[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[black uchiha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

The Great Dragon Collection is a collection of puppets in dragon from. This collection consist of 4 cardinal dragons (Thundra, Flame, Breeze, and Typhoon), the Dragon Knight puppet armor, and the rampage dragon (Dragoon)


(Kita no doragon: Thundra) Dragon of the North: Thundra
Type: Weapon/Puppet
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60/30 (A-rank/C-rank)
Description: The user summons Thundra a dragon of the Great Dragon collection. Thundra is 10ft tall, gold colored, and comprised completely of metal. It has shuriken for scales, from head to tail, that can be shot at the opponent (C-rank). Thundra has 2 large generators inside each leg that produces A-rank electricity, capable of being shot from Thundra’s mouth (3 times) in a blast or stream or sent throughout its body. Also, has the standard hidden puppet weapons.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can only shoot lightning 3 times (equal to A-rank)
-Puppet becomes unusable after 4 turns
-Lightning attacks count as one of the 3 moves
-Can only control 1 other puppet while in use
-Can’t summon any puppets for 1 turn
-Can only be taught/given by Black Uchiha

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±± Declined ±± Generator? Find a Naruto-like explanation for the electricity. Note that its electricity, its not fueled with chakra... Only Human puppets can use Ninjutsu...remember that. And this is valid for the other dragon puppet i declined a few pages back

(Minami no doragon: Fureimu) Dragon of the South: Flame
Type: Weapon/Puppet
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60/30 (A-rank/C-rank)
Description: The user summons Flame a dragon of the Great Dragon collection. Flame is 10ft tall, and red colored. It has shuriken for scales, from head to tail, that can be shot at the opponent(C-rank), it also has a heated coil tail with spikes(C-rank). Flame has 2 large gas tanks inside each leg that produces A-rank flames, capable of being shot from Flame’s mouth (3 times) in a blast or stream. Also, has the standard hidden puppet weapons.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can only shoot fire 3 times (equal to A-rank)
-Puppet becomes unusable after 4 turns
-Fire attacks count as one of the 3 moves
-Can’t summon any puppets for 1 turn
-Can only control 1 other puppet while in use
-Can only be taught/given by Black Uchiha

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±± Declined ±± Gas? how does it ignite? Also, if its based on a Gas it can't be a blast...only a stream like a flame thrower. Note again, these are flames...not Katon.

(Azuma no doragon: Taifū) Dragon of the East: Typhoon
Type: Weapon/Puppet
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60/30 (A-rank/C-rank)
Description: The user summons Typhoon a dragon of the Great Dragon collection. Typhoon is 10ft tall, deep blue colored, and covered in blades from head to tail, that can be shot at the opponent (C-rank). Typhoon is a pressurized puppet (like an aerosol can) filled with water, in such, produces A-rank water, capable of being shot from Typhoon’s mouth (3 times) or sent through its wings. Also, has the standard hidden puppet weapons.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can only shoot water 3 times (equal to A-rank)
-Puppet becomes unusable after 4 turns
-Water attacks count as one of the 3 moves
-Can only control 1 other puppet while in use
-Can’t summon any puppets for 1 turn
-Can only be taught/given by Black Uchiha

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±± Declined ±± water through its wings? to what effect? Again, this is not Suiton, its simply pressurized water.

I'm remembering this because this electricity, flames or this water will all be weaker than chakra powered ninjutsu of their counterparts. Elemental Jutsu > Raw element. Also, you need to state clearly if they can fly or not.

The Great Dragon Collection is a collection of puppets in dragon from. This collection consist of 4 cardinal dragons (Thundra, Flame, Breeze, and Typhoon), the Dragon Knight puppet armor, and the rampage dragon (Dragoon)


(Kita no doragon: Thundra) Dragon of the North: Thundra
Type: Weapon/Puppet
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60/30 (A-rank/C-rank)
Description: The user summons Thundra a dragon of the Great Dragon collection. Thundra is 10ft tall, gold colored, and comprised completely of metal. It has shuriken for scales, from head to tail, that can be shot at the opponent (C-rank). Thundra insides (including the mouth) are lined with tags that have electricity sealed within, enough that produces intense electrical blasts/streams that are equivalent to A-rank raiton attacks, capable of being shot from Thundra’s mouth (3 times) in a blast or stream or sent throughout its body. Also, has the standard hidden puppet weapons.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can only shoot lightning 3 times (equal to A-rank)
-Puppet becomes unusable after 4 turns
-Electric attacks count as one of the 3 moves
-Can only use C-rank attack once per battle
-Puppet can fly but not with the user
-Can only control 1 other puppet while in use
-Can’t summon any puppets the next turn
-Can only be taught/given by Black Uchiha

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(Minami no doragon: Fureimu) Dragon of the South: Flame
Type: Weapon/Puppet
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60/30 (A-rank/C-rank)
Description: The user summons Flame a dragon of the Great Dragon collection. Flame is 10ft tall, and red colored. It has shuriken for scales, from head to tail, that can be shot at the opponent(C-rank), it also has a heated coil tail with spikes(C-rank). Flame has 2 large gas tanks inside each leg with pipes that run to the mouth where an ignition switch is, that produces intense flames that are equivalent to A-rank katon attacks, capable of being shot from Flame’s mouth (3 times) in a stream. Also, has the standard hidden puppet weapons.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can only shoot fire 3 times (equal to A-rank)
-Puppet becomes unusable after 4 turns
-Fire attacks count as one of the 3 moves
-Can only use the C-rank projectiles once per battle
- Can use the tail for the duration of the puppet's life
-Puppet can fly but not with the user
-Can’t summon any puppets the next turn
-Can only control 1 other puppet while in use
-Can only be taught/given by Black Uchiha

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(Azuma no doragon: Taifū) Dragon of the East: Typhoon
Type: Weapon/Puppet
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60/30 (A-rank/C-rank)
Description: The user summons Typhoon a dragon of the Great Dragon collection. Typhoon is 10ft tall, deep blue colored, and covered in blades from head to tail, that can be shot at the opponent (C-rank). Typhoon is a pressurized puppet (like an aerosol can) filled with water, in such, produces intense water blasts/jets that are equivalent to A-rank suiton attacks, capable of being shot from Typhoon’s mouth (3 times) or slicing jets of water (1 in each wing)sent through its wings. Also, has the standard hidden puppet weapons.
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Can only shoot water 3 times (equal to A-rank)
-Puppet becomes unusable after 4 turns
-Water attacks count as one of the 3 moves
-Can only use C-rank attack once per battle
-Puppet can fly but not with the user
-Can only control 1 other puppet while in use
-Can’t summon any puppets the next turn
-Can only be taught/given by Black Uchiha

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±± All Approved ±± Added an aditional restriction in every single one. Also, nice job. ^^

 

[Yūsuke1]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suna : Paipusumasshu) - Sand Style - Tube Smash
Rank : A
Type : Offensive/Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 35
Damage points : 70
Description : With the upward sway of either hand, the user is able to conjure up a tube made and filled of sand that rises around the target area. The sand is materialized on the ground around the enemy as the user sways his hand upwards. As the tube rises, it continues to grow towards the skies and sends the enemy up with it inside the sand tube. The fact that the sand within the tube keeps rising along with the tube enables it to bring the enemy alone. This will also cause a cramped, tight, squeezed space within the tube for the enemy. When it reaches about ten meters up within the sky, it curves around and heads straight back towards the ground at a great speed. Similar to Primary Lotus, the sand tube will let go of the enemy within it at about 3 meters tall. The enemy will then smash into the ground head-first.

Note : Can only be used by a sand user
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Can only be used three times per battle
Note : No sand techniques A-rank or above may be used in the same turn
Note : Technique can be performed faster when target is on a sand source

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±± Declined ±± chakra info is wrong. A-Rank = 30 chakra/60 damage. resubmit

(Doton : Shi-so) - Earth Release : Seesaw
Rank : A
Type : Offensive / Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : 60
Description : With this technique, the user will first charge a massive amount of doton chakra within either foot and then stomp that particular foot onto the ground hard, channeling the doton chakra as he does that. The stomp causes it to burst into the ground, travelling underground towards the enemy. Upon reaching underneath the targeted area, the user will control that earth chakra to stop and release all its energy upwards to cause a square platform of earth big enough for the target to shoot up 10 meters into the air at an incredible speed, bringing along anybody who is standing on the platform of earth. Due to the tremendous speed that the enemy is going up, using techniques such as 'Wind Stream Technique' will be ineffective since the upwards motion would definitely be stronger than a tiny wind stream they are exhaling.

Note : Can only be used four times per battle
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : It is not necessary to use on a person or enemy
Note : No S-rank or above earth techniques can be used the same turn
Note : Must be standing on the ground to be able to use this technique

±± Declined ±± Look at the bolded. Take that part out. Once in the air you have no way to control the movement of your enemy or affect it thus you can't limit it with this technique. Also the restriction i bolded is quite unecessary

(Fuuton : Junshin) - Wind Release : Purity
Rank : B
Type : Defensive / Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 25
Damage points : N/A
Description : The user performs the 'Snake' handseal and concentrates his wind chakra into a certain spot on the ground. With this, the air on the ground starts swirling and forms a flower. This flower has but a single petal stuck onto its head. This wind manifested flower scans the surrounding battlefield for gas that causes damage in the body (poison, acid, etc). When it has located a gaseous threat, it will immediately start sucking the air at great speed at the gas, sucking the gas all up. Due to the chakra within it, it is controlled only to be able to sense harmful-type of gases. Not wind-techniques or the enemy. The moment it starts sucking up the gas, that single petal falls onto the ground as a sign of impurity. After fully sucking up the gas, it explodes non-violently. That tiny explosion doesn't have the power to bruise a human and hence, is not used offensively.

Note : Lasts until it has fulfill its purpose
Note : Can only be seen clearly with a dojutsu
Note : It is only able to sense harmful gases
Note : The tiny explosion can't hurt anybody
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Can only be used four times per battle
Note : Takes a few seconds to fully absorb most of the gas.
Note : Even without a dojutsu, you can still see the swirling air and the shape

±± Declined ±± Awesome idea actually. However, note the parts i bolded. Take that out. Also, this is more an A-Rank or S-Rank and you need to make the flower a bit bigger.

