Storyboard Mission Submission

[Pyro NB]

Players involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
[FONT=&quot]~ Finish a chore using Ninjutsu(1)[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]~ Gather resources from the land(1)[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]~ [/FONT][FONT=&quot]Build something for the Clan(1)[/FONT]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/30/2018
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Additional information: Something simple for once.

Mission Passed

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Choose between what is right and what is easy ( 3 )
Help put a part of the Clan’s past behind it ( 4 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
07-30-2018
08-01-2018 ( edited after midnight to fix grammar and spelling )
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Additional information: Basically a lore dump for my Sado bio so I have something to look back upon to inform me of how to make decisions. It was the objective of the mission to bring Trunks and Sado closer as clan mates by having them together talk about their past and overcome it. Additionally, Sado had a choice to make, either pick what he perceives as right. Carrying the weight of every person he helps and putting himself aside or what he perceives as easy. Focusing on himself and falling back into his old ways. I hope the second story element comes through and shows, as it was supposed to refer to Sado working through his own past and helping Trunks work through his. They're both a part of Golden Sabbath so I figured that was as spot on for "put a part of the Clan's past behind it" as could be. Adding to this, Sado brought up the way Trunks had acted previously in their interaction to point out that in the future he can bring questions, concerns or criticism directly to him instead of bolting. Another bit of the Clan's past that needed to be settled which was something that had happened a few days ago context for that can be found

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~Mission Passed

 

[Pyro NB]

Players involved: Pyro NB
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
~ Build something for the Clan(1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/01/2018
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Additional information: Started of simple but got way out of control real fast.

Mission Passed

 

[Never]

Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Convince an enemy to fight with you (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
27/07/18 - 04/08/2018
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It's a vague outcome, but i think you guys can read between the lines of what might happen lol

~Mission Failed. This was a good read, but you spend too little time on your one storyboard element. I understand how the fighting plays getting the audience, but it doesn't really play into the convincing.

 

[Detective L]

Players involved: Detective L
Mission Rank: S rank
Story elements chosen: Assassinate the enemy commander [5]
Destroy a large community [5]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/08/2018 - 05/08/2018
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Additional information: This is my first mission <_>.

Mission Passed. Lord Edgelord, Lord of the Edge, Lord of Stabbing Eyes

 

[Daemon]

Players involved: Daemon
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:

Build something for the clan (1)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/6/2018-8/6/2018
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Mission Failed. The building process itself is very brief.

Players involved: Daemon
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

Negotiate for or speak on behalf of your clan(3)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/8/2018-8/8/2018
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Additional information: Was going to write the mission as a "fail" by having the mayor know that I was the one who sunk Dhaka by word of mouth and he lead me on to hear my claim. But I don't know if failed missions are allowed to be submitted so I went with the generic ending.

Yes, you could submit a 'failed' mission and have it be passed. We judge what you've written based on the storyboard elements you've picked out. You can lose the fight and still pass the mission instead of winning the war, if so to speak. The new universal timeline means that we don't jump around; no matter what I write here what happened in your mission still happened as you wrote it. I just determine if you get goodies, which you do in this case. Mission Passed.

 

[Howard]

Players involved: Howard
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
Meet with a major faction representative ( 4 )
Facilitate a major peace agreement ( 5 )
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
08-04-2018
08-07-2018
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Additional information: I feel the summary explains everything relevant.

Mission Passed, and you're the lucky winner of an S-ranked artifact, to be posted.

(Arashikyojin) – Storm Giant’s Signet
Type: Artifact
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A (+1 Rank Suiton)
Description: A ring traditionally worn on the left thumb; the ring is a relic from the Northern peoples of Kael Drakkel in the Glacier Mount. It is fashioned out of an indestructible blue stone that augments the user’s water manipulation skills. All Water techniques of the user’s are strengthened by one rank, up to A-Rank. S-Rank and above techniques are augmented by an additional 10 damage. Once every four turns the user can further manipulate their water techniques through an infusion from the ring, granting them properties akin to that of the Grudge Rain Technique. This causes the user’s techniques to gain chakra absorptive properties, capable of consuming the chakra in techniques of equivalent chakra, rather than in damage. This infusion relinquishes the traditional damage boost, opting for a boost of 20 chakra instead. When the water technique directly strikes a living target with a chakra pool, it will drain 100 chakra per full turn of contact. After using this infusion, the ring's abilities are deactivated for a period of two turns.

