Custom Akatsuki

[ChrisWolf]

Ok so if everyone is cool with the name "Nengan Kohai" Kohai for short...then sharingdork can go ahead and make the social group, so far we have Salem and shinigami, sharings character and rayn, susan and rascal and tay tay so thats 7 more then halfway their! (assuming everyones ok with going for 12

 

[Reborn]

Ok so if everyone is cool with the name "Nengan Kohai" Kohai for short...then sharingdork can go ahead and make the social group, so far we have Salem and shinigami, sharings character and rayn, susan and rascal and tay tay so thats 7 more then halfway their! (assuming everyones ok with going for 12

This is going to turn out really well I think

 

[-Kisame-]

This is going to turn out really well I think

I agree this is looking very promising.

 

[ChrisWolf]

Another thing I need to say is that everyone who is taking this seriously and is going to be very involved in this should send me a friend request so we can PM easily because sometimes I will be writing a long reply to someone and during that time more people will add more ideas but I have to wait forever to reply to them once I submitt the reply I am working on otherwise I will be doublepostiing so during those times (which have happened a lot so far lol) I can pm certain people.

 

[-Kisame-]

So we agreed on the name, did someone make a social group?

 

[ChrisWolf]

So we agreed on the name, did someone make a social group?

I left it to Sharingdork so we just gotta be patient on that but we still need more character bios so everyone tell your fan fic writing buddies to give it a shot.

 

[Reborn]

I left it to Sharingdork so we just gotta be patient on that but we still need more character bios so everyone tell your fan fic writing buddies to give it a shot.

I reccomended it to one of my contacts, as I thought she might find it fun. She's a pretty good Fanfic writter so she'll probably have a good character

 

[ChrisWolf]

I'll give it a try, if you're still accepting members

Name: Youton Terumi

Nickname: "The Boy with no Home"

Age: 18

Village: Kirigakure
History: I was born in Kirigakure during Yagura's reign as the Fourth Mizukage. During that time everyone who had a Kekkai Genkai were being exterminated. So, I escaped with my mother, a woman who held two Kekkai Genkai. We were able to leave the village safely, but to our shock a Kiri Jounin found us. My mother was able to fight him off, but she told me to run away, and to return to Kiri one day. She said to me things would change by then. I returned a year later, but nothing changed. I looked for her my entire life but I was never able to find my mother, Mei Terumi. When I found out she was Mizukage, I was happy to discover that she was still alive. A ninja I have known for awhile said she was in the Land of Snow. So I embarked on a journey to the Land of Snow. To my surprise, there was a strange ninja who asked me to follow him into this cave. Before I could even react he froze me in a block of ice. The next thing I knew, I saw a man who said his name was Salem. He freed me and I told him my story. When he said that he knew where my mother was and that he would take me to her I was ecstatic, but he said that I would have to join his organization first. So, I did just that and here I am a member of Akatsuki.

Abilities: I posses the Kekkai Genkais of my mother (Lava Release and Boil Release). I possess an enormous amount of chakra. Using my Lava Release (which has it's own unique color that color is blue) I can create a massive continuous river of water amongst other things. With my Boil Release I can create a large mist or compact it into a sphere to shoot at my opponents while affecting only them.

Note: I possess a somewhat strategic mind, though my intellect is far from that of a genious.

Goal: My goal is to find my mother and for that I have joined the Akatsuki, so the common goals of this organization have become goals of my own in order to be reunited with her again.

I reccomended it to one of my contacts, as I thought she might find it fun. She's a pretty good Fanfic writter so she'll probably have a good character

I love your edited background story for your character Hebi I think its perfect and thanks reborn we still need 5 more members. Remember every one we have a lot of prep to do before we start writing anything and trying to work together so don't forget your characters background and story because you will be responsible for writing when we make this into a full fledged Fan Fic.

 

[Ashalita Phoenix]

Well, I am new here... So Let me see if I can make a character up.

