seeing snow for the first time can be exciting xd probably as much as watching a person freak out when they first see snowwow it's cool..! a good way to start a fic.. with all the mystery here and there..
and I actually imagine myself as excited as Gabriel if I ever see a snow..lol..(I live in a tropical country)
lol ty and i'm honored that you read this chapterYou're a wonderful writter. I didn't find anything wrong with anything in this chapter. I like the layout of the story and even the title. You use a lot of imagery in here which helped me picture what was going on and I can feel the intensity of the emotions of the characters..
Gabriel's love for his mother, to the point he's angered by his father's outbursts towrds her. His mixed feelings of anger and fustration with his father...angered when his father goes off at his mother...fustrated and guilty that he can't live up to his father's standards and causes him to go off the way he does....
I like Gabriel's mother too. She fits that picture of the perfect wife and mother who loves her child and husband...
I like Gabriel's father a little more then the other characters though, simply because everything with the other characters seems to revolve around his being. I may not be able to read the other three chapters tonight but I definatly will. If ever you decide to enter your fanfiction in the FF contests I wish you luck.
yeah i love blue and green eyesI'm starting to love the kid's Blue eyes..!!! xd
great theme, i don't believe i actually read that much of text...over all Great work..!!!
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he has his reasonsWTH PAPA IS SO HARSH!
But this is a great story so far me likey c:
of course there will be xdIts awesome for starters....You must be registered for see images
Kinda make one read it throughout the other chapters....
But hope to see more mystery in next chapters which eventually i'm going to read... xd
Offcourse i know...of course there will be xd
ty wing-man! :hug: glad you liked it and oh how i've missed those cute emotes of yours! lol
O_O lol....same i love these Eye color..usually Blue in girls..!! xdyeah i love blue and green eyes
Ty for reading it! I wasn't sure if you would xd
lol xd then you'd like chapter 4!O_O lol....same i love these Eye color..usually Blue in girls..!! xd
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lol ty for reading it
lol tynice~ reminds me of someone, though... anyway on to #2
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