(Entei no Yoro) Flame Empress Armour Type: Custom Weapon Rank: S-Rank Range: Short-Mid Range Chakra: 40 Damage: 60 Description: This armor is dark red predominantly, but also sports orange and black parts, with the first ones being shaped like flames and the second resembling dragon’s limbs. It’s basically made up of three different parts: the revealing breastplate with dragon like wings attached to it, the orange gauntlets and the dragon claw shaped greaves. The armors special ability allows the user to absorb up to A-Rank fire techniques, and using the fire chakra absorbed they channel it towards the sword and with a swing the release a A-Ran fire stream.
-Can absorb one fire technique per turn
-Can only be used by Toshiro
I'll need to close this thread for a few days to get it up to date. As you know, we've been suffering staff changes and since we've been needing to pitch in here and there, some things have been left behind a bit, namely in my case, my duties in this thread and the CFS thread.
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(Doton: Doro Rappu) - Earth Style: Mud Wrap
Type: Attack
Rank: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The person takes hold of Chakra infused mud already in play due to the chakra already found in the mud it can be slightly manipulated to surround the opponent. It basically blasts out and around the opponent covering their body in mud. This makes moving harder as well as restricts breathing. This is due to the chakra infused mud that covers the opponent It has the same effect as Swamp of the Underground as it saps the enemy of his strength. The mud can possibly asphyxiate the opponent if it successfully covers the opponent completely. The mud can be controlled slightly and forced to surround the opponent's head making it's way into their nose, mouth and eyes. The user must have used a Mud based Earth jutsu prior to this jutsu. Notes:
-Must have already used a mud based jutsu such as Swamp, Mud Fall, or mud bullets
-Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
-Must be the person's own Chakra infused Mud
~ How is that even possible ? It's mud, not some life-sucking leech. If you mean it slows them down, prevents them from moving, bla bla, that's fine, but not sapping their strength, because that's just silly. ~
(Doton: Doro Rappu) - Earth Style: Mud Wrap
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short ( of mud )
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The person takes hold of Chakra infused mud already in play due to the chakra already found in the mud it can be slightly manipulated to surround the opponent. It basically blasts out and around the opponent covering their body in mud. This makes moving harder as well as restricts breathing. This is due to the chakra infused mud that covers the opponent It has the same effect as Swamp of the Underground as it makes movement harder. The mud can possibly asphyxiate the opponent if it successfully covers the opponent completely. The mud can be controlled slightly and forced to surround the opponent's head making it's way into their nose, mouth and eyes. The user must have used a Mud based Earth jutsu prior to this jutsu.
Notes:
-Must have already used a mud based jutsu such as Swamp, Mud Fall, or mud bullets
-Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
-Must be the person's own Chakra infused Mud
~ Edited the range to short. Short here means the opponent must be in short range of the mud, not short range of you, so that's fine. Removed the part about regaining strength. Approved. ~
I edited it. I basically meant the same as the Swamp of the Underground how it becomes harder to move the more you struggle.
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(Doton: Kasui dou) - Earth Style: Spiked Body
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user concentrates doton chakra throughout his body, he then releases the doton chakra through his skin forming a thin layer of hardened earth. He can then manipulate the thin layer to form spikes all around his body skewering anything that is in immediate contact with the user. This comes in handy when in close range combat if the user has the opponent in a hold the spikes can skewer the opponent fatally wounding him. The spikes can not be shot out from the users body and when he releases hold of them they simply fall off of the user. This can be controlled to make a single spike or dozens.
Notes:
-Can only be used thrice per battle
-Must be able to manipulate up to A rank Earth to use this
-The spikes can only reach out an arms length
-While covered in spikes the user is weakened to Raiton based attacks.
(Fūton: Kami Kizu )- Wind Release: Paper Cut
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user concentrates his wind chakra at a point and produces a small sharp blade of wind which is 2cm long and as thin as a needle to cut the opponent immediately. This slice of wind resembles something like a paper cut and will do nothing overly harmful to the opponent but it can be useful to interrupt a string of hand seals the enemy may be performing, as the cut is instant. Note: Can only be used 3 times.
~ Interesting idea, but it can easily be abused. Declined. ~
(Genjutsu: Niwa Tougenkyou) - Illusionary Arts: Garden of Eden
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user releases his chakra into his opponents brain and makes him see trees and flowers grow out of the ground in the most beautiful way, whilst the opponent is distracted by this roots of a plant grow out of the ground extremely fast and bind the opponent to a spot, with the roots wrapping tightly around the opponent and restricting any movement. Due to the user thinking he/she is constricted by the plant roots he/she is unable to move. Note: Can only be used 3 times. Note: No Genjutsu in next turn.
(Fūton: Kase) - Wind Release: Handcuffs
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user concentrates on his wind chakra and forms a thick line of wind with two holes on each side which form around the users two wrists. The holes which fit tightly around the users wrists and the hole size can be changed by the user at will as different opponents will have different size of wrists. Furthermore the thick line of winds length can be changed by the user depending on whether the opponents hands are closer or further away from each other. This jutsu is mainly used to restrict the opponent from bringing his hands together thus preventing him from using hand seals. Note: Can only be used 4 times. Note: No S-rank wind on same turn.
~ Read the description carefully, you plan to handcuff yourself ? Or is it a line of wind-handcuffs that goes from your wrist to theirs ? In either case, modify the explanation. ~
(Fūton: Kase) - Wind Release: Handcuffs
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user concentrates on his wind chakra and forms a thick line of wind with two holes on each side which form around the opponents two wrists. The holes fit tightly around the opponents wrists and the hole size can be changed by the user, at will as different opponents will have different size of wrists. Furthermore the thick line of winds length can be changed by the user depending on whether the opponents hands are closer or further away from each other. This jutsu is mainly used to restrict the opponent from bringing his hands together thus preventing him from using hand seals. Note: Can only be used 4 times. Note: No S-rank wind on same turn.
~ Essentially inescapable, since he needs his hands to do most handseals to escape. Declined. ~
(Soshi Soroi) Elemental Suit
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (Depending on if the user attacks using this.)
Description: The user will release an elemental chakra that has an actual physical substance such as water or earth and will release it from their body making a highly concentrated suit of that element that encases their body. This acts as a defense and attack mechanism. It attacks by utilizing the element that the suit is made of to create anything (within reason) from it. If the user for example creates a suit of earth, they can make a shield form from the earth on their right arm that covers their body, same goes for if they use the water element. They can make a spike erupt from the earth or water from the suit that will pierce through the opponent or make spikes erupt from all over the suit to strike multiple targets. The user could make springs under their feet allowing them to jump to great heights. The size of what they create from the suit can be up to only 5 meters in height and 1 meters in width.
Notes:
- Each suit lasts for 3 turns.
- Must wait 2 turns before making another suit.
- The user can only use the suit to create one thing once per turn and it counts as one of their 3 jutsus per turn.
- A suit can be made only once per battle, so once if you make a suit of water and it 3 turns are over then you cannot create it again, but you can still make a suit of earth.
- Can only be used by -Yard-
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit
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(Kagenresu Katana) Shadowless Sword
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short-long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: +10 to Kenjutsu
Description: This sword was forged by the elder snakes and infused with Swift chakra by Ulquiorra. This making it so that he can make the sword move at great speeds while wielding it in his hands, slashing anyone in reach in an instant with great cutting power due to the speed. The blade is made of an unknown material that is impossible to break and never dulls. The blade it'self is sharp enough to cut through solid bone like butter. The user can only use the infused chakra to benefit towards increasing movement of strikes with the sword, as well as grant the arm that is wielding the sword the ability to move at enhanced speed for blocking and striking as long as he is wielding the sword.
