Fanfic: Itachi v/s Pain

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  • This is a fanfic based on Masashi Kisimoto’s manga/anime titled Naruto. I do not own the characters xd
  • I am an Itachi Uchiha fanboy and have therefore made him the winner of this fight. I don’t care how much you argue about the impossibilities within the fight and the end result :p
  • Since I suck at dialogues, this remains only a plot. However, if you feel you can complete the plot by adding dialogues, please feel free to do so and post it on this same thread. If moreover you can add more twists to the plot, please feel free to do that also. But I would request that you keep Itachi as the winner, although I know a lot of you may not be doing that U_U
So this takes place immediately after the Hidan & Kakuzu arc. Due to the various akatsuki members who have fallen to the nine-tails and Konoha shinobis, Pain is on his way to capture the nine-tails himself and destroy Konoha. As all the ‘paths’ gather some kilometers away from Konoha, a figure appears in the distance and heads towards them. As the figure gets closer, Pain realize it is Itachi Uchiha. The latter hide his surprise as he is confronted to six rinnegan users instead of the Akatsuki leader only. After a little chit-chat about each one’s purpose for being there and some intense eye confrontation between rinnegan and three-dotted sharingan, the fights begins.

Animal Path makes the first move, pretty much as usual since his summons can handle most tough opponents instead of having to get any ‘paths’ physically involved on the battlefield. He starts by summoning his three-headed dog known as Hell Hound. Itachi is unimpressed and charges at Animal Path, but Hell Hound does not intend to let him reach its master. It lunges at Itachi and whilst doing so, its two additional heads separate from its body in order to also lunge at the opponent. However, Itachi graciously dodges all the three dogs and proceeds towards the Animal Path in a matter of milliseconds. With his opponent being so unexpectedly fast on him, Animal Path cannot see the next attack coming. This is what Itachi had intended to make happen and upon reaching Animal Path, he draws out a sword from under his Akatsuki coat in order to stab Animal Path. But unexpectedly, Animal Path succeeds to dodge his sword in a spin and without even looking at it. Whilst Itachi temporarily loses his balance in the vain attack and being still too surprised to regain his posture, Animal Path connects an elbow kick to his spin and knocks down his opponent. As Animal Path waves his other arm for the next attack, all the other ‘paths’ and the three Hell Hound watch closely the defeat of the Uchiha genius. As the fatal attack comes near to execution, Itachi’s lying body explodes, much to the surprise of all who were watching. Almost simultaneously, red flames crash on the three Hell Hound and make them disappear. As the ‘paths’ look in the direction from which the second attack originated, they now see another Itachi and determine that the previous Itachi was only a bunshin bakuha. With the smoke dissipated, it can now be seen that Animal Path’s body has been badly severed and is not fit for combat anymore. Itachi is now set on Deva Path, the leader of the Akatsuki and presumably the leader of the five other rinnegan bearers, since this may prove to shorten or cease the fight.

Next ‘path’ to line up for combat is Asura Path. As Itachi and him charge towards each other, they quickly turn the battlefield into a ruin by opposing one’s missiles against the other one’s phoenix immortal fire. When they finally come in range for physical controntation, Itachi’s opponent turns out to be a four-armed humanoid possessing remarkable strength that must be dealt with utmost precaution. Moreover, Human Path and Preta Path have joined the fight. Knowing nothing of his opponent except that rinnegan was very powerful, Itachi had intended to use only jutsus not requiring his mangekyou sharingan. However, he is being bested in taijutsu by his three opponents and cannot yet figure out how they are able to predict his every movements. He is cornered and left with no choice. Fortunately, or rather unfortunately, his three opponents retreats right before he activates his mangekyou sharingan and enable him to save it for some more time. Their retreat is followed by egg-like objects falling from the sky. These begin to shine, alerting Itachi that they may be explosive. It turns out to be true and Itachi succeeds to avoid the explosion thanks to his correct assumption. Looking up, he finds the summoned bird named Hard Beak lunging directly at him this time since there are none of his allies around. Itachi manages to dodge and now realizes that Animal Path is back on his feet and in complete fighting condition. Naraka Path stands next to him, suggesting that he has something to do with his regeneration. The other three ‘paths’ have returned to their original position next to Deva Path. Although the result so far is disappointing, Itachi feels that all his efforts have paid off since he can now ascertain some things about his opponents. First one is that, through his hand-to-hand confrontation with the ‘paths’, he was able to feel the blacks rods channeling chakra and knows that Deva Path is just another puppet and not the real Pain. However, he needs to finish off all the ‘paths’ before facing the real guy since the latter could prove to be a handful. So it would be best that there is no ‘paths’ to interfere when that time comes. Second thing is that, on some instances since the beginning of the fight, the ‘paths’ have demonstrated remarkable reaction skills. This could be accounted by the fact that they are all rinnegan bearers and could be sharing a common vision. With these useful informations, Itachi can now devise a better strategy to deal with Pain and his ‘paths’.

Hard Beak charges once more but Itachi has prepared for it. Nearing contact, Itachi jumps at it and sets one foot on its beak, using that as support to throw himself back onto the bird’s body. He then takes out a sword that is similar to the one that his bunshin bakuha used, and stabs it into the bird’s back. Setting one foot on the sword, he again uses that as support but this time, he throws himself away from the bird’s back whilst the sword is thrusted into the bird’s heart like a bullet and ends its course on the ground beneath its victim. As Itachi lands with one knee to the ground, Hard Beak crashes at full speed behind him and disappears in a puff of smoke. Hard Beak and Itachi having taken the fight some distance away from the ‘paths’, a swarm of missiles is the only immediate action that the ‘paths’ can provide in order to catch the opponent off-guard upon his landing. However, Itachi is quick on the move and paths his way through the swarm of missiles. Once the distance between him and the ‘paths’ has been closed considerably, he launches a great fireball to engulf all missiles flying at him and make them explode simultaneously. With the proximity and power of the explosion, a screen of dirt masks the battlefield. Sensing the danger of this being a possible maneuver, the ‘paths’ retreat some meters back as they cannot see through the dirt. But, much to their misfortune, their predilection is correct. Itachi quickly and stealthily appears behind Naraka Path who realizes what the blurry shadow that crossed him was. Itachi had activated his mangekyou sharingan and now casts his amaterasu flames on Naraka Path. The second after, black rods stabs through Itachi’s body. These have been sent by Animal Path who was closer to Naraka Path and had come to protect his teammate. Though too late, he has succeeded to beat Itachi. Preta Path is next to arrive and absorbs the amaterasu flames, saving Naraka Path’s body from complete incineration although it has been rendered useless. When the stabbed Itachi disappear in a puff of smoke, both Animal Path and Preta Path are disconcerted when they learn this was only a shadow clone. On the other end of the battlefield, information about Itachi’s tactic is immediately received by the other ‘paths’. Asura Path, Human Path and Deva Path accordingly look at each other in a triangular motion way. As an Itachi figure appears behind Deva Path, this one therefore readily uses his shinra tensei to dispel the amaterasu flames casted at him. Itachi, which they ‘paths’ cannot yet ascertain to be the real guy, retreats some meters back after this failed attack. The screen of dirt dissipates and Itachi now faces only five ‘paths’.

