[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Selendrile]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Bakuton: Kibaku Doragon no Su)- Explosion Release: Explosive Dragon's Nest
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(45 per Dragon)
Description: The user, after ingesting a large amount of explosive clay, releases it from his mouth in a quick movement, similar to how Garuda is created. The entire process of consuming and releasing the clay lasts about five seconds. As the explosive clay is released from the mouth, it takes the shape of two dragons, similar to the C-2 Dragon. However, these dragons are smaller, more muscled and agile, and capable of flying at speeds up to 80mph. The dragons have the ability to be independently controlled similar to how clones function. Each dragon can separately be detonated with a single hand seal, and the blast radius of a single dragon goes out to mid-range from the location it was detonated from. The dragons stay on the battlefield until they are destroyed by the opponent, or detonated by the user.
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Only one dragon can be detonated per turn
*Note: No Clay techniques for the remainder of the battle
*Note: The user suffers a moderate fatigue after the use of this technique, being incapable of using or moving their legs for two turns

~ Too fast. At that speed, no one can dodge the dragons once they get even in mid-range, since the explosion also has to be accounted for ~

(Bakuton: Kibaku Doragon no Su)- Explosion Release: Explosive Dragon's Nest
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(45 per Dragon)
Description: The user, after ingesting a large amount of explosive clay, releases it from his mouth in a quick movement, similar to how Garuda is created. The entire process of consuming and releasing the clay lasts about five seconds. As the explosive clay is released from the mouth, it takes the shape of two dragons, similar to the C-2 Dragon. However, these dragons are smaller, more muscled and agile, and capable of flying at speeds up to 50mph. The dragons have the ability to be independently controlled similar to how clones function. Each dragon can separately be detonated with a single hand seal, and the blast radius of a single dragon goes out to mid-range from the location it was detonated from. The dragons stay on the battlefield until they are destroyed by the opponent, or detonated by the user.
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Only one dragon can be detonated per turn
*Note: No Clay techniques for the remainder of the battle
*Note: The user suffers a moderate fatigue after the use of this technique, being incapable of using or moving their legs for two turns

~ Approved ~

(Koishi Byōga Supia)- Pebble Drawing Spear
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Pebble Drawing Spear is a famed weapon rumored to be used by the Shodai Tsuchikage himself. The shaft itself its 5ft in length, and made from a heavy, chakra reinforced stone material. However, Selendrile has trained with the Spear for such a long amount of time; he is able to wield the heavy spear with normal dexterity. The triangular, bladed tip is composed of a tempered metal. Using his earth affinity, Selendrile is capable of channeling chakra into the spear. When this is performed, stones manifest themselves on the spear tip, using the shaft as a stone source. The stones can range from marble sized stones, to basketball sized ones. Using the Spear tip similar to a pencil, the user can draw various shapes and figures using the stones. After using this special ability two separate times, the user must replenish the stone shaft in order to maintain a source for drawing. This is done my simply placing the shaft against the ground, and elongating the shaft back to its original length using shape manipulation.
*Note: Only usable by Selendrile
*Note: Only usable by those with an Earth affinity
*Note: If not wielded by Selendrile, the Spear becomes impossible to lift due to its weight unless given permission first
*Note: The rocks produced by the Spear are B-ranked

~ What do you do once you draw with the rocks ? O_O ~

(Bakuton: Kibaku Gōsuto Kamikaze Keisei)- Explosion Release: Explosive Ghost Kamikaze Attack
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will put a single hand in their side pouches filled with clay, and begin to mold and shape it. They then will release ten small, white, ghostlike figures, resembling the user’s appearance. The tail ends of their bodies taper off to a point, giving them a ghost-like appearance. The ten ghosts are able to be individually controlled similar to clones, yet cannot use any jutsu. When moving, they are able to use the clay in their bodies to stretch their midsection up to mid-range from where their lower half is. Meaning, the lower half stays stationary, while the upper half travels up to mid-range away. Normal travel using their entire body is also possible. They are able to travel as fast as a normal explosive clay bird. Once they come in contact with anything, the user will perform a single hand seal, and detonate the ghosts individually. Each ghosts explodes with the force of five C1 bombs.
*Note: Can only be used by Selendrile
*Note: Only usable by Deidara
*Note: No clay techniques for 2 turns

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~ Impossibly long extension capabilities, lol. ~

 

[Erzo]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Fūton: Poppu) Wind Release : Pop
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates his wind chakra to form a highly compressed bubble of wind which is the same size as a tennis ball anywhere on the battle field, the user then makes the tennis ball blow up which results in a loud pop sound which affects the opponents hearing for 2 turns, making the hearing extremely bad due to the after affects of the pop. (like if someone had hears an explosion, their hearing would be phased and they get a ringing or buzzing sound in their ears.) And because of this the opponent would not be able to hear things very clearly giving the user an advantage.
Note: Can only be used twice.

±± Declined ±± similar technique is being made by mcknockout

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Karasu Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Myōjō) –Hyakutakarasu no Jutsu - One Hundred Scattered Crows Technique
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short – Self
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A ( )
Description:Hyakutakarasu is a summoning Technique developed by Law Hyuuga with the Aid of his Summoning Crows. Performing the Summoning Jutsu Law will call forth 100 (harmless) Crows to appear within an area so as to flood it with activity. These Crows will fly where directed by Law, usually around a target, causing confusion with their constantly and rapidly moving forms and endless screeches. Law or an ally could move within the flock almost undetected. With the target distracted by the Crows, Law can strike more easily and undetected till the last moment. Also the mass of crows can obscure any retreating ninja. When no longer needed, the crows will simply puff away in smoke, which by itself can also prove quite effective to cover ones movements.
- Can only be use twice per battle.
- Must wait one whole turn before using again.

~ Tell me this isn't similar to

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. It has the exact same abilities. EXACT SAME. Do not submit canon techniques under a different name. I should infract you, but I'm just warning you for now. ~

( Taka Ishuu ) : One With The Crows
Type:Supplementary
Rank: B
Range:Short – Self
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description: This is a special Crow Art Technique Law learned. Forming a single focusing hand sign Law can make himself disperse into a multitude of crows, usually numbering 20 or so. Able to reform at any time, he is still able to speak while in this multi Crow form, speaking from each and every one of them. There are no real offensive capabilities in this form, and his health and Chakra are split evenly among the Crows, meaning that for each crows destroyed he suffers injury and Chakra loss once reformed, As long as a Single Crow remains he can reform, but his health will reflect the loss. If all Crows are killed or destroyed than Law will die also. Also Law is aware of what each crows sees, hears, smells, experienced etc, allowing him to perceive event from multiple points of view. Usually this crows swam must remain within a certain distance from each other, within one mile.
- Can only be use twice per battle.
- No jutsu that needs handseal can be use while this jutsu is in play.

