Nothing Is What It Seems chapter 1

[rezaamani]

I Enjoyed reading this part ,I was even surprised when I learned that there was a Katana involved,The story flow is excellent I coud picture every single moment ,good bame selction for the boy Young lady

 

[Seffy]

I Enjoyed reading this part ,I was even surprised when I learned that there was a Katana involved,The story flow is excellent I coud picture every single moment ,good bame selction for the boy Young lady

ty for reading it, I'm glad you enjoyed it

 

[rezaamani]

ty for reading it, I'm glad you enjoyed it

Thanks to you too Sarah KEEP on writting,you're doing a very good job

 

[Disquiet]

I loved it, it was great!

 

[Seffy]

I loved it, it was great!

:hug: ty! glad you liked it ^_^

 

[-S-]

kool

 

[Seffy]

kool

ty and nice sig ^_^

 

[Mante]

Coooll!

 

[Seffy]

Coooll!

lol ty ^_^ glad you liked it

 

[UzumakiNarutoFan]

Awesome start...
Heading towards chapter 2...

 

[Seffy]

Awesome start...
Heading towards chapter 2...

Ty for reading, glad to hear you liked it ^_^

 

[chad062388]

:flaw: they won't let me be 500.

 

[99minutes]

WHY THE HELL CAN'T I THANK YOU FOR THIS?! O__O

Honestly, that was awesome! I love your writing style. Your grammar, punctuation, flow is perfect! Gabriel reminds me of young Sasuke D: Wanting to be stronger to impress his father, it's so exact! I loved it, keep it up! On to Ch. 2

PS: You need to change your status to: ThatOneChick is already an author!

xD

 

[Seffy]

WHY THE HELL CAN'T I THANK YOU FOR THIS?! O__O

Honestly, that was awesome! I love your writing style. Your grammar, punctuation, flow is perfect! Gabriel reminds me of young Sasuke D: Wanting to be stronger to impress his father, it's so exact! I loved it, keep it up! On to Ch. 2

PS: You need to change your status to: ThatOneChick is already an author!

xD

lol it's too old to thank xd
ty for your kind words! <3
This is in short my rough draft of the novel I am working on.
I see errors and such in the ff up here, but the plot is just too good that I rushed a few things :ghehe:
So in the novel I will slow it down and put in more minor events.
Ty so much for reading! :hug:

 

[Rand al'Thor]

Ohh..ya i finally commented..Sarah!!u are awesome..^_^...

 

[Seffy]

Ohh..ya i finally commented..Sarah!!u are awesome..^_^...

lol :hug: ty ^_^ glad you liked it <3

 

[Silva Master of the six]

you got me worked up I WANT MORE!!! damn it now i want to write one

 

[Seffy]

you got me worked up I WANT MORE!!! damn it now i want to write one

lol glad to hear it There are a total of 16 chapters out ^_~
That's awesome! Writing is a great way of expressing yourself and I wish you the best of luck if you decide to write one of your own! :scorps:

 

[Rand al'Thor]

Chp 1..finished..*runs off to chp 2*

 

[uchiha yasin]

yeah sure wait just for one month