Deva Path calls for a battle formation. Lining up, Deva Path sets himself at the far rear, with Preta Path in the centre and the rest of the ‘paths’ grouping themselves on the frontline. Itachi is irritated since this could lengthen the combat and consequently, the use of his mangekyou sharingan. However, he keeps his composure to avoid the ‘paths’ discovering his weak points. Pretty much as before, when fighting collectively the ‘paths’ use only taijutsu, much to Itachi’s expectations. With mangekyou sharingan activated, Itachi is much more able to keep up against three ‘paths’ in close combat. Dashing all over the battlefield, Itachi succeeds to summon his crows in-between the restless assaults of his opponents. With a massive flock of crows now surrounding Itachi and his three immediate opponents, Deva Path and Preta Path are unable to watch the fight anymore. Even within the flock of crows, the three ‘paths’ there have lost sight of Itachi who faded into the black mass. As they attempt to retreat out of the crows’ formation, Human Path is captured within the ephemeral jutsu when he looks at a crow shapeshifting into Itachi’s hands. Other crows have shapeshifted into shurikens and launched of the other two opponents. Asura Path has successfully shielded himself with his four arms, however Animal Path has had his left eye blinded by an incoming shuriken. With most of the ‘paths’ safely outside the flock of crows, Deva Path enters it and generates a mighty shinra tensei which kills most of the crows. With the imminent defeat of Human Path once he had been caught in Itachi’s ephemeral jutsu, Deva Path had thought that he would be the proper bait to capture Itachi in his shinra tensei, making the loss of Human Path more meaningful. However, Human Path now lies incapacitated on the battlefield whilst Itachi has escaped defeat by a close margin, making the sacrifice useless. Itachi is seen being propulsed away and trying to regain a firm posture on the ground in order to end his frenetic course. Once he achieves this, he immediately charges at Deva Path who is finally in the front line and easily attainable. Reacting quickly though, Preta Path also comes in front and switch position with Deva Path in order to absorb the casted amaterasu flames. Asura Path also sends in more missiles against Itachi but instead of dodging them as he previously did, Itachi intends to let nothing deviate him from his straight course towards Deva Path. He is finally prepared to use his most powerful move… Susanoo!

Blocking Asura Path’s missiles with his susanoo’s yata mirror, Itachi finally makes contact. Yata mirror is again used to crush Asura Path to the ground whilst the totsuka sword is swung at Preta Path, who was protecting Deva Path. Using his ability, Preta Path tries to absorb the sword and ultimately its wielder, the susanoo. As they clash, reality seems to distort around them. Finally, after a momentary tie, the totsuka sword wins over Preta Path and starts to suck him into its sheath. Deva Path, now fully recharged after his last use of the shinra tensei, reacts immediately. Using bensho tenin, he sends Asura Path’s incapacitated body to safety and succeeds to pull Preta Path from the totsuka sword’s grip, also sending him to safety. The countering effects of the bensho tenin and totsuka sword have weared Preta Path’s body which is now also incapacitated. Deva Path chains a mighty shinra tensei which blows most of susanoo away, propulsing his user away as well. With his armor temporarily destroyed, Itachi feels the attack and is unable to recover in mid-air. He rolls heavily on the ground and leaves a trail of blood. As he finally gets back up, he dispels his susanoo and deactivates his mangekyou sharingan since both have been using up his chakra at an insane rate after he got severely injured. Moreover, his other health problems, which he has been successfully ignoring since the beginning of the battle, are coming back at him. Though he now faces only two ‘paths’, the battle has turned to his disadvantage.

Seeing as how Itachi is nearing his limits, Deva Path and Animal Path charge at him. Itachi hardly puts up any defense and gets a bashing. He now appears in trance and close to faint. However, when he is meant to go down a final time, he remembers his goals and the glimmer of life comes back into his eyes. He catches Deva Path and Animal Path off-guard by recovering from his fall. Looking back at Deva Path with his mangekyou sharingan reactivated, he casts ameterasu flames on him. Deva Path uses once more his shinra tensei to rid himself of the amaterasu flames although sacrificing Animal Path in the process. However, the amaterasu flames have been able to fairly incapacitate his body before being put out. As for Itachi, even though he got hit and propulsed away once more by the shinra tensei, he takes less time to get back on his feet since he is now running only on willpower and is hardly concerned with the pain. With the other ‘paths’ out, Deva Path can now enter god mode. But due to the effects of the amaterasu flames, he cannot use his body for the fight and chooses to cast his most powerful jutsu instead… Chibaku Tensei!

Pulling in every surrounding matter such as earth, rocks and trees, Deva Path’s chibaku tensei alterates the battlefield and builds up a massive moon-like mass in the sky. Itachi is unable to resist the pull and gets also sucked into the ‘moon’. However, after some seconds, the ‘moon’ starts to warp. The warp is actually caused by Itachi’s susanoo which is using its totsuka sword to absorb the matter around in order to create an exit. Susanoo’s head can then be sighted as it tries to get out of the ‘moon’ and overlooks Deva Path. Amazed by Itachi’s remarkable willpower which has enabled him to summon his susanoo once more, Deva Path reacts too slowly when susanoo sends his yata mirror at him similarly to throwing a disc. The yata mirror rolls on Deva Path and crushes his body. The chibaku tensei is dispelled and all six ‘paths’ are now defeated.

With this fight over, Itachi searches the surrounding area in order to locate the real Pain and is able to recover a bit in the meantime. He eventually finds Pain and, upon confronting him, Itachi finally uses his tsukuyomi before Pain can launch any attack. Konan tries to intervene but is no match for Itachi. However, suddenly popping out from nowhere, Tobi appears and succeeds to break Itachi’s tsukuyomi on Pain in an instant. He then teleports Konan and Pain to another location and himself disappear after reprimanding Itachi for his action. Having his tsukuyomi broken and with all enemies gone, Itachi is no longer able to maintain his composure and fall on his knees, feeling the pain all over his battered body and thinking that it’s about time to meet his little brother...

The End :cool:
 

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  • However, after some seconds, the ‘moon’ starts to warp. The warp is actually caused by Itachi’s susanoo which is using its totsuka sword to absorb the matter around in order to create an exit. Susanoo’s head can then be sighted as it tries to get out of the ‘moon’ and overlooks Deva Path. Amazed by Itachi’s remarkable willpower which has enabled him to summon his susanoo once more, Deva Path reacts too slowly when susanoo sends his yata mirror at him similarly to throwing a disc. The yata mirror rolls on Deva Path and crushes his body. The chibaku tensei is dispelled and all six ‘paths’ are now defeated.

    The End :cool:


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This is amazing friend! I believed that itachi had a fight before he faced Sasuke. There was theory before. However, It will be nice to watch the anime version of this story.

excellent choice of texts and all for someone with french background right?

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Thanks to all those who appreciated my fanfic and even those who said it was boring, that was constructive feedback. that's why i reworked the presentation by adding dialogues in-between and divided the story into the following four episodes, which i will use to take part in the fanfic of the month competition.

Episode 1

Disclaimer
• This is a fanfic based on Masashi Kisimoto’s manga/anime titled Naruto. I do not own the characters.
• I am an Itachi Uchiha fanboy and have therefore made him the winner of this fight. I don’t care how much you argue about the impossibilities within the fight and the end result.


-Part 1-

So this takes place immediately after the Hidan & Kakuzu arc. Due to the various Akatsuki members who have fallen to Naruto and other Konoha shinobis, Pain is on his way to capture Kyuubi himself and to destroy Konoha in the process. As all the ‘paths’ gather some kilometers away from Konoha, they notice a figure in the distance, heading towards them. As the figure gets closer, Pain realizes it is Itachi Uchiha. The latter hide his surprise as he is confronted to six rinnegan users instead of the Akatsuki leader only.

Deva Path, with a calm and authoritative tone: What is your purpose for being here?
Itachi, with a calm and nonchalant tone: You don’t need to know my my reasons.
Deva Path: Itachi Uchiha… I know about you. You have been spying on Akatsuki for the sake of Konoha. Today I shall pass judgement over your actions!
Itachi’s eyes open wide to Deva Path’s last statement: Be it six or a hundred of you… you cannot defeat me!
Deva Path: You are nothing but a child to me. I shall show you the extent of my power… THE POWER OF A GOD!