~ Declined, do not resubmit ~

Hargot
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short – Self
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A ( )
Description:Hargot is comparable in size to Gamabunta with a very large wing span. His name is given to him not because of treason towards his own people, but rather because of the way he hunts and the way he battles. Large enough to be mounted, Law can use Hargot for transportation, but he is not the most likely to accept to act as ride for any one. Hargot, is quiet, withdrawn and rather mysterious. His wings and back are nearly pure black, while his eyes are of the purest blue. At three hundred years of age Hargot is one of the most skilled (A rank) Genjutsu users of his people. With a single stair he can paralyze an opponent with fear, Make them believe they are fallng from open sky, make them believes they are trapped in a powerful whirlwind, or even make them believe that they are suffocating. His powerful cry can deafen his opponent, render them mad with fear, or make them believe that the scream has broken their body. ( These jutsu has to be created so he can't do them right now) A powerful and experienced warrior as well, his Talons can tear into nearly any material. His grip can squeeze the life out of a grown man. and among his people he is an exception, being a Fire ( A rank and below) user rather than Wind. Like all Crows, he is extremely agile and swift.
- Can only be summon once per battle
- The caster can't use Fire jutsu for 3 turns
- Only last 3 turns

~ Proper format ~

 

[Enzup]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

3.) (Ninpou: Mitsukai Tsubasa) - Ninja Art: Angelic Wings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: User uses his ink brush to draw giant wings on his back. Once drawn, it appears like the wings are emerging out of user's back and gives user somewhat angelic look and flying ability. Because of giant size of wings, user can fly with very great speed which is equivalent to Rock Lee without weights.
Note: -Must know Ink ninjutsu.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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@Above tech: There are many ink ninjutsu which helps the user in flying for infinite amount of time (see spoiler below). Also user can create many birds, dragons and animals at a time. And I am creating just one thing. Also other ink ninjutsu can be used any no. of times. So I am just making a new ink custom which resembles other ink ninjutsu completely.. which is for fun..
Also there are not many people who possess ink ability on nb, and those who possess they "don't have a similar custom."
You can remove the great speed (lee without weights) part if you want..

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(Ninpou: Choujuu Giga) - Ninja Art Beast Imitation
Rank: C
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15(-3 for each additional animal created)
Damage Points:30
Description:The user draws out small animals that can attack(lions), bind(snakes),and allow the user to fly(birds).This jutsu consists of 5 small animals.The pictures can be pre-drawn but you must open the scroll.
Note:The 5 animal limit can be any variety of small animals.

(Ninpou: Chou Choujuu Giga) - Ninja Art: Super Beast Imitation
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20(-6 for each additional large animal past 3 or -3 for each small animal past 10)
Damage Points:40
Description:This is a more powerful version of beast imitation.The user can create huge animals.This can range form 3 huge dragons or 10 small animals.The pictures can be pre-drawn but you must open the scroll.

±± All Declined ±±It has been stated countless times before, by Izuna and not only him that no submission that uses Spoilers without them being for images or videos will be checked.

As stated in the first post of this thread:

"-No submission that uses font or formatting alterations such as underline, bold, allignement, color, size, spoilers, etc will be checked. The only exception is that you are allowed to Bold or underline the title of each technique you submitt and you can use spoilers for videos or images you need to post for references.

-An exception to the above rule is the requirement to bold the alterations on re-submissions. Its required that every altered or add part is bolded. If you simply take out something, write beneath the jutsu stating "I took out the part where..."."

@Below Ink tech: There are many ink ninjutsu which helps the user in flying for infinite amount of time (see ninjutsu list). Also user can create many birds, dragons and animals at a time. And I am creating just one thing. Also other ink ninjutsu can be used any no. of times. So I am just making a new ink custom which resembles other ink ninjutsu completely.. which is for fun..
Also there are not many people who possess ink ability on nb, and those who possess they "don't have a similar custom."

(Ninpou: Mitsukai Tsubasa) - Ninja Art: Angelic Wings
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: User uses his ink brush to draw giant wings on his back. Once drawn, it appears like the wings are emerging out of user's back and gives user somewhat angelic look and flying ability. Because of giant size of wings, user can fly with very great speed such that only sharingan 2T and above will be able to keep up with speed.
Note: -Must know Ink ninjutsu.
-Can only be taught by Enzup.

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~ Do you have like super-bendy arms or something ? ~

(Katon/Raiton: Jisatsu Maniakku) - Fire/Lightning Style: Suicidal Maniac
Type: Offense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-Death of user-)
Description: This forbidden technique requires sacrifice and a lot of lightning and fire chakra. So user stands still and then starts concentrating his lightning and fire chakra in his stomach in a small ball. He keeps on concentrating the chakra for some time, and once tremendous amount of chakra is concentrated in the stomach, user makes Tiger handseal and says "baku" and as the moment he says "baku", the ball inside the user's stomach expands instantly turning into a giant sphere and thus user explodes. The sphere envelopes everyone and everything within 10m radius (mid-range). The impact of the explosion is that great that everything is turned into ash within range.
Note: -For concentrating chakra in stomach, user must stand still for 3 seconds. In this period of time, he can't move, or do anything.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any lightning or fire move in his previous turn.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any S-Rank or above technique in previous turn.
-If user explodes and opponent gets caught in it, then the match would result in draw.
-Can only be used by Enzup.


±± Declined ±± Op. Also, this makes it so that it provides easy draws or wins even if you die.

(Katon/Raiton: Jisatsu Maniakku) - Fire/Lightning Style: Suicidal Maniac
Type: Offense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-Death of user-)
Description: This forbidden technique requires sacrifice and a lot of lightning and fire chakra. So user stands still and then starts concentrating his lightning and fire chakra in his stomach in a small ball. He keeps on concentrating the chakra for some time, and once tremendous amount of chakra is concentrated in the stomach, user makes Tiger handseal and says "baku" and as the moment he says "baku", the ball inside the user's stomach expands instantly turning into a giant sphere and thus user explodes. The sphere envelopes everyone and everything within 10m radius (mid-range). The impact of the explosion is that great that everything is turned into ash within range.
Note: -For concentrating chakra in stomach, user must stand still for 5 seconds. In this period of time, he can't move, or do anything.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any lightning or fire move in his previous turn.
-Can only be used if user hasn't used any S-Rank or above technique in previous turn.
-If user explodes and opponent gets caught in it, then the match would result in draw.
-Can only be used by Enzup.

~ Remove what I bolded. You have no idea whether he would turn to ash or not, depending on the defenses. ~

Changed it to 5 seconds. And I think 5 seconds are more than enough time for someone, to stop me from using this (or to kill me). Also just b'coz I said that "if opponent gets caught in it, then the match would result in draw", I think you are assuming that whenever I will use this and explode, then opponent will not be able to block it? Although its a F-Rank, but it can also be blocked like other F-rank jutsus are blocked. I mean, even if I explode (die), then also my opponent can block the impact of the explosion.
And I have to stay still for 5 seconds (before using it), and thats no joke.

 

[BusinessManTeno]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ration: itsutsu sutaffu metsubou) Lightning Style: 5 Staff Destruction
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Chakra Damage: 90 (-40 To user)
Description : The User Will Release do 5handseals and take out 5 staffs and stab them all in the ground in front of him. Once done, the user will channel 95% of their lightning chakra into those staffs. Once done, the staffs will then all charge. Once they are done charging the staffs will then channel the lightning that was charged up, underground towards the opponent. The ground will then glow a yellowish color., Once it glows it will be a huge explosion under the opponent that spreads throughout 10yards in height and width of the oppenent


-No Lightning Throughout the whole turn
-Must possess staffs to use this
-If used in Short-Mid Range. The user will get caught up in the explosion
-Counts as 2/3 user moves
-Takes 1 turn to charge up
-While Charging the user cant use any Nin or Genjutsu
-Once the move is done it strains the body and only allows the user to do 2 moves up to B rank throughout the whole battle.
-Only Taught by general Phaze

~ If you're using 95% of the lightning chakra, which, by the way, is a misnomer since there is no store of "lightning chakra", its just chakra that you give a lightning nature to, you'll be unable to use lightning for more than one turn. Second, all Forbidden ranks can be used only once, so add that. Also, is it 2 or 3 ? How are you supposed to use it in battle if you're unsure how many moves it counts as ? ~

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(Ration: itsutsu sutaffu metsubou) Lightning Style: 5 Staff Destruction
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Chakra Damage: 90 (-40 To user)
Description : The User Will Release do 5handseals and take out 5 staffs and stab them all in the ground in front of him. Once done, the user will channel 95% of their chakra into those staffs. Once done the staffs will then all charge. Once they are done charging the staffs will then channel the lightning that was charged up underground towards the opponent. The ground will then glow a yellowish color Giving off alot of static currents from below the enemy stunning them,. Once it glows and gives off the lightning currents (about 5seconds) it will be a huge lightning explosion under the opponent that spreads throughout 10yards in height and width of the oppenent

-Can only use once
-Cant use lightning throughout the whole battle after
-Must possess staffs to use this
-If used in Short-Mid Range. The user will get caught up in the explosion
-Counts as 2 of the 3 of the user moves
-Takes 1 turn to charge up
-While Charging the user cant use any Nin or Genjutsu
-Once the move is done it strains the body and only allows the user to do 2 moves up to A rank throughout the whole battle.
-Only Taught by general Phaze

±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. This has no salvation. Its too similar to existing techniques even with the staff shenanigan going on.