Notes:
~ Only Yard may Wield this sword.
~ This cannot be used to enhance run speed.
~ The user can only use the chakra of the sword to enhance the movement of the arm or arms wielding the sword and that is for strikes and defending. ~Declined~ There are no true restrictions here. The restrictions you made should go without saying.
(Fūton: Kaze Tenjou )- Wind Release: Rumbling ceiling
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user creates a large vertical spherical wall of flowing wind above the opponent, the wall of wind, immeaditly forces the opponent to the ground, inflicting a large amount of blunt damage and slicing the opponent in several places as it does so leaving various three inch deep slashes in the opponent. The flowing wind wall can be used to prevent the enemy from launching themselves into the air.
-No forbidden rank fuuton jutsu for the rest of the turn.
(Jakou)-Musk
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Type:Supplementry
Description:The users Ninken releases a large amount of pheromones mixed with chakra that spreads out across the battle field, the chakra used so as to make the pheromones react with human skin. The chakra mixed scent reacts well with the oils on the skin of humans marking them with a potent scent that is nigh on impossible to get off, in a similar way to how dogs mark their territory with the pugent scent that they produce naturally. The musk also can make the opponent nauseas, however it also allowers the Ninken and their human companion to track them by smell with ease. Inuzuka clan members are usually immune to this musk as they produce their own naturally. Doujutsu users will also see the release of the pheromones due to it being melded with chakra.
-Nausia lasts for one turn and can prevent the opponent from using techniques that require exhaling in fear of vomiting, it also disrupts the opponents sense of balance.
-The pheromones will not be able to use the air as a medium if it is raining. -Declined-
You can't control what your opponent's think/feel, so the part about the opponent having fear of exhaling as to go.
(Jakou)-Musk
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Type:Supplementry
Description:The users Ninken releases a large amount of pheromones mixed with chakra that spreads out across the battle field, the chakra used so as to make the pheromones react with human skin. The chakra mixed scent reacts well with the oils on the skin of humans marking them with a potent scent that is nigh on impossible to get off, in a similar way to how dogs mark their territory with the pugent scent that they produce naturally. The musk also can make the opponent nauseas, however it also allowers the Ninken and their human companion to track them by smell with ease. Inuzuka clan members are usually immune to this musk as they produce their own naturally. Doujutsu users will also see the release of the pheromones due to it being melded with chakra. -Nausia lasts for one turn disrupts the opponents sense of balance.
-The pheromones will not be able to use the air as a medium if it is raining.
~ Approved ~
(Fūton: Kaze Sakura )- Wind Release: Wind Petals
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses their fuuton chakra on anywhere on the battle field, bringing forth dozens upon hundreds of sakura shaped blades of wind. The blades of wind being no larger than 2 inches, and being extremely flat and sharp at the edges. The blades of wind are relatively invisible, however the only saving grace the opponent has, is that they can be seen slighty if the suns glow hits them, and that they create a slight faint, yet just noticeable by anyone who is being aware of their surrondings breeze. The user is able to direct the swarm of petals with several fluid hand movements, using them to attack or defend.
-Can only be used 2x.
-No A rank or above fuuton jutsu for the rest of the turn.
Fire body (kasai bodi) Type:Defence Rank:A Range:Short Chakra:30 Damage:60 Description:The user channels fire chakra all around his body and releases it turning his whole body into fire making him able to be hit by attack and them pass through him.
-Can only be used three time a battle
-Can send attack through him a rank or lower.But only B rank or lower water.
Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for every extra person)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The technique was developed after studying the unique mind techniques of the Yaminaka, which bare close resemblance to genjutsu. In this illusion, the user will focus their chakra on two or more opponents which will initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims believe as if their opponent is using a wind technique, by experiencing a huge gust of wind mixed with dust, blocking their vision. Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and believe their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. Both shinobi victims will then ensue each other in combat. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, believing that they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies and believing their comrade to be dead, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
~For use on more then two opponents, the hand seals Horse → Bird must be used in order for the user to focus their chakra to a wider range of enemies
~Since this jutsu requires has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active
~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time
~This technique can only be taught by Reborn
-Declined-
Restrict the amount of times it can be used and what's the process which activates the gengutsu (eye contact, hand seals, etc). Just focus chakra isn't a valid reason. Also, about that 'huge gust of wind', add that it isn't enough to do damage your opponent. It only blinds them.
Shangen: Ketsueki no Menokataki (Beautiful Illusion: Blood of the Enemy)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for each person above 2)
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique was specifically designed for several opponents in the case of being outnumbered or simply to make the battle easier. The technique was developed after studying the unique mind techniques of the Yaminaka, which bare close resemblance to genjutsu. The caster will make the Horse → Bird seals to initiate the illusion. The illusion will first have the victims believe as if their opponent is using a wind technique, by experiencing a huge gust of wind mixed with dust, blocking their vision (no physical harm comes from the gust). Once the victims regain their sight, both victims will look upon their comrades and see the image of the shinobi they were fighting and believe their comrades to be their enemies and they will see an image of their partner having been killed. Both shinobi victims will then ensue each other in combat. In the case there is more then two opponents being manipulated by this jutsu, each shinobi will see several copies of their opponent, believing that they've used the Shadow Clone Jutsu. While they fight their comrades as enemies and believing their comrade to be dead, the actual caster of this jutsu will be out of their sight and vision. This jutsu is meant to cause mass confusion and chaos among ranks and hopefully getting the enemy to injure their own lines or even kill them. While this illusion is in play the caster can move about freely as a result.