That said, Deva Path and the other ‘paths’ withdraw to the rear, with the exception of Animal Path who makes the first move by summoning his three-headed Hell Hound. Itachi is unimpressed and charges at Animal Path, but Hell Hound does not intend to let him reach its master. It lunges at Itachi and whilst doing so, its two additional heads separate from its body in order to also lunge at the opponent. However, Itachi graciously dodges all the three dogs and proceeds towards the Animal Path in a matter of milliseconds. With his opponent being so unexpectedly fast on him, Animal Path cannot see the next attack coming. This is what Itachi had intended to make happen.

Itachi, upon reaching Animal Path, draws out an ANBU-style sword from under his Akatsuki coat in order to stab Animal Path: This is it …
Animal Path spins on himself to avoid the sword without even looking at it: Not yet…

Itachi temporarily loses his balance in the vain attack and is too surprised to regain his posture. Animal Path connects an elbow kick to his spin and knocks him down.

Itachi, making contact with the ground: HUMPH…!!
Animal Path waves an arm for the next attack: Do you see now? You are nothing but an ant under my feet, for I am God! And I shall crush you!

The other ‘paths’ and the three Hell Hound watch closely the defeat of the Uchiha genius. [cutscene]

-Part 2-

As the fatal attack comes near to execution, Itachi’s lying body explodes and causes other explosions.

Deva Path, with the same surprised look as all the other ‘paths’: He used a bunshin bakuha combined with explosive tags…

Almost simultaneously, red flames crash on the three Hell Hound, engulfing them and making them disappear in a puff of smoke. As the ‘paths’ look in the direction from which that second attack originated, they now see another Itachi.

Deva Path: Puny tricks like this won’t work twice…
Itachi, walking calmly and closing in on the ‘paths’: You must surely be underestimating me… soon I will make you lie at my feet and die miserably, like I did to them!

With the smoke dissipated, it can now be seen that Animal Path’s body has been badly severed and is not fit for combat anymore. Itachi has now set target on Deva Path, the leader of the Akatsuki and presumably the leader of the five other rinnegan bearers, since this may prove to shorten or cease the fight.

Deva Path: Itachi Uchiha… a simple human like you won’t understand the difference between us. I will destroy you! And Konoha is next!
Itachi: Then show me that power of yours!

With these challenging words said, the battle is now unavoidable. Deva Path and Itachi look in the eyes of each other intensely, the rinnegan confronts the three-dotted sharingan. Who shall be the winner between the Sage of Six Paths and the Uchiha Genius? [cutscene]

To Be Continued…

Episode 2

Disclaimer
• This is a fanfic based on Masashi Kisimoto’s manga/anime titled Naruto. I do not own the characters.
• I am an Itachi Uchiha fanboy and have therefore made him the winner of this fight. I don’t care how much you argue about the impossibilities within the fight and the end result.


-Part 1-

Having defeated Animal Path and his Hell Hound, Itachi has now set target on Deva Path. However, Deva Path will not let him have it his way and it is Asura Path who lines up next for battle.

Itachi, charging towards Asura Path: Fire Style! Phoenix Immortal Fire!

Itachi’s jutsu opposes Asura Path’s missiles and their collision makes the battlefield turn into a ruined place. When they finally come in range for physical controntation, Itachi’s opponent turns out to be a four-armed humanoid possessing remarkable strength that must be dealt with utmost precaution. Moreover, Human Path and Preta Path join the fight.

Itachi, not knowing that he would soon regret his words: You are nothing but thrash, I have no interest in you all!

Itachi dashes all over the battlefield and takes on the relentless attacks of the three ‘paths’ one after the other. As the fight prolongs, the ‘paths’ demonstrate the ability to read his every movements and counter his taijutsu accordingly… the so-called thrash were besting him.

Itachi, whispering to himself and referring to the activation of his mangekyou sharingan which he believes will make him regain advantage over the fight: Urgh! I need to do this!... Mangek…

Though he had finally resolved to activate his mangekyou sharingan earlier than planned, Itachi does not proceed further since his three opponents suddenly make a retreat. The second after, he is surrounded by egg-like objects falling from the sky.

Itachi, as the egg-like objects begin to shine: Explosives!?

The explosives blow off and Itachi succeeds to escape them in time, thanks to his correct analysis.

Itachi, as he notices Hard Beak lunging at him immediately after he’s escaped the explosions: What the…!?

Itachi hardly manages to dodge the attack. As he watches Hard Beak flying off in the direction of where Animal Path lied earlier, he notices that his first opponent is back on his feet and in complete fighting condition. Naraka Path stands next to him, suggesting that he has something to do with his regeneration. The other three ‘paths’ have returned to their original position next to Deva Path.

Itachi, confused: What is happening? What are you?
Animal Path: I told you… you cannot perceive the extent of the difference between us.
Itachi: You told me? That was Pain’s words…
Animal Path: We are all Pain.
Itachi,putting on a serious face: I see… that explains a lot of things.
Animal Path, now being the one confused:
Itachi: You share only one personality and your eyes are no different. That’s how you were able to cover up any blind spots and read my moves.That’s how you knew you had to retreat when that bird attacked, without any signal amongst you.
Animal Path: How?? I only mentioned that we are all Pain, yet you’ve hit right on target. You really live up to your reputation.
Itachi, looking at Deva Path and the three ‘paths’ he had previously fought: There’s more! When I fought against those three, I could feel the chakra running through these black rods of yours. I now know that you are all merely puppets, even you whom I thought were the leader.
Deva Path: Your analysis skills are impressive. But they will soon be buried with you!
Itachi: When I’m through with your six puppets, I will come for you!

The battle takes a new start and Hard Beak charges once more towards Itachi. [cutscene]


-Part 2-

Itachi prepares to make contact with Hard Beak. When the bird gets near enough, Itachi jumps at it and sets foot on its beak, then throws himself back onto the bird’s body. He then takes out a sword that is similar to the one that his bunshin bakuha used, and stabs it into the bird’s back. Setting his foot on the sword this time, he throws himself away from the bird’s back whilst the sword is thrusted into the bird’s heart like a bullet, ending its course on the ground beneath its victim. As Itachi lands with one knee to the ground, Hard Beak crashes at full speed behind him and disappears in a puff of smoke.

Hard Beak and Itachi having taken the fight some distance away from the ‘paths’, a swarm of missiles is the only immediate action that the ‘paths’ can provide in order to catch the opponent off-guard upon his landing. However, Itachi is quick on the move and makes his way through the swarm of missiles, closing the distance between him and the ‘paths’.

Itachi, now close enough to his opponents and with a plan in head: Fire Style! Giant Fireball Technique!

The last missiles are engulfed into the giant fireball and explode. Itachi then crashes the giant fireball on the ground, creating a powerful impact that blows dirt all over the battlefield. The ‘paths’, temporarily unable to see due the screen of dirt, chooses precaution and fall back.

Itachi, mangekyou sharingan activated, appears quicky and stealthily behind Naraka Path whilst this one is retreating: Too slow!

Naraka Path is set ablazed by Itachi’s amaterasu flames. The second after, black rods sent by Animal Path pierces through Itachi’s body. Preta Path then appears to absorb the amaterasu flames, although too late. Naraka Path has been defeated and Itachi’s pierced body disappears in a puff of smoke.

Realising that the real Itachi is still somewhere around, the three ‘paths’ at the other end of the battlefield adopts a triangular formation where each one watches the next one in the formation. As Itachi appears behind Deva Path, this one is already alerted and readily uses his shinra tensei to dispel the amaterasu flames casted at him.

The screen of dirt dissipates and Itachi now faces only five ‘paths’ yet again.

Deva Path: You’re persistent!
Itachi, which the opponents cannot yet ascertain to be the real one: This is dragging on too much!
Deva Path: That’s right, the mangekyou sharingan takes its toll.
Itachi : Don’t think you can sit back yet!
Deva Path: Quite the contrary. Formation number 4!