(Suna : Paipusumasshu) - Sand Style - Tube Smash
Rank : A
Type : Offensive/Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : 60
Description : With the upward sway of either hand, the user is able to conjure up a tube made and filled of sand that rises around the target area. The sand is materialized on the ground around the enemy as the user sways his hand upwards. As the tube rises, it continues to grow towards the skies and sends the enemy up with it inside the sand tube. The fact that the sand within the tube keeps rising along with the tube enables it to bring the enemy alone. This will also cause a cramped, tight, squeezed space within the tube for the enemy. When it reaches about ten meters up within the sky, it curves around and heads straight back towards the ground at a great speed. Similar to Primary Lotus, the sand tube will let go of the enemy within it at about 3 meters tall. The enemy will then smash into the ground head-first.

Note : Can only be used by a sand user
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Can only be used three times per battle
Note : No sand techniques A-rank or above may be used in the same turn
Note : Technique can be performed faster when target is on a sand source

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(Doton : Shi-so) - Earth Release : Seesaw
Rank : A
Type : Offensive / Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : 60
Description : With this technique, the user will first charge a massive amount of doton chakra within either foot and then stomp that particular foot onto the ground hard, channeling the doton chakra as he does that. The stomp causes it to burst into the ground, travelling underground towards the enemy. Upon reaching underneath the targeted area, the user will control that earth chakra to stop and release all its energy upwards to cause a square platform of earth big enough for the target to shoot up 10 meters into the air at an incredible speed, bringing along anybody who is standing on the platform of earth.

Note : Can only be used four times per battle
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : No S-rank or above earth techniques can be used the same turn
Note : Must be standing on the ground to be able to use this technique

(Fuuton : Junshin) - Wind Release : Purity
Rank : A
Type : Defensive / Supplementary
Range : Short - Long
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : N/A
Description : The user performs the 'Snake' handseal and concentrates his wind chakra into a certain spot on the ground. With this, the air on the ground starts swirling and forms a flower. This flower has but a single petal stuck onto its head. This wind manifested flower scans the surrounding battlefield for gas that causes damage in the body (poison, acid, etc). When it has located a gaseous threat, it will immediately start sucking the air at great speed at the gas, sucking the gas all up. Due to the chakra within it, it is controlled only to be able to sense harmful-type of gases. Not wind-techniques or the enemy. The moment it starts sucking up the gas, that single petal falls onto the ground as a sign of impurity. After fully sucking up the gas, it explodes non-violently. That tiny explosion doesn't have the power to bruise a human and hence, is not used offensively.

Note : Lasts for four of the user's turn
Note : It is only able to sense harmful gases
Note : The tiny explosion can't hurt anybody
Note : Can only be used or taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Can only be used four times per battle
Note : Constantly scans the battlefield every turn
Note : It is much bigger than an average flower
Note : Takes a few seconds to fully absorb most of the gas.
Note : People can still see the swirling air and the shape much clearly, even without a dojutsu


±± All approved ±± Good job!!! ^^

 

[Heavens Blade]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kōton: Kōheika) steel release: steel arms
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user preforms four handseals then large steel arms come out of the users back these arms are very powerfull and can crush the bones in someones arms easily the arms only have three digits and cannot be used to do handseals however they can be used to help with jutsu in other ways i.e help mold the chakra
-the arms can reach up to mid range
-can only be used three times per match
-no more steel jutsu this turn or the next
-can only be taught by heavens blade

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±± Declined ±± How long do they last? Look at the bolded. Remove that. Be sure that these arms will not have superhuman strength. Add something about the strength somewhere in the description. Crushing your enemies limbs is ok...grabbing gamabunta and trowing it aside is not if you get my drift.

(Kōton: Kōheika) steel release: steel arms
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user preforms four handseals then large steel arms come out of the users back these arms are very powerfull and can crush the bones in someones arms easily the arms only have three digits and cannot be used to do handseals the steel arms have 3 times the strength of a human hands
-can only be used by steel bios
-last 3 turns
-the arms can reach up to mid range
-can only be used two times per match
-no more steel jutsu this turn or the next
-can only be taught by heavens blade

±± Approved ±± Changed the restrictions a bit

(fan doki: kyo shotto) fan wrath: big shot
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: while in fan wrath mode the user will swing there fan creating a large ball of wind this ball is slow moving but extremely durable while in short range the ball is in this large form but when the ball reaches the short mid range line the ball turns into hundreds of small balls of wind (bout the size of a marble) these balls are launched in a 180 degree radius and are very fast moving the small balls go until they reach the mid long range line then the disperse
-can only be used in fan wrath mode
-can only be used twice per battle
-can only be taught by heavens blade

hope that clearifies what i mean

±± Declined ±± Its severely unrestricted. Its an S-Rank wind technique. It needs some restriction besides the fact that i can only be used 2 times.

(leoliguar kata: kiba za predator) leoliguar style: fang of the predator
Type: Supplementry
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the summoner does three handseals then the leoliguar bares his teeth at its opponent and places the opponent into a deep genjutsu in the genjutsu the opponent believes they have shrunk down to the size of a mouse and is then attacked by the leoliguar
-the leoliguar can't preform anymore leoliguar kata for the remander of the time its on the field (effect doesnt carry over if they are resummoned later)
-can only be used once per match (meaning even if you bring out a different one they cant use it as well)
-summoner cant preform any genjutsu the next turn

±± Declined ±± Two things: If the leoliguar attacks the enemy in the genjutsu then the enemy will suffer damage from the mental pain of the attack he suffered within the genjutsu. Also, this technique is much more like an A-rank than an S-Rank. Other than that its ok.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu/raiton: tama no keibatsu) summoning technique/lightning release: ball of judgement
Type: Attack/supplementry
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user does three handseals then presses there hand on a tattoo and summones a dense ball of electricity above themself the ball can shoot out bolts of lighting that are A ranked this ball must stay in short range of the summoner it floats about 4 feet about above the user and is stationary
-must stay in short range of ball or it is destroyed
-every lighting blast done by the ball counts as one of your three moves
-can only be used once per match
-user cant use any lighting jutsu while this is in play and for the following turn
-can only be taught by heavens blade
-this is the tattoo

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±± Declined ±± I don't think i missed it but how long does the ball last? Also, is this a ball of pure lightning or a tool/weapon that becomes infused with lightning? If you are summoning a ball of pure lightning then its a no no. You can summon objects or living things or matter. Not energy. I would accept you summoning a large boulder or a large amount of water. However, pure lightning energy isn't possible.

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu/raiton: tama no keibatsu) summoning technique/lightning release: ball of judgement
Type: Attack/supplementry
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user does three handseals then presses there hand on a tattoo and summons a metal ball that is pact full of raiton chakra above themself the ball can shoot out bolts of lighting that are A ranked this ball must stay in short range of the summoner it floats about 4 feet about above the user and is stationary
-lasts 3 turns
-must stay in short range of ball or it is destroyed
-every lighting blast done by the ball counts as one of your three moves and can only be shot once per turn
-can only be used once per match
-user cant use any lighting jutsu while this is in play and for the following turn
-can only be taught by heavens blade

±± Approved ±± Edited it a bit.


(fan doki: kyo shotto) fan wrath: big shot
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: while in fan wrath mode the user will swing there fan creating a large ball of wind this ball is slow moving but extremely durable while in short range the ball is in this large form but when the ball reaches the short mid range line the ball turns into about 20 small balls of wind (bout the size of a marble) these balls are launched in a 180 degree radius and are very fast moving the small balls go until they reach the mid long range line then the disperse
-no more fan wrath jutsu this turn
-no A ranked or higher fan wrath jutsu next turn
-can only be used in fan wrath mode
-can only be used twice per battle
-can only be taught by heavens blade
-main projectile and secondary bullets are all visible and move at trackable speeds


±± Approved ±± Edited a bit

 

[Crocodile]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Shadow:Kagemusha Sodekuchi)-Shadow Armguard.
Type:Weapon-Defensive
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:40(For each B ranked and jutsu and below.)
Description:The Kagemusha Sodekuchi is like any other armguard,It has a special kind of metal around it that is able to defend against B ranked jutsu and below. Due to the extreme weight of the armguard, the user performs handseals at a slightly lower rate.
If another user other than the owner and the people he allows to use these touch the armguards they will be shocked with D ranked lightning causing them to be paralized for a second.

Note: Deflecting a jutsu counts as a move.
Note:It can only block B ranked jutsu 4 times.
Note:C,D Ranked jutsu can be blocked up to 7 times.
Note:The person shocked is unable to move for the length of one second, but can stll perform jutsus
Note:These can be taken off at any time during the battle to make hand seal performance faster.
Note:The left armguard has a hidden blade.
Note: Due to the added weight, when the armguard is removed, the user's hands are able to move faster, allowing him to perform hanseals at a 2/1 ratio.

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±± Declined ±± Look at the bolded. Does this mean it can defend against Katon-Karyuu Endan for example? Or against Doton: Doro Hoshi? Its 2 small armgards. It won't' protect you against all B-Rank techniques...its needs to be within reason. B-Rank techniques of gigantic size exist.

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(Shadow:Kagemusha Sodekuchi)-Shadow Armguard.
Type:Weapon-Defensive
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:40(For each B ranked and jutsu and below.)
Description:The Kagemusha Sodekuchi is like any other armguard,It has a special kind of metal around it that is able to defend against B-Rank Taijutsu and Kenjutsu attacks and can withstand the force of B-Rank Jutsu within reason, as the size of the armgards limits the amount of techniques they can defend against. Due to the extreme weight of the armguard, the user performs handseals at a slightly lower rate.
If another user other than the owner and the people he allows to use these tries to use the armguards they will be shocked with D ranked lightning causing them to be paralized for a second.

Note: Deflecting a jutsu counts as a move.
Note:It can only block B ranked jutsu 4 times.
Note:C,D Ranked jutsu can be blocked up to 7 times.
Note:The person shocked trying to use them is unable to move for the length of one second, but can stll perform jutsus
Note:The left armguard has a hidden blade.

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±± Approved ±± Editted a bit...a lot actually.