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(Ni kashira: Prometheus) Two Headed: Prometheus
Type: Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Chakra Damage:60
Description: General Will do 5handseals. once done he will bite his thumb till blood drip, wipe it on his tattoo , slam his hands on the ground and the 2 headed snake (Prometheus) will appear under him. Prometheus is about 3/4 the size of manda. about the same size of the snake that swallowed naruto. Prometheus is one of the rare breeds as it has 2 heads. He can use up to A rank Earth . Also he can go underground without using a jutsu. The Scales on this snake is so rough its not penetrated by B rank and Below Earth Jutsu. The snake is not poisonous so General Can ride inside their mouth if need be,. Both of the snakes speaks English,Spanish,and Dutch. (They was taught by oro) >_>

-Can only use Once
-Only last for 4turns
-No Ninjutsu while summon active
-All jutsus done by the snake counts as 1 towards the user
-The snake do not need to do hand seals for Earth techs
-Only can be used by General Phaze

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~ Left for Scorps ~


±± Declined ±± going underground without a technique? No. Also, dutch? spanish? =_= Yeah, because in narutoverse the concept of language is something that is equal to the RW. Remove that part.

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(Ni kashira: Prometheus) Two Headed: Prometheus
Type: Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Chakra Damage:60
Description: General Will do 5handseals. once done he will bite his thumb till blood drip, wipe it on his tattoo , slam his hands on the ground and the 2 headed snake (Prometheus) will appear around him (Like a Cork screw). Prometheus is about 3/4 the size of manda. about the same size of the snake that swallowed naruto. Prometheus is one of the rare breeds as it has 2 heads. He can use up to A rank Earth . The Scales on this snake is so rough its not penetrated by B rank and Below Earth Jutsu. The snake is not poisonous so General Can ride inside their mouth if need be,. Both of the snakes are able to speak.

-Can only use Once
-Only last for 4turns
-No Ninjutsu while summon active
-All jutsus done by the snake counts as 1 towards the user
-The snake do not need to do hand seals for Earth techs
-Only can be used by General Phaze

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±± Approved ±± Note however that you put a restriction that makes it so that while this snake is on the field you can't use Ninjutsu... Which means that while this is in play you can only use Genjutsu and Taijutsu.

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Majestic (yuusou)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Chakra Damage: N/A (+20 To the user for each time he activates the sword)
Description: This Sword was said to be set in stone and could not be pulled out by anybody. They sooner realize the weapon was KG coated Meaning only people with a certain KG can Obtain and hold it. Many tried and All have failed... Bloody Asch then came and pulled on the sword and with great force the sword was lifted. He is able to maintain the sword cause the sword choose him (Ik lame) Asch Fought Days and Days. Train months and months with the sword to gain mastery of the sword. When The sword Activates the Gold Lines in the sword turn Bright Red. Asch Channels his Chakra into the sword when activating it. Causing it to give off a huge huge Red Glare with immense heat (Like a solar flare) making water evaporate under A rank and Earth turn into clay Under A rank Due to heat sulking up all the water (Meaning B rank and below) Due to the Immense Heat Asch takes recoil damage, And can not do any S jutsus the next turn. If he does it again he cant Use S nor A rank jutsus the next Turn. If he uses it again he wont be able to use S,A,nor B jutsus the next turn. If he uses it one more time he will gain permanent damage and wont be able to do No jutsus above C rank nor jutsus that require handseals.. The sword is very sharp and can cut down huge boulders with ease without activation. If the sword cuts an opponent it will have the same affect as the Scorch suns. Due to the immense heat it will drain water out of the opponents body causing them to only be able to do 2jutsus. In order to do that. It must be activated as well.

-Only Can be used my Bloody Asch (My Scorch bio) and not my other bio
-Can only Activate 4times
-Cant Use Fire Nor Wind in the same turn as activation
-Activates once Asch Inputs his chakra into the sword (Must say so in battle if activate)
-The Flare does not have full affect on me since i am the sword wielder and the attack is not facing my direction
-Can only activate it once pr turn
-Activation counts as 1 of the 3 users turns

(Cali said nothing is wrong with a KG BIO. and since scorps re declined my other weapon i have no weapon as of now) Take off anything with the activation or add in anything if you must or want to make it approvable

~ All left for Scorps ~


±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Similar to many swords in existence and OPed.

Also...Chakra damage? Don't you mean Damage? Follow proper template.

 

[Gutsy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon: Kyousei Shoumei) Fire Release: Great Illumination
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will perform the Tiger hand seal, before releasing a massive amount of fire from his body, whereas it will surround him like a barrier, releasing a massive amount of heat and light around it, blinding the opponent. The intense light from the barrier will also block the user’s vision of the opponent. When the huge barrier is released into the area, standing 10 meters in height and has a circular area of 10 meters in diameter. It will automatically explode outwards towards the opponent with immense speed and heat while the opponent is blinded by the extreme light source. The fire explosion itself is so intense it will rip up pieces of earth, rocks and trees in the process while crushing almost anything in its path towards the enemy. The user himself will lose a huge amount of stamina as possible pass out from the lack of oxygen.
Note: The user will be sluggish while recovering from the loss of oxygen
Note: If the user keeps the barrier up for more than two turns they will pass out
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be used/taught by JiraiyaEroSennin

~ Similar techniques exist. ~

(Katon/Doton: Kaen Arashi Toukai) Fire Release: Blazing Storm of Destruction
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates a small hole in the ground, by stomping the ground once; this hole will extend into several small tunnels underground in the surrounding area. The tunnels will be surrounding the opponent in a diameter of 20 meters and be 5 meters underground, the tunnels will be crossing each other (X). This is followed by releasing a massive amount of fire into the hole which extends into several tunnels underground, while the fire is travelling; it becomes more compact and more heated as the ground above it will become warmer. When the fire has travelled into all the tunnels, the user will then weave a single hand sign, as the fire beneath will explode into a furry of massive flames, making the ground above it explode. The fire and earth will explode in all directions making a massive crater in the ground where as the user himself will be an easy target for his own jutsu if not being careful. The crater after the explosion is 40 meters in diameter and 10 meters deep. The explosion itself will reach into the air and the surroundings with massive force reaching far into the sky.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Cannot use any fire release for the next turn
Note: Can only be used/taught by JiraiyaEroSennin

~ OPed. ~

(Katon: Enkou Genkaku) Fire Release: Flaming Illusion
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will perform the Serpent-Tiger hand sequence, where as they will create a huge fireball which is only served as a distraction. The fireball served as a distraction is send directly towards the opponent as a B-ranked fire, while another massive fire is released from the user’s mouth upon the ground surrounding the opponent quickly. The fire will then extend high into the air (about 15 meters high), making nothing visible outside of the fire. The fire itself is still controlled by the user, making the surroundings and the user seem like an illusion to the opponent. Making them believe they have been caught in a genjutsu, as the flames will dance around and make everything look unreal. The fire will slowly become stronger and close in on the opponent while the heat will make the opponent lose stamina and become weak by the second, while the user will merely wait for the opponent to collapse from the intense flames and the belief of being controlled by someone else. Both the opponent and the user himself will have a great strain on their bodies, because of the lack of oxygen, and will faint for the lack of stamina and oxygen.
Note: can only be used/taught by JiraiyaEroSennin
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Cannot use fire release the next turn

~ Sorry, but you cannot make the opponent think it as an illusion, it is still within bounds of possibility.~

NOTE: Can be used/taught only by JiraiyaEroSannin is a contradiction. If it can only be used by you, it cannot be taught; if it can be taught, it cannot be used only by you.