The five ‘paths’ sets themselves into a battle formation. Lining up, Deva Path sets himself at the far rear, with Preta Path in the centre and the rest of the ‘paths’ grouping themselves on the frontline. This seems to annoy Itachi.

Itachi Uchiha has now activated his mangekyou sharingan. Will he be able to defeat his five opponents before he can’t sustain anymore the side effects of this cursed power?
With the lost of Naraka Path, Pain now prepares for serious direct confrontation. Will his battle formation be able to dispose of Itachi Uchiha? [cutscene]

To Be Continued…

Episode 3

Disclaimer
• This is a fanfic based on Masashi Kisimoto’s manga/anime titled Naruto. I do not own the characters.
• I am an Itachi Uchiha fanboy and have therefore made him the winner of this fight. I don’t care how much you argue about the impossibilities within the fight and the end result.


-Part 1-

Itachi has so far defeated Animal Path’s most powerful summons as well as Naraka Path. Pain has engaged into a battle formation in order to deal with him.

Pretty much as before, when fighting collectively the ‘paths’ use only taijutsu, much to Itachi’s expectations. With mangekyou sharingan activated, he is much more able to keep up against Animal Path, Human Path and Asura Path in close combat.

Animal Path, lunging at Itachi after Human Path’s attack has been deflected: You don’t expect to last long if you keep up that way…?
Itachi, dashing all over the battlefield in order to avoid taking on all three ‘paths’ at the same time:
Animal Path: That’s what I though...
Itachi: You’re misunderstanding me. Summoning Jutsu!!

Since the alternate attacks of the three ‘paths’ have had longer intervals when Animal Path was talking, Itachi has taken advantage of the conversation to make hand signs. Coming out from under his coat, a seemingly infinite number of crows take off into the sky.

Animal Path: What? When??
Itachi, referring to Pain’s lack of attention and to his next move: You have strayed… now the darkness shall consume you.

The massive flock of crows circles around Itachi and his three opponents like a black tornado, engulfing them in its darkness. Deva Path and Preta Path are unable to watch the fight anymore. Even within the flock of crows, the three ‘paths’ there have lost sight of Itachi who faded into the black mass.

Animal Path: Retreat!!
Itachi, hiding his presence and making his voice heard to all three ‘paths’: Do not be so naïve…

Keeping to his word, Itachi tries to cancel the opponent’s retreat. Some crows shapeshift into shurikens and rain on Animal Path and Asura Path. As for Human Path, he is captured within Itachi’s ephemeral jutsu after having looked at a crow which shapeshifted into Itachi’s hands.

Itachi, realizing that the ‘paths’ have opposed too little resistance to his attacks, whispers to himself: I’ve been deceived…!!

Itachi’s guess is right. Pain has baited him by having the ‘paths’ retreat, appear off-guard, and take more damage than they should have. Animal Path even had one of his eye blinded by an incoming shuriken. The very moment Itachi’s would have made his move on any one of them, he would have closed the net on himself.

Deva Path, catching Itachi’s attention as he appears into the black tornado: Shinra Tensei!

Animal Path and Asura Path had already escaped the black tornado when the jutsu was cast. The black tornado itself is nothing more than a rain of black feather now. The ‘paths’ scan the area for Itachi’s corpse but so far, they can only see that of Human Path, their sacrifice to Itachi’s defeat.

Itachi, talking to himself whilst getting up from the pile of black feathers that was covering his body: Urgh!! Such power!!
Deva Path, confused: YOU ESCAPED??
Itachi, thinking about how he would be dead now if he had realized Pain’s trap only a second later : That was close…
Deva Path, still confused: HOW??
Itachi, building his susanoo around him: Watch closely.
Deva Path, eyes wide open as he realizes how Itachi survived his shinra tensei: Now I see! You shielded yourself with that body!!
Itachi, having completely summoned his susanoo: That was only an incomplete form, a shell… now you shall feel the true power of my susanoo!

Itachi rushes towards Deva Path with his susanoo! [cutscene]

-Part 2-

Blocking Asura Path’s missiles with his susanoo’s yata mirror, Itachi finally makes contact. However, instead of first attacking Deva Path on which he was set, Itachi’s unexpectingly shifts target and uses the yata mirror to crush Asura Path on the ground, causing an instant kill. The totsuka sword is simultaneously swung at Deva Path. But, stepping in-between, Preta Path plans to interfere.

Preta Path tries to absorb the totsuka sword. As they clash, reality seems to distort around them. Finally, after a momentary tie, the totsuka sword wins over Preta Path and starts to suck him into its sheath. Deva Path reacts immediately and, using bensho tenin, he succeeds to pull Preta Path from the totsuka sword’s grip. However, the countering effects of the bensho tenin and totsuka sword have weared Preta Path’s body which is now useless for combat.

Itachi tries once more to strike Deva Path with his susanoo’s totsuka sword. However, having fully recharged from his last use of shinra tensei, Deva Path casts a mighty shinra tensei before the sword reaches him. The powerful impact blows most of susanoo’s front body away.

Itachi, feeling the attack through his temporarily destroyed armor: URRRRGH!!!!

Unable to recover in mid-air, Itachi heavily hits the ground and rolls whilst leaving a trail of blood behind.

Deva Path: Can you get up? Or have you had enough!?
Itachi, weakly getting up: ...urrrgh!
Deva Path: You’ve caused me to lose four bodies… that’s commendable. But that’s as far as you can go.
Itachi dispels his susanoo and deactivates his mangekyou sharingan in order to save his chakra:
Deva Path, taking Itachi’s action as a sign of resignation: So it is over… you now realize my power, the power of God!!
Itachi: … not… yet!!

Although he now faces only two ‘paths’, the battle has turned to Itachi’s disadvantage. Also, with the last hit that he’s taken, he is now confronted to his health problems which he had been successfully ignoring since the beginning of the battle. How long can he still sustain his condition?
Pain is at last able to corner his opponent. Will he win the fight or will Itachi counters his plans once more? [cutscene]

To Be Continued…

Episode 4

Disclaimer
• This is a fanfic based on Masashi Kisimoto’s manga/anime titled Naruto. I do not own the characters.
• I am an Itachi Uchiha fanboy and have therefore made him the winner of this fight. I don’t care how much you argue about the impossibilities within the fight and the end result.


-Part 1-

The battle between Pain and Itachi rages on. Itachi has so far defeated four ‘paths’ but is now in a critical condition.

Deva Path, seeing as how Itachi is nearing his limits, charges at him with Animal Path: So you still want to fight… then get prepared to be crushed!!

Itachi hardly puts up any defense and gets a bashing. He now appears in trance and close to faint. However, when he is meant to go down a final time, he remembers his goals and the glimmer of life comes back into his eyes.

Itachi: … not…yet… not… YET!!

Itachi catches Deva Path and Animal Path off-guard by recovering from what was to be his final down. Looking back at Deva Path with his mangekyou sharingan reactivated, he casts amaterasu flames on him.

Deva Path, burning on but feeling no pain: SHINRA TENSEI!!

Deva Paths rids himself of the flames although sacrificing Animal Path in the process. However, the amaterasu flames have been able to fairly incapacitate his body before being put out. As for Itachi, even though he got hit and propulsed away once more by the shinra tensei, he takes less time to get back on his feet since he is now running only on willpower and is hardly concerned with the pain.

Deva Path: How??... How can you still get up??
Itachi: I… I cannot let myself be stopped now… the time is drawing near… for my goals to realize…
Deva Path: Do you think you are the only one who fights for his goals?? Itachi Uchiha, I will show you that my goals surpasses yours!!

With the other ‘paths’ out, Deva Path can now enter god mode. But due to the effects of the amaterasu flames, he cannot use his body for the fight and chooses to cast his most powerful jutsu instead…

Deva Path: Chibaku Tensei!!

