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That's fine. ^_^

Now, here:

Advantages: The jutsu is more powerful than a standard B-rank when used in conjunction with water, meaning that it makes the combination of this jutsu more powerful than a standard Raiton/Suiton combination, as this jutsu is made specifically for that purpose. With this, you can increase the strength of even a low-ranking Suiton jutsu to do as much damage as an S-rank or more, and negate it's elemental weakness at the same time.

Disadvantages: Unless you can use Y/Y, you'll have to use this jutsu AFTER the water jutsu, which causes problems unless you use the right jutsu, as the electricity won't be able to mix with the water.

Potential strategies: Electrocute a source of water the opponent's standing on to do higher than normal damage for less chakra; combine with a clone to immediately fire a high-powered Suiton jutsu that can't just be walled with an Earth jutsu.

Now give it a shot. ^_^

I concentrate on my raiton chakra for some time then i do the Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals i then now used the concentrated chakra gotten from concentrating earlier to fire laser beams from my hand which are in form of lightning and electricity.
 

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I concentrate on my raiton chakra for some time then i do the Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals i then now used the concentrated chakra gotten from concentrating earlier to fire laser beams from my hand which are in form of lightning and electricity.
Just a note; this jutsu isn't concentrated like lasers are; it's very erratic and wide, thus allowing it to mix with water as best it can. However, that was fine.

Next is:


Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.



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Just a note; this jutsu isn't concentrated like lasers are; it's very erratic and wide, thus allowing it to mix with water as best it can. However, that was fine.

Next is:


Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.



Again, fill out the template, keeping in mind of what I told you I
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Hand seals required:Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare

Advantages to the technique:This technique helps or is very useful in attacking several opponents take multiple busnhin this is because it has the power to be slitted into multiple tendrils and attack from different corner,it also might give the element of surprise as aside from lightning jutsu like chidori which requires you to have contact with the opponent this allowed you to avoid that and attack from a long and ok distance.

Disadvantages to the technique:As all techniques which are lightning they have a general weakness to wind so the bolts which are sent through the flow can be countered by gust of wind blowing them away,for individuals or taijutsu user who are more common with short combat and jutsu usage this will be a huge disadvantage for them as the jutsu can only be performed done or carried out in the distance of mid to long.

Potential Strategies:It will work where in a water friendly battle terrain as the bolts can be passed through the water to make it a combo thus amplifying both singles attacks and make this justu stronger.

How the technique is preformed (in detail):The user focuses on their raiton chakra for long periods of time ,they then distribute it across their body giving or sharing it equally to all parts he then channels chakra to his palms and after doing this slams his palms on the ground which release a stream of electricity or lightning/raiton
 

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Hand seals required:Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare

Advantages to the technique:This technique helps or is very useful in attacking several opponents take multiple busnhin this is because it has the power to be slitted into multiple tendrils and attack from different corner,it also might give the element of surprise as aside from lightning jutsu like chidori which requires you to have contact with the opponent this allowed you to avoid that and attack from a long and ok distance.

Disadvantages to the technique:As all techniques which are lightning they have a general weakness to wind so the bolts which are sent through the flow can be countered by gust of wind blowing them away,for individuals or taijutsu user who are more common with short combat and jutsu usage this will be a huge disadvantage for them as the jutsu can only be performed done or carried out in the distance of mid to long.

Potential Strategies:It will work where in a water friendly battle terrain as the bolts can be passed through the water to make it a combo thus amplifying both singles attacks and make this justu stronger.

How the technique is preformed (in detail):The user focuses on their raiton chakra for long periods of time ,they then distribute it across their body giving or sharing it equally to all parts he then channels chakra to his palms and after doing this slams his palms on the ground which release a stream of electricity or lightning/raiton
Haha, excellent! ^_^ You brought up the part about it being a good anti-bunshin tool, which I was going to mention if you didn't.

Your disadvantages are a tad off, though: it CAN strike in short range, as it originates from you; however, the farther you allow it to go, the more the tendrils can spread out over an area, and strike more widespreadly.

Everything else was excellent. ^_^ Give it a shot.
 

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Haha, excellent! ^_^ You brought up the part about it being a good anti-bunshin tool, which I was going to mention if you didn't.

Your disadvantages are a tad off, though: it CAN strike in short range, as it originates from you; however, the farther you allow it to go, the more the tendrils can spread out over an area, and strike more widespreadly.

Everything else was excellent. ^_^ Give it a shot.

I focus on my raiton chakra for a large period of time channeling it across my body and distributing it equally to parts,i then focus and concentrate it mostly on my palms after this i slam my palms on the ground releasing streams of lightning which i aim at the tree.
 

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I focus on my raiton chakra for a large period of time channeling it across my body and distributing it equally to parts,i then focus and concentrate it mostly on my palms after this i slam my palms on the ground releasing streams of lightning which i aim at the tree.
Very good.

Now, for,:


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.



You know the drill. (Make sure to get the lightning jutsu, and not Minato's technique.)
 