~Since this jutsu requires has a range of people greater then one, intense focus is required meaning no other genjutsu can be used while this one is active ~Can be used 3 times in a match
~This jutsu can only be cast on a maximum of 4 people at any given time
~This technique can only be taught by Reborn
~ Ridiculous. The Yamanaka mind techniques have nothing to do with Genjutsu. Your technique also has nothing to do with Yamanakas, since the whole enemy fighting themselves thing is not exactly an uncommon idea ~
(Raiton:Howaito Raiton) -Lightning Style:White Lightning Rank:B Type: Defensive Range: Short Chakra cost: 15( -10 For Every Turn This Is In Use ) Damage Points: N/A Description: The User Makes The Horse Hand seal as the User Does This He Gathers Ration Chakra ,The user Then covers His/her body With Raiton charka By using Shape Transformation And Nature Transformation The User Then Turns The Raiton Chakra covering The Users Body Into a lightning shield And Also Giving The user A White Lightning Aurora, and it's able to reduces psychical and Elemental damage
Note:Can only Be Used 3 times per Battle Note: While Active The User Cannot Use Any Element Other Than Raiton Note: The Lightning Shied Reduces psychical damage (25%) Note: The Lightning Shied Reduces Elemental damage by 50% (Doton) Note: The Lightning Shied Reduces Elemental damage by 35% (Raiton) Note:Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage Note to mod checking: if you need to change anything to approve it please do it
(Raiton:Howaito Raiton) -Lightning Style: White Lightning Rank: B Type: Offensive /Defensive Range: Short Chakra cost: 15( -10 For Every Turn This Is In Use ) Damage Points: 30 Description: The user makes the horse hand seal as the user does this he gathers raiton chakra ,The user then covers his/her body with raiton charka and by using shape transformation andnature transformation the user then turns the raiton chakra covering the users body into a white lightning aurora , a side effect of this causes the users eyes and hair to turn pure white , and the user will get white lightning marks throughout the users body. The white lightning shield is also able to reduces psychical and Elemental damage, while In this form the user psychical attacks become electrified , and the user can slam their hands together with Great Force And When The users Hands collide They releases Raiton Chakra That They Gathered from the white lightning Creating A Flash So Bright That Any Thing in Close To Mid-Range Is Blinded with a white flash(Hand clap)
Note: Can only Be Used 3 times per Battle
Note: While Active the User Cannot Use Any Element Other Than Raiton
Note: The Lightning Shied Reduces psychical damage (25%), Elemental damage by 50% (Doton), and Elemental damage by 35% (Raiton)
Note: Will Not Work If the Opponent Is Not Looking at the User (Hand clap)
Note: If User or the Opponent Eyes Are closed They Will Be Unaffected (Hand clap)
Note This can Only be Used Two Times per battle (Hand clap)
Note: If Caught in This Flash the User/Opponent Will be Unable to See for That Turn (Hand clap)
Note: The user’s physical attacks are electrified (sending waves of electric into objects when the attacks connect)
Note: The user physical attacks are capable of breaking solid rock/Steele
Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used
Note: The user can only keep the white lightning shield up for three turns at a time
Note: A side effect of this causes the users eyes and hair to turn pure white , and the user will get white lightning marks throughout the users body
Note:Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage
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(Raiton:Howaito oujou) -Lightning Style:White Death Type:Attack Rank:C Range:Short-Mid Chakra:15 Damage:5 Description:The User Will Gather Raiton Charka Into Four Fingers ,The index finger And The middle finger Of Each Hand, The User Then Focus Their Raiton Chakra Into Those Four Fingers As The User Does This Their Four Fingers Start To Turn White, The User Then Uses Shape Transformation To Transform That Charka Into Tiny Bots Of White Lightning And It's Now Giving Off A High Pitch Sound
The User The Proceeds To Slide Two Fingers Across The Other One's Creating A Sound So High Pitch That It Causes Anyone In Close Range To Become Death ( Loss Of hearing ),causing a little pain to the user and the target, This Happens Because When The Fingers on One Hand Comes In Contact With The Fingers On The Other Hand The Friction Becomes So Great That When The two Sounds Mix It Causes An Ever Higher Pitched Sound To Form, because of this the user and target fells slight pain
Note:Can Only Be Used If White Lighting Is In Use Note:The User And Opponent Goes Death For That Turn Note:Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage Note to mod checking: if you need to change anything to approve it please do it
Basically Just Make A Fist And Bring index finger And The middle finger Out Of It And Just Place One On Top Of The Other One And Slide It Across
±± Declined ±± This is not a C-Rank. Also, you can't keep capitalizing the first letter of each word you type. It makes it very hard to read and understand. Also, this needs more explanation on both its effects and also its abilities, although i must admit the general idea isn't that bad.
(Raiton:Howaito oujou) -Lightning Style: White Death Type: Attack Rank: B Range: Short- Mid Chakra: 15 Damage: 30 Description: The user gathers raiton charka into four fingers ,The index finger And The middle finger Of each hand, The user then focus their raiton chakra into those four fingers As the user does this their four fingers start to turn white, the user then uses shape transformation To transform that charka into tiny bots of white lightning and It's now giving off A high Pitch sound. The user then proceeds to rub their two fingers across their other one's creating A sound so high pitch that it causes anyone in close range to mid-range to become death ( complete Loss of hearing ),and also causing severe pain to the the target, This happens because when the fingers on one hand comes in contact with the fingers on the other hand the friction becomes so great that when the two sounds mix it causes an even higher pitched sound to form, that new sound gives off vibrations at such a high speed that it causes the targets ears drums to become extremely stricken with pain ,the high pitched sound causes the loss of hearing(hearing a loud ringing sound) , and the vibrations cause the pain
Note: Can Only Be Used If White Lighting Is In Use
Note: The Opponent Goes Death For two turns
Note: The high pitched sound causes the targets ears to become damaged and the target will hear ringing sounds, when the target is hit with this jutsu his ears will not be death (no hearing at all), but the target will hear a loud ringing sound causing him/her to become unable to hear anything else for two turns
Note: The user can aim this in a single direction (causing any one in that direction to become affected)
Note: The width of the sound 6 feet
Note: The user cannot adjust the range, it always goes up to mid
Note: This is capable of affecting many targets at once ( as long as there in range )
Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used
Note: When hit by the sound the target slows down due to the pain this jutus causes ( by one speed level),and it lasts for two turns
Note: Can Only Be Taught By naruto uzumaki bujii sage
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(Raiton:Howaito Raikiri)White Lightning Blade Type:Weapon (sword) Rank:B Range:Short-Mid Chakra:N/A (20 when you add Raiton chakra ) Damage:40 Description:The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form
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when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form
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Note:The white lightning blade can only be used 3 times per battle
Note:When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state
Note:There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.
NoteWhen the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade
Note:When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele
~ So..this sword, for all its forms and things, only has the power to cut steel ? How is it different from thousands of custom weapons that can do that AND something else ? Declined. ~
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(Raiton:Howaito Raikiri)White Lightning Blade Type:Weapon (sword) Rank:B Range:Short-Mid Chakra: N/A (10 when you send out a pulse in V1 / 20 per turn every turn in V2) Damage:40
Description: The White Lightning Blade has a rumor of being forged with a fang of the nine tailed beast Kurama using white lightning to cut it into smaller pieces capable of being manipulated. This sword at first appears dull, rusty, and at first glance useless, this is called V1 form
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, in this form the sword can send out pulses of raiton chakra in a desired direction,the raiton pulses can pierces solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body and sending it back into your sword letting you know something is there. You send out the pulses by swinging your sword in that direction and the pulses can only be sent out horizontally.
when you add Raiton chakra into the blade it grows to a massive size and gives off tiny bolts of lightning causing fractures on the sword , this is called V2 form
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, in V2 form the blade gives a constant pulse of raiton charka this pulse can pierce solid objects and lets you know if someone or something is behind that object by reading their electrical energy in their body, you can detect any living thing inside the area. This helps you see what you can’t see , like if your blinded you can use your sword to find your opponent .
Note: In V1 every pulse counts towards your jutsu limit for that turn
Note: The pulses in V1 are 10 feet in width and 10 feet in height
Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it is the size of zabuza's Executioner's Blade
Note: When the white lightning blade is in it's V2 form it can cut Steele
Note: When in V2 the lightning blades constant pulse has a diameter of 20 feet (short/mid range) and a height of 20 feet
Note: The white lightning blade cannot send it’s pulses underground in any form
Note: When the white lightning blade is in its v2 from it can only stay like that for 3 turns, and then it reverts to it's v1 state
Note: There is a 2 turn cool down after used, meaning if used in v2 sate and you take it out or it reverts back to it's V1 state you have to wait 2 turns before you can use it in V2 form again.