 

[Shady Doctor]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

summoning animal: Fox
contract owner: william24 a.k.a me
other users who have signed contract: N/A
summoning boss if existing: none yet
other animals tied to this contract: N/A
description and background: will do a background and discription if approved, don't wanna waste my time ya know..

~ You either obey the rules of the thread and submit everything together, or you will be infracted.This is your last warning. If you're so time-conscious, what are you doing on an anime forum ? ~

 

[Punk Hazard]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Doton: Doro pitto) Earth Style: Mud Pit
Type:Offense
Rank:B
Range:Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:0
Description: The user sends a wave of chakra into the ground and under their opponent. The user has it mix with the ground and, after turning the ground into mud, cause the floor of earth under the opponent to collapse and cave in on itself, creating a large hole or pit. The walls of the pit are made of mud and slide inwards towards the opponent until it rises up to the opening of the pit, filling the pit with mud. Due to the mud not rising upwards like a platform, but pouring all around the opponent and surrounding them, the opponent's feet are usually trapped in a matter of seconds, making it impossible for them to stand on the mud
-Can only be thought by rikerslade-

~ Declined, similar techniques exist. ~

 

[Vision]

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Genjutsu: Maboroshi Fukusuu | Illusionary Technique: Multiple Vision
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will disrupt the opponents flow of chakra within the brain by performing two hand seals Snake → Bird so that it effects the part of their eye sight. Once the opponent is under this genjutsu, they will begin to see trails of the person they are looking at. Almost as if they are seeing a clone but not quite. The effect lasts three turns and the person under the genjutsu will not be able to attack with accuracy, although a large scale attack would still be effective against the user but won't take a direct hit due to it's inaccuracy.

Note: Must know up to A rank genjutsu in order to use this technique
Note: Able to use it 2 times in battle
Note: Lasts 3 turns
Note: Can only be taught by -Vision-

~ You know the massive error in this technique ? If he sees a trail, then he can just shoot the farthest one in the direction in which you move and hit you, since all the others will be behind the real you. ~


Genjutsu: Chien Taimu | Illusionary Technique: Time Delay
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will cast a genjutsu towards the opponent by disrupting their chakra flow in their brain. The user will simply point towards the opponent and make a single hand seal Tiger → Boar to put them under this genjutsu. While the opponent is under this genjutsu, any action performed will be delayed by one second. Rather it's a jutsu, any form of taijutsu, or even running. The person under this genjutsu, they will think that they are performing the action right away however this is not the case. Whatever is performed it will be delayed by two second.

Note: Able to use twice in battle
Note: Must have mastered genjutsu
Note: Lasts two turns unless broken
NoteL Can only taught by -Vision-

~ Rephrase that to will not notice ~

Katon: Nami Atsusa | Fire Release: Heat Wave
Type: Attack / Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will make a hand seal tiger, then will slam their hands on the ground. Directing the chakra as the users desire of location. Then then a red ring will rise from the ground which turns into an orb of ash cloud that surrounds the opponent and is highly concentrated and dense with Katon chakra therefore highly combustable and once it gets in contact with any fire and lightning source it will instantly explode and create a chain reaction of explosions within the orb of the ash cloud. Once this jutsu is activated and the opponent gets caught in it some of the ash will stick to the clothes and skin due to the thick and dense concentration of the ash cloud. The orb of ash will move along with the opponent that is caught in it, however the cloud is not harmful in anyway. In order for the user to make it move with the opponent one must keep his hands on the ground to control the orb of ash cloud moving with the person that is surrounding it. The speed of the ash cloud is strictly determined by the users ability to track their opponent. Dojutsu users would be able to move this orb of ash cloud faster than normal shinobi, as well as any sensor or sound ninja's.

Note: Can use once in battle
Note: Last 3 turns and moves with the opponent as he moves
Note: EIG and Swift users are able to escape with ease
Note: A rank fire or above have to be used to be effective
Note: Must have Mastered Katon element to be able to use this jutsu
Note: Speed of the ash cloud is determined by the user and their ability to track their opponent.
Note: Can only be taught by -Vision-

~ Declined. You're not submitting it directly under the opponent, no way. ~

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Genjutsu: Maboroshi Fukusuu | Illusionary Technique: Multiple Vision
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will disrupt the opponents flow of chakra within the brain by performing two hand seals Snake → Bird so that it effects the part of their eye sight. Once the opponent is under this genjutsu, they will begin to see trails of the person they are looking at. Additional effect is that once the trails happen the opponent will also be dizzy and disorientated, as if the opponent is showing drunk like qualities of their sense's. The opponent will also feel nausea followed by extreme migrane. The effect lasts three turns and the person under the genjutsu will not be able to attack with accuracy, although a large scale attack would still be effective against the user but won't take a direct hit due to it's inaccuracy.

Note: Must know up to A rank genjutsu in order to use this technique
Note: Able to use it 2 times in battle
Note: Lasts 3 turns
Note: Can only be taught by -Vision-

~ Declined, do not resubmit. ~

Genjutsu: Chien Taimu | Illusionary Technique: Time Delay
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will cast a genjutsu towards the opponent by disrupting their chakra flow in their brain. The user will simply point towards the opponent and make a single hand seal Tiger → Boar to put them under this genjutsu. While the opponent is under this genjutsu, any action performed will be delayed by two seconds. Rather it's a jutsu, any form of taijutsu, or even running. The person under this genjutsu, they will think that they are performing the action right away but may not notice what is actually happening.Whatever is performed it will be delayed by two seconds.


Note: Able to use twice in battle
Note: Must have Mastered genjutsu
Note: Lasts two turns unless broken
Note: Can only taught by -Vision-

~ Approved. ~

 

[Erzo]

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(Genjutsu: Hanshin Soshi) Illusionary Technique: Rebellious element
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: - (Depends on rank of Water jutsu used)
Description: The user releases his chakra into the opponents brain where it stays dormant until the opponent uses a water jutsu, the chakra will then take it's action and control the users vision and make them see their own attack suddenly take place on themselves, because of the element suddenly attacking them, they lose concentration and the attack they performed on the user of this genjutsu stops as they are no longer concentrating their chakra into that attack. Because of the various water jutsus the opponents reaction in reality will depend on the water jutsu used. For example should they use water gushing imprisonment they will think they are stuck in the water and drown as they struggle to disrupt the water, but in reality they will just stand at a point and later fall unconscious should they not figure out it's a genjutsu and get out of it. If the water jutsu used is more of a full on attack such as Water bullet then they will imagine getting hit by the brute force of the attack and get knocked back several meters whereas in reality they are again left standing at a spot screaming due to the injuries they think they are receiving. Whilst this genjutsu is active the opponent can see everything and anything the user does as normal.
Note: Can only be used twice.
Note: Lasts 2 turns each time
Note: No Genjutsu in same and next turn after use of this technique.