 

[Selendrile]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Bakuton: Kibaku Toami Kunai)- Explosion Release: Explosive Cast Net Knife
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: Deidara will put a single hand in his side pouches filled with clay, and begin to mold and shape it. Then, Deidara will release the clay from his palm in the shape of a regular kunai. He will then throw the kunai as normally at the opponent. At any moment, by performing a single hand seal, Deidara will expand the kunai into a large, clay cast net. If trapped within the net, the opponent's movements are severely restricted, preventing them from performing hand seals. With another hand sign, Deidara can explode the next at any time.
*Note: Must have a Deidara biograpghy
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Can be used thrice per battle
Declined, how can the kunai when expanding change shape into a net this is not possibly with the clay techniques, the kinjutsu only allows when molding a shape it stays that shape and when expanding the technique it just increases in size

(Bakuton: Kibaku Toami Kunai)- Explosion Release: Explosive Cast Net Knife
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will put a single hand in his side pouches filled with clay, and begin to mold and shape it. Then, the user will release the clay from his palm in the shape of a regular kunai. He will then throw the kunai as normally at the opponent. However, he will keep an incredibly thin, but strong clay string attached to the handle of the kunai, in order to manipulate its shape at will. At any moment, the user can expand the kunai into a large, clay cast net via the clay thread. If trapped within the net, the opponent's movements are severely restricted, preventing them from performing hand seals. With a single hand seal, the user can detonate the clay net. The net explodes with the force of three C1 bombs.
*Note: Must have a Deidara biograpghy
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Can be used thrice per battle

Re-worked the jutsu in order to fit in with the characteristics of clay techniques.

±± Declined ±± A thin "string" of clay? Thats taking it a bit too far as we haven't seen clay do anything like that so far. And in all honesty it would need to be a thick string to be able to keep itself attached to the kunai without breaking and it would make the kunai travel very very slowly.

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(Heron Geijutsu: Pēru Burū Shussan)- Heron Technique: Pale Blue Birth
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will perform two hand seals, and direct their chakra into their summon animal. When this happens, the summon will lay a massive pale blue egg, which drops to the ground, acting as a shield that can defend from reasonably sized attacks, such as beams, bullets, blasts, etc. The tough shell of the large, boulder size egg allows it to withstand many attacks. After the egg has defended from the attack, the user will perform another hand seal, causing a massive flock of immature Great Blue Heron to erupt from the egg. However, if used to defend from a full powered A-rank attack, the egg will break and be destroyed, which does not allow the user to release the flock of Herons. This flock of Herons swarms upon the enemy, ripping and tearing at their flesh with their powerful beaks and claws.
*Note: Can only be taught/used by Selendrile
*Note: Must have signed the Great Blue Heron contract; Can only be used with female summons
*Note: Usable twice per battle; Must be used with a different female summon each time
*Note: Rank of the flock is deducted normally from the rank of the attack defended from

±± Declined ±± Size of the egg...literally size of the Egg...massive is too relative and subjective. Also, the flock...how many? Size of each? And explain the bolded part...Unclear.

(Shunkō)- Flash Cry
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: Flash Cry is an advanced technique that combines taijutsu with pressurized chakra. When activated, the user will surround their back and arms with pressurized chakra, that flickers and flashes behind them sporadically. By focusing highly compressed chakra through the shoulders and back, the user will increase the damage of their strikes by releasing a burst of that chakra into their strike. This functions as a sort of piston, increasing the force behind an attack. Flash Cry increases the user's strength, speed, and reflexes. The users strength when using is equivalent to a chakra punch from Tsunade at her full might. The users speed and reflexes are increased by 1.25x. For short range the user has to land a hit directly on the opponent, or the ground within 5 feet from the opponent to cause any type of damage.
- Usable once per battle; Once activated it lasts for 5 turns
- Must be a taijutsu specialist stated on biography
- Can only be taught/used by Selendrile & Toshiro
- The user is only able to use physical techniques while Flash Cry is activated

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[KeotsuEclipse]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

1/16/12 -1/22/12
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(deddomanzubarēbōru) dead man’s volley
rank: Forbidden
type: Defensive
range: N/a
charka cost: 120
damage: N/a
description: More of a skill than an actual technique, dead man’s volley is a “game” forced upon the user and the opponent. when a non-doton technique approaches the user, they will focus a large quantity of chakra into their blade, creating an effect that causes the oncoming jutsu to condense itself into a sphere no larger than four feet across – however, as the jutsu is condensed, there is no loss of power, only area that it affects. However, the drawback to this is that the condensed energy is accelerated towards the user – thus initiating the game. The user can strike the energy sphere with their blade, causing the energy to rebound towards the opponent, also at high speeds; like the user, though, if the opponent has a sword, they can slash the energy orb to redirect it back at the user. The orb of energy can be reflected endlessly, until someone slips up, “losing” the game, and thus becoming the “dead man” as they take the full brunt of the energy sphere.
*the user must have stated in their bio that they know the rules of “dead man’s volley” to be able to use.
*once activated, this technique lasts the rest of the match; however, there are several stipulations, which are as follows:
[1. Only one technique can be transformed into the “ball” for dead man’s volley in a turn.
[2. While a “ball” remains active until its round is over (that is, until the ball is destroyed), another “ball” cannot be added within five turns of creating one “ball.”
[3. Dead man’s volley must be initiated by the sword-wielder.
[4. The opponent is not required to wield a sword; they may chose to cover their hands in a chakra reflecting the nature of the ball to reflect it if they so chose; likewise, the user can "shield bash" to reflect the ball as well, but cannot use the hand method mentioned above.
[5. Creating a “ball” counts as a move-per-turn, and costs 10 chakra.
[6. The reflecting of the ball does not count as a move-per-turn, as it is an action forced upon both parties.
[7. The ball has the same “power” as the technique that it was created from; therefore, if a ball has 60 power (crafted from an a-rank attack), and is struck by an attack with 61 power (an attack of equal or greater power), the ball is destroyed, and the game is considered a “draw.”
[8. The ball is imbued with the properties of the technique it was created from; if the user failed to volley a ball crafted form a a-rank fire justu and was stuck, they would take the same amount of damage in from the ball as the technique used to form the ball would have inflicted.
[9. A “ball” cannot be crafted from a technique whose power exceeds 120 (the chakra required to activate dead man’s volley in a match.
[10. With the very first use of dead man’s volley, it must be posted as a move, which subtracts the 120 chakra, the 10 chakra required for creating a ball, the move-per-turn of creating a ball, and the move-per-turn of creating a jutsu; therefore, the first time dead man’s volley is used in a match, it has a collective chakra cost of 130, and two moves of a turn.
[12. Due to the fact that the “ball” must have an energy-like, or semi-energy-like composition, earthen techniques (be it canon or ce) cannot be crafted into a ball. In fact, any technique that is “solid” cannot be crafted into a ball; the technique must be energy, gas, or liquid (i.e. Wind, fire, lightning, etc.)]

i know the concept of "forbidden rank jutsu = self-damaging" but i've never seen a f-ranked defense (nor can i imagine how it would harm one's self...), however, though this technique doesn't outright harm the user, there is a self-damaging aspect if the user fails to preform properly.

-on hold. Edit the red parts-

2/06/2012 - 2/12/2012

(Deddomanzubarēbōru) Dead Man’s Volley
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defensive
Range: N/a
Charka cost: 120
Damage: N/a
Description: More of a skill than an actual technique, Dead Man’s Volley is a “game” forced upon the user and the opponent. When an energy based technique approaches the user, they will focus a large quantity of chakra into their blade and point their sword in the direction of the attack, creating an effect that causes the oncoming jutsu to condense itself into a sphere no larger than four feet across – however, as the jutsu is condensed, there is no loss of power, only area that it affects. However, the drawback to this is that the condensed energy is accelerated towards the user – thus initiating the game. The user can strike the energy sphere with their blade, causing the energy to rebound towards the opponent, also at high speeds; like the user, though, if the opponent has a sword, they can slash the energy orb to redirect it back at the user. The orb of energy can be reflected endlessly, until someone slips up, “losing” the game, and thus becoming the “dead man” as they take the full brunt of the energy sphere.
*The user must have stated in their bio that they know the rules of “Dead Man’s Volley” to be able to use.
*Once activated, this technique lasts the rest of the match; however, there are several stipulations, which are as follows:
[1. Only one technique can be transformed into the “ball” for Dead Man’s Volley in a turn.
[2. While a “ball” remains active until its round is over (that is, until the ball is destroyed), another “ball” cannot be added within five turns of creating one “ball.”
[3. Dead man’s volley must be initiated by the sword-wielder.
[4. The opponent is not required to wield a sword; they may chose to cover their hands in a chakra reflecting the nature of the ball to reflect it if they so chose; likewise, the user can "shield bash" to reflect the ball as well, but cannot use the hand method mentioned above.
[5. Creating a “ball” counts as a move-per-turn, and costs 30 chakra.
[6. The reflecting of the ball does not count as a move-per-turn, as it is an action forced upon both parties.
[7. The ball has the same “power” as the technique that it was created from; therefore, if a ball has 60 power (crafted from an A-rank attack), and is struck by an attack with 61 power (an attack of equal or greater power), the ball is destroyed, and the game is considered a “draw.”
[8. The ball is imbued with the properties of the technique it was created from; if the user failed to volley a ball crafted form a A-rank fire justu and was stuck, they would take the same amount of damage from the ball as the technique used to form the ball would have inflicted.
[9. A “ball” cannot be crafted from a technique whose power exceeds 120 (the chakra required to activate Dead Man's Volley in a match.
[10. With the very first use of Dead Man's Volley, it must be posted as a move, which subtracts the 120 chakra, the 30 chakra required for creating a ball, the move-per-turn of creating a ball, and the move-per-turn of creating a jutsu; therefore, the first time Dead Man's Volley is used in a match, it has a collective chakra cost of 150, and two moves of a turn.
[12. Due to the fact that the “ball” must have an energy-like, or semi-energy-like composition, any technique that is not neutral energy, Lightning, Fire, or a CE combination of the mentioned (again, though, primarily in the form of energy) cannot be crafted into a "ball".

All red changed, shown in bold; removed that it effect Suiton and Fuuton techniques, as well.

±± Declined ±± Hum, were to start. For once, if this is a forbidden rank were are the drawbacks and damage done upon yourself? Also, you need to follow proper template. Forbidden rank cjs are 50-100. And this needs both simplification and also some sort of ritual to activate. Also, were are the restrictions? The ones that truly matter? For this one and in a one shot chance, VM me so we can discuss this better as the idea is simply genius.