~ When you say pierce, you mean that the pulses can go through them without causing damage, or with causing damage ? ~
(Suiton: Appurippu!) - Water Style: Rip-up! Type: Defense Rank: S Range: Short-Long Chakra Cost: 40 Damage Points: N/A Description: User utilizes his mastery over water element in order to divide H2O (water) molecules into H2 and O thus effectively 'erasing' selected volume of water. After user separates them he has to keep them divided by coating them with chakra in order for them to not merge again into water. *Due to complexity of jutsu user cannot use S-rank or above water jutsus during his next turn *Can be used two times per battle *Can only be taught by Kaziname
~ Declined, do not resubmit ~
I know that this would require quite a chakra control, but when you consider that here on NB we use chakra to create complex chemical compounds, various frequencies and whatnot, this jutsu turns out to be a piece of cake
(Genjutsu: Kokoro no Rinku) - Illusionary Style: Mind Link Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short-Long Chakra Cost: 40 Damage Points: N/A Description: This genjutsu was made in order to increase the team cohesion in battle. User of jutsu can use it on a maximum of 5 people (including himself). Through it, those in effect, can transmit various information or feelings to select or even all users. For example, if one ninja hears something he can immediately synthesize a sound in his fellow ninja head which says: "Someone is approaching." or if one ninja sees an enemy jutsu coming for them he can synthesize an image or 'video feed' of sorts in his ally's head in order to let him know about it.
The next jutsu is a CW I posted quite some time ago and it got declined due to it's abilities not being organized. Now, I know I have to quote it, but it's in archived thread so...
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~ Declined, Yamanaka-ish ~
(Fuer Grissa ost Drauka) – Bringer of Death Type: Weapon Rank: S Range: Short - Long Chakra Cost: N/A Damage: N/A Description: Rather remarkable and unique weapon created by chakra molders of the old. Said to originate from distant land in the north, where blacksmiths used chakra along with mastery of their talent to forge armor and weapons, this weapon comes in form of surprisingly normal looking, brown, leather bracer which covers entire forearm, its only exception being round, blue crystal embed into its center which shines upon every usage. In ancient texts, named as "One that is All" and "Form without Form", it brought many scholars and historians of the time into heated debate which was to conclude if weapon ever existed. After many years of arguments and counter-arguments, texts were labeled as nothing more than bedtime stories and as such soon fell into depths of oblivion. After hundreds of years, a man stumbled over a weapon while searching for gold in long-forgotten crypts of northern lords. After spending over twenty years on discovering and mastering abilities of the weapon he possessed, he systematically assassinated key people in the rule over northern districts while at the same time activating himself in the field of politics. Soon enough, he ensured himself and his bloodline a constant seat of power in rule over north. Weapon then passed from father to son and one of them was foolish enough to write down abilities on his deathbed because he didn't want his son to spend years on mastering abilities on his own. Not long after father's death, son was killed in his cradle and weapon was stolen where it's every traces is lost. Now, after all these centuries and decades, rumors has it that a lone ninja got his hands on it and secrets to its abilites... Abilities: User can, by using his chakra, create any weapon, shield or armor on any place on his body through use of special bracer. While they don't possess any special abilities they can be imbued with elemental chakra in order to increase their effectiveness. Although they can be thrown or shot, they will dissolve into thin air in a short time after hitting the target as they got too far from bracer. Every creation counts as a jutsu, but creating multiple copies of same thing still count as only one jutsu (for example, a handful of shurikens).
*Can only be used by Kaziname
~ Is that even Japanese ? ~
btw. I know you said I ought to make it special, but I think I'll make a set of CJs just for it... If I add any other abilities to it right now, I'm pretty sure it would be deemed as an OP weapon and rightly so.
(Fuuton:Kaze Supea)-Wind Release:Wind Spear Type:Offensive Rank:B Range:Mid Chakra:20 Damage:40 Description:After performing the Ram->Boar hand seals the user will exhale a stream of wind that is small in diameter but very long and it resembles a long staff.And it is sharp enogh to pierce the oponent.
~Note:Can be used three times per battle.
__________________________________________________________________________________ (Fuuton:Kaze Toku)-WInd Release:Wind Shiled Type:Defensive Rank:B Range:Short Chakra:20 Damage:N/A Description:The user will form a large shield of wind wich he can hold in his hand like a normal shield.The shield is large enough to cover the whole users body if the user stands on his knees.The shield can remain active for 3 turns before disspearsing.
~Note:Usable twice per battle
~Note:Lasts for 3 turns once activated unless it is destroyed. ~Both Declined~ Do not Resubmit
Sand Falll Type: Supplementary Rank: B-Rank Range: Short-Long Chakra: 20 Damage: N/A Description: The user makes the sand under the opponent un-dense, causing the opponent to sink
(Iriko Katatsumuri Kuchiyose: Snivellus) Sea Snail Summoning: Snivellus
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: n/a
Description:
Snivellus is the boss summon of the Sea Snails that reside in the underwater caves near Kirigakure. Snivellus isn't the biggest snail but he also isn't the smallest. He has a very bright purple-orange shell with spikes that cover it except for a small area on top (where the summoner stands or sits). Snivellus is big enough to have one user ride on the shell so about 8 feet high and 10 feet long. He is faster then the typical snail on land but his speed on water is increased to that of the user. Being the boss of the Sea Snails he does have unique abilities that only pertain to him. Snivellus has complete mastery over the lightning element and can use most techniques (except forbidden). The spikes that reside on his back have the ability to conduct incoming lightning/electric techniques and nullify them (up to B-Rank). Unlike other snails, sea snail's bodies are closer to the ground and when they emerge from the shell there face/eyes are at the base of the shell while the very long antennas they have rise to the higher of the shell. This goes for the same towards Snivellus and from these antennas is where he is able to unleash a very powerful electrical charge throughout the ground. Snivellus will slam his antennas into the ground and release a very powerful lightning current that takes the form as a spear. A current emits from both antennas and is sent towards the target in a crescent path so it hits a target from both sides.
Notes:
- Can use lightning techniques up to S-Rank which count towards the users moves
- Diffuses targeted lightning techniques up to B-Rank // twice per battle
- Lightning Spear Current is up to mid-range // once per battle // counts as technique // is Forbidden Ranked and dispels him due to the damage caused
- No other summons allowed when Snivellus is on the field
- Snivellus lasts 4 turns on field or until destroyed
- Must have signed the "Sea Snails" contract
- Only trainable/usable by Coyote
±± Approved ±± Editted
(Iriko Katatsumuri Kuchiyose: Beauregard) Sea Snail Summoning: Beauregard
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 25
Damage: n/a
Description:
Beauregard is a Sea Snail that is slightly bigger than a human male hand. He is summoned on the should of the user and remains there. Beauregard has a green shell with bright yellow stripes. However, Beauregard antennas are very heightened beyond the normal snail. Similar to the Inuzuka senses with smell, Beauregard can sense chakra very easily on the battlefield. Beauregard speaks to the user and doesn't attack. He's simple there for the purpose of sensory.
Notes:
- Beauregard remains of the field for 5 turns
- Must have signed the "Sea Snails" contract
- Can sense chakra up to mid-range either it be in the sky or ground
- Only usable/trainable by coyote.
±± Declined ±± Sorry, i won't approve chakra sensory summons even if they are easily countered
(Iriko Katatsumuri Gigei: Omowazu Katatsumuri Chouhou) Sea Snail Arts: Spontaneous Snail Salute
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description:
The user will preform 1 handseal then lift both of their hands up towards the target and from within both sleeves on both arms hundreds of rapidly spiraling snail shells with be launched at the target like bullets. These shells are from a sect of the Sea Snail species that hail from the icy north in the sea near Yukigakure. The shells are as hard as ice and steel so in reality they're able to penetrate skin and weak defenses.