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Very good.

Now, for,:


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air to draw in lightning chakra from the sky and then shoot the lightning energy at the enemy target.



You know the drill. (Make sure to get the lightning jutsu, and not Minato's technique.)

Handseals required:Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat

Advantages to the technique:It does not require much chakra from the user and its it mainly electricity gotten from the sky this technique can alos be used to take out large houses or t shops etc if it is targeted,it also has speed due to it being lightning and can counter Earth techniques of the same rank or lower.

Disadvantages to the technique:The user is more open to attack as when he draws the lightning chakra from the sky he is UN protected and not dodging against attack this proves he has a higher chance of being hit before doing the and performing the required hand seals pertaining to the lightning element and actually performing the jutsu.

Potential Strategies: The chakra from the sky can be targeted on a huge area which contains water to make the water conduct electricity and shock anyone in the water.

How the techniques is performed:The user does Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat and simply draws raw Lightning chakra from the sky similar to kirin and target it at his opponent.
 

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Handseals required:Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat

Advantages to the technique:It does not require much chakra from the user and its it mainly electricity gotten from the sky this technique can alos be used to take out large houses or t shops etc if it is targeted,it also has speed due to it being lightning and can counter Earth techniques of the same rank or lower.

Disadvantages to the technique:The user is more open to attack as when he draws the lightning chakra from the sky he is UN protected and not dodging against attack this proves he has a higher chance of being hit before doing the and performing the required hand seals pertaining to the lightning element and actually performing the jutsu.

Potential Strategies: The chakra from the sky can be targeted on a huge area which contains water to make the water conduct electricity and shock anyone in the water.

How the techniques is performed:The user does Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat and simply draws raw Lightning chakra from the sky similar to kirin and target it at his opponent.
Seems to be in order. The advantage of the jutsu's quickness is more or less negated by the handseals.

Give it a shot. ^_^

And sorry for my delay.
 

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Seems to be in order. The advantage of the jutsu's quickness is more or less negated by the handseals.

Give it a shot. ^_^

And sorry for my delay.
I focus on my raiton and do the Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat then i draw lightning chakra from the sky and direct it at a nearby wooden polls destroying it completely.
 

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I focus on my raiton and do the Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat then i draw lightning chakra from the sky and direct it at a nearby wooden polls destroying it completely.
That one is fairly simple, so I'll let it slide.


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.



I'll have some notes about this one afterwards, but go ahead and fill out what you can.
 

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That one is fairly simple, so I'll let it slide.


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a field of water under the opponent before shocking them with a lightning attack.



I'll have some notes about this one afterwards, but go ahead and fill out what you can.

Handseals required:Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat

Advantages to the technique:It can be done in mid range and can be used against earth techniques .

Disadvantages to the technique:It can not be used in short or long range and also requires water to use.

potential strategies:Can be used in connection with water element

How the technique is performed:The user focuses on his chakra and make water under the opponent feet them he send lightning bolt to the water shocking the opponent
 

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Handseals required:Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat

Advantages to the technique:It can be done in mid range and can be used against earth techniques .

Disadvantages to the technique:It can not be used in short or long range and also requires water to use.

potential strategies:Can be used in connection with water element

How the technique is performed:The user focuses on his chakra and make water under the opponent feet them he send lightning bolt to the water shocking the opponent
...this actually can be used in short and long range...Normally, I wouldn't let the answers you just gave me slide, but because of the way this jutsu works, I will.

This is a very odd jutsu as far as the RP is concerned, as to how it works, and both variants of it are already correct.

One version thinks that you project chakra underneath your opponent, and then convert it to water, creating a mass of water underneath the opponent. Then, you change some of the chakra within that water to electricity, electrocuting the opponent.

Another says that you use the chakra found in a previously used Suiton technique, and convert it to electricity.

For training purposes, we'll be preforming the first variant. Give it a shot.
 

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...this actually can be used in short and long range...Normally, I wouldn't let the answers you just gave me slide, but because of the way this jutsu works, I will.

This is a very odd jutsu as far as the RP is concerned, as to how it works, and both variants of it are already correct.

One version thinks that you project chakra underneath your opponent, and then convert it to water, creating a mass of water underneath the opponent. Then, you change some of the chakra within that water to electricity, electrocuting the opponent.

Another says that you use the chakra found in a previously used Suiton technique, and convert it to electricity.

For training purposes, we'll be preforming the first variant. Give it a shot.


I focus on my chakra channeling it equally in my body and distributing it to all parts i then project my chakra underneath my enemy,target or opponent and convert it to water creating a large water source then i change some of the chakra in the water to lightning to electrocute my opponent.
 

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I focus on my chakra channeling it equally in my body and distributing it to all parts i then project my chakra underneath my enemy,target or opponent and convert it to water creating a large water source then i change some of the chakra in the water to lightning to electrocute my opponent.
...meh, good enough.

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Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.

 

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...meh, good enough.

Now, for:


Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.