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(ZX Basutā) ZX Buster: ZX Buster is style of Taijutsu created by Keotsu after observing both the Gentle Fist and the Strong Fist; both the extremes of the spectrum. The Gentle Fist is a chakra based, “Internal” and “Soft” style, where as the Strong Fist is an “External” and “Hard” Style based on pure physical strength. As such, Keotsu desired to create a style that had both “External” and “Internal” and “Hard” and “Soft” qualities to it, knowing full well that if he mixed the best qualities of both, it wouldn’t excel in each area as the respective extremes did. Other inspiration comes from the concepts of Shape Manipulation and Chakra flow, which is highly evident once the style is seen in action.

Requiring small pieces of chakra metal on the tips of each knuckle and palm, a special type of glove made of chakra metal is generally used to perform this style; this mechanism is often built into the practioners shoes as well, to allow the use of their feet in this style or interesting and unique movements and attacks. The chakra metal helps direct the flow of chakra for this style.

Based upon a concept of utilizing the momentum of a strike, and the fact that those with large chakra reserves have a sort of “aura” around them from natural leakage, this channels that chakra into their movements, creating shapes and items to assist with their attacking; the use of shape manipulation allows for unorthodox techniques to be preformed via this style as well, though these are generally very unique, and detailed jutsu in their own right.

The most common aspect of this style, the free-form fighting, is simply referred to as “Zero Knuckle” or “X Fist,” depending on the practioner. Before impact, the user will gather the chakra and accelerate their chakra flow in the direction the strike is moving, causing masses of chakra to gather which is released as a large burst upon impact with each blow; this results and in a physical blow and a spiritual (chakra) blow striking the enemy at the same time – two strikes in one instance. Unlike the Gentle Fist, this chakra collision doesn’t have any effect on the chakra pathway - it simply penetrates into the enemy’s body, ensuring that some form of damage is received. As such, it was noted that this style was good against those who used Nagashi or Earth Spear as defensive measures to Taijutsu.

The concept of the “One-inch Punch” is built into the style; while the damage from an attack is supposed to be composed of 50% physical damage and 50% chakra, it is possible to change the ratio in vast margins; however, again, this is a jutsu in its own right, and has no adverse effect on the chakra pathway.

Not requiring as large an amount of strength as the Strong Fist, or as Precise chakra control as the Gentle Fist (as this is used to expel moderate, rather than precise amounts of chakra through chakra flow), this style offers a good middle ground, and does still require a user who is strong in body, and skilled in chakra control, as in the high-speed combat that comes with Close-range fighting, being able to manipulate their energies for this style must be second nature. It should be noted, though, that as the physical strength of a practioner increases, the momentum of a blow increases, and thus so does the size and strength of the chakra discharge.

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(Top portion is most important; the gauntlet seen is reduced down to pieces of chakra metal in the actual style)

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±± Approved ±± Genius. looking forward to check the techniques ^^

Just a small question: does the Style Submission (above) count as one of our 35 customs, or only the jutsu created for it?

Same question with actual Summoning Contracts as well. Sorry, but thank you. ^_^

±± I'll say no. Simple matter is that the description and general proposition of the Style is not a technique. Its a ground reference for the techniques you will build upon it. A definition. And, being a definition, it can't count towards the 35 technique limit. Same reasoning applies for the contract ^^ ±±

 

[Typhon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Momoirohigi: Buririanto Panku) | Pink Secret Technique: Brilliant Punk
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This attack utilizes the hard metallic defense of Diamond Jozu and turns it into an offensive attack. The puppeteer controls Jozu by having it move towards the opponent at high speeds with its metallic shingles facing outwards. The puppet smashes into the target causing considerable damage while knocking them back.
-Can be used three times per battle.
-Must be capable of using the Diamond Jozu puppet.

±± Approved ±±


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(Momoirohigi: Daiyamondo Jozu) | Pink Secret Technique: Diamond Jozu

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Type: Puppet
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: Diamond Jozu is a very large humanoid puppet with an empty chest cavity that can hold a puppeteer similar to Sasori's Hiruko. The defensive ability of this puppet comes from it's shingle like armor. One side of the shingles is the typical wooden plating used for most puppets, however the other side is plated with a very shiny metal which has the appearance of diamond when light shines off of it. At any time the puppeteer can flip these shingles exposing their defensive side. These shingles are capable of defending against a limited number of A-rank attacks, and is impervious to B-rank and below attacks. The front chest of the puppet also folds up exposing a moderate sized open window for the puppeteer to see from (can be seen in pic as the greenish chest plate area). This windowed area doesn't contain the metallic shingles and is a point of weakness for the puppet and is vulnerable to all attacks. The typical entrance/exit for this puppet is its back which can be used to quickly abandon it if needed.
-Metal Plating crumbles away after taking one A-ranked attack. S/Forbidden attacks instantly destroy both the armor and the puppet.

(Momoirohigi: Kanchi-sama) | Pink Secret Technique: Lord Canti
Type: Puppet
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (40 for Chakra Cannon)
Damage: N/A (80 for Chakra Cannon)
Description: Lord Canti is a puppet developed by Doflamingo as an offensive compliment to the defensive Diamond Jozu. Lord Canti is a red robotic-humanoid looking puppet that stands slightly taller than most people. Its base weapon is a red guitar with bladed edges which is used for direct melee combat. It also has the capability to use the basic puppetry attacks by releasing kunai, senbon, smoke bombs, etc. from its arms, including the basic chakra shield which opens up from his right arm. Canti can release a strong stream of fire from its grill-like mouth that reaches mid range and is A-rank in power. Canti's most powerful attack is a specialized chakra cannon used to devastate the opponent (submitted as a separate technique).
-All abilities used through Canti count as a move.
-Fire is A-rank, reaches mid-range and can be used three times.
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±± Declined ±± just take away the reference to robotics. No modern tecnology references in the RP. Other than that, its good


(Momoirohigi: Batta-appu) | Pink Secret Technique: Batters Up
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is Lord Canti's most powerful attack. The puppeteer controls Canti and tansforms its body into the shape of a cannon with a long barrel. They charge the puppet with chakra and then fire a condensed ball of chakra at high speeds towards the target. Once the ball hits its target it erupts in a massive blast decimating the target. This can only be used twice per battle due to the strain it puts on the body of the puppet. Due to the structural stress put on the puppet, after the second use it becomes unable to use puppetry techniques above C-rank.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Puppetry techniques above C-rank unusable after the second use.
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±± Declined ±± define the bolded part a bit better. Other than that, although a chakra Canon-like ninjutsu exists, its possible in the logic of the puppets and puppet techniques so rest seems fine.

(Momoirohigi: Kanchi-sama) | Pink Secret Technique: Lord Canti
Type: Puppet
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (40 for Chakra Cannon)
Damage: N/A (80 for Chakra Cannon)
Description: Lord Canti is a puppet developed by Doflamingo as an offensive compliment to the defensive Diamond Jozu. Lord Canti is a red humanoid looking puppet that stands slightly taller than most people. Its base weapon is a red guitar with bladed edges which is used for direct melee combat. It also has the capability to use the basic puppetry attacks by releasing kunai, senbon, smoke bombs, etc. from its arms, including the basic chakra shield which opens up from his right arm. Canti has a stable gas reservoir inside him that he can use to, along with an igniter, release a strong stream of fire from its grill-like mouth that reaches mid range and is A-rank in power. Canti's most powerful attack is a specialized chakra cannon used to devastate the opponent (submitted as a separate technique).
-All abilities used through Canti count as a move.
-Fire is A-rank, reaches mid-range and can be used three times.
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(Momoirohigi: Batta-appu) | Pink Secret Technique: Batters Up
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is Lord Canti's most powerful attack. The puppeteer controls Canti and tansforms its body into the shape of a cannon with a long barrel. They charge the puppet with chakra and then fire a condensed ball of chakra at high speeds towards the target. Once the ball hits its target it erupts in a massive blast decimating the target. This blast reaches mid range in all directions from its epicenter leaving a large crater in its place. Because of this the puppeteer must be careful where they fire it, or else they risk being consumed in the explosion as well. This can only be used twice per battle due to the strain it puts on the body of the puppet. Due to the structural stress put on the puppet, after the second use it becomes unable to use puppetry techniques above C-rank.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Puppetry techniques above C-rank unusable after the second use.
-In the turn used, the user can't be controlling other puppets.
-User can't perform S-Rank and above Regular Ninjutsu in the same and following turn.
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Clarified the size on the blast.

±± Both Approved ±± Edited the origin of fire in the first one and added some more restrictions to the second one otherwise i'd have to reduce the blast to spanning short range around.

 

[-Blade-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom weapon: Companion
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Descriptions:A huge halberd with the ability to utilize many elements it is also unbreakable, the sword can also have elemental chakra placed into it just like any other weapon but this one is especially fond of Lightning, it can also shoot up to A Rank Bolts to long range
-each bolt counts as 1 of the users 3 moves
-only Blade Hyuga and anyone with permission can use it

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±± Declined ±± Many similar swords exist.

Dragon Thunder (Ryuraisen)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra cost:30
Damage:60
Descriptions: The user is able to summon a thunderstorm and manipulate the lightning creating a lethal electric bolt that nearly kills whoever it touches although it doesnt kill the person struck will be left paralyzed. The attack cannot be fully controlled, and random bolts hit randomly around the user(Each person will state a number then ask a MUTUAL JUDGE to think of a number 1-100 if the opponent is closer the user is striken along with the enemy by a bolt no questions asked).
-Must have Companion sword
-User is limited to B rank lightning after this

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±± Declined ±± Love the idea of the bolded part but its impractical in our RP.Also many thunderstorm CJs exist.

Homing Hatred Ball(Gojou Tama)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: short-long
Chakra cost:40
Damage: 80
Descriptions: Companions most powerful attack. The user must chanel all of his fire and lightning chakra and wait 2 full turns(user, opponent, user, opponent, Hatred ball) during which no fire nor lightning moves may be used before firing. The hatred built inside the halberd combined with the power of fire, and lightning in Companion creates a huge and powerful ball of swirling anger, lightning and fire which homes in on the opponent and follows them so long as the user has seen them prior to firing.
-Must master fire and lightning for this
-User is unable to use any fire and lightning elements for 5 turns
-To begin chanelling the chakra into Companion takes one of the users three turns
-Charging must go uninterrupted(Companion cannot be stricken nor seperrated from the user) to work successfully
-If interrupted the opponent chooses between Fire and Lightning that element cant be used for 3 turns

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±± Declined ±± This is both overpowered and badly described. Reformulate.