Notes:
- Must have signed the "Sea Snails" contract
- Only usable/trainable by Coyote
[Shitoryu: Kiba] Four Swords Flow: Fangs Type: Weapon Rank: S-Rank Range: Short/Mid Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A Description: (Shitoryu: Kiba literally meaning "Four Sword Flow: Fangs" or "Four Swords Style: Fangs") is a specialized form of using the fang swords. The weapon set consists of four different fangs, each having two special natures and highly attractive to one of the swords, however, repulsive to the other two. All four fangs are made with different Metals and elemental Chakra. When used together they become set of extremely powerful weapons with high durability.
The Fangs were considered to be super natural weapons, recorded by earlier generations that they were bestowed in the ninja world to keep balance in power. The legend continues to state that each of the sword was sent down to one of the country in the ninja world, some people trying to attain the power ended up slaughtering innocent people for their evil purpose. The Fangs were then sealed in an stone located in middle of those countries. Over the time the seal broke, once again revealing the power of legendary fangs to the mere humans.
暗殺者芳 | The Messiah's Fang:
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This particular fang has said to be the most cursed of all, the blood of countless ninjas was drawn by this very sword in the stealthiness of nights. The Blade holds two elemental natures; Wind and Ice, and it is made up of sharpest metal. The Fang was also shaped with spikes like all other fangs and is attractive to Demon's Fang. Being Attractive to a weapon means that the end of the handle (start of the sword) fits into the end of the handle of other sword allowing the user to hold two swords in one hand, both pointing in opposite directions.
悪魔芳 | The Demon's Fang:
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The Demon's Fang, the most fearful one is made up of Fire and abundant Chakra. It is attractive to The Messiah's Fang, meaning it connects with that sword allowing user to wield both at once. The sword is known for its intensity of damage.
悪魔芳 | The Devil's Fang:
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The Devil's Fang is the strongest of all the fangs. It holds the call to earth and is known for the magnitude of damage. It is also able to slice through bones and flesh of the opponent and is attractive to The Angel's Fang, which means the end of The Devil's Fang connects with the end on The Angel's fang, allowing user to wield the swords in one hand, where both sharp ends pointing at different directions.
天使芳 | The Angel's Fang:
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The Angel's Fang is mightiest of all, It has the most piercing abilities and is the lightest in mass. The Sword is made up of elemental chakras; lightning and water. Its smoothness and piercing range allows user to use it in coalition with The Devil's Fang. The sword itself is shaped like The Messiah's Fang, "fangs" "spikes" pointing downwards. Note: The Elemental Natures have nothing related to the technique itself, Like all metals they are able to conduct only those specific natures barely increasing the stats. The Wielder of the four fangs can use them separately, in pairs or the entire set. The set of four fangs will be wielded using the connecting mechanism where two swords are combined together by their handles and the pointy edge pointing outwards in opposite direction. Two swords in each hand. Using all of them together will effect the speed, but Taijutsu masters are not affected by it. The Shitoryu is merely a name to the set of sword and not a fighting style allocated to the fangs. Each sword can be summoned only once per battle or all of them together (still once). To use the jutsu allocated to the weapon, all fangs must be wielded. A single fang cannot perform the jutsu alone. The swords/fangs can only be wielded by -Blizzard-. Special Note: The chakra natures are not ability, just giving the sword the uniqueness.
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This is a set of weapons and not a weapon. Also, the fact that each weapon has it's own chakra nature makes it looks like they're 4 different custom weapons. And you didn't mention any kind of ability. If you want, you can have normal swords with no effects on your bio and then just create jutsus for them
[Shitoryu: Kiba] Four Swords Flow: Fangs Type: Weapon Rank: S-Rank Range: Short/Mid Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A Description: (Shitoryu: Kiba literally meaning "Four Sword Flow: Fangs" or "Four Swords Style: Fangs") is a specialized form of using the fang swords. The weapon set consists of four different fangs, each having two special natures and highly attractive to one of the swords, however, repulsive to the other two. All four fangs are made with different Metals and elemental Chakra. When used together they become set of extremely powerful weapons with high durability.
The Fangs were considered to be super natural weapons, recorded by earlier generations that they were bestowed in the ninja world to keep balance in power. The legend continues to state that each of the sword was sent down to one of the country in the ninja world, some people trying to attain the power ended up slaughtering innocent people for their evil purpose. The Fangs were then sealed in an stone located in middle of those countries. Over the time the seal broke, once again revealing the power of legendary fangs to the mere humans. The elemental nature of each sword helps the user to channel that chakra (once; not constant supply) and increase the sword's range to 2 foot in length and 12 inches to the sides providing the user more cutting ability than normal.
暗殺者芳 | The Messiah's Fang:
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Elemental Nature; Ice
This particular fang has said to be the most cursed of all, the blood of countless ninjas was drawn by this very sword in the stealthiness of nights. The Blade holds two elemental natures; Wind and Ice, and it is made up of sharpest metal. The Fang was also shaped with spikes like all other fangs and is attractive to Demon's Fang. Being Attractive to a weapon means that the end of the handle (start of the sword) fits into the end of the handle of other sword allowing the user to hold two swords in one hand, both pointing in opposite directions.
悪魔芳 | The Demon's Fang:
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Elemental Nature; Fire
The Demon's Fang, the most fearful one is made up of Fire and abundant Chakra. It is attractive to The Messiah's Fang, meaning it connects with that sword allowing user to wield both at once. The sword is known for its intensity of damage.
悪魔芳 | The Devil's Fang:
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Elemental Nature; Earth
The Devil's Fang is the strongest of all the fangs. It holds the call to earth and is known for the magnitude of damage. It is also able to slice through bones and flesh of the opponent and is attractive to The Angel's Fang, which means the end of The Devil's Fang connects with the end on The Angel's fang, allowing user to wield the swords in one hand, where both sharp ends pointing at different directions.
天使芳 | The Angel's Fang:
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Elemental Nature; Lightning
The Angel's Fang is mightiest of all, It has the most piercing abilities and is the lightest in mass. The Sword is made up of elemental chakras; lightning and water. Its smoothness and piercing range allows user to use it in coalition with The Devil's Fang. The sword itself is shaped like The Messiah's Fang, "fangs" "spikes" pointing downwards.
Note: The Wielder of the four fangs can use them separately, in pairs or the entire set. The set of four fangs will be wielded using the connecting mechanism where two swords are combined together by their handles and the pointy edge pointing outwards in opposite direction. Two swords in each hand. Using all of them together will effect the speed, but Taijutsu masters are not affected by it. The Shitoryu is merely a name to the set of sword and not a fighting style allocated to the fangs. Each sword can be summoned only once per battle or all of them together (still once). To use the jutsu allocated to the weapon, all fangs must be wielded. A single fang cannot perform the jutsu alone. They are SET of swords but they have the same ability which is chakra conduction, They conduct chakra but that is limited to what nature they hold. If One of the sword is conducting chakra the others sword cannot conduct any chakra, which means only one of the sword gets the ability at one time. The swords/fangs can only be wielded by -Blizzard-.
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I was actually confused since you are asking me to make a basic set of swords with fusing together ability to make it more complex, like i stated in the previous post that the chakra was just to add uniqueness to the sword, but now i am putting it to use with a limitation.
