of the Unforgiving Sea
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user will preform a series of 4 handseals and then release their suiton chakra into a water source or a wet ground. From that point 2 humanoid-like beings will be formed and will have a syrup texture, which is done by manipulating the waters viscosity. These beings cannot be harmed by means of water, earth, wind, taijutsu, or kenjutsu due to their ability to reconstruct themselves if hit by a blunt or slicing attack. When the beings are made they are formed in front of the user. The beings are similar to Deidara clay minions without the cord. They begin to move at a very quickened pace towards the target. After running the beings suddenly fall and sink into the ground or water, to the target they would think that the users technique has failed. The beings sink deep into the ground and/or water, when they get deep enough they mix with water deep under the ground/water and control it. After a short time has passed a 2 massive pillars of water will rise up from the ground at an alarming quick pace, the rising pillars are pinpointed to where the target it. The pillars of water rise 200 feet in the air and has a diameter of 100 feet. So it's very large. Both pillars can rise up at the same time or one after another. If the water is risen from the ground is different then that if it's risen from deep under water.

Restrictions:
- If water is risen from the deep underground, it will be extremely hot
- If water is risen from the deep undersea, it will be extremely cold.
- Pillars cannot be risen until the next turn, takes 1 turn for the water beings to get to water.
- Unable to use a water technique the turn of the rising water pillars.
- Only usable once per battle.
- Only usable by Coyote.

~ Decline, do not resubmit ~

 

[Lord Snow]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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神レイジング: Raging God
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range:Supplementary
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Raging God sword was made in the heavens and in 1300 B.C, it was sent to the Earth in a meteorite that crash landed in the mountains of Voldern. The sword was kept in a secret chamber by wizards. This sword was made from a special type of material that is still unknown, but there is titanium and meteorite in the sword making it indestructable. The sword have special abilities, it can manipulate/release Raiton and Katon jutsus and can defend against any kind of jutsu from those two elements. Another great ability of the sword is to gather Natural energy and release it from the sword as a strong shock-wave that can smash through solid objects and the ground as it goes to the enemy. This shock-wave can fend of up to A-rank elemental jutsus and cause serious damage. The Raging God sword was made in the heavens and carries some of heavens mythical power with it.

Note: Can only be wielded by Jellal
Note: Can use up to S-rank Katon and Raiton jutsus
Note: When using Katon/ Raiton with sword, can't S-rank or higher Katon/Raiton jutsu without sword, for same turn and turn after
Note: Shock-wave can only be used every 2 turns becasue needs time to gather up natural energy

~ OPed ~

Doton: Mage Stone-Gorrilla
Type: Offensive/Deffensive
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user builds up a large amount of Doton chakra and channel it into the ground. Making the Ox handseal, they will use that Doton chakra in the ground to manipulate the earth making a huge gorilla. The gorilla stands 20 ft tall and can shoot large amounts of mud from its mouth. The amount of mud is compareable to a mud river. This earth gorilla can also turn into a wall when defending.

Note: Can only be used/taught by Jellal
Note: Shooting Mud counts as one turn.

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