PLEASE EDIT IF NECESSARY

 

[Lord of Kaos.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Earth Style: Small Cutters(Doton: Kogata kattā)
Rank: A
Range: All at the same time
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: near nothing
Description: The user does 3 hand-seals and slams his hand into the ground. His chakra quickly travels through the surface of the earth and covers the entire field. Then the user makes small pieces of earth come out of the ground(4mm^3). One attacks the opponent making a small flesh wound on his/her skin(deals as little damage as a bee sting). Then the small piece of earth with the opponents blood comes back to the user's hand. The user can create multiple earth pieces come and hit multiple opponents, no more then 1 piece can hit 1 target. The user can make pieces all around the opponent to hit him/her if he/she tries to escape. The main reason for this attack would be to draw out blood and get a sample so a summon with a sensitive nose can track the opponent.
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*The attack doesn't disperse clones
*Hidan bios and bios with blood CE can't use this jutsu

±± Declined ±± The idea is quite interesting but you need to make sure the tiny earth particles are somewhat visible. At that size they aren't. And, you wouldn't need Blood to trrack someone. Only something with the enemy's smell.

Earth Style: Small Cutters(Doton: Kogata kattā)
Rank: A
Range: All at the same time
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: near nothing
Description: The user does 3 hand-seals and slams his hand into the ground. His chakra quickly travels through the surface of the earth and covers the entire field. Then the user makes small pieces of earth come out of the ground(4cm^3). They glow blue because of the users chakra infused within the earth. One attacks the opponent making a small flesh wound on his/her skin(deals as little damage as a bee sting). Then the small piece of earth with the opponents blood comes back to the user's hand. The user can create multiple earth pieces come and hit multiple opponents, no more then 1 piece can hit 1 target. The user can make pieces all around the opponent to hit him/her if he/she tries to escape. The main reason for this attack would be to draw out blood and get a sample so a summon with a sensitive nose can track the opponent. Also the user can use this on his/herself to inflict pain and escape weak genjutsu. (only D-rank)
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*The attack doesn't disperse clones
*Hidan bios and bios with blood CE can't use this jutsu

~Resubmitting~ Added the bold parts. Also some carnivore like custom summons are made to be able to track blood only so this jutsu would help them. Also thought up the part about dispelling weak genjutsu.

±± Approved ±±


Fake Laser Jutsu(Nise rēzā Ninjutsu)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:25
Damage: near non(small burn)
Description:This jutsu's power is how easily it's made. By itself it needs no hand-seals and requires bare minimum focus on the user's part. The effect of the jutsu is simple too. It makes the users eyes glow bright allowing the user to fire a chakra laser from them. This chakra laser is weak and potentially harmless. It can make small burns as much as a lighter. It is hard to pinpoint at the beginning so the user has to start his laser around the opponent but quickly after the user can control and pinpoint the laser with high accuracy.. It can be used to leave markings for allies or other bodies. However it's main purpose is to be a distraction. Because of the simple nature of the technique it can be used in conjunction with almost any other jutsu.(all except forbidden rank and super powerful S-rank such as FRS, susanoo etc) If used with an other jutsu the user does the required amount of hand-seals for the other jutsu. Afterwards the user gathers the required chakra for the other jutsu and then uses the other jutsu while shooting the laser from his eye. The opponent can still see the other jutsu if it's visible. Therefore this jutsu is best used to set hard to detect traps and not make the opponent suspicious with the hand-seals and the chakra gathering.
*can only be used 3 times per battle
*can't be used along side doijutsu or any other jutsu that has something to do with the eye
*the user can't use doijutsu for 3 turns after this
*this jutsu will not work if the user has any eye gear on
*since the user needs no elemental chakra for this jutsu so yin/yang mastery isn't needed to use

±± Declined ±± similar technique already exists.

Lightning Root Blast(raiton: no rūtoburasuto)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: All at once
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After doing 5 hand-seals the user raises and slams hit foot to the ground. From his leg lightning chakra starts to go down into the ground. Lines of lightning come and race through the ground. It expands forming multiple branches from each line. Soon after smaller branches come from the big branches until the lightning covers the entire battlefield. The lightning looks like the roots of a gigantic tree. Upon impact the lightning paralyses the opponent and damages them slightly. Then a small lightning bullet shoots at the sky from where the opponent was hit alerting the user of the opponents location.(the can understand how deep the opponent is in the earth by the size of the bullet{weaker the bullet the deeper the opponent is since the bullet would lose power as it went through more earth)
*can only be used twice per battle
*can't be used on the same turn as another lightning jutsu

±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Too overpowered and too many abilities cramped inside the same technique.

 

[Vayne]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom weapon : Red Lanterns Ring (レッドランタンリング Reddorantanringu)
Rank:B
Range:Self
Chakra cost:None
Description:The user wears his ring this ring dosn't affect the opponent it just increases the mental state of the user making him feel relaxed and concentrated,putting him in a mood ready for fighting (like a placebo) which leads to increasing the powers of his attack by 15 percent.
Restrictions.
-can only be used by mangekyo byakugan.
-lasts for 2 turns
-can only be used 2 times per battle.
-must be separated by a 1 turn interval between each use.
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±± Declined ±± Bolded part is unrealistic in our RP.

Fire release: Fire Retriever(火災リリース：火·レトリーバーKasai rirīsu: Hi· retorībā).
Rank:A
Type:Attck/defense
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage:60
Discreption:The user uses his for element to create a dog shaped animal which is twice the size of a human,that dog attacks the opponent with great power burning the opponent if it touches him/her it also affects non living things by leaving a small burn on it.
Restrictions.
-can only be used three times per battle.
-needs a turn interval between each use.
-can only be used by mangekyo byakugan.

±± Declined ±± Similar technique exists.

Ninja arts: temporary insanity(忍者芸術：一時的な狂気 Ninja geijutsu: Ichiji-tekina kyōki)
Rank:A
Type:supplementary.
Range:Self
Chakra cost:30
Damage:N/A
Discreption:the user focuses chakra into his body then performs the following hand seals (Sheep-->Ox-->Dragon-->Tiger) this allows the user to gain temporary insanity making his moves unpredictable and uncopiable.
Restrictions.
-can only be used by mangekyo byakugan.
-lasts 1 turn.
-can only be used twice per battle.
-must be separated by a one turn interval between uses
-counts as one jutsu the following turn.
-sharingan can not predict it's movements except EMS
-the user gets this printed on his head

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±± Declined ±± Do you have ninjtusu training up to said rank? Even if you had this is similar to existing taijutsu styles and becoming insane would make you lose grasp on your actions and such you'd become unable to fight.

Also, Kanji form names are not necessary. Use only Romanji form.

 

[LolaxXx]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Ringdisks- Double Zero
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: It was created by a legendary blacksmith in a foreign land. Using the wielder's chakra and blood as ingredients amongst other things. This weapon will only activate if the user is holding it and by their chakra. Otherwise, It appears as just two large disks worn on the users hips. Each disk has blades around its edge, except where the handles are, and a large center in the middle. The user can use these disks in close range, or can throw them, allowing their sharp blades to cut through the air. The user can guide the disks back to them using their chakra. They also are engraved with a special seal which allows them to perform their special ability.
*Can only be used by the original owner
*Can control them to attack from a distance, but cannot perform jutsu while controlling the disks UNLESS using the disk's ability.

±± Approved ±±

Ringdisk Jutsu: Lightning Rain (Raikou Ame)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: By using their chakra, the user activates their Ringdisk's ability. Upon the user activating their chakra, the ring(s) begin to spin facing the target. The seals then activate, They then fire off rapid and multiple shots of small concentrated lightning blasts the size of Kunai that spread at the opponent. The attack covers a wide range 20feet in a circle. The speed at which the blasts come are very fast, when fired all that can be seen are blue streaks. The speed and power that the lightning contains allow them to pierce through rock with ease. They can penetrate through walls of water (within reason), but can easily be nullified by wind. If used in close range, the attack is nearly inescapable.
*Jutsu can only be used once per Disk.
*Can't use Lightning above A-Rank in the same and next turn

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Lightning Release: Lightning Transportation (Raikou koutsuu)
Rank: A
Type: Supplementy/ Defense
Range: Close
Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user sends their lightning chakra into the sky. They then create a large lightning bolt made from their own chakra that comes down and strikes them, as it hits them, the user directs the lightning in another direction and as the lightning moves, the user, using their chakra, can move through the lightning as well, allowing them to quickly dodge incoming attacks at extremely fast speeds. Also, if the enemy is too close, they can get get shocked by the lightning, while the shock isn't lethal, it can still cause numbness and temporary paralysis to opponents who are too close. Due to the speed of the technique, the user has a hard time seeing where they will land, and can be hurt by not knowing when they will land, causing them to crash hard, or possibly falling victim to some kind of counter. The speed is so great, user needs at least a 2T Sharingan to see the movement to prevent themselves from crashing.
*can only be used once per turn
*Sharingan 2T can keep up with the speed.

±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. OP

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[-Albel-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Hando Meiun) Lightning Style: Hand of Doom
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-A
Range: Short
Chakra: 40-30
Damage: 80-60
Description: The user runs towards the enemy and grabs any part of their body with his right hand. Once he has taken hold of the person he then channels lightning chakra through his hand and into the body part that has been taken hold of. When the lightning enters the desired part of the body it will be electrified and paralized. Now depending on how much lightning is sent into the disired part of the body it will either become paralized(A-rank) or fried to a crisp(S-rank) disabling the body part permentaly.
Note: Can only be taught and used by AlbelTheWicked and whom he allows
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: The part that has been paralized will remain paralized for 4 turns.
Note: Can not use any lightning jutsus for the next 2 turns
|Declined, similar techniques exists and can be done via existing cannon jutsu

Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Gull Maru sono genkaku) Summoning Technique: Gull Zero The Illusionist
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals, Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram or wiping blood on the summoning tattoo on the right arm the user summons the male gull, Zero. He is the son of the Gull queen and Gull King. Zero is a very entergetic gull who loves to fight any fights that he is summoned in. Even though he is hyper Zero is also very intellectual which makes him very reliable in fights. Zero is a white, black, and greyish feathered looking gull and is about the same size as Sasuke's Hawk which only allows him to carry one person on his back. Zero is able to fly at fast speeds and has mastered genjutsu. He is able to use all genjutsu techniques execpt for forbidden ones.
Note:May only be used and taught by AlbelTheWicked and whom he allows
Note:Once summoned, Zero stays on the field for 4 turns, and can only be summoned twice per battle.
Note:Must have signed the Gull contract.
Note:Every move Zero uses counts as the users move.