Name: Kitaru Hisatake
Nickname: Demon Princess
Age:16
Village: Currently in the Sand

History:When Kitaru was six, her parents and older brothers were murdered. She was the only surviving member of her clan. She constantly travels place to place, to find a home to belong. However, she was chased away from little towns and cities because of her demonic appearances. She has red demonic eyes that people mistaken her as a demon of hell. Then she was captured by the church and was sentenced to be burnt alive. The town's people threw rotten vegetables and rocks at her, calling her a devil. Stacks of hay surrounded her and her chains were tight as ever. Then they torched the hay and cheered for her torment. Suddenly, her bloodline saved her. Only that morning, the priest gave her a nickname, the Demon Princess. Kitaru rushed out the town, knowing that no one will accept her eyes. So she covers her face with a mask. Soon after, she was found unconscious in the desert and an old man name Genoa took her in. He trained her and taught her everything that he knows. Soon after, he adopted her as his daughter. She became a ninja of the Sand. Kitaru is very silent by nature and talks when she needs to. You will always find her nose stuck in a book (She covers her eyes with her bangs if she reads).

Bloodline: She can control ice(like Gaara controlling sand). However, she doesn't rely on it too much. She mostly uses Taijutsu and fight with her long katana.
Goal: Protect Genoa

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Here is a picture of her that I drew

 

[Reborn]

I think Sharingdork logged off everybody.

 

[-Kisame-]

Well, I am new here... So Let me see if I can make a character up.

Name: Kitaru Hisatake
Nickname: Demon Princess
Age:16
Village: Currently in the Sand

History:When Kitaru was six, her parents and older brothers were murdered. She was the only surviving member of her clan. She constantly travels place to place, to find a home to belong. However, she was chased away from little towns and cities because of her demonic appearances. She has red demonic eyes that people mistaken her as a demon of hell. Then she was captured by the church and was sentenced to be burnt alive. The town's people threw rotten vegetables and rocks at her, calling her a devil. Stacks of hay surrounded her and her chains were tight as ever. Then they torched the hay and cheered for her torment. Suddenly, her bloodline saved her. Only that morning, the priest gave her a nickname, the Demon Princess. Kitaru rushed out the town, knowing that no one will accept her eyes. So she covers her face with a mask. Soon after, she was found unconscious in the desert and an old man name Genoa took her in. He trained her and taught her everything that he knows. Soon after, he adopted her as his daughter. She became a ninja of the Sand. Kitaru is very silent by nature and talks when she needs to. You will always find her nose stuck in a book (She covers her eyes with her bangs if she reads).

Bloodline: She can control ice(like Gaara controlling sand). However, she doesn't rely on it too much. She mostly uses Taijutsu and fight with her long katana.
Goal: Protect Genoa

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Here is a picture of her that I drew

THAT is an awesome picture also a great bio.

 

[Ashalita Phoenix]

THAT is an awesome picture also a great bio.

Thanks... I love drawing.

 

[ChrisWolf]

Well, I am new here... So Let me see if I can make a character up.

Name: Kitaru Hisatake
Nickname: Demon Princess
Age:16
Village: Currently in the Sand

History:When Kitaru was six, her parents and older brothers were murdered. She was the only surviving member of her clan. She constantly travels place to place, to find a home to belong. However, she was chased away from little towns and cities because of her demonic appearances. She has red demonic eyes that people mistaken her as a demon of hell. Then she was captured by the church and was sentenced to be burnt alive. The town's people threw rotten vegetables and rocks at her, calling her a devil. Stacks of hay surrounded her and her chains were tight as ever. Then they torched the hay and cheered for her torment. Suddenly, her bloodline saved her. Only that morning, the priest gave her a nickname, the Demon Princess. Kitaru rushed out the town, knowing that no one will accept her eyes. So she covers her face with a mask. Soon after, she was found unconscious in the desert and an old man name Genoa took her in. He trained her and taught her everything that he knows. Soon after, he adopted her as his daughter. She became a ninja of the Sand. Kitaru is very silent by nature and talks when she needs to. You will always find her nose stuck in a book (She covers her eyes with her bangs if she reads).

Bloodline: She can control ice(like Gaara controlling sand). However, she doesn't rely on it too much. She mostly uses Taijutsu and fight with her long katana.
Goal: Protect Genoa

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Here is a picture of her that I drew

I think Sharingdork logged off everybody.