 

[Geezus]

Players involved: LGeezy
Mission Rank: D-rank
Story elements chosen: Explore a Landmark | Build a Camp
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/6/2018 - 8/7/2018
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Completing Faction Mission:

Establishing an Outpost

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Rank: D-Rank
Faction: The Shogunate of Takauji Ashikaga
Location: Yabuchi (023)
Requirement: N/A
Reward: Service Insignia (1x)
Description: A representative of the Shogunate has inquired about your willingness to assist in setting up an outpost in Yabuchi (023). The outpost can be a mere camp, or even a small stronghold made of stone or wood. Yabuchi is a strategic location for the Shogunate, as it is a key nexus for trade between the continents through ocean travel.

Mission Failed. You must receive Faction missions from representatives in their own landmarks. These landmarks are noted in the NW map, or the rules thread.

 

[Vroqrak]

Players involved: Zero Kelvin
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Infiltrate an enemy's organization (4) | Terrorize a large community (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10 August, 2018
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Additional information: My first time. Be gentle

~Mission Passed. Nice one.

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Players involved: Zero Kelvin
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Perform a moderate workout routine (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: August 10, 2018
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Additional information: This gave me nostalgia back to when I was trained in Tai by Goro

Yes, that's a workout, but your description of it is very superficial. You write yourself tired in listing exercises, which is the problem with missions with one storyboard element. Spend more time on them and pick out more, is my advice. Mission Failed.

 

[Sinthorus]

Players involved: Gajeel Redfox
Mission Rank: B (2.7 / 3)?
Story elements chosen:
-Defend yourself from wild beasts (2)
-Explore the history of something (3)
-Investigate the history of a landmark (3)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/08/2018
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Additional information: King arrives on the island, discovers things that make him ask questions and convince him to stay and help based on the history of the landmark. He's here to stay and make a difference.

~Mission Passed

 

[Never]

Players involved: ɴᴇᴠᴇʀ
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
- Survive a near-death situation (5)
- Convince an enemy to fight with you (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
13/08/2018 - 14/08/2018
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The second Storyboard element is more of a mission fail, they pretend to be slightly convinced by her offer more easily than maybe usual especially due to the circumstances they're being sold. But because they are going to (SPOILER ALERT) turn on her anyway, they accept to get her to lower her guard which plays a large part in the first storyboard element.

Mission Passed. Well, that sure was a lot of surviving and convincing. Nice work.

 

[Geezus]

Players involved: LGeezy
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Preform administrative duties
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 14/08/2018
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Additional information: Last time I attempted a multi-scenario story, I didn't get to finish it. I hope this time is different.

~Mission Passed. Wew, sneaking a little submission link in there, huh? Sneaky guy...

 

[ZK]

Players involved: ZK
Mission Rank: B ((1+4)/2 = 2.5)
Story elements chosen: Perform administrative duties (1) / Make all the necessary plans and arrangements for your Clan (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 16-08-2018
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Additional information: N/A

□ Mission Passed. □​

 

[Drackos]

Players involved: Drackos
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen: Explore an abandoned site (2)
Defend yourself from wild beasts (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/15/2018
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Additional information: N/A

□ Mission Passed. Poor Snakes >,>. □​

 

[Drackos]

Players involved: Drackos
Mission Rank: A (3+4)/2 = 3.5
Story elements chosen: Scout potential threats (3)
Rescue an ally (custom) (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/18/2018
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Additional information: N/A

□ Mission Passed. That Byakugan really makes scouting fun, huh? □​

 

[Priest]

