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OK lets say he has medic experience and can heal as well in very little time. He also was born with godlike chakra so he can almost never run out. His abilites arent so great but since he can use all of them at least 4 times in one fight it should make up for that and btw i think every character is weak compared to FLASH's character but my chakra reserves are the highest and plus with some medic my character is beast right! Also his personality is very beast now and arrogant which makes him intresting. His only weakness is taijutsu since he cant absorb that and is kind of a slow fighter. Also i just gave him a new jutsu which is called Tsunami and is as strong as an actual tsunami that is 100 ft high!!

Very good I am loving these new corrections but we only need two more members so you and that other character Jack spicer created "Flame" me and the other members want to discuss it before we just say you are members. But those new corrections definetly make me favor you I love the Tsunami thing.
 

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The applications are closing in 10 minutes then we will go over all bio submissions to figure out our final 2 members so post now or forever hold your peace! 10 minutes!
 

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Name: Cloud
Nickname: None
Age: 18
Village: Kumogakure
History: Cloud is from Island Turtle a moving island from Kumo. For some unknown reason the Raikage left him there with some of Kumo's high rated ninjas and a giant broadsword that Clouds parent left him. He grew up there alone waiting for friends and the only people he interacted with were his guards. They always told stories of the Legendary people who trained in this island and the fourth ninja war. From a young age the ninja guards that interacted with Cloud trained him to be a powerful ninja. Even the Raikage showed up a couple of times to teach him about the 5 nations, history and training. Even though Cloud had a couple of friends he always wanted to be loved, and he always wanted to know his mother and father. Once Cloud was 10 he started training with the broadsword lifting it up, putting lighting chakra on the sword and trying to slash giant boulders open. Once he turned 16 he actually started wondering how life was outside of this island. Since he was so accustomed to the island he thought that the world was very small with very few people in it. He started to plan his way out. So once it hit nightfall he took his broadsword, got on the turtles head and he waited to find land. He was suspecting the guards to be watching him but no one was there. He finally finds land and jumps of the turtle saying farewell to the land he knew as home. He sees a sign that says Kumo up ahead. He runs waiting to find adventure. He finally arrives to the huge village and sees blood all splattered on the floor and dead bodies everywhere. He feels this weird aura of evil and he feels people watching him. He looks up at the buildings before him and sees these evil eyes that were red and had black circle like things around the pupil. He passes out and when he wakes up he is in a bed in a weird hollow cave. He feels people around him, he grabbed broadsword and walks outside the exit of the room and he sees a numerous amount of people with red clouds and black robes. They all introduce themselves and they gave him a robe, a ring and they say will you join us. After numerous amount of plotting and etc two years pass by and Cloud has master usage of his broadsword, Raiton, FuUton, and Suiton. He pretty good with Doton and Kaiton. His only goal is to find out what happened that long and miserable night and his parents.

Abilities: Amazing Raiton user. Raiton on his Broadsword. His broadsword has the ability to come flying to his hands if its in another visible area. Also broadsword has a mind of its own and can only be wield by Cloud. Sword itself is a master of Raiton

Note: I typed this very fast if i get accepted i will make it better. I figured you guys needed a swordsman

Goal: To find parents, and to find out what happened that night

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Name: Cloud
Nickname: None
Age: 18
Village: Kumogakure
History: Cloud is from Island Turtle a moving island from Kumo. For some unknown reason the Raikage left him there with some of Kumo's high rated ninjas and a giant broadsword that Clouds parent left him. He grew up there alone waiting for friends and the only people he interacted with were his guards. They always told stories of the Legendary people who trained in this island and the fourth ninja war. From a young age the ninja guards that interacted with Cloud trained him to be a powerful ninja. Even the Raikage showed up a couple of times to teach him about the 5 nations, history and training. Even though Cloud had a couple of friends he always wanted to be loved, and he always wanted to know his mother and father. Once Cloud was 10 he started training with the broadsword lifting it up, putting lighting chakra on the sword and trying to slash giant boulders open. Once he turned 16 he actually started wondering how life was outside of this island. Since he was so accustomed to the island he thought that the world was very small with very few people in it. He started to plan his way out. So once it hit nightfall he took his broadsword, got on the turtles head and he waited to find land. He was suspecting the guards to be watching him but no one was there. He finally finds land and jumps of the turtle saying farewell to the land he knew as home. He sees a sign that says Kumo up ahead. He runs waiting to find adventure. He finally arrives to the huge village and sees blood all splattered on the floor and dead bodies everywhere. He feels this weird aura of evil and he feels people watching him. He looks up at the buildings before him and sees these evil eyes that were red and had black circle like things around the pupil. He passes out and when he wakes up he is in a bed in a weird hollow cave. He feels people around him, he grabbed broadsword and walks outside the exit of the room and he sees a numerous amount of people with red clouds and black robes. They all introduce themselves and they gave him a robe, a ring and they say will you join us. After numerous amount of plotting and etc two years pass by and Cloud has master usage of his broadsword, Raiton, FuUton, and Suiton. He pretty good with Doton and Kaiton. His only goal is to find out what happened that long and miserable night and his parents.