I love your character the demon princess what i really love is that she has ice powers I was hoping someone would come up with that no lie but just a few things. First what kind of ice powers does she have exactly like what kind of jutsus can she do? and also what was her reason for joining our organization the "Nengan Kohia" ? how did she meet my character Salem and everything? I can give you suggests if you need or want but I do really like your character you can be partnered with Hebi's character tay tay...you should also go through the other posts on this thread to see every ones story and so you know whats up. Yeah I think sharingdork logged off but thats ok I sent him a PM and think he will make social group when he gets back on if not we will deal with it then because I have to go now. Listen everyone if you have any ideas I would appreciate anyone who waited til' i logged back on later tonight before you post them here just because I need to write all of this down in a document to keep track of it so we can stay organized and i don't want to have a lot to write lol unless someone wants to do that for me be my guest but any new bios posted while I'm gone arent guarenteed to be part of Nengan Kohia because we got to discuss when I'm back on. I will be back on later tonight. Bye and great job everyone!

 

[Ashalita Phoenix]

I love your character the demon princess what i really love is that she has ice powers I was hoping someone would come up with that no lie but just a few things. First what kind of ice powers does she have exactly like what kind of jutsus can she do? and also what was her reason for joining our organization the "Nengan Kohia" ? how did she meet my character Salem and everything? I can give you suggests if you need or want but I do really like your character you can be partnered with Hebi's character tay tay...you should also go through the other posts on this thread to see every ones story and so you know whats up. Yeah I think sharingdork logged off but thats ok I sent him a PM and think he will make social group when he gets back on if not we will deal with it then because I have to go now. Listen everyone if you have any ideas I would appreciate anyone who waited til' i logged back on later tonight before you post them here just because I need to write all of this down in a document to keep track of it so we can stay organized and i don't want to have a lot to write lol unless someone wants to do that for me be my guest but any new bios posted while I'm gone arent guarenteed to be part of Nengan Kohia because we got to discuss when I'm back on. I will be back on later tonight. Bye and great job everyone!

Well, her ice abilities is the same concept as Gaara's sand abilities. The ice moves freely to protect her. She doesn't carries a gourd or a jar of water because 60 or 70% of the human body is made out of water and air is everywhere so it is easy for her to make ice. Well, if you want me to name some of her jutsu, I will.

Freezing Ice Bullets
Ice Shield
Ice Clone(I love this one because the minute a person touches her clone, they freeze...hehehe... like Sub Zero...)

Well, the reason why she joined the Nengan Kohia because her father Genoa was murder and she was beyond mad that she couldn't save her first family and her new one. So she join to get revenge on the murder. She knew that the Sand Village won't do anything for his death so she was going to abandon the village. But Salem stopped her and asked her to join. However, he tested her to see if she was even worth being in. They fought viciously and the more Kitaru fought, the more she was hungry. Her bloodlust was released and the Demon Princess was again freed. In the end, Kitaru was no match for Salem but he was impressed. So she was official a member.

Hehehehe... Well, that is all I can think of... You can partner me up with anyone.

 

[MinatoFLASH]

Name: Blaze
Age: 27
Height: 6ft
Weight: 175
From: Cloud Village
Male
Personality- Quite,cool,calm
History: Blaze was always a talented young man, ever since he was born. His father was a really powerful Jonin that was respected by everyone. His father saved many lives and did the most difficult missions. Blaze was the son his father wanted, a talented young man who cud take his father's place. When Blaze was just 3 he was learning ninjutsu and graduated the academy, Blaze was very intelligent because he cud of talked when he was 1 and fully understood and responded to most things at age 2. He was a genius with a 210 IQ! At age 2 he had already learn how to read fast and perfectly. When he became 5 he became a chunnin and the youngest EVER in the village. Blaze had the most incredible powers, he had a Kekkei Genkai called the Dailegan! No one knew what this new Kekkei Genkai was and the powers of it. The true powers of the Dailegan is that they can freeze time to evade any attack, if you possess the Dailegan u can also learn any element and it boost every jutsu's power by 10x! It cud even make a normal C rank jutsu as strong or stronger than an S rank jutsu! It also immunes u from poison. Another power of this kekkia genkia is that the user can travel at incredible speeds such as the Raikage and can also defy gravity and fly if they want. His chakra was also unlimited, on par with the kyuubi. But even tho he had such powers, Blaze hated fighting and going on missions in which ppl die. What he really wanted to do was be the Raikage so he can run things his non violent way. When Blaze was a jonin at age 10 he was already stronger than his father, and by age 14 he was stronger than most Kages! He was in the clouds military force as an Anbu but the reason why the cloud wasnt the strongest was because Blaze hated fighting so he never liked killing people or being used as a military tool! He hated the idea that ninja are military tools! So he barely ever fought and at age 17 he was assigned a mission to take out an S rank rogue ninja. The ninja was no match for Blaze but he spared him because the ninja promised to stay away from the cloud village. But a couple years later, this ninja tried to attack again but was killed by Rocky who then became the 40th Raikage! This killed Blaze only dream but the villagers didnt care becuz all they wanted Blaze to be is an Anbu that cud kill any other ninja. This made Blaze very angry and he fled the village, but the new Raikage along with the many anbu came to stop him and told him he had to stay. Blaze denied it so they tried to kill him becuz they were afraid he cud be a threat to them by joining another village. Blaze had to kill them all. The Raikage was the only survivor. After this event Blaze become an S rank wanted criminal and decided to join the Akatsuki.