Players involved: Priest
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
*- Do a good deed(1)
- Finish a chore using Ninjutsu(1)
-*Show the people of your landmark the merits of your Clan(2)
- Experiment with very advanced ninjutsu(5)
-*Make an enemy of the Clan disappear(3)
-*Establish control over a hostile area(5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
7/19/2018
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8/18/2018
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Additional information:
After finally gaining Shirou's trust, Medusa was asked to explain how she is going to help out in taking over the landmark. She would put out an ultimatum to the inhabitants of the landmark. Those that are willing to join would be saved while those who are unwilling to join would be regarded as enemy of the clan. While those who are in support would gather close-by and be safe from the massive cleansing that will follow. Medusa would then raise a powerful army of the undead from the numerous corpses she found on the landmark, making them sweep the entire landmark and kill everyone on their path, most especially, the leader of the rebellion. The purge as well as other benefits of the clan which was shown, would go further in swaying those who still doubts the clan into complete submission. At the end, Medusa and Shirou would assume total control of the landmark.*

Mission Passed and you're the lucky recipient of a B-rank artifact, to be posted.

(Kemono no Sadoru) – Beastmaster’s Saddle
Type: Artifact
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A saddle recovered from the ruins of Chungsu and crafted during the Golden Age of the Hangurian Freehold. The saddle, modest in appearance, is crafted from fine tanned leather and imbibed with Hangurian Ore. Lore holds that the saddle was commissioned by a noble house which was said to have tamed dragons and wyverns. While intended for dragons, the saddle is remarkably pliable and can fit any summon of reasonable size. The Hangurian Ore imbues the summon it is worn, enhancing its chakra and strength significantly; this allows the summon it is equipped on to travel through the world at higher speeds. This reduces landmark travel time by 10 minutes, while also increasing the summon’s effective speed by +2. This saddle can only be worn by personal summons, requiring a Ninjutsu specialty.

 

[Sinthorus]

Players involved: Gajeel Redfox &

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Mission Rank: S-class (5)
Story elements chosen:
- Survive a near-death situation - (5)
- Save a large community from danger - (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
Start - 08-11-2018
Finish - 08-20-2018
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All posts in between in that thread tell the story in full. This will be a meeting of myself and Nirvana through this landmark as he joins the WSE and a new alliance is formed protecting a large subjugated population, and protecting them from danger on a unified front. It's a base for a long adventure to come.

I'll buy some of the fighting and context as basis for your first storyboard element, and your second one speaks for itself. There's a lot of text that is not covered by your chosen SE's, but you guys write a lot and just move at your own pace, so that bothers me not at all. Mission Passed.

 

[Antares]

Players involved: Hazure
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Help a local trader by transporting his wares (2)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/24/2018
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Additional information: First mission to introduce my character Chaser into the Ninja World.

Mission Passed

 

[Daemon]

Players involved: Daemon And Detective L
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
Establish control over a hostile area (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/14- 8/25/2018
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Mission Passed

 

[Zaphkiel]

Players involved: Zaphkiel

Mission Rank: A (5+5+3+2=15/4= 3.75)

Story elements chosen:
- Defend yourself from wild beasts (2)
- Deal with a traumatic event from your past (3)
- Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself (5)
- Survive a near-death situation (5)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
8/25/18 - 8/27/18

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Additional information: First mission. Devised NPC techs for main antagonist to use. Not sure if allowed or not, but made for some nice RP.

I'm not going to outright fail this, because this was well done. But there are some issues here. First off, and most importantly, don't make up techniques for NPCs. It is needlessly confusing and just shouldn't happen. That said, it has no impact on what I'm about to say next. I'm removing the element of fighting an enemy much stronger than yourself. As an S-Rank element, this is supposed to represent an immense and nigh impossible challenge to overcome. You are a Sannin ranked Shinobi; this beast, while large, frightening, and immense, is not much stronger than you. Now, if you were a genin or chuunin performing such a task I could see it as plausible. Another example is Kakashi fighting Pein, or Jiraiya taking on all 6 Paths at once. I don't know why I'm citing Nagato/Pein specifically twice in a row, but yeah. It's supposed to be insurmountable odds against an enemy (usually not an animal/beast) that is vastly stronger and outclasses you in many ways. But in this specific conext, it doesn't fit.

Mission Passed.

However, because I've removed that element, it drops to a B-Rank mission overall. This means you gain 650 Kumi and 650 Ryo, rather than A-Rank rewards.