~ Since you clearly didn't understand what Alucard said, let me repeat it. THESE ARE 4 ( FOUR ) SWORDS. Each has their own ability and chakra nature. THESE CANNOT BE ONE ( 1 ) WEAPON. It will never be approved like this. Pick ONE weapon and submit it.~
(Hakke: Myaku Dageki ) 8 Trigrams: 64 Pulsating Strikes
Type:Supplementary|Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage Points:60
Description: An advance form of the 64 strikes mixed with the air palm concept. A hyuuga member will take their stance causing the 8 trigrams circle to appear under him/her and anything within short-range and mid-range. The user begins doing a special dance where as they move in unpredictable patterns, they "thrust" the air itself at very high speeds in the direction of the opponent with their middle and index finger. The opponent will feel nothing at first with it feeling like small weak air bullets, but as the the technique progresses after 2 seconds, these bullets become small precision like, stinging blades that not only give the opponent agonizing pain, limiting their movement, but attacks 64 tenketsu on the opponent's body limiting their chakra, only allowing them to perform 2 jutsus a turn for 2 turns.
Notes:
-No other hyuuga techniques in the same turn or the next
-Must be a Hyuuga Clan member
-Useable 3 times per match
~ Declined, technique has been created already by someone else ~
(Kuchiyose: Bakuyaku Hamaguri ) - Summoning: Explosive Clams
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost:20
Damage points:5 per clam
Description: After forming the Tiger hand seal the user summons his explosive clams. The user is able to summon anywhere from 1 to 20 of these clams(that are the size of a kunai each) at one time. They all bare the Kirigakure symbol on their backs like the Giant Clam. They are capable of producing an explosion twice the strength of an explosive tag.
-Can be summoned outside of battle and kept on the user at other times but must be stated at the start of a fight how many they are carrying.
-Can only be taught by Professor Sarutobi.
-Can only be used by someone who has signed the Clam contract.
(not really sure how to scale the damage per clam.)
(Kuchiyose: Nikui Kawa Hamaguri ) - Summoning: Hard Shell Clam
Rank: S
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After forming the required Boar, Dog and Snake hand seals the user summons his summmoning creature the Hard Shell Clam. It bares the Kirigakure symbol on its back and is a little smaller then the Giant Clam. This clam has an extremly hard shell capable of blocking strong attacks of any element up to S rank once, A rank twice, B rank 4 times and capable of blocking C ranks and below without damage to the shell. The user can summon the clam around himself,, in front of him or at another location of their choosing up to Mid range.
-Once per battle.
-Stays on field until dismissed by summoner or reaching its breaking point.
-Can only be taught by Professor Sarutobi.
-Can only be used by someone who has signed the Clam contract.
Dropping these 2 customs as well as the rest of the magnetic customs
Magnetic Ninja Art: Ghost Army
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User touches his bracelets and summons 30 long swords with his seals that he then spreads magnetism chakra into to take control of making the swords float in the air likethey are being weilded by invisiblemen. Theswordscan'tfloat higherthen 2 meters above theground and can't be controled past mid range from the user. User can only use Magnetism jutsu while this is active. -Swords can be controled for up to 2 turns. -2 times per battle.
-Only Magnetism bios can use
-Only Professor Sarutobi can use.
(Jishaku Ninpou:magunetto zonbi) Magnetic Ninja Art: Magnet Zombies
Type: Attack
Rank: D-Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10-50
Damage Points: 20-90
Description: the user unrolls one of the 5 scrolls that contain his Magnet Zombie creations and uses the scroll to summon one of his "Zombies"to thefield,wherehe then uses his Magnetism powers to control it like a puppet by using different polarities and metals to move their bodies at will.These Magnet Zombies vary in build and abilities and each contain their own limitsand an increase in the amount of concentration it takes for the user to control them the more advanced the summoned creation is. Once a Magnet Zombie is destroyed the remaining metal from them isn't poofed away and can be used for other attacks. -Can't use anything but magnetism ninjutsu while controling a Magnet Zombie. -D Rank Summons have no turn limit but are very slow and weak can have up to 4 out at a time due to barely empowering them with movement. have a simple ability that can be used once per zombie.
~ Left for Scorps ~
±± All Pending ±± You are not allowed to, at this point, drop customs.
(Suiton: Konpaku Reiki) Water Style: Phantasmic Aura
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses a very large and dense amount of Suiton chakra within their body before releasing it in the form of an extremely dense mist. The mist is produced from every point on the user's body and is constantly created in a sustained stream that quickly becomes extremely dense as it is contained within Short Range of the user. The thickness of the mist is so great that standing within it would cause anyone to become drenched in seconds and cause anyone that does not hail from Kirigakure to become incapable of breathing. The aura of mist moves with the user and does not spread, staying within short range of the user, with the user at the epicenter. The main purpose of this technique is to use it to allow continuous defense against Katon techniques of S-rank and below - its density and the amount of Suiton chakra within it allowing it to defend against techniques that would normally be capable of evaporating it.
Note: For the duration that this technique is sustained, the user cannot focus any Chakra Nature other than Suiton and cannot see through it with normal eyesight.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
Note: Can only be used by Demosthenes.
-Declined-
Restrict the amount of time this jutsu is active and reduce the amount of times it can be used to 2. Also, be more specific on the part about people who can't breath inside this mist. They can't breath properly but what happens to them? Affects their movements, speed, reaction time? Also add that this jutsu needs X amount of hand seals.
(Suiton: Konpaku Reiki) Water Style: Phantasmic Aura
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs five handseals and focuses a very large and dense amount of Suiton chakra within their body before releasing it in the form of an extremely dense mist. The mist is produced from every point on the user's body and is constantly created in a sustained stream that quickly becomes extremely dense as it is contained within Short Range of the user. The thickness of the mist is so great that standing within it would cause anyone to become drenched in seconds and cause anyone that does not hail from Kirigakure to become incapable of breathing properly within it. Inhaling the mist would cause them to cough violently as their body tries to evacuate the dense mist from their lungs, which has some effect on one's ability to react and move with dexterity, but this subsides shortly and can not cause the opponent to lose consciousness, so long as they do not remain within the mist. The aura of mist moves with the user and does not spread, staying within short range of the user, with the user at the epicenter. The main purpose of this technique is to use it to allow continuous defense against Katon techniques of S-rank and below - its density and the amount of Suiton chakra within it allowing it to defend against techniques that would normally be capable of evaporating it.
Note: For the duration that this technique is sustained, the user cannot focus any Chakra Nature other than Suiton and cannot see through it with normal eyesight.
Note: Can only be used two times per battle. Note: Each use of this technique can last up to four turns.
Note: Can only be used by Demosthenes.
(Note to whomever checks this submission: I do hope that a duration of four turns is deemed reasonable, as, for as long as this technique is sustained, I am only capable of using Suiton. If it is deemed to be unreasonable, please change the number of turns that it can be sustained as you see fit.)
~ Sorry, but the idea of creating a dense mist to block off Katon in an area has already been used. ~
(The following technique is based on the same ability from Soul Eater that Jacob Moore used as a basis for a technique he submitted in the past. He no longer wishes to attempt to resubmit that technique and has given me permission to use it as a basis for my own technique.)
(Hakke Tenrai Hougou) Eight Trigrams Divine Sutures
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A (-10 to user.)