~ You want to control your own vision ? ~

(Futon: Meimei Shouheki) Wind Release: Invisible Barrier
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user concentrates on his Wind chakra and creates an invisible dome like structure which forms around both him and his opponent and remains stationary and keeps everything within the dome inside, although it does no harm when used with things like the Hidden mist technique, this dome means the mist is not as easily dispersed as normal hence the opponent would have to use an A-rank or higher wind technique in order to fully blow away the mist and destroy the dome. Should the opponent be in mid range, the user can form the dome at mid range just behind himself and the opponent so that whatever is contained inside (should it be the mist, or smoke) is more concentrated and harder to see through then normal.
Note: Can be used 4 times.
Note: No S-rank wind in same turn.
Note: Doujutsu users can see the dome as it has users chakra.

~ Short-Long is too large a dome. ~

 

[Bloo]

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Summoning Animal:Honey badger
Scroll Owner:bluedevil158
Other Users who have signed contract: none
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
Description and Background:
The honey badger (Mellivora capensis), also known as the ratel, is a species of mustelid native to Africa, Southwest Asia, and the Indian Subcontinent. Despite its name, the honey badger does not closely resemble other badger species, instead it bears more anatomical similarities to weasels. It is primarily a carnivorous species, and has few natural predators because of its thick skin and ferocious defensive abilities.

The honey badger has a fairly long body, but is distinctly thick-set and broad across the back. Its skin is remarkably loose, and allows it to turn and twist freely within it. The skin around the neck is 6 millimetres (0.24 in) thick, an adaptation to fighting conspecifics. The head is small and flat, with a short muzzle. The eyes are small, and the ears are little more than ridges on the skin, another possible adaptation to avoiding damage while fighting.

The honey badger has short and sturdy legs, with five toes on each foot. The feet are armed with very strong claws, which are short on the hind legs and remarkably long on the forelimbs. It is a partially plantigrade animal whose soles are thickly padded and naked up to the wrists. The tail is short and is covered in long hairs, save for below the base.

Adults measure 23 to 28 centimetres (9.1 to 11 in) in shoulder height and 68–75 cm in body length, with females being smaller than males. Males weigh 12 to 16 kilograms (26 to 35 lb) while females weigh 9.1 kg. Skull length is 13.9–14.5 cm in males and 13 cm for females.

~ Scorpsyyyyyyyyy ~


Yes dear? Oh right...a contract!

±± Declined ±± Contract exists. Its held by Swizzik

 

[Howard]

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(Doton: Kasui dou) - Earth Style: Spiked Body
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user concentrates doton chakra throughout his body, he then releases the doton chakra through his skin forming a thin layer of hardened earth. He can then manipulate the thin layer to form spikes all around his body skewering anything that is in immediate contact with the user. This comes in handy when in close range combat if the user has the opponent in a hold the spikes can skewer the opponent fatally wounding him. The spikes can not be shot out from the users body and when he releases hold of them they simply fall off of the user. This can be controlled to make a single spike or dozens.
Notes:

-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
-The spikes can only reach out an arms length
-While covered in spikes the user is weakened to Raiton based attacks.

~ Too long. Also, how long does each use last ? ~

(Doton: Kasui dou) - Earth Style: Spiked Body
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (If used as spikes)
Description: The user concentrates doton chakra throughout his body, he then releases the doton chakra through his skin forming a thin layer of hardened earth all around his body or at certain intervals around his body. He can then manipulate the thin layer to form spikes all around his body skewering anything that is in immediate contact with the user. He can also make small shields that can block basic punches and kicks. This comes in handy when in close range combat if the user has the opponent in a hold the spikes can skewer the opponent fatally wounding him and if the opponent tries to attack head on the user can make a small shield made of hardened earth on his respective body part. The spikes can not be shot out from the users body and when he releases hold of them they simply fall off of the user same goes for the shields. This can be controlled to make a single spike or dozens, however he can only make one shield (Dense enough to block a punch or kick) at a time per use of jutsu.
Notes:

-Each use of this tech lasts until the user releases the spikes or shields. No longer than 1 full turn.
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
-The spikes reach out about 2 feet
-While covered in spikes or covered by a shield the user is weakened to Raiton based attacks.
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit
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(Kuchyrose: Hana Hekireki Tentei) - Summoning: Bloom of the Thunder God
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user bites his thumb smearing the blood onto his palm. He then performs two hand seals (Ram - Snake.) By doing this he summons 1000 small blue flowers, from the Kite Nesting grounds. These flowers are called "Thunder Lilies" due to their ability to create small amounts of raiton chakra they are considered to be extremely tasty and a favorite meal time snack to King Kodak. As the flowers grow they store raiton chakra all throughout their life storing small amounts, until the day they bloom. Once they bloom they release the small amount of raiton chakra they have stored causing small pulses of raiton that can stun small animals (1 flower has enough raiton chakra when bloomed to stun small animals such as rabbits and snakes). Usually the flowers don't bloom all at once so the damage is minuscule (While not being forced to bloom). Once the 1000 flowers are summoned through the use of raiton chakra and the Ram hand seal they can all be forced to bloom at once, this forces all the flowers to release their raiton chakra violently shocking anything in range of the flowers. Each flower creates a small pulse and when combined they equal a strong S rank attack. The electric field is enough to stop the human heart as well as tear through the ground leaving decent sized craters.
Notes:

-Must have signed the Kite Contract to use
-Must have mastered Raiton (To use the ability to force bloom the flowers.)
-No other summons the same turn
-If the user is in the field of flowers he will be shocked too
-The flowers die soon after their forced bloom they can only be summoned once per battle

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In Blood Prison it is shown that flowers can produce chakra natures. This is shown when the flowers from the Hidden Grass Village release small fire balls that are similar to the jutsu the Hidden Grass Nin use called Demon Latern. This is a variation of flowers that store trace amounts of chakra. This is best seen at 6:20:

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This is also backed up by the fact that not only can animals be summoned but it's been shown that just about anything can be summoned.

~Declined~ Restrictions? Do these just suddenly appear out of nowhere and bloom? Plus, I don't buy the crater bit if all of the flowers release a small spark that chains them together.

 

[Akuma]

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(buki- kasai tebukuro) Wepon- Fire Gloves
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short, Mid, Long Range
Chakra: 40 Chakra
Damage: 80 Damage
Description:
This gloves where specially made to gather the user's fire affinity chakra into them, and give the user the ability to just by snapping there fingers, create fire techniques using them for offensive/attack or even defence purposes. In short, they let the user use any fire technique with just snapping there fingers. The design on them represents the fire affinity.

~ Of course, every technique used with them counts as 1 of the 3 techniques per turn of the user.
~ Must have Fire Element mastered to wear them.
~ Only Solf J. Kimblee and those who he may lend the gloves may use them.
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~Declined~ You aren't the first to try this. Do no Resubmit

(Raiton- Tenrai ringu)-Lightning Release; Divine Ring
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short, Mid Range
Chakra: 30 Chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
Description:
The user will use the good amount of his Lightning affinity chakra, and by performing the necesary handseals (ram > snake > horse) will expell from his mouth a ring of lightning wich then is launched towards the opponent, it then start sppining around the opponent at high speed, with the whole of the middle pointed towards the user, when moving so fast the target will think it's more than 1 ring, and don't know wich one is the real one, it will then discharge a surge of lightning towards the target in the middle of where it's spinning paralizing the target for 1 turn. As soon as the target is paralized the ring slowly dissapears.