Jutsu- Water dragon jutsu, kirin, summoning (dragon which can destroy mountains in a roar), fire ball jutsu, dark hole( a jutsu in which you get sucked in a hole that crushes u with its gravitational powers, but very chakra consuming), meteor shower ( a jutsu in which meteors rain down on your opponent), galaxy beam ( a light beam which travels faster than light and hits the target, whatever it hits it pierces through, a lot of chakra must be used), time freeze jutsu. And a couple more common jutsu but these are the main ones.

Sry if its too long but plz read it! :no_ignore:

BTW this is kinda how he looks like-

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[UchihaClan The ultimate]

Name: Blaze
Age: 27
Height: 6ft
Weight: 175
From: Cloud Village
Male

History: Blaze was always a talented young man, ever since he was born. His father was a really powerful Jonin that was respected by everyone. His father saved many lives and did the most difficult missions. Blaze was the son his father wanted, a talented young man who cud take his father's place. When Blaze was just 3 he was learning ninjutsu and graduated the academy, Blaze was very intelligent because he cud of talked when he was 1 and fully understood and responded to most things at age 2. He was a genius with a 210 IQ! At age 2 he had already learn how to read fast and perfectly. When he became 5 he became a chunnin and the youngest EVER in the village. Blaze had the most incredible powers, he had a Kekkei Genkai called the Dailegan! No one knew what this new Kekkei Genkai was and the powers of it. The true powers of the Dailegan is that they can freeze time to evade any attack, if you possess the Dailegan u can also learn any element and it boost every jutsu's power by 10x! It cud even make a normal C rank jutsu as strong or stronger than an S rank jutsu! His chakra was also unlimited, on par with the kyuubi. But even tho he had such powers, Blaze hated fighting and going on missions in which ppl die. What he really wanted to do was be the Raikage so he can run things his non violent way. When Blaze was a jonin at age 10 he was already stronger than his father, and by age 14 he was stronger than most Kages! He was in the clouds military force as an Anbu but the reason why the cloud wasnt the strongest was because Blaze hated fighting so he never liked killing people or being used as a military tool! He hated the idea that ninja are military tools! So he barely ever fought and at age 17 he was assigned a mission to take out an S rank rogue ninja. The ninja was no match for Blaze but he spared him because the ninja promised to stay away from the cloud village. But a couple years later, this ninja tried to attack again but was killed by A who then became the 4th Raikage! This killed Blaze only dream but the villagers didnt care becuz all they wanted Blaze to be is an Anbu that cud kill any other ninja. This made Blaze very angry and he fled the village, but the new Raikage along with the many anbu came to stop him and told him he had to stay. Blaze denied it so they tried to kill him becuz they were afraid he cud be a threat to them by joining another village. Blaze had to kill them all. The Raikage was the only survivor. After this event Blaze become an S rank wanted criminal and decided to join the Akatsuki.