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Handseals required:Monkey → Unknown hand seal

Advantages to the technique:A very easy technique and one which i will ot explain much on because it is very straight forward.This move by ranke a shinobi Naruto the Movie 2: Legend of the Stone of Gelel he this jutsu is similar to that o darui which has laser beams and can be used as a quick offensive counter or move it can also be done in mid and short ranges .

Disadvantages to the technique:It can be coutered easily by the sharigan whch we read the user movement and dodge the lightning it can also be overpwered by c or b rank fuiton attacks and it can not be done in long ranges also its attack damages seems to only be to toss and break apart rocks or little objects making it not that useful unlike kirin which is said is strong to take out a mountain and is undogeable.

Potential Strategies:It can be used in conjunction with suiton attacks to electrocute water and power the attack this works because water is a conductor of electricity and serves of a some what catalyst as it speed or strength each elements attacks.

How the techniques is performed:The user does the monkey had seals and another unknown hand seals and focuses his raiton chakra channeling across his body he then focuses it on his palms shooting out the chakra as electricity in the form of electric currents
 
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Handseals required:Monkey → Unknown hand seal

Advantages to the technique:A very easy technique and one which i will ot explain much on because it is very straight forward.This move by ranke a shinobi Naruto the Movie 2: Legend of the Stone of Gelel he this jutsu is similar to that o darui which has laser beams and can be used as a quick offensive counter or move it can also be done in mid and short ranges .

Disadvantages to the technique:It can be coutered easily by the sharigan whch we read the user movement and dodge the lightning it can also be overpwered by c or b rank fuiton attacks and it can not be done in long ranges also its attack damages seems to only be to toss and break apart rocks or little objects making it not that useful unlike kirin which is said is strong to take out a mountain and is undogeable.

Potential Strategies:It can be used in conjunction with suiton attacks to electrocute water and power the attack this works because water is a conductor of electricity and serves of a some what catalyst as it speed or strength each elements attacks.

How the techniques is performed:The user does the monkey had seals and another unknown hand seals and focuses his raiton chakra channeling across his body he then focuses it on his palms shooting out the chakra as electricity in the form of electric currents
Very nice. This is also a useful technique because it can be used as a weapon if you so wish, and retains it's electrical properties.

Now, demonstrate, please, in detail.
 

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Very nice. This is also a useful technique because it can be used as a weapon if you so wish, and retains it's electrical properties.

Now, demonstrate, please, in detail.
I focus on my lightning chakra and channel it across my body distributing it to all parts equally i then do the monkey hand seal and concentrate my lightning chakra into my palm and shooting out in forms of electricity or laser i direct it at a small earth rock near me breaking it
 

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I focus on my lightning chakra and channel it across my body distributing it to all parts equally i then do the monkey hand seal and concentrate my lightning chakra into my palm and shooting out in forms of electricity or laser i direct it at a small earth rock near me breaking it
...decent. Remember, this is less a laser and more a whip; it's sustained, and thus can be used like a whip; if you must, think of it as the Laser Circus jutsu, only being a single tendril.

Next, is:


Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.

 

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...decent. Remember, this is less a laser and more a whip; it's sustained, and thus can be used like a whip; if you must, think of it as the Laser Circus jutsu, only being a single tendril.

Next, is:


Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.


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Hand seals required:Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat

Advantages to the technique:This is like the lightning version of earth swamp of the ungrounded as the user send Lightning and also expands the range to form a hound.This jutsu is good for attempting to block your opponent and restrict the movement it might also be good to be used against large aoitn of bunshin by using it against them to make them

Disadvantages to the technique:It can nor be used in short range and will be overpower by a wind jutsu it is also weak to repel like attacks such as shnrai tensei

potential strategies:Can be used in conjunction with water element

How the technique is performed:By manipulating lightning chakra into their hand, the user can make the lightning expand to create the form of a hound. The hound remains connected to the user's hand, allowing them to control it during its attack.
 
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Hand seals required:Rabbit or Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat

Advantages to the technique:This is like the lightning version of earth swamp of the ungrounded as the user send Lightning and also expands the range to form a hound.This jutsu is good for attempting to block your opponent and restrict the movement it might also be good to be used against large aoitn of bunshin by using it against them to make them

Disadvantages to the technique:It can nor be used in short range and will be overpower by a wind jutsu it is also weak to repel like attacks such as shnrai tensei

potential strategies:Can be used in conjunction with water element

How the technique is performed:By manipulating lightning chakra into their hand, the user can make the lightning expand to create the form of a hound. The hound remains connected to the user's hand, allowing them to control it during its attack.
Your disadvantages aren't really disadvantages. ._. It's just basic knowledge that's common for the Raiton element.

But, this technique doesn't have any really obvious disadvantages - it's a very good technique, other than the string of handseals needed.

It's essentially a lightning variant of Hurricane Fist or Destruction Torrent, other than the fact it requires handseals; and thus, is good when used in conjunction with them, as it moves very quickly, as shown, and has ample strength.

Alright, now, preform the technique, using detail in describing the steps of actually using it.
 
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