~ Can only be used 2 times per battle.
~ Can only be used by Solf J. Kimblee and those who he may allow.
~Declined~ What?

(Doton: Iwa tama)- Earth Release: Rock Throw
Type: Offensive/Attack
Rank: C-Rank
Range: Short, Mid Range
Chakra: 15 Chakra
Damage: 30 Damage
Description:
By using Earth realease chakra the user stomps his dominant foot onto the ground making a 4-fist sized rock to break from the ground and jump up, then hitting it with his dominant hand with earth chakra so it doesn't damage the user's hand, sending the rock towards the opponent at a decent speed where the opponent can see it coming.

~ It can only be used 1 time per turn.
~ Only Solf J. Kimblee and those who he allows may use it.
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit this. There's already a canon technique that is essentially this.

 

[Naruto Uzumaki Bijuu Sage]

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(Raiton: sono ketteiteki tachi)- Lightning Release- The final stand
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 20 Chakra
Damage: 40 Damage
Description: The user puts their hand together like their praying and gathers a massive amount of chakra into each arm, then quickly shifts it into their hands immediately after this is done the user preforms this row of hand seals Bird → Ox → Bird → Dragon → Ram → Horse→ Tiger, Then immediately after the hands seals are completed the user slams their hand together like their praying causing a massive shockwave to rush out from all directions capable of destroying any doton jutsu up to A-rank into pieces. This happens because of all the charka stored up being forced together it’s not the actual jutsu. A small but extremely compressed ball of pure raiton chakra ( comparable to that of a tailed beast ball, Not the power the compression) starts to form the user then throws this ball into the sky at a height of 100 feet and down range up to long range, by pushing his hands forward and opening them at the same time forcing it out. Once in the air the user can release all the compressed chakra by making the OX hand seal, creating a massive electrical explosion that has 1 kilometer blast radius, hitting anything that’s below it with a radius of 20 feet. This blast disturbs the electrical impulses in the body rendering your opponent unable to move. The reason this is called the final stand is because whoever uses this jutsu loses the ability to move their arms and their arms go numb for the rest of the battle, also whoever uses this jutsu losses their ability to mold or form charka rendering them unable to use jutsu for the rest of the battle.
Note: The user cannot use any jutsu after this is used (because they lose their ability to mold or form charka)
Note: This can only be used once per battle
Note: To uses this jutsu you have to complete 8 hand seals (NO Exceptions)
Note: once the hand seals are completed it takes about 3 seconds to form the ball of chakra
Note: From the time released this jutsu takes about 4 seconds to hit the ground
Note: If the user does this jutsu in long range his is unharmed from this justu (not talking about their ability to mold or form charka, that cannot be helped) , if used in mid-range the user will take minor damage ,and will become much slower ( by 2 speed chart levels), if the user does this in short range the user will get the same effect as the opponent does (rendering you and your opponent unable to move, thus drawing)

~ Remove the initial shockwave thing ~

(Raiton: Howaito daiyamondo )- Lightning Release white diamond disintegration
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: 20 Chakra ( Another 20 if the user blows it up)
Damage: 40Damage
Description:The user puts their hand together like their praying and gathers a massive amount of chakra into each arm, then quickly shifts it into their hands immediately after this is done the user preforms this row of hand seals Ox → Dragon → Bird → Dragon → Ram → Horse→ Tiger ,Then immediately after the hands seals are completed the user holds both of his arms out in front of him and makes a diamond shape with hands, As the user does this a large white diamond shaped of pure raiton chakra forms one foot in front of them. This diamond spins parallel to the user and it spins at an extremely fast speed, the diamond is 20 feet in width,20 feet in height , and 6 inches in length. After the user forms the diamond he makes the RAM hand seal, when he does this the diamond gets shot forward at great speed (still spinning)destroying most things in its path(a-rank doton), the user can either make the OX hand seal and release the jutsu causing the chakra to disperse with minor damage or make the Dragon hand seal causing the diamond to blow up releasing all that compressed raiton chakra destroying most things(A-rank doton) in a 1 kilometer blast radius and leaves a 10 foot deep crater. After the user completes this jutsu his hands go numb for one turn, making it impossible to do hand seals and move hands.
Note:The user cannot use any jutsu above B rank after this is used (because of the chakra drain on this jutsu)
Note: This can only be used twice per battle
Note: To uses this jutsu you have to complete 7 hand seals(NO Exceptions)
Note: After the user completes this jutsu his hands go numb for one turn.
Note: It takes about 2 seconds to gather enough chakra to even start the hand seals
Note:once the hand seals are completed it takes about 3 seconds to form the Diamond
Note:When the hands are numb the user cannot do hand seals or move hands
Note: If the user does this jutsu in long range his is unharmed from this justu (not talking about their ability to mold or form charka, that cannot be helped) , if used in mid-range the user will take minor damage ,and will become much slower ( by 2 speed chart levels), if the user does this in short range the user will get the same effect as the opponent does
Note: The explosion lasts for 8 seconds

~ OP ~

(Howaito Raiton senbon)White lightning Senbon
Type:Offensive
Rank:B
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description:The user gathers raiton chakra into his his hand and then makes the Ox → Bird → Dragon → Ram → Horse→ Tiger hand seals and immediately after this is done he closes his hand hand and touches it to his left shoulder then swings it out as he open his hand sending a massif amount of white lightning senbons flying out towards the opponent at great speed, these senbons are one inch in length and one inch in width. they leave your hand in a cube that's 20 foot in width and 20 foot in height and 20 foot in length... 240 senbons horizontally, 240 senbons vertically ,57600 in the area and 240 senbons length wise,1152000 senbons in total. once these senbons leave your hand you make the OX hand seal and all the senbons connect with each other by shooting out tiny lightning bolts that connect one senbon to another one horizontally, and vertically impaling and numbing anything inside inside area also severing all chakra points.the senbons can still connect if something is in the way example if someone puts up a wall of s-rank earth that's 10foot by 10 foot the sebons that the earth wall stopped can still connect with the other ones that did.. this causes no physical damage

Note:Can only be used once per battle
Note:The user right hand goes numb for three turns making it impossible to do jutsu that require hand seals.
Note:If the opponent is hit with this he cannot use any jutsu for the rest of the battle
Note: I know this may seen a OP but if someone thinks about its really easy to defend

~ OP. ~

 

[Better]

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(Raiton: Idaina Doragonraitoningu No Jutsu)- Lightning Release: Great Dragon Lightning
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short to Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:After performing the Ox hand seal, the user will expel dragon heads made up of lightning chakra from their mouth at their opponent. Its like False Darkness Spear, but more powerful and doesn't split into tendrils.

Note: Can only be taught by Better


(Doton: Iwa Nezumi)- Earth Release: Rock Mice
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 20 (+10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user stomps the ground and release his chakra through the ground and out pops up little stones of rocks, as the rocks pop up a little bit into the air, by using shape manipulation, the user manipulates all the pieces of stones into mice. These mice are connected to the users chakra and the user can see what the mice see. This technique is used for scouting purposes on the battlefield.

Note: Can only be Taught by Better

(Doton: Iwa Chakushu) - Earth Release: Rock Launch
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short to Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user stomps their feet to the ground and channels their doton chakra through the earth underneath their opponent and manipulate a chunk of the earth their opponent is directly standing on breaking it up.Then immediately after stomping the ground, the chunk of earth is launched into the air, thus launching the opponent into the air.