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Name: (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Gull Maru sono genkaku) Summoning Technique: Gull Zero The Illusionist
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:After preforming the necessary hand seals, Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram or wiping blood on the summoning tattoo on the right arm the user summons the male gull, Zero. He is the son of the Gull queen and Gull King. Zero is a very entergetic gull who loves to fight any fights that he is summoned in. Even though he is hyper Zero is also very intellectual which makes him very reliable in fights. Zero is a white, black, and greyish feathered looking gull and is about the same size as Sasuke's Hawk which only allows him to carry one person on his back. Zero is able to fly at fast speeds and has mastered genjutsu, but he cannot use them without hand seals.His feathers are designed so they resemble fingers,thus allowing him to preform hand seals. He is able to use all genjutsu techniques execpt for forbidden ones.
Note:May only be used and taught by AlbelTheWicked and whom he allows
Note:Once summoned, Zero stays on the field for 4 turns, and can only be summoned once per battle.
Note:Must have signed the Gull contract.
Note:Every move Zero uses counts as the users move.

±± Approved ±± Edited number of times it can be summoned.
*Resubmitting, added in the handseals to allow him to use the Genjutsu techniques.

 

[Kato.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Gishu Vulcan) - Vulcan's Hand

Rank A
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Vulcan's Hand is a long thin blade made of a mixture of infused chakra metals, that can absorb the users Katon chakra. Vulcan's Hand has a thin Katon chakra coating which makes everything that the blade strikes smoulder or if the user of this blade has pumped more Katon chakra into it it will incinerate everything it strikes.

The blade looks like this but with a faint red glow around it.

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Note: This sword can only be used by Kato Rokuemon or anyone I allow to use it.

±± Declined ±± Look at the bolded. OP. similar swords exist you know?

(Kasei Sashimibouchou) - Slicing Flames

Rank : B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user pumps Katon chakra into his sword (Vulcan's Hand), the sword then begins to glow a bright red, The user then slashes at the air releasing all the chakra that had been pumped into the sword.

Note: this can only be used with Vulcan's Hand.

±± Declined ±± Vulcan's hand wasn't approved.

*Resubmitting - took out the incinerating bit

(Gishu Vulcan) - Vulcan's Hand

Rank A
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Vulcan's Hand is a long thin blade made of a mixture of infused chakra metals, that can absorb the users Katon chakra. Vulcan's Hand has the ability to heat itself up allowing it deliver burn wounds and deep cuts in its targets. This ability is A-Rank.

The blade looks like this but with a faint red glow around it.

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Note - Can only be used by Kato Rokuemon

±± Approved ±± Had to edit it a bit so its approvable.

 

[~Light~]

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(Hyōton: Kōri Dōbutsu Sōshi) - Ice Release: Ice Animals Creation
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 [+10 to manipulate the animals movements]
Damage Points: N/A [60 if used as an attack or defense]
Description: This technique is an advanced Hyōton technique that's used like Sai's ink ninjutsu techniques but with the usage of the Hyōton chakra, by changing the moist in the air or adding Hyōton chakra to form transparent animals made out of the structures of the Ice release, the user can form the shape of various animals of Ice and have them to perform tasks like animals that crawl and wrap around the opponent binding them, flying animals that can be used to fly on top of it, large structured animals that can be used to defend from incoming attacks, or powerful animals that can cause blunt damage to the opponent. these animals are transparent and the user can see through them but not a clear vision, due to the Ice's structure the user's vision is distored when he's looking through them, the user is able to manipulate the animals movements through the usage of his chakra but he can't manipulate and change their shape once he finished forming them.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: Only a fixed number of 4 animals can be formed at a time if the animals created are earth based animals "doesn't have wings"
Note: The user can only form 2 flying animals of Ice, each animal can hold one person on his head.
Note: The Ice animals last for 2 turns.
Note: No Ice release techniques higher than A-rank for the next turn.

±± Declined ±± how big can these animals be? at what distance from the user can they be created?

(Hyōton: Kōri Dōbutsu Sōshi) - Ice Release: Ice Animals Creation
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 [+10 to manipulate the animals movements]
Damage Points: N/A [+60 if used as an attack or defense]
Description: This technique is an advanced Hyōton technique that's used like Sai's ink ninjutsu techniques but with the usage of the Hyōton chakra, by changing the moist in the air or adding Hyōton chakra to form transparent animals made out of the structures of the Ice release, the user can form the shape of various animals of Ice and have them to perform tasks like animals that crawl and wrap around the opponent binding them, flying animals that can be used to fly on top of it, large structured animals that can be used to defend from incoming attacks, or powerful animals that can cause blunt damage to the opponent. these animals are transparent and the user can see through them but not a clear vision, due to the Ice's structure the user's vision is distored when he's looking through them, the user is able to manipulate the animals movements through the usage of his chakra but he can't manipulate and change their shape once he finished forming them.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: Only a fixed number of 4 animals can be formed at a time if the animals created are earth based animals "doesn't have wings"
Note: The user can only form 1 flying animal of Ice at a time, that can hold up to 2 persons on his head.
Note: The size of the Ice animals can only be as big as Sai's ink animals.
Note: The Ice animals can be formed at a Short range distance from the user.
Note: The Ice animals last for 2 turns.
Note: No Ice release techniques higher than A-rank for the next turn.

±± Approved ±±

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(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Vasuki) - Summoning Technique: Vasuki
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+20 to A-rank and below fire techniques)
Description: The user bites his thumb wiping blood over a tattoo that's located on their wrists, summoning Vasuki the Queen of the Damselflies, Vasuki has a bloody red color over here entire body with a pitch black color down length of her body exactly at the center and has faint red colored wings which are parallel to her body, Vasuki is considered the largest Damselfly in size as she is half the size of Gamabunta, Vasuki has a great ability in the usage of fire techniques and can use all fire techniques up to S-rank without the usage of handseals, Vasuki has a distinct technique which is produced by her strong large wings, as she injects her wings with fire chakra creating a vortex of fire to race at the direction of the opponent at fast speeds, this fire vortex is swung at the target in an arc that the tip of the vortex is facing the target, the fire vortex counts as an A-ranked fire technique and has the size of the earth and stone dragon technique, Vasuki has a unique ability granted by her mastery of the fire release techniques, in which includes using more chakra when using fire techniques more than the technique requires, allowing her to boost fire techniques with an additional +20 damage points added to the fire technique, but this is only limited to fire techniques of A-rank and below, once per battle Vasuki can transfer some of her own fire chakra to the user, allowing him to boost the next fire technique that he uses with an additional +20 damage points, but this ability drains her chakra, making her only able to use fire techniques up to A-rank only and cannot boost their power any further meaning she loses the +20 damage boost to fire techniques.
Note: Can only be summoned once.
Note: Vasuki lasts a period of 5 turns.
Note: Vasuki's ability to transfer fire techniques to the user counts as a move.
Note: The fire vortex can only be used twice per battle and counts as a move.
Note: Must have signed the Damselfly contract.

±± Declined ±± OP. you know better than to submit these OP techniques.

(Damselfly Kadou No Jutsu) - Damselfly Crushing Vortex Technique
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This is a ninjutsu technique in which the user summons millions of normal sized Damselflies around the opponent, taking a vortex formation around the opponent when they are summoned as they all wrap around the opponent both acting as a means of distraction and attack, due to the large number of the Damselflies the opponent's vision will be completely blinded, as the Damselflies are summoned they all gather around the opponent like a coffin building pressure in order to crush the opponent in between them.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: Must have signed the Damselfly contract

±± Pending ±± Do you have valid Ninjutsu training? Regular one?

 

[BusinessManTeno]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~~~~~Updating My Boss Summon~~~~~~

Summoning Technique: (souseiki harinezumi) Phaze
Rank- S
Range-Long
Chakra Cost-40
Chakra Damage-80
Description- The user cuts his palm till blood drips. Once that he then does 5 hand seals and palms the ground. Once the user palms the ground Phaze (My summon) Appears in mid air above me circling me. Phaze Speaclizes in S rank Water. Phaze Can use the water in his body as a water source. (Ones that do not require a huge water source). The Water jutsus that Require handseals, The user does the Tiger handseal. And that count as the handseals. (S rank have to do Boar>Tiger). And can Travel at the speed of 80mph.Phaze Beak is Incredibly Strong. And Long.This summon is the same size as Sauske Hawk. so easy rideable. This summon can also talkk, so just incase a situation happen.