Pulling in every surrounding matter such as earth, rocks and trees, Deva Path’s chibaku tensei alterates the battlefield and builds up a massive moon-like mass in the sky.

Itachi, vainly resisting the pull: What?... such power!
Deva Path, as Itachi gets sucked into the artificial moon: This is the end!!

However, after some seconds, the ‘moon’ starts to warp. The warp is actually caused by Itachi’s susanoo which is using its totsuka sword to absorb the matter around in order to create an exit. Susanoo’s head can then be sighted as it tries to get out of the ‘moon’ and overlooks Deva Path.

Deva Path, amazed by Itachi’s remarkable willpower which has enabled him to summon his susanoo once more:

Deva Path reacts too slowly when susanoo sends his yata mirror at him similarly to throwing a disc. The yata mirror rolls on Deva Path and crushes his body. The chibaku tensei is dispelled and all six ‘paths’ are now defeated. [cutscene]

-Part 2-

With the fight over, Itachi searches the surrounding area in order to locate the real Pain and is able to recover a bit in the meantime. He eventually finds Pain.

Itachi confronts Pain: We are finally face to face.
Pain: You’ve made it this far. But victory isn’t yours yet.
Itachi: Still saying those kind of words…

Pain tries to suppress Itachi with his chakra.

Itachi, quickly reactivating his mangekyou sharingan: Tsukuyomi!

Konan tries to intervene but is no match for Itachi. However, suddenly popping out from nowhere, Tobi appears and succeeds to break Itachi’s tsukuyomi on Pain in an instant.

Itachi: URRRGH!!
Tobi: Itachi, you should stop yourself here…! Your actions will not go unpunished!

Tobi then teleports with Konan and Pain to another location. Having his tsukuyomi broken and with all enemies gone, Itachi is no longer able to maintain his composure and fall on his knees, feeling the pain all over his battered body.

Itachi, talking to himself: Foolish little brother… the time for our reunion has come…

Itachi faints and collapse completely on the ground. [cutscene]

The End

You are not forced to read the story again but please do read the new elements I brought to the conclusion of the story, see below.

Episode 5 (Pimp my fanfic; the alternate ending)

Disclaimer
• This is a fanfic based on Masashi Kisimoto’s manga/anime titled Naruto. I do not own the characters.
• I am an Itachi Uchiha fanboy and have therefore made him the winner of this fight. I don’t care how much you argue about the impossibilities within the fight and the end result.


With the fight over, Itachi searches the surrounding area in order to locate the real Pain and is able to recover a bit in the meantime. He eventually finds Pain.

Itachi confronts Pain: We are finally face to face.
Konan interferes before Pain can speak: Itachi, what have you been doing, you idiot!?
Pain, confused: Konan…?
Itachi ignores Pain and speaks To Konan with an unnerved tone: You set me up!
Konan, getting a bit aggressive: No I didn’t!... you didn’t follow my instructions!
Pain, still confused: Konan…?
Itachi, still ignoring Pain: You misled me to these ****ing puppets instead of the real guy!
Konan, getting more aggressive: I said I didn’t, listen to me!... the only way you could have ended there was by turning right at the Canyon intersection instead of turning left as I told you!
Itachi,thinking back and realizing his mistake: Urgh!
Konan: See, dumbass!
Pain, unable to contain himself: WTF does all this mean?? Konan, why are you helping him save Konoha?
Itachi, finally paying attention to Pain: You keep misunderstanding my intentions. Konoha is not my concern for the moment. I came here for Konan. I came here to deal with you.
Pain, finally realizing the truth about Konan and Itachi: Konan, he can’t mean… you cheated me and intended to have him kill me??
Konan looks down: I’m sorry Nagato…
Pain: I see… the pain that I’m feeling right now… I shall bestow the same fate upon the world! ALL SHALL FEEL…!!
Konan: OW SHUT UP!! Aren’t you tired of going on and on with the same shit? See that’s why I chose him…
Pain, depressed: … konan…
Itachi, grinning: Hehe…
Konan: You shut up also!! I’m not going anywhere with either. Not anymore.
Itachi, losing his smile: But…
Konan: Have a look at yourself! You’re all over the floor… I thought you were different, but you’re just another loser.
Itachi, now being the one depressed: … konan…
Tobi, appearing out from nowhere: You three, CALM DOWN!!
Konan, being bitchy: Good timing, take me out of this place! This sucks!
Tobi reprimands Pain and Itachi: You two, take the time to think this over and return to the organization when you’ve forgotten about this bitch.
Konan flames up: Who’re are you calling a bitch, you damn shitty motherf…!?

Tobi uses his teleportation jutsu to disappears with Konan before she can finish her phrase. Pain and Itachi, both completely depressed, sit on the ground and watches each other.

Itachi: We sure got played by that bitch…
Pain: Don’t mention it…
Itachi: So… did you have any last card up your sleeves?
Pain: Yeah sure! I was gonna beat the crap out of you!... Erm, and you?
Itachi: I had already planned to defeat you with Tsukuyomi. You were gonna spend the next month in a shitty prison and get your ass targeted by perverts…
Pain: What did you say!? You want to give it a try!?
Itachi: Nah, forget I said that... What do you plan to do now?
Pain: You sure were a worthy opponent. I need to return to the organization and do something about those damaged corpses that you left behind. What about you?
Itachi: That fight took a lot from me, I don’t think I’ll be able to keep up very long… but I’ll try my best to stick around some more until the time to reunite with my little brother arrives.
Pain: I’ve got no objection to you staying around...
Itachi: Fine...

The curtains now close on the untold fight between Pain and Itachi and on their triangular love with Konan…

The End

Let me know what you thing about the reworked version. Thank you all xd
 

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This is amazing friend! I believed that itachi had a fight before he faced Sasuke. There was theory before. However, It will be nice to watch the anime version of this story.

excellent choice of texts and all for someone with french background right?

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thanks pal :D

well, in mauritius we have both french and english backgrounds. these are the official languages. but we can also speak a bit of each communities' language such as hindi, arabic, etc... because mauritius is a small island with different communities, we tend to mix up easily :D

would be fantastic if i could draw properly, i would show you the fight as i imagined it instead of writing loads of text to describe it xd
 

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Tobi you little Bastard!!!!
Really Good Fan-Fic though, my Fav Part;
susanoo sends his yata mirror at him similarly to throwing a disc. The yata mirror rolls on Deva Path and crushes his body. The chibaku tensei is dispelled and all six ‘paths’ are now defeated.
lmao fck you Pain! Itachi Pwns!
 
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don't bother about me guys, i'm only reposting my fanfic after having resized it to 3 chapters. that's one condition for the 'fanfic of the month' contest, only 3 chapters per participation. nothing's changed to the storyline :p

Fan Fiction Title: Itachi v/s Pain, The Untold Confrontation

Episode 1

Disclaimer
• This is a fanfic based on Masashi Kisimoto’s manga/anime titled Naruto. I do not own the characters.
• I am an Itachi Uchiha fanboy and have therefore made him the winner of this fight. I don’t care how much you argue about the impossibilities within the fight and the end result.


-Part 1-

So this takes place immediately after the Hidan & Kakuzu arc. Due to the various Akatsuki members who have fallen to Naruto and other Konoha shinobis, Pain is on his way to capture Kyuubi himself and to destroy Konoha in the process. As all the ‘paths’ gather some kilometers away from Konoha, they notice a figure in the distance, heading towards them. As the figure gets closer, Pain realizes it is Itachi Uchiha. The latter hide his surprise as he is confronted to six rinnegan users instead of the Akatsuki leader only.

Deva Path, with a calm and authoritative tone: What is your purpose for being here?
Itachi, with a calm and nonchalant tone: You don’t need to know my my reasons.
Deva Path: Itachi Uchiha… I know about you. You have been spying on Akatsuki for the sake of Konoha. Today I shall pass judgement over your actions!
Itachi’s eyes open wide to Deva Path’s last statement: Be it six or a hundred of you… you cannot defeat me!
Deva Path: You are nothing but a child to me. I shall show you the extent of my power… THE POWER OF A GOD!