Sry if its too long but plz read it! :no_ignore:

BTW this is kinda how he looks like-

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NICE

 

[Deadai]

this thread is a great idea i have an idea for a charcter but it would take to long to type down.. u.u o.o lets just say my character would be more of the gate keeper of the akatsuki allwas protecting the intrence n hes a one eyed troll with a club syth thing to tierd to put it all in detail sorry x.x

 

[Nagato Uchiha]

Name: Blaze
Age: 27
Height: 6ft
Weight: 175
From: Cloud Village
Male

History: Blaze was always a talented young man, ever since he was born. His father was a really powerful Jonin that was respected by everyone. His father saved many lives and did the most difficult missions. Blaze was the son his father wanted, a talented young man who cud take his father's place. When Blaze was just 3 he was learning ninjutsu and graduated the academy, Blaze was very intelligent because he cud of talked when he was 1 and fully understood and responded to most things at age 2. He was a genius with a 210 IQ! At age 2 he had already learn how to read fast and perfectly. When he became 5 he became a chunnin and the youngest EVER in the village. Blaze had the most incredible powers, he had a Kekkei Genkai called the Dailegan! No one knew what this new Kekkei Genkai was and the powers of it. The true powers of the Dailegan is that they can freeze time to evade any attack, if you possess the Dailegan u can also learn any element and it boost every jutsu's power by 10x! It cud even make a normal C rank jutsu as strong or stronger than an S rank jutsu! His chakra was also unlimited, on par with the kyuubi. But even tho he had such powers, Blaze hated fighting and going on missions in which ppl die. What he really wanted to do was be the Raikage so he can run things his non violent way. When Blaze was a jonin at age 10 he was already stronger than his father, and by age 14 he was stronger than most Kages! He was in the clouds military force as an Anbu but the reason why the cloud wasnt the strongest was because Blaze hated fighting so he never liked killing people or being used as a military tool! He hated the idea that ninja are military tools! So he barely ever fought and at age 17 he was assigned a mission to take out an S rank rogue ninja. The ninja was no match for Blaze but he spared him because the ninja promised to stay away from the cloud village. But a couple years later, this ninja tried to attack again but was killed by A who then became the 4th Raikage! This killed Blaze only dream but the villagers didnt care becuz all they wanted Blaze to be is an Anbu that cud kill any other ninja. This made Blaze very angry and he fled the village, but the new Raikage along with the many anbu came to stop him and told him he had to stay. Blaze denied it so they tried to kill him becuz they were afraid he cud be a threat to them by joining another village. Blaze had to kill them all. The Raikage was the only survivor. After this event Blaze become an S rank wanted criminal and decided to join the Akatsuki.

Sry if its too long but plz read it! :no_ignore:

BTW this is kinda how he looks like-

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This is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Uchiha Kentaro]

Name: Shinjiro Tanaka
Nick name: Jiro
Age: 17
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 182
Country: Fire Village

Background: Grew up in a small village and his parents died when he was born
he was adopted and had a bro and a sis
7 years later a war broke out with the neighboring village........ seeing the dead bodies of all his friends and family warped his mind and made him stronger
6 years later he massacred a tiny village for their resources and that is where he saw madara
madara trained him until he was 16 and took him into the akatsuki at the age of 17
Justus: he has 2 elements fire and lightning he also has sharingan(lol how in the world)
fire ball jutsu phoenix flower jutsu etc
kirin chidori and stuff like that
Goals: revenge

 

[ChrisWolf]

Well, her ice abilities is the same concept as Gaara's sand abilities. The ice moves freely to protect her. She doesn't carries a gourd or a jar of water because 60 or 70% of the human body is made out of water and air is everywhere so it is easy for her to make ice. Well, if you want me to name some of her jutsu, I will.

Freezing Ice Bullets
Ice Shield
Ice Clone(I love this one because the minute a person touches her clone, they freeze...hehehe... like Sub Zero...)

Well, the reason why she joined the Nengan Kohia because her father Genoa was murder and she was beyond mad that she couldn't save her first family and her new one. So she join to get revenge on the murder. She knew that the Sand Village won't do anything for his death so she was going to abandon the village. But Salem stopped her and asked her to join. However, he tested her to see if she was even worth being in. They fought viciously and the more Kitaru fought, the more she was hungry. Her bloodlust was released and the Demon Princess was again freed. In the end, Kitaru was no match for Salem but he was impressed. So she was official a member.

Hehehehe... Well, that is all I can think of... You can partner me up with anyone.

Very nice, you know I think you got the heart of writer in you I can tell you got a talent for being creative and I am so beyond curious about what you meant by the demon princess was awakened lol does she transform or something?