Description: While in close range of the opponent, the user will strike any part of the opponent's body, pressing their palm against it. As soon as the user makes contact with the opponent, they utilize an immense amount of chakra through the striking palm to perform this technique. From the palm, forms of very small thread-like structures are sent into the opponent's body. These threads are formed by combining traits of the the Jyuuken's Second Form, which involves the utilization of extremely small and sharp chakra structures, and a specific part of the Third Form, specifically Eight Trigrams Heavenly Sky, which utilizes the creation of elongated, sharp, thread-like structures, making the threads created in this technique as small and sharp and structures created in the Second Form, allowing them to cut through the opponent's body without the damage done to it being significant. Several threads are created on impact and they branch out several times, making a very distinct path through specific tenketsu, disabling the opponent's ability to manipulate chakra, and moving in between the spaces of nerve endings, disallowing the opponent to move their body, all of which happens very quickly - nearly immediately upon impact. As this happens, the user must keep their palm on the opponent's body in order to uphold the technique and must remain still, making no voluntary physical movement, as that would cause the technique to subside. This technique's essential purpose is to halt both the opponent and one's own self in order to sort of "pause" the battle during a moment in which they are in great danger and need more time to react and plan their future movements.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: While sustaining this technique, the user must be in contact with the opponent and can make no voluntary physical movement.
Note: Sustaining this technique causes the user to take damage from the strain put upon them.
-Leaving for Scorps-
±± Declined ±± This is an A-Rank/S-Rank tops. Not by any means a Forbidden Rank
(Hakke Tenrai Hougou) Eight Trigrams Divine Sutures
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: While in close range of the opponent, the user will strike any part of the opponent's body, pressing their palm against it. As soon as the user makes contact with the opponent, they utilize an immense amount of chakra through the striking palm to perform this technique. From the palm, forms of very small thread-like structures are sent into the opponent's body. These threads are formed by combining traits of the the Jyuuken's Second Form, which involves the utilization of extremely small and sharp chakra structures, and a specific part of the Third Form, specifically Eight Trigrams Heavenly Sky, which utilizes the creation of elongated, sharp, thread-like structures, making the threads created in this technique as small and sharp and structures created in the Second Form, allowing them to cut through the opponent's body without the damage done to it being significant. Several threads are created on impact and they branch out several times, making a very distinct path through specific tenketsu, disabling the opponent's ability to manipulate chakra, and moving in between the spaces of nerve endings, disallowing the opponent to move their body, all of which happens very quickly - nearly immediately upon impact. As this happens, the user must keep their palm on the opponent's body in order to uphold the technique and must remain still, making no voluntary physical movement, as that would cause the technique to subside. This technique's essential purpose is to halt both the opponent and one's own self in order to sort of "pause" the battle during a moment in which they are in great danger and need more time to react and plan their future movements.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: While sustaining this technique, the user must be in contact with the opponent and can make no voluntary physical movement, nor can he use any techniques that do not require movement.
~ Edited, Approved. ~
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I changed the Rank from Forbidden to A and removed parts pertaining to the user taking damage as a result of the technique formerly being Forbidden Rank.
Fuuton/Katon: 5 Sutā Tatsumaki [Wind/Fire Style Combo: 5 Star Tornado]
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The User, while in the air, creates an orb of wind around their body that rotates at an extremely Fast speed. The user then instantly shoots fire up into the air from his mouth, both arms, and legs. The rotating of the Wind orb will pick up with fire and form into a large Tornado. The user will slowly rotate downwards while in the tornado and eventually touch the ground. The user can begin running and can change the direction of the tornado so that it cannot be dodged.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: User takes 50 damage from Chakra strain.
Note: No Fire or Wind techniques above A Ranked for 2 turns.
Note: No Fire or Wind Techniques above B Ranked for 1 turn.
Note: Costs 2/3 moves in a turn.
(Not sure if the turn usage was needed, but added just in case.)
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Damage points are incorrect. If you rotate a sphere of wind that fast near you and add such amounts of fire chakra, the fire would engulf you completely. Also remove the part where it says the tornado cannot be dodged and add physical damage to you. Burned limbs which prevent you from engaging in taijutsu or performing hand seals with normal speed, etc. Also, add the hand seals needed for this jutsu to be performed. And a simple clap of hand seals won't cut it as this is forbidden rank.
Hyouton: Burakkuaisubīmu [Ice Release: Black Ice Beam]
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user forms an Elemental Rasengan in his hand and enhances it with Black Ice chakra. The rotation takes the Chakra and rotates it at an incredibly fast rate, allowing the user to project it away from their hand instead of having to throw it. The beam will cause immense Frostbite damage to whatever it touches as well as freeze on contact. This can also be used to cover any solid object in Ice or Freeze Water. The beam coming from the Rasengan is larger than the Rasengan itself, freezing the air as it travels and adding to the size of the blast.
Note: Can only be used 4x per battle (as this is really a cannon technique but with applied results to avoid confusion)
Note: No Black Ice Techs Next Turn
-Declined-
No rasengan variations
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Kikōhō: [Tri Beam Cannon]
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user, while honing in on a target, channels and immense amount of chakra into his arms and form a triangle with his hands by keeping the fingers on each hand together, overlapping the index finger on the one hand with the pinky of the other hand, and overlapping the thumbs. The object being focused on gets zoomed in on and visualized inside that triangle. The user will then concentrate all the chakra into the triangle and release it into one of three wide beams of pure chakra. The user can separate the beams into 3 different rapid succession blasts, however they will be weaker by comparison and yet still add up to the total destructive force of one large S Ranked blast. Each beam is capable of destroying Concrete and continuing through it. When used in the air, the user will appear to levitate for the duration of the technique and is even more accurate than when on land, capable of leaving a 20 meter crater in the earth at the range of its impact.
Note: One Beam is equivalent to S Rank.
Note: Two Beams are equivalent to A Rank EACH.
Note: Three Beams are equivalent to B Ranked EACH.
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
Note: No Pure Chakra Ninjutsu can be used in the same turn as this technique.
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Remove the levitation part. The last note doesn't make much sense. If you can't use raw chakra, which is the 'regular' or 'normal' chakra, how would you be able to use elemental chakra? Also 20 meter crater is a bit too much for the B and A-rank version
Fuuton/Katon: 5 Sutā Tatsumaki [Wind/Fire Style Combo: 5 Star Tornado]
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The User, while in the air, forms 6 fast handseals and creates an orb of wind around their body that rotates at an extremely Fast speed. The user then instantly shoots fire up into the air from his mouth, both arms, and legs. The rotating of the Wind orb will pick up with fire and form into a large Tornado. The user will slowly rotate downwards while in the tornado and eventually touch the ground.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: User takes 50 damage from physical Fire. Speed slowed to that of one rank below the user.
Note: No Fire or Wind techniques above A Ranked for 2 turns.
Note: Costs 2/3 moves in a turn.
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~ How is this Short-Long ? It looks like only people near you will be damaged as you descend with the tornado ~
Hyouton: Burakkuaisubīmu [Ice Release: Black Ice Beam]
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 Description: The user forms condensed Hyouton chakra on one of his hands that emits a black aura. The Black Ice Chakra continues growing around the hand of the user it at an incredibly fast rate by freezing the air around the hand until it gains 10 feet in diameter. With a forceful push of chakra, the user can project the Black Ice Chakra away from their hand like a beam of Ice. The beam will cause immense Frostbite damage to whatever it touches as well as freeze on contact. This can also be used to cover any solid object in Ice or Freeze Water and have enough power to send it back towards the opponent at a faster speed. The beam freezes the air as it travels and adds to the size of the beam, not to exceed 20 feet in diameter.
