FF idea: Dragon Ball: Saiyan Blood

[-Yard-]

Dragon Ball Saiyan Blood​

Here's a new FF that I will be working on but before I go further into plot development I want to get some opinions on it.

Story

"Planet vegeta" was created by an asteroid colliding into another planet called "Sunsa" after the asteroid had hit, it wiped out nearly 95% of the race and caused both of the planets to drift light years away from each other.
My ff takes place 20 years before that happened and tells about the warriors that lived on that planet.




It held some of the universes most powerful beings but not as powerful as ssj3-4 ect that would ruin the story a little because being over powered in a ff can get a little boring since it's hard to picture from just text and i want to make it to where people who haven't watched/read db-dbz or gt can follow along nicely

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if you like the idea then thank the post
and if you have any comments on it then reply.

 

[Howard]

Dragon Ball Saiyan Blood​

Here's a new FF that I will be working on but before I go further into plot development I want to get some opinions on it.

Story

"Planet vegeta" was created by an asteroid colliding into another planet called "Sunsa" after the asteroid had hit, it wiped out nearly 95% of the race and caused both of the planets to drift light years away from each other.
My ff takes place 20 years before that happened and tells about the warriors that lived on that planet.


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if you like the idea then thank the post
and if you have any comments on it then reply.











held some of the universes most powerful beings but not as powerful as ssj3-4 ect that would ruin the story a little because being over powered in a ff can get a little boring since it's hard to picture from just text and i want to make it to where people who haven't watched/read db-dbz or gt can follow along nicely

Quick idea have the planet split and become two seperate planets with saiyens on both planets but have them have a variation of power like one planet has strong super saiyens but there are so few of them and the othe has strong super saiyens but they are weaker in power level but there are more of them.....

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

stealing my ff idea ( by makeing a dbz fanfic )

 

[-Yard-]

Quick idea have the planet split and become two seperate planets with saiyens on both planets but have them have a variation of power like one planet has strong super saiyens but there are so few of them and the othe has strong super saiyens but they are weaker in power level but there are more of them.....

yes that is the squeal

stealing my ff idea ( by makeing a dbz fanfic )

you stole the creator of db af's idea by creating your own db story

but no if you go through about 18 pages into this section you will see that i have been trying to get a good idea for a db ff

 

[Howard]

yes that is the squeal



you stole the creator of db af's idea by creating your own db story

but no if you go through about 18 pages into this section you will see that i have been trying to get a good idea for a db ff

Already had the same thought great minds think alike

 

[Sharingdork]

-_- asking ppl to thank the thread. so you can add to your 1700+ rep count? nu-uh, I'm not falling for it! You have enough rep already; time to give some back!

 

[Abysmal.]

Im puzzled Is this going to be a war like fanfiction between two ( formerly) neighbouring planets which are both inhabited by saiyans ?

And are you going to use characters from the actual show or creating your own ones or both ?

Oh well, what ever it is im sure its going to be great just coz its dbz.

Looking forward to it.

stealing my ff idea ( by makeing a dbz fanfic )

Your ideas are totally different its simply based on the same show.

 

[-Yard-]

Already had the same thought great minds think alike

xd apparently lol

-_- asking ppl to thank the thread. so you can add to your 1700+ rep count? nu-uh, I'm not falling for it! You have enough rep already; time to give some back!

xd nah, its just easier to see how many people like it than how many people like it but have there own opinions on it.


so for me its easier if they thank it but post their criticizing comments if they have any.
along with suggestions of course.

Im puzzled Is this going to be a war like fanfiction between two ( formerly) neighbouring planets which are both inhabited by saiyans ?

And are you going to use characters from the actual show or creating your own ones or both ?

Oh well, what ever it is im sure its going to be great just coz its dbz.

Looking forward to it.





Your ideas are totally different its simply based on the same show.

the planets are light years apart so theres no chance of them being able to be in a war against one another.
i'm creating my own characters as well

 

[Sharingdork]

xd apparently lol



xd nah, its just easier to see how many people like it than how many people like it but have there own opinions on it.


so for me its easier if they thank it but post their criticizing comments if they have any.
along with suggestions of course.

i suggest you stop asking for rep before the screen is filled with your rep bars. xd pretty soon, we can just replace your name with your rep bars, and ppl will say 'WHOA! Who is that!? They have so much rep!', 'Yeah, that's Yard...' xd If your rep bar keeps growing like that, you'll be have to put spoiler tabs around it so one post doesn't take up half the screen. xd

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

i suggest you stop asking for rep before the screen is filled with your rep bars. xd pretty soon, we can just replace your name with your rep bars, and ppl will say 'WHOA! Who is that!? They have so much rep!', 'Yeah, that's Yard...' xd If your rep bar keeps growing like that, you'll be have to put spoiler tabs around it so one post doesn't take up half the screen. xd

lol xdxdxdxd

 

[-Yard-]

i suggest you stop asking for rep before the screen is filled with your rep bars. xd pretty soon, we can just replace your name with your rep bars, and ppl will say 'WHOA! Who is that!? They have so much rep!', 'Yeah, that's Yard...' xd If your rep bar keeps growing like that, you'll be have to put spoiler tabs around it so one post doesn't take up half the screen. xd

damn you sharingdork you have thwarted my plans once again! xd

 

[Abysmal.]

the planets are light years apart so theres no chance of them being able to be in a war against one another.
i'm creating my own characters as well

Is this fanfiction of yours going to completely ignore what actually happened to planet Vegeta according to Toriyama himself. If so i'd like to see how the story will unfold.

 

[-Yard-]

Is this fanfiction of yours going to completely ignore what actually happened to planet Vegeta according to Toriyama himself. If so i'd like to see how the story will unfold.

this ff won't discuss planet vegeta it will just discuss "sunsa" before the asteroid hit and created planet vegeta.

 

[Sharingdork]

damn you sharingdork you have thwarted my plans once again! xd

*tents my fingers* Exactly my extremely exagerated goal. Extrodinarily, it's not extremly exhausting to extracate examples of 'ex' words from my extra ordinary mind. Exagerations of examplitory exceptional fanfictions are extremely exagerated (what?). EXACTLY! xd. no... exd.

 

[Abysmal.]

this ff won't discuss planet vegeta it will just discuss "sunsa" before the asteroid hit and created planet vegeta.

Very well.
I'll look forward to reading it.
The best of luck to you sir.

 

[-Yard-]

*tents my fingers* Exactly my extremely exagerated goal. Extrodinarily, it's not extremly exhausting to extracate examples of 'ex' words from my extra ordinary mind. Exagerations of examplitory exceptional fanfictions are extremely exagerated (what?). EXACTLY! xd. no... exd.

xd

*reps you*