Note: Can only be taught by Better
Note: The chunk of earth is only as wide as the opponent is.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle

~ All declined ~

 

[Makoto Yuki]

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Summoning Animal: Bald Eagle
Scroll Owner: Z-ONE
Other Users who have signed contract: None Yet
Summoning Boss if existing: None Yet
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None Yet
Description and Background: The plumage of an adult Bald Eagle is evenly brown with a white head and tail. The tail is moderately long and slightly wedge-shaped. Males and females are identical in plumage coloration,The beak, feet and irides are bright yellow. The legs are feather-free, and the toes are short and powerful with large talons. The highly developed talon of the hind toe is used to pierce the vital areas of prey while it is held immobile by the front toes. The beak is large and hooked, with a yellow cere.the bald eagle is the most prideful of the bird family.
~All yours Scorps~
±±Declined±± Seriously? Eagles are taken.

 

[Taiketsu Yagami]

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|Kei Sekken| Hardening Touch
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:N/A
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A (+5 to taijutsu due to hardened attack)
Description: A technique used in conjunction with taijutsu. The user coats his/her attacking limb in a flexible chakra capable of channeling any of the 5 natures while hardening that particular limb, making it feel like rock. When in contact with an opponent who for instance changed their body into water or hardened it through earth release, once this flexible chakra comes into contact with the opponent's body, it takes on the enemy's properties allowing the user to effectively hit the opponent regardless of their new defense while also doing extra damage due to the hardened limb.
Notes:
-User must know and have mastered all chakra natures up to B-rank.
-Doesn't work against defences of A-rank and above
-Can't be used on defences made of a KG

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~Declined~ How long does this last?

 

[Coyote]

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輝けるの海 | Kinkai Kyakuin | Seas of Rhye
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The "Seas of Rhye" are a twin pair of hatchets that were used on a ancient vessel known as "The Maelstrom". Whereabouts unknown the mighty ship sank to the bottom of the ocean somewhere in between "Nagi Island" and "Tea Country". For years the ship was a host to the underwater world until one day about 100 years later. On the coast of the "Lightning Country" a strange cast iron chest was found by a young chuunin by the name of "Levy". She has always been fond with the sea and often spend her days watching off the cliffs. Levy found the chest at the bottom of the rocky shore, when she opened this sunken treasure the two hatchets laid at the bottom with a note. Levy too this day is unable to translate the note but with what happened when she wielded the hatchets leaves her to wonder the origin of these treasures. Hatchets are both a close range weapon as well as a throwing weapon. These weapons are linked to Levys chakra meaning when she throws it a boomerang effects takes place in which it comes back to Levys chakra. These hatchets increase her Suiton techniques to some extent.

Abilities:

1. Hatchets linked to users chakra
2. Hatchets can be thrown
3. Able to deflect 1 lightning attack A-Rank and below
4. Increases Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment by 1 rank
5. Increases Water Style: Water shark bomb by 2 ranks
6. When a hatchet is thrown in water from the point of impact a large wave appears that can be controlled with the other hatchet
7. If one of the hatchets chop the ground it brings up water to create a water source.

Restrictions:

1. Only usable by Coyote
2. Deflect counts as a technique
3. Hatchet creating wave counts as technique
4. Hatchet creates water counts as a technique
5. Must have Suiton Mastery

~ I don't want so much history, pare it down to make using and checking the technique easy. Also, there has to be a time limit to the increase in rank, otherwise you can just spam Forbidden-rank Water Shark Bomb or whatever. ~

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輝けるの海 | Kinkai Kyakuin | Seas of Rhye
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
The "Seas of Rhye" are a twin pair of cestus that were used on a ancient vessel known as "The Maelstrom". Whereabouts unknown the mighty ship sank to the bottom of the ocean somewhere in between "Nagi Island" and "Tea Country". The Cestus are a close range weapon. they are prone to helping the water and lightning chakra in different aspects. It boosts up a couple techniques from water mastery. When it comes to lightning the gloves are able to channel lightning through them and able to deflect lightning. If the ground is punched with the gloves on a water source will rise up deep from underground not gushing but it's used to create some water on the field.

Abilities:

1. Gloves can channel lightning chakra and coat themselves in a small layer of it so that if they hit directly they can stun parts of the targets body while causing a small burst of lightning on contact // this ability is S-Rank
2. Able to deflect 3 lightning attacks A-Rank and below by making contact directly with the attack and overpowering it
3. When the user uses Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment with the gloves in hand, the technique is increased by 1 rank
4. When the user uses Water Style: Water shark bomb with the gloves in hand, the technique is increased by 2 ranks // four times per battle
5. If ground is punched a pool of water will rise from the ground to create a source in front of the user, which will remain in play and can be used as a water source (medium size with one use, large size with 2 uses). If the user wishes he can hit the enemy with the glove coated in water chakra, blasting the enemy away with a water shockwave // this ability is A-Rank

Restrictions:

1. Only usable by Coyote
2. Deflect counts as a technique
3. Some restrictions next to ability above
4. Must have Suiton Mastery

Water Shark Bomb would only be S-Rank btw Also I changed the type of weapon it is.
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±± Approved ±± Edited since it was weaker than my own CW while following a similar concept and it would be unfair to restrict yours when my own isn't. If you don't like it, you'll need to resubmit.

 

[Drizzy]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

±± Raiton: Sanryoukyou ze Erekutorikku|Lightning Release: Prism of Electrocution ±±
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Raiton: Sanryoukyou ze Erekutorikku is an advanced Lightning Technique. The user will perform the rat, dog, tiger then ram handseal. The user will then release his chakra into the earth. He will then direct this chakra below the opponent, without hesitation, the chakra forms lightning below the opponent. The lightning blasts upwards around the opponent, creating markings in the ground they rose from, very small/minor bolts will meet the opponent, these bolts aren't very painful, but there purpose will soon arise. The burst of lightning produces a paralysis effect on the opponent. At this same time, the kanji created by the Lightning's effect begin to glow blue. The kanji surrounds the opponent as a triangle, each edge about 10 meters from the center where the opponent is located,take note this is on the ground. This kani reads, "Anyone enclosed in this triangle, must face wrath's judgement". The kanji will then flash, a light source will be produced, temporarily restricting the opponent from sight. The opponent will open his eyes immediately to notice he's enclosed in a prism of lightning. This prism will then release violent currents of Lightning onto whoever is inside. In short: A blast of lightning erupts from the ground around the user, this lightning blast forms kanji from where they rise, loose bolts strike the opponent, paralyzing him, the kanji flashes a bright light, the lightning from the kanji forms a pyramid.
±± No S rank lightning for the next 2 turns due to it's chakra consumption.
±± No other lightning technique in the same turn, all lightning chakra of the turn must be for this technique only.
±± Mastery of Lightning required for the control needed.
±± Can only be taught by Drizzy.. to a maximum of 2 persons Kage Rank or higher.


±± Declined ±± why the hell did you submit twice? Is this a marker? :| It is isn't it? Because i declined this on page 14 of this thread...

^ Yeah, it's a marker in preparation of you declining it. I'll re-add it below this post with the edits.




±± Raiton: Sanryoukyou ze Erekutorikku|Lightning Release: Prism of Electrocution ±±
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Raiton: Sanryoukyou ze Erekutorikku is an advanced Lightning Technique. The user will perform the rat, dog, tiger then ram handseal. The user will then release his chakra into the earth. He will then direct this chakra below the opponent, without hesitation, the chakra forms lightning below the opponent. The lightning blasts upwards around the opponent in a triangular form 10 meters from the center where the opponent is located, creating kanji in the ground they rose from, very small/minor bolts will meet the opponent, these bolts aren't very painful, they only produce a paralysis effect on the opponent. At this same time, the kanji created by the Lightning's effect begin to glow. This kani reads, "Anyone enclosed in this triangle, must face wrath's judgement". The kanji will then flash, a light source will be produced, temporarily restricting the opponent from sight. The opponent will open his eyes immediately to notice he's enclosed in a prism of lightning. This prism will then release violent currents of Lightning onto whoever is inside.
±± No S rank lightning for the next 2 turns due to it's chakra consumption.
±± No other lightning technique in the same turn, all lightning chakra of the turn must be for this technique only.
±± Mastery of Lightning required for the control needed.
±± Can only be taught by Drizzy.. to a maximum of 2 persons Kage Rank or higher.