That said, Deva Path and the other ‘paths’ withdraw to the rear, with the exception of Animal Path who makes the first move by summoning his three-headed Hell Hound. Itachi is unimpressed and charges at Animal Path, but Hell Hound does not intend to let him reach its master. It lunges at Itachi and whilst doing so, its two additional heads separate from its body in order to also lunge at the opponent. However, Itachi graciously dodges all the three dogs and proceeds towards the Animal Path in a matter of milliseconds. With his opponent being so unexpectedly fast on him, Animal Path cannot see the next attack coming. This is what Itachi had intended to make happen.

Itachi, upon reaching Animal Path, draws out an ANBU-style sword from under his Akatsuki coat in order to stab Animal Path: This is it…!
Animal Path spins on himself to avoid the sword without even looking at it: Not yet…!

Itachi temporarily loses his balance in the vain attack and is too surprised to regain his posture. Animal Path connects an elbow kick to his spin and knocks him down.

Itachi, making contact with the ground: HUMPH…!!
Animal Path waves an arm for the next attack: Do you see now? You are nothing but an ant under my feet, for I am God! And I shall crush you!

The other ‘paths’ and the three Hell Hound watch closely the defeat of the Uchiha genius. [cutscene]

-Part 2-

As the fatal attack comes near to execution, Itachi’s lying body explodes and causes other explosions.

Deva Path, with the same surprised look as all the other ‘paths’: He used a bunshin bakuha combined with explosive tags…

Almost simultaneously, red flames crash on the three Hell Hound, engulfing them and making them disappear in a puff of smoke. As the ‘paths’ look in the direction from which that second attack originated, they now see another Itachi.

Deva Path: Puny tricks like this won’t work twice…
Itachi, walking calmly and closing in on the ‘paths’: You must surely be underestimating me… soon I will make you lie at my feet and die miserably, like I did to them!

With the smoke dissipated, it can now be seen that Animal Path’s body has been badly severed and is not fit for combat anymore. Itachi has now set target on Deva Path, the leader of the Akatsuki and presumably the leader of the five other rinnegan bearers, since this may prove to shorten or cease the fight.

Deva Path: Itachi Uchiha… a simple human like you won’t understand the difference between us. I will destroy you! And Konoha is next!
Itachi: Then show me that power of yours!

With these challenging words said, Deva Path and Itachi look in the eyes of each other intensely, the rinnegan confronts the three-dotted sharingan. [cutscene]

-Part 3-

Although he has set target on Deva Path, Itachi must first confront Asura Path as this one lines up next for battle.

Itachi, charging towards Asura Path: Fire Style! Phoenix Immortal Fire!

Itachi’s jutsu opposes Asura Path’s missiles and their collision makes the battlefield turn into a ruined place. When they finally come in range for physical controntation, Itachi’s opponent turns out to be a four-armed humanoid possessing remarkable strength that must be dealt with utmost precaution. Moreover, Human Path and Preta Path join the fight.

Itachi, not knowing that he would soon regret his words: You are nothing but thrash, I have no interest in you all!

Itachi dashes all over the battlefield and takes on the relentless attacks of the three ‘paths’ one after the other. As the fight prolongs, the ‘paths’ demonstrate the ability to read his every movements and counter his taijutsu accordingly… the so-called thrash were besting him.

Itachi, whispering to himself and referring to the activation of his mangekyou sharingan which he believes will make him regain advantage over the fight: Urgh! I need to do this!... Mangek…

Though he had finally resolved to activate his mangekyou sharingan earlier than planned, Itachi does not proceed further since his three opponents suddenly make a retreat. The second after, he is surrounded by egg-like objects falling from the sky.

Itachi, as the egg-like objects begin to shine: Explosives!?

The explosives blow off and Itachi succeeds to escape them in time, thanks to his correct analysis.

Itachi, as he notices Hard Beak lunging at him immediately after he’s escaped the explosions: What the…!?

Itachi hardly manages to dodge the attack. As he watches Hard Beak flying off in the direction of where Animal Path lied earlier, he notices that his first opponent is back on his feet and in complete fighting condition. Naraka Path stands next to him, suggesting that he has something to do with his regeneration. The other three ‘paths’ have returned to their original position next to Deva Path.

Itachi, confused: What is happening? What are you?
Animal Path: I told you… you cannot perceive the extent of the difference between us.
Itachi: You told me? That was Pain’s words…
Animal Path: We are all Pain.
Itachi,putting on a serious face: I see… that explains a lot of things.
Animal Path, now being the one confused:
Itachi: You share only one personality and your eyes are no different. That’s how you were able to cover up any blind spots and read my moves.That’s how you knew you had to retreat when that bird attacked, without any signal amongst you.
Animal Path: How?? I only mentioned that we are all Pain, yet you’ve hit right on target. You really live up to your reputation.
Itachi, looking at Deva Path and the three ‘paths’ he had previously fought: There’s more! When I fought against those three, I could feel the chakra running through these black rods of yours. I now know that you are all merely puppets, even you whom I thought were the leader.
Deva Path: Your analysis skills are impressive. But they will soon be buried with you!
Itachi: When I’m through with your six puppets, I will come for you!

Itachi has now discovered some of the abilities of his opponent. Will that help him win the fight or will Pain overwhelm him with his so-called godly powers? Who shall be the winner between the Sage of Six Paths and the Uchiha Genius? [cutscene]

To be Continued…

Episode 2

Disclaimer
• This is a fanfic based on Masashi Kisimoto’s manga/anime titled Naruto. I do not own the characters.
• I am an Itachi Uchiha fanboy and have therefore made him the winner of this fight. I don’t care how much you argue about the impossibilities within the fight and the end result.


-Part 1-

The battle between Itachi and Pain rages on. Itachi has so far learned some of the rules by which Pain plays, but his opponent has yet to show all the cards up his sleeves.

Itachi is currently faced to Animal Path and its summoned Hard Beak. As the giant bird lunges at him, Itachi prepares to make contact with it. When it gets near enough, Itachi jumps at it and sets foot on its beak, then throws himself back onto the bird’s body. He then takes out a sword that is similar to the one that his bunshin bakuha used, and stabs it into the bird’s back. Setting his foot on the sword this time, he throws himself away from the bird’s back whilst the sword is thrusted into the bird’s heart like a bullet, ending its course on the ground beneath its victim. As Itachi lands with one knee to the ground, Hard Beak crashes at full speed behind him and disappears in a puff of smoke.

Hard Beak and Itachi having taken the fight some distance away from the ‘paths’, a swarm of missiles is the only immediate action that the ‘paths’ can provide in order to catch the opponent off-guard upon his landing. However, Itachi is quick on the move and makes his way through the swarm of missiles, closing the distance between him and the ‘paths’.

Itachi, now close enough to his opponents and with a plan in head: Fire Style! Giant Fireball Technique!

The last missiles are engulfed into the giant fireball and explode. Itachi then crashes the giant fireball on the ground, creating a powerful impact that blows dirt all over the battlefield. The ‘paths’, temporarily unable to see due the screen of dirt, chooses precaution and fall back.

Itachi, mangekyou sharingan activated, appears quicky and stealthily behind Naraka Path whilst this one is retreating: Too slow!

Naraka Path is set ablazed by Itachi’s amaterasu flames. The second after, black rods sent by Animal Path pierces through Itachi’s body. Preta Path then appears to absorb the amaterasu flames, although too late. Naraka Path has been defeated and Itachi’s pierced body disappears in a puff of smoke.

