My first Fan-Fic idk how i feel about it yet so i guess let me know how you all feel.
Madara stands within his Susano' staring at the Kages with his sharingan blazing.
Madara: You cannot possibly hope to defeat me... you should have kept the Jinchuuriki with you, without him you have no hope.
Tsunade: Shut the hell up you bastard!
-Tsunade Punches the ground causing it to split underneath of Madara-
Madara: Damn!
-Susanoo extends on it's arms to the side of the crack and pushes off of it, launching both of them into the air-
-As madara is landing upon the ground Gaara opens a sand rift underneath of him, as he is being sucked down Mei excrete's lava over top of him-
Gaara: You can't escape now!
Madara: You doubt the true power of the original Susanoo!
-Madara's Susanoo reaches full capacity and creates a thick armor similar to Madara's, It stands taller then before and the sand hardly covers it's feet. it then easily deflects the lava.
Madara: You have indeed impressed me... I guess i might as well give the great "Kages" a taste of my true power!
-A giant rock forms above them, 4 times larger then the last-
Oonoki: Dammit! I don't even know if my full power will be enough... A! Throw me towards the rock and cover me in a shroud of lightening!
A: But you couldn't handle the shroud it will injure you as well!
Oonoki: The wind in my dust will insulate the lightening before it harms me, i will then use the strength of my dust and the power of your lightening to pierce this rock
A: Let's do this!
-He lifts oonoki into his arm and covers him in a shroud of fierce lightening and launches him into the sky-
Oonoki: Dust release: Atomic Shroud!!
-Oonoki shrouds his body into a dense cube, combining with the shroud of lightening the color turns black. He begins flying at amazing speeds.
Oonoki: I hope this works... this world will be fine without me, i believe in the new generation.
-With a smile on his face he pictures Naruto, and Kurotsuchi-
Oonoki- Good bye Kurotsuchi, you have grown into a fine woman... I trust in you
Madara: What is he doing!?
-As Oonoki flies into the giant rock he pierces it and begins to make his way to the edge of the atmosphere-
Oonoki: Dust Release: Atomic Self-Destruction!
-The rock then explodes in a giant flash, without a single shard reaching the ground-
-The kages faces are shown, their faces showing nothing but disbelief-
Madara: Dammit... that was my trump card, no bother i will make another.
-As he tried to build another he drops to his knee-
Madara: Shit! Even Edo Tensei has it's limits
A: He is weakened! Hurry attack him now we can't let the old man's sacrifice be in vein!
The Remaining Kages: Right!!
-End-
Madara stands within his Susano' staring at the Kages with his sharingan blazing.
Madara: You cannot possibly hope to defeat me... you should have kept the Jinchuuriki with you, without him you have no hope.
Tsunade: Shut the hell up you bastard!
-Tsunade Punches the ground causing it to split underneath of Madara-
Madara: Damn!
-Susanoo extends on it's arms to the side of the crack and pushes off of it, launching both of them into the air-
-As madara is landing upon the ground Gaara opens a sand rift underneath of him, as he is being sucked down Mei excrete's lava over top of him-
Gaara: You can't escape now!
Madara: You doubt the true power of the original Susanoo!
-Madara's Susanoo reaches full capacity and creates a thick armor similar to Madara's, It stands taller then before and the sand hardly covers it's feet. it then easily deflects the lava.
Madara: You have indeed impressed me... I guess i might as well give the great "Kages" a taste of my true power!
-A giant rock forms above them, 4 times larger then the last-
Oonoki: Dammit! I don't even know if my full power will be enough... A! Throw me towards the rock and cover me in a shroud of lightening!
A: But you couldn't handle the shroud it will injure you as well!
Oonoki: The wind in my dust will insulate the lightening before it harms me, i will then use the strength of my dust and the power of your lightening to pierce this rock
A: Let's do this!
-He lifts oonoki into his arm and covers him in a shroud of fierce lightening and launches him into the sky-
Oonoki: Dust release: Atomic Shroud!!
-Oonoki shrouds his body into a dense cube, combining with the shroud of lightening the color turns black. He begins flying at amazing speeds.
Oonoki: I hope this works... this world will be fine without me, i believe in the new generation.
-With a smile on his face he pictures Naruto, and Kurotsuchi-
Oonoki- Good bye Kurotsuchi, you have grown into a fine woman... I trust in you
Madara: What is he doing!?
-As Oonoki flies into the giant rock he pierces it and begins to make his way to the edge of the atmosphere-
Oonoki: Dust Release: Atomic Self-Destruction!
-The rock then explodes in a giant flash, without a single shard reaching the ground-
-The kages faces are shown, their faces showing nothing but disbelief-
Madara: Dammit... that was my trump card, no bother i will make another.
-As he tried to build another he drops to his knee-
Madara: Shit! Even Edo Tensei has it's limits
A: He is weakened! Hurry attack him now we can't let the old man's sacrifice be in vein!
The Remaining Kages: Right!!
-End-
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