Note: Can only be used 4x per battle
Note: No Black Ice Techs Next Turn
~ Declined. ~
Kikōhō: [Tri Beam Cannon]
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user, while honing in on a target, channels and immense amount of chakra into his arms and form a triangle with his hands by keeping the fingers on each hand together, overlapping the index finger on the one hand with the pinky of the other hand, and overlapping the thumbs. The object being focused on gets zoomed in on and visualized inside that triangle. The user will then concentrate all the chakra into the triangle and release it into one of three wide beams of pure chakra. The user can separate the beams into 3 different rapid succession blasts, however they will be weaker by comparison and yet still add up to the total destructive force of one large S Ranked blast. Each beam is capable of destroying Concrete and continuing through it. When used in the air, the user will be even more accurate than when on land, capable of leaving a 20 meter crater in the earth at the range of its impact. Note: One Beam is equivalent to S Rank. (20 Meter Crater)
Note: Two Beams are equivalent to A Rank EACH. (10 Meter Crater)
Note: Three Beams are equivalent to B Ranked EACH. (5 Meter Crater)
Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
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~ Approved ~
*Took out what you requested and added the different crater sizes as well
(Bakuton: Kibaku Doragon no Su)- Explosion Release: Explosive Dragon's Nest
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user, after ingesting a large amount of explosive clay, releases it from his mouth in a quick movement, similar to how Garuda is created. As the explosive clay is released from the mouth, it takes the shape of three dragons, similar to the C-2 Dragon. However, these dragons are smaller, more muscled and agile, and capable of flying at higher speeds. The dragons have the ability to be independently controlled similar to how clones function. Each dragon can separately be detonated with a single hand seal, and the blast radius of a single dragon goes out to mid-range from the location it was detonated from. The dragons stay on the battlefield until they are destroyed by the opponent, or detonated by the user.
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Only one dragon can be detonated per turn
*Note: No Clay techniques for the remainder of the battle
*Note: The user suffers a moderate fatigue after the use of this technique, being incapable of performing more than one hand seal per technique the following turn
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Give us an idea of how much time it takes for you to put all the clay on your mouth and for the mouth to spit out the dragons. Reduce the number of dragons to 2. Define the speed at which the dragons move or who can keep up with them at shorter ranges. That last restriction of yours allows you to use any technique which requires one single hand seal and lots of ppl say on their bios they can use for example all earth jutsus with a single hand seal so don't try and play with words. Take that out and replace it with a proper description which affects you in battle. Also, on the damage points, add how much damage a dragon makes (which would be 45).
(Doton: Tsūki no Jutsu)- Earth Release: Venting Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing an earth technique, the user will will channel even more chakra into it. By compressing the earth within an earth technique starting from the bottom , the user will force the air bubbles confined between the spaces of the earth to the surface. As the air pockets are forced to surface of the technique, the user will release the pent up air by opening small exit points on any part of the surface of the earth. A sudden and violent burst of air is released from the earth due to the confined pressure of air and the compression of it against the surface. The burst of air is capable of neutralizing directional lightning techniques up to A-rank. (such as a beam, laser, spear, etc)
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Can only be used twice per battle
*Note: No Doton techniques above A-rank the next turn -Declined-
Add the number of hand seals needed for this technique to work and that it would only work on large scale techniques, like earth walls or other big structures. Remember those structures need to be connected to the ground so you won't be able to use it on earth projectiles for example. And that it can only be formed in one place or that it can only block one lightning technique up to A-rank per usage, so that you can't just spam multiple air vents at the same time, blocking multiple A-rank lightning techniques
(Doton: Rokku no Tepu o Kakudai)- Expanding Rock Tape
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs the following hand seals, Snake → Ram → Bird → Hare → Dragon → Ox → Horse → Ram → Dragon → Snake, and then directs their doton chakra into the earth. Ten earth strips with similar physical characteristics as tape erupt from the ground below the opponent. If the rock tape touches the opponent, it will attach itself to the opponent’s skin, making it near impossible to remove. One turn after the opponent has been attached to the rock tape, the user will perform the Snake hand seal, and the tape expands and then amplifies its density rapidly, increasing its weight. This anchors the opponent to the ground due to the immense weight, rendering the part of the body immobile.
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Usable three times per battle
*Note: The opponent can battle as normal until the user expands the tape
*Note: No Doton in the same turn
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Add that the opponent needs to be in contact with the ground or that at least, there needs to be a medium for your earth chakra to move, like having the strips of earth binding the opponent but still connected to the ground.
(Bakuton: Kibaku Doragon no Su)- Explosion Release: Explosive Dragon's Nest
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(45 per Dragon)
Description: The user, after ingesting a large amount of explosive clay, releases it from his mouth in a quick movement, similar to how Garuda is created. The entire process of consuming and releasing the clay lasts about five seconds. As the explosive clay is released from the mouth, it takes the shape of two dragons, similar to the C-2 Dragon. However, these dragons are smaller, more muscled and agile, and capable of flying at speeds up to 80mph. The dragons have the ability to be independently controlled similar to how clones function. Each dragon can separately be detonated with a single hand seal, and the blast radius of a single dragon goes out to mid-range from the location it was detonated from. The dragons stay on the battlefield until they are destroyed by the opponent, or detonated by the user.
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Only one dragon can be detonated per turn
*Note: No Clay techniques for the remainder of the battle
*Note: The user suffers a moderate fatigue after the use of this technique, being incapable of using or moving their legs for two turns
~ Too fast. At that speed, no one can dodge the dragons once they get even in mid-range, since the explosion also has to be accounted for ~
(Doton: Tsūki no Jutsu)- Earth Release: Venting Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing an earth technique, the user will will channel even more chakra into it and perform the Tiger→ Ram → Monkey → Ram → Snake handseals. By compressing the earth within an earth technique starting from the bottom , the user will force the air bubbles confined between the spaces of the earth to the surface. As the air pockets are forced to surface of the technique, the user will release the pent up air by opening small exit points on any part of the surface of the earth. A sudden and violent burst of air is released from the earth due to the confined pressure of air and the compression of it against the surface. The burst of air is capable of neutralizing a single, directional lightning techniques up to A-rank per use. (such as a beam, laser, spear, etc)
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Can only be used twice per battle *Note: The user must have a medium for the chakra to travel through such as the ground, or maintain constant contact with an earth projectile
*Note: No Doton techniques above A-rank the next turn
~ I like the idea. Approved. ~
(Doton: Rokku no Tepu o Kakudai)- Expanding Rock Tape
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs the following hand seals, Snake → Ram → Bird → Hare → Dragon → Ox → Horse → Ram → Dragon → Snake, and then directs their doton chakra into the earth. Ten earth strips with similar physical characteristics as tape erupt from the ground around the opponent a metre away from him. If the rock tape touches the opponent, it will attach itself to the opponent’s skin, making it near impossible to remove. After attaching itself to the opponent, the user will disconnect the tapes from the ground. One turn after the opponent has been attached to the rock tape, the user will perform the Snake hand seal, and the tape expands and then amplifies its density rapidly, increasing its weight. This anchors the opponent to the ground due to the immense weight, rendering the part of the body immobile.
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Usable three times per battle
*Note: The opponent can battle as normal until the user expands the tape
*Note: The opponent must have contact with the ground in order for the tape to attach itself to them
*Note: No Doton in the same turn
The Elemental Natures have nothing related to the technique itself, Like all metals they are able to conduct only those specific natures barely increasing the stats.