-Only can stay for 4 turns
-User Cant Use any earth jutsus while summon is active
-Can use Once
-All techniques used by Phaze count toward the user's 3 moves
-The summon can only use up to S-rank earth techniques
-Can only be Taught by Ten-Zero

(Ragnorok Said it was ok for me to update and change my summon affinity. it was earth before. Nothing changed overall about his abilities)

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±± Pending ±± That link is for the contract. You say you are updating your bird so i need you to quote the technique were you posted the bird and bold the changes you made to it in your submission. Resubmit fulfilling that.

~~~~~ Resubmitting ~~~~~

Jisei sutairu:Jisei Electrons
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Chakra Damage:40(Not really an attack jutsu)
Description: The User does 3handseals, then send their Chakra filled with magnetic energy through the ground towards the opponent. The magnetic energy will then react to the opponent electrons in their body very harshly. Causing the electrons in the opponent body to spin rapidly out of control causing the electrons in the opponent body to to explode and stop overall. Making the opponent not able to send messages to the brain. Meaning the opponent can not move nor react to a jutsu. NOTE. This is NOT a genjutsu

-Can only use once-
-Cant Use any Genjutsu throughout the whole battle if this is used-
-Cant Use Any Ninjutsu for 3turns-
-After The use of this. User cant use any Magnetism For 2turns-
-Only Usable by Teno

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±± Declined ±± I can't believe this is the first time i'm going to actually said this but overpowered and unrealistic. To create such a magnetic field would be practically impossible. And, if your stop the electrons in the enemies body, thats not what happens... Its more like, you know...BOOM? Dematerialization? One more chance to make this work although its not salvageable in my opinion. And one more time...use proper template.

Jisei sutairu:Jisei Electrons- Magnetism Release: Magnetism Electrons

Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Chakra Damage:60
Description: The User does 3handseals, Then touches the ground. Sending a small wave of their magnetism chakra through the ground..Once it reaches under the user[/B].The magnetic energy will then react to the opponent electrons in their body very harshly. Causing the electrons in the opponent body to spin rapidly out of control Causing the electrons in the body to explode and demateralize. Making the opponent not able to send messages to the brain. Meaning the opponent can not move nor react to a jutsu If not already dead.. NOTE. This is NOT a genjutsu

-Can only use once-
-Cant use genjutsu for 3turns
-Cant Use Any Ninjutsu for 3turns-
-Only Usable by Teno

±± Declined ±± Overpowered and unrealistic. Do not resubmit.

~~~~~~~New Submission~~~~~~~

Doton:chippoke tamaishi- Earth Style: Tiny Pebbles
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Chakra Damage:80
Description: The user focuses his chakra into his dominant leg. He then stomps the ground. A piece of rock (The size of a boulder) Not big enough for the user to not see pass it Emerges in front of him/her. Once it emerges from the ground the user then does 3 handseals ending with the tiger. The boulder then starts to break off into pebble size pieces. The user then directs the Earth pebbles using his chakra and aim them at the opponent. The pebbles go at a very fast pace so its hard enough to pierce the opponent. The pebbles don't all break off at the same time , So it last about 3-4 Seconds.

-Note: Can only use this once
-Note: Cant Use Earth for the next turn after use
-Note: Cant Use Any S Rank for one turn
-Note: Hands must stay in the tiger position for it to continue
-Note: Only Usable by Teno757

±± Declined ±± Similar technique exist in both earth, ninjutsu and even other elements.

 

[The Doctor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kyotōryū taijutsu (Kyotōryū Martial Arts): Kyotōryū is a style of Martial Arts in which the practitioner trains for many years in order to harden their body to be like that of a sword. Sometimes referred to as "Swordless Kenjutsu" the practitioner relies on extremely fast, and strong strikes, which can literally, cut the opponent. The practitioner, through his training, learned how to use basic energy, Chakra and wind resistance (Not wind chakra), to do the maximum amount of damage to the opponent. The practitioner tries to gain a large amount of momentum extremely quickly, even in extremely closed situations. The practitioner also uses chakra, in order to gain more momentum, and add force to his strikes. It could be considered in the middle of the spectrum between the gentle fist, and the strong fist. The gentle fist utilizes 100% technique, while the strong fist utilizes 100% raw strength. This combines principles from both, using chakra to attack the opponent, while also putting extreme amounts of force, effectively utilizing 50% technique, and 50% raw power. One could call it the "Medium fist" as well.

Kyotōryū taijutsu: Fuugetsu
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user begins running at his opponent at extremely high speeds, with his arms behind him extended, collecting wind. He gains more and more momentum, and, upon reaching the opponent, he extends his palm, dragging the wind with his palm, and slams his palm into the opponent. The extreme momentum plus the wind gathered with his hand does massive amounts of damage to the opponent. The wind pushes the opponent across the battlefield, while releasing into the air behind him, blowing anything behind him back. (Note: This does not apply to humans. However, grass, swords and other ninja tools will be blown back.)

What it should look like: Note: Blue is wind.

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Kyotōryū taijutsu: Chrysanthemum
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: C
Range: Short: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 30
Description: Draws/catches the opponent's weapon between the user's back and arms, and forces it forwards, snapping/breaking it. Primarily a sword-breaking technique, though is capable of breaking limbs and other tools as well within reason.

Note to mods: Should look something like this

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||Both Declined|| I like the idea, but you need to associate a chakra cost with both techniques, as chakra is necessary to help the user gain some momentum, as you stated.

 

[Mockingbird]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuuinjutsu:Konshi Kakusan Hōgō)- Sealing Technique: Soul Thread Diffusion Sutures
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A-S
Range: Short (Short-Long)
Chakra points:30-40
Damage points:N/A
Description:In the A Rank variation of the technique, the user places a seal on the intended target. Upon placing the seal, the users chakra is injected into the opponent. Then, using very careful chakra manipulation, the user controls the injected chakra, causing it to rise to the surface of the skin and stick to any surface locking their movements and leaving them open for attacks.

The S Rank variation of the technique is much more advanced. The chakra residue permeates throughout the victim to such an extent, that the stitches can act internally as well as sticking them to a surface. Due to this effect, the entirety of the body's nerves are sealed by the various stitches, completely negating any opportunity for the opponent to preform movement. This variation takes on the appearance of large stitches spanning the victims entire body.

~The A Ranked variation can only be used 3 times per battle.
~The S Ranked variation can only be used 2 times per battle.
~Can only be taught by Jakey
~In order to place the seal, the user must first have come into contact with the enemy at some point. Afterwards, the technique can be activated from any range, from Short-Long.

±± Declined ±± S-Rank fuuin. Do you have mastery over fuuin...medical included? No fuuin above A-Rank can be submitted except for those with special fuuin training. You are a medical student thus you know this.

(Genjutsu: Donna Ko_tan Shita za Shin Beniya of Do_ri? Kaosu ando Hakkyo)-Illusion Technique: What Lies Beneath the Thin Veneer of Reason? Chaos and Madness
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This Genjutsu is one of the most efficient in history, created after several years of studying various powerful Genjutsu users. The user places the opponent under the influence of an illusion, where they begin to experience various psychological and hallucinatory effects. These psychological effects greatly vary from person to person, depending on factors such as previous experiences, state of mind and environment. Some psychological effects may include an experience of radiant colors, objects and surfaces appearing to ripple or "breathe", colored patterns behind the closed eyelids (eidetic imagery), crawling geometric patterns overlaying walls and other objects, morphing objects, a sense that one's thoughts are spiraling into themselves, loss of a sense of identity or the ego (known as "ego death"), and other powerful psycho-physical reactions. Many people will begin experience a dissolution between themselves and the "outside world". If the afflicted is in a hostile or otherwise unsettling environment, or is not mentally prepared for the powerful distortions in perception and thought that the technique causes, effects are more likely to be unpleasant than if he or she is in a comfortable environment and has a relaxed, balanced and open mindset. These effects however all begin with loss of perception, and huge cognitive shifts. The true power of this Genjutsu lies within it's lingering effects even after the illusion is broken. Due to the overwhelming experience on the mind, the opponent will be subject re-experience their "trip" throughout the following turns, despite no longer being under the influence of the illusion. This results in a lag in the opponents mind of a few seconds before they can actually concentrate hard enough to react accordingly to perform techniques and properly mold chakra. All that is required for the technique to be initiated is sight of the opponent from the waist up.
~Can only be used once
~Cannot use Genjutsu for the next turn, and can only use A Rank and below Genjutsu the next two turns afterwards.
~Can only use B Rank and below Taijutsu next turn.
~The effects of the Genjutsu remain for the following 2 turns after usage.

±± Declined ±± Excellently worded and constructed. Now, no Long range genjutsu. Why would using this prevent you from using taijutsu? I've stated before: no useless illogical restrictions just to get the technique approved. Also, the bolded part isn't right. Remember that the things the enemy's sees and experiences are illusions. So, once the genjutsu is released, nothing is left. The person's chakra is reset to normal and the effects of the illusion disperse.

(Fuuton:Gokei)-Wind Release: Mawscape
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra points:40
Damage points:80
Description:This jutsu requires the utmost chakra control to perform. It begins with the user releasing large amounts of Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding the intended target. This chakra then materializes and takes the form of innumerable wind blades in the form of Sakura Flower Petals (Just like Wind Release: Flower Scattering Dance) The countless wind blades swirl around the opponent on all sides, surrounding them like a heavy cloud looming low over the ground engulfing everything in its path. The flower petals then converge on the opponent in the center of the technique, leaving no blind spots or possibility of escape once the technique has been initiated. It then proceeds to collapse in on itself, obliterating the opponent inside, due to the countless razor like "flower" blades cutting deep into the flesh.
~Can only be used twice
~Cannot be used two turns consecutively
~Can only use B Rank and below Wind techniques next turn.

±± Declined ±± Make it mid range. Make the blades clearly visible. Other than that is ok. Note that this technique would take some time as the chakra pools and surround the enemy and before it actually slashes him.

Resubmitting. @Bold: Anything that was edited.
Text in the Violet color is information regarding anything that was edited.

(Genjutsu: Donna Ko_tan Shita za Shin Beniya of Do_ri? Kaosu ando Hakkyo)-Illusion Technique: What Lies Beneath the Thin Veneer of Reason? Chaos and Madness
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This Genjutsu is one of the most efficient in history, created after several years of studying various powerful Genjutsu users. The user begins by placing the opponent under the influence of an illusion, where they dream they are falling off a huge cliff face, and continue to fall forever; meanwhile in actuality, they are merely dreaming, and their body is asleep. However, the true power of this jutsu comes with its secondary effects. While the opponent is asleep, the user manipulates the flow of chakra in the targets cerebral nervous system, causing the body to unnecessarily begin to produce large amounts of DMT because the target is dreaming. While usually the powerful Hallucinogenic properties of DMT are negated by MAOI (monoamine oxidase), if a large enough dose is produced, and reaches the brain before it can be metabolized by MAOI, the person will be subject to powerful hallucinations beyond their control. After this secondary process is complete, the Genjutsu is automatically cancelled out, and the afflicted person wakes up. This leaves the DMT to take its effect once it reaches the brain. Some psychological effects may include an experience of radiant colors, objects and surfaces appearing to ripple or "breathe", colored patterns behind the closed eyelids (eidetic imagery), crawling geometric patterns overlaying walls and other objects, morphing objects, a sense that one's thoughts are spiraling into themselves, loss of a sense of identity or the ego (known as "ego death"), and other powerful psycho-physical reactions. Many people will begin experience a dissolution between themselves and the "outside world." These strong hallucinations are also accompanied by seeing imaginary objects that aren't really there. Because the drug is all natural, and not "manifested" by the Genjutsu itself, the effects last a much longer time than any ordinary Genjutsu making it highly effective against affected targets (In reality, a dose like this would last around 3 minutes), this leaves the affected target subject to powerful illusions for a while, and unable to properly mould chakra and react accordingly to things going on in reality. All that is required to activate this Genjutsu is sight of the opponent from the waist up.