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removed the "definition in short". shortened sentences, rearranged parts of the description for more clarity.



±± All Declined ±± as quoted from the rules of this thread:





In accordance to the above you are banned from this thread for 4 whole submission cycles. You can post again on the cycle that begins at the 30th of April.

The rules apply to everyone and the violation of the second rule I quoted can earn permanent banning from this thread while the first can earn an official infraction. May this serve as an example to others and as a reminder to yourself not to abuse or break the rules.

My apologies Scorps, I was ignorant towards the new rules (I read them but didn't take much notice). I have accepted your judgement and as you said, will now be submitting on the 30th of April.

±± Raiton: Sanryoukyou ze Erekutorikku|Lightning Release: Prism of Electrocution ±±
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Raiton: Sanryoukyou ze Erekutorikku is an advanced Lightning Technique. The user will perform the Rat, Dog, Tiger then ram handseals. The user will then release his chakra into the earth. He will then direct this chakra below the opponent, without hesitation, the chakra forms lightning below the opponent. The lightning blasts upwards around the opponent in a triangular form 10 meters from the center where the opponent is located, creating kanji in the ground they rose from, very small/minor bolts will meet the opponent, these bolts aren't very painful, they only produce a paralysis effect on the opponent. At this same time, the kanji created by the Lightning's effect begin to glow. This kanji reads, "Anyone enclosed in this triangle, must face wrath's judgement". The kanji will then flash, a light source will be produced, temporarily restricting the opponent from sight. The opponent will open his eyes immediately to notice he's enclosed in a prism of lightning. This prism will then release violent currents of Lightning onto whoever is inside.
±± No S rank lightning for the next 2 turns due to it's chakra consumption.
±± No other lightning technique in the same turn, all lightning chakra of the turn must be for this technique only.
±± Mastery of Lightning required for the control needed.
±± Can only be taught by Drizzeh to a maximum of 2 persons Kage Rank or higher.

±± Declined ±± Very Oped in many ways and similar to existing techniques.


±± Ninpou:Karasu's Manako|Ninja Art: Crow's Eye ±±
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Itachi performs the Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram (summoning seals) and channels his chakra to his mouth. He will then open his mouth, releasing from it a regular sized crow. This Crow is black with dark eyes. Due to Itachi's chakra being tied to the Crow, Itachi can reverse whatever the Crow sees back to him non stop for 5 turns.
±± Usable three times per battle
±± Can only be taught by Drizzeh
±± Only usable by Itachi biographies.

±± Declined ±± Link to summoning contract?

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dropping CW, exhibition in link above, replacing it with:.

Wrath|激怒
Type: Weapon
Rank: S Rank
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Wrath 激怒, special katanas (2) made of valuable materials. The metal used to create it cannot bend, break, shatter or melt. Due to this, myths go around that these katana was handed down by angels themselves, however, it was simply found on Mt. Karasu (Land of Crows). There is little History behind these katanas. It is well designed, a black, shiny blade, a black handle with red diamond shapes as the design exceptional material making the handle easy and comfortable to grip. There is a symbol placed on it, one, shaped as a part of the handle, the other on the base of the handle. When discovered, it was revealed that these katanas can relate to three types of chakra. This being Fire, Wind and Lightning.
Note: This is a dual weapon (two katanas).
Note: Can only be wielded by Drizzeh..
Note: Mastery of Fire, Wind and Lightning is needed to wield.
Note: Releasing techniques adds +10 to their strength.
Note: The chakra type can easily switch to another.
Note: Only Sage Rank have enough chakra and skill to use these katana.

Abilities and Restrictions

Release
The katana(s) can release up to S rank of the 3 available chakra types being Wind, Fire and Lightning. This can only release techniques that don't require handseals. The katanas cannot release S rank techniques for the next turn.

Absorption
The katana(s) can absorb up to B rank Wind, fire or Lightning techniques 3 times per battle. To absorb one technique doesn't require both katana. This counts towards the 3 allowed moves.

Null Effect
If Lightning Type chakra is in play, the user can stick one (or both) katana into the earth, while releasing from it violent chakra. This chakra prevents earth techniques of B rank and below to form within short range of the user. This effect lasts for 4 turns, it's activation counts towards the 3 allowed moves. This technique can be cancelled before it ends.

Blade Heating
When Fire or Lightning chakra is in play, the user can manipulate the chakra to super heat the katana(s). This will increase the katana's (or 2 katana, depends on the user) cutting capability. This technique is equivalent to C rank Fire/lightning. The blade(s) can only remain heated for 2 turns, this effect is usable only twice per battle, it's activation counts towards the 3 allowed moves. This can be cancelled before it ends.

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±± Declined ±± All of these abilities have been done before many times. ITs just another infusable sword that adds damage to certain techniques.

 

[Kryptiic]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Katon: Tsuin Sor Doragon | Fire Style: Twin Sky Dragon.
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user sends their fire chakra high into the sky above the opponent, The user then manipulates their fire chakra, creating two twin fire dragons that descend from the sky, intertwining with each other spinning as they descend down to the earth. The Twin fire dragons eventually hit the ground, exploding in a fiery maelstrom.
Note: Can only be used twice per match.
Note: No Fire jutsu S rank or above for the rest of the turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Kryptiic..
~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists

Katon: Boudou | Fire release: Uprising
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage:60
Description: The user focuses their fire chakra on the ground beneath and around their opponent, causing the ground to heat up exponentially, the user focuses on their fire chakra some more, causing the ground beneath their opponent to burst into flames.
Note: Can only be used three times.
Note: Can only be taught by Kryptiic..
Note: No S rank or above fire jutsu in the same turn.
~Declined~ Same Reason as the first

Raiton: Dageki | Lightning Style: Strike
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will perform the hand seals ‘Ox → Monkey → Hare’ and will create a large amount of small lightning bolts, around 3 inches long, surround the chosen target, capable of covering a 360˚ radius. The distance from the target can change to the users liking but must be a minimum of 1 meter from the target. Then almost instantly after their creation, the lightning bolts will rush at the target at fast speeds. As the lightning bolts fly inwards, the user has the option to perform the ‘Tiger’ hand seal or the ‘Boar’ hand seal or the ‘Bird’ hand seal. If the ‘Tiger’ hand seal is performed, on impact with the target the lightning bolts will extend and pierce right through what they hit. They extend to 1 meter but must make contact. If the ‘Boar’ hand seal is made then on impact each lightning bolt will release an incredible surge of lightning through the target, causing the target to be paralysed and feel numb. If the ‘Bird’ hand seal is made each small lightning bolt will create a large explosion on contact with the target. The hand seals can be strung together meaning all the lightning bolt variations will happen at once.
Note: Can only be taught by Kryptiic..
Note: Only usable twice per match.
Note: No lightning jutsu in the same turn.
Note: No lightning above A rank next turn.
Note: Must be at least Sannin rank to use.
~Declined~ You can create this 1 meter from the "target?" Not really sure if that's fair, given you can almost instantly strike the target and paralyze them with the bolts.