Realising that the real Itachi is still somewhere around, the three ‘paths’ at the other end of the battlefield adopts a triangular formation where each one watches the next one in the formation. As Itachi appears behind Deva Path, this one is already alerted and readily uses his shinra tensei to dispel the amaterasu flames casted at him.

The screen of dirt dissipates and Itachi now faces only five ‘paths’ yet again.

Deva Path: You’re persistent!
Itachi, which the opponents cannot yet ascertain to be the real one: This is dragging on too much!
Deva Path: That’s right, the mangekyou sharingan takes its toll.
Itachi : Don’t think you can sit back yet!
Deva Path: Quite the contrary. Formation number 4!

The five ‘paths’ sets themselves into a battle formation. Lining up, Deva Path sets himself at the far rear, with Preta Path in the centre and the rest of the ‘paths’ grouping themselves on the frontline.

Itachi Uchiha, who has now activated his mangekyou sharingan, seems to be annoyed by the opponent’s strategy. Will he be able to defeat his five opponents before he can’t sustain anymore the side effects of this cursed power? [cutscene]

-Part 2-

Pretty much as before, when fighting collectively the ‘paths’ use only taijutsu, much to Itachi’s expectations. With mangekyou sharingan activated, he is much more able to keep up against Animal Path, Human Path and Asura Path in close combat.

Animal Path, lunging at Itachi after Human Path’s attack has been deflected: You don’t expect to last long if you keep up that way…?
Itachi, dashing all over the battlefield in order to avoid taking on all three ‘paths’ at the same time:
Animal Path: That’s what I thought...
Itachi: You’re misunderstanding me. Summoning Jutsu!!

Since the alternate attacks of the three ‘paths’ have had longer intervals when Animal Path was talking, Itachi has taken advantage of the conversation to make hand signs. Coming out from under his coat, a seemingly infinite number of crows take off into the sky.

Animal Path: What? When??
Itachi, referring to Pain’s lack of attention and to his next move: You have strayed… now the darkness shall consume you.

The massive flock of crows circles around Itachi and his three opponents like a black tornado, engulfing them in its darkness. Deva Path and Preta Path are unable to watch the fight anymore. Even within the flock of crows, the three ‘paths’ there have lost sight of Itachi who faded into the black mass.

Animal Path: Retreat!!
Itachi, hiding his presence and making his voice heard to all three ‘paths’: Do not be so naïve…

Keeping to his word, Itachi tries to cancel the opponent’s retreat. Some crows shapeshift into shurikens and rain on Animal Path and Asura Path. As for Human Path, he is captured within Itachi’s ephemeral jutsu after having looked at a crow which shapeshifted into Itachi’s hands.

Itachi, realizing that the ‘paths’ have opposed too little resistance to his attacks, whispers to himself: I’ve been deceived…!!

Itachi’s guess is right. Pain has baited him by having the ‘paths’ retreat, appear off-guard, and take more damage than they should have. Animal Path even had one of his eye blinded by an incoming shuriken. The very moment Itachi’s made his move on one of them, he had closed the net on himself.

Deva Path, catching Itachi’s attention as he appears into the black tornado: Shinra Tensei!

Animal Path and Asura Path had already escaped the black tornado when the jutsu was cast. The black tornado itself is nothing more than a rain of black feather now. The ‘paths’ scan the area for Itachi’s corpse but so far, they can only see that of Human Path, their sacrifice to Itachi’s defeat.

Itachi, talking to himself whilst getting up from the pile of black feathers that was covering his body: Urgh!! Such power!!
Deva Path, confused: YOU ESCAPED??
Itachi, thinking about how he would be dead now if he had realized Pain’s trap only a second later : That was close…
Deva Path, still confused: HOW??
Itachi, building his susanoo around him: Watch closely.
Deva Path, eyes wide open as he realizes how Itachi survived his shinra tensei: Now I see! You shielded yourself with that body!!
Itachi, having completely summoned his susanoo: That was only an incomplete form, a shell… now you shall feel the true power of my susanoo!

Itachi rushes towards Deva Path with his susanoo! [cutscene]

-Part 3-

Blocking Asura Path’s missiles with his susanoo’s yata mirror, Itachi finally makes contact. However, instead of first attacking Deva Path on which he was set, Itachi’s unexpectingly shifts target and uses the yata mirror to crush Asura Path on the ground, causing an instant kill. The totsuka sword is simultaneously swung at Deva Path. But, stepping in-between, Preta Path plans to interfere.

Preta Path tries to absorb the totsuka sword. As they clash, reality seems to distort around them. Finally, after a momentary tie, the totsuka sword wins over Preta Path and starts to suck him into its sheath. Deva Path reacts immediately and, using bensho tenin, he succeeds to pull Preta Path from the totsuka sword’s grip. However, the countering effects of the bensho tenin and totsuka sword have weared Preta Path’s body which is now useless for combat.

Itachi tries once more to strike Deva Path with his susanoo’s totsuka sword. However, having fully recharged from his last use of shinra tensei, Deva Path casts a mighty shinra tensei before the sword reaches him. The powerful impact blows most of susanoo’s front body away.

Itachi, feeling the attack through his temporarily destroyed armor: URRRRGH!!!!

Unable to recover in mid-air, Itachi heavily hits the ground and rolls whilst leaving a trail of blood behind.

Deva Path: Can you get up? Or have you had enough!?
Itachi, weakly getting up: ...urrrgh!
Deva Path: You’ve caused me to lose four bodies… that’s commendable. But that’s as far as you can go.
Itachi dispels his susanoo and deactivates his mangekyou sharingan in order to save his chakra:
Deva Path, taking Itachi’s action as a sign of resignation: So it is over… you now realize my power, the power of God!!
Itachi: … not… yet!!

Although he now faces only two ‘paths’, the battle has turned to Itachi’s disadvantage. Also, with the last hit that he’s taken, he is now confronted to his health problems which he had been successfully ignoring since the beginning of the battle. How long can he still sustain his condition?
Pain is at last able to corner his opponent. Will he win the fight or will Itachi counters his plans once more? [cutscene]

To Be Continued…

Episode 3

Disclaimer
• This is a fanfic based on Masashi Kisimoto’s manga/anime titled Naruto. I do not own the characters.
• I am an Itachi Uchiha fanboy and have therefore made him the winner of this fight. I don’t care how much you argue about the impossibilities within the fight and the end result.


-Part 1-

The battle between Itachi and Pain rages on. Itachi has so far defeated four ‘paths’ but is now in a critical condition.

Deva Path, seeing as how Itachi is nearing his limits, charges at him with Animal Path: So you still want to fight… then get prepared to be crushed!!

Itachi hardly puts up any defense and gets a bashing. He now appears in trance and close to faint. However, when he is meant to go down a final time, he remembers his goals and the glimmer of life comes back into his eyes.

Itachi: … not…yet… not… YET!!

Itachi catches Deva Path and Animal Path off-guard by recovering from what was to be his final down. Looking back at Deva Path with his mangekyou sharingan reactivated, he casts amaterasu flames on him.

Deva Path, burning on but feeling no pain: SHINRA TENSEI!!

Deva Paths rids himself of the flames although sacrificing Animal Path in the process. However, the amaterasu flames have been able to fairly incapacitate his body before being put out. As for Itachi, even though he got hit and propulsed away once more by the shinra tensei, he takes less time to get back on his feet since he is now running only on willpower and is hardly concerned with the pain.

Deva Path: How??... How can you still get up??
Itachi: I… I cannot let myself be stopped now… the time is drawing near… for my goals to realize…
Deva Path: Do you think you are the only one who fights for his goals?? Itachi Uchiha, I will show you that my goals surpasses yours!!

With the other ‘paths’ out, Deva Path can now enter god mode. But due to the effects of the amaterasu flames, he cannot use his body for the fight and chooses to cast his most powerful jutsu instead…

Deva Path: Chibaku Tensei!!

