Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
Dropping my current CW if approved:
(Gekkō) - Moonbeam
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (-10 each turn while active)
Damage: N/A
Description: Moonbeam is a peculiar metal staff designed by a master blacksmith. The pole is entirely white and 5 ft long. At the top is a sphere 1.5 ft wide with a perfectly smooth, mirrored surface and at the base is a triangular spike. Moonbeam allows the wielder to merge other inanimate objects with the sphere and have it manipulate them. For example, the user may combine the sphere with a kunai and make the protruding blade slash enemies or shoot it out from any part of the sphere. When not manipulating the objects they remain merged with the sphere, becoming part of it. Any object can be merged as long as it can partially fit inside the sphere which has a limited capacity. Objects infused with chakra are compatible as well except when the chakra is damaging in nature. Once Moonbeam's ability is activated, it will be passively maintained while taking chakra from the wielder.
-Ability counts as a move when activated
-Can be used while on the user, not necessarily in his hand.
-Can block B rank attacks within reason and can only be destroyed by S rank or above.
-Can only be used by Ushiro and those he allows
Approved - changed the blue, i hate the wording of indestructable
(Shuradō: Sensō no Kaminoikari) – Asura Path: War God's Wrath
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (-15 each turn to sustain)
Damage: N/A (60 per attack)
Description: The user produces 100 arms from his body which combine into a single pair of arms, increasing their size and armor to hulking, armored proportions; each arm being five times the user's size. These arms possess the focused strength of a 100 arms and can vent jets of chakra from them like the Chakra Propulsion Boots technique for increased maneuverability and striking power. The monstrous strength gained by this technique rivals Tsunade's at her best. Each arm can withstand one A rank attack before being destroyed. An attack with one arm deals A rank damage, both arms deal S rank damage, and neither count toward the user's three moves per turn.
-Usable twice per battle
-Lasts for 2 turns
-Must wait 2 turns before using again
-Can only be used through Asura Path or with it active.
-Can only be used by Ushiro
Shown from 5:16 onward but smaller in video
Approved - we got there in the end xd
Dropping my current CW if approved:You must be registered for see links
Removed projection ability. Added merging ability.
(Gekkō) - Moonbeam
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (-10 each turn for both abilities)
Damage: N/A
Description: Moonbeam is a peculiar metal staff designed by a master blacksmith. The pole is entirely white and 5 ft long. At the top is a sphere 1.5 ft wide with a perfectly smooth, mirrored surface and at the base is a triangular spike. Moonbeam has two abilities. The first allows the user to merge other inanimate objects with the sphere and have it manipulate them. For example, the user may combine the sphere with a kunai and make the protruding blade slash enemies or shoot it out from the sphere. When not manipulating the objects they remain merged with the sphere, becoming part of it. Moonbeam's second ability allows its wielder to link his vision to the mirror and see everything reflected by it. Once either ability is activated, it will be passively maintained while taking chakra from the wielder.
-Both abilities count as a move when activated
-Can be used while on the user, not necessarily in his hand.
-Indestructible, but can only block attacks within reason
-Can only be used by Ushiro and those he allows
Declined - is there a limit to what can be fused with the spear? What happens to lightning infused weapons and such, can they only be shot out the mirror at the top and no to the linked vision
(Kuchiyose: Sōdaina Inago wa Jishin) – Summoning: Grand Locust Jishin
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kokyū, a giant locust 100 meters in height also known as the “Plague of the Land”. This title stems from an extreme passion for both exploration and destruction. It is said that whenever he appears in an unfamiliar place the entire landscape is left unrecognizable after his tirade subsides, though this is merely a rumor. Kokyū has pale white eyes and a steel-hard body that is dark grey in color and carries a large pickaxe capable of inflicting A rank physical damage. He is a master of the Earth element and as such can perform S rank and below Earth jutsu that do not require handseals. Due to his great size and tough body, he is immune to ninjutsu B rank and below, and earth jutsu A rank and below.
-Can only be summoned once
-Lasts for 4 turns
-No other summons at the same time
-No summons for two turns
-All techniques used by him count as one of the summoner's moves
-Must have signed the locusts contract
- When his axe is used for A rank damage it counts as move per turn
Approved - added the blue
(Shuradō: Sensō no Kaminoikari) – Asura Path: War God's Wrath
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (-15 each turn to sustain)
Damage: N/A (80 per attack)
Description: The user produces 100 arms from his body which combine into a single pair of arms, increasing their size and armor to hulking, armored proportions; each arm being five times the user's size. These arms possess the focused strength of a 100 arms and can vent jets of chakra from them like the Chakra Propulsion Boots technique for increased maneuverability and striking power. The monstrous strength gained by this technique rivals Tsunade's at her best. Each arm can withstand one S rank attack before being destroyed. Every attack has S rank power and does not count toward the 3 move per turn limit.
-Usable twice per battle
-Lasts for 3 turns
-Must wait 2 turns before using again
-Can only be used through Asura Path or with it active.
-Can only be used by Ushiro
Declined - so in total the power is S rank, so that means each arm would be A rank. As such both arms attacking at the same time would make S rank in power. It should take A rank to destroy one arm and S rank to destroy both. One arm attacking would then cause A rank damage, and if you don't want it to count as a move per turn reduce the useage to once or reduce it to two turns. Apart from that it's good.
Dropping my current CW if approved:
You must be registered for see links
(Gekkō) - Moonbeam
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (-10 each turn while active)
Damage: N/A
Description: Moonbeam is a peculiar metal staff designed by a master blacksmith. The pole is entirely white and 5 ft long. At the top is a sphere 1.5 ft wide with a perfectly smooth, mirrored surface and at the base is a triangular spike. Moonbeam allows the wielder to merge other inanimate objects with the sphere and have it manipulate them. For example, the user may combine the sphere with a kunai and make the protruding blade slash enemies or shoot it out from any part of the sphere. When not manipulating the objects they remain merged with the sphere, becoming part of it. Any object can be merged as long as it can partially fit inside the sphere which has a limited capacity. Objects infused with chakra are compatible as well except when the chakra is damaging in nature. Once Moonbeam's ability is activated, it will be passively maintained while taking chakra from the wielder.
-Ability counts as a move when activated
-Can be used while on the user, not necessarily in his hand.
-Can block B rank attacks within reason and can only be destroyed by S rank or above.
-Can only be used by Ushiro and those he allows
Approved - changed the blue, i hate the wording of indestructable
(Shuradō: Sensō no Kaminoikari) – Asura Path: War God's Wrath
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (-15 each turn to sustain)
Damage: N/A (60 per attack)
Description: The user produces 100 arms from his body which combine into a single pair of arms, increasing their size and armor to hulking, armored proportions; each arm being five times the user's size. These arms possess the focused strength of a 100 arms and can vent jets of chakra from them like the Chakra Propulsion Boots technique for increased maneuverability and striking power. The monstrous strength gained by this technique rivals Tsunade's at her best. Each arm can withstand one A rank attack before being destroyed. An attack with one arm deals A rank damage, both arms deal S rank damage, and neither count toward the user's three moves per turn.
-Usable twice per battle
-Lasts for 2 turns
-Must wait 2 turns before using again
-Can only be used through Asura Path or with it active.
-Can only be used by Ushiro
Shown from 5:16 onward but smaller in video
[video=youtube_share;-2-q0p846o4]https://youtu.be/-2-q0p846o4?t=5m16s[/video]
Approved - we got there in the end xd
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