Fanfic: Itachi v/s Pain

[BluePhenix]

Yikes! I was surprised to see you advertise my work here. I lost the momentum of what I should say about your fanfic.

Anywayz, here goes:

I don't like the ending, humph! The entire story was filled with superb action, and they were meticulously described down to the last detail that I could see my screen move as Pain and the glorious Itachi exchanged attacks. I was totally overwhelmed with their display of power DARN! it was so good. And then the ending?! Grr! I could feel my teeth gnashing, as I intensely read with speed to the result of the battle.

THAT (the comment above) - was actually an aftermath thought after I laughed off my chair after going through the ending. LOLZ or that should have been ROFL!!!! They both looked like jerks! - I certainly will not choose any of them, same as Konan did!

Super action packed! I actually forgot that you already told me about how it ends!

thanks a lot for having a look at it and for your sincere words

actually the ending with konan was made as an alternate one, the original ending ends quicker as there is no more action left to be seen. but for the fanfic contest i used the ending with konan as the official one

let's hope it doesn't ruin my chances

 

[PrinceAragorn1]

nice

 

[Bluedevil]

dude Itachi IS stronger then pain because his weakness is genjitsuand itachi is a genjitsu master even w/o mankengo. Pain would be on his ass but I still dont think that they would of fought. If anything they would help one another out. Both are trying to save somthing.

 

[shelma]

BEAUTIFUL!!!
Not since i am an Itachi fangirl but the story is awesome.
I always knew Itachi baby is strong and u brought it out perfectly!
Keep going.I expect some more from u!

 

[BluePhenix]

BEAUTIFUL!!!
Not since i am an Itachi fangirl but the story is awesome.
I always knew Itachi baby is strong and u brought it out perfectly!
Keep going.I expect some more from u!

thanks for your appreciation and support