Pulling in every surrounding matter such as earth, rocks and trees, Deva Path’s chibaku tensei alterates the battlefield and builds up a massive moon-like mass in the sky.

Itachi, vainly resisting the pull: What?... such power!
Deva Path, as Itachi gets sucked into the artificial moon: This is the end!!

However, after some seconds, the ‘moon’ starts to warp. The warp is actually caused by Itachi’s susanoo which is using its totsuka sword to absorb the matter around in order to create an exit. Susanoo’s head can then be sighted as it tries to get out of the ‘moon’ and overlooks Deva Path.

Deva Path, amazed by Itachi’s remarkable willpower which has enabled him to summon his susanoo once more:

Deva Path reacts too slowly when susanoo sends his yata mirror at him similarly to throwing a disc. The yata mirror rolls on Deva Path and crushes his body. The chibaku tensei is dispelled and all six ‘paths’ are now defeated. [cutscene]

-Part 2-

With the fight over, Itachi searches the surrounding area in order to locate the real Pain and is able to recover a bit in the meantime. He eventually finds Pain.

Itachi confronts Pain: We are finally face to face.
Konan interferes before Pain can speak: Itachi, what have you been doing, you idiot!?
Pain, confused: Konan…?
Itachi ignores Pain and speaks To Konan with an unnerved tone: You set me up!
Konan, getting a bit aggressive: No I didn’t!... you didn’t follow my instructions!
Pain, still confused: Konan…?
Itachi, still ignoring Pain: You misled me to these ****ing puppets instead of the real guy!
Konan, getting more aggressive: I said I didn’t, listen to me!... the only way you could have ended there was by turning right at the canyon's intersection instead of turning left as I told you!
Itachi,thinking back and realizing his mistake: Urgh!
Konan: See, dumbass!
Pain, unable to contain himself: WTF does all this mean?? Konan, why are you helping him save Konoha?
Itachi, finally paying attention to Pain: You keep misunderstanding my intentions. Konoha is not my concern for the moment. I came here for Konan. I came here to deal with you.
Pain, finally realizing the truth about Konan and Itachi: Konan, he can’t mean… you cheated me and intended to have him kill me??
Konan looks down: I’m sorry Nagato…
Pain: I see… the pain that I’m feeling right now… I shall bestow the same fate upon the world! ALL SHALL FEEL…!!
Konan: OW SHUT UP!! Aren’t you tired of going on and on with the same shit? See that’s why I chose him…
Pain, depressed: … konan…
Itachi shows a satisfied face: Hehe…
Konan: You shut up also!! I’m not going anywhere with either. Not anymore.
Itachi, losing his smile: But…
Konan: Have a look at yourself! You’re all over the floor… I thought you were different, but you’re just another loser.
Itachi, depressed: … konan…
Tobi, appearing out from nowhere: You three, CALM DOWN!!
Konan, being bitchy: Good timing, this place sucks! Take me out of here!
Tobi reprimands Pain and Itachi: You two, take the time to think this over and return to the organization when you’ve forgotten about this bitch.
Konan flames up: Who’re are you calling a bitch, you damn shitty…!?

Tobi uses his teleportation jutsu to disappears with Konan before she can finish her phrase. Pain and Itachi, both completely depressed, sit on the ground and watches each other.

Itachi: We sure got played by that bitch…
Pain: Don’t mention it…
Itachi: So… did you have any last card up your sleeves?
Pain: Yeah sure! I was gonna beat the crap out of you!... Erm, and you?
Itachi: I had already planned to defeat you with Tsukuyomi. You were gonna spend the next month in a shitty prison and get your ass targeted by perverts…
Pain: What did you say!? You want to give it a try!?
Itachi: Nah, forget I said that... What do you plan to do now?
Pain: You sure were a worthy opponent. I need to return to the organization and do something about those damaged corpses that you left behind. What about you?
Itachi: That fight took a lot from me, I don’t think I’ll be able to keep up very long… but I’ll try my best to stick around some more until the time to reunite with my little brother arrives. Nothing else give me reason to live anymore...
Pain: I’ve got no objection to you staying around...
Itachi: Fine...

The curtains now close on the untold fight between Pain and Itachi and on their triangular love with Konan… how’s that for a twisted ending!? [cutscene]

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well you said if we wanted we could remake your story so here it goes... the very long version is very quickly told like this

itachi was for some reason fights pain. For most of the fight would be a one sided battle with pain kicking itachi's ass. because Itachi would almost entirely use his sharingun and shadow clones. this is to avoid resorting to useing his MS.(at this pont itachi is not well and is almost blind and still wants to wait to fight sasuke) being that he is almost to the point of death he is forced to rely on his MS. In the final clash itachi uses sunnoso but all six pains find a way to overcome this imortal jitsu and manage to kill itachi. as five of the six pains walk away... deva pain(i believe thats yaheko's body) all of a sudden goes inverted and black feathers start to fall from the sky. Deva path looks horrified. The inversion quickly ends and all of the pains fall down, dead. There is a fade out and the last sceen shows itachi looking at kahona. the flash back starts to show that Itachi used tsumi (or however you spell it) before the entire fight and put all pains into a powerful genjutsu, thus allowing itachi to gain all the information he needed on pain including where the real pain was hiding. we then retrn to the present to see itachi viewing naruto and quietly walking away into the sunset.
 
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well you said if we wanted we could remake your story so here it goes... the very long version is very quickly told like this

itachi was for some reason fights pain. For most of the fight would be a one sided battle with pain kicking itachi's ass. because Itachi would almost entirely use his sharingun and shadow clones. this is to avoid resorting to useing his MS.(at this pont itachi is not well and is almost blind and still wants to wait to fight sasuke) being that he is almost to the point of death he is forced to rely on his MS. In the final clash itachi uses sunnoso but all six pains find a way to overcome this imortal jitsu and manage to kill itachi. as five of the six pains walk away... deva pain(i believe thats yaheko's body) all of a sudden goes inverted and black feathers start to fall from the sky. Deva path looks horrified. The inversion quickly ends and all of the pains fall down, dead. There is a fade out and the last sceen shows itachi looking at kahona. the flash back starts to show that Itachi used tsumi (or however you spell it) before the entire fight and put all pains into a powerful genjutsu, thus allowing itachi to gain all the information he needed on pain including where the real pain was hiding. we then retrn to the present to see itachi viewing naruto and quietly walking away into the sunset.
lol yeah, tsukuyomi would have been the easy way to do this... but there were much arguments on threads like 'pain is stronger that itachi' where people were opposing this theory. that's why i wrote a fanfic where itachi would still win without using tsukuyomi xd
 

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This is really good you should write more stories
thank you, i'll try to find the time to think up other storylines... although most of the time i'm slavedriving myself at work (i need money, alot!! :D)

lol for this one i could only write and finish it because people got me flaming up on threads :p
 

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everyone, you may wish to check the work of (imo) one of NB's most talented fanfic author :D

Its called Weaving Destiny and got all the elements that a naruto movie would have... the prologue can be read on her blog, otherwise here are the links to the five chapters she's written so far:







Enjoy!! :D
 

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Yikes! :eek: I was surprised to see you advertise my work here. I lost the momentum of what I should say about your fanfic.

Anywayz, here goes:

I don't like the ending, humph! The entire story was filled with superb action, and they were meticulously described down to the last detail that I could see my screen move as Pain and the glorious ;) Itachi exchanged attacks. I was totally overwhelmed with their display of power DARN! it was so good. And then the ending?! Grr! I could feel my teeth gnashing, as I intensely read with speed to the result of the battle.

THAT (the comment above) - was actually an aftermath thought after I laughed off my chair after going through the ending. :D:D:D LOLZ or that should have been ROFL!!!! They both looked like jerks! - I certainly will not choose any of them, same as Konan did! :p

Super action packed! I actually forgot that you already told me about how it ends! :eek:
 
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