~Can only be used once
~Cannot use Genjutsu for the next turn, and can only use A Rank and below Genjutsu the next two turns afterwards.
~The effects of the Genjutsu (DMT) remain for the following 2 turns after usage.
~Note:(DMT/Dimethyltryptamine: is a naturally occurring psychedelic compound of the tryptamine family. Trace elements can be found in mammals and Humans produced by an enzyme during metabolism. Metabolism, as you are aware occurs actively while you sleep as well as while you are awake. This drug, is basically what makes you dream at night and the body naturally produces it.)

Since Genjutsu revolve around manipulating the cerbral nervous system to cause illusionary pain to a target, me manipulating that part of the Brain to make it "believe" that it needs to produce more DMT should also be possible.

||Declined|| If this ability is activated by sight of the opponent from the waist up, it should be short range.

(Fuuton:Gokei)-Wind Release: Mawscape
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra points:40
Damage points:80
Description:This jutsu requires the utmost chakra control to perform, and the user begins by performing three handseals to imbue their chakra into the air first. It begins with the user releasing large amounts of Fuuton chakra into the air surrounding the intended target. This chakra then materializes and takes the form of innumerable wind blades in the form of Sakura Flower Petals (Just like Wind Release: Flower Scattering Dance) The countless wind blades swirl around the opponent on all sides, surrounding them like a heavy cloud looming low over the ground engulfing everything in its path. Over the course of a few seconds,The flower petals then converge on the opponent in the center of the technique, leaving no blind spots or possibility of escape once the technique has been initiated. It then proceeds to collapse in on itself, obliterating the opponent inside, due to the countless razor like "flower" blades cutting deep into the flesh.
~Can only be used twice
~Cannot be used two turns consecutively
~Can only use B Rank and below Wind techniques next turn.

For the Wind Technique, the blades of wind are already clearly visible as Sakura Petals, exactly like how the technique Wind Release: Flower Scattering Dance looks.

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(Raiton:Anko Endo Tsutomaranai Debiru)-Lightning Release:An End Un-Befitting Satan
Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Mid/Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:100 (-30 to user)
Description:A powerful lightning jutsu that begins with the user releasing large quantities of Raiton chakra from every pore on the body. The lightning builds around the user's body until the point when the lightning is vibrating at such astounding frequencies that it actually emits sound waves which can be sufficiently heard by an opponent. After gathering up enough chakra, the user focuses it all towards the hands and releases the chakra in one of two forms; The first being a powerful ray of lightning shot away at a single location from the hands resulting in a small electrical explosion as the lightning overwhelms its target. The second variation is when the user releases the energy in the form of a reverberating wave of energy and powerful electrical waves that severely damage anything caught within range (This variation extends only up to Mid Range). Both variations are extremely powerful, and on contact can fry an opponent to the bone. The sound waves that are released by the technique can be manipulated to sound somewhat like a "musical beat" in order to lull the opponent into a secondary sound based Genjutsu. In this Genjutsu the opponent imagines being sat down and bound to a wooden chair waiting for their execution. Soon after before they can escape the the illusion, they are shocked full of lightning simulating their death in the electric chair. This Genjutsu can be cast upon all who hear it (Other than the user of course).
~Can only be used once
~As a result of the jutsu, the user experiences electric burns to the skin and takes 30 damage themselves from using the technique.
~Can only use B Rank and below Raiton jutsu the following turn. Ban only use A Rank and below Raiton jutsu the turn after that.
~Can only be taught by Jakey
||Declined|| Too many effects in one technique. Break it down into segments or make separate techniques. This is currently just 3 jutsu in one.

 

[Korra.]

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[Suiton : Sōdaina mizu no Fenikkusu ] - Water Release : Grand Water Phoenix
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A more advance version of Johninto's original water phoenix the user will focus all their suiton chakra into the sky. When they have enough chakra in the sky they start to crate a giant phoenix that is the half the size of Gamabunta. When the phoenix is form it will explode into a large barrage of mini phoenixes that are the size of Abumanre bugs and will come down onto the opponent with such great force that even if they were underground the phoenixes would still break through and do major damage. Since the phoenixes are made up of the user chakra they will remain unharmed.
Note:Can only be used once in a battle
Note: Cannot use any water jutsus for the next turn
Note: It takes a jutsu move to form unless its already raining.
Note: Has to be taught by Johninto Uchiha
Declined, reduce the destructiveness such as removing the striking underground and still doing major damage

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[Suiton : Sōdaina mizu no Fenikkusu ] - Water Release : Grand Water Phoenix
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A more advance version of Johninto's original water phoenix the user will focus all their suiton chakra into the sky. When they have enough chakra in the sky they start to crate a giant phoenix that is the half the size of Gamabunta. When the phoenix is form it will explode into a large barrage of mini phoenixes that are the size of Abumanre bugs and will come down onto the opponent with such great force that even if they were underground up to 3 meters underground the phoenixes would still break through and do minor damage like breaking a little into the skin but not do faultily damage. Since the phoenixes are made up of the user chakra they will remain unharmed.
Note:Can only be used once in a battle
Note: Cannot use any water jutsus for the next turn
Note: It takes a jutsu move to form unless its already raining.
Note: Has to be taught by Johninto Uchiha

Lowered the phoenixes destructiveness and feel free to edit
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[Luther]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Chikyū sutairu: Raggu o nageta) Earth style: Tossed Rug.

Rank: S

Type: Offensive

Range:Mid

Chakra cost:40

Damage points:80

Description;The user focuses on his doton chakra for an amount of time
channeling it across his body and distributing it equally to all body part, he
then focuses the chakra on his palm and slams his focused chakra palm on the ground making about a huge up rise of earth which comes from the ground and back down in a straight forward motion similar to a carpet being tossed or dusted of or dirty particles ,when this impact upon the opponent it slams him on the ground and make him lose his stamina on the ground.

Note: Can be done two times a battle.

Note: Must wait 1 turn before using again.

Note: Must need thunder bolt permission or be taught by thunder bolt to use this technique.
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(Ninjutsu sutairu: Mukei bodi) Ninjutsu Style: Intangible Body

Rank: S

Type: Supplementary

Range: Short-Mid

Chakra cost:40

Damage points: -4 Damage to the user of the jutsu.

Description; Chakra is the basis of all ninja techniques and combined with spiritual energy as stated in Naruto makes up an individual and allows him or her to perform techniques. This jutsu takes advantage of this and chakra knowledge. The user releases chakra from a part or region of his body, completing depleting it up to the point where the is little or no left in that area this could be either his hands legs ,torso or any region of his body This will result in the break down of his genetic and physic structure allowing attacks which are aimed at that region to take half damage.

Note ;Can Only be done once in a battle.

Note: Last for two rounds.

Note:Can not do 3 jutsu next round due to chakra drainage

||Declined|| This makes little to no sense. Ninja are not composed entirely of chakra. They have a network of chakra within them. If there is no chakra in a specific region of the body, it simply means that specific part of the body is rendered normal.

(Raitoningusutairu: Sandāfurai)Lighting Style: Thunder Fly

Rank: A

Type: Offensive

Range: Short/Mid

Chakra cost:30

Damage points:60

Description; This technique was actually done by raiden in modern combat who was the God of lightning this jutsu try to reenact it and make it more plausible .The jutsu user channels his lightning chakra across his body distributing it equally to all parts as if it were an armor ,he then channels more of his lightning chakra into his two palms and dives forward in a frontal position to the opponent with his arms, which have been infused with pure lightning chakra toward the enemy, upon meet the user will slam his palms on the opponent chest slamming and pushing him backwards with great force. This jutsu is also a fast one and one which has speed due to the lightning chakra which has been channeled in the opponent body, to dodge this technique one will need to have fast reflexes and a good speed so as to respond to it in time and act according and in a proper response.

Note: Can only be used twice in a battle

Note: Must wait three turns to re use jutsu.

Note: Must have had or started training in ration

Note: Can not do any rank or higher jutsu in the same turns.

||Declined|| Done before way too many times.

 

[Kerrah]

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(Doton: Ishi Kiwa) Earth Release: Stone Edge
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will release their chakra onto the Earth they are standing on and pick up the stones using their chakra. The stones will be lifted and aligned in front of the user. Then the user performs one hand seal and releases the stones with a great force.
Note: Can only be used once every 2 turns.
Note: Can only be use four times per battle.
Note: Can only be used by Kerrah and those who he allows.

±± Declined ±± Size of the stones? Make it so that you stomp the ground and the stones lift. Also, this is a B-Rank and you don't need to put a limit to use it if you can only uuse it every 2 times.

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(Doton: Ishi Kiwa) Earth Release: Stone Edge
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user stomps the ground and lifts up a number of stones the size of a coconut, the stones will be lifted and aligned in front of the user. Then the user performs a single hand seal and sends them off with a great force.
Note: Can only be used once every 2 turns.
Note: Can only be used by Kerrah and those who he allows.
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(Doton: Magunichu-Do) Earth Release: Magnitude
Type: Attack
Rank: D-A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10-30
Damage Points: 20-60
Description: The user begins to rapidly channel their chakra throughout their body giving them a brown outer glow. The user will then jump into the air and smash both of their feet onto the floor, releasing the mass-concentrated chakra into the ground, causing the Earth beneath the opponent to violently shake and crack, the damage and size of the technique is depended on what rank the user performs. With the D-rank making them fall onto one knee, while the A-rank causes them to fall tremendously quick and cause damage to them, while at the same time the ground beneath them is breaking apart.
Note: Can only be used once every 3 turns
Note: Can only use A-rank twice per match
Note: Can only use B-rank thrice per match
Note: Can only be used by Kerrah and those who he allow

||Declined|| Done before, and there already exist Earth shaking techniques on varying levels.