Abilities: Amazing Raiton user. Raiton on his Broadsword. His broadsword has the ability to come flying to his hands if its in another visible area. Also broadsword has a mind of its own and can only be wield by Cloud. Sword itself is a master of Raiton

Note: I typed this very fast if i get accepted i will make it better. I figured you guys needed a swordsman

Goal: To find parents, and to find out what happened that night

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Absolutely love it! and also love the Kingdom hearts 2 version of cloud
 

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What you have on your bio is fine don't worry and yeah we still gotta get just two more members first and sharingdork will handle the rp when he gets back on probably tomorrow so we will worry about that then, we can't get too impatient or we will get disorganized people! lol btw does evry1 like my character it was the first post in this thread and no1 has commented much on it.
No one's commented much on mine either, but as for yours... What can the two MS's do, is my major question. Other than that, I'd say it's pretty cool.
 

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No one's commented much on mine either, but as for yours... What can the two MS's do, is my major question. Other than that, I'd say it's pretty cool.
Mostly just tsukynomi and high level ninjutsu I didnt want to give them susanoo and amatarasu because so many people choose those and to be honest with 22 sharingan puppets the possibilites to copy jutsu and use genjutsu is endless so thats enough
 
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Name: Zaku Tijiro
Age- 37
height- 5ft 10in

background- Zaku was always a mysterious young man who had incredible powers, he is from the leaf village. He was the most talented ninja in his generation, he is a true genius and at age 7 became a jonin! His powers were always feared people also feared if he was human or not. He has the power to destroy almost anyone. His power comes from his wind, he once found a sword that he believes is only meant for him. With this sword his chakra is insane and he as the power to make natural disasters! The sword has its own jutsus which are incredible, if anyone else touches the sword but him the other person wud start bleeding automatically and can die of blood loss. After finding this sword he trained and learned how to use it, he then used it for military power and to protect his family. But one day in the middle of the 10th ninja war his parents were killed! He then left the village to obtain sooo much power that nobody can touch him, once he achieves his goal he will take over the world and run it his way. There would never be violence unless he allows it, or peace unless he allows it. Later he leaves the village in search of forbidden jutsu and finds Salem who takes him in his organization because of his powers! Zaku has incredible powers with his sword, he swings the sword similar to how temari swings her wind fan but instead Zaku's jutsu arent wind schy jutsu but instead like twister justu which sends a tornado to the opponent. He also has defensive jutsu like wind wall and he also has edo tensei!

Goal: to run things HIS WAY

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Name: Zaku Tijiro
Age- 37
height- 5ft 10in

background- Zaku was always a mysterious young man who had incredible powers, he is from the leaf village. He was the most talented ninja in his generation, he is a true genius and at age 7 became a jonin! His powers were always feared people also feared if he was human or not. He has the power to destroy almost anyone. His power comes from his wind, he once found a sword that he believes is only meant for him. With this sword his chakra is insane and he as the power to make natural disasters! The sword has its own jutsus which are incredible, if anyone else touches the sword but him the other person wud start bleeding automatically and can die of blood loss. After finding this sword he trained and learned how to use it, he then used it for military power and to protect his family. But one day in the middle of the 10th ninja war his parents were killed! He then left the village to obtain sooo much power that nobody can touch him, once he achieves his goal he will take over the world and run it his way. There would never be violence unless he allows it, or peace unless he allows it. Later he leaves the village in search of forbidden jutsu and finds Salem who takes him in his organization because of his powers! Zaku has incredible powers with his sword, he swings the sword similar to how temari swings her wind fan but instead Zaku's jutsu arent wind schy jutsu but instead like twister justu which sends a tornado to the opponent. He also has defensive jutsu like wind wall and he also has edo tensei!

Goal: to run things HIS WAY

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Dang this is good! The character looks kinda cool too
 

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We already decided on all our members for our group but I will remember your charcater and we will use it in our future fan fic and also let you have a hand in the writing uchiha clan, if anyone drops out Nengan Kohai you will also be replacing them but for now we have a full group sorry :(
 

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We already decided on all our members for our group but I will remember your charcater and we will use it in our future fan fic and also let you have a hand in the writing uchiha clan, if anyone drops out Nengan Kohai you will also be replacing them but for now we have a full group sorry :(
U sure? i dont think we got 12 members yet, plus his guy is kinda epic and am i suppose to put new thread and post my bio on there i mean in our group place?
 
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